Throwies

[H1P30N3R]

^^forgot to enter that battle.. fuck.. yours looks nice mang

fake- thats some hot 3d on that throw.. slick colors. gonna get mad ups cuz people gonna go there and be like "oh shiitt, 2 fake throws?!!?! and a tag?!!??" then they can start graffitiing and getting down with the hoooood, and before you know it. ***** you'll have a crew!

You can still enter probably nouv is usually late polling the battles anyway.

[TastyMcNasty]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120603_181235.jpg



sick

[ebob616]

73188 Crits? @Axil Aight man

less is nice. awesome throwie.

[Kaze]

axil that picture is blank, doesnt load

somewere in nevada start with simple letters and keep practicing alot

kushbombing looks good, just dont really dig the E or the F but the throw is clean and looks good

hipe that looks sick dude, really dig the K, 2d on that would be nice

jaset the top picture is hard to make out, bottom one seems better but is abit sloppy with the letter placement

^ that looks nice cast, the A looks kinda weird being so far behind the C though

[nodrips]

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[BigFaggot]

that derk throw is fresh

[blackmath]

Not me but heres my homie gettin up above a 30 foot drop

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[Kushbombing]

Nice spot. Takes balls to hit spots like that. Post a pic of it finished

[Axil]

Fuck that i whud never do that :P

[Tranc]

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Ignore the bottom right and top left. Crits p1333333333333333333333334444444453

[blackmath]

Nice spot. Takes balls to hit spots like that. Post a pic of it finished

Seeeriously hahaha, he was kneeling on that shit too! Crazy mother fucker, that's why were in the same crew hahah. Anywhere heres his finished, and mine right next to his.

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[H1P30N3R]

Random throws .... I need a crew accept me bro's

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120604_201405.jpg

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120604_200520.jpg

[BigFaggot]

that neer throw is tight!

[H1P30N3R]

thanks man you write mesr now days?

[H1P30N3R]

stock tippin with 99 cent cans baby bubba

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_134919.jpg

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120509_135513.jpg

[uknowigetup]

Not me but heres my homie gettin up above a 30 foot drop

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Mad props to that dude. The leader of my crew, and also a very prominent member of one of my state's best crews does shit like that. I thought I had met hard ass dudes when I met drug dealers that pushed weight and shot people, but after seeing some of my guy's feats, they does not even compare.

[saveme]

my throws suck bu heres one i did what u think73475

[HOERS]

god my throw is still really ugly. plus my 3d looks like garbage

http://i49.tinypic.com/2moo0ax.jpg

[Beko]

Is that hoer or horn?

[KehmONE]

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Crits?

[HOERS]

Is that hoer or horn?

hoar

[6i9o]

@Hoar the H and R are good
@Kehm: Get rid of the swirl on the O :p

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I hate how the fill came out. Pink + Yellow = never again...

[illegal_drugs]

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[H1P30N3R]

this page blows fuckin toys!! smdh

[SMEZ_swagchamp]

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crit

[ebob616]

sorry..........

[evade.ink]

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[TastyMcNasty]

sorry. try again.

[Beko]

How's this?
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[6i9o]

73509

Bump
@Beko: Like the O

[5ive1ne9ineGraffiti]

Renak Your Shits Pretty Dope Dawg. I Like Your Red Throw Style! Keep Graffin

[Mildstyles]

^^^ oh my god, my soul just died a little bit

[Axil]

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CRITZ - i know the DNB Tag fucks the c up s bit - DONT CRIT THE DropinBombs tag it was just messing about

[TastyMcNasty]

Renak Your Shits Pretty Dope Dawg. I Like Your Red Throw Style! Keep Graffin

you know thats from 926 pages ago, right?

[BigFaggot]

can we crit the sick ass character? for real though, the top of you R needs to be smaller. everyone tells you thhat, yet you never do it.

[notmikegiant]

@ hipe - i've always dug your throws, but im not digging the B on buck, looks like its missing something. ever tried a kopr with a capital R? i like your lower case but it could be mistaken for a C, maybe im just crazy though
@ tranc - just try and do really simple throws before adding pointed tops and all other forms of "swag"
@ saveme - i just quickly skimmed it but is that an SA? if thats an S, that bubble on top looks wack
@ hoers - your A looks like an R, change that
@ kehm - i think youre going in the right direction, but every letter needs a little bit of work and needs to look cleaner
@ 6i9 - drop those squiggles on the S, they look awful. everything needs work, keep practicing and come back with something completely different from that
@ smez - i like the M and the E but i still think they all need work, it looks fairly uniform but it seems like theres too much going on and so it lacks flow
@ ebob - try one without negative space, or at least a very minor amount of negative space
@ evade - i kind of like the N and even thats a stretch, i would scrap it
@ beko - dont worry about a character on your O until all your letters look sick enough to warrant it. dont worry about shine or any of that crap worry about your letters looking good
@ axil - you get the same crits literally every single page and you dont change anything, so start changing everything

saw this on a walk with my girl today and i dont have shit to post right now so ill throw this up, also i think a lot of you guys that arent great at throw ups are wasting time doing fills and shine and shadow, why color a turd when it only looks like shit no matter what sparkle you put over it? in b4 people get butt hurt

also, hipe, if you read this would you hit me up with a GIFO throw? thinking about a name change
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[H1P30N3R]

