Throwies

[ribcage]

depends on what you like. Go peep game at the throwie battle thread and look at what a good throw looks like. If you still dont know after that, go look at nouveaup's posts

[Mc Satan]

i went through the past 30 or 40 pages of this thread i think i got a better idea here are 2 i just did, please crit and tell me which one is better if any. ill then work on that one and do a better version
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[Strange Journeys]

2nd one is way better, but the extension on the P and the E killllll it

[Mc Satan]

ok ill eliminate the extension on the P but i honestly dont know what you mean with the extension on the E considering its more or less an elongated square

[SmellsBad]

Have you considered sticking to all upper or all lower case letters?. The best two tips I ever got were keep you letters all the same case and to keep your letters all the same size. Or at least be aware of these factors.

[sir.to.you.]

fuckin stoned, no seriousness. crits though the hand is fun
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6142/6024315339_a71c1ecc9f_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6024315339/)
Photo 231 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6024315339/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[Strange Journeys]

ok ill eliminate the extension on the P but i honestly dont know what you mean with the extension on the E considering its more or less an elongated square

i meant the E in general its too fat and doesnt go wwwell with the rest

[lawlcat]

The entire last page is dedicated to mcsatan... you can't possibly need that many crits for a throw.

[MN Nice]

lol I'll mix it up from Satan. I need some work on my S...

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00217-20110809-0103.jpg?t=1312869896

[sadgeh]

hmm i like the S but the second E i dont like it whit that tongue do it like the first E

And lol satan need many help.

[Mc Satan]

well lawlcat considering i posted 5different throws,and i've never done a throw at least i'm working on it instead of bitching on the internet cause someone is filling a forum page

that being said

i eliminated the extension on the P and put in a lower case E instead couldn't quite get an uppercase to work, and again crits please
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[lost is gettin up]

new throw I never got any crits on... what should I fix/improve? http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/223.jpg

[Shit Outta Luck]

McSatan...what the fuck. Sike I'm just playin... work on the e way more.
You see how this e looks? YOU CAN SEE THE LEFT SIDE OF IT. WORK ON THAT. And work on the center of your H a bit more.
And Seor make the bottom left bar of the R smaller, it makes the whole thing weird. Keep it the same size as the other leg of the R. If that's a 1 a the end, don't have the bottom bar become a circle and go into it. It would look better like ) that except on the bottom of it. And for your S, work on the bottom of it. It just doesn't look right, mostly the little space inside of it. I just don't feel it, turn it or bend it differently or something haha

[emace1]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6125/6022642137_c7f84f82b0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6022642137/)
throw up (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6022642137/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/60576921@N02/), on Flickr

3d is shit

[ATAK!:3]

yeah im not too reliable as far as crits go but hell the toy as fuck guy has to try helping out sometimes
emace1 that e is a bit fucked up, especially the left side of it and yout right the 3d is messed up but as far as i can see it all has to do with can control and taking your time
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can i get some crits on this?

[MN Nice]

Try not to have your letters increase in size too much like that.

[ATAK!:3]

oh shit i didnt even notice i was doing that, thanks

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any progression here? crits?

[Graff2k11]

that ***** soup..thats tragic. someone take that paint can out of hellen kellers hand..please?

jest.. try taking thee swirly thing out of your e.. maybe an eye or a star or something, just play with it bro.

[MN Nice]

Much better Jest. Keep working with it. Work on a two letter throw as well.

[ATAK!:3]

hahahaha
yeah ill try something different will post it asap im working on a karak right now

[Phillip McDougall]

Mace's throwie is fine just how it is.

[ribcage]

His A confuses me a little bit. Not to fond of it myself, the rest is aight tho.

@MN Nice dude. work on your throw. stop worrying about these fools throw when yours is still garbage.
@atak shape of the left part of J and bottom part of E are just weird. and your T looks like a lower case r. LAst but not least dont put 3d over your letters. like the 3d on the E and S

[MN Nice]

@MN Nice dude. work on your throw. stop worrying about these fools throw when yours is still garbage.

Aight aight. What crits you got for it other than it being garbage?

[ribcage]

E and C looke exacty the same. THe S is almost exactly the same except with the swirl in it... the shadow is bad too

[Flawless Victory]

I agree with rib on Mace's A, looks too goofy to me.
I don't see too much wrong with MN's throw, though.
It's really bland, but I've seen dudes with throws much worse getting props.

[ribcage]

props dont mean theyre shits not wack. they get props cause it was painted im assuming, not because its on paper.

[dankbudz]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-1-1.jpg

[sir.to.you.]

