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alive
10-17-2006, 05:17 PM
i like the blocks but move the T in. the SEF is dope but ive seen that same S and E b4 fom u. be careful the letters are shrinking. try to figure out a way for the letters to work together a bit more.


peace.

pez ss
10-17-2006, 05:18 PM
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/5993/mygraffitivw0.th.jpg (http://img108.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mygraffitivw0.jpg) comments plze pez piece

neza
10-17-2006, 05:22 PM
dude is that in your black book.....NO!

so therefore should it be here.... no!

post peices in the peices thread and SKETCHES in the black books thread

nemzone
10-17-2006, 05:26 PM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/1919/dsc01089et4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

wat i been workn on duno if im pleased with it. il finish it tomorra

myl
10-17-2006, 05:27 PM
yeah for real.

alive thanks man. i guess youre right about the SE lookin like another sketch i did, had a brain fart and couldnt come up with anything couldnt even come up with a decent T...

and i tried puttin the T closer to the F in the blocks and it looks much better

what would i do without you

edit: nemz thats pretty hot

Sumoe
10-17-2006, 05:29 PM
i really like your style nems, it has a distinct look to it, its mad ill, also your letters flow good in that one^ :D

aces
10-17-2006, 05:33 PM
nemz I'm lovin that shit. The E seems to take up a lot less horizontal space than the other letters but other than that good shit.


Originally posted by aces@Oct 17 2006, 04:40 PM
http://img281.imageshack.us/img281/6923/summer2006025hb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Self crit - I don't like the A and the P at all but any opinions?
Anything else?

Sumoe
10-17-2006, 05:42 PM
i like it except for the A, it looks awkward but other than that it looks pretty good to me

poopis
10-17-2006, 05:51 PM
Nemz fix the bottom-middle of your M it looks like an elephant nose and ...pez all of your shit looks so... not made of thinking its like you took a can and scribbled then filled, and you called it a peice :S.SKETCH SKETCH SKEEEEETCH...

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6966/0007lo1.th.jpg (http://img244.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0007lo1.jpg)

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6118/0008id1.th.jpg (http://img244.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0008id1.jpg)

just did these 2 i wanted to color but i only have red left others died>.> Crits on these 2 please.

MainEvent
10-17-2006, 05:54 PM
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poopis
10-17-2006, 05:57 PM
middle of the A needs to be put in place ,get rid of the "." fix your N ,and also pull your A to the right alittle or get rid of the little extention on the right side of your M.

MainEvent
10-17-2006, 06:03 PM
alright, thanks alot man.

.D.H.
10-17-2006, 06:14 PM
^^ i like the letter structure of the a. im just not diggin the sharp edges of the i. too pointy.

MainEvent
10-17-2006, 06:26 PM
anymore advice on that simple?

TricksForKids
10-17-2006, 06:27 PM
aces the A has a bit of a simple uero style, it would be ok if all the other letters were like that but theyre not, nice Z and S, the jaggedness in the round part of the P isnt really working for me but its still ok

poopsis, looking pretty good man, try to get a bit bigger picture, but the simple is looking decent, not feelin ght ecurve on the R and the e looks sloppy

your throw up is ok, but im not feelin the O try to make it a face or soemthing, its looking out of place

main even,t keep things a bit straighter, your I looks akward , same with your M, your A is half decent, and the N, but the A looks awkward without something in the middle

keep going simpler

Peace

WolfBurrns
10-17-2006, 06:27 PM
Mainevent- Work on your structure. Really work on it.

Sumoe
10-17-2006, 06:34 PM
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4740/dsc0034cn2.jpg this is for the battle figured i get some crits on it...

poopis
10-17-2006, 06:34 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 17 2006, 06:27 PM
aces the A has a bit of a simple uero style, it would be ok if all the other letters were like that but theyre not, nice Z and S, the jaggedness in the round part of the P isnt really working for me but its still ok

poopsis, looking pretty good man, try to get a bit bigger picture, but the simple is looking decent, not feelin ght ecurve on the R and the e looks sloppy

your throw up is ok, but im not feelin the O try to make it a face or soemthing, its looking out of place

main even,t keep things a bit straighter, your I looks akward , same with your M, your A is half decent, and the N, but the A looks awkward without something in the middle

keep going simpler

Peace
the E with the thingy ontop? and I have a char on my O but it looks to close to this other guys O cause he has 2 eyes and a tounge sticking out...which looks too close to his so i&#39;m not getting called on a bit...just gotta keep thinking >.< but thanks for your help yo ,appriciate it.

nerdx
10-17-2006, 06:35 PM
sumoe, the M doesnt really fit the style. its really straight.
but other than that, some of the extensions seem forced.

TricksForKids
10-17-2006, 06:36 PM
no i like the small thing on top of the e, its the bottom of it thats looking sloppy, and by the R i mean you see how its jagged on the right side? curve it, ittle look fresher

poopis
10-17-2006, 06:38 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Oct 17 2006, 06:34 PM
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4740/dsc0034cn2.jpg this is for the battle figured i get some crits on it...
you definitely need to fix that O and the left side of your U looks squiggly ,and your M looks to bunched up. Just clean it up mostly is what im saying all those extra jaged edged stuff can be without.

Edit: Aah tricks I see now with the R, thanks for the crits it helped a poop load.

MainEvent
10-17-2006, 06:40 PM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Oct 17 2006, 07:27 PM
Mainevent- Work on your structure. Really work on it.
lol, will do

Sumoe
10-17-2006, 06:42 PM
yea im not good at "O"s i never can seem to pull them off <_< ...thnx for the crits tho

aces
10-17-2006, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 17 2006, 07:27 PM
aces the A has a bit of a simple uero style, it would be ok if all the other letters were like that but theyre not, nice Z and S, the jaggedness in the round part of the P isnt really working for me but its still ok

poopsis, looking pretty good man, try to get a bit bigger picture, but the simple is looking decent, not feelin ght ecurve on the R and the e looks sloppy

your throw up is ok, but im not feelin the O try to make it a face or soemthing, its looking out of place

main even,t keep things a bit straighter, your I looks akward , same with your M, your A is half decent, and the N, but the A looks awkward without something in the middle

keep going simpler

Peace
Is that what you mean by change up the letters though? I was trying to take your advice while doing this.

craz-e one
10-17-2006, 06:43 PM
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/993/pv053ll8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
comments?

sumoe nice shit dude i woul agree just clean it up

Sumoe
10-17-2006, 06:45 PM
"Z" looks out of place.

nerdx
10-17-2006, 06:45 PM
this is a good start. just next time make sure all your lettes are the same size.
The Z is a bit short, and it would be cool if could continue the style onto the Z.
All of the letters fit the style but the Z.

poopis
10-17-2006, 06:48 PM
Damn craze looks pretty nice just make your Z bigger and your E alittle bigger, other than that I love your CRA.

