Throwies

[Anon937]

I feel like an idiot for posting a throwie attempt, but still I need/wanting crits on it.
First attempt with this name/serious attempt in doing anything.

[Flawless Victory]

Don't do that bottom of the paper shit, man.
You're gonna have to learn how to finish the letter eventually.

[IbuprofenTablets]

Crits on this bullshit ass throw, please.

@Jest: I lol'd when I saw that instead of differing from your ususal bottom letter chop-off by doing the whole letter, you chopped your shit off at the top.

Man, finish all of your letters. It may look cool to you in your blackbook, but that shit will look WACK on the bottom of a wall, because it won't attract any attention. Your graff needs to be generally high for people to see. Ultimately, Practice your throws in it's full form not in it's partial form. That's why we're here.


@ Skina: Word, tell someone they need to work on something, but don't actually tell them what you think they should work on. Us toys need to know what to practice, otherwise we'll be running in circles forever.



http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo170-2.jpg

[Anon937]

Ehhhhh.
I think its an improvement, but need some heavy crits.
I like your shit though Ibu.

[Tempo718]

22976
hey y'all sorry bout the camera, i don't kno squat bout throws. somebody wit it on a xchange??1

btw skina i feela ya on it need work an all, but i was goin for a outline not 3d.

[Anon937]

Where is the M and the P, and no offense but that needs to be reworked heavily. but I will do an exchange, hit me up with a message.

[IbuprofenTablets]

@ Jekl:
Your top throw flows well, however that style's VERY typical IMO. So I personally wouldn't fuck with it, but that's just on account of my taste.

Also, the left left of your K on the top throw is a little hidden, I'd recommend toning down that gangsta' lean on your E just a smidgen'.

Furthermore, don't fuck with those pointy styles just yet, those styles are a little too advanced, most people flip that style end up failing at it (like myself), so I'd try doing it like a year or two for now. I've seen some people flip that style and have it look fresh, like some dude named B.S. Police that used to come on here.


Ohh, and make your shit look like a J, not an S(regarding your top throw).

[Anon937]

Yeah man, thanks on the crits.
The top one is basic and I got the idea I can just add or modify to the base structure to change it to something fresh.
Hitting the notebook again for the rest of the night.
And I seen B.S. Police's work, I like it.

[skinaone]

Crits on this bullshit ass throw, please.

@Jest: I lol'd when I saw that instead of differing from your ususal bottom letter chop-off by doing the whole letter, you chopped your shit off at the top.

Man, finish all of your letters. It may look cool to you in your blackbook, but that shit will look WACK on the bottom of a wall, because it won't attract any attention. Your graff needs to be generally high for people to see. Ultimately, Practice your throws in it's full form not in it's partial form. That's why we're here.


@ Skina: Word, tell someone they need to work on something, but don't actually tell them what you think they should work on. Us toys need to know what to practice, otherwise we'll be running in circles forever.



http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo170-2.jpg

DROP the add ons and its mad busy

[Tempo718]

22980

heres one for a jekl exchango

[Phat 2]

ibu, i would've never guessed that the first letter's an X had I not saw the tag down there. and I still can't figure out if the last one is an R or an N, so u know what to do

[Task977]

ibu, that n looks like an H. I'd like to see that without all the addons

http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/7818/scan0001bu.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/196/scan0001bu.jpg/)

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[H1P30N3R]

looks ok jest the t's tho not feelin either
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0090.jpg

[skinaone]

too slopy and take de lil circles off the letters

[Flawless Victory]

I don't see how you'd confuse that as an H,
and I really don't see how the shit you'd confuse that shit for an R at all.
There is a shitload going on, though

http://i56.tinypic.com/t5hvtg.png

[skinaone]

blow?

[IbuprofenTablets]

Yeah, I admit I added mad excess bullshit to the throw. At first, I just drew the face on the X with the rest of the throw and left it alone. Then I was looking some throws that had mad extra shit in it, so I decided to add stuff to the random word I drew.

And yeah, the face on the X was also a bit too much, but I rarely ever try faces on throws. So I did one.

Ya'll *****s like the face?


Pretty cool throw too, FV.

[skinaone]

23154
this is for a battle thread crits

[PermanentMarkers]

Not really diggin the face Ibu, and not the left foot of the N either, I think it would look better as a circle. I was playing with just putting a single eye in place of a hole in letters the other day. Got kinda carried away! Just some bullshit throwies that I cooked up for some friends in return for a bunch of shit records.

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5023/5692587539_1ac5c30851_z.jpg

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5183/5693156536_586ddd1e4f_z.jpg

Double T is just retarded...

[skinaone]

what N it says ALABAMA

[PermanentMarkers]

(I was talking to Ibu about the n)

Skina - You gotta make the first A and least try to look like the rest... otherwise how is anyone supposed to know its an a?

[skinaone]

OHH my bad
and yea i saw that btu over all how is it

[TastyMcNasty]

ill just leave this ere..

