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Bama61
05-06-2012, 12:15 AM
Bama :cool:

Alli
05-06-2012, 12:19 AM
Be more specific man I'm here for the crits, Anything that'll help

Z3BRA
05-06-2012, 12:30 AM
all i have to say:

stop painting and get back to the sketch pad

TastyMcNasty
05-06-2012, 12:46 AM
Be more specific man I'm here for the crits, Anything that'll help

aight. you're letters are very oddly sized compared to one another, the 2 overlaps the P too much. thats not really a drop shadow, looks more like thin 3D to me (not a bad thing, just pointing it out). and though i do see somewhat present bars, they arent present enough. and finally, you're tag hurts to look at. hope that helps

bama, stay off walls, and keep to the books. even then, your book-work seems quite weak

Restart
05-06-2012, 12:54 AM
make that tag solid THEN start working on the other stuff

Bama61
05-06-2012, 12:55 AM
dang man i'm not gonna stay off the walls ill keep painting till i get better

TastyMcNasty
05-06-2012, 01:05 AM
if you're letters were actually good, then i wouldnt oppose it. but until your letters as a whole are better, i suggest you stop wasting paint, and wall space.

Bama61
05-06-2012, 01:09 AM
guess im just another toy

SavorGraff
05-06-2012, 01:34 AM
how you feel about savors throw

Z3BRA
05-06-2012, 02:00 AM
dang man i'm not gonna stay off the walls ill keep painting till i get better

then do it where nobody can see your trash

Kaze
05-06-2012, 02:32 AM
guess im just another toy

this is called the toys forum for a reason

Bama61
05-06-2012, 02:51 AM
that was also a older throwie i have changed my still much since i started to paint on walls

H1P30N3R
05-06-2012, 03:10 AM
2pac is the truth not the throw the actual 2pac.... do some research alli and bama on graff then start completely over on paper.

GpersKreepers
05-06-2012, 06:08 AM
bama and alli - be humble and listen to people that have more skill than you, they want to see decent graffiti as well as you do,

ven0m
05-06-2012, 06:17 AM
the only thing that COULD be worth working on is that spokane throw, obama...
both you and 2pac aren't ready to be holding any cans yet, practice harddddddd now, party later

Kushbombing
05-06-2012, 07:13 AM
67952

Bump for crits

GpersKreepers
05-06-2012, 07:30 AM
can control is nice, but i'd have a go at doing the outline faster to make it more accentuated/bubbly/wild-ish? cant really describe what i mean but it sort of looks like it took you a while to do, also dont put those bubbles in again, never go more that a line forcefield on a throw imo, i normally just do fill and outline,

edit, enter this for a bit of fee back, was told my throw style is similar to some one so tried to take it a few steps back, any thoughs?? looking at the flick the 3d looks shit, damn
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02707.jpg

H1P30N3R
05-06-2012, 11:25 AM
I prefer drop shadows on throws personally think they look better. Not much I can find to crit gpers that is a good lookin throw, I really dig it.

KehmONE
05-06-2012, 01:16 PM
Pretty solid, I'm getting frustrated with my throw to be honest.

pover
05-06-2012, 01:40 PM
Crits? 67999

SavorGraff
05-06-2012, 02:22 PM
what do u guys think about the savor throw.
thats myn. me and bama paint together thats why he posed it

SavorGraff
05-06-2012, 02:42 PM
hows this?

gottapaintdaily
05-06-2012, 02:58 PM
68006
crits?

Alli
05-06-2012, 03:02 PM
aight. you're letters are very oddly sized compared to one another, the 2 overlaps the P too much. thats not really a drop shadow, looks more like thin 3D to me (not a bad thing, just pointing it out). and though i do see somewhat present bars, they arent present enough. and finally, you're tag hurts to look at. hope that helps

hahaha thanks for the help. We all start off somewhere, i still got alot to learn..

Kushbombing
05-07-2012, 03:57 AM
I think I get what's ur saying about speeding the outline up. Ur right I did spend a fair amount of time on the throw, mainly becuz It was chill and wanted it to look decent. The bubbles were to help cover my old throw underneath.

Gpers I like it but I would make the middle of the S thinner.
Pover nice but the E is kinda weird man.
Kasm if that's what it says the name is taken already and it needs a lot of work. Lose the white lines for one. I see u painted it on wood, that's good. Try doing it again but make you letters bigger. Your letters have a fucked up shape but I can see style in it, which Makes me think u stole the style. Either way u need to practice lots more. Show us some of ur paper work

MN Nice
05-07-2012, 07:42 AM
Gets bigger on accident. Want some crits. I can do the 4 better too.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/88787d1f.jpg?t=1336394585

Friz_One
05-07-2012, 08:03 AM
68077

pover
05-07-2012, 12:36 PM
Pover nice but the E is kinda weird man.


I know man i just can't find my E. Also my tag name is new so I need some time to catch it.

Mr.Zorak
05-07-2012, 04:11 PM
68118 What do you guys think? I'm thinkin this is going to be a little throwie ill put up when I'm in a rush or sketched out of a spot, its just CK instead of Corak

pover
05-07-2012, 04:27 PM
The k doesn't really look like a k... I like the structure though.

Mr.Zorak
05-07-2012, 05:11 PM
any suggestions on the k?

Mildstyles
05-07-2012, 05:18 PM
Yeah make it more like a K
LOLOLOLOLOL
it looks like an H, theres no real crit i could give just keep working on em and play around with different shapes and junk

pover
05-07-2012, 05:27 PM
Like make the lower part of the letters a bit bigger so you can develop the K better.

Norfsuthr
05-07-2012, 06:05 PM
Gets bigger on accident. Want some crits. I can do the 4 better too.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/88787d1f.jpg?t=1336394585

I'd lower the line inside the Y, you know the one.. yeaa the 4 looks weak, id like to see a better one, looks like it could get steezed out.

Gpers like everyone said it looks good. Id lose the bar on the G, and make the R similar to the P or something.

MN Nice
05-07-2012, 07:35 PM
No doubt ^ just didn't have enough room because I start on the right upper bar

pover
05-08-2012, 01:21 PM
Crits? I know it gets bigger I did it on purpose.

