Throwies

[Messi*TnR]

I'm not hating your throw is good. it's the continuity and the shape of the top. As far as originality.... No they aren't really.... just about everything has been done and when it comes to graffiti it's taking a structured thing such as letters and applying something abstract to it which limits things a little then you take the fact that there are tons of writers and they are all on the internet looking at other people's work. It's only a matter of time that one style starts to invade as with any other trend. The idea of graffiti alone isn't original. There is very little in the way of originality anymore, music, movies, etc. it's all a formula that is repeated with different exponents depending on who is making the work. There are people who push a lot harder than others to bend the rules etc and apear to be more original than most.

Well fucking put...i couldnt have said it better if my life depended on it..

[dankbudz]

word

[ZETA]

@know, i personally hate E's like that, but its all up to you. other than that i love it. and i dont think your K needds work... looks fine and looks like a K so i dont see a problem

[ribcage]

As long as we are pointing out people's throws looking like someone elses. That Sneez looks flat out like the "local" (as in on bs) Nouv throw. Ceaze: I like the top and bottom one. I feel like pretty much all throws are generic and look like someone else so fuck the bs and rock what you like.

the thing you need to know is, nouv has throws for daaays. I have throws that look like nouvs throws before I even knew this site existed. IF its not a straight up letter bite, let it go and worry about yourself


.... just about everything has been done and when it comes to graffiti it's taking a structured thing such as letters and applying something abstract to it which limits things a little then you take the fact that there are tons of writers and they are all on the internet looking at other people's work. It's only a matter of time that one style starts to invade as with any other trend. The idea of graffiti alone isn't original. There is very little in the way of originality anymore, music, movies, etc. it's all a formula that is repeated with different exponents depending on who is making the work. There are people who push a lot harder than others to bend the rules etc and apear to be more original than most.

LOL no no no no no no no no no! Not even close, yes there are tons of wanna be writers, but very few real ones come to the internet. Originality? there a ton of people making up their own shit, but theres about 1000000 times more people who seek help in a retarded fashion. Then they dont get help the one way they looked, so they resort to means of biting, like coming on this site, and the 20 others like it. Where the rare real writers come, post their stuff, and have faggots bite it who will never make a big name enough for them to ever find out they were bitten.

But hey, your goal here should be to get as many toys as possible to have the same mentality as you, and then you should all QUIT! Make less competition for people who actually have a chance at being successful

[PETER]

the thing you need to know is, nouv has throws for daaays. I have throws that look like nouvs throws before I even knew this site existed. IF its not a straight up letter bite, let it go and worry about yourself



LOL no no no no no no no no no! Not even close, yes there are tons of wanna be writers, but very few real ones come to the internet. Originality? there a ton of people making up their own shit, but theres about 1000000 times more people who seek help in a retarded fashion. Then they dont get help the one way they looked, so they resort to means of biting, like coming on this site, and the 20 others like it. Where the rare real writers come, post their stuff, and have faggots bite it who will never make a big name enough for them to ever find out they were bitten.

But hey, your goal here should be to get as many toys as possible to have the same mentality as you, and then you should all QUIT! Make less competition for people who actually have a chance at being successful If you're going to call me out you should look at why I even made the statement in the first place. Ceaze posted something and several people wanted to dog him about it looking like someone else and I pointed out that his throw looks like someone on here (I think throws are more often than not generic anyway).
Yes there are people who do something better than others and have an "original take" on things. I clearly made that point in my prevous post. You missed the point of that post. It is a writen language and we are ATTEMPTING to make something original, but at the end of the day it's all been done. Every song has been sung and story told.... the words are just rearranged. Graffiti is nothing new. Graffiti for some is about getting up more than the next guy or going bigger or whatever, but it's still just creativly written words that is nothing new. Diam and totem pushed things but its been done now and they just put a twist on what had already been done. NWA pushed boundries, but it's been done now and it was done before them. By definition nothing is original. And if by some stretch of the imagination you believe your graff to be original take another look. It is an english word used readily writen in the most basic of forms. Your throws are decent, but again it's a word and you have influences from other writers just as anyone else.... and in the end it's a word writen just like they have been for thousands of years. Unless you're making up your own language which would be original and then you go spray paint it on something which is unoriginal it doesn't matter it's been done and all you did was put a little bit of twist on something unoriginal.

[ribcage]

^im not gonna read that all.

Im not calling you out, I think... I just disagree with you. Nothing you say will change my mind, your brainwashed

[PETER]

the only reason I pointed out that Sneez's throw looked like nouv is people where calling out the new guy and I was making the point that if you want to do that you should do it to everyone. Not that I give a single fuck who looks like who. I liked both folks in question's work.

[ribcage]

? someone calls someone out, let them deal with it. They should be capable of defending themself

[knowtheledge]

But hey, your goal here should be to get as many toys as possible to have the same mentality as you, and then you should all QUIT! Make less competition for people who actually have a chance at being successful

your passive pessimism is laughable my dude...

[ribcage]

lol, indeed:D

[LIZARD]

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[TBS]

i like the Y and E dude. the other letters, not so much. fuck around with them though, as i noticed with the exchange, it's such an strange combination of letters to make flow in a throw smoothly (not sure in anyone else agrees) so just keep throwing stuff down and posting it here. we'll let you know when it's hot as fuck!

