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-testify-
10-22-2006, 10:22 AM
crits on mine?

uhhh
10-22-2006, 10:26 AM
Originally posted by EasyMac@Oct 21 2006, 11:41 PM
learn to fucking spell assmunch!
learn how to not talk like a 5th grader..

pez ss
10-22-2006, 10:27 AM
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/5400/pencilsketchpezwithcaractoruj2.th.jpg (http://img328.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pencilsketchpezwithcaractoruj2.jpg) http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6928/pencilsketchpezcloseupwh3.th.jpg (http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pencilsketchpezcloseupwh3.jpg) i no theez are not perfect and i need to go simpler but i like seeing what i can do and the letters are the same style and the same size i used a ruler any way comment and critz

What Happened to the Letters?
10-22-2006, 10:31 AM
Originally posted by P&#33;P+Oct 22 2006, 12:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (P&#33;P @ Oct 22 2006, 12:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Qlown@Oct 21 2006, 11:03 PM
Heres some of my work... You could go to qlown.deviantart.com to check out more, but theres not really that much. Still, drop by if you have the time :P

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/286/a/6/Ant_by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/290/1/2/BLOW_by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/277/a/a/__A___by_Qlown.jpg

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/286/0/1/RIP_by_Qlown.jpg

Thats all im gonna post. Ive decided my tag is gonna be &#39;Krack&#39;, and im wondering if thats a good name to go by?
nice style man, Im feelin it. :blink: [/b][/quote]
NO&#33; this is why this threads is bad, casue those letters are horirble and your tellign him theyre good, your trying to go way too complex and theyre uneven and ugly, im sorry but work on simpler letters add some flare to them and do simple arrows if ou are gunan do them also dont try extensions of any sort until you can burn kids with your simples

nemzone
10-22-2006, 10:31 AM
pez not much i can say if u know u should be going simpler..

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8641/dsc01103zl5.jpg

What Happened to the Letters?
10-22-2006, 10:39 AM
nemz lookin real good, all you guys can learn a thign or two from this, the addons are on point its clean and all the simple letters look good, the u could use a tiny work i think but looking nice all together

Bastardo
10-22-2006, 10:40 AM
fucking nice nemz.
great colours great letters. ;)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8874/picture065ls5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3449/picture061ns1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/486/picture072ac9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nemzone
10-22-2006, 10:43 AM
o my word bastardo lol, is that something thats NOT a throw i seE?&#33;?&#33;? :o :o

needless 2 say i quite like it, seen the others b4...

Sumoe
10-22-2006, 10:44 AM
lovin the colors nems :D

nemzone
10-22-2006, 10:49 AM
thnx ppl. :D bastardo, u missed the shadow on ur arrow, and the other arrows shadows a bit messed up lol.

What Happened to the Letters?
10-22-2006, 10:49 AM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Oct 22 2006, 11:40 AM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3449/picture061ns1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the thign on the actual blackbook, nto the papers standing up, looks exactly like my S, i dont have a camera anymore but jsut incase you ever see my shit i want you to know im not biting on you, i got soo many pages of that s its rediculous, actually mines a tiny bit diffrerent, but pritty much the same

ZealBomber
10-22-2006, 11:02 AM
Ay My shit blows But Still Check it.......



http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/7338/scansi8.th.jpg (http://img343.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scansi8.jpg)

nemzone
10-22-2006, 11:22 AM
well u can forget bout doing that S ever again&#33; and do block letters. simple as possible

Bastardo
10-22-2006, 11:23 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 22 2006, 10:49 AM
thnx ppl. :D bastardo, u missed the shadow on ur arrow, and the other arrows shadows a bit messed up lol.
you dont know how hard shadows are on those arrows lol

bouncingsoul
10-22-2006, 11:28 AM
Ahhh damn, I just hate when toys come over here and post these shit pieces without listening to advice other people give... I mean like there are some days when there&#39;s like a page or two of fucking awesome sketches but they barely occur. Listen, the reason people keep saying to go simple is not because you just get your letters really good by doing em over and over. It&#39;s so you can get used to having all your letter bars the same width, get your 3d good, etc. Now this is much easier when it&#39;s simple because well it&#39;s simple and easy to practice. After that, you can make addons that fit the style and other things too. If you just start out trying everything at once, you&#39;ll be adding shit to more shit, which, as you can guess, just leads to a big pile of shit. So please, just take our advice, go simple, start with bubble/block letters and just let fate take its way instead of trying to forge your own style out of nothing. Trust me, over time, when you get bangin simples, you prolly won&#39;t even want to do wildstyles, your simples will be soo much better lookin to you.

Also, try and keep the text beef outta here. If you guys really want to beef, you might as well post sketches to prove you&#39;re the better writer so we&#39;ll have something to look at and crit too.

:edit: Bastardo, lovin&#39; your shit as always, and thought I might repost this because it got drowned in the beef

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0279.jpg

I know my coloring sucks, my T is wack and you can barely see the E... Well you can barely see anything but yeah.

obseen
10-22-2006, 11:29 AM
bastardo i like that piece, better than your last by far
all quite good and i love the throws but ye, you just missed a tiny bit of shadows on the arrows

krazzie_ammo
10-22-2006, 12:01 PM
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3411/32jg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
simples, crits on any of them?

Apoc
10-22-2006, 12:03 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0279.jpg
what does it say?

Skesh
10-22-2006, 12:04 PM
Yeah, they are too big&#33;
-edit oh you resised &#39;em

I&#39;m really feeling the 2nd one&#33;

nemzone
10-22-2006, 12:08 PM
2nd ones my fav, cuz the bottom of letters are all evenly spaced ;)

P!P
10-22-2006, 12:08 PM
Guys i was workin on my blocks all day yesterday, think it is coming along.
....see what you think. what do i need still to fix.. :blink: http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00908.jpg

furious
10-22-2006, 12:13 PM
craze the second one looks pretty nice the only suggestion is maybe try a capital r and a.

pip go simpler and dont worry about trying to color it to cover up the fact that its not good, maybe put your letters closer together etc

it makes me cringe when really toy kids give other toys crits telling them their pieces are hot when theyre garbage

you wont get anywhere if everyone is nice to you instead of criticizing

nemzone
10-22-2006, 12:15 PM
im starting to think ur joking&#33; does that look like straight block letters to u>??

bump from last page cuz i feel like it :P
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8641/dsc01103zl5.jpg

ZealBomber
10-22-2006, 12:15 PM
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/2664/scan0001by4.th.jpg (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001by4.jpg)

Prob a 5 min sketch....

yesrejwen
10-22-2006, 12:16 PM
...

Skesh
10-22-2006, 12:22 PM
get rid of that extension on the P

ZealBomber, all the letters have a different styles. The S is pretty nice but it has to many extensions. Get rid of the arrow on the Y. The C is pretty ugly

P!P
10-22-2006, 12:33 PM
NEM, you mean i am joking? no i did that half-drunk at 2:30 or 3:30 this morning...

