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HoodRichSucka
10-19-2006, 11:28 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/SKATEEEEE.jpg



just messin round'....

-d

novella
10-19-2006, 11:35 PM
try not to post flicks without leavin crits first. thats just rude

hoodrich - that handy is pretty sick man, im not feeling the peice as much though. the K is defianately best, but it just doesnt flow together nicely. try and keep all the letters the same style (or 'font' if you will)

keep workin on 'er man

nuf.rd
10-19-2006, 11:55 PM
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031716.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031708.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031705.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/muze1lsk/S5031702.jpg

do these look ight for throw ups.

flclnaruto1213
10-20-2006, 12:00 AM
3rd pic is best

AoAssis
10-20-2006, 12:27 AM
Originally posted by Stonk@Oct 19 2006, 10:23 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cool014.jpg

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/3447/cool014sr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Makes it look alot better in my opinion.

novella
10-20-2006, 01:03 AM
just about finished the can two sketch, a little more tweaking, then color

crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/cantwo-1.jpg

JuicyJae
10-20-2006, 02:29 AM
it looks good, one things bothering me tho is the 3d but it could be just me tho

nemzone
10-20-2006, 06:34 AM
before u enter that, change these things.....
id take away the boxes around the piece.
the arrow going thru the N either take it out, or fatten it up. like make the first band and horizontal all a flowing line, then on the vertical bit, make that as fat as ur letters and the arrow proportionate with that.

i would do like 3d from the bottom or sumat to but thats up 2 uu...

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5044/dsc01096tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

done that for a battle and the fill nevr came out too well

TricksForKids
10-20-2006, 06:36 AM
nemz everythings pretty good, the fill might be a little much but..

dear lord look at that "toy battle" handstyle....come on man you can do bettern than that

nemzone
10-20-2006, 06:45 AM
lol yeh ur right, but handies aint my strongpoint so im not gonna fuss 2 much over it :P

joke
10-20-2006, 07:54 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnewerererer.jpg

summin i done quite quik yh i kno the char looks like the dud frm nightmare before x mas but hu cares

neway crits on evrything

uhhh
10-20-2006, 09:10 AM
Originally posted by uhhh@Oct 19 2006, 04:17 PM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-059S.jpg

crits?
bizzump.

whoarethereal evil
10-20-2006, 09:33 AM
wht is it

skan2
10-20-2006, 09:34 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3816/1000975lt2.jpg


the colors are ok, and i know im supposed to keep it simple but i wanted to see what i can do :D

nemzone
10-20-2006, 09:56 AM
never do that again! why do we have 2 stress DO SIMPLES over and over again?!?! fuck sakes! go simple you have no letter structure.. and i wouldnt worry bout colouring for a while.

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5044/dsc01096tp8.jpg
bump from last page

uhhh
10-20-2006, 10:08 AM
Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Oct 20 2006, 09:33 AM
wht is it
a piece, what else?

namesake
10-20-2006, 10:16 AM
Originally posted by skan2@Oct 20 2006, 09:34 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3816/1000975lt2.jpg


the colors are ok, and i know im supposed to keep it simple but i wanted to see what i can do :D
It looks like u had a pretty good idea about what u wanted to do but it just didnt turn out so well. No offense, but it looks like u were making it up as u went along. Definitely just try and keep it simple.

I do like the colors though. :D

obseen
10-20-2006, 10:30 AM
wow nemz, i love it
thats pretty damn sexy, im gonna have a difficult time beating that!

nemzone
10-20-2006, 12:25 PM
thnx lad! lol well itl give u something to try for :P

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4914/dsc01097sy0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

worth colouring?

Seka.
10-20-2006, 12:36 PM
couple sketches i did,

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/4739/pa200263al1.jpg

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1269/pa200264oa7.jpg
dont really like how the A came out in this one ^^

what do you think?

DareTwoCompare
10-20-2006, 12:42 PM
I give mad props to EPOD his sh** is ILL

obseen
10-20-2006, 12:48 PM
well emz i dont think i'll be beating you
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/4558/pict0001lw7.jpg

main2kNup
10-20-2006, 01:59 PM
Damn nemz, you could easily go into the other blackbook thread now, seems like we are all learning from you :rolleyes: love ya stuff though. colouring on WMD one is nice

http://p6.piczo.com/img/i139275683_8317_6.jpg

CRITS please dont seem to ever get any (messed my tag up my badddd lol)

nemzone
10-20-2006, 02:18 PM
naw i couldnt lol, see the work of ppl like lust n shit, nowhere near up 2 par yet! but thanx, and it said WILD lol...

if you made the blocks more realistic, like so they look proper cubes, it would be pretty cool. also colour it. i like the woman 2 lol. not in2 the handy fo

terower
10-20-2006, 02:18 PM
What is that a picture from? I've seen that same pose/photo before, but I can't remember where from. As far as critz go, work on your handstyle.

terower
10-20-2006, 02:21 PM
Calculus isn't as interesting the second time around.... But it's good for creativity.
I've been working on getting some emotions down with my character, and I think I've been doing a pretty good job so far. I especially like "Sad Afronian", "Beat-up Afronian", and "Confused Afronian".
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo81.jpg
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo82-1.jpg

Tell me what you think.

main2kNup
10-20-2006, 02:36 PM
i bite it off the dvd case off the film "the secritary"

AteskOne
10-20-2006, 02:40 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Oct 19 2006, 10:09 PM
^^^hot shit man...while we're posting work that we did for other people check out the peice i did for my girl.

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2928/scan0001da3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please
bump for crits


edit....main2knup, dont bite. gives you no chance of improving.

terower
10-20-2006, 02:47 PM
Nah, he didn't really bite... He just used the pose as a basis for his drawing, I think.

aces
10-20-2006, 02:57 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 20 2006, 01:25 PM
thnx lad! lol well itl give u something to try for :P

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4914/dsc01097sy0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

worth colouring?
Definately worth coloring. That shit will be ill. Whats with those characs by the way. I've seen so many people do them and I don't understand.

main2kNup
10-20-2006, 03:01 PM
it was for an art lesson, but i got told off for drawing it :angry: so i just added the name

littlerocky
10-20-2006, 03:23 PM
nemz im feelin that super dope get some color in it...
couple train pads i did cuz i was bored..also dont kno if train pads are considered wack but if they are my bad adn too late cuz i alreayd did um ne way lol..give me some imput
on the peice and not the train itself please lol

http://img415.imageshack.us/img415/28/imgp0549tm0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/7712/imgp0550um3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits and comments please thx

pez ss
10-20-2006, 03:42 PM
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/1975/sixtysixwsbbko8.th.jpg (http://img320.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sixtysixwsbbko8.jpg) help me with my wild style

pez ss
10-20-2006, 03:47 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Oct 20 2006, 09:34 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3816/1000975lt2.jpg


the colors are ok, and i know im supposed to keep it simple but i wanted to see what i can do :D
dude u need to work on ur lettering its not to bad the s is good but the k loks like a x and the a is weird try doin the same thing again to im prove it

littlerocky
10-20-2006, 03:48 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Oct 20 2006, 03:42 PM
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/1975/sixtysixwsbbko8.th.jpg (http://img320.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sixtysixwsbbko8.jpg) help me with my wild style
dont od wildstyle go to simples then develop your leters SLOWly making small changes in the letters then eventually go to extensions but keep the extensions out now and just delvelope ur leters from a simple form

nemzone
10-20-2006, 04:06 PM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4130/dsc01099lg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

colours are a bit wank lol but yeh i like it....

