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Nagger
10-02-2008, 06:29 PM
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/003-1.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/002.jpg

hellomynameisftc
10-03-2008, 12:47 PM
yo to the last person who posted

i dont know what the fuck thats supposed to say, CO or LO or BO or something like that?? well whatever the fuck it is ive seen it painted around ********** ****** before.

looks like Yoshi to me.. so i just call you Yoshi.

pm me

Nagger
10-03-2008, 12:51 PM
Its an S O i write Soup. Im just starting to get outside i booked for a long fking time. pm me ya area.

Queezy
10-03-2008, 03:02 PM
Soup from Mali

Nagger
10-03-2008, 03:14 PM
.... No not fucking mali wherever the fuuck that is.

Queezy
10-03-2008, 03:20 PM
Malibu. You better find a new name cause he's up huge in southern california.(Barely any of his work)
http://50mmlosangeles.com/artist.php?artistId=4334

DeTR
10-03-2008, 03:30 PM
C:\Documents and Settings\MyersTeam\My Documents\Connor's Files\Connor's Pictures.jpg

hows this look? haha.

DeTR
10-03-2008, 03:31 PM
o shit

DeTR
10-03-2008, 03:31 PM
that didnt work

Nagger
10-03-2008, 03:53 PM
lol im in tdot malibu is some rich ass town anyways and from what you showed me he dusnt look that great.

lawlcat
10-03-2008, 03:54 PM
... Way to triple post saying you fucked up.

Queezy
10-03-2008, 04:41 PM
Hahah, he's from Malibu but that is mostly in Los Angeles, and that work is old as fuck. I'm just saying it's pointless cause his shit bombs on urs.

Nagger
10-03-2008, 05:35 PM
Well toronto to cali no point for me to change and i just looked at your some of your shit i dont think you can even critique my shit or his for that matter.

SLEEP905
10-03-2008, 06:57 PM
Hahah, he's from Malibu but that is mostly in Los Angeles, and that work is old as fuck. I'm just saying it's pointless cause his shit bombs on urs.

no beef but,
you realize that malibu is like 2000 miles away from toronto right?
and does it matter if someone in malibu's shit burns someone whos posting in the toy forum?
he's obviously here for a reason

7nationarmy
10-03-2008, 07:18 PM
quit kryin and post people damn!!
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1191.jpg

Queezy
10-03-2008, 08:23 PM
1. I didn't know he was in toronto
2. Just cause i'm a toy doesn't mean I don't have an eye for whats good.
3. I was just letting u know

kroc_oner
10-03-2008, 08:31 PM
http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w47/garakankro/scan0012.jpg

LeaksOne
10-03-2008, 10:23 PM
too spaced out an the structure is weak

7nationarmy
10-03-2008, 10:55 PM
quit kryin and post people damn!!
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/CIMG1191.jpg

bottom page bump

Mr yarbles
10-04-2008, 09:30 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/28mi8b5.jpg

Dope throw icoe

krok dont write kes

blunttokes
10-04-2008, 09:44 PM
i like that se

keep it up yarbles

blunttokes
10-04-2008, 09:46 PM
kroc this is why u dun want to write kez.

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/7073/0919200621100821500kez5kl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kroc_oner
10-04-2008, 10:26 PM
i write kei lol

mrkurto
10-05-2008, 05:05 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3277/2913350119_ba90746583.jpg?v=0

Nervous?
10-05-2008, 10:14 AM
Anyone wanna do a throwie exch? I write alone.

Nagger
10-05-2008, 12:22 PM
I'll do a alone. i write soup.

kr4zy798
10-05-2008, 06:11 PM
Any crits. very new to graffiti. i did my friends name. dont hav a tag yet cant think of a good one

Nesk1
10-05-2008, 06:56 PM
krazy, get a handstyle down.
just keep drawing letters and try to style em up a bit.
NO arrows.
just look at graff flicks for inspiration, but dont bite, once you've got your bearings with graff, start to think about doing throwies, then moving onto simps and whatever.

unreal180
10-05-2008, 07:03 PM
nah dont listen to him
striaght letters nothing fancy
work on style later
thats all

kr4zy798
10-05-2008, 07:08 PM
thanks ill just work on a tag. i kno keep it simple

GOVKILLZ
10-05-2008, 07:10 PM
http://i493.photobucket.com/albums/rr298/GOVKILLZ/SANY1392.jpg

*NERRR.
10-05-2008, 08:03 PM
yo i was just wondering how this competions work i'm new in bombing science

Scratch
10-05-2008, 08:10 PM
gov that throws looking pretty chill
mrkurto i think you need some work with sketching, and a little with painting

any crits?
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1005082002.jpg

MaTtBoY
10-06-2008, 03:53 AM
Lol don't judge my handstyle on that wack pen scrawl I randomly put inside the "M" :P; crits? I have yet to venture outside of my blackbook:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v361/MaTtBoy/DSC00662.jpg

BOMiT
10-06-2008, 04:18 AM
First post here. I just got back into writing from a 3 year break. I sketched a quick outline. Nothing special.

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5438/dsc00103lw1.jpg

Start hating.

7nationarmy
10-06-2008, 07:52 AM
work on that i..ALOT

Nesk1
10-06-2008, 03:38 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3178/2918758371_7880053e99.jpg?v=0
scratch lookin safe, maybe a tad bit wider and make the first letter a bit more legible?
meta dont make your E drip down like that
vice yeh, work on your I
(by the way this was a dissed legal wall and i know the people who did the pieces.)

Jayz146
10-07-2008, 03:18 AM
Im just startin out in dis.crit would help a bit

7nationarmy
10-07-2008, 09:49 AM
yes u r

TONO
10-07-2008, 05:59 PM
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/745.jpg
crits would be nice...

Nervous?
10-08-2008, 06:32 AM
Soup man, I'm sorry I cant do your name to save my life. Sorry lol.

Zire
10-08-2008, 07:17 AM
^ haha

Nine9
10-08-2008, 09:00 AM
Quickie PEEG throws.

http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/8328/dsc01092tx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/6596/dsc01093ia2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/7788/dsc01094um1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BigBlueViolence
10-08-2008, 07:01 PM
Gov- I think it'd look better if you kept the arrows out of the O and the V

Nine- I dig 'em, the P and G just seem a little off to me.