....but, i dont want to use a ruler because if i get to use to that then what you do when you get to a wall. pull a giant ruler outta your bag??

nemzone
10-22-2006, 12:35 PM
dny try get smart wiv me dickface, i was the 1 who tried to help u&#33; u dont need a fuckin ruler&#33; just dont do the fuckin squiggles all round ur letters

P!P
10-22-2006, 12:36 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Oct 22 2006, 12:01 PM
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3411/32jg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
simples, crits on any of them?
Very nice ...i think the 2nd one is the best...like the letter structure...
not REAL original but still its clean

P!P
10-22-2006, 12:38 PM
yeah i know Nem, dont call names though man,
...i thoguth you were the one telling me to use a ruler...
the squiggles? you mean the shadow or the black ones all around.
I dunno man i was prty drunk

ShIfTeD
10-22-2006, 12:40 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Oct 21 2006, 09:28 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/867/sickblackbookjn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just finished B)
bump for crits <_<

whole reason y i posted it

nemzone
10-22-2006, 12:41 PM
i never said use a ruler, i said to go to the link i provided and follow the lessons. the sqiggles im talkin bout id ur letters&#33; do ur name like craze did and thats where u start. like his top 1 i mean

furious
10-22-2006, 12:47 PM
"pack" first of all i kindly suggest you dont write pack cuz theres a writer by that name with some big ups

secondly i like your k, your p is decent and your c is generic, maybe do a capital a cuz the lower case a doesnt really fit

and those markers make it look sorta toy so maybe do it in black and white or try buying some new markers or something

other than that not bad i guess. keep workin on it

bouncingsoul
10-22-2006, 12:58 PM
Originally posted by Apoc@Oct 22 2006, 12:03 PM

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0279.jpg
what does it say?
Woops, forgot that, it says swet

krazzie_ammo
10-22-2006, 01:01 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 22 2006, 12:41 PM
i never said use a ruler, i said to go to the link i provided and follow the lessons. the sqiggles im talkin bout id ur letters&#33; do ur name like craze did and thats where u start. like his top 1 i mean
yay, someone used me as an example B) but yeah, seriously dude....sort it outtt&#33;&#33;&#33; use a ruler and a pencil for the time being...

Skesh
10-22-2006, 01:07 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Oct 22 2006, 12:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul &#064; Oct 22 2006, 12:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-Apoc@Oct 22 2006, 12:03 PM

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0279.jpg
what does it say?
Woops, forgot that, it says swet[/b][/quote]
Hmm I&#39;m not feeling it, it looks like S12ijt

bouncingsoul
10-22-2006, 01:25 PM
lol

craz-e one
10-22-2006, 01:33 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7465/pv057ns7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
heres my latest comments?

Think281
10-22-2006, 01:35 PM
New Sketch&#33;

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Sketches/DSC02795.jpg

Any Crits? I&#39;ll also be posting some throwup sketches up tonight that I really need crits on. I needa find a style for em bad.


EDIT: Craze I like that alot. Easily read but still has lots of style to it. No bad thoughts at all.

Dagon
10-22-2006, 01:35 PM
i liked the way these came out, i need to keep on it still a lot but i think im starting to find a comfortable throw.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/PICT0365.jpg


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/PICT0364.jpg


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/PICT0363.jpg


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v47/reducetozero/PICT0361.jpg

Think281
10-22-2006, 01:38 PM
Dagon, I like that alot too, only complaint is it is really hard to make out the letters. Maybe if you put a small line in the letters where the hole is supposed to go it would be much more legible.

Think281
10-22-2006, 01:40 PM
What kind of markers do y&#39;all recommend? Cause I needa get away from colored pencils, makes it look sloppy.

ZealBomber
10-22-2006, 01:45 PM
Some More Sketches.....


http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4194/sketchezls5.th.jpg (http://img193.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sketchezls5.jpg)




http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/9039/pukeir8.th.jpg (http://img200.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pukeir8.jpg)

Think281
10-22-2006, 01:46 PM
I like the Puke and the Fuck&#39;s letters. But that is about it.

krazzie_ammo
10-22-2006, 01:49 PM
Originally posted by craz&#045;e one@Oct 22 2006, 01:33 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7465/pv057ns7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
heres my latest comments?
heyy, theres a new craze in town :D where you from?

koper
10-22-2006, 02:11 PM
Originally posted by craz&#045;e one@Oct 22 2006, 01:33 PM
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/7465/pv057ns7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
heres my latest comments?
not bad

keep direction in mind now, start making the piece have some flow, or movement to it.

also your C,R, and A are all on one level, and the Z, E are a bit lower. Try to even those out or use them for flow.

What Happened to the Letters?
10-22-2006, 02:11 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo+Oct 22 2006, 12:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bastardo @ Oct 22 2006, 12:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Oct 22 2006, 10:49 AM
thnx ppl. :D bastardo, u missed the shadow on ur arrow, and the other arrows shadows a bit messed up lol.
you dont know how hard shadows are on those arrows lol [/b][/quote]
yo man drop shadow is my specialty so i did you a lil ms paint rendering...hope this helps
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/4014/soeknf7.png

koper
10-22-2006, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 22 2006, 12:15 PM
im starting to think ur joking&#33; does that look like straight block letters to u>??

bump from last page cuz i feel like it :P
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8641/dsc01103zl5.jpg
very nice

i love it. Just needs a good background

YarHarHar
10-22-2006, 02:26 PM
quickies from this morning

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2017.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2016.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
10-22-2006, 02:32 PM
I am feeling the second one except for the 3d at the bottom.

What Happened to the Letters?
10-22-2006, 02:32 PM
i liek your handstyle but do you write yar or jar? casue the hand looks liek jar5 and the pice looks like yar5

krazzie_ammo
10-22-2006, 02:36 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Oct 22 2006, 12:01 PM
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3411/32jg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
simples, crits on any of them?
i think its jar5...i was thinking about colouring all this in....any crits??

Fluffy Bunnies
10-22-2006, 02:37 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Oct 22 2006, 12:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Oct 22 2006, 12:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Oct 21 2006, 09:28 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/867/sickblackbookjn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just finished B)
bump for crits <_<

whole reason y i posted it [/b][/quote]
Kinda Euro
But looks decent... not too toy

YarHarHar
10-22-2006, 02:39 PM
jar5

aces
10-22-2006, 04:28 PM
New name.
http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/7546/1135628993651778380vu8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Didn&#39;t fit the Z in. Any Crits?

Think281
10-22-2006, 04:31 PM
Looks great. I love that it is complex yet it isn&#39;t.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k179/Think281/Sketches/DSC02796.jpg

I&#39;m trying to get a good throwup to do. I like the top one the most followed by the bottom. The middle one sucks. I need some crits on how to improve these.

kaweJFK
10-22-2006, 04:44 PM
Originally posted by yesrejwen@Oct 22 2006, 12:16 PM
http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n103/yesrejwen/DSCF0412.jpg

i kinda fucked it up with the fill and the tmu...but crits on the letter structure?
i fucking love that "A"

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061021/01/9/d/6/9d665f81ba99ff46a9c46cabc0cc350c200610210_full.jpg

any more comments?

comments and tips please?&#33;

Viate
10-22-2006, 05:13 PM
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/00.jpg

Apoc
10-22-2006, 05:16 PM
^Its ok but really unclean

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/PA210080.jpg

crits

Viate
10-22-2006, 05:18 PM
i know.. :D i used crayolas

kaweJFK
10-22-2006, 05:23 PM
Viate it looks really good to me, but make the "e" more showable&#33;&#33;

TricksForKids
10-22-2006, 05:24 PM
Didnt know where else to put this

says "pimpkin" with a batman logo on the side, me and my boy did it last halloween

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/3503/x1pbglkvql4bven6mdi25wgyvwhjlchp2u9mq0fvlenalwa7ib gzbvs9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not bad apoc, lost the arrows, fix that A,

viate youve got some work to do with your eltters before you can
colour, nice colouring though, peace


kawe keeping it simple good job, keep working at it

aces your coming along, maybe try less of those little lines and bars and some more actual extensions

nice sutff craze, but its the same stuff i see everytime

and jar nice as well, but still, same stuff i usually see

alright im done with crits if i forgot you im sorry

.D.H.
10-22-2006, 05:28 PM
wow, pretty much all of the flicks on this page look good.
think- practice ur 3rd, and the top your k looks like an h. and personnally, i dont like that style of simples. go for blocks. the better i think

edit: well, the page before this had very nice flicks

Bastardo
10-22-2006, 05:32 PM
http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/6983/picture085kz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thanks to What happened to the letters for helping me with shadow.