FAB
10-20-2006, 04:47 PM
Theres a NEMS in ma city i think he got some dope ish.
and i also know this isnt painted thread either i just thougt it would be interesting to show.

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1663/nems003kh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and thanks to all the people who gave me positive crits on ma last post.

aces
10-20-2006, 04:49 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 20 2006, 05:06 PM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4130/dsc01099lg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

colours are a bit wank lol but yeh i like it....
That's dope there nemz. Lovin it. Still what's with those characters. I don't get it.

nemzone
10-20-2006, 04:54 PM
wikipedia 'vaughn bode'

Sumoe
10-20-2006, 04:59 PM
that piece is fire, really dope nemz

myl
10-20-2006, 05:27 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Oct 20 2006, 03:42 PM
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/1975/sixtysixwsbbko8.th.jpg (http://img320.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sixtysixwsbbko8.jpg) help me with my wild style
with every flick you post everyone says to do simples

ever think of listening? if you cant do simples then how do you expect to construct a wildstyle?

sank one
10-20-2006, 05:36 PM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9481/img0275td6.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0275td6.jpg)

nemz - dope shit, but like you said the colors are a bit lackin.

what do you guys think of this?

myl
10-20-2006, 05:37 PM
dont have both sides of the A stickin out like that

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 06:54 PM
Two new handies for my new name swet2... Dunno which one is better

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0273.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0274.jpg

nemzone
10-20-2006, 06:59 PM
u wont no til u try wiv a phat marker ;)

Slushi
10-20-2006, 07:00 PM
put your letters next to each other. And lose the sciblyness on the underline.
Make it just go right under your name.

uhhh
10-20-2006, 09:03 PM
for the battle. just need to findsome markers..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-060S.jpg

AteskOne
10-20-2006, 09:05 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 20 2006, 06:59 PM
u wont no til u try wiv a phat marker ;)
u dont need a fat marker just to make a tag look good. a good tag looks good no matter what you write it with. a broader tip may enhance the look of your tag but it doesnt change your skill...bouncing soul, i'd rock the second one. the first one the letters are a little to spread apart and dont flow well. also i'd consider changing your e.

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 09:12 PM
Yeah, I was just mesing around with that E... What do you think about the quotes though? I mean the quotes on the right... Should I have em like in the 2nd or not like in the 1st?

pez ss
10-20-2006, 09:20 PM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7746/pezbbbubblestylebombhx1.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezbbbubblestylebombhx1.jpg) http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2865/pezbbbombsiq0.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezbbbombsiq0.jpg) http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2993/pezblackbookfattoskinybombwz3.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezblackbookfattoskinybombwz3.jpg) every one told me to go simpler so i went simpler any way i think the last one is the best but tell me what u think and help me with it comments and helpful crittz

enigmatic
10-20-2006, 09:30 PM
annd its already been pointed out.

myl
10-20-2006, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Oct 20 2006, 09:20 PM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7746/pezbbbubblestylebombhx1.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezbbbubblestylebombhx1.jpg) http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2865/pezbbbombsiq0.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezbbbombsiq0.jpg) http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2993/pezblackbookfattoskinybombwz3.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pezblackbookfattoskinybombwz3.jpg) every one told me to go simpler so i went simpler any way i think the last one is the best but tell me what u think and help me with it comments and helpful crittz
wow do you not know what simples are

im talkin this kind of shit:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0123.jpg

-testify-
10-20-2006, 09:40 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6835/tagac0.png
^pask

mine new throwie trying something new out, and pez take all that crap of your bubble like those upper parts on the p it looks stupid.. and yea do simples

Fosale!
10-20-2006, 09:42 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Oct 20 2006, 09:03 PM
for the battle. just need to findsome markers..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-060S.jpg
i love the A and N but hate the C
and the TWO is hot.

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 09:43 PM
...You should go back to simples too

:edit: Damn lookin like a fool... That was to pask

-testify-
10-20-2006, 09:44 PM
that isnt simple?

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 09:56 PM
It is, but the letters aren't too great, which is a sign that you in fact didn't progress with simples correctly or not at all. Not trying to be mean, just saying

:edit: fuckin new page


Two new handies for my new name swet2... Dunno which one is better

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0273.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0274.jpg

-testify-
10-20-2006, 09:57 PM
ok would it be better if i didnt have the pointy ends or is it complete shit

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 09:59 PM
Yeah, your P is just beyond help... Just start over with blocks and bubbles. Ffocus on getting your proportion and stuff right

-testify-
10-20-2006, 10:02 PM
k thanks

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 10:06 PM
Np, I'd like to see some of your simples.

littlerocky
10-20-2006, 10:07 PM
Originally posted by littlerocky@Oct 20 2006, 03:23 PM


nemz im feelin that super dope get some color in it...
couple train pads i did cuz i was bored..also dont kno if train pads are considered wack but if they are my bad adn too late cuz i alreayd did um ne way lol..give me some imput
on the peice and not the train itself please lol
http://img415.imageshack.us/img415/28/imgp0549tm0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/7712/imgp0550um3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits and comments please thx
cani get some crits please i got blown off completeyl last time lol

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 10:11 PM
I see MU_R... Make your letters more like... letters

littlerocky
10-20-2006, 10:13 PM
my bad mugs....u cant read my throw?..o shit lol

bouncingsoul
10-20-2006, 10:34 PM
Yeah, your letters need more definition... Your G looks like a blob and your S looks like a bad lowercase R

d_g
10-21-2006, 02:57 AM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9581/sketch07yv2.jpg

Meh.

acidconceptone
10-21-2006, 03:01 AM
how long do you usually spend when you are sketching like.... a piece? what would be the most/least time you would spend on something like that... i thought spending 8 consecutive hours on a little sketch was a pretty long time but im sure some of you other guys probibally spend alot longer than just 8 hours. Peace.

novella
10-21-2006, 03:06 AM
8 hours is a loong time buddy, but dont worry too much. it shows you have the dedication, and thats solid.

im finding as i sketch more and more my stuff is not only improving, but i can sketch it out faster. initial sketch can take 30 mins to 2 hours, depending on how im feelin, then colouring can depend. maybe another hour?

thats just me though

joke
10-21-2006, 03:19 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnewerererer.jpg

summin i done quite quik yeah i know the char looks like the dude from nightmare before x mas but who cares need som crits please!!!

kaweJFK
10-21-2006, 04:04 AM
^ mayby go a little bit simpler, but the overall shape of the letters look great, and that character!!

