Throwies

[PETER]

ok... I'm going to catch shit for pointy bottoms. I like the heart shaped letters. Did two for Mori. Nap/Naps (the S needs some serious work) 647906479164792

[Norfsuthr]

Thats the thing, ive been workign on throws for a while and...
Wachu write I'll throw your name up for fun, maybe you can get something out of it. I got a W in my name and it's actually my favorite letter in the name.

[PETER]

Norf: Do an Antik while you're at it.

[Axil]

weird angle on that pic it seems to look ok .... went walking today spotted the first throw I ever done with paint lol

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120417_153811.jpg

Post a recent post :)

[Norfsuthr]

Norf: Do an Antik while you're at it.

I got you haha.

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7184/6945023594_26145c101d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6945023594/)
photo-3 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6945023594/)

alright here ya go, messed up that a but it turned into a little connection so w/e. I is one of the hardest letters for me, good practice.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7207/6945156126_ab2cb5cef1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6945156126/)
photo-4 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6945156126/)

[PETER]

I find the t to be a huge bitch. Throws just don't make sense in my head. They are really hard for me. What do you think of the ones i posted? I LIKE THE BOTTOM ONE THE MOST.

[Norfsuthr]

^I think you definitely gotta lose the heart thing for now. Focus on just making simple generic throw up letters so you can learn how to fit it all together. and make shit the same size.

[PETER]

Word. I've been trying it as well with these, but for the life of me i can't seem to get something i even remotely like. I'm gonna fuck with that one humor posted. Just dumb it down a tad and see what happens. THANKS FOR THE HELP.

[H1P30N3R]

I like the a to n connection on the bottom antik norf.... and axil just look at the last few pages

[dankbudz]

crits? is this M heading in the right direction? i think so, but i need another opinion

also, is anyone down for a throwie exchange? tryna get some practice in, if so PM me

[saveme]

quick thro on a truck i didnt have much time 64920

[ChadWarden]

what did you use, a fucking sharpie magnum?

[H1P30N3R]

lol I like the "I didnt have much time" but I stop took out my camera got it ready and took a pic tho.

[ven0m]

tagging the truck is illegal, taking pictures isn't. hence why he doesn't need to be in a hurry to do it

[centrysam]

few more practice throws
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7137/7091942723_7630063b8f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7091942723/)
IMG_0237 (2) (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7091942723/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

[saveme]

ya exatly n this girl i was wit took the pic ... i was gettn up wit what ever i had show me ur shit gettn up on a truck !!

[notmikegiant]

ill write seldom tonight, it might look like crap but i could use the practice anyway, ill get some shit up tonight

[H1P30N3R]

tagging the truck is illegal, taking pictures isn't. hence why he doesn't need to be in a hurry to do it

true.... im just callin bs in general on his excuse. If it looks bad just say I did a bad job rather than making excuses.

[saveme]

fukn haters

[saveme]

U say what u want I'll say what I want sry I didn't put stuff up that I sat down n drew up , it's called a thero it's somthin u thro up fast to get up jus sayn ?

[saveme]

Ps lik some 1 can incriminate you for something that you posted a picture of there's no proof that it was actually you , like most to shit on here that was hit on walls isnt illegal I'm callin bs on that !!

[ASE1]

how do u upload pics to here?

[PETER]

click the button that looks like a picture.....

[saveme]

My "excuse" was a joke no need to be literal look at the last page I put a pic of the first throw up I ever done on an illegal wall. And yes I know throws are meant to be done quickly, it still should be legible. Agree to disagree cool ?

Sounds lik ur makn excuses first 1 haha n legible hardly it looks like u tryed to go over it 3 times n what u do that on an abandoned house in the back woods of Kansas ?

[MN Nice]

Jesus christ. Nobody cares. Take it to the Pm's if you guys really need to vent out about your periods.

FLICK FOR TALK
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/seldomthrow.jpg?t=1334794557

[H1P30N3R]

true lol anyway... pretty nice the bottom of the s could come in a bit more and you got them m's down nicely.

[saveme]

Look I got no beef if u wana squash it ,it's Done if you can take criticism so can im cool wit u if not we can battle but if we do it we'll do it on walls I do Graf cuz I Lov it n came on here 2 find others that do 2

[Zorastra*N8r]

NIL the top one in green is chill looks nice.

[Z3BRA]

saveme:

keep it in one post, we have an edit button, or use a message system

but really

shut the fuck up

[Zorastra*N8r]

i know the prob fuckin suck but w.e new to it
top 2 prob suck
KNOX...
any crits, feed back would be dope.
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[Z3BRA]

everyone comes in here feelin sorry for themselves

you're in the toy section for a reason son!

ANYWAY the O looks nice but the rest needs to be less thin and more packed

[Zorastra*N8r]

top 2 fuckin suck balls wish i didnt post :/
heres 2 more i think there better but prob fuckin suck aswell.
any feed back, crits is dope..
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[Zorastra*N8r]

thanks Z3BRA and ya thats a valid point, u just end up doin it subconsiously cuz they r toy lol..
thanks for crit

[Norfsuthr]

Worst I've seen in a while. KEY MOFUCKIN BOARD LETTERS.

[Z3BRA]

KNOX, is it?

