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nemzone
10-29-2006, 09:13 AM
i like it. u missed 3d on the top part of the exclamation. i also question some of ur punchlines lol

skan2
10-29-2006, 09:16 AM
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/6372/1001001wb7.jpg
the thing on the a is suppose to be a snail.

crits

P!P
10-29-2006, 09:40 AM
the A and the N connected looks a bit sloppy, and i dunno about that snail. lol

krazzie_ammo
10-29-2006, 09:47 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 29 2006, 10:13 AM
i like it. u missed 3d on the top part of the exclamation. i also question some of ur punchlines lol
lol...i was watching friends and thats what ross said :P

main2kNup
10-29-2006, 09:48 AM
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i180180597_85431_6.jpg

Crits please?

P!P
10-29-2006, 09:50 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo+Oct 29 2006, 11:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (krazzie_ammo @ Oct 29 2006, 11:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Oct 29 2006, 10:13 AM
i like it. u missed 3d on the top part of the exclamation. i also question some of ur punchlines lol
lol...i was watching friends and thats what ross said :P [/b][/quote]
ummm i love that show. but never seen him say that before. cant wait til i do though.
haha, i will break my balls laughing

Necro-
10-29-2006, 09:51 AM
pip go sketch

krazzie_ammo
10-29-2006, 10:04 AM
Originally posted by P&#33;P+Oct 29 2006, 10:50 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (P&#33;P @ Oct 29 2006, 10:50 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Oct 29 2006, 11:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Oct 29 2006, 10:13 AM
i like it. u missed 3d on the top part of the exclamation. i also question some of ur punchlines lol
lol...i was watching friends and thats what ross said :P
ummm i love that show. but never seen him say that before. cant wait til i do though.
haha, i will break my balls laughing [/b][/quote]
yeahh...ermm he says it when rachel doesnt say good bye and he says to her "goodbye goodbye goodbye goodbye guuu....omg, its physically impossible&#33;"

nemzone
10-29-2006, 10:10 AM
i thot u ment ross said what i said lol

P!P
10-29-2006, 10:20 AM
ye i was lost too

taxus
10-29-2006, 10:28 AM
....

JFK_crew
10-29-2006, 10:30 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p144/jfk_3/dub.jpg

P!P
10-29-2006, 10:30 AM
crits or comments?http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00418.jpg

nemzone
10-29-2006, 10:41 AM
its alot better than the garbage u posted b4.. but u gotta work on straighter lines.

Sumoe
10-29-2006, 10:41 AM
your lines look really shaky, the X looks a lil too thin compared to the other letters, clean the lines up a lil bit, good thing your doin simples and not tryin to do wild style stuff yet

P!P
10-29-2006, 11:00 AM
thanks guys, illl get another one up soon.

skan2
10-29-2006, 11:06 AM
pip man your gettin better

DUF
10-29-2006, 11:15 AM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5096.jpg

furious
10-29-2006, 11:20 AM
Originally posted by tycoonin@Oct 25 2006, 11:11 PM
u do know bape is a clothing brand rite? but im definently feelin the peice
yeah i know that hah

idc though, bape is fresh

P!P
10-29-2006, 11:36 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00419.jpg

P!P
10-29-2006, 11:37 AM
Originally posted by skan2@Oct 29 2006, 01:06 PM
pip man your gettin better
thanks bro, But i reaally need some help with my handie. noobdy has helped yet.
could you try it out?? i write PEROX

-testify-
10-29-2006, 11:39 AM
Originally posted by Poptart@Oct 29 2006, 08:52 AM
hey fellow toys. i am experimenting with new styles so its safe to call me a toy. im 11 and have been doing graff for 4 months
OMGGZZ JOO R TEH PIG&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
just kidding
but seriously what are you asking, post something if you want help...piggy

P!P
10-29-2006, 11:40 AM
:o :blink: :D :D :D :D :D :huh: :P :D :D :D :D :D :P :P :P HAHHAAAA

bezerk
10-29-2006, 12:07 PM
my scanner is retarded and cut off the K..

http://i13.tinypic.com/47apngx.jpg

nemzone
10-29-2006, 12:11 PM
bezerk i find it hard 2 believe u actually are trying. i think ur sum1 who got banned and is just fuckin around.

if not, DO FUCKIN SIMPLES &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; ITS NOT HARD SO DONT FUCK UP AND DO WOT U JUST POSTED EVER AGAIN
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

P!P
10-29-2006, 12:18 PM
Originally posted by P&#33;P@Oct 29 2006, 01:36 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/phillian0/DSC00419.jpg
OR COMMENTS?

Soze One.
10-29-2006, 12:39 PM
some people just can&#39;t draw.
p&#33;p you might just be one of dem.

P!P
10-29-2006, 12:43 PM
if you say so man...Not gonna keep me from trying to get better.
I have potential. so you cant say i just CANT draw.
im nto one of them man

Soze One.
10-29-2006, 12:45 PM
Just calling it how I see it.

Fixion
10-29-2006, 12:48 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Oct 29 2006, 08:46 AM
hey how is the graff scene out in england man . . i live in san diego and the street scene which was vibrant in the late 90s is dead cuz the buff patrol washes your stuff in less than 24 hrs . . . i mean they just killed it, nobody can get steady rep . . i got a 40 yr old excon crack head ho who said shes doing good now that she livin in a trailer bitch bringin my injured pup an icee hot and thats real . . . . man i wasnt even tryin to have a late night . . . . but i hope i get to give this bitch a pearl necklace&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
What part in San Diego man? :D I live here too.

furious
10-29-2006, 12:53 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/001.jpg
new throw, criticize it baby

pip take more time sketching, everything you do is kinda wack. your lines are all unorganized and your letters have no form and need to be the same size

honesty is the best way to critique, no sugar coating

namesake
10-29-2006, 01:08 PM
Yo BAPE, i think that ur throw is pretty good but im not really feeling the B. The APE is good though, just try to fix up the B, man. :D

Mse
10-29-2006, 01:36 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Oct 29 2006, 01:11 PM
bezerk i find it hard 2 believe u actually are trying. i think ur sum1 who got banned and is just fuckin around.

if not, DO FUCKIN SIMPLES &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; ITS NOT HARD SO DONT FUCK UP AND DO WOT U JUST POSTED EVER AGAIN
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
please proceed to shut the fuck up

flclnaruto1213
10-29-2006, 01:46 PM
Bleh, idea page, quick sketches
crits welcome
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/9339/lalalaef1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nemzone
10-29-2006, 02:02 PM
Originally posted by Mse+Oct 29 2006, 07:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mse @ Oct 29 2006, 07:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Oct 29 2006, 01:11 PM
bezerk i find it hard 2 believe u actually are trying. i think ur sum1 who got banned and is just fuckin around.

if not, DO FUCKIN SIMPLES &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; ITS NOT HARD SO DONT FUCK UP AND DO WOT U JUST POSTED EVER AGAIN
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
please proceed to shut the fuck up [/b][/quote]
so u dont agree?