[skinaone]

your extencions on the r and S and E suck but its allright
2320923210

[ribcage]

lol bucket paint throw? you dont see those too often, and Sear's extensions don't suck, looks like he just messed up the one on the R by not making it proportionate

yo tasty that R is waaay better than your old 1. You gotta fix your A now

[skinaone]

ahahah yea we are pooooooorrrrr in venezuela so everything i do is with bucket of paint and 1 or 2 cans
adn i seriousely dont like them but its just MO

[Phat 2]

tasty, I am FEELING that fire shit on the first line. the two words connected. the flow on it is orgasmic.
you pull that off on wall as a clean ass hollow with a slick drop shadow and it's the titssssss

[IbuprofenTablets]

23154
this is for a battle thread crits

*Looks at throw*
*Notices the Faces*
*Notices the familiarness in the face*


http://cache.ohinternet.com/images/9/9e/HA_HA_HA,_OH_WOW.jpg

[centrysam]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5141/5691350599_3af728a581.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5691350599/)
Snapshot_20110503 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5691350599/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/60940571@N06/), on Flickr

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5107/5681645585_cbe9c4dd30.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5681645585/)
Snapshot_20110502 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60940571@N06/5681645585/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/60940571@N06/), on Flickr

[Phat 2]

@skina @ibuprofen

those faces remind me of a piece a friend of mine ABE12 painted a couple years ago:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2623/28/63/624595106/n624595106_6398549_8290124.jpg

[PermanentMarkers]

23231

I like it soar, but a couple improvements, like Keeping the hole of the A in the middle of the letter, and keeping the top of your S bigger. The A and R could both use some improvement, but i would stick with the style you have going on, and dont do that thing on the end of the R. Or at least tone it down a bit.

[fizzz]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3079/5700879453_407d4f0a2f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/54904153@N04/5700879453/)
IMAG0355.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/54904153@N04/5700879453/) by icu... (http://www.flickr.com/people/54904153@N04/), on Flickr

changing up my throwie, feeling i have the C right but am completely lost on what to do with the I and U, any ideas?

[ribcage]

^start with upper case letters

tosses for the battle, unhappy with both
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0508111737.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0508111739.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

I like the nice simple clean style you got ribcage ... not happy with mine either but that isn't anything new
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0094.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3079/5700879453_407d4f0a2f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/54904153@N04/5700879453/)
IMAG0355.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/54904153@N04/5700879453/) by icu... (http://www.flickr.com/people/54904153@N04/), on Flickr

changing up my throwie, feeling i have the C right but am completely lost on what to do with the I and U, any ideas?

draw like you paint. Clean single lines. Your letters look like they just finished puberty.

[MASE P_2s]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3079/5700879453_407d4f0a2f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/54904153@N04/5700879453/)
IMAG0355.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/54904153@N04/5700879453/) by icu... (http://www.flickr.com/people/54904153@N04/), on Flickr

changing up my throwie, feeling i have the C right but am completely lost on what to do with the I and U, any ideas?

i wouldnt write that name if i were u
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/2vlk7k2.jpg

[Skope2]

Babbies first throw

[skinaone]

umm needs to hit the pad befor painting

[Shroomsh]

Skina, I'm not to sure about your style..

[sir.to.you.]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3184/5705625987_e29fc8505e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5705625987/)
Photo 219 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5705625987/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3609/5706190722_4588c38095.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5706190722/)
Photo 220 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5706190722/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2356/5706190652_12d1ebc50c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5706190652/)
Photo 192 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5706190652/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
no good i know crits plz. alot.

[ribcage]

last 1 dope, handy weak tho

[.Cuore]

word, didn't hate the 2nd one either

[mindtrix350]

I agree, the last one looks best. I think you should run with that and evolve it.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/Photoon2011-05-09at0022-1.jpg

[nah!]

the shadows off

[lost is gettin up]

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/DSCN1692.jpg

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/DSCN1687.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

is that suppose to say hipe? lol I use to write that but anyway put the can down pic up a pencil for now do some research and draw a shitload

[MASE P_2s]

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/DSCN1692.jpg

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/DSCN1687.jpg

h is to fat and needs work idk if thats a o or a i ..make the top portion of the p more round and the e is to fat and oyea lose the circles in the p and e
hit the sketch books hommie

[Task977]

Elbur there is mad improvement there, I'm not saying your old style was bad though.
Teos that last throw is dope, the hand is weak though.
Ignore all the random shit
http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3231/scan0002ox.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/651/scan0002ox.jpg/)

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[MASE P_2s]

bottom of the t is to straight bro ive said this b4 and im gunna say it as many times as it takes

[Task977]

What can I do with the bottom of the T? Bend it? Round it?

[mindtrix350]

Thanks for the crits guys.

Jest- I think rounding the bottom might help it. I'm not sure about bending it, but it's worth a shot, so why not?

[SK2]

http://i025.radikal.ru/1105/5e/c5c298edc99a.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://s57.radikal.ru/i156/1105/a6/c0a3958e1a9f.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[Phat 2]

hell man you russian kids are craaazy

[MASE P_2s]

What can I do with the bottom of the T? Bend it? Round it?

id try rounding it and bending it but bot extremely

[PermanentMarkers]

What can I do with the bottom of the T? Bend it? Round it?

