Throwies

[Norfsuthr]

Yea find a new K brother. Gotta say it's lookin proper otherwise. Maybe straighten up the left leg of the N a bit, and the E and D could both use a little more creativity.

[7thIncision]

@MN Nice - man I'm loving that throwie style, but the drop-shadow around the bottom circle on the exclamation point's a little fucked.
@Mildstyles - The D doesn't match, i think the bar size is fine just even it up a bit. But you need something that's going to fill up more black space inside that D.

Here's one of my pen hollows. Goin' back to some simps.
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[killroywashere]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7177/6795257820_317229b89e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6795257820/)

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7209/6941371647_79ba11386f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6941371647/)

@mildstyle - try the the extension on the lower left part of the N. maybe throw that swirl in the D in the A

[GortGort]

crits started not long ago.
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0097.jpg
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0086.jpg

[notmikegiant]

@ kilroy - I would like to see the S a little bit bigger, especially in the first pic it seems a little small compared to the rest.

@ Gort - I dig repeating the letters in the second, but I would try some different G's and see how you can change it up


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rip me apart - I've got an "idea" of what works and what doesn't so specifics are truly appreciated.

[Mildstyles]

Not mike giant where about do you live

[notmikegiant]

^ PM'd you

[MiDo93]

@notmikegiant - The S is alright, the second letter cant make it out (it looks like either a "P" or and a lower case "e"), the E looks a little weird, and the for the X the top and bottom need to be a little closer together.

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Crits?

[notmikegiant]

did a really terrible job on the P, I was pretty disappointed with that. your glows are really clean, i'm not understanding that last letter. and keep it up if you want, but as is it looks really off with that dot on the end.


edit - i'm a dumbass, I would blow up that O

[Mildstyles]

ewww Mido that poor thing under your second throw :( </3

[MiDo93]

i know, the cdc piece under the last throwie was dissed beyond belief. i would never do that to a cdc piece without shit all over it

[sadgeh]

Mido - Make that O bigger way bigger.
Notmikegiant - Keep it off the wall, just sketch.
Killroy - dope

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And some one-liners
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[Mildstyles]

Why the hell did i just walk through a damn snowstorm for this.
Crits?
Too tired to crit anyone elses right meow ill edit this later when i feel like it.
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[NouveauP]

Looks good, NAKED. The E and D seem to be taller than the other 3 letters, but nothing major.

quick backwards two letter at a chill spot.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0509.jpg

[Mildstyles]

You really like going backwards huh? Haha, that 2 letter is looking nice^. The only thing I see is the left leg of the K the part above the ball on the bottom coulda been bigger, idk that part just looks a little weird. But thats all i can see, otherwise that thing is beautiful! And dont worry im sending my piece in a little bit, So just make sure you're on before the deadline so we dont get disqualified :p

[lostyoursense]

I,like the throw mild

[H1P30N3R]

nice toss naked and 2 letter nouv...the rest of you cats get back to the drawing board

[sadgeh]

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And some one-liners
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Bottom page bump and some crits would be nice.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120301_230313.jpg

[NouveauP]

Pesoe- Your bars just look kinda clunky. Just work on your consistency and line work.

I'm trying to make this look like an old school NY throw. Dunno if I achieved that or not.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0517.jpg

[Zookyook]

that K is dope... looks more simpy than throwy though yanno?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7178/6889645193_a9436e5554_z.jpg

[NouveauP]

I thought the K looked more like a simp too, trying to find a way to simplify my bottom right bar. But the funny thing is that the K was done with one line and was the only letter I could've left as a hollow and it still be clean. Check the slightly darker blues where I had to resketch the letters. None in the K. lol. But yeah I'm trying to fix it up so it flows better with the other letters. Kinda bit hipsterpunks on that one anyway.

I like your style unik, it has a lot of potential. it just seems like you rush these throws and some of your forms get sloppy. Most apparent in the red throwie's K. The bottom is shifted to the right really far. And the N is just kinda wild. Wouldn't really guess it was an N had it not been for your handy. But keep em comin, I like your shit.

