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Phat 2
01-30-2012, 07:17 PM
word. nevermind the long bottoms. they can come and go. well mostly go... hehe
but I'm gonna try something out since you guys are saying the v and e are fine and that the n's second leg is too big. I'm gonna link the n and o, and turn the second leg of the n into the o itself (just put a hole in it) and then figure something out for the M
fuck I gotta be honest, the m's the hardest

SynOne
01-30-2012, 07:54 PM
^ You aint joking, I mean, my W gives me tons of trouble. I feel you on the M.

Phat 2
01-31-2012, 04:50 PM
linked the O into the N's "belly" and made a little tweak to the M
I'm kinda going at this letter by letter until it's good.

norfsuthr? nouveaup? gemer?

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/420788_367183186641930_100000507545549_1369050_271 717812_n.jpg

Skadeem
01-31-2012, 07:43 PM
I forgot there was a thread just for throws.
nice fills sedge
5285552856


phat for me its the n....it just idk how to explain well. and i feel like the e needs some more definition its like sucked into the v. the points ehhh i kinda like em

KASE2
01-31-2012, 10:36 PM
my throwie and my homie's as well
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xBgYa7oF7o8 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xBgYa7oF7o8)

dankbudz
02-01-2012, 01:26 AM
skadeem that E and K is small, that 2nd ones cool

phat, too many points and probably should "unlink" that O. it looks likes you are trying a bit too hard for that style

Skadeem
02-01-2012, 07:38 AM
e and the k are intentionally small and thanks

BEASTOR
02-01-2012, 08:31 AM
Yo Skadeem, thanks bro. I do like dusty fills too but had time on my hands to do it solid. I like ya K, keep it up bro

NouveauP
02-01-2012, 04:04 PM
Phat - Same problem really. The VE look decent but the other letters fall off. That V is tight. I'd love to see that flare with a can. The e is good still, just kinda awkward because the V's weight is low and the e's weight is high (does that make sense?) the NO connection needs to go. And the M just doesn't work still. It seems like the motion of the throw goes diagonally up starting from the V. Keep at it, homie.

9ToTheOH
02-01-2012, 08:17 PM
52994

An attempt

YorkCro
02-02-2012, 02:00 PM
crits on throws :
5302053021

squakMix
02-02-2012, 05:31 PM
@YorkCro: I have no idea what I'm talking about, so take my comments with a grain of salt. But the one I liked best from your last post was the piece outlined in red at the very bottom of the page. The "K" seems more consistent with the "R" at the end, and the little hat wearing character in the "O" is cool. I would experiment a bit more with the swoop of the "Y" though... I liked the yellow one above better, because the bottom of it is similar to the "K" at the very end of the red outlined one. So if you used the Y from the yellow throwie, and the K from the one outlined in red, I think you'd have a nice symmetry going on.

What I'm about to post is pretty wack, but I'd like some feedback anyway. I'm trying to experiment with something that a non-graffiti writer can instantly read, and that gets away from the bubbly letters that are cliche in throwie letters. I write "etc."

53033

SkateJunt
02-02-2012, 06:50 PM
page i just did
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7151/6809442201_f79bfeb38c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6809442201/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6809442201/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

MN Nice
02-02-2012, 10:27 PM
Some of you on this thread are missing the entire concept of a throw. Simple, 1-2 line letters with flow. Here's a great example straight outta St. Paul.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00517-20111226-1454.jpg?t=1328242147

@squak - idk what the hell thats supposed to be, but scrap it. Look at the new to graff thread. And stop giving crits.

@gerb - you're going backwards with progress man, I remember when you switched over to Gerb and the throw was pretty good. Now its getting worse everytime you post.

@york - Keep working with your Y, maybe try capital. Otherwise you got the right idea.

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
02-02-2012, 10:36 PM
^^not necessarily the best example of "flow"

MN Nice
02-02-2012, 10:41 PM
You're right. Still got that video of your throw to post up here and show em how its done?

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
02-02-2012, 10:47 PM
yes, but i wont lol. cause then people will have the link to my photobucket. And all the people who think i dont do things will see stuff I dont want them to see...

ill leave this here for a few minutes though

MN Nice
02-02-2012, 10:56 PM
Hell yeah.

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
02-02-2012, 11:20 PM
have you gotten better yet?

MN Nice
02-02-2012, 11:36 PM
I'd like to think so.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00558-20111227-1442.jpg?t=1325022336

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00564-20111227-1447.jpg?t=1325022301

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
02-03-2012, 12:04 AM
make the point part of you m smaller, and that little hump that it turns into larger, dont let the middle lines of E touch your U, and scratch that tiny vertical line you put on your S that starts the bottom. Also, make it bigger, its easiar to learn practical control and line when you make your letters about 4/5 your height because you have more space to work with, then when you want to make it small or different letter sizes/add ons you'll be able to move that hand like its nothing

MN Nice
02-03-2012, 06:55 AM
thanks

Skadeem
02-03-2012, 02:11 PM
Yo Skadeem, thanks bro. I do like dusty fills too but had time on my hands to do it solid. I like ya K, keep it up bro

weeerrrrd i hate that fat fuck of a letter sometimes

dankbudz
02-03-2012, 07:42 PM
dope shit mues

MN Nice
02-03-2012, 08:01 PM
Nice ^ how big is that? I can't tell from the photo. Thanks for the good looks.

dankbudz
02-03-2012, 08:16 PM
like 3.5 high by 7 or something. i honestly don't know how long but that was a lil more than half my height

skinaone
02-03-2012, 08:37 PM
53103
ugh i thought the throw up while i was looking at the wall call it a freestyle? idk i dont like it very much but w.e crits

dankbudz
02-03-2012, 08:41 PM
is it supposed to be Skina?
if so i would fix up the K N and A

skinaone
02-03-2012, 08:44 PM
not an actually a crit tell me what i should do with them bigger spaces smaller spaces idunno i like th K and A but ill do the first paper sketch ever with it see what i can do
oh i just made up an A ;3 yessss

MN Nice
02-03-2012, 08:47 PM
Your K/N could make a good M lol.