@ compacted marijuana, thats whats good!
just picked up the book the other day,realized i didnt get better while not writing!
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6062/6031049576_aef02b3734_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031049576/)
Photo 243 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031049576/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[Mc Satan]

aany ideas on wtf to do with the E no matter what i do it just seems to fat compared to everything else

[sir.to.you.]

make it skinny

[Mc Satan]

2 new attempts, liking the second one more,crits pls
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[OZON]

i like the second one more but the P is covering the H way to much

[Strange Journeys]

hil might work, bring the p back a bit, put that bitch on an angle, kill the dead spaces and fux with the second E a little bit more, get rid of the shit in the p

[Mc Satan]

concerning the P i was thinking having it lean like this ) since the E is already kinda looking like this ). or i was thinking i could bend the back bar of the E a lil bit more so the 3 horizontal bars meet up. or should i actually be opening up the E more instead of closing it?

[~PVE~]

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a quick two letter throwie.
any crits/suggestions

[toopski]

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/2572/dsc0031qh.jpg
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7936/dsc0030ti.jpg

quick shit

[MN Nice]

rough draft but is this better?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00225-20110811-0234.jpg?t=1313048465

[dankbudz]

Sirtoyou- try to not covor the E so much with the T, looks pretty solid to me.

Mcsatan- they are more simps then throws, but go with the bottom one and the P needs alot of work. Same with the H.

MnNice- Those Es are retarded, the main reason it isnt good is cause the Es dont work at all. I kinda like that S but i think its just the top. Id stay away from puttin points on em till you get a solid throw based off bubble letters, but thats my personal opinion.

And also try to practice a few hundredd times more then you post, itll help.... Not tryna be a douche though haha. Less computer=more time to draw and get up

[Graff2k11]

http://i1086.photobucket.com/albums/j454/graff2k11/IMG_0223.png

the throw on the right is mine. crits

[mrchisel]

i like that s it looks original, but your e looks a lot like the e from the throwie on the left but overall it looks pretty good.

[ATAK!:3]

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crits? progression?

[Dreg one]

Graff 2k11, I like the throw, E could be fatter but I like the rest.

New name, Methad One. Crits please.
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[Phat 2]

@ compacted marijuana, thats whats good!
just picked up the book the other day,realized i didnt get better while not writing!
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6062/6031049576_aef02b3734_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031049576/)
Photo 243 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031049576/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

ditch the bottom one, you've been doing for a while I remember... the top one's where it's at man...
just practice it loads and loads and loadddds more... you got the main idea for your letters, just work on your flow and cleanliness and I'd say you got yourself a basic, proper, street-worthy toss.

[ATAK!:3]

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i like the bottom one better but im trying to come up with a more abstract throw, crits?

[sir.to.you.]

@phat word homie thanks

[Sparky]

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[OZON]

29784 crits

[SneeZ]

Did it a min ago. Does it have any potential?
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[Dreg one]

297932979429795 buuump.

[ATAK!:3]

@dreg one im diggin that style the a on the bottom one could use some work plus im not diggin the T that much
@sneez i like that you might want to trim up the 3d and maybe bring the letters a little closer together

[Dreg one]

Thanks, I don't know what it is, the right hand legs of the H and A keep pulling up. The T was what I felt most iffy about myself, any suggestions?

Sneez, I think it has potential yes, but the colours are taking away from the form right now if you ask me. Try it black fill, white outline, red force, I think that might make it look cool. Also, if you can find a way, I would try to pull the letters a bit closer without taking too much away from their current form.

OZON, there is a lot to be said, but I will say that a drop shadow is supposed to look like your letter completely blacked out with your coloured letter laying on top of it, but just a touch NE, SE, SW or NW. Figuring out drop shadowing to a certain degree (I am obviously learning too) will define your letters so much more.

[ATAK!:3]

i need some work on this but im trying to get something street worthy29815
crits?

[MN Nice]

New name that I've been fuckin with lately. Thoughts?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00234-20110813-0610.jpg?t=1313233931

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/photobucket-6528-1313253778443.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

everyone on this page (other than mone and evow) is trying too hard to accomplish a throw, so simple it up a bit.

[Shit Outta Luck]

yo mone, I think you should fatten up the top right of the N, right above the circle. Only a little bit though, and maybe make the middle of the M smaller and change the right side of it a bit. It reminds me of an E haha

[SandmanNZ]

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Crits?
My first throwup, no fill.

[Simon]

Liking that Sandman, hey you from NZ? I am too

[SandmanNZ]

Sick man! You write aesop?