[Zookyook]

lol it isnt an N its an M... umik.... im still workin on the hands i can see why ud think it was an N... and i say throws are supposed to be fast n sloppy, i think when they look like rubber stamps it gets annoying, i like tweaking little parts of the letters based on how fast im doing it or how im holding the can or marker... its like comparing augors throwups to copes, u could say copes are way cleaner but augors are way more free and sloppy, i think they have more style... to each his own

but yea u should think of a different K to use for a nice quick throwy, maybe a oneliner even... cuz that K is real clean and itd give u a perfect starting point to laying down a clean outline for a simp that u could potentially do a lot faster.... shit mayn id rather be able to lay down a simp than a throw if they took the same amount of time fo shooooo lol..... but yea any throw shouldnt take more than 15 seconds to lay down the outline... if ya ask me

[Phat 2]

bring the nemor tosses back asshole. fuck umik.

klaus. diggin it minus the U

[MoganOne]

I think u can come up with a better "K" and "M" but It's a fresh Name to work with

[Lado]

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[IbuprofenTablets]

Pesoe- Your bars just look kinda clunky. Just work on your consistency and line work.

I'm trying to make this look like an old school NY throw. Dunno if I achieved that or not.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0517.jpg


Nice, man. And yeah, you landed it. Reminds me of some 90's Ny graff (Ja, Kez5) with a west coast twist.

The top left of your U is a bit thin, though.

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/430253_391331834227065_100000507545549_1436893_128 1718032_n.jpg

crit it

[MN Nice]

Much better.

[dankbudz]

i don't like that N/O thing you got going on..

[Dossbog]

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Pac Man Scheme I tried out on my door

[notmikegiant]

like the idea, not really feeling the execution. could just be me but the drop shadow looks off, it doesnt look shifted it looks too small

[SiteGraff]

dope stuff guys, gonna try and upload some of mine soon. stay up!

[Silon295]

Pesoe- Your bars just look kinda clunky. Just work on your consistency and line work.

I'm trying to make this look like an old school NY throw. Dunno if I achieved that or not.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0517.jpg

still aint there yet. still looks west coasty

[after]

56859 crites plz

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/430253_391331834227065_100000507545549_1436893_128 1718032_n.jpg

crit it

bump for mo critters

[Asis13]

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[keenDSK]

@phat, looks like a good throwie too me, mess around with M a little is all i can say.
@asis, just keep practicing man, it all needs work though ill tell you that.

[cooldawg]

phat throwies dope but m isnt in proportion to the rest of it, too short

[notmikegiant]

feel like im getting some stuff to work out a little more. crits are definitely appreciated.

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[Dossbog]

Yeah the 3d is also messed up because I had painted something else under it using a black fill :/

[Mori]

57004 toss with a more complicated fill

[sadgeh]

MOR - That green and purple its dope but its not the best match, white as outline would be better imo

[GortGort]

changed up the g slightly crit away
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0108.jpg

[after]

56859 crites plz bump for some crites

[Panic519]

Spex try an X with less spacing
Mori looks good but a whole in the R would look better I think
Gort your G looks like a weird E or something

Here is an older one
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[Ojuyn3]

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[Mori]

Dope^

[Ramsta726]

Hello,i'm new here
im ramsta from Jakarta,indonesia
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Respect bro!

[killroywashere]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7181/6814500950_2204652a94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6814500950/)

[MN Nice]

Bump that ramsta!

not happy about this. go ahead and flame.

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[dankbudz]

do it bigger, holmes

[kwu]

yee muse go bigger it'll flow butter

some scribbles
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7183/6961035937_3015a22669_z.jpg

[notmikegiant]

been up all night writing some really lame shit, trying to get that X figured out without it looking like an H. can't tell if using a lower case E makes the P look weird. crits always appreciated, and if anyone wants to try their hand at a toss that would be cool too. wouldn't hurt to see someone elses take on it.

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@ rams - that first picture looks so clean, like that mellow blue glow.

@ kwu - your scribbles make my nights spent practicing seem like crap, digging the M on the right one and the A's all around

@ mori - that fill in looks awesome, real creative

[rollfatblunts]

spex try an x with less spacing
mori looks good but a whole in the r would look better i think
gort your g looks like a weird e or something

here is an older one
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learn your facts toy! 57352

[rollfatblunts]

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cant find a rolly thread so ill throw it up on here

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[Panic519]

Spex - try to make the x a lil more simple. Here are a few examples try biting one then tweaking it if u want.
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Some - I don't like your O with the stick coming off the top. It matches the other letters but still looks weird

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/muesthrow.jpg

the circle around my tag looks like a splash.

[rollfatblunts]

Yeah I see, I don't write some no more btw, way better one in mtl

[RaWs3kz]

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[RaWs3kz]

57004 toss with a more complicated fill mori im really feelin the fill...the black and purple are dope..u prob should have used that light pink from fill nd outlined the whole outter ya kno ? juss my opinion... props tho

[Kinger79]

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my old throwie. looks like shit huh? i dont scratch king btw. its kinger.

