Throwies

[MASE P_2s]

yea this is old i changed it to a sn

[MASE P_2s]

crits snaghttp://farm7.static.flickr.com/6090/6118381046_ee13b71d09.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/)
snag ekul throwy p2s (http://www.flickr.com/photos/snagscts/6118381046/) by CantTouchSociety (http://www.flickr.com/people/snagscts/), on Flickr

this is my new one

[ERAYS]

The E is fairly solid, but every other letter falls off. the R could be confused for an A, and just has odd shapes in it in general. The A isn't really much of a letter. The Y looks like an S and the S is just odd. I wouldn't do those weird squiggle lines either. Keep at it. Keep it simple for now. The ERAYS hand at the bottom isn't too bad, again minus the squiggles. Stay up.

thanks for the crits! I personally dont like the A either and yea the R and S need work but IMO the y just needs some work on its structure and proportions but thats just me...

[LIZARD]

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something quick i need some ideas for my throw R, its looks forced idk i can't figure it out...dont mind the ahhhh piss above it that was my buddy and i got bored so i added drips cuz we all now they look better on paper lol lmk what ya think

[Strange Journeys]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/62118673@N04/6158397880/

another fway spot, all sloppy :(
im not really feeling that yo, make all the letters similar to the e

[skinaone]

this is my new one
i like the old S waaayyy better

[skinaone]

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the last one is my original throw the others are jus fooling around now CRIT MY SHET

[EWL24]

skina - the second one is the best, i dont like how the bottom leg of the S goes all the way up, and on the other two the holes in the letters are to big

crits please
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[skinaone]

^^^ coming from you?
comeone guys anyone?

[LIZARD]

skina:whats up with the lines that r in the shadow, is it supposed to be a highlight cuz those would be on the opposite side of the shadow i think...either way i think u should ditch em all and leave just plain black

give crits to get crits, just cuz u don't like his shit doesn't mean he can't tell u what he thinks u need to change,

[EWL24]

fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better

[LIZARD]

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rough draft, i think i wanna take the lower part of the s and put it behind the curve a little instead of infront...crits

ewal: maybe make the bottom half of ur e one long curve instead of makin it go up and back down again. put a shadow or something on it to give it some life

[vems]

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any crits please? besides the poor line quality, this was done quickly at work lol

[Kostonee]

Vemsone I like it man, make the lines cleaner and sharpen the top of the V and it'll be nice bro

[vems]

ya no doubt i just threw it together in 2 mins while i was on a call at work, ima re do it with color tonight

[Phat 2]

skina, the second throw is the best, the other two have wide spread legs, and suck. exactly like prostitutes. if you wouldn't want your throws to be prostitutes you'd do like the second flick and close those spaces up

[bak]

bump that ewal, only clean shit on this page.
vems work on ur tag nd the e hole looks odd. the v would look more soilid if the left arm was a solid line instead of the lil curves.
seyr? keep practicing that throw, looks solid.
skina that shitty generic style is played out. give crits nt pussy lips.

[skinaone]

fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better
lol some one got mad :)
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw

[skinaone]

fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better
lol some one got mad :)
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw

[MN Nice]

Crits yo!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00358-20110921-2235.jpg?t=1316663350

[skinaone]

work on that M the U is ight need to be cleaner try an upper case E and the S is ok

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6159/6172647453_23459fdcb1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
oie_22212037lY5lfEc9 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
lookin for crits.

[PETER]

looks like FPD to me. The D doesn't seem to match the style of the other two letters. I suck at throws.... bad... but I suggest trying something more round... lowercase F and E maybe... might flow better for you.

[vems]

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i know it increases in size, i like it that way...all other crits welcome ;)

[Norfsuthr]

Thanks pete. I'm goin for a funky type of style so I'm not worried about flow yet till I get some solid letters to fuc with. Originally letter was gonna be separate from eachother but i thought it might be a dece toss.

And vems I think your V needs a little more structure, the M can lose the little notch on the far right, E could do with some negative space on the bottom half, and keep working on the S. ALso missed a little drop shadow on the s. Nice fill though, keep at it.

[bak]

that F is proper tho fed but i second wat pete said.

[LIZARD]

new v lmk what ya think
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[skinaone]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6159/6172647453_23459fdcb1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
oie_22212037lY5lfEc9 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6172647453/)
lookin for crits.

i love this :p

[Saiko]

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Khrits Pleez

[LIZARD]

atom:listen to the crits that people r telling u or their gonna stop given em...put a hole in the A and move that T over so it doesn't look like an r

just doodling crits
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[Saiko]

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My bad sevr that's an older one; i haven't got many new ones

[LIZARD]

A's better but bring the T over so u can see where the horizontal bar hits the vertical bar on the left side like u can see on the right...is the top throw and the bottom one both done by u cuz the top ones defiantly better lol K's hurting a little though

is the a backwards on the top throw on purpose?

[Saiko]

Yeah, the a looks really weird if i do it normally.
I did both, and k's are a whore to work with. I'm trying to work out another style for atom. The top one pry looks better cus i've been writing it longer.
I'll extend the top bar of the t and see what comes.
Thank you very much for the advice.

