Throwies

[ComradeR]

Kaze and Friidom thanks for the crits, yeah I usually have trouble with spacing and keeping some letters the same. I don't like my N as well, looks more like a messed up H. I'll be posting up more stuff tonight, fix a few things on it.

@skee, your first pic is blurry, cant see crap yo, I can see the second though, stick with simples, not feeling the pointy crap under each letter

[Friidom]

skee-on the second one try to make the leg of the k more like the bottom of the e's, you kinda made the bump smaller and its throwin it off

[TastyMcNasty]

yo dank, that;s sick

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0075.jpg

[blackmath]

And Tak looks like u are not full of shit. Lol
You need to get a better pic tho man lol. Can u see ur shit from the ground?

I definitelyyyy need a better pic haha, Ill try to go back up in the day but I would be seen for sure. And you can only see it if your pretty far away, cause the buildings so high. But it was more of a chill adventure night than a bombing night

[H1P30N3R]

aner - def a unique look I dig all the letters besides the a. I think if you change up the leg on it and maje the circle a bit bigger it would help, so that it is atleast a closer size to the other letters. my 2 cents

crits trying out a one liner...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_201159.jpg

[Kaze]

^that looks sick i think, maybe try to make your R alittle smaller so it matches ur other letters. i like how your R comes into ur P and makes the middle point for your P. maybe put something in the middle of your O but either way it looks dope.

[DEMPO]

dank wow dude im impressed

[Big Africa]

Critz been drawin this all day
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/2012-05-01213425.jpg
@ kaze thanks the e does look way better
@ Friidom i been work on my letter consistency

[Kaze]

it looks better africa, keep practicing man, maybe try and do something with the right leg of your R. try to get some simple ideas from other people...just dont take exactly what they have and use it and then call it ur own. its looking good, keep it up...glad i can help in any way

[TastyMcNasty]

yo dank, that;s sick

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0075.jpg

bottom page bump. and like HIPE said, A is a little small.

[H1P30N3R]

crits trying out a one liner...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_201159.jpg

bpb

[no-sleep]

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[Norfsuthr]

idk about that s

[no-sleep]

i just thought of it afew days ago im still tryin to develope it

[MN Nice]

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Bump. Go bigger!

[TastyMcNasty]

no sleep, i actually kinda dig that. work at it more

[no-sleep]

will do

[KehmONE]

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Ignore the M, working on it.

[nine514]

ive seen better from u kehm

[Kushbombing]

No sleep- I can def see spins style in ur letters bro.
Ur Whole in the E and the end of your H.

[BigFaggot]

@search, its a nice throw, but definitely work on that s, it kinda looks like a fancy dick hahaha

[no-sleep]

i love spins style, yeah now that i think of it that S is kinda fucked

[TastyMcNasty]

i dig the S though.

[no-sleep]

it could be cleaner

[blackmath]

Double outline is so damn shitty but crits?
First attempt at a two tone fade fill

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[nine514]

i like it tak.

[Skee]

Two tone is pretty clean but the colours don't mix at all.

[H1P30N3R]

painting wise pretty clean man ...you need to fix the 2 legs on that k tho man

[blackmath]

Thanks a lot guys, its so hard to get that fucker straight and even

[Tastyca]

Oh, that's Great Sir !!

[H1P30N3R]

blackmath- where the 2 legs on the k meet and you have that sideways v shape seperating thing cut that shit just connect them like this k in my simp (im no pro but have a general idea of structure)

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120428_211540.jpg

[R3bel1995]

I was demonstrating a single light source so the kid would understand...
even though it sounds like you were being sarcastic lol

Yes. I was being sarcastic.

[MAGOO52]

its been a while.. here you go.. any crits rip it up
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[R3bel1995]

Does that say magoo? Extend the left part of your M so it looks less like an A, your A, shorten the slit in the middle, make sure the bars on the G are the same as the width of the bars on all your other
letters. And round out your Os. Just a bit.

[Tastyca]

you are right

[nine514]

take your time and try not make so many lines in the outline.. one solid line always looks better.. your throw looks like it has fur ;) keep practicing :))

[Jake_NN_Bake]

I know I'm a toy and I'm gonna get shit for posting my first time painting but I really thought it came out better than I expected. Posting the landscape one just for kicks. Awesome spot with a ton of wall space, granted you're okay with getting very wet. Its under two bridges. Two seperate throwies. First one is above about 3 ft. of water. Had a tough time in the water for the first one. Second one is on dry land but I wanted to get the surroundings as well. Crits on the first one seeing as its the only one legible due to the camera angle of the second.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7043/6994471908_08c8d09d24.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994471908/)
Throw Creek. (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994471908/) by jakemorgan96 (http://www.flickr.com/people/jakemorgan96/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7185/6994470644_aa8b5e3838.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994470644/)
Throw Overdone (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakemorgan96/6994470644/) by jakemorgan96 (http://www.flickr.com/people/jakemorgan96/), on Flickr

[Coleo]

does it say 'HALO' or 'MALO' if it says halo your 'H' looks lika 'M' ...

