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Wick_
10-27-2008, 07:17 PM
Yeah the C needs some work, maybe if you had the top left part of it fatter if you know what I mean?

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/3001.jpg

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/3002.jpg

ignorance is bliss
10-27-2008, 07:23 PM
wick-im not feelin the w. the k on the first one is cool cause the peice brakin off from it is close to it the second one just looks like an h.

Wick_
10-27-2008, 07:26 PM
Thanks. Yeah I'm never really feelin my w's but I really like the first one so I'm just gonna keep messin around with it.

Fat4l_ONE
10-27-2008, 08:44 PM
My first throwie ever.....
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i312/straka_08/1225154255.jpg

ignorance is bliss
10-27-2008, 08:50 PM
pure hate.....no offence but re-do it. its not right for me

Wick_
10-27-2008, 08:50 PM
Snere - I like it, looks good but the e's could be done a little better so maybe try workin on those. And the last e looks big compared to the rest of you letters

Fat4l_ONE
10-27-2008, 08:56 PM
re did it on a postal sticker my R's suck on throwies......ne one wanna try at my name? ill return the favor for ya.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i312/straka_08/1225155397.jpg



then i did this one w/ a black sharpie.....ive just got no bubble style w/ R's
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i312/straka_08/1225156230.jpg

weakfingers
10-27-2008, 09:11 PM
Hey this is just a quick bubble throw I drew up, crits would be greatly appreciated.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/skwint012.jpg

And to snere my two cents would be, make the bottom curve of your s more defined. A good start at writing and sketching is look at the flicks on this site and try to emulate them and add your own style and flair.

Fat4l_ONE
10-27-2008, 09:17 PM
yeah thats what ive been trying to do tonight. but its the R' that really makes it look ugly....

and as weakfingers maybe do somehing else w/ the T?

its pretty simple and i can tell it didnt take you long.

weakfingers
10-27-2008, 09:38 PM
Yeah, the t is just hard to squish with the letters and if i do you cant really see it but ill work on it, here's my other throw up and again crits please.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/skwint013.jpg

And for your r's, i used to write ears but its taken in new york so you can try these ones.... there pretty basic.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/skwint015.jpg
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/skwint014.jpg

XskeletorX
10-27-2008, 09:51 PM
re did it on a postal sticker my R's suck on throwies......ne one wanna try at my name? ill return the favor for ya.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i312/straka_08/1225155397.jpg



then i did this one w/ a black sharpie.....ive just got no bubble style w/ R's
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i312/straka_08/1225156230.jpg

nice bite of my letters....

thanks for the crits dudes

Fat4l_ONE
10-27-2008, 09:56 PM
dude dont fuckin hate......ive seen other ppl use that kind of E.....plus ur prolly like hundreds of miles away from me so deal w/ it.

XskeletorX
10-27-2008, 09:59 PM
uhm...how bout you just come up with your own letters? douche.

Fat4l_ONE
10-27-2008, 10:26 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i312/straka_08/1225160562.jpg

BigBlueViolence
10-27-2008, 11:20 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/iz3l0w.png
Bored as shit in ms paint, haha

Last page bump.

Snere- Seriously homie, that shit is hurting.
I would suggest alot of sketching.
If you need help you should go to the New To Graff thread.

Same goes for weakfingers

weakfingers
10-28-2008, 12:34 AM
Dude, I know I suck and that's why I'm here asking for criticism. But I am going to stop posting and hit the books for a few weeks.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/skwint008.jpg

crystalmeth and abortions
10-28-2008, 12:41 AM
fat4l- when i look at your throw, no matter how far the other person lives from u, it still looks like a shitty attempt at some one elses style, im not talkin shit, but i think u should go more basic.

weakfingers- i actually dig what u got, but i dont see it as a throw. go more basic. and make the letters the same size.

my new throw
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/26/l_7243aac2c4604e03b980661bf9b2ca66.jpg

PatchesO
10-28-2008, 02:11 AM
SOFT - I like that, nice n clean
SKWINT - work on ya bubble one for a throw looks like its got some potential


been messin with mine before i get the paint out, what do you guys think i should go with?
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9067/42811226hw8.jpg

GraffitiSavedMyLife
10-28-2008, 02:44 AM
http://i37.tinypic.com/icjojl.jpg
bumped for crits

you got a nice hand but the h doesnt flow and the 2nd s should be more like the first
but good job
at least your out

GraffitiSavedMyLife
10-28-2008, 02:50 AM
[QUOTE=Fat4l_ONE;1240122]re did it on a postal sticker my R's suck on throwies......ne one wanna try at my name? ill return the favor for ya.

i doubt any one wants you to disgrace there name by you drawing it
no offense or anything

miteone
10-28-2008, 11:07 AM
patches i think number 1 has the most potential...5 isnt bad either but the letters need to have the same structure/flow with them...maybe for 1 all you need is a shadow to pull those spaces together...stay up

ignorance is bliss
10-28-2008, 01:03 PM
sesh i like it

EmesterOner!
10-28-2008, 09:41 PM
recent throwi on a truck.. im relly stoked about.
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff116/itsonlymeaaron/PA270375.jpg
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff116/itsonlymeaaron/PA270377.jpg

Den1
10-28-2008, 10:08 PM
crit please need alot of help
http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0484.jpg
marker was running out of ink so it looks kinda fucked up

CRAM760
10-28-2008, 11:22 PM
critics please
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s66/lokslug/Image1-9.jpg
"MiRa"

Gyse
10-28-2008, 11:58 PM
Den- the bottom left definitely looks best. You might as well just throw up your full name since there's not much of a point in a 2 letter when your name is only 3. Keep working at it.
crits appreciated
http://i35.tinypic.com/vqnzhh.jpg

jester.onest
10-29-2008, 01:02 AM
i know its shit. im working on it
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image064-1.jpg


Bump.
crits please.

librelikespie
10-29-2008, 02:28 AM
jester last er needs working

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t175/mud_aura/DSC03181.jpg
crits

jester.onest
10-29-2008, 02:34 AM
lol the whole reason i posted it was to get crits :P thanks.

lawlcat
10-29-2008, 02:38 AM
if youre having trouble with the ER at the end, take it off. have a just jest throw. cant go wrong with a shorter toss.