TricksForKids
10-17-2006, 06:52 PM
Originally posted by aces+Oct 17 2006, 06:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Oct 17 2006, 06:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Oct 17 2006, 07:27 PM
aces the A has a bit of a simple uero style, it would be ok if all the other letters were like that but theyre not, nice Z and S, the jaggedness in the round part of the P isnt really working for me but its still ok

poopsis, looking pretty good man, try to get a bit bigger picture, but the simple is looking decent, not feelin ght ecurve on the R and the e looks sloppy

your throw up is ok, but im not feelin the O try to make it a face or soemthing, its looking out of place

main even,t keep things a bit straighter, your I looks akward , same with your M, your A is half decent, and the N, but the A looks awkward without something in the middle

keep going simpler

Peace
Is that what you mean by change up the letters though? I was trying to take your advice while doing this. [/b][/quote]
yeah man, now you should just try doing some extensions, some small bars, maybe ven..dun dun dun..and arrow&#33; :o lol, nah actually arrows wouldnt work with your letters, but some bars, or elongated arms of letters

d_g
10-17-2006, 06:54 PM
Some sketches I&#39;ve done recently, I finally feel like I&#39;m moving on from simples. Although I know people are gonna tell me to go back to them haha.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6311/sketch02mf7.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/128/sketch01en4.jpg
(ignore the 3d on the last one, I know it&#39;s terrible)

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9323/sketch03ec3.jpg

poopis
10-17-2006, 07:03 PM
D_G your S&#39;s could really use some work except in the 2nd picture the 2nd one down it looks very good , also extend the right side of your R make it a little longer other than that its very nice and simple.

Fosale!
10-17-2006, 07:03 PM
S&#39;s are hard.
Drast, you are moving along quite nicely

poopis
10-17-2006, 07:04 PM
Fosale&#33; what movie is that in your Avatar?(Sorry for being off topic)

Fosale!
10-17-2006, 07:11 PM
idk i stole it from some fag on 12oz

bouncingsoul
10-17-2006, 07:15 PM
So koper got me thinking of new names. And I found one I like a lot. I love the letter flow and the H wasn&#39;t doing it for me so I took it out... Twase

So a sketch from math and two handies

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0269.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0270.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0271.jpg

:edit: Fosale, that&#39;s (or used to be, I dunno) Lust&#39;s avatar on hundredproof... Surely Lust isn&#39;t a fag

aces
10-17-2006, 07:19 PM
The E looks really long and the top of the T on the left but not on the horizontal bar looks weird if you understood that at all. I&#39;m liking the first handy with the second ones line&#39;s at the bottom so its like a mix if that makes any sense.

bouncingsoul
10-17-2006, 07:21 PM
Sweet thanks

:edit: new page bump

So koper got me thinking of new names. And I found one I like a lot. I love the letter flow and the H wasn&#39;t doing it for me so I took it out... Twase

So a sketch from math and two handies

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0269.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0270.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0271.jpg

:edit: Fosale, that&#39;s (or used to be, I dunno) Lust&#39;s avatar on hundredproof... Surely Lust isn&#39;t a fag

pez ss
10-17-2006, 07:29 PM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/2151/pezredbbnt6.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezredbbnt6.jpg) this is not the best copy of my pice but tell me what u think and hel me out

d_g
10-17-2006, 08:06 PM
Cheers for the comments everyone.

I&#39;ve been a bit slack on the sketching front lately with work and shit, so I haven&#39;t been able to put a great deal of effort into it.

bouncingsoul, Twase sketch is real nice.

The first hand is the better one IMO, I think you need to make your &#39;w&#39; look a little more like a &#39;w&#39; and a little less like a backwards &#39;G&#39;. Other than that I like it.

myl
10-17-2006, 08:13 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Oct 17 2006, 07:29 PM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/2151/pezredbbnt6.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezredbbnt6.jpg) this is not the best copy of my pice but tell me what u think and hel me out
do simple straight letters

Detoxication
10-17-2006, 08:23 PM
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n204/dhertzz/101706_21201.jpg


i dono if i like it or not... crits?

SKA11289
10-17-2006, 08:26 PM
Get rid of the extension in the middle of the "o" its outta place imo. other than that im really liking that

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/4640/1000148fc4.th.jpg (http://img124.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1000148fc4.jpg)<<thumbnail

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/5594/1000151py6.th.jpg (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1000151py6.jpg)<<thumbnail

Crits???

Stevie
10-17-2006, 08:27 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7192/ync2yu6.jpg

Detoxication
10-17-2006, 08:28 PM
Originally posted by SKA11289@Oct 17 2006, 08:26 PM
Get rid of the extension in the middle of the "o" its outta place imo. other than that im really liking that


haha its a v, (sev1) but thx for the crits

SKA11289
10-17-2006, 08:30 PM
oh sorry for getting it mixed up man

SKA11289
10-17-2006, 08:33 PM
Stevie, nice blocks but if you keep all the letters the same hieght i think it would flow a lot nicer. but i like how you got the skyline for a background

Stevie
10-17-2006, 08:36 PM
yeah i know what you&#39;re saying, thanks for the critique

edit: did you draw that in your siggie? :huh:

afek
10-17-2006, 08:37 PM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/104_0171.jpg

ignore the boombox


wat do you think

DUF
10-17-2006, 08:40 PM
i like it dude. im liking the C and the N but something about the A just doesnt fit.

minesweep
10-17-2006, 08:43 PM
simples:
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/5637/dscn0288pg0.jpg

and throw/ sticker idea:
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/8466/dscn0286xy7.jpg

any crits?

SKA11289
10-17-2006, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by Stevie@Oct 17 2006, 08:36 PM

edit: did you draw that in your siggie? :huh:
Naa i didnt draw that, i can only wish though

SKA11289
10-17-2006, 08:49 PM
minesweep....keep all your letter the same size/ thickness, and the parts that stick on the "e" and "l" dont seem poportional to the rest of the sketch, and what exactly does the throw say??

Detoxication
10-17-2006, 08:49 PM
Originally posted by SKA11289+Oct 17 2006, 08:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SKA11289 @ Oct 17 2006, 08:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Stevie@Oct 17 2006, 08:36 PM

edit: did you draw that in your siggie? :huh:
Naa i didnt draw that, i can only wish though [/b][/quote]
one day :)

SKA11289
10-17-2006, 08:51 PM
yea that drawing has been one of my inspirations, so i look at it a lot hoping........................ soory for the off topic

d_g
10-17-2006, 08:57 PM
Afek, you do realise that can2 is a really famous writer?

http://www.stick-up-kids.de/

minesweep
10-17-2006, 09:09 PM
im sure it was for the can 2 battle

and ska, the throw says dv it&#39;s abit abstract i geuss

shifty!
10-17-2006, 09:13 PM
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/5029/sh059bc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

is this one a little better then the last?

ghozt
10-17-2006, 09:24 PM
minesweep-ok im really not good enuff to crit anyone on theyr stuff but just keep sketchin man trust me


http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/6963/scan0025yb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits??? disregard garfield and his teddy lol

clockwork
10-17-2006, 09:25 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/kottonmouthclockwork/212309.jpg

My first bubble set in my blackbook. Its easy simple two stone on both. Wanted to make it as easy as possible and easy to throw.