[Jake_NN_Bake]

Its supposed to be an h. I guess that means I have to work on it huh?

[Coleo]

yes make the top more compact and dont do a pointy line at the bottom of the bar some thing like this:
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[blackmath]

Some old shit I decided to paint again "oc" the es was my homie

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[H1P30N3R]

throw is 2 colors a fill and outline all the extras can go looks like you need to move the can a little quicker.. keep practicing tho man even using paint helps in the long run..

Ok guys decided after last weeks throw battle and the discussion I would just let my sharpie go for this week idk what ppl look for in those battles .... I still won but only because nouv or hips didnt enter

zephyr
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120504_010901.jpg

[Kaze]

that throwie is siiick

[KehmONE]

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Crits?

I feel like my handstyle is progressing whilst my throwie is kinda just stagnant.

[Kushbombing]

^ looks better then the last one I saw u do.

[Woulf]

Liking the throwie blackmath. All i'd say is work on the S, it seems a bit un-proportional compared to the rest of it. Other then that, pretty sick.

Kemone, The S is cool but a bit hard to tell it is one at first, maybe it's just me. Your hand style is definitely progressing. Keep it up.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120505_202907.jpg

[Kushbombing]

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[H1P30N3R]

^not bad at all simple and clean the bottom of the e looks a little off coming from the little bubble but thats minor shit.

[Kushbombing]

Are you talking about the part of the that's filled in black?

[H1P30N3R]

im talkin about where the line comes down tucks back under the bubble on the e then makes that bottom circle of the e the circle is off balance

[Alli]

Made this in about 15 minutes or so, pretty nice but i fucked up on the drop shadow under the "2-P"

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[TastyMcNasty]

heh, thats not the only thing you fucked up

[Z3BRA]

oh my...

[Bama61]

Bama :cool:

[Alli]

Be more specific man I'm here for the crits, Anything that'll help

[Z3BRA]

all i have to say:

stop painting and get back to the sketch pad

[TastyMcNasty]

Be more specific man I'm here for the crits, Anything that'll help

aight. you're letters are very oddly sized compared to one another, the 2 overlaps the P too much. thats not really a drop shadow, looks more like thin 3D to me (not a bad thing, just pointing it out). and though i do see somewhat present bars, they arent present enough. and finally, you're tag hurts to look at. hope that helps

bama, stay off walls, and keep to the books. even then, your book-work seems quite weak

[Restart]

make that tag solid THEN start working on the other stuff

[Bama61]

dang man i'm not gonna stay off the walls ill keep painting till i get better

[TastyMcNasty]

if you're letters were actually good, then i wouldnt oppose it. but until your letters as a whole are better, i suggest you stop wasting paint, and wall space.

[Bama61]

guess im just another toy

[SavorGraff]

how you feel about savors throw

[Z3BRA]

dang man i'm not gonna stay off the walls ill keep painting till i get better

then do it where nobody can see your trash

[Kaze]

guess im just another toy

this is called the toys forum for a reason

[Bama61]

that was also a older throwie i have changed my still much since i started to paint on walls

[H1P30N3R]

2pac is the truth not the throw the actual 2pac.... do some research alli and bama on graff then start completely over on paper.

[GpersKreepers]

bama and alli - be humble and listen to people that have more skill than you, they want to see decent graffiti as well as you do,

[ven0m]

the only thing that COULD be worth working on is that spokane throw, obama...
both you and 2pac aren't ready to be holding any cans yet, practice harddddddd now, party later

[Kushbombing]

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Bump for crits

[GpersKreepers]

can control is nice, but i'd have a go at doing the outline faster to make it more accentuated/bubbly/wild-ish? cant really describe what i mean but it sort of looks like it took you a while to do, also dont put those bubbles in again, never go more that a line forcefield on a throw imo, i normally just do fill and outline,

edit, enter this for a bit of fee back, was told my throw style is similar to some one so tried to take it a few steps back, any thoughs?? looking at the flick the 3d looks shit, damn
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02707.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

I prefer drop shadows on throws personally think they look better. Not much I can find to crit gpers that is a good lookin throw, I really dig it.

[KehmONE]

Pretty solid, I'm getting frustrated with my throw to be honest.

[pover]

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[SavorGraff]

what do u guys think about the savor throw.
thats myn. me and bama paint together thats why he posed it

[SavorGraff]

hows this?

[gottapaintdaily]

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[Alli]

aight. you're letters are very oddly sized compared to one another, the 2 overlaps the P too much. thats not really a drop shadow, looks more like thin 3D to me (not a bad thing, just pointing it out). and though i do see somewhat present bars, they arent present enough. and finally, you're tag hurts to look at. hope that helps

hahaha thanks for the help. We all start off somewhere, i still got alot to learn..