[Kinger79]

nice D

[Panic519]

Those letters are wack. Is it king kinh or kinr.
Don't make the letters sound round. Work on paportions and pick a new name

[GortGort]

think i might have it now let me know
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0112.jpg

[MN Nice]

Ay sekz work on your spacing and sizing for your throws.

[emace1]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7042/6826705476_23ebfc98dc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6826705476/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6826705476/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/), on Flickr
GENO O kinda looks like a b...not giving fucks

[dreg]

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Crits please. Been a while. Got busted with this name about 6 months ago, gunna bring it out of retirement soon.

[dankbudz]

geno- would look aight if you fixed it! haha. props on getting up tho
dreg- scrap that, go simpler...


messing around with a new name
would like some solid crits on this, on the SELDO, i know the right side of the M is fucked tho. fuck the M

[NouveauP]

Got some potential dank, keep at it. D is lookin rough. S could be defined more. But not bad.
dreg- looks like your forcing style. start as simple as possible.
emace- I like the GE, but ehh on the rest.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7037/6978589141_6c8fbf2b9c_z.jpg

[AstoK]

day-time bombing, not such a quiet area, had to run a little bit.
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[STOXY]

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crits?

[AXILY]

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Thinking of putting it to a wall but it will be to hard for a toy like me :P

[Mori]

Fuck you^
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[Norfsuthr]

^nice A

Axily you need to just delete your account and give up. I can tell just from that you're never gonna be shit.

[ven0m]

hsss... thats gonna leave a sting

[saveme]

quick shit i drew love to here coments good n bad thats what makes us better5836358363

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sry it posted so many

[Mori]

bottom page bump58371

[snoketg]

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quick new throwie, can i get some crits?

make the o wider and that will look fresh as fuck mori

and a little taller

[kwu]

Pretty sure that's an a
and rev, the over lap should flow throughout so don't have the left leg over lap the right leg in the r. The e needs work, and the v is alright I can dig it

[snoketg]

ok, make that A bigger then.

[AstoK]

crits on this?
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mori your throw is fresh,
axily; give up
save me; no one can save you..
rev; getting there, unless you think you write revok, then your a gug and you can die..

[Phillip McDougall]

http://www.tumblr.com/photo/1280/corruptcops/19345166326/1/tumblr_m0xmb5NHeB1qcqap2
http://www.tumblr.com/photo/1280/corruptcops/19345179408/1/tumblr_m0xmc028xP1qcqap2

stock caps...

[dreg]

I like everything but the R ^ Those are some wide stocks!

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Crits please, Trying to just go more simple.

E: gah, fuck this, it keeps loading in upside down.

[Norfsuthr]

No^.

That R is dope. Only thing that dont give me a boner is the S.

[Phillip McDougall]

Yeah it's not my usual R... I don't know where the fuck this one came from. and the chrome was a can of Rusto Bright Coat, with a female valve and an "easy spray" nozzle for wider coverage... it's for sheet metal and shit. And I didn't have any other female caps haha. definitely need to invest in a cap adapter, all Rusto is female valve now...

[verty]

That 3rd one looks ok, not a throw but its good compared to your other shit. On the top 2 you're doing bubble styles for the ER but bar type ish on the VT, conform that shit. Look at some throws on flickr or something, usually they're 1 or 2 lines per letter, just go with that for now and keep the whole thing simple. btw I've only ever seen 3 guys who can rock a shine in their throws and not look like trash.



That 3rd one looks ok, not a throw but its good compared to your other shit. On the top 2 you're doing bubble styles for the ER but bar type ish on the VT, conform that shit. Look at some throws on flickr or something, usually they're 1 or 2 lines per letter, just go with that for now and keep the whole thing simple. btw I've only ever seen 3 guys who can rock a shine in their throws and not look like trash.

Thanks for the feedback guys, much.

Anyway im still keeping at it, looking at heaps of Pieces on here and everywhere else.

Latest attached, I think personally im getting better but still have a long way to go...
thoughts and suggestions?

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[ven0m]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/420041_344040512309046_100001093005637_1014526_189 9502441_n.jpg

so?

[Phillip McDougall]

NO


is the part that needs to be fixed most, the V is too lopsided, the E is too hidden, and the extended part of the M should be a little more even. the top of the N is too small and the O is HUGE.