68165

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 03:02 PM
not to bad the first letter was always hard for me when I started developing I lose the lil design at the bottom of the e and the loop on the r keep experimenting with your p also its not real defined looks kinda like a b ... my throws also use to get bigger as each letter unfolded its just doing throws a million times you will keep developing because you have basic idea of throws down pat .

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120508_153358.jpg

pover
05-08-2012, 03:05 PM
Thanks, that was useful.

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 04:32 PM
new here, I write KroeGHK, been at it for a while, all and any crits greatly appreciated
6822368224

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 04:41 PM
proper toss throw exchange??

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 04:48 PM
im down, what do you write?

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 04:51 PM
kopr

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 04:55 PM
ill have somethin in a few minutes

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 05:05 PM
there you go, little quickie for now
68228

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 05:09 PM
nice man dig it here quick 1 too

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120508_180832.jpg

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 05:46 PM
Dope yo I dig that k,shits nice

MN Nice
05-08-2012, 05:48 PM
The E on that first Kroe. Fresh.

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 05:58 PM
Thanks, I'm gonna post more later when I get back to my room
*edit*
Some other ish
68235
68236

Kushbombing
05-08-2012, 07:31 PM
Pover - your E is still messed lol.
Kroe - I like ur throw .. though the style seems pretty common. I would suggest tweaking it up and try to put some personality into it.

Jake_NN_Bake
05-08-2012, 09:00 PM
About half way through the first throw it started pouring down rain so we had to book it under the nearest train lol. Didn't come out too bad for the conditions. The second one is a little whack but I figured I would still throw it up there just for kicks. Second time out painting. Any crits or tips? Sorry I can't resize on my phone. 6824368244

Kushbombing
05-08-2012, 09:48 PM
HALO - well to start, never make excuses as to why it came out shitty. Most the time we wont believe you anyways. On top of that... People are going to see that and they won't know or care that it was raining. They will just see that what you left behind.

Also don't hide under a train. That's just fucking stupid. I don't think you should even go to trainyards yet. You'll probly just heat them out for the people who actually know what their doing. If you do go there anyways don't leave your empty cans around.

As for your throwups. They look like they are sagging. Don't make ur letters so droopy looking. Try nice round basic letters. Your A is the second throw up looks like a R. Practice on paper and show us ur best. We will tell u what u can fix and u will get better. Sketch as much as u can

KroeGHK
05-09-2012, 01:48 AM
I second all of the above, also as far as technique, if you're gonna do a dusty throwup, make it look intentional, your fill looks like a hybrid between dusty and clean/full so it just looks rushed and frantically scribbled in, also if your force field cuts into your outline then take that initial color and go over and fix it, just makes for a cleaner looking throw, but like kush said,it doesn't seem like your ready to paint quite yet,just get inspired and work magic with paper, get feedback, improve, get more feedback, then after some final tweaks you might be ready to practice can control on a wooden board or something, Rome wasn't built in a day and there's nothing wrong with taking time to develop , sorry for all the talk, I'm high as shit, that's just my 2 cents

BackAlleySkribbleSquad
05-09-2012, 02:22 AM
68258 Crits please :D

Kushbombing
05-09-2012, 09:06 AM
backalley i think u make ur letters too tall and skinny. i would beef em up a bit, i dont even know what it says lol

here is some throws
68269
68270
68271
68272

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 10:37 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7243/7165225076_11ae79058c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7165225076/)
photo-16 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7165225076/)

not giving a fuck

pover
05-09-2012, 10:40 AM
Pover - your E is still messed lol.


Yeah I don't come up with good e's... I will keep trying.
Ok all of my other letters are shit too.

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 11:41 AM
backalley-dont look up graffiti fonts on google learn your own letters.
kush - nice simple throw your e still gets me tho
norf- when I grow up I wanna bomb like you !! nice 2 letter man

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 01:58 PM
dollar store 1$ cans and stock tips for some mid day entertainment

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_134919.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_135513.jpg

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 02:01 PM
The cake is a lie...

Good shit man. I think you should do a capital R to go with that K, which is sexy btw. And double over your lines when you dont got a fatcap, it helps so much.

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 02:03 PM
word ill do that the lowecase is just super easy lol .... jacked your lil u thing for my p nobody is doing it out here and I dig it

pover
05-09-2012, 02:04 PM
dollar store 1$ cans and stock tips for some mid day entertainment

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_134919.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_135513.jpg


Hella good man, but those cans dont cover shit.

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 03:21 PM
yea I know but I dig the grimey dustiness of it cant beat 2 dollars worth of fun

Jake_NN_Bake
05-09-2012, 07:40 PM
Practice on paper and show us ur best. We will tell u what u can fix and u will get better. Sketch as much as u can

Okay thanks for the crit. And just for the record, we weren't painting the trains. Not nearly good enough for that yet.
Here is an idea I have been tossing around.
68404

Coleo
05-09-2012, 09:14 PM
that aint a throwie...

no-sleep
05-09-2012, 09:41 PM
wrong thread sir

dmgraff
05-09-2012, 10:07 PM
68419
rusto paint with a female fat on the blue

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 10:14 PM
Hmmm a rectangle O... I'm biting it.

You need a new P tho work on that

Coleo
05-09-2012, 10:16 PM
68419
rusto paint with a female fat on the blue

you should of just smeared shit all over the wall

Norfsuthr
05-09-2012, 10:37 PM
^c'mon man at least he's trying. Look what else is there, his shit is definitely an improvement by comparison.

