Blackbooks

[Enemy]

tryin sumthin new! pretty rough but ay fuck it! tell me what u think!
http://img289.imageshack.us/img289/31/10312005123142pm8jk.th.jpg (http://img289.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10312005123142pm8jk.jpg)

[faint rem one]

still love ur shit enemy, keep it up mang

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture526.jpg

new m. crits?

[pepsidude84067]

Originally posted by faint rem one@Oct 31 2005, 09:58 AM

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture526.jpg

new m. crits?
looks good but i dont know if this was intended but where it looks like a backwards 7 on all of them there not very consistant on where the reach over but thats all i noticed but looks good

[Myme]

New shit

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/264/mymespiky2nd0lb.jpg

[pepsidude84067]

Damn thats beautiful

[Sluts_r_us]

rem that looks good but i got a quick question...do u and AO write remik or do u just write rem?

[faint rem one]

i write rem.

he writes remik.

but we live in the same town.

so its kinda gay.

but he might change his name, and i might change mine.

thinkin of "RAEN"

[Sluts_r_us]

yeah thats cool or reign...u should just keep rem...i like your style

[faint rem one]

:lol:

[Enemy]

Originally posted by Myme@Oct 31 2005, 01:32 PM
New shit

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/264/mymespiky2nd0lb.jpg
man if u can paint that stay the fuck out of the toy section!! :ph34r:

[Bare0ne]

Myme thats shits Mad as fuck !!

[ONI13]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y110/Death27282/IMG_0685.jpg
nothing special

[Jank]

i agree. push the letterscloser together, so it has a bit of flow to it. work onit. itll get better

[faint rem one]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture527.jpg

new. crtis plz. :ph34r:

[Sluts_r_us]

still sick...all i can do is make my bomb style lol...i need a new style...if anyone wants to help...be my guest

[nerdx]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 1 2005, 07:18 PM
still sick...all i can do is make my bomb style lol...i need a new style...if anyone wants to help...be my guest
well better than me, ive got most stuff down, but cant get a bomb to look any good.

rem, looks good. at least your starting off simple. keep it up.

[Sluts_r_us]

nerd show us some of ur stuff

[nerdx]

a kind of throw. but not really. whatever you want to call it
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1570.jpg
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/wag_41636_1028_3520.jpg

a peice i first did on paper but wanted some color so did it on this creator
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/wag_100013_1020_8846.jpg
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1568.jpg

and a blockbuster with wack colors. i need more prismas.
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1567.jpg

some tags on paper, dont have any of ones on the streets yet.
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1575.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

i like the one on the train the best

[Select_One]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/nanosketch5.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/nanosketch4.jpg
^left is cut off

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/nanosketch6.jpg
forgot that one


waaaatev

[Sluts_r_us]

1st one for the win

[sibil juggalo]

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8118/scan00073xs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4481/scan00060gp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/371/scan00059ny.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/2176/scan00048bd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/7969/scan00038me.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4118/scan00021tv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some recent stuff tell me what you think

[Select_One]

you know i finally post something decent and than someone else posts some crazy ill shit to show me up within 20 min :lol:

Good stuff tho. You should probably post in the main blackbooks thread.

[sibil juggalo]

i didnt think i was good enough to post in the main black book section

[TITS]

throw up i just thought of today..tell me wat uall think.http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7055/throup19qs.th.jpg (http://img96.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throup19qs.jpg)

[TITS]

dont make fun of my coloring i used hi lighterz(broke ass beener) :D

[faint rem one]

Originally posted by faint rem one@Nov 1 2005, 07:14 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture527.jpg

new.Â* crtis plz. :ph34r:
bump.

mad props to nano and sibil, get out of the toy forum.

new one line throwie

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture528.jpg

crits PLZ.

[Sluts_r_us]

tits...dont use the name tits...heres some new styles kinda gay though

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6754/newstyle1cz.jpg

http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/1872/newstyle32uw.jpg

[faint rem one]

last one would be dope without the little thingys (lol cant explain them)

[Sluts_r_us]

lol yeah, without them is just what i always write lol..just felt like adding and changing things

[Fate]

Originally posted by faint rem one+Nov 1 2005, 10:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (faint rem one @ Nov 1 2005, 10:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Nov 1 2005, 07:14 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture527.jpg

new. crtis plz. :ph34r:
bump.

mad props to nano and sibil, get out of the toy forum.

:lol: [/b][/quote]
the 3d is wrong

[minesweep]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 2 2005, 12:07 AM
tits...dont use the name tits...heres some new styles kinda gay though

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6754/newstyle1cz.jpg

http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/5356/newstyle20wq.jpg

http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/1872/newstyle32uw.jpg
the second one looks like you bit some mrwiggles letters

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

lol, and got it rroong

[shifty 486]

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4236/picture0025oi.jpg
fucking around. Character isnt origanaly mine, but I added some shit like the marker and hands and shit. nothing special

[minesweep]

i like it but not that my opinion matters =)

[Sluts_r_us]

who the fuck is mrwiggles?

[Bare0ne]

wiggles is a b boy hip hop head he does wild style and shit all toys bite work of him as he has like a alphabet of all different letters on his site for them to baicly copy lol

[Sluts_r_us]

lol...i didnt bite shit u fags

[BELLA]

hahahA ^^^^

i was gonna say the same ish but I just found out like 20 minutes ago....hes on an old bboy flyer I have.....a masta graffa I guess.