Crits?

:)

nemzone
10-17-2006, 09:30 PM
shifty i like it but try make the r and the p more bulged atthe bottom like the E.

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/20/dsc01090gf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

couldnt sleep n this was crying out to be dressed with color, so this is wat happened.

furious
10-17-2006, 09:33 PM
Originally posted by Stevie@Oct 17 2006, 08:27 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/7192/ync2yu6.jpg
lose the skyline. other than that, this is what i like to see.

enigmatic
10-17-2006, 09:35 PM
I bombed the cover of my book. On the bus to school.

"A Seperate Peice"

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7451/1001278fs4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

anyway critz? excuse the bumpyness and the unfinished ness.

minesweep
10-17-2006, 09:37 PM
go back to simples

nemzone
10-17-2006, 09:40 PM
u blatently never finished that on purpose&#33;&#33;&#33; who would do the black outline then start the purple one without finishing the black?

have some consideration for the post above fuck&#33; :angry:

d_g
10-17-2006, 09:42 PM
Originally posted by minesweep@Oct 18 2006, 02:09 PM
im sure it was for the can 2 battle
Sweet as, didn&#39;t know there was one.

enigmatic
10-17-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 17 2006, 09:40 PM
u blatently never finished that on purpose&#33;&#33;&#33; who would do the black outline then start the purple one without finishing the black?

have some consideration for the post above fuck&#33; :angry:
Like i said, pardon the "unfinishedness"

Obviously meaning... I DIDNT FINISH IT.

I didnt like the way it was turning out so i said screw it and just cut it off there...



anyway your peice looks okay, but to similar to all of your others... umm, and the shadows not lookin to good, just use a different shade of the same color.

ShIfTeD
10-17-2006, 09:46 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2038/can2yv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my enry for the can2 battle...i would try somthing crazy but everyone said i should try out simples so crits?

ghozt
10-17-2006, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by ghozt@Oct 17 2006, 09:24 PM
minesweep-ok im really not good enuff to crit anyone on theyr stuff but just keep sketchin man trust me


http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/6963/scan0025yb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits??? disregard garfield and his teddy lol
jhsdjhsjhsfdhjhfdsjh noone crit mine? dsjhdj

uhhh
10-17-2006, 09:58 PM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-057S.jpg

was gonna be for the toy battle. but i mised the poll..

kicklip9634
10-17-2006, 10:04 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/2i8k6y0.jpg
crits?

ShIfTeD
10-17-2006, 10:09 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Oct 17 2006, 09:46 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2038/can2yv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my enry for the can2 battle...i would try somthing crazy but everyone said i should try out simples so crits?
god damnit&#33; i hate this, when you ask for crits on yours then you get others asking for crits when they dont even critique yours

ghozt- work on your letter structure, quit biting characters, work on handstyle, color it

uhhh- 3D is off, work on fill tecnique, work on letter structure

kicklip9634- work on letter structure, work on your 3D, work on making it clean

kicklip9634
10-17-2006, 10:11 PM
thanks for the crits i like youres a lot besides the "n"

DUF
10-17-2006, 10:26 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5068.jpg

shifted- that shit is clean.
kickflip- im liking it but something about the hole in the R.

myl
10-17-2006, 10:31 PM
Originally posted by kicklip9634@Oct 17 2006, 10:04 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/2i8k6y0.jpg
crits?
the T looks like a Y

nerdx
10-17-2006, 10:44 PM
yo Shifted, Im sure Koper will be pleased

craz-e one
10-17-2006, 10:53 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7637/pv054sm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thx for the crits on the pages before this is what i came up with ur advice. Any comments before i color? Myl take of the add ons on the t and dont make it look so much like a y. Shifted its definantly better keep workin looks good.

nerdx
10-17-2006, 10:59 PM
what happend do the rest of them?

ShIfTeD
10-17-2006, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by nerdx@Oct 17 2006, 10:44 PM
yo Shifted, Im sure Koper will be pleased
lol, i hope so or the kid in the closet will get it&#33; :ph34r:

thanx craz-e-one

d_g
10-17-2006, 11:29 PM
Originally posted by d_g@Oct 18 2006, 11:54 AM
Some sketches I&#39;ve done recently, I finally feel like I&#39;m moving on from simples. Although I know people are gonna tell me to go back to them haha.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6311/sketch02mf7.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/128/sketch01en4.jpg
(ignore the 3d on the last one, I know it&#39;s terrible)

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9323/sketch03ec3.jpg
Buuuuuuuuuuump.

ShIfTeD
10-17-2006, 11:33 PM
not bad man, your photoshop work is awsome, and this is good too...ill get to this style sooner or later, but for now im goin back to basics

id like to see some 3D or a shadow and some color

keep up the work nukka ;)

d_g
10-17-2006, 11:47 PM
^^^ If that was to me, thanks heaps. It finally feels like I&#39;m getting somewhere with sketching, still have a long way to go but I feel like I&#39;m progressing.

What happened to your old style dude? That xioxide peice you did for the team was fucking hot shit, then it seemed like you kinda lost it for a while. Anyways keep up the good work dude.

myl
10-17-2006, 11:47 PM
glad ive gone back to simples...i really like this a lot and i think its got mad potential
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0112-2.jpg

ShIfTeD
10-17-2006, 11:51 PM
yeah man that was for you

yeah i thought it was hot shit too, but noone else did <_<

everyone told me i needed to stop using the shit i was doing and go back to simple letters and basics...so i did...i just wish this site had more street art in it, since thats what im made of :unsure:

DUF
10-18-2006, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by DUF@Oct 17 2006, 10:26 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5068.jpg


Bump for crits. im doing this style with a roller with the colors switched.

nerdx
10-18-2006, 12:06 AM
myl lookin good.


shifted check out stencilrevolution.com used to post there a while back.
and artfucks.org

ShIfTeD
10-18-2006, 12:07 AM
never heard of artfucks

but stencilrevolution just confuses the hell out of me lol

thanx man

tycoonin
10-18-2006, 12:08 AM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Oct 17 2006, 09:46 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2038/can2yv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my enry for the can2 battle...i would try somthing crazy but everyone said i should try out simples so crits?
nice handstyle

kore
10-18-2006, 12:12 AM
This is probably my first time sketchin anything besides throwies :o
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff011.jpg
Crits? For some reason I don&#39;t like the S I did. I can&#39;t quit put my finger on what it is, but it just doesn&#39;t look right to me.