[Norfsuthr]

If you're stickin with the n-o connect be a little fancy/clever about it. It's boring *****.

still in the prototype phase here but lemme know what you think..
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7209/6841680822_28e0a4f907.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6841680822/)
oie_1619161tANovDN4 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6841680822/)

[SkateJunt]

workin on them throwss
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7046/6844175494_0fa2e15179.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6844175494/)
Picture 262 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6844175494/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[notmikegiant]

@ skate - B looks more like an E to me, and if youre really desperately hurting to do dollar signs and stars then do it, otherwise lose that. personally i like to see consistency in letter openings, so try doing all stars, or simple bars, or that spin thing from the R.

[SkateJunt]

thanks man
for the tribe throwie battle
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7185/6990979897_bfc981cde3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6990979897/)
Picture 264 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6990979897/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[MoganOne]

Props to Brains
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-03-13_18-07-44_74.jpg

[Negativity]

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Rate?
I know I suck

[KehmONE]

N in the first one has potential, the A also has potential. That K is awful.
Lose the shit around it, none of that outline shit, don't even worry about that shit yet.
Straight letters first, then when you've got straight letters down work on adding flares.

Also, there's a lot of people in here that have not improved at all since the last time I was on here...

[KehmONE]

Props to Brains
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-03-13_18-07-44_74.jpg
I dig the O N E, the E could use a bit of work, but that M doesn't fit the style of the other letters at all... Fix that shit up.

[SADEKxWSA]

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Quickie i did in class today with sum sharpies . WSA (WEST SIDE ARTISTS)

[KehmONE]

That's more of a burner than a throwie, and that pic is far too small to actually give any critiques on. Nice bite on the Wu Tang "W" though.

[Dossbog]

(r)zs(t)

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[AstoK]

dont go over your out lines , it makes them look scrappy

[MIX3638]

dam thats a quickie its freakin og

[ZIK_ONER]

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Crits please? New tag.. I need to fix my shading

[Rask Wsk LA]

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zik, try that shit in the middle of page

i know my shit go toy, hmu wit sum crits tho

[ZIK_ONER]

I'm much to toy to give you crits, all i can say is dope, I'll post up some new shit later

[Phillip McDougall]

ASK are all wack

[Mildstyles]

Mone and brains are the only things i can look at

[MN Nice]

That hurts bro lol jk can I get some crits on my shit from you guys?


http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/muesthrow.jpg

the circle around my tag looks like a splash.

[Mildstyles]

lol mues that one was too far back^^ i didnt see it.
the bottom of the E is weird, and its really small. try making it bubbly for now and extend it
And the top of the S seems too low, maybe bump it up a bit. or maybe just bump up the piointy part at the top
The bottom of the U is going to the right...make it stay under the actual part of the U
thats all i can think of but it is still nice my man

[Axil]

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[Hick94]

axi l- dont paint yet..stay on paper

[ChadWarden]

nah, fuck that, paint all you want. no one here really gives a shit either way.

[Hick94]

any crits on this
http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4804/img0035cc.jpg

[ChadWarden]

thats not so bad, but:


- a general rule for throwups is to keep all of you letters the same size, and i suggest that you observe it.

- although your e is decent, it looks goofy because of the much smaller n and a.

- the little point you have on the top left of all your letters looks gay, with the exception of the the e. the e looks like it has horns or some shit.

-the bump on the bottom of your D (yes, i know) wouldnt look so bad if it connected with the rest of the letter


word, hope this helps.

[cred1384]

@Dane the Bottom round part of the D and the round part of the a look off. Keep workin with it.

My first throwie concept, any tips for cleaning it up, want to go paint tonite.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_64498442x.jpg

[ChadWarden]

you seem pretty gung-ho on the "sharp" edges, but it think it would look better with more curves. like so.



http://suxorz.com/i5/previewima.jpg



just a suggestion.


oh, and good luck not getting caught!

[cred1384]

Thanks for the tip good man, i'll work with it.

[MDDLCLSSME]

Pase1 mck
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[MN Nice]

I love the concept but could use some definition on the S and E. Some lines for the holes maybe too.

[cred1384]

^ agreed.

Trying to clean it up, these are all quick concept sketches so they aren't very clean. Also ignore the shite tag. That need's work and i'm well aware haha.

Any tips on making the D in this one look less like an O?
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_12723902x-1.jpg

[MDDLCLSSME]

revamped-ish version59728

[KehmONE]

revamped-ish version59728

I'm actually really digging this, and the one before it with the blue outline.