CRAM760
10-29-2008, 10:36 AM
critics please
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s66/lokslug/Image1-9.jpg
"MiRa"

bump for crits

crystalmeth and abortions
10-29-2008, 02:37 PM
my new throw
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/26/l_7243aac2c4604e03b980661bf9b2ca66.jpg

bumpin the next page

Gyse
10-29-2008, 06:13 PM
rei- # 1 with #3's i looks best. put a dot or something in the R though.
soft- work on the F and T. A lot. then the s and o could use a bit of work.
monster- the e and r need some change, the n could be worked on too i guess.

Here's a new one, my R is still shitty.
http://i35.tinypic.com/xm7p5y.jpg

7nationarmy
10-29-2008, 06:47 PM
crystalmeth..aint feelin it..werk on it bro
mira..not the best but keep at it..remember practice makes perfect.,,well decent,u get the picture

before u tell me to post .....
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/icoe.jpg

-AnTi-
10-29-2008, 06:50 PM
some new stuff - lines are a bit scratchy but pen was fooked.

my favouritehttp://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lert2.jpg

http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lert3.jpg

http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lert4.jpg

fill went wrong on the scan in - was a really vibrant yellow
http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr314/_-LERT-_/lert5.jpg

crits please

-LeRt-

fr3gna
10-29-2008, 06:58 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/skersothrowie.jpg
crits please

Lert- do simples bro

7nationarmy- cool, thats not ur sig right?

Den1
10-29-2008, 08:13 PM
just came up with this
http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0489.jpg
the outline looks a little white because of the lighting
crit please! thanks

BigBlueViolence
10-29-2008, 10:12 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/2wdn14j.jpg

Gyse- Dig the G and R.

Fr3gna- Dope, but what's it say?

Den- The E is decent enough, but the D is terrible, man

fr3gna
10-29-2008, 10:26 PM
my throwies say "so so"

emblems
10-29-2008, 10:28 PM
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/2339/pictureorvideo142mh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/pictureorvideo142mh8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img529/pictureorvideo142mh8.jpg/1/)

smooth_nuts
10-29-2008, 10:34 PM
middle hilo's dope man

BigBlueViolence
10-29-2008, 10:35 PM
Ah, I had a homie that writes So.
Fun word to fuck around with.
I'd get rid out the whole 'make the S two seperate parts' bit.

http://i35.tinypic.com/289fo9f.jpg

That's just my style, though.

Hilo- I dig that middle one.

anybody wanna throw some crits my way?

emblems
10-29-2008, 10:37 PM
clean ur throw up a bit and make it simple but itll help u write so i assume

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1929/pictureorvideo144zx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/pictureorvideo144zx8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img129/pictureorvideo144zx8.jpg/1/)

Ask_The_Boss
10-29-2008, 10:56 PM
anti-keep it simple first, then work your ways up from there.

fr3gna - would be a dope oneliner. but other then, im diggin bigblues advice with the S.

den1- do you write den?..becuase if you do, no offense, but its fuckin retarded to throw an abbreviation on a wall for a 3 letter word.. just do the three letters. but its good. nice and simple. now add style do it..

bigblue- diggin it. whats it say? saran?

emblems- diggin the simple. not too crazy. now throw a little of your technique into it, style. personalize it, make it turn heads

now for mine, i know you have nothing to compare it to, cuz i havent posted another one for you to look at, but jsut lemme know whats up..


http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/throwup.jpg

BigBlueViolence
10-29-2008, 11:00 PM
clean ur throw up a bit and make it simple but itll help u write so i assume

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1929/pictureorvideo144zx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/pictureorvideo144zx8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img129/pictureorvideo144zx8.jpg/1/)
if this was directed at me, that so throwie wasn't mine, I fixed it up for some kid a few posts up.

Mine is the one up there that say satan.

Boss- that handstyle is sweet, man.

7nationarmy
10-29-2008, 11:10 PM
crystalmeth..aint feelin it..werk on it bro
mira..not the best but keep at it..remember practice makes perfect.,,well decent,u get the picture

before u tell me to post .....
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/icoe.jpg

sad but bump for crits??
and all use have toclean up the way u fill peeple..eather get better markers or do hollows..no need to fill always

BigBlueViolence
10-29-2008, 11:12 PM
Icoe- I dig it, minus the arrow.
and maybe the little lump under the E

jester.onest
10-30-2008, 02:45 AM
Lol i was examining at throwie fonts on the net and this is what i came up with:

http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image060.jpg

I know biting fonts isn't good but im just doing it so I can learn good basic letter structure.

smooth_nuts
10-30-2008, 03:03 AM
icoe's your shits dope..when you do a full sized o haha
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1077.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1005.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1038.jpg

fr3gna
10-30-2008, 06:30 AM
i write skerso, but i like the "so so" idea

-AnTi-
10-30-2008, 09:41 AM
smooth - shits awesome, i like the 2 letter.
"drop bombs like i was in nam" - classic
not to fond on exclamation marks but if thats how you roll go with it.

7nationarmy
10-30-2008, 12:02 PM
ahah dope..them throws is dope i like the charecters..and yeah man thought i'd try something diffrent with the o and the e..so thats wat came out lol

emblems
10-30-2008, 12:13 PM
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/1261/pictureorvideo145dt1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/pictureorvideo145dt1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img117/pictureorvideo145dt1.jpg/1/)

dope: the throws are nice but i feel as if ive seen them before

klic
10-30-2008, 01:59 PM
horrible exchange i did

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/AUDOS45ThrowieandHandyExchange.jpg

niloe - looks pretty good except i dont like your n(?)

smooth - looks fresh as always except i dont like the face on the second one down

jester - looks pretty good except i dont really like your j and k

7nationarmy - looks sick keep it up

fr3gna
10-30-2008, 03:08 PM
audos- tuck that s in
hiloe- <3
Dope- <3
(no homo)
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/skersocolabthrowie.jpg

a colab i did with SYNPS

PEST!
10-30-2008, 06:02 PM
i've been readin this forum for a while now but this is my first post so help me out..i've been drawin on paper for a while..thinkin about startin with markers, this is just one of my throws so crits are EXTREMELY appreciated.
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/1030081655.jpg

Den1
10-30-2008, 07:12 PM
pest- try to keep it simple and forget all the extra stuff till u have something solid u can start adding style to
http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0495.jpg
just came up with this

gunsofbrooklyn
10-30-2008, 07:29 PM
love the throwies smooth_nuts
work on the letters Den1

Gyse
10-30-2008, 07:38 PM
dope- it all looks sick
hilo- looks good too, but I'd attach the o to the l more, get rid of the little gap between them.
My new one...
http://i34.tinypic.com/e8u7gj.jpg

fr3gna
10-30-2008, 08:24 PM
audos- tuck that s in
hiloe- <3
Dope- <3
(no homo)
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u105/dansartwork/skersocolabthrowie.jpg

a colab i did with SYNPS


bump for crits : )

GETRAD
10-30-2008, 08:40 PM
aega?- that looks fucking sick, add a fill

ignorance is bliss
10-30-2008, 08:42 PM
That dope is so damn fly

Gyse
10-30-2008, 09:16 PM
aega?- that looks fucking sick, add a fill

Thanks man i'll do a filler tomorrow i guess. Last letter's an R by the way; does it look too much like an A?

