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krazzie_ammo
10-07-2006, 09:26 AM
hey phish....im still toy and haven't tried any extensions so you dont have to take my crits if yo dont want to....
1. i really like your letters they are really cartoonish which is good.
2. the arrows dont really go with the flow of the cartoonish letters.
3. the 3d looks gooood. :D

WolfBurrns
10-07-2006, 09:28 AM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Oct 6 2006, 05:42 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture22.jpg

My new name since I got pinched.. CRITS? Fuck, it seems like im starting all over.
I can get some crits on this before I ink it?

Punny
10-07-2006, 09:32 AM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl+Oct 6 2006, 09:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (jerm_mtl @ Oct 6 2006, 09:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Punny@Oct 6 2006, 04:56 PM
Some of my recent pics.
I would appreciate some crits, but please dont say to colour them because i will once my cousin decides to give me my sharpies.
*pic*
*pic*
please dont write joek theres joek in mtl
[/b][/quote]
Thats just great <_<

-testify-
10-07-2006, 09:34 AM
i think they look nice

beastie_1989
10-07-2006, 09:44 AM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Oct 6 2006, 06:27 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1165.jpg
nice Megadeth reference, peace sells is a rad song. Did u go to the gigantour 2006?

SkRIBBlE
10-07-2006, 09:46 AM
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/2607/muslimkq7.jpg

SkRIBBlE
10-07-2006, 09:47 AM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4603/freakymondayvp1.jpg

phish
10-07-2006, 09:48 AM
Originally posted by phish@Oct 7 2006, 09:10 AM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/extentions.jpg

arrows and extentions

crits?
bump new page

SkRIBBlE
10-07-2006, 09:49 AM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8776/freakazoidmz2.jpg
tell me wot u think

jonowev
10-07-2006, 09:58 AM
the character is bizzare...
the graff next to it is pretty awesome
all the colours make it a bit hard on the eye

tried a 3D - crits?
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/purplengreythrow.jpg

Code
10-07-2006, 10:05 AM
Skribble- I like the character, but as for the piece i dont know, it seems kind of messy, for example some of the extensions are kind of random, and the letter structure aint that good. But for the other pieces they are dope lovin the 3d Lol but i am just a toy so that just my oppinion.

Phish- I like the extension on the "P", but the "H" doesent seem to appeal to me.

Sole- its okay, but i dont like the "S" that much, good simple though.

Like i said guys i am probaly one of the biggest toyes as you about to see with this sketch, but i am just passing on advice people have given me.

http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/5213/scan0001yh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

critz please

Skesh
10-07-2006, 10:07 AM
Originally posted by Skesh@Oct 7 2006, 07:52 AM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/1akrim.jpg
after some blockbusters
tried a camo fill :)

The pic is crap, but I&#39;m not on my computer now, this computer has only a webcam (it&#39;s for a couple of days)

some other blockers


http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/1bkrim.jpg
bump

I was first

i want some comment on these

am I going into the right direction? and do you have tips to make it more interesting?

jonowev
10-07-2006, 10:10 AM
code - lose the arrows. the really dont work
and go simpler. try less rounded letters
crits on mine plz?
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/purplengreythrow.jpg

Code
10-07-2006, 10:15 AM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 7 2006, 10:10 AM
code - lose the arrows. the really dont work
and go simpler. try less rounded letters
crits on mine plz?
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/purplengreythrow.jpg
Hey, ty for the crit.

So now it my turn, I really lovin the simple would make a sick roller, but for some reason the "Y" just seems not to go with the flow. Not sure why but it doesent seem to go with the other 2 letters.

Sumoe
10-07-2006, 10:39 AM
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/3995/dsc0046lk1.jpg
crits? :ph34r:

terower
10-07-2006, 10:46 AM
JAY - looking good, that 3D&#39;s pretty well done. The Y is still a little off, though. I think it would look tight if you kept the tail of the y on the same level as the bottom of the J and A and not have it dip down like it is. Also, make sure all the lines stay at an even thickness.

KRIM - looking pretty good, that camo fill is pretty nice. My only suggestion is to bring the I over to the right a bit more, so it stands out better from the R and M.

Now my turn. I did this a week ago instead of paying attention in Calculus... I always feel like I draw my best when I&#39;m doodling in class. I&#39;m pretty proud of the police officer, but I also liked the old men on right, which came about by me trying to draw without lifting the pen from the paper.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo70.jpg

Comments? Opinions?

T_R_O_N
10-07-2006, 10:48 AM
Sum: dope character for sure, but try not to add to many ruffles in the clothes, your giving way to much emphasis on baggyness.

terower
10-07-2006, 11:01 AM
Sum, the character is decent, but it definitely needs some work. The arms and legs are too short in comparison to the torso and head. Also, you went a little overboard with the crease lines. If you work on those, it could be pretty dope.

aha
10-07-2006, 11:04 AM
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Sumoe
10-07-2006, 11:06 AM
the 3d is off and the T is a little awkward, other than that pretty good

aha
10-07-2006, 11:09 AM
,

Flash
10-07-2006, 11:37 AM
post the image

~raging babies~
10-07-2006, 12:22 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/623/jimmypanpz7.png

it says rasta crits anyone?

WolfBurrns
10-07-2006, 12:49 PM
rasta- Its okay. Needs alot of work. Make your letters evenly spaced. For instance the first a is hidden a bit too much. Your letters need more structure too. Take your time as well. No need to rush through your throws. I can see your trying to rush it, like your doing it on a wall. Try to master each letter first and then put them together and see what you come up with.

~raging babies~
10-07-2006, 01:02 PM
okay thanks

-testify-
10-07-2006, 01:26 PM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4420/paskthingob4.png

fixed my bomb a little its says pask crits?

Bastardo
10-07-2006, 01:35 PM
its the same pic as that other guys? :huh:
EDIT. NVM you are the same person?

~raging babies~
10-07-2006, 01:50 PM
no hes just my frend(not the one who spammed) and i coppied his code by accident also im on his username right now so this is testify crits?

Hilo
10-07-2006, 01:57 PM
crits on the canvass you cant see the yellow that much cosue its flairing and i editied it like mad

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4286/picture89vl2.jpg[/URL

crits

-testify-
10-07-2006, 02:10 PM
i like the face haha whats the third letter though EDIT nvm

Hilo
10-07-2006, 02:24 PM
e?

