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cookies!
11-05-2006, 12:49 AM
hmmm..
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9682/1104062232qv4.jpg

Vagrant
11-05-2006, 12:52 AM
Originally posted by Vagrant+Nov 4 2006, 11:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Vagrant @ Nov 4 2006, 11:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AteskOne@Nov 4 2006, 09:28 PM
looks fresh as hell bouncing soul...i dont really like the n tho. looks too short on the right leg. also you should try doing something a little different on the 3d. like make it lean toward the middle of the peice if your get what i&#39;m saying...all the 3d on the left hand side (of the middle of the piece) leans to the right and as you work towards the right it gets more and more vertical. until you reach the right side after the middle. then all the 3d lines should start leaning more and more to the right. its gives it a nice effect.

something i cooked up in school on friday.
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6835/scan0006td2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
obviously says love. at the bottom is says love life...love graf. i wanna put the love of hip-hop somewhere in it. still needs coloring. post more pics when its finished
I think it looks a little funny because its uneven. there are more letters on the right than the left. perhaps you should ditch the heart coming off the O and center the word.

~~~

As for bouncingsouls&#39; 3D. I think its fine. Not all 3D has to follow perspective. What you&#39;re telling him is dumb, anyways. You are basically saying to only do 3D a certain way, which is like saying to only make letters a certain way. There are many styles of letters, and there are many styles of 3D. Its the artist&#39;s prerogative to use which ever he wants.
Yes, you are only suggesting a 3D that follows a central vanishingpoint perspective, but you act as if it is better in some way. [/b][/quote]
I was refering to Atesk suggesting that BouncingSoul put some perspective on his 3D.

enigmatic
11-05-2006, 12:57 AM
for my girlfriend. she doesnt know i write.

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/36/1001296ih4.jpg

NiL
11-05-2006, 03:07 AM
Ignore the bad shadowing and gay tag :)

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseThrow.jpg
Same with this one, I just wanted to try a new fill too.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseThrow001.jpg

Sorry about the sideways but it wont change :(

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseRainTags-1.jpg

What tag is good?
Crits please on throws and tags don&#39;t care good or bad.

ASB_ONE
11-05-2006, 07:01 AM
same sketch better quality picture

still no crits?

peace.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0067_000.jpg

wildpspitfire90
11-05-2006, 10:07 AM
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2398.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2397.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2396.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2395.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2394.jpg
some stuff ive done in the past couple days.. CRITZ....

westsida
11-05-2006, 10:25 AM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/324/p1010482sm9.jpg
heres my shitty excuse for a one liner
any critz?

Sumoe
11-05-2006, 10:30 AM
Westsida clean it up a bit, looks mad messy.

Sumoe
11-05-2006, 10:31 AM
ASB: not feeling the extension on the top of the E, i think u should change up ur S a bit, clean it up and it should be good. sry double post :blink:

sky 5
11-05-2006, 10:59 AM
ASEM - it looks like the A and M are pinched in the middle pulling it right but the S and E dont do the same thing . . . .it looks akward having some letters lean and some dont . . . i would try gettin the letters to lay next to each other a lil closer, work on your end caps of your letters cuz they look sloppy and un-uniform . . its all about repeating certain chosen techniques on every letter your doing to have a solid sketch . .so if you choose to do end caps make them all be relatively the same or atleast same style . . .

ras
11-05-2006, 11:41 AM
Originally posted by wildpspitfire90@Nov 5 2006, 11:07 AM
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2398.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2397.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2396.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2395.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2394.jpg
some stuff ive done in the past couple days.. CRITZ....
Only relly like the 2nd one .... but i also like the a on the last one and lose the stupid squiggles in the s

ASB_ONE
11-05-2006, 11:43 AM
gees rip it aprt.

i kno its &#39;constructive criticism&#39; but post an example from ur shit iluustrating ur points.

then i might take it on board bit more.

krazzie_ammo
11-05-2006, 11:54 AM
lol...you dont have to take his crits if you dont want them, but why ask for crits in the first place...

so i put down the ruler and this is what i got :rolleyes: nothing new really..

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3555/50ia3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

ras
11-05-2006, 11:55 AM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 5 2006, 08:01 AM
same sketch better quality picture

still no crits?

peace.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0067_000.jpg
lose the top extension on the e and its kool...clean it up and put in a sweet fill...