Blend the N, because it looks like KAOX

[H1P30N3R]

yea watch style wars 3 times them come back to the forum go to new to graff thread do some research. Then youtube throw ups look at about 50 videos then get 20 notebooks and begin to draw your name hollow no color over and over. Not being sarcastic either a strong learning background will help you progress much quicker.

[ASE1]

Zorastra: not bad looks kinda like mine wen i started. focus on getting the letter structure (like the basis of the letter). but make it a bit thicker. stick with simple styles at first then the complex shit will come later i promise. thats how i started.

[Z3BRA]

Zorastra: not bad looks kinda like mine wen i started. focus on getting the letter structure (like the basis of the letter). but make it a bit thicker. stick with simple styles at first then the complex shit will come later i promise. thats how i started.

first post one of yours

[Coleo]

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eh its a sticker.. crits?

[Z3BRA]

eh its a sticker.. crits?


send it

[Coleo]

aight shud i make more?

[notmikegiant]

@ mues - that seldom looks nice, dig the character O, ill edit this in a bit with my weak attempt

[Mori]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7119/6946265966_d3ce18cc5b_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/6946265966/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/6946265966/) by mori95 (http://www.flickr.com/people/73382494@N04/), on Flickr

[H1P30N3R]

Nice ass toss naps also is that your character above the throw? .... did your name the other day for fun didn't know if you caught it.


naps solid simple and clean props
chad that g is illin nice stuff as usual
umik - yea the m is confusing

bored doing a few names for the hell of it

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120416_203055.jpg

[Mori]

much appreciated hipe. always been a fan of your throwies. and ya that is my character hahaha. some dude rolled this roller over the piece that was next to it and left it. and some kid who hangs around the wall wrote "vapor didnt do this" next to it. i thought it was funny

p.s. kinda an embarrassing character to be honest

[Mori]

ok... I'm going to catch shit for pointy bottoms. I like the heart shaped letters. Did two for Mori. Nap/Naps (the S needs some serious work) 647906479164792

thanks peter

[Kaze]

thats sick mori, liking the colors u went with and the entire thing just looks clean and dope...gotta practice my throwies alot lol
H1P-those are real dope, only thing i dont really like is the A but its better then what i can do lol

[Zorastra*N8r]

Mori ur throwie is really fuckin dope.. simple and visually appealing, and that crazy black midget at the top is dope also.. gary coleman back from the dead ahahah

[H1P30N3R]

shit naps I dig that character personally bro. yea you could tweak it and make little changes and evolve it but dont stray away from it.

[notmikegiant]

@ mori - really dig the throw up, i like that last character the best, got any sketches of other characters?

this is whatever, good to practice

no idea why this is double posting

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[Kaze]

need to make it more proportioned and just work on my throwies overall. Crits would be appreciated.
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[Kaze]

those are dope characters mori, trippy looking
Notmikegiant- thats a nice throwie

[bbones]

im hella new to all this...a lot of people say my n and s are whack but fuck i dont know what to do really.
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also sorry if theres a bones on here :-x

[Norfsuthr]

Kaze- those are lookin nice, practice more a try to get it cleaner thats all i can say

[Phillip McDougall]

Kaze? Really? Do you have no originality at all?

[Kaze]

thanks norfsuthr i appreciate it, il work on cleaning them up.
phillip mcdougall- you think i bite the letters for the throwie or somthing??

[Zorastra*N8r]

im hella new to all this...a lot of people say my n and s are whack but fuck i dont know what to do really.
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also sorry if theres a bones on here :-x

hey bones it looks dope, if ur new to this then thats pretty good.. keep it up. simple and clean

[PSYS]

aight shud i make more?

I'm down to trade for a few of those.
If you don't want to trade, then PM me because I want one. :)

[aiko]

Man, I used to write bones, its such a typical name for beginners to writes. Looks not bad though.

[PSYS]

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also sorry if theres a bones on here :-x

Looks pretty good for bein' hella new to it. :)

[Zorastra*N8r]

there few bones out there but fuck it looks good keep it up.

[Coleo]

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eh its a sticker.. crits?

bumb fo crits

[aiko]

bumb fo crits

thats pretty chill, i dig it, i don't know man, its good. your n is a bit fatter, but otherwise your letters work well.

[Coleo]

^thanks ima start doin my full name...

[MN Nice]

No pointy bottoms. Do a capital N

[Coleo]

damn it i cant do a capitol N they come out wonky but i could lose the pionty bottoms...

[H1P30N3R]

wonky lol not from the states just a guess ?

[bbones]

thanks yall...bones has been my nickname since grade school, people who call me it dont care if i do throwss

[dankbudz]

ignore the tumor on the M... act as if its not. even. there...
tried to do another Mues, but i fucked itup and the the U got me

[TastyMcNasty]

not bad, excluding the M, and the D is hurting too. i fucking love doing throws for your name, but i can't get flow in my exchange piece. so i'll at the least upload another one of my seldom throws by tomorrow.

[dankbudz]

Yeah the D got all wobbly and not quite right. My hand ain't too good with them curves yet.