YarHarHar
10-07-2006, 02:55 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1958.jpg

i dono about this style i think i jus need to fix it up?

Code
10-07-2006, 03:01 PM
Yo, Hare, i really do like the fill but the letters need to be defined a little more, in my opinion. I really cant even read what it says


Ok, here i lost the arrows and tried to go simpler, added a better fill to flare the piece up a bit, so what do you all think? Oh and ignore tag, i know its pretty danm bad i really got to work on it, but if you want to give me critz on tag go for it :)

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/7585/scan0003zu2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz please :P

YarHarHar
10-07-2006, 03:05 PM
says ja...not that ahrd to read

jonowev
10-07-2006, 03:08 PM
code, next time do a simple fill. the green band across it doesnt look that great. also, you chopped off half the C&#33; the A and the N are looking much better tho :)

jonowev
10-07-2006, 03:09 PM
YarHar, thas looking awesome. not feeling the fill, but the stars and the actual letter shapes are minted :D

Code
10-07-2006, 03:15 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 03:05 PM
says ja...not that ahrd to read
lol oops, sorry there ya, now that i look at it closer it does say JA, lol so ignore what i said, about the letter structure. Really really dope fill though i still think

Code
10-07-2006, 03:18 PM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 7 2006, 03:08 PM
code, next time do a simple fill. the green band across it doesnt look that great. also, you chopped off half the C&#33; the A and the N are looking much better tho :)
thank you for the crit&#33; :), and when you say simple fill do you mean like a one color fill?

jonowev
10-07-2006, 03:24 PM
yeah, just keep it simple and contrast the outlines with the fill. when youre ready, maybe try doing a fade (one coour at the top, one at the bottom, and merge them together in the middle using extreme subtlety)
:)

Code
10-07-2006, 03:36 PM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 7 2006, 03:24 PM
yeah, just keep it simple and contrast the outlines with the fill. when youre ready, maybe try doing a fade (one coour at the top, one at the bottom, and merge them together in the middle using extreme subtlety)
:)
lol, i know i am about to sound like the biggest toy, but what do you mean when you say "contrast the outlines with the fill"?

WolfBurrns
10-07-2006, 03:39 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 03:05 PM
says ja...not that ahrd to read
Theres already a really famous JA. A legend even. Just so you know.

jonowev
10-07-2006, 03:40 PM
well, make one colour compliment the other. use colours that stand out against each other, like blue and yellow
or red and black

Hilo
10-07-2006, 03:43 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Oct 7 2006, 01:57 PM
crits on the canvass you cant see the yellow that much cosue its flairing and i editied it like mad

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4286/picture89vl2.jpg[/URL

crits
crits please and JA chill on the fill man your destracting the letters

TricksForKids
10-07-2006, 03:54 PM
MF baby, im still calling you MF i dont acare bout the jame change, i like the letters, fill, everythings gravy these cats dont know what theyre saying

im just not feelin the middle little bar of the A, seems sloppy

and hielo thats arlight for a simle my man, itd look cool painted big


heres a little sketch for a possibly GRADE TWELVE font for the yearbook, crits?

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9882/gradetwelvezm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NICCSACC
10-07-2006, 03:55 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 02:55 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1958.jpg

i dono about this style i think i jus need to fix it up?
fill and stars is awesome... letters suck.

NICCSACC
10-07-2006, 03:56 PM
Originally posted by beastie_1989+Oct 7 2006, 09:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beastie_1989 @ Oct 7 2006, 09:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Oct 6 2006, 06:27 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1165.jpg
nice Megadeth reference, peace sells is a rad song. Did u go to the gigantour 2006? [/b][/quote]
nah couldnt even get there due to car trouble ya dig. i bet that shit was dope tho.

NICCSACC
10-07-2006, 03:58 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Oct 7 2006, 01:57 PM
crits on the canvass you cant see the yellow that much cosue its flairing and i editied it like mad

[URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4286/picture89vl2.jpg[/URL

crits
odd stuff but i like it kinda. looks like an eclipse or something (as far as the yellow fades/flare goes.)

YarHarHar
10-07-2006, 04:02 PM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns+Oct 7 2006, 03:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (WolfBurrns @ Oct 7 2006, 03:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 03:05 PM
says ja...not that ahrd to read
Theres already a really famous JA. A legend even. Just so you know. [/b][/quote]
your a moron

NICCSACC
10-07-2006, 04:03 PM
haha

TricksForKids
10-07-2006, 04:12 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 7 2006, 03:54 PM
MF baby, im still calling you MF i dont acare bout the jame change, i like the letters, fill, everythings gravy these cats dont know what theyre saying

im just not feelin the middle little bar of the A, seems sloppy

and hielo thats arlight for a simle my man, itd look cool painted big


heres a little sketch for a possibly GRADE TWELVE font for the yearbook, crits?

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9882/gradetwelvezm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump

Mse
10-07-2006, 04:19 PM
thats hawt man
i like the twelve

Z FUSE
10-07-2006, 04:21 PM
tricks that style looks cool, but the d on grade looks bit too thin.

crits on this plz.
http://img446.imageshack.us/img446/8030/noletaszu0.jpg

ESKI
10-07-2006, 04:42 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c336/strikerx4/Picture-1.jpg


working on a new name.. Critz?

-testify-
10-07-2006, 04:45 PM
fix the e and make the top of the n go in like the bottom part does also stick with one color for fills

anyway heres mine everyone ignored so crits it please

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4420/paskthingob4.png

afek
10-07-2006, 04:47 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Oct 7 2006, 05:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Oct 7 2006, 05:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Oct 7 2006, 03:54 PM
MF baby, im still calling you MF i dont acare bout the jame change, i like the letters, fill, everythings gravy these cats dont know what theyre saying

im just not feelin the middle little bar of the A, seems sloppy

and hielo thats arlight for a simle my man, itd look cool painted big


heres a little sketch for a possibly GRADE TWELVE font for the yearbook, crits?