Since you gave an assload of crits I got you ... sloppy but you get the idea.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120607_191900.jpg

[Kaze]

^ i dig that F, could be mistaken for an E though but its dope, it all looks good

[Saul Gud]

Been workin on a couple styles for my throw, Crits? http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7223/7349877792_fc9bd0741a_z.jpg

[KroeGHK]

just a quickie i threw down on a canvas
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[Kaze]

saul good i like the bottom one, looks cool. top one seems messy though. keep at it man

kroe that H seems like the weakest letter there, everything else looks good aside from the O being a lil to small but w.e. it looks dope...nice color blend too lol

[Saul Gud]

if you read this would you hit me up with a GIFO throw? thinking about a name change
I'm bored so here's a GIFO one liner. It's Saight.http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7100/7350072236_e96ef3687c_z.jpg

[PAN1K]

First graffiti in a long time.
Practicing throwie concepts on my marker board.

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[H1P30N3R]

not bad at all man the top 1 doesnt have much defenition but the others are cool the bottom 1 is my personal fav

Saul stole the loopy shits you do kinda I've use them before but ur 1 liner gave me the idea back

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120607_220424.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

just a quickie i threw down on a canvas
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i dig it man. make the top of the G more circular, as well as the O. then go paint it

[Beko]

Throwie exchange, don't mind the sucky hand style!
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[nodrips]

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[Brosef Stalin]

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Crits?

[Saul Gud]

^ I like your H but you should try drawing on paper more.

[H1P30N3R]

word draw on paper more the h is nice tho ... your lines are sloppy atleast do my old name justice bro !

no drips the d and e are solid the other 2 letters are illegible ... I think your trying to hard on em simple bro simple

[Saul Gud]

No Drips make your throwie more balanced. Your'e spending too much time on your character inside the D and abandoning the rest of it. I agree with H1P3 on goin a little simpler till you advance your letter style

[crane23]

74018
any crits? starting to do throwies and still need to work on them

[nodrips]

No Drips make your throwie more balanced. Your'e spending too much time on your character inside the D and abandoning the rest of it. I agree with H1P3 on goin a little simpler till you advance your letter style


I don't spend too much time lol its a throw the whole thing takes 30 sec and that R and K are the simplest of simple what do u mean? lol there is an absence of style in them which is my main problem cus I suck at Rs and Ks

as far as the R and K being illegible, i feel like one can clearly see that its an R and K. I do think that they don't really flow with D and the E tho which is why I put these up in the first place to get suggestions.

Thanks for the words tho fellas. Ill work on something i suppose. Keep getting up!

[H1P30N3R]

no offence derk but your wrong bro the r and k even if different style wise from the other letters lack definition to show that they are an in fact r and k.... They are hard to learn as for the r I suggest using a lowercase r for a lil time and the k just practice get ideas from other throws. My name have both k and r check it out and dont get me wrong im still toy but I have most off the letters down pretty well man.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120522_185554.jpg

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_201159.jpg

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120609_121730.jpg

[Kaze]

nodrips it doesnt look bad but it looks kinda off too, the letters dont all realy fit in and match, take hipes advice, fuck around with your K and get other ideas from other pple and use a lower case R...they look sick in throwies anyways, maybe change up the bottom part of ur E too or somthing

[Mildstyles]

Kopr the 1st pic and that connor are dope
Hollow 2 letters
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[H1P30N3R]

^^^ swagg your my hero mild

[Mildstyles]

haha thanks man,
By the way im retarded, all 3 of your pics are actually dope. I dont know why i forgot to include the 1 liner.

[Sicotik13]

this one was done on a bench with some paint markers but its the same as what i put up, its the only pic i have right now
P.S. before anyone says anything, i post this pic on an APP call "all city" and then deleted so i had to go back and screenshot it thats why the top bars there
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[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

your first mistake was drawing on a bench...

[GpersKreepers]

you left the top bare thing in because you want us all to think you were out at 3 in the morning, stop lying, no one is impressed

[Sicotik13]

no i saved the picture at 3am, the picture was taken a few days ago. and i just wrote on the bench out of boredom at a skate park, ill go out tomorrow and get actual pictures of my walls i just wanted your guys opinions but instead i got ignorant comments

[H1P30N3R]

weekly toss battle n such

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120610_194739.jpg

[Brosef Stalin]

Fix that first S, it's too small.

