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Phat 2
05-11-2011, 07:59 AM
hell man you russian kids are craaazy

MASE P_2s
05-11-2011, 03:46 PM
What can I do with the bottom of the T? Bend it? Round it?

id try rounding it and bending it but bot extremely

PermanentMarkers
05-11-2011, 06:43 PM
What can I do with the bottom of the T? Bend it? Round it?

Make it mirror your J, but less J-ish, and much more T... ya dig?

Basically the same thing Mase said, but if you focus on matching your J (but mirror with less kick, and the top bit)

skinaone
05-11-2011, 08:49 PM
http://i025.radikal.ru/1105/5e/c5c298edc99a.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://s57.radikal.ru/i156/1105/a6/c0a3958e1a9f.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

extinguisher cap ? (bottom one)

dankbudz
05-11-2011, 11:32 PM
crits?
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0511112127.jpg

weedeater
05-12-2011, 10:44 AM
skina - that bottom one is a fat cap, probably a pink dot, looks a little small but could be an astro.

Phat 2
05-12-2011, 03:45 PM
too drippy to be a fat cap imo... the way I see it, this is just some real shitty ass chrome, coz the drips are coming from a well hollow line know what I mean, that's the inside of the lines dripping.

skinaone
05-12-2011, 03:50 PM
i have en extinguisher cap and it sprays teh saaaaaammmeee way that throw came out
look at AMAZE the too uses an extinguisher cap but it just what i think

weedeater
05-12-2011, 08:51 PM
you may be right, i dont waste my money on caps off the internet, i rack them, so my "extinguisher" caps do something completely different apparently, as in, do what fire extinguishers do on a smaller scale.

dankbudz
05-12-2011, 11:50 PM
can i get some crits on these? I think the red ones best.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0511112127.jpg

SK2
05-13-2011, 01:20 AM
extinguisher cap ? (bottom one)

no, its a device for destroying beetles, in russia it is called sadovnik and costs about 4$



can i get some crits on these? I think the red ones best.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0511112127.jpg
top best, but lower part of the S looks better in blue. and I think that we should not keep the distance between s and e. and think of d, it looks like p

Sketchamus
05-13-2011, 11:01 AM
Here's a random throw up session i had earlier today, im still trying to define my throw up style,

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/225074_10150246836716204_746771203_8757333_5269631 _n.jpg

nah!
05-14-2011, 11:01 AM
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2226.jpg

skinaone
05-14-2011, 11:06 AM
thats not a throw more like a bomb

Task977
05-14-2011, 11:07 AM
I think that'd look alot better if you didn't use those raindrop type things in the "e"

nah!
05-14-2011, 11:33 AM
thats not a throw more like a bomb

throwup = bomb

Task977
05-14-2011, 01:35 PM
I feel like I'm going backwards in style
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/1323/scan0001ko.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/695/scan0001ko.jpg/)

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/2065/scan0002ef.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/190/scan0002ef.jpg/)

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/458/scan0003fm.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/3/scan0003fm.jpg/)

http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/3417/scan0004o.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/705/scan0004o.jpg/)

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Went back to the uppercase E
http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/1107/scan0001ma.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/834/scan0001ma.jpg/)

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hmmmm...?
http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/9052/scan0001bv.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/543/scan0001bv.jpg/)

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nah!
05-14-2011, 02:39 PM
change the s so the lines go in further

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/1323/scan0001ko.jpg

thin the j and t change the lines on the s

Phat 2
05-14-2011, 05:43 PM
jest that's good enough, but they're not that much different from one another for you to be posting each and every single one of them. could you like possibly, kindly, stop flooding the thread with that?
they're all the same man, and ure getting the same crits everytime
save it for something new bro. no hate of course, just at least post em all in the same post, and if you wanna add something to the collection, just edit it into your previous post if it's still on the same page.
peace

Lado
05-15-2011, 12:47 PM
@Jest - yo dude, your throw isn't bad. and sorta like Phat said, it's all the same thing practically, SO GO PAINT!!!! because:
A) It'll get you up and spread your name around
B) You'll develop style a lot quicker painting than sketching

skinaone
05-15-2011, 12:51 PM
nerd thats a peice not a throow take it to the toy black book thread
and JEST go paint bro

sir.to.you.
05-16-2011, 10:38 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/5729003708_92fafa7108.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003708/)
Photo 237 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003708/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

dankbudz
05-17-2011, 12:05 AM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0516112158.jpg

haha ignore the shitty shadow on the S

skinaone
05-17-2011, 11:35 AM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0516112158.jpg

haha ignore the shitty shadow on the S

ok first that S can be such a nice S just work
insted of putting O inside de Es and Ds bit a like or something
! point needs a lot of work but you will get there
D looks like an O

jaerjaer831
05-17-2011, 11:59 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b91/wade3heat/DSCN0712.jpghttp://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b91/wade3heat/DSCN0720.jpg

Distance
05-17-2011, 06:59 PM
http://i1118.photobucket.com/albums/k615/WombatLovin/Distantsquid-Fixed.jpg

I'm just starting out

ChadWarden
05-17-2011, 09:40 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/1461/photo00002y.jpg



hey guys im just starting out




edit: ok bro one of us needs to change names. its has to be you sorry but ive been getting this name up for like 3 months now sorry you have to change names.

sir.to.you.
05-17-2011, 11:11 PM
Disregard the cleanliness of these ones for now im just tryin to find out whats good with this style i kind of like it. what you think?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2462/5732644888_79ecbd16a0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732644888/)
Photo 242 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732644888/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2467/5732113849_26dc45ce92.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732113849/)
Photo 222 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732113849/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

dankbudz
05-18-2011, 12:40 AM
@Distance (the better one)
thats sick, but why you guys gotta tell eachother to change names and shit? your on the internet, i mean shit, if you were in the same state or some. but... fuckin internet man. some shit you gotta deal with.