[omek]

nthing special

[Panic519]

Pass second one is much better

[cred1384]

2 slaps i did out of boredom.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo55.jpg
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_35341882x.jpg

[killroywashere]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7068/6999737885_c454b5b4c2.jpg

pase - that shits awesome keep at it. i would say try to tweak the s some but your progression should be quick
cred - those stickers are nice. try to make your R more noticeable

[Zest3]

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[killroywashere]

cred your sig is killin me
ahh to fuckin high

SO - throw some drop shadow on that

[PETER]

Pase: That shit is dope. I love the loseness of it.
Cred: you're covering ground quick. Keep rockin.
Killroy: Looking good stay up.

[KehmONE]

http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/16.png
http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/17.png

Two styles I've been screwing with to get the letters the way I want, or even close to resembling what they're supposed to.

I wanna work off the first one, I like the feel of it when I write it. I just don't know what to do with the H or the Z.

I've also been playing around with the names SEGA and GASE/GAZE (Pronounced the same both ways) but I'm not sure how "taken" those names are.

[Hick94]

just google the names thats the best way to see if their taken

[cred1384]

@Hick First ones not bad, second is eh.

Made 2 more slaps
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_26399372x.jpg
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_69728182x.jpg

[Hick94]

the style is good but calm down on all the highlights especially on the 2nd pic it takes away from the letters

[Zest3]

Digging the first one

[ChadWarden]

Any tips on making the D in this one look less like an O?

the d you used on the last page looked nothing like an o. use it. and what youre doing with your throws right now is stupid. youre squeezing the letters too much and, with the sketchy highlights youre using, its all getting difficult to read. also, the leg of your r, the way it curls out at both ends, just doesnt look good.

[cred1384]

Trying to clean it up / dumb it down. Thanks for the crits fellas.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_90533952x.jpg

[ChadWarden]

you seem to really like the way your r looks, so i guess i wont restate what ive already said about it. try making the nose (middle bump) of the e larger. if you want, play around with different tops for your letters (curves, squares, everything in between). the ridges you have right now dont look so bad on the d, but it looks odd on the r. oh, and mark the holes in your letters. dots/lines, ya dig?

[cred1384]

I feel ya , I'd already finished that one before i saw your comment. I always get blinded and want to make the ridges or bumps consistent rather than aesthetic. I'll keep workin with it. Thanks again.

[Zest3]

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Throwie was in color but orange turned to brown with my lame scanner

[KehmONE]

http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/18.png

Need to fix the E, majorly.

[ChadWarden]

if i were you, i would exaggerate the bump on the side of your s.



like so


http://suxorz.com/i5/sadfsafsdf.jpg



fresh!



it would also be worth trying to do something clever with your o. lots of face potential there.

[KehmONE]

http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/18.png

Need to fix the E, majorly.
Forgot to ask for crits.

[ChadWarden]

KehmONE


- the left side of your g could stand to kick out more, i think. add a little flavor to go with the lip you have going. it also a bit smaller than the rest of the letters, which never really looks good for the first letter.

- the a looks boring. switch it up a bit?

- see about removing the negative space between the bottom of the s and the a.

- your e isnt as bad as you had it out to be. granted, it does looks like it has a stupid grin on its face.

- it looks like all of your letters are wider up top than they are down bottom. if thats something youre doing intentionally and you like it, go for it. if not, i suggest fixing it.

[KehmONE]

KehmONE


- the left side of your g could stand to kick out more, i think. add a little flavor to go with the lip you have going. it also a bit smaller than the rest of the letters, which never really looks good for the first letter.

- the a looks boring. switch it up a bit?

- see about removing the negative space between the bottom of the s and the a.

- your e isnt as bad as you had it out to be. granted, it does looks like it has a stupid grin on its face.

- it looks like all of your letters are wider up top than they are down bottom. if thats something youre doing intentionally and you like it, go for it. if not, i suggest fixing it.

I see what you mean about the G, it's actually the same size but it's a webcam picture so the perspective is slightly off from the way I was holding it.

I liked my 'a' I thought it was simple, but fit the style of the rest of the throw.

Not sure what I would do about the negative space.

They're intentionally wider at the top yeah.

[R3bel1995]

if they are intentionally wider at the top, try to make each of your letters the same width at the top and the same width at the bottom. This gives your letters some uniformity. About your E, try to make it more rounded on the bottom lip, that might help it a bit. And like chad was saying, your A doesnt really fit the style with the rest of your letters, its TOO simple.

[Zest3]

I agree about the face on the O, but gotta say the S you made me looks fucking bad... Atleast IMO, thanks for the advice though !

[PETER]

I like that A honestly. The E has a boat load of face potential... make that bitch spitting shit! I like the throw. It'll have some serious funk with a bit more work.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120320_235748.jpg

[cred1384]

@H1P digging that concept, try the drop shadow on the other side maybe?