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/9882/gradetwelvezm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump [/b][/quote]
nice needs tweaking on some letters


have you done that battle with niccsacc yet the one where aces picks the words

OliveOil
10-07-2006, 04:52 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 02:55 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1958.jpg

i dono about this style i think i jus need to fix it up?
POW&#33;

FEN the HEN
10-07-2006, 04:56 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar+Oct 7 2006, 04:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (YarHarHar @ Oct 7 2006, 04:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Oct 7 2006, 03:39 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 03:05 PM
says ja...not that ahrd to read
Theres already a really famous JA. A legend even. Just so you know.
your a moron [/b][/quote]
there is&#33; :o

mad nice yarharhar

kame2
10-07-2006, 05:04 PM
YarHarHar: if you brought the left side of the j down a bit, it would be easier to know that it says JA,
haha before i thought it said IEA haha.

aces
10-07-2006, 05:12 PM
The J looks like a V at first glance but it&#39;s sick.

-testify-
10-07-2006, 05:18 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Oct 7 2006, 04:45 PM
fix the e and make the top of the n go in like the bottom part does also stick with one color for fills

anyway heres mine everyone ignored so crits it please

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/4420/paskthingob4.png
can someone crit this and stop ignoring it

slEEt
10-07-2006, 05:35 PM
^ We&#39;re ignoring it for a reason.

obseen
10-07-2006, 05:42 PM
try harder next time and we&#39;ll crit

Code
10-07-2006, 06:04 PM
Testify- The problem with the throw that it is so danm messy, clean it up dont make it so squigly and work on the "k".

K, so i went with a simpiler fill this time, didnt cut the "C" in half, but unfortainetly i think i made the "N" to fat but whatever. And like always ignore tag :)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2338/scan0005so4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Z FUSE
10-07-2006, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by Z FUSE@Oct 7 2006, 04:21 PM
crits on this plz.
http://img446.imageshack.us/img446/8030/noletaszu0.jpg
lose the face in the O ACON.

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 06:41 PM
looks nice^^ i think the S is too big and the N is a bit weird, too close to the O i guess

Fosale!
10-07-2006, 07:02 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010245.jpg
thug.

.D.H.
10-07-2006, 08:00 PM
^^^^hahaha cool. really.

-testify-
10-07-2006, 08:11 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8730/graffnb5.png

tried to make it better

Fosale!
10-07-2006, 08:26 PM
and you didn&#39;t succeed.
try less squiggly lines

obseen
10-07-2006, 08:28 PM
try looking at other throws and simples
n study the letters on them, n change em a bit and incorporate em into your own graff,so you can get some ideas n shit and on how things work so you can start progressing with your own made up stuff

CHEN[Ken]
10-07-2006, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by OliveOil+Oct 7 2006, 04:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (OliveOil @ Oct 7 2006, 04:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 02:55 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1958.jpg

i dono about this style i think i jus need to fix it up?
POW&#33; [/b][/quote]
sickk looks like ja?

aces
10-07-2006, 08:37 PM
It&#39;s for the JA toy battle in the battle thread.

contraband
10-07-2006, 08:55 PM
Originally posted by CHEN[Ken]+Oct 7 2006, 08:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (CHEN[Ken] @ Oct 7 2006, 08:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by OliveOil@Oct 7 2006, 04:52 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-YarHarHar@Oct 7 2006, 02:55 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1958.jpg

i dono about this style i think i jus need to fix it up?
POW&#33;
sickk looks like ja? [/b][/quote]
yeah thats butter, maybe a few tweaks here and there but really nice style.

bouncingsoul
10-07-2006, 09:52 PM
The style you used on the J looks sick in that, but I don&#39;t really like your J structure overall... They all look like U&#39;s to me.

d_g
10-07-2006, 10:18 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 8 2006, 02:52 PM
The style you used on the J looks sick in that, but I don&#39;t really like your J structure overall... They all look like U&#39;s to me.
My thoughts as well.

Fosale!
10-07-2006, 10:30 PM
Fune and Sec bookie.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010248.jpghttp://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010247.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010251.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010250.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010249-1.jpg
resize.nope.sorry.

nerdx
10-07-2006, 10:33 PM
fune looks pretty good

Fosale!
10-07-2006, 10:35 PM
Random 2am sketches.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010259.jpg
fucked up K
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010258.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010257.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010256-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010255.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010254.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010253.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010252.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010242.jpg
more thug.^

nerdx
10-07-2006, 10:36 PM
you got too much time on your hands

Fosale!
10-07-2006, 10:37 PM
Originally posted by nerdx@Oct 7 2006, 10:33 PM
fune looks pretty good
Fune is flcnaruto by the way
for dem cats dat don&#39;t know.

-testify-
10-07-2006, 11:34 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9185/bombls7.png

made it not so squiggly

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 11:39 PM
ur P A and K need alot of work, the S is ok, but the P needs to be defined more, add a horizontal bar in the middle of the A where that vertical line comes up in the middle, add a horizontal line on the top of it and define ur K more so it dusnt look like a H

top one is a new style im trying out, worth working on or not? bottom one is the one ive been working on for a while, adding some shading and stuff, crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/THROPOOOCT8.jpg

-testify-
10-07-2006, 11:46 PM
thanks for actually being helpful instead of saying you fucking suck quit toy and for the top style i think you could maybe make the top part of the r rounder instead of jagged but i like it

d_g
10-07-2006, 11:47 PM
Truth, if I was you I&#39;d make the pointy bits on the side of the letters rounded.

doomsayer
10-07-2006, 11:50 PM
how do you mean? and testify i used to get those comments aswell telling me to quit cause i suck to bad, just keep at it and you&#39;ll eventually get somewhere, my stuff still sucks, but its alot better than it used to be.

-testify-
10-07-2006, 11:59 PM
^thanks
tried to do what you said

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/662/bomb2nx8.png

doomsayer
10-08-2006, 12:01 AM
the P looks a bit better, its still bigger than the rest of the letters, u want to make it th esame size and the K still kinda looks like a H

d_g
10-08-2006, 12:08 AM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9997/thropoooct8lh2.jpg

Something like that, I dunno, haha it looked better in my head but then again MSPaint didn&#39;t do it any favours haha.

doomsayer
10-08-2006, 12:09 AM
ohh i see, yeah i know what u mean, i think its look nice like that, ill give it a go

doomsayer
10-08-2006, 12:27 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/oct8sketchhhhh.jpg

like this?