@sir.to.you
I like that E.
Try maybe adding a line up in that S, like you have on the E.
write that shit like 100 times and see how it looks

FACTone
05-18-2011, 12:59 PM
wy should you change name's you both live mile's from each other

ribcage
05-18-2011, 01:21 PM
do yall not know what a joke is? im pretty sure chad just be fuckin wit chall cause hes got mad bars

@fact your letters need a lot more definition, Ionly know the first letter is an N because of your tag, the A is the only kinda cool letter, and the only reason why i know its an A is also because its in your tag

@sir.to.you super ugly bro, id start completely over with a more bubly style, but not bubble letters.... so more throwy style if that makes sense......... and if you feel like you dont need to start over completely then start by changing the tips of your letters, cause thats the worst part

sir.to.you.
05-18-2011, 01:22 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2210/5734482824_21691dc23f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5734482824/)
Photo 244 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5734482824/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
word i like that better

H1P30N3R
05-18-2011, 01:34 PM
LMAO at whoever thought chad's throw was 3 months of skill kill yourself

Eclectic Boogaloo
05-18-2011, 05:38 PM
sir dont stretch it like that looks mad ugly

sir.to.you.
05-18-2011, 06:09 PM
haha thats what i why i asked. shtooooooooooooooooooooopsss

skinaone
05-18-2011, 08:08 PM
@Distance (the better one)
thats sick, but why you guys gotta tell eachother to change names and shit? your on the internet, i mean shit, if you were in the same state or some. but... fuckin internet man. some shit you gotta deal with.

@sir.to.you
I like that E.
Try maybe adding a line up in that S, like you have on the E.

write that shit like 100 times and see how it looks
bro if someone had your name id tell them to change it no matter were they are

ribcage
05-18-2011, 09:33 PM
boredom throws.... any1 want 1?
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518111912.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518111926.jpg

sir.to.you.
05-18-2011, 10:48 PM
throw a teos brothaaaaa then watch the bruins kill shit

ribcage
05-18-2011, 10:52 PM
Bruins? I gotchu in a minute
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/05181120562.jpg
my fuckin purple is running out

dankbudz
05-18-2011, 11:35 PM
yoo, ribcage
can you do me a quicky SEDER throw?

ribcage
05-19-2011, 12:01 AM
no problemo my *****, give me a sec and then ill edit this post witta pic

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518112204.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518112205.jpg
kinda fucked up so they aint the cleanest my B, prolly cant draw a strate line in the state im in

dave the pirate
05-19-2011, 12:06 AM
il take one for shits and giggles

ribcage
05-19-2011, 12:16 AM
o shit nark or seya? i dont like Y's so nvm i'll get ya on a nark even tho N's fuckin suck at the beginin for me

dankbudz
05-19-2011, 12:17 AM
Nice man, im feeling it

dave the pirate
05-19-2011, 12:20 AM
nasty nark

dave the pirate
05-19-2011, 12:24 AM
whaaat action shots lol

ribcage
05-19-2011, 12:55 AM
dude, i can not for the life of me draw your name right now, just spent like the last 15 just on N's so fuck it, here a shitty throw for ya.
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518112249.jpg

Ima retry wen im not as faded, sorry breh. But fuck throwie N's at the beggining of words, should be outlawed!!!!!!

dave the pirate
05-19-2011, 12:57 AM
all good throw up n,s at the begging are really hard to work with

lawlcat
05-20-2011, 06:39 PM
M's suck equally.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG_20110520_115820.jpg

ribcage
05-20-2011, 06:53 PM
^lol

ChadWarden
05-20-2011, 08:06 PM
looking at your username, avatar, and style i feel that youre probably some jerkoff 14 year old shit.

all of your letters are shit, those scribbles add nothing, and the dots at the end of your lines dont look stylish in the least. your tag sucks, too.

lawlcat
05-20-2011, 08:29 PM
lol jesus christ, sounds like someone just found out they were adopted. sorry bro.

I do wish I was 14 again though. Thanks for that.



edit: definitely agree with you on the name thing... someday I'll grow up.

H1P30N3R
05-20-2011, 09:13 PM
dave the pirate super clean toss props

ribcage
05-20-2011, 09:18 PM
@lawl yo chad was right bout your work tho, hand does have potential tho...

@hipe yo i peeped game at your throw in the toy bombs, your E's looked liked you rushed em or something, the middles of em look real bad, and the whole in the S u should have brought up a tad. But that shits is startin to look hella good, your control looks a lot better than it used to

H1P30N3R
05-20-2011, 09:21 PM
i made the e's 1 line so ill change that and thanks man tryin to fix all the kinks b4 i hit the streets

ribcage
05-20-2011, 09:27 PM
thats a weird way to make your E's one line lol but yeah that P lookin steaz, and the drop shadow is lookin on point

Isho
05-20-2011, 10:25 PM
Isho

dankbudz
05-20-2011, 10:58 PM
loose the tumor on the bottom of the I, the dot, and the right of the S.
try pulling the lines in more on teh S and H, mainly the H. and fatten that O up.
just make shit look nice and pretty, work from there
and shit

ChadWarden
05-21-2011, 01:19 AM
http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/1811/kindergartencoparnoldsc.jpg


its just style, man.

SicK-
05-21-2011, 10:53 AM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/19b6863e.jpg
A is beat as fuck

skinaone
05-21-2011, 11:30 AM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/seamafia/
save is oldschool here in venezuela

H1P30N3R
05-21-2011, 11:46 AM
saver the a needs work the middle of the e needs to be raised a tad so the bottom can be a cleaner circle and the hole in the r goes over to far ...