[LIZARD]

yeah havin a T in the middle sucks cuz no matter what i do i always feel like I'm hiding it to much so it looks like an r...ill keep tweaking it thanks

[skinaone]

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OK the top of the Y is ok i mean its not my likings but its nice, i would go with a capital E and take the huge rectangle, T is too STIFF, I is nice but to pushed away from the other letters, BTW the dimencions are wrong IMO

[SneeZ]

man, thats bullshit. yes, your brainwashed

[skinaone]

who
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[ceaze]

who
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uhhh crits


that s is ugly, k looks sort of like an H, the i is weak, the n look like a lowercase H, and the A almost looks like an r, also, stop closing off the bottom right legs of your letters, thats so generic...keep working on it tho, has potential.

[sir.to.you.]

@yeti dono if im feelin the little tumor on the end of the T.
FRESH OUT THE BING SPOT!!!stuck at home for a while, looks like its back to doodlin...crits yo!
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6213/6271635096_babac827f2_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6271635096/)
Photo 234 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6271635096/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[MyNipsAreHard]

Skina- everything is dope. except the N still looks like an h. i see how it is an N but i could see how people would think its a lowercase H.
Sir.to.you- i like the throw. but i dont like the bottom loops. and the little line at the bottom of the E. but other than that the throw is dope. the piece need some work

[skinaone]

that s is ugly, k looks sort of like an H, the i is weak, the n look like a lowercase H, and the A almost looks like an r, also, stop closing off the bottom right legs of your letters, thats so generic...keep working on it tho, has potential.
to be completely honest
i see nothing generic about it, the S might be original not ugly lol i understand the N looking like an H but the K? i being weak? idk what youre talking about about the A looking like an R i will post a pic of an SHIHR throw and you will see the difference, thanks for the crit but it makes no sence, not trien to be an ass but thats just what i think
@my nips are hard , thanks anything else?

[skinaone]

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[sir.to.you.]

@skina- defiantly looks better painted but i think the i is too wide compared to all the other letters maybe.
i just figured out why all my shit looks funny, because i put the highlight on the same side of the shadow. but decided to destroy some markers on the grip!
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6219/6278760744_8e00006586_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6278760744/)
Photo 238 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6278760744/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[MN Nice]

Hope you're not taggin with your name on your board. Might as well rock a nametag on your chest while you bomb.

[ribcage]

lmao your assuming too much breh, itd only be like wearing a name tag if his name was up and known lol

[MN Nice]

lol true

[Shell703]

Don't know if it shows...

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong001.jpg

SEOT - Try evening out the E a little bit, and get rid of that loop on the bottom of the T, shit's ugly and I'd close up the hole in the O to make the letters look more like they all belong to the same family.

[SynOne]

Shell if that says Ear, I would advise a new name. Even though Earsnot's name isn't just "Ear" he does throws that are just ear. OTher than that. Bring your letters closer together.

[tophaa]

Hey you guys, got a few things that I could use some feedback on.
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This is with really poor quality paint, like super back dollar cans. Please don't hate for paint quality haha, it's a bit wompyjawed but feeback would be nice :).
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Not necessarily a 'throw up,' it's just something that I put together.
Thank you all!

[H1P30N3R]

stick to the notepad for now man loose the highlights do some research on your bubble lettters and practice alot!!

[sir.to.you.]

i dont im not able to bomb shit for a while so iv been fuckin words up.thanks for your concern though cuz i never coulda thought of somethin so genius. what would i do with out the Einstein's around me to give me a hand.

[sir.to.you.]

and that was actually at RIB bein typee tough nuts knowin everything about everyone over there.

[Shell703]

SynOne- Thanks for the feedback, it's DAR you have any suggests on how to make the D look more like a "D", i've been having a hard time with it.

[ribcage]

and that was actually at RIB bein typee tough nuts knowin everything about everyone over there.

what are you saying? I dont even remember ever adressing you...

[NouveauP]

Vivid, PESOE said it all. Practice a shit ton. Research some throws. Gain some inspiration. Emulate then make your own.
SEOT- it has some potential, but you really need to work on your shapes. Keep hitting the books and clean your hand up. The bottom of the T is by far the worst part though. Consistency is key. And a thing to know about drop shadows is that should be the EXACT shape of your initial outline.No fatter, no longer, no wider. I still have a lot of trouble with this myself.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0503.jpg

[DCSKATER]

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[Dusk oner]

Just started writing need help, any help will be appreciated.
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[SynOne]

Nouv, no doubt I'm a toy, but I sure read that as Klrus. Imo your A looks like a R. Even though that would be a kick ass R.

Dusk, I'm colorblind. So I can't see nothing but black with a few highlights and a red outline.

[NouveauP]

Syn, I'm still a toy too, but it's most definitely an A. In an R, the right side bend would bend in ABOVE that center line instead of below it. Thanks for the crit though.

Dusk - Work on keeping all of your letters consistent for now. Sketch on some graph paper to really see if you're keeping everything proportional. And remember, crawl before you walk.

[SynOne]

Nouv, you're right. Now that I really look back at it. It does look like an A. Sick flow in it. Keep it up.