[Zest3]

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atom - I wouldn't extend the legs of the A and M like that. Try putting a hole in the O and see what it looks like. Also, the legs on the last one of the A don't look proportional, not because they're not the same length but because they're not the same width.

[PETER]

Sevr: I like both, but feel like the S on the first one doesn't fit. The rest of it I like a lot. On the second one I feel like the pointy bit at the top of the V should be on the other side to keep with the rest of the letters and put a space between the point on the R (which reminds me of flame boy from spitfire) giving it more balance. Looking good on both though. Maybe a face in the E on the first one.... it has a lip and mouth.... pierce his lip ;)

Zest3: That SO is zest fully clean. well done.

[vems]

here i re-did the outline to make the letters stand out better, and hopefully add some more structure to the v a bit, also added some more effects to the fill.

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[PETER]

vems: I dig it a lot. I like the lowercase E, but I think you could do a better one. knock out a few hallow E's.

[vems]

thanks man, yeah this was the first of this style i threw up, ive evolved it a little bit over the past couple days, after i finish that sek throwback ill post up another throwie

[MN Nice]

Crits yo!

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00358-20110921-2235.jpg?t=1316663350

bump for more crits and less talk on this page.

[PETER]

I suggest filling up the gap on the M. The U, E, S all have the same flow the M does not.

[LiveFreeDieFree]

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Decided to venture away from the simple stereotypical throwie letters and added my own style to it.

[LIZARD]

that Y definitely needs to changing cuz the only reason i knew what it said was cuz of ur other posts lol...good job on everything else though and doin ur own thing

[vems]

yah that y can easily be fixed by adding in a line comming in from the left arm, other than that i actually like it better than ur other stuff, keep workin/tweakin that throwie man and its a keeper.

[skinaone]

this is deprressing

[LiveFreeDieFree]

this is deprressing

Then take some zoloft and give some crits instead of making a pointless post.

[Shroomsh]

33936 each letter is about 2 metres wide

[PETER]

Hayst: Agreed. I knew it was a Y from other posts, but at first I thought it was an S.

[. lewd]

do a proper fill in if its over some toy scribbles because it looks like your piece got disssed

[skinaone]

Then take some zoloft and give some crits instead of making a pointless post.
theres no point cause all yall going to do is bitch and not listen to them so i rather just say that

[LiveFreeDieFree]

theres no point cause all yall going to do is bitch and not listen to them so i rather just say that
I haven't made a single bitchy post yet. Youu're the one making the bitchy post, here..

[shush4]

my new throwie:

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=33969&d=1316987374

crits please it says shush but do my "h" look like a k?

[aaesoo]

take out that little nub on the h's, and your u seems to bend a different way at the bottom then the rest of the letters. beside that not bad.

[shush4]

take out that little nub on the h's, and your u seems to bend a different way at the bottom then the rest of the letters. beside that not bad.

thanks for the advice i'll keep it in mind. btw lmao at your sig

[skinaone]

I haven't made a single bitchy post yet. Youu're the one making the bitchy post, here..

lol your right
but still kinda depresing

[SynOne]

Crit it mad hard.

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[shush4]

Crit it mad hard.

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honestly. im no expert but my first thought was wtf is that... even as far as throw ups go i think you should start way simpler. if i didn't know what it said i would think it said su and not really be able to make out the last character

[Shroomsh]

Yeah, it looks decent in person, cos its chrome, but it woulda taken forever to fill proper, took about 20 mins to fill that much

[Phat 2]

shroomsh, that A isn't an A :P

edit, flicks!

last night, excellent spot on main street, slaps oncoming traffic plain in the face:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/303078_280546411965348_202093693143954_1170627_364 741120_n.jpg

this morning: TO THE BUFF !

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/294871_287312977962285_100000507545549_1110876_495 010028_n.jpg

...fuck that

[vems]

shroomsh, that A isn't an A :P

edit, flicks!


last night, excellent spot on main street, slaps oncoming traffic plain in the face:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/303078_280546411965348_202093693143954_1170627_364 741120_n.jpg

this morning: TO THE BUFF !

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/294871_287312977962285_100000507545549_1110876_495 010028_n.jpg

...fuck that

dam they fast to buff where u at! nice tho i really like, only thing is, get rid of those little points on the bottom of the letters.

[skinaone]

i told him that so many times already

[theking]

why is he on a ladder?

[Phat 2]

take a wild guess... or more like a wild look

[geza_arts]

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a quick trow up ARTS yeah.

[SynOne]

Kind of a old throwie I used. But I got bored of it, but I came back to it... And I like it.

Crits. (Yes I know S is not proportional, and yes now I realize I'm missing the line on my N.)

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[ribcage]

looks like ass

[theking]

take a wild guess... or more like a wild look
unless your a midget you shouldnt need a ladder... hes like 1 foot of the ground above his throwie

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6188172818_66c1c00cf4.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
oie_2781955K2p1KFTZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
ED isnt quite right but you get the idea.