SicK-
05-21-2011, 11:55 AM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/seamafia/
save is oldschool here in venezuela

Im not from venezuela so i honestly dont care.
Thanks hipe that shit is whack its the first thing ive ever done with the name

nah!
05-22-2011, 02:40 PM
http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2011/05/22/wag_203501_2205_7113.jpg

thatswhatshesaid
05-23-2011, 10:02 AM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/2.jpg

nah!
05-23-2011, 11:36 AM
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2240.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2242.jpg

Task977
05-23-2011, 01:40 PM
Dont overlap the letters like that, take away the weird x at the bottom of the second "U", and make sure the n has consistent width. It looks strange with the right part of the N getting so small.
I felt like throwing in an R
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2428/scan0001akb.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/31/scan0001akb.jpg/)

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Eclectic Boogaloo
05-23-2011, 05:22 PM
why dont both of you go paint something

skinaone
05-24-2011, 11:15 AM
nah dont over lap the letters your going over your self too much
jest GO PAINT

H1P30N3R
05-24-2011, 01:44 PM
fix the dead space between the bottom of the r and s actually dont tilt the leg on that r it looks awkward

hecktor
05-24-2011, 07:26 PM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/2.jpg

bamp

skinaone
05-24-2011, 08:49 PM
spaces are WAAAAAY to big IMO

Task977
05-24-2011, 11:32 PM
I agree with skina, those spaces just straight up don't work. To hipe, I guess I could give that a try, I'm not getting many chances to paint so I'm just fucking with sharpies. I gotta catch some JEST throws

lost is gettin up
05-25-2011, 10:55 AM
http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/Picture136.jpg

waffle house

TastyMcNasty
05-25-2011, 03:26 PM
meh///

Isho
05-25-2011, 04:49 PM
How about now guys?, should I leave the add ons or simple letters?

lost is gettin up
05-25-2011, 04:50 PM
meh///

middle one looks the best not feeling the S

skinaone
05-25-2011, 08:01 PM
isho take the bunch of faces off

ribcage
05-25-2011, 10:58 PM
^aint you put faces in your shit? Lol
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0525111943.jpg
I always get pissed off at throws I color...shits weak

dankbudz
05-26-2011, 12:51 AM
yo ribcage,
what i can crit is that i think the R should but fatter on top, the E has a weird opening, try fattening the right part of the R so the like doesnt come straight from that corner, if that made much sense. that bright orange would look dope on a wall.
idk if you want crit on the backgrorund, but on the bottom, that one empty space should probably be one fatter bubble. (btw i got ur exchange comin by the weekend)

-even if skina does put faces on his throws, they have to be better than that guys. but shits funny how alot of people tell others to not do something, while they do the same thing.

hope this picture works, fuckin photobucket is site maintenance or some

ribcage
05-26-2011, 12:59 AM
Lol was just a shitty throw my dude, colored it with crayola markers. Just boredom

as for yours the E and D need work, just expirement

TastyMcNasty
05-27-2011, 09:40 PM
ribcage- i think your uncoloured ones are better, but ive always loved your A's man.
sed- youre getting better, but like ribcage said, your E and D are hurtin.

started fucking around with my letters today, crits?

skinaone
05-27-2011, 10:16 PM
i see them the same ass always

skinaone
05-27-2011, 10:19 PM
^aint you put faces in your shit? Lol
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0525111943.jpg
I always get pissed off at throws I color...shits weak
LMAO yea but hee need to work on his letters first then he can add any fucking type of face he wants lol :)

TastyMcNasty
05-27-2011, 10:21 PM
i see them the same ass always

im only minorly fucking with the letters, i.e. the extension thing on the A, the circles on some of the R's, and the face in the O

TastyMcNasty
05-27-2011, 10:22 PM
i see them the same ass always

im only minorly fucking with the letters, i.e. the extension thing on the A, the circles on some of the R's, and the face in the O

ribcage
05-27-2011, 10:27 PM
@tasty yea man Even when im bombing i usually dont do fills, for some reason i like the scenery to be the fill, especially when its a bunch of toy tags im going over, then ill just put a shadow and call it quits. And thanks breh, been gettin a lot of compliments on the A lately, I only have 2 throwy A's, i always thought they were my weak point

skinaone
05-27-2011, 10:31 PM
I SEE IT ahahhaha minor very very minor tweats but its ight

dankbudz
05-29-2011, 10:37 PM
tried something new with the E, D is pretty much the same

serk757
05-29-2011, 11:17 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEK1-1.jpg

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEK.jpg

BESIDES CAN CONTROL. and me running out of paint. what yall nigggas think

dankbudz
05-30-2011, 12:28 AM
i cannot make out what that says for the life of me. PEEK? TEEK? your handy looks like RAEK or PAEK. i just dont know haha
but i for the K in the bottom one, i would loose that bottom tumor thing in it and raise up the right bar of it.

fucked around with this a bit more, i cant get a good R, so i left them out for now.

ribcage
05-30-2011, 12:32 AM
throwy R's are one of my favorite things in the world. lol top of your S looks a little weird on that 1, E is gettin better, D still hurtin

dankbudz
05-30-2011, 04:52 PM
S is huge, hows this D lookin? i like it more then the one above even though its pretty much the same.

Phat 2
05-30-2011, 06:13 PM
this is for the throw battle, which should I go with ?

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/251464_224193510940899_100000507545549_866111_5760 170_n.jpg

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/250220_224321864261397_100000507545549_866771_5582 823_n.jpg

word is IETSINAF
(btw, get down on the toy throw battle peeps !!!)

dankbudz
05-30-2011, 06:31 PM
first one although the f lookin like a E

ian
05-30-2011, 06:33 PM
http://cl.ly/2q2r2A0I3P0H292B2j1T/Screen_shot_2011-05-30_at_7.31.45_PM.png

put my tag in that large bottom part of the e after takin this, can control needs work but lemme know what you think

ribcage
05-30-2011, 07:54 PM
kick on the right lefg of N needs to be proportionate to the rest, right now its way to big and looks awkward. also you a fat cap for the outlinte, you want thick lines to make it stand out, show people that you have real can control. Also throw up hollows/outlines and get em down, cause atm your just wasting paint on the fills

upper90daynnight
05-30-2011, 08:05 PM
hey this is my first throw so crits please
24511

ribcage
05-30-2011, 09:25 PM
P's not bad, the rest sucks, your U is the only letter that has negative space

n0b0dy
05-30-2011, 11:09 PM
http://i1095.photobucket.com/albums/i473/bay_bidness/2011-05-30205848.jpg
help please?

