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Phillip McDougall
04-19-2012, 03:41 PM
Kaze? Really? Do you have no originality at all?

Kaze
04-19-2012, 03:56 PM
thanks norfsuthr i appreciate it, il work on cleaning them up.
phillip mcdougall- you think i bite the letters for the throwie or somthing??

Zorastra*N8r
04-19-2012, 07:07 PM
im hella new to all this...a lot of people say my n and s are whack but fuck i dont know what to do really.
65046

also sorry if theres a bones on here :-x

hey bones it looks dope, if ur new to this then thats pretty good.. keep it up. simple and clean

PSYS
04-19-2012, 07:13 PM
aight shud i make more?

I'm down to trade for a few of those.
If you don't want to trade, then PM me because I want one. :)

aiko
04-19-2012, 07:15 PM
Man, I used to write bones, its such a typical name for beginners to writes. Looks not bad though.

PSYS
04-19-2012, 07:16 PM
65046

also sorry if theres a bones on here :-x

Looks pretty good for bein' hella new to it. :)

Zorastra*N8r
04-19-2012, 07:22 PM
there few bones out there but fuck it looks good keep it up.

Coleo
04-19-2012, 07:54 PM
64954
eh its a sticker.. crits?

bumb fo crits

aiko
04-19-2012, 08:02 PM
bumb fo crits

thats pretty chill, i dig it, i don't know man, its good. your n is a bit fatter, but otherwise your letters work well.

Coleo
04-19-2012, 08:03 PM
^thanks ima start doin my full name...

MN Nice
04-19-2012, 08:07 PM
No pointy bottoms. Do a capital N

Coleo
04-19-2012, 08:09 PM
damn it i cant do a capitol N they come out wonky but i could lose the pionty bottoms...

H1P30N3R
04-19-2012, 11:12 PM
wonky lol not from the states just a guess ?

bbones
04-19-2012, 11:34 PM
thanks yall...bones has been my nickname since grade school, people who call me it dont care if i do throwss

dankbudz
04-19-2012, 11:41 PM
ignore the tumor on the M... act as if its not. even. there...
tried to do another Mues, but i fucked itup and the the U got me

TastyMcNasty
04-20-2012, 12:03 AM
not bad, excluding the M, and the D is hurting too. i fucking love doing throws for your name, but i can't get flow in my exchange piece. so i'll at the least upload another one of my seldom throws by tomorrow.

dankbudz
04-20-2012, 12:49 AM
Yeah the D got all wobbly and not quite right. My hand ain't too good with them curves yet.

notmikegiant
04-20-2012, 12:59 AM
kinda bored tonight, anyone wanna do an exchange? not really concerned with quality as mine is mostly shit

write SPEX or ASPECT, thinking of a name change

Coleo
04-20-2012, 07:35 AM
wonky lol not from the states just a guess ?

yes from the states came from germany though a while ago

centrysam
04-20-2012, 11:14 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7110/6950441604_1b76fb863c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6950441604/)
IMG_0240 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6950441604/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

H1P30N3R
04-20-2012, 11:24 AM
moe?? or hue? if it it suppose to be hue drop the top middle line on the h and u down further to distinguish the letters, also I think the e would look a little better if that middle section didnt come to a point.... My personal opinion I dont dig the shines you put on throws just a personal preference. After that all being said you have enough skill to make your own adjustments and it still look good.

centrysam
04-20-2012, 11:44 AM
^lol
its HU!
and its oneline outline thats why middle of h is like that

thanks for crits tho . will workin on bringing middles down further

H1P30N3R
04-20-2012, 12:45 PM
I knew it was a oneliner, that ! can be mistaken for an e easily. oneliners are a biatch at times

centrysam
04-20-2012, 02:19 PM
yea i see that now never noticed that lol . maby i shouldnt bend it like that . rock it stright next time

blackmath
04-20-2012, 02:37 PM
65173

Freestyled this straightletter/throwie last night. I only have a tag for that shit right now, I just came up with the new name, but i think that throwie came out good for no planning, what do you guys think?


65173

Freestyled this straightletter/throwie last night. I only have a tag for that shit right now, I just came up with the new name, but i think that throwie came out good for no planning, what do you guys think?

Oh and I ran out of red paint, lol

6518165182

Heres the old shit

ven0m
04-20-2012, 06:59 PM
KING?

http://michaeljacksonhoax.lefora.com/composition/attachment/9782839b47bd905cc2685c61f308ffef/388899/MJ-oh%20no%20you%20didn't.jpg?thumb=1

Zorastra*N8r
04-20-2012, 08:56 PM
the king looks chill, simple and clean. like it more than the tank, but both r chill.

TastyMcNasty
04-20-2012, 10:07 PM
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0060.jpg

Kushbombing
04-21-2012, 08:21 AM
Dude u used to write king??
There is someone who used to write TAKI 183, in case you don't know. One of or even maybe, the first writer to go all city in NYC

Norfsuthr
04-21-2012, 01:08 PM
^Yeah so be original.

Tasty thats dope

H1P30N3R
04-21-2012, 01:35 PM
tasty thats fuckin wild lookin n very original props.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120421_141453.jpg

Phillip McDougall
04-21-2012, 02:30 PM
lol wsgud FV

blackmath
04-21-2012, 03:53 PM
Yeah I used to write King for about a month, didnt really throw it up anywhere. I read a lot of Stephen King, in no way do I think I'm a real "king" haha. But yeah I know of Taki 183. I just write Tak now cause he's a character in a Stephen King book.

Is there another KING I dont know about? I know its a toolish/toyish thing to write but I never heard of another KING. And idgaf if it sounds toyish, I used to write a bunch of random shit like "19" and "All Hail The Crimson King", both form The Dark Tower book series, so it just kind of fit.

dankbudz
04-21-2012, 04:29 PM
anyone got them crits?

MN Nice
04-21-2012, 05:34 PM
That D and extension on the M are a no-go.