:)

Viate
10-29-2006, 02:02 PM
yo.
wen i use my new york fats or blue dots on america&#39;s finest black and silver paint, they dont make flairs. but wen i use them on other type of cans, the flairs come easily. like really really nice flairs.

wut type of caps are good to make flairs for americas finest?

btw, the america&#39;s finest is cheap paint.

furious
10-29-2006, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by furious@Oct 29 2006, 01:53 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/001.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/002.jpg
b&#39;s a little different in that one

sorry for the bump but the page ended

alera
10-29-2006, 02:17 PM
dont know about the b maby make it uppercase.

tryin a new style
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/9728/1029061512akv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz? or any suggestions?

furious
10-29-2006, 02:28 PM
Originally posted by searoner@Oct 29 2006, 07:27 AM
alright im new on here im from the u.k. some people might know me from british bombing or as tearz on here a long time a go. hoping to get some advice on my stuff heres a few new things...
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/5281/04010002xo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/3007/04010001rm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sear 2m2s
best post in a while...

Viate
10-29-2006, 02:44 PM
yo.
wen i use my new york fats or blue dots on america&#39;s finest black and silver paint, they dont make flairs. but wen i use them on other type of cans, the flairs come easily. like really really nice flairs.

wut type of caps are good to make flairs for americas finest?

btw, the america&#39;s finest is cheap paint.

furious
10-29-2006, 02:51 PM
cant help you with that but this wouldnt really be the thread to post it in

but americas finest is decent paint for so cheap

rusto makes it

AoAssis
10-29-2006, 03:31 PM
Some fo Mse&#39;s shit, he couldnt post it so im postin it up for him.

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596...3/200039506.jpg (http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/200039506.jpg)

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596...3/200039467.jpg (http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/200039467.jpg)

P!P
10-29-2006, 03:33 PM
furious...yeah thanks, and i was just getting kind of mad because he was prty much saying i should not try anymore
,,,,not like i am listening to that or nothin. but yeah i will take more time.need a flat surface...been doing it in my lap at the comp. =)

flclnaruto1213
10-29-2006, 03:59 PM
shit and stil no crits. Damn you guys are rough

AoAssis
10-29-2006, 04:02 PM
I like the one outlined in red. Do me a clam :)

F.R.A.T.
10-29-2006, 04:03 PM
that shoe is fuckin dopee i love it :wub:

kore
10-29-2006, 04:05 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff016.jpg
Crits?
I think it looked better before I fucked it up trying to color it:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff015.jpg


bape: i like the 2nd b better, but yeah try an uppercase one too and see how it looks. might look even better.

AoAssis or Mse or whatever: shits lookin dooopee. i love your style.

Sear: Hot shit man&#33; keep postin more&#33;

Alera: don&#39;t like it too much. it&#39;s too busy. hard to make out the letters.

F.R.A.T.
10-29-2006, 04:21 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Oct 23 2006, 09:01 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture72.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture74.jpg


Any Critz all i got was that the z looked like a 2
keso it did look better in pencil cause u coloured to far in on the k

poopis
10-29-2006, 04:25 PM
Originally posted by kore@Oct 29 2006, 05:05 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff016.jpg
Crits?
I think it looked better before I fucked it up trying to color it:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff015.jpg


bape: i like the 2nd b better, but yeah try an uppercase one too and see how it looks. might look even better.

AoAssis or Mse or whatever: shits lookin dooopee. i love your style.

Sear: Hot shit man&#33; keep postin more&#33;

Alera: don&#39;t like it too much. it&#39;s too busy. hard to make out the letters.
lovin it alot man nice, simple, and good. Keep it up.

And Frat it looks pretty good the just that Z that needs work...and the glob or arrow right in the middle of the C and the E looks pretty odd, Other than that it looks nice. And the last one the C looks alittle odd.

Detoxication
10-29-2006, 04:28 PM
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n204/dhertzz/sevik.jpg

kore
10-29-2006, 04:28 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.+Oct 29 2006, 05:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (F.R.A.T. @ Oct 29 2006, 05:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-F.R.A.T.@Oct 23 2006, 09:01 PM
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture72.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture74.jpg


Any Critz all i got was that the z looked like a 2
keso it did look better in pencil cause u coloured to far in on the k [/b][/quote]
Yeah the Z does look like a 2 but other than that the throwie looks fine. The piece look like it has too many arrows. at the end it look like theres 2 z&#39;s cause of that weird extension.

poopis: thanks man

alera
10-29-2006, 04:42 PM
Originally posted by alera@Oct 29 2006, 03:17 PM
dont know about the b maby make it uppercase.

tryin a new style
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/9728/1029061512akv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz? or any suggestions?
dident get that many critz <_<

keso- it does look better wit the pencil
only thing im not fellin is the leg of the K
just my 2 cents

nerdx
10-29-2006, 04:47 PM
The A kind of got lost once you went more complex. but other than that its nice.

poopis
10-29-2006, 05:45 PM
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/1367/0012mt5.th.jpg (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0012mt5.jpg)

Nother attempt at a peice i know the size goes down just criticism on the structure on my new lettering please before i color and try to add arrows.(might have to click to see the hidden features)

P!P
10-29-2006, 06:43 PM
Originally posted by nerdx@Oct 29 2006, 06:47 PM
The A kind of got lost once you went more complex. but other than that its nice.
ye looks kinda like an R

sky 5
10-29-2006, 06:45 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2128/1202011yb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

posted a how to do the fill for this in the new2graf thread . . . get ups

dude above . .your letters get progressively smaller man, use that eraser and try again, maybe grab a ruler and draw a rectangle then fill in 90% or so of that rectangle with letters . . make the rectangle kinda narrow thoo . . 2inches high

myl
10-29-2006, 06:50 PM
pretty dope sky, you make it look so easy

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0136-1.jpg
quick simple i came up with today

edit: im not too fond of the T...

searoner
10-29-2006, 06:52 PM
i like the colours sky what does it say?
myl not bad looksw like youre getting a grip with structure i would take thoose little things of the ends though,
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6933/img0016iy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

sky 5
10-29-2006, 07:07 PM
it says R . . . SEAR i dig your style, you might wanna try fixin the R up alil thoo, maybe have some open space in that top loop part of the R . . once you get that down i think your good to go on up to the reg thread . .SEFT - yeah the T comes out too far, too big compared to the other letters . . .maybe try gettin some vertical movement going with some well placed extensions, help tie in your letters more

Boxer
10-29-2006, 07:09 PM
i did this this moring. pleas give feedback

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7568/skillzxh8.jpg

and i did this for my friend last week

http://myspace-630.vo.llnwd.net/01350/03/64/1350934630_l.jpg

feedback plz

myl
10-29-2006, 07:13 PM
thanks for the crits guys...

boxer do simple letters like arial font shit

TricksForKids
10-29-2006, 07:58 PM
hot page, theres too much to comment on....just busted out this pen freestyle

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8263/bawkredblackje5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

beone
10-29-2006, 08:01 PM
i like the style u got always with the lines fading into the center but you should change it up every now and then....i dont like the letters so much on this except the b...pretty good tho

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/258870.jpg
stickers are from jamaica

Fixion
10-29-2006, 08:01 PM
Tricks that is ill&#33;

Soze One.
10-29-2006, 09:04 PM
damn sky5
i like your shit.

Soze One.
10-30-2006, 12:57 AM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1323.jpg

Nosypainter
10-30-2006, 01:34 AM
Originally posted by kore@Oct 29 2006, 05:05 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff016.jpg
Crits?
I think it looked better before I fucked it up trying to color it:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff015.jpg


bape: i like the 2nd b better, but yeah try an uppercase one too and see how it looks. might look even better.