[notmikegiant]

kinda bored tonight, anyone wanna do an exchange? not really concerned with quality as mine is mostly shit

write SPEX or ASPECT, thinking of a name change

[Coleo]

wonky lol not from the states just a guess ?

yes from the states came from germany though a while ago

[centrysam]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7110/6950441604_1b76fb863c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6950441604/)
IMG_0240 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6950441604/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

[H1P30N3R]

moe?? or hue? if it it suppose to be hue drop the top middle line on the h and u down further to distinguish the letters, also I think the e would look a little better if that middle section didnt come to a point.... My personal opinion I dont dig the shines you put on throws just a personal preference. After that all being said you have enough skill to make your own adjustments and it still look good.

[centrysam]

^lol
its HU!
and its oneline outline thats why middle of h is like that

thanks for crits tho . will workin on bringing middles down further

[H1P30N3R]

I knew it was a oneliner, that ! can be mistaken for an e easily. oneliners are a biatch at times

[centrysam]

yea i see that now never noticed that lol . maby i shouldnt bend it like that . rock it stright next time

[blackmath]

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Freestyled this straightletter/throwie last night. I only have a tag for that shit right now, I just came up with the new name, but i think that throwie came out good for no planning, what do you guys think?


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Freestyled this straightletter/throwie last night. I only have a tag for that shit right now, I just came up with the new name, but i think that throwie came out good for no planning, what do you guys think?

Oh and I ran out of red paint, lol

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Heres the old shit

[ven0m]

KING?

http://michaeljacksonhoax.lefora.com/composition/attachment/9782839b47bd905cc2685c61f308ffef/388899/MJ-oh%20no%20you%20didn't.jpg?thumb=1

[Zorastra*N8r]

the king looks chill, simple and clean. like it more than the tank, but both r chill.

[TastyMcNasty]

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0060.jpg

[Kushbombing]

Dude u used to write king??
There is someone who used to write TAKI 183, in case you don't know. One of or even maybe, the first writer to go all city in NYC

[Norfsuthr]

^Yeah so be original.

Tasty thats dope

[H1P30N3R]

tasty thats fuckin wild lookin n very original props.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120421_141453.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

lol wsgud FV

[blackmath]

Yeah I used to write King for about a month, didnt really throw it up anywhere. I read a lot of Stephen King, in no way do I think I'm a real "king" haha. But yeah I know of Taki 183. I just write Tak now cause he's a character in a Stephen King book.

Is there another KING I dont know about? I know its a toolish/toyish thing to write but I never heard of another KING. And idgaf if it sounds toyish, I used to write a bunch of random shit like "19" and "All Hail The Crimson King", both form The Dark Tower book series, so it just kind of fit.

[dankbudz]

anyone got them crits?

[MN Nice]

That D and extension on the M are a no-go.

[Kushbombing]

King or Tak. I haven't heard of an artist who Calls himself king, at least no one that wasn't a toy. Anyways ur shit is clean so props to that. On the king ur g is too small and doesn't fit well style wise. The Tak your K doesn't fit. Just too skinny. Top of the T looks bored also.

Tasty the oneliner is dope. Like how u did the LD. Couldn't shaped the L a bit more

Dank looks good, i would do something siff with the botto
Of the E, I'm not feeling the D. The M also seems a lil big

[blackmath]

King or Tak. I haven't heard of an artist who Calls himself king, at least no one that wasn't a toy. Anyways ur shit is clean so props to that. On the king ur g is too small and doesn't fit well style wise. The Tak your K doesn't fit. Just too skinny. Top of the T looks bored also.


My thoughts exactly. Thanks for the advice man

[dmgraff]

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some of my first throw ups, just did some today and will try to get some pics tomorrow

[Spy10327]

Just finished this one, came out all right except for the e, in my opinion my e has been making me lose my flow. Might respell my name a bit.
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Any tips/crits?

[TastyMcNasty]

people in the last two posts need to go more simple. both realllllyyyyy wack

[Kushbombing]

Just finished this one, came out all right except for the e, in my opinion my e has been making me lose my flow. Might respell my name a bit.
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Any tips/crits?

Lol haven't seen a throw like this is a while.

If you seriously want to get better you got a lot of work ahead. First off, don't waste your time coloring in anything for a while. Work on making your letter look better. Coloring is a waste of time and you should have got enough practice when you were a kid. Do simples. Practice keyboard style letters... It's harder than you would think. Try writting your name as simple as possable and maybe adding a shadow. If you. An do that and make all the letters the same size and paportions then your on track. If you can't do that, then you better pracites lots.
The only way to get better is to fill pages and pages of your name over and over. Insted of coloring maybe just outline it with marker. Once you have a basic start it will be easier to build your own style that looks dope, good luck.

[Js97]

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Tried to keep it simple and straight letter. Thoughts?

[MN Nice]

A solid fill would be cool. lol. Relax when you paint, if you have enough time to do that random line fill, you can do a solid fill.

[killroywashere]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7036/7101423275_84d5d8eb5d.jpg

Jes - try finding some chill walls. you look rushed

seldom - try tweaking your D a bit. and if you make the extension on the M bigger it might flow better

[SONAR-MEKA]

♠♠♠thats good ??dath?..sonar-meka are any of these names taken before i upload my pics i wanna no if there is no bite intended.