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061021/01/9/d/6/9d665f81ba99ff46a9c46cabc0cc350c200610210_full.jpg

comments please??! + tips

poepomhoog1
10-21-2006, 08:25 AM
dope kawe specially the W

Joke..nice char, I think youre 3d is off in a few places though...and the letter look dope but I think they would look better if they where a lil more compact instead off streched out..

BSK
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5420/nieuweml1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz??

jonowev
10-21-2006, 08:40 AM
Originally posted by kaweJFK@Oct 21 2006, 09:04 AM
^ mayby go a little bit simpler, but the overall shape of the letters look great, and that character!!

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061021/01/9/d/6/9d665f81ba99ff46a9c46cabc0cc350c200610210_full.jpg

comments please??! + tips
love it. not keen on the K tho. the left hand side seems too small - needs to extend down more

beastie_1989
10-21-2006, 10:24 AM
poepomhoog1, you should do ore simple stuff first, then go on to more complicated stuff.

http://img321.imageshack.us/img321/1882/pictures018bq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on mine?

Apoc
10-21-2006, 10:46 AM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 20 2006, 09:56 PM
It is, but the letters aren't too great, which is a sign that you in fact didn't progress with simples correctly or not at all. Not trying to be mean, just saying

:edit: fuckin new page


Two new handies for my new name swet2... Dunno which one is better

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0273.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0274.jpg
toy tags thread

poepomhoog1
10-21-2006, 10:53 AM
thanx for the critz beastie..
youre first 3 letters are pretty dope..not really feelin the n

beastie_1989
10-21-2006, 10:58 AM
yeah me neither, the e isent that great too

terower
10-21-2006, 11:21 AM
Originally posted by joke@Oct 21 2006, 03:19 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnewerererer.jpg

summin i done quite quik yeah i know the char looks like the dude from nightmare before x mas but who cares need som crits please!!!
3D is most definitely off in several places. If you are gonna do vanishing point in the middle 3D, i suggest practicing on simpler letters first. Also, picture it as all going to ONE point (i.e. the middle of your R) and draw ALL lines to that. But, the letters are pretty decent for being more complex.

terower
10-21-2006, 11:22 AM
Originally posted by kaweJFK@Oct 21 2006, 04:04 AM
^ mayby go a little bit simpler, but the overall shape of the letters look great, and that character!!

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061021/01/9/d/6/9d665f81ba99ff46a9c46cabc0cc350c200610210_full.jpg

comments please??! + tips
That's real hot. Great job.

kicklip9634
10-21-2006, 11:35 AM
http://i11.tinypic.com/2wefngm.jpg
critz

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 11:59 AM
Yeah Apoc, I posted it there too, but this thread gets more responses so yeah

trac
10-21-2006, 12:08 PM
the outland is pretty crappy and why use two different pens for the main letters? the letters are to far away from eachother. it just looks odd and crappy. it bein scrunched up doesnt help either

trac
10-21-2006, 12:12 PM
outline

uhhh
10-21-2006, 12:23 PM
because theres defienetly not an edit button..

P!P
10-21-2006, 12:31 PM
can someone tell me what i should use to color in my sketches with?
...Gott some good ones then when i go to color them they fucking get ruined...
Markers suck ass on paper, and I dont know what else i need........
please help anyone!

-testify-
10-21-2006, 12:40 PM
sharpies prismas? you should post it though to see if it's even worth coloring ;)

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 12:42 PM
2 letter throwie (sw with a swooshie thing) and my updated handie

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0275.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0276.jpg

terower
10-21-2006, 12:45 PM
I don't get that extra "swooshie thing" on the throwie...

aces
10-21-2006, 12:51 PM
Loving those bouncingsoul! The handy is awesome.

http://img483.imageshack.us/img483/1152/1133582973644785810og1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
SEA. Couldn't fit the Z in there.
Trying to spice it up a bit. What do ya think?
For a new name SEAZ.

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 12:55 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 21 2006, 12:42 PM
2 letter throwie (sw with a swooshie thing) and my updated handie

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0275.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0276.jpg
bump for a new page

And aces, I can barely see it but from what I can see it looks sick. I love that A but it seems like you had more than enough space to fit in a Z...?

aces
10-21-2006, 01:00 PM
Yea it's phone picture so it is shitty quality but if I put the Z in it would be a little squished. I'll see if I can get it in but I don't know. I'll color it and get a good pic later tonight.

With that throwie I don't know about the top thing that is massive but other than that it is looking dope. I say if you stick with that name, go paint that.

Soze One.
10-21-2006, 01:02 PM
i like that aces.
bouncing soul i like the swet two
crits?
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1277.jpg

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 01:02 PM
Yeah I'm prolly stickin' with this name... Also my friend told me he's interested in starting graffiti like last week so expect some of his stuff on here too since I don't think he has a camera

:edit: Soze, it'd look sweet if you went simpler. Just letters and 3d man

Soze One.
10-21-2006, 01:08 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 21 2006, 01:02 PM
Yeah I'm prolly stickin' with this name... Also my friend told me he's interested in starting graffiti like last week so expect some of his stuff on here too since I don't think he has a camera

:edit: Soze, it'd look sweet if you went simpler. Just letters and 3d man
thanks
i just got bored today.

namesake
10-21-2006, 01:12 PM
Soze, i really like that O and the E looks pretty good too. But im just not feelin the S and the Z. u dont necessarily have to keep it simple cuz thats pretty simple already, but maybe u should change that loop thing on the top part of the Z. :D

...just a thought :lol:

novella
10-21-2006, 01:14 PM
soze: take off the double dash with the arrow extension thing, on the S and the E. just looks really toy, along with the extension on the top of the Z (where the Z bends up and comes out the top)

otherwise thats solid, big improvement over your bubble letter type things. keep at it dude

HA!KU
10-21-2006, 01:17 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_0374.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_0375.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_0383.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m303/muffinbut/IMG_0382.jpg

really simple, im just getting started. any criticism or advice or anything helps

P!P
10-21-2006, 01:18 PM
here Testify...see if its worth it...only took 15 minutes, i can handle the crit. :blink:

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00894.jpg[COLOR=blue]
sorry for the darkness...forogt to turn the light on...

