Throwies

[skinaone]

dont matter if its a crew cause yours is a name
just put NU then neum inside
theres a crew in my town/city thats SA adn i sometimes bomb and but S.A then skina1 on the side

[sir.to.you.]

what up wit this tumor E?
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5224/5829940999_717a9202c5_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/)
Photo 259 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
T should be bigger fa reeeaaal

[drae]

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pretty rough sketch

[Graham]

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Ok guys which throwie do you like better? Jam is short for jammer man a nickname given to me when i was 2 and i know jammer man is kinda a queer tag but jam is pretty legit and jam has some sentimental value to it and isnt some random name that i thought looked cool. Therefore, JM is short for it.

Whats you opinion?
also, constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, thnx :D

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

shits tight flat
jam those all lick ass

[Graham]

i said constructive criticism, i dont see your shit anywhere .......

[Eclectic Boogaloo]

wtf am i supposed to say? Look at those throws. are any of them looking good to you? You gotta think for yourself sometimes. Look at other peoples shit on this site and flickr to get an idea of what a good throw looks like. Also, my lack of posted pics is irrelevent, as i dont feel it necessary for me to post my work for crits, im happy with my shit. recognize yo

[dankbudz]

Jam- didnt you already post that lil story about your name... lol
anyway, i would personally stick with uppercase for that, but its up to you.
loose those waves and turn them into bars. and listen to eclectic boogaloo on doing at least a bit of research.

[Ace.K]

I think I like this one.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00117-20110614-0153.jpg?t=1308034919

[haezr]

Haha, It's definitely better than the last one you posted man. Work on your lines, bring down the leg of the K, and make it a bit smaller. Work on the top of the A.

[sir.to.you.]

what up wit this tumor E?
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5224/5829940999_717a9202c5_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/)
Photo 259 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5829940999/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
T should be bigger fa reeeaaal

Bumpin this cuz i wana know what yall think of this fucked up E.

[Ace.K]

It would work if the rest of the letters were like that maybe. Just seems out of place and flamboyant compared to the T.

[ribcage]

......uuuh its fucked up? Lol if you know its fucked up why we gotta tell you agains its fucked up?

Anyways, theirs tumors on all of your letters, not just the E. Top left of O top left of S top right of T and top left of T(that 1 looks benign tho). and the bubbles/drops at the end look real bad, them are all about having a clean hand movement, work on em

[skinaone]

reach post your throw i wanna se a nice throw in this thread :D

[ribcage]

really hard to draw on paper when you dont got your other hand to keep it steady...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/th_0611112149.jpg (http://s1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/?action=view&current=0611112149.mp4)

hows about i bump this lil vid instead?

[Ace.K]

hows about i bump this lil vid instead?

Have you been using that for a while or just improvised it?

[weakfingers]

Ive seen these new one liner throwies where you do the complete tops followed by the bottom's it was hard to think of at first but heres my attempt at it,
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2512/5838276190_4a552ee8b3_b.jpg

[haezr]

Haha, had to laugh as I walked home today...
I must've been really fucking drunk because I do NOT remember doing this at all...
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-06-16180459.jpg

[Phat 2]

haha nah it happens... I can't remember 90% of the tags/throws I do around the city, I'd be passing by them at times and notice them and go (in my mind) "ohhh yeaah.... riiiight.. shit when did i do that?"
also sometimes people tell me they saw one of my tags somewhere and they start trying to explain to me where it is exactly, and I'd be like <=\ ummm ? where?
hehehe, but on the real eros, tighten up that throw and get some better flow in those letters man, judging by your line flares, you seem like you have a good bombing hand.

[ribcage]

you a lefty eros?

[Isho]

New Isho Throwup...Extreme toy alert ;):p. Crits, pointers, tips etc are gladly welcomed!

[Ace.K]

Stick to learning your handstyles, man. That tag below is pretty bunk. Constantly write your ABC's until you're comfortable with each letter. Then move on from there if you're actually going to stick to graff.

[wackiwo]

make it even

[..romero..]

Ive seen these new one liner throwies where you do the complete tops followed by the bottom's it was hard to think of at first but heres my attempt at it,
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2512/5838276190_4a552ee8b3_b.jpg

dope :cool:

[ATAK!:3]

25754crits?