enigmatic
11-05-2006, 12:19 PM
Originally posted by Fixion@Nov 4 2006, 07:32 PM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1815/dscf2083ln5.jpg
Simple, crits?
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9004/dscf2082do4.jpg
Fixed up the letters. Crits?
Bravo&#33; You actually listen to other artists instead of just cussing with toy "wildstyles"

This is really clean. Your gonna be way better then a lot of this site in a year. Keep it up.

Hot_Pocket
11-05-2006, 01:04 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 5 2006, 12:54 PM
lol...you dont have to take his crits if you dont want them, but why ask for crits in the first place...

so i put down the ruler and this is what i got :rolleyes: nothing new really..

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3555/50ia3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
Man, where&#39;d you get that orange marker or pen or whatever it is? I want one, they look sexy.

furious
11-05-2006, 01:06 PM
fixion if you had a nicer f in the first one it would look pretty hot.

some stuff i did last night...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/block2.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/block3.jpg

ras
11-05-2006, 01:06 PM
i know i sound a idiot and a prick and that but what does bump mean... :wacko: :unsure:

krazzie_ammo
11-05-2006, 01:19 PM
Originally posted by Hot_Pocket+Nov 5 2006, 02:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hot_Pocket @ Nov 5 2006, 02:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Nov 5 2006, 12:54 PM
lol...you dont have to take his crits if you dont want them, but why ask for crits in the first place...

so i put down the ruler and this is what i got :rolleyes: nothing new really..

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3555/50ia3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
Man, where&#39;d you get that orange marker or pen or whatever it is? I want one, they look sexy. [/b][/quote]
its a berol fine

baper, i love your style, very naiiceee...

YarHarHar
11-05-2006, 01:22 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2045.jpg

white outlines to thick...

Necro-
11-05-2006, 01:24 PM
that is fuckin nice

[EDIT] actually i freakin love that. you wanna do an exchange? i write mav or maven.

uhhh
11-05-2006, 01:36 PM
for the single letter battle.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-068S.jpg
crits before coloring?

furious
11-05-2006, 01:40 PM
jar feelin that, besides the thick outline, looks hot

i like the fact that your letters have gotten sillyer hah, thats not a bad thing.

any crits on my garbage

CinimeIsntDope
11-05-2006, 01:59 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/6783/graff001smallbl8.jpg

messing around with throws. crooked <_<

krazzie_ammo
11-05-2006, 02:00 PM
JAR5: at first glance the R looked like a P....but it looks good :)

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 02:04 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0301.jpg

Fixed the fucked up arms and got better lighting... Comments?

ASB_ONE
11-05-2006, 02:11 PM
aint cussing his crits asking for an example of what hes chattn bout.

Code
11-05-2006, 02:12 PM
Jar=Really lovin it, just not feelin the "a" it looks a little sloppy,but everthing else is dope :)

uhh=I actully like it accept that arrow on the right kind of seems random and the S could be a little thicker :)

Cinime= Love the throws

Bouncing soul=Lovin the letter but the character could use some work

K, unlike my other stuff i have decided to start over with a new name, and just work the simples. I saw my self not improving so i am just going back and rock the simples and keep on moving from there :)

So here they are
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/6289/scan0001zf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Here i did the the same as top but kind of messed around with the K and the O. Also worked the bubble letters :)

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1131/scan0003mb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Torrent
11-05-2006, 02:16 PM
http://myspace-763.vo.llnwd.net/01387/36/73/1387103763_l.jpg

Any critique?

Code
11-05-2006, 02:18 PM
Originally posted by Torrent@Nov 5 2006, 03:16 PM
http://myspace-763.vo.llnwd.net/01387/36/73/1387103763_l.jpg

Any critique?
Your good, but go a bit simpiler and clean up the 3d a bit and you will be gold :)

ASB_ONE
11-05-2006, 02:19 PM
torrent thats fly as hell mang. like it.

uhhh
11-05-2006, 02:20 PM
code-looks like you just start. keep at it. and thanks for the crits.

the arrows, i realized ,are the slightest bit offset from each other, but it really bugs me so i think i&#39;ll redo it before tomorow.

well heres that one colored anywyas..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-069S.jpg

cookies!
11-05-2006, 02:21 PM
Originally posted by cookies&#33;@Nov 4 2006, 11:49 PM
hmmm..
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9682/1104062232qv4.jpg
aaannyyoone?

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 02:25 PM
I don&#39;t know what the last letter is supposed to be... They all look like blobs to me. The only way I figured out "coo..." was from the handie

cookies!
