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noxi
08-06-2008, 07:01 PM
I would take out the crown.

bak
08-06-2008, 07:26 PM
thanks shie and i like the color combination on the first but wats the second pic? symbol?

ETCH 07
08-06-2008, 11:28 PM
thanx for the reply ...

Mr yarbles
08-06-2008, 11:57 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/2zzjbq8.jpg
Ehhh

Shie not too shure how I feel about your h

etch
Keep working on it

wers dope.

Incognito
08-07-2008, 11:34 AM
Couple of painted throws.
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/paintthrow2.jpg
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/paintthrow.jpg
looking for crits on the style not the painting skill but both would be nice

Shie - lovin the E, but i agree with yarbles the h is kinda wierd, not to sure about it.

Etch- i like the ch in the first one. Second one definatly needs a lot of work, might be better off starting from scratch with that one.

yarbles - i don't know what it is about the h but something is wierd about it. its like the top half doesnt belong with the lower half or something, im not sure. Other than that its really good

freshair
08-07-2008, 01:13 PM
attn toys: plz stop writing stupid names like....ARROW.AROH.THROWIE.ETCH.SKETCH...its so stupid

sorry...just had to say that.....

aroh u need letter structure...new name too

aeks...the A n K need work.........

SHIE....fly..i like it

ETCH 07
08-07-2008, 03:16 PM
attn toys: plz stop writing stupid names like....ARROW.AROH.THROWIE.ETCH.SKETCH...its so stupid

sorry...just had to say that.....

aroh u need letter structure...new name too

aeks...the A n K need work.........

SHIE....fly..i like it


names and the reason for them are a personnal choice in my opinion .. if i lived life choosing by everyone elses opinions id be a zombie. to each is own ...

freshair
08-07-2008, 03:36 PM
i bump you for not bitchin about wut i said...and a favorite quote i love using...

"to each his own.."

respect towards you...

originalhomeboy
08-07-2008, 06:35 PM
names and the reason for them are a personnal choice in my opinion .. if i lived life choosing by everyone elses opinions id be a zombie. to each is own ...

Word up to the 35 year old bomber. :D

ETCH 07
08-07-2008, 07:45 PM
again thx to anyone even taking time to critique what i do .. i learned a long time ago that critizim is both constructive and motivating. to many people hide behind the " hater " excuse. alltough some do actually just hate on shit , most of the time people are giving a honest opinion , sometimes a educated one. so im always the student ... it makes me a better teacher , feel me ?

not to mention the fact that i been rappin , making beats , and once was b boyin ( breakin for those who aint hip hop culture orientated ) for a long time, so critisizm is something u welcome when doing that. it means people are taking notice of your skills , at every level. i do what i do for the love of doing it. not for others opinion. but i still respect those who have more skill at something than i do at the momment. and even would if i were to advance past them. respect is a must .. i will say this though .. its definetly a struggle between the father and the graffer in me when im out painting and having to dip out from the cops with my 17 year old son ... hahaha . so wierd ... but dope none the less .. we definetly have a tighter trust between us cause of it ...

originalhomeboy
08-07-2008, 07:52 PM
Still working on my throws.
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1566/hertsthrowiesjy1.jpg

bak
08-08-2008, 12:03 AM
to etch - i think u and ur son can pull off the fake construction look with the jackets whill tagging i've heard it works with older taggers just a thought

Worms
08-08-2008, 01:10 AM
another night of bombing
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/002.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004.jpg
ranoutafuckinpaint^
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/005.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/006.jpg
FUCK THE BURNERS UNTIL UVE RIPED UR STREETS TO PEICES

Worms
08-08-2008, 01:11 AM
again thx to anyone even taking time to critique what i do .. i learned a long time ago that critizim is both constructive and motivating. to many people hide behind the " hater " excuse. alltough some do actually just hate on shit , most of the time people are giving a honest opinion , sometimes a educated one. so im always the student ... it makes me a better teacher , feel me ?

not to mention the fact that i been rappin , making beats , and once was b boyin ( breakin for those who aint hip hop culture orientated ) for a long time, so critisizm is something u welcome when doing that. it means people are taking notice of your skills , at every level. i do what i do for the love of doing it. not for others opinion. but i still respect those who have more skill at something than i do at the momment. and even would if i were to advance past them. respect is a must .. i will say this though .. its definetly a struggle between the father and the graffer in me when im out painting and having to dip out from the cops with my 17 year old son ... hahaha . so wierd ... but dope none the less .. we definetly have a tighter trust between us cause of it ...

man i wish u were my dad but then again if my dad had to run from the cops... i think hed pull his groin or somtn

bakerone
08-08-2008, 03:09 AM
Skie is fucking sick props.
Etch lose the crown.
Crits please?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2039/2743143748_fc4eff8bf3.jpg?v=0

freshair
08-08-2008, 10:58 AM
fix the B...A and K..where u have the "bars" coming from the left to the right...make it the same direction but on the other leg of the letter...and fix the E a little

comin out nice tho

ETCH 07
08-08-2008, 11:10 PM
to etch - i think u and ur son can pull off the fake construction look with the jackets whill tagging i've heard it works with older taggers just a thought

ill keep that in mind ... thx ...

worms : ... hahahaha , i almost fell out my chair ... no groin pullage here , ...

losing the crown ....

Mr yarbles
08-09-2008, 12:03 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/r7t24n.jpg
Fixin up the k

bake
Work on your k and a

wers
It looks like you're trying to progress too fast.
Your letters need some work.

herts try not to make your eltters get bigger as they go on

freshair
08-09-2008, 12:16 PM
lose the A ...keep the E and S and keep fixing the K

Mr yarbles
08-09-2008, 03:52 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/15i5j5g.jpg
I changed up the lump in the a
When I try to change it completley it looks wierd.

LeaksOne
08-09-2008, 05:01 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff005.jpg
this is what i used to write. i was jus fuckin around with the border

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff006.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff007.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff008.jpg
these were jus some colors i was fuckin wit

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff004.jpg
i did this one real quick. i dont really like the shine and i need to fix the bottom of the S

Crits??

bowchicabowow
08-09-2008, 05:59 PM
LEAKS- Keep your letters the same height use simpler color schemes on a few of those, its only a throw, and don't do extra effects around the bomb like that. Go practice that and come back for more in depth crits.

LeaksOne
08-09-2008, 08:33 PM
well on those i was using lower case letters so i had to make em small but ill have to try an make em all the same size an see how that looks and really on some of those i was jus tryin out some of the new markers i had but ill cool it down with the colors. post the outcome. thanks for the crit tho

bowchicabowow
08-09-2008, 09:21 PM
well on those i was using lower case letters so i had to make em small but ill have to try an make em all the same size an see how that looks and really on some of those i was jus tryin out some of the new markers i had but ill cool it down with the colors. post the outcome. thanks for the crit tho
The rules of standard typography don't apply to graff, you can make lowercase letters the same height as upper case and it can look just fine.