[Kushbombing]

I think I get what's ur saying about speeding the outline up. Ur right I did spend a fair amount of time on the throw, mainly becuz It was chill and wanted it to look decent. The bubbles were to help cover my old throw underneath.

Gpers I like it but I would make the middle of the S thinner.
Pover nice but the E is kinda weird man.
Kasm if that's what it says the name is taken already and it needs a lot of work. Lose the white lines for one. I see u painted it on wood, that's good. Try doing it again but make you letters bigger. Your letters have a fucked up shape but I can see style in it, which Makes me think u stole the style. Either way u need to practice lots more. Show us some of ur paper work

[MN Nice]

Gets bigger on accident. Want some crits. I can do the 4 better too.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/88787d1f.jpg?t=1336394585

[Friz_One]

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[pover]

Pover nice but the E is kinda weird man.


I know man i just can't find my E. Also my tag name is new so I need some time to catch it.

[Mr.Zorak]

68118 What do you guys think? I'm thinkin this is going to be a little throwie ill put up when I'm in a rush or sketched out of a spot, its just CK instead of Corak

[pover]

The k doesn't really look like a k... I like the structure though.

[Mr.Zorak]

any suggestions on the k?

[Mildstyles]

Yeah make it more like a K
LOLOLOLOLOL
it looks like an H, theres no real crit i could give just keep working on em and play around with different shapes and junk

[pover]

Like make the lower part of the letters a bit bigger so you can develop the K better.

[Norfsuthr]

Gets bigger on accident. Want some crits. I can do the 4 better too.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/88787d1f.jpg?t=1336394585

I'd lower the line inside the Y, you know the one.. yeaa the 4 looks weak, id like to see a better one, looks like it could get steezed out.

Gpers like everyone said it looks good. Id lose the bar on the G, and make the R similar to the P or something.

[MN Nice]

No doubt ^ just didn't have enough room because I start on the right upper bar

[pover]

Crits? I know it gets bigger I did it on purpose.

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[H1P30N3R]

not to bad the first letter was always hard for me when I started developing I lose the lil design at the bottom of the e and the loop on the r keep experimenting with your p also its not real defined looks kinda like a b ... my throws also use to get bigger as each letter unfolded its just doing throws a million times you will keep developing because you have basic idea of throws down pat .

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120508_153358.jpg

[pover]

Thanks, that was useful.

[KroeGHK]

new here, I write KroeGHK, been at it for a while, all and any crits greatly appreciated
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[H1P30N3R]

proper toss throw exchange??

[KroeGHK]

im down, what do you write?

[H1P30N3R]

kopr

[KroeGHK]

ill have somethin in a few minutes

[KroeGHK]

there you go, little quickie for now
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[H1P30N3R]

nice man dig it here quick 1 too

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120508_180832.jpg

[KroeGHK]

Dope yo I dig that k,shits nice

[MN Nice]

The E on that first Kroe. Fresh.

[KroeGHK]

Thanks, I'm gonna post more later when I get back to my room
*edit*
Some other ish
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[Kushbombing]

Pover - your E is still messed lol.
Kroe - I like ur throw .. though the style seems pretty common. I would suggest tweaking it up and try to put some personality into it.

[Jake_NN_Bake]

About half way through the first throw it started pouring down rain so we had to book it under the nearest train lol. Didn't come out too bad for the conditions. The second one is a little whack but I figured I would still throw it up there just for kicks. Second time out painting. Any crits or tips? Sorry I can't resize on my phone. 6824368244

[Kushbombing]

HALO - well to start, never make excuses as to why it came out shitty. Most the time we wont believe you anyways. On top of that... People are going to see that and they won't know or care that it was raining. They will just see that what you left behind.

Also don't hide under a train. That's just fucking stupid. I don't think you should even go to trainyards yet. You'll probly just heat them out for the people who actually know what their doing. If you do go there anyways don't leave your empty cans around.

As for your throwups. They look like they are sagging. Don't make ur letters so droopy looking. Try nice round basic letters. Your A is the second throw up looks like a R. Practice on paper and show us ur best. We will tell u what u can fix and u will get better. Sketch as much as u can

[KroeGHK]

I second all of the above, also as far as technique, if you're gonna do a dusty throwup, make it look intentional, your fill looks like a hybrid between dusty and clean/full so it just looks rushed and frantically scribbled in, also if your force field cuts into your outline then take that initial color and go over and fix it, just makes for a cleaner looking throw, but like kush said,it doesn't seem like your ready to paint quite yet,just get inspired and work magic with paper, get feedback, improve, get more feedback, then after some final tweaks you might be ready to practice can control on a wooden board or something, Rome wasn't built in a day and there's nothing wrong with taking time to develop , sorry for all the talk, I'm high as shit, that's just my 2 cents

[BackAlleySkribbleSquad]

68258 Crits please :D

[Kushbombing]

backalley i think u make ur letters too tall and skinny. i would beef em up a bit, i dont even know what it says lol

here is some throws
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[Norfsuthr]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7243/7165225076_11ae79058c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7165225076/)
photo-16 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7165225076/)

not giving a fuck

[pover]

Pover - your E is still messed lol.