[Lusid]

30006 crits? i don' really like the "d"

[SandmanNZ]

I think your L and D are a bit weird, and try to keep all your letters the same size dude.

[Lusid]

I think your L and D are a bit weird, and try to keep all your letters the same size dude.

aight thanks for the help, i probably shouldn't bring the top of the D to the S

[SandmanNZ]

Yeah, another good one is either stick to all uppercase or all lower case, a capital D will help alot.

[Simon]

yeah I do haha, where bouts you from? I'm from up north haha Whangarei

[SandmanNZ]

Bay of plenty man, ohh too bad thats so far away!

[Simon]

yeah haha oh well, at least I know theres another Kiwi on this site :D

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/5947704362_fe75cb2d9b_b.jpg

[nah!]

i dont like how the right side of the V is so skinny but its cool

[PulseWithLife]

vows is a dope name

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

yeah thats my boy.

[sifer-]

both say SR crits plz

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[TastyMcNasty]

i use SR as my 2 letter too :3
and youre S is nicely done, but that R is hurting

[sifer-]

thankss mann and yee idk what to do with my r im tryin to play around with it

[TastyMcNasty]

try makin the top flat like the S, and have the left leg of the R overlapping the right (oppisite of what youre doing), and have the middle part of the R extend more, and not be so squished

[sifer-]

the r is still pointy i forgot to fix that but hows this

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[MN Nice]

Sifer, try SF. It reps your name better than sr.

[sifer-]

isnt there a writer in NY that writes SF

[MN Nice]

There's probably someone who writes SR somewhere. You're not writing SF.

[sifer-]

yee thats truee well ill try SF if im not feeling it do i still have to use it

[MN Nice]

lol no. Do what the fuck you want to. Just thought I'd suggest it.

[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816110018.jpg

[sifer-]

yee thanks mann but whatdo you think boiut the throw

[SandmanNZ]

That s is awesome. reminds me alot of skuf's which is sick as.

[MN Nice]

I actually think that S is fresh.

Flick for all this talking. Rib that combined throw is tight!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00263-20110816-0255.jpg?t=1313481878

[sifer-]

@mnnice i likee thatt i dunno what to sayy bout it except the fact that i like it haha

i made the top of the r more like the top of the s
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[sifer-]

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[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816110018.jpg
bump

[.Cuore]

bump

likin it reach, you might want to try making the C look a bit more like a C so you can distinguish it from the A. other than that, i like the idea.

[MN Nice]

I actually think that S is fresh.

Flick for all this talking. Rib that combined throw is tight!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00263-20110816-0255.jpg?t=1313481878

Bump. Sifer that updated one is looking better. Did you ever mess around with SF?

[sifer-]

No i havent yet i will soon though ill post it but yeah man thankss

[sifer-]

i have absolutley no idea what to do with my f i think ill just stick to sr unless i get any idea

[SandmanNZ]

29945
Crits?
My first throwup, no fill.
bump

[nah!]

bleerrr it looks ugly

[shadyloc420]

OOPS! your straight sandbaggin in the toy thread!

[nah!]

???

no U

[SandmanNZ]

Criticism instead of just saying its ugly would be super helpful :D
Its the first time i painted anything thats not just a tag :/

[sifer-]

sandmann work on your throw in your blackbook first

[SandmanNZ]

Yeah i will do, i was just experimenting that night, any of the letters you think i should improve more? or are they all rubbish n can that idea/style

[MN Nice]

Yeah man they're all pretty weak.

Sorry for posting the same throw, just trying to get some crits.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00269-20110818-0033.jpg?t=1313654368

[CollinCreeper1]

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give a man some crits!

[ribcage]

I can tell the E's are E's but thats about it....

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816112353.jpg

[Strange Journeys]

whys your h so fat

[ribcage]

idk, just how my hand moved on that 1 I guess

[Saiko]

I can tell the E's are E's but thats about it....

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816112353.jpg
Reach...where are you from?

[ribcage]

winchestertonfieldville

[EWL24]

crits please
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[Saiko]

winchestertonfieldville
...oh there's this reach near philly who's a monster on the rails. Would've been fucked if that was you...

[ribcage]

send pics. I get down.

[Saiko]

send pics. I get down.
I'll try and find some of his stuff online. most of his work is on the rails and under tunnels, so those lame ass non writing photographers pry won't have any of his stuff.

[ribcage]

...I havent been to philly since I was a kid... and I didnt paint. So that aint me, I been in the train game for a few years tho...