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6748/img1225yq1.jpg

mrkurto
10-09-2008, 03:18 AM
Peeg:
fix your G's. only letter i'm not feelin

letsgobombin
10-09-2008, 11:19 AM
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/745.jpg
crits would be nice...
do i see the recent cile throwie battle influence/bite? look at the albert fish vs cile battle in the battle thread if you dont know what im on about, if so don't bite, if not, i was going to give some crits but then i realised you didnt so crit next time
sa- looks ok, basic letters, work from that and also your might be a bit plain, try to do it so you can see the whole letters, or at least the top
peeg- i do agree about the g, try both upper and lower case and also try to keep the vertical bar of the p more pronounced, could be confused for an e, e's are plain nothing good with em, nothing bad and also their looks like you tried to put drop shadow in the holes but theirs none on the actual letters, just realized you didnt quit but im not gonna delete all this so crit next time
toy- new to graff thread and bars for simples, simple bubble letters for throwies and make sure you crit others if you want crits
nesk- think that says as, work on your control alot, you got alot of drips and some not very clean lines, also if it was a legal wall you should've done a whole throwie, the s doesnt seem to bad and i like the fact that the tops are kinda the same but backwards, i dont like that bump on the bottom of the a, try and rework that, personally i wouldnt do crosses on letters, experiment with lines or circles or ovals but that personal preference, get some good can control down and that could be pretty nice
edit: also anyone up for a throwie exchange? trying out new style

LeaksOne
10-09-2008, 03:00 PM
how can i possibly give crits after letsgobombin?? he covered the whole page.
tono - i like that throw but your f is kinda small

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff022.jpg
disregard my retarded L i dont what happen when i was drawin that. i finally found a K too. crits??

ErrorOner...
10-09-2008, 03:18 PM
flare - that looks mad dope but DONT BITE!! and your 3d is messed...
peeg - really smooth except for the g
nesk1 - nice two-letter but work on not dripping and get some better paint maybe? work on your 3d a lil as well.

my two-letter.....crits..
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture21.jpg

TONO
10-09-2008, 05:55 PM
my friend showed his throwie alphabet to me from his bb and i bit his f but i guess he got it from that battle? idk
flare - that looks mad dope but DONT BITE!! and your 3d is messed...
its supposed to be shadow... and your 2 letter is ill. nice and simple. looks like you write scrap?

letsgobombing. ill do an exhange with you? do you write your username?

mekosbc
10-09-2008, 08:43 PM
not feelin the r...

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/745.jpg
crits would be nice...

Aker.ATK
10-10-2008, 04:59 AM
leaks: pretty nice man, keep at it!
error: cool man, but the S and the P don't really seem to belong together... maybe meke the S more rounded or the P more square
tono: pretty dope! like the yellow forcefield... try not to overlap ur letters too much
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/9770/throwfh7.jpg
my basic throwie things... crits please!

TONO
10-10-2008, 08:33 AM
im not really feeling that k on both the throws.

letsgobombin
10-10-2008, 11:07 AM
my friend showed his throwie alphabet to me from his bb and i bit his f but i guess he got it from that battle? idk its supposed to be shadow... and your 2 letter is ill. nice and simple. looks like you write scrap?

letsgobombing. ill do an exhange with you? do you write your username?

i write pocs, ill have yours up asap but you might have to wait till monday

HAIRCUT
10-10-2008, 03:26 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/hurricaneaty/IMG_0572.jpg?t=1223666315

crits on throw?
or straight letter?

Nine9
10-10-2008, 05:37 PM
F is super sick, L is good, not fussed on the Y.

Capo Izi
10-10-2008, 06:25 PM
Trying out my new throwie....I did it REAL fast...

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/19/l_bc76317efa124f54913de865f6b14f9a.jpg

mrkurto
10-10-2008, 09:49 PM
FLY: lovin the F! so sick. the rest are good, but the Y seems detached from the rest.
CAPO: good work... i don't know why you mentioned you did it "REAL fast", am i suppose to be impressed?

Capo Izi
10-10-2008, 10:23 PM
No I just mentioned it, meaning I didn't have time to color it, ink it, or find any good paper n' stuff.....I just wanted to show my new throw.

Nesk1
10-11-2008, 06:50 AM
flare - that looks mad dope but DONT BITE!! and your 3d is messed...
peeg - really smooth except for the g
nesk1 - nice two-letter but work on not dripping and get some better paint maybe? work on your 3d a lil as well.

my two-letter.....crits..
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture21.jpg
Cheers error, yeh, first time painting in a while, and on the X on the A, it's supposed to drip :)
2 letters looking aight, just the P doesn't really suit the S's style, or the other way round whatever.

Aker.ATK
10-11-2008, 07:56 AM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/9770/throwfh7.jpg
my basic throwie things... crits please!
bump, no crits...

BigBlueViolence
10-11-2008, 10:50 AM
Trying out my new throwie....I did it REAL fast...

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/19/l_bc76317efa124f54913de865f6b14f9a.jpg

Don't do that thing with your C, take it all the way up. None of the other letters have the hump thing, so it looks silly to me.


http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6748/img1225yq1.jpg

Bumpskis.

Subconcious
10-11-2008, 09:13 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3198/2933240430_e372dde6cc_b.jpg

smooth_nuts
10-11-2008, 09:58 PM
error...dont write sp.

coh508
10-11-2008, 10:16 PM
What does sp mean?

BigBlueViolence
10-11-2008, 10:18 PM
SPone is another writer.

coh508
10-11-2008, 10:36 PM
O wow that was umm well im just dumb

coh508
10-11-2008, 10:42 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=155&pictureid=873

lawlcat
10-12-2008, 01:16 AM
^^^ stick to paper.

Scratch
10-12-2008, 02:10 AM
coh- agreed, stick to paper.
subconcious, you too
big blue- pretty original. i dig.
aker- top ones good, id work on your E more though, its your weakest letter

on that note, hit me up with some crits

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1011081211.jpg

YA

ErrorOner...
10-12-2008, 02:10 AM
error...dont write sp.

ok um...no. I will write whatever the fuck I want to! Besides, that is only my two-letter i write scrap.
Nesk1 the P doesnt suit the S cuz i changed my S from this,
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture23.jpg

Scratch you don't need no crits just go out and fucking paint that shit cuz its fly as fuck!

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 10:29 AM
ummm no you little butthurt homo...spone has been around for forever and a day and he's also a billion times better then your nut ass....
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3155/2934699804_03731094cb.jpg
flick for talkage.

ErrorOner...
10-12-2008, 01:22 PM
Ok well I live in Canada so I don't give a shit about no American writers.

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 01:33 PM
well sonny boy your not gonna go anywhere with your wack little attitude problem,but what ever your problems not mine.....