11-05-2006, 02:27 PM
haha its another c

Code
11-05-2006, 02:27 PM
Cookies= its not that good keep at it try to add a shadow to it and work with the letters a little more

And can i get one more crit

krazzie_ammo
11-05-2006, 02:28 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 5 2006, 12:54 PM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3555/50ia3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

minesweep
11-05-2006, 02:32 PM
the big craze is hot and would make a good roller
the throwie keep workin on and overlap your letters if you know what i mean

skan2
11-05-2006, 02:34 PM
make the c bigger on the bubble throw up one




http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/5440/1001024fz4.jpg

wonderin if i should color it , so please crits

etch a sketch
11-05-2006, 02:51 PM
skan - thats pretty good but i aint feelin the s and is the 45 there on purpose?

skan2
11-05-2006, 02:55 PM
yeah there like a millon skans out there and i like the name alot so thats why i went with 45

afek
11-05-2006, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Nov 5 2006, 03:34 PM
make the c bigger on the bubble throw up one




http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/5440/1001024fz4.jpg

wonderin if i should color it , so please crits
NO

skan2
11-05-2006, 03:52 PM
wtf NO WHAT^^^^

etch a sketch
11-05-2006, 03:56 PM
He&#39;s saying you shouldn&#39;t colour it. I think. Well, heres my contribution for the day.
Tell me anything i should fix or work on please.

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3384/file0007vd6.jpg

skan2
11-05-2006, 03:58 PM
y not color it

krysnum1
11-05-2006, 04:00 PM
i like the style, kate. or kote?

rally like tha e, not so much the k..

afek
11-05-2006, 04:04 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Nov 5 2006, 04:58 PM
y not color it
because it would be a waste

etch a sketch
11-05-2006, 04:27 PM
It&#39;s note. Haha, i could understand how you could&#39;ve read that as kote. Well thanks ill try to work on this style some more.

ARMAwonR
11-05-2006, 04:29 PM
Little Bit Of Progression ...



http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid218/p114a6e1dc99f1a95c18ba4977a87d948/ec2e5231.jpg

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid218/pbd844d4894db3a7cef2e4178a68e64cd/ec2e5245.jpg

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid218/p2fd6fe13676a6c9aaaa64dac54424d77/ec2e522b.jpg

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid218/pb41aa20d60cc964fc96435c553ed73c4/ec2e5226.jpg

ARMAwonR
11-05-2006, 04:30 PM
and a completely over-done piece

i cooked this steak well done :(

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid218/pc6cad3ffdc376a461afab231d83c0916/ec35956a.jpg

ASB_ONE
11-05-2006, 04:32 PM
simples:

peace.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0076_000.jpg

TricksForKids
11-05-2006, 04:38 PM
keep it up homie&#33;, just work on that S a bit and the A, the E and M look nice, props to someone who knows where to start, nice e handstyle too

TricksForKids
11-05-2006, 04:40 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5040/circlebawkvr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

YarHarHar
11-05-2006, 04:49 PM
love you handstyle..mines horrid..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2046.jpg

outline not so thick on this one

Quigbert
11-05-2006, 05:01 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri5.jpg

Criticism please.

OliverTwist
11-05-2006, 05:02 PM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture148.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture146.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture147.jpg

some neww sketches :blink:

ion-i
11-05-2006, 05:12 PM
theres already an olive. on here.
in this same forum.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/38.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/36.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap295.jpg

ASB_ONE
11-05-2006, 05:13 PM
tricksforkids: nice handstyle mang.

yar har har: looks good but cant rele tell wat it says maybe work on ya letter structure?

quigbert: dont like the e or the star things. id ditch them and avoid making peaks in your lines like at the top of the e. also the letters seem bit too spaced apart

olivertwist: looks alright just the structure needs to be more consistant avoid arrows, try and do your best letters and look at how they build off each other and develop from ther

peace
asem one.

Soze One.
11-05-2006, 05:54 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 5 2006, 05:40 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5040/circlebawkvr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
what happened to mastah killah ?
:(
haha

Fosale!
11-05-2006, 06:00 PM
Originally posted by OliverTwist@Nov 5 2006, 06:02 PM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture148.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture146.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture147.jpg

some neww sketches :blink:
your stuff looks like Alies&#39;s stuff.
its prob you.
who cares if there are 2 olives
if this kid doesnt live in or close to cali then whats it matter.