AoAssis or Mse or whatever: shits lookin dooopee. i love your style.

Sear: Hot shit man&#33; keep postin more&#33;

Alera: don&#39;t like it too much. it&#39;s too busy. hard to make out the letters.
im not feeling the k to much, work on the style of it...

Qlown
10-30-2006, 05:20 AM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 30 2006, 09:58 AM
hot page, theres too much to comment on....just busted out this pen freestyle

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8263/bawkredblackje5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Really good job as usual, maybe try your hand at a deifferent style?

alive
10-30-2006, 05:56 AM
exchange for sky5
u know, whenever i fill shit inm it loses its. . . i dunno. sharpness. definition. cuz the lines are to fat and rounded then i think.
then a quick pencil sketch. ive vowed to start always using the pencil

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02839.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02840.jpg



peace.

bouncingsoul
10-30-2006, 09:09 AM
Kinda wierd because I vowed to use pen haha

Not really feelin the reks sketch prolly because what you said... sharpness etc. The cear sketch looks good though. The E and the R are nice, the C and the A could use some work though. Keep sketchin&#33;

enigmatic
10-30-2006, 09:21 AM
Reks. Looks okay, Needs a little cleanng up.

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/1934/1001285do7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz Please. Sorry for the huge ass pic... I cant minimize it on this comp. Anyway im thinking of changhing my name to something a lil shorter. Maybe like "A-MEN" since i already know those letters and that name cracks me up :lol:

aces
10-30-2006, 02:08 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 29 2006, 09:58 PM
hot page, theres too much to comment on....just busted out this pen freestyle

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8263/bawkredblackje5.jpg (http://62.193.235.46/servlet/redirect.srv/p5.p1.pnshoncsmpy.pkj/)
Just want to say that the W gets messed up on all of the things that I see you do. The K looks a little weird because it is connected but other than that it&#39;s nice. Keep it up.

ras
10-30-2006, 02:53 PM
Anoda Nu Name ... DUB This tym...Messin round widdit

Lil Throw and Karak...

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/3334/dubyg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits And Comments Pleeeease............................... ;)

OliveOil
10-30-2006, 02:55 PM
speak english please.

flclnaruto1213
10-30-2006, 02:59 PM
word it actually took me a few minutes to figure out what "anoda" meant.

ras
10-30-2006, 03:02 PM
okay...heres another new name...just messing around with it...that better

now can i have some crits and comments on it now please... ;)

Sumoe
10-30-2006, 03:18 PM
Ras can&#39;t really help u out cause i&#39;m no good at throwies but looks good to me..
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/7294/dsc0110pg7.jpg
Crits?

ras
10-30-2006, 03:26 PM
Holy Sh*t Sumoe thats Ace Mate :o :D

some guy from NCI...
10-30-2006, 03:35 PM
See you took a little shine to sky5 work ;)

jerm_mtl
10-30-2006, 04:19 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Oct 30 2006, 02:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Oct 30 2006, 02:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-kore@Oct 29 2006, 05:05 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff016.jpg
Crits?
I think it looked better before I fucked it up trying to color it:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff015.jpg


bape: i like the 2nd b better, but yeah try an uppercase one too and see how it looks. might look even better.

AoAssis or Mse or whatever: shits lookin dooopee. i love your style.

Sear: Hot shit man&#33; keep postin more&#33;

Alera: don&#39;t like it too much. it&#39;s too busy. hard to make out the letters.
im not feeling the k to much, work on the style of it... [/b][/quote]
did u know that queso means cheese in spanish hahahaha

Sumoe
10-30-2006, 04:31 PM
cheese :blink:

FIN one
10-30-2006, 05:14 PM
3-d or shadow is a little off and some parts of the s and e look off. but good work tho

Soze One.
10-30-2006, 05:19 PM
fuckin around at school.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1324.jpg

TricksForKids
10-30-2006, 05:41 PM
way too mnay arrows soze, theres not even any letters thre, well there is..and S and an R and maybe a scrunched up O, but go back to your letters man, those arrows are coming out of nowhere for no reason

sumoe, nice shit, the letters are still a bit jagged but your good colouring hides it well, nice penguin too

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/1259/bawkgreenthrowupmf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Soze One.
10-30-2006, 05:44 PM
imma go back to basic letters i was just bored in chemistry

ONLY
10-30-2006, 06:02 PM
where should arrows be put??

RepUrSet
10-30-2006, 06:06 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 30 2006, 06:41 PM
way too mnay arrows soze, theres not even any letters thre, well there is..and S and an R and maybe a scrunched up O, but go back to your letters man, those arrows are coming out of nowhere for no reason

sumoe, nice shit, the letters are still a bit jagged but your good colouring hides it well, nice penguin too

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/1259/bawkgreenthrowupmf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sick how u use the actual letter for the holes in the letter
nvr seen that done before :o

myl
10-30-2006, 06:28 PM
yeah thats a real sick idea man, looks phat as hell

A-chue!
10-30-2006, 06:36 PM
heres a quik summary of my name change crits

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVNUEROP.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HevnBLUEfade.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/hevn14.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/ruffhevnthrow.jpg]http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/gin...ffhevnthrow.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/Hevnearthy.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/Hevncanvas.jpg
canvas im gonna

N.O.T.E
10-30-2006, 06:47 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/9594/clipboard01hm0.jpg
did this for a battle...need serious critiques

Sumoe
10-30-2006, 06:51 PM
n.o.t.e.,not too fond of the background or the bottom part of the E, i do like how the A connects to the S pretty good overall :)

a-chue really likin the second one, dont like the second to last one but good color choice and fade on it.

Prism
10-30-2006, 07:21 PM
http://i14.tinypic.com/2j15uty.jpg
Meh Im still new

bouncingsoul
10-30-2006, 08:01 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 30 2006, 06:41 PM
way too mnay arrows soze, theres not even any letters thre, well there is..and S and an R and maybe a scrunched up O, but go back to your letters man, those arrows are coming out of nowhere for no reason

sumoe, nice shit, the letters are still a bit jagged but your good colouring hides it well, nice penguin too

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/1259/bawkgreenthrowupmf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
...Am I the only one who doesn&#39;t like the lettering thing? Personal thing I guess...?

But I fucking love that K

ONLY
10-30-2006, 08:02 PM
sumoe thats it really sick, wanna write up my name?? its so hard to do the &#39;&#39;O&#39;&#39; in my name , i write : only

extirpate
10-30-2006, 08:24 PM
a couple sketches what you all think?
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/8008/halloeve001wh4.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2963/halloeve002gk0.jpg

-testify-
10-30-2006, 08:26 PM
i think i love you
the only thing you could change would be on the top on that weird line in the &#33; and the left of the k seems too plain for the rest
its the sex though

Sumoe
10-30-2006, 08:32 PM
lol, it&#39;s defineately the sex :P

kore
10-30-2006, 08:33 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff017.jpg
My boy said I need to change my throwie, all the letters are wack. I need some more opinions cause I can&#39;t think of a shit to do for a new one. crits?