Coleo
02-03-2012, 08:49 PM
i hate throwies because i suck at em got any ideas?
i write NESO

skinaone
02-03-2012, 08:49 PM
@mn nice :( 4th person to tell me that

dankbudz
02-03-2012, 08:50 PM
well you got a dope style goin, but i remember way back you've posted some throws and they were nicer then this.
like the middle of the K throws it off as a H or M, just makes it less as an obvious K, thats probably more me being ocd.
but the N looks like an M, try not bringing the middle up so high into the letter and also cut the 2nd bump on top. cause both of those basically define it as an M not an N.
and the A just needs some tweaking so the middle is more centered, making the right part not look so much like a leg of an R.
also you probably know this, but try to get it all lined up on the bottom.

Coleo- i hate you cause you suck at life. if you fail at something why would you ask someone else to do it for you? you sound like a goddamn woman.

skinaone
02-03-2012, 08:53 PM
53104
there dont bite just an idea

Coleo
02-03-2012, 08:53 PM
Danks right ^^

skinaone
02-03-2012, 08:54 PM
well you got a dope style goin, but i remember way back you've posted some throws and they were nicer then this.
like the middle of the K throws it off as a H or M, just makes it less as an obvious K, thats probably more me being ocd.
but the N looks like an M, try not bringing the middle up so high into the letter and also cut the 2nd bump on top. cause both of those basically define it as an M not an N.
and the A just needs some tweaking so the middle is more centered, making the right part not look so much like a leg of an R.
also you probably know this, but try to get it all lined up on the bottom.

Coleo- i hate you cause you suck at life. if you fail at something why would you ask someone else to do it for you? you sound like a goddamn woman.
thanks ill stick to my old ones then im just trying to make it different

Coleo
02-03-2012, 08:55 PM
53104
there dont bite just an idea
hey thanks man i dont like to bite ill work off it:)

MN Nice
02-03-2012, 08:56 PM
i hate throwies because i suck at em got any ideas?
i write NESO

I'm bored enough.

Aaaaaand its gone.

Coleo
02-03-2012, 08:57 PM
well you got a dope style goin, but i remember way back you've posted some throws and they were nicer then this.
like the middle of the K throws it off as a H or M, just makes it less as an obvious K, thats probably more me being ocd.
but the N looks like an M, try not bringing the middle up so high into the letter and also cut the 2nd bump on top. cause both of those basically define it as an M not an N.
and the A just needs some tweaking so the middle is more centered, making the right part not look so much like a leg of an R.
also you probably know this, but try to get it all lined up on the bottom.

Coleo- i hate you cause you suck at life. if you fail at something why would you ask someone else to do it for you? you sound like a goddamn woman.
just askin for help...

skinaone
02-03-2012, 08:58 PM
lol^^
shut up and post more throws

dankbudz
02-03-2012, 09:00 PM
nah dog just keep practicing, just needs to be tweaked. by the looks of the throw you posted for Neso, i think you should grab some 10cent composition books and fill them up. not bad, just sloppy.


WHY?! WHYYY?! WHYYY?!?!?!
THE FUCK WOULD YOU GUYS POST HIM SHIT. i mean if it was someone that contributed, but this mother fucker... goddamn, he's just gonna bite you. thats what he said. straight up. "I hate throws because i suck at them, can you post me some so i can bite the fuck outta them?"

Colors
02-03-2012, 09:02 PM
mues you know what else you could do if your still bored...

skinaone
02-03-2012, 09:05 PM
nah dog just keep practicing, just needs to be tweaked. by the looks of the throw you posted for Neso, i think you should grab some 10cent composition books and fill them up. not bad, just sloppy.


WHY?! WHYYY?! WHYYY?!?!?!
THE FUCK WOULD YOU GUYS POST HIM SHIT. i mean if it was someone that contributed, but this mother fucker... goddamn, he's just gonna bite you. thats what he said. straight up. "I hate throws because i suck at them, can you post me some so i can bite the fuck outta them?"
see here in venezuela we have no 10cent books their are more like 10$ books i cant affored ahhah

dankbudz
02-03-2012, 09:26 PM
lol i could send you over some if you'd pay for postage...
did a quickie SKINA, K and A's are fuckers. and Ns and Is.. lol just playin i just suck

edit:
COLEO- keep doin that over and over, do it bigger too, like 3 a page. and keep it simple like that but lose those tiny lil lines on the S if you can somehow understand which ones I'm describing ill be proud... and try not to overlap the N.

Coleo
02-03-2012, 09:28 PM
53108
crits please

Coleo
02-03-2012, 11:28 PM
5311853119
crits please... these are the best out of the millions that i did

dankbudz
02-04-2012, 12:03 AM
bottom picture, right two pages are the better one, don't waste marks though unless you got mass stock or gettem for free. you will regret it eventually if they are any good.
avoid doing things like the lump on the top of the S on the very bottom right one. and the bottom leg of the N

Coleo
02-04-2012, 12:08 AM
alright ya i rack sharpie paints, decos ,molotows, etc.

skinaone
02-04-2012, 12:39 PM
wtf you can rack molotows?
YOU A BOSS

sadgeh
02-04-2012, 01:28 PM
just wondering i must work on it this is on paint because i have no camera at the moment and only the touchpad of my laptop to write with
its sloppy as hell but some will gett the idea and that what i need on how i can improve some lil things.
Later today or tommorow i post one thats drawn with pen and shizzle.
53154

Phat 2
02-04-2012, 05:20 PM
test

edit: awesome, new page.
be nice now

and flick for talking:

