Throwies

[jrone]

alright im happy with my throw up now thanks for all the input .. now this is another one ive been working on, changed the bottom of the R n made it more cartoon like

[NosE2]

the top of the r comes down to far. bring it up so it doesnt make it looks like a munchkin or some shit

[Norfsuthr]

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8725/image88j.jpg (http://img36.imageshack.us/i/image88j.jpg/)
Still trying to get a good R, I think this ones better than what i had yesterday.

JR make the line in the middle of the J come down farther, and work on the r.
wilbur try to make each letter level, and that doesnt look like an L.

[H1P30N3R]

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8725/image88j.jpg (http://img36.imageshack.us/i/image88j.jpg/)
Still trying to get a good R, I think this ones better than what i had yesterday.

JR make the line in the middle of the J come down farther, and work on the r.
wilbur try to make each letter level, and that doesnt look like an L.

really diggin that throw norf props

[NouveauP]

I missed PESO day, so I made a quick contribution. Should've made the top of the P a bit bigger, but oh well. Lazy styles.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0211.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

pesoes just has a nice flow and of course your hands are clean

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0025.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

Old shittt.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo195.jpg

[Mippi]

Alright here's the throwie I've been working on. I wrote it out a million times... still dont like it. But I'm ready for some crits.

[jrone]

these r my 2 official throw ups .. thanks to every one who helped me develope my throw ups i fn appreciate it
now its time to start bombing again so im prob not going to be posting again till i try doing some pieces
JR ONE
Just Reckless

[Phat 2]

thanks for the update on your officialness
first flick needs more flow, you need to lose the dot over the j everywhere, the n and e aren't good enough
second throw in second flick sucks ass.
we tell you over and over again. the first one in the second flick is the keeper. just lose the dot

[Svc]

19466

[Mippi]

agreed the uppercase r is kinda wack lowercase looks sick

new throw in need of crits please and thanks

[No_Alias]

I'd been fooling around on paper, and toyed (emphasis on toy) around with throw designs, but after reading some threads on the site, I took the knowledge I gained and tried applying it to this in my chill spot. I would appreciate all the suggestions, I eventually filled in the metallic barrier at the top of "11" so that's all yellow now. As a writer, what would be some steps you would take towards improving the overall feel of this?
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[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/IMG_0734.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/P1010772.jpg

[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0303112238.jpg

exchange wit hekler a while back
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0210112219.jpg

[ntn]

http://i772.photobucket.com/albums/yy7/S1ksh07z/181554_194523443909539_100000556531523_647319_8747 17_n.jpg

hahah srry man but i couldnt stop laughing for like 5 min.
just check other pieces for inspiration and practise till you drop.

oh yeah.. never put a crown above your piece unless u r king. :P


*lol didnt notice that1 was posted many pages back x)

[Sbal]

mipe i like it, e seems too wide
Dark, that tumor on the right side of the painted R is too big

[jypsy]

@Mipe I personally like the yellow throw better than the blue one you posted later, I think the 'm' is more legible in the yellow than the blue. The 'e' with the tongue made me smile :)
@Alias I like the highlighting on your numbers, but the misshapen 0 really bugs me. In your chill spot, where I assume you're not liable to be caught easily, you could have taken your time to make sure all the numbers were shaped evenly.

[ChadWarden]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/P1010772.jpg

the knee of your r looks wierd when the it goes out that far and doesnt come back closer to the other leg of the r.

but i like your throw enough to give you some feedback all the same.

[inthecity]

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/2329/mark4l.jpg

[Sbal]

yee mark fix up the top right bar of the K then go destroyy

[Fube]

im starting to regulate this thread a bit more. heres a few guidlines on what i would like to see catch on.

- no excessive crits without a bump to the next page, or if your posting crits along with your own work.
- small props like "thats good shit" ect... are fine with no bump, as long as its on the same page. make sure to address the post you want tho, by the screen name or name in work.
- if you dont like a sketch then there is no need to post hate about it. unless your posting some of your work with the hate.
- if your post got deleted and you feel you deserve it to be here then pm me your bitching, dont post it in the thread.

the idea here is to get as many flicks as possible with as little talk as possible.

feel me?

-Fube.

[ribcage]

@darkeist, yo if you do that throw in paint about 100 more times it will probably look the way you want but right now its lookin pretty weak, put a little more structure on the R and tighten up that D if thats what ur gonna use.

@mark you got a good base for your letters goin, make your letters a little more proportionate and work on that K dude lol

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0305111559.jpg
i keep goin to fast and overlapping my A and E, but uh I think yall can tell how that goes........crit if you please

[NouveauP]

Ribcage- I'd like to see it done with a ballpoint pen rather than a chisel tip. Looks like it could be sick. The curl is the middle of the R isn't doing it for me. And your A is a little lost. Hand under it is pretty sick. Keep developing this.

Mark- I'd try to tighten that throw up a bit. Maybe try making letters with minimal lines. These letters aren't really flowing yet.

Quick exchange with my homie Basoe.
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5136/5505098193_cd89a13ab3.jpg

[Phat 2]

i like how u left the b open. youve come a long way fast with throws hckler. props :)

[H1P30N3R]

nouv fresh and clean as usual..
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0035.jpg

[Skope2]

'Denie' i dont really do throwies too often so be as nasty as you can.

[NouveauP]

Thanks Pesoe! your throw shows huge improvement. I'd lose the little tumors of the P. I'd just come up straight for now. I personally would make the letters a little shorter, but that's just personal preference. good job, though!

Denie- the E's read as Cs. And those bumps on the N and I need to go. Study some throws online and emulate some shapes. Don't bite though

[Phat 2]

pesoe showing progress... yes yes...
props on this shit mayne, only comment I have is the lower hole of the S, not feelin it.. might be better without it, try the same lower part of the s nouveaup did upstairs

[sir.to.you.]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5298/5508254316_4884370c92.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5508254316/)
top fills that poopoo. crits?