[Lado]

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modified the first one to a different style kind of.
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Overall, I'd like to hear what you think.

[.Cuore]

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modified the first one to a different style kind of.
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Overall, I'd like to hear what you think.

I prefer the first one tbh.

[Lado]

I prefer the first one tbh.

So do I man, I like the S and K. But the modified was only another example of what to work with, kind of fit the style I've been seeing. I think I may be sticking with the 1st one.

[IbuprofenTablets]

Chill, the swirl in the S (first pic) screams toy IMO, make sure not to have any shit like that in your throw, at least not yet. As for the rest of the the throw, it's boring. I think the second one has the most appeal; work with that. One more thing, you seem to have a problem with your letter spacing, it looks like the letters after the first letter are too tucked into the previous one. Give them a little more breathing space.


Oh, almost forgot, one golden rule: don't sketch your throw, you wouldn't sketch it with paint, would you? Of course not.

Besides, the only thing worth sketching with paint/a pencil/a pen is a piece.


Keep it up.

[Lado]

Ibu, which letters, of the 2 throws, would you say are the best ones and should be carried on or played with? I'm kind of fond of the "L K" in the 1st one. But of course, that's coming from my toy perspective.

[MN Nice]

Sorry for posting the same throw, just trying to get some crits.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00269-20110818-0033.jpg?t=1313654368

El bumpito

Sulk, I'd pick the S and U from the second one and the L and K from the first.

[~PVE~]

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Crits welcomed ^_^

Ewal - Your throw should all flow with each other letter.
lado - I personally like the top better(minus the swirl)
mm - I would just bring down the top right side of the S down just a tad.

[IbuprofenTablets]

Ibu, which letters, of the 2 throws, would you say are the best ones and should be carried on or played with? I'm kind of fond of the "L K" in the 1st one. But of course, that's coming from my toy perspective.


Well, in my opinion, the entire throw in the second one is better than the entire throw first one. The K in the first one looks droopy, and non-flowing, for lack of a better term. Work with everything in the second throw. Remember to give your letter breathing space.

[centrysam]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6076/6050829945_80534961f0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6050829945/)
Snapshot_20110816_2 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6050829945/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6144/5939506983_8d212ae489.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5939506983/)
Snapshot_20110714_4 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5939506983/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

pg battles
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6030/5927944355_abf1e72e46.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5927944355/)
Snapshot_20110711 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5927944355/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6131/5919500180_70e7b553f2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5919500180/)
Snapshot_20110709 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5919500180/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[ribcage]

^god damn your throws and hands are ugly. the STOMP one is the only one that I can look at without being annoyed... Try simpling em up a bit, because the slight complexity your tryin to put on those letters look terrible. Work on hand movements and cleanliness with simpler letters, then if you really want come back to this style and fuck with it.

[Phat 2]

i strongly disagree. nothing wrong with these throws at all. they flow real nice.
the handstyle, yeah it needs work. but the throws are great, nothing's ever perfect. but they DEF aren't ugly !

[ribcage]

theyre not clean, their inconsistant, and they are most definetly ugly. If I saw them in high traffic+high graffiti area location id chose him to cover in a heartbeat

[Phat 2]

to each his own opinion i guess

[KehmONE]

I'm with Phat on this one, I like em.

[centrysam]

@ ribcage ,,, i dont understand u ... iv only posted on this site a few times .. every time uv commented on any my flicks its been hate ..
but thats ok .. im used to that much like all of us ... but i do agree with u that my hands are ugly and some of the throws are wack but not ALL of them .. i put alot of time into my throws and for u to degrade my work pisses me off ...soo say something constructive soo u dont like such a fag . even if ur the best graff artist ever to be put on earth . if thats ur attitude then i belive u are wack . deemed to be road kill ......

but anyways why dont ya post one of these SICK ASS STEAZY throws u claim to be soo good at there captin

[SneeZ]

ribcage is bullshitin on this one. the Humr throws are good, keep writin em.

[ribcage]

Your throws have potential, but that doesnt make them good. Maybe its the picture quality that makes em look dirty... but Im sure that your throws are on the same level as your tags. THe lines on your throws look sketched out, not one clean line.

No need to get butthurt and start saying I think I know everything, I apologize for being too blunt with you, didnt know it was gonna hurt your feewings.

so I guess in your eyes I dont know throws, but how can someone that dont know throws tell someone else about throws?! pandamonium. Stop assuming you know anything
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[Shit Outta Luck]

new shit lol
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[.Cuore]

rib was so wrong, i love those throws.

[~PVE~]

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[SneeZ]

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wud u guyz think?