-testify-
10-08-2006, 12:45 AM
yea i just dont like the circles overlap and make it so theres a hole in the r

heres mine
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7716/bomb3ko6.png

Hot_Pocket
10-08-2006, 12:48 AM
The holes in the P and A are really big. And the top part of the K, the part that sticks out, it looks off.
Well that&#39;s my 2 cents. Work on those along with whatever anyone else tells you.

-testify-
10-08-2006, 12:49 AM
ok thanks

>SM!7K<
10-08-2006, 12:55 AM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n98/jovy414/10_07_06_1431.jpg

what should i do to it?

Fosale!
10-08-2006, 12:58 AM
define the C a little more.
looks like a C but also somewhat like a weird S, i like it though

nemzone
10-08-2006, 01:50 AM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9293/img131za4.jpg

done this for a battle on another forum

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 01:59 AM
give this girly some critz ^^, yeah i havent posted much latly cause of my court fines and such but i finally got a little time..


http://x3d.xanga.com/a3cd1127c0c3581868314/z55912985.jpg
http://xae.xanga.com/fc6d03273403481867882/z55912617.jpg
http://x41.xanga.com/3f7d152026d3581867388/z55912200.jpg
http://xa8.xanga.com/ecbd36555653781866976/z55911864.jpg

d_g
10-08-2006, 02:01 AM
NEMZ is a girl, or were you referring to yourself nosy?

Anyways, Nosy, your stuff is pretty nice.

nemzone
10-08-2006, 02:03 AM
ask ur mum how much of a fuckin girl i am nosy.

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 02:11 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Oct 8 2006, 02:01 AM
NEMZ is a girl, or were you referring to yourself nosy?

Anyways, Nosy, your stuff is pretty nice.
i was refering to myself and thanks im working on some styles and trying to improve

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 02:13 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 8 2006, 02:03 AM
ask ur mum how much of a fuckin girl i am nosy.
ok for one i was refering to myself being a girl not you you have nothing to do with anything i typed on my post so before you cop a fucking attitude get your fucking facts straight..... k thnx goodbye not meaning to be a bitch but jeez

nemzone
10-08-2006, 02:28 AM
ite well my bad, but u cant blame me for thinkin it, wasnt the only person who thought u ment me.

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 02:32 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 8 2006, 02:28 AM
ite well my bad, but u cant blame me for thinkin it, wasnt the only person who thought u ment me.
btw your picture owns :D

Code
10-08-2006, 03:19 AM
Originally posted by Code@Oct 7 2006, 06:04 PM
Testify- The problem with the throw that it is so danm messy, clean it up dont make it so squigly and work on the "k".

K, so i went with a simpiler fill this time, didnt cut the "C" in half, but unfortainetly i think i made the "N" to fat but whatever. And like always ignore tag :)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2338/scan0005so4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump&#33;, critz please :)

Truth.
10-08-2006, 04:27 AM
crrits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/oct7peice.jpg

jonowev
10-08-2006, 04:30 AM
its quite a cool design, but the lines are quite wobbly. looks live your hand was shaking all over the place when you drew it - especailly on the pink outline

Truth.
10-08-2006, 04:40 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/oct7peice.jpg

oh, thats the paper, its like drawing on styrofoam, like it has these weird line things through it, it&#39;s not my hand....

nemzone
10-08-2006, 04:41 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 8 2006, 06:50 AM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9293/img131za4.jpg

done this for a battle on another forum
bumpin this from otha page for criticizzles

i like it truth, likin the highlites and lowlites lol. u sud try paintin it

Truth.
10-08-2006, 04:45 AM
yeah im real keen to paint it, i got no paint tho, i gotta get me some paint,l yours is lookin real nice, the Y seems a bit out of wehack tho, i think u shud make the space at the top of it a little wider

jonowev
10-08-2006, 04:46 AM
truth - make the horizontal part of the T flat before you consider painting it. it just looks messy

nemzone - the letters are quite nice, but the colours that you used (green n brown) make me want to wretch&#33; :wacko:

Truth.
10-08-2006, 04:48 AM
yeah green and brown are army colours but they dont go together well, ill redraw it tonight jono and work more with the T, i have an idea for it, but i know what u mean when u say its messy, its kinda like the whole peice has bars, then the t&#39;s have some random add-on, io need to define if my T&#39;s have two bars or three. ill work it tonight.

jonowev
10-08-2006, 04:56 AM
awesome. where you from truth?
yeah if you sort those T&#39;s out, and maybe bring the R and the U closer together, itll be quite mint :)

Truth.
10-08-2006, 05:03 AM
cool, im from australia near sydney

jonowev
10-08-2006, 05:10 AM
oh&#33; good evenin mate :lol:
im in the UK
its like, 10 AM here

post another pic when youve made those changes, truth

obseen
10-08-2006, 05:56 AM
nemz you can never take part in another one of my toy battles&#33;&#33;
seriously its cool man, i think youve won

aces
10-08-2006, 06:15 AM
Originally posted by nemzone+Oct 8 2006, 05:41 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nemzone @ Oct 8 2006, 05:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Oct 8 2006, 06:50 AM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9293/img131za4.jpg

done this for a battle on another forum
bumpin this from otha page for criticizzles

i like it truth, likin the highlites and lowlites lol. u sud try paintin it [/b][/quote]
Is it ARMY? If so the top of the A seems like it should be more connected itself. Other than that it&#39;s looking really good. I think that the space in between the M should have been filled so like you should have taken up more space with the M so you don&#39;t have that space because there aren&#39;t any other spaces in the piece and it just kinda looks weird.

nemzone
10-08-2006, 06:28 AM
yeh i started the A and said that to myself, and was gonna fix em all up when i got the basic word done. and just never lol. the space in the M i didnt think was too bad, but each to there own lol

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/4749/img132fg3.jpg
done that in the past 2 hours...

Code
10-08-2006, 06:33 AM
Originally posted by Code+Oct 8 2006, 03:19 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Code @ Oct 8 2006, 03:19 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Code@Oct 7 2006, 06:04 PM
Testify- The problem with the throw that it is so danm messy, clean it up dont make it so squigly and work on the "k".