[Spy10327]

I only color in my better pieces and throwies in my blackbook and I'm only uploading them so that I don't upload too much wack shit ya know? Here's my most recent throwie.65450

[H1P30N3R]

^^ go here
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread

[Spy10327]

Slight change in spelling dropped the e and added that 'i'. My 'f' is a too fat and my t doesn't flow yet i'll fix that after i get my i to flow. Tips/crits?
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[Axil]

Simple it down Fait a throw up meant to be fast some u can do under 1min or 2

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[H1P30N3R]

^^^ dont give crits until you have an idea of what your doing yourself.... go here
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread

[aiko]

that drop shade is awkward as fuck

[Lord dak]

that drop shade is awkward as fuck

^^ this,
you gotta work on that bro

[ven0m]

that drop shade is awkward as fuck
i dont get it whats awkward about it? or you know what better yet, define awkward...
cause all I'm seeing is just a regular ass shadow with nothing wrong

[H1P30N3R]

^^ thank you as I said before to them go here

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread

[Spy10327]

I've read thru that a dozen times, and also row these throwies don't even take me that long to pull off. my letters are developing style one at a time it seems, so some are currently odd and others are aight. 65586 got about 50 "hello my name is" stickers at the local grocery store today and a sharpie king and two metallic sharpies (goes over stray outline marks very well imo.

[Axil]

just change it don't keep a letter the same for me that hard to look at and if that's your tag on the paper get a better tag i just telling u straight cus your doing what i was doing about a month ago not listening to anyone and just keeping it the same trust me change it and look at some throw ups on Google and just learn from them :)

[Spy10327]

just change it don't keep a letter the same for me that hard to look at and if that's your tag on the paper get a better tag i just telling u straight cus your doing what i was doing about a month ago not listening to anyone and just keeping it the same trust me change it and look at some throw ups on Google and just learn from them :)

My letters are def changing, I'm taking mostly all the crits i've been getting (not too many so far) but nah thats not my handstyle at the top my bestfriend was fucking around and she did that lol. my handstyle was more fluid back when the word was still spelled fate.

[TastyMcNasty]

slow down. make your letters evenly sized, and change your word its a poor letter combo

[H1P30N3R]

here I did a you guys a quick toss now try flipping it and making it your own...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120422_220655.jpg

[MN Nice]

I don't like how much your bar thickness varies.

[H1P30N3R]

As in these 2 throws or all my throws ? crits very much appreciated mues anything to help me advance. Been alot of super toys around the forum as of late.

[MN Nice]

I think just those ones. I'm sure your own throw is on point.

[H1P30N3R]

word been trying work on my handstyles n simps a little more lately. fuckin unemployment is gonna make me a better artist lol

[dmgraff]

just did one of my first publicly visible throwies on a big dumpster, after i finished and started to walk away i relized it lookes so fucked up because of a bar going down the side of the dumpster
(btw it was my shortned name op instead of optik so half the throw is fucked)

[ven0m]

hipeoner! respect on that gif haha laughed so hard I got a headache

[Friz_One]

65755This is one of my throwies

[H1P30N3R]

word venom shit had me dying too....

friz trying making it one clean rather rather than a sketch style throw

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120423_132308.jpg

[Mori]

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[Spy10327]

So I wanna change my name to either Buf, Buff, or Buft. I like the letters ya know. should I practice each of them, or does someone recommend one from the list?

[sadgeh]

Hipe that O is clean as hell, damn nice boy.
Mori nice too as always. But how do you do that pointy line inside the C? just wondering

[dankbudz]

hipe- lookin goood

crits?

[DaFugg]

Hip, not that I'm any good with throws, but he's right about thickness, It's the A and the R really throwing me off. They look jumbled.

It's not BAD looking. that's just the only way I see improvement. haha;)

[DaFugg]

Dank what markers do you use? I always envy the consistency in your writing. You down for an exchange BTW? It's been a while.

[notmikegiant]

quick exchange, looks meh like everything else i post

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[H1P30N3R]

Hip, not that I'm any good with throws, but he's right about thickness, It's the A and the R really throwing me off. They look jumbled.

It's not BAD looking. that's just the only way I see improvement. haha;)

Yea it was done quickly just to give an idea of what their names throw style would resemble rather than the pics they put up.

thanks guys on the moist throw ...

dank- the t drop that top bar down just a bit and dont bring the middle part in so close together.The o is a too small at the bottom part. The rest isnt bad just developing your own bit of flavor takes time. Also your characters are boss man!

[dankbudz]

thanks for the crit and complement bro

[GooberOne]

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[GooberOne]

my camera is dumb the date is wrong

[notmikegiant]

went out tonight

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here's a buddys

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this was in a warehouse nearby

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[Friz_One]

notmikegiant third bomb is very nice

[uknowigetup]

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120424_154512.jpg

Hello gents, I've taken a break from piecing and have been working on a better throwie. I like this one and will probably start painting it. Can I get some crits?

[gemer]

@ friz damn man ur throws are much better than ur pieces imo

[blackmath]

Came up with some new shit today, let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is key.
Don't take the stupid little designs too serious though, that was boredom. Let me know what you think about the style

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[Kaze]

the 2 bottom pictures are dope black math. just keep practicing is all i can say

[blackmath]

Thanks man I really appreciate it

[Negativity]

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My boy JOI

[Norfsuthr]

^You guys are gonna go far, I can tell.