[sema]

^^^^the double lines throw it off and the pyramid like bottoms dont really flow i know a few people that do somethin like that but so im not sayin it cant work just doesnt here keep playin with it try to make it one consist. flowing body

[OZON]

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is this in kamlooops looks so familliar

[Gatsoi]

I'ts been a while
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/mm.jpg

[~PVE~]

is this in kamlooops looks so familliarThat they are.

[OZON]

i saw the top pic and was like i swear to god that looks like the thing by my school

[YorkCro]

what do ya guys think?
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[~PVE~]

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didnt quite fill the d in as much as i'd to to. was dark as a witches tit!

[OZON]

messin with new name30909 crits

[MN Nice]

It has no style what so ever ^ Its just bland bubble letters pushed together.

[ChadWarden]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0816110018.jpg

do more with this RE connection.

[~PVE~]

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top two were done with this nasty 6year cold can of tremclad rust paint. oily as fuck

[HëRbN]

pve come up with a new throw. expecially if your actually out painting. cause that one is hideous

[Phat 2]

30907
didnt quite fill the d in as much as i'd to to. was dark as a witches tit!
WHAT FUCKIN D ?
either someone told you these were good throws or you didn't take anyone's opinion.
they generally suck. you're definitely not ready for the streets.
first step I'd take would be getting a proper basic handstyle down before worrying about throws.
second step after I've mastered the fucking handie's letters would be throwing actual letters instead of 5 weird heart shapes and 2 dots.
third step would be doing a shadow instead of a 3D... 3D's are for pieces, not throws (with a few exceptions)
and fourth step would be actually filling the shadow in properly, not a lousy ass wiggle

[Evow1]

yea pve, step you life game up.

[~PVE~]

Thanks guys I'll work on it. Evow stop being a internet hype man.

[ribcage]

do more with this RE connection.

im tryin to make it 1 liner, dont quite got it down yet...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0827112025.jpg

[OZON]

It has no style what so ever ^ Its just bland bubble letters pushed together.
true ive been on vacation for a fuckin month and havent been doing anything until i found that board in my house and thats wat i came up with lol but no im gunna be doing simples just cant wait till im back so i can start practicing again lol

[.Cuore]

messin with new name30909 crits

http://www.conservapedia.com/images/0/03/Sine-pi.jpg

?

[ribcage]

lol we got a joker up in this bitch!

[illegal_drugs]

my friends on the left
http://cs10770.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_67d080e0.jpg

http://cs11384.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_9414dd78.jpg

[.Cuore]

lol we got a joker up in this bitch!

i'm going to sig this loool


my friends on the left
http://cs10770.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_67d080e0.jpg

http://cs11384.vk.com/u54123642/125887868/y_9414dd78.jpg

I would resize the dot in the R to make it smaller like the one in the A.

[MN Nice]

Nice two letter, Rasn. Trying out a one liner throw. It starts the the top right and moves the the bottom right leg and from there on.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00291-20110829-0010.jpg?t=1314596468

[ribcage]

i'm going to sig this loool

thatll cost $5

[centrysam]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6182/6095071662_5990187849.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/)
Snapshot_20110829 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[.Cuore]

thatll cost $5

sure just gotta wait for my welfare check to come in


http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6182/6095071662_5990187849.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/)
Snapshot_20110829 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

diggin the top left one though the R seems a bit out of place. still good though.

[ribcage]

sure just gotta wait for my welfare check to come in

I can wait. Ill pm you my address.

@Humr top right is okay... the rest not so much... do some ballpoints

[AeonFBC]

the first one is on a bus
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[MN Nice]

Ain't bad but it aint great. The E sticks out when you have the top half over lap the bottom. And make sure your letters keep that even size on your two letters.

[Mc Satan]

havent drawn anything in a long time been busy. got a few mins today. what you think?
EDIT: did 2 more just messing around
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[NOSEO]

31066 crits.

[emace1]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6206/6102255970_001246b34d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6102255970/)
IMG_0028 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6102255970/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/60576921@N02/), on Flickr


decided to start writing "genome" today. pretty shitty throw but i need crits pleeease

[SneeZ]

@emace1 I would suggest bit bigger 3d/shadow, makes it look stronger. And i would drop the hole in the o, replaced it with line. Try to cathc the flow of letters.