Kushbombing
04-21-2012, 07:10 PM
King or Tak. I haven't heard of an artist who Calls himself king, at least no one that wasn't a toy. Anyways ur shit is clean so props to that. On the king ur g is too small and doesn't fit well style wise. The Tak your K doesn't fit. Just too skinny. Top of the T looks bored also.

Tasty the oneliner is dope. Like how u did the LD. Couldn't shaped the L a bit more

Dank looks good, i would do something siff with the botto
Of the E, I'm not feeling the D. The M also seems a lil big

blackmath
04-21-2012, 09:43 PM
King or Tak. I haven't heard of an artist who Calls himself king, at least no one that wasn't a toy. Anyways ur shit is clean so props to that. On the king ur g is too small and doesn't fit well style wise. The Tak your K doesn't fit. Just too skinny. Top of the T looks bored also.


My thoughts exactly. Thanks for the advice man

dmgraff
04-21-2012, 10:19 PM
6535265353
some of my first throw ups, just did some today and will try to get some pics tomorrow

Spy10327
04-21-2012, 10:55 PM
Just finished this one, came out all right except for the e, in my opinion my e has been making me lose my flow. Might respell my name a bit.
65354
Any tips/crits?

TastyMcNasty
04-21-2012, 11:05 PM
people in the last two posts need to go more simple. both realllllyyyyy wack

Kushbombing
04-21-2012, 11:58 PM
Just finished this one, came out all right except for the e, in my opinion my e has been making me lose my flow. Might respell my name a bit.
65354
Any tips/crits?

Lol haven't seen a throw like this is a while.

If you seriously want to get better you got a lot of work ahead. First off, don't waste your time coloring in anything for a while. Work on making your letter look better. Coloring is a waste of time and you should have got enough practice when you were a kid. Do simples. Practice keyboard style letters... It's harder than you would think. Try writting your name as simple as possable and maybe adding a shadow. If you. An do that and make all the letters the same size and paportions then your on track. If you can't do that, then you better pracites lots.
The only way to get better is to fill pages and pages of your name over and over. Insted of coloring maybe just outline it with marker. Once you have a basic start it will be easier to build your own style that looks dope, good luck.

Js97
04-22-2012, 12:39 AM
6535665357


Tried to keep it simple and straight letter. Thoughts?

MN Nice
04-22-2012, 01:05 AM
A solid fill would be cool. lol. Relax when you paint, if you have enough time to do that random line fill, you can do a solid fill.

killroywashere
04-22-2012, 03:37 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7036/7101423275_84d5d8eb5d.jpg

Jes - try finding some chill walls. you look rushed

seldom - try tweaking your D a bit. and if you make the extension on the M bigger it might flow better

SONAR-MEKA
04-22-2012, 03:44 AM
♠♠♠thats good ??dath?..sonar-meka are any of these names taken before i upload my pics i wanna no if there is no bite intended.

Spy10327
04-22-2012, 11:55 AM
I only color in my better pieces and throwies in my blackbook and I'm only uploading them so that I don't upload too much wack shit ya know? Here's my most recent throwie.65450

H1P30N3R
04-22-2012, 12:00 PM
^^ go here
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread

Spy10327
04-22-2012, 01:07 PM
Slight change in spelling dropped the e and added that 'i'. My 'f' is a too fat and my t doesn't flow yet i'll fix that after i get my i to flow. Tips/crits?
65473

Axil
04-22-2012, 04:40 PM
Simple it down Fait a throw up meant to be fast some u can do under 1min or 2

65513

H1P30N3R
04-22-2012, 04:58 PM
^^^ dont give crits until you have an idea of what your doing yourself.... go here
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread

aiko
04-22-2012, 04:59 PM
that drop shade is awkward as fuck

Lord dak
04-22-2012, 05:36 PM
that drop shade is awkward as fuck

^^ this,
you gotta work on that bro

ven0m
04-22-2012, 06:08 PM
that drop shade is awkward as fuck
i dont get it whats awkward about it? or you know what better yet, define awkward...
cause all I'm seeing is just a regular ass shadow with nothing wrong

H1P30N3R
04-22-2012, 06:10 PM
^^ thank you as I said before to them go here

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-The-New-To-Graffiti-Thread

Spy10327
04-22-2012, 07:25 PM
I've read thru that a dozen times, and also row these throwies don't even take me that long to pull off. my letters are developing style one at a time it seems, so some are currently odd and others are aight. 65586 got about 50 "hello my name is" stickers at the local grocery store today and a sharpie king and two metallic sharpies (goes over stray outline marks very well imo.

Axil
04-22-2012, 07:41 PM
just change it don't keep a letter the same for me that hard to look at and if that's your tag on the paper get a better tag i just telling u straight cus your doing what i was doing about a month ago not listening to anyone and just keeping it the same trust me change it and look at some throw ups on Google and just learn from them :)

Spy10327
04-22-2012, 08:18 PM
just change it don't keep a letter the same for me that hard to look at and if that's your tag on the paper get a better tag i just telling u straight cus your doing what i was doing about a month ago not listening to anyone and just keeping it the same trust me change it and look at some throw ups on Google and just learn from them :)

My letters are def changing, I'm taking mostly all the crits i've been getting (not too many so far) but nah thats not my handstyle at the top my bestfriend was fucking around and she did that lol. my handstyle was more fluid back when the word was still spelled fate.

TastyMcNasty
04-22-2012, 08:33 PM
slow down. make your letters evenly sized, and change your word its a poor letter combo

H1P30N3R
04-22-2012, 09:14 PM
here I did a you guys a quick toss now try flipping it and making it your own...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120422_220655.jpg

MN Nice
04-22-2012, 09:16 PM
I don't like how much your bar thickness varies.

H1P30N3R
04-22-2012, 09:28 PM
As in these 2 throws or all my throws ? crits very much appreciated mues anything to help me advance. Been alot of super toys around the forum as of late.

MN Nice
04-22-2012, 09:39 PM
I think just those ones. I'm sure your own throw is on point.