...peepee.

ErrorOner...
10-12-2008, 01:38 PM
haha its not like im runnin around writing boner everywhere fuck

smooth_nuts
10-12-2008, 01:45 PM
buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut Spone is a really really really well know writer...whos been around for a long while

Mr yarbles
10-12-2008, 02:16 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/29usmde.jpg

Spone is very well known
Just change your other letter to an e
My last letter is an r but I still use an e
Even though I guess it could end in an e too
Besides that the p is pretty wack bro

Good throw dope

Capo Izi
10-12-2008, 02:55 PM
haha its not like im runnin around writing boner everywhere fuck


Dude, don't be such a little bitch, and just change your name, SPone is already used....You suck, he's rules. Just respect your god damn elder writers.

Nagger
10-12-2008, 07:06 PM
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/seup013.jpg
http://i372.photobucket.com/albums/oo162/thatdudeskid54/003-1.jpg
Top ones new just trying stuff out with shitty paint and caps

+Hoodwigga
10-12-2008, 07:37 PM
like the top one better. no the o and the second e though

BigBlueViolence
10-12-2008, 08:20 PM
That first E is dope, minus the little hump thing.


Edit- Hold up, that's an O? you should make it your E, man.

+Hoodwigga
10-12-2008, 08:25 PM
fuck i was looking in a diffrent thread and apparently that says soup...

IVandal420
10-12-2008, 09:57 PM
tryin out a 1 liner did em quik but tell me whut yah tihnk

http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z150/Blazed-On3/avok.jpg
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z150/Blazed-On3/hk.jpg
fukd up on da k badly

Nagger
10-12-2008, 10:03 PM
top say seup second is so sometimes i fuck around with the letters im gonna do a cleaner one with some good paint and caps and a nice drop shadow see how it looks.
vandal - try making it flow more hard to explain.

IVandal420
10-12-2008, 10:06 PM
werd i jus kinda rushed em mdid em in like a min but i kinda unsterstand whut you mean

-Wings-
10-12-2008, 10:18 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF13102008_00000.jpg

Jaskal Exchange throwie :P... Its bad I know but I dont like throwies to much.

cerex89
10-13-2008, 01:00 AM
i love simples
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/IMG_0013.jpg
and i dont like my S im changing it next time

Incognito
10-13-2008, 01:16 PM
Been a while since I did anything, New name, and tweaked an old style a bit.
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/Twos.jpg
Feel like the T and S don't fit well though.

Ecks: looking good, the K seems alittle off though. The upper leg seems like its to small for the letter.

Havok: One liners shouldn't have to cross over eachoter that much. The letters need to flow into eachother more rather than just bridging the letters together any way possible.

Soup: Really liking that two letter one.

peacebomb
10-13-2008, 08:27 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/o8005.jpg
Crits please. First e is messed up.
Incognito- I really like the t.

Culture_Shock
10-13-2008, 11:58 PM
four add-ons is too many...

unsuccsessfull
10-14-2008, 12:28 AM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/003.jpg
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_1903.jpg

sacwacko
10-14-2008, 01:37 AM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6395.jpg

LeaksOne
10-14-2008, 03:13 AM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff022.jpg
disregard my retarded L i dont what happen when i was drawin that. i finally found a K too. crits??[/QUOTE]

bump from 2 pages ago. can i get more then one crit please??? with a cherry on top

mattxgrace
10-14-2008, 10:03 AM
[QUOTE=Incognito;1229311]Been a while since I did anything, New name, and tweaked an old style a bit.
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/Twos.jpg
Feel like the T and S don't fit well though.

the T is dope.

try extending the bottom of the S all the way next time.

otherwise it looks tight.

Zire
10-14-2008, 10:22 AM
Leaks, not bad, your keeping it simple. Your k kinda looks like a h though.
Unsuccesful i think thts cool, clean it up a bit though.

Ene, the bottom bars of your e's are to long and thin, fatten them up abit.

Been trying to get a nice throw down so i can start painting it. Came up with these, crits would be helpful.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/14102008388.jpg

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/14102008386.jpg
Messd up on the z i think.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/14102008387.jpg

TONO
10-14-2008, 05:16 PM
i dont like that hump thing on the z. idk maybe if you cleaned it up tho. anyone know what those are called anyway?

Incognito
10-14-2008, 06:10 PM
Zire: I agree that first hump is really messed up. Also the R and A in the first one are way to similar.

Leaks: I like the A, but thats about it. The rest is to plain i think

Sac: Pretty sick, try to keep it all the same size, but other than that nice.

Changed around the W and S a bit, feel like i kinda fucked it up though
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/newtwos.jpg
That and a new two letter
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/2s.jpg
thoughts on either?

TONO
10-14-2008, 07:15 PM
@incognito
i thought you wrote thos. its a good thing you changed that w, that o is starting to look like a face. see the eye and eyebrow? you should expand on that idk. and the bottom of the s should be thicker like your 2 letter. which is good btw but i cant tell if thats a 2 or a z...

Zire
10-14-2008, 07:20 PM
So basically drop the z and change the a/r Thanx for the crits

gentrifried
10-14-2008, 07:27 PM
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/isa1.sized.jpg
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/ISa2.sized.jpg

TONO
10-14-2008, 07:57 PM
@zire exactly.
@gentrifried why do you do the curves in the dot in the i? and i feel like the i should be the same size with the other two letters. other than those crits its dope but whats the thing next to the top one?


http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/DSC00806.jpg

gentrifried
10-14-2008, 08:07 PM
@zire exactly.
@gentrifried why do you do the curves in the dot in the i? and i feel like the i should be the same size with the other two letters. other than those crits its dope but whats the thing next to the top one?


http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t123/xxT0N0xx/DSC00806.jpg

the curves in the i dot is a smiling unibrow kind of guy as for the lil thing next to the top one Im not sure myself a curved bolt with a smilely face perhaps
sometimes i wake up and am like what the F*** was i thinking last night

thanks for the feedback much appreciated

klic
10-14-2008, 08:14 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELDividerThrow.jpg
from late august/early september cant remember
i know the e is way to big

flare - your letters seem to go from best to worst, work on the secong leg of your r, and i think the top of your a is too big, other than that it has pretty good flow though

twos - i like the style you got going except dont make the top of your s so big in your first sketch

crits please

Jayz146
10-14-2008, 08:17 PM
My first time goin out and doin' graffiti I started small Trash, slides, whateva no walls yet. Criqs and Fries(jokes) both appreciated(Could use da laugh rite now)

TONO
10-14-2008, 08:33 PM
@shpel your e is redonkculously big other than that its dope and what do you mean by the second leg on the r? the right or the left..
@getrifried lol i thought you just half assed an eye and i lmaoed when you said you didnt know what it was.
@jayz theres no picture...