[H1P30N3R]

word it happens sometimes the letters getting larger as I write.

[Sicotik13]

i like the drips you added

[skinaone]

74210
ma throw

[H1P30N3R]

skina what up man ... looks solid

[Mildstyles]

Kopr that spurs is too nice... already got my vote. Heres mine and SAIGHT i did you one cuz idk where but you posted somewhere about doing one, and i got bored. just dont bite
Probably should have done black outline silver force but oh well
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[H1P30N3R]

thank you good sir unless nouv enters lol... or steezhound aka cooldawg laces up a nasty spurs. Your style is quite nice throw game has progressed alot man !!

[skinaone]

skina what up man ... looks solid

wassup maine.. im chilling, thanks bruh

@mildstyle its ight get more steeze and your own flavor to it

[H1P30N3R]

Havent seen u around here in a while ... props for still writing man !! some ppl its just a phase they go through

[skinaone]

Havent seen u around here in a while ... props for still writing man !! some ppl its just a phase they go through

some people better get over that phase fast cause theirs too many toy wack writtter ive met in 2010 2011 and 2012

[Saul Gud]

Here's my entry for the battle...http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7237/7170854493_1ea1897793_c.jpg
Mildstyles, that saight looks dope, just forgot the ! at the end, but Saul Gud, what do you write? I'll shoot you an exchange

[Kaze]

damn hipe thats a sick throw, onlything is what stalin said about the first S being to small, second S is gold though. i have that problem with letter sizing alot in throwies :/

[H1P30N3R]

^^ it happens man takes time to learn how to keep em just right if you get carried away the smallest bit shit get outta hand. See I still do it too after almost 3 years. And saul he writes naked and or resq

[Kaze]

^yeh it seems like throwies and tags are more muscles tissue memory then burners and other drawings, like for thowies and tags its usualy do fast, think later type thing lol, i have to do it like 1000+ times over lol

[H1P30N3R]

perfectly normal it is muscle memory once you learn your letters then you just slap em on paper and make small tweaks as you go ...

[Kaze]

yeh i really need to practice throwies alot more and shit, i feel that i tryed doing small tweaks before i should have with all throwies, tags and burners...still do too much prob lol. gotta know were my limit is and shit...somewere below 0 lol. but i wana start doing some of the monthly toss battles and handstyle battles but i either miss it or cant get anything nice going for it, im gonna start trying to get in on them more now though

[skinaone]

i think its like knowing your letters
ive never really had that prob well when i started writting about 6 years ago but actually i started really writting 2 years ago LOL
and never really had that prob

[H1P30N3R]

I think he does em 1000 times because your never satisified with the end product which is a good thing if your critical on your own stuff more than others its helps in the long run.

[Kaze]

^yeh for sure, like one of the most over used terms that is basicaly spot on, practice makes perfect lol

[Brosef Stalin]

74335
I hate R's with a passion. Crits?

[Sicotik13]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0681.jpg
http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0691.jpg

i like that! but maybe make the holes smaller or slimmer

[Kaze]

^^Stalin that looks good, just make the bottom part of your R slightly more pointy like the bottom of your H and other letters but not too much...looks good man keep it up

[ZIK_ONER]

74414 Crities for my titties?

[KroeGHK]

clean it up, your highlights cut into your outline and your 3d/shadow is off and inaccurate, also try and make the curves in your letters more consistent, lose that arrow in the C and dont put your tag inside the throw, hope that helps

[aiko]

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[notmikegiant]

@ skina - i like that, its a cool style
@ mild - i like the silver outline, gotta work on those letter sizes for the s'aight though
@ saul - all your throws have some funk to them, i like how consistent everything usually is
@ brosef - looks alright, that R isnt too bad, try a capital R and do something different than a face in the P
@ zik - i dont like how your C is never outlined on the left side
@ aiko - thats more of a simple than a throwie, and that M is trying to be so gothic/dark/brooding it hurts
@ sinn - not that into pointed bottoms but its got some flavor, work on your outline at the points you can see its all sorts of haggard

screwing around last night, thanks for all who did a GIFO throw, helped me out heaps

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[Natalie.Portman]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture1253.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture1105.jpg

[Saul Gud]

Here's a couple styles, fo da Mildstyles... http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7083/7363046554_37344bba11_z.jpg
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8005/7177822901_66bccfce82_c.jpg
@not mike giant, if your gonna do a throwie on top of other sketches it helps to fill it in with a color, cuz that ^^^ is hard to read

[Kaze]

aiko the V looks kinda weird, i thought it was a trippy N before lol

notmikegiant you should add color to that or do another one with color and drop shadow or somshit

looking spiffy natalie portman, i like your graff more then your acting to be honest

that naked looks dope saul gud, really dig that Q in resq

[H1P30N3R]

weekly battle crits appreciated ... Im diggin it myself or is that too arrogant ?