:lol: everyone hates euro :(

Apoc
10-22-2006, 05:42 PM
page 1755 is one of the best pages in this thread.... good to see everyone is progressing. Hats off to the future generation

aces
10-22-2006, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by aces@Oct 22 2006, 05:28 PM
New name.
http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/7546/1135628993651778380vu8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Didn&#39;t fit the Z in. Any Crits?
Anything else?

Think281
10-22-2006, 05:44 PM
Originally posted by .D.H.@Oct 22 2006, 05:28 PM
wow, pretty much all of the flicks on this page look good.
think- practice ur 3rd, and the top your k looks like an h. and personnally, i dont like that style of simples. go for blocks. the better i think

edit: well, the page before this had very nice flicks
Thanks for the crits. I&#39;ll see if I can come up with some sort of throwup that is blocky. I got alotta learning to do :)

nerdx
10-22-2006, 06:46 PM
nerdx loves euro

Fosale!
10-22-2006, 06:49 PM
euro is the illest.
bastardo, keep doin pieces please

P!P
10-22-2006, 07:05 PM
"THINK"...Good to see someone on my level. lol, justt ry keeping the letters all on the same level. like make a line on the paper maybe.
I am startin to do that......and with tape on walls......aight, well bout to post some new throws, see hwo you like

obseen
10-22-2006, 07:06 PM
craze why dont yuo do eomthing new
ive seen those same 3 pieces tons and tons of times
kawe your piece looks quite good
shit, i was replying to some other page

TricksForKids
10-22-2006, 07:07 PM
anyways heres some piece of shit i just conjured up, royally fucked up with the fill, oh well

Peace

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/3581/bawkyellwpurpet3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fosale!
10-22-2006, 07:10 PM
hottest fill everr.
i really love it.
idk why
you should do more tech stuff like that.

NiL
10-22-2006, 07:11 PM
Originally posted by NiL@Oct 22 2006, 02:11 AM
Crits trying to make a new bomb..

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/jaja002.jpg
Crits please..

littlerocky
10-22-2006, 07:14 PM
Originally posted by littlerocky@Oct 20 2006, 03:23 PM
nemz im feelin that super dope get some color in it...
couple train pads i did cuz i was bored..also dont kno if train pads are considered wack but if they are my bad adn too late cuz i alreayd did um ne way lol..give me some imput
on the peice and not the train itself please lol

http://img415.imageshack.us/img415/28/imgp0549tm0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/7712/imgp0550um3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits and comments please thx
bump for crits....reads MUGS

NiL
10-22-2006, 07:21 PM
Looks mad, your orderd them train pictures off the net somewhere aye? They look sick.

YarHarHar
10-22-2006, 07:32 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Oct 22 2006, 02:26 PM
quickies from this morning

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2017.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2016.jpg
some one give me constructive crits instead of i like i dont like bullshnap

Fixion
10-22-2006, 07:37 PM
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/2672/dscf2066xe7.jpg
Enjoying basics. Crits? Ignore the crappy character on the bottom <_<

To YarHarHar:
Your second one, the J looks like a Y. Unless its suppose to be.

Think281
10-22-2006, 07:39 PM
On the first flick the fill bothers me. It just is distracting to the eyes and kind of makes the A look like an E. On the second flick like it was already said the J looks like a Y the connection needs to go behind the J somehow because it interfers with the integrity of the letter. I like the handstyle alot on the second one though.

EDIT: Directed towards YarHarHar

TricksForKids
10-22-2006, 08:00 PM
jar im not gunna lie i like your old stuff alot better, your focusing too much on colours and fills and losing eltter structure

i could draw those letters in 30 seconds

the way the R overlaps itself is sloppy as well as the thin line in the middle of your A, the J&#39;snice and simple, but i dont like the A and the R

there you go

fixion thats clean and simple, go paint it really big and then stop sketching that plain and simple

and heres a fucking BUMP so i cna get some crits too

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/3581/bawkyellwpurpet3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

FIN one
10-22-2006, 08:07 PM
i like it, nice fill and 3-d but the letters look a lil wack if you look close(the a). as a whole tho nice job like the B or what looks like a b

NiL
10-22-2006, 08:15 PM
Originally posted by NiL+Oct 22 2006, 07:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Oct 22 2006, 07:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NiL@Oct 22 2006, 02:11 AM
Crits trying to make a new bomb..

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/jaja002.jpg
Crits please.. [/b][/quote]
Crits please&#33;

Yeah the fill on that one is mad. It&#39;s crazy do it with paint. But than probly get ruined.

Apoc
10-22-2006, 08:16 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/3581/bawkyellwpurpet3.jpg
That shit is fire

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:16 PM
:blink: sorry i cant crit. much. i suck too bad to be telin othe rpeople stuff...
but i am lookin for any good advice that you can throw this way...

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/dsc00913b.jpghttp://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00915.jpg

second one looks OK......but i know the first ones are wack, and shittty. did them in my corvette, so its shit.

CRITS PLEASE&#33;

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:19 PM
NiL....i like the bottom right the best, has most def. on all letters, and the X for the hole in the R is a nice touch...

NiL
10-22-2006, 08:19 PM
2nd one lacks letter structure and doesn&#39;t look too good. But keep pracitsing simple shiet y0.

CRITS ON MINE&#33;

NiL
10-22-2006, 08:21 PM
Originally posted by P&#33;P@Oct 22 2006, 08:19 PM
NiL....i like the bottom right the best, has most def. on all letters, and the X for the hole in the R is a nice touch...
Yeah I was trying new ways for the thingy in the R but I aint feeling the X too much.

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:22 PM
whatever you feel. but still. that one has the best structure no doubt.
...where you bombin? j/w man

NiL
10-22-2006, 08:26 PM
Originally posted by P&#33;P@Oct 22 2006, 08:22 PM
whatever you feel. but still. that one has the best structure no doubt.
...where you bombin? j/w man
Yeah making I was bombing need a new one. I got 2 new cans and the caps are stock and don&#39;t come off and they are the | caps and spray like shit it sucks ass but I&#39;ll still go do some shit in tunnles where no one goes.

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:27 PM
ye man.....But i only have stock shit too, so i feel your pain,
Got rust oleum though....they have nice little fan tips...and the yellow krylon i had too i think. not sure. but those are the only good stock caps i found.

NiL
10-22-2006, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by P&#33;P@Oct 22 2006, 08:27 PM
ye man.....But i only have stock shit too, so i feel your pain,
Got rust oleum though....they have nice little fan tips...and the yellow krylon i had too i think. not sure. but those are the only good stock caps i found.
I don&#39;t care if they are stock or not but these caps are just pathetic + the paint is fucking enmal shit. My ex got them for me.

noalies
10-22-2006, 08:31 PM
bastardo influenced me. euro style


http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/7605/picture119nt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hot_Pocket
10-22-2006, 08:35 PM
Work on your letter structure more, go for more simple blocks and take the faces out for now.