Make it mirror your J, but less J-ish, and much more T... ya dig?

Basically the same thing Mase said, but if you focus on matching your J (but mirror with less kick, and the top bit)

[skinaone]

http://i025.radikal.ru/1105/5e/c5c298edc99a.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

http://s57.radikal.ru/i156/1105/a6/c0a3958e1a9f.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

extinguisher cap ? (bottom one)

[dankbudz]

crits?
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0511112127.jpg

[weedeater]

skina - that bottom one is a fat cap, probably a pink dot, looks a little small but could be an astro.

[Phat 2]

too drippy to be a fat cap imo... the way I see it, this is just some real shitty ass chrome, coz the drips are coming from a well hollow line know what I mean, that's the inside of the lines dripping.

[skinaone]

i have en extinguisher cap and it sprays teh saaaaaammmeee way that throw came out
look at AMAZE the too uses an extinguisher cap but it just what i think

[weedeater]

you may be right, i dont waste my money on caps off the internet, i rack them, so my "extinguisher" caps do something completely different apparently, as in, do what fire extinguishers do on a smaller scale.

[dankbudz]

can i get some crits on these? I think the red ones best.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0511112127.jpg

[SK2]

extinguisher cap ? (bottom one)

no, its a device for destroying beetles, in russia it is called sadovnik and costs about 4$



can i get some crits on these? I think the red ones best.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0511112127.jpg
top best, but lower part of the S looks better in blue. and I think that we should not keep the distance between s and e. and think of d, it looks like p

[Sketchamus]

Here's a random throw up session i had earlier today, im still trying to define my throw up style,

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/225074_10150246836716204_746771203_8757333_5269631 _n.jpg

[nah!]

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2226.jpg

[skinaone]

thats not a throw more like a bomb

[Task977]

I think that'd look alot better if you didn't use those raindrop type things in the "e"

[nah!]

thats not a throw more like a bomb

throwup = bomb

[Task977]

I feel like I'm going backwards in style
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/1323/scan0001ko.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/695/scan0001ko.jpg/)

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/2065/scan0002ef.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/190/scan0002ef.jpg/)

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/458/scan0003fm.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/3/scan0003fm.jpg/)

http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/3417/scan0004o.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/705/scan0004o.jpg/)

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Went back to the uppercase E
http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/1107/scan0001ma.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/834/scan0001ma.jpg/)

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hmmmm...?
http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/9052/scan0001bv.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/543/scan0001bv.jpg/)

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[nah!]

change the s so the lines go in further

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/1323/scan0001ko.jpg

thin the j and t change the lines on the s

[Phat 2]

jest that's good enough, but they're not that much different from one another for you to be posting each and every single one of them. could you like possibly, kindly, stop flooding the thread with that?
they're all the same man, and ure getting the same crits everytime
save it for something new bro. no hate of course, just at least post em all in the same post, and if you wanna add something to the collection, just edit it into your previous post if it's still on the same page.
peace

[Lado]

@Jest - yo dude, your throw isn't bad. and sorta like Phat said, it's all the same thing practically, SO GO PAINT!!!! because:
A) It'll get you up and spread your name around
B) You'll develop style a lot quicker painting than sketching

[skinaone]

nerd thats a peice not a throow take it to the toy black book thread
and JEST go paint bro

[sir.to.you.]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/5729003708_92fafa7108.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003708/)
Photo 237 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003708/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[dankbudz]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0516112158.jpg

haha ignore the shitty shadow on the S

[skinaone]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0516112158.jpg

haha ignore the shitty shadow on the S

ok first that S can be such a nice S just work
insted of putting O inside de Es and Ds bit a like or something
! point needs a lot of work but you will get there
D looks like an O

[jaerjaer831]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b91/wade3heat/DSCN0712.jpghttp://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b91/wade3heat/DSCN0720.jpg

[Distance]

http://i1118.photobucket.com/albums/k615/WombatLovin/Distantsquid-Fixed.jpg

I'm just starting out

[ChadWarden]

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/1461/photo00002y.jpg



hey guys im just starting out




edit: ok bro one of us needs to change names. its has to be you sorry but ive been getting this name up for like 3 months now sorry you have to change names.

[sir.to.you.]

Disregard the cleanliness of these ones for now im just tryin to find out whats good with this style i kind of like it. what you think?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2462/5732644888_79ecbd16a0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732644888/)
Photo 242 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732644888/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2467/5732113849_26dc45ce92.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732113849/)
Photo 222 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732113849/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[dankbudz]

@Distance (the better one)
thats sick, but why you guys gotta tell eachother to change names and shit? your on the internet, i mean shit, if you were in the same state or some. but... fuckin internet man. some shit you gotta deal with.

