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shush4
09-25-2011, 05:49 PM
take out that little nub on the h's, and your u seems to bend a different way at the bottom then the rest of the letters. beside that not bad.

thanks for the advice i'll keep it in mind. btw lmao at your sig

skinaone
09-25-2011, 05:55 PM
I haven't made a single bitchy post yet. Youu're the one making the bitchy post, here..

lol your right
but still kinda depresing

SynOne
09-25-2011, 07:25 PM
Crit it mad hard.

34014

shush4
09-25-2011, 08:35 PM
Crit it mad hard.

34014

honestly. im no expert but my first thought was wtf is that... even as far as throw ups go i think you should start way simpler. if i didn't know what it said i would think it said su and not really be able to make out the last character

Shroomsh
09-25-2011, 09:35 PM
Yeah, it looks decent in person, cos its chrome, but it woulda taken forever to fill proper, took about 20 mins to fill that much

Phat 2
09-26-2011, 04:53 AM
shroomsh, that A isn't an A :P

edit, flicks!

last night, excellent spot on main street, slaps oncoming traffic plain in the face:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/303078_280546411965348_202093693143954_1170627_364 741120_n.jpg

this morning: TO THE BUFF !

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/294871_287312977962285_100000507545549_1110876_495 010028_n.jpg

...fuck that

vems
09-26-2011, 10:52 AM
shroomsh, that A isn't an A :P

edit, flicks!


last night, excellent spot on main street, slaps oncoming traffic plain in the face:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/303078_280546411965348_202093693143954_1170627_364 741120_n.jpg

this morning: TO THE BUFF !

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/294871_287312977962285_100000507545549_1110876_495 010028_n.jpg

...fuck that

dam they fast to buff where u at! nice tho i really like, only thing is, get rid of those little points on the bottom of the letters.

skinaone
09-26-2011, 03:07 PM
i told him that so many times already

theking
09-26-2011, 03:47 PM
why is he on a ladder?

Phat 2
09-26-2011, 05:44 PM
take a wild guess... or more like a wild look

geza_arts
09-26-2011, 06:32 PM
34085
a quick trow up ARTS yeah.

SynOne
09-26-2011, 07:34 PM
Kind of a old throwie I used. But I got bored of it, but I came back to it... And I like it.

Crits. (Yes I know S is not proportional, and yes now I realize I'm missing the line on my N.)

34111

ribcage
09-26-2011, 07:35 PM
looks like ass

theking
09-26-2011, 07:56 PM
take a wild guess... or more like a wild look
unless your a midget you shouldnt need a ladder... hes like 1 foot of the ground above his throwie

Norfsuthr
09-27-2011, 01:22 AM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6188172818_66c1c00cf4.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
oie_2781955K2p1KFTZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
ED isnt quite right but you get the idea.

Shroomsh
09-27-2011, 03:51 AM
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Phat 2
09-27-2011, 08:05 AM
unless your a midget you shouldnt need a ladder... hes like 1 foot of the ground above his throwie

dude, he's 4 ladder steps high, how did that add up to just one foot to you? :P
and he's on a ladder because he was cleaning the high top of that shutter
those 2 shutters have been closed for years and no one's touched them yet. they're filthy, you should've seen the dust fall off them whil he was cleaning em. damn.
but turns out I gave the owner a wake up call by bombing em. that worker's cleaning the dust off so that he could later paint both shutters with white paint... I passed by again later and the things were squeeky clean haha.

sema
09-27-2011, 08:33 AM
looks like it left a hallow less he went back over again p kinda looks like t at first glance tho

vems
09-27-2011, 08:46 AM
34429

super clean man, i like the dusty fill with the solid shade lines.


dude, he's 4 ladder steps high, how did that add up to just one foot to you? :P
and he's on a ladder because he was cleaning the high top of that shutter
those 2 shutters have been closed for years and no one's touched them yet. they're filthy, you should've seen the dust fall off them whil he was cleaning em. damn.
but turns out I gave the owner a wake up call by bombing em. that worker's cleaning the dust off so that he could later paint both shutters with white paint... I passed by again later and the things were squeeky clean haha.

oh sweet, so they primed them up for you to paint again, how nice..;)

PETER
09-27-2011, 09:01 AM
be sure to thank them when you do

Norfsuthr
09-27-2011, 04:07 PM
Geza- that r gets too small, and dont do throws at the bottom unless you fit the bottom of the letters too.

Syn- be steadier with your hand or faster, maybe simplify your letters a bit and straighten them up.

Phat not hating but you should change your throws up a bit and progress it. I get the idea of recognition but you have to let your letters progress too, do a few different throws or something.


http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6188172818_66c1c00cf4.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
oie_2781955K2p1KFTZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
repost for crits

Shroomsh
09-27-2011, 06:32 PM
Fed, put the letters closer togeter, or slightly overlap them, otherwise, good letters

Saiko
09-27-2011, 06:45 PM
34656
Crits, please

Strange Journeys
09-27-2011, 08:19 PM
actually do a throw up man those just look like really weak straights

Norfsuthr
09-27-2011, 11:29 PM
I'm working on like throwups that aren't overlapping, its intentional. Apparently I don't have it right yet, so thanks

rolling fresh kush
09-28-2011, 01:37 AM
bump

rolling fresh kush
09-28-2011, 01:56 AM
http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/IMG_0309210.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/fg.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/k.jpg

old

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/kikj.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/002.jpg

SneeZ
09-28-2011, 06:30 AM
lol, you could post all the flix at once, man.

Some stupid flicks for crits. The shitty colors were all I had here. In diff apartment, I keep my stuff.
For simpler ones I didn't get crit, so i tried more complex, turned out looking like shit. Fucked up the second one with old white marker.

3483034831

Edit: and phat, i think ur usual throw is much better than this ph bomb.

Shroomsh
09-28-2011, 06:42 AM
kush, your a gaycunt, stop spamming all the threads, post everything you want to say in one post, stop raping shit for credits

sneez, that first one is fresh, but the n looks odd with the curl thing, almost get away with it because of the rest of the letters, but looks eh

LIZARD
09-28-2011, 09:25 PM
35110
crits..

sneez: first ones dope but i agree with shroom that bend on the N looks weird. i can see y u put it there cuz it does match but it just doesn't look right if that makes sense lol

Norfsuthr
09-28-2011, 10:14 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6160/6193591753_af4091106b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6193591753/)
oie_295642heRVc8xl (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6193591753/)

sevr- the face doesnt work too well in the r. try it in a lowercase e or on the s. dont do exclamation marks. just keep practicing.

MyNipsAreHard
09-28-2011, 10:43 PM
35120
Havent done a throw in a while

PETER
09-29-2011, 09:50 AM
Sneez: Both look good. I like the top one most and the second one would look better with a solid fill. I agree with them about the N, but it works.