Soze One.
10-21-2006, 01:21 PM
go simple.

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 01:24 PM
Haiku, your stuff is a perfect example of what most people on here should be doing. But why'd you write Jar5 in the last one?

HA!KU
10-21-2006, 01:27 PM
becauuuse jar5 is my boyfriend and he's basically gotten me started, coaching me an stuff

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 01:28 PM
Wait really? No wonder your stuff is good simples.

EasyMac
10-21-2006, 01:32 PM
And no offense Pip, but yours is a perfect example of what not to do, vomiting your random ideas onto paper, look to the great haiku for guidance

taxus
10-21-2006, 01:36 PM
That pip's proper fresh....
Do a character holding a some canz of paint.....
Although its abit readable, graffin isent about makein your graff readable.....
Make it so hard to read you cant read it your self.
Peace tagga ragga man.
keep hittin dem streets all da time.

P!P
10-21-2006, 01:42 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00897.jpg

better?? :blink:

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 01:44 PM
A little, but still not good. Do stuff like haiku

Fixion
10-21-2006, 01:44 PM
Uhmm O.o

HA!KU
10-21-2006, 02:00 PM
And no offense Pip, but yours is a perfect example of what not to do, vomiting your random ideas onto paper, look to the great haiku for guidance

aww

P!P
10-21-2006, 02:06 PM
its ok Ha!ku...I liked yours anyways, just i dont like the wholee space between all the letters thing.

...I really only want to know how to color in on paper...
what materials...cause my markers will fuck up any sketch i have.. :blink:

P!P
10-21-2006, 02:08 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00898.jpg
better still YET?

Fixion
10-21-2006, 02:10 PM
Originally posted by P!P@Oct 21 2006, 02:08 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00898.jpg
better still YET?
P!P start with block letters first. Simple simple block letters. No curves, no bubbles

fost
10-21-2006, 02:12 PM
make all your letters the same size and thickness and dont let them droop down like that

Soze One.
10-21-2006, 02:25 PM
here ya go
imma redo it
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1278.jpg

P!P
10-21-2006, 02:26 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00899.jpg :blink:

Soze One.
10-21-2006, 02:29 PM
dude get a ruler make all the letters square and the same size

myl
10-21-2006, 02:29 PM
no you dont fucking undestand kid

DO IT LIKE THIS:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0123.jpg

same size, same width, same everything

except yours will say PIP

trac
10-21-2006, 02:46 PM
any crits
http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/3614/dsc00096dv9.jpg

myl
10-21-2006, 02:48 PM
on that part of the T that overlaps the R, dont do the 3d on that part cause its covering part of the R

trac
10-21-2006, 02:52 PM
ill do that next time

skan2
10-21-2006, 02:53 PM
http://img322.imageshack.us/img322/6900/1000985iq5.jpg its a real quick sketch but is this simple enough :unsure:

trac
10-21-2006, 02:54 PM
pip wat age are you man?

myl
10-21-2006, 03:06 PM
im guessing 11

trac
10-21-2006, 03:09 PM
if hes older than that he should give up hes fuckin hopless i know 5 year olds better than that

Soze One.
10-21-2006, 03:11 PM
dont make me post up some of my lil brothers work haha

*tark*
10-21-2006, 03:17 PM
here my first ''sketch'' :unsure:


http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p258/tarkone/21oct003.jpg

crits plz

trac
10-21-2006, 03:19 PM
well its better than pips, try and keep the letters the same hight and even the 3d out

P!P
10-21-2006, 03:20 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00901.jpg :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: :blink:

myl
10-21-2006, 03:21 PM
so much for listening to my advice pip

FEN the HEN
10-21-2006, 03:23 PM
dont write SKAN either (directed at skan2)

P!P
10-21-2006, 03:24 PM
i listened to your advice man. I just took the picture at a weird angle.

P!P
10-21-2006, 03:25 PM
I am 15 too....never been taught how to write. I have tagged shit before, i am much better with paint than pencil.

nemzone
10-21-2006, 03:31 PM
trac who the fuck are u to talk shit to ppl?! yeah alrite pips not good, but wats wiv the makin fun of him in replies to other ppls sketches??? ur not brilliant urself!

pip do this.... got to that link and look at the lessons. do the basic letter one (number 3)over and over and over until u can do it without looking at it...
DONT TRY AND DO THE OTHER ONES UNTIL U CAN DO PROPER LETTERS!!!!11
http://www.mrwiggles.biz/id171.htm

i no this is gunna prob get me flamed but fuck this kids gotta learn and i sure as hell aint teaching im.

trac
10-21-2006, 03:32 PM
HAHA u make me laugh, better with paint than a pencil? BULL SHIT. When u start writin?

Fixion
10-21-2006, 03:41 PM
WAIT! Ignore P!P and don't give him anymore advice. He's probably a troll or just an 11 year old -_-

Soze One.
10-21-2006, 03:42 PM
Originally posted by Soze One.@Oct 21 2006, 02:25 PM
here ya go
imma redo it
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1278.jpg
bump for crits

trac
10-21-2006, 03:44 PM
Originally posted by trac@Oct 21 2006, 02:46 PM
any crits
http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/3614/dsc00096dv9.jpg
bump for crits

nemzone
10-21-2006, 03:44 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 21 2006, 08:31 PM
trac who the fuck are u to talk shit to ppl?! yeah alrite pips not good, but wats wiv the makin fun of him in replies to other ppls sketches??? ur not brilliant urself!

pip do this.... got to that link and look at the lessons. do the basic letter one (number 3)over and over and over until u can do it without looking at it...
DONT TRY AND DO THE OTHER ONES UNTIL U CAN DO PROPER LETTERS!!!!11
http://www.mrwiggles.biz/id171.htm

i no this is gunna prob get me flamed but fuck this kids gotta learn and i sure as hell aint teaching im.
obviously no1 read thisss

obseen
10-21-2006, 03:47 PM
haha, wow trac, your soooo much better than pip, i actually like his last sketch better than yours
you wanna listen to toxus for good advice lol
but ye, best advice is just sketch,sketch and sketch
style doesnt come overnight, and listen to nemzone cos hes smart

taxus
10-21-2006, 03:48 PM
That p!p's fresh.......