Qlown
10-22-2006, 08:36 PM
Throwie Exchange with &#39;Kurupt&#39;.

Went back to simples. Critique?

http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs12/300W/i/2006/295/7/f/Kurupt_Exchange_by_Qlown.jpg

Apoc
10-22-2006, 08:39 PM
this thread is bumpin

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:39 PM
Only thing i can see is the second U ...the bottom s-d isnt connected all the way...
but looks nice

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:41 PM
Originally posted by NiL+Oct 22 2006, 08:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Oct 22 2006, 08:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-P&#33;P@Oct 22 2006, 08:27 PM
ye man.....But i only have stock shit too, so i feel your pain,
Got rust oleum though....they have nice little fan tips...and the yellow krylon i had too i think. not sure. but those are the only good stock caps i found.
I don&#39;t care if they are stock or not but these caps are just pathetic + the paint is fucking enmal shit. My ex got them for me. [/b][/quote]
yeah well if i had one can for all of my exes i could fill my house with em. hahaah :blink:

aces
10-22-2006, 08:42 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 22 2006, 09:00 PM
jar im not gunna lie i like your old stuff alot better, your focusing too much on colours and fills and losing eltter structure

i could draw those letters in 30 seconds

the way the R overlaps itself is sloppy as well as the thin line in the middle of your A, the J&#39;snice and simple, but i dont like the A and the R

there you go

fixion thats clean and simple, go paint it really big and then stop sketching that plain and simple

and heres a fucking BUMP so i cna get some crits too

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/3581/bawkyellwpurpet3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Fucking ill tricks&#33;&#33;&#33; Don&#39;t know what else to say. I love it.

Apoc
10-22-2006, 08:45 PM
u shouldn&#39;t be up in the toy forum anymore

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:47 PM
I agree. yous hould only be here for giving us advice haha, but you have mad potential and skillz Tricks

NiL
10-22-2006, 08:48 PM
Qlown that looks mad shit.

P!P
10-22-2006, 08:53 PM
Originally posted by NiL@Oct 22 2006, 08:48 PM
Qlown that looks mad shit.
except i think the bottom one is overused. like i see those letters everywhere,
but i know its a quickie. So not saying its shit or nothing. im feeling the top letter structure though

NiL
10-22-2006, 08:57 PM
Originally posted by P&#33;P+Oct 22 2006, 08:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (P&#33;P @ Oct 22 2006, 08:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NiL@Oct 22 2006, 08:48 PM
Qlown that looks mad shit.
except i think the bottom one is overused. like i see those letters everywhere,
but i know its a quickie. So not saying its shit or nothing. im feeling the top letter structure though [/b][/quote]
I like the bottom one. I love that simple quick shit to throw on a wall.

Apoc
10-22-2006, 09:01 PM
neither of them are good

P!P
10-22-2006, 09:05 PM
no not GREAT but O.K.....
and yeah that wuick shit thatt EVERYONE USES, i dont mind the throws, just let it be a little original. anyways, i only like the top one for the style of letter .not the actuall peice itself

FEN the HEN
10-22-2006, 09:10 PM
PIPpy longstockings........ B)

meaner1
10-22-2006, 09:11 PM
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/1253/meaner2os6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Im just startin out simple any crits? thanks

Kayone707
10-22-2006, 09:24 PM
heres something i did for a girl back in 2003&#33; hah good times.. bad graff
http://myspace-297.vo.llnwd.net/01319/79/27/1319807297_l.jpg

Fixion
10-22-2006, 09:35 PM
Too much arrows. Haha

TricksForKids
10-22-2006, 09:51 PM
2003?

thats only 3 years ago.....damn thats inspiring

Soze One.
10-22-2006, 10:05 PM
some bs.
crits please
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1287.jpg

Kayone707
10-22-2006, 10:14 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 22 2006, 07:51 PM
2003?

thats only 3 years ago.....damn thats inspiring
02-03.... but ya shows what practice and some skill can do :)

NiL
10-22-2006, 10:16 PM
Soze lose them arrow things on the 2nd one.

Sou - Mvd
10-22-2006, 10:30 PM
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2764/picture460qh4.jpg

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/5498/picture465ts1.jpg

Any critiques would be appreciated.

gk1
10-22-2006, 10:35 PM
I agree with NiL, the arrows could be dropped on the second one Soze. Or maybe if the fill was the same as the letters they would work a little better. Otherwise I dig the first one.

Hot_Pocket
10-22-2006, 10:38 PM
Sou, I really have nothin&#39; to say about them other than sick as hell. The only advice I can give is use actual paper :P

NOA3p
10-22-2006, 10:56 PM
sex bombs
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b243/Decon-Devon/Graff/Graff011.jpg

and halloween peice.

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b243/Decon-Devon/Graff/Graff015.jpg

Sou - Mvd
10-22-2006, 11:00 PM
Originally posted by Hot_Pocket@Oct 22 2006, 10:38 PM
Sou, I really have nothin&#39; to say about them other than sick as hell. The only advice I can give is use actual paper :P
Where&#39;s the fun in that&#33;?

meaner1
10-22-2006, 11:01 PM
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/982/meanerrin0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

im not happy with this the n looks like a k and the a is gross any crits please thanks

novella
10-22-2006, 11:17 PM
meaner, try and figure out why you dont like the A and the N. what makes them look no good? figure this out and your sketch will be even better next time.

as a helper to this, i thought that said merk


im pretty stoked on where my skills are going though, i started writing last june or so, and this is where ive come so far
(latest sketch)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslaburn.jpg

also, i finished the robot appliances i posted a ways back, added a flying toaster
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/robotappliances2.jpg

critss?

Necro-
10-22-2006, 11:25 PM
Originally posted by Kayone707@Oct 22 2006, 09:24 PM
heres something i did for a girl back in 2003&#33; hah good times.. bad graff
http://myspace-297.vo.llnwd.net/01319/79/27/1319807297_l.jpg
thank you for posting that, i needed some inspiration :D .

meaner1
10-22-2006, 11:30 PM
Originally posted by novella@Oct 22 2006, 11:17 PM
meaner, try and figure out why you dont like the A and the N. what makes them look no good? figure this out and your sketch will be even better next time.

as a helper to this, i thought that said merk


im pretty stoked on where my skills are going though, i started writing last june or so, and this is where ive come so far
(latest sketch)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslaburn.jpg

also, i finished the robot appliances i posted a ways back, added a flying toaster
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/robotappliances2.jpg

critss?
yeah thanks man and your kitchen appliances are pretty neat

novella
10-22-2006, 11:36 PM
i just hope my advice made sense somewhat, just try to use self criticism to your advantage i guess. before you can figure out what looks good, you have to know what looks bad, and thus what to avoid

meaner1
10-23-2006, 12:00 AM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/5999/blkandtg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i have no idea crits?

enu
10-23-2006, 12:05 AM
Originally posted by epod@Jun 15 2005, 06:12 AM
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/1208/picture0112hg.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0112hg.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/8112/picture0108nd.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0108nd.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/9782/picture0148uo.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0148uo.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/8287/picture0131wp.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0131wp.jpg)

http://img210.echo.cx/img210/4373/ep28dt.th.png (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=ep28dt.png)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/582/picture0184ax.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0184ax.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/4105/picture0165pz.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0165pz.jpg)
u gottt skill ive been writing for a month keep on doing what your doing

novella
10-23-2006, 12:12 AM
enu: get with it. that stuff was posted almost 1800 pages ago

mean: that A isnt an A, the rest is solid block letters though. the 3D on the E is off though

NoneOfThisIsReal
10-23-2006, 12:15 AM
After my last post I decided to go to more basic letters, realizing I was trying to go too far ahead of my abilities. Ignoring the crap on the top of the page that&#39;s cut off, I came up with this.