[MN Nice]

hahahahaha

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120425_012451.jpg

[ComradeR]

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[Friz_One]

gemer, throwies are better cuz i have bad markers, and i don't have many writer skills i am a toy

[PETER]

Mori, humor, dank, naked, anyone else with a solid throw.... Can you guys do a "krsd" for me please? I have some things running in my head.... See where this goes.

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

man will somone please do a "pussy" throw for me?? I will never get any on my own so i need someone else to do it for me. kthx

[Quote1]

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[nine514]

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my first 2 throwies. CRITSSSSSSS plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

[Kushbombing]

Don't flood the thread with 3 posts.
Don't take pics of yourself or anyone you know in front of your graff.

As for your throws. Second one sucks. How did u manage too make your E soo low? Next time u outline make sure your bottoms are lined up before you fill in. After you fill step back and check it again.

U got a pretty easy name. Sketch and make it look better before you bomb again
Your stuff looks make

[nine514]

looks make?

and secondly, i don't know who that guy is in the first pic ;) And thanks for advice Kush.

[ven0m]

stop flooding asshole! use the fucking edit button or die

[blackmath]

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[dankbudz]

don't write tak, people that are a lot better than you write it. however its not like you'll get up. sooo... and those aren't throws.

crits? I'm having a bitch of a time figuring out this M and my hand steadiness improves then turns to shit and so on and yea yaaa

[Kushbombing]

^ tops ones better. Both M's are kinda big compared to other letters. I would shorten all the lines in the M.
I don't like the S in the second one as much as the first. The bottom right of the second M looks weird too

TAK. The second one gets way to thing. They aren't even throwups.
Just the letter combo tak sucks. T is a bitch and K is a hoe.

[KehmONE]

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Been kinda fuckin' with this, still working on trying to turn it into a 4 letter one liner.
Wish my phone didn't take such retardedly large photos.

[H1P30N3R]

one liners take years to master my advice is to focus on a basic throws... or cut out some of the lines like I did in the i to z to e connection in the throw below.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_165433.jpg

[Mildstyles]

Lol tak... TAKI 183, so dont write that. Kopr always looking good and dankbudz got some flava! I like the SE on the top one but you could use some tweaking with an M, definitely nice though
Heres my flood of leetzor throwz
I would have really liked the siren one if the S didnt make me want to puke
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[H1P30N3R]

the gees and siren just need work on the s then they are solid. The hero is pretty cool

boredom .....

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_204711.jpg

[Spy10327]

66524 Suggestions? Am I getting the right idea?

[Mr.Zorak]

66526 suggestions?

[Kaze]

looks good as usual hipe.
SPY-you gotta find new letters man, u got 3 square ones and then one rounded one and ur F and T is really bad, T's in throwies should not be done in lower case unless you are a throwup king who can pull off nutty shit. keep practicing man we all start off at the bottom and work r way up, most of us at least. not saying im good, i still suck too. just keep at it.

zorak- u got ur letters in the same square genre which is good but it doesnt look all that nice just like everyone else starting out. I dont like how ur C is really top heavy and that it comes out more then bottom, just needs a one line and it would look like a lower case E. practice practice practice and you will progress.

These still suck and need lots of work but anyways, crits please.
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[dmgraff]

just finished 2 designs which one is better?
1st is a block letter66553
2nd is somthing else66554

[nine514]

wow. terrible.

[ven0m]

you're not a whole lot better either, nine514...

[blackmath]

don't write tak, people that are a lot better than you write it. however its not like you'll get up. sooo... and those aren't throws

The fuck do yuo mean I'll never get up anyway? I dont give a shit if other people write the same name. I'm out every night gettin up. And I like straight letter throws, not a bunch of bubble letters like everyone else in this thread

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[Svc]

66562 back to painti after a year without, crits

[Norfsuthr]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_204711.jpg

I like those E's homie, need some shaping up but its a good idea. The last one really. P needs some work too.

[Mildstyles]

Needed to waste what was left, quick 2 letter. K is messed
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[ComradeR]

any crits on all the pics i post is welcome. I suck but still trying, got another throwie down
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[Axil]

Mildstyle - Does it say NK? - its better than what i can do + its Dark red + black so its hard to tell for me :P

Zem - remove the outline around it remove them ring things and try pushing them a bit closer together and the middle line on the m move it a little bit

Cirtz Please + i know it not that good but its hard to get a r that i like :P

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8154/6973511750_82f67cc6c1_z.jpg

[dankbudz]

im jealous of your throw naked and hope and the other few who gots some guud shit!

http://i46.tinypic.com/2d97ep1.jpg

[Axil]

Like the S Seldom just a suggestion make the hole in the s a bit smaller

[Strange Journeys]

^ i think its cool as is, got some funk

@ kase that shit aint workin, your trying to complicate it too much, cut back some yo

[Kaze]

thanks for the crits journeys i appreciate it, is there any letters in particular that gotta go or should i jsut scratch the hole thing?
Dank i like your S the way it is, the middle part of it is my favorite part of it, maybe coule be abit smaller but the way it is looks good, maybe dont have ur L going up on such a sharp angle at the bottom but either way it looks good

[Mildstyles]

Thanks dank, that 2 letter got some steez to it im lovin it. The S is sick and that L is much better than what i could do, looks nice

looks like a cool spot too

[blackmath]

Better pictures, fucked up my K.