P!P
10-21-2006, 04:19 PM
sorry im not a pro. thats why i am in the fucking TOYS section...
damn give me a break, and TRAC stop being a dumbass, if you think you are better than everyone else, you wont get any better yourself.
I am just taking what comes my way and going with it. trying to get better.

P!P
10-21-2006, 04:22 PM
nem, took your adive i will practice more later. but thanks a ton. like i said before. never been aroudn any good writers or nuttin...

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00902.jpg :blink:

nemzone
10-21-2006, 04:22 PM
ite, so go try lesson 3 on the above link and post it. but with ur name obviously

nemzone
10-21-2006, 04:24 PM
stop tryin to make the corners all shap cuz then ur letters look all convexed! make them parrallel and nice a rounded corners n shit

P!P
10-21-2006, 04:29 PM
i will when i get back...but i did try that. and i will work on smoothing the edges out.


thanks man, honestly, big help.

Peace- P!P :blink:

-testify-
10-21-2006, 04:44 PM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/2908/simplece3.png

heres my simple cause everyone said to do it cause i sucked so yea..and pip dont make any jagged lines

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 05:03 PM
Yeah, that's better. Don't overlap em so much though. Keep sketchin

-testify-
10-21-2006, 05:03 PM
ok thanks and I didnt mean to overlap I just noticed it

fost
10-21-2006, 05:16 PM
pip try this- forget anything to do with style or whatever you are trying to do- copy all the letters from your keyboard and draw them exactly like that for now style will come later

Punny
10-21-2006, 05:21 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/JuK1.jpg
Work in progress.
Some crits would be great.

poopis
10-21-2006, 05:26 PM
Originally posted by Soze One.+Oct 21 2006, 03:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Soze One. &#064; Oct 21 2006, 03:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Soze One.@Oct 21 2006, 02:25 PM
here ya go
imma redo it
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1278.jpg
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
Soze I like man Im felling your S and Z the most but , but it can deal without the little orange things i guess..overall its good imo just fix your E it looks pretty odd in the middle , and the bottom.Also the O looks kinda out of place.

Punny ,nice work there JU are great blocks but fix your K at the bottom right it looks like it going completly horizontal just make it go down a tad bit.

Punny
10-21-2006, 05:29 PM
Thanks, I was thinking that it looked kinda akward. I was trying to kinda match it up with the J but then it looked even more screwed up, so I just used this. =P

Punny
10-21-2006, 05:51 PM
I was writing marvel, but ran out of space.
So it ended up being marv. Lol
(Another Work In Progress)
What do you think?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Marv1.jpg

fost
10-21-2006, 05:53 PM
punny i&#39;m digging that style a lot

rediscovering the joy of simples:

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/4381/101306wh7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9389/101406wd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/6697/101706rv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and a new piece too:

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9052/101206bon7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

poopis
10-21-2006, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by Punny@Oct 21 2006, 05:51 PM
I was writing marvel, but ran out of space.
So it ended up being marv. Lol
(Another Work In Progress)
What do you think?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Marv1.jpg
k punny REALLY fix the R and the V they both don&#39;t match the other letters style the V is too basic , and your R needs a little more defiance looks like a 2 :S. And the right side of your M is to close to the middle don&#39;t overlaop it.

Fost thos simples are pretty nice but try not to make them but so sharp and as far as it goes just practice on your S&#39;s.And dont attempt any wildstyle what soever yet man.Also what markers do you use ,or whatever you use to color?Just got paid and wondering whats good for some coloring.

Punny
10-21-2006, 06:00 PM
Thanks fost.
Your stuff is pretty good too, id have to say the last one is my favourite, mostly because of the colours. (considering i cant colour for shit)

@Poopis Thanks, i was actually trying a new style out, rather then my usuall simple stuff. But I agree, now that i actually look at, the V and R really do look terrible :lol:

poopis
10-21-2006, 06:05 PM
I mean you have potential in those letters but they arent comin out :S....I dunno.

fost
10-21-2006, 06:17 PM
thanks punny

and poopis what&#39;s wrong with the s?

and i&#39;m not trying to sound defensive but don&#39;t try wildstyle? i&#39;ve been doing that type of shit for a while now

and i use prismas and decos

any other crits?

fost
10-21-2006, 06:23 PM
poopis post some of your stuff before you give everyone else crits too

poopis
10-21-2006, 06:23 PM
well what I mean by don&#39;t try wildstyles is the one i saw, no offense but it looked pretty messy. I&#39;m sure others would say go back to simples or w/e. And your S dunno but it looks kinda odd with the other letters like out of place ,I know S&#39;s are hard but it almosy looked like an 8 sharp at the bottom round at the top. But I havent experienced any S&#39;s so I really don&#39;t know that much to say about em.
Edit: I&#39;ve posted plenty of my stuff but mostly I just wait until I&#39;m happy of what i&#39;ve done or w/e you can find some couple pages back prolly 6 pages but ...yea I&#39;ll post something i&#39;m working on now later gotta clean it.

skan2
10-21-2006, 06:25 PM
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1471/1000985kf1.jpg

this was real quick but w/e :D CRITS

-testify-
10-21-2006, 06:28 PM
make all the letters the same size and width make the top right of your n more rounded

poopis
10-21-2006, 06:28 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Oct 21 2006, 06:25 PM
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1471/1000985kf1.jpg

:D CRITS
Blocks my friend...blocks. That whole thing needs some work done, just sketch with some blocks cause that style looks nasty.

P!P
10-21-2006, 06:30 PM
FoSt i will try that....just the simple keyboard letters...but, about the coloring stuff... i would like to know what you use tooo...I suck ass at coloring on paper. much easier on a wall...they need like mini spray bottles for pasper. that would be sick :blink:

skan2
10-21-2006, 06:32 PM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9647/1000986mc9.jpg
any better :unsure:

skan2
10-21-2006, 06:33 PM
pip i use shrapies and primas

FEN the HEN
10-21-2006, 06:33 PM
and stop writing skan

skan2
10-21-2006, 06:34 PM
fuck u i can write what ever i feel like

P!P
10-21-2006, 06:35 PM
damn.....where would the easiest place to get primas from? wal-mart sound OK? :blink:

afek
10-21-2006, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Oct 21 2006, 07:34 PM
fuck u i can write what ever i feel like
its a free country




























dont

skan2
10-21-2006, 06:36 PM
art store

fost
10-21-2006, 06:37 PM
poopis i cant find any of your sketches

and i guess i understand that it looks kinda sloppy but thats mainly the coloring not the structure- believe me i&#39;ve done my fair share of blocks

heres an old cleaner one:

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7133/91806rt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

P!P
10-21-2006, 06:51 PM
since this place is the only one that&#39;ll talk to me can someone here describe to me what i need to make my own marker? :blink:
been looking into it but i want real advice not just some tutorial....

