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MN Nice
08-13-2011, 06:12 AM
New name that I've been fuckin with lately. Thoughts?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00234-20110813-0610.jpg?t=1313233931

MoganOne
08-13-2011, 03:20 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/photobucket-6528-1313253778443.jpg

TastyMcNasty
08-13-2011, 03:27 PM
everyone on this page (other than mone and evow) is trying too hard to accomplish a throw, so simple it up a bit.

Shit Outta Luck
08-13-2011, 05:15 PM
yo mone, I think you should fatten up the top right of the N, right above the circle. Only a little bit though, and maybe make the middle of the M smaller and change the right side of it a bit. It reminds me of an E haha

SandmanNZ
08-13-2011, 05:37 PM
29945
Crits?
My first throwup, no fill.

Simon
08-13-2011, 11:13 PM
Liking that Sandman, hey you from NZ? I am too

SandmanNZ
08-13-2011, 11:33 PM
Sick man! You write aesop?

Lusid
08-14-2011, 10:05 PM
30006 crits? i don' really like the "d"

SandmanNZ
08-14-2011, 10:31 PM
I think your L and D are a bit weird, and try to keep all your letters the same size dude.

Lusid
08-15-2011, 12:53 AM
I think your L and D are a bit weird, and try to keep all your letters the same size dude.

aight thanks for the help, i probably shouldn't bring the top of the D to the S

SandmanNZ
08-15-2011, 01:31 AM
Yeah, another good one is either stick to all uppercase or all lower case, a capital D will help alot.

Simon
08-15-2011, 03:00 AM
yeah I do haha, where bouts you from? I'm from up north haha Whangarei

SandmanNZ
08-15-2011, 03:25 AM
Bay of plenty man, ohh too bad thats so far away!

Simon
08-15-2011, 03:49 AM
yeah haha oh well, at least I know theres another Kiwi on this site :D

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
08-15-2011, 04:13 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5947704362_fe75cb2d9b_b.jpg

nah!
08-15-2011, 08:09 AM
i dont like how the right side of the V is so skinny but its cool

PulseWithLife
08-15-2011, 08:53 AM
vows is a dope name

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
08-15-2011, 01:38 PM
yeah thats my boy.

sifer-
08-15-2011, 05:33 PM
both say SR crits plz

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TastyMcNasty
08-15-2011, 05:36 PM
i use SR as my 2 letter too :3
and youre S is nicely done, but that R is hurting

sifer-
08-15-2011, 05:45 PM
thankss mann and yee idk what to do with my r im tryin to play around with it

TastyMcNasty
08-15-2011, 05:58 PM
try makin the top flat like the S, and have the left leg of the R overlapping the right (oppisite of what youre doing), and have the middle part of the R extend more, and not be so squished

sifer-
08-15-2011, 06:31 PM
the r is still pointy i forgot to fix that but hows this

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30074

MN Nice
08-15-2011, 06:57 PM
Sifer, try SF. It reps your name better than sr.

sifer-
08-15-2011, 07:00 PM
isnt there a writer in NY that writes SF

MN Nice
08-15-2011, 07:04 PM
There's probably someone who writes SR somewhere. You're not writing SF.

sifer-
08-16-2011, 02:19 AM
yee thats truee well ill try SF if im not feeling it do i still have to use it

MN Nice
08-16-2011, 02:29 AM
lol no. Do what the fuck you want to. Just thought I'd suggest it.

ribcage
08-16-2011, 02:40 AM
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816110018.jpg

sifer-
08-16-2011, 02:49 AM
yee thanks mann but whatdo you think boiut the throw

SandmanNZ
08-16-2011, 02:55 AM
That s is awesome. reminds me alot of skuf's which is sick as.

MN Nice
08-16-2011, 03:05 AM
I actually think that S is fresh.

Flick for all this talking. Rib that combined throw is tight!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00263-20110816-0255.jpg?t=1313481878

sifer-
08-16-2011, 04:58 PM
@mnnice i likee thatt i dunno what to sayy bout it except the fact that i like it haha

i made the top of the r more like the top of the s
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sifer-
08-16-2011, 05:11 PM
30103

ribcage
08-16-2011, 05:18 PM
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816110018.jpg
bump

.Cuore
08-16-2011, 05:24 PM
bump

likin it reach, you might want to try making the C look a bit more like a C so you can distinguish it from the A. other than that, i like the idea.

MN Nice
08-16-2011, 07:40 PM
I actually think that S is fresh.

Flick for all this talking. Rib that combined throw is tight!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00263-20110816-0255.jpg?t=1313481878

Bump. Sifer that updated one is looking better. Did you ever mess around with SF?

sifer-
08-16-2011, 11:18 PM
No i havent yet i will soon though ill post it but yeah man thankss

sifer-
08-16-2011, 11:36 PM
i have absolutley no idea what to do with my f i think ill just stick to sr unless i get any idea

SandmanNZ
08-17-2011, 12:24 AM
29945
Crits?
My first throwup, no fill.
bump

nah!
08-17-2011, 01:41 AM
bleerrr it looks ugly

shadyloc420
08-17-2011, 02:00 AM
OOPS! your straight sandbaggin in the toy thread!

nah!
08-17-2011, 02:09 AM
???

no U

SandmanNZ
08-17-2011, 02:25 AM
Criticism instead of just saying its ugly would be super helpful :D
Its the first time i painted anything thats not just a tag :/

sifer-
08-18-2011, 12:34 AM
sandmann work on your throw in your blackbook first

SandmanNZ
08-18-2011, 02:20 AM
Yeah i will do, i was just experimenting that night, any of the letters you think i should improve more? or are they all rubbish n can that idea/style

MN Nice
08-18-2011, 03:00 AM
Yeah man they're all pretty weak.