Stonk
10-30-2006, 08:34 PM
yeah i dont really like the &#33; but every thing is awesome.
keso, i liked your old throw way better than that one. go back to that
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/cool029.jpg sorry for posting so many sticker pics, this is the last

kore
10-30-2006, 08:41 PM
Old throwie?
This one?
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff012.jpg

N.O.T.E
10-30-2006, 08:42 PM
dope stickers man are did you only use decos for that?

Stonk
10-30-2006, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by kore@Oct 29 2006, 05:05 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff016.jpg
Crits?
I think it looked better before I fucked it up trying to color it:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff015.jpg


bape: i like the 2nd b better, but yeah try an uppercase one too and see how it looks. might look even better.

AoAssis or Mse or whatever: shits lookin dooopee. i love your style.

Sear: Hot shit man&#33; keep postin more&#33;

Alera: don&#39;t like it too much. it&#39;s too busy. hard to make out the letters.
o my bad, i thought that this was it.

not decos, zig painters

TricksForKids
10-30-2006, 08:48 PM
i think im gunna have to beat bouncingsoul up, lol,

kidding, im glad you keep me in check, i dont really like using the B&#39;s in my B, but i love the A in my A

anyways, hahlahmahlaylay

Sumoe
10-30-2006, 08:50 PM
nice stickers stonk, i need to get sum paint markers this weekend so i can work on a canvas :rolleyes:

it was a good idea about the letters inside the letters, looked a little funny, still good though

kore
10-30-2006, 08:51 PM
stonk: ooohh ok. well that&#39;s not too old. i just posted it yesterday or something, lol. that wasn&#39;t really a throwie to me, more of a simple piece, but i&#39;ll try to make it into a throw since i&#39;m all outta ideas.

P!P
10-30-2006, 09:16 PM
Kore just look at other guys throws that have some of the same letters as you.
DONT COPY&#33; but always good to change it completely when you are stumped
...you can get some major ideas

P!P
10-30-2006, 09:17 PM
Originally posted by A&#045;chue&#33;@Oct 30 2006, 08:36 PM
heres a quik summary of my name change crits

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVNUEROP.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HevnBLUEfade.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/hevn14.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/ruffhevnthrow.jpg]http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/gin...ffhevnthrow.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/Hevnearthy.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/Hevncanvas.jpg
canvas im gonna
Im readin that first one as KEVN...not too clear when half the H dissapears ;)

P!P
10-30-2006, 09:20 PM
Originally posted by ras@Oct 30 2006, 04:53 PM
Anoda Nu Name ... DUB This tym...Messin round widdit

Lil Throw and Karak...

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/3334/dubyg8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits And Comments Pleeeease............................... ;)
Thats hott...love that karak&#33;
but, my friend just told me today he was gonna change his name to DUB,,,
you are better, but just wonderin, any other DUBs around?

TricksForKids
10-30-2006, 09:30 PM
yeh man DUB&#39;s all world....lol

only thugs and wanna be thugs write dub...and kids that write "22&#39;s on Impalas" inside their throws...so unless your friend wants to get shot by the 17 other dubs in his ghetto ass neighbourhood maybe he should change his name to 22 Murdah Killah

nerdx
10-30-2006, 09:31 PM
Originally posted by P&#33;P+Oct 30 2006, 10:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (P&#33;P @ Oct 30 2006, 10:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-A&#045;chue&#33;@Oct 30 2006, 08:36 PM
heres a quik summary of my name change crits

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVNUEROP.jpg


Im readin that first one as KEVN...not too clear when half the H dissapears ;) [/b][/quote]
you are retarted. its a little thing called style.
Hevin keep it up man. everythings good. Would like to see some of thoes painted.

krysnum1
10-30-2006, 09:31 PM
Yeah, this one got funked up cause i used highliters for some of it, and i scaned it so the highliter part dosent show up.

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2746/cci00060la0.jpg

yeah, i was fcuked up when i did this, went from a scetch to a pen drawing, to colors as i started to get creative.

CRITTierz?

Soze One.
10-30-2006, 09:31 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Oct 30 2006, 10:30 PM
yeh man DUB&#39;s all world....lol

only thugs and wanna be thugs write dub...and kids that write "22&#39;s on Impalas" inside their throws...so unless your friend wants to get shot by the 17 other dubs in his ghetto ass neighbourhood maybe he should change his name to 22 Murdah Killah
i think i just found myself a new name. ;)

TricksForKids
10-30-2006, 09:37 PM
Originally posted by Soze One.+Oct 30 2006, 10:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Soze One. @ Oct 30 2006, 10:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Oct 30 2006, 10:30 PM
yeh man DUB&#39;s all world....lol

only thugs and wanna be thugs write dub...and kids that write "22&#39;s on Impalas" inside their throws...so unless your friend wants to get shot by the 17 other dubs in his ghetto ass neighbourhood maybe he should change his name to 22 Murdah Killah
i think i just found myself a new name. ;) [/b][/quote]
Shit i knew i shoulda kept murdah killah to myself, just rolled off the tongue so well :lol:

bouncingsoul
10-30-2006, 09:38 PM
knews sketch and character both in my fucking boring biology class

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0289.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0290.jpg

nerdx
10-30-2006, 09:47 PM
unique style, just keep at it

AteskOne
10-30-2006, 09:47 PM
^^^iiiiill shit...that characs fuckin dope. keep it up cause im a fan of your work.

P!P
10-30-2006, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Oct 30 2006, 11:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Oct 30 2006, 11:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Soze One.@Oct 30 2006, 10:31 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Oct 30 2006, 10:30 PM
yeh man DUB&#39;s all world....lol

only thugs and wanna be thugs write dub...and kids that write "22&#39;s on Impalas" inside their throws...so unless your friend wants to get shot by the 17 other dubs in his ghetto ass neighbourhood maybe he should change his name to 22 Murdah Killah
i think i just found myself a new name. ;)
Shit i knew i shoulda kept murdah killah to myself, just rolled off the tongue so well :lol: [/b][/quote]
hahaa, well, Ill tell him anyways. he is far form Thug, and this aint much of a ghetto. we just like to make it one.
....TO MANY CLEAN WALLS HERE>..
SOMEONE KILL ME NOW&#33;&#33;

TricksForKids
10-30-2006, 10:02 PM
fair enough...

knews, or whatever your name is seeing as though you change it everyday..

the E is killing that piece and separates the KN and WS, i like all the letters for starters except that fucking E, lol, the bottom leg is killing it, try using a character like the one you drew below instead of your E, or just fix the damn E

and the next sketch better be clean, in colour, on blank paper, and with 3D

Peace out- 22 Murdah Killah

bouncingsoul
10-30-2006, 10:10 PM
I was expecting to be torn apart when I saw tricks replied haha. But yeah, I&#39;m sticking with this. The guys on 12oz kinda made me... And damn, that&#39;s kinda hard man... jkjk, I&#39;ll try something but me and my mates are planning to go egg random people skating tomorrow.

krysnum1
10-30-2006, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by krysnum1@Oct 30 2006, 10:31 PM
Yeah, this one got funked up cause i used highliters for some of it, and i scaned it so the highliter part dosent show up.

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2746/cci00060la0.jpg

yeah, i was fcuked up when i did this, went from a scetch to a pen drawing, to colors as i started to get creative.

CRITTierz?
bump, some how this got ignored at least one crit?