Sevr: I like the V and R, but don't much care for that S and E. The S looks way out of place and the E looks more like what I picture your S looking like for this just with out the chunk at the bottom. I suggest styling your S like that E and using a lower case E styled like your R (which I like a lot)

vems
09-29-2011, 07:34 PM
35306

quickie wit some new markers, critsss besides teh sloppey lines

MN Nice
09-29-2011, 07:48 PM
Make a hole in the head of your E. Like how Cope does his, it'll look much better.

vems
09-29-2011, 08:40 PM
like the E in my avi? i usually do it that way, jus wanted to change up a bit

sane.
09-30-2011, 05:33 AM
3534635347353483534935350

Strange Journeys
09-30-2011, 08:43 AM
ay dog thats dope you should move to NY and get down on the bombing scene out there,i think you're ready!

Skeng
09-30-2011, 09:53 AM
Lol'd at sane, don't people know there history nowadays?

TheDoctor
10-02-2011, 02:03 AM
3549235493

Just some ideas ive been playin with. Anybody know if the name is taken?? The one with the arrows needs to not have arrows. They are wack as fuck XD haha

MyNipsAreHard
10-02-2011, 10:20 AM
35120
Havent done a throw in a while

Repost for CRITS please

35595
blue and white one is alot older. i just did the top one tonight.
crits are well appreciated

MN Nice
10-02-2011, 10:39 PM
That bottom one is bangin. First one has potential.

Strange Journeys
10-02-2011, 11:09 PM
go with top more original

Phat 2
10-03-2011, 04:24 AM
my nips are hard, use the bottom one for sure. it's for the win big time. except change the K because it's more "throwie" style, while the rest of the throwie has more of a "simps" style to it... so go for a regular 3-bar K it would be heaps nicer.
/2cents

Norfsuthr
10-03-2011, 05:45 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6015/6208795521_f246bf1a30.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6208795521/)
oie_404120ys7BYzoP (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6208795521/)
Still workin with the top of the y. one line tho except the holes and shit.

Block that top one looks good, keep working it. Make the letters the same height more.

Pitlord
10-03-2011, 07:13 PM
My first ever Throwie. Cant seem to get the hang of it tho...

http://i.imgur.com/FKLda.jpg

Saiko
10-03-2011, 08:18 PM
My first ever Throwie. Cant seem to get the hang of it tho...

http://i.imgur.com/FKLda.jpg
I kinda like the style. it's not those same damn generic throw letters.
On crits, though, keep at it; your letters need a bit more definition(the a and d look the same).
Just my opinion.

skinaone
10-03-2011, 09:12 PM
ok dude tell me what generic means, for real ive seen like 40 people saying thats so generic, and they all have different meanings -.-

Saiko
10-03-2011, 09:14 PM
ok dude tell me what generic means, for real ive seen like 40 people saying thats so generic, and they all have different meanings -.-
I mean overused,general,typical or bland. Or boring.

skinaone
10-03-2011, 09:27 PM
35733
35731
35732
so my shit is generic acording to a bunch of yall

ribcage
10-03-2011, 09:55 PM
lol dude cmon, why would you listen to a jackoff like saiko (that cant even draw a tag, let alone paint one) about throws when clearly he doesnt know shit.

Throws are a personal adaptation of an already set style. New ideas and originality are a plus, but if you throw a bunch of fuckin squares up on a wall and call it a throw, its not a throw. A good throw is more hand movement and style, rather than the letters themselves(not meaning the letter can suck). Yall need to focus less on wether or not your throw looks like the rest, and worry more about why a throw is used and painting it.

p.s. skina your throws are fine

MN Nice
10-03-2011, 10:02 PM
Please paint the closed one more skin. I like that one more.

Saiko
10-04-2011, 03:53 PM
Please paint the closed one more skin. I like that one more.
+1

skinaone
10-04-2011, 04:11 PM
lol dude cmon, why would you listen to a jackoff like saiko (that cant even draw a tag, let alone paint one) about throws when clearly he doesnt know shit.

Throws are a personal adaptation of an already set style. New ideas and originality are a plus, but if you throw a bunch of fuckin squares up on a wall and call it a throw, its not a throw. A good throw is more hand movement and style, rather than the letters themselves(not meaning the letter can suck). Yall need to focus less on wether or not your throw looks like the rest, and worry more about why a throw is used and painting it.

p.s. skina your throws are fine
ight my man <3


Please paint the closed one more skin. I like that one more.
ill think about it

porkyPig
10-04-2011, 06:25 PM
http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/AUSTIN008.jpg

Phat 2
10-04-2011, 07:23 PM
weren't you banned the other day?

knowtheledge
10-05-2011, 07:49 AM
Sup people.. some trows:
35843
35844
reads quel, but I ain't feelin the 'q' too much..

PETER
10-05-2011, 08:04 AM
Quel: looks like Guel.

Skina1: the top throw looks more "generic" than your other one. It looks more like the standard throw... Not to say it doesn't look good. I like the yellow one a lot.

MTK
10-05-2011, 08:18 AM
Quel... i like all of them but mabey you can turn the q over and bring down the tail a lil... just a crit cuz it looks like a G

bak
10-05-2011, 02:38 PM
everything on this page needs improvement.
keep practicing

ZETA
10-05-2011, 02:44 PM
Of course it is a toy section, so practice is assumed.

Personally i think theyre both pretty toy, but maybe you guys can help.


Which is better? Quick oneliner or the top one35886

bak
10-05-2011, 02:48 PM
work on the letter structure. not a fan of ur tags or top thro but the bottom one with practice can become decent. try simpler legible letters like ur bottom E

PETER
10-05-2011, 02:56 PM
Zeta: I like the concept of the first one and think with some work could be decent. The T needs some deffenition.

knowtheledge
10-05-2011, 03:46 PM
messin around with this..
that trows older tho figured i'd post it still

35887
35888
35889

MN Nice
10-05-2011, 03:54 PM
Quel, your q is just a fucked up S. Try again

knowtheledge
10-05-2011, 03:59 PM
haha fuck i know.. how bout that last blue one
its the only one that looks like a q

mind as well post these.. disregard dat first letter

35891
35892

MN Nice
10-05-2011, 04:05 PM
Thats better actually. Didn't see that one. Keep working with it, thats probably the best of them all.