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3734/dscf1690cm2.th.jpg (http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3734/dscf1690cm2.jpg)

I like the handstyle, but it seems too .... I dunno, generic? Overplayed? Too something. And I don&#39;t like arrows; don&#39;t know why I used one. I definitely need work on the bubble letter styles. I tried to keep the letters consistent, though. And I got curious about gradients.

Forgive me, I&#39;m just thinking through my keyboard.

smokincron
10-23-2006, 01:00 AM
Originally posted by smokincron@Oct 22 2006, 02:34 AM
some shit i did for soze

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/5537/im002788eo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump..

jus cuz i liked how i did that :P

Kayone707
10-23-2006, 01:02 AM
Originally posted by Sou &#045; Mvd@Oct 22 2006, 08:30 PM
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2764/picture460qh4.jpg

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/5498/picture465ts1.jpg

Any critiques would be appreciated.
your 3d is wayyy off... the letters aint proportional, and your tag needs to loose them extra lines..

I aint sayin to copy this but..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslaburn.jpg

See how this kid made his letters all proportional?
try doing block letters with flow. learn your letters&#33;
dont try doing add ons till you get your basics down first..

thats a lil advice for anyone whos willing to hear me

Nosypainter
10-23-2006, 01:09 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 20 2006, 06:34 AM
before u enter that, change these things.....
id take away the boxes around the piece.
the arrow going thru the N either take it out, or fatten it up. like make the first band and horizontal all a flowing line, then on the vertical bit, make that as fat as ur letters and the arrow proportionate with that.

i would do like 3d from the bottom or sumat to but thats up 2 uu...

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5044/dsc01096tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

done that for a battle and the fill nevr came out too well
nice nemz

smokincron
10-23-2006, 01:12 AM
ill^^^^^

Sou - Mvd
10-23-2006, 01:14 AM
your 3d is wayyy off... the letters aint proportional, and your tag needs to loose them extra lines..

I aint sayin to copy this but..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/teslaburn.jpg

See how this kid made his letters all proportional?
try doing block letters with flow. learn your letters&#33;
dont try doing add ons till you get your basics down first..

thats a lil advice for anyone whos willing to hear me





Thanks for the comment.

Looking back on it now, I need to work on a single direction 3d more, attempting that inward and then rainbow style didn&#39;t quite work out.

I get what you&#39;re saying about the letter structure too, I&#39;ll simplify it and focus on some consistancy. I get bored after a while and just start going at it which is probably why my U&#39;s always turn out terrible.

Back to the cardboard I go&#33;

smokincron
10-23-2006, 01:16 AM
y not use paper man? so much better....

Sou - Mvd
10-23-2006, 01:19 AM
haha I did those at work and didn&#39;t have any paper.

That, and I can&#39;t find my sketchbook. :(

d_g
10-23-2006, 01:45 AM
I like that &#39;D&#39; Nemz, just the fill kinda distracts from the lines of the peice.

I&#39;ve been drinking, sorry if that doesn&#39;t make sense.

NoneOfThisIsReal
10-23-2006, 02:06 AM
I like this a lot better than my previous post (just scroll up -- it&#39;s on this page). Any comments on the style? It&#39;s nothing near a lot of the stuff I&#39;ve seen in this topic, I know. Once again I tried to keep the letters consistent and sized right, just trying to develop a style to call my own, and even kind of poked fun at the little swirlies.
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/4592/dscf1696ec4.th.jpg (http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/4592/dscf1696ec4.jpg)

Looks like the paper was bent when I took the picture, but if you follow the lines you&#39;ll see the letters line up.

P!P
10-23-2006, 05:31 AM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Oct 22 2006, 09:10 PM
PIPpy longstockings........ B)
haha....HEYheyHEY

Qlown
10-23-2006, 06:05 AM
Originally posted by Apoc@Oct 23 2006, 10:01 AM
neither of them are good
Why? Id liek to know so it wont happen again.

P!P
10-23-2006, 06:33 AM
wtf ENU, why did you pt someone elses stuff from the begg. of this thread?

koper
10-23-2006, 11:20 AM
heh here is some of my older toyish stuff

from about 3 years ago up until about 9 months ago

Started without any donception of letter structure
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7387/saturnbattlesketchsx8.jpg


Then I started doing simples, and learnt about 3D
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/3961/kopebyrubrdukyea9.jpg
http://img348.imageshack.us/img348/9617/havokbattlebyrubrdukyrb1.jpg
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/7530/poserbattlebyrubrdukywg4.jpg


Started adding some extras, played with working words into shapes, symetry
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/9900/kopealiverbyrubrdukygo7.jpg


Then started adding some elemnts of my handstyle and rounding some edges
http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/6282/koprbyrubrdukyqh7.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3117/trustbattlepiecebyrubrdukyqj7.jpg


And the rest wrote itself
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/5528/poerkbyrubrdukyig3.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/5929/poerkagainbyrubrdukyjx7.jpg

Code
10-23-2006, 11:35 AM
Originally posted by koper@Oct 23 2006, 11:20 AM
heh here is some of my older toyish stuff

from about 3 years ago up until about 9 months ago

Started without any donception of letter structure
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7387/saturnbattlesketchsx8.jpg


Then I started doing simples, and learnt about 3D
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/3961/kopebyrubrdukyea9.jpg
http://img348.imageshack.us/img348/9617/havokbattlebyrubrdukyrb1.jpg
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/7530/poserbattlebyrubrdukywg4.jpg


Started adding some extras, played with working words into shapes, symetry
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/9900/kopealiverbyrubrdukygo7.jpg


Then started adding some elemnts of my handstyle and rounding some edges
http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/6282/koprbyrubrdukyqh7.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3117/trustbattlepiecebyrubrdukyqj7.jpg


And the rest wrote itself
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/5528/poerkbyrubrdukyig3.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/5929/poerkagainbyrubrdukyjx7.jpg
Man, some of those pieces are dope, i wish i could do that good of 3d.

I have been looking for an art school, but since i live in Paris and speak absolutly no french, i cant really take art classes, and i am completly art challenged, but that wont stop me:). Just got to self teach lol

nemzone
10-23-2006, 11:51 AM
new weird fuckin shit, what would u think if u saw this painted??

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/9810/dsc01107zk9.jpg
http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/3930/dsc01106uy1.jpg

Code
10-23-2006, 11:54 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 23 2006, 11:51 AM
new weird fuckin shit, what would u think if u saw this painted??

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/9810/dsc01107zk9.jpg
http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/3930/dsc01106uy1.jpg
aint that bad man, but the letter structure needs some work on those. I have seen some of your other pieces big fan :) try to add your stile to it :)

myl
10-23-2006, 11:59 AM
yeah the first one looks like it says NEVN at first glance

nemzone
10-23-2006, 12:02 PM
yeh its not too good, but i like it for wat started off as a doodle. il elaborate on it then post more later ;)

Skesh
10-23-2006, 12:04 PM
I don&#39;t like it, sorry.

koper, i like &#39;em all. the first looks good too, in my opinion...