[Jiska Matos]

my throw up fro,m the train times

[TastyMcNasty]

jiska- try and make all the letters the same height (more or less) because it looks weird as hell.. .and dont do the 2 lines in each letter, or at all for that matter, it looks awfully toy . all in all its not bad, but nor is it good, so simple it up more. on the positive side the handy in the top of the H is bangin

wackiwo- that work is waaay too long, try for something with only 4 letters for now

[haezr]

haha nah it happens... I can't remember 90% of the tags/throws I do around the city, I'd be passing by them at times and notice them and go (in my mind) "ohhh yeaah.... riiiight.. shit when did i do that?"
also sometimes people tell me they saw one of my tags somewhere and they start trying to explain to me where it is exactly, and I'd be like <=\ ummm ? where?
hehehe, but on the real eros, tighten up that throw and get some better flow in those letters man, judging by your line flares, you seem like you have a good bombing hand.
What do you mean line flares?
Yeah, I've been trying to work on it... make it better somehow... it's like I've got writer's block.

@Ribcage
Nah, definitely right handed why?

[Lsd]

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some recent shit, not too stoked on my letters so help a brother out and lets see some crits, please and thank you.

[Phat 2]

your 2 letter throws are phat son. do moar of em

[519Baby]

just started graff like a week ago, so yeah im toy but whatever. first throwie, crit?
http://i51.tinypic.com/fkbrx1.jpg

[Lsd]

word, i'll post some more 2 letters in a bit, any other advice though on my "lun"?

[MakeHate]

Critz anyone? thanks.

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[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ liking the faces within the letters make hate :) dope shit on them pages in general i think
519 baby draw it alot more and change it til you like it....don't bother with colour just do it lots of times til your happy with it n its all nice and balanced also try block and bar letters aswell as bubble letters yo :)

[Phat 2]

makehate, those are pretty nice. the throws the hands, everything's pretty ok. all you need is more practice and you're nickel.

[nah!]

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2293.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2294.jpg

[skinaone]

nah
dont do em so barrish
make'em rounder have more style make your imaginacion have an orgasem

["FrY"]

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[EWL24]

did this for the throw battle, since i write geth i was wondering what u guys think of the G and E, crits please
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[BigBend]

i think i drulled allitle when i finished this :cool:
http://i54.tinypic.com/f107s7.jpg

["FrY"]

damn...where'd the crits go?

oh i made this one just a few minutes ago. i like Node better than Neon...or shock...or fry...
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[TastyMcNasty]

fry- thats nice and simple, keep workin with that and slowly develop it more

["FrY"]

cool thanks :)

[pointman]

Been bombing these past few days, just a basic GL throwie what do you guys think??
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[H1P30N3R]

looks ok glums try makin the bubble on the l like the square on the g instead

[.Cuore]

i think they work well together.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0130.jpg

[skinaone]

ok that P is on fire except the lil circle in the middle try using a |,U,X it will look much better
dont make the bottom of the E so spread out ya digg? also dont go so far back with the making of the second part of the E get it ? or i have to draw it
S dont make the extra extencions like | and then at the bottom oyu did the | again take that off
Os straight

[nah!]

need some crits

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2293.jpg

[MoganOne]

@Pointman- That G does not look totally like shit but that is a real wack L
@Pesoe- Why are you not improving man? 1st do not put faces in your O you are not ready for that. 2nd The little points your are trying to do at the bottom are not working imo. and last of all I swear it is like you are getting worst as you post...
@Nah- That looks like shit i'm sure you know this... lol
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2011%20Graffiti/0621111742-1.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

Idk I have a solid throw im just tryin different styles feels like I have been stuck on the style

[.Cuore]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0130.jpg

1. change the O in the P
2. in the S, get rid of the angled turn on the under side of the S. just keep it a straight line, and stop before it takes a 90 degree turn.

[MoganOne]

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I did a quick fix on some of the areas that could be easily improved imo

[H1P30N3R]

thanks mone looks like im over doing the letters rather than keeping them simple

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0108.jpg

[REDjacket]

@pointman i really like that "G" the "l" id make more square on the rounded out part. I like it though.

[MoganOne]

Precisely man... Kiss Method "KEep It SIMPLE stupid"

[Graff2k11]

http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o411/tcoley13/IMG_1019.jpg

"hoen" let me know whatcha think

[Graff2k11]

@hiponer your throw flows bro, keep it up

[nah!]

NM!!!1!


http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2314.jpg
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http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2319.jpg

[pointman]

pesoe- pretty dope i think the throwie going to a point at the bottom is you're thing
Mone- reminds me of certain euro style pieces people do round my area so as a throwie its sweet
nah-im not really feeling it, paint wise i think it would turn out sloppy
just a few more sketches il get some pictures up of the painted ones later, did like 4 or 5 in a row last night haha
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[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ yeah i was guna say the l look a little like a t in the first few photos you put of the is throw up pointman, but these last few defo make a good looking L, nice one kidda :)

[Graff2k11]

@pointman, im likin the two letter throw..