FEN the HEN
10-30-2006, 10:21 PM
now why is that......hmmm......

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
10-30-2006, 10:22 PM
i like the coloring, and choice of colors.....and the squigglies.....

thats pretty much it though.

has potential. keep practicing.

ToXiK
10-30-2006, 10:37 PM
BouncingSoul, For some reason I&#39;m not feeling that K there. the top right part of the K is kinda ehh.... N seems kinda small too. Maybe if you added some 3-d or drop shadow then it&#39;d look much better. Overall good work.

krysnum1
10-31-2006, 12:01 AM
Man, I just finnished ths, i jsut wannted to work on some caricters or somthin, i made this erally messed up. I kept feeling new stuff to put on it IDK, jsut the pills are making me creative, but im not sure if this is ganna look good to me tommaro. im really feallin it just caue i was really into doing this peace.
Yea wat ya think of it.


Crit plz/

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1038/cci00061qz1.jpg

man, im trippin right now, im ganna take a look at it anouther time, see if i like it.

Z FUSE
10-31-2006, 01:39 AM
krysnum^ i dunno seems too wavy 4 letters..

crits on my poor throws please...
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/6492/sn67ff3.jpg
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1363/sn56rj9.jpg
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7633/sn45od6.jpg

Qlown
10-31-2006, 03:04 AM
Like the first one ZFuse.

Nice colors krysumn1, but the lettering needs work.

d_g
10-31-2006, 03:10 AM
All those throws are pretty nice.

EDIT:


http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch08.jpg

Any comments before I ink it, the &#39;S&#39; is terrible.

Toyminater
10-31-2006, 05:00 AM
^S looks like the best letter&#33;

Toyminater
10-31-2006, 05:07 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Oct 30 2006, 04:18 PM
Ras can&#39;t really help u out cause i&#39;m no good at throwies but looks good to me..
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/7294/dsc0110pg7.jpg
Crits?
Fucking wicked peice man. The character is great too. Great coloring on him.






http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/toyminater/000_0055.jpg
Something i did last week. Critique?

ras
10-31-2006, 05:14 AM
Originally posted by krysnum1@Oct 31 2006, 01:01 AM
Man, I just finnished ths, i jsut wannted to work on some caricters or somthin, i made this erally messed up. I kept feeling new stuff to put on it IDK, jsut the pills are making me creative, but im not sure if this is ganna look good to me tommaro. im really feallin it just caue i was really into doing this peace.
Yea wat ya think of it.


Crit plz/

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1038/cci00061qz1.jpg

man, im trippin right now, im ganna take a look at it anouther time, see if i like it.
blank wallz = blank minds...

haha..thats good ;)

Qlown
10-31-2006, 05:58 AM
Blank walls = Blank minds...

Deep.

joke
10-31-2006, 06:07 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdarows.jpgjust fukin round crits ,worth colour?






http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdhalloween2.jpg
for the halloween batlle crits




http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdblackngreen.jpg unno what to do for fill crits?

ras
10-31-2006, 06:21 AM
added a couple of arrow&#39;s...

http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/9422/dub2yt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cirts and comments pleaseeee. ;)

joke
10-31-2006, 06:24 AM
work on more basic letter n dont have arrows change the characters they look lankey n have a word with some meaning

i chose my word from how im feelin

P!P
10-31-2006, 06:25 AM
liked the first one better....but this charac,. is sick

ras
10-31-2006, 06:29 AM
i did do the first one but tried adding on sum arrows...thanks for the advice anyways... :)

aces
10-31-2006, 09:59 AM
Originally posted by krysnum1+Oct 31 2006, 12:19 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (krysnum1 &#064; Oct 31 2006, 12:19 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-krysnum1@Oct 30 2006, 10:31 PM
Yeah, this one got funked up cause i used highliters for some of it, and i scaned it so the highliter part dosent show up.

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/2746/cci00060la0.jpg

yeah, i was fcuked up when i did this, went from a scetch to a pen drawing, to colors as i started to get creative.

CRITTierz?
bump, some how this got ignored at least one crit?[/b][/quote]
Don&#39;t try to blame that shit on the use of highlighters. It just sucks&#33; Plain and simple. The letters don&#39;t have any structure what so ever. Work on structure not colors.

Will post a sketch hopefully when I get home.

alive
10-31-2006, 10:20 AM
if u blame things on your markers, your shooting yourself in the foot, and denying yourself crits from me and many others.]

its ur own goddamn fault that ur wack. not ur fucking highlighters.

draw us block letters. u gotta start with them

ras
10-31-2006, 11:19 AM
sumthing new ;)

http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/9336/dub3vl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits And Comment&#39;s Pleeeaseee.........

Fluffy Bunnies
10-31-2006, 11:26 AM
I did this in class yeasterday...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Penciloutline.png

ras
10-31-2006, 11:29 AM
Cool AK...I like the A

myl
10-31-2006, 12:56 PM
dope AK

perfect example of simples

aces
10-31-2006, 01:34 PM
AK one thing is that you should make the bit off the A more like the bits off the K. Other than that it&#39;s a nice simple.

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1139/picturefo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
There&#39;s the pic I promised. Crits???

ras
10-31-2006, 01:46 PM
Summore Stuff ;)

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/213/dub4gw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

CRITS AND COMMENTS PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE &#33; ... :)

FIN one
10-31-2006, 03:16 PM
joke, the first one looks real good but work on your force fields and proportions overall

gcrolla
10-31-2006, 03:30 PM
Started from this
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/6959/161230fk4.th.jpg (http://img404.imageshack.us/my.php?image=161230fk4.jpg)


got to this.still not done, gunna do a fill in.
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/1231/162630ya5.th.jpg (http://img404.imageshack.us/my.php?image=162630ya5.jpg)

Detoxication
10-31-2006, 03:39 PM
http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/4217/img1103nm0.jpg


any advice?

nemzone
10-31-2006, 04:08 PM
http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/3401/picture1qu5.jpg

main2kNup
10-31-2006, 04:19 PM
Originally posted by main2kNup@Oct 29 2006, 10:48 AM
http://p6.piczo.com/img/i180180597_85431_6.jpg

Crits please?
bump for crits,

Nems aint really sure about that grey(aint sure if its grey) colour, i dont know why, but i sorta like the N.

detox, i dont think you needed that yellow line with the pencil colour under it, and be a lil more carefull on 3d, but 3d isnt that bad.

krysnum1
10-31-2006, 04:21 PM
Girl has a flat booty, dont like.:(

N.O.T.E
10-31-2006, 04:24 PM
Originally posted by N.O.T.E@Oct 30 2006, 07:47 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/9594/clipboard01hm0.jpg
did this for a battle...need serious critiques
anymore critiques, any suggestions on fixing e? i also need help with doing 3d on curves

ras
10-31-2006, 04:24 PM
Originally posted by ras@Oct 31 2006, 02:46 PM
Summore Stuff ;)

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/213/dub4gw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

CRITS AND COMMENTS PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE &#33; ... :)
Crits Pleeease....

aces that looks kool ...

nemzone
10-31-2006, 04:27 PM
na its just a pen sketch wiv a bic. and its taken wiv ma webcam lol
heres it b4 3d n shit
http://img420.imageshack.us/img420/9320/img135ja6.jpg

Sumoe
10-31-2006, 04:27 PM
Ras, 3D is a lil off and you should work on letter structure, nice colors tho.
Nemz, likin it except for the E, like the style tho its unique.