BigBlueViolence
10-30-2008, 10:16 PM
I could tell it was an R.

http://i34.tinypic.com/2wdn14j.jpg

Bumppppp

smooth_nuts
10-30-2008, 11:23 PM
bigbluedidldo-you ned to start doing the whole e and it'd be fresh man....and besides that open letters are wack
aega-i like it throw a drop shadow on that bitch
emblems-you probaly seem them before cause im very proud of my tosses and i whore them out like they were my baby sister
anti-exclamation points are classsic son...you gotta love em
edit*
AEGR-thought it was an a to bro...try moving the line it it farther to the right

Keke
10-30-2008, 11:51 PM
here we go

Jester- nice, but the shading is off
smooth- nice as always
emblem- simpler
shapel- eh i just don't like it even the letters out
fr3gna- nice 1 liners like the top one better the bottom one just isnt right dont like the points
pest- simpler and more round, my advice look at some NY style throws
den- follow your own advice, simple down its really bad sorry the letters are al unequalsized and there's random extensions all over
aegr- orgasmic, i dont know why but i just love your letter struc.
big blue- unique but hard to read

and finally some shit i did for an exchange

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG_1299.jpg

Stussy
10-30-2008, 11:58 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/ravhn9.jpg
Doap- looks good

BigBlueViolence
10-31-2008, 12:10 AM
It's hard to read?
The big one says Satan,
the little ones are ea.


Stussy- I dig the A, and what I am pretty sure is a Z.
The Y isn't bad, it just doesn't flow well with the other letters
The R is weird though.

Stussy
10-31-2008, 12:18 AM
http://i37.tinypic.com/ravhn9.jpg
Doap- looks good

bump

blunttokes
10-31-2008, 01:13 AM
dont mind the shit on the left no idea who that is.
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2372/dscf0789gx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6240/dscf0790jh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us/)
highway drunk stuff

smooth_nuts
10-31-2008, 01:19 AM
i like your letters BUT you s should be lined up with your e and c not above it all like "look at me im an s im better then you B-EYE-ITCH!"

blunttokes
10-31-2008, 01:22 AM
my ec was off balance... hillside.

jester.onest
10-31-2008, 02:27 AM
Jester- nice, but the shading is off

Yeah its just a shitty one i did in class :P
didnt want teachers to see so i had to keep hiding it.

heres some better ones:
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image0630-1.jpg
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image062.jpg

the second one is better the photo is crap though

gunsofbrooklyn
10-31-2008, 11:50 AM
work on the Letters jester your getting there

Gyse
10-31-2008, 04:52 PM
Rays- your R needs some work, I like the A, the bottom of the Y looks like it should be a little longer, and the Z shouldn't be so hidden behind the Y. Fix it up and I think it'll look good.
Jester- It's coming along, but you should try to make some letters not look like 2 parts if you know what I mean.
Sec- it looks good, but EVERYTHING I've seen from you is always backwards.

blunttokes
10-31-2008, 05:16 PM
just how i do my sec throws.....

smooth_nuts
10-31-2008, 05:19 PM
uhh the last one you posted would look alot classier if you did it forwards imo.

osnapizzel
10-31-2008, 06:15 PM
smooth nuts i dig those O's

smooth_nuts
10-31-2008, 06:24 PM
those O's will eat your children bitch!


some flicks for being a talkitive whore
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1109.jpg
cover of my book....all dooty covered looking and shit
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1075.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1070.jpg
WORD TO MUVA!
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1113.jpg
one letter toss stickers...ignore the bottom one

Masta T
10-31-2008, 10:50 PM
newe style im tryn wut u think?
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/throwieidea.jpg

smooth nuts a;ways dign ur shit man nice work

chafed__nuts
10-31-2008, 11:11 PM
those O's will eat your children bitch!


some flicks for being a talkitive whore
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1109.jpg
cover of my book....all dooty covered looking and shit
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1075.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1070.jpg
WORD TO MUVA!
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1113.jpg
one letter toss stickers...ignore the bottom one


those are actually solid as fuck. but i never knew the dude repped cfk
maybe cuz he never tags shit outside his bedroom

smooth_nuts
10-31-2008, 11:30 PM
do i smell a slight/sorta complement!?

...and yes,i am cfk,faker put me down
god get off my balls already i paint when i paint,and i paint enough to make myself happy
acting like your mega up:/

chafed__nuts
10-31-2008, 11:41 PM
mega up?
i dont even know how to paint

actually u still suck tho

smooth_nuts
10-31-2008, 11:51 PM
and your still a homo

ignorance is bliss
11-01-2008, 12:20 AM
a ciggarette???

or a dirty stinky bum taker?

gunsofbrooklyn
11-01-2008, 02:30 AM
really liking them smooth_nuts but try something new

ignorance is bliss
11-01-2008, 02:34 AM
HEY JUST DID THIS THROW IN MY BUDDIES ROOM BEFORE I GO OUT PAINTING!!!!!

SORRY FOR THE DRIPS I'VE BEEN DRINKING

HAPPY HALLOWEEN AND HAPPY PAINTING

CRITS?????????????????????

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/100_1405.jpg

jester.onest
11-01-2008, 05:36 AM
work on the Letters jester your getting there

Jester- It's coming along, but you should try to make some letters not look like 2 parts if you know what I mean.

Thanks guys.
Yeah I meant the letters to be two parts, it was just the look I was going for.

heres a new one:
http://i407.photobucket.com/albums/pp154/jester-onest/Image0640.jpg
yeah I know its similar to the others but I've been working on speed and letter structure similarity between Jester and Joker.