Coleo
05-09-2012, 10:38 PM
well he can at least get straight lines no?

dmgraff
05-09-2012, 10:48 PM
nope i did this by holding the can with my butt cheeks cuz i dont have hands

MN Nice
05-09-2012, 10:49 PM
lmao ^

Coleo
05-09-2012, 11:02 PM
nope i did this by holding the can with my butt cheeks cuz i dont have hands

apperentley

dmgraff
05-09-2012, 11:19 PM
ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

Restart
05-10-2012, 12:17 AM
not too sure if this counts as a throwie but crits would be cool

68429

got too much time on my hands so i (shittily) colored it in
68430

H1P30N3R
05-10-2012, 12:26 AM
Its more of a straight letter simple piece you dont want all the dead space each letter is built off the letter before it. Dont worry about coloring your throws right now getting your letters down are more important. Do some research look at tons of throw ups and bite anyone who says different is a liar ... after you get the basics down you will develop your own style and letters it takes time and alot of paper.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120510_011306.jpg

KroeGHK
05-10-2012, 01:59 AM
im diggin the G and the R kopr, dope throw
Omega - I understand if youre new and all but i dont have enough fingers and toes to count the number of times ive seen beginners write things like "omega" before you continue any further with structure work, maybe try and pick a less generic name, somethin with letters you like and that you think you can get a good flow with, as far as what you posted, with straight letter shit, you gotta work with consistent bars, meaning every part of your letters are as close to being the same thickness as possible and length as well, I can draw out what i mean if you need but its a pretty simple concept
bumped flick for talking, crits on this one would be appreciated
68433

pover
05-10-2012, 02:10 AM
Lol dmgraff is a funny guy...

sadgeh
05-10-2012, 09:30 AM
Kroe that shit is dope, but on the leg of the E make that round or somewhat not straight

KroeGHK
05-10-2012, 11:14 AM
Kroe that shit is dope, but on the leg of the E make that round or somewhat not straight
like curved upwards or downwads? thats not how i usually do my E's i was just tryin somethin new
just a quickie fer shits n gigs
68547

H1P30N3R
05-10-2012, 11:21 AM
yes that e is sick

Dahm
05-10-2012, 12:50 PM
2 second bs with nothing but a shit pen and a used flash card. Crits please.

68560

Mildstyles
05-10-2012, 07:52 PM
Because i spell so well.....hahaha
68630

KehmONE
05-10-2012, 08:36 PM
68640

M's fucking infuriate me, liked the way the name Dahm sounded so I attempted a dahm throw.
Anyone got any crits, or tips/ideas for M's? I've tried a bunch of different ideas and can't find one that looks decent in the slightest.

iPwnF00lz
05-10-2012, 08:49 PM
All of those attached images aren't throwies.. keep tweaking the bottom version it'll come with practice

so much style on this page, keep it up fellas

KehmONE
05-10-2012, 09:07 PM
Yeah, I had to delete them it added them as attachments for some reason...

Dahm
05-10-2012, 09:41 PM
Good effort Kehm, I'll post some various M's for you to peep soon.

Mildstyles, I'll get you that "Naked" exchange soon.

KehmONE
05-10-2012, 10:48 PM
Good effort Kehm, I'll post some various M's for you to peep soon.

Mildstyles, I'll get you that "Naked" exchange soon.

Haha, yeah... super inconsistent when it comes to the quality of shit I draw because of my palsy.. but I tried.


68657
Tried a bit harder to make my lines smooth and flowing, and tried a different M.

H1P30N3R
05-10-2012, 10:57 PM
^^ dude I have cerebal palsey affecting my right side its hard to hold the paper still with my right hand (the side that is fucked up) . It is annoying as fuck because i cant just slide the paper a lil left or right hold it perfectly still and draw my letter. You may have a totally different case of palsey but keep working on it you will figure out a way.

KehmONE
05-10-2012, 11:11 PM
^^ dude I have cerebal palsey affecting my right side its hard to hold the paper still with my right hand (the side that is fucked up) . It is annoying as fuck because i cant just slide the paper a lil left or right hold it perfectly still and draw my letter. You may have a totally different case of palsey but keep working on it you will figure out a way.

Haha, yeah. I have slight cerebral palsy, I get really bad shakes and twitches. Aside from that, is the toss even worth working on?

Mori
05-10-2012, 11:15 PM
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8020/7173656418_0ab1e0d5dc_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7173656418/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7173656418/) by mori95 (http://www.flickr.com/people/73382494@N04/), on Flickr
quick throw from da neighborhood spot today

hipe whatcha think bud?

H1P30N3R
05-10-2012, 11:24 PM
soam- yea lose the loop on the top of the s and your letters would look better if you made them taller and about the same width ... it prob looks a lil messy because of the small size

naps- nice clean fill drop shadow letters are nice and different. Only thing I might like to see is a drop down line at the top of the a to match the one on your p.But that is just me being super picky trying to find something.

Mori
05-10-2012, 11:34 PM
ya ive done that in a few, think i could do the same to the top of the s kinda so it matches all the letters too? or should i leave the s top solid

dmgraff
05-10-2012, 11:59 PM
68661
gotta work on the sizing a little but its a new idea

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 04:31 AM
68662

Dropped the loop, better? The M is still bugging me, but I'll just keep on keeping on with it until I find something that works.

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 05:43 AM
2 second bs with nothing but a shit pen and a used flash card. Crits please.

68560

everything about this is absolute dopeness imo, youve got a wicked fresh style, down for an exchange?
and Soam, I personally find it easy to develop letters when i work slow and large, dont be afraid to take up a whole page on a throw or even a letter

flicks for talkin:
new name(?)
68664
68665
68666

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Mori
05-11-2012, 08:41 AM
^ fuck you essay

GpersKreepers
05-11-2012, 09:19 AM
feelin the first gophe, kroe

kehm, best one i've seen off you so far, but id personally make the O alot more round, or even egg shaped like

Kushbombing
05-11-2012, 09:57 AM
I like ur g son

MN Nice
05-11-2012, 10:07 AM
seconded ^

H1P30N3R
05-11-2012, 11:42 AM
ya ive done that in a few, think i could do the same to the top of the s kinda so it matches all the letters too? or should i leave the s top solid

Yea maybe you could rock one throw where you did all the little drop down lines and 1 throw with no drop down lines

H1P30N3R
05-11-2012, 11:58 AM
soam- on the far side of your m when it swings in dont draw that line in so far.. and I wouldnt worry about coloring or drop shadowing just yet get your letters down first your almost there.

sadgeh
05-11-2012, 12:42 PM
On Kroe that was what i mean,

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 12:58 PM
on the e? yeah idk i like uppercase E's more cos you can do more with them structurally
flick for talking: some waaaaaaayyy throwback shit (nahh just like 4 months old)
68686