LeaksOne
08-09-2008, 09:28 PM
i kno i said i would try it out an see how it comes out.

mosezone
08-10-2008, 12:04 AM
yarbles-it's aiight, just fuck around with it and try to get it down with quick strokes, if you know what i mean
leaks-yea, make them the same size, no matter if it's upper or lower case. and extensions rarely work on throws. just keep messing around with shit

just a throwie from tonight. anyone feeling it?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02020.jpg

Darkeist
08-10-2008, 12:08 AM
Moes, told you this on sbc but whatever. Your throw flows well, but it looked like something happened on the right leg of the M, like the can didnt spray or something.

mosezone
08-10-2008, 12:14 AM
yea word, the can was running out, it was almost empty

numberonestunna
08-10-2008, 12:22 AM
moes - i like the throwie a lot. howd you get ur name? not the restaurant i hope.

freshair
08-10-2008, 01:04 PM
runnin out onthe M??? and still did the rest...

hahaha......its nice..i like it. and i wouldnt complain about that one little thing.its not even sumthin to complain about.
wut u should complain about is the bottom of the S....that part is ugly.

seems like u got good can control dude.keep it up.
but its also hard to say anything because i know my own moes over here.

GraffitiEast2008
08-10-2008, 01:33 PM
I no the tag is shit this is old
http://i308.photobucket.com/albums/kk357/eastsidegraffiti08/Photo2.jpg

http://i308.photobucket.com/albums/kk357/eastsidegraffiti08/Photo3.jpg

Wallace
08-10-2008, 02:54 PM
Bahahahaahaha oil backwards l is back

AHAHSHASHASAHSHSAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHA

Cesk
08-10-2008, 06:46 PM
yarbles-it's aiight, just fuck around with it and try to get it down with quick strokes, if you know what i mean
leaks-yea, make them the same size, no matter if it's upper or lower case. and extensions rarely work on throws. just keep messing around with shit

just a throwie from tonight. anyone feeling it?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02020.jpg

Loving it man, just the M needs like a tad bit of work, nothing much though just the bottom is sketchy. The tag I like the most. Nice stuff..

fromthegrave
08-10-2008, 08:01 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/zkoidk.jpg

DECO ONE
08-10-2008, 09:11 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000134.jpg

EgoZen
08-10-2008, 09:46 PM
http://a883.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/8/l_07e6890e65273635a44ba6c7e1bc7c9a.jpg

Wallace
08-10-2008, 09:56 PM
zen- try and keep the letters proportional

ive gone through SO many different A's and cant find one that works still

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4144/phone0006rh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sufr
08-11-2008, 01:37 AM
tryed a new style of throwy

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e250/sk8er_az/DSC00028.jpg
critz and tips?

bowchicabowow
08-11-2008, 01:54 AM
SAID- I like your S, just smooth it out, usually done by drawing it faster. The proportions of the A and D need to be tweaked alot. and the I is just ugly, the caving in outline almost never looks good. Keep at it man.

EgoZen
08-11-2008, 05:20 AM
Thank you Wallace...
I fucked it up a little bit yes..
Man it was on a busy street and I was so fucking paranoid..:S

LeaksOne
08-11-2008, 06:38 PM
sufr-yea practice that so you can do it fast and still have it look good instead of shaky. i think you should experiment with your I and D but im feelin that S.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff.jpg
well its not very good lookin but i scaled up the letters. i need to change my L find a new A and experiment with some K's
Crits?

Snew
08-12-2008, 02:11 AM
haa i know its weak.. first attempt at a throw at all.. just testing out a cap really.. but whatevs..

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/IMG_0099.jpg

Sufr- your S has some serious potential, just work on proportions and doing something with that I..

Nine9
08-12-2008, 06:07 AM
First N is a bit out of shape with the rest, but I'll work on it. Just trying to bend the word a bit.

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/9632/dsc00929jc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Snew, I'd change the N, at least the top right bit. Hard to make it out really because of the colour of paint and floor/wall.

Leak - Close the gap of the L, and just experiement with little changes on each leter til you find something that works nice. Then keep going.

Cesk
08-12-2008, 10:56 AM
tryed a new style of throwy

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e250/sk8er_az/DSC00028.jpg
critz and tips?

Don't know why but im really feeling this throw, its got like a nice taste to it, I say just try to make all the letters even.
Good stuff man.

LeaksOne
08-12-2008, 03:21 PM
nine- that throw looks like seen. not sayin your bitin but im feelin it anyway
snew- keep practicin an change your n and make your S less curvy to fit in with the rest of the letters

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff012.jpg
right when i posted the other one i didnt like it at all cuz like nine said the gap was way too big so i did this last night real quick. crits??

HaLo_07
08-12-2008, 04:16 PM
Yo, LEAKS... no dis but yo, why the name LEAKS? and naw, for real you lack that flow, but it's worth a start. No one was a beast at writin graff there first years.

Stay up Kid.

originalhomeboy
08-12-2008, 05:44 PM
Chyeah its shit. I need to put dots in my E and R.

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/3535/throw1iv5.jpg

LeaksOne
08-12-2008, 06:36 PM
Yo, LEAKS... no dis but yo, why the name LEAKS? and naw, for real you lack that flow, but it's worth a start. No one was a beast at writin graff there first years.

Stay up Kid.

i duno it jus came to me one day. im sure people asked cope why cope but hes king now i guess you jus use what you got it was my 3rd name. first was rank then case now leaks. its original an i can work with it. my flow will come later tho so im not too worried about that. im tryna jus get it straight now.

mekosbc
08-12-2008, 11:38 PM
yo nine you have improved alot lovin the throwie

Atmosphere
08-13-2008, 01:22 AM
I write MANR. I know it's horrible.

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm57/AmbushedReality/Man002.jpg

bowchicabowow
08-13-2008, 09:22 PM
HERTS - I like it, maybe make it go straighter. and like you said, put dots in the letters that have em. And make the top of the T less round. And the E doesn't look like an E.
MANR - Keep the style of each letter more uniform and have them more flush with eachother.

http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/psilolovesfluffy/0813082055.jpg

smooth_nuts
08-13-2008, 09:34 PM
nine stop biting gaint...NOW!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3228/2760361835_e8fc257f69.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3249/2761201690_196c0025a1.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/2761196562_aec9e71019.jpg
quick exchange for chump...

BigBlueViolence
08-13-2008, 11:02 PM
fuck a camera

http://i38.tinypic.com/2wmncb6.jpg (http://i38.tinypic.com/2wmncb6.jpg)

dig that second one, six

smooth_nuts
08-13-2008, 11:14 PM
word...you should make your r and n more like a r and n less like blobs,digg

BigBlueViolence
08-13-2008, 11:21 PM
Yeah, I know they're plain janes, I just can't think of shit to do with them.

Wallace
08-13-2008, 11:26 PM
BigBlue- Needs more style
smooth_nuts - i like the first one more

what ive been putting up lately

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6603/phone0007ma8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-Zeal-
08-14-2008, 01:44 AM
the herts and asic throwies are pretty fresh

Nine9
08-14-2008, 07:21 AM
nine stop biting gaint...NOW!