Jayz146
10-14-2008, 08:37 PM
@shpel your e is redonkculously big other than that its dope and what do you mean by the second leg on the r? the right or the left..
@getrifried lol i thought you just half assed an eye and i lmaoed when you said you didnt know what it was.
@jayz theres no picture...

what chu talkin im lookin rite at it

TONO
10-14-2008, 08:44 PM
@ jayz nvm its there now... hehe. whats pic number 2? and try to use bars im not feeling that huge arrow ontop of the j and im liking that sdent throw just clean it up

FLIP FLOP
10-14-2008, 08:48 PM
isa- your I is to big and none of your letters go together (the s is all rounded and the a isnt).
flare- basicaly what shpel said but maybe you could change the tops to all face the same direction.
shpel-your e is way too big, your p is a bit boring compared to the rest of your letters and your l looks like a backwards J.
jayz- read the new to graffiti thread and stick to paper for a while.

good work all of you though (cept for jayz :p jp )

klic
10-14-2008, 08:51 PM
[QUOTE=TONO;1230614]@shpel your e is redonkculously big other than that its dope and what do you mean by the second leg on the r? the right or the left..
QUOTE]

the right(dont know why i didnt say that in the firrst place haha). just make it the same size as the left one and dont make the top of your r so big

lawlcat
10-14-2008, 08:52 PM
your first time out and you hit a playground slide, what looks like the side of a house, and an orange storage container with red paint... not to mention horrible can control. i would look for some chill spots to work on that. but you should stay on paper for a while anyways.

that being said, clean your throw up a bit and try putting some style into your letters.

klic
10-14-2008, 08:59 PM
jayz, i dont understand the second one

TONO
10-14-2008, 08:59 PM
@flip flop. i dont know what making them face the same direction means
@shpel kk( and how do you pronounce your name? chapplle or shpel..)
and i agree with lawlcat

FLIP FLOP
10-14-2008, 09:03 PM
you see how the top of your A is face a different direction than the rest of them? try and fix it so they all flow the same direction.

klic
10-14-2008, 09:03 PM
shpel, its kinda a hard one to say

lawlcat
10-14-2008, 09:05 PM
looks like saying the word 'spell' just with the SH.

TONO
10-14-2008, 09:05 PM
@flip flop oh i got you. thx
@shpel ok lmao

klic
10-14-2008, 09:08 PM
looks like saying the word 'spell' just with the SH.

exactly haha

klic
10-14-2008, 09:08 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELDividerThrow.jpg
from late august/early september cant remember
i know the e is way to big

flare - your letters seem to go from best to worst, work on the secong leg of your r, and i think the top of your a is too big, other than that it has pretty good flow though

twos - i like the style you got going except dont make the top of your s so big in your first sketch

crits please

bump

Fube
10-14-2008, 09:13 PM
watch your letter thickness, other then that id say its ok for a throwie. keep trying to progress.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture055.jpg

Mandella?
10-14-2008, 10:57 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=se1gj0.jpg

sear
Trying something new
Crits would be great
I hate imageshack.

mrkurto
10-14-2008, 11:16 PM
fube- sick sick sick. hit the streets with that shiii
mandella?- pics too dark. from what i see its decent. too many add-ons though

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb250/mrkurto/14-10-08_2106.jpg

Mandella?
10-14-2008, 11:26 PM
There is no addons..
ill try to get a decent quality pic.

mattxgrace
10-14-2008, 11:31 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g315/mocantdance/sentoner1.jpg

I hate the 'N'

tell me what you think.

Incognito
10-15-2008, 01:21 AM
Sent!, I'd have to agree the N is no good. If nothing else i'd close the gap in it, it throws off everything. The T also doesn't seem to fit. the S E and N all seem to have that little tail on the end I say try to use that on the T.

letsgobombin
10-15-2008, 11:15 AM
sent- go simpler, the t isnt too bad, its simple but stay with simple bubble letters first and then progress
krco?- cant really read it at all, especially the second letter, unless its a p with a small o underneath, try to make it more legible
fube- your stuff is amazing but im thinking how fast could you get that up if you were painting? The first one looks fine but the second looks like it would take alot longer, i think its just the little details like drips and stuff thats making me think that, that simp is nice as well
shpel- keep all your letters same size and similar thicknesses, especially the e, keep experimenting and you could get something solid from that
and tono, i'll have your exchange up when i get some more batteries for my camera, i'll post it in here as well

peacebomb
10-15-2008, 06:32 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/uut001.jpg
Less add ons. Made bottom bars thicker cant make them to thick or else the letter turns into a c.

TONO
10-15-2008, 08:04 PM
@peacebomb thats the same amount of add ons. your second e isnt round like the first
@letsgobombing ya ya sure. ill post yours when you post.

Zire
10-15-2008, 09:04 PM
Yes! mandella knows where its at with the guy from pan's labyrinth!

ene- Your 3d looks a bit off on the first e and your two e's are slightly different.
Kurto- I kinda like it apart from your k looks like a h and an i, and your t don't quite look like a t enough. its pretty good though

anyway.. fixed the z( i hope). Constuctive crits please. And yes my light source is more fucked up than a cat with an afro.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/16102008389.jpg

Worms
10-15-2008, 09:27 PM
that bant shit is straight fireee
i envy ur skills

Spyr
10-15-2008, 11:52 PM
Hey guys im new here and I just started out not to long ago. Can i have some help please. Crit it up. Sorry i used highlighter :( the closest thing i have to a decent marker to make clean lines...
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f193/bigsalute000/Image7.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f193/bigsalute000/Image5.jpg
that was earlier today... i have progressed to this... im guessing this is better right? i like the bottom one. tell me what you think. im also having some trouble making the p not look like the s
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f193/bigsalute000/Image3-1.jpg

TONO
10-16-2008, 08:43 AM
@zire looks alot better imo but the z and top of the a are to far a@part
spyr your p's in the thrid pic like like s's but the top ones are good

HaLo_07
10-16-2008, 12:03 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f193/bigsalute000/Image3-1.jpg
The one on the bottom right is the only one I would say that has potential kid...The R,Y and the S need work...The S needs a lil bit of a tweak while the R needs some good work and the Y...It's gotta look like...Well, A Y. lLolL But the E is str8. Nice lil letter structure. Could be good, so make it good.

