Throwies

[RX-1]

http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/7832/throwmo8.th.jpg (http://img373.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwmo8.jpg)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9905/newsl0.th.jpg (http://img127.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newsl0.jpg)

the 2nd one is a new one i'm trying out

oak - man you're all over the place! and you've got different styles so that's awesome. keep it up dood!
jinx - that throw looks solid but i think someone else has that name? idk they're probably on the other side of the country

[pureemoti0n]

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/894/scanpanvm9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
scrath i like the YA just the first bit of Y looks a bit small.

[BigBlueViolence]

Oak- I dig every one of those sneak throws, and most of your painted ones, but the ghosty looking Os remind me of Oker.

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5258/dsc09903kj8.jpg

[viseversa101]

My shit. Trying to actually get my throws down.

Crits would help a lot, thanks.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/0909081941.jpg

says "ya!" by the way.

I personally like it

[beefisforburgers]

Oak- I dig every one of those sneak throws, and most of your painted ones, but the ghosty looking Os remind me of Oker.

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5258/dsc09903kj8.jpg

Awe shit I know who Oker is but Ive never even seen this throw man.

[beefisforburgers]

yeah, i know, im still working on it. any advice?

your throw would look nicer if the letters were a little wider and draw A line under your throws when you do them on paper so that the bottoms of the letters are at the same level.

[ShaolinNy]

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii104/beefisforburgers/HPIM0947.jpg

Some shit I drew for sneak

Thanks alot bro there awsome!Ill def practice n ill post some stuff up soon

[Baron]

Oak- I dig every one of those sneak throws, and most of your painted ones, but the ghosty looking Os remind me of Oker.

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5258/dsc09903kj8.jpg

Your throws remind me of BONER

[+Hoodwigga]

well hes throwing up ykk above the first one

[+Hoodwigga]

maybe im old school but i like bubble letters over those kinda like heartshaped ones
and your name kinda sounds like slang for a penis

[braxtons a g]

big blue- you wouldnt happen to be from chicago would you?
dink(poser)- the real dink is from nyc stop taking his pics and acting like its you.

[LikeRainButNot]

maybe im old school but i like bubble letters over those kinda like heartshaped ones
and your name kinda sounds like slang for a penis

lolz :D:D

a schwa is the upsidedown e you find in the dictionary.

[+Hoodwigga]

it sounds gay all the same. i would suggest a name change unless your inviting beef from other cats

[LikeRainButNot]

it sounds gay all the same. i would suggest a name change unless your inviting beef from other cats

beef cause its sounds gay? that's probably one of the dumber things i've heard...

[+Hoodwigga]

ha dont be surprised if your name sounds like slnag for a pecker you could be crossed unless the kids where your at are layed back

[Masta T]

quick one in a hot area lols got caught doin it but now the whole main road can c it =/ haha yea it was kinda shity specially cuz the pink blue up in my hand for no reason fukn brand new lol rushed a lill, wish i had the time to blend it but o well theres the next time
i coverred ovr sum gay shit thts wut tht black shit under my name is lol

lastly im still a mad toy soo dont crit to hard but constructive crit wont url like my 3rd tag n ive done 3 charachters

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/Wall9-12-08.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

I can't believe you said you covered some terrible shit haha your's is terrible man I'm sorry
DOn't do two fill colors ina throwie
Or arrows
Or any of what your doing practice with bubble letters

Don't paint for a long while too
You're going to be embaressed.

[Masta T]

yo i kno its shit u dont have to hate like tht shit u started sumwhere to. thts why im here to learn an theres no1 to learn from where im at. ill do the bubble letters but by shit theres was sumtin the said fuck real big jus scribble shit.

[Mr yarbles]

I know we all starte somewhere
I got hated on too kid it helps you improve alot more then being nice
I'm just saying don't hit streets right now becuase in a few months your going to look back and regret it
For some reason it's always your worst shit that never gets buffed.

[Masta T]

yea i kno. an ight i found a practice tunnel tht hasnt been hit so ill jus go there n practice get cleaner, work on throwies n shit but yea id rather have u be a lil harsh tho motivates me more haha

[Masta T]

i took ur advice yarbles an jus went bck tot da basics wut u think
critz

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/0913081340.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

yellow looks alright lose the lumps off the a though
Don't do fills yet either
Just keep sketching and you'll get it

[Gnar]

yea fix the A and put some shadow on it maybe

[Dying to live]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/akelthrowie.gif

[Gnar]

thats realy good but im having a hard time figuring out if the first letter is an A or a K

edit: i mean A not K sry

[+Hoodwigga]

your having troubles telling if its an a or an a? what the fuck?
but shit looks good mayne i dont like the lil swoop down in the e tho maybe a swoop up like in the a? but whatever

[lolumad?]

i took ur advice yarbles an jus went bck tot da basics wut u think
critz

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/0913081340.jpg

for starters, your name is gay as fuck.
and please stop talking like that
and your letters look like they have hemorrhoids.

[StayHyE]

nice dyin to live

[braxtons a g]

crits pleasee.. ill give some in my next post

[Masta T]

so wheres the crit u jus fukin ripped on meh an my name should have nutin to do with the thrwie. Stop tlikn like fukin wut to? This is a toy fukin forum where toys get crits if ur so god damn good mayb u shouldnt b in this forum.

lyfe nice but it looks like ur y needs a lil work


for starters, your name is gay as fuck.
and please stop talking like that
and your letters look like they have hemorrhoids.