[knowtheledge]

dollar can throws

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6113/6284109809_1f40b5d117.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6109/6284626624_529629f028.jpg

[sir.to.you.]

@knowtheledge that new jedi shits tight right!

[Phat 2]

have the left side of the M be as high as the rest of the word, experiment some more with K's and E's and youre good

[knowtheledge]

@sty fuck yea dude jmt fovever!

n thanks phat ima do dat

[H1P30N3R]

nouv I dig the the throw
dc skater and dusk stick to the books and research right now
muse - phat hit it on the head your m and e's need a little work.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1319698394.jpg

[Shell703]

Muke - I agree with Phat, and try bringing the E up in line with the rest of the throw
Nouv - That shit looks straight to me, no crits...
Top - get those letters consistent as first then start playing with different sizes later
DC - I'd work with the RBK for right now, work on the lettering and not so much on the highlights and reflections
Dusk - Try keeping the letters balanced for right now, the D looks bottom left heavy, and the U looks bottom right heavy, the S looks right heavy and the K just has a big wart on the bottom.
Hip - The E's look too hidden and the S looks too squished in the middle, try giving equal space to each letter.

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/Throwa001.jpg

[NouveauP]

Muke- The M and the U aren't too bad. M actually has some style on it. I would shape it up a little better, but it's a good start. the K and E need some work for sure. And just your whole throw could be proportioned better. But keep at it, it has potential.

Pesoe - I have to agree your first E is hidden. Bring it out more. And I think the leaning style you have (and I have :D ) looks better when each letter is aligned. Look at the size difference from your P and your last E. Use some graph paper to keep them all the same height. I used to have the same problem (and still get caught doing it a lot).

Dar- That's more of a straight letter. Try to do throws with minimal lines and in smooth motions (one smooth motion is optimal. My throws rarely have more than 3 lines per letter) Throws are meant to be done quickly. Research some throws and copy a few to get the jist of how to form some letters. Then base your letters off of that. But remember, don't bite, just draw influence.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0504.jpg

[knowtheledge]

trying new ish, used some racked excel paint with ny fats.. works alright but the paint is mad thin

and the second flick is garbage

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6112/6287558630_e5b7cc19d4.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6093/6287038447_ec4ef273b0.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

first m is proper I personally dont dig the e still seems the middle of the e is being hidden or smashed ... but over all a nice toss

[Shell703]

Muke - The M looks a lot bigger than the other letters for some reason.

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong008.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong004.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong009.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong002.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong003.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong007.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong006.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ThrowsHongKong005.jpg

[sir.to.you.]

word thanks for the crits a few pages back. much appreciated!

[H1P30N3R]

dar try a capital d with a lowercase a and r

[Flawless Victory]

Dar, you posted some that were pretty dope, but too many for me to point any of them out.

[.Cuore]

on the 4th DAR pic, diggin the one extreme bottom left.

edit: moreso the one right above it.

[H1P30N3R]

these are a lil sloppy but whatever

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1319854247.jpg

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1319853424.jpg

[NouveauP]

First one is mad dope. Just define that P a little more. Good shit though forreal

[SynOne]

Exactly what Nouv said. Dope as fuck. Define that P though. The first one I thought it said Besoe.

[Tempo718]

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[H1P30N3R]

word i see that the p looked like a b ill clean the p up .... tempo man quit wasting your time coloring and highlighting your stuff the letters need alot of work sorry but they all look horrible .

[MyNipsAreHard]

Tempo- listen to H1P3. work on letters instead of trying to to stupid fills.
Pesoe- i kinda like the bottom one better because mostly the P is better. imo. but there both sick. but then again nouv kills it with the throws so maybe just listen to him ahha

[junky]

swee trowies

[LIZARD]

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[knowtheledge]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6117/6293571889_894fe20514.jpg

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6212/6293570851_578e28b979.jpg

[Tempo718]

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[SneeZ]

arketek, nice throw, but r is bad, easily mistaken for c, give it a shot wit capital r.

[MyNipsAreHard]

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two styles of throwies...
Tempo- quit trying to make it all bubbly n shit. i like that you took the advice to make it without color. now do simple letters instead of all this bubble shit

[knowtheledge]

the r was a product of my laziness lol

[H1P30N3R]

mynips- the block throws are fresh!

[knowtheledge]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6239/6296120941_081263295d.jpg

[SynOne]

Knowtheledge stick with a name ffffssssssss Lol. That throwies dope. Drop the X's in the letters, imo it would look better without that.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320029008.jpg

[inthecity]

^^ i like that make the letters more proportional and work on ur spacing a bit

[Tempo718]

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[centrysam]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6158/6267427089_051491630a_m.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6267427089/)
Snapshot_20111021 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6267427089/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[Carma7]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6239/6296120941_081263295d.jpg

i dont like how you make the last two letters drop down like 10 inches and the X's look sloppy i would replace them with just lines or somethin but the style is lookin dope.

[H1P30N3R]

those x's are k's bro ... centry nice shit man
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320106778.jpg

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320106804.jpg

[bak]

feelin the red pesoe. keep practicing it
carma those E's woud look solid without that extra hump on top
n as always, give grits to get crits ya Ts

[Strange Journeys]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6239/6296120941_081263295d.jpg
im sorry, but this is gross

[centrysam]

pesoe . thanks man . last pic bottom right is ill i like dat man nice work

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/385177_298253156861340_202093693143954_1240473_551 879921_n.jpg

[The Kidz]

39141^really liking the two in the dot and the h.