@sir.to.you
I like that E.
Try maybe adding a line up in that S, like you have on the E.
write that shit like 100 times and see how it looks

[FACTone]

wy should you change name's you both live mile's from each other

[ribcage]

do yall not know what a joke is? im pretty sure chad just be fuckin wit chall cause hes got mad bars

@fact your letters need a lot more definition, Ionly know the first letter is an N because of your tag, the A is the only kinda cool letter, and the only reason why i know its an A is also because its in your tag

@sir.to.you super ugly bro, id start completely over with a more bubly style, but not bubble letters.... so more throwy style if that makes sense......... and if you feel like you dont need to start over completely then start by changing the tips of your letters, cause thats the worst part

[sir.to.you.]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2210/5734482824_21691dc23f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5734482824/)
Photo 244 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5734482824/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
word i like that better

[H1P30N3R]

LMAO at whoever thought chad's throw was 3 months of skill kill yourself

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

sir dont stretch it like that looks mad ugly

[sir.to.you.]

haha thats what i why i asked. shtooooooooooooooooooooopsss

[skinaone]

@Distance (the better one)
thats sick, but why you guys gotta tell eachother to change names and shit? your on the internet, i mean shit, if you were in the same state or some. but... fuckin internet man. some shit you gotta deal with.

@sir.to.you
I like that E.
Try maybe adding a line up in that S, like you have on the E.

write that shit like 100 times and see how it looks
bro if someone had your name id tell them to change it no matter were they are

[ribcage]

boredom throws.... any1 want 1?
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518111912.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518111926.jpg

[sir.to.you.]

throw a teos brothaaaaa then watch the bruins kill shit

[ribcage]

Bruins? I gotchu in a minute
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/05181120562.jpg
my fuckin purple is running out

[dankbudz]

yoo, ribcage
can you do me a quicky SEDER throw?

[ribcage]

no problemo my *****, give me a sec and then ill edit this post witta pic

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518112204.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518112205.jpg
kinda fucked up so they aint the cleanest my B, prolly cant draw a strate line in the state im in

[dave the pirate]

il take one for shits and giggles

[ribcage]

o shit nark or seya? i dont like Y's so nvm i'll get ya on a nark even tho N's fuckin suck at the beginin for me

[dankbudz]

Nice man, im feeling it

[dave the pirate]

nasty nark

[dave the pirate]

whaaat action shots lol

[ribcage]

dude, i can not for the life of me draw your name right now, just spent like the last 15 just on N's so fuck it, here a shitty throw for ya.
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518112249.jpg

Ima retry wen im not as faded, sorry breh. But fuck throwie N's at the beggining of words, should be outlawed!!!!!!

[dave the pirate]

all good throw up n,s at the begging are really hard to work with

[lawlcat]

M's suck equally.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG_20110520_115820.jpg

[ribcage]

^lol

[ChadWarden]

looking at your username, avatar, and style i feel that youre probably some jerkoff 14 year old shit.

all of your letters are shit, those scribbles add nothing, and the dots at the end of your lines dont look stylish in the least. your tag sucks, too.

[lawlcat]

lol jesus christ, sounds like someone just found out they were adopted. sorry bro.

I do wish I was 14 again though. Thanks for that.



edit: definitely agree with you on the name thing... someday I'll grow up.

[H1P30N3R]

dave the pirate super clean toss props

[ribcage]

@lawl yo chad was right bout your work tho, hand does have potential tho...

@hipe yo i peeped game at your throw in the toy bombs, your E's looked liked you rushed em or something, the middles of em look real bad, and the whole in the S u should have brought up a tad. But that shits is startin to look hella good, your control looks a lot better than it used to

[H1P30N3R]

i made the e's 1 line so ill change that and thanks man tryin to fix all the kinks b4 i hit the streets

[ribcage]

thats a weird way to make your E's one line lol but yeah that P lookin steaz, and the drop shadow is lookin on point

[Isho]

Isho

[dankbudz]

loose the tumor on the bottom of the I, the dot, and the right of the S.
try pulling the lines in more on teh S and H, mainly the H. and fatten that O up.
just make shit look nice and pretty, work from there
and shit

[ChadWarden]

http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/1811/kindergartencoparnoldsc.jpg


its just style, man.

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/19b6863e.jpg
A is beat as fuck

[skinaone]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/seamafia/
save is oldschool here in venezuela

[H1P30N3R]

saver the a needs work the middle of the e needs to be raised a tad so the bottom can be a cleaner circle and the hole in the r goes over to far ...

[SicK-]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/seamafia/
save is oldschool here in venezuela

Im not from venezuela so i honestly dont care.
Thanks hipe that shit is whack its the first thing ive ever done with the name

[nah!]

http://www.vandalsquad.com//img/graffiti/2011/05/22/wag_203501_2205_7113.jpg

[thatswhatshesaid]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/2.jpg

[nah!]

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2240.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2242.jpg

[Task977]

Dont overlap the letters like that, take away the weird x at the bottom of the second "U", and make sure the n has consistent width. It looks strange with the right part of the N getting so small.
I felt like throwing in an R
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2428/scan0001akb.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/31/scan0001akb.jpg/)

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[Eclectic Boogaloo]

why dont both of you go paint something

[skinaone]

nah dont over lap the letters your going over your self too much
jest GO PAINT

[H1P30N3R]

fix the dead space between the bottom of the r and s actually dont tilt the leg on that r it looks awkward

[hecktor]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/2.jpg

bamp

[skinaone]

spaces are WAAAAAY to big IMO

[Task977]

I agree with skina, those spaces just straight up don't work. To hipe, I guess I could give that a try, I'm not getting many chances to paint so I'm just fucking with sharpies. I gotta catch some JEST throws

[lost is gettin up]

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/Picture136.jpg

waffle house

[TastyMcNasty]

meh///

[Isho]

How about now guys?, should I leave the add ons or simple letters?