H1P30N3R
04-22-2012, 09:44 PM
word been trying work on my handstyles n simps a little more lately. fuckin unemployment is gonna make me a better artist lol

dmgraff
04-22-2012, 11:33 PM
just did one of my first publicly visible throwies on a big dumpster, after i finished and started to walk away i relized it lookes so fucked up because of a bar going down the side of the dumpster
(btw it was my shortned name op instead of optik so half the throw is fucked)

ven0m
04-23-2012, 06:44 AM
hipeoner! respect on that gif haha laughed so hard I got a headache

Friz_One
04-23-2012, 07:12 AM
65755This is one of my throwies

H1P30N3R
04-23-2012, 12:40 PM
word venom shit had me dying too....

friz trying making it one clean rather rather than a sketch style throw

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120423_132308.jpg

Mori
04-23-2012, 01:55 PM
65795

Spy10327
04-23-2012, 02:11 PM
So I wanna change my name to either Buf, Buff, or Buft. I like the letters ya know. should I practice each of them, or does someone recommend one from the list?

sadgeh
04-23-2012, 04:15 PM
Hipe that O is clean as hell, damn nice boy.
Mori nice too as always. But how do you do that pointy line inside the C? just wondering

dankbudz
04-23-2012, 07:38 PM
hipe- lookin goood

crits?

DaFugg
04-23-2012, 08:15 PM
Hip, not that I'm any good with throws, but he's right about thickness, It's the A and the R really throwing me off. They look jumbled.

It's not BAD looking. that's just the only way I see improvement. haha;)

DaFugg
04-23-2012, 08:16 PM
Dank what markers do you use? I always envy the consistency in your writing. You down for an exchange BTW? It's been a while.

notmikegiant
04-23-2012, 08:27 PM
quick exchange, looks meh like everything else i post

65893

H1P30N3R
04-23-2012, 09:11 PM
Hip, not that I'm any good with throws, but he's right about thickness, It's the A and the R really throwing me off. They look jumbled.

It's not BAD looking. that's just the only way I see improvement. haha;)

Yea it was done quickly just to give an idea of what their names throw style would resemble rather than the pics they put up.

thanks guys on the moist throw ...

dank- the t drop that top bar down just a bit and dont bring the middle part in so close together.The o is a too small at the bottom part. The rest isnt bad just developing your own bit of flavor takes time. Also your characters are boss man!

dankbudz
04-23-2012, 11:00 PM
thanks for the crit and complement bro

GooberOne
04-23-2012, 11:36 PM
65904

GooberOne
04-23-2012, 11:37 PM
my camera is dumb the date is wrong

notmikegiant
04-24-2012, 04:16 AM
went out tonight

65937

here's a buddys

65938

this was in a warehouse nearby

65939

Friz_One
04-24-2012, 09:33 AM
notmikegiant third bomb is very nice

uknowigetup
04-24-2012, 02:52 PM
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120424_154512.jpg

Hello gents, I've taken a break from piecing and have been working on a better throwie. I like this one and will probably start painting it. Can I get some crits?

gemer
04-24-2012, 04:10 PM
@ friz damn man ur throws are much better than ur pieces imo

blackmath
04-24-2012, 07:45 PM
Came up with some new shit today, let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is key.
Don't take the stupid little designs too serious though, that was boredom. Let me know what you think about the style

661956619666197

Kaze
04-24-2012, 08:33 PM
the 2 bottom pictures are dope black math. just keep practicing is all i can say

blackmath
04-24-2012, 08:36 PM
Thanks man I really appreciate it

Negativity
04-24-2012, 09:40 PM
6620566206
My boy JOI

Norfsuthr
04-24-2012, 10:42 PM
^You guys are gonna go far, I can tell.

MN Nice
04-24-2012, 10:47 PM
hahahahaha

H1P30N3R
04-25-2012, 12:36 AM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120425_012451.jpg

ComradeR
04-25-2012, 03:32 AM
66272

Friz_One
04-25-2012, 07:16 AM
gemer, throwies are better cuz i have bad markers, and i don't have many writer skills i am a toy

PETER
04-25-2012, 01:27 PM
Mori, humor, dank, naked, anyone else with a solid throw.... Can you guys do a "krsd" for me please? I have some things running in my head.... See where this goes.

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
04-25-2012, 01:31 PM
man will somone please do a "pussy" throw for me?? I will never get any on my own so i need someone else to do it for me. kthx

Quote1
04-25-2012, 03:14 PM
66290

nine514
04-25-2012, 05:10 PM
66296

66297

my first 2 throwies. CRITSSSSSSS plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Kushbombing
04-25-2012, 05:39 PM
Don't flood the thread with 3 posts.
Don't take pics of yourself or anyone you know in front of your graff.

As for your throws. Second one sucks. How did u manage too make your E soo low? Next time u outline make sure your bottoms are lined up before you fill in. After you fill step back and check it again.

U got a pretty easy name. Sketch and make it look better before you bomb again
Your stuff looks make

nine514
04-25-2012, 05:48 PM
looks make?

and secondly, i don't know who that guy is in the first pic ;) And thanks for advice Kush.

ven0m
04-25-2012, 06:21 PM
stop flooding asshole! use the fucking edit button or die

blackmath
04-25-2012, 09:07 PM
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dankbudz
04-25-2012, 09:20 PM
don't write tak, people that are a lot better than you write it. however its not like you'll get up. sooo... and those aren't throws.

crits? I'm having a bitch of a time figuring out this M and my hand steadiness improves then turns to shit and so on and yea yaaa

Kushbombing
04-25-2012, 10:59 PM
^ tops ones better. Both M's are kinda big compared to other letters. I would shorten all the lines in the M.
I don't like the S in the second one as much as the first. The bottom right of the second M looks weird too

TAK. The second one gets way to thing. They aren't even throwups.
Just the letter combo tak sucks. T is a bitch and K is a hoe.

KehmONE
04-26-2012, 07:48 AM
66424

Been kinda fuckin' with this, still working on trying to turn it into a 4 letter one liner.
Wish my phone didn't take such retardedly large photos.