Sorry for posting the same throw, just trying to get some crits.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00269-20110818-0033.jpg?t=1313654368

CollinCreeper1
08-18-2011, 05:56 PM
30302
give a man some crits!

ribcage
08-18-2011, 09:25 PM
I can tell the E's are E's but thats about it....

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816112353.jpg

Strange Journeys
08-18-2011, 09:44 PM
whys your h so fat

ribcage
08-18-2011, 09:47 PM
idk, just how my hand moved on that 1 I guess

Saiko
08-18-2011, 09:53 PM
I can tell the E's are E's but thats about it....

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816112353.jpg
Reach...where are you from?

ribcage
08-18-2011, 10:02 PM
winchestertonfieldville

EWL24
08-18-2011, 10:11 PM
crits please
30312

Saiko
08-18-2011, 10:14 PM
winchestertonfieldville
...oh there's this reach near philly who's a monster on the rails. Would've been fucked if that was you...

ribcage
08-18-2011, 10:17 PM
send pics. I get down.

Saiko
08-18-2011, 10:21 PM
send pics. I get down.
I'll try and find some of his stuff online. most of his work is on the rails and under tunnels, so those lame ass non writing photographers pry won't have any of his stuff.

ribcage
08-18-2011, 10:27 PM
...I havent been to philly since I was a kid... and I didnt paint. So that aint me, I been in the train game for a few years tho...

Lado
08-18-2011, 11:37 PM
30314

modified the first one to a different style kind of.
30315


Overall, I'd like to hear what you think.

.Cuore
08-18-2011, 11:50 PM
30314

modified the first one to a different style kind of.
30315


Overall, I'd like to hear what you think.

I prefer the first one tbh.

Lado
08-19-2011, 12:40 AM
I prefer the first one tbh.

So do I man, I like the S and K. But the modified was only another example of what to work with, kind of fit the style I've been seeing. I think I may be sticking with the 1st one.

IbuprofenTablets
08-19-2011, 08:09 AM
Chill, the swirl in the S (first pic) screams toy IMO, make sure not to have any shit like that in your throw, at least not yet. As for the rest of the the throw, it's boring. I think the second one has the most appeal; work with that. One more thing, you seem to have a problem with your letter spacing, it looks like the letters after the first letter are too tucked into the previous one. Give them a little more breathing space.


Oh, almost forgot, one golden rule: don't sketch your throw, you wouldn't sketch it with paint, would you? Of course not.

Besides, the only thing worth sketching with paint/a pencil/a pen is a piece.


Keep it up.

Lado
08-19-2011, 11:39 AM
Ibu, which letters, of the 2 throws, would you say are the best ones and should be carried on or played with? I'm kind of fond of the "L K" in the 1st one. But of course, that's coming from my toy perspective.

MN Nice
08-19-2011, 11:55 AM
Sorry for posting the same throw, just trying to get some crits.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00269-20110818-0033.jpg?t=1313654368

El bumpito

Sulk, I'd pick the S and U from the second one and the L and K from the first.

~PVE~
08-20-2011, 05:54 AM
30419
Crits welcomed ^_^

Ewal - Your throw should all flow with each other letter.
lado - I personally like the top better(minus the swirl)
mm - I would just bring down the top right side of the S down just a tad.

IbuprofenTablets
08-20-2011, 09:43 AM
Ibu, which letters, of the 2 throws, would you say are the best ones and should be carried on or played with? I'm kind of fond of the "L K" in the 1st one. But of course, that's coming from my toy perspective.


Well, in my opinion, the entire throw in the second one is better than the entire throw first one. The K in the first one looks droopy, and non-flowing, for lack of a better term. Work with everything in the second throw. Remember to give your letter breathing space.

centrysam
08-21-2011, 09:00 AM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6076/6050829945_80534961f0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6050829945/)
Snapshot_20110816_2 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6050829945/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6144/5939506983_8d212ae489.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5939506983/)
Snapshot_20110714_4 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5939506983/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

pg battles
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6030/5927944355_abf1e72e46.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5927944355/)
Snapshot_20110711 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5927944355/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6131/5919500180_70e7b553f2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5919500180/)
Snapshot_20110709 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5919500180/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

ribcage
08-21-2011, 01:25 PM
^god damn your throws and hands are ugly. the STOMP one is the only one that I can look at without being annoyed... Try simpling em up a bit, because the slight complexity your tryin to put on those letters look terrible. Work on hand movements and cleanliness with simpler letters, then if you really want come back to this style and fuck with it.