ShIfTeD
10-18-2006, 12:15 AM
Originally posted by tycoonin+Oct 18 2006, 12:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tycoonin @ Oct 18 2006, 12:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Oct 17 2006, 09:46 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2038/can2yv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my enry for the can2 battle...i would try somthing crazy but everyone said i should try out simples so crits?
nice handstyle [/b][/quote]
thanx bro im good for 1 thing :D

i just went to the artfucks page...damn that shits confusing :unsure: i think ill stay here, and on graffiti spot

nerdx
10-18-2006, 12:16 AM
yeah its confusing at first just read around, youll get it.

FEN the HEN
10-18-2006, 12:16 AM
wow that handie is sick, and DUF good looking on that looks dope

ShIfTeD
10-18-2006, 12:19 AM
Originally posted by kore@Oct 18 2006, 12:12 AM
This is probably my first time sketchin anything besides throwies :o
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff011.jpg
Crits? For some reason I don&#39;t like the S I did. I can&#39;t quit put my finger on what it is, but it just doesn&#39;t look right to me.
you need to work on it being clean...the point of a pencil is so you can erase it...so do your lines them go over them with a marker and do your fill

work on your handy there bud...those letters together can look sick...it just takes time geting it down&#33; ;)

kore
10-18-2006, 12:23 AM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Oct 18 2006, 12:19 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Oct 18 2006, 12:19 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-kore@Oct 18 2006, 12:12 AM
This is probably my first time sketchin anything besides throwies :o
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff011.jpg
Crits? For some reason I don&#39;t like the S I did. I can&#39;t quit put my finger on what it is, but it just doesn&#39;t look right to me.
you need to work on it being clean...the point of a pencil is so you can erase it...so do your lines them go over them with a marker and do your fill

work on your handy there bud...those letters together can look sick...it just takes time geting it down&#33; ;) [/b][/quote]
I would&#39;ve given it a fill if I had markers. I keep forgettin to go to Michaels to pick up some prismas >.<

Yeah, I know my handstyle sucks. I&#39;m still workin on that.

DUF, thats dope man. I&#39;d love to see that shit done on some big ass wall B)

NoneOfThisIsReal
10-18-2006, 01:20 AM
I know I need to work on consistency (and probably letter form as well), but do you guys think this style is worth pursuing or should I work on something else?

The frilly-loops definitely need work.
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/9251/dscf1668ap6.th.jpg (http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/9251/dscf1668ap6.jpg)


I did a quick search to check if Sose was taken, and didn&#39;t find anything. If it is, please tell me.

ShIfTeD
10-18-2006, 01:22 AM
develop a new style, go with somthin else...not really feelin it

clockwork
10-18-2006, 01:56 AM
I like the curley one. I think that shit is pretty bomb lookin to me. Is it your first swirly one like it?

Here check mine out. Its my first finished bubble. 5 tone, Mint, Blue, Yellow, and Orange. And black.

You cant see some. Please crit and give me props for my first bub.

Thanks


http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/kottonmouthclockwork/014951.jpg

joke
10-18-2006, 03:07 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJbP2o0nWB4
i know this is totaly unrelated but its funny as hell

d_g
10-18-2006, 03:16 AM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Oct 18 2006, 04:51 PM
yeah man that was for you

yeah i thought it was hot shit too, but noone else did <_<

everyone told me i needed to stop using the shit i was doing and go back to simple letters and basics...so i did...i just wish this site had more street art in it, since thats what im made of :unsure:
If you can find it try and check out this documentry called &#39;Rash&#39;, it&#39;s about the Melbourne Australia street art scene, really good film.

joke
10-18-2006, 04:46 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnew4.jpg

summin new im tryin i kno it kinda shit but crits on possible colours n shit n wot u think of the hhandstyles?n 3d?

nemzone
10-18-2006, 07:06 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 18 2006, 02:30 AM
shifty i like it but try make the r and the p more bulged atthe bottom like the E.

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/20/dsc01090gf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

couldnt sleep n this was crying out to be dressed with color, so this is wat happened.
got no fuckin feedback so bump

joke, im not feelin the random blocks on the outside of ur piece. also the way u colourd the 3d kills ur letters

joke
10-18-2006, 07:10 AM
thanks for the crits n well i dnt think u need crits ure is fkin amazin but im no expert make the 3d a bit more clean


and what do you think i could do to change the 3d in future?

joke
10-18-2006, 07:34 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnew3-1.jpg

need some crits please ,like colours i could colour it , 3d styles like fill for the 3d?

Apoc
10-18-2006, 07:44 AM
nemz the archs under ur letters look wierd

myl
10-18-2006, 08:03 AM
nice coloring job nemz

joke that piece looks pretty good, kind of reminds me of bouncingsouls style

Apoc
10-18-2006, 09:02 AM
joke i wouldl love to see some of ur simples... it seems like your adding grooves, bumps and extensions where they dont belong... just a suggestion

joke
10-18-2006, 11:21 AM
thanks n i hate simples i know i sold starts simple and i have just like chalengin myself lol :P and thanks for the crits n i had a diferent thing for the s but just fuked it up

myl
10-18-2006, 11:34 AM
Originally posted by myl@Oct 17 2006, 11:47 PM
glad ive gone back to simples...i really like this a lot and i think its got mad potential
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0112-2.jpg
bump cause i rarely post sketches

terower
10-18-2006, 11:38 AM
I like the idea of having one font/script letter in the middle of your regular letters, but that F could stand to be more defined. Honestly, though, I don&#39;t really feel the ones that aren&#39;t the E. Too pointy for my tasts.

terower
10-18-2006, 11:41 AM
Originally posted by DUF+Oct 18 2006, 12:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DUF @ Oct 18 2006, 12:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DUF@Oct 17 2006, 10:26 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5068.jpg


Bump for crits. im doing this style with a roller with the colors switched. [/b][/quote]
3D is messed up. It doesnt come far enough out on the D or it comes too far on the U... your choice which. Also, I&#39;d brin that F to the right a bit more... it looks squished.

terower
10-18-2006, 11:42 AM
Originally posted by tycoonin+Oct 18 2006, 12:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tycoonin @ Oct 18 2006, 12:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Oct 17 2006, 09:46 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2038/can2yv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my enry for the can2 battle...i would try somthing crazy but everyone said i should try out simples so crits?
nice handstyle [/b][/quote]
I disagree. It looks sloppy/forced in my opinion... <_<

terower
10-18-2006, 11:44 AM
Originally posted by joke@Oct 18 2006, 04:46 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnew4.jpg

summin new im tryin i kno it kinda shit but crits on possible colours n shit n wot u think of the hhandstyles?n 3d?
Thats pretty good, dude. Two things though, 1. The extension on the S seems out of place when it&#39;s at that angle... it might look better coming down and touching the ground or bottom of hte page or something. 2. 3D is messed up on some of the outer blocks and it looks like you have a vanishing line instead of a vanishing point.

joke
10-18-2006, 12:29 PM
thnks man

ados
10-18-2006, 01:26 PM
quaaludes&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-2.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp062.jpg

near
10-18-2006, 01:53 PM
rustyasphuck

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/awdaw.png

aces
10-18-2006, 02:22 PM
Ados where you been man? Good to see you back. I don&#39;t know about that sketch though I just can&#39;t quite say what it is but there&#39;s something that I don&#39;t like about it.