[Sluts_r_us]

wtf is b boy

[Bare0ne]

sum dancin shit i think lol :blink:

[Sluts_r_us]

lol sounds gay

[Bare0ne]

Looks gay

[Sluts_r_us]

is gay

[Bare0ne]

are you ;O Gay man here &#33;&#33; ^^^^^^^^ :lol:

[HEIST]

b-boy is is someone who does the elements like break dances, mc&#39;s, dj&#39;s or writes quit talkin shit bout somethin you dont know about. if it wasnt for them you would of probably picked up a diff hobby like making model airplanes or taking it in the ass

[Sluts_r_us]

wow way to be a sensitive faggot lol.."omg dont make fun of them&#33;"

[BELLA]

<_<

B BOY is a breakdancer...also poppers lockers boogiers....


but not gay.

[AoAssis]

k first off bboyin isnt gay its hella dope, and i think bboy stands for breakin boy or breakdancing boy not sure, and if u r good at bboy its hella dope if u dont belive me go to www.Bboy.org and go to galery and look at some of the vids some r noobs but others r hella dope so ya dont call bboyin gay wen u dont even kno wat it is

[Sluts_r_us]

lol

[BELLA]

w3rd to yo mutha....&#33;

bboys are madd hawt yo.

[Myme]

Bboys,are Break Boys, A.K.A. Breakdancers.

And if you can&#39;t respect Bboys, THen get the fuck out because Graffiti is a part of Hip Hop culture which includes MCing, Rapping, Breaking, and Graff.

[Sluts_r_us]

kthnx for that lil lesson myme...

[Select_One]

yea breakdancin is fucking ill - and mad hard ive practiced and still suck. Respect that shit or move on to a different game.

how can you not even know what a bboy is anyway - do you live under a fucking rock? dont even try to act like your right here - go erase your posts and stop replying before you submit yourself to multiple pages of serious blasting.

im not really one to talk shit but calling breakdancing gay on a graffiti forum is like .. bad.

[AoAssis]

AMEN Myme and Select One said it all, so ya if u dont respect 1 elemnt of the hip hop comunity u dont respect ne of it, so think before u talk, now u probably got urself off to a good start like snakes a life time of ridicule......dont worry jesus forgives us all :lol:

[minesweep]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 2 2005, 05:56 PM
lol...i didnt bite shit u fags
oh your right this is just a misunderstanding sorry
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/5165/bite9uy.jpg
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/5356/newstyle20wq.jpg

[Myme]

Definatly used some elements from Mr W but his is crappier.

Anyway less bullshit more actual work

http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/1658/mymespiky1020nl.jpg

[TITS]

slutz, dont be telling me wat 2 rite or not to rite..at least i ddont bite shit off graff creator or were ever the fuk u got it....i can rite wat ever the fuk i want... and b boys r fukin sik,cuz i am one bitch. :angry:

[Sluts_r_us]

hahahahahahahahahhahhahahahhahhahahahaah
you guys know i bit that on purpose right?....
plus u guys need to fuckin chill...u guys filled like 2 pages making points on how bboy is cool lol

edit: tits you need to calm down too, i gave a suggestion and others made the same suggestion but w/e

also i still dont know who mrwiggles is >_>

[minesweep]

hot as usual myme

[AoAssis]

stop fukin makin pointless posts its fukin gay and stop doin talkin like ur chatin cuz ur NOT stop ur LOLZ and ROFLAMOZ AND LMFOA and shit like that and OMG just shut the fuk up if u dont got ne advice or constructive critisismz to say or sumthin that actualy makes sense to say then dont say it, we should just start bangin all the people hwo make pointless threads and make pointless posts

EDIT- "u guys kno i did that on purpose rite" or "i nvr seen that before" is always the excuse isnt it? and if u bit that on purpose then how do u not kno who mr wiggles is ya nice try but ur a dummass

[TITS]

yo sluts im sorry dude i got out of control, i was just pissed cuz my mom took away all my markers cuz she caught me taggin,so we cool?

[AoAssis]

im just pissed cuz there was like 4 new threads made today and they were all gay and pointless so if i go off on u like that again slut or ne one else here im sry its just cuz im sick of all these gay ass toys, isnt everyone else sik of em too?

[Sluts_r_us]

ao idc i think its funny when people flip out on the net lol

[AoAssis]

yes it is, i will loook bak on this in a week or so and laugh

[Myme]

1. Learn to resize
2. Either get better markers or take more time doing your fill ins
3. Outline your 3-D
4. GO SIMPLER

[magic nyc]

pencil one looked good
outline it with a fine sharpie and clean up your lines while doing it

[magic nyc]

wiggles isnt cool
but i am ;)

[djsupreeme]

http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/1.jpg
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/2.jpg
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/3.jpg

Im trying to work on somthing like this. But do you think it has potential and if so what can i do to improve it?

[magic nyc]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/3306/oniek20zijn20pokemon4xu.jpg
I worked real hard on this ok guys.

[magic nyc]

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/pg17_butterfree.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/pg30_candi.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/pg105_psyduck.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/pikachutears.gif
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/pokemon150b.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/pokemonp2.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/sentret.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/jenn-bombing.png
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/1130504908_f.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/Oddities/buttpic1a.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/ll/julia.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/PuertoRico/PuertoRico098.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a37/goverment_issued/PuertoRico/PuertoRico102.jpg

[Select_One]

omfg your sig is fucking hilarious im like dying laughing.

but get that fucking pokemon sketch shit out of here this is a graff forum not a pokemon forum. Post back when u can incorporate one of those characters into a nice piece. o yes and prepare to get blasted by anyone who looks at this....... your gunna get PAWN3D&#39;


o yea how did u go from that decent pikachu sketch to that rainbow faggot bullshit?