[lost is gettin up]

meh///

middle one looks the best not feeling the S

[skinaone]

isho take the bunch of faces off

[ribcage]

^aint you put faces in your shit? Lol
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0525111943.jpg
I always get pissed off at throws I color...shits weak

[dankbudz]

yo ribcage,
what i can crit is that i think the R should but fatter on top, the E has a weird opening, try fattening the right part of the R so the like doesnt come straight from that corner, if that made much sense. that bright orange would look dope on a wall.
idk if you want crit on the backgrorund, but on the bottom, that one empty space should probably be one fatter bubble. (btw i got ur exchange comin by the weekend)

-even if skina does put faces on his throws, they have to be better than that guys. but shits funny how alot of people tell others to not do something, while they do the same thing.

hope this picture works, fuckin photobucket is site maintenance or some

[ribcage]

Lol was just a shitty throw my dude, colored it with crayola markers. Just boredom

as for yours the E and D need work, just expirement

[TastyMcNasty]

ribcage- i think your uncoloured ones are better, but ive always loved your A's man.
sed- youre getting better, but like ribcage said, your E and D are hurtin.

started fucking around with my letters today, crits?

[skinaone]

i see them the same ass always

[skinaone]

^aint you put faces in your shit? Lol
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0525111943.jpg
I always get pissed off at throws I color...shits weak
LMAO yea but hee need to work on his letters first then he can add any fucking type of face he wants lol :)

[TastyMcNasty]

i see them the same ass always

im only minorly fucking with the letters, i.e. the extension thing on the A, the circles on some of the R's, and the face in the O

[TastyMcNasty]

i see them the same ass always

im only minorly fucking with the letters, i.e. the extension thing on the A, the circles on some of the R's, and the face in the O

[ribcage]

@tasty yea man Even when im bombing i usually dont do fills, for some reason i like the scenery to be the fill, especially when its a bunch of toy tags im going over, then ill just put a shadow and call it quits. And thanks breh, been gettin a lot of compliments on the A lately, I only have 2 throwy A's, i always thought they were my weak point

[skinaone]

I SEE IT ahahhaha minor very very minor tweats but its ight

[dankbudz]

tried something new with the E, D is pretty much the same

[serk757]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEK1-1.jpg

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEK.jpg

BESIDES CAN CONTROL. and me running out of paint. what yall nigggas think

[dankbudz]

i cannot make out what that says for the life of me. PEEK? TEEK? your handy looks like RAEK or PAEK. i just dont know haha
but i for the K in the bottom one, i would loose that bottom tumor thing in it and raise up the right bar of it.

fucked around with this a bit more, i cant get a good R, so i left them out for now.

[ribcage]

throwy R's are one of my favorite things in the world. lol top of your S looks a little weird on that 1, E is gettin better, D still hurtin

[dankbudz]

S is huge, hows this D lookin? i like it more then the one above even though its pretty much the same.

[Phat 2]

this is for the throw battle, which should I go with ?

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/251464_224193510940899_100000507545549_866111_5760 170_n.jpg

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/250220_224321864261397_100000507545549_866771_5582 823_n.jpg

word is IETSINAF
(btw, get down on the toy throw battle peeps !!!)

[dankbudz]

first one although the f lookin like a E

[ian]

http://cl.ly/2q2r2A0I3P0H292B2j1T/Screen_shot_2011-05-30_at_7.31.45_PM.png

put my tag in that large bottom part of the e after takin this, can control needs work but lemme know what you think

[ribcage]

kick on the right lefg of N needs to be proportionate to the rest, right now its way to big and looks awkward. also you a fat cap for the outlinte, you want thick lines to make it stand out, show people that you have real can control. Also throw up hollows/outlines and get em down, cause atm your just wasting paint on the fills

[upper90daynnight]

hey this is my first throw so crits please
24511

[ribcage]

P's not bad, the rest sucks, your U is the only letter that has negative space

[n0b0dy]

http://i1095.photobucket.com/albums/i473/bay_bidness/2011-05-30205848.jpg
help please?

[BRER]

B's are such a bitch when starting a throwie... I recently changed my name to Bao lol so as far as the BA goes I like to do both upper case. Idk what to tell you about the y though. I hate that letter in general. Also check out boner for some badass B's. Yours isn't bad, but try to make your hand movements a little faster. Those lines are shaky and that makes it look bad anyway. I'm drunk atm so idk if that made any sense or helps at all, but there ya go.