Detoxication
10-31-2006, 04:28 PM
Originally posted by Detoxication@Oct 31 2006, 04:39 PM
http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/4217/img1103nm0.jpg


any advice?
bump for crits

Vagrant
10-31-2006, 04:36 PM
I envisioned this last night, and sketched it up today.
It needs some work on the letters and spacing, but the general weave idea is there.
Done in colored pencil because I havent racked any art markers yet.
(Ignore the shitty ghost lines coming through from the other side of the paper)

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Rant_Throw_Weave.jpg

Crits?

ras
10-31-2006, 04:40 PM
Originally posted by Vagrant@Oct 31 2006, 05:36 PM
I envisioned this last night, and sketched it up today.
It needs some work on the letters and spacing, but the general weave idea is there.
Done in colored pencil because I havent racked any art markers yet.
(Ignore the shitty ghost lines coming through from the other side of the paper)

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Rant_Throw_Weave.jpg

Crits?
the wave idea&#39;s kool ...

N.O.T.E
10-31-2006, 04:42 PM
Originally posted by ras+Oct 31 2006, 05:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Oct 31 2006, 05:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Oct 31 2006, 02:46 PM
Summore Stuff ;)

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/213/dub4gw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

CRITS AND COMMENTS PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE &#33; ... :)
Crits Pleeease....

aces that looks kool ... [/b][/quote]
like he color scheme alot

ras
10-31-2006, 04:47 PM
im glad...the colour scheme is the thing i struggle quit a bit with...im might post up a throw with the same colous

main2kNup
10-31-2006, 04:51 PM
Originally posted by ras+Oct 31 2006, 05:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras &#064; Oct 31 2006, 05:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Vagrant@Oct 31 2006, 05:36 PM
I envisioned this last night, and sketched it up today.
It needs some work on the letters and spacing, but the general weave idea is there.
Done in colored pencil because I havent racked any art markers yet.
(Ignore the shitty ghost lines coming through from the other side of the paper)

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Rant_Throw_Weave.jpg

Crits?
the wave idea&#39;s kool ... [/b][/quote]
I like where this is going, maybe tidy it up a lil and will look nice. got any markers

Monster Island
10-31-2006, 04:54 PM
before i say this, i by no means consider myself any better then anyone here...but somethin i notice with all the flix on this thread is that everyone here seems to spend more time coloring their pieces then bothering to develop their style. the amount of time some of you guys spend coloring a whack piece is wasted, you could have done 5 single color or hollow pieces that will help you develop your style and structure. dont get me wrong, color is very imporant, but not nearly as important as your letters...unless you plan on putting these pieces up (i hope not...yet), then just stick to working out your letters&#33; whats every response to someones plea for "crits"??? "work on your letters".....because thats what you gotta do&#33;&#33;&#33;

Soze One.
10-31-2006, 05:21 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1329.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1332.jpg

TricksForKids
10-31-2006, 05:54 PM
soze lose the arrows on your pieces, the throwups are decent but teeth are played out..you execute it pretty well though

that characters pretty fresh, very actually, keep that shit up

shitty throw, im out to get drunk

http://img314.imageshack.us/img314/1305/awxf5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Equinox
10-31-2006, 06:07 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9011/enox4id7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

did a nice simple thing, critz on it plz?

ANTIC
10-31-2006, 06:16 PM
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2193/10312006051843pmmv3.png (http://imageshack.us)

havent sketched in like 2 months...since this got deleted from the other one ill post it here, did it in history learning bout the panic of 1893(year?) so yea here ya go....panyk

N.O.T.E
10-31-2006, 06:26 PM
Originally posted by N.O.T.E+Oct 31 2006, 05:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (N.O.T.E &#064; Oct 31 2006, 05:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-N.O.T.E@Oct 30 2006, 07:47 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/9594/clipboard01hm0.jpg
did this for a battle...need serious critiques
[/b][/quote]
any suggestions for the "e"?
dope stuff antic

ANTIC
10-31-2006, 06:41 PM
http://img280.imageshack.us/img280/9016/10312006071852pmec7.png (http://imageshack.us)

colored now...idk if i like it better before or now. colored with just some shitty colored pens

http://img424.imageshack.us/img424/3936/10292006011840pmno9.png (http://imageshack.us)

got the monkey from someone on bs&#39;s sig


http://img286.imageshack.us/img286/5441/09062006090536pmmk5.png (http://imageshack.us)

just some random shit^

krysnum1
10-31-2006, 08:24 PM
nice antic.

a pic i jsut made....

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/4035/cci00062ql9.jpg

you know the deal. crit it.

Mach
10-31-2006, 08:48 PM
krynsum was that for the sketch battle for halloween? its pretty cool

this is one of my first somewhat decent pieces and any crits on it and dont be gay and say shit that aint constructive
sorry bout shitty pic quality i need a scanner
by the way it sez Zach

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d176/zrisyourfriend/ZachsGraffiti-1.jpg

Soze One.
10-31-2006, 08:49 PM
Originally posted by Soze One.@Oct 31 2006, 06:21 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1329.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1332.jpg
:P

F.R.A.T.
10-31-2006, 08:49 PM
wat does it say

FEN the HEN
10-31-2006, 08:55 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture145.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture144.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture143.jpg

Sumoe
10-31-2006, 09:20 PM
it&#39;s messy, do simples ;)

kore
10-31-2006, 09:21 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff022.jpg
Still workin on a new throw....

P!P
10-31-2006, 09:34 PM
Try completely changing around the letters then making your own way of doing them.
Glad to see you did actually change em this time =)

Apoc Dozer
10-31-2006, 09:37 PM
http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/4024/sdfsdfasfnr9.png (http://imageshack.us)

I numbered it this time~ Like I said before I got no clue what I&#39;m doin, please give me some tips to make it better

P!P
10-31-2006, 09:41 PM
#2 looks ok except for the U. all the rest are either spaced out too much and crooked, or just not the same style. and work on gettin them to flow. thats a big thing.

NoneOfThisIsReal
10-31-2006, 09:46 PM
Originally posted by ANTIC@Oct 31 2006, 08:41 PM
...
http://img424.imageshack.us/img424/3936/10292006011840pmno9.png (http://imageshack.us)

got the monkey from someone on bs&#39;s sig
...
I&#39;m liking the Goodfella&#39;s monkey.



After much erasing and redrawing, I settled on an R. I also resized the O and I think I may have distorted it a bit (the "O" ... in a bad way).