FEN the HEN
10-21-2006, 06:54 PM
fuck you SKAN your stuff is shit, there two writers who are way better than you who write it .........STOP

P!P
10-21-2006, 06:57 PM
FEN i added you on myspace....and i agree man. SKAN really needs to stop posing,
make your own name or something :blink:

nemzone
10-21-2006, 07:03 PM
fost it dont matter how many blocks u do, as long as u get th point of them... to see how letters go together and learn bout the structure and what worx and wat dont... and i dont see much structure in that sketch. no beef m8

Viate
10-21-2006, 07:03 PM
Starting out simple. Made with bars and used tag to form letters
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02977.jpg

Then used those simple letters, redrew the simple letters softly and added some music to it
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02979.jpg

P!P
10-21-2006, 07:07 PM
Originally posted by Viate@Oct 21 2006, 07:03 PM
Starting out simple. Made with bars and used tag to form letters
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02977.jpg

Then used those simple letters, redrew the simple letters softly and added some music to it
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02979.jpg
i like it....BUT, on the "S" where is the rest of the block? shouldnt it be on top of the "A"?

just wondering....not crit.ing

fier
10-21-2006, 07:08 PM
Hey, even though I&#39;m new here, it&#39;s no fair to ask for crits without giving them, so here goes:

Viate: I like them, but in the second one the V looks like a W to me

Fost: the extension on the "f" drives me crazy. I think because it looks like a finger.

and the throw I&#39;m working on:
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o155/fier06/Stickers/119_1921.jpg

Viate
10-21-2006, 07:09 PM
s? it says VIATE

sup my *****s. its rend back in action with walls and books with a new name

Viate
10-21-2006, 07:10 PM
Starting out simple. Made with bars and used tag to form letters
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02977.jpg

Then used those simple letters, redrew the simple letters softly and added some music to it
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02979.jpg

P!P
10-21-2006, 07:15 PM
same thing i said on the other page....where is the rest of your V hiding behind the A? shouldnt it be in front?

poopis
10-21-2006, 07:17 PM
if you make the E the same size as your other letters it would look nice.

And Fier it looks nice just fix your E and R, mostly the R cause it looks weird.

EasyMac
10-21-2006, 07:37 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Oct 21 2006, 06:34 PM
fuck u i can write what ever i feel like
For fuck sake&#39;s are people really that fuckin stupid? "Don&#39;t use skan ..it&#39;s taken". Like what fuckin name isn&#39;t taken, so let me get this straight, once you reach a certain skill level in graff people aren&#39;t allowed to use the word your using, like "there&#39;s already a skan", ...yeah there&#39;s hundreds of skans you noob, what do you say to people, "yeah I was gonna have Skan as my word but someone on the other side of the courty is using it, so what can I do?" Like holy fuck and pip, what the fuck are you doing calling him a poser, you&#39;ve been doing it for like what...1 day..know your role bitch, anyway fuck people who think they run the game. No beef though.

skan2
10-21-2006, 07:39 PM
i did my reasearch and i didnt find any dude with the name skan. if there is a skan out there show me a pic

myl
10-21-2006, 07:49 PM
obviously you didnt look hard at all

http://www.graffiti.org/dj/n-igma14/t50/large/skan.jpg
http://www.graffiti.org/dj/n-igma7/illegals/large/skan-tk.jpg
http://www.graffiti.org/dj/n-igma8/damage/large/skan.jpg
http://www.graffiti.org/dj/n-igma7/illegals/large/skan.jpg

skan2
10-21-2006, 07:50 PM
thanx easy-mac.

poopis
10-21-2006, 07:51 PM
sorry to bust ur bouble

Skan (http://static.flickr.com/41/111039898_405466b3da.jpg?v=0)

A diffrent Skan (http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y264/skanoner/scanprimerr.jpg)

But regardless dude if you really like the name and don&#39;t give a fuck go ahead.

Edit:damn he beat me to it :*(

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 07:51 PM
Yaaaaaaay Rend is back. Where&#39;d you go man? Shit&#39;s looking good. I loove that T, the V and the I... The other letters not so much. Your E is waay too big and the A is OK... Just take out those huuuge bars like the one on the bottom of the A and the one on the bottom left of the V, make your E the same height and width as the other letters and it&#39;d be bangin

myl
10-21-2006, 07:52 PM
yea but if you do write skan id put a number after it, im guessin yours is 2

poopis
10-21-2006, 07:54 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/2599/0011ox0.th.jpg (http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0011ox0.jpg)

Crits on just the 2 big ones please,just cleaned them n stuff...hopefully Ill get some deco&#39;s tomoz.

myl
10-21-2006, 07:56 PM
phone numberss have 7 numbers...that one has 6, thus meaning its not a phone numer

its 2 different area codes that i travel from

716 and 216

skan2
10-21-2006, 07:57 PM
yeah theres a two after it, my name used to be skandal, but i thought it was to long, and i love the name skan 2

poopis
10-21-2006, 07:58 PM
I didnt look at it good enough I thought it had seven i was like...wtf? but yea ^^^^^^^^^^

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 07:59 PM
I don&#39;t think 2 would work because there&#39;s already 2 skans... Write skan4 or something. You can&#39;t go wrong with two digits. Like Die59 etc.

skan2
10-21-2006, 08:03 PM
like skan45

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 08:04 PM
Yeah, that sounds pretty good actually

skan2
10-21-2006, 08:07 PM
alright its final, so you all better reconize lol B)

poopis
10-21-2006, 08:09 PM
Originally posted by poopis@Oct 21 2006, 07:54 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/2599/0011ox0.th.jpg (http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0011ox0.jpg)

Crits on just the 2 big ones please,just cleaned them n stuff...hopefully Ill get some deco&#39;s tomoz.
bump for new page

P!P
10-21-2006, 08:10 PM
Originally posted by EasyMac+Oct 21 2006, 07:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (EasyMac @ Oct 21 2006, 07:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-skan2@Oct 21 2006, 06:34 PM
fuck u i can write what ever i feel like
For fuck sake&#39;s are people really that fuckin stupid? "Don&#39;t use skan ..it&#39;s taken". Like what fuckin name isn&#39;t taken, so let me get this straight, once you reach a certain skill level in graff people aren&#39;t allowed to use the word your using, like "there&#39;s already a skan", ...yeah there&#39;s hundreds of skans you noob, what do you say to people, "yeah I was gonna have Skan as my word but someone on the other side of the courty is using it, so what can I do?" Like holy fuck and pip, what the fuck are you doing calling him a poser, you&#39;ve been doing it for like what...1 day..know your role bitch, anyway fuck people who think they run the game. No beef though. [/b][/quote]
the thing you quoted him being a bitc and saying he can write whatever the fuck he wants, i was saying dont pose as someone else.
ALL i have been doing this whole day is taking advice and workin with it.
he justr came across as he doesnt give a fuck what anyone else says, but now i see it different. so i take it back.