ZETA
10-05-2011, 04:16 PM
Yeah QUEL, the only thing really BAD is the Q and thats only cause it looks like a G. But the E is kinda eh... real simp, but its still a nice throw. And you seem to be getting it up so i still give you props

Phat 2
10-05-2011, 04:42 PM
how come your bruzer tags are so awesome when the tags in the flicks above are lame?

knowtheledge
10-05-2011, 11:25 PM
aha i just started writing Quel a couple days ago i'm still fuckin with it but ye i write both cause i couldnt stand my bruzr throw

MN Nice
10-05-2011, 11:28 PM
Dumb choice. stick with Bruzr and get a new throw.

knowtheledge
10-06-2011, 09:21 PM
thanks buddy

fixed it up a lil
36084

MN Nice
10-06-2011, 09:43 PM
Get a hole in the bottom of your B.

knowtheledge
10-07-2011, 10:45 AM
ayo retok you got a basic structure goin try bringin those lines in a bit n maybe make your letters taller

some mo trows

36085
36087

yeye baked sketchin

sema
10-07-2011, 10:49 AM
losen the arrows is a step in the right direction

ZETA
10-07-2011, 10:54 AM
you do know that one of the greatest writers ever is named REVOK right?...

knowtheledge
10-07-2011, 03:54 PM
losen? ya mean lose em right?

MoF.
10-07-2011, 06:13 PM
you do know that one of the greatest writers ever is named REVOK right?...
yea true, but people dont seem to mind wen somone writes dope and completly bites Cope2 style and its not like im biting of him

MTK
10-07-2011, 06:18 PM
yea true, but people dont seem to mind wen somone writes dope and completly bites Cope2 style and its not like im biting of him Actually every time I see someone write dope of bs.com it always becomes a huge fight

MyNipsAreHard
10-07-2011, 06:21 PM
yeah RETOK, i would think about changing my name if i were you

knowtheledge
10-07-2011, 06:26 PM
meh..

36127

TBS
10-07-2011, 11:31 PM
some bullshit.. seriously cannot seem to do anything at the moment. too much work, not enough time to sit and think shit through. anyway, it is what it is, all progression and that.
36140
36141
36142
36143
36144

geargff
10-07-2011, 11:50 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6034/6222105236_67047fbf1c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6222105236/)
BAISE (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6222105236/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6035/6219073450_ea76f7d67a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6219073450/)
BAISE (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6219073450/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6154/6167476895_fd09283b8a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6167476895/)
BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6167476895/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr

MTK
10-08-2011, 12:14 AM
TBS... i really like that pink one and the lil charater

TBS
10-08-2011, 12:14 AM
Baise you're lines are pretty shakey, and the A looks really tall and skinny compared to the S and E. i think you should spend a while just throwing this shit on paper over and over again. it's an alright start i guess but needs a ton of work.

cheers MTK, it's a little sloppy. i don't like the E either. been trying shit out with an upper case E that i think i can work with. i think the lower case one like in that pink one is a bit fat looking.

knowtheledge
10-08-2011, 03:57 AM
drunk shit

36151

vems
10-08-2011, 09:32 AM
TBS... i really like that pink one and the lil charater


ya that pink one is dope homie, may i suggest making the holes in the B and R and E white tho, to match the O a lil more & cuz the shadow is white in the backround, idk may look better,.

MN Nice
10-08-2011, 11:02 AM
@Broke - on the pink one, the idea of the middle bump on R's is to match up with the line coming off of the left leg. This may not be the best example to show, but this is what I mean:

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00396-20111008-1052.jpg?t=1318089752

ribcage
10-08-2011, 01:45 PM
you suck at my R lolz
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0810111936.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518111926.jpg

MN Nice
10-08-2011, 01:49 PM
Yep. Just to show him what I meant though.

ribcage
10-08-2011, 01:55 PM
...not the first time dis little nigglets bitten me. how my ankles taste?

MN Nice
10-08-2011, 01:56 PM
Its not like I'm using the shit. Calm your tits.

ribcage
10-08-2011, 02:08 PM
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/53/109082194_32de7d9bb9.jpg

knowtheledge
10-08-2011, 07:03 PM
aha^

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6031/6224744162_abcb8927fe.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6212/6224220537_8fba0da398.jpg

TBS
10-08-2011, 08:33 PM
the bump in the R, i duno why i even put that in there. i don't like it, and the white back ground is cause... well maybe i forgot to colour it :p. but cheers for the crits. any crits on the others?

Ribs, the T on the REFLECT doesn't quite fit in i don't think. the Reach on the other hand is cool. the H pops to fuck!! not too sure on the MASSIVE set of balls though....

Rites
10-08-2011, 09:56 PM
Rib- da white and black ones ill, the outline on the train could be cleaner.

ribcage
10-08-2011, 10:04 PM
wachu mean breh, if u seen it in person ud be able to see the lil spray dots from how clean my hand movements were. Idk where it was benched at, but where I painted it I had to reach to paint it too

skinaone
10-08-2011, 10:26 PM
nah the throw are good the A on the first freight is kinda hiden but still looks good

killroywashere
10-09-2011, 01:55 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6162/6227353972_9e7f5045d5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227353972/)

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6154/6226835595_ec375bb711.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6226835595/)

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6179/6227335644_8b9b75173a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227335644/)

@knowledge - your bombs are original but could prolly go with some tweaking. i think they lack flow
@ribcage - whats up with a painted bomb sometime?

TastyMcNasty
10-09-2011, 10:56 PM
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2422.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2421.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2420.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2413.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2405.jpg

ribcage
10-09-2011, 11:00 PM
aaaye, you stepped ya game up. that dope throw is dope

TastyMcNasty
10-09-2011, 11:04 PM
thanks bro, been going hard since school started

ribcage
10-09-2011, 11:06 PM
back to the in class doodling eh?

TastyMcNasty
10-09-2011, 11:10 PM
nothing better to do, physics is easy as fuck, and theres nothing better to do in social (AP).

ribcage
10-09-2011, 11:34 PM
ah I remember taking a physics class. I failed it, but I jacked a 1250 ml bulb flask a few test tubes and an ammo sized box of amonium nitrate. Took coneptual physics the next year and passed that shit hella easy, also stole a few lab materials, most broke though

TastyMcNasty
10-09-2011, 11:40 PM
haha why would you do that? whats the point

ribcage
10-09-2011, 11:47 PM
first flask I had (only like 750 ml I tried to make into a bong... never worked out, the shit broke. turned the other 1 into a ghetto stove top vape. But idk dude, why does anybody do any stupid stuff when their young and in highschool? I think I may have been tryin to impress some underclassmen and peers or some bullshit. Still got the test tubes and shit. I might find a good use for em some day, you never know. O and I took the amonium nitrate because when you catch it on fire it smokes a lot. I made a sick ass smoke bomb bomb with it. smoked for 20-30 seconds and then boom. super easy to make too. shyit I should give yall a lesson on some super easy home made explosives

TastyMcNasty
10-09-2011, 11:53 PM
haha ya man i get it. for example i stole a MJ doll from my band teacher for shits n gigs hahah. ended up just throwing it out of a bus ahah

ribcage
10-10-2011, 12:05 AM
.............not the same at all. my shit at least had a purpose.