BRER
05-30-2011, 11:36 PM
B's are such a bitch when starting a throwie... I recently changed my name to Bao lol so as far as the BA goes I like to do both upper case. Idk what to tell you about the y though. I hate that letter in general. Also check out boner for some badass B's. Yours isn't bad, but try to make your hand movements a little faster. Those lines are shaky and that makes it look bad anyway. I'm drunk atm so idk if that made any sense or helps at all, but there ya go.

ribcage
05-30-2011, 11:36 PM
hmmmmmm idk really how to help ya with that other than tell you to watch vids and look at a bazillion pictures of throwies, then maybe your brain will come up with ideas on how to make it less plain, Y's be hard for throws too mang. All in All that aint a bad start, just clean it up a bit

edit* o damn post ninja up here^ said almost exactly what i said lol

n0b0dy
05-30-2011, 11:44 PM
thanks for the crits, and i'll look that dude up, watch some vids, and study some pictures tomorrow
and see if i can apply some stuff without biting. gotta be up inna few hours for work. peaaaace

TastyMcNasty
05-31-2011, 05:42 PM
crits?

Phat 2
05-31-2011, 07:00 PM
your throws would look 100 times better if their tops didnt converge to meet in that corner. give it a try and show us what it would look like.

TastyMcNasty
05-31-2011, 07:31 PM
your throws would look 100 times better if their tops didnt converge to meet in that corner. give it a try and show us what it would look like.
i dont know what you mean by that.. .elaborate

n0b0dy
05-31-2011, 07:45 PM
think he means how all the tops flow up into the upper left corner....maybe?:confused:

TastyMcNasty
05-31-2011, 07:47 PM
think he means how all the tops flow up into the upper left corner....maybe?:confused:
ohhhh, thanks for elaborating lol... ill give it a shot

OZON
06-01-2011, 12:37 AM
been super busy with school so i havent been doing anything at all the past month24611 i hate the p and the r

Live4TheWall
06-01-2011, 12:51 AM
Gotta make the P stand out more..... Make the top about half the height of the main stem.




for a friend

ChadWarden
06-01-2011, 08:05 PM
edit: im such a bleeding cunt.

dumb down the swoop thing you do on the upper right corner of your letters. it ruins the otherwise fine L, M, and O.

if the middle bar of the E was thicker, i think it would help out quite a bit. your L is fine except for the over exaggerated swoopthing. make sure the M comes over a little to the left to eliminate the akward space above the L. again, less swoopthing and your O is straight.


oh, and those tags? try keyboard letters at a slant. their like black. never go out of style.

Drez
06-03-2011, 02:42 PM
Im new to the forums, been writing for 3 months now. Heres two pieces of my work.

A quick throwie i did.(Ran outta paint, thats why the arrow doesnt have an outline)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5237/5794559828_d59e2b3bae.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794559828/)
ash (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794559828/) by Drez_DZ (http://www.flickr.com/people/62257914@N04/), on Flickr

My Penguin Character

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2790/5794020203_4b73fd85ef.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794020203/)
ash1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794020203/) by Drez_DZ (http://www.flickr.com/people/62257914@N04/), on Flickr

Thoughts?

thatswhatshesaid
06-03-2011, 04:26 PM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/photo4.jpg

skinaone
06-03-2011, 08:29 PM
24755
i was just fucking around and this came up
i think i like the other throw better

H1P30N3R
06-04-2011, 10:31 PM
not really feelin that skina the i is mad generic try switchin up your style see what happens seems like your forcin the letters that way because all your letters have that hole the a n and k always look like the same letter
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0115.jpg

skinaone
06-04-2011, 11:15 PM
i feel ya ill just stick to my old one it seems like its the best one i do haha
and for your crit im seeing maaaaaaaadddddd progress keep it up
the first E is too hidden the rest is fine but the O try making it more like a character insted of just a face ya digg?
Or make it flow a bit more like the P and see what happens

btw i can make your throw a oneliner ahhaha i just tried it

kron
06-05-2011, 06:32 AM
hy.im writing for about 3 weeks now.what you think about this?

H1P30N3R
06-05-2011, 09:05 AM
start over kron go to the new to graff thread and do a little research on throws before you get started....
Skina yea I use to do a 1 liner on my name before I added the e at the end

tried making the bottom of the o like a rag but idk think the checker stripes are too much any1 have any simple details that would make it look more legit ?
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0116.jpg

thatswhatshesaid
06-05-2011, 01:48 PM
yo pesoe your o looks like a c

chen
06-05-2011, 05:49 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/monk.jpg
What you think?

Phat 2
06-06-2011, 03:26 PM
endingtotalsocial: you need to stop quoting old posts please. thanks.

lost is gettin up
06-06-2011, 08:13 PM
http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/DSCN1709.jpg Not very clean I know. With that said: Any crits?

skinaone
06-06-2011, 09:09 PM
yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now
letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO

lost is gettin up
06-06-2011, 10:04 PM
yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now
letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO

Your throws are sick as sin skina thx for the crits

Ace.K
06-06-2011, 10:42 PM
Thoughts? Just a simple bomb.

EDIT: I know the lines and circles are uneven. Just a quick sketch of my idea.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00082-20110606-0118.jpg?t=1307341340

Isho
06-07-2011, 02:57 PM
Critics please? pointers?tips? I'm going bombing tonight.

dankbudz
06-07-2011, 05:15 PM
please dont go bombing if this is what you are putting up..

for crits, if you are going to have no space in the ISH, then i would just use a line as the whole in the O.
Push those letters closer and work on a steadier hand.