It's not a bite you fruitcake, I just tried angling my throwie a little like his and Seens and others etc.. . I didn't realise using an angle was biting. Look.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3266/2676771623_063258b2b4.jpg

Although I'll be the first to admit that with an angle it looks too much like his to be usable though. I guess because the letters are a similar simple rounded style.

bowchicabowow
08-14-2008, 08:08 AM
BigBlue - Add more detail, like that guy said, R and N look like blobs. Cool style though.
ASIC - try making the I more visable, looking pretty decent.
Bumpin my shit. Usually the right leg of the N extends higher tolook like a propper upper case N.
http://i245.photobucket.com/albums/gg52/psilolovesfluffy/0813082055.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 09:56 AM
nince- fresh as always
near - i think that has very good potential..id work on the n a little bit..doesnt flow like the other letters

early stages of a style im workin with..'
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00145.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00146.jpg

LiMe..S.B.C
08-14-2008, 11:17 AM
JOGA looking fresh.
nince- fresh as always
near - i think that has very good potential..id work on the n a little bit..doesnt flow like the other letters

early stages of a style im workin with..'
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00145.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00146.jpg

freshair
08-14-2008, 11:17 AM
Joga looks like hes improving

CT08
08-14-2008, 11:18 AM
joga that last one is fire

freshair
08-14-2008, 11:18 AM
ooo lets not blow his head up now.....it aint all that but its good

sex without condoms
08-14-2008, 11:20 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115036.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115053.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115119.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115207.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115239.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115700.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115750.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115818.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115840.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115851.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115901.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115924.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115934.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115947.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/115956.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/120007.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/120030.jpg

yo joga your g looks like a c. lose the line going upwards in the letter and just put it going down

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 11:27 AM
i think the one in pen and the last one are the tops

Stussy
08-14-2008, 01:05 PM
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7253/photo541ml6.jpg
Sex- Love the style

Nine9
08-14-2008, 01:52 PM
Rae/Sex - Sick dude.

The a's/r's with little notches on either side look best to me.

crevette
08-14-2008, 03:42 PM
sex - that eighth one is sick. The other ones lack substance.

crevette
08-14-2008, 03:43 PM
Don't be killing to many trees now.

Hater-AiD~>
08-14-2008, 04:04 PM
ray..not diggin the r but maybe its me..the rest of it is clean though

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/336e18aa.jpg

boredness at work

originalhomeboy
08-14-2008, 05:13 PM
Good page for the toy throwies so far! Keep it up boys, I dig every throwie on this page.

Wallace
08-14-2008, 05:34 PM
paper
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/6603/phone0007ma8.jpg

painted in almost pitch black, fuck i need better eyesight
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/7167/phone0005yy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8422/phone0009lj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crevette
08-14-2008, 05:45 PM
Joga - You're getting better. On that last one the shadow doesn't really make sense though.
Stussy - that r needs work.

I hate giving crits when I don't even know what I'm talking about.
I didn't want to waste to much space in my book. So here's some ideas.

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/ew.jpg

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/ew2-1.jpg

bowchicabowow
08-14-2008, 05:46 PM
Im not hating on your work Sex without condomns, but you don't need to post that many pics of essentially the same thing, at least not that big.
SAP - That looks fresh and simple, the second one I mean. It looks better than the first, try a cleaner one, on paper and take a pic. And yeah the tablets work magic. I have a intuous3. But my fucking dog destroyed the 50 dollar pen.
Any more crits on my throw?

smooth_nuts
08-14-2008, 05:48 PM
blah blah blah

nine stop biting gaint...NOW!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3228/2760361835_e8fc257f69.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3249/2761201690_196c0025a1.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3052/2761196562_aec9e71019.jpg
quick exchange for chump...
bumper cars
edit*sex is dopetastic...

BigBlueViolence
08-14-2008, 05:52 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/16kc3ma.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/mcrgip.jpg

bowchicabowow
08-14-2008, 05:54 PM
That earn one is fresh. Just the cholo dots are out of place.

knightsafe
08-14-2008, 09:34 PM
some new shit
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/227/d/d/sf_by_fastnloud.jpg

HaLo_07
08-14-2008, 10:29 PM
Yo no nothin, your throw-up needs work. You got no characteristic to it.

Keep tryin...

Baron
08-15-2008, 09:33 AM
I like it, try a colored fill next time, that would look nice.

sex without condoms
08-15-2008, 10:54 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114348.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113543.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113558.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113618.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112051.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112130.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112140.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112153.jpg

GaZm13
08-15-2008, 11:52 AM
^^You don't need to post in every thread. Pick one or the other please.

sex without condoms
08-15-2008, 12:04 PM
i do what i please man.

TESTER
08-15-2008, 12:54 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/Photo46-1.jpg

nine that looks dope

bowchicabowow
08-15-2008, 02:19 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/Photo46-1.jpg

nine that looks dope
Fix the E's and the R. R looks too much like an A. That could be fixed with a dot. The E's don't look like E's. Looks fuckin good tho.

Thrice
08-15-2008, 02:24 PM
sex-same crit as i posted in toy blackbooks
kinght-pretty nice, great size, although i suggest balancing that little thing on the top of the F.
teseter-very nice, i advise making that S wider and add the hole things on the Es and R.
Posting old flick for more crits.
http://i34.tinypic.com/29ux0tt.jpg

BigBlueViolence
08-15-2008, 04:41 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/16kc3ma.jpg

http://i37.tinypic.com/mcrgip.jpg
Bumpskis

Sex- Your shit is sweet, I just think the last Apples one had a little too much space between the letters.

crevette
08-15-2008, 05:22 PM
big blue - more colors, cleaner, don't like overlaps if they are in a piece so simple.
thrice - cool, except for that last m looks too big, and that tumor on the right side of the m looks... like a tumor.
tester - sick style, like the cleaniless. that s is UGLY though. Make it more boxy like the other ones.
sex - I like that 7th one, the green looks good, that splash looks good, BUT those orange squiglys look shitty. I don't like the ones with diff colors on each one because they emphasize one letter more than another making it look imbalanced. If you did all VERY VERY bright colors but different it might look better. Similar brightness thoough.
knight - that f and the top of that s look decent. HOWEVER, the bottom of the s looks lumpy. And I dunno but sf seems kind of short. that's just me though.

aright so i got mine on paper, and it doesn't look as good but i'll keep working. those were the only colors i had. need to buy some pens. my s looks too small, the p looks to big and needs to be pushed more against the a. have i missed anything?

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/scan0002.jpg

HaLo_07
08-15-2008, 08:15 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/Photo46-1.jpg

Shit is hot. Stay up.