[Shroomsh]

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[Phat 2]

unless your a midget you shouldnt need a ladder... hes like 1 foot of the ground above his throwie

dude, he's 4 ladder steps high, how did that add up to just one foot to you? :P
and he's on a ladder because he was cleaning the high top of that shutter
those 2 shutters have been closed for years and no one's touched them yet. they're filthy, you should've seen the dust fall off them whil he was cleaning em. damn.
but turns out I gave the owner a wake up call by bombing em. that worker's cleaning the dust off so that he could later paint both shutters with white paint... I passed by again later and the things were squeeky clean haha.

[sema]

looks like it left a hallow less he went back over again p kinda looks like t at first glance tho

[vems]

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super clean man, i like the dusty fill with the solid shade lines.


dude, he's 4 ladder steps high, how did that add up to just one foot to you? :P
and he's on a ladder because he was cleaning the high top of that shutter
those 2 shutters have been closed for years and no one's touched them yet. they're filthy, you should've seen the dust fall off them whil he was cleaning em. damn.
but turns out I gave the owner a wake up call by bombing em. that worker's cleaning the dust off so that he could later paint both shutters with white paint... I passed by again later and the things were squeeky clean haha.

oh sweet, so they primed them up for you to paint again, how nice..;)

[PETER]

be sure to thank them when you do

[Norfsuthr]

Geza- that r gets too small, and dont do throws at the bottom unless you fit the bottom of the letters too.

Syn- be steadier with your hand or faster, maybe simplify your letters a bit and straighten them up.

Phat not hating but you should change your throws up a bit and progress it. I get the idea of recognition but you have to let your letters progress too, do a few different throws or something.


http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6188172818_66c1c00cf4.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
oie_2781955K2p1KFTZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6188172818/)
repost for crits

[Shroomsh]

Fed, put the letters closer togeter, or slightly overlap them, otherwise, good letters

[Saiko]

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Crits, please

[Strange Journeys]

actually do a throw up man those just look like really weak straights

[Norfsuthr]

I'm working on like throwups that aren't overlapping, its intentional. Apparently I don't have it right yet, so thanks

[rolling fresh kush]

bump

[rolling fresh kush]

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/IMG_0309210.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/fg.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/k.jpg

old

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/kikj.jpg

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/002.jpg

[SneeZ]

lol, you could post all the flix at once, man.

Some stupid flicks for crits. The shitty colors were all I had here. In diff apartment, I keep my stuff.
For simpler ones I didn't get crit, so i tried more complex, turned out looking like shit. Fucked up the second one with old white marker.

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Edit: and phat, i think ur usual throw is much better than this ph bomb.

[Shroomsh]

kush, your a gaycunt, stop spamming all the threads, post everything you want to say in one post, stop raping shit for credits

sneez, that first one is fresh, but the n looks odd with the curl thing, almost get away with it because of the rest of the letters, but looks eh

[LIZARD]

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crits..

sneez: first ones dope but i agree with shroom that bend on the N looks weird. i can see y u put it there cuz it does match but it just doesn't look right if that makes sense lol

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6160/6193591753_af4091106b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6193591753/)
oie_295642heRVc8xl (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6193591753/)

sevr- the face doesnt work too well in the r. try it in a lowercase e or on the s. dont do exclamation marks. just keep practicing.

[MyNipsAreHard]

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Havent done a throw in a while

[PETER]

Sneez: Both look good. I like the top one most and the second one would look better with a solid fill. I agree with them about the N, but it works.

Sevr: I like the V and R, but don't much care for that S and E. The S looks way out of place and the E looks more like what I picture your S looking like for this just with out the chunk at the bottom. I suggest styling your S like that E and using a lower case E styled like your R (which I like a lot)

[vems]

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quickie wit some new markers, critsss besides teh sloppey lines

[MN Nice]

Make a hole in the head of your E. Like how Cope does his, it'll look much better.

[vems]

like the E in my avi? i usually do it that way, jus wanted to change up a bit

[sane.]

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[Strange Journeys]

ay dog thats dope you should move to NY and get down on the bombing scene out there,i think you're ready!

[Skeng]

Lol'd at sane, don't people know there history nowadays?

[TheDoctor]

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Just some ideas ive been playin with. Anybody know if the name is taken?? The one with the arrows needs to not have arrows. They are wack as fuck XD haha

[MyNipsAreHard]

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Havent done a throw in a while

Repost for CRITS please

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blue and white one is alot older. i just did the top one tonight.
crits are well appreciated

[MN Nice]

That bottom one is bangin. First one has potential.

[Strange Journeys]

go with top more original

[Phat 2]

my nips are hard, use the bottom one for sure. it's for the win big time. except change the K because it's more "throwie" style, while the rest of the throwie has more of a "simps" style to it... so go for a regular 3-bar K it would be heaps nicer.
/2cents

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6015/6208795521_f246bf1a30.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6208795521/)
oie_404120ys7BYzoP (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6208795521/)
Still workin with the top of the y. one line tho except the holes and shit.

Block that top one looks good, keep working it. Make the letters the same height more.