[AoAssis]

im not laughing at ur sig im laughin at ur side duck hella funnny and all the other pokemon

[meetermaid]

i&#39;m pretty sure (actually i&#39;m hoping hoping hoping) magic is like joking....hahahaha. POKEMON KICKS ASS&#33; but don&#39;t let this thread go to shit now kiddies, theres so much shittalking for like the last 2 pages >_<constipatedsmiley

[AoAssis]

ya i havent had time to do ne new drawings i think i will do one now :blink:

[minesweep]

i need better markers :( but just simples for now
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4927/picture0098bg.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0098bg.jpg)

[Select_One]

can only hope its all a joke...

[pepsidude84067]

Originally posted by minesweep@Nov 3 2005, 02:01 AM
i need better markers :( but just simples for now
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4927/picture0098bg.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0098bg.jpg)
ok first your not consistant with your letters

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

work on it.

[toxus]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051103/11/7/6/6/766eed608c00b7e701840b58da3677f4200511030_full.jpg

[Jank]

arrow = bad.
work on S. rest not bad. keep it up

[toxus]

yeah, i wont do that stupid arrow again, i was just bored haha

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

lmfao

[Mr Tasty]

new S im messin about with
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/yasss.jpg

[nano]

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a8/jeffeq...ve/hazebomb.jpg (http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a8/jeffequalslove/hazebomb.jpg)

here&#39;s something i did in class. limited colors..

[geloe1]

hmmm kidz need work that s dont look like n s lol sorry keep it up though

[Bare0ne]

True that S is a bit mesed up you shold stay simple and you will eventualy progress to more complex leters like you are trying to achieve atm lol :P

[Jank]

nano boy squigly lines dont lok good. make the lines straigh. it&#39;ll help

taste, i think the problem is u&#39;v put in extensions just for the hell of putting in extensions. doesnt look too bad in my opinion.... u got a nice style normally, so keep at it tho. safe

[Jank]

done another page:took about a fukin year to do so u better comment...not overly original characters(&#33;) and a corny ass phrase, but just for jokes:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/YooucantbeataclassicVaugnBode.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

nice....heres my new sketch....amaz helped me alot on this though...

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/2122/dscf03258om.jpg

edit: and yes i do know that i suck at outlining i have shaky hands but other than that...comments?

[Jank]

aye other than that, i personally like the J, but now it doesnt really match the other letters. i think the E is very weak. the O could be ok if u fix the hole in the middle, make it the same shape as the outline, not square. the C is arite. i would try n make it more like a C...that dont make senc... i liked your old C better. i dno wot to do about the E. i cant do Es either, but it just looks like a blob. make the letter more defined. now ppl comment on mine.

[Sluts_r_us]

yeah thanks for the tips and about urs..the one thing i noticed is that you should seperate you c from the l in classic...just a thought

[minesweep]

throwie didn&#39;t take as much time on it as i should have but more focused on the letters than the outline or shadow
http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/5858/dscn00835em.th.jpg (http://img347.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn00835em.jpg)

[Myme]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 3 2005, 06:57 PM
nice....heres my new sketch....amaz helped me alot on this though...

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/2122/dscf03258om.jpg

edit: and yes i do know that i suck at outlining i have shaky hands but other than that...comments?
Put a line between those two little curls in the C, Don&#39;t mold your letters, they look like turds

And cut that TMC shit out, there&#39;s already a TMC crew (The Mad Children) and they destroy your ass, and you don&#39;t need to be in a crew at all at this stage.

TMC
http://artcrimes.com/maze/maze_deem_make_419.jpg

[AMAZ tbscrew]

hmm last time i cheked..theres alot of crews with the same name...nice
try...not even the same name...just the first letters of each word.....dumbass
ike umm tbs..yea theres alot of tbs&#39;s...dick shit..nice job...idiot..

and i helped him wit dat sketch...joce...wuts up wit the shaky lines?

[pepsidude84067]

My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1227.jpg)
^
New letter structure tyrin out (like this the best)
My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1226.jpg)
^
New tag more of symbol
My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1222.jpg)
My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1219.jpg)
^
On the last two messin with colors and shit and structure

Crit plz will take any and all

[Select_One]

NANO change ur nick before u get your post count up.. cuz ive been writing nano for a while now so be cool and change it.
(cant believe someone actually used that name ive never seen it before... wtf)

[AMAZ tbscrew]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz002.jpg


the shit i helped joce with

[Sluts_r_us]

yeah about the outline...my basement is cold and when im cold my hands get all shaky......<_<

[Myme]

:rolleyes: TMC CREW FO SHO KILLIN DA HARDEZ SPOTS

Chip - It&#39;s looking good, nice and simple, i&#39;d say make a second curve on the bottom of the C and connect the two, not just 1 on the top, but keep at it, not much you&#39;re doing so far

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/518/mymecrazyshit4ys.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

once again you post that same sketch god dam post sumthin new >_>

[Myme]

Right, 11/03/2005 is the same sketch.. dumbass

[Sluts_r_us]

thats the date you took the pic dumbass....that means that it could be the same sketch taken 2day

[AMAZ tbscrew]

yo...get a new style you keep doin the same shit...just adding extensions......nice job

[Myme]

Yeah, I take pics on 2 different days just to confuse people and get more feedback, check my posting history and you&#39;ll see i&#39;ve never posted this piece, just because I have style and my pieces have a distinct look and not chunky molded hunks of shit doesn&#39;t mean it&#39;s the same piece

[AMAZ tbscrew]

you havent seen any of my shit so umm u shouldnt talk

[Myme]

well umm you havn&#39;t posted any of your shit so you shouldn&#39;t talk, anyway i&#39;m done with this kiddy argument bullshit, fucking pointless

Again for the new page

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/518/mymecrazyshit4ys.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

nah i think hes talkin 2 me but w/e all ur shit loks the same

[nerdx]

myme they all look good. but this ones got madd arrows.
but give him some credit, hes got a nice stlye.

and its hard as hell to come up with otheres.
at least for me.