Masta T
11-01-2008, 08:14 AM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/throwieidea.jpg

a style im working with.
and guy above me its ok idk its jus not like wow but its ok

Wick_
11-02-2008, 04:29 PM
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/4-1.jpg

two letter throw. crits?

Keke
11-02-2008, 08:16 PM
jester- looking good ,but you should make it more throwieish if you know what i mean that would look as good in paint

Ca- dont let your outline drip

Wick- looks nice dont like the bottom k leg

heres some random shit is this style even worth trying?

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG00025.jpg

klic
11-02-2008, 08:58 PM
trying to improve my throws

exchange i did

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/EASENThrowExchange.jpg

keke - looks good and id stick with it except for two things, 1. i dont like how the top of the letters are all blocky, (even though it helps the flow), and 2. make sure all the parts of your letters are connected (if you know what i mean), for example, since the top of your s and t is cut off, to some people it might read ea!! (not so much in your s), and if your handstyle wasnt there, i wouldnt have known that was a t

wk - i dont like the bottom right leg of your k

ignorance looks pretty good except for the drips

daze - not feeling it, everything looks to forced, edit: i think you still owe me a throw exchange

[MiTH] hovz
11-02-2008, 09:18 PM
klic, the top of your a i think needs to be a little longer and extend more. like all the way to the E. the painting on the closet is pretty legit, wish i could do that to my wall:mad:...

MiTH
heres a few ive done, first was long ago, kinda odd... the second was my first piece i threw up on a bridge... the third is just the m and i, i cant think of a t and h to fit the form, im working on it now... the last is one ive been working on for a little while...

PEST!
11-02-2008, 09:53 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/1102082044.jpg
crits? i tried to give it a shade and border

Zire
11-03-2008, 04:23 PM
Haven't done much in a while. Anyway re-styled my throw. I think it don't look like evryone elses and possibly keep it but i dunno what you guys think?
shpel- get rid of the space between the e and a. its okay though.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/28102008409.jpg

wrekstyle
11-03-2008, 05:48 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/DSCF0004.jpg


http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/IMG00593.jpg


Writers From Rhode Island Pm me


Please give me ur feedback...

milk boxx
11-03-2008, 11:44 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/DSC07842.jpg
quick 2 letter throw.
crits

osnapizzel
11-03-2008, 11:52 PM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2490/cac0001mk6.jpg

freshsesh
11-04-2008, 12:54 AM
http://i36.tinypic.com/mrp9nq.jpg

7nationarmy
11-04-2008, 02:28 AM
page is lookin like shit fellas
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/GetAttachment-3aspx-2.jpg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCtP3V0gacs

BigBlueViolence
11-04-2008, 02:58 AM
I'll second that.

It looks dope, I think the O/bump on the E combo could be confused for a lower case I, though.

[MiTH] hovz
11-04-2008, 02:00 PM
wreck, looks sweet, if you could only find those paint colors.. maybe try to combine the letters more they seem kinda seperated...
milk, for some reason it reminds me of mario or something..

both of those painted throws are nice

am i on the right track (for being pretty much a complete toy:p) ? im just not sure whether or not i should be working on block letters or not. I also cant think of anyway to fit a T and a H into this style. if anyone has opinions as to what number i should be going with or what i should try itd be appreciated.
thanks guys

Sizzuurp
11-04-2008, 04:45 PM
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/DSCF0004.jpg


http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/IMG00593.jpg


Writers From Rhode Island Pm me


Please give me ur feedback...

really likin the colors on the first one, shit pops. kinda seems like the first 3 letters should be a little more spread out. the first e is skinnier and more squished than the second. but looks rad

FLIP FLOP
11-04-2008, 05:07 PM
really likin the colors on the first one, shit pops. kinda seems like the first 3 letters should be a little more spread out. the first e is skinnier and more squished than the second. but looks rad

no it doesn't look "rad" it looks like he needs to get colour schemes that make sense and there should not be that much negative space in a throwie. his s looks like shit too.

BigBlueViolence
11-04-2008, 05:59 PM
Milkbox- I'm not going to lie, it looks like you tried way too hard. Take it down a notch.

Attempted to close the E, ignore the wack ass R.

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6754/im000243he3.jpg

mekosbc
11-04-2008, 11:06 PM
alot of hurt throwies.................but SOME desent ones..

BigBlueViolence
11-05-2008, 12:08 AM
you should clarify which ones are hurt
and which ones are not.

H1TBYNUMB3RS
11-05-2008, 12:23 AM
big blue toes throws or prey tight i ike the top one

what should i work on yoo?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3029/3004841898_1671919566.jpg?v=0

freshsesh
11-05-2008, 04:24 AM
http://i34.tinypic.com/10dxyet.jpg
fucked the h up

klic
11-05-2008, 05:14 PM
some throws...

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELandADMENHighlited.jpg

sesh - looks decent, but yah you did fuck the h up haha

nor - looks fresh dont know what to crit

FLIP FLOP
11-05-2008, 07:08 PM
klic- looks good cept the p just looks awkward for some reason.

Wick_
11-05-2008, 10:54 PM
All of these are lookin tight man. I'm gonna have to agree with FLIP FLOP about the P though. Try makin the rounded part at the top a bit fatter.

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/SSPX0478.jpg
Here's my latest one, two letter. I was planning on paintin it this weekend without the drop shadow though. whatdya think?

BigBlueViolence
11-06-2008, 12:16 AM
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6754/im000243he3.jpg

bumper cars.
not really feeling anything on this page

skeet-skeet
11-06-2008, 01:40 AM
http://i512.photobucket.com/albums/t326/skeet-skeet_/IMG000038.jpg

crits?...
and should I start throwing this up?

nor - your tag is kinda a bite off phere.. just sayin.

orchardhillicetea
11-06-2008, 02:10 AM
throw up that throw up skeet skeet
and that earn shit is lookin tight

gentrifried
11-06-2008, 05:12 PM
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/Basemnet_0004.sized.jpg

wrekstyle
11-06-2008, 07:37 PM
worked on a new throw...dont really like the "d" can i get some help on it...