K, so i went with a simpiler fill this time, didnt cut the "C" in half, but unfortainetly i think i made the "N" to fat but whatever. And like always ignore tag :)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2338/scan0005so4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump&#33;, critz please :) [/b][/quote]
Critz please:)

krazzie_ammo
10-08-2006, 06:35 AM
right track wrong train&#33; thats from Fort Minor :D

nemzone
10-08-2006, 06:38 AM
:o ssshhhhhhhhhh :lol: yeh i no lol, but it suites me, im on the wright track doing art, but the wrong train cuz i do it on the streets.

aces
10-08-2006, 06:55 AM
That&#39;s good shit nemz. What kinda markers do you use for outlining?

nemzone
10-08-2006, 07:05 AM
red sharpie, green fineline pilot and for the tag its just a bingo marker

aces
10-08-2006, 07:09 AM
Thanks, I&#39;ve been having trouble finding good outlining markers so I&#39;ve just been asking around and makin a list and I&#39;m gunna go rack some of each and try em all out.

-AbSrD
10-08-2006, 07:12 AM
shittt rackin sharpies ur in the big time

main2kNup
10-08-2006, 07:26 AM
Yo, Please give me advice, yeah i know some of my stuff is art fag but it all good

http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121538430_86722_6.jpg
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121536443_47368_6.jpg
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121588434_24552_6.jpg
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121536445_62089_6.jpg

main2kNup
10-08-2006, 07:28 AM
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121588438_10032_6.jpg
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121536441_73200_6.jpg
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121536440_68619_6.jpg
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121588432_941_6.jpg

obseen
10-08-2006, 07:38 AM
characters are dope

aces
10-08-2006, 07:38 AM
Originally posted by &#045;AbSrD@Oct 8 2006, 08:12 AM
shittt rackin sharpies ur in the big time
You making fun of my ability to rack? A month ago I racked a 144 set of prismas, 20 cans and 30 paint pens from one store. All I bought was one can.

krazzie_ammo
10-08-2006, 08:22 AM
nice aces...theres only one place near me that sells markers - WHSmiths and they are full of cameras so sadly i have to buy mine LEGALLY **cries**

TricksForKids
10-08-2006, 09:20 AM
i buy all my shit, i feel way to guilty stealing , just dont have it in me.

afek
10-08-2006, 09:31 AM
when steal i suck at it and it takes me to long and sometimes i feel guilty


but dollar rama is the shit for stealing

Detoxication
10-08-2006, 09:32 AM
http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/7929/10070623051vd6.jpg
advice?

afek
10-08-2006, 09:35 AM
same addvice as in the picture forum

prank
10-08-2006, 09:50 AM
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4663/image87td7.jpg

WHAT NEXT?

aha
10-08-2006, 10:19 AM
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

main2kNup
10-08-2006, 10:25 AM
mmm aint to sur about this one, i dont really know what is wrong about it, just looks a bit weird :blink:

http://p6.piczo.com/img/i122113045_90380_6.jpg

seazr
10-08-2006, 10:31 AM
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7813/imga0768in2.jpg
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3086/imga0769ti5.jpg

Detoxication
10-08-2006, 10:35 AM
change ur name...



now

Sumoe
10-08-2006, 10:50 AM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/392/dsc0094cy2.jpg
crits?

aha
10-08-2006, 11:07 AM
.

jonowev
10-08-2006, 11:10 AM
yeah the O is real fucked, but the 3D is fine&#33; what the fuck are you on about aha?

aha
10-08-2006, 11:16 AM
.

jonowev
10-08-2006, 11:18 AM
its a wierd piece anyways, so im not surprised that the 3D is a little fucked

Sumoe
10-08-2006, 11:20 AM
thnx for crits. yeah i kinda rushed it thats why the letters are off but thnx anyways.

whoarethereal evil
10-08-2006, 11:22 AM
the 3d is all different its propeortions rnt great and the angles are off bt other thn tht not alot and in gernall thts very hot

WolfBurrns
10-08-2006, 11:23 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Oct 8 2006, 10:50 AM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/392/dsc0094cy2.jpg
crits?
The coloring is pretty good but that doesnt help out your letters. Get your structure down before worrying about the fill, becuase you have that down from what I can see. Also, dont put a halo above your tag..

jonowev
10-08-2006, 11:23 AM
yeah... i mean no beef - its a nice piece, but just spend a bit more time on the structure, and make sure it looks good in pencil before inking it :)

TricksForKids
10-08-2006, 11:24 AM
wor dsumoe, the E&#39;s pretty nice thou

crits?

says grade twelve, for a possible yearbook cover oage for the grade 12 section


http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/2061/gradetwelve2ve3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

WolfBurrns
10-08-2006, 11:26 AM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 8 2006, 11:23 AM
yeah... i mean no beef - its a nice piece, but just spend a bit more time on the structure, and make sure it looks good in pencil before inking it :)
You remind me of a leech...

jonowev
10-08-2006, 11:28 AM
yes... i love to suck blood from peoples ankles... :blink:

aha
10-08-2006, 11:30 AM
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

prank
10-08-2006, 12:25 PM
Originally posted by prank@Oct 8 2006, 09:50 AM
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4663/image87td7.jpg

WHAT NEXT?
bumb

TricksForKids
10-08-2006, 12:41 PM
k...this is to everyone, i give crits all the time, but you ahve to crit the people above you to post a picture of your own.

theres like 100 of us on this shit, and if well jut keep bumping our own shit without giving crits or feedback everyones gunna get angry, as i already am, yank waht the FUCK do you mean whats next?

figure it out, were not guiding you to getting a style, start playing with your fucking letters

fuck.

TricksForKids
10-08-2006, 12:42 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 8 2006, 11:24 AM
wor dsumoe, the E&#39;s pretty nice thou

crits?

says grade twelve, for a possible yearbook cover oage for the grade 12 section


http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/2061/gradetwelve2ve3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fucking bump :angry:

jonowev
10-08-2006, 12:43 PM
agreed tricks. i hate when people post their pics right under mine without critting :angry:
^^ the 3D is perfect... i dont like the E&#39;s and the A&#39;s
they have thick parts and thin parts, and it looks a little wierd

afek
10-08-2006, 12:44 PM
toy treads all chat


trix it looks good

317773
10-08-2006, 01:01 PM
dope shit trix

'' Ra '' 92
10-08-2006, 01:14 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Oct 8 2006, 10:50 AM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/392/dsc0094cy2.jpg
crits?
smart

aces
10-08-2006, 01:15 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Oct 8 2006, 01:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Oct 8 2006, 01:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Oct 8 2006, 11:24 AM
wor dsumoe, the E&#39;s pretty nice thou

crits?