Commadore:Pluto
08-16-2008, 01:43 AM
i dig that style you got going there t's are a bitch for me(throwie wise that is)

Commadore:Pluto
08-16-2008, 01:49 AM
fucking having trouble uploading shit

mekosbc
08-16-2008, 12:33 PM
seriously bro it gets old seein the same pixz on every thread there is no point i posting them in every thread.... not beefin just tellin you it getz old they hot throwz but seriously come on.....
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/114348.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113543.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113558.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/113618.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112051.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112130.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112140.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/112153.jpg

ShaolinNy
08-16-2008, 01:05 PM
Would any one be able to help me out with a thowie for sneak please?Ive tried and every time i do something it just looks really toy..All i want is soemthign simple and fresh dont go crazy

Thanks alot

wafflecakee
08-16-2008, 03:15 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i53/wafflecakee/Photo99.jpg

Wallace
08-16-2008, 06:23 PM
try a smaller dot on the O, and a different s/e

dj3hac
08-16-2008, 07:17 PM
just a sketch i did with a shitty sharpie, only fine marker that i have that still has ink right now. Again... shitty webcam. I did different styles for the ASK and the ONe.

http://teamhac.com/pictures/Picture004.jpg
ASKONe

Sarto
08-16-2008, 07:38 PM
Ask- make the bars all the same widths , for example the a is way skinner then the k ,
not a bad sketch over all
but i find alot of people write ask ,

dj3hac
08-16-2008, 08:09 PM
the K is supposed to have the wide leg on it, its from my throwie which I'll include as well. There is no body in my area that writes ask, im not going world wide so im not going to worry too much about my name, because ive been using it for 4 years now. but IF i was going to change i'd probably write: "Septik".

http://teamhac.com/pictures/Picture010.jpg
http://teamhac.com/pictures/Picture005.jpg
http://teamhac.com/pictures/Picture006.jpg
http://teamhac.com/pictures/Picture007.jpg
http://teamhac.com/pictures/Picture008.jpg
http://teamhac.com/pictures/Picture009.jpg

noxi
08-16-2008, 08:48 PM
Looks pretty dope.

Mr yarbles
08-16-2008, 08:59 PM
What?

FIrst of all all his widths are fucked up his letter structure is terrible it dosn't even look like he's using bars he use shitty extensions and he's combining throwies and striaght letters
I'm sorry but those are anything but dope, those need a whole lot of work.

Baron
08-16-2008, 09:25 PM
1st doesnt flow and is very generic,
2nd I dont like it at all. The A looks like it could be an H and the S looks terrible
3rd nothing looks even or flowing at all
4th looks like a5R
5th ay?
6th meh...

Wallace
08-17-2008, 03:17 AM
ask - most of those aren't really throwy's
im so shitty with paper.. i like my big drawing spaces =)

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5048/phone0004pw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ShaolinNy
08-17-2008, 12:34 PM
Would any one be able to help me out with a thowie for sneak please?Ive tried and every time i do something it just looks really toy..All i want is soemthign simple and fresh dont go crazy

Thanks alot

Any one>?As you can see i need a ton of help

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo08/c5/15/19af9d054397.jpg

crevette
08-17-2008, 02:26 PM
^^dude just go to the non toy throwie thread and look at some ideas. Don't copy them, but look at the general style. Take bits and pieces and combine, or just make up some shit. Work on one letter at a time while at the same time making sure they don't look radically different. Then do them all more or less the same length and width etc. You can't just shit one out. Use newspaper or something to practice on and just keep practicing til you get something that looks halfway decent. The work won't be done for you.

ask - that first one looks okay but that k doesn't really have anything to do with the others. Make it bubblier and stuff.

mr yarbles - i wouldn't be talking... Work on yours before going ape shit on other peoples...

crevette
08-17-2008, 02:27 PM
wallace - hardcore except for the s looks sketch.

Mr yarbles
08-17-2008, 02:55 PM
^^dude just go to the non toy throwie thread and look at some ideas. Don't copy them, but look at the general style. Take bits and pieces and combine, or just make up some shit. Work on one letter at a time while at the same time making sure they don't look radically different. Then do them all more or less the same length and width etc. You can't just shit one out. Use newspaper or something to practice on and just keep practicing til you get something that looks halfway decent. The work won't be done for you.

ask - that first one looks okay but that k doesn't really have anything to do with the others. Make it bubblier and stuff.

mr yarbles - i wouldn't be talking... Work on yours before going ape shit on other peoples...

I'm not going ape shit on him, i'm trying to help him
People have been hard on me too
He's never going to learn if people tell him he's dope

You guys are too soft on everyone.

Asic I don't like the a :/
Everything else is good
Try not to make them go small to big makes it look wierd.

crevette
08-17-2008, 03:32 PM
Mine. I did it on the comp, but ill do it on paper later. And more cleaned up. prefer this one, or the bubblier longer one? like the p and a but hate the s. i'm just working out the letter order, to see which is better. pas spa sap watever...

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/ew3.jpg

sneak- mebbe work in pencil. first.

dj3hac
08-17-2008, 06:08 PM
Can someone please explain "bars' to me? In my time I've never heard of them, I just write the way I learned. I've asked around and people say they don't know what they are, even the local greats.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture011.jpg

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture012.jpg

SOCA
08-17-2008, 07:48 PM
buddy, i dont even know what bars are, just do your thing, do your letters, as long as you like it, than fuck anyone who says different i see some potential in that shit though ask, keep drawin holmes.

nemzone
08-17-2008, 08:38 PM
http://a259.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/108/l_5207ffb039980779fb2f6a9dda080ee2.jpg

i hat excuses for shit work as much as the next cunt but in all honesty this is all iv done in like a year. was dont the nite b4 i flew to iraq... ignore the hand

osnapizzel
08-17-2008, 10:07 PM
ask those arent real throws, plus the real ask burns you

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/203/picture324cg9.jpg

dj3hac
08-17-2008, 10:28 PM
well burn me as he may, im the only one in my area that writes it (902 - Nova Scotia) so i dont much care about my name... Ive been using it for 4 years, im known by it, im not changing it.

bowchicabowow
08-17-2008, 10:31 PM
well burn me as he may, im the only one in my area that writes it (902 - Nova Scotia) so i dont much care about my name... Ive been using it for 4 years, im known by it, im not changing it.

Try making a play on the word. Like AskMe or Ask?s. I think that last one would be dope. That might be totally unecessary, depends on how big the "real" ask is.

dj3hac
08-17-2008, 10:44 PM
well my catch phrase is "Ask about me".

And yarbles, if you are going to crit me, fine... But don't try to rip on me when what I have destroys you. A seasoned veteran, sure rag on me all you want. As long as you have the skill to back yourself up.

Mr yarbles
08-17-2008, 10:57 PM
WHat the fuck?
Don't fucking call me out
your shit dosn't burn mine.
For four years you suck fucking dick.
You really wana see who's better then battle me.

bowchicabowow
08-17-2008, 11:00 PM
Yo chill ppl.

Yeah yarbles was harsh but it was true. It does need work. and ask sorry no you don't burn yarbles.

Ok settled cool dope fresh ill sick n shit.

osnapizzel
08-17-2008, 11:02 PM
well burn me as he may, im the only one in my area that writes it (902 - Nova Scotia) so i dont much care about my name... Ive been using it for 4 years, im known by it, im not changing it.


youve been writing for 4 years??? damn kid... ive been writing for a year, and i shit on you :(

my advice to you is less talking more sketching, a lot more sketching...

Mr yarbles
08-17-2008, 11:16 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/idd99i.jpg
Still working with the letters.

snap
Diggin it

bowchicabowow
08-17-2008, 11:24 PM
yarbles I give that throw a license to ill. Cept the N i weird make the top and bottom storkes more offset, so it looks less like an H, I can still read it but it'd look better.