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120611_224530.jpg

[no-sleep]

im enjoying it aswell!

[Kushbombing]

^ that throw is tight. The K is sick, I don't like how the U is so compresses against the k tho, between the D and E looks odd.

Saul good. The resq is cool but the naked is meh. The K is very meh.


Aiko sorry but that's weak. I wouldn't have put a gap in only the A like you did. You gota sketch a lot more and talk less.

[Norfsuthr]

Nice U's hipe. not feelin the z but i like it.
Bringin back tha flat top
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5312/7178988513_830990e8f6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7178988513/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7178988513/)

I cant decide between these 2 G's, what do you guys think

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8152/7179045501_28967c0826.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7179045501/)
rfwefa (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7179045501/)

[ChadWarden]

that second g is dope. i dont really care for how flat the top of the first throw is, but that isnt to say its wack. i liked one of the other w's you had used before more than this one, though. this one seems too plain jane.

keep progressing, mayne, you're making most these kids look bad.

[Kaze]

The hole throw is dope hipe, i really dig that K

i like the top picture better norfsuthr, i kinda like the top G more cuz it matches the J at the other end of the throwie, bottom one is cool too though

[PETER]

Ok... The guys that have been around here know the throw idea is beyond me.... Right direction?
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[ZIK_ONER]

Make both letters have the same concept, so lose the edge on the left side of the a. The left leg of the k should be a bit more visible, don't hide it too much. Just my 2 cents, hope that helps.

[PETER]

Thanks Zik. I'm workin on a capital A.... would you mind doing an Antik throw? just trying to see how different people work the letters for inspiration. EDIT: What if I push the top of the A out to the left kina like the right side of the K?

[ZIK_ONER]

74679 Here you go, hope you like it

[PETER]

Thanks It's sharp. Gathering ideas. I like the T.... which having a T in the middle of a throw seems to be a huge bitch. Thanks for taking the time.

[Saul Gud]

@ peter I'll post an Antik throw soon.
I've been workin on my saight! throwie which one's better?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7220/7180869117_3696340a5a_z.jpg

[Norfsuthr]

bottom one. h looks like an n tho

@chad and hipe
preciate it guys

[EWL24]

i suck at throws
crits please
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[Kushbombing]

If you suck at throws then what are you good at?

Some nice throws on the page. Sory no crits atm

[Saul Gud]

EWL24 try using more contrasting colors for your fill and outline, Sketch, and experiment with your letters more.
Peter, here's an Antic throwie...
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8143/7366443358_01d3a8a6d5_z.jpg

[PETER]

Saul: That would be awesome. That bottom one is sick hommie.... both are good, but that bottom one isn't your average run of the mill joint. Edit: I am digging this a lot. Thanks. Gives me a new perspective on some of these letters.

[Saul Gud]

For sure. the bottom saight takes a little longer to throw up but I love how original it is. I also have to deal with the T in the middle of my throwie, kind of a pain, I just try to make the right side of the letter before the T resemble the left side of a T if that makes sense.

[Kaze]

Peter like ZIK said dont have the left leg of ur K so hidden, the edge on the left side of the A is a general good idea but right now lose it and just work on making ur letters match in the throwie...im having the same problem right now, maybe have the bototm part of ur K come up abit more higher too, just keep practicing man

saul gud i dig the bottom one, really cool idea for a throwie, u r top one is looking alot better, its alot more clean good job man, the G is dope but i think the H looks abit weird and the small bump on the right side of A kinda looks weird but i guess it kinddof matches the theme but try to change it up or somthing, keep it up man lookin good

EWL, the E is abit to small and ur A looks squished, just keep drawing it over and over

[ZIK_ONER]

Saul Gud your shit is dope as fuck, wanna hit me up with a cast? I got you

[Kitten]

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[H1P30N3R]

Nice U's hipe. not feelin the z but i like it.
Bringin back tha flat top
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5312/7178988513_830990e8f6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7178988513/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7178988513/)

I cant decide between these 2 G's, what do you guys think

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8152/7179045501_28967c0826.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7179045501/)
rfwefa (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7179045501/)

bump the homie norf !! I like the non flat top myself

[Brosef Stalin]

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Can't figure out anything instead of a face for my P.