[Strange Journeys]

nope

[H1P30N3R]

dont know if i like that or not phat and kids idk what thjat says go simpler keep your letters the same size

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320191458.jpg

[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/1031112313.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

ribcage we are fuckin losers lol nice consistent style man

[ribcage]

lol yep, that was for the battle, but I forgot to send it... thanks

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320218299.jpg

[Takeiteasy]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6239/6296120941_081263295d.jpg

Dude, looks gnarley. Love your style. I don't have anything to critique about it. I think the x's look fine and I like the way the letters drop. I sometimes get crap for dropping letters, but I just like the way it flows.

[TBS]

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[Strange Journeys]

fuckin a

[ribcage]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/1102112334.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

just needs a nice drop shadow looks good reach... my first time painting peso back 8 months ago or so saw it today
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320308944.jpg

[ribcage]

I dont fuck wit no shadows... if the outline looks clean


or not...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/1103110017.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

maybe its just a habit for me

[ribcage]

you know who its really a habit for?

[H1P30N3R]

no clue.. who is that ?

[ribcage]

dis dick

[PETER]

I'm Casper, the friendly ghost / The DOPEST ghost in town / All the bitches love me 'cause I'm fuckin' CASPER / The DOPEST ghost around.

[greenapple67]

too noob for this hobby :)
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[ribcage]

I'm Casper, the friendly ghost / The DOPEST ghost in town / All the bitches love me 'cause I'm fuckin' CASPER / The DOPEST ghost around.
GAY

@greenapple does that sAY ZOUR? do they still make those??

[H1P30N3R]

idk those were dope back in the day tho...
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320350883.jpg

[SynOne]

Hip nice throwies.

Dick Move: I know this is a throwie thread. But in that tag, I would drop that arrow. maybe even the halo. Would look better without those.

[SynOne]

Right side of my W is a little flat. And my T is alllll fucked. Still working on the consistency with the throwie.

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[MN Nice]

You're getting the hang of it, try a different E and on your W, make the middle line meet your bump in the middle instead of the left side (if you get what I'm trying to say. And yeah keep working on your T. And also, theres no need to color your throws just to make them better. Just outline and keep workin at it.

[Mr.Hater_666]

Yo Tasty, I Listen To Your Sig Everyday!
Mosh Motherfuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[dankbudz]

my pic may be a bitch to see, but lemme get some crits if you gottem
edit: shit is just flippin my image for no reason, it dont even look like that. lol

yo pesoe, youve improved alot on those throws, man. and sadly Syn is right about that tag.. if you left out alot of those lil extra things, arrow extensions n shit, it would look alot more smooth.

[Iyk]

Right side of my W is a little flat. And my T is alllll fucked. Still working on the consistency with the throwie.

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Dope K, the wrest needs work, the S lacks style and the wrest look awkward. But all perfectly sized, keep on it.

[H1P30N3R]

dank -nice steez on the left to right toss even the hands solid shit

[Tempo718]

dank I betchu if I can have a vega fulla purp u'd prolly wana get down huh. 2 face

[H1P30N3R]

^^ lame


tempo sounds like the ultimate faggot.

[ribcage]

if u had a vega full of purp dis nigglet would jack yo ass witta swiss army knife

[SynOne]

Dank - Nice throw, I love those E's they smash. But that D. You might need to define it a tad bit more. You don't want people thinking that's a O. It might look more defined if the image wasn't flipped. I just can't really tell.

[knowtheledge]

if u had a vega full of purp dis nigglet would jack yo ass witta swiss army knife

hahahaah

[SynOne]

Re-did this mother fucker.

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[sifer-]

@synone.......make ur last letter t to a T. imo it would look better with all caps or all lower case soo ye

anyone crits on mine
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[Norfsuthr]

S goes too low, I is a T. Keep at it...

skewt- I like your W, consider doin something like this with the bottom tho
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6096/6313300515_6ef269d9a7.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6313300515/)
oie_52027GdfckaTC (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6313300515/)

[SneeZ]

sifer what happened to your s? make it same size, it doesn't look good this way.

[Iyk]

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Not happy with E.
But i can safely say it looked MUCH better, when just greylead.

[.Cuore]

looks straight outta graffiti creator

[centrysam]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6115/6319302434_751b34e403.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6319302434/)
Humr throws (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6319302434/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[SynOne]

Sam, that bottom one is illllllllllll.

[centrysam]

thnks

[MyNipsAreHard]

SAM- i like em both but my one crit is the R on the bottom one doesnt so much look like a R. if theres a whole i cant see it

[duley]

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[centrysam]

it is an R dont need hole some time i put it there sometimes not

[duley]

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[Lado]

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[H1P30N3R]

not bad witch reminds me of my older throws now start letting the pen flow letters will develop a more natural flow rather than lookin forced.

[porkyPig]

yo that sa is exactly like sake's from smh...... dont be a biter.....