[H1P30N3R]

your r is really hurtin lines aren't to clean. And your i is small try making all your letters proportions similiar.

[NosE2]

your s looks like a c

[Sbal]

nouv that basoe is pretty sick, but the soe part is kind of smaller.
Pesoe, that style seems reminiscent of the throw up font on the web, i know that you didnt use it but thats what it reminds me off, im just not feelin it, no hate
denie- not feeling the ni thing right there.
sir- totally rework it.

I know some people dislike my S because it's not a real bubble letter, so what could i do to the rest of my throw to help it flow with the s better?
19651

[NosE2]

just make the s open instead of closed...round out the top of the e, bring down the line in the middle of the a and put a - on top of it, you should be good..

[Tempo718]

how bad is this shit???

19659

[ribcage]

do you really have to ask?

[Tempo718]

eh... NAAAH

[KRE1]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/7985/002ipg.jpg
http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8308/003jte.jpg

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/200729_202959553064295_100000507545549_707705_1513 65_n.jpg

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/185899_202960053064245_100000507545549_707709_3915 971_n.jpg

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/196466_202959636397620_100000507545549_707706_5495 370_n.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

props phat the 2 letter is getin around i see

[Phat 2]

was just telling nouveaup how I automatically or unconsciously do it whenever I grab a can, even though I've always hated doing the same thing over and over again, this 2 letter bitch is starting to hang in my brain >.<
but it's all good it's all good

[Flawless Victory]

Not digging that little chrome fill one, but the black fill ones are pretty dope

[smokeitup]

less talk more pics, dont care if the pics suck i would rather see pics than shit talk.

this is old...

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MARCH2010093.jpg

[Darkeist]

haha funny i thought about writing bars today...

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Photo-0011-2.jpg

[Get Rekt!]

lookin any better? I think so
19760

[ribcage]

ooooo my bad on the crit post w/o pic wasnt intentional forgot about that shit..........


^so uh i guess i have to restate that the little bump before the bottom rounded part of the right portion of that M needs to go...and if your hands aint that great you probably shouldnt write on your throw with them...

flic for talk, ballpoints for the ***** who said post ballpoint, and old
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0311112224.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0311112210-1.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0311112212.jpg

[Phat 2]

^not bad, not bad at all :)

[H1P30N3R]

diggin your throws reach shit looks good man

[nah!]

not my best
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2044.jpg

[pointman]

first attempt

[OZON]

1984819849198501985119852
im pretty new to this stuff tell me what you think

[Phat 2]

pointman, I think someone already gave u this crit before, but anyway, if that's Spurt, your U looks like an L, you know what you have to do to fix that.
whatelse, your letters are too bubbly and too generic, throwups dont have to be this rounded, try to mix it up a bit, work on your throw's flow so that it doesnt just look like a bunch of rounded style bubble letters throw together like a block... give it flow
oh and get a better marker hehe

ozone, Imma give u the same crits i gave to pointman regarding your bubble letter throws, and for the straight ones, they might have some potential later on for simple pieces if you fix your letter structure and work on your bars, but not too much throwups if you know what i mean...
in your first flick; I wouldn't mind seeing a thick ass middle bar on the z, the second o as big as the first and both with no holes, and a thick ass back bar on the f with correct letter structure/bar usage with the same colors thrown on a colored wall anywhere in as-big-as-possible scale.. with the same silver and shit..

[H1P30N3R]

nah - what you lol'ing at your are basically the same level from the pic u posted .... ozone and nah dont worry about colors for now..get your letter form 3d and drop shadowing down. as well with what phat says thumb through the new to graff thread also it can be very helpful.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0040.jpg

[ribcage]

@hipe top right one the top of letters looks pretty wack my dude, e's on the top left lookin good tho prolly the best ones ive seen from you, put the middle part of the first one on the sencond one and theyd look dope... and round up that p

[OZON]

19877
i realize this was on the first page just wanted o try it out .. would this be considered biting?

[ribcage]

hmmmm idk if id call it a complete bite, but you are going into a grey area. especially with that first O. Its only not a bite when you use someone else's style to spark your own, but when you try to make his style your style and then call it yours when the only thing your changin is the name its a bite... so if you want to "try" his style dont post or paint it, either build from it or destroy it...

throws are a little different though cause most the styles/looks be pretty similar, especially with real common letters i.e. all the vowels and S's

what im wondering is of all things, why you bit something so toy that doesnt look good, cmon breh. If you gotta stoop to biting at least try to bite something better than that

to mods: uuuh i hope the couple pics i posted in that 1 up there keeps this 1 from bein deleted... unless what ive said is wrong

[OZON]

I thout this would be cobsidered biting i was just bored and saw it so i thoit i would try it thats what i got my 1st try but i dont think ill be doing that one anymore... Thanks for the feed back

[Worm*]

Crits?
http://i1214.photobucket.com/albums/cc500/AZRM/Black%20Book/2011-03-13_02-03-07_198.jpg
http://i1214.photobucket.com/albums/cc500/AZRM/Black%20Book/2011-03-14_01-34-19_388.jpg
http://i1214.photobucket.com/albums/cc500/AZRM/Black%20Book/2011-03-14_01-34-34_592.jpg

[ribcage]

I thout this would be cobsidered biting i was just bored and saw it so i thoit i would try it thats what i got my 1st try but i dont think ill be doing that one anymore... Thanks for the feed back

yea its one thing to do that with throws, like i said there in a grey area because a throw is a style of letter in itself, meaning most letters will have the same foundation and a lot of peoples throws have similar letters. its on you to put in the style.