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/422605_370336746326574_100000507545549_1376225_250 160005_n.jpg

Colors
02-04-2012, 11:44 PM
Got bored so i started practicing throws. The mues one came out better, sorry seder haha
5329953300

zombie_hemp
02-05-2012, 05:55 AM
src="http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w282/half_dead_krew/stickers/DSC_0446.jpg" border="0" alt="">
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w282/half_dead_krew/stickers/DSC_0446.jpg

Hick94
02-05-2012, 09:17 AM
phat that throw is dope....
zombie change the E on aecs doesnt go wit the throw..
any crits..?
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5809/img0018sg.jpg
http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/8871/img0015bp.jpg

Skadeem
02-05-2012, 01:32 PM
Just fucking stop

TastyMcNasty
02-05-2012, 02:46 PM
new name
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2564.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2566.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2567.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2568.jpg

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
02-05-2012, 03:00 PM
groovy throws, shits on your old ones

NouveauP
02-05-2012, 03:07 PM
For suuuure. Once you clean up those shapes (which will happen naturally as you keep sketching this) that throw is gonna be on fire. Like that a lot.

TastyMcNasty
02-05-2012, 03:36 PM
groovy throws, shits on your old ones


For suuuure. Once you clean up those shapes (which will happen naturally as you keep sketching this) that throw is gonna be on fire. Like that a lot.

cheers :D

Phat 2
02-05-2012, 03:40 PM
truth. props on the progress kid :)

SkateJunt
02-05-2012, 04:08 PM
had a nice day painting today at a sick bridge spot, a freight even stopped right on the bridge and i caught tags on my first ever freight, overall good day
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7017/6825740029_d26eaba92e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825740029/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825740029/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
the R is really fucked up on this one
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7004/6825735477_284311c732.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825735477/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825735477/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7034/6825738457_fd1cffac1d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825738457/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825738457/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7152/6825726501_15b960261e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825726501/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6825726501/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

kwu
02-05-2012, 04:15 PM
gettin better make the left leg of the r in the toss round too

SkateJunt
02-05-2012, 04:23 PM
thanks man

MoganOne
02-05-2012, 09:00 PM
Some fun withe highlighters and sharpies while I was bored at work.
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-02-05_18-18-01_60.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-02-05_20-50-45_657.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-02-05_20-22-09_194.jpg

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
02-05-2012, 09:03 PM
those are tight!!!

MoganOne
02-05-2012, 09:12 PM
Thanks bro

MN Nice
02-05-2012, 09:35 PM
This is a damn fine page. bump tasty, phat, mone and colors. Gerb, I told ya dude! Shits looking much better when its simple. Good looks on painting too.

SkateJunt
02-06-2012, 07:03 AM
yeah ive been feeling simples alot more lately, all ive been sketching is simps throws and a shitload of hands

criscros18
02-06-2012, 01:59 PM
phat that throw is dope....
zombie change the E on aecs doesnt go wit the throw..
any crits..?
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5809/img0018sg.jpg
http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/8871/img0015bp.jpg…holy crap. please stop.

MN Nice
02-06-2012, 04:42 PM
Exchange with a guy on another forum. should've thickened up the Z a bit more.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00637-20120206-1628.jpg?t=1328568054

Hick94
02-06-2012, 04:55 PM
criscros 18 i know its shit but im finding it hard to get the hang of throw ups.....better..?
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/516/img0021ws.jpg

MN Nice
02-06-2012, 05:03 PM
Exchange with a guy on another forum. should've thickened up the Z a bit more.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00637-20120206-1628.jpg?t=1328568054

I'm hot with taking the bottom page posts.

Skadeem
02-06-2012, 07:45 PM
criscros 18 i know its shit but im finding it hard to get the hang of throw ups.....better..?

you been posting the same shit for a long time, and it's barely gotten better. I think you may be wasting your time.

I don't think me or crisco were being sarcastic

SkateJunt
02-06-2012, 07:52 PM
some new throw shiz
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7171/6833166573_0ca32bf5c7.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6833166573/)
Picture 243 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6833166573/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7146/6833177139_164f062731.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6833177139/)
Picture 242 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6833177139/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Skadeem
02-06-2012, 09:01 PM
R looks kinda like a k, the b looks like an e with random crap, g needs flavor.

SkateJunt
02-06-2012, 09:05 PM
thanks

'Crook'
02-07-2012, 10:33 AM
53676
Any crits please ?

intel
02-07-2012, 11:11 AM
" Sup Y'all" Im new here and new to graff in general. Its some new excitement love the look of it love the thrill of getting up love just the boldness colors expressions symmetry. its really just unexplainable! Ima put up my first couple of peices.

5367953680

5368153682

53687536895369053691

536955369653698

Hick94
02-07-2012, 12:26 PM
skadeem what do you mean same shit...?

PETER
02-07-2012, 12:37 PM
Intel stick to the books. Please see the new to graffiti thread. Read it end to end twice. Just a warning. You are not killing toys nor are you a toy killing it so drop that.

'Crook'
02-07-2012, 02:46 PM
can any one give me crits on my entry ?

'Crook'
02-07-2012, 02:58 PM
here it is one again ! 53707

Coleo
02-07-2012, 03:00 PM
im likein it just drop the lumps on top of the "C" and the "E"

dankbudz
02-07-2012, 03:35 PM
lol NAED, look good though. that seder throw you posted was dope

Colors
02-07-2012, 03:41 PM
Yeah me and k's just dont go together, and thanks man i was actually a little proud of myself for those throws haha

snoketg
02-07-2012, 08:26 PM
intel- like they said.... hit the books
gerb- that thing at the end need to be fixed e or b
crook- i like the bumps on the c and e but the M isnt really going with the rest.
colours- i like that shit, i cant to k's ether.. but yeah it looks sweet, maybe like define the D a bit more or whatever
Hick- i havent seen alot of your throwies, but i did see one a couple months ago or whatever and it looks the same

heres my throwies sorry about them all going in different directions, just 2 letters RE
53791

SkateJunt
02-07-2012, 09:06 PM
quick throw

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7146/6839082745_4a1fe5a2ce.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6839082745/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6839082745/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

snoketg
02-07-2012, 09:16 PM
still looks the same put more ephasis on the straight line in the b

SkateJunt
02-07-2012, 09:17 PM
the top part of the b?