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/bayroc_2008/DSCF0034.jpg

rave316
11-07-2008, 01:50 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7017/hpim0613ke9.th.jpg (http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hpim0613ke9.jpg)http://img145.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

A throwie i did yesterday at my college with some sidewalk chalk.

Wick_
11-07-2008, 04:58 PM
I know it's chalk but it looks messy, maybe paint or on paper wouldlook better.

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/SSPX0482.jpg

Just drew this up quick so it looks a little sketchy but I'm startin to get w's that I like.

klic
11-07-2008, 05:38 PM
rave, your a joke

blunttokes
11-07-2008, 07:40 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7017/hpim0613ke9.th.jpg (http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hpim0613ke9.jpg)http://img145.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

A throwie i did yesterday at my college with some sidewalk chalk.

ur in college
... barf

rave316
11-07-2008, 09:04 PM
damn well ok i guess wick was the only one that gave some decent advice thanks wick

klic
11-07-2008, 09:17 PM
chalk.. your a joke

rave316
11-07-2008, 09:20 PM
seriously man why the fuck does it matter what i use to draw shit?

rave316
11-07-2008, 09:21 PM
what does a serious graffiti artist only use a spray can or some markers to do graffiti?

jester.onest
11-07-2008, 09:52 PM
dude. if you decide that chalk is your medium. then you will be fairly unique. but chalk gets buffed easily.

rave316
11-07-2008, 10:02 PM
i know that but honestly right now i will be alright with that since i know i got a long way to go before i can actually do anything that i would want to use some spray on.

ignorance is bliss
11-07-2008, 10:03 PM
i agree with blunttokes

rave316
11-07-2008, 10:12 PM
honestly all i care about is that i did it, people saw it, they liked it, and i had a good time doing it too.

rave316
11-07-2008, 10:13 PM
ok what the fuck is wrong with me being in college??

Wick_
11-07-2008, 10:14 PM
I know it's chalk but it looks messy, maybe paint or on paper wouldlook better.

http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/SSPX0482.jpg

Just drew this up quick so it looks a little sketchy but I'm startin to get w's that I like.
Bump
also, I just painted it, first thing I painted and i'll get a flick tm when it's light out

klic
11-07-2008, 10:41 PM
i used chalk when i was 4. its hilarious picturing a college student playing with his chalk on the side of the road, and i guarantee its going to be gone in about a day

exchange i did... i blow at throws

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SPADESThrowExchange1.jpgf
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SPADESThrowExchange2.jpg

wk - not feeling it, i dont like the arrows on the bottom

spades - lookin better, just bring your s and p more to the right

start giving crits if you want to recieve them

Wick_
11-07-2008, 10:49 PM
Any suggestions?

rave316
11-07-2008, 11:10 PM
klic it's just chalk again why should it matter, i was doing something i like plus there are alot of artists out there who use chalk on sidewalks and in parks to make really kick ass murals and if you think it's childish you seriously need to loosen up man and actually try to have some fun.

Whatchug0t?
11-07-2008, 11:20 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/29eve1.jpg
shityy throw i did for this thread
:)

crits?

Culture_Shock
11-07-2008, 11:21 PM
its funny that 90% of the people on the toy threads are the shittiest artists that walk upright and dress themselves, and they can criticize you for your medium? Rave, just tell them that it's buff proof chalk or some shit, these kids will believe anything...
I mean uhh, shame on you! you know that graffiti is limited to paint and markers and stickers and "black books". anything else is clearly against the strict rules and guidelines of graffiti...

EmesterOner!
11-08-2008, 12:11 AM
whatchugot?- i like ur letters but do something else with the holes in ur letters.

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/7538/photo31cm5.jpg (http://img83.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo31cm5.jpg)
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/photo31cm5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img83/photo31cm5.jpg/1/)
crits por favor compadres..

BigBlueViolence
11-08-2008, 12:44 AM
Erupto- that R looks like an A, and the dots on the R and P are a little big, but other then that, shit's dope.

Eme- highlights are meant to match the color of the fill. chrome isn't very close to blue on the color wheel. also, not digging the ace on the E.

Fube
11-08-2008, 12:55 AM
http://inhabitat.com/wp-content/uploads/01_reverse.jpg

http://www.npr.org/programs/morning/features/2004/jul/graffiti/gallery/gently.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i279/urbanretro/cleangraffiti.jpg

this guy just cleans the surface of dirty ass walls.

graffiti is not about the medium u use. slingin paint is just the most used medium.

now, i would say u should work on your letters because theres no sugar coatin that toss u did. its ugly, but hey, who gives a fuck, its chalk.

jester.onest
11-08-2008, 05:41 AM
Yeah. that guy is a hero. He can't get arrested because it's not illegal to clean things xD

gunsofbrooklyn
11-08-2008, 06:37 AM
cool stuff Emester

rave316
11-08-2008, 03:39 PM
so should i go with the usual advice of work from simple one liner letters and go up from there?

Fube
11-08-2008, 04:09 PM
if u ask me, id work on handstyle. get a sick one, then move to throwies, then piecing

Wick_
11-08-2008, 08:01 PM
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/5001.jpg

Another 2 letter. I'm feelin this one. crits?

wrekstyle
11-08-2008, 08:16 PM
i used chalk when i was 4. its hilarious picturing a college student playing with his chalk on the side of the road, and i guarantee its going to be gone in about a day

exchange i did... i blow at throws

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SPADESThrowExchange1.jpgf
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SPADESThrowExchange2.jpg

wk - not feeling it, i dont like the arrows on the bottom

spades - lookin better, just bring your s and p more to the right

start giving crits if you want to recieve them
thanks man, looks good, did u see the throw i did for u?

klic
11-08-2008, 11:34 PM
yah i did thanks

edit: yay 300 posts

Speedy
11-09-2008, 11:54 AM
Go easy on me. I'm just getting the hang of throws.
http://i37.tinypic.com/jzw56c.jpg

thebaconator
11-09-2008, 03:40 PM
speedy- its pretty clean, good drop shadow...just more practice i guess
whatchugot- thats decent man, ur shadow is a lil wierd tho its not all in the same place u got it on the left and the bottom

first attempt at the whole word
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/CIMG0567.jpg
2 letter
http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r13/onedayafter3/CIMG0568.jpg

crits?

Bink1
11-09-2008, 03:55 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/9332/dsc04431dv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

comments and crits?