TastyMcNasty
10-10-2011, 12:09 AM
i guess, maybe it was because she;s a bitch, and i wanted to piss her off. or you know, being high was a factor i guess

Norfsuthr
10-10-2011, 07:31 PM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6174/6232271291_2ceed5b4e5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6232271291/)
oie_1122815DCwuv8uG (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6232271291/)

What ive been putting up lately. the 8 is squished, dont mind that.. crits otherwise? I feel like flow is an issue, but that will come.

SynOne
10-10-2011, 07:38 PM
New Throwie, Crits.

36432

Norfsuthr
10-10-2011, 07:43 PM
Use fewer lines, it'll be faster and come off smoother than using like 10 lines in your toss, plus it forces you to be creative and efficient with where you take each line. Fuck with some other shapes and ideas besides bubbles.

MyNipsAreHard
10-10-2011, 08:20 PM
Norf- not sure what the first one or two letters are supposed to be. but the O and A look sick to me.
Syn- have the line in the Y curve up not down. and what norf said

Norfsuthr
10-10-2011, 08:36 PM
its 8you haha. Guess it needs some fixing up, it was a quicky tho.

MyNipsAreHard
10-10-2011, 08:46 PM
haha gotcha... i see it now. the 8 isnt really defined and neither is the Y. but i like the concept for the Y alot

skinaone
10-10-2011, 09:48 PM
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2413.jpg
are you fucking kidding?
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TastyMcNasty
10-10-2011, 11:07 PM
skina, whats the problem? you think you're the first one to use big gaps in your letters? you think you're the first one to separate your letters in two (i.e A, R)? no, you are a toy with a huge ass ego, blindly calling bites, when clearly they are two very unique styles. now stop being such a cunt. kthxbai

SynOne
10-11-2011, 07:30 AM
Imo, gaps are ugly. Skina, use the filled one lol.

skinaone
10-11-2011, 07:40 PM
skina, whats the problem? you think you're the first one to use big gaps in your letters? you think you're the first one to separate your letters in two (i.e A, R)? no, you are a toy with a huge ass ego, blindly calling bites, when clearly they are two very unique styles. now stop being such a cunt. kthxbai
im not talking bout the gaps you moron
ive never seen an S thats starts like mine till you came along, eggo? fuck no im just not one of those writters that are all up on other *****s dicks

TastyMcNasty
10-11-2011, 07:42 PM
if you've never seen an S remotely similar to yours, clearly you haven't looked hard. and as far as the similarities in the S go, they are NOTHING alike

skinaone
10-11-2011, 07:49 PM
***** i posted a danm S like that about 2 months ago
and they do look alike -.-
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i posted the exact same throw
but in marker -.-

knowtheledge
10-11-2011, 07:54 PM
Tasty, those are steee even tho its mad similar to skuf's s.. n skina they aint even that close dog!

drawin on some old skate mags.. still trying to get my r's down

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6235634763_8780a96f29.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6119/6235633217_18ce5e648a.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6217/6236157004_419eaba425.jpg

Flawless Victory
10-11-2011, 09:56 PM
YO TASTY your sig is my wallpaper

TastyMcNasty
10-11-2011, 10:07 PM
YO TASTY your sig is my wallpaper

fuckin love the black dahlia murder

PETER
10-12-2011, 09:16 AM
first throw I've come up with I like. Crits. I know the lines are shakey, but it's the first time I did a fill and outline of it and I have chugged a shit load of coffee this morning.

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skinaone
10-12-2011, 01:10 PM
what does it say
but the shakey ass lines dont look that bad
but your keeping it nice and simple,im feeling the K if it even is a K

PETER
10-12-2011, 01:36 PM
Says Antik

ribcage
10-12-2011, 01:37 PM
its awful, try harder

PETER
10-12-2011, 02:04 PM
I will. what is horrible is out of all my attempts over the years... mind you it's been many since I have tried... this is probly my best throw to date. I've never really much cared for them and have always been shit at them so I've never really given it much effort. Lately I've seen several that have given me motivation to build one of my own.

Phat 2
10-12-2011, 03:29 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/319231_288313344521988_202093693143954_1198744_287 998099_n.jpg

your comments

NouveauP
10-12-2011, 04:35 PM
The HA connect looks pretty sick even though they aren't too proportional. Just seems to work here. I like the idea of the backwards P. Give your H a back to lean on, but I don't think you pulled it off well enough here. Mostly the indention in the top, I think. Just round it out. I'd avoid using a lowercase t in a throw. It's just a really awkward structure and I think a capital T would be more effective. The 2 isn't too bad.

PETER - study some throws homie. Thats lookin rough. And try just drawing simple shapes for a while like circles squares and triangles, but try to draw them proportionally and CLEAN. Maybe try to exhale as you move you hand. Try drawing with your elbow rather than your wrists. These may not necessarily work, but just try to find what works for you.

MyNipsAreHard
10-12-2011, 05:46 PM
Peter- looks like you were having a heart attack while doing those lines. work on cleanliness. and the I looks like a C. maybe make them a lil talller
Phat2- idk how i feel about the backwards P. i usually like backwards letters but not feelin it as much on this one. not saying you cant make it look better. and the h looks a lil like an L. diggin that A. definitely make the T capital. maybe have the P bump out more at the top rather than sag down. idk

skinaone
10-12-2011, 06:18 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/319231_288313344521988_202093693143954_1198744_287 998099_n.jpg

your comments
AHATZ thats what i read there
your other throws are betta

SynOne
10-12-2011, 06:42 PM
Took crits, need more.

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skinaone
10-12-2011, 06:47 PM
ok looks the same,
youve posted 3 other thrwos and you havent changed anything. :/

SynOne
10-12-2011, 07:03 PM
Trying to get down one throw, not change it completely. So I'm taking the crits and applying it to the throw.

Flawless Victory
10-12-2011, 07:16 PM
http://i52.tinypic.com/25k1mwg.jpg

skinaone
10-12-2011, 07:19 PM
@syn Change it, try a new style cause that sure aint working
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crits changed it a bit smaller gaps streched out letters i think its ight

Flawless Victory
10-12-2011, 07:51 PM
Your N looks like an H an your A looks A LOT like an R.
Like if your user name wasn't skina I'd think that said skihr.

skinaone
10-12-2011, 07:55 PM
H,and R hmmmm
i dont see the R and i kinda see the H any more crits ?