ShaolinNy
08-18-2008, 12:18 AM
^^dude just go to the non toy throwie thread and look at some ideas. Don't copy them, but look at the general style. Take bits and pieces and combine, or just make up some shit. Work on one letter at a time while at the same time making sure they don't look radically different. Then do them all more or less the same length and width etc. You can't just shit one out. Use newspaper or something to practice on and just keep practicing til you get something that looks halfway decent. The work won't be done for you.

ask - that first one looks okay but that k doesn't really have anything to do with the others. Make it bubblier and stuff.

mr yarbles - i wouldn't be talking... Work on yours before going ape shit on other peoples...


Ok thanks ill try that

crevette
08-18-2008, 02:26 AM
Yarbles - like the A. E is passable except for that little mark on the middle bar of that e. Both K's look kinda fucked, but the 1st looks better than the 2nd one. S is passable. O is fine. Last E is fine except for that little mark in blah blah same thing as the other e. General form looks pretty cool.

Osnap - Word, that's sick. The character i don't dig as much. Drop the character or make it better.

ask - keep working. More. Not so many add ons. Keep it simple. Same thing I told shaolin, look at ideas in the non toy thread.

I penciled mine. i like it. I'll pen it later, when I get pens. Which might take a while.

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/scan0003.jpg

nemzone
08-18-2008, 06:18 AM
http://a259.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/108/l_5207ffb039980779fb2f6a9dda080ee2.jpg

i hat excuses for shit work as much as the next cunt but in all honesty this is all iv done in like a year. was dont the nite b4 i flew to iraq... ignore the hand


stop talkin pish u lil fagbags

Mass Appeal
08-18-2008, 08:30 AM
And yarbles, if you are going to crit me, fine... But don't try to rip on me when what I have destroys you. A seasoned veteran, sure rag on me all you want. As long as you have the skill to back yourself up.

Hahahahah oh god hilarious.
Looking fine Nemz.
And im liking that OhSnap joint tooo.

Thrice
08-18-2008, 11:02 AM
thrice - cool, except for that last m looks too big, and that tumor on the right side of the m looks... like a tumor.


My reaction to that.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BANkMaLJaY4&feature=related


Im just kidding thanks for the crit, i'll fix it.

crevette
08-18-2008, 03:09 PM
Haha. IT'S NOT A TUMA OK ITS NOT A TUMA. Man, I can't believe that guy is the governor of California.

dj3hac
08-19-2008, 01:22 AM
Just trying some new styles.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture013.jpg

I colored over my finger to further stay anonymous, am I white, black... red?

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture014.jpg

I like that ^E^ and no i didnt bit this, if you think i did, sorry ive never seen it before so it wasnt intentional. (i did each half of my name in a different style, its ASKONe, not just ask)

Nesk1
08-19-2008, 08:56 AM
Ask, not feeling the first one so much, I don't know just doesn't flow nice I suppose, but what do I know.
As for the second one, it actually looks quite nice, maybe spread the lines in the middle of the N a bit more to make it a bit more distinctive, looks a tad like an H atm, but it's pretty good.

Pas, I'd say stop the lines on the s before it reaches the A if you know what I mean, so you can actually see it's an s, but it's pretty legible, maybe add a bit more style to it, but nice and simple is good. :)

Yarbles, looks sick, all I can see is that on your N at the bottom, don't have a gap, I'd just have the line, but it's up to you of course.
Mine, the wall was pretty dirty, was wet and grimey and just grim, but I gave it a go.
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/herb360/Image080.jpg
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/herb360/Image079.jpg
Crits would be muchos appreciated, ta:)
EDIT - God damn it this happened last time, never use photobuckets editing tool, doesn't seem to work when linking pics =/ Just have a go at reading it ;)

osnapizzel
08-19-2008, 01:23 PM
what does that say? on the last one that thing after the s and before the e looks better than your e, the k needs a lot of work especially in the right bottom corner, the s is the strongest letter of them all

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6136/picture327aj4.jpg

Spraycan Stories
08-19-2008, 01:43 PM
haha ohsnap knows whats up

whosthisguy
08-19-2008, 01:59 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/f2olyv.jpg

crits?

crevette
08-19-2008, 02:29 PM
ohsnap - LOL

depo - the d looks like a y, e is ugh, especially that character's gotta go, p looks ok apart from that top part. the 0 looks more like a d.

nesk - the s is the only aright thing. That k needs mad work. what's that second letter?

Nesk1
08-19-2008, 05:52 PM
ohsnap - LOL

depo - the d looks like a y, e is ugh, especially that character's gotta go, p looks ok apart from that top part. the 0 looks more like a d.

nesk - the s is the only aright thing. That k needs mad work. what's that second letter?

It says SIEK

Mr yarbles
08-19-2008, 06:27 PM
Messed up on both of them
http://i33.tinypic.com/eqcokk.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/kcxaxi.jpg

haha ohsnap that chicks got a madddd tan line
Still though props :)

Dude under me that's more of a piece than a throw

bak
08-19-2008, 07:25 PM
yarbles i like the style
onsnap lol

new lil sharpie toy crits?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/08-19-08_1654.jpg

dj3hac
08-19-2008, 08:20 PM
for just starting out thats quite good, i like how you were able to connect everything. The N is a bit off though

crevette
08-20-2008, 02:03 AM
nesk - make that look like an i.
yarbles - second one is better. Still that k's right leg looks sketchy. It's too skinny. Try to do it all in sharpie, because those inside outlines don't look so clean.
bak - i like the color and the fill but that u is mega odd and the letters at the end are fatter than the ones in the beginning. Some of that 3d doesn't make sense either go up and down at the same time.

I don't really stick to one style. Repeating one style would make it... boring. It's probably not a good idea though...

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/8853/scan0004vo3.jpg[SIZE="1"]

osnapizzel
08-20-2008, 06:13 AM
pas thats not a throw

whosthisguy
08-20-2008, 11:49 AM
http://i36.tinypic.com/f2olyv.jpg

crits?



crits?

Thrice
08-20-2008, 11:56 AM
Give crits to get crits.

crevette
08-20-2008, 12:25 PM
aight, my bad.

whosthisguy
08-20-2008, 01:08 PM
there's been nothing to crit since i've posted?

mekosbc
08-20-2008, 03:53 PM
frsh letter for a good lookin gurl from this angle haha dope shit snap
what does that say? on the last one that thing after the s and before the e looks better than your e, the k needs a lot of work especially in the right bottom corner, the s is the strongest letter of them all

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6136/picture327aj4.jpg

mekosbc
08-20-2008, 03:58 PM
dude there is no way you have been writing for four years. n do stuff like that.... you need alot of work on you letter structure...style...fills...handstyle...etc... just go to the new to graff thread learn sum stuff...your throwies are ight but ur other stuff is hella toy ish...not started beef but seriously...
Just trying some new styles.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture013.jpg

I colored over my finger to further stay anonymous, am I white, black... red?