[librelikespie]

hai
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf266.jpg

[SAID]

nice handy!

[Zire]

but shit looks good mayne i dont like the lil swoop down in the e tho maybe a swoop up like in the a? but whatever

i think its actually supposed to represent an eyelid coz of the teeth and chin below it but yeh i could be wrong.

Monster- looks good but sort your skinny leg of the m out and theres a little too much going on in that throw.

[braxtons a g]

monster- looks okay.. i mean i like it till i look closely.. weird shaped letters but i haven figured out if thats good yet lol
masta- your not shittin me.. the Y is so hard.. i picked the most difficult name

[LiRE[kngs]

i picked the four easiest letters for me and made a name out of it thats how i came up with LiRE

[braxtons a g]

i picked the four easiest letters for me and made a name out of it thats how i came up with LiRE
see.. with me. i use to write faze.. but almost got caught cause i guess someone snitched.. so i had to change my name.. and somehow came up with lyfe2, cause i was starting over again. i shoulda changed it early.. im not changin it again lol. already got to far with it..

[Zire]

im not changin it again lol. already got to far with it..

I don't think its too late to change your name. Sure you've got up with that name, but it ain't like people are gonna look at those pieces and be like wow.(no offence, im shit too). I doubt anyone wuold notice if you stopped writing it. Your might find you progress quicker with an easier name.

[whosthisguy]

http://i38.tinypic.com/9is8lv.jpg

thoughts? crits?

[braxtons a g]

I don't think its too late to change your name. Sure you've got up with that name, but it ain't like people are gonna look at those pieces and be like wow.(no offence, im shit too). I doubt anyone wuold notice if you stopped writing it. Your might find you progress quicker with an easier name.
you know what.. i think your right. but see i want a name no ones got and thats hard to find anymore..

[Zire]

if you go to artcrimes.org( i think) they have a list of all there featured artists. When i thought of my name i went on there to see if anyone good had it. If theres a name and there shit then take it and king it.

[Zire]

Just fucking about with a new throwie, its not the finnished product, got alot of tweaks to do. But anyways what you guys think?

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/14092008301.jpg

[whosthisguy]

http://i38.tinypic.com/9is8lv.jpg

thoughts? crits?



MONSTER - see how your R comes down on the right side....make your M and N do that too. idk why you stopped them so high, bring them down like all the other letters.

LYFE2 - You don't have to change your name. just dont paint public spots, sketch a lot more.

crits plz?

[whosthisguy]

ZIRE. take the point out of the top left of the Z and make the R more round

[Masta T]

Lyfe yea u picked a difficult name lolz. Idk ive been dazd but for throwies it works better wit da e so idk if i should keep da e or no lol

[mosezone]

zaro-i would just do regular bubble letters, and get solid ones down. all the weird shit going on, such as the thing on the Z, are unnecessary right now
depo-it's pretty decent, definately clean. i would change the E though so it doesn't look too much like the P, and maybe make the O not wavy looking, that's just me though

new throwie, this one's super fucking sloppy, but it'll hopefully get better the more i paint it. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02039.jpg

[ShaolinNy]

zaro-i would just do regular bubble letters, and get solid ones down. all the weird shit going on, such as the thing on the Z, are unnecessary right now
depo-it's pretty decent, definately clean. i would change the E though so it doesn't look too much like the P, and maybe make the O not wavy looking, that's just me though

new throwie, this one's super fucking sloppy, but it'll hopefully get better the more i paint it. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02039.jpg


hey bro very nice...i tried the thowie u sent me i still need alot more practice but what u think?

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo04/a0/ab/b5c6f49e7569.jpg

crits plz

[7nationarmy]

http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_ce0430fbee5b46ddf97e3168c22f37f0.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_66ed82ccd0749e6cd74006906164679d.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0652.jpg

[mosezone]

http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_ce0430fbee5b46ddf97e3168c22f37f0.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/m_66ed82ccd0749e6cd74006906164679d.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG0652.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i318/one-track-mind/Picture042-1.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i318/one-track-mind/Picture057-2.jpg

i call a bite on this one. no beef or anything, you look like you've got some good can control and you could probably do some dope stuff, but this has gotta be a bite.

[Fube]

indeed.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture047.jpg

[7nationarmy]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i318/one-track-mind/Picture042-1.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i318/one-track-mind/Picture057-2.jpg

i call a bite on this one. no beef or anything, you look like you've got some good can control and you could probably do some dope stuff, but this has gotta be a bite.

lmao..the funny thing is that i just found out about this particular thread..i was posting on 12oz previously never here..so please..stop..

[mosezone]

so you're admitting it's a bite?

[ATE]

Here one of my new ones, fixed the tops of the letters, there now sharper not flat...:P
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/HPIM1612-1.jpg

[lawlcat]

first ever attempt at a throw. be nice.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/mbd.jpg

[whosthisguy]

MADE - it's really not too bad. i would just try and make the D look a litttttle bit more like a d. maybe make it rounder at the bottom. thanks for the crits.