[Axil]

Brosef Stalin - Remove the middle line from the e that's all i can say to make this better:)

[skinaone]

Saul Gud your shit is dope as fuck, wanna hit me up with a cast? I got you

oh helllll no

[skinaone]

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bling blinggg

[TastyMcNasty]

skina, no offence but i think you've gotten worse during your absence from this site

[skinaone]

skina, no offence but i think you've gotten worse during your absence from this site

i changed my name tho hahahah
its nerk but yeah i havent really been putting alot of effort into it anymore

[TastyMcNasty]

you should again man, you're throws were dope

[skinaone]

its almoste the same im nerk now
so its NK, i got sick of skina people weere i live bitting my shit so i was like fuck it

[TastyMcNasty]

work on it yo, you had potential

[skinaone]

tbh not to brag but i think i have the best throw on this thread right now ive had this name for 2 months and i feel king looking at a shit load of pagess on here but i cant say im a beast like i use to be. but time will tell it all

[TastyMcNasty]

hope you mean one of the best *ahem*

[skinaone]

lmao yess thats what i ment now crit my throw and post yours

[H1P30N3R]

<=== this guy is a monster ..... in toy land lol

[skinaone]

Trolooo

[H1P30N3R]

bro u see smokey's face when i post pics he is all like well peep the avy

[TastyMcNasty]

lose 3 of the 4 drips, along with the halo thing. i'm not digging the triangle shapes on the bottom of your letters. they would look much better squared off, or rounded. and i think the right side of the N should cover the left leg, not vice versa. and something is off in your K, i can't put my finger on what it is though.

and here's some older flicks. they're all almost a month old, and i have progressed since.
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0090.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0092.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0080.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0091.jpg

[skinaone]

me no get what u said

[Mildstyles]

It isnt the "best" , its better than a lot of other throws but its all a matter of preference and style. I've seen throws better than yours on this thraed and obviously ive seen worse.
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[skinaone]

the first one is fucking nice
and the people that actually have better throws then us arent even on this thread anymore

[H1P30N3R]

hope u like it if not FUCK YOU!! lol

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120612_224229.jpg

[skinaone]

lmao not bad really
its ok i like it

[H1P30N3R]

yeah just a quick 1 ive exchanged with pretty much every1 .... and yea naked is right style preference n such weigh heavy ... like alot of ppl dig saul gud's work n i think its not all that but then again i dont like the style.

[skinaone]

nah bruh saul w.e dude needs work , have you noticed the people who have nice throws are clean af even on paper ?

[MN Nice]

lose 3 of the 4 drips, along with the halo thing. i'm not digging the triangle shapes on the bottom of your letters. they would look much better squared off, or rounded. and i think the right side of the N should cover the left leg, not vice versa. and something is off in your K, i can't put my finger on what it is though.

and here's some older flicks. they're all almost a month old, and i have progressed since.
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0090.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0092.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0080.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0091.jpg

I wanna see one of these painted, chrome fill with a black outline by a huge fat cap. It'd be tigghhhhtttt

[TastyMcNasty]

im thinking red outline with chrome hahaha. im actually racking a few cans tomorrow, then gonna head down to the legal wall and get my can control up ahaha

[Saul Gud]

@ Peter, Kaze, & Zik Oner Thx for da props! I'll def shoot you a CAST. Tasty Mcnasty, Mildstyles, and Hipe those throws are sick. I definitely agree on it coming down to personal preference with what throwies look good. I personally think Skina One's throws look a little feminine... too much glamour and glitz not enough attention to just throwin the letters up. No offense dude.

[KroeGHK]

meh...
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[Saul Gud]

Those are dope^ If you could get the third one down to be a clean arch at the bottom of the letters it would be ill.

[TastyMcNasty]

the two last ones, yes.

[ChadWarden]

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nice, these are pretty clean. the a's are a bit too behind the n. speaking of the a, have you considered making it an uppercase? to match the other letters?


http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120612_224229.jpg


i must confess, that overlapping shit you do just isnt working. i understand youre trying to make your own style and all but, shit. maybe just turn it down a notch or two. the e aint so bad, but that k just looks silly.

[notmikegiant]

@ gophe - i like the second one the most
@ naked - i like the first one the most, keep watching letter size it gets way bigger by the D
@ tasty - really good, id rather see a black outline though if you paint it

meh, really jacked the O up, crits?

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[Kitten]

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please give me some advice :)

[PETER]

Gophe: That third one is tough as fuck!

[PETER]

for sure. The bottom saight takes a little longer to throw up but i love how original it is. I also have to deal with the t in the middle of my throwie, kind of a pain, i just try to make the right side of the letter before the t resemble the left side of a t if that makes sense.

that makes a lot of sense. I can see exactly what you mean in the pic and when i first looked at it i thought... Hhhmmm i like how he used the bottom of the n to make the left side of the t. Clever.