Yeah I don't come up with good e's... I will keep trying.
Ok all of my other letters are shit too.

[H1P30N3R]

backalley-dont look up graffiti fonts on google learn your own letters.
kush - nice simple throw your e still gets me tho
norf- when I grow up I wanna bomb like you !! nice 2 letter man

[H1P30N3R]

dollar store 1$ cans and stock tips for some mid day entertainment

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_134919.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_135513.jpg

[Norfsuthr]

The cake is a lie...

Good shit man. I think you should do a capital R to go with that K, which is sexy btw. And double over your lines when you dont got a fatcap, it helps so much.

[H1P30N3R]

word ill do that the lowecase is just super easy lol .... jacked your lil u thing for my p nobody is doing it out here and I dig it

[pover]

dollar store 1$ cans and stock tips for some mid day entertainment

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_134919.jpg
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_135513.jpg


Hella good man, but those cans dont cover shit.

[H1P30N3R]

yea I know but I dig the grimey dustiness of it cant beat 2 dollars worth of fun

[Jake_NN_Bake]

Practice on paper and show us ur best. We will tell u what u can fix and u will get better. Sketch as much as u can

Okay thanks for the crit. And just for the record, we weren't painting the trains. Not nearly good enough for that yet.
Here is an idea I have been tossing around.
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[Coleo]

that aint a throwie...

[no-sleep]

wrong thread sir

[dmgraff]

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rusto paint with a female fat on the blue

[Norfsuthr]

Hmmm a rectangle O... I'm biting it.

You need a new P tho work on that

[Coleo]

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rusto paint with a female fat on the blue

you should of just smeared shit all over the wall

[Norfsuthr]

^c'mon man at least he's trying. Look what else is there, his shit is definitely an improvement by comparison.

[Coleo]

well he can at least get straight lines no?

[dmgraff]

nope i did this by holding the can with my butt cheeks cuz i dont have hands

[MN Nice]

lmao ^

[Coleo]

nope i did this by holding the can with my butt cheeks cuz i dont have hands

apperentley

[dmgraff]

ya so next time you insoult some one think about it cuz they might have done it with there butt

[Restart]

not too sure if this counts as a throwie but crits would be cool

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got too much time on my hands so i (shittily) colored it in
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[H1P30N3R]

Its more of a straight letter simple piece you dont want all the dead space each letter is built off the letter before it. Dont worry about coloring your throws right now getting your letters down are more important. Do some research look at tons of throw ups and bite anyone who says different is a liar ... after you get the basics down you will develop your own style and letters it takes time and alot of paper.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120510_011306.jpg

[KroeGHK]

im diggin the G and the R kopr, dope throw
Omega - I understand if youre new and all but i dont have enough fingers and toes to count the number of times ive seen beginners write things like "omega" before you continue any further with structure work, maybe try and pick a less generic name, somethin with letters you like and that you think you can get a good flow with, as far as what you posted, with straight letter shit, you gotta work with consistent bars, meaning every part of your letters are as close to being the same thickness as possible and length as well, I can draw out what i mean if you need but its a pretty simple concept
bumped flick for talking, crits on this one would be appreciated
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[pover]

Lol dmgraff is a funny guy...

[sadgeh]

Kroe that shit is dope, but on the leg of the E make that round or somewhat not straight

[KroeGHK]

Kroe that shit is dope, but on the leg of the E make that round or somewhat not straight
like curved upwards or downwads? thats not how i usually do my E's i was just tryin somethin new
just a quickie fer shits n gigs
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[H1P30N3R]

yes that e is sick

[Dahm]

2 second bs with nothing but a shit pen and a used flash card. Crits please.

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[Mildstyles]

Because i spell so well.....hahaha
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[KehmONE]

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M's fucking infuriate me, liked the way the name Dahm sounded so I attempted a dahm throw.
Anyone got any crits, or tips/ideas for M's? I've tried a bunch of different ideas and can't find one that looks decent in the slightest.

[iPwnF00lz]

All of those attached images aren't throwies.. keep tweaking the bottom version it'll come with practice

so much style on this page, keep it up fellas

[KehmONE]

Yeah, I had to delete them it added them as attachments for some reason...

[Dahm]

Good effort Kehm, I'll post some various M's for you to peep soon.

Mildstyles, I'll get you that "Naked" exchange soon.

[KehmONE]

Good effort Kehm, I'll post some various M's for you to peep soon.

Mildstyles, I'll get you that "Naked" exchange soon.

Haha, yeah... super inconsistent when it comes to the quality of shit I draw because of my palsy.. but I tried.