SNEAK - keep sketching duder

ITO or whatever - i'll back and say, it's not tooooo much of a bite. BUMP HATER! <3

DOKER? - the D and O are pretty nice. the ker doesn't fit. make the rest of the letters round at the bottom like they are.

[Albert Fish]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i318/one-track-mind/Picture042-1.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i318/one-track-mind/Picture057-2.jpg

i call a bite on this one. no beef or anything, you look like you've got some good can control and you could probably do some dope stuff, but this has gotta be a bite.
ahaha why/how would he bite io

thats funny.

[smiley 13]

cos the i is the same

[Dying to live]

only so many ways you can do an I

[7nationarmy]

am i admitting?? what are u a tard..it means i never seen that in my life...and there is only a couple ways to do an i..and wen i finally found one that werks...this dickface had to try and hate..its funny cause u prolly just suck is all...call bittes to make u feel better.lmao
:D

[7nationarmy]

oh and its ico kids i c o --->_ l

[ATE]

Lawlcat, dispite your name im gonna give you crits.....just because that throw is fucking good for a begginer one....no beef..but i fucking hate your name :D (user name)

[lawlcat]

hah. No worries. User names arent really my thing. Just kind of grabbed the first thing that came to me. Thank you for the crits though.

[ATE]

hah. No worries. User names arent really my thing. Just kind of grabbed the first thing that came to me. Thank you for the crits though.

no prob...i know what you mean with the name thing :D

[mosezone]

am i admitting?? what are u a tard..it means i never seen that in my life...and there is only a couple ways to do an i..and wen i finally found one that werks...this dickface had to try and hate..its funny cause u prolly just suck is all...call bittes to make u feel better.lmao
:D

haha man, i guess you showed me. chill out, quit peeing your pants over this shit. and i never said anything about me, i was just saying that it looked like a bite. maybe it's not, it just looks similar.

and bumping this, any crits or feelings on this throw?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02039.jpg

[7nationarmy]

no man i never get mad...call it a bitte or not similarity w.e use are calen it now a days..its all good son..im doin ma thing and planing on proceeding and its all good kid..i guess it was boredom or some shit ;)..

edit..nice throw by the way

[LeaksOne]

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff015.jpg
tryin to funky up my L. i still need a new fuckin K

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff016.jpg
possible aka name

Crits??


can i get some crits??

[LeaksOne]

MAOE - hot throws man keep it up
ATE - keep practicing on paper
Fube - Hot as always
7nation - that last throw is hot

[whosthisguy]

it's MADE and i critted you up a couple of pots.
Leaks, whatever you do, don't write neo.
and for LEAKS, try and make all your letter the same size. and keep sketching.

[BigBlueViolence]

and bumping this, any crits or feelings on this throw?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/DSC02039.jpg

I dig it, but I think it would look better if you filled in the holes on the A and D. That's just me, though, do what you gotta do.


http://i36.tinypic.com/aoxqpy.jpg

[viseversa101]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/side.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

That looks like straight up mexican gang graff, dude. Expect to get crossed by ms13 and shit painting like that.

[viseversa101]

mexican gangs wont do this
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/5.jpg

[viseversa101]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/roller.jpg

[whosthisguy]

nice fuckin rollers dude.

[Masta T]

Vise - nice rollers man especially in a train yad
Made- were u use them new krylon cans the spray 360? if so u kno how to get the fukin caps off?

[mosezone]

ha i write MAOE, i just have a shitty O, need to make it look less like a D i guess. and i was just using some old krylon, i fucking wish i could get those shitty caps off. i never used krylon when they had normal caps, and now that they're gone, i miss em':(

[Masta T]

lolz they always got krylion on sale for like 3 buck but i hate the new caps. they ight for a fill but id prefer a stock cap. i jus get rustos

[mosezone]

yea word, i almost always use rusto, but krylon used to be the only kind of paint i could rack, so i've got some left over.

[blunttokes]

made u aint in tdot r ya..

[mosezone]

ha nah, why?

[blunttokes]

jus wonderin

looked like a spot i hit wen i was in tdot...
but im takin ur sig as illinois lol


5min sketch exchange i did for ALTER
yes its goin there too
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/4838/dscf0099tw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Eack]

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/7673/img0009dk9.jpg

[blunttokes]

shizam hahaha i use to say that when i was like 15 yrs old

fuckin longago

[Eack]

hahah same here! i feel its a priceless expression that should be back on the streets hahahah

[blunttokes]

im guessing you aint over 17..

but keep drawing..

[Eack]

im 17....

[blunttokes]

haha

watta guess

[LeaksOne]

it's MADE and i critted you up a couple of pots.
Leaks, whatever you do, don't write neo.
and for LEAKS, try and make all your letter the same size. and keep sketching.

oh shit my bad. i thought it said maoe. im still fuckin around wit my throw so ill work on makin all the letters the same size. an how come i cant write neo? i didnt have my heart set on it or nothin i jus was fuckin wit the letters.

[BigBlueViolence]

It does say Maoe.

http://i36.tinypic.com/34irc4k.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

them stickers are ugly i like your hands alot better

[BigBlueViolence]

...me?