[porkyPig]

stolen http://i628.photobucket.com/albums/uu7/Duracell-BunnyTGF/sake1.jpg

[inthecity]

work with that last witch

[Strange Journeys]

that first one is pretty tight, work with the W a little bit more

[KE1]

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[SynOne]

Decent throw. Although. That K doesn't flow with the other two. Try a Different K or try a different N E. Make them Flow.

[MN Nice]

Meh.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00448-20111107-2252.jpg?t=1320728061

[PhuktheSystem]

Aerd,alberta!!

[Jeffrey Inpho Daniel]

aerd?

[SynOne]

Phuk. Make your letters even. You don't want one letter to be fat and the next be skinny. Throws it all off. Keep it all same width and height.

[KE1]

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[bak]

^ getting there. the e is better but the k still needs work. sorta looks like a N.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/IMG00080-20111108-1527.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

decent your letters are getting larger as u write tho ... I do that alot myself
mues - nice simple and clean put that on some walls bro

[snoketg]

nek, your first throwie looks the same as the second. maybe try ti change the bottom of the k or expand on the n e or just make new letters all together but anyways that right lwg on the k really should go.
bak/trife whatever thats tight, put some work in on the f it seems to simple for the other letters

[ribcage]

Meh.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00448-20111107-2252.jpg?t=1320728061

.........

[Simon]

4025640257
crits?

[Aster.one]

Mues love it!! And DAMN that bitch is smoken!! Wanna enilate that pussy!

[KE1]

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I'm gonna change the N to a style thats similar to the K.

[snoketg]

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nek the k is a little flat on the right leg, keep practicing

[SynOne]

Snoke - All good but the N and the K. That N needs fixing a lot. It looks more like a K than the K does.

For the N you should drop how big the bend is on the right leg. You can still round it. Just don't cut it directly in the half of the letter. Maybe bring it down or something.

The K - That little bump on the right side of the K needs to be lowered as well. The rest of the K seems fine. Just lower the entire right side of the K.

[PhuktheSystem]

snoke your n reminds me of a k,tweek the top of it

[Aster.one]

Snoke fix your N and take the dick off your K..

[ERAYS]

lol ^ agreed

heres some quick throws i did and taped to my wall haha

crits? opinions?

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[Aster.one]

Fix your s and that shit would look sick

[H1P30N3R]

erays toss looks pretty good id rather see a different e but overall its still pretty nice

[ERAYS]

Fix your s and that shit would look sick

tru, what exactly do u mean?

[ERAYS]

erays toss looks pretty good id rather see a different e but overall its still pretty nice

yea I wanna kinda change the E a bit, just havent figured it out yet :P

...btw thanks for the crits from both of you^^

[H1P30N3R]

and you s just needs the bottom part changed up something like mine look
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320106804.jpg

[celonerr]

sick handstyle erays

[CaionBrazil]

i start do on walls 3 months ago , im from brazil and how no have brazilian forums for graffiti i create this account today in this forum , this is my arts and i want crits and opinions , sorry for bad english, and sorry if this is the wrong session , sorry for layout too , sorry for all hahahahahahah !


http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAFAufmqvjSBelJIyzdcXani1FrsgZjJZirGysSFFzGQ6Q2 CD6BZVbTXcXm1fnAXykuVe2rAb06waOOYqmSvdavAAm1T1ULgH o64rMAPEPQROAmWQnbt3QvVk.jpg


http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAACqVd-1StT1VWKAbrSy_69dYgLYMLe8eR8c4RxfZFQyrTIsoV1p5RCK4 vTbKuo4-9ZNY37C4r4zFPlCpdTfIS34Am1T1UE8SJIm6oIAQnveUqvRAod HTduVX.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAAPNt6uXgoGxT5PpPMVp2tNyNyW34teD0oy0XY9Fu40uuw lySCGuRCMSYalj8rG9iuoxD0IlXMm3Ed9zlFgsNU0Am1T1UOmQ ly7SbP-qCllMRQVIRpSFghBg.

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAAYun4eUSJfIHWUo_qrLnuYW41zWTICZ0nXm0suLO2VP6W Q9FKFE9A1Ln9YwFvTLhAWFYDys20OOiUk2ID95wUEAm1T1UHZG yKgzAe13HrwnYfUbIzpYpUzs.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAF-XDJVP70I6kAddf_DScgZdLJRE5tkz4dn8p7-4xvnKjP6K_lYcnBXej54B6F3oDO6gN30XMgPit2PEBrvLneYAm 1T1UFKQBm-qUeoYU5DxOM16mENNI8Kr.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAL7plUZLARnjtac1xbUKX5rlBhppRWbKkSCvOWSGkv1DwL Jz5kxuin4itf1u1A2ZQAGXTd4MlBlMGbk_jXWMEIIAm1T1UOi9 oGX_PGul2WVNEJ0x3KwDnQht.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAFynTZ014rt-60D78vl8VkB8UMCIdnNAFopbccLfwwGzjnfTngIBxiGcxEyqbz RczKXP1zuFdquLUnBwq8-266kAm1T1UPY9ZrYmuybmOEdKH5XoQ_EXXhlw.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAB1wLzR4Cahuumq5UMgrnhiSwgDsMRCAW0Q_KWvCsFaRn1 EvxVyzAFRwWG6snBj3zUyisTVaOxKQl7lYzepq9B4Am1T1UNXt aKaS6L9e5H_ffFwHtPJC0Y_D.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAAI0vXVRqtFpK96D8CQ3zQUx57gWjhRmqaCK1F8ru7PU9It JGyejPSNng23hlSkDParfhOi8ddUoki5b95T7JdSYAm1T1UNGi 7IPm37n9CZcZGOBaClxoR5Wi.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAANQ8Q1drERmoJt6U7yS_7MpRPKzlSSYIAArUaAe9zxa3LG iWkP4xlmgSNILYw0zjoo9i2a8pYAYHNwwqcGNJfroAm1T1UD4F cLOSWPBVfJrgY3yVxlRYZZub.jpg