Norfsuthr
02-08-2012, 06:56 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7048/6843954543_8240a10334.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6843954543/)
oie_915311aJkDwGYC (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6843954543/)

def not on point but i feel ok about it, thoughts?

Skadeem
02-08-2012, 08:30 PM
I like it but I'd see about maybe making the top bar of the f a bit more pronounced and fucking around with the u's and c's some more

Mori
02-08-2012, 08:37 PM
Never down with a star or any sort of hash mark or line for a hole in letters like o and p.

Norfsuthr
02-08-2012, 09:26 PM
Yea my U's came out pretty bad, the C isnt quite right either. You're right about the F needing emphasis on the top cause mori thinks its a P haha.

And mori i feel you about the *, but if you don't like stars or lines what do you use for the holes? strictly dots or circles and faces?

Mori
02-08-2012, 11:27 PM
I usually rock a hollowed out 'o' with a drop shadow in the open space. But don't get me wrong, its a personal pref. I can digg your style home boy. I just think * can be used as a cop out for a otherwise dope letter, ya know?

verty
02-09-2012, 03:47 PM
I havent been here for awhile.. but ive been still toy bombing. Any thoughts and feedback would be great ;)

PETER
02-09-2012, 04:26 PM
If I'm not mistaken I recall you.... and if my memory serves me right you've gotten better. Keep fuckin' with 3 and 4. Relax with some of the highlights it's a bit of an over kill. some of your stuff is a little wobbly and out of proportion.... like the R's in 2 and 3.

Norfsuthr
02-09-2012, 04:27 PM
That 3rd one looks ok, not a throw but its good compared to your other shit. On the top 2 you're doing bubble styles for the ER but bar type ish on the VT, conform that shit. Look at some throws on flickr or something, usually they're 1 or 2 lines per letter, just go with that for now and keep the whole thing simple. btw I've only ever seen 3 guys who can rock a shine in their throws and not look like trash.

SkateJunt
02-09-2012, 05:37 PM
my entry for next weeks throw battle
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7141/6848824547_14d7811d15.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6848824547/)
Jints throwie battle (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6848824547/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

gemer
02-09-2012, 10:16 PM
diggen them colors^ think you should work on the d' more tho

'Crook'
02-09-2012, 10:43 PM
im likein it just drop the lumps on top of the "C" and the "E"
Thanks for the crits dude !

smokeitup
02-10-2012, 04:48 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY10THFEB003.jpg

crits?

VERBS
02-10-2012, 06:57 AM
i think that this looks more on the piece side,becuz it took u awhile and it doesnt look very rushede,its pretty good very nice fill

PETER
02-10-2012, 07:40 AM
i think that this looks more on the piece side,becuz it took u awhile and it doesnt look very rushede,its pretty good very nice fill
fired.

naked. the full name joints are solid. I'm with Gemer on the D. progressing nicely.

Trab
02-10-2012, 08:01 AM
Try to keep throwies simple. Practice some more, i liked your handstyle but this one isn't that good.
I will drop a throwie on this page when i'm at home.

Mori
02-10-2012, 10:03 AM
i think that this looks more on the piece side,becuz it took u awhile and it doesnt look very rushede,its pretty good very nice fill
Get to class, tot.

Trab
02-10-2012, 01:58 PM
/////////////////////////

Phat 2
02-10-2012, 06:03 PM
the fog one's the only good thing you've got. start from there and move up. dont worry about style yet..

VeX'D
02-11-2012, 10:07 AM
53994

Any crits?

Norfsuthr
02-11-2012, 07:44 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7197/6859787029_7da0f1a0c4.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6859787029/)
oie_1223855Le00lZff (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6859787029/)

vex try it with some style I guess, youre consistent with bar widths (except in the V kinda) so I guess go in

Phat 2
02-11-2012, 08:05 PM
ecok^

that was your crit

Norfsuthr
02-11-2012, 08:18 PM
ehh i see it I guess, gotta work out proportions better

or maybe i should change my name to E.at COcK

MN Nice
02-11-2012, 08:30 PM
Or you could pick a good word lol

bio99
02-13-2012, 12:10 AM
54284

crits?

Trab
02-13-2012, 08:13 AM
Thanks Phat, i'm gonna keep practicing on paper.

StAtiK1
02-13-2012, 06:07 PM
just came back from a 2 year break and this was the throw i was rocking when i stopped. worth painting or should i scrap it?
http://i41.tinypic.com/i5cbjq.jpg

keenDSK
02-13-2012, 11:10 PM
id say scrap it, find somethin with more style.
nowwwww criticize, constructively!
5446754468

0nly10fmikind
02-13-2012, 11:52 PM
scrap it, or at least fill it in or something.

SkateJunt
02-14-2012, 06:33 PM
Just some pen stuff
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7200/6878326957_f2ce8af679.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6878326957/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6878326957/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

TastyMcNasty
02-14-2012, 08:46 PM
id say scrap it, find somethin with more style.
nowwwww criticize, constructively!
5446754468

scrap it completely. the points on the bottom leave too much blank space, the lines and the giant holes make it look more toy than it might actually be, and the letter structure isn't all quite there.

'Crook'
02-15-2012, 11:39 AM
54526
Any crits pleasee ??

"Scap!"
02-15-2012, 02:35 PM
54552

tell me what u think.