Bartic
10-18-2006, 02:32 PM
Near: i&#39;m not feeling the extensions in the middle of the r and the top part of the a needs work, don&#39;t worry about coloring for now get ur structure down, 3d looks good tho

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/8703/suki21xl0.png
Any comments?

minesweep
10-18-2006, 02:47 PM
loose the arrows, other than it looks good

and throw/ sticker idea:
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/8466/dscn0286xy7.jpg

Mse
10-18-2006, 03:12 PM
Bartic - loose the arrows and make le letters the same size but yeah keep drawing


fuck it first time ive tried anything complicated in a while
so yeah meh bah shit sucks nuts balls because

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/196966725.jpg


http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/196966721.jpg


http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/196966719.jpg


http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/196966716.jpg


http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/196966712.jpg

A-chue!
10-18-2006, 03:26 PM
the tue moi thing is so dope. the complicated shiot isnt ass good i think that tue moi shit is complicated enough for now.

new burner maybe frieght worthy.
crits

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVNUEROP.jpg

furious
10-18-2006, 03:31 PM
sweet pix broze

Mx5
10-18-2006, 04:06 PM
I think we need a SuperToy Thread cause theirs some shit in here not even picture worthy...
Their are a lot of kids who put work into their sketches and it goes unseen compared to the paper scribblers.

nerdx
10-18-2006, 04:06 PM
hevn lookin good. not big on the fill. but thats fine.
get that pianted.

myl
10-18-2006, 04:23 PM
work in progress...yeah i know i skipped the E for now
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0115.jpg

dont remeber if i said it but your streaks are in the mail miser

nerdx
10-18-2006, 04:59 PM
haha, is that my que?
your marker is refilled to the brim and in a nice box. you will for sure know
when it shows up on your door step

Sumoe
10-18-2006, 05:19 PM
Originally posted by ados@Oct 18 2006, 01:26 PM
quaaludes&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-2.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp062.jpg
not really feelin the piece, nice dog tho :D

myl
10-18-2006, 05:25 PM
Originally posted by nerdx@Oct 18 2006, 04:59 PM
haha, is that my que?
your marker is refilled to the brim and in a nice box. you will for sure know
when it shows up on your door step
ha right on man

i made the box i sent your stuff in cause all my other ones were like as big as my head. its made outta duct tape and pieces of cardboard i cut up its such a piece of shit haha

gotta do whatcha gotta do :lol:

edit: almost finished...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0116-2.jpg

ghozt
10-18-2006, 05:36 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Oct 18 2006, 12:15 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Oct 18 2006, 12:15 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by tycoonin@Oct 18 2006, 12:08 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Oct 17 2006, 09:46 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2038/can2yv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my enry for the can2 battle...i would try somthing crazy but everyone said i should try out simples so crits?
nice handstyle
thanx bro im good for 1 thing :D

i just went to the artfucks page...damn that shits confusing :unsure: i think ill stay here, and on graffiti spot [/b][/quote]
im totally lovin tht shit :ph34r:

furious
10-18-2006, 05:37 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0116-2.jpg

sefto put some nice 3d on this itll look fresh

edit:bumpa carzzz

ghozt
10-18-2006, 05:44 PM
sefto- theres somthin aboout ur f tht i dont like

bouncingsoul
10-18-2006, 05:51 PM
Not a whole forum, but the SuperToy idea sounds good. Maybe pm cezr about it or something. He could make and sticky an Advanced Toys thread... But I dunno how it&#39;d work out... Maybe it would though

neza
10-18-2006, 05:56 PM
just some simples crits?

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/3356/simplesja5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i know the A is out on the middle one
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7042/simples2wq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cheers neza

bouncingsoul
10-18-2006, 06:02 PM
Keep doing those like on the second page and get your 3d better. Work on getting your shit cleaner too...

Also, anyone know if Swet is taken by anyone other than the one in Denmark? I wanted to write Swet2

kicklip9634
10-18-2006, 06:06 PM
duf i like it just cut off the 3d a little on the "U"

d_g
10-18-2006, 06:15 PM
Neza, your stuff isn&#39;t too bad, just keep practicing them.

Some more sketches by me

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8964/sketch04ns5.jpg

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/9805/sketch05mg5.jpg

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2917/sketch06jb9.jpg

-GEKS-
10-18-2006, 06:17 PM
i like em

pez ss
10-18-2006, 06:20 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/909/pezbbhalfandhalfkl2.th.jpg (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezbbhalfandhalfkl2.jpg) i thought thos was kinda good but give me tips pointers crits etc.

pez ss
10-18-2006, 06:22 PM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4889/pezwildstylebbyg6.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezwildstylebbyg6.jpg) let me no what u think.

poopis
10-18-2006, 06:24 PM
I REALLY like the 2nd and last ones D_g, keep that up man but on the 2nd one the top middle of the S looks kinda weird and your T on the 2nd pic.

Neza , your blocks are good ,but your throwy looks kinda floppy along with your A, and on the 2nd pic 3rd down ,your N needs to be defined more it doesnt shot some structure, and just move your E&#39;z from the N they look like there getting sucked in

And Myl don&#39;t curve your F at the top make it kinda sharp I dunno but to me it looks like a sideways M other that that the rest of your letters have nice proportion.

pez ss
10-18-2006, 06:24 PM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/8130/sixtysixwildstylesketchpm5.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sixtysixwildstylesketchpm5.jpg) i thoght this was one of my best skechts sugeestions

myl
10-18-2006, 06:27 PM
pez do simples

thanks for the crits guys...heres the finished product

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0117-1.jpg

pez ss
10-18-2006, 06:27 PM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/8899/sixtysixwsbbec6.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sixtysixwsbbec6.jpg) i also write sixty six crits plz

TricksForKids
10-18-2006, 06:29 PM
that S needs some serious work seft, the Es pretty nice, but lost all that random sqaury shit in the middle, tbhe F&#39;ss decent, and somethings missing on the T, 3-D&#39;s on points, maybe a little big though

peace

poopis
10-18-2006, 06:29 PM
ok Pez , DON&#39;T do arrows yet...don&#39;t even attempt wildstyles. Stick to block letters, your letters lack structure you really need to give them some proportions , like on your first one keep your letters the same width like your P is way wider than the E and your Z. Try going HERE (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335) this helped me and this should deffinantly help you seriously...go there, and don&#39;t triple post just put all 3 in 1 post ok?

furious
10-18-2006, 06:30 PM
Originally posted by poopis@Oct 18 2006, 06:24 PM
I REALLY like the 2nd and last ones D_g, keep that up man but on the 2nd one the top middle of the S looks kinda weird and your T on the 2nd pic.