Phat 2
08-21-2011, 06:24 PM
i strongly disagree. nothing wrong with these throws at all. they flow real nice.
the handstyle, yeah it needs work. but the throws are great, nothing's ever perfect. but they DEF aren't ugly !

ribcage
08-21-2011, 07:08 PM
theyre not clean, their inconsistant, and they are most definetly ugly. If I saw them in high traffic+high graffiti area location id chose him to cover in a heartbeat

Phat 2
08-22-2011, 01:09 PM
to each his own opinion i guess

KehmONE
08-22-2011, 01:19 PM
I'm with Phat on this one, I like em.

centrysam
08-22-2011, 05:44 PM
@ ribcage ,,, i dont understand u ... iv only posted on this site a few times .. every time uv commented on any my flicks its been hate ..
but thats ok .. im used to that much like all of us ... but i do agree with u that my hands are ugly and some of the throws are wack but not ALL of them .. i put alot of time into my throws and for u to degrade my work pisses me off ...soo say something constructive soo u dont like such a fag . even if ur the best graff artist ever to be put on earth . if thats ur attitude then i belive u are wack . deemed to be road kill ......

but anyways why dont ya post one of these SICK ASS STEAZY throws u claim to be soo good at there captin

SneeZ
08-24-2011, 09:20 AM
ribcage is bullshitin on this one. the Humr throws are good, keep writin em.

ribcage
08-24-2011, 10:58 AM
Your throws have potential, but that doesnt make them good. Maybe its the picture quality that makes em look dirty... but Im sure that your throws are on the same level as your tags. THe lines on your throws look sketched out, not one clean line.

No need to get butthurt and start saying I think I know everything, I apologize for being too blunt with you, didnt know it was gonna hurt your feewings.

so I guess in your eyes I dont know throws, but how can someone that dont know throws tell someone else about throws?! pandamonium. Stop assuming you know anything
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816112353.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816110018.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0415111500.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0611112117.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518112204.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0323112024.jpg

Shit Outta Luck
08-24-2011, 06:31 PM
new shit lol
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.Cuore
08-24-2011, 06:48 PM
rib was so wrong, i love those throws.

~PVE~
08-25-2011, 03:10 AM
30754
30755
30756
30757

SneeZ
08-25-2011, 06:27 AM
30760
wud u guyz think?

sema
08-25-2011, 07:05 AM
^^^^the double lines throw it off and the pyramid like bottoms dont really flow i know a few people that do somethin like that but so im not sayin it cant work just doesnt here keep playin with it try to make it one consist. flowing body

OZON
08-25-2011, 09:39 AM
30754
30755
30756
30757
is this in kamlooops looks so familliar

Gatsoi
08-25-2011, 11:14 AM
I'ts been a while
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/mm.jpg

~PVE~
08-25-2011, 03:33 PM
is this in kamlooops looks so familliarThat they are.

OZON
08-25-2011, 04:43 PM
i saw the top pic and was like i swear to god that looks like the thing by my school

YorkCro
08-26-2011, 10:29 AM
what do ya guys think?
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~PVE~
08-26-2011, 09:16 PM
30907
didnt quite fill the d in as much as i'd to to. was dark as a witches tit!

OZON
08-26-2011, 10:31 PM
messin with new name30909 crits

MN Nice
08-27-2011, 12:29 AM
It has no style what so ever ^ Its just bland bubble letters pushed together.

ChadWarden
08-27-2011, 12:50 AM
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816110018.jpg

do more with this RE connection.

~PVE~
08-27-2011, 12:26 PM
30923
30924
30925
30926
top two were done with this nasty 6year cold can of tremclad rust paint. oily as fuck

HRbN
08-27-2011, 01:25 PM
pve come up with a new throw. expecially if your actually out painting. cause that one is hideous

Phat 2
08-27-2011, 01:28 PM
30907
didnt quite fill the d in as much as i'd to to. was dark as a witches tit!
WHAT FUCKIN D ?
either someone told you these were good throws or you didn't take anyone's opinion.
they generally suck. you're definitely not ready for the streets.
first step I'd take would be getting a proper basic handstyle down before worrying about throws.
second step after I've mastered the fucking handie's letters would be throwing actual letters instead of 5 weird heart shapes and 2 dots.
third step would be doing a shadow instead of a 3D... 3D's are for pieces, not throws (with a few exceptions)
and fourth step would be actually filling the shadow in properly, not a lousy ass wiggle

Evow1
08-27-2011, 01:46 PM
yea pve, step you life game up.

~PVE~
08-27-2011, 02:09 PM
Thanks guys I'll work on it. Evow stop being a internet hype man.

ribcage
08-27-2011, 10:34 PM
do more with this RE connection.

im tryin to make it 1 liner, dont quite got it down yet...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0827112025.jpg

OZON
08-28-2011, 04:16 PM
It has no style what so ever ^ Its just bland bubble letters pushed together.
true ive been on vacation for a fuckin month and havent been doing anything until i found that board in my house and thats wat i came up with lol but no im gunna be doing simples just cant wait till im back so i can start practicing again lol

.Cuore
08-28-2011, 05:08 PM
messin with new name30909 crits

http://www.conservapedia.com/images/0/03/Sine-pi.jpg

?

ribcage
08-28-2011, 05:09 PM
lol we got a joker up in this bitch!

illegal_drugs
08-28-2011, 05:33 PM
my friends on the left
http://cs10770.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_67d080e0.jpg

http://cs11384.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_9414dd78.jpg

.Cuore
08-28-2011, 07:26 PM
lol we got a joker up in this bitch!

i'm going to sig this loool


my friends on the left
http://cs10770.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_67d080e0.jpg

http://cs11384.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_9414dd78.jpg

I would resize the dot in the R to make it smaller like the one in the A.

MN Nice
08-29-2011, 12:42 AM
Nice two letter, Rasn. Trying out a one liner throw. It starts the the top right and moves the the bottom right leg and from there on.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00291-20110829-0010.jpg?t=1314596468

ribcage
08-29-2011, 12:48 AM
i'm going to sig this loool

thatll cost $5

centrysam
08-29-2011, 07:36 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6182/6095071662_5990187849.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/)
Snapshot_20110829 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

.Cuore
08-29-2011, 07:42 PM
thatll cost $5

sure just gotta wait for my welfare check to come in


http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6182/6095071662_5990187849.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/)
Snapshot_20110829 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

diggin the top left one though the R seems a bit out of place. still good though.

ribcage
08-29-2011, 10:06 PM
sure just gotta wait for my welfare check to come in

I can wait. Ill pm you my address.