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture014.jpg

I like that ^E^ and no i didnt bit this, if you think i did, sorry ive never seen it before so it wasnt intentional. (i did each half of my name in a different style, its ASKONe, not just ask)

beefisforburgers
08-20-2008, 04:38 PM
New hollow yo, critz?http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/DSCF0982.jpg

osnapizzel
08-20-2008, 05:57 PM
i like that k the r needs some work on the top, and the o is a little plain, but then again its an o so theres only so much you could do with it, where the drop shadow at?

beefisforburgers
08-20-2008, 06:56 PM
Thats not an R its an A.

beefisforburgers
08-20-2008, 07:10 PM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0713.jpg

Here's a fillin and drop shadow,the yellow one is mine.

Hoaks
08-20-2008, 08:07 PM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8932/image085pe4.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image085pe4.jpg)
Click for size ;)
well everyone here is 10x above my level so my crits probably aren't worth much, but I'll play by the rules and give it a go.
Ohsnap, looks sick I really don't know what to crit, maybe make the left leg of the H a bit fatter? nice girl too.
beef, Oh wait, it's an A not an r >.< Looks dope :)
sorry for the shit crits

VoyR
08-20-2008, 08:27 PM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0713.jpg

Here's a fillin and drop shadow,the yellow one is mine.

Another thing I'm not liking is how u do the upper inside part of the R, Id change the horizontal line to a vertical one. Maybe try curve it a bit so it follows the flow of the outer line of the R as well, I'd also lower the line that makes the two legs of the r a bit. ... :P Toy critz

BIGel
08-20-2008, 08:30 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3212/2782193555_21ee8b6457.jpg?v=0

Hoaks
08-20-2008, 08:34 PM
BIGel, looking good, make the bottom half of the E a bit wider / longer, looks a bit off, but you don't see it around, and different is good, so.
And I know you're a mod and all, but try and give some crits, please? ;)

lolumad?
08-20-2008, 08:41 PM
oak, i think the hollow is tight. only thing i would do is just try and do something really really little with the o just so that it's not simple as fuck.

crevette
08-21-2008, 04:29 AM
oak - make that a an a.

Bigel - It's nice but that e is weird and so is the z before it. Blacken that little triangular part to the right of the emebbe.

Hoaks - nice s and h can't really catch that last letter. The connecting bar in the H make it less tilted mebbe, like perpendicular to the H's legs.

i did kinda of a weird style. a still look like an a? I need new markers.

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/scan0006.jpg

crits i what i need, thanks.

Nesk1
08-21-2008, 07:34 AM
Haha, it's an exclamation mark, looks like he'll have to make it more legible, I'd say pas don't bend the P on the left hand side, if you get what I mean.

Tonberry
08-21-2008, 12:10 PM
Oak, I like it. The only thing I'd change is the simplicity of the O Do something with it, don't just make it a plain oval or circle. Otherwise, I like it.

TESTER
08-21-2008, 02:00 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/Photo46-2.jpg

sick bigel

beefisforburgers
08-21-2008, 02:21 PM
go simpler Tester
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0763.jpg

Nine9
08-21-2008, 04:18 PM
Oak that's sick. Love the K.

mekosbc
08-21-2008, 09:59 PM
yo beef ur gettin up..the force is a lil sloppy... but it lookz ight...

Sans
08-21-2008, 10:40 PM
beef- nice throw

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7103/dscn2411dp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

(http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=136&i=dscn2411dp0.jpg)

BigBlueViolence
08-21-2008, 10:49 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/qozs5v.jpg


Done for an exchange. Crits on the letters, not on the shadow, please.

Nerve- That second throwie is decent, the arrows need to go though, in my opinion. I dig that V, though

-Zeal-
08-22-2008, 01:12 AM
test-looks real tite keep it up
big el-nice throwie
oak-good but need to work on that can control a tad
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a211/adm123456789/throwiez.jpg

AdRe*
08-22-2008, 04:28 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/08-22-08_1620.jpg

beefisforburgers
08-22-2008, 06:01 PM
zeal I did that shit soo fast if it lookjs rugged it cause the spot was heaty

-Zeal-
08-22-2008, 06:20 PM
yea i understand i still think its good

beefisforburgers
08-23-2008, 04:16 PM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0758.jpg
A different throw for ya'll

Nesk1
08-23-2008, 07:20 PM
Oak, gotta say, not feeling this one as much go back to the a and o that you posted before imo, it's all good though.

beefisforburgers
08-23-2008, 08:56 PM
Thanks for the critz heres a different one http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0761.jpg

dj3hac
08-24-2008, 01:14 AM
Oak I like how you are getting up, If it were me, I'd try to make my letters more like cute animals (seriously) sometimes it's nice to see some lighter shit. A lot of stuff looks to 'mean' if you know what I mean. I'm not hating on THAT particular style, but its just beginning to become the norm.

dj3hac
08-24-2008, 01:36 AM
http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture015.jpg

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture016.jpg

Criticize me please :)

BEAS one
08-24-2008, 02:44 AM
crit please

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/8-21-2008112802AM.jpg

Nesk1
08-24-2008, 06:17 AM
Yeeeeeh, feeling it oak.

And what's up with that van?

garbage down tha way
08-24-2008, 11:30 AM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0758.jpg
A different throw for ya'll

this throw is so ill. dont change a thing on it.

The Chronic
08-24-2008, 01:57 PM
crit please

http://i273.photobucket.com/albums/jj217/JuggaloSk8er4life/8-21-2008112802AM.jpg

throwie aint to bad but that handstyle is staight muggin nigg.a, work on that

Mr yarbles
08-24-2008, 06:55 PM
http://i35.tinypic.com/259xxew.jpg

Oak not diggin the one on the uhaul the other's are good though

Beas work on your b and e

dj the throw aint bad but the piece is

dj3hac
08-24-2008, 09:31 PM
Oak not diggin the one on the uhaul the other's are good though

They are both on U-Haul, im think you mean the second one?

Mr yarbles
08-24-2008, 09:38 PM
Oh shit haha
I ment the first one the a and k look too spaced out in the middle

Snew
08-25-2008, 01:01 AM
Yarbles- thats ill.. Diggin all the Letters except maybe the K but i think it works good.
Oak- The first Throwie on the Page is the best of the three
Beas- I like the bottom half of the letters. Not really diggin the points on the top.
DJ3hac- the second one is awesome. the two letters work great together.. a nice 2 letter thrwoie..

anyways i know the can control is wack.. And i used too big of a cap and it was kinda clogged too.. but crits anyways..

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3173/2794822665_8ecd467961.jpg?v=0

H3TT1NG3R
08-25-2008, 09:34 AM
^throw some shadow on that, and once u get good at can control it'll be decent.
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8470/blackthroweq8.jpg
any crits before i put this up?

hellomynameisftc
08-25-2008, 10:13 PM
go simpler Tester
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0763.jpg

doughboy fresh!

Scratch
08-25-2008, 11:58 PM
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0821080118.jpg

I know its not good, critz? i need to improve it

beefisforburgers
08-26-2008, 04:05 AM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0807.jpg

beefisforburgers
08-26-2008, 04:07 AM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0803.jpg

beefisforburgers
08-26-2008, 04:12 AM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0757-1.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0828.jpg

hellomynameisftc
08-26-2008, 10:29 AM
oak i see you got mad ideas and keep it up. eventually your gonna find one you really like and run with it. where the fuck is that chemist tho?