[dankbudz]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0627111523.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

gl - bottom pic left side its pretty fresh

[H1P30N3R]

seder would have the d over lappin and the top of the r needs rounded off a little better other than that its nice feelin ur S

[NouveauP]

Those GL two letters aren't bad. The G is a little strange, but the L looks really clean.

SEDER - the bottom of the D throws me a little but. Keep workin at it.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0382.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

fire that k is murderin

[.Cuore]

classy, nouv

[dankbudz]

Nouveau- thats fresssh. I think that U would look better without the lower case part on the bottom.


decided to do a quick 2 letter with an experimental S and bit more funky D. just looking for opinions on it, so lemme hear your thought.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0628112232a.jpg

[Urbanosity Ltd.]

yeah the d is sick.. the s just needs to be more refined.. i like the shade too

[Phat 2]

actually the D needs more work on the top right bump you got there and the hole... forget about putting an actual hole, use symbols like $ or just a line, or an arrow... or even put ur crew name in there nawitmean? coz a triangular hole doesnt work, yer D's not triangular

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

I thought it like a pretty tight BD danks whoops sorry...does work as an s but i defo thought it was a b first

[dankbudz]

haha i see that now. thats funny, my eyes just used to lookin at is as an S, i hate that shit. thanks for lettin me know though, im already workin on changin it up

[dankbudz]

fix the E, and loose the lump on the V, and the extra lil line in it. O looks nice, W i would just not do so much with the right side.

[Ace.K]

Whatcha guys think? The drop shadows are shit, put no effort into them and messed up on the right splash. But what our your crits for the lettering?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00151-20110630-0236.jpg?t=1309419615

[Ace.K]

If you like it, keep it. That's the cool part of graff. lol

[dankbudz]

nah man, you still gotta learn your basics before you can do your own thing. or youll be a fag who throw paints on a canvas and practically rubs shit on it and calls it abstract art. fuck that.

Evow- dude, if you keep it go for it. but DONT PAINT THAT SHIT, that E is absolutely horrible, im not trying to hate. its just how it is.

[Ace.K]

Can I get some crits? Thoughts at least?


Whatcha guys think? The drop shadows are shit, put no effort into them and messed up on the right splash. But what our your crits for the lettering?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00151-20110630-0236.jpg?t=1309419615

[dankbudz]

loose the splash shit, and practice.

[Ace.K]

Dude you're biting NouveauP hard on that first K.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0380-1.jpg

[KehmONE]

Haha, I suppose you're right... I saw a k that was manipulated not to look like that k, and manipulated it so it didn't look like that... (I changed the already changed k, and apparently it ended up exactly like someone elses. ) its such a nice k though lol. But I take responsibilty for biting all things considered.

[NouveauP]

dank is right about that E. The back of the E is supposed to come in to make that indention in the center of the E, not the top of the bottom Leg. I did a few quick E's to show you what I mean. Look at the first E and how it wraps to see what I mean.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0385.jpg

KEHM - It just seems like your letters lack the consistency needed to have letter flow. Keep practicing. And remember EMULATE in order to gain inspiration. Don't bite. ;)

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0133.jpg

[.Cuore]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0133.jpg

Pesoe, I'm still not diggin your S. If you get rid of the extension on the top of the line that makes the swirl, it would look a lot better imo. You could also just get rid of that extension, and the bottom one.

[H1P30N3R]

ill try that out

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0135.jpg

[JayHaze]

Just got into this so I'm open for any criticism or advice.
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[.Cuore]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0135.jpg

I think that looks a lot better. Good work.

["FrY"]

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I fucked up the 'm' and the 's' is outa proportion, but I like it.

[ribcage]

ace k is the biter police

[H1P30N3R]

I think that looks a lot better. Good work.
Yea before you said somethin I thought if i took that bar goin up off the s it would kills the defention of it ..

[Ace.K]

ace k is the biter police

Got that shit on lock.

[MakeHate]

critz please????
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[MoganOne]

Lookin Better Pesoe More and more simple yet efficient...
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0407110959_0001.jpg

[KehmONE]

lol that he does... mind you I had no idea, and sure as hell am not stupid enough to bite someone on these forums on purpose lol. insta-flame right there.

[Phat 2]

On the highway:

quick hollow for my crew

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/261887_238414822845174_202093693143954_998349_3239 949_n.jpg

and quick hollow exchange for Vega 925

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/263433_243672252326358_100000507545549_938232_3095 110_n.jpg

I'm still down to paint exchange with any of the rest of you guys yo, put me up in your town and Imma get you up in Beirut ha!!