[meetermaid]

everybody chill out.. like, seriously, none of this shit is a big deal at all.

myme, the only one of those arrows i like is the one on the bottom left of the m, but i do like the little swirly things you added.

[pepsidude84067]

Originally posted by pepsidude84067@Nov 3 2005, 08:31 PM
My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1227.jpg)
^
New letter structure tyrin out (like this the best)
My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1226.jpg)
^
New tag more of symbol
My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1222.jpg)
My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/IMGP1219.jpg)
^
On the last two messin with colors and shit and structure

Crit plz will take any and all
myme looks good like always dont listen to there shit and i agree with nerdx it aint that esy coming up with a new style

any other crit

[AoAssis]

you tag is horrible that line that runs thru the letters is hella ugly so take that out, try and make it nice and simple then post it again and i&#39;ll try and help u from there

[pepsidude84067]

My Webpage (http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/pepsidude84067/new.jpg)

so you want something more like this

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a40/leact/mypiece.jpg

[pepsidude84067]

i like it there is alot a motion though makes your eye move all over

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

ok. not sure bowt dat comment but is on a a3 piece o paper and i crnt scan it.

[Kayone707]

Originally posted by Myme@Nov 3 2005, 07:50 PM
well umm you havn&#39;t posted any of your shit so you shouldn&#39;t talk, anyway i&#39;m done with this kiddy argument bullshit, fucking pointless

Again for the new page

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/518/mymecrazyshit4ys.jpg
this could go somewhere. keep up

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

comments on my piece.

[minesweep]

Originally posted by minesweep@Nov 3 2005, 07:33 PM
throwie didn&#39;t take as much time on it as i should have but more focused on the letters than the outline or shadow
http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/5858/dscn00835em.th.jpg (http://img347.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn00835em.jpg)
feedback?

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

dope.......
not

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/vareoutline.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/varearrowstylesketch.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/varesketchx2.jpg
some outlines i threw up on paper

[nerdx]

the last 2 are the best.

[Sluts_r_us]

i like the second one but it would be beter without the arrows

[BELLA]

the second one is best....Yay pink&#33; = )

[Jank]

last 2 all the way...&#33; 2nds not bad... with work it cud b arite.

[vare_187uk]

cheers guys foir the help would u say theres anything else i can try on the bottom 2 to make them any better add ons etc of other bits ill take this into account thanx again&#33;

[C3ZR ONE]

I&#39;m for the first two. The 2nd in particular. The first has mad potential with an enhanced 3D effect possibbly. And bits always rock out a piece. nice work.

[C3ZR ONE]

After a second look, the first two probably wont work with bits but the last two would. That first piece is the fire. Very origional style.

[toxus]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051105/04/f/2/a/f2adbb6ae030d1de807bc15c28bc26d7200511050_full.jpg

[wfl]

i did this real quick in class i messed up on the e but idc my grl told me to write her name. comment plez.

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a34/robsk8ter247/erin.jpg

[scOpeOne]

aga trance what does that say? i dont see any letters

[scribbler]

What makes these 2 pieces so different? (exept the color, the "H" and the 3D)...cause everyone on all the forums allways says that the "Pheak" is so much better....I mean its even the same letters...

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/PHEAK.jpg
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/Kepha0002.jpg

[scOpeOne]

the first one is nicer.. but bring the curl on the P down a bit it doesnt flow with the rest

[Jersey Skillz - Joha]

Heres some of my shit ....

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/4184/zoarblue7hz.th.jpg (http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zoarblue7hz.jpg)

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/1677/0301140828004no.th.jpg (http://img323.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0301140828004no.jpg)

http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/8261/anotherzo6br.th.jpg (http://img374.imageshack.us/my.php?image=anotherzo6br.jpg)

Just messing with different styles

-ZOAR- DWI - MTA

[Gara]

Dont have a scanner so i had to take a picture from my phone jsut a little something i drew while i was bored messed aroudn with coils input?

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4143/951125559092906rm.jpg

[---CRoR---]

something i did the other day... any good or shit? no faggit comments ither or ill jus laugh at u cuz i really actually dun care bout faggit comments... only a few ppl i respect on here n the rest FUCK U but who knows any of u culd be the ones i have respect for... comments
SOCKR
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3509/picture0830sp.th.jpg (http://img239.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0830sp.jpg)

[AoAssis]

ur K and R dont flow with the rest, they seem to have their own style because of the bump between the first and second leg, if u get wat i mean, so take the bump out and it should have more flow and look better, hope that helped

[---CRoR---]

ya i thot the same thing after i flicked it lol... cuz i culdnt put bumps or w.e in the S O C jus K R so meh ill try new styles n then put it on here n yeah this time i agree wit u other then the tags thread lmao peace

[AoAssis]

http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/2174/dude0047ho.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ya just felt like drawin that i was gana put it in karakters but didnt kno if it was one

i dont like the way the legs turned out, cuz i suk at drawin legs or maybe i just suk at drawin
http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/7559/dude0036fr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

watu think?

[JadedSketches]

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1070/graffz1966tw.th.jpg (http://img377.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffz1966tw.jpg)
quick throw,P is sorta messed,feedback?