But if you tried that shit with a piece or something you get a lot of upset people bitchin at you. If you just started writin hit me in a pm and ill do an exchange with ya

[NosE2]

on all of your throws its going from bigger to smaller starting with the A...the A looks like a pair of nuts, the Z isn't defined, the R looks like an A in most of them, and the M's look like a foot...The fades are actually pretty tight, just most of the time you wouldn't do a fade or full color in a throwie, unless you're Cope or some shit, which he is retarded regardless how up he was/is. Keep working on your throws, but also try some straight letters, and keep working on your handstyle. You might want to consider a different name, not because it's not a word, just because AZRM doesn't really flow together.

[ntn]

http://sp1.fotolog.com/photo/1/55/73/ditrymef/1300144075655_f.jpg
need some crits.

[ian]

^not really feelin the pointed tops all going to the same spot, and your letters grow majorly, idk if thats what you were goin for but i dont really like it.


http://i.imgur.com/6xvH2.jpg

[weedeater]

YES! that r and k in the last one are fucking dope, although im not really feeling the s or the t. the outline on the top is a little hard to define because of the colors, but its looking good.

[ntn]

@ian
aight,
yes the growth of the letters is where i was goin for :P
ur right about the tops though.

^ u should make it all 1 style like u did to the R and the K.. it will end up dope i guess even its not my style.

[ian]

YES! that r and k in the last one are fucking dope, although im not really feeling the s or the t. the outline on the top is a little hard to define because of the colors, but its looking good.

word dude, the top one is just some old thing i did, my blackbook is gettin pretty full so ive been tryin to use any open space i can, the stork is for the battle, and i agree about the s and t, i didnt really plan anything out i just sorta went with it lol. thanks though

[FuckTheFame]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5099/5530786200_bd2be034f6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5530786200/)


NAZER - nice style
ian - second letter could prob use some work
worm - good color schemes. whats up wtih 3d?

[H1P30N3R]

ian -what weedeater said
youth-i like your style the left top side of your y just throws me off idk why.
Aight guys Ive used my chill spot plenty summer is coming around are my throws decent enough to start gettin my shit out there in viewable places or should I stick to my spot for a while longer?
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0043.jpg

[skinaone]

19966 crit me ;)

[ribcage]

^ I like the S cause its unlike everyone else's generic version of S's, but uh the K and N look like crap, and why is ur A hiding?

@ hipe yo your P still dont look right *****, that one in particular looks like a lower case E to me, the bootom of the rounded part should be connected to the part that comes down from it ya digg? Its almost there

[skinaone]

^ I like the S cause its unlike everyone else's generic version of S's, but uh the K and N look like crap, and why is ur A hiding?

@ hipe yo your P still dont look right *****, that one in particular looks like a lower case E to me, the bootom of the rounded part should be connected to the part that comes down from it ya digg? Its almost there

the A didnt fit cause i had a samall place to throw it and yea had to do it like that
yea im trien to change the K but i ficed the N ill post a painted one later on this week

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/14-1.jpg

[nah!]

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2059.jpg

i like your throw mewn cant really fault it except maybe make the M a bit fatter?

[ntn]

niceone mewn, like the style. but i shouldchange your E. maybe make the ends of it the same length like u did to the M and W.

@nah not bad but its kinda sloppy. the H is leaning too much and that add on the N doenst rly fit the rest. maybe put that same add to the A and H. it will create a nice effect.

peace

[H1P30N3R]

nah move your marker quicker dont have to press hard either...
mewn - looks good only thing I dislike is the loop thing on the top left of your m
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0044.jpg

[OZON]

@H1P30N3R the only thing i dont like are the little wholes on the P and the O
The block one i was just trying things out
the one with the worlds i ust thout it would be a cl thing to draw(maybe a future piece)

[SilentVandal]

Just want some critique and help to improve my throw-up.

http://img41.imagevenue.com/loc257/th_334423149_DSCF0365_122_257lo.JPG (http://img41.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=334423149_DSCF0365_122_257lo.JPG)

(sorry about the pic size my computers screwed just zoom in the page)

[OZON]

@SilentVandal its looking pretty good but your k looks diferent from all the other letters also work on your e

[ian]

http://i.imgur.com/w5viAl.jpg

for the weekly battle. crits please?

[OZON]

[QUOTE=for the weekly battle. crits please?[/QUOTE]
i think decent but the U is uneven and the S doesnt go with the rest of thletters and the B doesnt have a whole in it like all the others

[ian]

thats cuz its an L nigguh

p.s. you're shits all wack and not throwies. get out the sketchbook and start doin keyboard letters, like this: OZON

[weedeater]

thats an L my man

and ian, the only letter thats not working with the rest is the S, also, the right side of the second D needs some work. props on the HOME battle btw

[ian]

thats an L my man

and ian, the only letter thats not working with the rest is the S, also, the right side of the second D needs some work. props on the HOME battle btw

yeah i havent been able to come up with a solid s that fits that style. im gonna use that O and E for my actual throwie and i think my n will fit but im havin trouble with the S, i can do a handie S and a piece S just fine, its actually probably my fav letter to do, but i cant seem to get down the throwie version lol. thanks for the props too

[ribcage]

@hipe yo thas lookin pretty good you paint it yet?

[Phat 2]

OZON, I'm gonna have to ask you to stop giving crits please, sir... step outta the car please, sir.
from now on, OZON gets free crits, he doesn't have to crit to get crits, ayyyt ?
you're welcome, OZON
you're welcome, everyone else

[ntn]

http://sp1.fotolog.com/photo/1/55/73/ditrymef/1300144075655_f.jpg
need some crits.
;d

[H1P30N3R]

@hipe yo thas lookin pretty good you paint it yet?

thanks, imma get it up this weekend pics comin soon

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/197010_205332266160357_100000507545549_723046_2721 146_n.jpg

stainer throws

[skinaone]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/197010_205332266160357_100000507545549_723046_2721 146_n.jpg

stainer throws
i like that P but that H looks wack and take the bottom what ever that i off and your good

[NouveauP]

I still dislike the points on the bottom of your throws, but you seem to like them, so I'll quit calling you on it. And the skinny bit on the left of your P throws me off a bit.