-testify-
10-23-2006, 12:14 PM
nemz i actually like it alot...dont know why probably cause it&#39;s sorta different

krazzie_ammo
10-23-2006, 12:19 PM
yeah nemz, i think its ok...no harm in trying something new&#33;&#33;

heres something i did...
http://img335.imageshack.us/img335/8352/33te3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? :D

-testify-
10-23-2006, 12:22 PM
dont do that extension thing on your e and make it in line with the other letters and make the r and a, a lil more close together i like it though

nerdx
10-23-2006, 01:08 PM
nemz that style is nice. but specifically the second one is better.

and myl thanks a bunch you got yours yet?

Twitch1
10-23-2006, 01:22 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/BBOOKCOVER.jpg

Twitch1
10-23-2006, 01:23 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/tara.jpg

Twitch1
10-23-2006, 01:23 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/fREEDOM.jpg

Twitch1
10-23-2006, 01:25 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/SK8.jpg

Twitch1
10-23-2006, 01:26 PM
fuckin a. finially got a new set of pens. critz?

aces
10-23-2006, 01:33 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 23 2006, 12:51 PM
new weird fuckin shit, what would u think if u saw this painted??

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/9810/dsc01107zk9.jpg
http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/3930/dsc01106uy1.jpg
I actually really like the first one but the second one just confuses me and makes me have to look at it for a while to find the letters.

P!P
10-23-2006, 02:58 PM
TWITCH,,.....the second one is my fav. like the eye tricks you did, nie use of direction.

.....didnt really look at all the ltters too much so cant comment on all that rigth now :blink:

Seka.
10-23-2006, 03:15 PM
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/156/pa200263dk2.jpg

Pretty Simple, any crits?


-nemz
i like the style but its real confusing, takes a while to find the letters

flclnaruto1213
10-23-2006, 03:50 PM
No. Not pretty simple.
and no it only took me about 10 seconds to decipher nemz&#39;s stuff, i liked it.

tea dee sea
10-23-2006, 03:51 PM
yoo seka check this out
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/8562/lossdfw4.png
its kinda sloppy but u get the point lol

flclnaruto1213
10-23-2006, 03:52 PM
bro thats not even crits thats straight changing someones style...

**HOSTYLE**V9L_CREW**
10-23-2006, 03:53 PM
so what its a new perspective

PeYGoNeR
10-23-2006, 04:28 PM
first page in my new black book crits plz
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/8134/damean080zx1.jpg
fucked up on the e in the peice

nemzone
10-23-2006, 04:32 PM
im feelin it, and love the big throw. the peice is a lil crammed.

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/9172/dsc01109kw9.jpg
http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/157/dsc01108gn6.jpg

meh i tried, n nothin reli happened lol. fink im gettin a touch of writers block. il see tomorrow or somthin lol

Code
10-23-2006, 04:37 PM
Lol since nobody is critten i guess i will

Twitch= I really like it, though some of your 3d is off, and the letters on your first piece arent very well specified, also the second one is a little better with the structure, but still needs work. I suggest going a little simpiler :)

Seka,= Well its pretty good reminds me of my first sketch:), though its much better. But over all the structure isnt really impressing me and its kind of sloppy like you said, and the "E" aint that good

PayGoner=Man that throwy is dope, lovin the little faces :). As for the piece pretty will made, but next time put a little space in between the letters

Nemzone= Bro, that style could be the next big thing, but just keep tweaking it, not really feelin the flow of the letters, but either way GJ

Lol just to remind you i am probaly more toy then both of you so i am just giving my oppinion. K here i worked on everything you guys told me unfortainetly i kind of screwed up on the coloring. :(



http://img281.imageshack.us/img281/9348/scan0006nq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz please

nemzone
10-23-2006, 04:43 PM
k. try not worry bout colouring, even just do the outline, then a subtle single line forcefield. for 3d, u gotta cut it off about 1-2cm behind ur letters. dont go all the way to the VP looks cheesy. also avoid doin wat u did on the bit coming down from the top of the C. make the lines on either side of that parallel. ;)

uhhh
10-23-2006, 04:45 PM
nemz-i liked your other style better. but i think this defienetly has potential. keep workin at it.

eMJayBee
10-23-2006, 04:49 PM
Just did this, critz?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/scan0043-3.jpg

nemzone
10-23-2006, 04:49 PM
yeh this aint reli a change of style. more of a throw sorta thing, that i could paint. cuz ther aint a hope in hell of me paintin the pieces i can draw lol

Code
10-23-2006, 04:59 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 23 2006, 04:43 PM
k. try not worry bout colouring, even just do the outline, then a subtle single line forcefield. for 3d, u gotta cut it off about 1-2cm behind ur letters. dont go all the way to the VP looks cheesy. also avoid doin wat u did on the bit coming down from the top of the C. make the lines on either side of that parallel. ;)
K man ty, time to pick up the pencil and drop the markers :)

emJay= you seem very artistic and the 3d is dope, but the letter structure needs work, go back a little add that 3d to simpler stuff and then move on to the more advanced stuff

neza
10-23-2006, 05:10 PM
a present for a girl called shana

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/5970/shana1colourhu3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

PeYGoNeR
10-23-2006, 05:52 PM
neza thats fucking dope y u posting in here??

Soze One.
10-23-2006, 05:56 PM
Originally posted by PeYGoNeR@Oct 23 2006, 05:52 PM
neza thats fucking dope y u posting in here??
agree&#39;d

TricksForKids
10-23-2006, 05:56 PM
neza where the fck did that come from? your still hiding not the best letters especially that H, but other than that im diggin it, shoulda done a thin baclk outline to make your eltters stand out, but the colouring is fire

neza
10-23-2006, 05:57 PM
if i post that in the main forum they will send me here trust me that is toy compared to their standards

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 05:57 PM
I fucking love those blue highlight things... Not so sure of the H though. I&#39;m not too big of a fan of pointy things overall so I guess it&#39;s personal opinion about that. But the blue things are sweeeet. Your 3d is fucked in a lot places too. And work on them handies.

neza
10-23-2006, 06:02 PM
cheers guys ill stick an outline on it

handstyles are my week point i do practice em but i just suck lol

i rushed it a bit hence the screwed 3d took about an hour to outline and 20 mins to colour

-neza

Fixion
10-23-2006, 06:09 PM
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5748/dscf2068zo8.jpg
Might fill in the 3D if it&#39;s good :&#092;. Crits anybody?

emokid
10-23-2006, 06:10 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 23 2006, 05:56 PM
neza where the fck did that come from? your still hiding not the best letters especially that H, but other than that im diggin it, shoulda done a thin baclk outline to make your eltters stand out, but the colouring is fire
agreed, that came out of nowhere, that eclipses anything else youve posted which ive seen by a very long way

PeYGoNeR
10-23-2006, 06:14 PM
fixion nice and simple try taking off the extentions on youe letters like the botom of your f the top of your x and on the top and botom of your n and it looks like u messed up on the f abit ohh and the 3d is a lil bit off in someplaces...just tring to help lol peace

TricksForKids
10-23-2006, 06:15 PM
neza, to practice handstyles, i mean, im no kings, but to practice just do really clean simple eltters and have them flow nicely together:

like, heres a progression of my name:, dont know if its gunna help but whatever:
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3589/cameronhandstylegn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and a little bump of my ish uncoloured and then coloured:

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/5696/bawkredvn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/9870/bawkyellwpurpyh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fixion
10-23-2006, 06:18 PM
Originally posted by Fixion@Oct 23 2006, 06:09 PM
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5748/dscf2068zo8.jpg
Might fill in the 3D if it&#39;s good :&#092;. Crits anybody?
PeYGoNeR thanks.