http://images.orkut.com/orkut/photos/PQAAACuyibBWejeleUphod0a374kDmoOmU0YmrHh0rCf83UJ68 iCaZecLue49lRgmEYOm5WdaZ0GqkmvfaoIbb0V7gsAm1T1UFf8 KNAq-C8sAsgK89RjHbCQe6VV.jpg


is this , hugs!

[MN Nice]

Mad potential on those throws. just work on defining your letters more, such as your A and O, as well as your N - it looks like a blend of an N and a funky uppercase A. Otherwise, its fresh and sticks in your memory.

[.Cuore]

and you s just needs the bottom part changed up something like mine look
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/1320106804.jpg

middle one diggin'

[H1P30N3R]

^^ thanks trying to have a few diff styles

[rebz]

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[rebz]

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[Phat 2]

http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQq-qitS7db4QY2Xj63Hosg6sf37O-VDmEFreiKbaGy5ARdE62M

[ChadWarden]

im not feeling the isosceles triangle in your s. your r and e are pretty, through. same with your friends w+i connection. i hope you continue to write graffiti, friend.




























http://i44.tinypic.com/2nt9w1j.jpg

[ribcage]

lmao isoscelese. nice tits by the way

[bak]

i dig the s. abstract for a change. unless generic is ur flavor

[PETER]

lmao isoscelese. nice tits by the way I had the same reaction. The fact he called the R and E pretty also amused me.

[ChadWarden]

i dig the s. abstract for a change.






http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7120/img2011110500544.jpg









????????

[MN Nice]

I read Rebo. Warden, you might want to work on your letter structure.







lol

[PETER]

LMFAO!!!!! great one!

[spiltink]

watch out here cum the throw ups!! dun dun dun dun duun dun dun dun dun....

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2512%20%28Medium%29.JPG

[H1P30N3R]

not bad at all I dig the throw just the circle in the o and a throw somethin different in there just my personal opinion shit it still looks solid tho... pic for talkin 12 oz battle
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/photo.jpg

[Norfsuthr]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6240/6346671600_190e738bf1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6346671600/)
oie_155305EC5MRJCB (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6346671600/) your

[snoketg]

spil and water those are tight
40716

i didnt take the dick off my k i figured i would try it like this before i do..... yes? no?

[spiltink]

that s is weird

[PETER]

that s is weird
and the N looks like a K

[centrysam]

few quick ones for battles
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6057/6347646593_802024d065.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6347646593/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6347646593/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6117/6347580209_008e999f26.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6347580209/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6347580209/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6035/6331126953_aa27a45d22.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6331126953/)
Snapshot_20111110 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6331126953/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[H1P30N3R]

nice as usual centry props

[ribcage]

......still think theyre ugly as fuck

[centrysam]

an i still think ur toss looks generic
and i still think ur a fat 12 yearold kid whos parents beat him soo he trys to take it out on peeps on bs hahaha

[centrysam]

and i still dont give a fuck !

[TastyMcNasty]

......still think theyre ugly as fuck

^this

an i still think ur toss looks generic
and i still think ur a fat 12 yearold kid whos parents beat him soo he trys to take it out on peeps on bs hahaha

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[ribcage]

an i still think ur toss looks generic
and i still think ur a fat 12 yearold kid whos parents beat him soo he trys to take it out on peeps on bs hahaha

dont hate me cause you aint me.


and i still dont give a fuck !

you dont care that your toss is ugly? thats aight with me man, not that it matters...

[rebz]

thanks for the critcism new flicks mabe tommorw or saturady

[ribcage]

41338413394134041341

[MN Nice]

Diggin the tag rib.

[centrysam]

wow rib that R and E are soo orginal . u must be the only one who puts the bump at the bottom of the R like that ahha

[ribcage]

Thanks man!!!!! been rockin these letters since 2007 when you were probably still in diapers. Sorry my letters arent wanna be half throwie half retarded sketched out fugly letters, we cant all have amazing throws like you do. Your pointless extra curves and points are truly a gift

VVVVVV someone can read small writing:cool:

[spiltink]

well it seems like simple unoriginal throws get all the hoes..... MAD lol

[centrysam]

w.e .
@ baby back rib ...maby next time u try and smash someone for tryin somthin diff . ull think about ur own toss . and maby relize ur not the god of throws .. and that everyone on here can do a toss like urs ...

and u should dot ur R and A with an ! . that would really seperate ur letters from the heard ahahahaha

u should post another hollow toss . havent seen u do one of those befor ahha

[ChadWarden]

and i still dont give a fuck !



obviously you do give a fuck if youre going out of your way to show strangers, over the internet, your graffiti. dont front apathy

[ribcage]

You think you can do a throw like mine?! do it son. Id like to see that, my style would look way better on your letters.