H1P30N3R
04-26-2012, 04:08 PM
one liners take years to master my advice is to focus on a basic throws... or cut out some of the lines like I did in the i to z to e connection in the throw below.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_165433.jpg

Mildstyles
04-26-2012, 05:59 PM
Lol tak... TAKI 183, so dont write that. Kopr always looking good and dankbudz got some flava! I like the SE on the top one but you could use some tweaking with an M, definitely nice though
Heres my flood of leetzor throwz
I would have really liked the siren one if the S didnt make me want to puke
6648366484664856648666487

H1P30N3R
04-26-2012, 08:13 PM
the gees and siren just need work on the s then they are solid. The hero is pretty cool

boredom .....

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_204711.jpg

Spy10327
04-26-2012, 09:08 PM
66524 Suggestions? Am I getting the right idea?

Mr.Zorak
04-26-2012, 09:50 PM
66526 suggestions?

Kaze
04-26-2012, 11:10 PM
looks good as usual hipe.
SPY-you gotta find new letters man, u got 3 square ones and then one rounded one and ur F and T is really bad, T's in throwies should not be done in lower case unless you are a throwup king who can pull off nutty shit. keep practicing man we all start off at the bottom and work r way up, most of us at least. not saying im good, i still suck too. just keep at it.

zorak- u got ur letters in the same square genre which is good but it doesnt look all that nice just like everyone else starting out. I dont like how ur C is really top heavy and that it comes out more then bottom, just needs a one line and it would look like a lower case E. practice practice practice and you will progress.

These still suck and need lots of work but anyways, crits please.
6652866529

dmgraff
04-27-2012, 02:28 AM
just finished 2 designs which one is better?
1st is a block letter66553
2nd is somthing else66554

nine514
04-27-2012, 08:05 AM
wow. terrible.

ven0m
04-27-2012, 08:23 AM
you're not a whole lot better either, nine514...

blackmath
04-27-2012, 10:31 AM
don't write tak, people that are a lot better than you write it. however its not like you'll get up. sooo... and those aren't throws

The fuck do yuo mean I'll never get up anyway? I dont give a shit if other people write the same name. I'm out every night gettin up. And I like straight letter throws, not a bunch of bubble letters like everyone else in this thread

66561

Svc
04-27-2012, 11:04 AM
66562 back to painti after a year without, crits

Norfsuthr
04-27-2012, 11:15 AM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_204711.jpg

I like those E's homie, need some shaping up but its a good idea. The last one really. P needs some work too.

Mildstyles
04-27-2012, 11:50 AM
Needed to waste what was left, quick 2 letter. K is messed
66566

ComradeR
04-27-2012, 03:08 PM
any crits on all the pics i post is welcome. I suck but still trying, got another throwie down
66580

Axil
04-27-2012, 04:25 PM
Mildstyle - Does it say NK? - its better than what i can do + its Dark red + black so its hard to tell for me :P

Zem - remove the outline around it remove them ring things and try pushing them a bit closer together and the middle line on the m move it a little bit

Cirtz Please + i know it not that good but its hard to get a r that i like :P

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8154/6973511750_82f67cc6c1_z.jpg

dankbudz
04-27-2012, 04:41 PM
im jealous of your throw naked and hope and the other few who gots some guud shit!

http://i46.tinypic.com/2d97ep1.jpg

Axil
04-27-2012, 04:44 PM
Like the S Seldom just a suggestion make the hole in the s a bit smaller

Strange Journeys
04-27-2012, 05:09 PM
^ i think its cool as is, got some funk

@ kase that shit aint workin, your trying to complicate it too much, cut back some yo

Kaze
04-27-2012, 05:17 PM
thanks for the crits journeys i appreciate it, is there any letters in particular that gotta go or should i jsut scratch the hole thing?
Dank i like your S the way it is, the middle part of it is my favorite part of it, maybe coule be abit smaller but the way it is looks good, maybe dont have ur L going up on such a sharp angle at the bottom but either way it looks good

Mildstyles
04-27-2012, 05:39 PM
Thanks dank, that 2 letter got some steez to it im lovin it. The S is sick and that L is much better than what i could do, looks nice

looks like a cool spot too

blackmath
04-27-2012, 05:51 PM
Better pictures, fucked up my K.

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Axil
04-27-2012, 07:40 PM
Tak how long that take you man looks Nice just need to get better paint :P

What C looks better? 1 or 2

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8016/7119907729_ed9fd7f5f0_z.jpg http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8154/6973511750_82f67cc6c1_z.jpg

Strange Journeys
04-27-2012, 08:07 PM
2nd C
@Kase, I think your S is the strongest of the letters you got,you got all the negative space between the letters thats got to go, the a is unreadable and the k has that weird kick on the bottom bar

H1P30N3R
04-27-2012, 08:12 PM
yea norf it was a quick sloppy throw bur ill clean up them e's

And dank im jealous of your simps we are even

Spy10327
04-27-2012, 10:43 PM
66622
crits?

blackmath
04-27-2012, 11:26 PM
Tak how long that take you man looks Nice just need to get better paint :P

Uhhh probably around 5 minutes, not sure haha.

And I like your first C more, it fits the R better

dmgraff
04-28-2012, 05:38 AM
wow. terrible.

insted of saying i suck how about you tell me how to get better

R3bel1995
04-28-2012, 06:07 AM
Axil, can you please just delete your sig. Until you stick with a name. THEN say "I write ____" or else change it to "Today I'm writing ____ but tomorrow I don't know what I'll write". Now regarding your throwie. Most importantly, make all the bars the same width. And on your R in the second one, don't put the right bar behind the left.

Axil
04-28-2012, 10:55 AM
im keeping this name until i get caught :P

Critz please!

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7263/7121551877_a1ffb0b98f_z.jpg

Woulf
04-28-2012, 11:32 AM
Axil, Looks cool but the leg of the R could be a bit more fat. I'm not really the best to be giving critz, just trying to help.