I need to fatten the K a little bit.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0242.jpg

[Phat 2]

really? should i go with just a rounded bottom without the spikes? i think that's actually the thing that's gives my throw some identity imo, if i just simply round it up it'll be too bland donno.. but i'll give it a shot
and yo that thing on the P ure talking about ibu is the back bar of the P, throws have structure too innit...
thanks for the crits

[ribcage]

^ yo i agree wit nouv, i dislike them spikes you put on it too

@nouv looks like your steppin out of your throwie style a little bit, i dig it, except for the bottom left part of that K...I can imagine what you meant for it to look like tho, so as for crits that A needs more style, only letter thats just a blob

[IbuprofenTablets]

i disagree, yo'. i fucks wit' dat pointy shit mah' *****.

now fo' mah' jazzzzzzzz; an exchange.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo244-1.jpg

[KAWT]

okay i've always been shit at throwies but i have decided put on up here. please gimme some crits

http://i1220.photobucket.com/albums/dd442/kawt1/throwie.png

[skinaone]

really? should i go with just a rounded bottom without the spikes? i think that's actually the thing that's gives my throw some identity imo, if i just simply round it up it'll be too bland donno.. but i'll give it a shot
and yo that thing on the P ure talking about ibu is the back bar of the P, throws have structure too innit...
thanks for the crits

not round but drip the spikes adn the P its the bottom that i dont like

[Worm*]

kawt start by making the space between letters consistent. Having gaps on only one side of the word makes it look uneven. Also that W irritates me because the center line doesn't line up.

Crits? I know I forgot the drop shadow on part of the bottom one. Didn't notice 'til it was too late.

http://i1214.photobucket.com/albums/cc500/AZRM/Black%20Book/2011-03-18_12-12-39_140.jpg

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/19-1.jpg

[weedeater]

^^word, plus giving info such as "at a sandwich shop, my job, my college" is more than enough to pin point who the fuck did them if they are reported and you get unlucky enough to have a cop from your town lurking BS. jail food es no bueno.

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

work on paper before you begin vandalizing your work and school

[chen]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/2011-03-0323_41_17.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/2011-03-2123_10_26.jpg
Working on my throwie...

[feud]

Thanks for all of the feedback guys. I deleted the post for safety and lack of quality. I'll get a blackbook and work on it. Any crit of my work that you all remember that would help in the quality aspect?

[KAWT]

chen, that last one is dope. the colours really work with it

[mindtrix350]

I'd have to agree, the bottom one looks dope.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-22at1033.jpg
Blah.

[ribcage]

jail food es no bueno.

Lol this is true, only thing to look forward to is getting a piece of fruit thats not beat to shit

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0323112024.jpg

[feud]

Okay, I practiced on paper. Crit this for me, yeah?

[mindtrix350]

None of those are throwies.

[Tacit]

i suck ass.... but i worked really hard to get my throw this "Good" this is pretty decent for me... i know im terrible, i can draw pretty well, but i have no creativity. can someone draw up a simple throw for me? something pretty sick, but not too hard, im more into curved on throws, no sharp pointy throws like some people have, nice and curvy. please?
which one of these is better? i used a high lighter on the first one, because i didnt have any markers at school.
http://i54.tinypic.com/28uidd4.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/ofroz4.jpg

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

that throws wack dont overlap the TA so much, make the dot of th i come lower so its no floating and lose the exclamation

[Tacit]

ive got down simple keyboard letters, what i posted was me trying to add a bit of style to them, letter progression. sincei was trying a new style, my spacing and all that is fucked up. everyone kepes telling me "keyboard letters" but IVE GOT THEM DOWN. im trying to gget better, i cant do keyboard letters forever

[Tacit]

http://i54.tinypic.com/2dt97qb.jpg
i fucked up the last t, and the C. and i know my Spacing's off. but i get rusty, ive been playing around with new styles for a few weeks, so yeah. plus, i want to learn something new, even if my letters aren't wtfpwn, im bored, and i want to draw something and look at it and say "wow thats kinda cool" and thats what a throw is. i want ot learn throws.

[mindtrix350]

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-23at1952.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

Wow. Not bad, Anion.
I fucks wit' all of that minus the Peso.


@Tacit: Trust, this kid Heklr was garbage when he first started a while ago. Fuckin' wanted to add "style" to everything just like you. All the while he couldn't even draw a straight letter R properly. Now he can lay clean straights.

Get your structure and flow sharp, then you can add style to shit.
You have to know the rules to be able bend them, brah'.

[H1P30N3R]

research shows your actual interest in graff not jus havin ppl spoon feed you shit .... jus sayin
bottom of my p needs bulked up but whatever jus a quick for talkin
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0049.jpg

[Tacit]

research shows your actual interest in graff not jus havin ppl spoon feed you shit ....
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0049.jpg

1. that 3d is WACK. chose a vanishing point, and stick with it.
2. i googled for like 20 minutes about that kind of graff, using variolsu terms, didnt find it, so i asked.

[H1P30N3R]

yea I know jus put it up they want more pics it is a drop shadow anyway lol... didn't mean anything cruel I was jus sayin man
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0044.jpg

[Tacit]

http://i51.tinypic.com/14si77l.jpg
see this.

[H1P30N3R]

thats called a perspective point but nice try here is a drop shadow tutorial
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-New-To-Graffiti-Start-Here!/page5

[TastyMcNasty]

lol hipe i gotta tell you... P's are gay and hard as hell to pull off
haha tacit. that is what we call a drop shadow :p

bored... crits?