says grade twelve, for a possible yearbook cover oage for the grade 12 section


http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/2061/gradetwelve2ve3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fucking bump :angry: [/b][/quote]
The R looks a little like a V but if you read it as a word you can easily distinguish it as an R. It&#39;s good other than that though.

aces
10-08-2006, 01:16 PM
Sumoe...Good coloring but the structure in it is horrible. I like the coloring though.

nemzone
10-08-2006, 01:50 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 8 2006, 05:41 PM
k...this is to everyone, i give crits all the time, but you ahve to crit the people above you to post a picture of your own.

theres like 100 of us on this shit, and if well jut keep bumping our own shit without giving crits or feedback everyones gunna get angry, as i already am, yank waht the FUCK do you mean whats next?

figure it out, were not guiding you to getting a style, start playing with your fucking letters

fuck.
well thank fuck im not the only one who thinks this?&#33; fuckin does my head in when someone posts a flick straight after u without sayin shit. and the word &#39;crits&#39; gets on my tits 2 lol.

tricks, when i first looked, i thought the top word was evade lol. but i can see it now and i like ur styles uniqueness&#33;

namesake
10-08-2006, 01:52 PM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/7769/sowl1he0.jpg

i just finished this a little while ago.

any crits?

TricksForKids
10-08-2006, 01:59 PM
damn nemz sorry for saying "Crit" so much, i ahte that word too now that i think about it

and soul its looking ok, chill out on the 3d and lose the lines inside the letters, or at least make them cleaner

Peace

namesake
10-08-2006, 02:09 PM
thanks Tricks&#33;

by the way, ur "grade twelve" letters are raw as hell&#33;

prank
10-08-2006, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by aces+Oct 8 2006, 01:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Oct 8 2006, 01:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 8 2006, 01:42 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Oct 8 2006, 11:24 AM
wor dsumoe, the E&#39;s pretty nice thou

crits?

says grade twelve, for a possible yearbook cover oage for the grade 12 section


http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/2061/gradetwelve2ve3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fucking bump :angry:
The R looks a little like a V but if you read it as a word you can easily distinguish it as an R. It&#39;s good other than that though. [/b][/quote]
i like it except for the interior of the a and the extension on the top of the d either than that its cool


think im starting to understand flow

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/6499/image88lp6.jpg

dajam410
10-08-2006, 03:07 PM
Any advice/critiques on my throw?

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/throwup.jpg

jonowev
10-08-2006, 03:09 PM
errrr. draw it?
and work on letter structure - thats quite appaling

dajam410
10-08-2006, 03:12 PM
I assume you&#39;re talking about mine. I did draw it, but i messed around in photoshop with it. Can you be more specific on what may be wrong with it? I&#39;m trying to keep it simple

jonowev
10-08-2006, 03:15 PM
make the letters much less rounded, take that big bulge off the K, and fill the shadow in properly. i think it would look better without the photoshop-ing. post the origional sketch if you would... :)

phish
10-08-2006, 04:45 PM
Originally posted by dajam410@Oct 8 2006, 03:07 PM
Any advice/critiques on my throw?

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/throwup.jpg
i like it, but thats just me

your handstyle&#39;s dope

dajam410
10-08-2006, 04:54 PM
Thanks alot guys. I should of mentioned what it said when i posted it originally, it says DJM, short for DAJAM.

Original sketch:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/scanner008.jpg

317773
10-08-2006, 05:02 PM
at first glance i thought it was ask

phish
10-08-2006, 05:06 PM
i thought i said ask aswell

terower
10-08-2006, 05:11 PM
Originally posted by terower@Oct 7 2006, 10:46 AM
JAY - looking good, that 3D&#39;s pretty well done. The Y is still a little off, though. I think it would look tight if you kept the tail of the y on the same level as the bottom of the J and A and not have it dip down like it is. Also, make sure all the lines stay at an even thickness.

KRIM - looking pretty good, that camo fill is pretty nice. My only suggestion is to bring the I over to the right a bit more, so it stands out better from the R and M.

Now my turn. I did this a week ago instead of paying attention in Calculus... I always feel like I draw my best when I&#39;m doodling in class. I&#39;m pretty proud of the police officer, but I also liked the old men on right, which came about by me trying to draw without lifting the pen from the paper.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo70.jpg

Comments? Opinions?
bump?

terower
10-08-2006, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by dajam410@Oct 8 2006, 04:54 PM
Thanks alot guys. I should of mentioned what it said when i posted it originally, it says DJM, short for DAJAM.

Original sketch:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/scanner008.jpg
Then you have poor letter structure or a case of the munchies (chomp chomp). That clearly says ask, you can&#39;t pass that S of for a J in normal society, and that first letter is obviously an A. The K is the only thing that MIGHT pass for anything but a K, and that takes some looking to see.

dajam410
10-08-2006, 06:08 PM
Alright I&#39;ll start working on it, but I still don&#39;t see how my M can pass as a K

Fosale!
10-08-2006, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by dajam410@Oct 8 2006, 06:08 PM
Alright I&#39;ll start working on it, but I still don&#39;t see how my M can pass as a K
you&#39;re dumb.

317773
10-08-2006, 06:24 PM
look at your "m"..how is that an "m"? on an "M" the line goes down the middle..thats not the middle. and im lost on how the "a" is a "d"

Torrent
10-08-2006, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by main2kNup@Oct 8 2006, 07:26 AM
Yo, Please give me advice, yeah i know some of my stuff is art fag but it all good

http://p6.piczo.com/img/i121538430_86722_6.jpg

http://www.ferris.edu/jimcrow/question/kkk.jpg

?

317773
10-08-2006, 06:38 PM
...wow.

phish
10-08-2006, 07:16 PM
Originally posted by dajam410@Oct 8 2006, 06:08 PM
Alright I&#39;ll start working on it, but I still don&#39;t see how my M can pass as a K
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/scanner008.jpg

novella
10-08-2006, 07:18 PM
holy fuck man.... hahaha


but ya, i was about to get DJM to not write ask too, haha. work on those letters. a lot

Fosale!
10-08-2006, 07:24 PM
Originally posted by terower@Oct 6 2006, 10:55 AM
Throw-up.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo60.jpg
Feedback/crits?
100% bite of Cror&#39;s
"bunny" S

myl
10-08-2006, 08:23 PM
Thanks alot guys. I should of mentioned what it said when i posted it originally, it says DJM, short for DAJAM.