[aces]

I know the Z is too short but it's my first time messing with paint pens at all and it was late as fuck when I did it.
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This shows what I'm using here for my new "Paint Pen Blackbook" haha which is one of those Benjamin Moore color swatch things. The top piece is a clear plastic so it was hard to work on but the rest are like a matte finish heavy paper so it works really well and it's cool to have a different background color for each one I do haha (although the pages are a bit slippery for the paint pens but maybe that's just something I gotta get used to...)
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[Urbanosity Ltd.]

Aces, it was hard to tell the E, but then i got it.. nice work for first time with paint pens though

[Strange Journeys]

Outs- The TS is tight, make the U seperate more from the O, and rework that face.
phat- the K doesnt flow well, but the AC is down, and its a highway spot so who gives a fuck
My T's too small, and my U is gay. Says Debut
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[Ace.K]

Yeah man, that could use some work all around. The extension on the D is pretty bunk, the E is bland compared to the other letters, and then it looks like a whole new font on the next three letters with the pointed bottoms. Keep workin on it.

[H1P30N3R]

bored z is a tricky letter
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0139.jpg

[aces]

Aces, it was hard to tell the E, but then i got it.. nice work for first time with paint pens though

Thanks man :) Bumping it cause it was the last on the page...

I know the Z is too short but it's my first time messing with paint pens at all and it was late as fuck when I did it.
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This shows what I'm using here for my new "Paint Pen Blackbook" haha which is one of those Benjamin Moore color swatch things. The top piece is a clear plastic so it was hard to work on but the rest are like a matte finish heavy paper so it works really well and it's cool to have a different background color for each one I do haha (although the pages are a bit slippery for the paint pens but maybe that's just something I gotta get used to...)
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[NouveauP]

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0387.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

nouv = ray allen of throws perfect form

[NouveauP]

I appreciate it homie. Your name is always so fun to write.
I got really experimental with this throw. Definitely went overboard, but it makes my eyes hurt [in sort of a good way], so I'll let you guys tear it apart.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0388.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

keep experimenting your style is evolving adding style to the ray allen form

[ribcage]

yeee nouv got throws fo daaays, the only thing I can see is that A to U part might be hard to pull off w/ paint if your usin a fat to outline

fuck Z's I hate em on throws... Nouv you got Z's?

@hipe yo looks like your starting to get your hand movements down your E's are lookin good

[NouveauP]

Nouv you got Z's?

I'll play with them every now and then. But yeah Z's, X's, and Q's kinda fuck me up. I wrote ZERO to demo a Z
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0389.jpg

EVOW - the VOW isn't bad. It's kinda lumpy. That V could be tighter. The W has an interesting form to it, but something about the right side of the letter throws me off. And the drooping that your throw is doing isn't really working.

And that E....

Oh that E...

It doesn't matter if you take crits or not, ANYONE with an eye for letters will think you're toy if you rock that E. Just trust me. Keep it in mind, but scrap it. Maybe there's a similar solution you can find,but it needs work either way.

[Ace.K]

We just try to help Evow, but you're just acting stuck up and arrogant. And why not battle? Because "real" writers fight it out? That makes you a better fighter, not a better writer.

Pic for talking. Trying out some char's with my throw and I'm diggin this flat top dude. Crits/thoughts are welcome.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00157-20110706-2136.jpg?t=1310006280



@ Hipe make it Morse.

[H1P30N3R]

nouv word is morse set it up homie
aci the c is nice the middle of the e is weird and there is potential in your character but he needs a hairline everyone will tell you not to use characters for now though, I like using them myself some letters just seem boring well atleast my letters lol

[Ace.K]

Try making that E lowercase and give it more of a form like your C.

I've tried that, but I can't get it to keep with the uniformity of the A and C. I'll keep trying though.

[dankbudz]

you arent much smarter, ACE
Edit: another deleted post by ace.... lol

Evow- if anyones liking your E then they are fuckin dumb, that letter looks full retard.
its like a T, E and L all in one. also that bottom right of the W is quite fat and funky, but thats all my opinion, take it or leave it.
the throw is clean beans though.

[NouveauP]

No I delete the useless talk. I never delete flicks. You said the E was original, yeah. But that's it. It's still cluttering the board. Flicks>talk
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0391.jpg

[KehmONE]

hahahahahaha thanks for the new sig ace.

sloppy highlighter steez



Sweet jesus you sound like a little punk ass kid.