shit&#39;s hot. bump.

Hilo
11-05-2006, 06:07 PM
trust it isnt noalies i know him man it isnt him they have a simular stlye couse theyr in the same crew ad they have there own crew style. so yeah man. olive isnt alie.

Fosale!
11-05-2006, 06:10 PM
oh ok.

Quigbert
11-05-2006, 06:13 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert@Nov 5 2006, 06:01 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri5.jpg

Criticism please.
More criticism?

Fosale!
11-05-2006, 06:31 PM
your missing 3d on the I

jerm_mtl
11-05-2006, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Nov 5 2006, 07:31 PM
your missing 3d on the I
i dont see a 3d missing ... ???

TricksForKids
11-05-2006, 06:39 PM
Originally posted by Soze One.+Nov 5 2006, 06:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Soze One. @ Nov 5 2006, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Nov 5 2006, 05:40 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5040/circlebawkvr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
what happened to mastah killah ?
:(
haha [/b][/quote]
its 22 Murdah Killah, GOD get it right&#33;

Soze One.
11-05-2006, 06:42 PM
part of that red rum krew?
haha

jerm_mtl
11-05-2006, 06:49 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1736/beefcakeps8.jpg


some shit i did 2-3 weeks ago.... crits? says RA :ph34r: :ph34r:

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 07:02 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Nov 5 2006, 07:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Nov 5 2006, 07:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Soze One.@Nov 5 2006, 06:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Nov 5 2006, 05:40 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5040/circlebawkvr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
what happened to mastah killah ?
:(
haha
its 22 Murdah Killah, GOD get it right&#33; [/b][/quote]
<3 sexy handies

jerm_mtl
11-05-2006, 07:04 PM
how do u put color writing in ur sig, ive tried a hundred times put still dont get how

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 07:06 PM
Ohh yeah, Tricks, want to do a handie exchange? I&#39;ll get yours up in a bit.

knews2

jerm_mtl
11-05-2006, 07:09 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Nov 5 2006, 08:04 PM
how do u put color writing in ur sig, ive tried a hundred times put still dont get how
bump on new page FOR AN ANSWER <_< :blink:

capo93
11-05-2006, 07:11 PM
jerm wut part of mtl are u if ure west island hit me up 2 go bombing some time

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 07:13 PM
...This isn&#39;t the thread to be asking that in

And Tricks, here ya go

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0302.jpg

jerm_mtl
11-05-2006, 07:18 PM
i hope u die for saying that u bastard

Necro-
11-05-2006, 07:20 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 5 2006, 05:49 PM
love you handstyle..mines horrid..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2046.jpg

outline not so thick on this one
really like that, only thing that i dont like is how tall the R is compared to the rest of the letters. maybe raise the right side of the J up a lil.

jerm_mtl
11-05-2006, 07:43 PM
i like ur new style mf...real nice

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 07:45 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Nov 5 2006, 08:18 PM
i hope u die for saying that u bastard
...What?

jerm_mtl
11-05-2006, 07:51 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Nov 5 2006, 08:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Nov 5 2006, 08:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-jerm_mtl@Nov 5 2006, 08:18 PM
i hope u die for saying that u bastard
...What? [/b][/quote]
that im in the wrong threak, bid deal, u could have took 1 post to answer so big fucken deal

Fixion
11-05-2006, 08:02 PM
Originally posted by Fixion@Nov 4 2006, 07:32 PM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1815/dscf2083ln5.jpg
Simple, crits?
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9004/dscf2082do4.jpg
Fixed up the letters. Crits?
BUMP. Thanks for whoever gave crits to mine. Anymore?

TricksForKids
11-05-2006, 08:02 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 5 2006, 08:13 PM
...This isn&#39;t the thread to be asking that in

And Tricks, here ya go

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0302.jpg
fuck you bitch ill never exchange&#33;

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/9167/knews2kh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl+Nov 5 2006, 08:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (jerm_mtl &#064; Nov 5 2006, 08:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 5 2006, 08:45 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-jerm_mtl@Nov 5 2006, 08:18 PM
i hope u die for saying that u bastard
...What?
that im in the wrong threak, bid deal, u could have took 1 post to answer so big fucken deal [/b][/quote]
I don&#39;t know how to, so I didn&#39;t answer. If you posted in the right thread, maybe someone who knows could&#39;ve helped you?