Thread-Locks
11-09-2008, 04:07 PM
Go easy on me. I'm just getting the hang of throws.
http://i37.tinypic.com/jzw56c.jpg

Hey speeds what kind of markers are those? they look really nice

Wick_
11-09-2008, 04:09 PM
Cink- looks not bad for your first, should've filled in your shadow better

Bink1
11-09-2008, 04:17 PM
its BINK :) , maybe my B is kinda wasted but i drawn the star in there , so it dont look like B? ( i should change it then)
didnt had time for the shadows , was missing the bus :)

Wick_
11-09-2008, 04:28 PM
Oh hah, that makes sense. Try putting your star in the bottom half of your B and see how that looks, so one in the top and bottom.

CRAM760
11-09-2008, 06:11 PM
MiRa throwie, need to work on my "i"...
Crits please...
http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s66/lokslug/Image1-10.jpg

gunsofbrooklyn
11-09-2008, 06:34 PM
those are some neat throwies thebaconator
yes the baconator is tasty

Speedy
11-09-2008, 08:10 PM
Hey speeds what kind of markers are those? they look really nice

Chisel tip sharpies

Baron
11-09-2008, 10:26 PM
thebaconater- why is she a boyscout?

[MiTH] hovz
11-10-2008, 12:08 AM
haha silly boyscout... and we have a stoned a or d in there too!
mira... try changing to a lowercase i, theres not much to do with an uppercase for the style you do.

any crits on my new throw. just did it quick in bed, i fucked up the shadow and the outline (did it with some shitty metallic marker) i was bored... so ignore that shit. im more focsed on my letters...

k'n1ve
11-10-2008, 02:18 AM
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSCF0164.jpg

Holloween Throwie

k'n1ve
11-10-2008, 02:21 AM
first time post...

Bink1
11-10-2008, 08:58 AM
looks super kewl :)

ignorance is bliss
11-10-2008, 12:52 PM
bink how is that a b..it looks like a failed e

BAGS
11-10-2008, 01:26 PM
looks like a cursive lower case B lol

*edit

thebaconator
11-10-2008, 04:12 PM
thebaconater- why is she a boyscout?

i dont know really....she's jsut kinda there, i was thinkin about makin her look really baked too
and its a stoned a

Bink1
11-10-2008, 04:47 PM
looks like a cursive lower case B lol

*edit

thats , what it meant to be .

lawlcat
11-10-2008, 05:03 PM
fucking around.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/sdfsd.jpg

"Riot"
11-10-2008, 05:26 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/paint.jpg

above the trash.

Wick_
11-10-2008, 05:50 PM
2nd throwie ever...
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/5002.jpg

Edit - I had a bad cap for the black and the stock was a vertical line

weakfingers
11-10-2008, 08:41 PM
-thebaconator, Your two letter throw was good but for some reason the middle section of your e was a bit to long for my liking (I dont know if you were going for that)
-Bink1, On your "first throwie" I dont want to sound mean but like work that throw out on paper first, the b looked totally like an e but for a first... it has potential, just work on it.
-Milk boxx, its looking nice just the shadows on your drips dont go in the same direction as your spikes.

I posted on here about 2 weeks ago and got flamed so i worked on my throw and I'm back again for some more crits, The N looks abit like a U and the I is abit to skinny but overall i like where its going,

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/skwint024.jpg

smooth_nuts
11-10-2008, 09:05 PM
de for dope....
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1165.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1167.jpg
http://i361.photobucket.com/albums/oo54/doapuno/Picture1164.jpg

Sarto
11-10-2008, 09:19 PM
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/002-6.jpg
dope- really diggin the middle one.

Whatchug0t?
11-10-2008, 09:36 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2ustshh.jpg
Crits?

Sarto thats real dope i like it but your R and A look sorta the same but other then that its nice

BigBlueViolence
11-10-2008, 10:28 PM
Sarto-dope, but I think the T is a little too fat.
Edit; After reading what Erupt said, I agree. you should lose the line in the middle of your A.

Erupt- loads better with the lower case R, man.

lawlcat
11-10-2008, 11:35 PM
fucking around.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/sdfsd.jpg

new page bump

erupt im liking it, good flow.
sarto good stuff, like the O.
dope like the faces in the letters, middle one definitely takes it.

smooth_nuts
11-10-2008, 11:43 PM
word,lawlcat you need to make your letters more defined
like,more like letters and not random blobs
and possibly use a capital d,huh?

Wick_
11-10-2008, 11:49 PM
Erupt- lookin good, looks like you spent more time on this one too.

Dope- smooth as always, I'm likin the third one

Fat4l_ONE
11-11-2008, 12:43 AM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/1018/2ndthrowiete9.jpg
its only the 2nd throwie ive ever done. but pretty good for a hollow throw, or so i thought...

jester.onest
11-11-2008, 01:00 AM
yeah fat4l i like it but you need a bit of shadowing on the bottom (i think)

lol the link in ur sig! BITCH!

XD

Fat4l_ONE
11-11-2008, 01:14 AM
yeah i wanst sure if it would look right w/ shadow on top and bottom.....can u demonstrate in ms paint or something cos i cant picture it w/ like 2 angles of persepctive shadow

lawlcat
11-11-2008, 01:17 AM
just draw your throw, then draw the entire throw again slightly above or below and to the left or right of your first drawing, representing the shadow where it sticks out of the original.

Fat4l_ONE
11-11-2008, 01:30 AM
yeah but thats kinda what i allready did...

lawlcat
11-11-2008, 01:37 AM
point is you cant have a shadow on the top and bottom of anything. mostly in reference to jesters post.

weakfingers
11-11-2008, 07:01 AM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/1018/2ndthrowiete9.jpg
its only the 2nd throwie ive ever done. but pretty good for a hollow throw, or so i thought...

Work on keeping all the letters the same size. I dont know if you have taken that picture on an angle but that r seems way to squished to me.

Bink1
11-11-2008, 07:54 AM
im going to do , my throw on paper then ! and improve the B :) , coz i know it suked :D

Zire
11-11-2008, 11:23 AM
Haven't done much in a while. Anyway re-styled my throw. I think it don't look like evryone elses and possibly keep it but i dunno what you guys think?
shpel- get rid of the space between the e and a. its okay though.

http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/28102008409.jpg

bump

Bink1
11-11-2008, 01:22 PM
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5185/dsc04434sb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/dsc04434sb3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img204/dsc04434sb3.jpg/1/)

my new improved throw :)

Whatchug0t?
11-11-2008, 02:09 PM
Erupt- lookin good, looks like you spent more time on this one too.