Isho
06-07-2011, 06:36 PM
How about now?

thatswhatshesaid
06-07-2011, 07:00 PM
nope

ChadWarden
06-07-2011, 07:11 PM
isho, my *****


as strongly as i encourage you to go bombing tonight, despite what your peers say (that practice is critical to progression,) that throw is wack.

http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/1254/photo00001j.jpg

this is basically your throw, but with some CW help. i strongly recommend you bite the shit out of this.

also, when you go to paint, move with your letters. dont just stand still and move your arm at the shoulder, but sway with your letter. and if you have the chance, take a few steps back and look at your throw before you "bounce." see what youve done wrong and take note on what needs improving. theres no reason you cant improve that very next throwy that you do 1-5-whatever minutes from now.


dont get caught.



edit: and, no, im not saying my throw is perfect.

VeX'D
06-07-2011, 08:41 PM
25060

Hope it shows... I've just started like 1 1/2 week ago dudes..

Any crits?

thatswhatshesaid
06-07-2011, 09:31 PM
CHADWARDEN in that throw you did your I looks like a dick your S looks like an ass the H looks like 2 asses mashed togehter and that O looks like an ass. ISHO don't use that, also practice man you'll get there. but get good then paint don't make your town hate graffiti more then it already does by putting up ugly shit, also all the local heads will think your wack as fuck. Don't take offence im just saying.

i popsted this before but it was small heres it bigger

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/photo6.jpg

left one has key lime force feild you cant see it tho in this photo i guess

OZON
06-08-2011, 01:22 AM
25109well i beleive im makin progress crits please

Phat 2
06-08-2011, 04:09 AM
thatswhatshesaid, those 3 gaps are very ugly dude... close em up
and it's not clear what it says, only clear letter is the G... then there's an O, then there's either 2 A's or 2 R's
also, the sharp edges in the G's middle bar aren't working when all your throw has rounded edges

Isho
06-08-2011, 02:28 PM
Pointers, critics, tips? I just started about a month ago.:)

nah!
06-08-2011, 03:44 PM
dont bother with forcefield just focus on the letters

Drez
06-08-2011, 03:45 PM
Pointers, critics, tips? I just started about a month ago.:)

Blackbook ISHO. Practice everyday and keep progressing your letters. I know it gets annoying hearing everyone saying "blackbook,blackbook,blackbook." but its the truth. Anyone can pick up a can of paint and spray on a wall, but it takes true heart to progress and get better. A big problem i notice in your tag is lazy fill, terrible shading, and a very uneven outline. Like i said, practice in your blackbook for a while before you go bombing again. Because what you threw up right there looks incredibly toy. With practice, your letters will flow, and you will learn how to paint. (And when doing your fill, go either left to right or top to bottom and stick with it.)

H1P30N3R
06-08-2011, 08:31 PM
let me help dont pay 10 15 for a blackbook so u can doodle toy shit in it get notebook paper its cheap

dankbudz
06-08-2011, 08:37 PM
yeah dude, fill up at least 2 lined notebooks. the cheapest ones.

and ash, dude your throw up looks just as bad as his. no hate. just pointing out my brutha

skinaone
06-08-2011, 08:39 PM
wait why is isho bombing?
if you started amonth ago get some style first then bomb
SAVE PAINT

skinaone
06-08-2011, 08:48 PM
ok why in the hell is someone telling a toy to bite yo wtf are you doing!

OZON
06-08-2011, 09:11 PM
25109well i beleive im makin progress crits please

bump for crits

VeX'D
06-08-2011, 09:40 PM
25159

Only 1 and half weeks worth of work, any crits?

OZON
06-08-2011, 09:45 PM
25159

Only 1 and half weeks worth of work, any crits?

make all the letters the same size and get rid of the detail inside of the leters make it simple

dankbudz
06-08-2011, 09:49 PM
dont quote the shit right above you, looks kinda sped when you do that.
vex- get rid of those swoopy sword shit on the letters, you can do whatever you want in the fill, but make the E upper case and the same size.
ozone- i dont got crits for that, just practice it alot and post up whatever you come up with.

Ace.K
06-09-2011, 01:23 AM
Thoughts? Just a simple bomb.

EDIT: I know the lines and circles are uneven. Just a quick sketch of my idea.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00082-20110606-0118.jpg?t=1307341340

?? Anyone?

erosone
06-09-2011, 02:50 AM
25180

My bomb :D

Ace.K
06-09-2011, 02:59 AM
The E and R are too separated and the O looks like a U. Pretty bomb ass S though, nice job.

toopski
06-09-2011, 10:24 AM
super quick shit

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/6914/imag0141k.jpg

can was almost empty so dont mind the fucked lines

DECREW

erosone
06-09-2011, 11:29 AM
thanks Ace.K,i will post new later

erosone
06-09-2011, 11:47 AM
25197


new :D

Ace.K
06-09-2011, 11:51 AM
Definitely better. Did you make a new account from haezr? You both go by Eros.

erosone
06-09-2011, 12:12 PM
i am Eros for now one jear :D
but i have respect and i will rename myself if second eros writing graffiti better and longer than i

i dont know english xD

Ace.K
06-09-2011, 12:43 PM
Haha its all good man. Look for the user "haezr" on this site. Same name but I don't think he's been doing it for as long as you.

erosone
06-09-2011, 01:01 PM
we can battle if he want

haezr
06-09-2011, 03:11 PM
Haha, we can battle for sure... I write in a completely different area... not about to beef with someone who writes the same 4 letters... meh
lol

skinaone
06-09-2011, 04:55 PM
i need to go paint to bring some light to this thread

haezr
06-09-2011, 08:24 PM
?? Anyone?