:edit: Tricks, I love it... Except for the crookedy thing on the top right of the K haha

TricksForKids
11-05-2006, 08:08 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Nov 5 2006, 09:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Nov 5 2006, 09:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Nov 5 2006, 08:51 PM

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 5 2006, 08:45 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-jerm_mtl@Nov 5 2006, 08:18 PM
i hope u die for saying that u bastard
...What?
that im in the wrong threak, bid deal, u could have took 1 post to answer so big fucken deal
I don&#39;t know how to, so I didn&#39;t answer. If you posted in the right thread, maybe someone who knows could&#39;ve helped you?

:edit: Tricks, I love it... Except for the crookedy thing on the top right of the K haha [/b][/quote]
Yo ill eat your children&#33; that crooked K represents STYLE.....except yeah..it pisses me off a lil too, lol props to the BAWK you dropped too keep it up ninja

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 08:39 PM
Haha thanks... Any critz on this

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0301.jpg

...?

TricksForKids
11-05-2006, 09:14 PM
when paper baes attack? bals attack? baps attack? wtfs the thrid word&#33;

im lking the when" dont like your as, or the R, love the S in AND THE c AND BIG a&#39;S IN ATTACK

COLOUR SHIT&#33;

bouncingsoul
11-05-2006, 09:25 PM
BAGS haha

Meh, coloring&#39;s overrated... The letters in that were just me fucking around with a different type of style so yeah, hence the craziness/shittiness

furious
11-05-2006, 09:29 PM
Originally posted by furious@Nov 5 2006, 02:06 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/block2.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/block3.jpg
i wouldnt have to bump so often if i didnt just get overlooked.

tycoonin
11-05-2006, 09:31 PM
i like them...im guessin ur over obsessed with a bathing apes tho?

tycoonin
11-05-2006, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by tycoonin@Nov 2 2006, 11:52 PM
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/6530/sapermj8.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sapermj8.jpg)



bump for more critz maybi??

Soze One.
11-05-2006, 09:34 PM
bape i like your style
i wanna see some karaks though.
i have an odd feelin youd be pretty good at dem.

furious
11-05-2006, 09:46 PM
ill do a karak just for you one day sozer

tycoonin does it say sape?, if so the s is way too big but if you brought it inline with the a and lined it up nice it would be lookin pretty dope.

sape? im guessing youre obsessed with sathing apes?&#33;&#33;??&#33;

im just playin, and nah i aint obsessed with bapes i just think theyre fresh and like the letters.

edit: lose the bubbles too, not really workin out for you

C-SONE
11-05-2006, 09:52 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110075.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110080.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110082.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110084.jpg[/
CRITSSSSS

Fosale!
11-05-2006, 09:56 PM
do simples
use bars to form letters.

NoneOfThisIsReal
11-05-2006, 10:03 PM
Which simple style do you guys like better, the first or second? (Oh, and how&#39;s the handstyle on the first one? I&#39;m undecided as far as that goes. It&#39;s been bugging me.)

On the second, the S is fucked (like I wrote) and doesn&#39;t match the rest, so I drew a really quick N off to the side to show how it would look. Just use your imagination to put it together. Neither sketch is clean, I know.
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/5536/dscf1749cw6.th.jpg (http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/5536/dscf1749cw6.jpg)
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7883/dscf1753fe1.th.jpg (http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/7883/dscf1753fe1.jpg)

The UssUaL SusPecT
11-05-2006, 10:09 PM
i like ur first style better...it actually looks madd clean, but that may be because of the lighting. Just straighten out the lines on the top of the T and ur set.

Nice job on the even sizing of the letters.

NoneOfThisIsReal
11-05-2006, 10:12 PM
Originally posted by The UssUaL SusPecT@Nov 5 2006, 11:09 PM
i like ur first style better...it actually looks madd clean, but that may be because of the lighting. Just straighten out the lines on the top of the T and ur set.

Nice job on the even sizing of the letters.
Thanks for the reply.

And by the top of the T do you mean where the bar connects to the column? I just realized that it&#39;s off where they connect.

etch a sketch
11-05-2006, 10:12 PM
Originally posted by etch*a*sketch@Nov 5 2006, 04:56 PM
He&#39;s saying you shouldn&#39;t colour it. I think. Well, heres my contribution for the day.
Tell me anything i should fix or work on please.