[Pitlord]

My first ever Throwie. Cant seem to get the hang of it tho...

http://i.imgur.com/FKLda.jpg

[Saiko]

My first ever Throwie. Cant seem to get the hang of it tho...

http://i.imgur.com/FKLda.jpg
I kinda like the style. it's not those same damn generic throw letters.
On crits, though, keep at it; your letters need a bit more definition(the a and d look the same).
Just my opinion.

[skinaone]

ok dude tell me what generic means, for real ive seen like 40 people saying thats so generic, and they all have different meanings -.-

[Saiko]

ok dude tell me what generic means, for real ive seen like 40 people saying thats so generic, and they all have different meanings -.-
I mean overused,general,typical or bland. Or boring.

[skinaone]

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so my shit is generic acording to a bunch of yall

[ribcage]

lol dude cmon, why would you listen to a jackoff like saiko (that cant even draw a tag, let alone paint one) about throws when clearly he doesnt know shit.

Throws are a personal adaptation of an already set style. New ideas and originality are a plus, but if you throw a bunch of fuckin squares up on a wall and call it a throw, its not a throw. A good throw is more hand movement and style, rather than the letters themselves(not meaning the letter can suck). Yall need to focus less on wether or not your throw looks like the rest, and worry more about why a throw is used and painting it.

p.s. skina your throws are fine

[MN Nice]

Please paint the closed one more skin. I like that one more.

[Saiko]

Please paint the closed one more skin. I like that one more.
+1

[skinaone]

lol dude cmon, why would you listen to a jackoff like saiko (that cant even draw a tag, let alone paint one) about throws when clearly he doesnt know shit.

Throws are a personal adaptation of an already set style. New ideas and originality are a plus, but if you throw a bunch of fuckin squares up on a wall and call it a throw, its not a throw. A good throw is more hand movement and style, rather than the letters themselves(not meaning the letter can suck). Yall need to focus less on wether or not your throw looks like the rest, and worry more about why a throw is used and painting it.

p.s. skina your throws are fine
ight my man <3


Please paint the closed one more skin. I like that one more.
ill think about it

[porkyPig]

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/AUSTIN008.jpg

[Phat 2]

weren't you banned the other day?

[knowtheledge]

Sup people.. some trows:
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reads quel, but I ain't feelin the 'q' too much..

[PETER]

Quel: looks like Guel.

Skina1: the top throw looks more "generic" than your other one. It looks more like the standard throw... Not to say it doesn't look good. I like the yellow one a lot.

[MTK]

Quel... i like all of them but mabey you can turn the q over and bring down the tail a lil... just a crit cuz it looks like a G

[bak]

everything on this page needs improvement.
keep practicing

[ZETA]

Of course it is a toy section, so practice is assumed.

Personally i think theyre both pretty toy, but maybe you guys can help.


Which is better? Quick oneliner or the top one35886

[bak]

work on the letter structure. not a fan of ur tags or top thro but the bottom one with practice can become decent. try simpler legible letters like ur bottom E

[PETER]

Zeta: I like the concept of the first one and think with some work could be decent. The T needs some deffenition.

[knowtheledge]

messin around with this..
that trows older tho figured i'd post it still

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[MN Nice]

Quel, your q is just a fucked up S. Try again

[knowtheledge]

haha fuck i know.. how bout that last blue one
its the only one that looks like a q

mind as well post these.. disregard dat first letter

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[MN Nice]

Thats better actually. Didn't see that one. Keep working with it, thats probably the best of them all.

[ZETA]

Yeah QUEL, the only thing really BAD is the Q and thats only cause it looks like a G. But the E is kinda eh... real simp, but its still a nice throw. And you seem to be getting it up so i still give you props

[Phat 2]

how come your bruzer tags are so awesome when the tags in the flicks above are lame?

[knowtheledge]

aha i just started writing Quel a couple days ago i'm still fuckin with it but ye i write both cause i couldnt stand my bruzr throw

[MN Nice]

Dumb choice. stick with Bruzr and get a new throw.

[knowtheledge]

thanks buddy

fixed it up a lil
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[MN Nice]

Get a hole in the bottom of your B.

[knowtheledge]

ayo retok you got a basic structure goin try bringin those lines in a bit n maybe make your letters taller

some mo trows

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yeye baked sketchin

[sema]

losen the arrows is a step in the right direction

[ZETA]

you do know that one of the greatest writers ever is named REVOK right?...

[knowtheledge]

losen? ya mean lose em right?

[MoF.]

you do know that one of the greatest writers ever is named REVOK right?...
yea true, but people dont seem to mind wen somone writes dope and completly bites Cope2 style and its not like im biting of him

[MTK]

yea true, but people dont seem to mind wen somone writes dope and completly bites Cope2 style and its not like im biting of him Actually every time I see someone write dope of bs.com it always becomes a huge fight

[MyNipsAreHard]

yeah RETOK, i would think about changing my name if i were you

[knowtheledge]

meh..