66753
Just started any critz would be much appreciated.

centrysam
04-28-2012, 11:54 AM
@ axil . i think the c is to squre .
throws should b made up of eather .simple bars . or half circles .
you should also be able to do each letter with out lifiting marker from page .
so to fix ur toss i would recomend making the top of the c and r the same shape . and the middle of the c more rounded because ur r is rounded . practice makes perfect . fill pages with small tosses an u will get it .

bio99
04-28-2012, 01:46 PM
667546675566756

the proportions could be better but what do ya think? critzz

dankbudz
04-28-2012, 02:10 PM
dumb it down, hombre ^^

crits?

Axil
04-28-2012, 02:12 PM
the 3rd one is the best but whats going on with the d it looks like a u?

dankbudz
04-28-2012, 02:15 PM
when i ask for crits, I'm asking for crits from someone who's not a total fag, such as you. the D looks preetttty distinguishable as a D the bottom bar part could of been brought up high, but regardles... I'm pretty sure no U would look like that.

if anyone with knowledge has crits, get at me,

Mildstyles
04-28-2012, 02:30 PM
I dont how about knowledge butttt
the 2nd and 3rd S's are bangin, 3rd ELDOM is nice...so basically i like the last throw i think its the best haha
but IMO on the D, the line that seperates the round part from the little bar(top middle of the D), make that line not go down as far and for the loop of the D try making it less like an O curve and see if you can get a D curve, the d curve is less extreeme if ya feel me

MN Nice
04-28-2012, 03:02 PM
I was hoping you'd start using the bumped M leg like I had in our exchange. Work with it more

H1P30N3R
04-28-2012, 03:10 PM
2 and third one is solid that third one the e is on fire . Idea when you drop that first line down for your l kick a little line inward then bring the leg of the l out with an overlapping look such as the e and m. And if I make no sense ill just draw 1 and post it, Oh and yea what naked was saying bout the d too.

dankbudz
04-28-2012, 03:19 PM
thanks for the crits, y'all.
mues, ya its looked good this was e tryna do my own thing with that similar idea
hipe, i understand what your saying, ill try that out, see how it works n such

Norfsuthr
04-28-2012, 04:21 PM
dat 2
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8160/6976346342_8d944c9c31.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6976346342/)
photo-10 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6976346342/)

H1P30N3R
04-28-2012, 04:57 PM
yessir

Axil
04-28-2012, 05:02 PM
GO next time get a fill in and a outline and swap the star in the o to a Line or a slightly curved line

Critz Please

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8018/7122520047_3b2681fcb2_z.jpg

H1P30N3R
04-28-2012, 05:06 PM
^^this guy

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0903/Kelly/retard.jpg

Silky Johnson
04-28-2012, 07:14 PM
thats one ugly muhfukka !

Spy10327
04-28-2012, 11:58 PM
ok new name i got the throwies down imho i'm def still improving but i need to work on a handstyle soon 66847

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 12:01 AM
Um....about having those throwies down... Try doing some that arent so blocky that more of a blockbuster with no negative space than a throw...

Spy10327
04-29-2012, 12:09 AM
Um....about having those throwies down... Try doing some that arent so blocky that more of a blockbuster with no negative space than a throw...

iight i lost a few good pages by the time i took a pic, but thanks.

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 12:21 AM
you will go through another 50 notebooks before you "get throws down" be sure to clear out about a year of time too... ohh and thats if you progress pretty quick.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_020412.jpg

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 01:20 AM
Shoutouts...stolen idea to the next level!
If i didnt do you a throw sorry but i can only fit so many on 1 page haha. either i decided your letters suck or there wasnt enough space. I think i got everyone including the hands tho
throws go Naked Seldom Mues Cred Humor Venom then a bunch of ye olde handstyles
66848

Spy10327
04-29-2012, 11:06 AM
Hey mildstyles what do you mean by negative space, what made that style not a throwie?

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 11:42 AM
Yours? Because yours was basically a blockbuster with no negative space, and negative space is the space inbetween the letters. If you made a B witht he 2 holes in it, the space inside the holes are negative space. And all of the other space in between your letters are negative space, but you don't NEED negative space for a throw, my main problem with yours is that its blocks. Use curved lines with more movement

Spy10327
04-29-2012, 11:44 AM
Yours? Because yours was basically a blockbuster with no negative space, and negative space is the space inbetween the letters. If you made a B witht he 2 holes in it, the space inside the holes are negative space. And all of the other space in between your letters are negative space, but you don't NEED negative space for a throw, my main problem with yours is that its blocks. Use curved lines with more movement
Iight thanks I will work on that now.

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 03:04 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_110415.jpg

Norfsuthr
04-29-2012, 04:33 PM
Only thing im not feeling is the K. Try a smaller hole in it and something else on top, imo.

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 04:41 PM
will do thanks for the crit

Woulf
04-29-2012, 07:15 PM
66959

Still learning throwie's. Any crits are much welcomed. Whenever I try and shade it always comes out weird.

MN Nice
04-29-2012, 07:48 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_110415.jpg

Go bigger. It'll help.

blackmath
04-29-2012, 07:54 PM
@Woulf
All of your 3D lines need to be at the same exact angle, it helps to do it with a ruler on paper but dont get used to it, its better to learn it by hand.
Basically, like you have 3D at the back of your S, its impossible for there to be 3D on the front of your F. It should be coming off the very very bottom of the F.

Well, thats if you want the 3D to be down and to the left of your throwie.

But you definitely need work on your throws. Not to be a dick but much, much more work.
Keep your letters the same size, graffiti doesn't condone proper grammar lol.
Shitty 3D will make the shittiest throw look even shittier.
Get better markers. I sound like a toy sayin that shit because who the fuck gives a shit. Markers are markers, paint is paint. But its much easier to use paint markers to practice throws cause all of the color goes over what you want it to, instead of turning black and weird like sharpies or regular markers.
The face is okay cause all toys do dumb little faces, but lose the cigarette thing.