Stay Up. And Welcome To Bombing Science...lol

Scratch
10-16-2008, 12:07 PM
yo im not getting any crits anywhere so im taking it to here haha

which one do you think is better/ is there anything i can do to make the one thats better even better?

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1015082106.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1011081211.jpg

thanks

spyr try more simple things before making anything complicated. but its good that you get the idea that good throwies have letters that are similar.

HaLo_07
10-16-2008, 12:15 PM
yo im not getting any crits anywhere so im taking it to here haha

which one do you think is better/ is there anything i can do to make the one thats better even better?

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1015082106.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1011081211.jpg

thanks

spyr try more simple things before making anything complicated. but its good that you get the idea that good throwies have letters that are similar.
The bottom one looks dope. MADDDD cartoonish. Dope colors
The lotter structure is good to.

gcrolla
10-16-2008, 03:19 PM
Scratch- I like the top one besides those things on the sides of it. Second one doesn't look bad I can't read it though.

Spyr- Top 2 are really simple, letters are kind of out of proportion though. Bottom ones I can't even tell what they say.

Zire- Letters are pretty cool, highlights and shading is off a bit. Tight though.

http://i33.tinypic.com/j0a5nl.jpg

BigBlueViolence
10-16-2008, 03:57 PM
I'm diggin the S and A on that, Say. But not the Y so much.

Subconcious
10-16-2008, 04:17 PM
Nice, Scratch

nastonE
10-16-2008, 04:24 PM
scratch- that second one's dope, the first one isn't really doing it for me, maybe because there isn't much flow
croll- try to make them less of a straight letter, it's herd to pull that off in 30 seconds or less if there's all those sharp turns etc
http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/1880/10162008042056pmto0.png

HaLo_07
10-16-2008, 05:11 PM
Whats the second letter in your throwie??
Is it an O? Or...somethin...lol
It's maddd street, diggin the style, but MADDDD hard to get a good read on it.

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/24/l_40895f4f82d34b20bd479143bec6d28d.jpg

Crits, B/S talk...Lemme hear it.

nastonE
10-16-2008, 05:37 PM
Whats the second letter in your throwie??
Is it an O? Or...somethin...lol
It's maddd street, diggin the style, but MADDDD hard to get a good read on it.

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/24/l_40895f4f82d34b20bd479143bec6d28d.jpg

Crits, B/S talk...Lemme hear it.

it's an A, once i told you, you can see it

and pretty dope Y and E, get that N the same size and practice it over and over and it'll develop on it's own

HaLo_07
10-16-2008, 05:42 PM
Lmao, DAMN thats not an E...It's an I.

Ya, the N is sometin I need to work on.

But thanx for the crits. I'll be back with sometin soon.
Shiit, I should post my old stuff here...lol hahaha

nastonE
10-16-2008, 05:49 PM
Lmao, DAMN thats not an E...It's an I.

Ya, the N is sometin I need to work on.

But thanx for the crits. I'll be back with sometin soon.
Shiit, I should post my old stuff here...lol hahaha

lol i'm probably as blind as you then

:D

Spyr
10-16-2008, 07:26 PM
Well this is my throwie on a sticker. is it better than the previous stuff?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f193/bigsalute000/Image4.jpg

HaLo_07
10-16-2008, 09:59 PM
Well this is my throwie on a sticker. is it better than the previous stuff?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f193/bigsalute000/Image4.jpg


DEFINETLY need to wor on this WAY more.
Don't worry about the letter structure before color I would say.

In other words...shiit needs work cause it's Suckin...HARD! lol

Stay up.

sacwacko
10-16-2008, 11:51 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6418.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6421.jpg

klic
10-17-2008, 08:55 PM
Lmao, DAMN thats not an E...It's an I.

Ya, the N is sometin I need to work on.

But thanx for the crits. I'll be back with sometin soon.
Shiit, I should post my old stuff here...lol hahaha

get rid of that extra bump on your i or else a lot of people are going to think its an e

HaLo_07
10-17-2008, 09:07 PM
Werd, been tryin to give it more of a Characteristic but an I can be sorta difficult to get down, especially a Bubble "I"

Any one mind helpin out?

BigBlueViolence
10-17-2008, 11:33 PM
http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/1880/10162008042056pmto0.png
This is dope.
I don't thing that the arrow in the S is really necessary, though.

Zire
10-18-2008, 12:28 PM
worked on my throw a bit more, i think i got the 3d slightly off again but whatevs. Crits if you want.
http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/17102008392.jpg

klic
10-18-2008, 02:16 PM
looks like it says bar not zar

letsgobombin
10-18-2008, 04:02 PM
tono, heres your exchange finally, sorry for the wait
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/a53e28f8.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/87d5c690.jpg
zar- does look alot like bar, a and r arent half bad though
kas- not a clue how thats an a, drop shadow is off on the left side of the k, k doesnt look too much like a k and the s is pretty nice, dont see the point of that gap in the line on the s and that line going all the way to the other line on the s isnt good either
aspek- sweet, cant think of anything other than maybe make the p suit the other letters a bit better, it kinda stands out cus that bit is pointed
spyr- use simple bubble letters for now and then just experiment with stuff
yin- i tought that said yen as well, i would make that bump not go into the letter and just be a bump, make all the letters the same size and that'd be solid, keep playing with it though

nastonE
10-18-2008, 05:43 PM
kas- not a clue how thats an a, drop shadow is off on the left side of the k, k doesnt look too much like a k and the s is pretty nice, dont see the point of that gap in the line on the s and that line going all the way to the other line on the s isnt good either


that isn't a K, it's an M. the reason why that doesnt look like your generic A, is because I made the bottom flow with the rest of the letters in the throwie, giving it a 'spade' shape. i get what you mean with the gap on the S, but when i'm doing the throwie, right before that gap is where i start the S, thats why it doesnt join the line on the other side of the gap. where is the flaw in my drop shadow though?

klic
10-18-2008, 06:28 PM
where is the flaw in my drop shadow though?

on your s, its not going to the bottom left

osnapizzel
10-18-2008, 06:33 PM
aspeh thats pretty good

crimateNC
10-18-2008, 06:36 PM
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/60/l_e7e24ed5842b4755b8c0865f71e98181.jpg
here is the throwie i am working on 4 my illy name "RESN"
i ran outta space on the board i used, hence the chopped N, and I didnt take a good pic of the whole thing lol
and sorry 4 the paint drips XP

Zire
10-18-2008, 06:42 PM
Yeh i kinda fucked up the z a bit but i dont really think it looks alot like a b but thanks for the crits anyway.

sacwacko
10-19-2008, 12:29 AM
bottom of the paper.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6428.jpg

gentrifried
10-19-2008, 12:30 AM
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/Amok_0008.sized.jpg
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/Deter_2.sized.jpg
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/OHMF0014.sized.jpg

sacwacko
10-19-2008, 12:32 AM
bottom of the paper.
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6428.jpg
bottom of page.