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[Axil]

Tak how long that take you man looks Nice just need to get better paint :P

What C looks better? 1 or 2

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8016/7119907729_ed9fd7f5f0_z.jpg http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8154/6973511750_82f67cc6c1_z.jpg

[Strange Journeys]

2nd C
@Kase, I think your S is the strongest of the letters you got,you got all the negative space between the letters thats got to go, the a is unreadable and the k has that weird kick on the bottom bar

[H1P30N3R]

yea norf it was a quick sloppy throw bur ill clean up them e's

And dank im jealous of your simps we are even

[Spy10327]

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crits?

[blackmath]

Tak how long that take you man looks Nice just need to get better paint :P

Uhhh probably around 5 minutes, not sure haha.

And I like your first C more, it fits the R better

[dmgraff]

wow. terrible.

insted of saying i suck how about you tell me how to get better

[R3bel1995]

Axil, can you please just delete your sig. Until you stick with a name. THEN say "I write ____" or else change it to "Today I'm writing ____ but tomorrow I don't know what I'll write". Now regarding your throwie. Most importantly, make all the bars the same width. And on your R in the second one, don't put the right bar behind the left.

[Axil]

im keeping this name until i get caught :P

Critz please!

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7263/7121551877_a1ffb0b98f_z.jpg

[Woulf]

Axil, Looks cool but the leg of the R could be a bit more fat. I'm not really the best to be giving critz, just trying to help.


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Just started any critz would be much appreciated.

[centrysam]

@ axil . i think the c is to squre .
throws should b made up of eather .simple bars . or half circles .
you should also be able to do each letter with out lifiting marker from page .
so to fix ur toss i would recomend making the top of the c and r the same shape . and the middle of the c more rounded because ur r is rounded . practice makes perfect . fill pages with small tosses an u will get it .

[bio99]

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the proportions could be better but what do ya think? critzz

[dankbudz]

dumb it down, hombre ^^

crits?

[Axil]

the 3rd one is the best but whats going on with the d it looks like a u?

[dankbudz]

when i ask for crits, I'm asking for crits from someone who's not a total fag, such as you. the D looks preetttty distinguishable as a D the bottom bar part could of been brought up high, but regardles... I'm pretty sure no U would look like that.

if anyone with knowledge has crits, get at me,

[Mildstyles]

I dont how about knowledge butttt
the 2nd and 3rd S's are bangin, 3rd ELDOM is nice...so basically i like the last throw i think its the best haha
but IMO on the D, the line that seperates the round part from the little bar(top middle of the D), make that line not go down as far and for the loop of the D try making it less like an O curve and see if you can get a D curve, the d curve is less extreeme if ya feel me

[MN Nice]

I was hoping you'd start using the bumped M leg like I had in our exchange. Work with it more

[H1P30N3R]

2 and third one is solid that third one the e is on fire . Idea when you drop that first line down for your l kick a little line inward then bring the leg of the l out with an overlapping look such as the e and m. And if I make no sense ill just draw 1 and post it, Oh and yea what naked was saying bout the d too.

[dankbudz]

thanks for the crits, y'all.
mues, ya its looked good this was e tryna do my own thing with that similar idea
hipe, i understand what your saying, ill try that out, see how it works n such

[Norfsuthr]

dat 2
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8160/6976346342_8d944c9c31.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6976346342/)
photo-10 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6976346342/)

[H1P30N3R]

yessir

[Axil]

GO next time get a fill in and a outline and swap the star in the o to a Line or a slightly curved line

Critz Please

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8018/7122520047_3b2681fcb2_z.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

^^this guy

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0903/Kelly/retard.jpg

[Silky Johnson]

thats one ugly muhfukka !

[Spy10327]

ok new name i got the throwies down imho i'm def still improving but i need to work on a handstyle soon 66847

[Mildstyles]

Um....about having those throwies down... Try doing some that arent so blocky that more of a blockbuster with no negative space than a throw...

[Spy10327]

Um....about having those throwies down... Try doing some that arent so blocky that more of a blockbuster with no negative space than a throw...

iight i lost a few good pages by the time i took a pic, but thanks.

[H1P30N3R]

you will go through another 50 notebooks before you "get throws down" be sure to clear out about a year of time too... ohh and thats if you progress pretty quick.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_020412.jpg

[Mildstyles]

Shoutouts...stolen idea to the next level!
If i didnt do you a throw sorry but i can only fit so many on 1 page haha. either i decided your letters suck or there wasnt enough space. I think i got everyone including the hands tho
throws go Naked Seldom Mues Cred Humor Venom then a bunch of ye olde handstyles
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[Spy10327]

Hey mildstyles what do you mean by negative space, what made that style not a throwie?