[skinaone]

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please give me some advice :)
uhh danm you post the same pic everytime so idk how you get better if you dont change anything

[Norfsuthr]

Tasty you gotta paint those, especially if youve improved since then. Looking straight as fuck.
Mild those are dope, id definitely try out a capital A, but your lowercase looks good anyway. PAINT MOTHERFUCKERS, the weathers so nice.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7220/7183651185_5730d2a182.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7183651185/)
DSC_1831 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7183651185/)

[HeyThere(O.o)]

Nothin' special.
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[skinaone]

Tasty you gotta paint those, especially if youve improved since then. Looking straight as fuck.
Mild those are dope, id definitely try out a capital A, but your lowercase looks good anyway. PAINT MOTHERFUCKERS, the weathers so nice.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7220/7183651185_5730d2a182.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7183651185/)
DSC_1831 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/7183651185/)
that G is nice
take the star of the O tho and try to make the letters flow a bit more

[Norfsuthr]

Yaier thats sick man, work the Y a bit tho.

@skina thanks, yeah the star was buggin me after i did it. not a big deal to me cause this is a highway spot that gets buffed in a week or less...

[HeyThere(O.o)]

Good lookin Norf, I got a bunch of Y's that's just a quick one.

[Mcnuggets]

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/dabe4c9d.jpg

[Mcnuggets]

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/8f0a6cea.jpg
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/be4bbbf1.jpg

[HeyThere(O.o)]

Yo Sine, you know there's already some well known Sine's right?

[Mcnuggets]

I write sine502 <<

And iwrite from about a year
Ifigured put few werks ago :S

[Mcnuggets]

And if you have his email or anything males contact to him give me plz

[Saul Gud]

Zik_oner here's a CAST
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5076/7369243394_3297283285.jpg

[PETER]

Thinkin' about a name change too keep shit fresh.... Need to work the d.
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crits?

[Mcnuggets]

@peter

Its more simpler than a throwie man
Pactice mOre

[PETER]

still fuckin' around rough idea....
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[Saul Gud]

^ I like it. T looks good, maybe it should go under the i too. idk

[PETER]

right on... seems to be my best so far. I'll play with it a bit. Kinda like this but behind.
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[Norfsuthr]

I write sine502 <<

And iwrite from about a year
Ifigured put few werks ago :S
And if you have his email or anything males contact to him give me plz

dohoho its that time of year again! Now that schools out wanna join my internet krew?

[Shit Outta Luck]

hahaha hell yeah we should start some crazy ass krew. Lets call it da leopard skin coats kru!

And damn my throwies are whack, I never work on em :/
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[PETER]

only fuck fat chicks crew

[H1P30N3R]

^^^ bahahaha I can dig tho

[H1P30N3R]

nice, these are pretty clean. the a's are a bit too behind the n. speaking of the a, have you considered making it an uppercase? to match the other letters?




i must confess, that overlapping shit you do just isnt working. i understand youre trying to make your own style and all but, shit. maybe just turn it down a notch or two. the e aint so bad, but that k just looks silly.


Word appreciate the crits I dont get many crits other than stupid shit like your a is bigger than the other letters or w.e .... but this is something I can work on see where it goes ill try tone my overlapping down .

[notmikegiant]

meh, really jacked the O up, crits?

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bump for crits

[Kushbombing]

^ the G looks a bit busy, keep tweaking it and the hole in the O looks a bit weird.


SOL - might look better if the L didn't go so low

[skinaone]

^ I like it. T looks good, maybe it should go under the i too. idk

you have a horrible taste in throws

[skinaone]

hahaha hell yeah we should start some crazy ass krew. Lets call it da leopard skin coats kru!

And damn my throwies are whack, I never work on em :/
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put more steeezze into it

[Saul Gud]

you have a horrible taste in throws
Hate all you want... Saul Gud

[Shit Outta Luck]

Skina...I don't know how. When it comes to throwies, I'm the worst.

[Mcnuggets]

dohoho its that time of year again! Now that schools out wanna join my internet krew?

Fo real?

[Sicotik13]

graffiti is all about having your own style whats it matter if other people hate it as long as its your own

[Saul Gud]

^^^Pho Reel!!!
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7092/7185816815_1305ec9b05.jpg

[Wizard]

just a mess about throwie... rustyyyyy75132

[GpersKreepers]

wiz- i want to see you post a page packed SOLID with outline throws like that^ do like at lease 25 per a4 page, no fill, nice and quick, that should be the next thing you post in here

[Wizard]

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[Wizard]

75139i love this pink marker ha

[6i9o]

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My E and G looked like a face so...yeh
Wiz I'll try and circle the one's I like later
Sigh I just realized I forgot 3D

[PETER]

He said a page like that, not a page with a couple like that and a bunch of other ones. The pink ones are your best yet. Do 1000 of them.

[Mildstyles]

1000 at the very least
SOL thats a good base to work off of, youll change em up through time and itll progress.
And yeah chad+norf i mess around with capital a's but so far my lower case ones are better but im trying to get a capital A.
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[Wizard]

@peter And what? It's not like he's the boss of me haha.. I'll do what I want on a page man.

[PETER]

He told you to do it for a reason. That's the best one you've done. And doing it over and over will help a ton. You know what you're right. No one here is the boss of you. Just keep sucking.