Queezy
10-19-2008, 12:40 AM
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/Amok_0008.sized.jpg


Wow um.... On all 3 just work on paper and once you get your fuckin letters looking decent go to a yard or some chill place and practice your can control. Practice and dedication will do wonders.

crimateNC
10-19-2008, 01:00 AM
repost 4 crits plz n thanks
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/60/l_e7e24ed5842b4755b8c0865f71e98181.jpg
here is the throwie i am working on 4 my illy name "RESN"
i ran outta space on the board i used, hence the chopped N, and I didnt take a good pic of the whole thing lol
and sorry 4 the paint drips XP

sacwacko
10-19-2008, 01:13 AM
Wow um.... On all 3 just work on paper and once you get your fuckin letters looking decent go to a yard or some chill place and practice your can control. Practice and dedication will do wonders.
like honestley, it will save your toy ass from getting crossed or dissed. i'd diss that in a second. get up on paper for now.

Queezy
10-19-2008, 02:28 AM
here is the throwie i am working on 4 my illy name "RESN"
i ran outta space on the board i used, hence the chopped N, and I didnt take a good pic of the whole thing lol
and sorry 4 the paint drips XP
Same deal as the last one. Work on your throwie via paper, then get your can control. I'm not telling you to change your name but in my neighborhood and i'm sure in many parts there is a RESN and does A RES throwie. Just slowly make your letters on paper and it will form nicer letter combinations and just an all around better throw.

Queezy
10-19-2008, 02:29 AM
bottom of page.

It looks nice but I can't really see it that great.

Zire
10-19-2008, 11:04 AM
Tried making my z less b ish, and yeh at least get your letters down before painting.
http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/19102008395.jpg

nastonE
10-19-2008, 02:45 PM
Tried making my z less b ish, and yeh at least get your letters down before painting.
http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/19102008395.jpg

get the top of the A to have the same flow with the top of the Z if you know what i mean

KLIMAX+
10-19-2008, 03:40 PM
first ever..
http://i36.tinypic.com/a0j4f6.jpg
crits please

zire that z is sick,, the r looks a bit like an a tho

DRAKE_RKZ
10-19-2008, 06:28 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5669/img00059cd3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/5746/img00060jd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/9843/img00064oe6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/995/img00063jj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

retnemed
10-19-2008, 07:02 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6418.jpg
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/100_6421.jpg

hey nice shit man, stay up.

freshsesh
10-19-2008, 08:51 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/icjojl.jpg
new throwie, crits?

-Wings-
10-19-2008, 09:05 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2371.jpg

Im not huge on throwies.

Steele
10-19-2008, 09:43 PM
Drake - Dope throw, R is too fat at the bottom if you ask me
Sesh - Make your S's the same and lose that extra bump on the E
Wings - Paint over that with a big black square bro

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6069/thrwwz4.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/thrwwz4.png/1/w400.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img171/thrwwz4.png/1/)http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/5462/dddpd1.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/dddpd1.png/1/w500.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img413/dddpd1.png/1/)

Says CUE

Which one is nicer? what should I change?

crimateNC
10-19-2008, 09:49 PM
you should fix your coding or reupload it lmao

cause i'm not seeing shit

freshsesh
10-19-2008, 09:52 PM
steele-ide say the second one is nicer but do a little work on that e

Steele
10-19-2008, 09:54 PM
yea it was a quick one, i know its fucked but you get the idea

thanks

GETRAD
10-19-2008, 10:02 PM
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/getradthrow.jpg
somehtng im thinking about throwing up around town

revid!
10-19-2008, 10:06 PM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3783/p00120id2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/p00120id2.jpg/1/w240.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img522/p00120id2.jpg/1/)
.

HaLo_07
10-19-2008, 10:39 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/IMG_2371.jpg

Im not huge on throwies.

Yo...your not only bad at throwies it seems...but paint quality also sucks...Is that the 98 cent shiit??

freshsesh
10-19-2008, 10:54 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/icjojl.jpg
bumped for crits

HaLo_07
10-19-2008, 11:02 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/icjojl.jpg
bumped for crits

Naw yo, you still need alot of work bro.

The H is not flowin with the style your tryin to pull.
The E is str8, just refine it a it more and the S's are ok.

But regardless, it does look clean. The you got a steady hand.
But work on your letter structure. The colors were good.

Wanted!
10-20-2008, 12:32 AM
can ya'll help me out
i just started ...

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=158&pictureid=886
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=158&pictureid=887

freshsesh
10-20-2008, 12:41 AM
go look into the new to graff thread, lots of goods there

DRAKE_RKZ
10-20-2008, 02:34 PM
http://img147.imagevenue.com/loc1124/th_27468_IMG00189_122_1124lo.JPG

stumpyhasnolegs
10-20-2008, 03:33 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2zt99ad.jpg
k is way off

KLIMAX+
10-20-2008, 05:04 PM
:rolleyes:
first ever..
http://i36.tinypic.com/a0j4f6.jpg
crits please


bump

LeaksOne
10-20-2008, 05:51 PM
^^new to graff thread an stick to paper

Hi Haters
10-21-2008, 12:00 AM
where u from if u live where it snows... wait till spring to get ur name up and just draw till then..
its perfect advice youll get.

PatchesO
10-21-2008, 03:05 AM
dont mind that ROKCO the R could be a bit more exciting i think

KLIMAX i think ya should let us see it on paper

SESH the thing on top of the E looks a bit wierd to me


DIGITAL JUNKIE
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/734/reisf6.jpg

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3323/grimeyreixg3.jpg

Zire
10-21-2008, 06:08 AM
Tried making my z less b ish, and yeh at least get your letters down before painting.
http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/19102008395.jpg

Bump, What you guys think, am i ready to paint this?

Nine9
10-21-2008, 12:16 PM
Simple PEEG throw.

Need a better G.

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9113/dsc01130md4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/dsc01130md4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img385/dsc01130md4.jpg/1/)

lawlcat
10-21-2008, 01:01 PM
Your p and your g look nothing like what theyre supposed to.