[Mildstyles]

Yours? Because yours was basically a blockbuster with no negative space, and negative space is the space inbetween the letters. If you made a B witht he 2 holes in it, the space inside the holes are negative space. And all of the other space in between your letters are negative space, but you don't NEED negative space for a throw, my main problem with yours is that its blocks. Use curved lines with more movement

[Spy10327]

Yours? Because yours was basically a blockbuster with no negative space, and negative space is the space inbetween the letters. If you made a B witht he 2 holes in it, the space inside the holes are negative space. And all of the other space in between your letters are negative space, but you don't NEED negative space for a throw, my main problem with yours is that its blocks. Use curved lines with more movement
Iight thanks I will work on that now.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_110415.jpg

[Norfsuthr]

Only thing im not feeling is the K. Try a smaller hole in it and something else on top, imo.

[H1P30N3R]

will do thanks for the crit

[Woulf]

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Still learning throwie's. Any crits are much welcomed. Whenever I try and shade it always comes out weird.

[MN Nice]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_110415.jpg

Go bigger. It'll help.

[blackmath]

@Woulf
All of your 3D lines need to be at the same exact angle, it helps to do it with a ruler on paper but dont get used to it, its better to learn it by hand.
Basically, like you have 3D at the back of your S, its impossible for there to be 3D on the front of your F. It should be coming off the very very bottom of the F.

Well, thats if you want the 3D to be down and to the left of your throwie.

But you definitely need work on your throws. Not to be a dick but much, much more work.
Keep your letters the same size, graffiti doesn't condone proper grammar lol.
Shitty 3D will make the shittiest throw look even shittier.
Get better markers. I sound like a toy sayin that shit because who the fuck gives a shit. Markers are markers, paint is paint. But its much easier to use paint markers to practice throws cause all of the color goes over what you want it to, instead of turning black and weird like sharpies or regular markers.
The face is okay cause all toys do dumb little faces, but lose the cigarette thing.

Thats all I got man, just work on the 3D shit, ill post a pic if you still dont get it

[blackmath]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_110415.jpg

Did you do your fill AFTER you did your outline??

[iPwnF00lz]

Shoutouts...stolen idea to the next level!
If i didnt do you a throw sorry but i can only fit so many on 1 page haha. either i decided your letters suck or there wasnt enough space. I think i got everyone including the hands tho
throws go Naked Seldom Mues Cred Humor Venom then a bunch of ye olde handstyles
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diggin these

[H1P30N3R]

Did you do your fill AFTER you did your outline??

no just drippy ass paint didnt give it enough time to dry before doing the outline.

mues- word first time painting since last summer i'll get it down.
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[Silky Johnson]

Yeahh MUHFUKKAS!!

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_113556.jpg

[Mildstyles]

I hope thats now kopr's new account, and if it isnt
Can we see this kid get banned^^

[H1P30N3R]

its me it was my hater account but wasnt much fun.

[Spy10327]

66992 more rounded? or is this round enough?

[Woulf]

Thanks black.
I was reading some post here and there and I seen i'm probably going to have to work on the same angle business. I know i'm going to need a lot of work but I don't mind, I enjoy this so it'll come with practice and time...hopefully. As for the 3d, i'll make sure to keep it more of a shadow. Someone was saying for beginners some markers to start off with is Krylon and Rusto. Any input on that? Isn't a toy more of someone who bites off other peoples styles & such? I guess many others have done the faces at one point or another but there isn't much someone hasn't done already.

Could you post a pic just so I could see if that's cool? Much thanks man, I really appreciate it.

[ComradeR]

Spy, I'd say start off with simples, copy them letters from ur keyboard and work on spacing

[IronyATB]

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I'd like some crits on this please. Namechanged to SKEE. I realise the top left of the S should come out more to the left and I need to make them all the same width at the bottom (K in particular) but apart from that, what are your opinions?

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Redid it, I think this is better. (Ignore the handstyle, I haven't came up with one yet for new name.

[blackmath]

Thanks black.
I was reading some post here and there and I seen i'm probably going to have to work on the same angle business. I know i'm going to need a lot of work but I don't mind, I enjoy this so it'll come with practice and time...hopefully. As for the 3d, i'll make sure to keep it more of a shadow. Someone was saying for beginners some markers to start off with is Krylon and Rusto. Any input on that? Isn't a toy more of someone who bites off other peoples styles & such? I guess many others have done the faces at one point or another but there isn't much someone hasn't done already.

Could you post a pic just so I could see if that's cool? Much thanks man, I really appreciate it.

Yeah man all you gotta do is practice and it'll come eventually. And to be completely honest, theres so many people calling someone a toy, no one even knows what it means exactly anymore. To me, a toy is someone who has absolutely no idea what hes doing, and has no knowledge on anything artsy. Or someone who is only doing it to vandalize, or someone who doesn't paint at all and talks about getting up all the time. Basically someone who is either really bad, or sort of bad and doing it for the wrong reasons, (to be cool or to be an asshole and fuck shit up). And I really dont know what kinda markers are good, I worry about the paint. But any paint marker like Deco is good, really. And yeah Ill draw up my shit and ill keep the 3D hollow so you can see the angles n shit


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Here you go man. Now this is super super sketchy, I rushed cause i got shit to do today. But I guess that kinda shows how you should 3D, just pick an angle and at every corner of the letter, draw a line down at that angle, but allllways keep it the same. When you get to a corner where the "3D" line would go into the letter you just colored, dont draw the line. Thats what makes it look toyish and just incorrect. Think of pointing a single light source at an object, there is only going to be ONE shadow, it is virtually impossible for there to be more than one

[blackmath]

Flooding the board I know, dont care. I went to the craaaziest spot ive been to in a while last night. Climbed up a fire escape (that had no floor by the way, only two railings along each side) 8 stories up, onto the top of this old ass building. Easily could've died/gotten seriously hurt. But thats all the fun, isnt it? anyway, heres the shit I threw up, I think it came out pretty good. I had to stand literally two inches away from the wall cause... well its confusing to explain but you get the fuckin picture lol. Anyway here it is

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Better picture, shows the size much much better.