Thats all I got man, just work on the 3D shit, ill post a pic if you still dont get it

blackmath
04-29-2012, 07:56 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_110415.jpg

Did you do your fill AFTER you did your outline??

iPwnF00lz
04-29-2012, 08:59 PM
Shoutouts...stolen idea to the next level!
If i didnt do you a throw sorry but i can only fit so many on 1 page haha. either i decided your letters suck or there wasnt enough space. I think i got everyone including the hands tho
throws go Naked Seldom Mues Cred Humor Venom then a bunch of ye olde handstyles
66848

diggin these

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 09:20 PM
Did you do your fill AFTER you did your outline??

no just drippy ass paint didnt give it enough time to dry before doing the outline.

mues- word first time painting since last summer i'll get it down.
.

Silky Johnson
04-29-2012, 09:34 PM
Yeahh MUHFUKKAS!!

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_113556.jpg

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 09:37 PM
I hope thats now kopr's new account, and if it isnt
Can we see this kid get banned^^

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 09:38 PM
its me it was my hater account but wasnt much fun.

Spy10327
04-29-2012, 09:58 PM
66992 more rounded? or is this round enough?

Woulf
04-29-2012, 11:12 PM
Thanks black.
I was reading some post here and there and I seen i'm probably going to have to work on the same angle business. I know i'm going to need a lot of work but I don't mind, I enjoy this so it'll come with practice and time...hopefully. As for the 3d, i'll make sure to keep it more of a shadow. Someone was saying for beginners some markers to start off with is Krylon and Rusto. Any input on that? Isn't a toy more of someone who bites off other peoples styles & such? I guess many others have done the faces at one point or another but there isn't much someone hasn't done already.

Could you post a pic just so I could see if that's cool? Much thanks man, I really appreciate it.

ComradeR
04-30-2012, 12:47 AM
Spy, I'd say start off with simples, copy them letters from ur keyboard and work on spacing

IronyATB
04-30-2012, 12:55 PM
67117

I'd like some crits on this please. Namechanged to SKEE. I realise the top left of the S should come out more to the left and I need to make them all the same width at the bottom (K in particular) but apart from that, what are your opinions?

67118

Redid it, I think this is better. (Ignore the handstyle, I haven't came up with one yet for new name.

blackmath
04-30-2012, 04:35 PM
Thanks black.
I was reading some post here and there and I seen i'm probably going to have to work on the same angle business. I know i'm going to need a lot of work but I don't mind, I enjoy this so it'll come with practice and time...hopefully. As for the 3d, i'll make sure to keep it more of a shadow. Someone was saying for beginners some markers to start off with is Krylon and Rusto. Any input on that? Isn't a toy more of someone who bites off other peoples styles & such? I guess many others have done the faces at one point or another but there isn't much someone hasn't done already.

Could you post a pic just so I could see if that's cool? Much thanks man, I really appreciate it.

Yeah man all you gotta do is practice and it'll come eventually. And to be completely honest, theres so many people calling someone a toy, no one even knows what it means exactly anymore. To me, a toy is someone who has absolutely no idea what hes doing, and has no knowledge on anything artsy. Or someone who is only doing it to vandalize, or someone who doesn't paint at all and talks about getting up all the time. Basically someone who is either really bad, or sort of bad and doing it for the wrong reasons, (to be cool or to be an asshole and fuck shit up). And I really dont know what kinda markers are good, I worry about the paint. But any paint marker like Deco is good, really. And yeah Ill draw up my shit and ill keep the 3D hollow so you can see the angles n shit


67189

Here you go man. Now this is super super sketchy, I rushed cause i got shit to do today. But I guess that kinda shows how you should 3D, just pick an angle and at every corner of the letter, draw a line down at that angle, but allllways keep it the same. When you get to a corner where the "3D" line would go into the letter you just colored, dont draw the line. Thats what makes it look toyish and just incorrect. Think of pointing a single light source at an object, there is only going to be ONE shadow, it is virtually impossible for there to be more than one

blackmath
04-30-2012, 05:46 PM
Flooding the board I know, dont care. I went to the craaaziest spot ive been to in a while last night. Climbed up a fire escape (that had no floor by the way, only two railings along each side) 8 stories up, onto the top of this old ass building. Easily could've died/gotten seriously hurt. But thats all the fun, isnt it? anyway, heres the shit I threw up, I think it came out pretty good. I had to stand literally two inches away from the wall cause... well its confusing to explain but you get the fuckin picture lol. Anyway here it is

67191

Better picture, shows the size much much better.

67192

nine514
05-01-2012, 12:09 AM
67219
2nd time out ever. 2 throwies in pretty high traffic area. crits?

nine514
05-01-2012, 12:11 AM
67220 thoughts?

blackmath
05-01-2012, 12:43 AM
Other than the shitty can control (no offense) it looks alright, just gotta keep practicing paintin and you'll get it. You should try to find a chill spot so you can take your time and go in the day. Id try to change up the bottom of the N's too, maybe make the bubble smaller and more towards the bottom, or even get rid of it all together. Idk try it out see how you like it

Kushbombing
05-01-2012, 05:23 AM
Flooding the board I know, dont care. I went to the craaaziest spot ive been to in a while last night. Climbed up a fire escape (that had no floor by the way, only two railings along each side) 8 stories up, onto the top of this old ass building. Easily could've died/gotten seriously hurt. But thats all the fun, isnt it? anyway, heres the shit I threw up, I think it came out pretty good. I had to stand literally two inches away from the wall cause... well its confusing to explain but you get the fuckin picture lol. Anyway here it is

67191

Better picture, shows the size much much better.

67192


Prove it with a zoomEd out pic. I think ur full of shit 8th story??

Kushbombing
05-01-2012, 05:30 AM
Nine. Getting a tiny bit better. Ur avatar throwie sucks . The white ones... The E is way to low. Glad tO sesimeon not doing that again.
But do t paint high traffic spots man. Find somewhere chill to paint where u can take ur time and shIt.
Keep practicing
Work on making ur letters better

R3bel1995
05-01-2012, 07:19 AM
67189



Ok I know that they say Graff is meant to have arrows, but I don't think this is wat they meant... :p

nine514
05-01-2012, 07:58 AM
Kush and black, thanks for the advice. Only thing is that i think im past the stage of waisting paint in areas where no1 sees it... its not that terrible....