'Crook'
02-15-2012, 02:39 PM
I dont really know what to tell you !! But im sure someone here knows !

"Scap!"
02-15-2012, 05:34 PM
just give me advice guy! i dont care how nice or shitty it looks, ive been doing this throwie for a year now. maybe i should change the P and the C, idk really what to do.

'Crook'
02-15-2012, 11:02 PM
You should change the s the c the a and the p

'Crook'
02-15-2012, 11:03 PM
And do more simple stuff

Skaep
02-16-2012, 01:09 AM
I went for simple, but i think its too simple.. crits greatly appreciated.

54619

I know its forced but its a start I guess.

dankbudz
02-16-2012, 01:29 AM
thats not too simple. is it supposed to be SY or SC? or what

lostyoursense
02-16-2012, 01:42 AM
thats not too simple. is it supposed to be SY or SC? or what

It's something maybe sk?

dankbudz
02-16-2012, 02:02 AM
i hope its supposed to be a Y...

0nly10fmikind
02-16-2012, 05:50 AM
how did you get SC? it's deff SY or SK, either way the Y or K needs to be fixed.

Norfsuthr
02-16-2012, 01:17 PM
just came back from a 2 year break and this was the throw i was rocking when i stopped. worth painting or should i scrap it?
http://i41.tinypic.com/i5cbjq.jpg


Dont listen to these children; take a look at their shit, not quite in a place to be saying scrap it. Let's see how you do it on paper and go from there. Definitely don't scrap it, it's simple and on the right track.

Gerb- You need a new g my man. I'm having trouble with G's too, Kind of a tough letter for throws. Try some new shapes.

Skaep
02-16-2012, 02:18 PM
I went for simple, but i think its too simple.. crits greatly appreciated.

54619

I know its forced but its a start I guess.

its supposed to be sk but yeah i think i should define the k more, thanks guys.

'Crook'
02-16-2012, 02:44 PM
Any crits for mine ??

snoketg
02-16-2012, 02:58 PM
yeah, crooks make your letters more proportionate and the lines more clean and shit, then start puttin a little style into it mang

and dont cover up the middle leg of your m!

logesoner
02-17-2012, 05:37 AM
5486954870 critz?

'Crook'
02-17-2012, 07:21 AM
yeah, crooks make your letters more proportionate and the lines more clean and shit, then start puttin a little style into it mang

and dont cover up the middle leg of your m!
Thanks i appreciate !

MN Nice
02-17-2012, 10:01 AM
Its a good start Loges, its good to have some uniformity among your letters for a throw, but they all have the same shape besides the O. Keep practicing and tweaking your letters, but make sure you keep your letter structure with.

logesoner
02-17-2012, 05:23 PM
Its a good start Loges, its good to have some uniformity among your letters for a throw, but they all have the same shape besides the O. Keep practicing and tweaking your letters, but make sure you keep your letter structure with. cheers for the tips man

Skame Graffiti
02-17-2012, 09:23 PM
54953549545495554956549575495854959

B-36
02-18-2012, 06:29 AM
pretty weak but still

54982

Fuck
55011

I had to do it55018

Gangsta rap made me do it

Hick94
02-18-2012, 10:53 AM
skame that truck pic is sick so is the walrus
any critz?
http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/2449/img0026hs.jpg

uknowigetup
02-18-2012, 07:59 PM
Sup you guys, I haven't worked with my throwie too much, here is one that I came up with. I finally decided on this k which I like, but I don't like the W. I tried to make it symmetrical, but it didn't come out the way I would have liked. Critz.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120218_201521.jpg

smokeitup
02-18-2012, 09:38 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/SATURDAY18THFEB2012009.jpg

killroywashere
02-19-2012, 08:21 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7067/6902727565_b392dd9bde.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6902727565/)

@skame - that walrus is ill

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7050/6904134375_4d324e10bb.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6904134375/)

B-36
02-19-2012, 09:54 AM
551905519155192

Writers block -.-

Skadeem
02-19-2012, 08:16 PM
know your throwies aren't too much different from your pieces. you should start studying the differences in structures among simps and throws and pieces and such. youtube is always good

killroywashere
02-20-2012, 02:20 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7045/6911663563_09f5e80719.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6911663563/)
logesone - keep at it bro
dkode - that last bomb is fresh. a fill would have been nice tho

killroywashere
02-20-2012, 02:22 PM
@ B - 36 - why dont you take a break from drawing for a day or two. or maybe you need to paint. something to get out of a slump you know?

MN Nice
02-20-2012, 08:25 PM
entry for the throw battle.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00675-20120220-1945.jpg?t=1329788870

Skaep
02-21-2012, 01:32 AM
Well I had honestly never seen SKAME or his throws before...I feel like im biting with these now. But crits?

55457

SkateJunt
02-21-2012, 03:10 PM
some slaps i made last night
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7209/6916184833_ecb23a32ed.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6916184833/)
Slapppys (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6916184833/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

"Braze"
02-21-2012, 05:30 PM
55478
Crits anyone?

STOXY
02-21-2012, 05:33 PM
BSB mannnn and looking sick

TastyMcNasty
02-21-2012, 07:02 PM
55478
Crits anyone?

go simpler, stop with the lines inside the letters, and basically trash the whole thing.

Skaep
02-21-2012, 08:36 PM
Well I had honestly never seen SKAME or his throws before...I feel like im biting with these now. But crits?

55457

Bump for bottom of page post.. Crits?