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[TBS]

some bullshit.. seriously cannot seem to do anything at the moment. too much work, not enough time to sit and think shit through. anyway, it is what it is, all progression and that.
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[geargff]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6034/6222105236_67047fbf1c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6222105236/)
BAISE (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6222105236/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6035/6219073450_ea76f7d67a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6219073450/)
BAISE (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6219073450/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6154/6167476895_fd09283b8a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6167476895/)
BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/photos/baiseone/6167476895/) by BAISEone (http://www.flickr.com/people/baiseone/), on Flickr

[MTK]

TBS... i really like that pink one and the lil charater

[TBS]

Baise you're lines are pretty shakey, and the A looks really tall and skinny compared to the S and E. i think you should spend a while just throwing this shit on paper over and over again. it's an alright start i guess but needs a ton of work.

cheers MTK, it's a little sloppy. i don't like the E either. been trying shit out with an upper case E that i think i can work with. i think the lower case one like in that pink one is a bit fat looking.

[knowtheledge]

drunk shit

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[vems]

TBS... i really like that pink one and the lil charater


ya that pink one is dope homie, may i suggest making the holes in the B and R and E white tho, to match the O a lil more & cuz the shadow is white in the backround, idk may look better,.

[MN Nice]

@Broke - on the pink one, the idea of the middle bump on R's is to match up with the line coming off of the left leg. This may not be the best example to show, but this is what I mean:

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00396-20111008-1052.jpg?t=1318089752

[ribcage]

you suck at my R lolz
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0810111936.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0518111926.jpg

[MN Nice]

Yep. Just to show him what I meant though.

[ribcage]

...not the first time dis little nigglets bitten me. how my ankles taste?

[MN Nice]

Its not like I'm using the shit. Calm your tits.

[ribcage]

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/53/109082194_32de7d9bb9.jpg

[knowtheledge]

aha^

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6031/6224744162_abcb8927fe.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6212/6224220537_8fba0da398.jpg

[TBS]

the bump in the R, i duno why i even put that in there. i don't like it, and the white back ground is cause... well maybe i forgot to colour it :p. but cheers for the crits. any crits on the others?

Ribs, the T on the REFLECT doesn't quite fit in i don't think. the Reach on the other hand is cool. the H pops to fuck!! not too sure on the MASSIVE set of balls though....

[Rites]

Rib- da white and black ones ill, the outline on the train could be cleaner.

[ribcage]

wachu mean breh, if u seen it in person ud be able to see the lil spray dots from how clean my hand movements were. Idk where it was benched at, but where I painted it I had to reach to paint it too

[skinaone]

nah the throw are good the A on the first freight is kinda hiden but still looks good

[killroywashere]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6162/6227353972_9e7f5045d5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227353972/)

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6154/6226835595_ec375bb711.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6226835595/)

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6179/6227335644_8b9b75173a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/68449554@N07/6227335644/)

@knowledge - your bombs are original but could prolly go with some tweaking. i think they lack flow
@ribcage - whats up with a painted bomb sometime?

[TastyMcNasty]

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2422.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2421.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2420.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2413.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2405.jpg

[ribcage]

aaaye, you stepped ya game up. that dope throw is dope

[TastyMcNasty]

thanks bro, been going hard since school started

[ribcage]

back to the in class doodling eh?

[TastyMcNasty]

nothing better to do, physics is easy as fuck, and theres nothing better to do in social (AP).

[ribcage]

ah I remember taking a physics class. I failed it, but I jacked a 1250 ml bulb flask a few test tubes and an ammo sized box of amonium nitrate. Took coneptual physics the next year and passed that shit hella easy, also stole a few lab materials, most broke though

[TastyMcNasty]

haha why would you do that? whats the point

[ribcage]

first flask I had (only like 750 ml I tried to make into a bong... never worked out, the shit broke. turned the other 1 into a ghetto stove top vape. But idk dude, why does anybody do any stupid stuff when their young and in highschool? I think I may have been tryin to impress some underclassmen and peers or some bullshit. Still got the test tubes and shit. I might find a good use for em some day, you never know. O and I took the amonium nitrate because when you catch it on fire it smokes a lot. I made a sick ass smoke bomb bomb with it. smoked for 20-30 seconds and then boom. super easy to make too. shyit I should give yall a lesson on some super easy home made explosives

[TastyMcNasty]

haha ya man i get it. for example i stole a MJ doll from my band teacher for shits n gigs hahah. ended up just throwing it out of a bus ahah

[ribcage]

.............not the same at all. my shit at least had a purpose.

[TastyMcNasty]

i guess, maybe it was because she;s a bitch, and i wanted to piss her off. or you know, being high was a factor i guess

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6174/6232271291_2ceed5b4e5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6232271291/)
oie_1122815DCwuv8uG (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6232271291/)

What ive been putting up lately. the 8 is squished, dont mind that.. crits otherwise? I feel like flow is an issue, but that will come.

[SynOne]

New Throwie, Crits.

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[Norfsuthr]

Use fewer lines, it'll be faster and come off smoother than using like 10 lines in your toss, plus it forces you to be creative and efficient with where you take each line. Fuck with some other shapes and ideas besides bubbles.