[Sluts_r_us]

first time shading what u think...any tips?http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2237/dscf03275mx.jpg

[---CRoR---]

not bad... put some clothes on the damn thing haha n make it paint sumthin on a wall like yer tag er watever then it wuld be dope&#33; hopefully&#33;

[Sluts_r_us]

not understandin a word ur saying >_>

[AMAZ tbscrew]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz005.jpg

soo

[JadedSketches]

Originally posted by JadedSketches@Nov 5 2005, 11:54 PM
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1070/graffz1966tw.th.jpg (http://img377.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffz1966tw.jpg)
quick throw,P is sorta messed,feedback?
quit the chitchat,bump.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

its arite work on the p and shutup k =]

[magic nyc]

1250 post later and you produce that shit?

[m0ck]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 12:18 AM
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz005.jpg

soo

I like it alot. The char is dope, and so are the letters. The handstyles need some work though, also the &#39;Z&#39; in the throw could use some tweaking, the top doesn&#39;t fit with the rest of the sketch imo. Good stuff.

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 5 2005, 11:54 PM
first time shading what u think...any tips?http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2237/dscf03275mx.jpg
comments/...

[weldo]

sorry really shit photo
feedback please

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/9641/phto00335nf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

3d a little off, other than that looks quite nice, work on letter strucktor tjo (sp <_<)

[weldo]

yea on the s thatnks for that

[toxus]

Originally posted by toxus@Nov 5 2005, 01:29 PM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051105/04/f/2/a/f2adbb6ae030d1de807bc15c28bc26d7200511050_full.jpg
bump

[AMAZ tbscrew]

yea i no the handstyle isnt that good..but that sketch is old and iv changed it sence then

here&#39;s more of my shit this is old 2

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz004.jpg

[Gara]

little something i drew feedback?

http://img350.imageshack.us/img350/2026/9528510003733000ug.th.jpg (http://img350.imageshack.us/my.php?image=9528510003733000ug.jpg)

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 5 2005, 11:54 PM
first time shading what u think...any tips?http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2237/dscf03275mx.jpg
bump

[snetz1]

hers somthin i did in class..http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/stbcrew/akorcolour.jpg

[scythe]

here&#39;s one of mine. i hate the arrow so don&#39;t even comment on it.
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/coolsub.jpg

[toxus]

i rushed this one a bit...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/85.jpg

edit:http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffiti/wag_180412_0611_1079.jpg

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

nice letters

[AMAZ tbscrew]

umm how about people comment on others people shit...and then post theres..cuz its like i did this did that..and no one comments on anything

[toxus]

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz004.jpg
i like it, but the a&#39;s (if they are a&#39;s) look a bit like a 6 kind of, and i reckon you should level it all out.


http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2237/dscf03275mx.jpg
looks nice, just keep the letters the same fattness and stuff.

[quote]http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b384/stbcrew/akorcolour.jpg
you should start out simple, nice handsyles though.

[quote]http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/coolsub.jpg[quote]
keep your letters the same fattness, nice 3d aswell


and my stuff http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/85.jpg
http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffiti/wag_180412_0611_1079.jpg


we should all coment on the last sketches then post yours.

[C3ZR ONE]

I made some new slaps. The half page size&#39;s were a motherfucker. The outline could be better but I think they&#39;ll look good around town. Critz?
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000003.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000004.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000002.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000001.jpg

[AMAZ tbscrew]

ther all good i like them..orps keep it up...joce you suck =] lol

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz003.jpg

[AMAZ tbscrew]

all these sketchs im posting are old..like this siz one it use 2 be my old name.. never posted any of my work up tho..even the amaz sketchs are old..my styles changed alot

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/siz011.jpg

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 02:26 PM
ther all good i like them..orps keep it up...joce you suck =] lol

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz003.jpg
i like joce&#39;s stuff better then urs.....looks like u try to hard to make ur stuff look kool, so stop the round and pointy letters, if u have round parts in ur leters stick with round all the way dont mix it up unless u kno wat ur doin cuz if u dont kno wat ur doin it looks like shit, just my 2 cents, so do a whole piece just round letters and post again,

joce change ur C like instead of makin the C round make it straight like this
http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/4192/dscf03275mx7pg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 02:39 PM
my styles changed alot


thank God

[C3ZR ONE]

AoAssis, you&#39;ve gotten bitchy over the last couple weeks. Whats up man? I gotta give you credit for always putting in your 2 cents though. ;)
AMAZ- I thought the last pic, "siz" was pretty origional. Respect.

[djsupreeme]

Originally posted by djsupreeme@Nov 2 2005, 09:56 PM
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/1.jpg
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/2.jpg
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/3.jpg

Im trying to work on somthing like this. But do you think it has potential and if so what can i do to improve it?
anybody.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by AoAssis+Nov 6 2005, 02:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Nov 6 2005, 02:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 02:39 PM
my styles changed alot


thank God [/b][/quote]
wuts up your ass? that styles nice you mad cuz ur shit suks? its arite ull be good one day

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by AoAssis+Nov 6 2005, 02:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Nov 6 2005, 02:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 02:26 PM
ther all good i like them..orps keep it up...joce you suck =] lol

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz003.jpg
i like joce&#39;s stuff better then urs.....looks like u try to hard to make ur stuff look kool, so stop the round and pointy letters, if u have round parts in ur leters stick with round all the way dont mix it up unless u kno wat ur doin cuz if u dont kno wat ur doin it looks like shit, just my 2 cents, so do a whole piece just round letters and post again,

joce change ur C like instead of makin the C round make it straight like this
http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/4192/dscf03275mx7pg.jpg (http://imageshack.us) [/b][/quote]
o yea and dont tell me what i can and cant do wit my shit cuz its my style not yours arite bitch?