[+Hoodwigga]

yeah you. maybe capital letters? but dont do anything just cause of me

[blunttokes]

is it EA or CA if so make the A maybe a lil more like the C,E? :S

thats jus me though so iunno.

[BigBlueViolence]

'll admit that just the e and a together are kind of ugly, but I think it's a little better with the whole thing

http://i36.tinypic.com/9te89z.jpg

[librelikespie]

hai some throws
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf270.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf271.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf272.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf260.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf262.jpg

[GIG]

http://lh5.ggpht.com/deliopera/SNEfaa3q7hI/AAAAAAAABRw/avZjRsKrmbU/s720/0917081033.jpg

@ Libre: Not liking the teeth, but the letters are lookin' good for a throwie.

@ BigBlue: That sticker is kind of weak... heh.

[sex without condoms]

way to suck

[Eack]

http://lh5.ggpht.com/deliopera/SNEfaa3q7hI/AAAAAAAABRw/avZjRsKrmbU/s720/0917081033.jpg

@ Libre: Not liking the teeth, but the letters are lookin' good for a throwie.

@ BigBlue: That sticker is kind of weak... heh.

id stick to paper if i was you man

[GIG]

Well it was my first ever and on wet wood. Can't really expect it to be amazing

[lawlcat]

trying to shorten it up.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/hhgkdhc.jpg

edit: says dkr

[mosezone]

Well it was my first ever and on wet wood. Can't really expect it to be amazing

yea, but neither of those are good excuses for it to suck as bad as it does. i'm sorry, but the letters are all different sizes, the fill is horrendous, and it's seriously bad. read the new to graff thread, it will really help.

[ErrorOner...]

My new two-letter throwie... trying to find something to throw up quicker.

http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0915081723.jpg

As opposed to writing my whole name,,
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture17.jpg

[springbreak95]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00232.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo315/art_critic/IMG00233.jpg
what do you think? also just a two letter but i like it more than my whole name
sp i dig your throw
gig wow are you kidding?

[LeaksOne]

ErrorOner - not feelin the handy at all. to much extra stuff. start simple. the sketch underneath it needs some serious practice. that painted pic has potential but you need to sketch more. keep workin at it.
Gig - no...jus.......no. excuses wont help thats jus horrible.
SpringBreak - That throw has potential but its not as clean as it could be. my advice is keep sketchin an then maybe you'll like your full name or else jus change your name to SO. keep it up tho

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff019.jpg
latest drawing. trying hard to perfect this throw. CRITS??

[+Hoodwigga]

i cant do a good l so i wont crit you on that but the e im not feeling the a is eh k is shit and the same with the s. i wouldnt make the top of the s come down and lightly cover up the middle myself and the lower right part of the k is crippled or something

just my thoughts

[LeaksOne]

ive always said i need a new k an im not guna use the KET style k cuz EVERYBODY uses that k. i think im jus guna keep my a for now until i find somthin better. i admit i need work on my s but it can be fixed quick an the e keeps fuckin wit me cuz it has to start on the leg of the l so theres no gaps an i have to make sure people kno its an e. thanx for the crits tho.

[mosezone]

DKR, not really feeling them, maybe mess around with that style or a diff style a little more
SP, make your letters on like the same level, know what i mean? and the whole drop-looking thing is kinda played out in my opinion
SO, i'd get rid of the little attachment things
LEAKS, not bad, just keep playing with it

2 throws from tonight, the 2 letter ones were with a basically empty can. crits?
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/48D2FC5C0001F29D00003E1F22007589420.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/48D2FDD7000B025400005E1722007589420.jpg

[librelikespie]

lawlcat - lose the antennae bro
SO - good can control, dunno about the extensions
made- id lift the to right part f the a so that its the same height as everything else and change the d to make it look less like an O, unless you do write maoe...

crits please
roundy throwie
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf279.jpg
squary throwie
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/asdf280.jpg
:)

[Zire]

Clean up your drawings, they always looked like you cant be assed. xD

[S4d3n]

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5646/stugthrowsih9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/stugthrowsih9.jpg/1/w499.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img229/stugthrowsih9.jpg/1/)

Quick MS Paint pics, some throws that I was tryin' out, the first one came about from a failed attempt at a one liner, it should read 'Stug'. I'd really like some advice or help with it, Throw ups are the only things that I have any sort of trouble with.

[calculating infinity]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a358/ynotynot/nm011.jpgtheres already a well known st/este whos up from the keys to atl

[S4d3n]

***theres already a well known st/este whos up from the keys to atl

If you're referring to me, the ST is obviously just the first two letters of what I write, I didn't finish the rest of the throw in that one, don't have anything to show for it either.

[calculating infinity]

it doesnt really matter unless youre in the area anyways
crits
your bottom S looks like seens and doesnt go with the T
i dont even know whats happening in the top one man, just start from scratch and use bars. i didnt know that was a T for your second letter i had no idea what it was actually.
keep practicing

[ShaolinNy]

hey bro very nice...i tried the thowie u sent me i still need alot more practice but what u think?

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo04/a0/ab/b5c6f49e7569.jpg

crits plz

ANy crits

[SAID]

work on structure and letter flow.
oh, and definately handies.
definately.