[MyNipsAreHard]

Norf- not sure what the first one or two letters are supposed to be. but the O and A look sick to me.
Syn- have the line in the Y curve up not down. and what norf said

[Norfsuthr]

its 8you haha. Guess it needs some fixing up, it was a quicky tho.

[MyNipsAreHard]

haha gotcha... i see it now. the 8 isnt really defined and neither is the Y. but i like the concept for the Y alot

[skinaone]

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2413.jpg
are you fucking kidding?
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[TastyMcNasty]

skina, whats the problem? you think you're the first one to use big gaps in your letters? you think you're the first one to separate your letters in two (i.e A, R)? no, you are a toy with a huge ass ego, blindly calling bites, when clearly they are two very unique styles. now stop being such a cunt. kthxbai

[SynOne]

Imo, gaps are ugly. Skina, use the filled one lol.

[skinaone]

skina, whats the problem? you think you're the first one to use big gaps in your letters? you think you're the first one to separate your letters in two (i.e A, R)? no, you are a toy with a huge ass ego, blindly calling bites, when clearly they are two very unique styles. now stop being such a cunt. kthxbai
im not talking bout the gaps you moron
ive never seen an S thats starts like mine till you came along, eggo? fuck no im just not one of those writters that are all up on other *****s dicks

[TastyMcNasty]

if you've never seen an S remotely similar to yours, clearly you haven't looked hard. and as far as the similarities in the S go, they are NOTHING alike

[skinaone]

***** i posted a danm S like that about 2 months ago
and they do look alike -.-
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i posted the exact same throw
but in marker -.-

[knowtheledge]

Tasty, those are steee even tho its mad similar to skuf's s.. n skina they aint even that close dog!

drawin on some old skate mags.. still trying to get my r's down

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6167/6235634763_8780a96f29.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6119/6235633217_18ce5e648a.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6217/6236157004_419eaba425.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

YO TASTY your sig is my wallpaper

[TastyMcNasty]

YO TASTY your sig is my wallpaper

fuckin love the black dahlia murder

[PETER]

first throw I've come up with I like. Crits. I know the lines are shakey, but it's the first time I did a fill and outline of it and I have chugged a shit load of coffee this morning.

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[skinaone]

what does it say
but the shakey ass lines dont look that bad
but your keeping it nice and simple,im feeling the K if it even is a K

[PETER]

Says Antik

[ribcage]

its awful, try harder

[PETER]

I will. what is horrible is out of all my attempts over the years... mind you it's been many since I have tried... this is probly my best throw to date. I've never really much cared for them and have always been shit at them so I've never really given it much effort. Lately I've seen several that have given me motivation to build one of my own.

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/319231_288313344521988_202093693143954_1198744_287 998099_n.jpg

your comments

[NouveauP]

The HA connect looks pretty sick even though they aren't too proportional. Just seems to work here. I like the idea of the backwards P. Give your H a back to lean on, but I don't think you pulled it off well enough here. Mostly the indention in the top, I think. Just round it out. I'd avoid using a lowercase t in a throw. It's just a really awkward structure and I think a capital T would be more effective. The 2 isn't too bad.

PETER - study some throws homie. Thats lookin rough. And try just drawing simple shapes for a while like circles squares and triangles, but try to draw them proportionally and CLEAN. Maybe try to exhale as you move you hand. Try drawing with your elbow rather than your wrists. These may not necessarily work, but just try to find what works for you.

[MyNipsAreHard]

Peter- looks like you were having a heart attack while doing those lines. work on cleanliness. and the I looks like a C. maybe make them a lil talller
Phat2- idk how i feel about the backwards P. i usually like backwards letters but not feelin it as much on this one. not saying you cant make it look better. and the h looks a lil like an L. diggin that A. definitely make the T capital. maybe have the P bump out more at the top rather than sag down. idk

[skinaone]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/319231_288313344521988_202093693143954_1198744_287 998099_n.jpg

your comments
AHATZ thats what i read there
your other throws are betta

[SynOne]

Took crits, need more.

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[skinaone]

ok looks the same,
youve posted 3 other thrwos and you havent changed anything. :/

[SynOne]

Trying to get down one throw, not change it completely. So I'm taking the crits and applying it to the throw.

[Flawless Victory]

http://i52.tinypic.com/25k1mwg.jpg

[skinaone]

@syn Change it, try a new style cause that sure aint working
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crits changed it a bit smaller gaps streched out letters i think its ight

[Flawless Victory]

Your N looks like an H an your A looks A LOT like an R.
Like if your user name wasn't skina I'd think that said skihr.

[skinaone]

H,and R hmmmm
i dont see the R and i kinda see the H any more crits ?

[Flawless Victory]

For real, you don't see it?

http://i52.tinypic.com/2psrko2.jpg


The letters aren't bad, they just don't really look like the letters they are supposed to be

[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/1012111823.jpg

[skinaone]

For real, you don't see it?

http://i52.tinypic.com/2psrko2.jpg


The letters aren't bad, they just don't really look like the letters they are supposed to be
i see the N being and H but the A being an R not so much but ill fix it up a bit
@ reach SHITS AWESOME but the P fix it up a bit AND BTW i finished the simple peice were should i post it up ?