Original sketch:

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/scanner008.jpg



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/scanner008.jpg

namesake
10-08-2006, 08:32 PM
:lol: ^^LMAO^^ :lol:

namesake
10-08-2006, 08:47 PM
Alright I&#39;ll start working on it, but I still don&#39;t see how my M can pass as a K
i dunno what u were thinking man, but that look exactly like ASK...



http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/433/0810062136fc9.jpg

This was just a quick throwie&#33;&#33; Any feedback??

SeeOne
10-08-2006, 08:56 PM
Originally posted by phish+Oct 8 2006, 07:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (phish @ Oct 8 2006, 07:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dajam410@Oct 8 2006, 06:08 PM
Alright I&#39;ll start working on it, but I still don&#39;t see how my M can pass as a K
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k263/seb070987/scanner008.jpg [/b][/quote]
Trim those two little things at the top of the "m". Replace em with something easier to read.

Apoc
10-08-2006, 09:26 PM
Originally posted by namesake@Oct 8 2006, 08:47 PM

Alright I&#39;ll start working on it, but I still don&#39;t see how my M can pass as a K
i dunno what u were thinking man, but that look exactly like ASK...



http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/433/0810062136fc9.jpg

This was just a quick throwie&#33;&#33; Any feedback??
it looks like its stickin out of the paper

bouncingsoul
10-08-2006, 10:40 PM
Yeah it does, it&#39;s not that great but it looks awesome.

317773
10-08-2006, 10:52 PM
that poppin out effect is ill

>SM!7K<
10-08-2006, 11:17 PM
Originally posted by >SM&#33;7K<@Oct 8 2006, 12:55 AM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n98/jovy414/10_07_06_1431.jpg

what should i do to it?
oh kay

so i got i should fix the C a lil more... not sure how, and what else should i do with it.....

fuck it should i paint it...

Fosale!
10-08-2006, 11:25 PM
i would personally make the round part of the D a little fatter but thats just me
and i would love to see that painted.

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 11:27 PM
Originally posted by Truth.@Oct 8 2006, 04:27 AM
crrits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/oct7peice.jpg
make the color more tight it looks squigly and all over the place other then that its not bad really simple which i like cause im old school as hell but you should develop diffrent letter styles...

Nosypainter
10-08-2006, 11:31 PM
Originally posted by Apoc+Oct 8 2006, 09:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Apoc @ Oct 8 2006, 09:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-namesake@Oct 8 2006, 08:47 PM

Alright I&#39;ll start working on it, but I still don&#39;t see how my M can pass as a K
i dunno what u were thinking man, but that look exactly like ASK...



http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/433/0810062136fc9.jpg

This was just a quick throwie&#33;&#33; Any feedback??
it looks like its stickin out of the paper [/b][/quote]
that is sick as hell and i love your handstyle alot... props man

terower
10-08-2006, 11:45 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Oct 8 2006, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Oct 8 2006, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-terower@Oct 6 2006, 10:55 AM
Throw-up.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo60.jpg
Feedback/crits?
100% bite of Cror&#39;s
"bunny" S [/b][/quote]
Could you post up some comparison pictures? I&#39;ve never seen/heard of CROR, but that is a style I have been working on for about two years. I could pull out some of the early incarnations of it if you want.

furious
10-09-2006, 12:06 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/slapz/kublock.jpg

lemme get some crits on this doofy lookin block buster&#33;

groTESQue
10-09-2006, 12:12 AM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l133/bombingingsci/Scan1.jpg
first post.tag needs work.crits?

TricksForKids
10-09-2006, 12:13 AM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9755/happy17thgd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

id comment on everyones shit but it seems like nosy&#39;s got it covered

NOMX
10-09-2006, 12:25 AM
thats an ugly T

TricksForKids
10-09-2006, 12:26 AM
fuck you its my birthday

myl
10-09-2006, 12:33 AM
happy birthday

tycoonin
10-09-2006, 12:35 AM
i persinaly like it&#33; and yes happy birthday as well

317773
10-09-2006, 12:38 AM
Happy Birthday. Cumpleaños felices. Joyeux Anniversaire. お誕生日おめでとう.

...yea

NOMX
10-09-2006, 12:49 AM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 9 2006, 12:26 AM
fuck you its my birthday
i dont care, i still think that T is ugly regardless of what day of the year it is.

d_g
10-09-2006, 12:54 AM
I don&#39;t like the &#39;T&#39; because it doesn&#39;t fit with the rest of your letters, like none of your other vertical lines have that squigly thing going on, and your &#39;M&#39; kinda looks like a &#39;D&#39; cause of the last line coming back round and touching the middle of the &#39;M&#39;.

All up it&#39;s good.

Fosale!
10-09-2006, 01:03 AM
Happy
Burfday
Tricks
for
Kids.&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

myl
10-09-2006, 01:11 AM
fosale
always
posts
like
this
w
t
f

furious
10-09-2006, 01:16 AM
Originally posted by furious@Oct 9 2006, 12:06 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/slapz/kublock.jpg

lemme get some crits on this doofy lookin block buster&#33;
happy birthday, but everyone just disregarded my request for crits

C-SONE
10-09-2006, 01:19 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture026.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture027.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture017.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture015.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture013.jpg
^^ my throwie
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture023.jpg
^^^ my new handstyle
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture021.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture020.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture019.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/Picture018.jpg
^^^^ 3d shit i was drawing in a hope of better learning on how to construct 3d stuff

d_g
10-09-2006, 01:24 AM
KU5, I like that style, I can see it progressing quite a bit. If I was you I would either do a &#39;5&#39; to go with it or write out &#39;five&#39; in the same style. Just seems a bit empty with just two letters.

furious
10-09-2006, 01:33 AM
thanks, yeah ive written out five and stuff too, ill post more when i geta digital camera rather than taking phone pics

c-sone that one piece that says "nada" or something looks hot

other than that im not really feeling any of it

C-SONE
10-09-2006, 01:37 AM
thanks but that nada one isnt actually my sketch if you will look at my post you will see that none of the 3d ones are mine

myl
10-09-2006, 01:40 AM
most of that 3d is pretty dope for being a toy

mr. sinister
10-09-2006, 01:43 AM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9941/img0255kj7.th.jpg (http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0255kj7.jpg)

heres some high sketches :P

myl
10-09-2006, 01:48 AM
yeah dont do that ever again

NOMX
10-09-2006, 01:57 AM
dont write sain

mr. sinister
10-09-2006, 02:17 AM
why, i know theres a sane and fuck you myl.

myl
10-09-2006, 02:32 AM
way to start beef on your second post ever.