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[nine514]

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2nd time out ever. 2 throwies in pretty high traffic area. crits?

[nine514]

67220 thoughts?

[blackmath]

Other than the shitty can control (no offense) it looks alright, just gotta keep practicing paintin and you'll get it. You should try to find a chill spot so you can take your time and go in the day. Id try to change up the bottom of the N's too, maybe make the bubble smaller and more towards the bottom, or even get rid of it all together. Idk try it out see how you like it

[Kushbombing]

Flooding the board I know, dont care. I went to the craaaziest spot ive been to in a while last night. Climbed up a fire escape (that had no floor by the way, only two railings along each side) 8 stories up, onto the top of this old ass building. Easily could've died/gotten seriously hurt. But thats all the fun, isnt it? anyway, heres the shit I threw up, I think it came out pretty good. I had to stand literally two inches away from the wall cause... well its confusing to explain but you get the fuckin picture lol. Anyway here it is

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Better picture, shows the size much much better.

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Prove it with a zoomEd out pic. I think ur full of shit 8th story??

[Kushbombing]

Nine. Getting a tiny bit better. Ur avatar throwie sucks . The white ones... The E is way to low. Glad tO sesimeon not doing that again.
But do t paint high traffic spots man. Find somewhere chill to paint where u can take ur time and shIt.
Keep practicing
Work on making ur letters better

[R3bel1995]

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Ok I know that they say Graff is meant to have arrows, but I don't think this is wat they meant... :p

[nine514]

Kush and black, thanks for the advice. Only thing is that i think im past the stage of waisting paint in areas where no1 sees it... its not that terrible....

[Big Africa]

@ nine dont get a big head man, that'll leave you lickin' your wounds. keep practicing at them chill spots and then troll them skreets later. That's what i do

[blackmath]

Ok I know that they say Graff is meant to have arrows, but I don't think this is wat they meant... :p

I was demonstrating a single light source so the kid would understand...
even though it sounds like you were being sarcastic lol

[blackmath]

Prove it with a zoomEd out pic. I think ur full of shit 8th story??

I wasn't hanging off the side of the building if thats what you mean. I had to climb up the side yeah, but once I got on the roof I was able to walk around. It was still sketchy cause it felt like it was gonna collapse but yeah. I could really get good pictures but here ya go

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The one of them is from the bottom lookin up, you can barely tell what it is but if you look at the right light you can see the top of the building, and I was already two stories towards the top when I took the picture. But nahhh man Im not full of shit, I was shittin my pants the whole way up though lol

[nine514]

Props to tak for the 8th story bombage

[aiko]

ahahah killin it

[Kushbombing]

Kush and black, thanks for the advice. Only thing is that i think im past the stage of waisting paint in areas where no1 sees it... its not that terrible....

A couple years from now you look back and see some of this stuff ur painting and just laugh at yourself. But do w/e



And Tak looks like u are not full of shit. Lol
You need to get a better pic tho man lol. Can u see ur shit from the ground?

[dankbudz]

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[H1P30N3R]

yessir thats what up homie looks good

[Kaze]

nine- lose that 2 ball thing on your lowercase E, just make it one line smooth line or somthing and maybe make the dot of your eye a bit bigger with like that swirl thing going to the centre or somthing.
dank- that throw looks sick, i like your S alot, cant really see the M but it all looks dope

[Friidom]

meh new throwie im messin with. crits welcome. says won
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[Mildstyles]

Dank that throw is solid, where is it, on a house? Either way very nice throwski keep it up

[ComradeR]

Did something quick for this one girl i know.. The I is shit, I know that :P
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[Big Africa]

http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/2012-05-01181130.jpg

Critz por favor, been workin on this one for a lil bit.

[nine514]

not feeling the R and E, but nice colors and shadow.

[Kaze]

friidom- make your O wider and your N abit wider and maybe more straight, just keep practicing.

comrader- shadowing looks bit off, dont like ur N really but the first A is nice, just should have made the centre hole of it more in the centre

big africa- looks decent just maybe make your E have abit more of a gap so it matches all ur other letters...rather then just the line coming up and curving in...if you get what i mean. looks good though, keep practicing man.

[Friidom]

yea i was thinking about fattening/shortening it all up thanks for the crit
comrade-try to make your letters more evenly spaced if you kno what i mean. like the I is further from the A than the rest are from each other and try to make your second A lean the same way as the first
africa-looks like the letters get bigger from left to right just fix that up and should look a lot better

[Skee]

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Throwies for my new name, I'm not feeling them at all but it's the best I have came up with up to now.