Nine9
10-21-2008, 01:13 PM
What do they look like?

miteone
10-21-2008, 02:24 PM
a D and a D

Nine9
10-21-2008, 03:38 PM
DEED?

Lol, yeah I can see that now.

I might just use the name DEEK or some shit seeing as I have the DEE sorted lol. Bang a letter on the end and I'm done. I just want to bomb shit now, I'm fed up of trying to perfect a throw.

Grape1
10-21-2008, 05:25 PM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/8571/goup003eq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/goup003eq2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img216/goup003eq2.jpg/1/)

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/9081/roswellio4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/roswellio4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img184/roswellio4.jpg/1/)

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/7330/2838039806ac53213dd2bnx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2838039806ac53213dd2bnx4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img523/2838039806ac53213dd2bnx4.jpg/1/)

grape kac/cbc

Teez-EmM!!!
10-21-2008, 05:29 PM
why toy thread???

XskeletorX
10-21-2008, 05:35 PM
What do they look like?

Looks like Deeo. HOLY DIVAH!

I'd just go with Deeo, looks pretty dope

GETRAD
10-22-2008, 01:21 AM
nine9- cant read it, work on your letters

critz plz
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/getradthrow-1.jpg

retnemed
10-22-2008, 01:32 AM
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w228/Hofmeyr/IMG_2487.jpg
crits.

retnemed
10-22-2008, 01:34 AM
can ya'll help me out
i just started ...

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=158&pictureid=886
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=158&pictureid=887

Alright man, put up a huge of wood board in your backyard, and practice can control and what not on it, and dude, u need to totally revamp your letters, stick to the books for a while, save your paint untill you get decent

BigBlueViolence
10-22-2008, 01:35 AM
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/7330/2838039806ac53213dd2bnx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



grape kac/cbc
Fucking dope.

PatchesO
10-22-2008, 06:28 AM
dont mind that ROKCO the R could be a bit more exciting i think

KLIMAX i think ya should let us see it on paper

SESH the thing on top of the E looks a bit wierd to me


DIGITAL JUNKIE
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/734/reisf6.jpg

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3323/grimeyreixg3.jpg

bump for critz

Nine9 - as DEEO that looks dope
GRAPE - thats the shit
GETRAD - i like the bottom one, its heaps cleaner

AdRe*
10-22-2008, 06:41 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/moto_0104.jpg

HaLo_07
10-22-2008, 08:12 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/moto_0104.jpg

And you...Naw yo, keep at it mos def.
You need to work harder on your letter structure.

Scratch
10-22-2008, 05:45 PM
adre- fix your m, work on your flow
patches- looks okay, im not digging the thing on the bottom of the i though
wanted- stick to drawing for now
retnemed- work on your can control. otherwise its good

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1022081735.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/downsized_1022081526.jpg

crits?

Black Flag
10-22-2008, 05:56 PM
Looks good, but idk about that A, cool idea but maybe try doing something else?

Scratch
10-22-2008, 05:57 PM
yeah haha i thought i did it small usually but i got home and compared it with my other pictures and i was like what the fuckk was i thinkinggg

but yeah, im definitely doing it the same size next time haha

Queezy
10-22-2008, 05:58 PM
Looked good on paper, just try to practice can control and that throwie will look nice

klic
10-22-2008, 07:50 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHMsPaint.jpg

ms paint shit, looks crappy because im using the touch pad on my laptop

damen - the d, a and m look horrible

yaek - try to keep all of your letters the same size, and practice your can control so it will look as good on the wall as it does on paper

crimateNC
10-22-2008, 10:30 PM
Looks good, but idk about that A, cool idea but maybe try doing something else?

na.. the Y isnt good either
sorry but when its painted. it look like shit

blisone
10-23-2008, 01:49 PM
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/Graffagl1.jpg
Thats not me
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/Graffagl.jpg

http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/Graffagl3.jpg

http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/Graffagl4.jpg

http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p338/XyXaXyX/Graffagl2.jpg

Those are old. most of them got buffed.. I cant fuckin wait to go out again today!!!!!!!!!!!

-anyone know how i can make my throw ups more new york-ish looking? cuz i love that street/faded, fat, not fully filled type of graffiti.. but not the sucky ones..


(And no i dont use that Anarchy "A" anymore...)

Culture_Shock
10-23-2008, 02:37 PM
adre- fix your m, work on your flow
patches- looks okay, im not digging the thing on the bottom of the i though
wanted- stick to drawing for now
retnemed- work on your can control. otherwise its good

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1022081735.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/downsized_1022081526.jpg

crits?

looks okay on paper, but it fell apart when you painted it.
try and get a consistent structure, of course, but I think that the thinner outline on the painted piece detracted from it as well.
try and get an outline that's as proportionaly wide as your sketch.
i swear by ny fats for outlines and fills...

Nine9
10-23-2008, 05:42 PM
AGL, try and keep your shit in proportion with the letters the same size and thickness.

devil at sea level
10-23-2008, 06:16 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/graffer012.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/graffer015.jpg

Zire
10-24-2008, 10:54 AM
Tried making my z less b ish, and yeh at least get your letters down before painting.
http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/19102008395.jpg
So,is this ready to paint?

sarz- looks pretty good but i don't like the random rectangle at the back of the a

gunsofbrooklyn
10-24-2008, 12:19 PM
liking the first one mister devil at sea level

Masta T
10-24-2008, 12:33 PM
AGL id make ur tag a lil bigger in somwe cuz they look a lil smooshed but the driping agl is str8,. Zar i think it looks pretty tight an basic which is good id like to c it up on a wall.