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4148/dscf1746nz5.th.jpg (http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4148/dscf1746nz5.jpg)

Apoc Dozer
10-31-2006, 09:47 PM
aight thanks, but what should I do with the U?, I agree it&#39;s messed up but how should I fix it?

nerdx
10-31-2006, 09:59 PM
i like the Nand the O but the rest is not going with the first style.

smokincron
10-31-2006, 10:07 PM
Originally posted by Apoc Dozer@Oct 31 2006, 10:37 PM
http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/4024/sdfsdfasfnr9.png (http://imageshack.us)

I numbered it this time~ Like I said before I got no clue what I&#39;m doin, please give me some tips to make it better
number 2 but ur S needs work outta everything&#33;&#33;&#33;

keep it up

DUF
10-31-2006, 10:35 PM
some of my new NOGA stuff.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5103.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5102.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5101.jpg

DUF
10-31-2006, 11:47 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5104.jpg

explosivo_420
10-31-2006, 11:55 PM
damn that shit is wack

Vagrant
11-01-2006, 12:11 AM
"Post your pieces with too many arrows"

I don&#39;t think this is too many arrows but we&#39;ll see what ya&#39;ll thing.
No i do not have any decent markers. This was done in colored pencil.
Crit please

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Rant_Throw_Arrows_Bubblefill.jpg

Apoc Dozer
11-01-2006, 12:12 AM
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5774/drammmmac7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Please give me some tips

dibz
11-01-2006, 12:23 AM
vagrant
where you stay at?

Equinox
11-01-2006, 12:32 AM
Originally posted by Equinox@Oct 31 2006, 07:07 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9011/enox4id7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

did a nice simple thing, critz on it plz?
I really dont like to bump my own stuff, but id really like to get a crit, even if its just being told its wack as hell + a reason..... :unsure:

Vagrant
11-01-2006, 12:39 AM
Originally posted by Equinox+Nov 1 2006, 12:32 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Equinox @ Nov 1 2006, 12:32 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Equinox@Oct 31 2006, 07:07 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9011/enox4id7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

did a nice simple thing, critz on it plz?
I really dont like to bump my own stuff, but id really like to get a crit, even if its just being told its wack as hell + a reason..... :unsure: [/b][/quote]
if you are going to fill in the e hole, then fill in the o hole. the titties in the x are fucked up. having single chips on the left, but doubles on the right looks odd, i understand its because of the shape of the letters but it just doesnt look right. work on the shadow.
perhaps drop the division of the loop and tail of the e down so it has a larger loop, this being so it matches the N better because of where you end the lines inside the N.
Hope this constructive crit wasnt too harsh. frankly i dont think its harsh at all.

hit me back with a crit?

Equinox
11-01-2006, 12:46 AM
thx, and not harsh at all, dont gotta worry bout hurting my feelings.
i want to learn, only way im going to learn is if i get a idea of what im doing wrong.

edit: by the way, good advice i see how that would clean that up.

sky 5
11-01-2006, 03:27 AM
..

d_g
11-01-2006, 03:53 AM
^?

Qlown
11-01-2006, 05:16 AM
Sky5? You have me blinking here.

ENOX: To me, your X is thin on one side and fat on teh other, which looks kinda odd. And you should have all your holes filled in black if you did it for one.

Vagrant: I&#39;d say lose the arrows altogether. Just my opinion though. Your fill looks good, would be pretty dope if done with proper markers like prismas.

Im gonna be posting soon, be sure to hit me back.

aces
11-01-2006, 05:38 AM
Originally posted by aces@Oct 31 2006, 03:34 PM
AK one thing is that you should make the bit off the A more like the bits off the K. Other than that it&#39;s a nice simple.

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/1139/picturefo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
There&#39;s the pic I promised. Crits???
bump

kore
11-01-2006, 05:38 AM
Originally posted by kore@Oct 31 2006, 10:21 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff022.jpg
Still workin on a new throw....
Bump for crits...

sky 5
11-01-2006, 06:26 AM
yeah im sittin here hands covered in paint, my boy just draged me off the parking lot so fuck yall . . .

Qlown
11-01-2006, 06:33 AM
Nice one Ase. Maybe you could lose that arrow on the far right. Pther than that, it&#39;s doppe. Would love to see that colored&#33;

sky 5
11-01-2006, 06:41 AM
..

Qlown
11-01-2006, 07:34 AM
Im still confused... Go easier on the slang.

joke
11-01-2006, 08:25 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdarows.jpgjust fukin round crits ,worth colour?






http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdhalloween2.jpg
for the halloween batlle crits




http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdblackngreen.jpg unno what to do for fill crits?

ras
11-01-2006, 09:47 AM
cool joke ....

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8196/dub5ua2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits and comments please ... ;)

Graff legend
11-01-2006, 09:48 AM
blackbook pics (http://www.alltheconspiracies.org)

DUF
11-01-2006, 09:59 AM
Originally posted by DUF@Nov 1 2006, 12:47 AM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5104.jpg
bump for crits all i ever get is dick head comments. if i got some crits on how to improve maybe i could learn something. it&#39;s kinda sad that the majority of people on here just talk shit and dont even help out. im new at this and im posting it in the TOY section so of course it&#39;s not going to be amazing. but just to say "damn that shit is wack" like explosivo_420 doesnt fucking help. fuck, were not born graffiti masters, shit.

ras
11-01-2006, 10:01 AM
duf...your noga throw is really vibrant but i dont like the G and i think your throw is good tho

sank one
11-01-2006, 10:09 AM
maybe you guys should spend more time on letter structure and not on color. just a thought....

DUF
11-01-2006, 10:14 AM
thanks for the crits. yeah i usually just practice the throw over and over again and if one come out that i think is decent for me i color it. i know the g is fucked up in that one.

Ruski
11-01-2006, 10:42 AM
Originally posted by joke@Oct 31 2006, 07:07 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdarows.jpgjust fukin round crits ,worth colour?

Maybe, green fill and light blue 3d.. aint sure with the right background might work out pretty well:)





http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdhalloween2.jpg
for the halloween batlle crits




http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/iluvchelcie/kirsdblackngreen.jpg unno what to do for fill crits?
love ur letters mate

unknown...
11-01-2006, 10:48 AM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/3695/p1010024ah6.jpg
So im trying to start sketchin again and get something going so i can get painting again in about a month or so. Changed my name and tryin to just get basic stuff going b4 i go super crazy

ras
11-01-2006, 11:47 AM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 1 2006, 10:47 AM
cool joke ....

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8196/dub5ua2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits and comments please ... ;)
Crits please


unknown ... the 3d is perfecto ;)

aces
11-01-2006, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by Qlown@Nov 1 2006, 08:33 AM
Nice one Ase. Maybe you could lose that arrow on the far right. Pther than that, it&#39;s doppe. Would love to see that colored&#33;
You talking to me? If so I&#39;ll have the colored one up tomorrow cause I don&#39;t got any markers at my disposal today. Chilling at a friends house.

kore
11-01-2006, 01:34 PM
Originally posted by kore+Nov 1 2006, 06:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kore @ Nov 1 2006, 06:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-kore@Oct 31 2006, 10:21 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff022.jpg
Still workin on a new throw....
Bump for crits... [/b][/quote]
Bump again...still haven&#39;t got any crits..

Apoc
11-01-2006, 01:37 PM
I dont like it

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/PA310060.jpg

RI$K
11-01-2006, 01:38 PM
dun this a while ago

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9760/kuruptoz6.th.jpg (http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kuruptoz6.jpg)

Apoc
11-01-2006, 01:38 PM
Double post

fucksociety
11-01-2006, 01:39 PM
quicky pen freestyle...crits?

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-3.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/mybmwblue.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/focksociety-1.jpg

ras
11-01-2006, 01:51 PM
Fuck society..the grey and purple lines make it pop ...
Nice and simple Apoc...
Ri&#036;k...that shits fucking ace mate...great choice of colours and great letters..