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Tried a bit harder to make my lines smooth and flowing, and tried a different M.

[H1P30N3R]

^^ dude I have cerebal palsey affecting my right side its hard to hold the paper still with my right hand (the side that is fucked up) . It is annoying as fuck because i cant just slide the paper a lil left or right hold it perfectly still and draw my letter. You may have a totally different case of palsey but keep working on it you will figure out a way.

[KehmONE]

^^ dude I have cerebal palsey affecting my right side its hard to hold the paper still with my right hand (the side that is fucked up) . It is annoying as fuck because i cant just slide the paper a lil left or right hold it perfectly still and draw my letter. You may have a totally different case of palsey but keep working on it you will figure out a way.

Haha, yeah. I have slight cerebral palsy, I get really bad shakes and twitches. Aside from that, is the toss even worth working on?

[Mori]

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8020/7173656418_0ab1e0d5dc_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7173656418/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7173656418/) by mori95 (http://www.flickr.com/people/73382494@N04/), on Flickr
quick throw from da neighborhood spot today

hipe whatcha think bud?

[H1P30N3R]

soam- yea lose the loop on the top of the s and your letters would look better if you made them taller and about the same width ... it prob looks a lil messy because of the small size

naps- nice clean fill drop shadow letters are nice and different. Only thing I might like to see is a drop down line at the top of the a to match the one on your p.But that is just me being super picky trying to find something.

[Mori]

ya ive done that in a few, think i could do the same to the top of the s kinda so it matches all the letters too? or should i leave the s top solid

[dmgraff]

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gotta work on the sizing a little but its a new idea

[KehmONE]

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Dropped the loop, better? The M is still bugging me, but I'll just keep on keeping on with it until I find something that works.

[KroeGHK]

2 second bs with nothing but a shit pen and a used flash card. Crits please.

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everything about this is absolute dopeness imo, youve got a wicked fresh style, down for an exchange?
and Soam, I personally find it easy to develop letters when i work slow and large, dont be afraid to take up a whole page on a throw or even a letter

flicks for talkin:
new name(?)
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[Mori]

^ fuck you essay

[GpersKreepers]

feelin the first gophe, kroe

kehm, best one i've seen off you so far, but id personally make the O alot more round, or even egg shaped like

[Kushbombing]

I like ur g son

[MN Nice]

seconded ^

[H1P30N3R]

ya ive done that in a few, think i could do the same to the top of the s kinda so it matches all the letters too? or should i leave the s top solid

Yea maybe you could rock one throw where you did all the little drop down lines and 1 throw with no drop down lines

[H1P30N3R]

soam- on the far side of your m when it swings in dont draw that line in so far.. and I wouldnt worry about coloring or drop shadowing just yet get your letters down first your almost there.

[sadgeh]

On Kroe that was what i mean,

[KroeGHK]

on the e? yeah idk i like uppercase E's more cos you can do more with them structurally
flick for talking: some waaaaaaayyy throwback shit (nahh just like 4 months old)
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[KroeGHK]

nahh that was just some shit a friend did in one of my old books thats not my work, tagging school bathrooms is a bit below me not to sound dickish
*EDIT*
also, in the event you ever do recognize someones work, please be mindful of the fact that graffiti is vandalism(AKA ILLEGAL..not that i do illegal shit) so unless you want to be strongly disliked, dont call someone out on it over the internet (which is visible to ALL...common sense) that being said you probably...no.....you definitely should NOT watermark your pics with your full name(especially if you are in posession of spray paint and on a graff forum, just an evidence thing...again...common sense) but for now, put down the paint, youre not ready for it by any stretch of the imagination, ive been writing for upwards of 7 years and still dont consider myself 100% ready for paint, go over to the threads that explain shit for beginners and just get educated, soak in all the info you can, then grab a PENCIL and get to work, I know this is all happening fast and somewhat harsh, but thats what this is, graff writers arent nice people, we're egotistic bastards who dont want to be bothered with anything that's not up to par, not to sound cliche but it isnt a hobby, its a lifestyle, if youre just doing it to be cool or to try something new and be adventurous, then graff isnt for you. That's all. For now.
anywho...
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[6i9o]

nahh that was just some shit a friend did in one of my old books thats not my work, tagging school bathrooms is a bit below me not to sound dickish
*EDIT*
also, in the event you ever do recognize someones work, please be mindful of the fact that graffiti is vandalism(AKA ILLEGAL..not that i do illegal shit) so unless you want to be strongly disliked, dont call someone out on it over the internet (which is visible to ALL...common sense) that being said you probably...no.....you definitely should NOT watermark your pics with your full name(especially if you are in posession of spray paint and on a graff forum, just an evidence thing...again...common sense) but for now, put down the paint, youre not ready for it by any stretch of the imagination, ive been writing for upwards of 7 years and still dont consider myself 100% ready for paint, go over to the threads that explain shit for beginners and just get educated, soak in all the info you can, then grab a PENCIL and get to work, I know this is all happening fast and somewhat harsh, but thats what this is, graff writers arent nice people, we're egotistic bastards who dont want to be bothered with anything that's not up to par, not to sound cliche but it isnt a hobby, its a lifestyle, if youre just doing it to be cool or to try something new and be adventurous, then graff isnt for you. That's all. For now.
anywho...
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It's not something I do, it's the program I use to edit the photo with. I'll have to change it so it doesn't watermark it. Trust me, I'm not doing it cause of ego
Back on topic, I'm digging everything except the "!". Look a little too much like a "P" for me