[ribcage]

hmmmmmm idk really how to help ya with that other than tell you to watch vids and look at a bazillion pictures of throwies, then maybe your brain will come up with ideas on how to make it less plain, Y's be hard for throws too mang. All in All that aint a bad start, just clean it up a bit

edit* o damn post ninja up here^ said almost exactly what i said lol

[n0b0dy]

thanks for the crits, and i'll look that dude up, watch some vids, and study some pictures tomorrow
and see if i can apply some stuff without biting. gotta be up inna few hours for work. peaaaace

[TastyMcNasty]

crits?

[Phat 2]

your throws would look 100 times better if their tops didnt converge to meet in that corner. give it a try and show us what it would look like.

[TastyMcNasty]

your throws would look 100 times better if their tops didnt converge to meet in that corner. give it a try and show us what it would look like.
i dont know what you mean by that.. .elaborate

[n0b0dy]

think he means how all the tops flow up into the upper left corner....maybe?:confused:

[TastyMcNasty]

think he means how all the tops flow up into the upper left corner....maybe?:confused:
ohhhh, thanks for elaborating lol... ill give it a shot

[OZON]

been super busy with school so i havent been doing anything at all the past month24611 i hate the p and the r

[Live4TheWall]

Gotta make the P stand out more..... Make the top about half the height of the main stem.




for a friend

[ChadWarden]

edit: im such a bleeding cunt.

dumb down the swoop thing you do on the upper right corner of your letters. it ruins the otherwise fine L, M, and O.

if the middle bar of the E was thicker, i think it would help out quite a bit. your L is fine except for the over exaggerated swoopthing. make sure the M comes over a little to the left to eliminate the akward space above the L. again, less swoopthing and your O is straight.


oh, and those tags? try keyboard letters at a slant. their like black. never go out of style.

[Drez]

Im new to the forums, been writing for 3 months now. Heres two pieces of my work.

A quick throwie i did.(Ran outta paint, thats why the arrow doesnt have an outline)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5237/5794559828_d59e2b3bae.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794559828/)
ash (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794559828/) by Drez_DZ (http://www.flickr.com/people/62257914@N04/), on Flickr

My Penguin Character

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2790/5794020203_4b73fd85ef.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794020203/)
ash1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/62257914@N04/5794020203/) by Drez_DZ (http://www.flickr.com/people/62257914@N04/), on Flickr

Thoughts?

[thatswhatshesaid]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/photo4.jpg

[skinaone]

24755
i was just fucking around and this came up
i think i like the other throw better

[H1P30N3R]

not really feelin that skina the i is mad generic try switchin up your style see what happens seems like your forcin the letters that way because all your letters have that hole the a n and k always look like the same letter
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0115.jpg

[skinaone]

i feel ya ill just stick to my old one it seems like its the best one i do haha
and for your crit im seeing maaaaaaaadddddd progress keep it up
the first E is too hidden the rest is fine but the O try making it more like a character insted of just a face ya digg?
Or make it flow a bit more like the P and see what happens

btw i can make your throw a oneliner ahhaha i just tried it

[kron]

hy.im writing for about 3 weeks now.what you think about this?

[H1P30N3R]

start over kron go to the new to graff thread and do a little research on throws before you get started....
Skina yea I use to do a 1 liner on my name before I added the e at the end

tried making the bottom of the o like a rag but idk think the checker stripes are too much any1 have any simple details that would make it look more legit ?
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0116.jpg

[thatswhatshesaid]

yo pesoe your o looks like a c

[chen]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/monk.jpg
What you think?

[Phat 2]

endingtotalsocial: you need to stop quoting old posts please. thanks.

[lost is gettin up]

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/DSCN1709.jpg Not very clean I know. With that said: Any crits?

[skinaone]

yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now
letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO

[lost is gettin up]

yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now
letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO

Your throws are sick as sin skina thx for the crits

[Ace.K]

Thoughts? Just a simple bomb.

EDIT: I know the lines and circles are uneven. Just a quick sketch of my idea.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00082-20110606-0118.jpg?t=1307341340

[Isho]

Critics please? pointers?tips? I'm going bombing tonight.

[dankbudz]

please dont go bombing if this is what you are putting up..

for crits, if you are going to have no space in the ISH, then i would just use a line as the whole in the O.
Push those letters closer and work on a steadier hand.

[Isho]

How about now?

[thatswhatshesaid]

nope

[ChadWarden]

isho, my *****


as strongly as i encourage you to go bombing tonight, despite what your peers say (that practice is critical to progression,) that throw is wack.

http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/1254/photo00001j.jpg

this is basically your throw, but with some CW help. i strongly recommend you bite the shit out of this.

also, when you go to paint, move with your letters. dont just stand still and move your arm at the shoulder, but sway with your letter. and if you have the chance, take a few steps back and look at your throw before you "bounce." see what youve done wrong and take note on what needs improving. theres no reason you cant improve that very next throwy that you do 1-5-whatever minutes from now.


dont get caught.



edit: and, no, im not saying my throw is perfect.

[VeX'D]

25060

Hope it shows... I've just started like 1 1/2 week ago dudes..

Any crits?