Flawless Victory
10-12-2011, 08:19 PM
For real, you don't see it?

http://i52.tinypic.com/2psrko2.jpg


The letters aren't bad, they just don't really look like the letters they are supposed to be

ribcage
10-12-2011, 08:29 PM
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/1012111823.jpg

skinaone
10-12-2011, 09:10 PM
For real, you don't see it?

http://i52.tinypic.com/2psrko2.jpg


The letters aren't bad, they just don't really look like the letters they are supposed to be
i see the N being and H but the A being an R not so much but ill fix it up a bit
@ reach SHITS AWESOME but the P fix it up a bit AND BTW i finished the simple peice were should i post it up ?

SynOne
10-12-2011, 10:24 PM
Thinking about changing what I write to Scewt... the Y in Syn throws me off, and I just can't personally do much with it because I'ma failure.

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Flawless Victory
10-12-2011, 11:11 PM
Man, I think you should go with a different name.
When I think of the word scoot I think of a dog scooting across a carpet dragging his ass.

SynOne
10-12-2011, 11:15 PM
Lol, tbh, I just liked the way it rolled off the tongue. And plus, some of my friends called me Cooter Scooter for a while. I just like it.

ribcage
10-12-2011, 11:33 PM
are you sure they werent just calling you cooter? or pussy?

SynOne
10-13-2011, 07:24 AM
^ Lmfao, Nope. It was because I called someone a Cooter Scooter when I was really stoned. And it just stuck.

Phat 2
10-13-2011, 10:55 AM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/301917_288691377817518_202093693143954_1199952_163 2621327_n.jpg

ok I changed some stuff
how about it now?

PETER
10-13-2011, 11:55 AM
The T looks far more like a T. It has good balance. Personally I liked the 2 before vs this one.

skinaone
10-13-2011, 07:29 PM
i like the idea of the P but youre still not doing it right HA connection is dope but the A needs work the T aint flowing neither and that 2 aint that nice but its better then the Z you were doing

Norfsuthr
10-14-2011, 01:02 AM
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6111/6242331161_1799833e70.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6242331161/)
oie_1463457pEDPbevZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6242331161/)


phat the p and t need work. I think a backwards p is fine, maybe balance it by making the top right of the t bigger. Or do a backwards t that would be sick.

Phat 2
10-14-2011, 05:10 AM
ok i think I got it, I'll try an idea I have later on at work. will edit this post with the flick. I'm trying to get a decent full name throw down. I'm starting to find that my usual 2 letters aren't enough for me. I nEED MOAARR :P heh
@nofrthuser, the hell's a backward T dude, it's a symmetrical letter, unless you mean upside down, nd then it'll become an L

SynOne
10-14-2011, 07:58 AM
Fucking Lol'd so hard at a backwards T.

Norfsuthr
10-14-2011, 11:09 AM
Why are people so constipated round here....

sema
10-14-2011, 11:22 AM
prolly cause there tryin to figure out how to do a backwards t phat might i suggest throwin a backwards o in there somewhere also?....

H1P30N3R
10-14-2011, 04:49 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0115.jpg

skinaone
10-14-2011, 04:55 PM
you still have the same one? ok just do straight down lines for the P and Os take of the l stick on the S and your Es are hiding
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OLD ASS STICKER but i think im bringing that throw back to life CRITS i did it in like jan

Strange Journeys
10-14-2011, 05:11 PM
Pesoe pull that first E forward! you progressed alot though

SynOne
10-15-2011, 01:56 AM
Top one, Capital T or lowercase t? Bottom. Crits. Mind all these were done while blazed.

knowtheledge
10-15-2011, 02:08 AM
The second one with the capital t is nice dude.. I would bring that t in more n define the k cause its lookin like an n.. good start tho
aha I always sketch blunted.. sometimes I feel like I get writers block if I dont have any trees

skinaone
10-15-2011, 03:38 PM
nope not doing it right

ZETA
10-16-2011, 09:12 AM
i think its funny phats a mod yet he posts in toy

Flawless Victory
10-16-2011, 11:37 AM
Phat only mods the toy forum, why wouldn't he post in it?

And modding an internet graffiti forum doesn't mean that you are good at graffiti.
It just means that you have a lot of spare time to spend modding an internet graffiti forum.

skinaone
10-16-2011, 04:37 PM
NAKED ?
try simpler things that K is nice thoe

Z3BRA
10-16-2011, 04:39 PM
The K looks like an H

Phat 2
10-16-2011, 06:26 PM
actually I mod the toy forum, battle forum and tools and tips forum. and I do it all in about 30mins before I go to bed. so no, it doesn't mean that mods have nothing better to do. I've got 0 time for rest during the day flawless victoy.
not that it's any of your bee's wax anyway tho

smokeitup
10-17-2011, 12:10 AM
look at this:

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/6742/photo0026ki.th.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/401/photo0026ki.jpg/)
http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/8163/photo0027z.th.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/854/photo0027z.jpg/)
http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/5904/photo0028j.th.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/853/photo0028j.jpg/)




what do u think of SPIY?

ZETA
10-17-2011, 05:14 AM
@smoke, eh the greens a little weird and the pics are small and low quality so its hard to tell..

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smokeitup
10-17-2011, 05:30 AM
@smoke, eh the greens a little weird and the pics are small and low quality so its hard to tell..



u can click on the pics and it brings it up, there not mine its way too toy to be my throwies just seeing what people think of them...

SynOne
10-17-2011, 07:31 AM
It really looks like a P is an r. Just sayin.

Zeta - Digging it, I wouldn't have the diamond opening in the A. Just seems to off balance it. But some might like that.

Strange Journeys
10-17-2011, 12:08 PM
haha hope those arent yours smoke they suck

nice crotch zeta and put some fucking socks on man

SynOne
10-17-2011, 03:37 PM
^ Yeah, I thought the same as you. "Fuck the art, lets stare at his crotch."

Tried Defining the K. Re Crit this bitch.

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tophaa
10-18-2011, 12:08 AM
373983739937400

iToy but iTry, thought I would throw up some pics from a legal place to tag in the area. The last one says HKD, which is my groups name, I usually throw it but I was just messing around earlier. Didn't come out too great but alas... Feedback please :D

verty
10-18-2011, 04:38 AM
hey guys,
this is my first post on this forum...
ive been interested in Graffiti all my life, but latley have had the urge to draw/write some peices. Im by no means any good and give full respect to all the talented writes out there.
here are two throwups ive plotted on paper. Feedback would be great.

ZETA
10-18-2011, 10:49 AM
@strange, socks are for pussies who cant stand the "cold" of october... and yeah ya like that crotch?