[springbreak95]

thanks for the advise i will work up some different throws post pics when i getz em

[Cauz-One]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/30678574@N07/2874639938/in/photostream/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/30678574@N07/2874641520/in/photostream/

[smile_]

http://lh5.ggpht.com/deliopera/SNEfaa3q7hI/AAAAAAAABRw/avZjRsKrmbU/s720/0917081033.jpg

@ Libre: Not liking the teeth, but the letters are lookin' good for a throwie.

@ BigBlue: That sticker is kind of weak... heh.



:confused:are you serious?
and uh, just some SHAT i'm tryin
http://i36.tinypic.com/2zom5aw.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/ddj238.jpg

[Nine9]

Smile, I like the middle one. Simple and flows nicely.

I'm tryna get a nice throw down, and came up with this N. Personally I think it's pretty nice, flows well and the like, but I showed it to someone else and he was WTF.. I can't see how it's an N. Two people said that now, I'm like arhgrhgrhgrh.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/1086/dsc01070sz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/dsc01070sz2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img176/dsc01070sz2.jpg/1/)

["Riot"]

http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/WebCam_20080921_1029.jpg

[Nine9]

Trash, looks good. Could use a little something though, it seems kinda bland.

["Riot"]

you talkin the letters?
or throw in a drop and shit.

and on the n.
dont bring the bottom left line so close to the middle.
should clear it up.

[Nine9]

Yeah the letters man.

It's good, flows well and shit, but kinda standard/generic if you get me. A little touch of something might help a bit.

[Nine9]

i.e This look pretty much the same.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/getursaladtossd/Garththrows.jpg

[Masta T]

nine i like the style of tht throwie been trying to get down a style like tht for my name its b kool if u could interpt my name like tht like to c how it would work. lol the bottom one id like to c on a train fo shiow

but heres a throwie

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/throwiie-1.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/getursaladtossd/Garththrows.jpg

the top is nothing speacil but the bottom is looking nice. dont know how quick you can throw it up but it looks like it would be fire on a truck.


oh and the r looks a lil retarded

[Masta T]

critz on mine?

[LikeRainButNot]

nine i like the style of tht throwie been trying to get down a style like tht for my name its b kool if u could interpt my name like tht like to c how it would work. lol the bottom one id like to c on a train fo shiow

but heres a throwie

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/throwiie-1.jpg

way to copy smooth nuts' D.

[lawlcat]

hah, yea pretty much identical to his. change it.

new one
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/scan0020.jpg

["Riot"]

i.e This look pretty much the same.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/getursaladtossd/Garththrows.jpg

^^thats such a generic D.
deff not a bite.

calling bites out on a toy forum is stupid.


if your calling me out on a bite.
im about to laugh my ass off

[Nine9]

^^thats such a generic D.
deff not a bite.

calling bites out on a toy forum is stupid.


if your calling me out on a bite.
im about to laugh my ass off

Lol calm down man.

I'm just showing you how generic that style is. It's not a bite, but everybody comes up with a similar throw it seems. Like the top one I posted there is very similar in style to yours right?

I was looking through throwies over at 12oz from like a year ago, and I saw it and immediately thought of yours is all.

[Masta T]

itas is pretty common yo

["Riot"]

yeah. thats what i ment to say.
but i thought you called me out on a bite.
its cool.

[gcrolla]

lawlcat- make the a a little smaller to go with the size of the k, letters look good though

lawllalawl

[Mr yarbles]

http://i34.tinypic.com/zoc0h4.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/rtnbdc.jpg
Eh.

[StayHyE]

^^ work a bit on proportion...and makin letters a bit thicker..but all the same size...youre on the right track tho..

http://i34.tinypic.com/35bian9.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i38.tinypic.com/25p3gi0.jpg
Some ideas for a charcter for my a.

and thanks man I'm working on all my stuff real hard lately.

Your throws nice but the r and n just kinda throw it off for me

[Panda Jerk]

dont do characters... its homo unless ur Big el or mewt oooooor mass appeal..... i think thats it

[StayHyE]

http://i35.tinypic.com/2mr9r35.jpg

[Masta T]

nice throwie qabove me here one i came up with mad simple but i think i i clean it up itll look decent

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/throwie2.jpg

[eng]

yarbles sick throwies just get your had even smoother and it will b perf
dare sort out drop shadow and smoother style

mine plz crit:
http://i498.photobucket.com/albums/rr342/hunterthomson/P1020242.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

tk you defiently ave a style devoloping there. make tha thing look more like a m if that what it is and work thea as well. th z and the e donttneed quite as much work of now.
just catch up with the other two letters

[klic]

something quick i just did, i know my s looks like shit...
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELRedThrow.jpg

yarbles - just keep working on your can control and it will look sick soon
zema - good flow and all, it just seems a little to simple , you know?
daze - it looks like you were shaking as you did that, im just not really feeling any of the letters

[DRONE_905]

http://i38.tinypic.com/10cndpv.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/s33f44.jpg

dont paint drunk kids...crits?if you wanna give em

[Nine9]

Throwie.

Simple and dirty.
Mainly the past few weeks I've been trying too hard and like twisting letters and kinda losing the simplicity of bubble letters, so here I thought fuck it, reversed my name, banged two letters down super quick like NY style, and thought yeah.. that could work.

Still gonna fuck around and maybe get them a little smoother round the edges, but as a simple two letter throw, it could work. What you reckon?