Same goes for me. Here are some slaps i made.
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[centrysam]

good work . keep practicing . next time try and close some of the hollow space in the tosses .
keep em commin

[MASE P_2s]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6182/6095071662_5990187849.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/)
Snapshot_20110829 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6095071662/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr
your throwys are inconsistant bro youll good ones then ull have ones that look like ass the only good one in this is the 2 letter

[Mc Satan]

guys mind crti'ing the ones i posted earlier i really want some help on throws

[Phat 2]

nice tits sneez hah!

[ribcage]

@mc satan just keep practicing

@mase you sir are correctomundo

[centrysam]

@ mase its a throwup on paper its just fuckin around . i try to do differnt things an sometimes it dont work out , thats why it was on paper anyways

@emace.... since no one else will give u a sensible crit . i guess i will try , i think if u show more of the N instead of covering it with the E ,, and shape the O a little better ... also maby if the left side of the g was a little more square it might flow better .... just suggestions .

[EWL24]

^^ haha i saw that and was like "uh? those arent Mc Satan's letters?"
anyways @Mc Satan im in the same spot ur in, but one thing i can tell u is that ur P covers the H too much

crits please
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[Strange Journeys]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6194/6104852767_def408c118_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/64621696@N02/6104852767/)

Heres a nasty angled flick on a weird stone wall
ay yo ewal that A is way to diproportionate, basically make everything proportionate actually. got some flava rockin though

crits

[ribcage]

D and T, pronounce them both more. For your T you should have both triangle parts on it to make it no doubt a T ya digg? right now it looks like a carrot or a C. Also dont put that 3d on the U thats over the T

[IbuprofenTablets]

Him shading that part in actually matches the dropshadow he laid out, 'cause that would have been where the T came down. Further, as we all know, if it's shown, a dropshadow needs to worked in, if applicable.

Also, I think I know what you wrote before what you write right now, Debut.
Your steez has definitely improved, props.

A few gripes with it, though:
1. The E is huuurt. Make it a simple one, 'cause it would imo, compliment the rest of the throw. Idk, maybe throw in a u as the eye.
2. Idk, that little notch on the top of the B looks out of place, scrap that.
3. Look around for inspiration on D's 'cause I think it would add a bit more spark to your throw; your D's a bit boring. Ohhh, make the dot on the bottom right part of your D, maybe add another U as the eye, or do one of those Augor hole things.

Just my two cents, 'cause I think I see what style you're attempting.



Yeah, add the triangle thing like Reach suggested too.

[Strange Journeys]

thanks ill work on it

[bak]

ewal just keep practicing that thro. the more u do it the more ull structure each letter.

shits n giggles
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/IMG00016-20110902-1513.jpg

[Phat 2]

is it just me or do we have some real similar throw styles?
I kinda looked at that flick and went "SHIT, I do not remember drawing these!" heh.
for crits, maybe practice your hand movements to make em more fluid so that you dont get none of those shakey lines no more. you can get with some good flows once your lines are nice and clean

[bak]

thanks man. yea i seen a different flick of urs nd noticed some similarities.
yea my problem is gettin each letter to b the same size (not go small to big) nd the shakeyness too
but based on that..which s is more solid? top or bottom?

[LIZARD]

i vote bottom one

[centrysam]

i think the bottom is the better toss .... but both are nice .. good work

[LIZARD]

31323

new name...jerm,germ i know the hand style sucks but lmk bout the throw

[.Cuore]

ewal just keep practicing that thro. the more u do it the more ull structure each letter.

shits n giggles
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/IMG00016-20110902-1513.jpg

haha steezy T on the SWEETS. likin it.

[Phat 2]

but it can be mistaken for a C... careful

[Lado]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6081/6105591714_9e0877c2fd.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105591714/)
SU(LK) throw (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105591714/) by Ladotch (http://www.flickr.com/people/ladotch/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6061/6105049931_84943e5389.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105049931/)
SU(LK) throw (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105049931/) by Ladotch (http://www.flickr.com/people/ladotch/), on Flickr

Sorry that it's only "SU", I do have plenty of full throws, but I was really only confident with these. The K's in my others still have to be right. I'll post soon though.

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6081/6105607442_d06cc99a00.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105607442/)
Lado throw (http://www.flickr.com/photos/ladotch/6105607442/) by Ladotch (http://www.flickr.com/people/ladotch/), on Flickr

[MN Nice]

Definitely stick with Lado.

[.Cuore]

get rid of the crease in the bottom of the S on the first one, should make it a bit better.

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6207/6115991071_7c88e320cf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)
Photo on 2011-09-05 at 10.33 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)

Trying to get back with this shit now that I'm done with court :). I'm a bit rusty but I've been fuckin with 'erf'. Excuse it being backwards, I don't know how to flip it on my new mac.

Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.

[Lado]

Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.

Hey, thanks man! :) To my defense, not that it makes a big deal, it looks sketched because I was working with a colored pencil and I wanted the lines to be darker, so I went back over with them (the end result being pretty sloppy). I appreciate this all and I'll keep working towards a better end product.

[Phat 2]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6207/6115991071_7c88e320cf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)
Photo on 2011-09-05 at 10.33 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6115991071/)

Trying to get back with this shit now that I'm done with court :). I'm a bit rusty but I've been fuckin with 'erf'. Excuse it being backwards, I don't know how to flip it on my new mac.

Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.

fuck! I couldda sworn I thought that said "3RD"
there was some dude here a while ago with some cool works and wrote 3RD but he dissapeared, I thought it was you and that he came back haha
damn, well then I guess that's crit enuff innit :P

[MASE P_2s]

crits snaghttp://farm7.static.flickr.com/6090/6118381046_ee13b71d09.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/)
snag ekul throwy p2s (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/) by CantTouchSociety (http://www.flickr.com/people/snagscts/), on Flickr

[Norfsuthr]

Looks like you got a good style, I'd say simplify and lower the tail thing on the s.


fuck! I couldda sworn I thought that said "3RD"
there was some dude here a while ago with some cool works and wrote 3RD but he dissapeared, I thought it was you and that he came back haha
damn, well then I guess that's crit enuff innit :P

I AM 3RD, I got caught so I can't write it anymore. Now it's Erf cause the letters are similar. It's the same as my old R, that's probably why it looks familiar.

[Phat 2]

hhaah ! well I'll be damned then!

[IbuprofenTablets]

@Erf: Dope ER connection.
It looks like Eri, though. make the top of the F more present.

[sadgeh]

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crits on the first one the second one is like i drew it in a bad trip.

[sema]

keep workin on em in ur books, till u get alil more flow
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[SneeZ]

Its bout time, to upload the shit i came up wit. Ok, drop shadows fucked, struggling with n a bit. gotta get the lines cleaner. The bad colors was all i could find.

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feedback pls.

[sema]

youll figure it out just keep it all goin the same way think of where your light sorce would b like on the little splashs it sould be down to the left like the rest of the shadow on the throw also with the round bottoms its easier to drop it down lower to echo the curves better

[skinaone]

31563
shitty cam pic new throw i kinda like it

[Mc Satan]

was doodling in class and came up with something similar to this and really like it decided to clean it up a bit. what do you think? do i finally got something halfway decent?31614

[sema]

not to be a DICK but that p just winked at me haha....try to get smoothe lines and dont sketch your throws

[.Cuore]

that's much more a simp than a throw.

[bak]

throws shoud b smooth single lines.
no sketching. but the i is cool
how'd u think of the name?
i read it nd thot of pedophile

[bio99]

31670

I know the proportions could be better but any crits?

[bak]

try n do that s in two lines n same with the rest of ur letters. but good start.kill that smiley face tho

[SynOne]

http://i54.tinypic.com/2jds5mf.jpg

Critique.

Yes I know my e on the 2nd one is fucked up... I messed up and was like... ohh well.

[MN Nice]

Cut the One out. Just Syn

[SynOne]

I thought someone painted Syn that was decently popular... Syn it is, I would much rather that any how. Thanks.

[MN Nice]

Well still write synone, but with a longer name like that you're gonna want to shorten it up.

[skinaone]

-.- yall kidding me?
nooo crits?

[MN Nice]

I don't think your N and A need those bottom bumps.

[skinaone]

then the letters would flow so they have to stay . anything else?

[LIZARD]

31684

bored at work, couple strips of tape and a couple sharpies lol lmk what ya think

[Saiko]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=31601&d=1315521313
The throw at the top is alot quicker, but i can do both.

Seyr i like it. I think the r should be a bit smoother, though, to match the rest of the letters.

[SynOne]

Ok, so besides a shortend throwie to syn, crits?

[vems]

31686

quick throwie, de, crits/??

[Strange Journeys]

ay lose those highlights in the drop shadow. that leg coming up from the D is too much, and lose the bump coming off the top of the E, and personally, i think exclamations and periods are lame, but do what you want to

[LiveFreeDieFree]

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Yeeeeeee, I need a drop shadow.

[LIZARD]

sevr not seyr but thanks i know the r needs work....live free: looks to bunched up towards the beginning, space em out a little more

[Pitlord]

31684

bored at work, couple strips of tape and a couple sharpies lol lmk what ya think

Like it!