PETER
10-18-2011, 02:27 PM
Vert: Your bottom one is smashing your top one, but they both need work. I suggest filling some of the space under the left side of your T on the bottom one. I am horrible at throws so I can't really expand on that, but the idea is for it to have style in quick and simple way. Troll around and keep rockin' the books... post as you progress to keep it moving.

skinaone
10-18-2011, 04:53 PM
hey guys,
this is my first post on this forum...
ive been interested in Graffiti all my life, but latley have had the urge to draw/write some peices. Im by no means any good and give full respect to all the talented writes out there.
here are two throwups ive plotted on paper. Feedback would be great.

ueot thats what ia see
V make the line go down more E is not flowing the the V same for the R and the T is like mad far away

knowtheledge
10-18-2011, 05:27 PM
havent posted here in a min..

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6171/6258294501_f19f84c2e2.jpg

MyNipsAreHard
10-18-2011, 05:41 PM
Knowledge- pretty good i just dont like all the bumps on the M and that does look like a K
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tophaa
10-19-2011, 01:19 AM
Can anyone give me feedback on mine?

verty
10-19-2011, 06:02 AM
Vert: Your bottom one is smashing your top one, but they both need work. I suggest filling some of the space under the left side of your T on the bottom one. I am horrible at throws so I can't really expand on that, but the idea is for it to have style in quick and simple way. Troll around and keep rockin' the books... post as you progress to keep it moving.

Thanks for the tip Peter... ill work on filling in the T... ill keep posting as I progress ;)


ueot thats what ia see
V make the line go down more E is not flowing the the V same for the R and the T is like mad far away

Thanks for the tip.. yeah I thought the V looked like a U as welll.. struggling getting bubble text with more definition I guess.. but will work on it.. Thanx :)

PETER
10-19-2011, 07:15 AM
Vert: I suggest dropping by the "New to Graffiti" thread and studying up there. Also look around and see how people construct their throws and basic letters.

SneeZ
10-20-2011, 09:15 AM
had to post this shit. gott's ta fix da N, bytchz!
37711

ZETA
10-20-2011, 11:05 AM
i like the tag. itd be hard to do fast, but its still nice. fits the style of the throw. and it all looks good but the N is lower case which is kinda eh... i personally like to keep the letters consistant

knowtheledge
10-20-2011, 11:40 AM
been so bored

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6240/6264151294_a77432055c.jpg

ceaze
10-20-2011, 05:48 PM
sup fellas, hopeing i can get some crits...

muke- good shit, consistant, the onlything i would suggest is keeping the top of the bottom right leg of the K from connecting there in the middle, i feel thats very generic.
sneez- i like your style man, i actually dont mind the upper/lowercase mixture, i think it looks straight

heres a couple quickies i threw up for some crits.
377343773537736

sorry about the used paper, all my buddies pages where filled up lol

MyNipsAreHard
10-20-2011, 08:34 PM
Know- where do you get those slaps? i need some

skinaone
10-20-2011, 08:48 PM
sup fellas, hopeing i can get some crits...

muke- good shit, consistant, the onlything i would suggest is keeping the top of the bottom right leg of the K from connecting there in the middle, i feel thats very generic.
sneez- i like your style man, i actually dont mind the upper/lowercase mixture, i think it looks straight

heres a couple quickies i threw up for some crits.
377343773537736

sorry about the used paper, all my buddies pages where filled up lol
looks like SEEN;s shit bro get a whole new style, but ithey are OK

skinaone
10-20-2011, 08:49 PM
been so bored

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6240/6264151294_a77432055c.jpg
fix that K son

skinaone
10-20-2011, 08:52 PM
Knowledge- pretty good i just dont like all the bumps on the M and that does look like a K
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BLOGK
love the B L O
dont do the verticle extencion on the C and your K is mad lobsided

EWL24
10-20-2011, 10:34 PM
looks like SEEN;s shit bro get a whole new style, but ithey are OK
looks kinda like Cope 2's style also, so yeah listen to what skina said

PETER
10-21-2011, 06:13 AM
As long as we are pointing out people's throws looking like someone elses. That Sneez looks flat out like the "local" (as in on bs) Nouv throw. Ceaze: I like the top and bottom one. I feel like pretty much all throws are generic and look like someone else so fuck the bs and rock what you like.

knowtheledge
10-21-2011, 06:19 AM
Know- where do you get those slaps? i need some

staples dude or any office supply

word up I'm wit Peter on this one.. to each his own y'all n cees the last one flows the best, my two cents

ceaze
10-21-2011, 08:32 AM
As long as we are pointing out people's throws looking like someone elses. That Sneez looks flat out like the "local" (as in on bs) Nouv throw. Ceaze: I like the top and bottom one. I feel like pretty much all throws are generic and look like someone else so fuck the bs and rock what you like.

thanks pete, i honestly dont think they look much like seens, except for the fact it has 2 EEs.

SneeZ
10-21-2011, 08:47 AM
Cees - the one on the right is fresh. The left one would be better if you make similar holes in the e and come off more clean. the one in the midd is bad.
muke - nice and simple, i agree with others, fix the k and i suggest, you make a smaller gap on lower part of e.

and nouv, klaus throw is totally different thing. i respect his throws, i would never bite. hes got that continuity in his throws, maybe you were refering to that. if you still think so, nobody is original than.

PETER
10-21-2011, 09:38 AM
I'm not hating your throw is good. it's the continuity and the shape of the top. As far as originality.... No they aren't really.... just about everything has been done and when it comes to graffiti it's taking a structured thing such as letters and applying something abstract to it which limits things a little then you take the fact that there are tons of writers and they are all on the internet looking at other people's work. It's only a matter of time that one style starts to invade as with any other trend. The idea of graffiti alone isn't original. There is very little in the way of originality anymore, music, movies, etc. it's all a formula that is repeated with different exponents depending on who is making the work. There are people who push a lot harder than others to bend the rules etc and apear to be more original than most.

Messi*TnR
10-21-2011, 10:10 AM
I'm not hating your throw is good. it's the continuity and the shape of the top. As far as originality.... No they aren't really.... just about everything has been done and when it comes to graffiti it's taking a structured thing such as letters and applying something abstract to it which limits things a little then you take the fact that there are tons of writers and they are all on the internet looking at other people's work. It's only a matter of time that one style starts to invade as with any other trend. The idea of graffiti alone isn't original. There is very little in the way of originality anymore, music, movies, etc. it's all a formula that is repeated with different exponents depending on who is making the work. There are people who push a lot harder than others to bend the rules etc and apear to be more original than most.