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3844/dsc01074qz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/dsc01074qz5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img91/dsc01074qz5.jpg/1/)

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4010/dsc01075qh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/dsc01075qh3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img510/dsc01075qh3.jpg/1/)

[klic]

yah its looking good nine, i wouldnt make them any simpler

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHRedThrow.jpg

something quick i just did

[calculating infinity]

i.e This look pretty much the same.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i297/getursaladtossd/Garththrows.jpg
fresh

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/731/0925082352dp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[~~>ANTIK<~~]

^^ work a bit on proportion...and makin letters a bit thicker..but all the same size...youre on the right track tho..

http://i34.tinypic.com/35bian9.jpg

bumparooni on that A and E

[lawlcat]

^^ sick. really feeling that.
sloppy i know, just trying some different ish. says doke
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/scan0029.jpg

[AdRe*]

Knw its not amazing
jst need sum helpful crits
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/09-26-08_0058.jpg

[calculating infinity]

fresh

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/731/0925082352dp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
?

[Nine9]

^ I think it's sick.

Everything a throw should be. Only letter I'd change a bit would be the S, but otherwise I can see it looking good thrown up on the wall.

['TieR']

crits welcome
good or bad
:)

[Nine9]

Bad dude.

It doesn't flow and its outta proportion.

Try to keep your shit rounded a bit more, have the letters kinda similar so they go together well. Basically just do simple bubble letters, then when you have those down, switch them up a little.

A throw doesn't have to be amazing, but it has to flow and look 'right'.

['TieR']

yeah ok thnx
but i dont want to have the same style as everyone else
i want mine to be somthing differant
really differant
but yeah ok

[Nine9]

Yeah I feel you. Saying that, you need to get the basic letter forms down first and you slowly learn what works and what doesn't letter wise.. then you can start adding your own little touches of style.

It's a pain in the ass and alot of work, but gradually your shit will improve.

['TieR']

ok nice one man

[7nationarmy]

paper...walls..its w.e to me kids :D
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-1aspx-3.jpg
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-1aspx-2.jpg

[Masta T]

nationarmy nice flow.. lolz it makes me embarassed to put mine up.
crit PLZ dont jus say u suk or sumtin cuz to b honest i nko thtws why im a TOY. it was my 2nd throwie so yea i kno the shadows a bit missin didnt notice till after so here it is . all stock caps gifure i should masta them be4 anything else

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/7172/92608gp6.th.jpg

[7nationarmy]

thanx..and for ur second throw not bad...u should see ma first one...uuuuuugggggg

[calculating infinity]

changed the R after someone pointed out the TIE resemblance
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/6715/0927080137hk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Nine9]

Resemblence to what? Keep the old R man, it's not a bite of a throw I've ever seen.

If people mean Tie's little peace symbol 'I' they're retarded.

[7nationarmy]

Resemblence to what? Keep the old R man, it's not a bite of a throw I've ever seen.

If people mean Tie's little peace symbol 'I' they're retarded.

arent they

[smooth_nuts]

i strongly dislike ties work...just my thoughts
icoe's dope jares is dope
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3114/2883907465_5431d4ddb7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3181/2872330884_6587f42197.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/2867088136_764a32ca35.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3112/2866383058_c28d0cba6e.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3048/2865552675_724edbf97b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3089/2864816790_429e743552.jpg
just some shit from my flickr

[7nationarmy]

dope d's on those throws bro..and thatnx..and i dont know i like ties shit..mostly rocked throws and blockletters so..

[smooth_nuts]

yeah idk...i've seen some dope shit shit and i've seen some super ugo shit from him...guess it just depends on what im seeing at the moment :/

[7nationarmy]

true that...his throws are sloopie..thas koo to me..graff wasnt always about being klean like how it is now

[smooth_nuts]

so true.

[Juggernaut Oner]

i strongly dislike ties work...just my thoughts
icoe's dope jares is dope
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3114/2883907465_5431d4ddb7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3181/2872330884_6587f42197.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/2867088136_764a32ca35.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3112/2866383058_c28d0cba6e.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3048/2865552675_724edbf97b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3089/2864816790_429e743552.jpg
just some shit from my flickr

smooth yur sick as hell i love yur steez

[smooth_nuts]

:D

[Juggernaut Oner]

http://i524.photobucket.com/albums/cc327/juggernautoner/scan0002.jpg
the juggernaut toss

[Mr yarbles]

Fucked up the k :/
http://i33.tinypic.com/2r604ew.jpg

[Panda Jerk]

and the a

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah.
I can't seem to come up with anything good for them

[klic]

yah its looking good nine, i wouldnt make them any simpler

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHRedThrow.jpg

something quick i just did


something quick i just did, i know my s looks like shit...
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELRedThrow.jpg

yarbles - just keep working on your can control and it will look sick soon
zema - good flow and all, it just seems a little to simple , you know?
daze - it looks like you were shaking as you did that, im just not really feeling any of the letters

bump for crits

jug - that looks sick, id just make your j and u bigger, and nice handy too
smooth - looks good exept i dont like your e (not sure why, sorry)
yarbles - keep at it, it will come, your improving a lot

[HaLo_07]

i strongly dislike ties work...just my thoughts
icoe's dope jares is dope
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3114/2883907465_5431d4ddb7.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3181/2872330884_6587f42197.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/2867088136_764a32ca35.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3112/2866383058_c28d0cba6e.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3048/2865552675_724edbf97b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3089/2864816790_429e743552.jpg
just some shit from my flickr


Your shiits maddd nice, I'm diggin the face in your throw-ups. Madd props up. And the colors are nice too. Madd simple, But nice and clean style.