[~PVE~]

just a simp
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[Shroomsh]

Thats disgusting.

[IbuprofenTablets]

^^^ This gus knows his stuff, guys.
He can do his name in Mr.Wiggles' piece font without copying it from the computer anymore!! King status, broo'.

[Saiko]

sevr not seyr but thanks i know the r needs work....live free: looks to bunched up towards the beginning, space em out a little more my bad in that case, bring that lil square at the bottom more to the right so it looks like a u not a y.

[LIZARD]

yeah bubble v's always either look like u's or y's..idk i need to tweak it a little more

[Female]

I'm guessing the letters are uneven, the drop shadow is off, and the letters are ugly as fuck. Crits are welcome.
http://i54.tinypic.com/20svdee.jpg
Posting this crap. So i can go back to basics

[ribcage]

whats it say?

[Female]

SORE. i tried to thickening the lines trick and i guess I fucked up the round-ness.

[.Cuore]

SORE. i tried to thickening the lines trick and i guess I fucked up the round-ness.

I would make the ending line of the S a little bit higher up, so it finishes under the line on the right where the bottom curve begins.. if that makes sense.

[Strange Journeys]

that sores pretty fresh, make the R bigger i think

[Strange Journeys]

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quicky f-way spot with a fucked up U, other crits?

[MN Nice]

Word up, thats fresh Strange. Hopefully that shack aint still in use, that'd be fucked up.

My tag is sooooooooo bad, just don't even mention that shit. I'm gonna go over it soon. And my outline is off but you aint got shit for light under a bridge.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00236-20110814-1341.jpg?t=1313993164

[Female]

I'm guessing the letters are uneven, the drop shadow is off, and the letters are ugly as fuck. Crits are welcome.
http://i54.tinypic.com/20svdee.jpg
Posting this crap. So i can go back to basics
Bump
@Mues that M is fresh, and what paint cans you use?

[MN Nice]

That was with Ironlak reloads.

[LiveFreeDieFree]

31941
Eh. The H looks weird. Oh well. Crits?
31942
This one looks better, in my opinion. Crits?

[LIZARD]

female: that R need a little work cuz it almost looks like an A...u have to make the 2nd leg come out on a slant just like u would write it regularly not straight down

i actually use to write sore just for shits..im down for an exchange if u want,i still have alotta sore pieces in my books lol

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/309248_280755718618011_100000507545549_1082489_911 942372_n.jpg

a buddy of mine who went to brasil hit me up there :)

[skinaone]

Thats disgusting.
i should bi tch slap you
acting like your shits so fresh gtf -.-

[skinaone]

31829

quicky f-way spot with a fucked up U, other crits?
not feeling that D son i already told you this a while ago
and clean un that B the U is ight

[ribcage]

exchange
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0913112043.jpg
@phat that straight letter is better than your throw imo

[bak]

feelin that fable. but the tags D:

[Phat 2]

exchange
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0913112043.jpg
@phat that straight letter is better than your throw imo

oh I know right? it definitely is. I'm really diggin it
and tight fabel throw

[NouveauP]

Sick throw Fable. Only thing I might tweak is square off the F similar to the E. And maybe not make the slit in the E's back so large. But honestly, it's tight as is. Keep it up.

That Brazil straight letter is pretty cool.

LiveFree- study some other people's throws for a while and work from that inspiration.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0477.jpg

[ribcage]

thanks homie, its always a pleasure to see your throws

[sema]

mues try kills primer white it covers solid on just bout anything, n get some fat caps youll b aight

[SneeZ]

Rib, solid thorws as usual. The Klaus thing is off tha hook.
Hit da wallz wit that shit homies, make it big, nah'meen?
post some flicks, if yall will be doin it, lookin forward for it.

[MN Nice]

Klaus has posted a paint flick a while back, he definitely gets down. And yeah man, I did use fats for the fill but I'll use it for the outline too. Peace.

[ERAYS]

yo that was a pretty dope fable thow, just dont personally like the E but keep writting!!

any crits?32162

[NouveauP]

The E is fairly solid, but every other letter falls off. the R could be confused for an A, and just has odd shapes in it in general. The A isn't really much of a letter. The Y looks like an S and the S is just odd. I wouldn't do those weird squiggle lines either. Keep at it. Keep it simple for now. The ERAYS hand at the bottom isn't too bad, again minus the squiggles. Stay up.

[skinaone]

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the blueish one was done today had to go over some assholes peice since he went over mine
the red out line a couple of days ago
my original throw is the one i did today

[MASE P_2s]

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[skinaone]

not feeling thatG