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 03:37 PM
nahh that was just some shit a friend did in one of my old books thats not my work, tagging school bathrooms is a bit below me not to sound dickish
*EDIT*
also, in the event you ever do recognize someones work, please be mindful of the fact that graffiti is vandalism(AKA ILLEGAL..not that i do illegal shit) so unless you want to be strongly disliked, dont call someone out on it over the internet (which is visible to ALL...common sense) that being said you probably...no.....you definitely should NOT watermark your pics with your full name(especially if you are in posession of spray paint and on a graff forum, just an evidence thing...again...common sense) but for now, put down the paint, youre not ready for it by any stretch of the imagination, ive been writing for upwards of 7 years and still dont consider myself 100% ready for paint, go over to the threads that explain shit for beginners and just get educated, soak in all the info you can, then grab a PENCIL and get to work, I know this is all happening fast and somewhat harsh, but thats what this is, graff writers arent nice people, we're egotistic bastards who dont want to be bothered with anything that's not up to par, not to sound cliche but it isnt a hobby, its a lifestyle, if youre just doing it to be cool or to try something new and be adventurous, then graff isnt for you. That's all. For now.
anywho...
68708

6i9o
05-11-2012, 04:23 PM
nahh that was just some shit a friend did in one of my old books thats not my work, tagging school bathrooms is a bit below me not to sound dickish
*EDIT*
also, in the event you ever do recognize someones work, please be mindful of the fact that graffiti is vandalism(AKA ILLEGAL..not that i do illegal shit) so unless you want to be strongly disliked, dont call someone out on it over the internet (which is visible to ALL...common sense) that being said you probably...no.....you definitely should NOT watermark your pics with your full name(especially if you are in posession of spray paint and on a graff forum, just an evidence thing...again...common sense) but for now, put down the paint, youre not ready for it by any stretch of the imagination, ive been writing for upwards of 7 years and still dont consider myself 100% ready for paint, go over to the threads that explain shit for beginners and just get educated, soak in all the info you can, then grab a PENCIL and get to work, I know this is all happening fast and somewhat harsh, but thats what this is, graff writers arent nice people, we're egotistic bastards who dont want to be bothered with anything that's not up to par, not to sound cliche but it isnt a hobby, its a lifestyle, if youre just doing it to be cool or to try something new and be adventurous, then graff isnt for you. That's all. For now.
anywho...
68708

It's not something I do, it's the program I use to edit the photo with. I'll have to change it so it doesn't watermark it. Trust me, I'm not doing it cause of ego
Back on topic, I'm digging everything except the "!". Look a little too much like a "P" for me

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 04:28 PM
nahh that was just some shit a friend did in one of my old books thats not my work, tagging school bathrooms is a bit below me not to sound dickish
*EDIT*
also, in the event you ever do recognize someones work, please be mindful of the fact that graffiti is vandalism(AKA ILLEGAL..not that i do illegal shit) so unless you want to be strongly disliked, dont call someone out on it over the internet (which is visible to ALL...common sense) that being said you probably...no.....you definitely should NOT watermark your pics with your full name(especially if you are in posession of spray paint and on a graff forum, just an evidence thing...again...common sense) but for now, put down the paint, youre not ready for it by any stretch of the imagination, ive been writing for upwards of 7 years and still dont consider myself 100% ready for paint, go over to the threads that explain shit for beginners and just get educated, soak in all the info you can, then grab a PENCIL and get to work, I know this is all happening fast and somewhat harsh, but thats what this is, graff writers arent nice people, we're egotistic bastards who dont want to be bothered with anything that's not up to par, not to sound cliche but it isnt a hobby, its a lifestyle, if youre just doing it to be cool or to try something new and be adventurous, then graff isnt for you. That's all. For now.
anywho...
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I'm digging that, especially the E.

Also, I agree with everything you said... wholeheartedly. Graffiti is a passion for me, and absolutely a lifestyle.

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 04:36 PM
im glad you agree and dig the throw, idk ive just seen way too many people just "get into" graff thinking its easy and makes you cool or popular without putting in the time or effort it takes to grow, ive seen the generic styles with the awkward shapes and arrows and shit and claims to not understand the oh so simple concept of basic bars, and i did that too when i started off, but in my opinion its one of the most life consuming art forms around and it annoys me when people think they can just pick up a marker or can and just be writers without knowing anything about writing or what a huge commitment it really is
ok, rant over(hopefully) flicks for venting like a bitch
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pover
05-11-2012, 04:53 PM
I think that the most important thing about graff is doing it for yourself, and not giving a fuck about what others think about it.

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 04:59 PM
Yo Kroe, up for a throw exchange? I'm curious to see what kinda steez you could bring to the letter M.
And Kroe and Gophe both look fun to write.

H1P30N3R
05-11-2012, 05:00 PM
^^ is that the toy in you speaking out or the actual love of your own art... because if we dont know structure and proportions along with many other things our graff is wack

pover
05-11-2012, 05:12 PM
^^ is that the toy in you speaking out or the actual love of your own art... because if we dont know structure and proportions along with many other things our graff is wack

No, I meant that we shouldn't care about what people think about the fact of us painting. Criticism is essential to grow, I meant basically do it to enjoy and not to be the coolest/toughest guy around and to show off.

Moe_13
05-11-2012, 05:18 PM
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KehmONE
05-11-2012, 05:22 PM
@ Moe - That E has potential... the rest is whack. Back to the sketchbook my friend.

6i9o
05-11-2012, 05:31 PM
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Still new to this stuff

spher
05-11-2012, 06:15 PM
^^^^^work on those dodgy looking o's more definition maybe make it funny and fun somehow incorperate a face a cat dont make it look to uniformed but overall its good

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 06:30 PM
^^ No.

HOERS
05-11-2012, 11:26 PM
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first ever attempt at a throw. crit away

dankbudz
05-12-2012, 04:32 AM
kids these days....

6i9o
05-12-2012, 06:33 AM
@Hoer - The middle bar on the E doesn't seem right

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The "O" is a bite. I can't think of an "O" for the life of me. And the "P" still doesn't seem right to me

pover
05-12-2012, 06:42 AM
You should write the O like a regular O.