[smooth_nuts]

smooth - looks good exept i dont like your e (not sure why, sorry)
oh no you didnt faggot i'll burn the shit out of you then chop your head off shit down your neck and super glue it back on!!!haha i kid i kids
you dont have to say soory man your just telling me what you think im not some little writing for 3 weekstoy who cant take crits i leave that for everyother kid on the forums hahaha....

aesk...have you tried using a lower case a?maybe that'll work better for you

[klic]

i was saying sorrry because i didnt know why i didnt like it not because i was saying i didnt like it if you know what i mean

[smooth_nuts]

word word...

[Olick]

smooth?!

YOUR ALIVE?!!

[cerex89]

heres mines
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/0917081542.jpg

[Panda Jerk]

i like teh simp

[smooth_nuts]

smooth?!

YOUR ALIVE?!!

as alive as i could possibly be hahaha

[Olick]

word fo

[smooth_nuts]

word to ya moms.

make sure you tell i said whats up haha

[Masta T]

been workin on a diff style i think this looks ight

critz?

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/0927081012.jpg

[klic]

give them to get them^

[Masta T]

i do all the time

[Masta T]

*bump*
been workin on a diff style i think this looks ight

critz?

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/0927081012.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

dude...we've told you before

DON"T WRITE DAZE!!!

[Masta T]

why wtf it took me forevr to think of tht shit. u gota b kidding me if theres another i mean wtf r the chances.

[Nagger]

Idunno i think it looks fkn terrible. Start over?

[DRONE_905]

why wtf it took me forevr to think of tht shit. u gota b kidding me if theres another i mean wtf r the chances.

what are the chances? the name daze has been raped around the world

[Panda Jerk]

*bump*
been workin on a diff style i think this looks ight

critz?

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/0927081012.jpg

the original daze is a king.. look him up... and i would definatly channge yr name.... its like writing atlas for the east coast new york area

[wics2]

the original daze is a king.. look him up... and i would definatly channge yr name.... its like writing atlas for the east coast new york area


LMAO

I dare you to come to new york city and write map, revs, earsnot, bones, or omega

go for it =D

[Panda Jerk]

i ment atlas for the LA area not new york haha

[GOVKILLZ]

daze not feelin it homie

[gcrolla]

Daze-Don't put the dots in your letters to make the faces or whatever you were trying to do. Shading is way off too.

[nastonE]

Daze- that looks more like a sketch which would take more than 10 minutes, than a 30 second throw with all those sketchy edges, go simpler. Also that drop shadow's going in like 2 different directions, which defeats the purpose

Crits on this?
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5950/throw3hu5.jpg

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2100/throw2zt7.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

amke it a lil simpler. it seems like you could very well have something if you didnt out arrows from nowhere. and make the bottom middle part of your m dip a lil more

[Panda Jerk]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee123/kerks_/scan0010.jpg

[+Hoodwigga]

the r is pretty wack. a and t too a lil. im feeling the arrow on the right.

[Panda Jerk]

yeah throws are not my forte as u can tell

[smooth_nuts]

CANT TOUCH IT!
i'll reck that shit like your little sister bum hole...haha
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3089/2864816790_429e743552.jpg
flick for my douchebag talk haha

[KASE2]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/6-1.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i37.tinypic.com/1zva1b4.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/1tn6na.jpg
Still working on them.

hemp you should finshed the bottom lines but it looks dope

Doap, it's well, dope :)

[Look]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u130/ccskater900/0929082040.jpg

never painted before, sketch i made in class, simple bubble letters ha.. wanna hit it up somewhere but deff not ready.. it needs some serious work but i want it out soon so helps appreciated

[klic]

something quick i just did, i know my s looks like shit...
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELRedThrow.jpg

yarbles - just keep working on your can control and it will look sick soon
zema - good flow and all, it just seems a little to simple , you know?
daze - it looks like you were shaking as you did that, im just not really feeling any of the letters

never got any crits for this one yet

look - atleast you got the right attitude coming into this unlike most of the people starting off, just keep working on it and your letters will progrress and just stay of the walls for a while until you get a decent consistent style going

[Thread-Locks]

Yeah look, keep it up, sketch your balls off 26 hours a day
And that's a great word by the way, you won't have to worry about people not seeing your shit

[Look]

ha thanks, im deff gonna be sketching like crazy in the next few days because im planning on getting some paint and practicing on maybe some plywood or big-ass cardboard over the weekend
obviously i can tell that can control and sharpie control will be two very different things so i think a little practice with the can wouldnt hurt

[Thread-Locks]

yeah well, I'd advise working on some handies too, cause tagging is where most people start off
I'm a toy also, but I know that you should learn as much as you can, draw till your wrist falls off and lay off painting untill you think you're really ready

[+Hoodwigga]

KILC
i think it gradually gets worse. p,e,l mostly.
and your hand sucks to. but i know your not here to get crits on that

[klic]

yah thats a really shitty tag by me but still even my best ones suck

[nastonE]

Daze- that looks more like a sketch which would take more than 10 minutes, than a 30 second throw with all those sketchy edges, go simpler. Also that drop shadow's going in like 2 different directions, which defeats the purpose

Crits on this?
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/5950/throw3hu5.jpg

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2100/throw2zt7.jpg


Bump for crits?