[KehmONE]

nahh that was just some shit a friend did in one of my old books thats not my work, tagging school bathrooms is a bit below me not to sound dickish
*EDIT*
also, in the event you ever do recognize someones work, please be mindful of the fact that graffiti is vandalism(AKA ILLEGAL..not that i do illegal shit) so unless you want to be strongly disliked, dont call someone out on it over the internet (which is visible to ALL...common sense) that being said you probably...no.....you definitely should NOT watermark your pics with your full name(especially if you are in posession of spray paint and on a graff forum, just an evidence thing...again...common sense) but for now, put down the paint, youre not ready for it by any stretch of the imagination, ive been writing for upwards of 7 years and still dont consider myself 100% ready for paint, go over to the threads that explain shit for beginners and just get educated, soak in all the info you can, then grab a PENCIL and get to work, I know this is all happening fast and somewhat harsh, but thats what this is, graff writers arent nice people, we're egotistic bastards who dont want to be bothered with anything that's not up to par, not to sound cliche but it isnt a hobby, its a lifestyle, if youre just doing it to be cool or to try something new and be adventurous, then graff isnt for you. That's all. For now.
anywho...
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I'm digging that, especially the E.

Also, I agree with everything you said... wholeheartedly. Graffiti is a passion for me, and absolutely a lifestyle.

[KroeGHK]

im glad you agree and dig the throw, idk ive just seen way too many people just "get into" graff thinking its easy and makes you cool or popular without putting in the time or effort it takes to grow, ive seen the generic styles with the awkward shapes and arrows and shit and claims to not understand the oh so simple concept of basic bars, and i did that too when i started off, but in my opinion its one of the most life consuming art forms around and it annoys me when people think they can just pick up a marker or can and just be writers without knowing anything about writing or what a huge commitment it really is
ok, rant over(hopefully) flicks for venting like a bitch
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[pover]

I think that the most important thing about graff is doing it for yourself, and not giving a fuck about what others think about it.

[KehmONE]

Yo Kroe, up for a throw exchange? I'm curious to see what kinda steez you could bring to the letter M.
And Kroe and Gophe both look fun to write.

[H1P30N3R]

^^ is that the toy in you speaking out or the actual love of your own art... because if we dont know structure and proportions along with many other things our graff is wack

[pover]

^^ is that the toy in you speaking out or the actual love of your own art... because if we dont know structure and proportions along with many other things our graff is wack

No, I meant that we shouldn't care about what people think about the fact of us painting. Criticism is essential to grow, I meant basically do it to enjoy and not to be the coolest/toughest guy around and to show off.

[Moe_13]

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[KehmONE]

@ Moe - That E has potential... the rest is whack. Back to the sketchbook my friend.

[6i9o]

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[spher]

^^^^^work on those dodgy looking o's more definition maybe make it funny and fun somehow incorperate a face a cat dont make it look to uniformed but overall its good

[KehmONE]

^^ No.

[HOERS]

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first ever attempt at a throw. crit away

[dankbudz]

kids these days....

[6i9o]

@Hoer - The middle bar on the E doesn't seem right

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The "O" is a bite. I can't think of an "O" for the life of me. And the "P" still doesn't seem right to me

[pover]

You should write the O like a regular O.

[ZIK_ONER]

@Bipo Nothing seems right for me, also don't change up styles in your letters, see how the end of the I is sharp.. And so is part of the b etc.. Keep it bubble for now. Your highlights are everywhere..

[6i9o]

@Pover & Zik. Ok, thanks for the crits

[HOERS]

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a tiny bit less janky but not really

[HOERS]

@bipo im not really in any position to give crits but i think you should just try going round for the whole entire thing.

also fuck the star. no offense

[H1P30N3R]

hoers you have the general idea now its drawing your name another couple thousand time before you develop better skill and your own style. The bottom lip on that e is a no go make it more rounded like the bottom of your other letters to fit that style.And the o just make an o doesnt have to have that lil thing on it. Also go to the stickers posters etc thread I've saw your characters they are real sick making character slaps would be a good look for you man ppl trade alot back and forth.