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Nov 6 2005, 02:52 PM
AoAssis, you&#39;ve gotten bitchy over the last couple weeks. Whats up man? I gotta give you credit for always putting in your 2 cents though. ;)
AMAZ- I thought the last pic, "siz" was pretty origional. Respect.
u want real reason lol? cuz i was just bored and was hopin one of my rettarded comments would make it into someones sig lol :D good reason huh? now u kno how the AO clock ticks :lol:

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Nov 6 2005, 03:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Nov 6 2005, 03:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 6 2005, 02:45 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 02:26 PM
ther all good i like them..orps keep it up...joce you suck =] lol

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz003.jpg
i like joce&#39;s stuff better then urs.....looks like u try to hard to make ur stuff look kool, so stop the round and pointy letters, if u have round parts in ur leters stick with round all the way dont mix it up unless u kno wat ur doin cuz if u dont kno wat ur doin it looks like shit, just my 2 cents, so do a whole piece just round letters and post again,

joce change ur C like instead of makin the C round make it straight like this
http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/4192/dscf03275mx7pg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
o yea and dont tell me what i can and cant do wit my shit cuz its my style not yours arite bitch? [/b][/quote]
ummm ya i can see how my post might have been kinda mean but no need to cry..... and i was just implying that i dont like ur style, wat u want me to put IMO after every post i make so u dont cry? and u have to give me credit for givin my 2 cents to everyoen but i guess not so maybe i should just avoid ur posts.....and the thing about dont do round with point is cuz thats some advice i got from someone else and it seems to work cuz i think that piece looks ugly anf long jagged things look ugly.....and i said thank God that u changed ur style cuz i was hopin that now u dont still draw like the last posts u made cuz they dont look good, but thats just my 2 cents and just so u dont cry i will say IMO, if u dont kno wat that means...it means in my opinion

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

god. release the beef <_<


lets all carm and drink herbal tea to improve our karma














:lol: fuck it lets have roman candle wars &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;1111111111 :phr34k:

[scOpeOne]

Originally posted by djsupreeme+Nov 6 2005, 02:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (djsupreeme &#064; Nov 6 2005, 02:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-djsupreeme@Nov 2 2005, 09:56 PM
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/1.jpg
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/2.jpg
http://www.theghettoblaster.com/zed/graff/bombscience/3.jpg

Im trying to work on somthing like this. But do you think it has potential and if so what can i do to improve it?
anybody. [/b][/quote]
almost everything can go somewhere.. ure S is fine, ur U is fine and simple.
you just have to experiment with some other P&#39;s and clean up ure E so it can flow better with the rest and then. u will have a burner

oh and im talking about the last pic. the first 2 suck stick with the one u did on the 3rd pic

[nerdx]

sub, that peice is looking really nice. i love the shading on the 3d.


just a quick one for my mum.
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1577.jpg

[AoAssis]

^^^ loooks pretty good just i dont like how the L is slanted can u change that ? keep at it

[JadedSketches]

For magic dissing me two pages back,post count has nothing to do with skill.
I just talk alot.
Toxus is a vet,and he&#39;s still toy.

[AoAssis]

^^ true

[Sluts_r_us]

ao...thanks for the comment but if i make my c more "straight" it wont fir in with the other letters

[Gara]

Originally posted by Gara@Nov 6 2005, 10:32 AM


http://img350.imageshack.us/img350/2026/9528510003733000ug.th.jpg (http://img350.imageshack.us/my.php?image=9528510003733000ug.jpg)

feedback?

[JadedSketches]

Get rid of those fucking arrows,and wait a bit before putting shadow 3d

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/fullrawkus.jpg
just summat from a graphotism battle if yall cant read it seys rawkus

[shae]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/sdf.jpg
bored, photoshop

[nerdx]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 6 2005, 06:04 PM
^^^ loooks pretty good just i dont like how the L is slanted can u change that ? keep at it
lol, it was a quick sketch while i was on it.
lol. im just donig random words, figure i will get better at letters this way.



^^^ I like the i, and nice colors.

[Gara]

Originally posted by JadedSketches@Nov 6 2005, 08:44 PM
Get rid of those fucking arrows,and wait a bit before putting shadow 3d
something against arrows..... do they scare you?

[faint rem one]

nah man..

hes just tryin to give u advice. hes rite. arrows=overrated.

[Gara]

ah well thanks for the advice i guess ill stop using arrows... <_<

[AoAssis]

nvr got ne feed bak on this cuz the other thread got closed, wat u think just came to me :)

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8334/bombingscience0sk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fate]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Nov 6 2005, 03:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Nov 6 2005, 03:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 6 2005, 02:45 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 02:26 PM
ther all good i like them..orps keep it up...joce you suck =] lol

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz003.jpg
i like joce&#39;s stuff better then urs.....looks like u try to hard to make ur stuff look kool, so stop the round and pointy letters, if u have round parts in ur leters stick with round all the way dont mix it up unless u kno wat ur doin cuz if u dont kno wat ur doin it looks like shit, just my 2 cents, so do a whole piece just round letters and post again,

joce change ur C like instead of makin the C round make it straight like this
http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/4192/dscf03275mx7pg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
o yea and dont tell me what i can and cant do wit my shit cuz its my style not yours arite bitch? [/b][/quote]
thats my "e" at the bottom

[---CRoR---]

Originally posted by weldo@Nov 6 2005, 03:10 AM
sorry really shit photo
feedback please

http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/9641/phto00335nf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like that... look a lot better painted i bet&#33; keep it up man

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Fate+Nov 7 2005, 05:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fate &#064; Nov 7 2005, 05:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 03:03 PM

Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 6 2005, 02:45 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 6 2005, 02:26 PM
ther all good i like them..orps keep it up...joce you suck =] lol

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b242/AMAZtbs/amaz003.jpg
i like joce&#39;s stuff better then urs.....looks like u try to hard to make ur stuff look kool, so stop the round and pointy letters, if u have round parts in ur leters stick with round all the way dont mix it up unless u kno wat ur doin cuz if u dont kno wat ur doin it looks like shit, just my 2 cents, so do a whole piece just round letters and post again,

joce change ur C like instead of makin the C round make it straight like this
http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/4192/dscf03275mx7pg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
o yea and dont tell me what i can and cant do wit my shit cuz its my style not yours arite bitch?
thats my "e" at the bottom [/b][/quote]
where? if ur talkin about the e in joce...thats not urs...ii had a e that looked like my c but i changed it to what it is now so dont go accusing me of biting ur e

[diarrhea]

that rawkus piece is pretty ill

[scOpeOne]

Originally posted by Gara+Nov 6 2005, 11:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Gara @ Nov 6 2005, 11:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-JadedSketches@Nov 6 2005, 08:44 PM
Get rid of those fucking arrows,and wait a bit before putting shadow 3d
something against arrows..... do they scare you? [/b][/quote]
hes not scared of arrows.. ure arrows are just retardedly placed, badly formed and u have absolutly no idea how to use them... so stop being a little bitch and take peoples advice when u ask for it

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by JadedSketches@Nov 6 2005, 06:21 PM
For magic dissing me two pages back,post count has nothing to do with skill.
I just talk alot.
Toxus is a vet,and he&#39;s still toy.
yea sorry but i would just figure...
im like an evolved toy my self i have trouble with most things
i get help from other graff artist though so it depends
viva la toya

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by shifty 486@Nov 2 2005, 04:14 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4236/picture0025oi.jpg
fucking around. Character isnt origanaly mine, but I added some shit like the marker and hands and shit. nothing special
shifty, willy looks better without the arms...

[nerdx]

a quick ser peice from the other night.
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1578.jpg



and another dumb word sketch. for practice. lol
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1579.jpg



the ser peice is the only serious one.

[Sluts_r_us]

new style...thanks again amaz...tmc
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3237/newstylejoce1xr.jpg

[nerdx]

loose the dot above the j, it is out of place.

[Sluts_r_us]

k lol

[Gara]

dont do a dot do a small slanted square that matches its width above it

[nosferatu]

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/5417/n17bc.th.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/my.php?image=n17bc.jpg)

comments?

[Sluts_r_us]

lose that little pimple thing on the n

[AMAZ tbscrew]

haha pimple things...nice joce lol nice way 2 put it

[nerdx]

any feed on my ser piece? tahts the only want that was any serioius.

[JadedSketches]

Nope throwup..
All the extra shit is something I dont usualy do,but Ume made me do it,its all jokes.
http://img336.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffz2011jz.jpg

[nerdx]

looks nice, just like you said it was for jokes the rest of it.

[diarrhea]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v703/wordington/sketch/sinus1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v703/wordington/sketch/sinus2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v703/wordington/sketch/sinus3.jpg
FEEDBACK PLZ.,

[JadedSketches]

Yeah, "blood in blood out" and "the crazy chechnyan kid"..
come on&#33; :lol:

[oneshokid]

http://img350.imageshack.us/img350/7683/titan2tj.gif

[FFS]

im kind of hoping thats a joke..

if not... sorry.

[FFS]

Hey guys, ive been interested in graffing and the people behind it for over a year or so now, and ive pretty much just started sketching. its been about 3 weeks now, and I would like to get some opinions on how Im doing. im looking for some constructive criticism, and since ive just started im going with the basics. simple stuff. and i know they need to be colored, but hey, theyre just sketches.

And sorry about the crappy quality... the only digital camera I own is on my cellphone :)

http://img498.imageshack.us/img498/4417/tag13df.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img498.imageshack.us/img498/5776/tag23zr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[weldo]

do your shading last not letter after letter but other than that i couldent tell u been doin it for jus over 3 weeks

[FFS]

i dont get what you mean. i outline the 3-d of the letter but i dont shade them in until im sure thats what i want it to look like. i might be misunderstanding

[weldo]

black and white
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3724/phto00327va.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[alive]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9500/07110517445mt.jpg
alive^^


Constructive critism please,
thanks for your time and help&#33;

[Mekas]

Originally posted by FFS@Nov 8 2005, 03:55 AM
i dont get what you mean. i outline the 3-d of the letter but i dont shade them in until im sure thats what i want it to look like. i might be misunderstanding
He means dont put your 3d over top of other letters. Unless you want to add depth to your sketch, but you don&#39;t want depth in your sketch or it&#39;d look worse. I&#39;d say those are really nice compared to most of the ppl who just started on these forums. Keep on keepin&#39; on.

[ACTION NEWS...]

Why do toys even try pieceing?

I&#39;ve been writing for a year and I don&#39;t even attempt it, you shouldn&#39;t either.

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

lol

[FFS]

ohhh okay i gotcha mekas thanks for the explanation. ill fix em, thanks for the heads up. ill be putting up another one soon.

[toxus]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/86.jpg
iv been bombing and taggin with one of my friends whos like alot more better than me, and he&#39;s going to help me out. and also the bomb in the pic i have been putting up every were now.

any comments?

[toxus]

sorry for double posting...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/87.jpg

[Jank]

the S one the top right one is best. it works. gd. lost the bit on the o of that one.
the P on the bottome right one looks like a D. on the 1 with the crosses push the letters closer together, as in the one on bottom left.