Errr... has potential as an idea... but the top halves of the letters are wack as fuck.
The shaky uneven bottoms need to be fixed, not a fan of the x's

TastyMcNasty
06-09-2011, 09:11 PM
...

Task977
06-09-2011, 09:25 PM
Soar - The ones on the left are the best
Havent posted in a while, I'm not too sure about this throw. Been painting my old throws and straights, I just dont have a camera. Phat can rest easy now :)
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5903/scan0001ge.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/824/scan0001ge.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

haezr
06-09-2011, 10:10 PM
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-06-09210623.jpg
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-06-09213205.jpg

Really quick, rough version of what I'd like to develop into my throw.

OZON
06-10-2011, 10:42 PM
its lookin good but you should get rid of the tumour on the S and the E makes it ugly

Phat 2
06-11-2011, 04:09 PM
yeah, all of em :D

Ace.K
06-11-2011, 04:17 PM
Love the idea of the first one but needs a little help on the A. Otherwise you're good!

ribcage
06-11-2011, 05:08 PM
i need to go paint to bring some light to this thread

lol i hear ya breh, do some throws on paper...


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MYxAiK6VnXw

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0611111517.jpg
Tryin to get somethin new.... got the idea down, ill post pic once i get the hand movements down
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0611111518.jpg

MoganOne
06-11-2011, 05:31 PM
Soar - The ones on the left are the best
Havent posted in a while, I'm not too sure about this throw. Been painting my old throws and straights, I just dont have a camera. Phat can rest easy now :)
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5903/scan0001ge.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/824/scan0001ge.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

Best looking Throw on here in awhile

Isho
06-11-2011, 06:14 PM
Any tips, critics, pointers, should I add add-ons?

OZON
06-11-2011, 06:21 PM
get rid of the tumour on th i make the i the same size get rid of the extenision on the h and round out the left side so its like all the other letters then connect the letters more

haezr
06-11-2011, 07:59 PM
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/DSC_0296.jpg

better?

Still trying to work on the E and the R, not sure what to do with them to make them fit the simplistic style of the OS...
Any ideas? Crits?

skinaone
06-11-2011, 09:52 PM
ok
1st the E try making it rounder or squarer you can even make the lines different sizes
Rs i personaly dont like them but instead of making em all round make themwith a bar l then the ) get it ?
Os make is rounder
Ss i love S no im jsut playing i dont really like them but the top is to wide and take the lil stick of thats pointing down
i think thats a good e nuff crit

skinaone
06-11-2011, 09:58 PM
sorry bout the dobble post but i need more crits havent really gotten any good ones
25418

ribcage
06-12-2011, 12:32 AM
^hump in the I breh... I believe i critted err letter before....was you no listen or was it not what you wanted to hear?

yeeeeeeeeeee I be oooooooonnnnnnnnn....... really hard to draw on paper when you dont got your other hand to keep it steady...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/th_0611112149.jpg (http://s1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/?action=view&current=0611112149.mp4)

chen
06-12-2011, 10:39 AM
What do you think?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/2011-06-1217_28_49.jpg

Drez
06-12-2011, 11:03 AM
@Ted-A throwie is something you can throwup quick. Some consider bubbled letters to be throws, but if you can throw that tag up in 2-3 mins or less...than its a throwie.(Its all about quickness)

@Chen-Dont connect all the letters together.Just keep it simple at first and you will progress with more and more practice. But your N doesnt look like an N.(Take off the tumor at the top of the N)

Phat 2
06-12-2011, 12:09 PM
im diggin the vid ribcage... nice quick clean hand movement, just the way they should be :)

here's from today's battle, the back of every writer's board hehe

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/251188_227714140588836_100000507545549_892839_1099 817_n.jpg

chen
06-12-2011, 12:29 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/graf.jpg

OZON
06-12-2011, 01:02 PM
@chen i dont like your E looks like a 8 to me you should drop the extension on the N then focuse on make the letters the same size

skinaone
06-12-2011, 02:37 PM
http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lmn8bwpwfs1qhwdzco1_500.jpg
i dont know if this is a "throwie" im not sure what a "throwie" is but, do you think this is okay?
it says keanu thats what i "write" for graffiti
that is a "peice or something like that" look around and you will see "throwies" i too "write" graffiti my "name" is skina

nah!
06-12-2011, 02:43 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/251188_227714140588836_100000507545549_892839_1099 817_n.jpg

whats that dodgy lego advert?

Phat 2
06-12-2011, 02:53 PM
there was a lego competition happening at the same time dude.. can you cut the useless questions?

Ace.K
06-12-2011, 03:31 PM
Bleh. Making progress?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00108-20110612-1525.jpg?t=1307910494

OZON
06-12-2011, 04:04 PM
@acek drop the extesion on the A make the letters the same size

haezr
06-12-2011, 04:53 PM
ok
1st the E try making it rounder or squarer you can even make the lines different sizes
Rs i personaly dont like them but instead of making em all round make themwith a bar l then the ) get it ?
Os make is rounder
Ss i love S no im jsut playing i dont really like them but the top is to wide and take the lil stick of thats pointing down
i think thats a good e nuff crit

Haha, maybe it's just me but I found most of this hard to understand.

sir.to.you.
06-12-2011, 04:54 PM
your k looks like a u with a boner

stupid shit just wanted to say that
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3225/5826375092_e212452e29_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5826375092/)
Photo 248 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5826375092/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

H1P30N3R
06-12-2011, 07:12 PM
teos looks pretty good the e is a little bland but i like the other letters
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0118.jpg

haezr
06-12-2011, 07:52 PM
teos looks pretty good the e is a little bland but i like the other letters
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0118.jpg

wtf is that supposed to be between your S and E?