Well fucking put...i couldnt have said it better if my life depended on it..

dankbudz
10-21-2011, 10:17 AM
word

ZETA
10-21-2011, 11:20 AM
@know, i personally hate E's like that, but its all up to you. other than that i love it. and i dont think your K needds work... looks fine and looks like a K so i dont see a problem

ribcage
10-21-2011, 01:21 PM
As long as we are pointing out people's throws looking like someone elses. That Sneez looks flat out like the "local" (as in on bs) Nouv throw. Ceaze: I like the top and bottom one. I feel like pretty much all throws are generic and look like someone else so fuck the bs and rock what you like.

the thing you need to know is, nouv has throws for daaays. I have throws that look like nouvs throws before I even knew this site existed. IF its not a straight up letter bite, let it go and worry about yourself


.... just about everything has been done and when it comes to graffiti it's taking a structured thing such as letters and applying something abstract to it which limits things a little then you take the fact that there are tons of writers and they are all on the internet looking at other people's work. It's only a matter of time that one style starts to invade as with any other trend. The idea of graffiti alone isn't original. There is very little in the way of originality anymore, music, movies, etc. it's all a formula that is repeated with different exponents depending on who is making the work. There are people who push a lot harder than others to bend the rules etc and apear to be more original than most.

LOL no no no no no no no no no! Not even close, yes there are tons of wanna be writers, but very few real ones come to the internet. Originality? there a ton of people making up their own shit, but theres about 1000000 times more people who seek help in a retarded fashion. Then they dont get help the one way they looked, so they resort to means of biting, like coming on this site, and the 20 others like it. Where the rare real writers come, post their stuff, and have faggots bite it who will never make a big name enough for them to ever find out they were bitten.

But hey, your goal here should be to get as many toys as possible to have the same mentality as you, and then you should all QUIT! Make less competition for people who actually have a chance at being successful

PETER
10-21-2011, 02:13 PM
the thing you need to know is, nouv has throws for daaays. I have throws that look like nouvs throws before I even knew this site existed. IF its not a straight up letter bite, let it go and worry about yourself



LOL no no no no no no no no no! Not even close, yes there are tons of wanna be writers, but very few real ones come to the internet. Originality? there a ton of people making up their own shit, but theres about 1000000 times more people who seek help in a retarded fashion. Then they dont get help the one way they looked, so they resort to means of biting, like coming on this site, and the 20 others like it. Where the rare real writers come, post their stuff, and have faggots bite it who will never make a big name enough for them to ever find out they were bitten.

But hey, your goal here should be to get as many toys as possible to have the same mentality as you, and then you should all QUIT! Make less competition for people who actually have a chance at being successful If you're going to call me out you should look at why I even made the statement in the first place. Ceaze posted something and several people wanted to dog him about it looking like someone else and I pointed out that his throw looks like someone on here (I think throws are more often than not generic anyway).
Yes there are people who do something better than others and have an "original take" on things. I clearly made that point in my prevous post. You missed the point of that post. It is a writen language and we are ATTEMPTING to make something original, but at the end of the day it's all been done. Every song has been sung and story told.... the words are just rearranged. Graffiti is nothing new. Graffiti for some is about getting up more than the next guy or going bigger or whatever, but it's still just creativly written words that is nothing new. Diam and totem pushed things but its been done now and they just put a twist on what had already been done. NWA pushed boundries, but it's been done now and it was done before them. By definition nothing is original. And if by some stretch of the imagination you believe your graff to be original take another look. It is an english word used readily writen in the most basic of forms. Your throws are decent, but again it's a word and you have influences from other writers just as anyone else.... and in the end it's a word writen just like they have been for thousands of years. Unless you're making up your own language which would be original and then you go spray paint it on something which is unoriginal it doesn't matter it's been done and all you did was put a little bit of twist on something unoriginal.

ribcage
10-21-2011, 02:18 PM
^im not gonna read that all.

Im not calling you out, I think... I just disagree with you. Nothing you say will change my mind, your brainwashed

PETER
10-21-2011, 02:23 PM
the only reason I pointed out that Sneez's throw looked like nouv is people where calling out the new guy and I was making the point that if you want to do that you should do it to everyone. Not that I give a single fuck who looks like who. I liked both folks in question's work.

ribcage
10-21-2011, 02:30 PM
? someone calls someone out, let them deal with it. They should be capable of defending themself

knowtheledge
10-21-2011, 02:56 PM
But hey, your goal here should be to get as many toys as possible to have the same mentality as you, and then you should all QUIT! Make less competition for people who actually have a chance at being successful

your passive pessimism is laughable my dude...

ribcage
10-21-2011, 05:30 PM
lol, indeed:D

LIZARD
10-21-2011, 05:50 PM
37876

crits

TBS
10-21-2011, 10:30 PM
i like the Y and E dude. the other letters, not so much. fuck around with them though, as i noticed with the exchange, it's such an strange combination of letters to make flow in a throw smoothly (not sure in anyone else agrees) so just keep throwing stuff down and posting it here. we'll let you know when it's hot as fuck!

LIZARD
10-22-2011, 12:42 AM
yeah havin a T in the middle sucks cuz no matter what i do i always feel like I'm hiding it to much so it looks like an r...ill keep tweaking it thanks

skinaone
10-22-2011, 02:30 PM
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OK the top of the Y is ok i mean its not my likings but its nice, i would go with a capital E and take the huge rectangle, T is too STIFF, I is nice but to pushed away from the other letters, BTW the dimencions are wrong IMO

SneeZ
10-22-2011, 08:07 PM
man, thats bullshit. yes, your brainwashed

skinaone
10-22-2011, 08:56 PM
who
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uhhh crits

ceaze
10-22-2011, 11:17 PM
who
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uhhh crits


that s is ugly, k looks sort of like an H, the i is weak, the n look like a lowercase H, and the A almost looks like an r, also, stop closing off the bottom right legs of your letters, thats so generic...keep working on it tho, has potential.

sir.to.you.
10-23-2011, 12:20 AM
@yeti dono if im feelin the little tumor on the end of the T.
FRESH OUT THE BING SPOT!!!stuck at home for a while, looks like its back to doodlin...crits yo!
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6213/6271635096_babac827f2_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6271635096/)
Photo 234 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6271635096/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

MyNipsAreHard
10-23-2011, 09:23 AM
Skina- everything is dope. except the N still looks like an h. i see how it is an N but i could see how people would think its a lowercase H.
Sir.to.you- i like the throw. but i dont like the bottom loops. and the little line at the bottom of the E. but other than that the throw is dope. the piece need some work

skinaone
10-23-2011, 10:41 AM
that s is ugly, k looks sort of like an H, the i is weak, the n look like a lowercase H, and the A almost looks like an r, also, stop closing off the bottom right legs of your letters, thats so generic...keep working on it tho, has potential.
to be completely honest
i see nothing generic about it, the S might be original not ugly lol i understand the N looking like an H but the K? i being weak? idk what youre talking about about the A looking like an R i will post a pic of an SHIHR throw and you will see the difference, thanks for the crit but it makes no sence, not trien to be an ass but thats just what i think
@my nips are hard , thanks anything else?

skinaone
10-23-2011, 10:30 PM
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MN Nice
10-24-2011, 11:13 PM
Hope you're not taggin with your name on your board. Might as well rock a nametag on your chest while you bomb.

ribcage
10-24-2011, 11:21 PM
lmao your assuming too much breh, itd only be like wearing a name tag if his name was up and known lol

MN Nice
10-24-2011, 11:28 PM
lol true

Shell703
10-25-2011, 10:10 AM
Don't know if it shows...