Neza , your blocks are good ,but your throwy looks kinda floppy along with your A, and on the 2nd pic 3rd down ,your N needs to be defined more it doesnt shot some structure, and just move your E&#39;z from the N they look like there getting sucked in

And furious don&#39;t curve your F at the top make it kinda sharp I dunno but to me it looks like a sideways M other that that the rest of your letters have nice proportion.
thats not my sketch hah it&#39;s myl&#39;s. i was bumpin it cuz someone posted the same time as me as i was criticizing it

and i couldnt quote in a new post cuz bs is gay and doesnt let you post 2 posts within like 2 minutes in this thread or something

poopis
10-18-2006, 06:32 PM
O damn...I need to pay attention more sorry but I&#39;m kinda new to this forum stuff ,but anyways hopefuly Myl&#39;s knows who I directed it too sorry there :unsure:

freakshow
10-18-2006, 06:34 PM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1669/im008657wf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2089/im008658gl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/5840/im008659th5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

a few from this week and last. crits please

TricksForKids
10-18-2006, 06:36 PM
liking the last one as a simple euroish stile, especially the
R

like to see new kids come in here and actually take time on their sketches

keep it up

myl
10-18-2006, 06:48 PM
thanks for the input tricks...now that i look at that S is really wack

freakshow
10-18-2006, 06:53 PM
thanks man. i have been putting a shit load of time into getting better

im working on another sketch like the bottom one right now, so ill post it up when im done

Seti
10-18-2006, 06:56 PM
seti&#39;s notorious return...
sez WAE unreadable but watever
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image056.jpg
crits much welcome

myl
10-18-2006, 07:13 PM
such a dope style, wish i understood the concepts of it

TricksForKids
10-18-2006, 07:21 PM
not that unredable, im impressed

when you tell me what the hell it says its not that hard

i aint a fan of 3D shit, except if its executed damn damn well, and even then im a fan of more conventional shit

but you&#39;re coming along nicely

Peace

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/69/waeok5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

myl
10-18-2006, 07:22 PM
capped&#33;

sank one
10-18-2006, 07:40 PM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/7800/img0271dd9.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0271dd9.jpg)

something i did in chem, but i think im ready to paint it..

seti - dope style but i can read shit in 3d :( .

Fosale!
10-18-2006, 07:47 PM
Setiii,
your back&#33;
ive been wondering where you went.

d_g
10-18-2006, 07:49 PM
Sank, put some more style into your letters bro.

prank
10-18-2006, 07:52 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5946/image95iu4.jpg

crits pllzzzz


seti paint it&#33;

sank one
10-18-2006, 07:55 PM
yank thats fresh, but i think it looks wierd with the outline between the legs of the n

ghozt
10-18-2006, 08:07 PM
shifted-how can i improve my letter sctructure???

Soze One.
10-18-2006, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by myl@Oct 18 2006, 06:27 PM
pez do simples

thanks for the crits guys...heres the finished product

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0117-1.jpg
ill.

prank
10-18-2006, 08:39 PM
alot of ur extensions are ruinning it and i dont really like ur s

prank
10-18-2006, 08:41 PM
alot of ur extensions are ruinning it and i dont really like ur s

myl
10-18-2006, 09:10 PM
thanks soze

i redid the S and did a little more work on the T

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0118-2.jpg

Soze One.
10-18-2006, 09:12 PM
what colors you goin to use on it?

myl
10-18-2006, 09:15 PM
not sure...im gonna use photoshop to color it and find colors that look good though and then fill it in

corper17
10-18-2006, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by furious@Oct 18 2006, 05:37 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0116-2.jpg

sefto put some nice 3d on this itll look fresh

edit:bumpa carzzz
looks koo Yo MinuS da Eraser marks know wut i mean...

Learninitup
10-18-2006, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by freakshow@Oct 18 2006, 06:34 PM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1669/im008657wf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/2089/im008658gl2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/5840/im008659th5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

a few from this week and last. crits please
feelin that man nice

and myl, really happy to see u got rid of that stationary E. when i first saw your outline of all the other letters i was like tight&#33; but that E ruined it, lookin real tight now tho with that 3-d

myl
10-18-2006, 10:35 PM
thanks man

bouncingsoul
10-18-2006, 10:41 PM
Ey myl, go simpler. Your letter structure is decent but the addons ruin it. And make your 3d smaller. It&#39;s just too big haha.

...Anyone know if swet2 is taken?

d_g
10-18-2006, 10:44 PM
I&#39;ve never heard of that name, google didn&#39;t bring anything up at all.

bouncingsoul
10-18-2006, 10:55 PM
It did for me... Well I just searched "swet graffiti" and it&#39;s some dude who paints with Can2 so yeah pretty popular... But that&#39;s in Europe so yeah...

:edit:

New simple
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0272.jpg

d_g
10-18-2006, 11:01 PM
Oh, I typed &#39;swet2 graffiti&#39;.

bouncingsoul
10-18-2006, 11:05 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 18 2006, 10:55 PM
It did for me... Well I just searched "swet graffiti" and it&#39;s some dude who paints with Can2 so yeah pretty popular... But that&#39;s in Europe so yeah...

:edit:

New simple
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0272.jpg
bump for critz

...Thought so dg

myl
10-18-2006, 11:47 PM
interesting style...not sure if im likin the W, maybe tilt it more counterclockwise

alright heres that shitty wildstyle piece i tried, minus the shittiness plus a few added tweaks to some of the letters

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0120-1.jpg

SYK
10-18-2006, 11:48 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5445/picsgw9.jpg



crits plz

KYT
10-18-2006, 11:51 PM
Originally posted by SYK@Oct 18 2006, 11:48 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5445/picsgw9.jpg



crits plz
man you dumbass trick what the fuck you doin postin that toy ass shit on here

SYK
10-18-2006, 11:52 PM
man fuck u bitch u wanna start beef&#33;?

d_g
10-18-2006, 11:53 PM
Crit time haha.

Swet, &#39;W&#39; looks kinda like an &#39;h&#39; but tilted to the left a bit it would look more like a &#39;W&#39;. Your &#39;E&#39; kinda looks like a &#39;5&#39; with a weird extention at the bottom. With a little more definition that style will be come real nice.

Seft, looks a lot better like that, just watch bending the horizontal of the &#39;F&#39; like that, cause it will start to look like an &#39;E&#39; if you&#39;re not careful.