Dope- smooth as always, I'm likin the third one

haha nahh actually less time thats just one of my regular tosses.
i think i just overdid it with that first throwie
:rolleyes:

k'n1ve
11-11-2008, 03:58 PM
i like that bink...

Bink1
11-11-2008, 04:36 PM
thanks :D

Black Flag
11-11-2008, 04:47 PM
Bink, the only thing I don't like on your throw is the dots for the B, other than that, pretty good.

Bink1
11-11-2008, 05:16 PM
well the dots indicate the holes in tha B . dunno what shouldi i replace them with ...

aekone
11-11-2008, 08:13 PM
Just started.
I know slik is unoriginal but I have yet to find a name that isn't.
Still working on.. Everything really. :P
Advice?

Steele
11-11-2008, 08:52 PM
Slik/Aek - Stick to simple letter forms man, try to keep lines to a minimum. like that extra bump, in the S, drop it. But then your S looks wack, so change the whole S. Keep it simple. Your L and I are decent, try like that kind of a clean style.


http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5200/throwacueuk3.png (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwacueuk3.png)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/throwacueuk3.png/1/w515.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img249/throwacueuk3.png/1/)

Crits on throw/handy?

osnapizzel
11-11-2008, 09:11 PM
your A looks like a D and your C looks like an L

aekone
11-11-2008, 09:15 PM
Yeah I was goin for a certian look with the S
And of course I failed to convey it.
WIll work on it some more and post pics later.

-Deuces

[MiTH] hovz
11-11-2008, 11:07 PM
steele, make the lines for the a and the e horizontal instead of vertical, it makes it easier to read. also try changing the a, it looks strange.

new throw i made, i know its toy, but i just came up with it now... im proud of the little guy.:D

it says roci

Wick_
11-11-2008, 11:12 PM
2nd throwie ever...
http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg127/Hangman7563/5002.jpg

Edit - I had a bad cap for the black and the stock was a vertical line

crits?

Roci - I'm really liking that style but the "i" looks like a lowercase "b" to me

[MiTH] hovz
11-11-2008, 11:22 PM
thanks man, its like the first positive thing ive gotten haha, im such a baby nuts compared to everyone here.. but ya ive had trouble wit the i, for some reason its something ive always done with my i's, its something ive kept with me since the first time ive started writing so ive wanted to keep it as a sort signature for me, idk, ill end up changing i bet... idk how else to make it fit

Keke
11-11-2008, 11:53 PM
steele - dont mix up your angles keeps the flow even
wick- i really dont like it but for some reason i cant say why , maybe because its to square i dont know i just think the letters are ugly for some reason, sorry

and here my ish , so you can tell me if i even have the right to talk
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/EABLOOD.jpg

BigBlueViolence
11-12-2008, 12:57 AM
Is that an A? if it is, it's dope.

k'n1ve
11-12-2008, 01:12 AM
wick u gotta make your lines match up on your k---basic letter structure will make it look cleaner...

Keke
11-12-2008, 01:23 AM
Is that an A? if it is, it's dope.

if your talking to me its an E A

k'n1ve
11-12-2008, 01:38 AM
nah.. tha wick throw-- your shit looks sick

klic
11-12-2008, 12:13 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/LEAKSThrowExchange.jpg

keke - looks pretty good but make your e complete and loose the little square thing on the r

wick - stick to the books for now until you get a decent throw and tag down (the tag looks decent)

mith - it looks like your improving which is good but make your letters more rounded and less squared (the p for example)

acue - looks decent but keep working on it

slik - lose the bump in the middle right of your s and maybe attach the dot of the i to the rest of the letter

Zire
11-12-2008, 12:28 PM
bump


http://i335.photobucket.com/albums/m477/rizz_89/28102008409.jpg

bumpizzle,

klic
11-12-2008, 12:31 PM
give em to get em, and keke i just realized that was an a not an r my bad

Scratch
11-12-2008, 05:40 PM
keke- thats pretty cool, id like to see what it looks like as a fill-in not just an outline though
zire- first 2 letters are pretty good but your r is slackin. maybe try doing a lower case r. make it look more like your Z or A, it looks too out of place.
klic- not bad, but the A is looking kind of funky. play with it. an uppercase A would look better there probably, try it.
Aeks- simples. work on your simples first, and yes im talking not throws. start with perfecting your handstyle, then move on to throws.
Steele- your A is your weakest letter, but if you fix that up it should be a pretty clean, simple throw, and thats a good thing.


what i usually do
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i277/ethanablouin/1011081211.jpg

trying to work on getting all my letters in.
http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq68/slaphousekids/1112081725.jpg

crits please

aekone
11-12-2008, 06:37 PM
Yo.
Found a name I like and It's original (as far as I know, correct me if I'm wrong)
Decided to keep the bump to try to make a bit of a theme.
(And plus all the other S's I made sucked)
Let me know what's wrong with it.
Note: Ignore the tag I'm working on that one right now.

FLIP FLOP
11-12-2008, 08:27 PM
make your letters the same size and try not to have any spaces in between them. its alos a good idea to start simple with throwies just like you do with pieces.

smooth_nuts
11-12-2008, 08:51 PM
yeak-stop making your a over lap the y it makes it look retaded...
fuckign with my first name out of bordem
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3009/3025676805_ea2c222d12.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3025/3026509104_75cde3512f.jpg
it's ment to look retarded/hipsterish....and the e's supposed to be all massive and shti too haha:/
more first nameizzle
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3030/3025675847_b7c23e9abb.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3165/3026508026_6387b78ec4.jpg

osnapizzel
11-12-2008, 09:04 PM
i like that dope throw, but hate everything else, including that boner lookin e you had on the last one

ignorance is bliss
11-13-2008, 12:07 AM
Doap ur fucking dope!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

smooth_nuts
11-13-2008, 12:15 AM
crack helps...