@Humr top right is okay... the rest not so much... do some ballpoints

AeonFBC
08-30-2011, 07:43 AM
the first one is on a bus
31039310403104131042310433104431045

MN Nice
08-30-2011, 01:58 PM
Ain't bad but it aint great. The E sticks out when you have the top half over lap the bottom. And make sure your letters keep that even size on your two letters.

Mc Satan
08-30-2011, 04:30 PM
havent drawn anything in a long time been busy. got a few mins today. what you think?
EDIT: did 2 more just messing around
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NOSEO
08-31-2011, 08:35 AM
31066 crits.

emace1
08-31-2011, 11:17 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6206/6102255970_001246b34d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6102255970/)
IMG_0028 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6102255970/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/60576921@N02/), on Flickr


decided to start writing "genome" today. pretty shitty throw but i need crits pleeease

SneeZ
09-01-2011, 06:55 AM
@emace1 I would suggest bit bigger 3d/shadow, makes it look stronger. And i would drop the hole in the o, replaced it with line. Try to cathc the flow of letters.

Same goes for me. Here are some slaps i made.
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centrysam
09-01-2011, 06:23 PM
good work . keep practicing . next time try and close some of the hollow space in the tosses .
keep em commin

MASE P_2s
09-01-2011, 06:27 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6182/6095071662_5990187849.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/)
Snapshot_20110829 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr
your throwys are inconsistant bro youll good ones then ull have ones that look like ass the only good one in this is the 2 letter

Mc Satan
09-01-2011, 06:36 PM
guys mind crti'ing the ones i posted earlier i really want some help on throws

Phat 2
09-01-2011, 06:37 PM
nice tits sneez hah!

ribcage
09-01-2011, 06:39 PM
@mc satan just keep practicing

@mase you sir are correctomundo

centrysam
09-01-2011, 07:58 PM
@ mase its a throwup on paper its just fuckin around . i try to do differnt things an sometimes it dont work out , thats why it was on paper anyways

@emace.... since no one else will give u a sensible crit . i guess i will try , i think if u show more of the N instead of covering it with the E ,, and shape the O a little better ... also maby if the left side of the g was a little more square it might flow better .... just suggestions .

EWL24
09-01-2011, 09:14 PM
^^ haha i saw that and was like "uh? those arent Mc Satan's letters?"
anyways @Mc Satan im in the same spot ur in, but one thing i can tell u is that ur P covers the H too much

crits please
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Strange Journeys
09-02-2011, 12:21 AM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6194/6104852767_def408c118_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/64621696@N02/6104852767/)

Heres a nasty angled flick on a weird stone wall
ay yo ewal that A is way to diproportionate, basically make everything proportionate actually. got some flava rockin though

crits

ribcage
09-02-2011, 12:43 AM
D and T, pronounce them both more. For your T you should have both triangle parts on it to make it no doubt a T ya digg? right now it looks like a carrot or a C. Also dont put that 3d on the U thats over the T

IbuprofenTablets
09-02-2011, 10:17 AM
Him shading that part in actually matches the dropshadow he laid out, 'cause that would have been where the T came down. Further, as we all know, if it's shown, a dropshadow needs to worked in, if applicable.

Also, I think I know what you wrote before what you write right now, Debut.
Your steez has definitely improved, props.

A few gripes with it, though:
1. The E is huuurt. Make it a simple one, 'cause it would imo, compliment the rest of the throw. Idk, maybe throw in a u as the eye.
2. Idk, that little notch on the top of the B looks out of place, scrap that.
3. Look around for inspiration on D's 'cause I think it would add a bit more spark to your throw; your D's a bit boring. Ohhh, make the dot on the bottom right part of your D, maybe add another U as the eye, or do one of those Augor hole things.

Just my two cents, 'cause I think I see what style you're attempting.



Yeah, add the triangle thing like Reach suggested too.

Strange Journeys
09-02-2011, 05:10 PM
thanks ill work on it

bak
09-02-2011, 05:22 PM
ewal just keep practicing that thro. the more u do it the more ull structure each letter.

shits n giggles
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/IMG00016-20110902-1513.jpg

Phat 2
09-02-2011, 05:44 PM
is it just me or do we have some real similar throw styles?
I kinda looked at that flick and went "SHIT, I do not remember drawing these!" heh.
for crits, maybe practice your hand movements to make em more fluid so that you dont get none of those shakey lines no more. you can get with some good flows once your lines are nice and clean

bak
09-02-2011, 05:51 PM
thanks man. yea i seen a different flick of urs nd noticed some similarities.
yea my problem is gettin each letter to b the same size (not go small to big) nd the shakeyness too
but based on that..which s is more solid? top or bottom?

LIZARD
09-02-2011, 05:56 PM
i vote bottom one

centrysam
09-02-2011, 07:12 PM
i think the bottom is the better toss .... but both are nice .. good work

LIZARD
09-02-2011, 10:54 PM
31323

new name...jerm,germ i know the hand style sucks but lmk bout the throw

.Cuore
09-02-2011, 11:06 PM
ewal just keep practicing that thro. the more u do it the more ull structure each letter.

shits n giggles
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/IMG00016-20110902-1513.jpg

haha steezy T on the SWEETS. likin it.