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3384/file0007vd6.jpg
Well anymore help? I need really need it. I just got back to graffing 2 weeks ago and i used to write Pezz. got busted taggin a grocery store. I got what was comin to me tho. Most open spot ever...

Fosale!
11-05-2006, 10:18 PM
@none of this is real
second style is better
just move the I closer to the T so the space between each letter is even
curve the T and I a lil more to match the N
and the 3D is perfect.
way to start of nice.

The UssUaL SusPecT
11-05-2006, 10:18 PM
Originally posted by NoneOfThisIsReal+Nov 5 2006, 11:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NoneOfThisIsReal &#064; Nov 5 2006, 11:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-The UssUaL SusPecT@Nov 5 2006, 11:09 PM
i like ur first style better...it actually looks madd clean, but that may be because of the lighting. Just straighten out the lines on the top of the T and ur set.

Nice job on the even sizing of the letters.
Thanks for the reply.

And by the top of the T do you mean where the bar connects to the column? I just realized that it&#39;s off where they connect. [/b][/quote]
yea.

if u wanna build on ur second style, disconnect the dot on the I from the T, too.

Real good job on the first one, hehe :D

The UssUaL SusPecT
11-05-2006, 10:24 PM
Originally posted by etch a sketch+Nov 5 2006, 11:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (etch a sketch &#064; Nov 5 2006, 11:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-etch a sketch@Nov 5 2006, 04:56 PM
He&#39;s saying you shouldn&#39;t colour it. I think. Well, heres my contribution for the day.
Tell me anything i should fix or work on please.

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3384/file0007vd6.jpg
Well anymore help? I need really need it. I just got back to graffing 2 weeks ago and i used to write Pezz. got busted taggin a grocery store. I got what was comin to me tho. Most open spot ever... [/b][/quote]
ehh the sizing (width) of the letters is off, and im not feeling the extension on the e...

Nice concept for ur T =]

furious
11-05-2006, 10:31 PM
note, feelin the n and o

try to do the same sort of thing with the t or e that you did with the n and try going with a basic style capital e, i think that would look hot

NoneOfThisIsReal
11-05-2006, 10:38 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Nov 5 2006, 11:18 PM
@none of this is real
second style is better
just move the I closer to the T so the space between each letter is even
curve the T and I a lil more to match the N
and the 3D is perfect.
way to start of nice.
Thanks for the tips.

I&#39;m going to work on both styles and see how they turn out after a while.

tycoonin
11-05-2006, 11:34 PM
Originally posted by furious@Nov 5 2006, 10:46 PM
ill do a karak just for you one day sozer

tycoonin does it say sape?, if so the s is way too big but if you brought it inline with the a and lined it up nice it would be lookin pretty dope.

sape? im guessing youre obsessed with sathing apes?&#33;&#33;??&#33;

im just playin, and nah i aint obsessed with bapes i just think theyre fresh and like the letters.

edit: lose the bubbles too, not really workin out for you
lol ya i do got a pair of bapes ;) but the brand dont got nothin ta do with my name and thanks for the tips

Soze One.
11-05-2006, 11:52 PM
Originally posted by tycoonin+Nov 6 2006, 12:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tycoonin @ Nov 6 2006, 12:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-furious@Nov 5 2006, 10:46 PM
ill do a karak just for you one day sozer

tycoonin does it say sape?, if so the s is way too big but if you brought it inline with the a and lined it up nice it would be lookin pretty dope.

sape? im guessing youre obsessed with sathing apes?&#33;&#33;??&#33;

im just playin, and nah i aint obsessed with bapes i just think theyre fresh and like the letters.

edit: lose the bubbles too, not really workin out for you
lol ya i do got a pair of bapes ;) but the brand dont got nothin ta do with my name and thanks for the tips [/b][/quote]
i wanna get da hulks.

DUF
11-05-2006, 11:58 PM
my latest NOGA stuff.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5113.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5114.jpg
crits please?

inkbits
11-06-2006, 12:10 AM
Quick biro structure.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7387572.jpg

Soze One.
11-06-2006, 12:12 AM
nice.

Vagrant
11-06-2006, 12:17 AM
Clean as hell.

Those random drips are definately out of place though, unless you add some more to balance it out.

Torrent
11-06-2006, 12:30 AM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4286/dscn7991smalljz5.jpg

Any critique on my bombs. Snare and Love.