Nagger
10-24-2008, 01:07 PM
that grape is fkn dirt.

ignorance is bliss
10-24-2008, 01:42 PM
i never thought it would be this hard to find a pencil or writing utensil in my house....ill put up a throwie when i can find one haha

devil at sea level
10-24-2008, 04:34 PM
good looks everybody i actually removed the square out the at and i think its alot better now, ...btw i think a couple on here down outlines then fills do your orginall outline first, fill it in, then use a diff color for the outline, so much easier..and zar maybe make the top of the z smaller and letters the same size itd be quite nice

ignorance is bliss
10-24-2008, 05:45 PM
i know it sucks and im workin on it but crits on the handie and the throw??????


http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/DSC_1416.jpg

klic
10-24-2008, 06:47 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHMsPaint.jpg

ms paint shit, looks crappy because im using the touch pad on my laptop

damen - the d, a and m look horrible

yaek - try to keep all of your letters the same size, and practice your can control so it will look as good on the wall as it does on paper

bump

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/DAZDThrowieExchange.jpg

exchange i did a while ago

devil - lose the random extension of the right of the A
cays - needs a lot of work, keep it up though

EmesterOner!
10-25-2008, 12:53 AM
ok.. some of my first work with a can, been mainly pen and paper before. crits welcome.
<a href="http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vczIzNy5waG90b2J1Y2tldC5jb20vYWxidW1zL2 ZmMTE2L2l0c29ubHltZWFhcm9uLz9hY3Rpb249dmlldyZjdXJy ZW50PVBBMTkwMzQyLmpwZw==" target="_blank"><img src="http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff116/itsonlymeaaron/PA190342.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket" /></a><a href="http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vczIzNy5waG90b2J1Y2tldC5jb20vYWxidW1zL2 ZmMTE2L2l0c29ubHltZWFhcm9uLz9hY3Rpb249dmlldyZjdXJy ZW50PVBBMTkwMzQ0LmpwZw==" target="_blank"><img src="http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff116/itsonlymeaaron/PA190344.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket" /></a><a href="http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vczIzNy5waG90b2J1Y2tldC5jb20vYWxidW1zL2 ZmMTE2L2l0c29ubHltZWFhcm9uLz9hY3Rpb249dmlldyZjdXJy ZW50PVBBMTkwMzQ2LmpwZw==" target="_blank"><img src="http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff116/itsonlymeaaron/PA190346.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket" /></a><a href="http://www.msplinks.com/MDFodHRwOi8vczIzNy5waG90b2J1Y2tldC5jb20vYWxidW1zL2 ZmMTE2L2l0c29ubHltZWFhcm9uLz9hY3Rpb249dmlldyZjdXJy ZW50PVBBMjEwMzUwLmpwZw==" target="_blank"><img src="http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff116/itsonlymeaaron/PA210350.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket" /></a>

jester.onest
10-25-2008, 12:57 AM
Ignorance is Bliss:

The handie- the "a" shouldn't cross over the "t" and the circle above the c isn't working. Move it over the top of the "i" a bit more. Try and but a bit of a sweep over the top of the "t" Like this thing: "~".

The throwie- I think its sweet, just try and sharpen up the lines and add some shadowing (if you like).

Emester:
Post the images with the [img] thing, then we can see them.

EmesterOner!
10-25-2008, 01:10 AM
lol, sorry bout that.
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/PA190342.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/PA190346-2-1.jpg
crits welcome..

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 01:53 AM
there is no i mang its an extension off of the a but thanks for the crits...my first throwie attempt other than a two letter i have...ill post tomorrow

EmesterOner!
10-25-2008, 02:02 AM
no coments.. well, maybe cause the pics are bad.. il try to get pics of my latest throwies tom.

jester.onest
10-25-2008, 02:07 AM
Yeah, the pics are kinda hard to make out.

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 02:26 AM
yo anyone know how to color shade/fade????

Wick_
10-25-2008, 02:50 AM
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/Picture008.jpg

How's the shadowing on this one?
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/Picture004.jpg


http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/Picture001.jpg

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 03:04 AM
make the letters even at the bottom?????

maybe it will look better

i just picture a sun up in one of the corners and pretend its shining down on the throw and go where the shade would go if there was a sun....not to sound gay but it worked


good advice????

Wick_
10-25-2008, 03:10 AM
I'll try it out right now, seems like good advice.

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 03:14 AM
post it i wanna peep it

Wick_
10-25-2008, 03:55 AM
I fucked up on the W shade right when i started. Evening out the letters helped and the sun did help a little, i just got practice it more. I think I made the shadow to big here too.

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/Picture.jpg

Nine9
10-25-2008, 08:13 AM
Wick, the gap in the W ruins it for me.


Here's a rough DEEK throw, gonna work on it and get it nice the next few days, but this is the basic look I'm going for, simple shit. Def need to work on the K as you can see, but I'll have shit down soon I think.

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/8006/dsc01146kj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/dsc01146kj3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img136/dsc01146kj3.jpg/1/)

Keke
10-25-2008, 11:42 AM
just a simple 2 letter, can i get some ideas on making holes? would lines look better?
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG_1283.jpg

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 01:08 PM
Wick-looks alot better than the first one, but i agree with nine the gap in the w is to much

Deek- that is sick and the k is gonna look good once you fiddle with it a little bit, The bottom of the e's are to big for me


EA- the holes are to big for me,and the e is to unoriginal funk that shit up a little bit

ignorance is bliss
10-25-2008, 01:32 PM
i know the shadowing is way two big and fucked up on this but i did it in like 20 seconds
crits
Possible two letter throwie??????

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/DSC_1426.jpg

jester.onest
10-26-2008, 12:43 AM
i know its shit. im working on it
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image064-1.jpg

bild12365
10-26-2008, 12:48 AM
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/6487/getattachmentzt6.jpg

jester.onest
10-26-2008, 01:11 AM
hmm, maybe take a pic before it gets gone over?

i don't think thats ur work.
usually u take a pic just when its done. it looks old.

XskeletorX
10-26-2008, 03:47 AM
Somethin I did real quick about a month ago...was deciding on which N to use. Went with #1

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/110527.jpg?t=1225007087

Nine9
10-26-2008, 06:25 AM
I prefer the second N.

Scratch
10-26-2008, 11:21 AM
the 3rd ones the best n

but the 2nd one fits the style more.

ignorance is bliss
10-26-2008, 12:39 PM
the second n reminds me of bomberman

i like it

Keke
10-26-2008, 06:40 PM
jester - keep the letters the same size
gone- i like the o and n but not the G or E

here's my 2 letter
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG_1289.jpg

Wick_
10-26-2008, 10:24 PM
KEKE - I like it better than the last one but the dollar signs are a little sketch, but it works better than the holes.

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/2001.jpg

ignorance is bliss
10-26-2008, 10:48 PM
keke- lookin better with the dolla dolla bills

wick- i hate it.....no offence

ignorance is bliss
10-27-2008, 04:06 AM
just drew this up.

CRITS????????

Possible two letter???

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1401.jpg

BigBlueViolence
10-27-2008, 09:18 AM
The A is decent, I'd just use a dot instead of a $, though.
But man, that C is hurting, Those bumps make it look goofy.

http://i36.tinypic.com/iz3l0w.png
Bored as shit in ms paint, haha

ignorance is bliss
10-27-2008, 12:25 PM
thanks i know the c dosen't come close to flowing with the a....gonna work on it ill post later