Garfobz
02-22-2012, 04:02 PM
55557
critz anyone? been working on this for about a year now

snoketg
02-23-2012, 12:45 AM
hey skaep i noticed that your throwies haven't changed to much at all. i dont really have much to say about your letters. lol. but i have some advice a dude told me about throwies. its that the inside of your letters should have the basic letter that your writing inside it. if that makes sense but check this out hope it helps
55594
i the e is a bad example but you should get the jist of it

snoketg
02-23-2012, 12:47 AM
gerb- i like the top left slap the best
braze- go with what tastymcnasty said
roast- go simpler and bring the T closer to the S

KillahChop
02-23-2012, 01:55 AM
yo roast, diggin that T, and that A, I don't really think that the rest flows togetha tho.
braze, them overall letter structures flow real nice, just figure somethin out with that e.
gerb, fuck man I aint even gonna say shit haha. SWAG
skaep, really diggin them letters man, try a full piece, with 3d

crits please?

[URL=]http://www.flickr.com/photos/76006644@N08/6827049227/in/photostream (]http://www.flickr.com/photos/76006644@N08/6827032409/in/photostream[/URL)

PS : sorry, cant figure out the images, if someone could help me out that'd be great!

smokeitup
02-23-2012, 01:56 AM
toys forum has gotten really bad, i thought people could do better than this!

SkateJunt
02-23-2012, 07:15 AM
thanks snoke and killah chop. killah im not sure how long youve been doin graff, so i dont know if you know what basic letter structure is, you have potential, those letters are just really sloppy and wobbly, if no one explains structure to you by the time im back from school, il find the page i learn it from

KillahChop
02-23-2012, 02:26 PM
Word thanks a bunch man!

TastyMcNasty
02-23-2012, 03:23 PM
55557
critz anyone? been working on this for about a year now

for a year that's pretty weak. the only thing i actually like is the T, which is actually pretty sick. don't do shines, and typically on throws you do a drop shadow, where as you're doing 3D. and that handy, from what i cab see, is extremely weak. focus on that for now.

killroywashere
02-23-2012, 08:23 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7178/6778474520_3a25fd4637.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6778474520/)

H1P30N3R
02-23-2012, 11:41 PM
weekly throw battle
arson - not bad but the r is off the r and s need tightened up with a bigger right leg on the r
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120224_003337.jpg

gemer
02-24-2012, 12:02 AM
nice^^
arson the o and the n is pretty nice but not diggen the s' or the r' so much

NanaKillsKMC
02-24-2012, 12:07 AM
Yo whats good Kills up in this thread..Browsin' gettin familiar wit da art here K'sUP!!!

Garfobz
02-24-2012, 12:59 PM
thanks for the crits everyone! fuckin with a drop shadow now

hellomynameisftc
02-24-2012, 02:07 PM
garfobs looking good dude, try doing the highlights in a light colour. but nice to see you here.
-R15K03 ON3R

A-MAN
02-25-2012, 01:56 PM
First post! new here, been stalkin for a minute, just lookin for some crits.

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l317/simonn_01/IMG_0315.jpg

Colors
02-25-2012, 05:22 PM
aman- i cant even read that
hipe- dope throws as always i cant find anyhting wrong

Can i get some good ol crits?
Fudged up my K. Try to look at the K as not a hole in the middle of the 2 legs, but the 2 legs overlapping. That's what i was going for but then i realized people would think its a hole...

and ran outta space for the D
55997

ChadWarden
02-25-2012, 05:53 PM
the way the right of you k and left of your e both are pointed is somewhat akward, but besides that, thats pretty solid. a is getting too covered, i suppose.

KillahChop
02-25-2012, 07:29 PM
yo roast, diggin that T, and that A, I don't really think that the rest flows togetha tho.
braze, them overall letter structures flow real nice, just figure somethin out with that e.
gerb, fuck man I aint even gonna say shit haha. SWAG
skaep, really diggin them letters man, try a full piece, with 3d

crits please?

[URL=]http://www.flickr.com/photos/76006644@N08/6827049227/in/photostream (]http://www.flickr.com/photos/76006644@N08/6827032409/in/photostream[/URL)

PS : sorry, cant figure out the images, if someone could help me out that'd be great!

Yo didnt really get any crits, anybody?

leaf88
02-25-2012, 08:26 PM
crits please ? 56015 crits please ? and can someone help me out our give me some different ideas for my letter R...eww i hate R's lol but I gotta learn..

lostyoursense
02-25-2012, 08:47 PM
56016

lostyoursense
02-25-2012, 08:48 PM
5601756018

found a abandoned building and had some fun today

KillahChop
02-25-2012, 09:32 PM
Zerd, the drop shadow in the bottom left of the Z is a little fucked up
sense, the bottom red N, i feel like it doesn't flow that well with the rest of the throw

MoganOne
02-25-2012, 10:41 PM
You straight up Jacked Seen's letters in that last red throw...

56050

lostyoursense
02-25-2012, 10:44 PM
You straight up Jacked Seen's letters in that last red throw...

56050

Yo straight up wasn't trying to jack shit my friend

MoganOne
02-25-2012, 10:44 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-02-25_22-35-30_517.jpg
a drunk throwie. meh pretty wack

lostyoursense
02-25-2012, 10:47 PM
But I see where your coming from I like my other throw better anyways

MoganOne
02-25-2012, 10:50 PM
Yo straight up wasn't trying to jack shit my friend
Hey pal, i'm not your friend. lol jk bro. I like how simple you have your throws at an early stage I would guess. It seem that you are going in the right direction. Those are some cool looking spots to drop those pieces to by the way

lostyoursense
02-25-2012, 10:53 PM
Hey pal, i'm not your friend. lol jk bro. I like how simple you have your throws at an early stage I would guess. It seem that you are going in the right direction. Those are some cool looking spots to drop those pieces to by the way

Thanks mang yeah that spots dope it's I old like mini mall thing been a downed for like three years I went down there with two cans of paint and had myself a good ol time haha

Norfsuthr
02-25-2012, 11:36 PM
Naked I like that. You could do something more with the D i guess.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7208/6784402536_57554a32bd.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6784402536/)
oie_2662917gK0wBF7Y (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6784402536/)