[skinaone]

20316
crit meeee ;)

[ribcage]

@hipe you gettin better foo, First E and s lookin weak though(on the green one)... im boutta get you on 1, prolly pm it too you/put it in here

[skinaone]

lol hipe i gotta tell you... P's are gay and hard as hell to pull off

bored... crits?

i like that S verry nice S but erthing else is wack take the add on off ( those drips and bubbles)

[Tacit]

thats called a perspective point but nice try here is a drop shadow tutorial


the funny thing is, thats called a vanishing point. i take art, and we dont actually do art, they just make us memorize shit like this, google it. its a canishing point. and thats not drop shadow that i was trying to get him to draw, its a much better and cleaner looking version of 3d

[Tacit]

whatever though, no need to argue, its nbd. anyone wanna throw exchange with me? i need some new ideas. i have 0 creativity, im not gonna just rip off the whole throw, but i get ideas for othe styles from them

[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0323112024.jpg

bump+
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0323112029.jpg
yo obviously shit aint clean, but it aint my word so i aint gone draw it a thousand times until it all matches up but i think you get it.

I think P's are tight when you got them as the first letter, cause the left part of it can be flat without lookin weird... I pm'd you the other one since it has different P

@tasty yo the tops of the A and R are lookin real ugly. Makes the A not look like an A anymore so id say scratch that one, and the the right leg of the R looks too skinny too me... maybe start the line later so the skinny bar isnt that long? ....Just a thought... I think ima get you on 1 cause i like the word...

[mindtrix350]

the funny thing is, thats called a vanishing point. i take art, and we dont actually do art, they just make us memorize shit like this, google it. its a canishing point. and thats not drop shadow that i was trying to get him to draw, its a much better and cleaner looking version of 3d

I'm not even trying to argue, but drop shadows and 3D are different when it comes to this. I take art as well and I'm aware of what vanishing points are, I'm just letting you know, he wasn't trying to go for 3D.

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-23at22162.jpg

I need to just run with circles for the "B" and "R". And I need to lose the connection in the "R".

[2ndsexwithoutcondoms]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/new%20start%202011/153718.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/new%20start%202011/125622.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/new%20start%202011/boxespen.jpg

[skinaone]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/new%20start%202011/153718.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/new%20start%202011/125622.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/new%20start%202011/boxespen.jpg
they are all the same but they are tiiiggghhhtt but fuck that last S

[ribcage]

i take art,...

nobody gives a fuck dude.

On the real though drawing lines for vanishing points is cheating in the long run. Practicing without that shit will improve you skills, yeah you'll fuck up a few but when you get to a wall are you gonna draw out lines? Nah your going to eye that shit out. And if you havent eyed your shit out before then you prolly gone fuck it up. No harm in checkin your sketched 3d with a ruler or someshit to see if it matches up after you eyed it out if your tryin to fix it up to make your sketch look nice. I guess thats unpractical for some of the newer heads... but its something to think about...

[2ndsexwithoutcondoms]

every time i go paint im not going to do a different toss each fucking time. think of how many artists use the same throwie over and over duh mine are the same i get one down then i dont giv a fuck.
i just hate life actually.


stupid noobs.

[ribcage]

I shall edit this post with a crit if you fix that double post:cool:

lol you didnt delete the one where you corrected yourself... but i will crit you early...


20316
crit meeee ;)

your K your N and your A look like the same thing, and none of them look like a good letter. Little circle thing on the bottom of the I needs to go. I liked your S better when the long left part wasn't there. and whats with the squiggly in the I?

oh yeah, to avoid broken links/ weird links like what happened when i bumped your pic, just get a photobucket or imageshack and upload it there first ya digg?

[skinaone]

the I is a leg ahahah
idk why it does that
adn they said the last S sucked but it was original so im confused ahahahah

[ribcage]

usually the spiral/squiggly in a letter replaces a hole in the letter so on an I its looks dumb lol. but uh yeah your S is different from anything ive seen but the left long part looks kinda unnatural right now. Perhaps once you got the motion down it will look good, but you do need to differentiate your A K and N

[sauerkraus]

Yo crit me. Just posted these on 4chan and couldn't get much more than "I'm not gonna post my own but I'll tell you yours suck".2032320322203212032020324

Any criticism is appreciated. Gotta learn somehow.

[mindtrix350]

Or should I maker the outer leg of the "R" fatter and make the inner leg smaller?
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-24at10172-1.jpg

[ian]

lol kraus i saw your ass on 4chan last night, don't go on there much but i remembered that green and black piece of shit you posted on here a while back. There was nothing you posted that could be given crits. the only crits i have for you is put your paint the fuck away get out a pencil and paper and do some keyboard letters, but only if you're ACTUALLY interested in improvement. Otherwise just bitch at me that you can do keyboard letters/keyboard letters are boring/you're trying to actually do something with "style" and keep makin a toy name for yourself in your town

[nah!]

I drew a character and put a throwie next to it.
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2076.jpg

[feud]

Working on my keyboard letters. Critiques?

[ian]

^does that really look like this? -> FEUD

round the U, round the D, beef up your bars a bit and make sure you're keeping their width consistent

[ChronicKush]

FUED- That belongs in the blackbook thread but yeahh what ian said lol.
NAH- That looks like a character off the simsons...?

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/199604_206770146016569_100000507545549_733647_8252 371_n.jpg

[pointman]

colors on the far right throwie are sick, and phat i take it you used fat caps on that tag? and flared it out?