I aint a god of throws, but I like to think I know what a good one looks like. If you want an ego boost off some youngins tellin you you got a nice throw then thats great, cause thats the only people you gonna get it from with a throw like that... i.e. try something else cause that shit aint workin

yeah hollow tosses breh, I dont need to color my shit to make it look better than just the outline. Because as u can see, nothing was sketched out like yours, its all clean single lines. It takes me 5 seconds to draw one of those how long does it take you? 5 minutes? No gimmicks here, just good ol throwie the way its meant to be done.

[centrysam]

rib ur a fuckin tool . u come one here and smash 70% of posts . if everyone had ur attitude graff would have died long ago ....
if u think ur soo good y u still post in toy section ... u say u been rockin same letters since 07 and i belive u .. 4 years and still thats the best u got ... props man that real progession .. if u want ur shit to look like everyone elses thats fine blend in with everone else ... ima keep tryin diff shit . and to be honest i dont give a fuck wat u think .
like really keep doin the same ol letters maby one day ur R will jump off the page and slap u in the face with somthin new .

[snal]

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tryin' some spontanious shit

[centrysam]

good try .. like the last letter the best . try not covering the e with that other part of first letter maby look bit better .. ( that was constuctive crit for those of you who are fuckin morons and dont no what that is )
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6032/6351455892_03993137fc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6351455892/)
Humrtoss (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6351455892/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[snal]

40908
first piece from one month ago
40909
new throw style i dont only like the v bottom part,i've messed it

[ribcage]

rib ur a fuckin tool . u come one here and smash 70% of posts . if everyone had ur attitude graff would have died long ago ....
if u think ur soo good y u still post in toy section ... u say u been rockin same letters since 07 and i belive u .. 4 years and still thats the best u got ... props man that real progession .. if u want ur shit to look like everyone elses thats fine blend in with everone else ... ima keep tryin diff shit . and to be honest i dont give a fuck wat u think .
like really keep doin the same ol letters maby one day ur R will jump off the page and slap u in the face with somthin new .

Im still "toy" as far as this forum goes, thats why I post in here broheam. My throws dont need to go anywhere man, its a THROW, and its MY THROW, MY STYLE. my Throw eats your throw and shits it out then eats the shit, then vomits it on your face. You dont think I have more than 1? your naive, I got one liners, 2 liners, backwards, and negatives. Some times you gotta keep gems to yourself and to your city. I dont go postin every throw ive ever tried, I post the one thats known, and thats already been bitten.

Whose throw does my throw look like? Enlighten me? you keep sayin it but uh idk. you post the same shitty throw with different colors the same amount as Ive posted mine. but thats the difference, shitty throw vs not shitty throw. take what you said and apply it to yourself, quit being a hypocrite and step ya game up

[centrysam]

w.e king of the toys on bs ... i dont need to argure... just remeber wat u just said , its a THROW, and its MY THROW, MY STYLE ....
soo when the next guy/ girl comes on here and posts somthin they tyed once or twice ( not talkin about me ) . give them constuctive crits or shut ur face ...
ur fuckin negitivity might be all it takes to make someone not try agen .

ended

[snal]

good try .. like the last letter the best . try not covering the e with that other part of first letter maby look bit better .. ( that was constuctive crit for those of you who are fuckin morons and dont no what that is )
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6032/6351455892_03993137fc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6351455892/)
Humrtoss (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6351455892/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickrthanks man i understand what you told me and i will try it.I also have the version when the E is not capital letter.I will practice and hopefully find the balance,thank you again.Your throw is good nice structure and it has style i like it

[centrysam]

np man dont mind helping peeps .
keep em comin

[ribcage]

w.e king of the toys on bs ...

ur fuckin negitivity might be all it takes to make someone not try agen .

I AM DA KING OF TOYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thats my goal though, I thrive on making people quit, dont you know how this troll thing works? Ive given a lot of constructive crits bro, and Im pretty sure ive helped a lot of heads on and off the interwebz, but I dont help those who have absolutely no potential

[centrysam]

lol ok rib . ur the man . i cant belive how amazing u are at 1 liners . and backwards tosses and shit u are amazing . thay should make a graff movie after u
, there ur ego bar full . good now go rock another hollow. but anyways ima go sketch cuz its more productive than talkin to u ,,

[SynOne]

Rib does give crits. Ffs. Actually if it wasn't for him telling me how shitty my work is. I wouldn't have progressed. My stuff still looks like shit no doubt. But I am progressing.

Sometimes hard crits are what you need. If you are whining over someone telling you your work looks like shit on the internet. You aren't cut out for the game anyways.

[Saiko]

lmfao


that is all.

[MN Nice]

Rib does give crits. Ffs. Actually if it wasn't for him telling me how shitty my work is. I wouldn't have progressed. My stuff still looks like shit no doubt. But I am progressing.

Sometimes hard crits are what you need. If you are whining over someone telling you your work looks like shit on the internet. You aren't cut out for the game anyways.

Fucking this. Good post syn.