TastyMcNasty
02-25-2012, 11:39 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-02-25_22-35-30_517.jpg
a drunk throwie. meh pretty wack

love that N

Hick94
02-26-2012, 03:29 PM
sense i like that first throw
http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3430/img0031fw.jpg

MN Nice
02-26-2012, 08:20 PM
Dear god, no ^

dankbudz
02-26-2012, 08:25 PM
nah thats hella good

A-MAN
02-27-2012, 10:47 AM
ok let me try again with a more visible one.

i would love some crits

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l317/simonn_01/IMG_0305.jpg

and it says MANIQ

sadgeh
02-27-2012, 12:44 PM
Where are the M, the A, the N, the I and the Q? Make your letters more simple man, this isnt dope

lostyoursense
02-27-2012, 01:03 PM
sense i like that first throw
http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/3430/img0031fw.jpg

thaks man yours could use some work but im bad with throws so i cant give much advise

lostyoursense
02-27-2012, 01:05 PM
theres no way that says maniq thats stretched out squares with some lines

millie
02-28-2012, 10:44 AM
idk what makes this a toy thread, some of these throw ups have some potential

leaf88
02-28-2012, 11:09 AM
Sorry to do this again... but can I please get some crits ? and maybe some help with my R's..? 56172

MN Nice
02-28-2012, 04:23 PM
Ayy

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00691-20120228-1619.jpg?t=1330467719

Norfsuthr
02-28-2012, 04:46 PM
^nice. I'd lower the middle line in the U so its not cramped in the little spike there, make the bottom of the e a little bigger, and make the swirl in the S smaller or lower. Actually I think you can come up with a cooler S than that, but it looks fine as is.

Norfsuthr
02-28-2012, 06:28 PM
Yea find a new K brother. Gotta say it's lookin proper otherwise. Maybe straighten up the left leg of the N a bit, and the E and D could both use a little more creativity.

7thIncision
02-29-2012, 09:21 AM
@MN Nice - man I'm loving that throwie style, but the drop-shadow around the bottom circle on the exclamation point's a little fucked.
@Mildstyles - The D doesn't match, i think the bar size is fine just even it up a bit. But you need something that's going to fill up more black space inside that D.

Here's one of my pen hollows. Goin' back to some simps.
56218

killroywashere
02-29-2012, 10:27 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7177/6795257820_317229b89e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6795257820/)

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7209/6941371647_79ba11386f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6941371647/)

@mildstyle - try the the extension on the lower left part of the N. maybe throw that swirl in the D in the A

GortGort
02-29-2012, 02:34 PM
crits started not long ago.
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0097.jpg
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0086.jpg

notmikegiant
02-29-2012, 06:56 PM
@ kilroy - I would like to see the S a little bit bigger, especially in the first pic it seems a little small compared to the rest.

@ Gort - I dig repeating the letters in the second, but I would try some different G's and see how you can change it up


56302

rip me apart - I've got an "idea" of what works and what doesn't so specifics are truly appreciated.

Mildstyles
02-29-2012, 07:10 PM
Not mike giant where about do you live

notmikegiant
02-29-2012, 07:22 PM
^ PM'd you

MiDo93
02-29-2012, 07:46 PM
@notmikegiant - The S is alright, the second letter cant make it out (it looks like either a "P" or and a lower case "e"), the E looks a little weird, and the for the X the top and bottom need to be a little closer together.

56308
56309
Crits?

notmikegiant
02-29-2012, 08:05 PM
did a really terrible job on the P, I was pretty disappointed with that. your glows are really clean, i'm not understanding that last letter. and keep it up if you want, but as is it looks really off with that dot on the end.


edit - i'm a dumbass, I would blow up that O

Mildstyles
02-29-2012, 08:07 PM
ewww Mido that poor thing under your second throw :( </3

MiDo93
02-29-2012, 08:38 PM
i know, the cdc piece under the last throwie was dissed beyond belief. i would never do that to a cdc piece without shit all over it

sadgeh
03-01-2012, 12:20 PM
Mido - Make that O bigger way bigger.
Notmikegiant - Keep it off the wall, just sketch.
Killroy - dope

56370
56371

And some one-liners
56372

Mildstyles
03-01-2012, 01:17 PM
Why the hell did i just walk through a damn snowstorm for this.
Crits?
Too tired to crit anyone elses right meow ill edit this later when i feel like it.
56382

NouveauP
03-01-2012, 02:42 PM
Looks good, NAKED. The E and D seem to be taller than the other 3 letters, but nothing major.

quick backwards two letter at a chill spot.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0509.jpg

Mildstyles
03-01-2012, 02:56 PM
You really like going backwards huh? Haha, that 2 letter is looking nice^. The only thing I see is the left leg of the K the part above the ball on the bottom coulda been bigger, idk that part just looks a little weird. But thats all i can see, otherwise that thing is beautiful! And dont worry im sending my piece in a little bit, So just make sure you're on before the deadline so we dont get disqualified :p

lostyoursense
03-01-2012, 03:07 PM
I,like the throw mild

H1P30N3R
03-01-2012, 04:45 PM
nice toss naked and 2 letter nouv...the rest of you cats get back to the drawing board

sadgeh
03-01-2012, 04:58 PM
56370
56371

And some one-liners
56372

Bottom page bump and some crits would be nice.

H1P30N3R
03-01-2012, 10:43 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120301_230313.jpg

NouveauP
03-02-2012, 02:22 AM
Pesoe- Your bars just look kinda clunky. Just work on your consistency and line work.