[Phat 2]

yes sir pink dot on all the silvers in the flick, and the last toss is by Eps, everything else is me

[pointman]

Good stuff Im liking it nice little spot you got there! with throwies like yours where is the van action at!!? ;)

[H1P30N3R]

puttin in work phat props
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0052.jpg

[ian]

yo phat what exactly is ACK? You write that on everything ya do

Hipe that R is pretty fucked lol, the squiggle in the E looks bad, the A would look better without that bit on the bottom right, C isnt too bad, id bring down that line in the middle and make the bottom part more like a circle if ya feel me, and the H is pretty plain, idk nothin much to say about that


EDIT:

yeah i feel ya on that, no problem ma dude

[H1P30N3R]

yea tryin to work on my alphabet r and k's either turn out real nice or real shit ...and the e was a spur of the moment thing a simple line probably would of looked better..thanks for crits tho

[nah!]

NAH- That looks like a character off the simsons...?

hahaha yeah lol it was off some simpsons playing card i thought it might look good?

[Phat 2]

hahaha an action, ah hell man, I only hit one van with a throw... I hit a lotta busses and trucks and shit with tags, but no throws. :P
ian, ack is my crew. artcore kru

[NouveauP]

That silver Phat2 hand is pretty nice. Flare that shit!
And reach, clean up those lines and that might look pretty sick!
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0254.jpg
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0256.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

I dihg the second k more the 1st looks more like an h to me nouv

[Phillip McDougall]

Handstyle's starting to look like the way I used to write, Nouv. Not calling you out, I promise. Just noticing something. Keep up the progression bruh

[ThinkWitInk]

first throwie. shit as fuck. i need to fix it up a bit.

[ian]

http://i.imgur.com/fBbJa.png
http://i.imgur.com/t4a8g.png


think i actually got my S down where i like it

[chen]

Chen, Smutch
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/103_0265.jpg

[Phat 2]

oh hell man smutch's is great !!! but its a bit confusing to figure out which letter goes where, had u not said it was smutch, I would've read it SUCTH
but really great concept, lovin it

[ntn]

whadya think?
http://sp1.fotolog.com/photo/1/55/73/ditrymef/1301336261305_f.jpg

["FrY"]

Uhm, so heres my first throwie in sequence... I know, I know. My 'h' SUCKS. any tips?


EDIT: Switch around the 3rd and 4rth image

["FrY"]

Mkay heres one of my name :3


Edit: You cant really see it, but there is a yellow outlining. And i messed up on the back of the 'F' along with my handie

[ian]

http://i.imgur.com/fBbJa.png
http://i.imgur.com/t4a8g.png


think i actually got my S down where i like it

bump for crits

[ribcage]

yo im sorry you like that S, the top is quite ugly. I suggest taking out the little hump on the right side

[ribcage]

ha! how about you stfu?!

when you start in this forum its give crits to get them, i don't have anything on this page but noise does wheres your crits for him? joking/complaining about not getting crits is ridiculous

your shit is wack, blob letters dont equal a throwie. The R doesnt even look like any kind of letter in the english alphabet. try all uppercase or all lower case. Your hand is worst then your throw for it is also not readable. I wouldn't bother taking the time to color your ish at this point because it would be a waste of your oh so valuable time

peace

...pic for chatter. @ian I aint got S's that well either, unless there at the beginning
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0328112031.jpg


not a throwie vvvv

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

dude work with simpler letters ie keyboard letters

[ribcage]

^lol is that really your idea of simple? lol you you need to go here vvvv, lots of basic info+tutorials and such that are truly helpful
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-New-To-Graffiti-Start-Here!

[mindtrix350]

@Fry- I mean, yeah they're better than your first go, but you should still go simpler. As said before, do keyboard letters. Also, keep handies in the handie thread.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-29at1000.jpg

[nah!]

Chen, Smutch
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/103_0265.jpg

hey its better than your last one but some of the letters are out of proportion.

not the letters the bars in the letters i mean

[mindtrix350]

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-29at1226.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

This thread....lulz

MY ***** LEAKS lol

Mindtrix- your on the right track keep practicing and you'll get it or atleast you'll get better and better at it

Another thing guys this is THROWIES not HANDYS..... I could care less what your handie looks like in this thread. Its one thing to post a throwie with your handy in the same picture, but dont just post your handstyles here there is a thread for that.

["FrY"]

So i was hella bored in my pre calc. class so i did throwie on my journal. also my bad for postin hand style... i thought thats what you ment by keyboard letts. defin keyboard letters. do you mean kinda like basic block letters? ill give a go at that (:

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

fry thats a step forward, make the R smaller and the y closer. Keyboard letters are the letters on the keyboard FRY. they help u learn structure.
Wilbur,s ome of those are pretty good, i dont like the B in the rounded throw.

[mindtrix350]

I think you should try to round them and try to make them the same size.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-29at2143.jpg

["FrY"]

So i finnally figured out i needed to get more basic!!!20601

[skinaone]

i dont see a diffence from de rest of the throw you have posted IMO
try messing with the letters making them rounder, one liners,IDK

[OZON]

20602
did this today im not very proud of it but i felt like posting it crits please

[ntn]

Ozone, u should sketch a bit more before u go bombing. and its normal it looks wack, cuz cancontrol needs a lot of practise. keep sketching. ur throw needs more structure, and leave the details for now.
keepitup

[NouveauP]

Fry, you can stay here for however long you want. It's the toy throwies. There's no minimum skill level. However, try to heed the advice you're getting from the boards. And don't think you have to post every single throw you draw out. Get the advice, fill up some pages for a few days, then post your progression.
Did this for a impromptu battle with Phat, but ended up picking another one. Tried a 3-d style I've seen a couple of big name cats do (Revok and Curve in particular). What do you guys think?