[thatswhatshesaid]

CHADWARDEN in that throw you did your I looks like a dick your S looks like an ass the H looks like 2 asses mashed togehter and that O looks like an ass. ISHO don't use that, also practice man you'll get there. but get good then paint don't make your town hate graffiti more then it already does by putting up ugly shit, also all the local heads will think your wack as fuck. Don't take offence im just saying.

i popsted this before but it was small heres it bigger

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/photo6.jpg

left one has key lime force feild you cant see it tho in this photo i guess

[OZON]

25109well i beleive im makin progress crits please

[Phat 2]

thatswhatshesaid, those 3 gaps are very ugly dude... close em up
and it's not clear what it says, only clear letter is the G... then there's an O, then there's either 2 A's or 2 R's
also, the sharp edges in the G's middle bar aren't working when all your throw has rounded edges

[Isho]

Pointers, critics, tips? I just started about a month ago.:)

[nah!]

dont bother with forcefield just focus on the letters

[Drez]

Pointers, critics, tips? I just started about a month ago.:)

Blackbook ISHO. Practice everyday and keep progressing your letters. I know it gets annoying hearing everyone saying "blackbook,blackbook,blackbook." but its the truth. Anyone can pick up a can of paint and spray on a wall, but it takes true heart to progress and get better. A big problem i notice in your tag is lazy fill, terrible shading, and a very uneven outline. Like i said, practice in your blackbook for a while before you go bombing again. Because what you threw up right there looks incredibly toy. With practice, your letters will flow, and you will learn how to paint. (And when doing your fill, go either left to right or top to bottom and stick with it.)

[H1P30N3R]

let me help dont pay 10 15 for a blackbook so u can doodle toy shit in it get notebook paper its cheap

[dankbudz]

yeah dude, fill up at least 2 lined notebooks. the cheapest ones.

and ash, dude your throw up looks just as bad as his. no hate. just pointing out my brutha

[skinaone]

wait why is isho bombing?
if you started amonth ago get some style first then bomb
SAVE PAINT

[skinaone]

ok why in the hell is someone telling a toy to bite yo wtf are you doing!

[OZON]

25109well i beleive im makin progress crits please

bump for crits

[VeX'D]

25159

Only 1 and half weeks worth of work, any crits?

[OZON]

25159

Only 1 and half weeks worth of work, any crits?

make all the letters the same size and get rid of the detail inside of the leters make it simple

[dankbudz]

dont quote the shit right above you, looks kinda sped when you do that.
vex- get rid of those swoopy sword shit on the letters, you can do whatever you want in the fill, but make the E upper case and the same size.
ozone- i dont got crits for that, just practice it alot and post up whatever you come up with.

[Ace.K]

Thoughts? Just a simple bomb.

EDIT: I know the lines and circles are uneven. Just a quick sketch of my idea.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00082-20110606-0118.jpg?t=1307341340

?? Anyone?

[erosone]

25180

My bomb :D

[Ace.K]

The E and R are too separated and the O looks like a U. Pretty bomb ass S though, nice job.

[toopski]

super quick shit

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/6914/imag0141k.jpg

can was almost empty so dont mind the fucked lines

DECREW

[erosone]

thanks Ace.K,i will post new later

[erosone]

25197


new :D

[Ace.K]

Definitely better. Did you make a new account from haezr? You both go by Eros.

[erosone]

i am Eros for now one jear :D
but i have respect and i will rename myself if second eros writing graffiti better and longer than i

i dont know english xD

[Ace.K]

Haha its all good man. Look for the user "haezr" on this site. Same name but I don't think he's been doing it for as long as you.

[erosone]

we can battle if he want

[haezr]

Haha, we can battle for sure... I write in a completely different area... not about to beef with someone who writes the same 4 letters... meh
lol

[skinaone]

i need to go paint to bring some light to this thread

[haezr]

?? Anyone?

Errr... has potential as an idea... but the top halves of the letters are wack as fuck.
The shaky uneven bottoms need to be fixed, not a fan of the x's

[TastyMcNasty]

...

[Task977]

Soar - The ones on the left are the best
Havent posted in a while, I'm not too sure about this throw. Been painting my old throws and straights, I just dont have a camera. Phat can rest easy now :)
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5903/scan0001ge.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/824/scan0001ge.jpg/)

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[haezr]

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-06-09210623.jpg
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-06-09213205.jpg

Really quick, rough version of what I'd like to develop into my throw.

[OZON]

its lookin good but you should get rid of the tumour on the S and the E makes it ugly

[Phat 2]

yeah, all of em :D

[Ace.K]

Love the idea of the first one but needs a little help on the A. Otherwise you're good!

[ribcage]

i need to go paint to bring some light to this thread

lol i hear ya breh, do some throws on paper...


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MYxAiK6VnXw

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0611111517.jpg
Tryin to get somethin new.... got the idea down, ill post pic once i get the hand movements down
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0611111518.jpg

[MoganOne]

Soar - The ones on the left are the best
Havent posted in a while, I'm not too sure about this throw. Been painting my old throws and straights, I just dont have a camera. Phat can rest easy now :)
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5903/scan0001ge.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/824/scan0001ge.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

Best looking Throw on here in awhile

[Isho]

Any tips, critics, pointers, should I add add-ons?