AshY
08-26-2008, 09:33 PM
What good, first time painting
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT012.jpg
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/DONTKICKCATSHIT005.jpg

Wallace
08-26-2008, 09:58 PM
ash- the H looks solid other than the bottom right, the other letters could use some work

everyone loves stickers right?
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/8373/phone0005xt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mr yarbles
08-26-2008, 10:02 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/160wkd0.jpg

Asic man I'm really digging those they all flow nice and are just really good all around keep that up

Ash lose the floss or whatever you call it

LikeRainButNot
08-26-2008, 10:05 PM
ash - looks like u didnt shake ur cans well enough. work on getting comfortable with ur cans and keeping ur lines even width like in ur 's'. and lolz at the penis.

yarbles - watch those drips!

AshY
08-26-2008, 11:11 PM
thanks for the crits.

Snew
08-26-2008, 11:21 PM
Yarbles just keep paintin and move the can faster to stop the drips bro.
Ash I dig the H work with that style
Asic stickers are sick Lemme see some of them painted...

Anyways.. i screwed up the W i cant paint on my knees... haha

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3292/2802330422_244a73b816.jpg?v=0

Scratch
08-26-2008, 11:44 PM
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0821080118.jpg

I know its not good, critz? i need to improve it

I still need crits. Damn im bad at throws =[

http://a283.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/81/l_502fefc8d78e7cd6b927e4dd627c1cda.jpg

-sense-
08-27-2008, 12:25 AM
assh that shits funny, always have extra with you.
sneew that s is hiding, strighten that mother fuckers head up.

http://i36.tinypic.com/jr9t12.jpg
crossin paths

-sense-
08-27-2008, 12:29 AM
old
http://i36.tinypic.com/nnw1mh.jpg
thats mines now.

Wallace
08-27-2008, 12:34 AM
too much going on

-sense-
08-27-2008, 12:56 AM
naw man i was crossin http://i34.tinypic.com/11hfnf8.jpgtook that shit and killed in the name of

letsgobombin
08-27-2008, 07:35 AM
sense- why? moes is alot better than you and unless you know him and are doing it for a joke, theirs no point, if you're gonna go over someone anyway then actually do a piece, dont put crappy lines and stuff inside his throw
yaek- i counldnt actually tell what it said but guessing from what you write its ya, think of a new y and a, do your whole name and then for a shortened version just take away the e and k, your pink is very hard to see, that might be to do with the chrome or you mightve rushed it. if you rushed it then take your time next time, not so long that you get drips but dont be so rushed, it doesnt look like an extremely heated spot anyway, hit the books first
snew- stick to chill spots for now and go simpler, the best letter is the e but its alot better than the other letters which says to me that it was either bit or heavily influenced by someone, the w is very generic but could look good if it was cleaner and the s and n are horrible and take the bit off of the bottom of the e
aekz- you need to work on your can control big time, find a chill spot and just do simples, simples, simples to build up your control. your drop shadow is messy the letters get gradually smaller, dont worry about doing bubbles off to the side, keep working on that k and i dont like the little pointed bit, it can be pointed but i think the way it comes to a point doesnt look good, i prefered your older style
asic- nicer than normal but try not to make the top of the s and i so pointed smooth it out a bit, try it with the drop shadow not going over the next letter and try to mix light colours with other light colours or vice versa when you're mixing colours because i cant make out the outline on some of them
ash- its very, very dusty, your h is the only letter you should keep but take away that little tumour on the right side of it, hit the books and get a new a and s down, forget about the charac
oak- you got some nice stuff watch the drips on the metal one, how did you get the seemingly floating one? truck? the one with the red forcefield is clean, overall a nice solid throw thats not trying to hard but try to keep all your pics in one post
lasek- couldnt make out the a at all and the other letters are bad go alot simpler, the only kinda slightly good letter would be the a if you took off the tumour like thing, start back with simple bubbles
snew again- see above
edit: now thats what you call crits

Mr yarbles
08-27-2008, 08:09 AM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2j5c41j.jpg
New a
and thanks alot for the crits man
Good to see someone still gives good advice



snew stand the s up move you w in and ust keep working on it
I wouldn't hit frieghts just yet

Edit nevermind moes I didn't read the whole sotry haha

haner_noc
08-27-2008, 10:33 AM
yoooo chek this shit bitch www.hit-them-hard.piczo.com

LikeRainButNot
08-27-2008, 10:59 AM
yarbles - leg on the k is too skinny and the top part of the s is too big.

beefisforburgers
08-27-2008, 06:55 PM
sense- why? moes is alot better than you and unless you know him and are doing it for a joke, theirs no point, if you're gonna go over someone anyway then actually do a piece, dont put crappy lines and stuff inside his throw
yaek- i counldnt actually tell what it said but guessing from what you write its ya, think of a new y and a, do your whole name and then for a shortened version just take away the e and k, your pink is very hard to see, that might be to do with the chrome or you mightve rushed it. if you rushed it then take your time next time, not so long that you get drips but dont be so rushed, it doesnt look like an extremely heated spot anyway, hit the books first
snew- stick to chill spots for now and go simpler, the best letter is the e but its alot better than the other letters which says to me that it was either bit or heavily influenced by someone, the w is very generic but could look good if it was cleaner and the s and n are horrible and take the bit off of the bottom of the e
aekz- you need to work on your can control big time, find a chill spot and just do simples, simples, simples to build up your control. your drop shadow is messy the letters get gradually smaller, dont worry about doing bubbles off to the side, keep working on that k and i dont like the little pointed bit, it can be pointed but i think the way it comes to a point doesnt look good, i prefered your older style
asic- nicer than normal but try not to make the top of the s and i so pointed smooth it out a bit, try it with the drop shadow not going over the next letter and try to mix light colours with other light colours or vice versa when you're mixing colours because i cant make out the outline on some of them
ash- its very, very dusty, your h is the only letter you should keep but take away that little tumour on the right side of it, hit the books and get a new a and s down, forget about the charac
oak- you got some nice stuff watch the drips on the metal one, how did you get the seemingly floating one? truck? the one with the red forcefield is clean, overall a nice solid throw thats not trying to hard but try to keep all your pics in one post
lasek- couldnt make out the a at all and the other letters are bad go alot simpler, the only kinda slightly good letter would be the a if you took off the tumour like thing, start back with simple bubbles
snew again- see above
edit: now thats what you call crits



Thanks for the critz man I stood on the roof of a truck for the yellow fill in and stood on a chainlink fence for the hollow blue one

Mr yarbles
08-27-2008, 08:39 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/67oci8.jpg
Workin on it

GETRAD
08-27-2008, 11:30 PM
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/DSCF6107.jpg
first time out of the books, woulndt have done it but i found a chill warehouse
critz please

dj3hac
08-28-2008, 10:26 AM
older, but i like it.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture017.jpg

LeaksOne
08-28-2008, 03:44 PM
dj3hac- i like that throw. poor quality but i can still see its pretty good. you should try addin colors
yarbles-i like the new A its pretty nice an im feelin your S
getrad-keep practicin man. you got potential

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff013.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff014.jpg
sorry so big. i forgot to resize em. i changed my A an tweaked my L an E
crits??