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0260.jpg

["FrY"]

Alrighty, thanks for the advice... I just wanna post this last one, to show that i finally get what you guys mean by keyboard letters. and then ill just practice my own for a couple days :)20611

[Skeng]

Alrighty, thanks for the advice... I just wanna post this last one, to show that i finally get what you guys mean by keyboard letters. and then ill just practice my own for a couple days :)20611
You should try and put them more close together

[mindtrix350]

Nouv- Looks tight. It might be the paper, but the effect isn't quite working.
Fry- Yeah, put the letters closer together. I like doing just outlines so I can all the letters without and discrepancies.
Playing around.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-30at1053.jpg

[SilentVandal]

Post your critz one of my first painted throw's. (Shitty paint with quick fill)

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/9797/photoct.jpg (http://img26.imageshack.us/i/photoct.jpg/) Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

[SixOhThree]

Pretty decent^ make sure when you do your fill. that you have all lines travel the same direction just like coloring

[mindtrix350]

For the "n", I think you should move the bottom line over to the right a bit because it could be confused with a "H".
The "K" should be the same height as the other letters because it looks awkward having just the last letter a tad bit taller.

[skinaone]

Fry, you can stay here for however long you want. It's the toy throwies. There's no minimum skill level. However, try to heed the advice you're getting from the boards. And don't think you have to post every single throw you draw out. Get the advice, fill up some pages for a few days, then post your progression.
Did this for a impromptu battle with Phat, but ended up picking another one. Tried a 3-d style I've seen a couple of big name cats do (Revok and Curve in particular). What do you guys think?

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0260.jpg
that prurty dope but im not feeling the first S

[NouveauP]

Thanks homie. I didn't like it much either, to be honest. I think I'm going to round out the top to look more like the R.

Old HEKLE throw to keep the flicks coming. Remember kids, FLICKS>Talk! Don't make me and Phat come in everyday to clean this thread up.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0187.jpg

[mindtrix350]

I think if you did round out the "S", it would look nice with just the left-top part rounded.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-30at12542.jpg
Hm, again, just throwing around ideas.

[Phat 2]

Tried a 3-d style I've seen a couple of big name cats do (Revok and Curve in particular). What do you guys think?
lol man, that doesn't work unless you're wearing 3D glasses all the time :P:P:P

[Rezume_or_die]

20636

[ian]

took that bump out of the S

http://i.imgur.com/Yjvp5.png

[ribcage]

@rezumeordie lol your R look like a shitty version of my R
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0305111559.jpg

[I_FLOAT]

rezume: loving that R

Noise: in that silver simple the I looks a lil crammed in there between the O & S


Any Tips on a K? not feelin this one much.
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/IMG_0724.jpg

[smokeitup]

20602
did this today im not very proud of it but i felt like posting it crits please

dont hold the can too close to the wall or your gonna get drips, and practice fillin in your throw more evenly, go right to left and then up and down. u would know this if u read any tutorials on here.

[Rezume_or_die]

ribcage: Ya I tried using an r with the bottom accent like yours but it was to cluttered with the capital e, Im deffintly gunna try with lowercase one though, I like the r and the h in that throw.

[ribcage]

^Lol still not throws, move it to the toy BB thread


ribcage: Ya I tried using an r with the bottom accent like yours but it was to cluttered with the capital e, Im deffintly gunna try with lowercase one though, I like the r and the h in that throw.

bottom accent? All I see is the circle that i use everytime(that heads on here tell me to change) and the point on the top left that i use on all my ish... What you forgot is the leg part of the right leg, yours is just a circle. If you gonna use my R do it right

[skinaone]

2064720648
me and my boi ruok crits on mine please

[skinaone]

took that bump out of the S

http://i.imgur.com/Yjvp5.png

that tag is dope adn that bottom noise is ok change the S and on the throw umm IMO i dont like it the O is straight work on the N make it the same size as all the other letters take th hump of the I and the S is weird

[Dreg one]

I am brand new to BS, I realize the G in my throw is looking similar to GIANT, but i noticed that after the fact, all crits are welcomed and appreciated. Spring is here and I want some good crits and changed before this starts getting up.

[ribcage]

@ian you should do your throw 1000 times on a chalk board, your throw is getting better but other then your N it dont got much style

[mindtrix350]

I am brand new to BS, I realize the G in my throw is looking similar to GIANT, but i noticed that after the fact, all crits are welcomed and appreciated. Spring is here and I want some good crits and changed before this starts getting up.

Loose the lumps.

[I_FLOAT]

Dreg: looks like your letters are folding in on them selves

Noise: the S in that blue bomb needs some work


http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/IMG_0561.jpg

[ribcage]

S kinda look like a P, K definetly looks like an X

[mindtrix350]

I think your "e"s look like P's as well, so you should define them a bit.
Still looking for "R"s
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-03-31at2245.jpg

[centrysam]

@ wilbur ...like the first one the most



http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5024/5574817431_473310325e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5574817431/)Snapshot_20110330 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5574817431/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/60940571@N06/), on Flickr


http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5297/5559334474_9e02ba8cd7.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5559334474/)throwworkinn (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5559334474/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/60940571@N06/), on Flickr

[OZON]

2070820709207072070620710 i messed up on my z for most of these crits please

[H1P30N3R]

wow really ................stop get you pen n paper for a while because your out lookin maddddd toy you will hate it later when you get better

[skinaone]

YO STOP PAINTING! wtf are you doing ? do what hipe i telling you to do 4 reallll

[jiwhanese]

first try at this
crit please, besides maybe making the first "E" smaller
20724

[Norfsuthr]

^ true shit, fuck them haters mayne. faces in every O? Swag.