Syk, handstyle is pretty terrible, so is the throw, it&#39;s real generic, and the &#39;VAC&#39; thing looks like a young kids hand writing. Sorry to sound harsh, but keep practicing you&#39;ll get it.

KYT
10-19-2006, 12:08 AM
Originally posted by SYK@Oct 18 2006, 11:52 PM
man fuck u bitch u wanna start beef&#33;?
man you walk your bitch ass the 43 feet to my house and ill show you some real fuckin beef

kame2
10-19-2006, 12:09 AM
Critz please
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9112/can2dl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

turnturnturn
10-19-2006, 12:14 AM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1498.jpg


crits crits crits

EasyMac
10-19-2006, 12:28 AM
Alright, I know this isn&#39;t the right thread for this probobly, but anyone who cares that much is a bitch anyway, so basically i got writers block for the letter "F", and I need some semi skilled dude to quickly write a bunch of "f&#39;"s down on a paper for me if it&#39;s not too much trouble , potential thanks to whomever may do this for me should they in fact do it...yeah..so..critz for these last 2 homeboys?

EasyMac
10-19-2006, 12:31 AM
Not that I would bite those f&#39;s, it would just nudge me in the right direction

myl
10-19-2006, 12:35 AM
oh word...i like doin this

i gotcha on this one hold on a min while i sketch em up

edit: here they are...Fs are a tricky letter to pull off nicely...these are just some basic ones thatll hel to get your thoughts flowin

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0121.jpg

turnturnturn
10-19-2006, 12:46 AM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1498.jpg

CRITS please

ANY ADVICE ON learning SF STYLE FUNk funk letters in general

NOMX
10-19-2006, 12:52 AM
KAME DONT WRITE CAN 2&#33;&#33;

myl
10-19-2006, 12:53 AM
i bet its for the battle

EasyMac
10-19-2006, 01:00 AM
thanks myl that&#39;ll help for sure, appreciate it

NOMX
10-19-2006, 01:09 AM
Originally posted by myl@Oct 19 2006, 12:53 AM
i bet its for the battle
i hope so

kame2
10-19-2006, 01:11 AM
well gee, why else would i write it?

NOMX
10-19-2006, 01:23 AM
maybe u were a toy who didnt know shit about graff.

my mistake

NnameO
10-19-2006, 01:29 AM
yeah i posted the first two up not so long ago but never got crits.
MICE
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4976/mire001aq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
RONIK
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6642/mire004jz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

And a new one i did in class it was guna say OF MICE AND MEN but i didnt finish the MEN part so i left it to jus OF MICE AND.

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4297/mice004lt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tell me wat yall think.

NOMX
10-19-2006, 02:25 AM
shits dope

Mse
10-19-2006, 02:43 AM
handstyles are intresting, but im not digging the actual graffiti
number 2 is nice

ados
10-19-2006, 04:40 AM
Originally posted by ados@Oct 18 2006, 01:26 PM
quaaludes&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-2.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp062.jpg
crits...new style or what?

Apoc
10-19-2006, 09:01 AM
Originally posted by Mse@Oct 19 2006, 02:43 AM
handstyles are intresting, but im not digging the actual graffiti
number 2 is nice
your sig is frightening for some reason

bouncingsoul
10-19-2006, 09:09 AM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Oct 18 2006, 11:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Oct 18 2006, 11:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@Oct 18 2006, 10:55 PM
It did for me... Well I just searched "swet graffiti" and it&#39;s some dude who paints with Can2 so yeah pretty popular... But that&#39;s in Europe so yeah...

:edit:

New simple
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0272.jpg
bump for critz

...Thought so dg [/b][/quote]
bump for critz

Apoc
10-19-2006, 09:14 AM
take better flix lol

bouncingsoul
10-19-2006, 09:18 AM
That was last night haha. I think it&#39;s a decent flick though. Just the lighting but it still shows pretty much all there it to it

:edit: holy shit we have the same post count

aces
10-19-2006, 10:04 AM
Is that a new name? I can&#39;t quite make it out from what I can see it is SHET? Is that right? Oh well. I&#39;m going for a name change. SEAZ? I&#39;ll post pictures later.

Apoc
10-19-2006, 10:07 AM
my contrast isnt set right I guess.

kame2
10-19-2006, 10:32 AM
Originally posted by kame2@Oct 19 2006, 12:09 AM
Critz please
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9112/can2dl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for critz, p.s this is for the can2 sketch battle.

myl
10-19-2006, 10:40 AM
letters are decent
handstyles need some work
and that montana can...its ugly

turnturnturn
10-19-2006, 10:52 AM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1498.jpg


crits please

anything

Apoc
10-19-2006, 11:10 AM
i like it

_Pure
10-19-2006, 11:22 AM
Yea, i like it too, only the 3D is off, and the last &#39;e&#39; is too fat. But the style is nice ;)

And now that I&#39;m here:
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/4514/cantwouf9.jpg

Any crits ? Sorry for the bad pic :(

turnturnturn
10-19-2006, 11:25 AM
fresh. but the W is sort of doo doo

prank
10-19-2006, 11:40 AM
Originally posted by prank@Oct 18 2006, 07:52 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5946/image95iu4.jpg

crits pllzzzz


seti paint it&#33;
bomp for crits&#33;

Nyc Sno
10-19-2006, 11:48 AM
Originally posted by turnturnturn@Oct 19 2006, 10:52 AM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1498.jpg


crits please

anything
i really like but ur e is whats killing it i would try upper case e&#39;s if i was you

turnturnturn
10-19-2006, 12:27 PM
i&#39;m kinda rusty on the upercases though any ideas??

noalies
10-19-2006, 12:43 PM
aloe.

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9494/picture115jm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aces
10-19-2006, 01:08 PM
I don&#39;t know about that. The A doesn&#39;t look like an A and the L looks more like an I and the E is really weird.

Sumoe
10-19-2006, 01:34 PM
i got my S, M and O down in my throw anyone got any advice on Us and Es

freakshow
10-19-2006, 01:57 PM
something i did really quick last night .
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/6748/im008661np3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

oh and this one
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/3325/im008662mm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

poopis
10-19-2006, 02:05 PM
The First one is cleaner than your 2nd ,also tweak your M and make it straight just like you other letters. Cause the M looks lke its sinking down into the left.

ados
10-19-2006, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by ados+Oct 19 2006, 04:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ados @ Oct 19 2006, 04:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ados@Oct 18 2006, 01:26 PM
quaaludes&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-2.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp062.jpg
crits...new style or what? [/b][/quote]
is that bad? no crits at all?

Fluffy Bunnies
10-19-2006, 02:22 PM
Originally posted by ados+Oct 19 2006, 02:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ados @ Oct 19 2006, 02:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ados@Oct 19 2006, 04:40 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-ados@Oct 18 2006, 01:26 PM
quaaludes&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-2.jpg

crits...new style or what?
is that bad? no crits at all? [/b][/quote]
Yes that is bad...