[ShaolinNy]

been workin on thowies and here what i came up with its EXTREMELY sloppy but besides that what do you guys think?I like everythign but the A i dont know what kind of a would fit there any ideas?

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo17/3a/f5/327f43fc5877.jpeg


Crits Please

[lawlcat]

what the hells going on with the K?

[HaLo_07]

Ya, that throwie needs work...ALLOT of work...

Word of Advice to ANY one and EVERY one.
Always work on your shiit maddd hard before goin out to paint it.
You'll be WAY happier if you stay with knowin that your shiit looked nicer than most peoples.

[)><(((x>]

http://www.aww-kittah-aww.com/up/files/1001/DSCN0182_thumb.jpg

http://www.aww-kittah-aww.com/up/files/1001/DSCN0183_thumb.jpg

Crits please.

[nastonE]

http://www.aww-kittah-aww.com/up/files/1001/DSCN0182_thumb.jpg

http://www.aww-kittah-aww.com/up/files/1001/DSCN0183_thumb.jpg

Crits please.

lose that ridge between the M and N, if you're planning to pull off the throwie fast, it would be awkward with that ridge. try to make the O flow with the rest of the letters

[smooth_nuts]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3264/2903284644_da4dc684b4.jpg
just dicking around

[Baron]

been workin on thowies and here what i came up with its EXTREMELY sloppy but besides that what do you guys think?I like everythign but the A i dont know what kind of a would fit there any ideas?

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo17/3a/f5/327f43fc5877.jpeg


Crits Please

Your K looks like it has ED.

[nastonE]

smooth, nice face you got going there

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/7189/rrres8.png

[HaLo_07]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i235/JaKu3z07/100_0258.jpg

Props, Crits...Anything?

P.S.-Ya, Smooth, Your face in your throwie is dope.

[+Hoodwigga]

make all the letters same size. and the big ball on the i looks fucking stupid

[)><(((x>]

lose that ridge between the M and N, if you're planning to pull off the throwie fast, it would be awkward with that ridge. try to make the O flow with the rest of the letters
Anything else? Other crits? Is it clean? Flow? Except for the O

[Peek]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq61/peak540/0930082248-1.jpg

just started sketching this awhile ago, never painted before.

[Peek]

i know the k looks like shit, was reluctant to post it but i need some kind of crits to see where im at. back to sketching.

[lawlcat]

^^ lol i was talking about my K...

[Peek]

well my k is shitty too, so it looks like we're in the same boat

[cerex89]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0005.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0002.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0003-1.jpg

[MontanaHands]

Nice cerex love the e's :D

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/09300815571.jpg

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0930081556a1.jpg

[HaLo_07]

make all the letters same size. and the big ball on the i looks fucking stupid


What would you put for the top of the "i?" of that YIN throwie.

[+Hoodwigga]

im just saying smaller. it looks gay when its that big tone it doown

[Nagger]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/Soupthrowups002.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/Soupthrowups009.jpg
tremclad is shit

[nastonE]

http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/Soupthrowups002.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/Soupthrowups009.jpg
tremclad is shit

is that in Tdot? i see an eyes tag there

[nastonE]

Anything else? Other crits? Is it clean? Flow? Except for the O

It also looks like your drop shadow's moving in 2 different places (top and bottom). other then that, you have something half decent, just practice the same letters hundreds of times, and it'll improve on itself and after experience

[Nagger]

Ye some bridge on birchmount road. these are also there http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/Soupthrowups011.jpg

[miteone]

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/512/handywk9.jpg

crits please

[lawlcat]

is that joke?

[miteone]

yea

[dark2]

joke that has some potential not feeling the e n need 2 work on it some more like simples with bars hope helps
crits?
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/211949.jpg

[lawlcat]

hah. i write doker. but all my bombs say doke.

i like everything but the J though.
try putting a shadow on it.

[MontanaHands]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/09300815571.jpg

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0930081556a1.jpg


crits guys? :(

[Nervous?]

Most of you guys have the general idea of throwies, and some of you even look pretty good at them (go get up) but the thing with throwies isn't to be original, its not to possess any sort of style or anything obviously you can add a few personal touches and what not. It's to repeat over and over and over. Everywhere. And some of you just need to change your name to something original/less generic IE:Joke, Daze.

[miteone]

keep developing your letters a bit montana

[cerex89]

walking around the town
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0014.jpg
better pic
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0016.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0011.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0010.jpg

[lawlcat]

Lol @ the "rape" tag on the second picture.

Wheres that at?

[cerex89]

by the hp pavilion in san jose

[StayHyE]

http://i38.tinypic.com/jagql3.jpg

[cerex89]

is that an 8

[StayHyE]

http://nymeria87.files.wordpress.com/2008/05/facepalm1.jpg