Phat 2
09-04-2011, 07:34 AM
but it can be mistaken for a C... careful

Lado
09-04-2011, 08:49 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6081/6105591714_9e0877c2fd.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105591714/)
SU(LK) throw (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105591714/) by Ladotch (http://www.flickr.com/people/ladotch/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6061/6105049931_84943e5389.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105049931/)
SU(LK) throw (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105049931/) by Ladotch (http://www.flickr.com/people/ladotch/), on Flickr

Sorry that it's only "SU", I do have plenty of full throws, but I was really only confident with these. The K's in my others still have to be right. I'll post soon though.

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6081/6105607442_d06cc99a00.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105607442/)
Lado throw (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105607442/) by Ladotch (http://www.flickr.com/people/ladotch/), on Flickr

MN Nice
09-05-2011, 12:18 AM
Definitely stick with Lado.

.Cuore
09-05-2011, 12:32 AM
get rid of the crease in the bottom of the S on the first one, should make it a bit better.

Norfsuthr
09-05-2011, 10:04 AM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6207/6115991071_7c88e320cf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)
Photo on 2011-09-05 at 10.33 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)

Trying to get back with this shit now that I'm done with court :). I'm a bit rusty but I've been fuckin with 'erf'. Excuse it being backwards, I don't know how to flip it on my new mac.

Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.

Lado
09-05-2011, 01:48 PM
Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.

Hey, thanks man! :) To my defense, not that it makes a big deal, it looks sketched because I was working with a colored pencil and I wanted the lines to be darker, so I went back over with them (the end result being pretty sloppy). I appreciate this all and I'll keep working towards a better end product.

Phat 2
09-05-2011, 05:31 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6207/6115991071_7c88e320cf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)
Photo on 2011-09-05 at 10.33 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)

Trying to get back with this shit now that I'm done with court :). I'm a bit rusty but I've been fuckin with 'erf'. Excuse it being backwards, I don't know how to flip it on my new mac.

Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.

fuck! I couldda sworn I thought that said "3RD"
there was some dude here a while ago with some cool works and wrote 3RD but he dissapeared, I thought it was you and that he came back haha
damn, well then I guess that's crit enuff innit :P

MASE P_2s
09-05-2011, 06:33 PM
crits snaghttp://farm7.static.flickr.com/6090/6118381046_ee13b71d09.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/)
snag ekul throwy p2s (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/) by CantTouchSociety (http://www.flickr.com/people/snagscts/), on Flickr

Norfsuthr
09-05-2011, 07:33 PM
Looks like you got a good style, I'd say simplify and lower the tail thing on the s.


fuck! I couldda sworn I thought that said "3RD"
there was some dude here a while ago with some cool works and wrote 3RD but he dissapeared, I thought it was you and that he came back haha
damn, well then I guess that's crit enuff innit :P

I AM 3RD, I got caught so I can't write it anymore. Now it's Erf cause the letters are similar. It's the same as my old R, that's probably why it looks familiar.

Phat 2
09-06-2011, 06:56 AM
hhaah ! well I'll be damned then!

IbuprofenTablets
09-06-2011, 09:48 AM
@Erf: Dope ER connection.
It looks like Eri, though. make the top of the F more present.

sadgeh
09-06-2011, 04:10 PM
31497
31498

crits on the first one the second one is like i drew it in a bad trip.

sema
09-06-2011, 05:07 PM
keep workin on em in ur books, till u get alil more flow
31503

SneeZ
09-07-2011, 06:21 AM
Its bout time, to upload the shit i came up wit. Ok, drop shadows fucked, struggling with n a bit. gotta get the lines cleaner. The bad colors was all i could find.

31532

feedback pls.

sema
09-07-2011, 07:30 AM
youll figure it out just keep it all goin the same way think of where your light sorce would b like on the little splashs it sould be down to the left like the rest of the shadow on the throw also with the round bottoms its easier to drop it down lower to echo the curves better

skinaone
09-07-2011, 10:01 PM
31563
shitty cam pic new throw i kinda like it

Mc Satan
09-08-2011, 08:50 PM
was doodling in class and came up with something similar to this and really like it decided to clean it up a bit. what do you think? do i finally got something halfway decent?31614

sema
09-09-2011, 12:28 AM
not to be a DICK but that p just winked at me haha....try to get smoothe lines and dont sketch your throws

.Cuore
09-09-2011, 01:35 AM
that's much more a simp than a throw.

bak
09-09-2011, 12:58 PM
throws shoud b smooth single lines.
no sketching. but the i is cool
how'd u think of the name?
i read it nd thot of pedophile

bio99
09-09-2011, 01:48 PM
31670

I know the proportions could be better but any crits?

bak
09-09-2011, 02:31 PM
try n do that s in two lines n same with the rest of ur letters. but good start.kill that smiley face tho

SynOne
09-09-2011, 04:22 PM
http://i54.tinypic.com/2jds5mf.jpg

Critique.

Yes I know my e on the 2nd one is fucked up... I messed up and was like... ohh well.

MN Nice
09-09-2011, 04:28 PM
Cut the One out. Just Syn

SynOne
09-09-2011, 04:52 PM
I thought someone painted Syn that was decently popular... Syn it is, I would much rather that any how. Thanks.

MN Nice
09-09-2011, 05:00 PM
Well still write synone, but with a longer name like that you're gonna want to shorten it up.

skinaone
09-09-2011, 05:01 PM
-.- yall kidding me?
nooo crits?