[sadgeh]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6936/graffschetsen.jpg

It was my name.

[Phat 2]

your name was moto?
I'd raise the O a bit higher so that it aligns with the two outside bars of the M
also if you wanna do a 2 letter throw, maybe it's a better idea to write MT instead

[NouveauP]

TO- lose that little lump in the middle of the top of your T. That should help the confusion.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0393.jpg

[dankbudz]

isnt that the same as before? those colors sure helped that E out..

Nouveau- thats ill

[sadgeh]

I thought that E was a K with a weird thing on top.
Whatever nouveau looks good but the pic is a little unsharp that's kinda sad.

[H1P30N3R]

nouv yes sir!!!

[Menu]

the only thing about nouvs is that the shadow is dodgy but the letters are good

[.Cuore]

TO- lose that little lump in the middle of the top of your T. That should help the confusion.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0393.jpg

Lol seems like it would take quite a while to do that throw.

[ribcage]

^I doubt it takes him very long at all. Thats the beauty to throws.

That one is especially small... Im more of a my height throw kinda guy as opposed to just my upper body throw if ya know what I mean, unless its a oneliner. But uh I think you prolly made it small cause all of the weeds and shit at the bottom of the wall... Lol slanted throws and frozen toes

[NouveauP]

Yeah, that spot is in a fairly busy area, but the building has been vacant so long that it's overgrown as fuck.

And yeah, that throw was done pretty quickly. Notice the lines. Most of them are only one line. The A and U have two.

Thanks for the great crits guys!

[.Cuore]

oh and nouv, maybe put some sort of hole in the top half of the A? cuz imo it looks a bit like an R though. other than that looks really good

[NouveauP]

Haha yeah, I actually meant to put HS there instead of on my K so that would act as the hole. Goops.

[OZON]

2711327114 i need a better camera. hate if you want crits are always welcome

[manik00]

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quick throwie, crits please

[frostyfresh]

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did this one ages ago (sorry about sketching the letters) and i can't seem to find a way to improve on it.
does anyone know anything i can do?

[H1P30N3R]

manik -thats more of a straight letter simple than a throw on a lil research on basic bubble letters will help you alot read tutorials as well as you frosty the begginer section thread and soak that shit up scratch what you got start over after that.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0149.jpg

[Strange Journeys]

hipe why dont you ever paint anymoe?

[frostyfresh]

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started working on stuff like this
crits pls

[Ace.K]

I like how you kept uniformity throughout each letter but some have unnecessary extensions and the first letter is hard to depict.

[asgoodasitgets]

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well...here it is.

[H1P30N3R]

jccz?

[Jokz]

asgoodasitgets: id work more on flow and the speed of ur throw. seems like u took a lot of time to do this one...

here's some stuff i did a while back, thought id post it to get some crits lol

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3343/3275089089_d10b8cdaea.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/3275089089/)
Jokzzzzz (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/3275089089/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6134/5929291196_3d9a267519_m.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5929291196/)
throwup (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5929291196/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6133/5928733429_a28b54c52e_m.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5928733429/)
simple throw (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5928733429/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr

[asgoodasitgets]

jccz?
Jeez. ive fixed the e's ill have some pictures tomorrow. its kind of frustrating finding a style.

[j3d10n3r]

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crits? besides the overall sloppiness, it was pitch black

[Strange Journeys]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4150/5052150487_0ac7d624c2_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/thegraveyardshift/5052150487/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4082/4877212441_6bd93cd995_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/scgraffiti/4877212441/)
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3596/3358516749_38c4368028_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/obknoxious/3358516749/)
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5181/5691810796_0a0d9b08c0_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/30454043@N03/5691810796/)
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5061/5691242623_b918c8c4d8_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/30454043@N03/5691242623/)

i wouldnt write jedi., throws alrite though, i just dont really feel the D, plus it seems small

[shimasounds]

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brand new and messing around with concepts. quick sketch.

[Ravid1]

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Very first time out with spray paint. Done on a bridge near my house. Tips, comments, and constructive criticism.

[Ace.K]

You need some work man. Stick to the black book and practice your can control.

an outline in MPLS.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG_3670.jpg?t=1310680922

[H1P30N3R]

nice hollow ace color and drop shadow next time

[Phat 2]

sweet throw ace. just needs to be better flowin. kinda looks a bit stiff know what i mean? but definitely a good starting point to build off of

[Cuso707]

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Any crits?

[sane.]