[Kaze]

Wizard their just trying to help you, sometimes helpfull advice isnt always in the most friendly form but its still help...the pink throws u uploaded r the bset iv seen u do so far i think, its looking good, just keep practicing them over and over and you will see an improvment, keep at it man

Naked im reallly diggin thow throws dude, nice

[Wizard]

Iknow it's advice and I love some advice tbh it's the best I ever got but I just don't like someone actually telling me what to do.. But yea I need more practise :p

[PETER]

And the pink ones are for sure your best. Do a million of them

[Wizard]

Will do man :) thanks for tha help

[PETER]

As you go (not on every one, but every 100 or so) make a some subtle changes and see how they work. All the changes you where trying on that last page didn't work at all. Your throw should be muscle memory.

[Wizard]

What do u mean muscle memory

[PETER]

You should be able to do it blind folded. You muscles should just know what to do.

[Wizard]

That would be awesome lol

[ZIK_ONER]

Most writers can do that, not that awesome lol.

[Wizard]

It would be awesome TO ME.. :p

[HeyThere(O.o)]

I could probably do a one line blindfolded...

[HeyThere(O.o)]

Exchange for AntikOne..
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[H1P30N3R]

1000 at the very least
SOL thats a good base to work off of, youll change em up through time and itll progress.
And yeah chad+norf i mess around with capital a's but so far my lower case ones are better but im trying to get a capital A.
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word nice shit naked that james is dope that is my real name. Im gonna bite that shit n start writin james everywhere

[Wizard]

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[H1P30N3R]

Bitin my avy smh lol ... anyway your on the right path but it isnt necessary to post every flick your draw draw about 300 post a pic draw another 300 post another flick .

[H1P30N3R]

took chad's advice cutting out crossing my lines so much... can i get som Big Krit's guys?

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120614_233311.jpg

[Kaze]

yo im really diggin that K and R alot...especially the kicks u got on the right bottom legs. only thing i can really say is have the bump coming outa the back of ur K not go up so high...maybe drop it down a bit and try to give it abit of a inward angle....just slightly if u get wat im saying. overall i dig it alot

[ChadWarden]

now that looks better and you know it. that k's actually pretty fresh.

i feel like the p fucked you on this one. notice how much father down it goes than the o? and then you made the r the same size as the p, which would of been a good thing if the p wasnt bigger than the first two letters. one thing i like to do to keep my letter proportionate is to imagine a box around them. imagine a box aorund the k, then imagine one around the r, or at least the main of it. see the difference in size?


http://suxorz.com/i5/img2012061.jpg


now that all being said, dont feel you need to always have your letters the same size, because you dont. plenty of cats have letters that vary in size and still look good. just that in this case, with the style you have, it doesnt.


theres also just something about that p, besides what i mentioned above, that just hurts the overall throw, i feel. dont know if you feel the same, but i recommend thinking up a new one. word.

[Saul Gud]

@hipe I think you should change the negative space inside the top of the P. I also agree with Kaze on changing the bulge on the back of the K somehow. But otherwise, looks hella dope. Like the matching K & R styles

[Mcnuggets]

http://i47.tinypic.com/5aq9ub.jpg

crits

[BigFaggot]

hipe i think its the top of the P. its too pointed compared to the o and R looks nice though

[H1P30N3R]

thanks for all the crits guys I will work on the p the back of my k and letter size ... time to hit the lab lol

[Shit Outta Luck]

Naked two pages back..thanks for the Sol and that Q on the RESQ...mmm shit's delicious.

[Randy Lahey]

I'm going for a euro style, any pointers?
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[Kaze]

Euro style is the shit, i dont dig wat u did with ur top Y on the bottom of it..one liner idea is cool but it needs more work, try going a little bit more simple and let ur work develope naturally, i like the bottom one more K and L idea is pretty cool...keep workin on it

@MCNUGGETS look up some generic throwies and try some simpler letters, keep working at it dude

[aiko]

critz... idono about the P cause its such a long under bar
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[GpersKreepers]

would you scribble the outline with a spray can too? then dont do it on paper, the V looks like a U and along with the P is too thin to try and make work with how your doing your AM, none of your letters are proply constructed,

[aiko]

i know its a bit sloppy, i was a bit drunk. i scribbled because all i had was a pen, i don't have to draw something perfectly, to know how i want to throw it up, its not like I'm copying it straight from my sketch book. thanks anyway though, ill keep working on it.

[H1P30N3R]

and don't use excuses that is lame. those are more suited for blackbook thread not throwish at all ... just take the crits from ppl with a good rep such as gpers learn develop more and keep it moving.