MN Nice
09-09-2011, 05:03 PM
I don't think your N and A need those bottom bumps.

skinaone
09-09-2011, 06:43 PM
then the letters would flow so they have to stay . anything else?

LIZARD
09-09-2011, 07:06 PM
31684

bored at work, couple strips of tape and a couple sharpies lol lmk what ya think

Saiko
09-09-2011, 09:06 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=31601&d=1315521313
The throw at the top is alot quicker, but i can do both.

Seyr i like it. I think the r should be a bit smoother, though, to match the rest of the letters.

SynOne
09-09-2011, 09:26 PM
Ok, so besides a shortend throwie to syn, crits?

vems
09-09-2011, 10:07 PM
31686

quick throwie, de, crits/??

Strange Journeys
09-09-2011, 11:03 PM
ay lose those highlights in the drop shadow. that leg coming up from the D is too much, and lose the bump coming off the top of the E, and personally, i think exclamations and periods are lame, but do what you want to

LiveFreeDieFree
09-09-2011, 11:40 PM
31689

Yeeeeeee, I need a drop shadow.

LIZARD
09-10-2011, 01:52 AM
sevr not seyr but thanks i know the r needs work....live free: looks to bunched up towards the beginning, space em out a little more

Pitlord
09-10-2011, 02:17 AM
31684

bored at work, couple strips of tape and a couple sharpies lol lmk what ya think

Like it!

~PVE~
09-10-2011, 04:40 AM
just a simp
31703

Shroomsh
09-10-2011, 06:31 AM
Thats disgusting.

IbuprofenTablets
09-10-2011, 06:49 AM
^^^ This gus knows his stuff, guys.
He can do his name in Mr.Wiggles' piece font without copying it from the computer anymore!! King status, broo'.

Saiko
09-10-2011, 08:45 AM
sevr not seyr but thanks i know the r needs work....live free: looks to bunched up towards the beginning, space em out a little more my bad in that case, bring that lil square at the bottom more to the right so it looks like a u not a y.

LIZARD
09-10-2011, 12:41 PM
yeah bubble v's always either look like u's or y's..idk i need to tweak it a little more

Female
09-11-2011, 07:39 PM
I'm guessing the letters are uneven, the drop shadow is off, and the letters are ugly as fuck. Crits are welcome.
http://i54.tinypic.com/20svdee.jpg
Posting this crap. So i can go back to basics

ribcage
09-11-2011, 07:52 PM
whats it say?

Female
09-11-2011, 07:58 PM
SORE. i tried to thickening the lines trick and i guess I fucked up the round-ness.

.Cuore
09-11-2011, 08:18 PM
SORE. i tried to thickening the lines trick and i guess I fucked up the round-ness.

I would make the ending line of the S a little bit higher up, so it finishes under the line on the right where the bottom curve begins.. if that makes sense.

Strange Journeys
09-11-2011, 11:54 PM
that sores pretty fresh, make the R bigger i think

Strange Journeys
09-11-2011, 11:55 PM
31829

quicky f-way spot with a fucked up U, other crits?

MN Nice
09-12-2011, 12:20 AM
Word up, thats fresh Strange. Hopefully that shack aint still in use, that'd be fucked up.

My tag is sooooooooo bad, just don't even mention that shit. I'm gonna go over it soon. And my outline is off but you aint got shit for light under a bridge.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00236-20110814-1341.jpg?t=1313993164

Female
09-12-2011, 01:43 PM
I'm guessing the letters are uneven, the drop shadow is off, and the letters are ugly as fuck. Crits are welcome.
http://i54.tinypic.com/20svdee.jpg
Posting this crap. So i can go back to basics
Bump
@Mues that M is fresh, and what paint cans you use?

MN Nice
09-12-2011, 03:29 PM
That was with Ironlak reloads.

LiveFreeDieFree
09-12-2011, 09:59 PM
31941
Eh. The H looks weird. Oh well. Crits?
31942
This one looks better, in my opinion. Crits?

LIZARD
09-13-2011, 02:08 AM
female: that R need a little work cuz it almost looks like an A...u have to make the 2nd leg come out on a slant just like u would write it regularly not straight down

i actually use to write sore just for shits..im down for an exchange if u want,i still have alotta sore pieces in my books lol

Phat 2
09-13-2011, 07:33 AM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/309248_280755718618011_100000507545549_1082489_911 942372_n.jpg

a buddy of mine who went to brasil hit me up there :)

skinaone
09-13-2011, 05:10 PM
Thats disgusting.
i should bi tch slap you
acting like your shits so fresh gtf -.-

skinaone
09-13-2011, 05:12 PM
31829

quicky f-way spot with a fucked up U, other crits?
not feeling that D son i already told you this a while ago
and clean un that B the U is ight

ribcage
09-13-2011, 10:46 PM
exchange
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0913112043.jpg
@phat that straight letter is better than your throw imo

bak
09-14-2011, 03:45 AM
feelin that fable. but the tags D:

Phat 2
09-14-2011, 04:20 AM
exchange
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0913112043.jpg
@phat that straight letter is better than your throw imo

oh I know right? it definitely is. I'm really diggin it
and tight fabel throw

NouveauP
09-14-2011, 11:58 PM
Sick throw Fable. Only thing I might tweak is square off the F similar to the E. And maybe not make the slit in the E's back so large. But honestly, it's tight as is. Keep it up.

That Brazil straight letter is pretty cool.