ZIK_ONER
05-12-2012, 06:59 AM
@Bipo Nothing seems right for me, also don't change up styles in your letters, see how the end of the I is sharp.. And so is part of the b etc.. Keep it bubble for now. Your highlights are everywhere..

6i9o
05-12-2012, 07:39 AM
@Pover & Zik. Ok, thanks for the crits

HOERS
05-12-2012, 01:01 PM
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a tiny bit less janky but not really

HOERS
05-12-2012, 01:33 PM
@bipo im not really in any position to give crits but i think you should just try going round for the whole entire thing.

also fuck the star. no offense

H1P30N3R
05-12-2012, 01:53 PM
hoers you have the general idea now its drawing your name another couple thousand time before you develop better skill and your own style. The bottom lip on that e is a no go make it more rounded like the bottom of your other letters to fit that style.And the o just make an o doesnt have to have that lil thing on it. Also go to the stickers posters etc thread I've saw your characters they are real sick making character slaps would be a good look for you man ppl trade alot back and forth.

HOERS
05-12-2012, 01:58 PM
hoers you have the general idea now its drawing your name another couple thousand time before you develop better skill and your own style. The bottom lip on that e is a no go make it more rounded like the bottom of your other letters to fit that style.And the o just make an o doesnt have to have that lil thing on it. Also go to the stickers posters etc thread I've saw your characters they are real sick making character slaps would be a good look for you man ppl trade alot back and forth.

thanks for the advice:). and yeah I've been lurking that thread like no other. but I'm still waiting on a few hundred stickers in the mail. then il get active with some shit

TastyMcNasty
05-12-2012, 02:05 PM
kids these days....
^^

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 03:47 PM
@bipo looks like you posted the EXACT same 3 throws but just edited the colors digitally...no need for that, honestly SIMPLE letter orm should be the only thing on your mind, leave the colors/photoshop alone for now
@hoers dont make that right bar of the R so long and try to keep all your 3d going in the same diretion

Spy10327
05-12-2012, 08:39 PM
68942 boo; crits? sorry about the outline with the fill, the blue is surprisingly darker than i expected

dmgraff
05-13-2012, 12:10 AM
68661
gotta work on the sizing a little but its a new idea

didnt get anything so bump

dankbudz
05-13-2012, 04:01 AM
if u didn't get crits then don't bump it you faggot

H1P30N3R
05-13-2012, 11:16 AM
not perfect but not bad seld and your still gettin up anyway!

SenseTwo
05-13-2012, 11:56 AM
alright heres some of my shit, im open to any crits and suggestions. i just started so here goes. like i said im open to work with anything....
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pover
05-13-2012, 12:16 PM
Change your S and draw less vertical lines on it. Also make the top part of the E smaller. The n is quite good, but careful because in the second picture it looks like a K.
Overall pretty good for a newbie.

HOERS
05-13-2012, 12:43 PM
i like that n sense

Mildstyles
05-13-2012, 01:08 PM
AWKWARD....The other sense...

SenseTwo
05-13-2012, 01:22 PM
i think theres always gonna be at least 1 other person writing the same name as you :p
idk i dont think it matters really, unless hes like a king

Mildstyles
05-13-2012, 01:35 PM
On the forums, i meant

ven0m
05-13-2012, 01:57 PM
i think theres always gonna be at least 1 other person writing the same name as you :p

try at least a bazzillion

H1P30N3R
05-13-2012, 02:08 PM
thats why im gonna start writing douchebangoner.... ill be the only one out there well atleast with the name

KehmONE
05-13-2012, 02:13 PM
@ Seld - looks solid, I like that your letters are overly simple but still look good. Could do with a little flair and style though. The D and the M are kinda hurtin' imo.

pover
05-13-2012, 02:14 PM
thats why im gonna start writing douchebangoner.... ill be the only one out there well atleast with the name

Wow, you better not write douchebangoner, he's a living legend.

Kushbombing
05-13-2012, 02:30 PM
Way too much talk.

Sense if u just started then u must have stolen ur style.. And there is another sense here who is better.

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MASTAH_RIBCAGE
05-13-2012, 02:36 PM
reallisticly though, theres got to be like over 30 non-toys who paint the word "sense" or "senser" or "cense". Definetly on the top 10 of most commonly written word.

KehmONE
05-13-2012, 02:37 PM
@FAKE - Not really digging the tops of those letters. Your can control is looking good though. Your K looks way too much like an H, the middle bar on the E is fucked up, same with the bar on the F. Get rid of the intersecting horizontal and vertical line in your A and use something else to show that it's an A.

H1P30N3R
05-13-2012, 02:44 PM
fake - bottom of the e is still funky and try developing your style I have yet to see you even try a different style on your throw.

pic since im talking

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120506_230411.jpg

SenseTwo
05-13-2012, 02:49 PM
can someone show me the other sense on here? i wanna check him out

Kushbombing
05-13-2012, 02:50 PM
Thanks dude. I like the tops of my throw just cuz it matches and is easy. I want to fix my K up I don't want it to look like H.
Also I'm trying to develope new style by fixing and changing my origanal throw style. Thanks for the crits. Guys

KehmONE
05-13-2012, 02:53 PM
Yo hipe, that E is hot.

Zerberro
05-13-2012, 02:57 PM
you are best!

HOERS
05-13-2012, 03:15 PM
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Zookyook
05-13-2012, 03:32 PM
"hoer"... u cant do that.... time for a new name.... ho-diddy is king shit in cleveland, u will never catch up

H1P30N3R
05-13-2012, 03:35 PM
hoer-dope characters on your e dont give it a lip on the bottom line of the middle bar just have your bubble come off that the r needs work

The new name
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120513_162237.jpg

HOERS
05-13-2012, 03:39 PM
"hoer"... u cant do that.... time for a new name.... ho-diddy is king shit in cleveland, u will never catch up

oh shit. thanks for the heads up.

Skee
05-13-2012, 03:49 PM
Hoer your characters are the shit.