:blink:

skan2
10-21-2006, 08:17 PM
yeah pip you have no room to say that i was a poser, but what ever its only your first day writing graff. jp :P

Think281
10-21-2006, 08:18 PM
A simple little thing I drew up.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Sketches/DSC02793.jpg

Any crits? I&#39;m thinking about painting it in my chill spot for practice. I&#39;m just gonna keep working on the simples&#33;

EDIT: Now that I look at it, I think it would look better with all the letters strait up. Any thoughts on that?

Fosale!
10-21-2006, 08:20 PM
if your gonna put 3D on the letters i would put a drop shadow on the cloud as well or 3d

skan2
10-21-2006, 08:21 PM
looks good but i would fix up on the t a little, like make it the same size, but other than that i think it looks good

P!P
10-21-2006, 08:23 PM
Im cool now bro...but its not my first day writing graff. just my first day learning any shit that actually makes good graff.....
I am in Cocoa FL.....so fucking weird down here. only like 5% of the writing is worth learning from. and Its only on the trains, and the layaways are not close to my house,
not many peoples around here do the art, but the fucking poser gangs and shit. I HATE THEM, so i tag over all their shit

Necro-
10-21-2006, 08:27 PM
Originally posted by Viate@Oct 21 2006, 07:03 PM
Starting out simple. Made with bars and used tag to form letters
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02977.jpg

Then used those simple letters, redrew the simple letters softly and added some music to it
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02979.jpg
i like the first one better.

Necro-
10-21-2006, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by HA&#33;KU@Oct 21 2006, 01:27 PM
becauuuse jar5 is my boyfriend and he&#39;s basically gotten me started, coaching me an stuff
so your a woman? that&#39;s good. i hope you stick with graff.

P!P
10-21-2006, 08:33 PM
yeah she def. is the best girl writer i have ever seen...Very simple and clean

ShIfTeD
10-21-2006, 08:37 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Oct 21 2006, 08:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Oct 21 2006, 08:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Viate@Oct 21 2006, 07:03 PM
Starting out simple. Made with bars and used tag to form letters
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02977.jpg

Then used those simple letters, redrew the simple letters softly and added some music to it
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02979.jpg
i like the first one better. [/b][/quote]
i think they both nned a hell of alot of work


3D is off

letter structure sucks





and thats not even simple.....go waaaay simpler than that

Necro-
10-21-2006, 08:42 PM
rend puts out soem nice shit, the letter structure on that is really nice and it flows helluh well. i just like the top one better.

and i honestly dont think you have any authority on letter structure, shifted. no beef, but i think most of your stuff is kinda ugly.

Think281
10-21-2006, 09:05 PM
Another quick one.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Sketches/DSC02794.jpg

I know the letter structure is competly hidious but does the silver 3-d kinda stuff make since at all? I can&#39;t quiet decide haha.

ShIfTeD
10-21-2006, 09:28 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/867/sickblackbookjn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just finished B)

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 09:32 PM
Lovin that K and the bubbles are pretty good. The handie is waaaay past unreadable

Think281
10-21-2006, 09:33 PM
Man I like that alot. Only thing is the "i" is kind of hard to distinguish at first glance. Very nice though. I like the "S" and the handstyle.

ShIfTeD
10-21-2006, 09:37 PM
yeah the i is aukward but it flows with it so im happy

ShIfTeD
10-21-2006, 09:39 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 21 2006, 09:32 PM
Lovin that K and the bubbles are pretty good. The handie is waaaay past unreadable
yeah, i nkow what your sayin...it would be hella easier if i didnt outline it in another color but oh well

bouncingsoul
10-21-2006, 10:26 PM
Shit sketch I did with coloring for once

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0279.jpg

"swet"

Viate
10-21-2006, 10:32 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Oct 21 2006, 09:28 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/867/sickblackbookjn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just finished B)
dude u saying my stuff basically sucks.... look at ur shit&#33; fucken ugly ass retarded looking letters and awful looking bubbles. the black drop shaddow is colored awful. u fucking suck ur fucking poser actin like u know it all.

Bastardo
10-21-2006, 10:39 PM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/322/picture072ra0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Soek.
eurostyle kinda fing

Truth.
10-21-2006, 10:40 PM
pen fresstyling, on my leg, in the car

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/CIMG5328.jpg

Truth.
10-21-2006, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by Viate+Oct 21 2006, 10:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Viate @ Oct 21 2006, 10:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Oct 21 2006, 09:28 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/867/sickblackbookjn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just finished B)
dude u saying my stuff basically sucks.... look at ur shit&#33; fucken ugly ass retarded looking letters and awful looking bubbles. the black drop shaddow is colored awful. u fucking suck ur fucking poser actin like u know it all. [/b][/quote]
yeah u shud make him (shifted) apologise to you for trying to help you out, disgraceful how kids on here actually try to help you&#33;

ShIfTeD
10-21-2006, 10:46 PM
lol


he said it himself, his stuff sucks

i never said your stuff sucks viate, but obviously you already know




its not like i didnt tell the truth, im far from perfect, and i need to work on things too...but i can easily say that your letter structure is bad, your handstyle needs work, and its sloppy, and your 3-d is off


im sorry viate....i didnt mean to huwt your poow wiw feewings :(

EasyMac
10-21-2006, 10:54 PM
Yeah viate...take that&#33;

uhhh
10-21-2006, 10:57 PM
shifted. you have no room to tlak. that sketch you posted. was clean. ill give you that. but id like to see how you do WITHOUT a ruler. and to tell you the truth. i kinda like viates tyle. i just think it could use some tweaking.


easymac-please no dick ridin

sank one
10-21-2006, 10:59 PM
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/126/img0279la2.th.jpg (http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0279la2.jpg)

something i did earlier

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1395/img0278zu3.th.jpg (http://img148.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0278zu3.jpg)

this was in my door when i came home.

Qlown
10-21-2006, 11:03 PM
Heres some of my work... You could go to qlown.deviantart.com to check out more, but theres not really that much. Still, drop by if you have the time :P

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/286/a/6/Ant_by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/290/1/2/BLOW_by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/277/a/a/__A___by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/286/0/1/RIP_by_Qlown.jpg

Thats all im gonna post. Ive decided my tag is gonna be &#39;Krack&#39;, and im wondering if thats a good name to go by?