GETRAD
08-28-2008, 04:55 PM
first try at critz
leaks- iv been lurking the toy threads for a while, and your shit is def getting better, i just dont like the bottom of the L, its to short for me but what do i know

-sense-
08-28-2008, 06:40 PM
lets go- nah dude me and moes are tight.
it really wasnt that serious i wasnt tryin to waste paint i didnt have at the time.
it got the point across
so yeah boyy

bowchicabowow
08-29-2008, 12:19 AM
WOW leaks that is a huge improvement! props!

LeaksOne
08-29-2008, 01:28 AM
WOW leaks that is a huge improvement! props!

thanks man. i took what all you guys were sayin to the head an put it on paper. you dont kno how much i practice my throws everyday. thanks for all the crits. i need to start fuckin wit new styles now an perfectin this throw

Pesky_Human
08-29-2008, 03:57 AM
That R at the beginning is hot. Would love to see a clearer picture...


older, but i like it.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture017.jpg

Pesky_Human
08-29-2008, 04:25 AM
That R at the beginning is hot. Would love to see a clearer picture...


older, but i like it.

http://www.teamhac.com/pictures/Picture017.jpg

noxi
08-29-2008, 10:21 AM
Thats a "a"

ShaolinNy
08-29-2008, 12:46 PM
Can someone PLEASE help me with a nice n simple throwie for sneak.ive been trying for ever n cant figure any thing out can some please help!

thanks

Hoaks
08-29-2008, 04:43 PM
Can someone PLEASE help me with a nice n simple throwie for sneak.ive been trying for ever n cant figure any thing out can some please help!

thanks

We're not gonna do your graff for you.

Sorry it just annoys me when I see exchanges but then the people actually start writing what the other person did or whatever.

Worms
08-29-2008, 05:08 PM
some from tonights mission
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/0042.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/062.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/060.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/056.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/061.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/058.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/059.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/057.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/004-1.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/0062.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/0032.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/0022.jpg

Czar One
08-29-2008, 07:35 PM
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/picklecheese.jpg

Worms
08-29-2008, 07:48 PM
try makin it simpler its kinda messy r they one liners?

Czar One
08-29-2008, 07:49 PM
yeah, except for that just CZ one on there, that's a two liner =p

Worms
08-29-2008, 08:05 PM
wana try makin me a one liner wers

Czar One
08-29-2008, 08:06 PM
I would, but I suck at them, those were my first attempt at oneliners. I could try and see what comes of it though man.

Worms
08-29-2008, 08:11 PM
cant be n e worse them mine it ended up lookin like a 2 year old with a crayon

Czar One
08-29-2008, 08:17 PM
Alright man, I'm gunna start working on that right now.

Fube
08-29-2008, 08:25 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture045-1.jpg

synps
08-29-2008, 11:23 PM
wers- i think your r's look to much like n's
czar- try not to transpose your letters as much but have them just normal dont have all the overlapping lines
fube- sick as usual

I've been working on my throwie lately- thoughts?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/throwie.jpg

Czar One
08-30-2008, 10:02 AM
For Wers: Sorry it came out wack as hell =/
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/wersoneliner.jpg

Mr yarbles
08-30-2008, 05:01 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/wan5hk.jpg
Workin on my connection from a to e

Czar that is ill

sex without condoms
08-30-2008, 06:55 PM
some help out is due.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sketch/194855.jpg

Nirvous2000
09-03-2008, 04:19 PM
This be my throwy, but i havent been painting for long, this is like the 7th or 8th one i've painted, i know its fucking simple as shit but i rather go simple and clean then crazy and messy. but i'm in the middle of comping up with a new throwy post it up in a bit.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p111/AscheZuAsche_album/PEPTOGYE.jpg


Sick shit fube

synps- i think your lacking flow, something isnt flowing quite right. try doing it faster and smoother, find the flow in it.

osnapizzel
09-03-2008, 10:29 PM
one line throws all dayyyy

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2127/picture350fp0.jpg

Evasion Of Invasion
09-03-2008, 10:36 PM
someone mention one liners?
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/first.jpg
regular Sinn throwie
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_0076.jpg

viseversa101
09-04-2008, 01:18 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/2.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_857f2370df6ef04831d01d67e6f67740.jpg

sex without condoms
09-04-2008, 01:26 PM
that looks nothing like viceversa dont paint now just sketch.
it looks like it reads wcsewersa

thats me
09-04-2008, 03:29 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll150/JYwriter/IMG000133.jpg

sallybsk
09-04-2008, 10:27 PM
You guys do know there is a thread for one liners.


oh yea, and your spelling for "vise versa" is kinda wack xD...
lewl

Mr yarbles
09-05-2008, 10:36 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/2qa0gog.jpg
cenik your c i and k dot look good work o them

skor lose the huge loop in you r

LeaksOne
09-08-2008, 04:01 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff015.jpg
tryin to funky up my L. i still need a new fuckin K

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff016.jpg
possible aka name

Crits??

yortseD.eht.hturT.
09-08-2008, 11:53 PM
http://http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d21/volcom__19/105_4063.jpg

Stussy
09-09-2008, 06:02 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/1zmcdqc.jpg

Scratch
09-09-2008, 06:50 PM
My shit. Trying to actually get my throws down.

Crits would help a lot, thanks.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0909081941.jpg

says "ya!" by the way.

Thrice
09-09-2008, 11:52 PM
Bahahah how shitty i was not too long ago.
http://i38.tinypic.com/30ndfdx.jpg

dink
09-10-2008, 12:11 AM
im a supervirgin toy, first throw ever made , , whatcha think?

http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/9376/graffmy007sb3.th.jpg (http://img374.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffmy007sb3.jpg)

Thrice
09-10-2008, 12:16 AM
Put the can down and hit the paper and pencil. Start sketching.

beefisforburgers
09-10-2008, 02:22 AM
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0947.jpg

Some shit I drew for sneak

beefisforburgers
09-10-2008, 02:23 AM
Heres some of my shit and stuff by my homies


http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0911.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0896.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0892.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0882.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0904.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0922.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0934.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0902.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0901.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0843.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0938.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0915.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0946.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0894.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0930.jpg
http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0717.jpg

soath
09-10-2008, 04:10 AM
alot of beauty shit in that post. keep it UP.

beefisforburgers
09-10-2008, 04:35 PM
Yo stussy that throw has potential keep it up
That Ya throw is decent needs work though

Scratch
09-10-2008, 06:40 PM
yeah, i know, im still working on it. any advice?

LikeRainButNot
09-10-2008, 08:05 PM
~~

FLSteele16
09-10-2008, 08:42 PM
oak- really nice work
schwa- i like that style a lot

i have not done a throwie in a while. did this one real quick in study hall.
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/7166/scan0003bs1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/scan0003bs1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img242/scan0003bs1.jpg/1/)