Big Africa
05-01-2012, 09:26 AM
@ nine dont get a big head man, that'll leave you lickin' your wounds. keep practicing at them chill spots and then troll them skreets later. That's what i do

blackmath
05-01-2012, 10:29 AM
Ok I know that they say Graff is meant to have arrows, but I don't think this is wat they meant... :p

I was demonstrating a single light source so the kid would understand...
even though it sounds like you were being sarcastic lol

blackmath
05-01-2012, 10:32 AM
Prove it with a zoomEd out pic. I think ur full of shit 8th story??

I wasn't hanging off the side of the building if thats what you mean. I had to climb up the side yeah, but once I got on the roof I was able to walk around. It was still sketchy cause it felt like it was gonna collapse but yeah. I could really get good pictures but here ya go

672786727967280

The one of them is from the bottom lookin up, you can barely tell what it is but if you look at the right light you can see the top of the building, and I was already two stories towards the top when I took the picture. But nahhh man Im not full of shit, I was shittin my pants the whole way up though lol

nine514
05-01-2012, 03:10 PM
Props to tak for the 8th story bombage

aiko
05-01-2012, 04:01 PM
ahahah killin it

Kushbombing
05-01-2012, 04:10 PM
Kush and black, thanks for the advice. Only thing is that i think im past the stage of waisting paint in areas where no1 sees it... its not that terrible....

A couple years from now you look back and see some of this stuff ur painting and just laugh at yourself. But do w/e



And Tak looks like u are not full of shit. Lol
You need to get a better pic tho man lol. Can u see ur shit from the ground?

dankbudz
05-01-2012, 04:14 PM
.

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 04:55 PM
yessir thats what up homie looks good

Kaze
05-01-2012, 04:57 PM
nine- lose that 2 ball thing on your lowercase E, just make it one line smooth line or somthing and maybe make the dot of your eye a bit bigger with like that swirl thing going to the centre or somthing.
dank- that throw looks sick, i like your S alot, cant really see the M but it all looks dope

Friidom
05-01-2012, 05:11 PM
meh new throwie im messin with. crits welcome. says won
67361

Mildstyles
05-01-2012, 05:14 PM
Dank that throw is solid, where is it, on a house? Either way very nice throwski keep it up

ComradeR
05-01-2012, 05:23 PM
Did something quick for this one girl i know.. The I is shit, I know that :P
67362

Big Africa
05-01-2012, 05:25 PM
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/2012-05-01181130.jpg

Critz por favor, been workin on this one for a lil bit.

nine514
05-01-2012, 05:42 PM
not feeling the R and E, but nice colors and shadow.

Kaze
05-01-2012, 05:42 PM
friidom- make your O wider and your N abit wider and maybe more straight, just keep practicing.

comrader- shadowing looks bit off, dont like ur N really but the first A is nice, just should have made the centre hole of it more in the centre

big africa- looks decent just maybe make your E have abit more of a gap so it matches all ur other letters...rather then just the line coming up and curving in...if you get what i mean. looks good though, keep practicing man.

Friidom
05-01-2012, 06:01 PM
yea i was thinking about fattening/shortening it all up thanks for the crit
comrade-try to make your letters more evenly spaced if you kno what i mean. like the I is further from the A than the rest are from each other and try to make your second A lean the same way as the first
africa-looks like the letters get bigger from left to right just fix that up and should look a lot better

Skee
05-01-2012, 06:16 PM
6736367364

Throwies for my new name, I'm not feeling them at all but it's the best I have came up with up to now.

ComradeR
05-01-2012, 06:43 PM
Kaze and Friidom thanks for the crits, yeah I usually have trouble with spacing and keeping some letters the same. I don't like my N as well, looks more like a messed up H. I'll be posting up more stuff tonight, fix a few things on it.

@skee, your first pic is blurry, cant see crap yo, I can see the second though, stick with simples, not feeling the pointy crap under each letter

Friidom
05-01-2012, 06:52 PM
skee-on the second one try to make the leg of the k more like the bottom of the e's, you kinda made the bump smaller and its throwin it off

TastyMcNasty
05-01-2012, 07:07 PM
yo dank, that;s sick

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0075.jpg

blackmath
05-01-2012, 07:22 PM
And Tak looks like u are not full of shit. Lol
You need to get a better pic tho man lol. Can u see ur shit from the ground?

I definitelyyyy need a better pic haha, Ill try to go back up in the day but I would be seen for sure. And you can only see it if your pretty far away, cause the buildings so high. But it was more of a chill adventure night than a bombing night

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 07:45 PM
aner - def a unique look I dig all the letters besides the a. I think if you change up the leg on it and maje the circle a bit bigger it would help, so that it is atleast a closer size to the other letters. my 2 cents

crits trying out a one liner...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_201159.jpg

Kaze
05-01-2012, 07:49 PM
^that looks sick i think, maybe try to make your R alittle smaller so it matches ur other letters. i like how your R comes into ur P and makes the middle point for your P. maybe put something in the middle of your O but either way it looks dope.

DEMPO
05-01-2012, 07:57 PM
dank wow dude im impressed

Big Africa
05-01-2012, 08:39 PM
Critz been drawin this all day
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/2012-05-01213425.jpg
@ kaze thanks the e does look way better
@ Friidom i been work on my letter consistency

Kaze
05-01-2012, 08:49 PM
it looks better africa, keep practicing man, maybe try and do something with the right leg of your R. try to get some simple ideas from other people...just dont take exactly what they have and use it and then call it ur own. its looking good, keep it up...glad i can help in any way

TastyMcNasty
05-01-2012, 09:02 PM
yo dank, that;s sick

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0075.jpg

bottom page bump. and like HIPE said, A is a little small.

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 09:19 PM
crits trying out a one liner...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_201159.jpg

bpb

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 09:20 PM
topless 67427

Norfsuthr
05-01-2012, 09:30 PM
idk about that s

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 09:38 PM
i just thought of it afew days ago im still tryin to develope it

MN Nice
05-01-2012, 09:42 PM
.