Trying different stuff to make it look better
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_97868292x.jpg

[snoketg]

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crits?

[VERS420]

Im new here lemme know what you guys think
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[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

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[KehmONE]

@Vers

Make your lines with one flowing motion, they look like they're made of more than one motion. Straigthen them up a bit, they look shakey as fuck. That R is awful. The extension on the top of the V is wack. Your hand style at the top has potential in it's simplicity.

[Zest3]

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Need to make a face on that O.

[VERS420]

Thanks I'll try and work on it .

[KehmONE]

60003
Need to make a face on that O.

/has potential, the bottom of the S needs work. The O definitely needs something done with it, it's way too boring.

[KehmONE]

http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/27.png

Not sure which name I like better, I'm personally leaning towards SEGA or SEGA2 just because the 2 looks sick... I know there isn't any SEGA's in my city.

[Peon209]

http://i51.tinypic.com/s5bdxv.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

the s needs work on both throws to much dead space on the first and the second why is there a big blotch of on the s?....a needs more definition, the first e is your most solid letter you arent far off just some little tweaks here and there .

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120322_135219.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

peon drop the shine shit and your letters are boxy as hell do a little research on throws look at tons and write your name tons of times ...it will get better with effort ps. idk what it is suppose to say

[Peon209]

I write fadr. I was just tweakin my throwie a bit.
This is my normal throwie:
http://i53.tinypic.com/2f07lzo.jpg

[KehmONE]

Keep practicing man.

[cred1384]

@Fadr use lines or dots or whatever to show where the holes in the letters are.

Trying to simplify my shitt

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_44058932x.jpg

[HipsterPunks]

http://i1222.photobucket.com/albums/dd488/chadhipster/physh.jpg
for PHYSH sorry bout the I

[Mildstyles]

You might have already seen this but i would love some crits!
hipster- thats nice man although the first H is a little too covered...thats really the only thing i can point out.
cred-for now, REALLY dumb it down, like very simple letters. It will evolve overtime.
fadr- Get rid off all the blobs on the top of your letters, and fix the d is looks like an O right meow. And the R could be tweaked
hipe- always, always dope! Cant really point anything out besides the E might be alittle too small for the rest of the letters
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[aiko]

i don't write gnaw, just fucking around, little help with the W?
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[aiko]

60047
mild i really like that but just pull the e back a bit more with its shading to fill it out, also, through the beginning of your piece the letters don't really lean much, and if so, its to the right, so the way the D falls to the left at the end is it a bit off, id just block it out a lil.

[Zest3]

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I know the S is fcked up, wanted to try a face for my O

[MN Nice]

http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/27.png

Not sure which name I like better, I'm personally leaning towards SEGA or SEGA2 just because the 2 looks sick... I know there isn't any SEGA's in my city.

Fuck off biter.


http://youtu.be/fIsYgIdg44Q

[aiko]

ahahahahahaah

[TastyMcNasty]

Fuck off biter.


http://youtu.be/fIsYgIdg44Q

hahahahahh

naked and hipster , those are dope.

working my throws more
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0024.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0025.jpghttp://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0027.jpg

[MN Nice]

Painted versions asap ^


I write fadr. I was just tweakin my throwie a bit.
This is my normal throwie:
http://i53.tinypic.com/2f07lzo.jpg

Oh and you too. Queer.

http://nelsondanielcelis.files.wordpress.com/2010/10/abcdario10.png

Pic for talk. They buffed it the next morning. My boy's face that he puts up.

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[SynOne]

Tasty, I just shat myself.

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

gross.

tasty that R is hurting

[TastyMcNasty]

Tasty, I just shat myself.

why?

gross.

tasty that R is hurting
really? i like it. but hows the rest of the throw?

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

its got some steez, id change the bottom of the E though. either shave some of the fatness, or change it entirely, and for the R, just make the little boxy part go out a little bit farther than the top part
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[8===D]

did u do that with spray paint it looks so reel

["Braze"]

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To pass the time in college, crtis any one?

[KehmONE]

Well that will be the last time I take any advice from my friend... I had no idea.
I was screwing around with letters, names, ideas, etc. My friend said to me "Just go with a name thats meaningful to you, like something nostalgic or significant to your way of life" I said "Video games are nostalgic I loved that shit, like old school sega genesis, nintendo, atari and shit, come to think of it... SEGA is 4 letters and sounds sick" He responded "Dope, here check this throwie out and try and make it your own, it'll give you something to work off of" and sent me a sketch of what you see in the video...
I changed the S, the E and the A because I didn't like the ones he sent me, and kept the G because I couldn't come up with anything in my mind that looked better.
So yep, I bit. Albeit I had no idea that video or writer even existed I googled SEGA and nothing came up that made me think I was being unoriginal in any way, besides not being the first to use the name.