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[Ace.K]

Sane your throw would be way better if you moved the A slightly behind the S, lose the left bump on the N, and move it behind the A. Just my opinion though. Plus it'd be easier and quicker to fill. Are those painted throws just practice ones at your house or actually on the streets?

[H1P30N3R]

I just had a flashback looking at sane's e i use to rock that same 1 when I wrote hipe .. but yea what ace is sayin also just try simple bubble letters without extra lumps curves and points for now.

[Strange Journeys]

dont write SANE yo

[NosE2]

rustyhttp://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6373/001jkmh.jpg

[.Cuore]

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you can't write sane, he's a legend.


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Any crits?

and I wouldn't write ERASE either, especially since you're from the bay; there's already an ERASE in sfo.

[H1P30N3R]

nice nose hand is crack too

[Flawless Victory]

dont write SANE yo
This is the only thing that should be said to someone trying to write Sane in this thread

[H1P30N3R]

but he has it stiched on his hat bro!!

[sane.]

Thanks ace uhmm ye I'll try that out and those paint ones were in my house but I'm going to do Agee out soon

[dont panic]

second sticker in this pic.. first was a shitty char attempt.. any advice on the throw?
http://i52.tinypic.com/2925l52.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

try a capital d the r looks like an e the e looks like an i keep all your letters pretty much same width and height go simple for now
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0154.jpg

[Dreg one]

^ I know... D's are tough for some reason... but I have no idea how that is supposed to be an R. I like the idea on the E but fatten it up... somehow. I don't know what to say about the P, I don't hate it but I don't like it that's for sure.

[H1P30N3R]

look at tons of throw alphabets and jus look at peoples throws pick up little pieces from letters and build off that

[dont panic]

try a capital d the r looks like an e the e looks like an i keep all your letters pretty much same width and height go simple for now

i tried a capital d but i couldnt get it to work. i guess ill be humble and start my name off lowercase haha
http://i52.tinypic.com/b6rrdt.jpg

[Phat 2]

main street shutters spot. paint exchange with klaus. who else wants in on this shit?

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/268184_250726994954217_100000507545549_967769_5405 131_n.jpg
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/284046_250727364954180_100000507545549_967770_6788 576_n.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

thats whats up phat idk when I could get you one up but when I do ill post a pic then you can go from there.
also... EVERYONE GO ENTER IN THE TOY THROW BATTLE THREAD ILL POLL IT TONIGHT.

[H1P30N3R]

woah dicr start all over man simple bubble letters look em up

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0161.jpg

[MN Nice]

Couple throws with the new name.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00184-20110718-0956.jpg?t=1311002348
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00183-20110718-0955.jpg?t=1311002364
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00182-20110718-0955.jpg?t=1311002377
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00185-20110718-0956.jpg?t=1311002173

Crit if you want to.

[sifer-]

3d failed -.- but whatever LOL its my first attempt at a throwie crit hard thanks
- sifer
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[Ravid1]

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I actually like that Sifer is that a P in your sig though?
questions, comments, concerns?

[Ravid1]

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Practicin my throws til i can afford to buy more paint. Want to put this one somewhere nice

[sifer-]

@ravid1
lol actually its an f in my sif...fail on my part LOL
uhh for your throw...i dont really know what it says try and make it simpler i geuss i dont really know what to say cause i just kinda started :|
on your second throw it looks good imo

[H1P30N3R]

27942
Practicin my throws til i can afford to buy more paint. Want to put this one somewhere nice
no you dont because in a year if your still writing you might have a decent throw and already have a shitty rep for puutin stuff like that up in good spots

[Ravid1]

Well I'll put it in a bad spot then. I'm a toy but I gotta start somewhere

[H1P30N3R]

agreed not hatin on you man just a little advice ..find you a chill spot and paint the fuck out of it

[sifer-]

says sifer its pretty toy haha but crits would be nice

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[Ravid1]

Haha I feel it. Got this low key bridge near my house that people don't really go to cause it's out of the way up hill and in a nicer hood. There is still graff there but it gives me a good canvas outside my home to try out different shit on.

Sifer on this one your S is practically an R with those ad ons still diggin your simple flare style though

[sifer-]

how can i change it to not make it look like an r cause it looks like an s to me and i dunno what i should do with it

[NouveauP]

It looks like an S to me... the circle confuses me, but it's an obvious S.

Your R is missing a leg though.

[sifer-]

yah i didnt know how to draw the back of the s so i covered the negative space with a circle -.- LOL. and the r's other leg is behind the e

[sifer-]

and is it any good to put up

[Strange Journeys]

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quick freeway fill in

[nah!]

is that a bridge?