Can I get more crits? Just bumped up my post.

TricksForKids, your stuff is pretty much dope.

neza
10-23-2006, 06:20 PM
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/7569/shana2hw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just an out line any crits befor i add colour

-neza

TricksForKids
10-23-2006, 06:21 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 23 2006, 06:15 PM
neza, to practice handstyles, i mean, im no kings, but to practice just do really clean simple eltters and have them flow nicely together:

like, heres a progression of my name:, dont know if its gunna help but whatever:
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3589/cameronhandstylegn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and a little bump of my ish uncoloured and then coloured:

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/5696/bawkredvn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/9870/bawkyellwpurpyh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump to second page

fixion, its looking pretty nice and simple, try to make your 3D cleaner, and work with the extensions to make them a bit simpler, especially the little points coming off the N

TricksForKids
10-23-2006, 06:22 PM
*shana i dont like the a&#39;s and H, the S is hot and the N is ok, but theres a bit too much going on in the H and the as dont have the greatest structure, try making the a&#39;s a bit more defined and calm down on the H

neza
10-23-2006, 06:24 PM
i dont like the purple smudges i fink a simple force feild would look nicer

those black details are hot though

AoAssis
10-23-2006, 06:25 PM
yo tricks hows my sketch comin?

TricksForKids
10-23-2006, 06:39 PM
Ao, i have you set up for my sketching time on wednesday night, i got the whooole night to do it, its gunna be fire, but i forget what you write

clam?

alive
10-23-2006, 06:40 PM
learning to rock the ill bubbles
(old ass piece filled in, not that im much better now)
wondering what u think of my handstyle
havent been sketching much lately, gotta get back on it


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02836.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02837.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02838.jpg


crits would make u my new best friend.
peace.

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 06:46 PM
OK, I decided Swet is too good for me to be writing his name around so I&#39;m gonna play around with swekt, sound good?

Also tricks, hate to say it but your A, W and K all lack in good structure. The A is OK, but the bar doesn&#39;t fit the style, the W is barely recognizable, it just looks like a couple bars and the top right part of the K just isn&#39;t doing it for me... Otherwise I love it, but yeah, the B just seems to jump out since it&#39;s very well defined unlike the other letters and it seems to be the most "full" is that makes any sense

:edit: Cear, I fucking love that handie with the bubbles under it for some reason. It just looks awesome

doinitagain
10-23-2006, 06:47 PM
very nice handstyle, better than mine i suck at em

Fixion
10-23-2006, 06:47 PM
Awesome. The first one, the A looks kinda messed up. Don&#39;t know about your others though.

neza
10-23-2006, 06:48 PM
in the first handy the a cold be a tad bigger but other than that i like em the buble are a bit busy try em wiv like 2 coulours instead of 4 but its cool

Hot_Pocket
10-23-2006, 06:48 PM
I guess all I can actually crit is handstyle because that&#39;s all I can really do :)

You&#39;re going in the right direction, but the A is just kinda blah, just chillin there. I&#39;m in love with the E and R&#39;s are hella hard for me to do and I like yours.

Viate
10-23-2006, 07:21 PM
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC03012.jpg

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 07:23 PM
Once again your E is too big and the I seems like it&#39;s flying away which I don&#39;t like much... Th eother letters are sweet though. Lovin that T

koper
10-23-2006, 07:28 PM
Originally posted by alive@Oct 23 2006, 06:40 PM
learning to rock the ill bubbles
(old ass piece filled in, not that im much better now)
wondering what u think of my handstyle
havent been sketching much lately, gotta get back on it


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02836.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02837.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02838.jpg


crits would make u my new best friend.
peace.
the piece has reasonable good structure except for the C, it doesnt fit. It&#39;s not overlapping the E and how you have it weighted heavily at the top left does not work. 3D is good. But clean p your lines man. Use a ruler if you have to until your used to it but damn, the scribbliness of takes away from it for sure.
Handsyle is nice and simple, the bubbles look dope



Just clean it up and keep playing with letters.

alive
10-23-2006, 07:32 PM
wow thanks, im thrilled to get crits from you. scribbled lines are because i usually sketch without a pencil, just straight "pen freestyle". seems to flow better for me, but then it turns out like that. but recently ive absolved to start using a pencil.
good point with the overlap and all that.

ill try to post up my work more, the problem is that half the time u end up getting passed by, and the other half u only get crits from people much worse. vry rare that u get something helpful like yourself. but im gonna start.

peace.

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 07:38 PM
Yeah, kayone came on here too. I think more experienced writers should come on here more often. It really helps

Chop Logic
10-23-2006, 07:40 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/best2.jpg

Crits/comments please, thanks, im trying to get better.

Punny
10-23-2006, 07:45 PM
A peice that was meant for the toy battle, but i ran out of time to do it.
Crits would help.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v26/eccobox/Can2.jpg

Punny
10-23-2006, 07:49 PM
@Chop
It looks pretty good except for the fact that the extension on the right makes the P look like an R.

Bastardo
10-23-2006, 07:50 PM
MmmmHmm nice and simple. stick with it.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5555/picture090py6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Euro stylezzz. History book hell yeh :lol:
need a colour scheme?


http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/5124/picture091yy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
throws

aces
10-23-2006, 07:52 PM
Originally posted by Viate@Oct 23 2006, 08:21 PM
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC03012.jpg
Were you on as a different person before? Your style looks a little familiar but I can&#39;t quite say who it reminds me of.

Punny
10-23-2006, 07:53 PM
Now that ive posted my pic i realized how horrible my tag is. I think i should go back to righting wheaty. Longer tags look better. =P

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 07:53 PM
Loving that euro shit soek.

Punny, see the ends of the C and how they&#39;re different widths than the rest of the letters? Work on that, but other than that it&#39;s a siick simple

obseen
10-23-2006, 07:54 PM
fuking nice bastardo, lovin em

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by aces+Oct 23 2006, 07:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Oct 23 2006, 07:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Viate@Oct 23 2006, 08:21 PM
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC03012.jpg
Were you on as a different person before? Your style looks a little familiar but I can&#39;t quite say who it reminds me of. [/b][/quote]
He was the all famous Rend haha

PeYGoNeR
10-23-2006, 08:02 PM
yoo bastardo your styles soo ill
a new throwie i came up with about 5mins ago wut do u all think??
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/6959/damean081eh9.jpg

obseen
10-23-2006, 08:03 PM
rend i like your style
i like the colours, i dont get why you keep chanigng abbounts though
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7623/pict0004yo3.jpg
for a battle on bb

-testify-
10-23-2006, 08:05 PM
whats bb

i like it alot though

nemzone
10-23-2006, 08:15 PM
wtf battle is that for?&#33;? i gonna ave trouble wiv it anyways :o :o

such an improvement m8&#33; also, bastardo, u no i love em lol. the 1 with the E with on arrow is my fav ;)

aces
10-23-2006, 08:20 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Oct 23 2006, 08:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Oct 23 2006, 08:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by aces@Oct 23 2006, 07:52 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Viate@Oct 23 2006, 08:21 PM
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC03012.jpg
Were you on as a different person before? Your style looks a little familiar but I can&#39;t quite say who it reminds me of.
He was the all famous Rend haha [/b][/quote]
Haha I knew I knew who it was just couldn&#39;t get it out of my mouth.

PeYGoNeR
10-23-2006, 08:24 PM
Originally posted by PeYGoNeR@Oct 23 2006, 08:02 PM
yoo bastardo your styles soo ill
a new throwie i came up with about 5mins ago wut do u all think??
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/6959/damean081eh9.jpg
bump to a new page crits??