[OZON]

haha well it doesnt matter anyways im working on a new tag turns out somebody in my town has been doing it hadd no idea pluss hes wayy better than me oh ad its not that i dont grab a piece of paper and practice its just that paint is wayy more funn

[ribcage]

Yo i understand that his shit is wack, but why would you tell him not to paint? In those pics hes paintin at a toy wall, it aint like he goin over anything that matters. Keep paintin and get some can control *****, take your time

[OZON]

Word. It's all about having fun.
Yeah, you're shit sucks right now but at least you'll get your can control down at the same rate you progress on paper. A lot of people can draw some great stuff on paper but hardly paint. So when they do paint, their piece doesn't look so great after all.
Try to keep it to chill walls if you're gonna' paint at this stage. You will definitely regret seeing a toy ass throw a year or two later after you've progressed. But it'll be something to laugh about.
Yep, what Rib says. haha dont worry this is all under a bridge were only writers go so i keep going over my old throws tryin to get better but now im trying a new tag om thinkin slurp

[Norfsuthr]

Slerp.

needin a new throw bad, still a work in progress but crits on what I got so far? that R is killin me.

edit: fixed it up a bit
http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/4284/image100.jpg (http://img863.imageshack.us/i/image100.jpg/)

Slurp- all i can say is keep doing it hundredsof times, and close up that U so its a tight bubble letter like the others

[OZON]

well ive been at it for bout 15 mins and this is what i got so far20727 give crits

[OZON]

Slerp.
[/IMG][/URL]

i like that E more than U imma give that a try

[Xstinkt1]

..

[OZON]

crits please20730

[Xstinkt1]

Maybe change up the S and L

crits please20730

[Norfsuthr]

bump for crits


http://img863.imageshack.us/img863/4284/image100.jpg (http://img863.imageshack.us/i/image100.jpg/)


slack your k needs a lot of work and it doesnt really fit with the sl.
slerp try making everything the same size. R is looking particularly weak

[nah!]

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2094.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2095.jpg
coloured now with some pens i racked form school lmao

[Dreg one]

NAH, the first one looks real nice, just make sure to fill evenly with cans or markers.

Crits please... I feel my G is my real weak spot... all crits welcome.

E: also, OZON(E) everyone telling you to wait is right to a certain degree, keep that stuff to the same spot like you have been saying, if you have a closed backyard and can set up a few pieces of drywall or fibreboard that would be perfect, practice, take crits and dump 30 cans onto that drywall/board and then you will be ready to leave something behind. I did the same thing, and I was eventually glad to start seeing my throws getting slowly buffed. I learned then that it is best to keep real low key (as it seems you have been) while in the beginning, then later you can hit all kinds of spots in style. Painting on drywall is fun anyway, just rack or get cheap paint.

[nah!]

yeah those pens are weird but they'll colour over each over and sharpies and probably other pens too.

[unknown--]

20764

cit hard...

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/207903_209390929087824_100000507545549_751651_3206 031_n.jpg

just had a micro can on me when I found this spot by mistake... so ignore the weakness :P

and these are from earlier tonight, the story from the chat thread hehe - bad quality pic warning:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/199455_209391049087812_100000507545549_751652_5473 658_n.jpg

[MoganOne]

props phat

[OZON]

choose your fav if you like em crits plz2078720786

[.Cuore]

@Phat: Haha, to be honest, I don't really see how these are classified as 'toy' per se. It's good work, liking it phat.

[OZON]

crits plz20813

[mindtrix350]

Nay to the faces in the letters. Lose the bump or tumor (as some call it) on the "S". Close up your "E". I think you should find a different "L", but that's just me. Keep all of the letters level.

[OZON]

how is this20816

[Get Rekt!]

Slerp lose the dead space and make your letters the same size.

[jiwhanese]

any thoughts on this one?
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[OZON]

any thoughts on this one?
20847

make the letters the same size i cant tell if thats an r or a c and your d is covering your a too much

[4menace2society0]

http://i52.tinypic.com/33de82b.jpg
http://i55.tinypic.com/e0hlyh.jpg
http://i56.tinypic.com/o02k2d.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/33xbpl2.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/2ytweb6.jpg
http://i53.tinypic.com/11ql9xl.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/21o6ix2.jpg

[centrysam]

@4menace2society nice flicks

can i get some crits on ma throws
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5068/5590468062_0bdeab1c48.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5590468062/)
throwsss (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5590468062/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/60940571@N06/), on Flickr

[Phat 2]

they're good and regular :)
not much to crit on raelly. nice job

[Norfsuthr]

Humr- your UM is ok, work on the H an R. That bottom purple h is a good one to develop.

[centrysam]

thanks for the crits ,,ill work on that

[pointman]

crap throws a go go

[ribcage]

bottom 1 is aight, you gotta eliminate the negative space on the M tho. G is tight. L M S need some fixin

[OZON]

20879

[mindtrix350]

Lose the eyes (I think that's what you're going for).
Fix the right leg of the "R".
Thicken the "L" and "P".
Close up the gap in the "E" or try to do an uppercase.
Keep working with that "S".

[OZON]

well i got lazy n didnt fill in the shade and the X's arent placed well but other than that any better?20881

[mindtrix350]

A little. You still have to fatten up that "P" and fix the right leg of the "R" because it looks awkward.

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-04-04at2334.jpg

[OZON]

how is this lookin
wilbur-i like the blue one the most20884

[mindtrix350]

Getting better.
Still have to mess around with the right leg of the "R".
The "L" is still super thin compared to everything else. Maybe thin out the other letters instead?

[Dreg one]

20894

Crits please.

[Get Rekt!]

Lookin alot better wilbur

[pointman]

Wilbur- looks pretty dope to me
Dreg - not really too sure what to make of it, might be worth putting some other throw ideas up as well.

[H1P30N3R]

the s needs work looks like a letter for a straight the other letters jus look bland other than the c its pretty solid

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0062.jpg

[jiwhanese]

new ones
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i rather like the s in this one. T's a bit thin i think. Try to ignore my failure of a shading shading.
20946

[unknown--]

20956

Lol used highlighters; crit hard please

[Tempo718]

is that suppose to be a U?