KroeGHK
05-13-2012, 04:59 PM
attempts at one liners..meh...
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Skee
05-13-2012, 05:26 PM
Second one is looking good as a whole but fix the middle of the O, the P and E are also sloppy.

MN Nice
05-13-2012, 05:50 PM
attempts at one liners..meh...
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Keep working with this

dankbudz
05-13-2012, 05:58 PM
crit? mainly on my D... yes.. my fucking D

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
05-13-2012, 05:59 PM
its got a dent in it. not good

Mildstyles
05-13-2012, 06:33 PM
Yeah just thought of this new name, its pretty original. And stuff.
Dank the Dster...Make the angle on the top part of the d the same as the bottom...if you understood that. It woul;d make it look much better and im still tellin you try some D's without that thing in the D! in the middle left i mean
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dankbudz
05-13-2012, 06:40 PM
i know i don't like the thing on the left but its the only way i know how to make it not look like a damn O!
and i dig what you say bout the dent and angle

H1P30N3R
05-13-2012, 09:07 PM
alot of douchebaggery in here guys ... naked gettin sick with the throws as of late man! dank you could also mess with something like the top of your s has with the drop down line to help make your d.

KehmONE
05-14-2012, 03:24 PM
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Tried to tweak the S a little bit, still can't seem to figure out anything for the M.

MN Nice
05-14-2012, 03:29 PM
i know i don't like the thing on the left but its the only way i know how to make it not look like a damn O!
and i dig what you say bout the dent and angle

Work with the dent and angle but also look around more. One of my favorite throws is Adek's. Get some inspiration.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4002/4476839750_2e525be970.jpg

nbswaggggg93
05-14-2012, 04:10 PM
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dankbudz
05-14-2012, 06:56 PM
good looking Mn, and ye i been looking round

crits on deeez?

BigFaggot
05-14-2012, 08:13 PM
those are fresh.
crits are needed. my throws suck.
69362 and yes, its half buffed.

H1P30N3R
05-14-2012, 08:28 PM
^^ haha your throws suck j/k anyway the n isnt bad the e's I would make more of a circle at the bottom instead of lumps ...if it helps start at the bottom them work your way up the e (no homo) the r looks mor simpish a lowecase r might be good for you to start with.

Kaze
05-14-2012, 08:29 PM
Kroe- those look really cool, you should keep at them and try to clean them up.

Soam- looking good, maybe make the bottom part of your A abit bigger.

nbs- to be honest i dont really like it, your F looks to small and doesnt fit, and that W is weird, thats just my opinion though, maybe try something new?

dank- those look cool, i dont really like the inwards bend on the top part of your D, maybe have it more straight and slightly bent out or something. other then that though i like the idea of your D and the other letters all look good....maybe fatten that S up a little bit though. for the second picture only thing i dont really like is the bottom part of the K, you should have made it more rounded like the bottom part of your R, and the middle pointy part of the S doesnt really match with the other rounded style stuff but thats just being picky...they both look dope overall, just small things to work on.

Big Faggot- it doesnt even look that bad comparing to other stuff, the right part of the N may be a little to big and like kopr said maybe try out a lower case R


thanks kopr for the help with these, i have to clean them up alot just seeing if im going in the right direction...taking and using the loop in the I may have been to much, if so il take it out. crits appreciated.
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BigFaggot
05-14-2012, 08:33 PM
thanks hipe, really helps. im the opposite of you, i paid no attention to throws and put all my time into piecing haha.

H1P30N3R
05-14-2012, 08:35 PM
top 1 is the 1 man lose that shit inside the d and the v ..also work on the bottom of that v make it more like the i. really diggin that e man. We are all here to learn Im just 1 toy if I can help another toy along the way thats cool because in time we all develop our own style. stepping stones help if the users intention is right.

neer- word atleast we are both decent at something graff wise lol

Kaze
05-14-2012, 08:42 PM
dope thanks man, really appreciate it, yeh all the help i can get the better haha, its always nice to have someone who is better at something to give you tips and and help along the way, i just want to get something more or less simple down and get smoother at it so i can hopefully move onto more complicated shit. just have to put in the effort

no-sleep
05-14-2012, 08:50 PM
yo gunr stop postin that faggot ass song on half of the threads

CRANEE
05-14-2012, 10:33 PM
crane coming for yall

Kushbombing
05-15-2012, 06:52 AM
Fuck crane


http://i1244.photobucket.com/albums/gg580/kushbombing/aa554f73.jpg

SMEZ_swagchamp
05-15-2012, 11:56 AM
69410
fuck the bullshit. post your toss. crits and bullshit chat welcome. calm down on the beef tho.

SMEZ_swagchamp
05-15-2012, 11:57 AM
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kwu
05-15-2012, 02:52 PM
lol fade fills on a toss... kids these days

Skee
05-15-2012, 02:56 PM
Gotta have dem mad bubbles yo, make it airy n shit!

BigFaggot
05-15-2012, 04:00 PM
it speaks for itself. crits please.
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Kaze
05-15-2012, 04:14 PM
SMEZ- go more simple

Kushbombing- i would loose that bump in the A or make it smaller or somthing and try to make your K look more like a K and less like an H. looking good though, keep it up man.

bigfaggot- its not as bad as u think it is. i like the e's, just make them more even to eachother and maybe make your N a little bit bigger and the top hanging part of your R a little bit less rounded and drop down a little further maybe. it looks good though

H1P30N3R
05-15-2012, 06:11 PM
neer- I use to do my e's like that .. quick fix on the r see the right half of your n thats your r except the top part being bigger than the bottom part (obviously)

KroeGHK
05-15-2012, 07:05 PM
yuppppp
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Spy10327
05-15-2012, 07:54 PM
Crits or tips? http://pics.snapp.me/c8c40a4ab7ded5f4_6dca7a9fa8b62cd1_d.jpg

H1P30N3R
05-15-2012, 08:57 PM
make the 2 o's some titties !!!

gophe - I like the different styles try flippin that onliner man like a line coming off the top from 1 letter then the next letter have it coming off the bottom alternating the lines .... just an idea