[SynOne]

Thinking about changing what I write to Scewt... the Y in Syn throws me off, and I just can't personally do much with it because I'ma failure.

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[Flawless Victory]

Man, I think you should go with a different name.
When I think of the word scoot I think of a dog scooting across a carpet dragging his ass.

[SynOne]

Lol, tbh, I just liked the way it rolled off the tongue. And plus, some of my friends called me Cooter Scooter for a while. I just like it.

[ribcage]

are you sure they werent just calling you cooter? or pussy?

[SynOne]

^ Lmfao, Nope. It was because I called someone a Cooter Scooter when I was really stoned. And it just stuck.

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/301917_288691377817518_202093693143954_1199952_163 2621327_n.jpg

ok I changed some stuff
how about it now?

[PETER]

The T looks far more like a T. It has good balance. Personally I liked the 2 before vs this one.

[skinaone]

i like the idea of the P but youre still not doing it right HA connection is dope but the A needs work the T aint flowing neither and that 2 aint that nice but its better then the Z you were doing

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6111/6242331161_1799833e70.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6242331161/)
oie_1463457pEDPbevZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6242331161/)


phat the p and t need work. I think a backwards p is fine, maybe balance it by making the top right of the t bigger. Or do a backwards t that would be sick.

[Phat 2]

ok i think I got it, I'll try an idea I have later on at work. will edit this post with the flick. I'm trying to get a decent full name throw down. I'm starting to find that my usual 2 letters aren't enough for me. I nEED MOAARR :P heh
@nofrthuser, the hell's a backward T dude, it's a symmetrical letter, unless you mean upside down, nd then it'll become an L

[SynOne]

Fucking Lol'd so hard at a backwards T.

[Norfsuthr]

Why are people so constipated round here....

[sema]

prolly cause there tryin to figure out how to do a backwards t phat might i suggest throwin a backwards o in there somewhere also?....

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMAG0115.jpg

[skinaone]

you still have the same one? ok just do straight down lines for the P and Os take of the l stick on the S and your Es are hiding
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OLD ASS STICKER but i think im bringing that throw back to life CRITS i did it in like jan

[Strange Journeys]

Pesoe pull that first E forward! you progressed alot though

[SynOne]

Top one, Capital T or lowercase t? Bottom. Crits. Mind all these were done while blazed.

[knowtheledge]

The second one with the capital t is nice dude.. I would bring that t in more n define the k cause its lookin like an n.. good start tho
aha I always sketch blunted.. sometimes I feel like I get writers block if I dont have any trees

[skinaone]

nope not doing it right

[ZETA]

i think its funny phats a mod yet he posts in toy

[Flawless Victory]

Phat only mods the toy forum, why wouldn't he post in it?

And modding an internet graffiti forum doesn't mean that you are good at graffiti.
It just means that you have a lot of spare time to spend modding an internet graffiti forum.

[skinaone]

NAKED ?
try simpler things that K is nice thoe

[Z3BRA]

The K looks like an H

[Phat 2]

actually I mod the toy forum, battle forum and tools and tips forum. and I do it all in about 30mins before I go to bed. so no, it doesn't mean that mods have nothing better to do. I've got 0 time for rest during the day flawless victoy.
not that it's any of your bee's wax anyway tho

[smokeitup]

look at this:

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/6742/photo0026ki.th.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/401/photo0026ki.jpg/)
http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/8163/photo0027z.th.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/854/photo0027z.jpg/)
http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/5904/photo0028j.th.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/853/photo0028j.jpg/)




what do u think of SPIY?

[ZETA]

@smoke, eh the greens a little weird and the pics are small and low quality so its hard to tell..

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[smokeitup]

@smoke, eh the greens a little weird and the pics are small and low quality so its hard to tell..



u can click on the pics and it brings it up, there not mine its way too toy to be my throwies just seeing what people think of them...

[SynOne]

It really looks like a P is an r. Just sayin.

Zeta - Digging it, I wouldn't have the diamond opening in the A. Just seems to off balance it. But some might like that.

[Strange Journeys]

haha hope those arent yours smoke they suck

nice crotch zeta and put some fucking socks on man

[SynOne]

^ Yeah, I thought the same as you. "Fuck the art, lets stare at his crotch."

Tried Defining the K. Re Crit this bitch.

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[tophaa]

373983739937400

iToy but iTry, thought I would throw up some pics from a legal place to tag in the area. The last one says HKD, which is my groups name, I usually throw it but I was just messing around earlier. Didn't come out too great but alas... Feedback please :D

[verty]

hey guys,
this is my first post on this forum...
ive been interested in Graffiti all my life, but latley have had the urge to draw/write some peices. Im by no means any good and give full respect to all the talented writes out there.
here are two throwups ive plotted on paper. Feedback would be great.

[ZETA]

@strange, socks are for pussies who cant stand the "cold" of october... and yeah ya like that crotch?

[PETER]

Vert: Your bottom one is smashing your top one, but they both need work. I suggest filling some of the space under the left side of your T on the bottom one. I am horrible at throws so I can't really expand on that, but the idea is for it to have style in quick and simple way. Troll around and keep rockin' the books... post as you progress to keep it moving.