ShIfTeD
10-21-2006, 11:10 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Oct 21 2006, 10:57 PM
shifted. you have no room to tlak. that sketch you posted. was clean. ill give you that. but id like to see how you do WITHOUT a ruler. and to tell you the truth. i kinda like viates tyle. i just think it could use some tweaking.


easymac-please no dick ridin
ooo i have no room to talk???


how am i "talking"

like i said im not perfect at it....and i can use a fucking ruler if i damn well please&#33;

im stating simple facts...so uhhh quit actin like your runnin the fuckin place

theres mods for a reason, and noone wants your 2 cents

sank one
10-21-2006, 11:11 PM
i hate when ppl fuckin post shit and they never crit the person right above them.

YarHarHar
10-21-2006, 11:11 PM
...I really only want to know how to color in on paper...
what materials...cause my markers will fuck up any sketch i have..

1 use a good marker and 2 when you outline with a sharpie or something your lines will look cleaner

also try just spending more time on your work and make it a bit smaller, focus on having straighter lines (but learn to do it without a ruler) and keeping your letters consistent

P!P
10-21-2006, 11:11 PM
damn SHIFTED. people disgracin all up in here tonight, but shit, i just got 9 canz of krylon tonight, gonna go put up some new shit on the comm. center here in town, but the fucking cops chansed up through the woods, and lucky me and Ko-Ko were wearing black too because we were laying down in the bushes for about an hour watching those damn piggies go by. haha, I am sweaty as shit, and waiting for tomm. ....my cans are still waiting , i chuked them in the woods... :blink:

YarHarHar
10-21-2006, 11:12 PM
oops sorry that last comment was from HA&#33;KU, i didn&#39;t realize i never signed out of his accoutn and back into mine...............

P!P
10-21-2006, 11:13 PM
Originally posted by Qlown@Oct 21 2006, 11:03 PM
Heres some of my work... You could go to qlown.deviantart.com to check out more, but theres not really that much. Still, drop by if you have the time :P

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/286/a/6/Ant_by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/290/1/2/BLOW_by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/277/a/a/__A___by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/286/0/1/RIP_by_Qlown.jpg

Thats all im gonna post. Ive decided my tag is gonna be &#39;Krack&#39;, and im wondering if thats a good name to go by?
nice style man, Im feelin it. :blink:

P!P
10-21-2006, 11:17 PM
HAIKU, were you replying to me?
i think i asked about the markers,

cause i can do the lines and shit, but when i try to fill in with markers i screw up. i am trying to start with the throws for now, but move on to fillings later. sound good?

......and whoeevr told me to copy all the keyboard letters earlier. I DID, and made my own alphebet bubbled. haha

Qlown
10-21-2006, 11:26 PM
Originally posted by sank one@Oct 21 2006, 11:11 PM
i hate when ppl fuckin post shit and they never crit the person right above them.
o.0 ... Alright then. Nice fat letters on the &#39;SANK&#39; piece, easily distinguishable blocks. Only thing i dont like, apart from it having no color, would be the fact taht ur letters seem to slant off and shrink a TINY bit at the end. Its not that obvious, but it still smears the overall look of the entire peice. Keep sketching.

Any crits for mine now? :lol:

P!P
10-21-2006, 11:40 PM
NO crit. from me, just saying im diggin the style and overall look of the sketch,
coulld easily see somethin like it on a wall/train

EasyMac
10-21-2006, 11:41 PM
Yeah in a sec Qlown, hey "uhh", what was that about "dick ridin", bitch you need to back the fuck up and know your mother fucking role and shut the fuck up, and learn to fucking spell assmunch&#33; Now..anyone got some crits for my man Qlown.

myl
10-22-2006, 01:02 AM
get out the A1 sauce cause i smell beef

Necro-
10-22-2006, 01:11 AM
i want to see a battle between shifted and rend

P!P
10-22-2006, 01:17 AM
I will vote vote for that. would be intrestin&#39; for sure...
I am kinda drukk right now, but ognna post up the peice ive been drawing for the past hour....


one sec..

-testify-
10-22-2006, 01:18 AM
throwie exchange for soze

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/865/ahry9.png

NiL
10-22-2006, 02:11 AM
Crits trying to make a new bomb..

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/jaja002.jpg

smokincron
10-22-2006, 02:34 AM
some shit i did for soze

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/5537/im002788eo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mse
10-22-2006, 06:40 AM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Oct 21 2006, 10:39 PM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/322/picture072ra0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Soek.
eurostyle kinda fing
these handstyles are sooo dope
you people are stupid, rend and everything else on the past 3 pages sucks fucking dick compared to this

joke
10-22-2006, 06:40 AM
Originally posted by terower+Oct 21 2006, 11:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (terower @ Oct 21 2006, 11:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-joke@Oct 21 2006, 03:19 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdnewerererer.jpg

summin i done quite quik yeah i know the char looks like the dude from nightmare before x mas but who cares need som crits please&#33;&#33;&#33;
3D is most definitely off in several places. If you are gonna do vanishing point in the middle 3D, i suggest practicing on simpler letters first. Also, picture it as all going to ONE point (i.e. the middle of your R) and draw ALL lines to that. But, the letters are pretty decent for being more complex. [/b][/quote]
kk thanks

Punny
10-22-2006, 09:03 AM
Another one.
What do you think?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Juk2.jpg

P!P
10-22-2006, 09:17 AM
[b] very nice, i cant crit. it though, cause mine are far from perfect. :blink:

P!P
10-22-2006, 09:24 AM
:blink: looks hella even and Blanced, its sik.

Punny
10-22-2006, 09:26 AM
Thanks.

Qlown
10-22-2006, 09:40 AM
Very nice, clean work punny. Only problem i have with that piece would be ur last letter. Note how all ur letters are more or less consistent in width, but the end of ur &#39;K&#39; at teh bottom right is way too small compared to the rest, so i think that disrupts the overall flow. Thats just my opinion however, some people may think otherwise. Id consider removing the end of the K and slicing it off so the bottom of the whole piece remains on the same plane. Other than that, im really diggin that piece :) good job.

Crits for mine?

Punny
10-22-2006, 09:47 AM
Qlown, Id have to say the biggest issue would be the size of the letters, in many cases some letters arent as wide as the others, and in the first one the letters all seem a bit to thin.

noalies
10-22-2006, 09:56 AM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/5686/picture118bk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new name on the top.

afek
10-22-2006, 09:58 AM
Originally posted by uhhh@Oct 21 2006, 11:57 PM
easymac-please no dick ridin
mostly everyone on this toy forum