Bump. Go bigger!

TastyMcNasty
05-02-2012, 02:19 PM
no sleep, i actually kinda dig that. work at it more

no-sleep
05-02-2012, 02:20 PM
will do

KehmONE
05-02-2012, 03:55 PM
67528

Ignore the M, working on it.

nine514
05-02-2012, 04:24 PM
ive seen better from u kehm

Kushbombing
05-02-2012, 07:36 PM
No sleep- I can def see spins style in ur letters bro.
Ur Whole in the E and the end of your H.

BigFaggot
05-02-2012, 08:39 PM
@search, its a nice throw, but definitely work on that s, it kinda looks like a fancy dick hahaha

no-sleep
05-02-2012, 08:48 PM
i love spins style, yeah now that i think of it that S is kinda fucked

TastyMcNasty
05-02-2012, 08:49 PM
i dig the S though.

no-sleep
05-02-2012, 08:51 PM
it could be cleaner

blackmath
05-03-2012, 02:49 AM
Double outline is so damn shitty but crits?
First attempt at a two tone fade fill

67647

nine514
05-03-2012, 08:20 AM
i like it tak.

Skee
05-03-2012, 08:32 AM
Two tone is pretty clean but the colours don't mix at all.

H1P30N3R
05-03-2012, 11:04 AM
painting wise pretty clean man ...you need to fix the 2 legs on that k tho man

blackmath
05-03-2012, 11:27 AM
Thanks a lot guys, its so hard to get that fucker straight and even

Tastyca
05-03-2012, 11:33 AM
Oh, that's Great Sir !!

H1P30N3R
05-03-2012, 11:51 AM
blackmath- where the 2 legs on the k meet and you have that sideways v shape seperating thing cut that shit just connect them like this k in my simp (im no pro but have a general idea of structure)

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120428_211540.jpg

R3bel1995
05-03-2012, 12:54 PM
I was demonstrating a single light source so the kid would understand...
even though it sounds like you were being sarcastic lol

Yes. I was being sarcastic.

MAGOO52
05-03-2012, 02:03 PM
its been a while.. here you go.. any crits rip it up
67664

R3bel1995
05-03-2012, 02:12 PM
Does that say magoo? Extend the left part of your M so it looks less like an A, your A, shorten the slit in the middle, make sure the bars on the G are the same as the width of the bars on all your other
letters. And round out your Os. Just a bit.

Tastyca
05-03-2012, 03:13 PM
you are right

nine514
05-03-2012, 04:39 PM
take your time and try not make so many lines in the outline.. one solid line always looks better.. your throw looks like it has fur ;) keep practicing :))

Jake_NN_Bake
05-03-2012, 08:25 PM
I know I'm a toy and I'm gonna get shit for posting my first time painting but I really thought it came out better than I expected. Posting the landscape one just for kicks. Awesome spot with a ton of wall space, granted you're okay with getting very wet. Its under two bridges. Two seperate throwies. First one is above about 3 ft. of water. Had a tough time in the water for the first one. Second one is on dry land but I wanted to get the surroundings as well. Crits on the first one seeing as its the only one legible due to the camera angle of the second.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7043/6994471908_08c8d09d24.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994471908/)
Throw Creek. (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994471908/) by jakemorgan96 (http://www.flickr.com/people/jakemorgan96/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7185/6994470644_aa8b5e3838.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994470644/)
Throw Overdone (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994470644/) by jakemorgan96 (http://www.flickr.com/people/jakemorgan96/), on Flickr

Coleo
05-03-2012, 08:55 PM
does it say 'HALO' or 'MALO' if it says halo your 'H' looks lika 'M' ...

Jake_NN_Bake
05-03-2012, 08:57 PM
Its supposed to be an h. I guess that means I have to work on it huh?

Coleo
05-03-2012, 09:02 PM
yes make the top more compact and dont do a pointy line at the bottom of the bar some thing like this:
67745

blackmath
05-03-2012, 09:35 PM
Some old shit I decided to paint again "oc" the es was my homie

6776567766

H1P30N3R
05-04-2012, 12:33 AM
throw is 2 colors a fill and outline all the extras can go looks like you need to move the can a little quicker.. keep practicing tho man even using paint helps in the long run..

Ok guys decided after last weeks throw battle and the discussion I would just let my sharpie go for this week idk what ppl look for in those battles .... I still won but only because nouv or hips didnt enter

zephyr
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120504_010901.jpg

Kaze
05-04-2012, 04:07 AM
that throwie is siiick

KehmONE
05-04-2012, 01:59 PM
67859

Crits?

I feel like my handstyle is progressing whilst my throwie is kinda just stagnant.

Kushbombing
05-05-2012, 07:49 AM
^ looks better then the last one I saw u do.

Woulf
05-05-2012, 02:34 PM
Liking the throwie blackmath. All i'd say is work on the S, it seems a bit un-proportional compared to the rest of it. Other then that, pretty sick.

Kemone, The S is cool but a bit hard to tell it is one at first, maybe it's just me. Your hand style is definitely progressing. Keep it up.

H1P30N3R
05-05-2012, 07:36 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120505_202907.jpg

Kushbombing
05-05-2012, 09:16 PM
67952

H1P30N3R
05-05-2012, 09:50 PM
^not bad at all simple and clean the bottom of the e looks a little off coming from the little bubble but thats minor shit.

Kushbombing
05-05-2012, 09:55 PM
Are you talking about the part of the that's filled in black?

H1P30N3R
05-05-2012, 10:14 PM
im talkin about where the line comes down tucks back under the bubble on the e then makes that bottom circle of the e the circle is off balance

Alli
05-06-2012, 12:05 AM
Made this in about 15 minutes or so, pretty nice but i fucked up on the drop shadow under the "2-P"

67968

TastyMcNasty
05-06-2012, 12:09 AM
heh, thats not the only thing you fucked up

Z3BRA
05-06-2012, 12:12 AM
oh my...