[skinaone]

hey guys,
this is my first post on this forum...
ive been interested in Graffiti all my life, but latley have had the urge to draw/write some peices. Im by no means any good and give full respect to all the talented writes out there.
here are two throwups ive plotted on paper. Feedback would be great.

ueot thats what ia see
V make the line go down more E is not flowing the the V same for the R and the T is like mad far away

[knowtheledge]

havent posted here in a min..

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6171/6258294501_f19f84c2e2.jpg

[MyNipsAreHard]

Knowledge- pretty good i just dont like all the bumps on the M and that does look like a K
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[tophaa]

Can anyone give me feedback on mine?

[verty]

Vert: Your bottom one is smashing your top one, but they both need work. I suggest filling some of the space under the left side of your T on the bottom one. I am horrible at throws so I can't really expand on that, but the idea is for it to have style in quick and simple way. Troll around and keep rockin' the books... post as you progress to keep it moving.

Thanks for the tip Peter... ill work on filling in the T... ill keep posting as I progress ;)


ueot thats what ia see
V make the line go down more E is not flowing the the V same for the R and the T is like mad far away

Thanks for the tip.. yeah I thought the V looked like a U as welll.. struggling getting bubble text with more definition I guess.. but will work on it.. Thanx :)

[PETER]

Vert: I suggest dropping by the "New to Graffiti" thread and studying up there. Also look around and see how people construct their throws and basic letters.

[SneeZ]

had to post this shit. gott's ta fix da N, bytchz!
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[ZETA]

i like the tag. itd be hard to do fast, but its still nice. fits the style of the throw. and it all looks good but the N is lower case which is kinda eh... i personally like to keep the letters consistant

[knowtheledge]

been so bored

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6240/6264151294_a77432055c.jpg

[ceaze]

sup fellas, hopeing i can get some crits...

muke- good shit, consistant, the onlything i would suggest is keeping the top of the bottom right leg of the K from connecting there in the middle, i feel thats very generic.
sneez- i like your style man, i actually dont mind the upper/lowercase mixture, i think it looks straight

heres a couple quickies i threw up for some crits.
377343773537736

sorry about the used paper, all my buddies pages where filled up lol

[MyNipsAreHard]

Know- where do you get those slaps? i need some

[skinaone]

sup fellas, hopeing i can get some crits...

muke- good shit, consistant, the onlything i would suggest is keeping the top of the bottom right leg of the K from connecting there in the middle, i feel thats very generic.
sneez- i like your style man, i actually dont mind the upper/lowercase mixture, i think it looks straight

heres a couple quickies i threw up for some crits.
377343773537736

sorry about the used paper, all my buddies pages where filled up lol
looks like SEEN;s shit bro get a whole new style, but ithey are OK

[skinaone]

been so bored

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6240/6264151294_a77432055c.jpg
fix that K son

[skinaone]

Knowledge- pretty good i just dont like all the bumps on the M and that does look like a K
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BLOGK
love the B L O
dont do the verticle extencion on the C and your K is mad lobsided

[EWL24]

looks like SEEN;s shit bro get a whole new style, but ithey are OK
looks kinda like Cope 2's style also, so yeah listen to what skina said

[PETER]

As long as we are pointing out people's throws looking like someone elses. That Sneez looks flat out like the "local" (as in on bs) Nouv throw. Ceaze: I like the top and bottom one. I feel like pretty much all throws are generic and look like someone else so fuck the bs and rock what you like.

[knowtheledge]

Know- where do you get those slaps? i need some

staples dude or any office supply

word up I'm wit Peter on this one.. to each his own y'all n cees the last one flows the best, my two cents

[ceaze]

As long as we are pointing out people's throws looking like someone elses. That Sneez looks flat out like the "local" (as in on bs) Nouv throw. Ceaze: I like the top and bottom one. I feel like pretty much all throws are generic and look like someone else so fuck the bs and rock what you like.

thanks pete, i honestly dont think they look much like seens, except for the fact it has 2 EEs.

[SneeZ]

Cees - the one on the right is fresh. The left one would be better if you make similar holes in the e and come off more clean. the one in the midd is bad.
muke - nice and simple, i agree with others, fix the k and i suggest, you make a smaller gap on lower part of e.

and nouv, klaus throw is totally different thing. i respect his throws, i would never bite. hes got that continuity in his throws, maybe you were refering to that. if you still think so, nobody is original than.

[PETER]

I'm not hating your throw is good. it's the continuity and the shape of the top. As far as originality.... No they aren't really.... just about everything has been done and when it comes to graffiti it's taking a structured thing such as letters and applying something abstract to it which limits things a little then you take the fact that there are tons of writers and they are all on the internet looking at other people's work. It's only a matter of time that one style starts to invade as with any other trend. The idea of graffiti alone isn't original. There is very little in the way of originality anymore, music, movies, etc. it's all a formula that is repeated with different exponents depending on who is making the work. There are people who push a lot harder than others to bend the rules etc and apear to be more original than most.