I'm trying to make this look like an old school NY throw. Dunno if I achieved that or not.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0517.jpg

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 11:18 AM
that K is dope... looks more simpy than throwy though yanno?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7178/6889645193_a9436e5554_z.jpg

NouveauP
03-02-2012, 11:26 AM
I thought the K looked more like a simp too, trying to find a way to simplify my bottom right bar. But the funny thing is that the K was done with one line and was the only letter I could've left as a hollow and it still be clean. Check the slightly darker blues where I had to resketch the letters. None in the K. lol. But yeah I'm trying to fix it up so it flows better with the other letters. Kinda bit hipsterpunks on that one anyway.

I like your style unik, it has a lot of potential. it just seems like you rush these throws and some of your forms get sloppy. Most apparent in the red throwie's K. The bottom is shifted to the right really far. And the N is just kinda wild. Wouldn't really guess it was an N had it not been for your handy. But keep em comin, I like your shit.

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 11:36 AM
lol it isnt an N its an M... umik.... im still workin on the hands i can see why ud think it was an N... and i say throws are supposed to be fast n sloppy, i think when they look like rubber stamps it gets annoying, i like tweaking little parts of the letters based on how fast im doing it or how im holding the can or marker... its like comparing augors throwups to copes, u could say copes are way cleaner but augors are way more free and sloppy, i think they have more style... to each his own

but yea u should think of a different K to use for a nice quick throwy, maybe a oneliner even... cuz that K is real clean and itd give u a perfect starting point to laying down a clean outline for a simp that u could potentially do a lot faster.... shit mayn id rather be able to lay down a simp than a throw if they took the same amount of time fo shooooo lol..... but yea any throw shouldnt take more than 15 seconds to lay down the outline... if ya ask me

Phat 2
03-02-2012, 06:51 PM
bring the nemor tosses back asshole. fuck umik.

klaus. diggin it minus the U

MoganOne
03-02-2012, 07:23 PM
I think u can come up with a better "K" and "M" but It's a fresh Name to work with

Lado
03-03-2012, 01:30 AM
56495
56496

IbuprofenTablets
03-03-2012, 10:12 AM
Pesoe- Your bars just look kinda clunky. Just work on your consistency and line work.

I'm trying to make this look like an old school NY throw. Dunno if I achieved that or not.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0517.jpg


Nice, man. And yeah, you landed it. Reminds me of some 90's Ny graff (Ja, Kez5) with a west coast twist.

The top left of your U is a bit thin, though.

Phat 2
03-03-2012, 12:57 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/430253_391331834227065_100000507545549_1436893_128 1718032_n.jpg

crit it

MN Nice
03-03-2012, 02:28 PM
Much better.

dankbudz
03-03-2012, 04:01 PM
i don't like that N/O thing you got going on..

Dossbog
03-03-2012, 07:02 PM
56546
Pac Man Scheme I tried out on my door

notmikegiant
03-03-2012, 10:51 PM
like the idea, not really feeling the execution. could just be me but the drop shadow looks off, it doesnt look shifted it looks too small

SiteGraff
03-04-2012, 10:25 AM
dope stuff guys, gonna try and upload some of mine soon. stay up!

Silon295
03-04-2012, 12:37 PM
Pesoe- Your bars just look kinda clunky. Just work on your consistency and line work.

I'm trying to make this look like an old school NY throw. Dunno if I achieved that or not.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0517.jpg

still aint there yet. still looks west coasty

after
03-04-2012, 04:44 PM
56859 crites plz

Phat 2
03-04-2012, 04:45 PM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/430253_391331834227065_100000507545549_1436893_128 1718032_n.jpg

crit it

bump for mo critters

Asis13
03-04-2012, 05:02 PM
568705687156872

keenDSK
03-04-2012, 09:45 PM
@phat, looks like a good throwie too me, mess around with M a little is all i can say.
@asis, just keep practicing man, it all needs work though ill tell you that.

cooldawg
03-05-2012, 01:46 AM
phat throwies dope but m isnt in proportion to the rest of it, too short

notmikegiant
03-05-2012, 03:55 AM
feel like im getting some stuff to work out a little more. crits are definitely appreciated.

56912

Dossbog
03-05-2012, 10:11 AM
Yeah the 3d is also messed up because I had painted something else under it using a black fill :/

Mori
03-05-2012, 03:28 PM
57004 toss with a more complicated fill

sadgeh
03-05-2012, 04:48 PM
MOR - That green and purple its dope but its not the best match, white as outline would be better imo

GortGort
03-05-2012, 06:00 PM
changed up the g slightly crit away
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0108.jpg

after
03-06-2012, 09:11 AM
56859 crites plz bump for some crites

Panic519
03-06-2012, 09:22 AM
Spex try an X with less spacing
Mori looks good but a whole in the R would look better I think
Gort your G looks like a weird E or something

Here is an older one
57092

Ojuyn3
03-06-2012, 05:59 PM
57202

Mori
03-06-2012, 06:29 PM
Dope^

Ramsta726
03-06-2012, 08:05 PM
Hello,i'm new here
im ramsta from Jakarta,indonesia
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57267
Respect bro!

killroywashere
03-06-2012, 08:47 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7181/6814500950_2204652a94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6814500950/)

MN Nice
03-06-2012, 10:36 PM
Bump that ramsta!

not happy about this. go ahead and flame.

57315

dankbudz
03-06-2012, 10:54 PM
do it bigger, holmes

kwu
03-07-2012, 12:48 AM
yee muse go bigger it'll flow butter

some scribbles
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7183/6961035937_3015a22669_z.jpg

notmikegiant
03-07-2012, 02:42 AM
been up all night writing some really lame shit, trying to get that X figured out without it looking like an H. can't tell if using a lower case E makes the P look weird. crits always appreciated, and if anyone wants to try their hand at a toss that would be cool too. wouldn't hurt to see someone elses take on it.

57333

@ rams - that first picture looks so clean, like that mellow blue glow.

@ kwu - your scribbles make my nights spent practicing seem like crap, digging the M on the right one and the A's all around

@ mori - that fill in looks awesome, real creative