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120515_215038.jpg

Kaze
05-15-2012, 10:43 PM
kroe the top pictures are cool, just clean them up a bit and change up the R, maybe try experimenting with some other oneliner methods too. i really like the E in the bottom picture

spy you should change up the first letter

kopr that looks dope, i dig that fat S

H1P30N3R
05-15-2012, 10:59 PM
i like fat asses too

Kaze
05-15-2012, 11:47 PM
^ haha yeehh fat asses r the shit. your sig is funny as fuck btw lol

crane23
05-16-2012, 05:36 AM
69605

first throwie ever, any crits would be appreciated

GpersKreepers
05-16-2012, 06:27 AM
loose the face and shines for now, do it in a marker so we can see it better, does it say soak? is that ment to be an O?

nine514
05-16-2012, 08:10 AM
Fake/Kush man, you are getting alot better. My only crit would be NOT to listen to these crits here bro. keep it the way it is.. Nice job bro. Keep getting up!

crane23
05-16-2012, 08:57 AM
loose the face and shines for now, do it in a marker so we can see it better, does it say soak? is that ment to be an O?


where do you see O? lol it says SPAK and whats wrong with the face

6i9o
05-16-2012, 09:16 AM
I think what he's saying is the bottom right leg of the K kinda looks like an O?

crane23
05-16-2012, 09:35 AM
yeah i give you that, but it's a K and k have those 4 legs and the face has nothing to do with it, just added it there fo fun

KroeGHK
05-16-2012, 01:29 PM
@Kopr I'll try out some funky shit, i just wanna get a clean simple one liner out first before i add any style to it cos one liners arent my strong suit at all, and that V is dope, and the S too
@Kaze thanks for the crit, i always do my oneliners too quick then freeze up when I get to the R and rush out some wack shit, I'll work on what you said tho
@Spak having faces on your letters doesnt help the style when youre just starting out, maybe when you have decent letters down you can try putting a face on something(prolly not though, idk..)but that P could be confused with an O, it doesnt stick out enough, make it visibly a P, stick that loop out and mke that P your bitch so it cant be mixed up

Mr.Zorak
05-16-2012, 06:33 PM
yo guys what do you think?6965669657

HOERS
05-16-2012, 07:44 PM
@mr zorak

Don't do the pointed bottom or the highlight thing

Spy10327
05-16-2012, 08:03 PM
69663
Crits? I got that b looking better and fuck titties for o's lol I aint getting a shit ton of pink paint.

ComradeR
05-16-2012, 11:11 PM
spy, just keep working on simples and separating your letters, maybe use circles on O's instead of dots

Axil
05-17-2012, 12:43 AM
Corak - I Sent you a private message :)

What do you think i know messed up on the R leg :P

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7083/7213739636_ae74c62d22_z.jpg

smokeitup
05-17-2012, 07:23 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012001.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012002.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012004.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012006.jpg

whatcha think?

dankbudz
05-17-2012, 11:42 AM
no..
it only takes a month or so or even less time to get a solid throw down if you actually try.
its all uneven and wobbly n shit and a million little lines n points.

also go bigger, throws and simps are supposed to be big.. you coulda murked that whole crate with a fat throw.

Axil
05-17-2012, 12:33 PM
Corak Remove the highlights look how much better it looks :P

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Kushbombing
05-17-2012, 01:52 PM
Boo your name sucks lol. I would use more than just a dot inside your O
Smokeitup. That throw looks bad. I can't make out the letters unless I really try. Shitty surface to paint on.. Not sure why you bothered even showing us that... 3 times. Probly would be a lil better with a fill.
Corak your k is wack

ven0m
05-17-2012, 04:45 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012001.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012002.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012004.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY17THMAY2012006.jpg

whatcha think?

fuuuuuck I wish I was the one who gets to paint that container
mmmm.. I can imagine a huge top to bottom chrome toss with red outlines.. shit'd be far out

Wizard
05-17-2012, 04:50 PM
First throwie..I'll upload a better picture tomorrow.. Any tips? the red can wasn't that well shok up, thats why it's kind of blotchy and stuff. Anything I can do better next time? 69718

HOERS
05-17-2012, 06:16 PM
waste of a container

MoganOne
05-17-2012, 06:34 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-05-03_15-36-21_359.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-05-17_17-42-45_122.jpg

Axil
05-17-2012, 07:11 PM
Bad paint nice throwup just remove the bar under the N so you can see it a n :P

Wizard
05-17-2012, 07:40 PM
Any feedback for mine?

HOERS
05-17-2012, 07:52 PM
Any feedback for mine?

waaay to much empty space. the bottom of the w looks strange. the middle of the z is to skinny and the tail on the z looks bad... you should round things out and widen them much more

Spy10327
05-17-2012, 08:02 PM
Boo your name sucks lol. I would use more than just a dot inside your O


Lol, atleast i have it for a good reason, but fine i'll fuck around try lines and shit

Wizard
05-17-2012, 08:17 PM
waaay to much empty space. the bottom of the w looks strange. the middle of the z is to skinny and the tail on the z looks bad... you should round things out and widen them much more

iight thanks man!! :)

smokeitup
05-17-2012, 10:18 PM
fuuuuuck I wish I was the one who gets to paint that container
mmmm.. I can imagine a huge top to bottom chrome toss with red outlines.. shit'd be far out

so u reckon i should go back and go over it in a bigger throw? i dont really have any chrome left tho and i need fatcaps maybe a trip to the graff shop and then ill go back over it?


Boo your name sucks lol. I would use more than just a dot inside your O
Smokeitup. That throw looks bad. I can't make out the letters unless I really try. Shitty surface to paint on.. Not sure why you bothered even showing us that... 3 times. Probly would be a lil better with a fill.
Corak your k is wack

yeah i was gonna fill it but there were people playing soccer likes 10 metres away and i was high as fuck i got a bit paranoid that they might hear me painting..


no..
it only takes a month or so or even less time to get a solid throw down if you actually try.
its all uneven and wobbly n shit and a million little lines n points.

also go bigger, throws and simps are supposed to be big.. you coulda murked that whole crate with a fat throw.

might go back over it in bigger throws next time i just need fat caps couldnt find any

Raul Flores Jr.
05-17-2012, 11:04 PM
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KroeGHK
05-17-2012, 11:17 PM
So...too much talk going on here
@Bear fix up that B idk that big bubble coming off it doesnt look right, and careful with that A almost looking like an R, other than that its looking ni

idk....i like it....crits?
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blackmath
05-18-2012, 03:22 AM
Haven't posted lately, just got fired from my job so I've been out lookin for a new one. Been paintin though, crits?