Here&#39;s what I have to say about it "..." <--- a quote full of dots&#33;

krazzie_ammo
10-19-2006, 02:47 PM
hello everybody :D i havent drawn in ages, i dunno what to do so i have gone back to my old styles.
heres one page,
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/9998/31wk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
in know they are very basic, the one in the middle is my current style. crits please?

prank
10-19-2006, 03:28 PM
dude that is too simple

krazzie_ammo
10-19-2006, 03:34 PM
yeah, ive gone back to my old simple styleeees, im trying to improve but i cant think of anything :S

aces
10-19-2006, 03:50 PM
Do what you were working on before

MEBone
10-19-2006, 04:11 PM
for the battle, crits?

http://img280.imageshack.us/img280/7585/1128816863628380970mr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alera
10-19-2006, 04:15 PM
gess its ok dont like how the C is kinda off

nother hollow sketch i neeed markers bad :(
http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/3439/1019061711zf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz

uhhh
10-19-2006, 04:17 PM
alera-i really really like that l.. the other letters could learn from it. overall though.. its pretty good.

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-059S.jpg

crits?

poopis
10-19-2006, 04:28 PM
Originally posted by MEBone@Oct 19 2006, 04:11 PM
for the battle, crits?

http://img280.imageshack.us/img280/7585/1128816863628380970mr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Looks very nice n sipmle just bring your C down...it looks pretty off man.

and Uhhh does it say Ans?

Alera it looks ok just fix your R it looks like an A, and your E looks weird with the middle of it sloping down.

krazzie_ammo
10-19-2006, 04:29 PM
Originally posted by aces@Oct 19 2006, 03:50 PM
Do what you were working on before
th middle one is what i was working on...i dunno how to improve it though... :(

poopis
10-19-2006, 04:33 PM
all I can say is keep thinking or watch some graff movies to get an idea, I&#39;m not saying bite someone just get some general ideas of what you think would look good for your letters....kinda like me repeating myself.

uhhh
10-19-2006, 04:48 PM
Originally posted by poopis@Oct 19 2006, 04:28 PM
Uhhh does it say Ans?


nahhman. ahe, anyways crits besides that?

umop 3pisdn
10-19-2006, 05:46 PM
fuck off i changed my mind

corper17
10-19-2006, 05:58 PM
Originally posted by NnameO@Oct 19 2006, 01:29 AM
yeah i posted the first two up not so long ago but never got crits.
MICE
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4976/mire001aq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
RONIK
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/6642/mire004jz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

And a new one i did in class it was guna say OF MICE AND MEN but i didnt finish the MEN part so i left it to jus OF MICE AND.

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4297/mice004lt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tell me wat yall think.
lookin fresh yo keep it up........

┬░MARS┬░
10-19-2006, 06:20 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c225/ILLumin8-Inc/LastScan3.png

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c225/ILLumin8-Inc/LastScan2-1.png

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c225/ILLumin8-Inc/LastScan.png



i know i need alot of practice but i just started...heavy feed plzz...

The Fallen Slave of Atlantis
10-19-2006, 07:44 PM
try and go a bit simpler and loose the colour for now.. get letter structure down first.

turnturnturn
10-19-2006, 08:11 PM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1500-1.jpg


i tries to fix the e&#39;s

any crits?

changes?

TricksForKids
10-19-2006, 08:11 PM
didnt ahve anything to fill with, bored off my ass in school..freestlye


not bad sense, still a little bubbly for a simple though, keep it up

i aint too happy with it at all

but whatever a fliks a flik


"you can not"
"bitch i...."

"can two"

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4811/can2fc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

turnturnturn
10-19-2006, 08:19 PM
how does one fix "bubbly"

cyber one
10-19-2006, 08:37 PM
i hate it when people like you and ace get in on battles, makes me know im going to lose... haha.. good stuff though. i love how your style is progressing.

bouncingsoul
10-19-2006, 08:45 PM
The swirlies seem a bit random or forced but it looks good otherwise

DUF
10-19-2006, 08:58 PM
My cantwo entry.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5069.jpg
crits?

flclnaruto1213
10-19-2006, 09:11 PM
clean. im pretty sure there should be 3d onthe top of the 2

DUF
10-19-2006, 09:14 PM
yeah just noticed that thanks man.

ShIfTeD
10-19-2006, 09:17 PM
it reminds me of mine

novella
10-19-2006, 09:31 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 19 2006, 08:11 PM
didnt ahve anything to fill with, bored off my ass in school..freestlye


not bad sense, still a little bubbly for a simple though, keep it up

i aint too happy with it at all

but whatever a fliks a flik


"you can not"
"bitch i...."

"can two"

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4811/can2fc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like it tricks, but using the contrasting colors for your 3D and force makes it tougher to see your letters. if you could put an orange fill in there or something like that, it would make the peice stand out a lot more

SAGE2
10-19-2006, 09:38 PM
soo this was pretty much the first sketch i ever did, besides just fuckin around when i got bored in school..tell me what u guys think..



http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g244/DuTchTwiSter973/juiceee.jpg

novella
10-19-2006, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by SAGE2@Oct 19 2006, 09:38 PM
soo this was pretty much the first sketch i ever did, besides just fuckin around when i got bored in school..tell me what u guys think..



http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g244/DuTchTwiSter973/juiceee.jpg
thank you for keeping it simple. and not trying some crazy wildstyle off the bat

the E doesnt really fit, just because it sticks off the end kind of funny like, but i can read it all easily. which is a very good start. just draw a lot, try out different words and letters. try adding 3D onto the letters, etc

flclnaruto1213
10-19-2006, 09:55 PM
pic came out shitty idk why

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6301/wtffeo9.png (http://imageshack.us)

for another friend.

AteskOne
10-19-2006, 10:09 PM
^^^hot shit man...while we&#39;re posting work that we did for other people check out the peice i did for my girl.

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2928/scan0001da3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please

Stonk
10-19-2006, 10:23 PM
i like it excpet for the little red hair looking things coming out of the bottom

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cool014.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cool013.jpg

Fosale!
10-19-2006, 10:25 PM
Poed.
first throwie is fire.
flcnaruto.
its fire.
just dont like the H
ill see you tommorow.

AteskOne
10-19-2006, 10:30 PM
it aint hair...you ever see the pic of jesus with a heart on his chest n like a red aura coming off of it...well i didnt plan it like that but thas what it kinda came out lookin like lol.

novella
10-19-2006, 11:02 PM
poed - i like the second one better just because its colored better, but you really need to shift the P to the left. it covers the O way too much, looks like a J if i didnt know any better

heres a first sketch for the cantwo battle, im still tweaking it, hence why its still in pencil, just wanted to know what you guys thought though

Im hella stoked on the A

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/cantwo.jpg