[ribcage]

saiko and humr are in the same club. both try to make it seem like what theyre doing off the internet is more important than what im doing on and off the internet. They both children, and they both suck dicks.

umad bros?

[centrysam]

w.e u dont no shit ..

[ribcage]

I know tons of super cool graffitis stuffs man:cool:

[H1P30N3R]

dbl post

[H1P30N3R]

hilarious rib pullin chains on the forum and they go for it ... simple thing is you both have skill and different style rib is just old school about throws humr you bring a different new flip on throws with almost simple type letters ...

[spiltink]

another page lost to the flame wars

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2522.JPG

[H1P30N3R]

^^ that needs to be on a wall dont forget your shadow on the middle of your a props amos

[SynOne]

Amos. What MIGHT make that better is on your A you could bring the bottom up a bit to even out with the S. It would make it more symmetric. And I think with that throw symmetry is nice.

[H1P30N3R]

personally i prefer the grimey steez on letters than perfect symmetry but you are right we are toys here learning

[rebz]

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[spiltink]

im meant to be getting down to this spot to paint sometime soon but its far away

nice up rebs

[PETER]

I need some inspiration for a project I'm working on. Any cats willing to post up a throw that says (I know it's long as fuck) Natural St8?

[H1P30N3R]

^^ 100 credits to be inspired lol might get u one up later

[ChadWarden]

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i see that you've come to your senses and switched to a right triangle.

other ways i think you could improve are:

- possibly remove those rectangle stubs on the end of your last three letter? the b can rock it, but the s? i dont know, but the e just looks like its dropping a log.

- ensure your letters are in proportion to one another. in this piece your letters grow noticeably in size.

- make sure the joint leg of your r stays large. in this picture it too small in comparison to, like, everything else.

- and dont play the lottery. you'll never really win.

[SkateJunt]

hows this? my 3rd or 4th filled throwie
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6108/6341081024_519af0fa81.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6341081024/)
Picture 082 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6341081024/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[SkateJunt]

hows this? my 3rd or 4th filled throwie
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6108/6341081024_519af0fa81.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6341081024/)
Picture 082 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6341081024/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[RXpress123]

41133
The letters I use in my throwie... tips?

[rebz]

i just get drunks and fuck up alottt :cool:

[rebz]

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[ribcage]

- and dont play the lottery. you'll never really win.

cant win if you dont play

[Strange Journeys]

41184
yo rebs you should make the BS not go lower the the re

Scoob, your B is way to wide, and the swirly things are dumb

[PETER]

- and dont play the lottery. you'll never really win.
I once wiped my ass with a $198 million powerball ticket.

[PETER]

^^ 100 credits to be inspired lol might get u one up later I'm down. It's a project for a dance group. I am going to do a bunch of different handies, and throws, and such and have my graphic design buddy layer them and such with something over it.

[rebz]

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yo rebs you should make the BS not go lower the the re

Scoob, your B is way to wide, and the swirly things are dumb



like i said i was drunkkk brahhhhh i personly like the swirl when i do it right

[TBS]

new throw style i'm fucking with. quite like this one..
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[SynOne]

Define that R from that K. You're K looks fine. But that R sure looks like a K.

[TBS]

cheers, will give that a shot.

[Auras]

Good Style man, kleen I like it, keep at it Yo

[Strange Journeys]

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bump

lol at tbs dont sketch em out bro

i also dont like the e at all

[TBS]

nah i don't usually. i was just trying new shit with pencil then went over one of them to make it stand out a pit for the camera. i strongly suggest a few people do that too.. still do it flowingly (not sure if that's a word) and shit but saves running through a ton of paper

[Phat 2]

that style is proper ill, tBS.
props guy

[rebz]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/58835012@N08/

[TBS]

rebs i think you're throw style is sick as fuck. i'm not a huge fan of the first leg on the R but it fits with the rest of it so doesn't look too out of place or anything

[SneeZ]

rebz i read your cwie frows lwis. had to say this. the desr one is good, ill give you some crit nex time.

@TBS Ok, drop boath extensions on b, give r more definition and drop the circle thing on bottom left leg, do the same with k(letter itself is good) E looks like shit, (not hatin) you have to fix it. Also drop the extension on bottom of s. Keep playin with it.


quick one so i wont be fully offtopic. and its very small, yes.
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[centrysam]

i like dat . try not to have the points on the top left of the letters . might look better . just my opinion .
good work

[3omo]

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[rebz]

was thinking that same latley

[rebz]

dont get what yu said about the cwie throwie thats my homie desr is my boys boy gots mad street cred

[TBS]

'flash' for a battle, the S looks like a Y and i don't like the H... other than that, any crits?
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[ohhai]

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[H1P30N3R]

tbs I dig your style man clean the s up thats all
rebs - nice up props that mone throw is fire reminds me of a guy who paints out here dues fst

[Beko]

first time to take it to a wall! it was a small space so it was hard to get a nice picture with my shitty phone!
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messed up on the K aand i dont favor the O

[TBS]

i really don't know where to start with that... not much more to say other than keep practicing. at least you got it to a wall but... it's ugly as fuck.

'LABOR' throw for a this weeks battle, 3D's off but oh well. i'll pay more attention next time.
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[SEWONER]

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[TastyMcNasty]

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whatever youre doing, just fucking stop...