OZON
06-12-2011, 10:07 PM
Its a O for pesoe

ribcage
06-12-2011, 10:32 PM
im diggin the vid ribcage... nice quick clean hand movement, just the way they should be :)


Lol I think your the only one that realized it was a video

Ace.K
06-12-2011, 10:41 PM
Exactly. Thats why I had that first post there right under it.

TastyMcNasty
06-12-2011, 10:43 PM
^^haha well now i know its a vid, and i will add its pre sick, love your style man

H1P30N3R
06-13-2011, 12:59 AM
yea its suppose to be an o just hard to make an o the same style as the other letters so i was tryin a character

haezr
06-13-2011, 01:06 AM
Haha makes sense.
Ribcage, I fucking dig your style... watching that vid makes me cream my pants a little lol.

ribcage
06-13-2011, 12:15 PM
yee vid was a success then, just tryin to show show some of yall that hand movements are important, especially when you move from paper to a wall.

@hipe yo the bottom parts all look bad except for the way you kicked the P, because you made some seperation from the round part of the P to the kick ya feel me? Cause you didnt do it for any of the other letters, so id start by makin the E's kick out at the bottom like the P does

TastyMcNasty
06-13-2011, 02:33 PM
facking around with different names

FlatScank
06-13-2011, 02:51 PM
went down along a train-line to flick some graf, caught a throw here and there.

skinaone
06-13-2011, 03:15 PM
oh god how can you peice witha throw like that
i see elot right thereee

TastyMcNasty
06-13-2011, 03:19 PM
flat- other than your F thats a pre bangin throw

nah!
06-13-2011, 04:00 PM
went down along a train-line to flick some graf, caught a throw here and there.

how the hell did you find walls like that!!?? IT HASNT EVEN BEEN BUFFED

if i went down a train track all the walls would be white-grey paint underneath a piece

~~

im trying to develop something

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2275.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2276.jpg

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2277.jpg
(wont be painting NU beause its a crew in my city)

skinaone
06-13-2011, 04:07 PM
dont matter if its a crew cause yours is a name
just put NU then neum inside
theres a crew in my town/city thats SA adn i sometimes bomb and but S.A then skina1 on the side

sir.to.you.
06-13-2011, 04:37 PM
what up wit this tumor E?
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5224/5829940999_717a9202c5_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/)
Photo 259 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
T should be bigger fa reeeaaal

drae
06-13-2011, 07:46 PM
25528
pretty rough sketch

Graham
06-13-2011, 08:54 PM
2554525546

Ok guys which throwie do you like better? Jam is short for jammer man a nickname given to me when i was 2 and i know jammer man is kinda a queer tag but jam is pretty legit and jam has some sentimental value to it and isnt some random name that i thought looked cool. Therefore, JM is short for it.

Whats you opinion?
also, constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, thnx :D

Eclectic Boogaloo
06-13-2011, 09:19 PM
shits tight flat
jam those all lick ass

Graham
06-13-2011, 09:33 PM
i said constructive criticism, i dont see your shit anywhere .......

Eclectic Boogaloo
06-14-2011, 12:20 AM
wtf am i supposed to say? Look at those throws. are any of them looking good to you? You gotta think for yourself sometimes. Look at other peoples shit on this site and flickr to get an idea of what a good throw looks like. Also, my lack of posted pics is irrelevent, as i dont feel it necessary for me to post my work for crits, im happy with my shit. recognize yo

dankbudz
06-14-2011, 01:00 AM
Jam- didnt you already post that lil story about your name... lol
anyway, i would personally stick with uppercase for that, but its up to you.
loose those waves and turn them into bars. and listen to eclectic boogaloo on doing at least a bit of research.

Ace.K
06-14-2011, 02:03 AM
I think I like this one.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00117-20110614-0153.jpg?t=1308034919

haezr
06-14-2011, 02:05 AM
Haha, It's definitely better than the last one you posted man. Work on your lines, bring down the leg of the K, and make it a bit smaller. Work on the top of the A.

sir.to.you.
06-14-2011, 02:50 PM
what up wit this tumor E?
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5224/5829940999_717a9202c5_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/)
Photo 259 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
T should be bigger fa reeeaaal

Bumpin this cuz i wana know what yall think of this fucked up E.

Ace.K
06-14-2011, 03:02 PM
It would work if the rest of the letters were like that maybe. Just seems out of place and flamboyant compared to the T.

ribcage
06-14-2011, 03:03 PM
......uuuh its fucked up? Lol if you know its fucked up why we gotta tell you agains its fucked up?

Anyways, theirs tumors on all of your letters, not just the E. Top left of O top left of S top right of T and top left of T(that 1 looks benign tho). and the bubbles/drops at the end look real bad, them are all about having a clean hand movement, work on em

skinaone
06-14-2011, 08:34 PM
reach post your throw i wanna se a nice throw in this thread :D

ribcage
06-14-2011, 09:32 PM
really hard to draw on paper when you dont got your other hand to keep it steady...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/th_0611112149.jpg (http://s1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/?action=view&current=0611112149.mp4)

hows about i bump this lil vid instead?

Ace.K
06-14-2011, 10:31 PM
hows about i bump this lil vid instead?

Have you been using that for a while or just improvised it?

weakfingers
06-16-2011, 05:27 PM
Ive seen these new one liner throwies where you do the complete tops followed by the bottom's it was hard to think of at first but heres my attempt at it,
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2512/5838276190_4a552ee8b3_b.jpg

haezr
06-16-2011, 07:44 PM
Haha, had to laugh as I walked home today...
I must've been really fucking drunk because I do NOT remember doing this at all...
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-06-16180459.jpg

Phat 2
06-17-2011, 08:03 AM
haha nah it happens... I can't remember 90% of the tags/throws I do around the city, I'd be passing by them at times and notice them and go (in my mind) "ohhh yeaah.... riiiight.. shit when did i do that?"
also sometimes people tell me they saw one of my tags somewhere and they start trying to explain to me where it is exactly, and I'd be like <=\ ummm ? where?
hehehe, but on the real eros, tighten up that throw and get some better flow in those letters man, judging by your line flares, you seem like you have a good bombing hand.

ribcage
06-17-2011, 10:41 PM
you a lefty eros?