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6168/dub6bh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

CRITS AND COMMENTS PLEASE &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; THANKYOU <_< ;)

Skesh
11-01-2006, 01:59 PM
Duf, do you write Noga now? Not DUF?

DUF
11-01-2006, 02:27 PM
wanted to write something else as well still do duf but im starting to like the noga better.

CinimeIsntDope
11-01-2006, 02:28 PM
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/5904/cinimethrowiesmallgz1.png

thought i would post this throwie here too to get opinions on how to make it better.

Sumoe
11-01-2006, 02:32 PM
Originally posted by kore+Nov 1 2006, 02:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kore @ Nov 1 2006, 02:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kore@Nov 1 2006, 06:38 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-kore@Oct 31 2006, 10:21 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff022.jpg
Still workin on a new throw....
Bump for crits...
Bump again...still haven&#39;t got any crits.. [/b][/quote]
i like it :D

beastie_1989
11-01-2006, 02:53 PM
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/3585/666style1ga7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on this s.v.p :D

Kace
11-01-2006, 03:00 PM
Dub Im Still Pretty toy but im not diggin the character

OliveOil
11-01-2006, 03:04 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Nov 1 2006, 07:26 AM
yeah im sittin here hands covered in paint, my boy just draged me off the parking lot so fuck yall . . .
did anyone ever tell u how cool u were?

P!P
11-01-2006, 03:19 PM
Originally posted by Apoc Dozer@Oct 31 2006, 11:47 PM
aight thanks, but what should I do with the U?, I agree it&#39;s messed up but how should I fix it?
the U needs to be less rounded. looks like a O with a gap at the top. but still needs to all be balanced. and try to work on overall flow too..

imported_Bes_one
11-01-2006, 03:21 PM
comments or critz?
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/1755/pict0658qb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

P!P
11-01-2006, 03:25 PM
3-d is off in some places on the S and in the bottom right part of the "R"

imported_Bes_one
11-01-2006, 03:26 PM
That "R" is a "B".LOL

ras
11-01-2006, 03:27 PM
Bes one....lyk everyone says on this toy forum...start off with simples...its been helping me so far :lol:

afek
11-01-2006, 03:32 PM
Originally posted by Apoc@Nov 1 2006, 02:38 PM
Double post
not quite

next time you try to be cool

















dont&#33;

P!P
11-01-2006, 03:39 PM
Originally posted by Bes_one@Nov 1 2006, 05:26 PM
That "R" is a "B".LOL
nvmd i am tlkaing about the E then...
looks like BRS though

wildpspitfire90
11-01-2006, 04:24 PM
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2392.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2391.jpg
critz???

neza
11-01-2006, 05:01 PM
wild practice making your letters all the same size the B in the top one and the top t in the second one look outta place keep practicing those simples dude

ive been messing with 3d

Enso
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4337/enso1by0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sone
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9083/sone1eb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

Sykal
11-01-2006, 05:05 PM
sick i love the firts one

Sumoe
11-01-2006, 05:07 PM
i got respect for ppl who do 3D shit, i don&#39;t understand it too well but it looks pretty good to me, i just dont like the green add-ons and what not in the one that says sone.

Vagrant
11-01-2006, 05:08 PM
Originally posted by neza@Nov 1 2006, 05:01 PM
wild practice making your letters all the same size the B in the top one and the top t in the second one look outta place keep practicing those simples dude

ive been messing with 3d

Enso
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4337/enso1by0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sone
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9083/sone1eb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
get more geometric, dont try curves yet. as always, practice more on the letters than spending time coloring.

Oprah
11-01-2006, 05:14 PM
if thts suppose to be toy...

Slaze
11-01-2006, 05:28 PM
Originally posted by neza@Nov 1 2006, 06:01 PM
wild practice making your letters all the same size the B in the top one and the top t in the second one look outta place keep practicing those simples dude

ive been messing with 3d

Enso
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4337/enso1by0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sone
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9083/sone1eb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
what did u use to color that? it looks sick as fuck to me, good job.

neza
11-01-2006, 05:39 PM
black biro shading, then markers over the top cheers guys

-neza

kore
11-01-2006, 06:05 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Nov 1 2006, 03:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Nov 1 2006, 03:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by kore@Nov 1 2006, 02:34 PM

Originally posted by kore@Nov 1 2006, 06:38 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-kore@Oct 31 2006, 10:21 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b352/Pimpzilla652/graff022.jpg
Still workin on a new throw....
Bump for crits...
Bump again...still haven&#39;t got any crits..
i like it :D [/b][/quote]
lol really? thanks man. anyone think i gotta do somethin to improve on it?

Equinox
11-01-2006, 06:18 PM
somethings i did.
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/7434/enox4redonar5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
worked on what i was trying befor, i know the 3D abouve the e looks a bit weird.

and something new.
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4699/enox5dp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

critz?

bouncingsoul
11-01-2006, 06:37 PM
Woooooooooooo, a buncha new flicks form my boring ass Biology class (1.5 hours of shiiiiiiit)

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0292.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0293.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0294.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0295.jpg

...Sorry Tricks, no blank paper... I havta do something for a project anyway so I&#39;ll get it up tomorrow...

Bowser
11-01-2006, 06:43 PM
bouncing I really like the second karak....ish is dope

Hilo
11-01-2006, 07:18 PM
nice guys. new stlye crits?

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2230/picture125nf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-des-
11-01-2006, 07:23 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b57/trsboy/S3010451.jpg

Thats my first nice thing ive done lol so tell me watch ya think about it&#33;?

.D.H.
11-01-2006, 07:28 PM
Originally posted by neza@Nov 1 2006, 06:01 PM
wild practice making your letters all the same size the B in the top one and the top t in the second one look outta place keep practicing those simples dude

ive been messing with 3d

Enso
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4337/enso1by0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sone
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9083/sone1eb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
HELLLLZ YEA.
looks good. loks like you used like a black be for shading. dunno if you did, but it gives it a good effect. keep it up.

Hilo
11-01-2006, 07:32 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Nov 1 2006, 08:18 PM
nice guys. new stlye crits?

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2230/picture125nf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for fuck sakes do u guys know that u needa fuckign give crits to get them learn u fuckign dumb fucks this is a place for peocple to post there sketches and fucking learn and hear about others fucking oppinion

Hilo
11-01-2006, 07:32 PM
oh and that ensoe shit is fucking great BUMPPPPPP for it,

F.R.A.T.
11-01-2006, 07:35 PM
Hilo i dont really like it cause it looks messy, do u live in etobicoke, cause som1 round there rits Hilo

could some one show me another way to do a c cause when i do pieces the C really pisses me off

-des-
11-01-2006, 07:35 PM
Originally posted by Hilo+Nov 1 2006, 08:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hilo @ Nov 1 2006, 08:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hilo@Nov 1 2006, 08:18 PM
nice guys. new stlye crits?

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2230/picture125nf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for fuck sakes do u guys know that u needa fuckign give crits to get them learn u fuckign dumb fucks this is a place for peocple to post there sketches and fucking learn and hear about others fucking oppinion [/b][/quote]
I like it&#33; But i would see if you can put some more color into it, it sorta looks plain....but thats just me&#33;

-des-
11-01-2006, 07:37 PM
Edit:oops&#33;