---CRoR---
10-09-2006, 02:56 AM
lets bash him :ph34r:

Coze
10-09-2006, 06:09 AM
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n48/zephism/cozebomb.png

Lemme know what you think.

Sumoe
10-09-2006, 07:57 AM
it&#39;s nice...except for that extra piece on the "E".

T_R_O_N
10-09-2006, 08:27 AM
jesus this is like the second guy to write sane here, whats up with that?

aces
10-09-2006, 08:38 AM
Originally posted by furious@Oct 9 2006, 01:06 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/slapz/kublock.jpg

lemme get some crits on this doofy lookin block buster&#33;
I really like this style a lot. Would be sick painted.

phish
10-09-2006, 08:56 AM
Originally posted by T_R_O_N@Oct 9 2006, 08:27 AM
jesus this is like the second guy to write sane here, whats up with that?
actually his about the sixth in like a week and a half

T_R_O_N
10-09-2006, 09:06 AM
Originally posted by phish+Oct 9 2006, 08:56 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (phish @ Oct 9 2006, 08:56 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-T_R_O_N@Oct 9 2006, 08:27 AM
jesus this is like the second guy to write sane here, whats up with that?
actually his about the sixth in like a week and a half [/b][/quote]
this is sad, do they not know who the fuck Sane is?&#33; :blink:

mr. sinister
10-09-2006, 09:20 AM
i know who sane is and im not writign that. sain is different then sane, ai = i. i said in my first post that i know who he is. o and myl, if you post a negative comment, expect to get one back.

ras
10-09-2006, 09:26 AM
yeah your saying all the bullshit like i know who sane is and that but the way you pronounce sain sounds exactly the same as sane..... <_< :blink:

TricksForKids
10-09-2006, 09:32 AM
omgz0rz you guys should battle the real sane for his name cuz hes insane

TricksForKids
10-09-2006, 09:34 AM
or is it insain?

mr. sinister
10-09-2006, 09:40 AM
touche

jonowev
10-09-2006, 09:46 AM
fosale...
your signature amuses me. i wasnt saying &#39;you hardly ever post&#39; to you

what gives?&#33;? :blink:

imported_Bes_one
10-09-2006, 10:15 AM
comments or crits?

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/9065/pict0648qa6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ARMAwonR
10-09-2006, 10:20 AM
total lack of letter structure ... boxes are your friends&#33;

Fosale!
10-09-2006, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by jonowev@Oct 9 2006, 09:46 AM
fosale...
your signature amuses me. i wasnt saying &#39;you hardly ever post&#39; to you

what gives?&#33;? :blink:
i know you were saying it to bastardo.
thats why i put his above yours.

jonowev
10-09-2006, 10:40 AM
ooooh i see. my apologies for being a dumbass.
go back to basics, bes one

tried some basic extensions and 3D - n.b. they are two seperate letters
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/jonowev/blackandwhite3D.jpg

myl
10-09-2006, 11:05 AM
Originally posted by mr. sinister@Oct 9 2006, 09:20 AM
i know who sane is and im not writign that. sain is different then sane, ai = i. i said in my first post that i know who he is. o and myl, if you post a negative comment, expect to get one back.
http://www.picpop.com/gallery/albums/userpics/10530/E-thug.jpg

TricksForKids
10-09-2006, 11:35 AM
jay those letters are coming along nicely

somthings fucked with my scanner, but oh well, heres a taste till i get it fixed

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3918/bawkmangledri4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

terower
10-09-2006, 12:00 PM
TricksForKids: If that&#39;s hand drawn, I&#39;m really impressed with the cleanness. Props&#33;

Doodle in my blackbook that turned into something I liked:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo73.jpg

Close-up 1. (dunno why I made that C so gay...)
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo74.jpg

Close-up 2.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo75.jpg

aces
10-09-2006, 12:01 PM
I&#39;m really liking that tricks. The only thing that I would say was possibly connect the part of the K that isn&#39;t connected and the same with the B. I don&#39;t know but maybe.

neza
10-09-2006, 12:09 PM
crits please guys

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/7362/neza4ahy2.th.jpg (http://img76.imageshack.us/my.php?image=neza4ahy2.jpg)
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7340/neza1abr9.th.jpg (http://img236.imageshack.us/my.php?image=neza1abr9.jpg)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/899/neza2agk3.th.jpg (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=neza2agk3.jpg)

cheers

-neza

jonowev
10-09-2006, 12:30 PM
thanks for the crit tricks :)
and that is proper nice - colour it in

Slushi
10-09-2006, 01:33 PM
Trcik, your style is teh illz0r

Haz-E
10-09-2006, 02:13 PM
can some give me some tips on drawing please

alive
10-09-2006, 02:20 PM
draw something, and well help you from there.
and dont write HAZE, that name is taken by a big oldschool nyc writer

TricksForKids
10-09-2006, 04:02 PM
yall know...


http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/6784/bawkbrownvl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

WolfBurrns
10-09-2006, 04:05 PM
3d and forecfield are hot. But the brown is kinda.. not good. Just not my perference of color though. Good job.

SKA11289
10-09-2006, 04:10 PM
ya that 3-d is hott

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/6909/1000118ev7.th.jpg (http://img77.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1000118ev7.jpg)

a throw i came up with, it say SMS, Crits?

terower
10-09-2006, 04:13 PM
SKA - I don&#39;t see the M at all. That looks like a U.

TRICKS - Colors are dope. It&#39;s a nice scheme, and you pulled it off well.

SKA11289
10-09-2006, 04:33 PM
so define the M more????

terower
10-09-2006, 04:39 PM
Or actually make it an M. Could you explain how it&#39;s an M, or highlight the parts you consider to be an M? It&#39;d be easier to help you if I could see what you were going for.