[nosferatu]

http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/3083/n21uu.th.gif (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=n21uu.gif)

What do you guys think?

[tubedisasters]

i like feed back so ill post this here too

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/Picture026.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/Picture025.jpg

[JadedSketches]

the purple one is hot.

[magic nyc]

yea i second that, would like to own one my self

[C3ZR ONE]

TubeDisaters-Those slaps are def&#33; I like the Charachter. I&#39;ve been trying to think of one but haven&#39;t had much luck yet. I was thinking about Chilly Willy the penguin but I think I&#39;d rather come up with my own. Here&#39;s some slaps I made. I posted &#39;em on the big boy forum and got knocked, but after seeing there shit, I can see why.
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000003.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000002.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000004.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000001.jpg
I tried but it kinda ended up looking like a B-boy got it on with a box of fruity pebbles... :blink: :(

[Sluts_r_us]

nice colors?

[nerdx]

cezar, thoes arent too bad. i kind of like them. the colors are hot. but i dont know if they go with thoes peices.



2 knew ones. im thinking of wrting toil, short for toilet. hahahha
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1585.jpg
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1584.jpg

[HEIST]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/smackahoe3/HEIST.jpg

[HEIST]

Please critisize or however you spell it, this was the sketch i did for that massive toy battle

[nerdx]

well, i dont htink its going to win, unless its whoever is the biggest toy.
keep the width of the letters the same in all the diffrent angles the same.
like the H it doesnt fit at all with the rest of the letters, but the S is pretty nice thought.

[HEIST]

lol what else would a toy battle be about n thanks for the advice

[Myme]

That Toil is fresh, not to keen on the O (little big and hole placement is weird) but it&#39;s good overall, the Bral one is wack

[C3ZR ONE]

NerdX- You&#39;re showing improvement. Keep working it. You seem to have the concept of steady lines and width down. You could probably start adding a little flair in there bit by bit. Or try some bubble throwies.
Heist- You&#39;ve got a long way to go, BUT, you can always tell if someone has some potential by there beginning sketches and you seem to have a rough but natural idea of flair. Keep at it.
I feel like a jackass giving critz to others when I&#39;m still in toy mode myself, but I guess if we didn&#39;t this forum would be pretty fuckin quiet..
Here&#39;s one I did today. 3D and wildstyle are still above my level, but I still like trying it.
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00540969f00000009.jpg
Critz?

[nosferatu]

Originally posted by nosferatu@Nov 8 2005, 03:52 PM
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/3083/n21uu.th.gif (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=n21uu.gif)

What do you guys think?
*bump*

[FFS]

Hey guys, this isnt MY name or anything, my bro asked me to do this for him. i dunno if i should trace this one out and actually ink it up, or just scrap it. also if you have any suggestions on adding graphics or effects to it, please speak up... just looking for some tips.

once again sorry about the camera quality.

http://img492.imageshack.us/img492/7687/t15pd.jpg

[weldo]

c3zr one it good but you should get rid of all those little square things in the fill and it would look way betta also get rid of all those cut offs

[pesci]

Originally posted by FFS@Nov 8 2005, 12:40 AM


http://img498.imageshack.us/img498/5776/tag23zr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i thought that one was dope, the other one was alirght but im not into blocky letters..

[JadedSketches]

yeah that dist is hot.

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

Originally posted by toxus@Nov 8 2005, 01:32 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/86.jpg
iv been bombing and taggin with one of my friends whos like alot more better than me, and he&#39;s going to help me out. and also the bomb in the pic i have been putting up every were now.

any comments?
push that throwie (or is it ;) ) closer togeter. more, compact.

[JadedSketches]

Toxus...that might be the worse I`ve ever seen of you..
:(

[nosferatu]

Originally posted by nosferatu+Nov 8 2005, 10:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nosferatu @ Nov 8 2005, 10:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nosferatu@Nov 8 2005, 03:52 PM
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What do you guys think?
*bump* [/b][/quote]
double *bump*

c&#39;mon guys help me out, I need some constructive crit.

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

nice

[Fate]

Originally posted by nosferatu+Nov 9 2005, 01:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nosferatu @ Nov 9 2005, 01:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by nosferatu@Nov 8 2005, 10:37 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-nosferatu@Nov 8 2005, 03:52 PM
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/3083/n21uu.th.gif (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=n21uu.gif)

What do you guys think?
*bump*
double *bump*

c&#39;mon guys help me out, I need some constructive crit. [/b][/quote]
the n is terrible. it you gonna put 3d in the middle of your letters you hafta do the rest

[Myme]

Classic myme style, different letter structure (I dunno but I &#39;m feeling the lowercase e

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/2470/mymeletterstructurepiece8sf.jpg

And just for fun, here&#39;s the rough concept I made for it during school, I usually practice my letter structure like this, I recommend you try it, do 3-4 different letters(same style though) and look at what&#39;s wrong with them and maybe combine them, whatever, it works for me.

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/6329/mymeletterstructure7dd.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by nosferatu+Nov 9 2005, 01:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nosferatu @ Nov 9 2005, 01:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by nosferatu@Nov 8 2005, 10:37 PM
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What do you guys think?
*bump*
double *bump*

c&#39;mon guys help me out, I need some constructive crit. [/b][/quote]
once again....lose the pimple on the n but i bet you will choose not to take advice from me so what ever

[JadedSketches]

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6862/graffz2028bk.th.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graffz2028bk.jpg)
quick bomb.

[BELLA]

Ok yo....heses 3 things I did.....BE NICE please. Sorry it is so big....i did what I could.

http://img281.imageshack.us/img281/6031/glits5cp.jpg