[HOERS]

hoers you have the general idea now its drawing your name another couple thousand time before you develop better skill and your own style. The bottom lip on that e is a no go make it more rounded like the bottom of your other letters to fit that style.And the o just make an o doesnt have to have that lil thing on it. Also go to the stickers posters etc thread I've saw your characters they are real sick making character slaps would be a good look for you man ppl trade alot back and forth.

thanks for the advice:). and yeah I've been lurking that thread like no other. but I'm still waiting on a few hundred stickers in the mail. then il get active with some shit

[TastyMcNasty]

kids these days....
^^

[KroeGHK]

@bipo looks like you posted the EXACT same 3 throws but just edited the colors digitally...no need for that, honestly SIMPLE letter orm should be the only thing on your mind, leave the colors/photoshop alone for now
@hoers dont make that right bar of the R so long and try to keep all your 3d going in the same diretion

[Spy10327]

68942 boo; crits? sorry about the outline with the fill, the blue is surprisingly darker than i expected

[dmgraff]

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gotta work on the sizing a little but its a new idea

didnt get anything so bump

[dankbudz]

if u didn't get crits then don't bump it you faggot

[H1P30N3R]

not perfect but not bad seld and your still gettin up anyway!

[SenseTwo]

alright heres some of my shit, im open to any crits and suggestions. i just started so here goes. like i said im open to work with anything....
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[pover]

Change your S and draw less vertical lines on it. Also make the top part of the E smaller. The n is quite good, but careful because in the second picture it looks like a K.
Overall pretty good for a newbie.

[HOERS]

i like that n sense

[Mildstyles]

AWKWARD....The other sense...

[SenseTwo]

i think theres always gonna be at least 1 other person writing the same name as you :p
idk i dont think it matters really, unless hes like a king

[Mildstyles]

On the forums, i meant

[ven0m]

i think theres always gonna be at least 1 other person writing the same name as you :p

try at least a bazzillion

[H1P30N3R]

thats why im gonna start writing douchebangoner.... ill be the only one out there well atleast with the name

[KehmONE]

@ Seld - looks solid, I like that your letters are overly simple but still look good. Could do with a little flair and style though. The D and the M are kinda hurtin' imo.

[pover]

thats why im gonna start writing douchebangoner.... ill be the only one out there well atleast with the name

Wow, you better not write douchebangoner, he's a living legend.

[Kushbombing]

Way too much talk.

Sense if u just started then u must have stolen ur style.. And there is another sense here who is better.

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[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

reallisticly though, theres got to be like over 30 non-toys who paint the word "sense" or "senser" or "cense". Definetly on the top 10 of most commonly written word.

[KehmONE]

@FAKE - Not really digging the tops of those letters. Your can control is looking good though. Your K looks way too much like an H, the middle bar on the E is fucked up, same with the bar on the F. Get rid of the intersecting horizontal and vertical line in your A and use something else to show that it's an A.

[H1P30N3R]

fake - bottom of the e is still funky and try developing your style I have yet to see you even try a different style on your throw.

pic since im talking

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120506_230411.jpg

[SenseTwo]

can someone show me the other sense on here? i wanna check him out

[Kushbombing]

Thanks dude. I like the tops of my throw just cuz it matches and is easy. I want to fix my K up I don't want it to look like H.
Also I'm trying to develope new style by fixing and changing my origanal throw style. Thanks for the crits. Guys

[KehmONE]

Yo hipe, that E is hot.

[Zerberro]

you are best!

[HOERS]

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[Zookyook]

"hoer"... u cant do that.... time for a new name.... ho-diddy is king shit in cleveland, u will never catch up

[H1P30N3R]

hoer-dope characters on your e dont give it a lip on the bottom line of the middle bar just have your bubble come off that the r needs work

The new name
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120513_162237.jpg

[HOERS]

"hoer"... u cant do that.... time for a new name.... ho-diddy is king shit in cleveland, u will never catch up

oh shit. thanks for the heads up.

[Skee]

Hoer your characters are the shit.

[KroeGHK]

attempts at one liners..meh...
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[Skee]

Second one is looking good as a whole but fix the middle of the O, the P and E are also sloppy.

[MN Nice]

attempts at one liners..meh...
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[dankbudz]

crit? mainly on my D... yes.. my fucking D

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

its got a dent in it. not good

[Mildstyles]

Yeah just thought of this new name, its pretty original. And stuff.
Dank the Dster...Make the angle on the top part of the d the same as the bottom...if you understood that. It woul;d make it look much better and im still tellin you try some D's without that thing in the D! in the middle left i mean
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[dankbudz]

i know i don't like the thing on the left but its the only way i know how to make it not look like a damn O!
and i dig what you say bout the dent and angle

[H1P30N3R]

alot of douchebaggery in here guys ... naked gettin sick with the throws as of late man! dank you could also mess with something like the top of your s has with the drop down line to help make your d.

[KehmONE]

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Tried to tweak the S a little bit, still can't seem to figure out anything for the M.