[Strange Journeys]

no its like one of those big ass dumpsters, shit was mad rushed as well. its in a parking lot right off the freeway

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6015/5965176910_387a34cd08_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/64621696@N02/5965176910/)

[serb11]

its actually not bad keep praticing strange

http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/2556/snapshot20110722.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/39/snapshot20110722.jpg/)

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quick paper ting

[Phat 2]

nice sebs. just get some cleaner lines and drop a shadow on that baby

[serb11]

proper thanks buddy

[Ravid1]

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Ravid as usual

[Ravid1]

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Practicin under a bridge

Used a crappy can one night then came back the next day to try and touch up before people saw

[MN Nice]

Yikes dude. Hold back on painting for now. Stick to your black book and get a better throw sketched. Your letter structure is shitty and not even legible.

[Ravid1]

The crappy add on lines do throw a lot of it off but I feel like Id have something down with a cleaner can and more soberness.

[Ravid1]

More messin around in the black book
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[MN Nice]

Better but work on your R. Its just two nuts with a hat on and a mouth.

[Shroomsh]

Ravid, for throws start really simple, throws are kinda about readable letters that people can recognize as your name, the second thing is you need to be able to 'throw' one up without looking at a sketch in a reasonable amount of time

[Ravid1]

I feel it Ive been doin a lot of simple throws so lately I just started fucking around with different ideas hoping to create a style for myself that I can potentially build off of

[Shroomsh]

Well then, just paint a lot more in low profile areas to develop can control. Otherwise you'll get a bad rep

[H1P30N3R]

yes no maybe ?
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0174.jpg

[skinaone]

you getting better
just clean it up a bit

[skinaone]

no its like one of those big ass dumpsters, shit was mad rushed as well. its in a parking lot right off the freeway

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6015/5965176910_387a34cd08_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/64621696@N02/5965176910/)
its ight work on your shadows cause there are some that are bigger then the others
im not feelling the D.E.T
that B is ight and the U is nice

[ribcage]

@pesoe rework that P bro
@ravid yikes that looks like ass

@Mn Nice your ace-k right?

[Flawless Victory]

its actually not bad keep praticing strange

http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/2556/snapshot20110722.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/39/snapshot20110722.jpg/)

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quick paper ting

Don't end your throws at the bottom of a page.
Throws, like women, don't look good without a bottom.

[ribcage]

lmao damn, never thought of it like that

[MN Nice]

Throws, like women, don't look good without a bottom.

Hahaha I'm gonna sig this. What about if its faded at the bottom?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00198-20110727-2019.jpg?t=1311817719

[ribcage]

no, especially that^

[MN Nice]

Aight I'll fill it next time.

[Flawless Victory]

http://i55.tinypic.com/fbjq5l.jpg

Really rough example, but yeah man, you can't get very far without learning to add bottoms to your letters.

[MN Nice]

Yeah I know, thats my original design for it. This was just late at night so I said fuck it and just faded it.

[H1P30N3R]

bored more practice
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0176.jpg

[homemovies]

28542

i feel like this might look good after its painted on a wall

[Simon]

>>go skating with mates
>>have can of black and green
>>not much green left, think theres enough to do a quick throw up
>>green runs out after first letter
:L now theres a half coloured in throw up and the stuck up ass in the store that sells paint wont sell to me >.<

[nah!]

rack it

don't act static

just backpack it

[ribcage]

dont take backpack, grab basket, have a homie wait outside entrance, fill up basket, walk towards entrance, homie sees you walking towards entrance and walks in to make doors open, you walk through open doors w/ basket, put shit in car/backpack/shoppingcart/Mom's car, chuck basket, leave. Huff.

[sadgeh]

I'm glad that I live in Holland and always can buy cans. But sometimes I rack just go there put it in your pants buy something little and walk away, like a boss.

[Phat 2]

bored more practice
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0176.jpg

some kid in my area used to write smerk! damn! you just reminded me of him... went over all his throws, haven't seen any new shit from him in over a year

[H1P30N3R]

lol just tryrin names just practice different letters havin a creative block with pesoe

[OZON]

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i feel like this might look good after its painted on a wall drop the halo the shit on the sides and focuse on makeing your letters the same size

[Simon]

all the places in my town have it behind a counter or locked in a cabinet, its bs haha
theres some paint at my work that I could steal but its fluro colours and I dont really want any fluro colours

[MN Nice]

Nah man, fluor paint sucks. It doesn't cover, just "highlights" the under stuff if anything.