-testify-
10-23-2006, 08:32 PM
thats worse than mine make all the letters the same size and dont make the g so sideways and dont connect some letters to each other at one place and other letters other places

TricksForKids
10-23-2006, 08:35 PM
Peyg go back to your old styl,e it flowed alot better

-testify-
10-23-2006, 08:37 PM
ok its not worse than mine

alera
10-23-2006, 08:37 PM
messin with extensions & stuff, i hate postin stuff up half finished but i dont got that much time
hopfull y my prismas will come in tomorow so i can add some collor :D
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3521/1023062128vv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz are always welcome.

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 08:40 PM
That out those random ribbon things and it&#39;d be bangin

afek
10-23-2006, 08:41 PM
seems alright

but i wouldnt do it on graph paper


2 letter throw
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/104_0176.jpg
comments?

Fosale!
10-23-2006, 08:43 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Oct 23 2006, 08:05 PM
whats bb

i like it alot though
www.britishbombing.com (http://www.britishbombing.com)

Fixion
10-23-2006, 08:45 PM
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/6523/dscf2069fy6.jpg
Crits anybody? Another simple, with a shadow. Ignore the crappy character <_<

YarHarHar
10-23-2006, 08:47 PM
dont lie the tops of the letters or the bottom of the c..or the m....i gues si dont really liek it..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2019.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2018.jpg

PeYGoNeR
10-23-2006, 08:50 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 23 2006, 08:35 PM
Peyg go back to your old styl,e it flowed alot better
yea i was just trying a new style thanks
posting more pic&#39;s t.m peace

F.R.A.T.
10-23-2006, 08:52 PM
Jar im really felling the piece just not the little gold bits flyin off
Just My 2 Cents
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture72.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture74.jpg
A piece and throw i just did
Critz?? :) :)

afek
10-23-2006, 08:53 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Oct 23 2006, 09:47 PM
dont lie the tops of the letters or the bottom of the c..or the m....i gues si dont really liek it..


its gm.. but ya i know wat you me it still needs tweaking

ghozt
10-23-2006, 08:53 PM
fixion maybe u shuld complete the o?

and jar im likin ur lil karak or w.e it is

koper
10-23-2006, 08:54 PM
Originally posted by alera@Oct 23 2006, 08:37 PM
messin with extensions & stuff, i hate postin stuff up half finished but i dont got that much time
hopfull y my prismas will come in tomorow so i can add some collor :D
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3521/1023062128vv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz are always welcome.
i like where this is going

Fixion
10-23-2006, 08:57 PM
Originally posted by Fixion@Oct 23 2006, 08:45 PM
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/6523/dscf2069fy6.jpg
Crits anybody? Another simple, with a shadow. Ignore the crappy character <_<
Thanks ghozt. More crits? Bumped to this page now. Don&#39;t crit on the O not being completed because now I really think it shoulda been completed :P.

To Alera: Maybe lose the extensions.

littlerocky
10-23-2006, 09:01 PM
Fixion i liek how ur keepin it simple dont liek the charac tho ....
messin around tryin to add some extensions and shit to my style
http://img330.imageshack.us/img330/933/imgp0561xd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
quick pencil sketch
crits and comments please
reads MUGS

F.R.A.T.
10-23-2006, 09:01 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Oct 23 2006, 08:52 PM

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture72.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture74.jpg
A piece and throw i just did
Critz?? :) :)
bump cause it was on the end of the last page

afek
10-23-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by afek@Oct 23 2006, 09:41 PM
seems alright

but i wouldnt do it on graph paper


2 letter throw
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/104_0176.jpg
comments?
new page

Fixion
10-23-2006, 09:04 PM
To F.R.A.T.: Your Z looks like a 2 on the second one. The first one is ill.

YarHarHar
10-23-2006, 09:10 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Oct 23 2006, 08:47 PM
dont lie the tops of the letters or the bottom of the c..or the m....i gues si dont really liek it..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2019.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2018.jpg
bumppppp

and its a j wiht a face jus a short version of my throw

littlerocky
10-23-2006, 09:14 PM
i like those j throws ther enice and first one is nice to accept the j looks a little out of place...any shit on mine?

terower
10-23-2006, 09:16 PM
JAR5- Fresh as usual... I really dig how you construct letters. As far as the J face goes... I think I like it more if I pretend it&#39;s just a face. Either way, it&#39;s fresh as hell.

Just outlined this now... Fucked up the R a little bit...
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h56/terower/Photo84.jpg
Feedback?

Fosale!
10-23-2006, 09:19 PM
dont write sort.
Hare2 will burnyou.
he writes Sort.

ghozt
10-23-2006, 09:29 PM
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/1064/scan0033jz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1084/scan0034wm4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits???

terower
10-23-2006, 09:39 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Oct 23 2006, 09:19 PM
dont write sort.
Hare2 will burnyou.
he writes Sort.
So?

Everyone writes everything at this point. I&#39;ve been using this name for two and a half years now, and this is the first I&#39;ve heard of another guy. Which means we most likely don&#39;t write in the same area (where is he from?). Unless he explicitly told me he had a problem with it, I&#39;m not going to change my name because of him.

Fosale!
10-23-2006, 09:40 PM
wow.
2.5 years
doesnt show.

terower
10-23-2006, 09:42 PM
Blah blah blah. Why are you trying to start shit? It&#39;s pointless.

Viate
10-23-2006, 09:52 PM
ive wrote for about... a year i guess?

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 09:59 PM
Yeah same. I started around November/December 2005, so close to a year

:edit: New pencil sketch says "swekt"

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0280.jpg

DUF
10-23-2006, 10:17 PM
i like it man. w looks a little odd but it&#39;s sick dude.

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 10:18 PM
Yeah, I majorly fucked up my W and my T in that one

aces
10-23-2006, 10:24 PM
Yea the T looks horrid and the W is ok but the rest is pretty sick. I don&#39;t like how your E and your S get really skinny and then the rest of the letters aren&#39;t as skinny if that makes any sense. BTW are we still on with the halloween battle with paint fumes?

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 10:26 PM
Yeah I just PMed him a character sketch to see if he liked it. I&#39;ll PM it to you now

NoneOfThisIsReal
10-23-2006, 10:35 PM
Originally posted by NoneOfThisIsReal@Oct 23 2006, 03:06 AM
I like this a lot better than my previous post (just scroll up -- it&#39;s on this page). Any comments on the style? It&#39;s nothing near a lot of the stuff I&#39;ve seen in this topic, I know. Once again I tried to keep the letters consistent and sized right, just trying to develop a style to call my own, and even kind of poked fun at the little swirlies.
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/4592/dscf1696ec4.th.jpg (http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/4592/dscf1696ec4.jpg)

Looks like the paper was bent when I took the picture, but if you follow the lines you&#39;ll see the letters line up.
Bump because it was passed up. Any comments on the style? Go even simpler? Etc.

bouncingsoul
10-23-2006, 10:38 PM
Well you got the width and stuff down I see. Just work on letter structure now. I suggest using bars because it&#39;s a really good way to develop style too. Mess around with different shaped bars and shit and see what you like

NoneOfThisIsReal
10-23-2006, 10:40 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Oct 23 2006, 11:38 PM
Well you got the width and stuff down I see. Just work on letter structure now. I suggest using bars because it&#39;s a really good way to develop style too. Mess around with different shaped bars and shit and see what you like
Alright, thanks.