Anyways regardless, a couple different variations I was working on earlier.
http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/30.png
http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/31.png
http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/32.png

Really quick pen sketches to put the letter structures I was seeing in my head onto paper.
Crits?

[Zest3]

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I know the S is fcked up, wanted to try a face for my O
Crits on the face?

[ven0m]

damn tasty u gon let him cover you like dat?
but to be frank, that's the first thing i really dig from you. i say its a keeper

[TCV]

Fix ur a on the bottom. And just rewrite it a couple thousand times

[TastyMcNasty]

:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3
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[H1P30N3R]

here you go kehmone ...tried using some of the style your shooting for also.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120323_154912.jpg

[omiz]

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My First Throwy Ever.
Comments and Critiques Please!

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

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[TastyMcNasty]

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:3

[Zest3]

Crits on the face?
.

[ven0m]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/404022_405396116153970_100000507545549_1482936_349 178353_n.jpg

tryin an approach that's a little less calculated. followed my hand's instinct on this one...
comments?

[TastyMcNasty]

fix the N and M, and it'll be spot on

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Photo0133.jpg

[Axil]

its not that good i had someone watching me out there window and its was a solo so i rushed it but what do u think
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[ZIK_ONER]

Axil, don't paint until you can make something worth looking at. Stick to the books.

[Axil]

i know but i wanted to do something when i went out i only did like 5 tags so i wanted to do that

[killroywashere]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7100/6999737983_e38e394a98.jpg[/url]

[MN Nice]

Yeah dude, you keep painting that one rock no one looks at...

And axil do whatever the hell you want. I recommend just tagging and bombing for now until you get better can control. Feel me?

[H1P30N3R]

^ someone was watching him bro or that would of been a sick ass burner ....smh @ ppl in windows fuckin up the graff game.

[killroywashere]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7187/6790821176_11c49cffa8.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7179/6936940775_31d2e7d731.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7197/6790821332_86ded80af8.jpg


sorry they arent on a rock

[dreg]

Best dollar black a Canadian can find ;)

Crits please. 60199

[omiz]

it kinda looks like dreb.

[killroywashere]

try a lower case E

[Mildstyles]

Meh i lost it a little bit, gotta start doing em again.
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[Norfsuthr]

Just gotta fix up your ED now^

[TCV]

that naked looks like it was done on paper the you throws are dope

[ChadWarden]

thats the problem with the toy forum. most of you fuckers dont know the good graffiti from the bad.




naked, thats solid, but find a way to define the d more.

[Norfsuthr]

Thats not the problem with the toy forum, thats why its the toy forum.

[Mildstyles]

And why would you think that tcv, that is crazytalk!
Thanks chad, d's for throws are hard for me but no doubt I'm gonna look for other ways to do em
And norf, I feel you. I appreciate the feedback from both of you

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-03-24_17-37-19_623.jpg
I crossed off a wack one lol
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-03-24_21-24-58_932-1.jpg

[SkateJunt]

i need to get back to sketching mor often, any crits on the throw?
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6036/6869662052_2d4c18e8cd.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6869662052/)
Picture 268 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6869662052/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[dankbudz]

Mone those are looking tight, but i think you could make the M a lot better
GErb- dumb that top on down

[dreg]

^ The L and D do nothing for me. But I understand the hardships of the letter D.

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

@dank mone's M's are fine, but yours need work.

[dankbudz]

never said his weren't "fine", just could be better.
and yea, what i posted wasn't an attempt at anything great...

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

shit everyone's m's "could be better".

[dankbudz]

you know what i mean you fuckin douche

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

actually, i dont think i do... I like those m's, and you were extremely vague on why/how the m's could be better

[MoganOne]

Mone those are looking tight, but i think you could make the M a lot better
GErb- dumb that top on down
Lol yeah I am slowly getting the M down on the throws

[KehmONE]

http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/43.png
http://i1269.photobucket.com/albums/jj598/kehm2/45.png
The three basic styles I've been screwing with.
The first one was a letter style that came after I just let my hand naturally draw the letters, but I still managed to get stuck on the A. Had a few ideas for the A, but they came after I took the picture.

Crits?