FuckTheFame
11-13-2008, 12:55 AM
dope your shits lookin too phresh these days
you should work on some shit besides throwies
post em on 814 if you do any
but remember crack is a cheap drug
stick to coke thats how the real g's role

smooth_nuts
11-13-2008, 01:02 AM
haha word.
im a fan of pills myself...

i work on everything(i believe i have a couple flicks in the toy book thread from earlier today) handstyles,pieces,simples,ect.....throw ups are just what im best at i guess :/

gunsofbrooklyn
11-13-2008, 01:10 AM
good job smoothnuts
i seriosuly suck at bubble letters atm
i write soke (you say it like the word soak)

ErrorOner...
11-13-2008, 04:22 AM
working on some new letters for my throw as opposed to my original sp...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture30.jpg

Zire
11-13-2008, 09:23 AM
give em to get em, and keke i just realized that was an a not an r my bad

I crited people when i first posted it mate. Safe.

Sarto
11-13-2008, 09:34 AM
working on some new letters for my throw as opposed to my original sp...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/Picture30.jpg


like the r but not so much the c .

Bink1
11-13-2008, 10:26 AM
1.TWO letter .

http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8788/dsc04439bc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

2.Improved and bigger throwie

http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/1733/dsc04438yz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/dsc04438yz2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img353/dsc04438yz2.jpg/1/)

im thinking of putting these on stickers , what ya think?

Mare*
11-13-2008, 03:20 PM
http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr113/KidsOnLsd/scan.png
crits?

Scratch: your letters are dope, just dont squash them
Smooth: i only like the dope one but i dont like the way the eyes and mouth are on the d and o.
Error: I only like the "r"
Bink: Both are fresh but work on the !

Bink1
11-13-2008, 03:26 PM
that g dont fit in (my opinion). and i think u should try to draw the same letter in your throw the same like your first n is different then second , mayeb it would look better if u would copy tha letterz.

p.s.
im tot so my opinions might be tot....

Mare*
11-13-2008, 03:38 PM
that g dont fit in (my opinion). and i think u should try to draw the same letter in your throw the same like your first n is different then second , mayeb it would look better if u would copy tha letterz.

p.s.
im tot so my opinions might be tot....

the second n is a h, it spells "insight" but thanks for the crit.

Lsd
11-13-2008, 04:32 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0001.jpg First time posting, crits welcome.

Bink1
11-13-2008, 05:01 PM
the second n is a h, it spells "insight" but thanks for the crit.

oh, now i dig it :)

aekone
11-13-2008, 06:02 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0001.jpg First time posting, crits welcome.
Yo man! Diggin the shit out of that bro!
But might a toy suggest changing the u a lil' bit?
At first I thought it was a Y.

LeaksOne
11-13-2008, 08:26 PM
lsd thats raw but i think you should work on your U and N. other then that keep it up

LeaksOne
11-13-2008, 08:33 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff032.jpg
jus did this 2 mins ago. took about a min. crits?

Lsd
11-13-2008, 08:46 PM
Thats a dope Leaks throwie man but ive seen that "E" quite a bit.

LeaksOne
11-13-2008, 08:51 PM
yea i kno i borrowed it. its kinda hard to be creative with it.

Bars
11-13-2008, 10:11 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9219/newthroue3.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newthroue3.jpg)http://img208.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

crits?

Eack
11-14-2008, 11:51 AM
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/7225/img0092me1.jpg

calculating infinity
11-14-2008, 12:53 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3279/3029377161_6a5063170b.jpg?v=0

k'n1ve
11-14-2008, 02:20 PM
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/7225/img0092me1.jpg

you have too many letters that look, or are the same... and i dont know about those extra bubbles on the back of the letter. not trashin you because its pretty sick.

weakfingers
11-14-2008, 03:16 PM
I posted on here about 2 weeks ago and got flamed so i worked on my throw and I'm back again for some more crits, The N looks abit like a U and the I is abit to skinny.

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/skwint024.jpg


Here's a bump from a couple pages ago, any crits?

gentrifried
11-14-2008, 04:03 PM
Still working on the gimped out S

http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/ISIgraf0006.sized.jpg

Bars
11-14-2008, 08:15 PM
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/7225/img0092me1.jpg

I like it; it has decent flow.

milk boxx
11-14-2008, 10:05 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/DSC07846.jpg

2letter crits!

give me some crits yo! i needa work on a throw

BigBlueViolence
11-14-2008, 10:58 PM
Lose the spikes, straighten your E, and then you should be set.

http://i33.tinypic.com/qrep2e.jpg

Pretty jankity, but the style is a work in progress.
Wasn't sure weither or not the dots on the A should be on the top or bottom, so I put both on that *****.
Also, I'm fully aware that the fill is shit, the marker was dying

dark2
11-15-2008, 05:17 PM
BBV- its not bad but try making ur bars more the same size i.m.o

crits?
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20081106.jpg

BigBlueViolence
11-15-2008, 05:26 PM
Bars?
I think you might be thinking pieces homie.
Try not curving the lines that go inside of the letter on the R and K.
Also, don't go so wild with the fill colors, it normally just distracts from the letters.

EDIT- did you mean straighten them?
If so, I get what you're saying there.

dark2
11-15-2008, 05:50 PM
yea sorry thats what i meant
and okay thanks

more like this ?
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20081115.jpg

Lsd
11-15-2008, 06:59 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0002.jpg Still working on this style but here's what ive got so far.

synps
11-15-2008, 08:02 PM
isi- practice some more on paper before painting
satan- dots on the top, I dont like how the bottom of the s goes over the rest of it
dark- put the a rightside up and dont fill with dark colors
lsd- nice handy. loose the curlyq's and the arrows

Two throws with my name backwards (practice for the battle). Top is a one liner. crits?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/kennysphotos/throw.jpg

BigBlueViolence
11-15-2008, 09:32 PM
don't really get why you revers your P and Y?

http://i37.tinypic.com/qycosm.jpg

not diggin my R at all.

synps
11-15-2008, 09:35 PM
I reversed it for a battle. the battle is reverse your name so thats what I did.
I'd say make it a capital r. the holes are looking nice though!

BigBlueViolence
11-15-2008, 09:54 PM
oh, alright, I didn't notice it was fully reversed because, well, those are the only two letters you really have to change.

Just dicking around.

http://i38.tinypic.com/97ib6o.jpg

mtown
11-16-2008, 12:33 PM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/876/img0213fx2.jpg
critzzz... bbv: i like it

Bink1
11-16-2008, 01:02 PM
whats with the brown color? any other than brown and i kinda like it :)

Baron
11-16-2008, 02:14 PM
Thats a throwie?