LiveFree- study some other people's throws for a while and work from that inspiration.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0477.jpg

ribcage
09-15-2011, 12:06 AM
thanks homie, its always a pleasure to see your throws

sema
09-15-2011, 12:21 AM
mues try kills primer white it covers solid on just bout anything, n get some fat caps youll b aight

SneeZ
09-15-2011, 02:40 AM
Rib, solid thorws as usual. The Klaus thing is off tha hook.
Hit da wallz wit that shit homies, make it big, nah'meen?
post some flicks, if yall will be doin it, lookin forward for it.

MN Nice
09-15-2011, 10:29 AM
Klaus has posted a paint flick a while back, he definitely gets down. And yeah man, I did use fats for the fill but I'll use it for the outline too. Peace.

ERAYS
09-15-2011, 10:35 AM
yo that was a pretty dope fable thow, just dont personally like the E but keep writting!!

any crits?32162

NouveauP
09-17-2011, 11:40 AM
The E is fairly solid, but every other letter falls off. the R could be confused for an A, and just has odd shapes in it in general. The A isn't really much of a letter. The Y looks like an S and the S is just odd. I wouldn't do those weird squiggle lines either. Keep at it. Keep it simple for now. The ERAYS hand at the bottom isn't too bad, again minus the squiggles. Stay up.

skinaone
09-17-2011, 01:33 PM
32264
32265

the blueish one was done today had to go over some assholes peice since he went over mine
the red out line a couple of days ago
my original throw is the one i did today

MASE P_2s
09-18-2011, 04:07 PM
32438

skinaone
09-18-2011, 06:57 PM
not feeling thatG

MASE P_2s
09-18-2011, 07:01 PM
yea this is old i changed it to a sn

MASE P_2s
09-18-2011, 07:02 PM
crits snaghttp://farm7.static.flickr.com/6090/6118381046_ee13b71d09.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/)
snag ekul throwy p2s (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/) by CantTouchSociety (http://www.flickr.com/people/snagscts/), on Flickr

this is my new one

ERAYS
09-18-2011, 08:16 PM
The E is fairly solid, but every other letter falls off. the R could be confused for an A, and just has odd shapes in it in general. The A isn't really much of a letter. The Y looks like an S and the S is just odd. I wouldn't do those weird squiggle lines either. Keep at it. Keep it simple for now. The ERAYS hand at the bottom isn't too bad, again minus the squiggles. Stay up.

thanks for the crits! I personally dont like the A either and yea the R and S need work but IMO the y just needs some work on its structure and proportions but thats just me...

LIZARD
09-19-2011, 12:25 AM
32574

something quick i need some ideas for my throw R, its looks forced idk i can't figure it out...dont mind the ahhhh piss above it that was my buddy and i got bored so i added drips cuz we all now they look better on paper lol lmk what ya think

Strange Journeys
09-19-2011, 10:13 AM
http://www.flickr.com/photos/62118673@N04/6158397880/

another fway spot, all sloppy :(
im not really feeling that yo, make all the letters similar to the e

skinaone
09-19-2011, 12:07 PM
this is my new one
i like the old S waaayyy better

skinaone
09-19-2011, 12:12 PM
32603
32604
32605

the last one is my original throw the others are jus fooling around now CRIT MY SHET

EWL24
09-19-2011, 06:40 PM
skina - the second one is the best, i dont like how the bottom leg of the S goes all the way up, and on the other two the holes in the letters are to big

crits please
32685

skinaone
09-19-2011, 09:18 PM
^^^ coming from you?
comeone guys anyone?

LIZARD
09-19-2011, 09:34 PM
skina:whats up with the lines that r in the shadow, is it supposed to be a highlight cuz those would be on the opposite side of the shadow i think...either way i think u should ditch em all and leave just plain black

give crits to get crits, just cuz u don't like his shit doesn't mean he can't tell u what he thinks u need to change,

EWL24
09-19-2011, 09:39 PM
fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better

LIZARD
09-20-2011, 06:36 PM
32871

rough draft, i think i wanna take the lower part of the s and put it behind the curve a little instead of infront...crits

ewal: maybe make the bottom half of ur e one long curve instead of makin it go up and back down again. put a shadow or something on it to give it some life

vems
09-21-2011, 12:57 PM
32964

any crits please? besides the poor line quality, this was done quickly at work lol

Kostonee
09-21-2011, 04:30 PM
Vemsone I like it man, make the lines cleaner and sharpen the top of the V and it'll be nice bro

vems
09-21-2011, 05:19 PM
ya no doubt i just threw it together in 2 mins while i was on a call at work, ima re do it with color tonight

Phat 2
09-21-2011, 06:10 PM
skina, the second throw is the best, the other two have wide spread legs, and suck. exactly like prostitutes. if you wouldn't want your throws to be prostitutes you'd do like the second flick and close those spaces up

bak
09-21-2011, 06:20 PM
bump that ewal, only clean shit on this page.
vems work on ur tag nd the e hole looks odd. the v would look more soilid if the left arm was a solid line instead of the lil curves.
seyr? keep practicing that throw, looks solid.
skina that shitty generic style is played out. give crits nt pussy lips.

skinaone
09-21-2011, 09:14 PM
fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better
lol some one got mad :)
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw

skinaone
09-21-2011, 09:14 PM
fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better
lol some one got mad :)
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw

MN Nice
09-21-2011, 10:49 PM
Crits yo!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00358-20110921-2235.jpg?t=1316663350

skinaone
09-21-2011, 10:52 PM
work on that M the U is ight need to be cleaner try an upper case E and the S is ok

Norfsuthr
09-22-2011, 02:24 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6159/6172647453_23459fdcb1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
oie_22212037lY5lfEc9 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
lookin for crits.