[Dossbog]

Strange
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[PETER]

ok... I am horrible at throws... I've only tried a couple of times. I kinda like the direction of this one. I'm counting on some of you guys that are good with them to crit this shit. Hipe, reach, naked, brains, venom, youth, there are a few more of you but cant think of at the moment, but I'm lookin' at you kids.
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edit... I know the lines are rough etc... it was more to get the idea on paper and see how it works. I'm looking more for letter form and how I might improve flow, shape, etc.

[ven0m]

pics or gtfo
the end

[SkateJunt]

sloppy as fuck :/

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7045/7019302081_c9417b5532.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/7019302081/)
Picture 271 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/7019302081/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[Hylite]

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you get it, i like throw ups

[Trab]

'crew' throwie
http://i44.tinypic.com/35b6pon.jpg
Crits are welcome!

[aiko]

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Maybe just try pointing off the bottom hook of your A, a bit.
And your last N is a bit fucked up, id shit the little feather tip in the middle of it to the beginning left side, make it somewhat resemble your other N.

[aiko]

'id shit the little feather tip" ahhahaha

[PETER]

its a k

[aiko]

Well there's your problem.

[sadgeh]

Its clearly a K but make the thickness much more

[PETER]

make it thicker where? the little bit at the top or the loop. I'll be fuckin' with this a bit tonight. Gimme some ideas to throw around with it.

[sadgeh]

the thickness on the whole throwie or work it out a lot better with this kinda style cause it could be really dope

[TastyMcNasty]

you get it, i like throw ups

ya, too bad you're not any good at them

[noted]

607166071760718

eh, started to start throwies about a week ago. i know they're not the best, any tips[for a beginner]?

[H1P30N3R]

antik - man dont try that pointy shit at the bottom of your letters it never works out ... I went through that phase as I was learning also. start with simple bubble letters keep the flow and style of each letter alike ....practice practice practice the more u slop down throws on paper the more different ideas you will get. Take bits and pieces from different letters you make and start to develop. None of this happens in days or weeks it took me 2 years to get decent(at just throws) so dont get discouraged just all depends on how much time and effort you put into it.

pic for talking exchange with naked

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120327_152342.jpg

[aiko]

i like the 2nd and 3rd note

[ven0m]

peter, my crit is this: think differently. you're treating the throw like a piece. it's a very different approach.
I'm sorry I'm not in the mood to elaborate too much, but I will tell you this: think fatter, bulkier, thicker letters... like obese fucking letters. the whole word is supposed to not have any space in it. it's suppposed to be like a big ol chunk of goo. like fat letters overlapping each other in a way that eliminates the space you usually have in a piece...
the best advice I can give you is to just go look at pro tosses in the gallery and come back with a new understanding of how those bombers think. once you start getting how they think when they build their throws, you'll get it.

[PETER]

That is very much how I approach it. That makes a lot of sense.

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

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[noted]

myke, i love your style. its so retro

[KehmONE]

Man that monkey character is fucking dope, mind if I bite it for my blackbook?
That rocket piece would be sick painted, just fix the L it's too small.

[Dossbog]

Rzst

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[gemer]

@RLMike diggen that monkey

[smokeitup]

beginners look at this video:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=endscreen&NR=1&v=qpaTAbanv10

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

beginners look at this video:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=endscreen&NR=1&v=qpaTAbanv10 I get it they re not throwies. my bust anyways didnt mean to pu it here.

[ven0m]

I consider them throws... they're real nice too btw.. is that all you??? *suspicious*

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

I consider them throws... they're real nice too btw.. is that all you??? all me. no other way to be. @ KeHM dont touch my monkey...hahaha. @SEME preciate it yo. thx to everyone getting alotta good feed back. go peep the toy BB and you'll see my whole post

[Phillip McDougall]

Yeah that Lyfe with the backwards E is like the only quality thing besides the monkey

[REAL_LYFE_MIKE]

no love on the robot? damn....time to put in more work then.

[Dossbog]

peter, my crit is this: think differently. you're treating the throw like a piece. it's a very different approach.
I'm sorry I'm not in the mood to elaborate too much, but I will tell you this: think fatter, bulkier, thicker letters... like obese fucking letters. the whole word is supposed to not have any space in it. it's suppposed to be like a big ol chunk of goo. like fat letters overlapping each other in a way that eliminates the space you usually have in a piece...
the best advice I can give you is to just go look at pro tosses in the gallery and come back with a new understanding of how those bombers think. once you start getting how they think when they build their throws, you'll get it.

Dude.....YES! I wish someone had told me that months ago but instead i just kept trying to polish turds!!!

[ven0m]

well then I'm glad I helped