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Kaze
05-18-2012, 03:37 AM
Raul Flores that looks cool

Kroe that link doesnt work :/ wont work for me at least

blackmath those r looking good but i dont think they are really throwies, its more of a straight letter/burner.

KroeGHK
05-18-2012, 05:46 AM
hopefully this works
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Kushbombing
05-18-2012, 07:33 AM
Tak
For the most part, your Ks look Better.

SomeOneWasHere
05-18-2012, 07:39 AM
i think it looks fresh mone

MN Nice
05-18-2012, 09:06 AM
You must honestly be retarded.

6i9o
05-18-2012, 09:19 AM
^I've been called that more than a few times
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MN Nice
05-18-2012, 09:27 AM
Good thing I got the screen cap on my phone Tyler ;)

illegal_drugs
05-18-2012, 03:53 PM
70086
Crits?

Kaze
05-18-2012, 04:12 PM
@Kroe. you should fatten up your G and have your P come down just a bit lower so it doesnt look so short. you should work on the arrow thing on your G, dont really dig the way it is right now and make the first bump on the top of your G bigger so it matches the other bump more, this just needs to be cleaned up and then it would look really dope on a wall. i like your E and the shape of the O is cool. keep at it man


illegal drugs, make the top part of your R come down abit further and have the bottom part of your A bigger, its looking good though keep at it.

illegal_drugs
05-18-2012, 04:15 PM
Thanks for the crits

illegal_drugs
05-18-2012, 05:31 PM
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Kaze
05-18-2012, 05:46 PM
to be honest both of them are sloppy, but i would work on the bottom one, just clean it up and go simple, A and N need the most work, just start simple man, your R is on the right track i think just has to be cleaned up and what not

TastyMcNasty
05-18-2012, 06:04 PM
the R is solid , rest looks like it was drawn and filled by michael j fox

CRANEE
05-18-2012, 08:59 PM
why feel the need to post your illegal work on a board, for self gratification?

MoganOne
05-19-2012, 12:41 AM
i think it looks fresh mone

Thanks my dude

HOERS
05-19-2012, 11:38 AM
@wiz still way too much empty space...you need to bunch your letters up

Wizard
05-19-2012, 11:41 AM
@hoers yea i know, this was a month or so back.. But i will bunch them up when i go out again.

blackmath
05-19-2012, 12:26 PM
6i9o, doesn't look like you're in any position to shit talk me hahaha.... and you said my shits wackk??? Take some advice and don't talk shit unless you've got somethin to back it up. You saying my shit is wack means absolutely nothing to me now that I've seen all your work...

centrysam
05-19-2012, 12:28 PM
exuse the wackness on the bottom .
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7237/7228089660_953ff3f257.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7228089660/)
IMG_0253 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7228089660/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7227/7228090344_2d3b4c88b6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7228090344/)
IMG_0260 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7228090344/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr


http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5032/7228091472_429c3875eb.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7228091472/)
IMG_0259 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/7228091472/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

blackmath
05-19-2012, 12:53 PM
Centry the top left in the first picture is fucking dooope, and the third picture is the best one in my opinion

centrysam
05-19-2012, 12:57 PM
thanks bro .

6i9o
05-19-2012, 01:40 PM
6i9o, doesn't look like you're in any position to shit talk me hahaha.... and you said my shits wackk??? Take some advice and don't talk shit unless you've got somethin to back it up. You saying my shit is wack means absolutely nothing to me now that I've seen all your work...

Woah when did I say that dude?
I just went through the last 5 pages and I see nothing about shit talking you. If anything your throw's are sick =/ You got me confused for someone else

KroeGHK
05-19-2012, 04:48 PM
@Tak - shits lookin good, just make sure you're keeping your bar widths consistent (K gets a little thin in some spots) and if you're gonna round off the ends of one letter, do it all the way through (like the T is rounded off but the A has sharpened edges)
@Wiz - just like Hoers said get those letters close together, work on them too, imo youre not ready for paint, work on keeping all the letters consistent and close together
@Humor - shits so dope, props dude i hope i have throws like you when i grow up lol
@Bipo - youre getting better, just keep working on consistency and shit...yeah

tryin to get this right...crits?
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CRANEE
05-19-2012, 05:12 PM
kroe that first one sucks for real and kinda the second, and is wizard being serious ?:confused:

KroeGHK
05-19-2012, 05:15 PM
theyre both the same as the third except for the G...
plus, seeing as you have no posts showing your graff i dont really think your in any position to just blatantly say my shit sucks with out any crit or reasoning behind it, watch yourself

KehmONE
05-19-2012, 07:25 PM
Those top 2 are dope Kroe. I was playing with mine a bit, every time I end up happy with it... give it a day and then I hate the way it looks again.

Kaze
05-19-2012, 07:53 PM
Kroe id work with the top and third one, the lower case G is cool but its not quite there, just keep fuking around with it man, the top G is looking better then before i think but again, still needs more work. i think the top of ur H is good but the middle doesnt really seem to match with the other stuff in the throwie, keep at it man...and as for crane...i wouldnt be surprised if he/she is one of those cops monitoring the forums or just someone with nothing else better to do...

centrysam
05-19-2012, 08:07 PM
@ kroe thanks man . i like the second one . i think it might b better if the G. didnt have the swirl . and didnt cover as much of the O . and maby try a different E
pretty solid over all.
do them with a marker tho . sketchin them out dont help . do like the same toss over an over on the same page with a marker . after a notbook of tosses u will notice a difference
ur hand will no were to go with out thinkin

KroeGHK
05-19-2012, 11:09 PM
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Natalie.Portman
05-20-2012, 01:17 AM
Wheres the painted bombs?
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_2037.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/IMG_2035.jpg