[MN Nice]

i know i don't like the thing on the left but its the only way i know how to make it not look like a damn O!
and i dig what you say bout the dent and angle

Work with the dent and angle but also look around more. One of my favorite throws is Adek's. Get some inspiration.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4002/4476839750_2e525be970.jpg

[nbswaggggg93]

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[dankbudz]

good looking Mn, and ye i been looking round

crits on deeez?

[BigFaggot]

those are fresh.
crits are needed. my throws suck.
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[H1P30N3R]

^^ haha your throws suck j/k anyway the n isnt bad the e's I would make more of a circle at the bottom instead of lumps ...if it helps start at the bottom them work your way up the e (no homo) the r looks mor simpish a lowecase r might be good for you to start with.

[Kaze]

Kroe- those look really cool, you should keep at them and try to clean them up.

Soam- looking good, maybe make the bottom part of your A abit bigger.

nbs- to be honest i dont really like it, your F looks to small and doesnt fit, and that W is weird, thats just my opinion though, maybe try something new?

dank- those look cool, i dont really like the inwards bend on the top part of your D, maybe have it more straight and slightly bent out or something. other then that though i like the idea of your D and the other letters all look good....maybe fatten that S up a little bit though. for the second picture only thing i dont really like is the bottom part of the K, you should have made it more rounded like the bottom part of your R, and the middle pointy part of the S doesnt really match with the other rounded style stuff but thats just being picky...they both look dope overall, just small things to work on.

Big Faggot- it doesnt even look that bad comparing to other stuff, the right part of the N may be a little to big and like kopr said maybe try out a lower case R


thanks kopr for the help with these, i have to clean them up alot just seeing if im going in the right direction...taking and using the loop in the I may have been to much, if so il take it out. crits appreciated.
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[BigFaggot]

thanks hipe, really helps. im the opposite of you, i paid no attention to throws and put all my time into piecing haha.

[H1P30N3R]

top 1 is the 1 man lose that shit inside the d and the v ..also work on the bottom of that v make it more like the i. really diggin that e man. We are all here to learn Im just 1 toy if I can help another toy along the way thats cool because in time we all develop our own style. stepping stones help if the users intention is right.

neer- word atleast we are both decent at something graff wise lol

[Kaze]

dope thanks man, really appreciate it, yeh all the help i can get the better haha, its always nice to have someone who is better at something to give you tips and and help along the way, i just want to get something more or less simple down and get smoother at it so i can hopefully move onto more complicated shit. just have to put in the effort

[no-sleep]

yo gunr stop postin that faggot ass song on half of the threads

[CRANEE]

crane coming for yall

[Kushbombing]

Fuck crane


http://i1244.photobucket.com/albums/gg580/kushbombing/aa554f73.jpg

[SMEZ_swagchamp]

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[SMEZ_swagchamp]

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[kwu]

lol fade fills on a toss... kids these days

[Skee]

Gotta have dem mad bubbles yo, make it airy n shit!

[BigFaggot]

it speaks for itself. crits please.
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[Kaze]

SMEZ- go more simple

Kushbombing- i would loose that bump in the A or make it smaller or somthing and try to make your K look more like a K and less like an H. looking good though, keep it up man.

bigfaggot- its not as bad as u think it is. i like the e's, just make them more even to eachother and maybe make your N a little bit bigger and the top hanging part of your R a little bit less rounded and drop down a little further maybe. it looks good though

[H1P30N3R]

neer- I use to do my e's like that .. quick fix on the r see the right half of your n thats your r except the top part being bigger than the bottom part (obviously)

[KroeGHK]

yuppppp
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[Spy10327]

Crits or tips? http://pics.snapp.me/c8c40a4ab7ded5f4_6dca7a9fa8b62cd1_d.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

make the 2 o's some titties !!!

gophe - I like the different styles try flippin that onliner man like a line coming off the top from 1 letter then the next letter have it coming off the bottom alternating the lines .... just an idea

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120515_215038.jpg

[Kaze]

kroe the top pictures are cool, just clean them up a bit and change up the R, maybe try experimenting with some other oneliner methods too. i really like the E in the bottom picture

spy you should change up the first letter

kopr that looks dope, i dig that fat S

[H1P30N3R]

i like fat asses too

[Kaze]

^ haha yeehh fat asses r the shit. your sig is funny as fuck btw lol

[crane23]

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[GpersKreepers]

loose the face and shines for now, do it in a marker so we can see it better, does it say soak? is that ment to be an O?

[nine514]

Fake/Kush man, you are getting alot better. My only crit would be NOT to listen to these crits here bro. keep it the way it is.. Nice job bro. Keep getting up!

[crane23]

loose the face and shines for now, do it in a marker so we can see it better, does it say soak? is that ment to be an O?


where do you see O? lol it says SPAK and whats wrong with the face

[6i9o]

I think what he's saying is the bottom right leg of the K kinda looks like an O?