[Simon]

yeah didnt think it would be any good, I know this is completely off topic haha but would like car paint be any good to tag with?
Ironlaks are 10 dollars each here an I can get cheap shitty paint for like 6.50 so I might go with the shitty paint an just use Ironlak for my good pieces

[ribcage]

I'm glad that I live in Holland and always can buy cans. But sometimes I rack just go there put it in your pants buy something little and walk away, like a boss.

terrible idea, see below vvv


dont take backpack, grab basket, have a homie wait outside entrance, fill up basket, walk towards entrance, homie sees you walking towards entrance and walks in to make doors open, you walk through open doors w/ basket, put shit in car/backpack/shoppingcart/Mom's car, chuck basket, leave. Huff.

[sadgeh]

in some stores here, you must walk through the checkpoint stand so to put it in your pants is better:)

[nah!]

I don't write this i'm just messing around with the letters
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2372.JPG
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2371.JPG

[kedekone]

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[ribcage]

looks like kedey

[mrchisel]

coloring looks good kedek

[lost is gettin up]

Working on new throwie http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/223.jpg

[vaginalexpolosion]

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[mista_dza]

sove or save? taht V looks fresh, but im not diggin any of the other letters. maker your throw just like that V and work off that imo.

[vaginalexpolosion]

soup

[Shit Outta Luck]

And that right there is ya problem sir

[mista_dza]

that says soup ?? damnmm that P is def an 'e' the fix that. and if tthats a U you need to not make it pointy and round it on the bottom, anyway


some little shit i came up with, workin on a new D for my throws so im just puttin this here
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[Mc Satan]

havent ever tried drawing a throw not quite sure where to even try, any suggestions? im gonna try some tomorrow so i'd like some tips before i start

[Nyc Sno]

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wowww seriously biggest toy move possible

[mista_dza]

MCsatan , bubble letters= throwup, keep that in mind those bubble letter you had to do for titles of projects in like 3rd-5th grade is what you need to be doing lolol

and nyc sno i concur, not that because Sane/Smith are some of my favorite writers, but i cant stand it when people jump in this game thinkin they can just pick a name, yeah you can, but you gotta do some research and give some people respect, cuz if i see toys usin big names like revok, sane, cope , or even blest( from that movie) im crossin that shit out straight up.

[lost is gettin up]

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/228.jpg
http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/268.jpg
Crits on new throw? I got fuckin attacked by wasps doin' the 2nd one x]

[lost is gettin up]

I started writing "isor" as my first name but went to google images and iSoR is bumpin' in NYC. Changed right away. I'm with you on this one;do some research and if someone is getting up way harder than you,Drop it.

[vaginalexpolosion]

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[Shit Outta Luck]

Vaginalexplosion lol put something inside of the U to distinguish it as a U and not a V. Do something else with the P to make it look less like an E. Lose the the bar that makes it look like an E.

[Strange Journeys]

damn you a grimy motherfucka

[MN Nice]

I would just stick to Sove if I were you. Its a nice throw. Better than soup anyways.

[Phat 2]

true^

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/185300_260848720608711_100000507545549_1008018_267 4838_n.jpg

[lost is gettin up]

fresh drop ^^

[Mc Satan]

first time i try a throw crits please
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[sadgeh]

why is there only 3D on the bottom?

[Phat 2]

and why do you have your short shorts crotch on the paper?

[Flawless Victory]

Ⓖⓞⓣ ⓝⓞⓣⓗⓘⓝⓖ ⓞⓝ ⓣⓗⓔ ⓝⓐⓚⓔⓓ ⓝⓘⓖⓖⓐ ⓘⓝ ⓣⓗⓔ ⓗⓐⓝⓓⓢⓣⓨⓛⓔ ⓑⓐⓣⓣⓛⓔ ⓣⓗⓡⓔⓐⓓ

[Mc Satan]

my crotch aside, crits on the actual throw, and im fixing the whole 3d only at bottom thing right now i didnt realize it

EDIT: added 3d at top now please crit
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[Skeletor1134]

not diggin the big hole in the P. i feel like your individual letters are too spread out.

[sadgeh]

the big hole in the P is ugly, and that dot in the dot of the i is weird but it has something!

[Strange Journeys]

thats not a throw yo

[Mc Satan]

did these 2 while waiting to pay some bills so they are a bit sloppy, just posting them to see if letter type and placement are better this time. also decided to do a lower case E on one of them to see how it looks like
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[Strange Journeys]

youre basically doing more straight letters, just shittily proportioned. go on flickr or google or this forum and look up some throws

[nah!]

dont buldge the letters

[Mc Satan]

gonna try a few more but before i do, quick question should i stick to lower case E or capital?