Isho
06-19-2011, 02:23 AM
New Isho Throwup...Extreme toy alert ;):p. Crits, pointers, tips etc are gladly welcomed!

Ace.K
06-19-2011, 02:44 AM
Stick to learning your handstyles, man. That tag below is pretty bunk. Constantly write your ABC's until you're comfortable with each letter. Then move on from there if you're actually going to stick to graff.

wackiwo
06-19-2011, 02:45 AM
make it even

..romero..
06-19-2011, 09:19 AM
Ive seen these new one liner throwies where you do the complete tops followed by the bottom's it was hard to think of at first but heres my attempt at it,
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2512/5838276190_4a552ee8b3_b.jpg

dope :cool:

ATAK!:3
06-19-2011, 04:16 PM
25754crits?

Jiska Matos
06-19-2011, 10:27 PM
my throw up fro,m the train times

TastyMcNasty
06-19-2011, 10:56 PM
jiska- try and make all the letters the same height (more or less) because it looks weird as hell.. .and dont do the 2 lines in each letter, or at all for that matter, it looks awfully toy . all in all its not bad, but nor is it good, so simple it up more. on the positive side the handy in the top of the H is bangin

wackiwo- that work is waaay too long, try for something with only 4 letters for now

haezr
06-20-2011, 07:34 PM
haha nah it happens... I can't remember 90% of the tags/throws I do around the city, I'd be passing by them at times and notice them and go (in my mind) "ohhh yeaah.... riiiight.. shit when did i do that?"
also sometimes people tell me they saw one of my tags somewhere and they start trying to explain to me where it is exactly, and I'd be like <=\ ummm ? where?
hehehe, but on the real eros, tighten up that throw and get some better flow in those letters man, judging by your line flares, you seem like you have a good bombing hand.
What do you mean line flares?
Yeah, I've been trying to work on it... make it better somehow... it's like I've got writer's block.

@Ribcage
Nah, definitely right handed why?

Lsd
06-22-2011, 08:19 PM
25919259202592125922259232592425925259262592725928 2592925930259312593225933

some recent shit, not too stoked on my letters so help a brother out and lets see some crits, please and thank you.

Phat 2
06-23-2011, 03:29 AM
your 2 letter throws are phat son. do moar of em

519Baby
06-23-2011, 10:31 AM
just started graff like a week ago, so yeah im toy but whatever. first throwie, crit?
http://i51.tinypic.com/fkbrx1.jpg

Lsd
06-23-2011, 01:14 PM
word, i'll post some more 2 letters in a bit, any other advice though on my "lun"?

MakeHate
06-23-2011, 02:17 PM
Critz anyone? thanks.

2603526036

arsebanditskaelsucker
06-23-2011, 02:57 PM
^^ liking the faces within the letters make hate :) dope shit on them pages in general i think
519 baby draw it alot more and change it til you like it....don't bother with colour just do it lots of times til your happy with it n its all nice and balanced also try block and bar letters aswell as bubble letters yo :)

Phat 2
06-24-2011, 07:59 AM
makehate, those are pretty nice. the throws the hands, everything's pretty ok. all you need is more practice and you're nickel.

nah!
06-24-2011, 08:13 AM
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2293.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2294.jpg

skinaone
06-24-2011, 11:25 AM
nah
dont do em so barrish
make'em rounder have more style make your imaginacion have an orgasem

"FrY"
06-24-2011, 12:45 PM
26084
26104
26105

EWL24
06-24-2011, 01:02 PM
did this for the throw battle, since i write geth i was wondering what u guys think of the G and E, crits please
26085

BigBend
06-24-2011, 04:03 PM
i think i drulled allitle when i finished this :cool:
http://i54.tinypic.com/f107s7.jpg

"FrY"
06-25-2011, 12:55 AM
damn...where'd the crits go?

oh i made this one just a few minutes ago. i like Node better than Neon...or shock...or fry...
26158

TastyMcNasty
06-25-2011, 02:18 AM
fry- thats nice and simple, keep workin with that and slowly develop it more

"FrY"
06-25-2011, 02:03 PM
cool thanks :)

pointman
06-26-2011, 12:45 PM
Been bombing these past few days, just a basic GL throwie what do you guys think??
26234

H1P30N3R
06-26-2011, 02:52 PM
looks ok glums try makin the bubble on the l like the square on the g instead

.Cuore
06-26-2011, 02:54 PM
i think they work well together.

H1P30N3R
06-26-2011, 03:17 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0130.jpg

skinaone
06-26-2011, 03:55 PM
ok that P is on fire except the lil circle in the middle try using a |,U,X it will look much better
dont make the bottom of the E so spread out ya digg? also dont go so far back with the making of the second part of the E get it ? or i have to draw it
S dont make the extra extencions like | and then at the bottom oyu did the | again take that off
Os straight

nah!
06-26-2011, 05:02 PM
need some crits

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2293.jpg

MoganOne
06-26-2011, 07:25 PM
@Pointman- That G does not look totally like shit but that is a real wack L
@Pesoe- Why are you not improving man? 1st do not put faces in your O you are not ready for that. 2nd The little points your are trying to do at the bottom are not working imo. and last of all I swear it is like you are getting worst as you post...
@Nah- That looks like shit i'm sure you know this... lol
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/0621111742-1.jpg

H1P30N3R
06-26-2011, 07:46 PM
Idk I have a solid throw im just tryin different styles feels like I have been stuck on the style

.Cuore
06-26-2011, 08:35 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0130.jpg

1. change the O in the P
2. in the S, get rid of the angled turn on the under side of the S. just keep it a straight line, and stop before it takes a 90 degree turn.