PETER
09-22-2011, 03:07 PM
looks like FPD to me. The D doesn't seem to match the style of the other two letters. I suck at throws.... bad... but I suggest trying something more round... lowercase F and E maybe... might flow better for you.

vems
09-22-2011, 06:29 PM
33320

i know it increases in size, i like it that way...all other crits welcome ;)

Norfsuthr
09-22-2011, 06:53 PM
Thanks pete. I'm goin for a funky type of style so I'm not worried about flow yet till I get some solid letters to fuc with. Originally letter was gonna be separate from eachother but i thought it might be a dece toss.

And vems I think your V needs a little more structure, the M can lose the little notch on the far right, E could do with some negative space on the bottom half, and keep working on the S. ALso missed a little drop shadow on the s. Nice fill though, keep at it.

bak
09-22-2011, 07:20 PM
that F is proper tho fed but i second wat pete said.

LIZARD
09-22-2011, 07:51 PM
new v lmk what ya think
33282

skinaone
09-22-2011, 08:18 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6159/6172647453_23459fdcb1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
oie_22212037lY5lfEc9 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
lookin for crits.

i love this :p

Saiko
09-22-2011, 08:39 PM
33287
Khrits Pleez

LIZARD
09-22-2011, 08:46 PM
atom:listen to the crits that people r telling u or their gonna stop given em...put a hole in the A and move that T over so it doesn't look like an r

just doodling crits
33288

Saiko
09-22-2011, 08:54 PM
33291
My bad sevr that's an older one; i haven't got many new ones

LIZARD
09-22-2011, 09:07 PM
A's better but bring the T over so u can see where the horizontal bar hits the vertical bar on the left side like u can see on the right...is the top throw and the bottom one both done by u cuz the top ones defiantly better lol K's hurting a little though

is the a backwards on the top throw on purpose?

Saiko
09-22-2011, 09:17 PM
Yeah, the a looks really weird if i do it normally.
I did both, and k's are a whore to work with. I'm trying to work out another style for atom. The top one pry looks better cus i've been writing it longer.
I'll extend the top bar of the t and see what comes.
Thank you very much for the advice.

Zest3
09-23-2011, 07:38 AM
33342
atom - I wouldn't extend the legs of the A and M like that. Try putting a hole in the O and see what it looks like. Also, the legs on the last one of the A don't look proportional, not because they're not the same length but because they're not the same width.

PETER
09-23-2011, 07:54 AM
Sevr: I like both, but feel like the S on the first one doesn't fit. The rest of it I like a lot. On the second one I feel like the pointy bit at the top of the V should be on the other side to keep with the rest of the letters and put a space between the point on the R (which reminds me of flame boy from spitfire) giving it more balance. Looking good on both though. Maybe a face in the E on the first one.... it has a lip and mouth.... pierce his lip ;)

Zest3: That SO is zest fully clean. well done.

vems
09-23-2011, 01:11 PM
here i re-did the outline to make the letters stand out better, and hopefully add some more structure to the v a bit, also added some more effects to the fill.

33408

PETER
09-23-2011, 01:18 PM
vems: I dig it a lot. I like the lowercase E, but I think you could do a better one. knock out a few hallow E's.

vems
09-23-2011, 01:28 PM
thanks man, yeah this was the first of this style i threw up, ive evolved it a little bit over the past couple days, after i finish that sek throwback ill post up another throwie

MN Nice
09-24-2011, 09:47 AM
Crits yo!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00358-20110921-2235.jpg?t=1316663350

bump for more crits and less talk on this page.

PETER
09-24-2011, 10:09 AM
I suggest filling up the gap on the M. The U, E, S all have the same flow the M does not.

LiveFreeDieFree
09-24-2011, 03:13 PM
33630

Decided to venture away from the simple stereotypical throwie letters and added my own style to it.

LIZARD
09-24-2011, 03:23 PM
that Y definitely needs to changing cuz the only reason i knew what it said was cuz of ur other posts lol...good job on everything else though and doin ur own thing

vems
09-24-2011, 03:56 PM
yah that y can easily be fixed by adding in a line comming in from the left arm, other than that i actually like it better than ur other stuff, keep workin/tweakin that throwie man and its a keeper.

skinaone
09-24-2011, 08:05 PM
this is deprressing

LiveFreeDieFree
09-24-2011, 10:58 PM
this is deprressing

Then take some zoloft and give some crits instead of making a pointless post.

Shroomsh
09-25-2011, 04:14 AM
33936 each letter is about 2 metres wide

PETER
09-25-2011, 06:54 AM
Hayst: Agreed. I knew it was a Y from other posts, but at first I thought it was an S.

. lewd
09-25-2011, 06:59 AM
do a proper fill in if its over some toy scribbles because it looks like your piece got disssed

skinaone
09-25-2011, 12:01 PM
Then take some zoloft and give some crits instead of making a pointless post.
theres no point cause all yall going to do is bitch and not listen to them so i rather just say that

LiveFreeDieFree
09-25-2011, 04:42 PM
theres no point cause all yall going to do is bitch and not listen to them so i rather just say that
I haven't made a single bitchy post yet. Youu're the one making the bitchy post, here..

shush4
09-25-2011, 04:54 PM
my new throwie:

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33969&d=1316987374

crits please it says shush but do my "h" look like a k?

aaesoo
09-25-2011, 05:19 PM
take out that little nub on the h's, and your u seems to bend a different way at the bottom then the rest of the letters. beside that not bad.