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong001.jpg

SEOT - Try evening out the E a little bit, and get rid of that loop on the bottom of the T, shit's ugly and I'd close up the hole in the O to make the letters look more like they all belong to the same family.

SynOne
10-25-2011, 03:25 PM
Shell if that says Ear, I would advise a new name. Even though Earsnot's name isn't just "Ear" he does throws that are just ear. OTher than that. Bring your letters closer together.

tophaa
10-25-2011, 07:33 PM
Hey you guys, got a few things that I could use some feedback on.
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This is with really poor quality paint, like super back dollar cans. Please don't hate for paint quality haha, it's a bit wompyjawed but feeback would be nice :).
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Not necessarily a 'throw up,' it's just something that I put together.
Thank you all!

H1P30N3R
10-25-2011, 07:40 PM
stick to the notepad for now man loose the highlights do some research on your bubble lettters and practice alot!!

sir.to.you.
10-25-2011, 10:46 PM
i dont im not able to bomb shit for a while so iv been fuckin words up.thanks for your concern though cuz i never coulda thought of somethin so genius. what would i do with out the Einstein's around me to give me a hand.

Shell703
10-26-2011, 12:06 AM
SynOne- Thanks for the feedback, it's DAR you have any suggests on how to make the D look more like a "D", i've been having a hard time with it.

ribcage
10-26-2011, 12:16 AM
and that was actually at RIB bein typee tough nuts knowin everything about everyone over there.

what are you saying? I dont even remember ever adressing you...

NouveauP
10-26-2011, 12:47 AM
Vivid, PESOE said it all. Practice a shit ton. Research some throws. Gain some inspiration. Emulate then make your own.
SEOT- it has some potential, but you really need to work on your shapes. Keep hitting the books and clean your hand up. The bottom of the T is by far the worst part though. Consistency is key. And a thing to know about drop shadows is that should be the EXACT shape of your initial outline.No fatter, no longer, no wider. I still have a lot of trouble with this myself.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0503.jpg

DCSKATER
10-26-2011, 03:28 AM
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Dusk oner
10-26-2011, 05:23 AM
Just started writing need help, any help will be appreciated.
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SynOne
10-26-2011, 07:31 AM
Nouv, no doubt I'm a toy, but I sure read that as Klrus. Imo your A looks like a R. Even though that would be a kick ass R.

Dusk, I'm colorblind. So I can't see nothing but black with a few highlights and a red outline.

NouveauP
10-26-2011, 07:50 AM
Syn, I'm still a toy too, but it's most definitely an A. In an R, the right side bend would bend in ABOVE that center line instead of below it. Thanks for the crit though.

Dusk - Work on keeping all of your letters consistent for now. Sketch on some graph paper to really see if you're keeping everything proportional. And remember, crawl before you walk.

SynOne
10-26-2011, 08:53 AM
Nouv, you're right. Now that I really look back at it. It does look like an A. Sick flow in it. Keep it up.

knowtheledge
10-26-2011, 05:44 PM
dollar can throws

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6113/6284109809_1f40b5d117.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6109/6284626624_529629f028.jpg

sir.to.you.
10-26-2011, 06:21 PM
@knowtheledge that new jedi shits tight right!

Phat 2
10-26-2011, 06:28 PM
have the left side of the M be as high as the rest of the word, experiment some more with K's and E's and youre good

knowtheledge
10-26-2011, 08:17 PM
@sty fuck yea dude jmt fovever!

n thanks phat ima do dat

H1P30N3R
10-27-2011, 01:57 AM
nouv I dig the the throw
dc skater and dusk stick to the books and research right now
muse - phat hit it on the head your m and e's need a little work.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1319698394.jpg

Shell703
10-27-2011, 02:09 AM
Muke - I agree with Phat, and try bringing the E up in line with the rest of the throw
Nouv - That shit looks straight to me, no crits...
Top - get those letters consistent as first then start playing with different sizes later
DC - I'd work with the RBK for right now, work on the lettering and not so much on the highlights and reflections
Dusk - Try keeping the letters balanced for right now, the D looks bottom left heavy, and the U looks bottom right heavy, the S looks right heavy and the K just has a big wart on the bottom.
Hip - The E's look too hidden and the S looks too squished in the middle, try giving equal space to each letter.

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/Throwa001.jpg

NouveauP
10-27-2011, 02:59 PM
Muke- The M and the U aren't too bad. M actually has some style on it. I would shape it up a little better, but it's a good start. the K and E need some work for sure. And just your whole throw could be proportioned better. But keep at it, it has potential.

Pesoe - I have to agree your first E is hidden. Bring it out more. And I think the leaning style you have (and I have :D ) looks better when each letter is aligned. Look at the size difference from your P and your last E. Use some graph paper to keep them all the same height. I used to have the same problem (and still get caught doing it a lot).

Dar- That's more of a straight letter. Try to do throws with minimal lines and in smooth motions (one smooth motion is optimal. My throws rarely have more than 3 lines per letter) Throws are meant to be done quickly. Research some throws and copy a few to get the jist of how to form some letters. Then base your letters off of that. But remember, don't bite, just draw influence.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0504.jpg

knowtheledge
10-27-2011, 06:29 PM
trying new ish, used some racked excel paint with ny fats.. works alright but the paint is mad thin

and the second flick is garbage

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6112/6287558630_e5b7cc19d4.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6093/6287038447_ec4ef273b0.jpg

H1P30N3R
10-27-2011, 06:40 PM
first m is proper I personally dont dig the e still seems the middle of the e is being hidden or smashed ... but over all a nice toss

Shell703
10-28-2011, 06:49 AM
Muke - The M looks a lot bigger than the other letters for some reason.

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong008.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong004.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong009.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong002.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong003.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong007.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong006.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong005.jpg

sir.to.you.
10-28-2011, 02:50 PM
word thanks for the crits a few pages back. much appreciated!

H1P30N3R
10-28-2011, 08:12 PM
dar try a capital d with a lowercase a and r

Flawless Victory
10-28-2011, 08:28 PM
Dar, you posted some that were pretty dope, but too many for me to point any of them out.

.Cuore
10-29-2011, 12:01 AM
on the 4th DAR pic, diggin the one extreme bottom left.

edit: moreso the one right above it.

H1P30N3R
10-29-2011, 02:31 AM
these are a lil sloppy but whatever

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1319854247.jpg

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1319853424.jpg