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-05-27_18-07-58_492-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-05-27_17-24-45_932-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/2012-06-14_13-27-42_146-1.jpg

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aHrn3-Cb3iM&feature=player_embedded

[TastyMcNasty]

mone, those are fresh.

boring weekend, decided to work on my throws more.
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0101.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0102.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0103.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0104.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0105.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0106.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0107.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0108.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0109.jpg

[Tempa]

^ nice
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mine are crappy but o well haha

[ZIK_ONER]

^ Someone teach him how to fill before he does anything else.

[STOXY]

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Crits anyone ?

[ZIK_ONER]

Eeew

[GpersKreepers]

that poor wall.

[PETER]

75584 still working on the whole throw thing.... None of the letters match. Crits. Offb crew bitches & hoes

[Randy Lahey]

Here's a tip for Stoxy and Tempa.....don't get high when you're starting out sketching, you will make very little progress and to make things worse, you might even think what you're drawing is great. So many baked sketches were posted here by me only to be torn apart by the seniors.

[TastyMcNasty]

mone, those are fresh.

boring weekend, decided to work on my throws more.
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0101.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0102.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0103.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0104.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0105.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0106.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0107.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0108.jpg
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0109.jpg

bump for crits

[Swirve]

75632 I cant lie i emulated a writer named OTIS, but in all, what do you guys think???

[Arose.One]

@Tasty: throws look fantastic, the 'b' in the 'basoe's could use a reworking, imo. everything else is super tight.
@Swirve: take a look at the post above yours. Letters are all the same size, no lines have been overworked, it looks like he just let his lines flow from the natural movement of his hand, and it's pretty well set up for an easy fill. when you go over the same line a ton of times scratching back and forth, it will look sloppy. should be more about arm movement, then wrist back-and-forth action. hope that helps?

[Swirve]

@Tasty: throws look fantastic, the 'b' in the 'basoe's could use a reworking, imo. everything else is super tight.
@Swirve: take a look at the post above yours. Letters are all the same size, no lines have been overworked, it looks like he just let his lines flow from the natural movement of his hand, and it's pretty well set up for an easy fill. when you go over the same line a ton of times scratching back and forth, it will look sloppy. should be more about arm movement, then wrist back-and-forth action. hope that helps?
yeah i see where your going with what your saying its just i was bored in class and kept coloring and tracing with my pen because i was high. i could really care less whether or not the backshadow was scratchy or not, but thats just me. thanks though man

[defaultlegend]

Throwie

[IbuprofenTablets]

^ Lol.


@Tasty: dude, those look pretty fuggin' slick; one thing, though:
that B is butter, but you should completely close off the B (referring to the left side of the B). I'd say the B can be done in one line based on the looks of it.

Almost forgot, see the sharp thingy you put on your A, and S, should also be on the E.

[Mcnuggets]

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/0cdfd1d5.jpg

Crits

[Saul Gud]

Yea, work on those letters a bit more before covering your throw in faces,
@Zik did you ever see that Cast throwie I posted last week for you?

[ZIK_ONER]

:O no, can you link it again? I did a saight but im out of town, ill do one again today.

[Saul Gud]

For Sure... http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5076/7369243394_3297283285_z.jpg

[ZIK_ONER]

Dig it alot, mine isnt that good lol.75754

[Mcnuggets]

That cast is fucking good

Here some shit

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/be4bbbf1.jpg
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/8f0a6cea.jpg
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/38a79560.jpg

[Kaze]

yo lose that top thing on ur S it looks like a dildo coming outa ur S lol, is the 3rd letter a N or K? the E in the top picture is prob the best, just make the bottom part a little smaller...i can try to draw out some simple throwies for u to give u some ideas of u want...

[Mcnuggets]

I appreciate if you do
Its n by the way :)
Thanks for the crit man

[nine514]

try and fill in left to right motions only.

[Kaze]

here mcnuggets, its kinda messy and shit
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[Mcnuggets]

I believe you know first try first bombing illegal shit
Iget loose man

And thanks kaze ima practicing this 😁

[Mcnuggets]

Here are few
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/9645f369.jpg
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/9b7cfa39.jpg

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

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[Kaze]

i dig that E ^

[Mcnuggets]

Me too
Thanks man
Ima doing one for each of you when iget home ��

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/054b3b91.jpg?t=1340221629

[Mcnuggets]

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/9d84ec7a.jpg
Not that good :S
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/fa4ec267.jpg

And ribcage what do u write?

[Kaze]

MN nice thats tight!, think i least like bout it is the middle part of the y, maybe a little line down the middle for extra definition but it looks good that way and Y's r tough in throwies i think...looks dope man

mcnuggets that top throw is the best one iv seen u post i think, only thing is the top of the S with the 3 bumps, either have just 2 suttle bumbs or maybe right now just fuk around with one and the curves and shit but either way i guess...thanks for the kaze throwie, gotta go more simple though, keep praciticing dude....and ribcage writes reach