[OZON]

get rid of the tumour on th i make the i the same size get rid of the extenision on the h and round out the left side so its like all the other letters then connect the letters more

[haezr]

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/DSC_0296.jpg

better?

Still trying to work on the E and the R, not sure what to do with them to make them fit the simplistic style of the OS...
Any ideas? Crits?

[skinaone]

ok
1st the E try making it rounder or squarer you can even make the lines different sizes
Rs i personaly dont like them but instead of making em all round make themwith a bar l then the ) get it ?
Os make is rounder
Ss i love S no im jsut playing i dont really like them but the top is to wide and take the lil stick of thats pointing down
i think thats a good e nuff crit

[skinaone]

sorry bout the dobble post but i need more crits havent really gotten any good ones
25418

[ribcage]

^hump in the I breh... I believe i critted err letter before....was you no listen or was it not what you wanted to hear?

yeeeeeeeeeee I be oooooooonnnnnnnnn....... really hard to draw on paper when you dont got your other hand to keep it steady...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/th_0611112149.jpg (http://s1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/?action=view&current=0611112149.mp4)

[chen]

What do you think?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/2011-06-1217_28_49.jpg

[Drez]

@Ted-A throwie is something you can throwup quick. Some consider bubbled letters to be throws, but if you can throw that tag up in 2-3 mins or less...than its a throwie.(Its all about quickness)

@Chen-Dont connect all the letters together.Just keep it simple at first and you will progress with more and more practice. But your N doesnt look like an N.(Take off the tumor at the top of the N)

[Phat 2]

im diggin the vid ribcage... nice quick clean hand movement, just the way they should be :)

here's from today's battle, the back of every writer's board hehe

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/251188_227714140588836_100000507545549_892839_1099 817_n.jpg

[chen]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f158/ackooo/graf.jpg

[OZON]

@chen i dont like your E looks like a 8 to me you should drop the extension on the N then focuse on make the letters the same size

[skinaone]

http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lmn8bwpwfs1qhwdzco1_500.jpg
i dont know if this is a "throwie" im not sure what a "throwie" is but, do you think this is okay?
it says keanu thats what i "write" for graffiti
that is a "peice or something like that" look around and you will see "throwies" i too "write" graffiti my "name" is skina

[nah!]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/251188_227714140588836_100000507545549_892839_1099 817_n.jpg

whats that dodgy lego advert?

[Phat 2]

there was a lego competition happening at the same time dude.. can you cut the useless questions?

[Ace.K]

Bleh. Making progress?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00108-20110612-1525.jpg?t=1307910494

[OZON]

@acek drop the extesion on the A make the letters the same size

[haezr]

ok
1st the E try making it rounder or squarer you can even make the lines different sizes
Rs i personaly dont like them but instead of making em all round make themwith a bar l then the ) get it ?
Os make is rounder
Ss i love S no im jsut playing i dont really like them but the top is to wide and take the lil stick of thats pointing down
i think thats a good e nuff crit

Haha, maybe it's just me but I found most of this hard to understand.

[sir.to.you.]

your k looks like a u with a boner

stupid shit just wanted to say that
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3225/5826375092_e212452e29_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5826375092/)
Photo 248 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5826375092/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[H1P30N3R]

teos looks pretty good the e is a little bland but i like the other letters
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0118.jpg

[haezr]

teos looks pretty good the e is a little bland but i like the other letters
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0118.jpg

wtf is that supposed to be between your S and E?

[OZON]

Its a O for pesoe

[ribcage]

im diggin the vid ribcage... nice quick clean hand movement, just the way they should be :)


Lol I think your the only one that realized it was a video

[Ace.K]

Exactly. Thats why I had that first post there right under it.

[TastyMcNasty]

^^haha well now i know its a vid, and i will add its pre sick, love your style man

[H1P30N3R]

yea its suppose to be an o just hard to make an o the same style as the other letters so i was tryin a character

[haezr]

Haha makes sense.
Ribcage, I fucking dig your style... watching that vid makes me cream my pants a little lol.

[ribcage]

yee vid was a success then, just tryin to show show some of yall that hand movements are important, especially when you move from paper to a wall.

@hipe yo the bottom parts all look bad except for the way you kicked the P, because you made some seperation from the round part of the P to the kick ya feel me? Cause you didnt do it for any of the other letters, so id start by makin the E's kick out at the bottom like the P does

[TastyMcNasty]

facking around with different names

[FlatScank]

went down along a train-line to flick some graf, caught a throw here and there.

[skinaone]

oh god how can you peice witha throw like that
i see elot right thereee

[TastyMcNasty]

flat- other than your F thats a pre bangin throw

[nah!]

went down along a train-line to flick some graf, caught a throw here and there.

how the hell did you find walls like that!!?? IT HASNT EVEN BEEN BUFFED

if i went down a train track all the walls would be white-grey paint underneath a piece

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im trying to develop something

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2275.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2276.jpg

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2277.jpg
(wont be painting NU beause its a crew in my city)