NiL
11-06-2006, 12:42 AM
Originally posted by NiL@Nov 5 2006, 04:07 AM
Ignore the bad shadowing and gay tag :)

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseThrow.jpg
Same with this one, I just wanted to try a new fill too.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseThrow001.jpg

Sorry about the sideways but it wont change :(

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseRainTags-1.jpg

What tag is good?
Crits please on throws and tags don&#39;t care good or bad.
Crits please

NOMX
11-06-2006, 12:42 AM
duf loose the little things on the sides and keep working on ur letters until they are readable and not simple and plain

edit: hey rise, just curious but about how much time did u put in thinking about what name u were gonna use?

GRAM
11-06-2006, 12:42 AM
Help?
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9701/45235345002ef2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

GRAM
11-06-2006, 12:43 AM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9701/45235345002ef2.jpg

Truth.
11-06-2006, 12:43 AM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9701/45235345002ef2.jpg

oop trying to fix the code for ya, but i see u alredy handled that

NiL
11-06-2006, 12:46 AM
Crits on my posts?

Trying getting better letter structure. GRAM
Just do simple bubbles for now or do basic ones.

Torrent
11-06-2006, 12:48 AM
Originally posted by Torrent@Nov 6 2006, 01:30 AM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4286/dscn7991smalljz5.jpg

Any critique on my bombs. Snare and Love.
Critique?

NiL
11-06-2006, 12:59 AM
Personaly. better letters.
Crits on mine? Previous page.

GRAM
11-06-2006, 01:04 AM
Originally posted by NiL@Nov 6 2006, 01:46 AM
Crits on my posts?

Trying getting better letter structure. GRAM
Just do simple bubbles for now or do basic ones.
That&#39;s what I&#39;ve been trying to do, but I mean, I haven&#39;t been progressing at all.

weldo
11-06-2006, 01:05 AM
torrent those throwies are fukin buring man i love that style all good exept for i think its an e on the end of one which i dont like on the one with 3d.
help me please aye emos are beautiful people
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1932/cci00007aa6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Torrent
11-06-2006, 01:17 AM
Damn. A lot of style. I&#39;m not feeling the red on the 3D but it looks pretty good.

NiL
11-06-2006, 01:19 AM
Emos are ugly people. Like a cut up asshole.

As for Gram get a piece of paper and like use the bottom of the page and just do round bubble letters no likes straight lines and add in arrows or things that you or whoever think it may look cool. We all done that when we started out I did it all straight line doing jagged edges and shit, but yeah just do simple little bubble letters. Can look at mine get an idea and what not look at other peoples work aswell. Keep practising.

GRAM
11-06-2006, 01:23 AM
Originally posted by NiL@Nov 6 2006, 02:19 AM
Emos are ugly people. Like a cut up asshole.

As for Gram get a piece of paper and like use the bottom of the page and just do round bubble letters no likes straight lines and add in arrows or things that you or whoever think it may look cool. We all done that when we started out I did it all straight line doing jagged edges and shit, but yeah just do simple little bubble letters. Can look at mine get an idea and what not look at other peoples work aswell. Keep practising.
Alright thanks man, Really appreciate it.

weldo
11-06-2006, 01:29 AM
yea emos eat shit aha

ras
11-06-2006, 01:40 AM
i fucking hate emo&#39;s

Soze One.
11-06-2006, 02:05 AM
edit
....

inkbits
11-06-2006, 02:05 AM
I dunno shit about emo&#39;s so aint touchin that, but I like the style on that weldo.



http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7387572.jpg

Here&#39;s a revised of last post, less mild.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7390817.jpg

d_g
11-06-2006, 02:12 AM
Those are fucking nice, I like the first one better though.

NiL
11-06-2006, 02:17 AM
Blood oth those are nice. First one was done good.

Quadratic
11-06-2006, 02:19 AM
i feelin those pesk bits

Quadratic
11-06-2006, 02:21 AM
some new sketches... forgive the sloppy



http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/8masoe.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/9masoe.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/10masoe.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/11masoe.jpg

Truth.
11-06-2006, 03:17 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/nov6slap1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/NOV6SLAPS2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/NOV6SLAPS3.jpg

Why do people always rip down my stickers? :(

NiL
11-06-2006, 03:41 AM
lol nice stickers. Probly because they are jealous I put one up in the toilet at school and I&#39;m amazed it is still there. Normaly everyday the toilets get buffed if you do anything in there but this sticker been up there for awhile now and nothing.

Code
11-06-2006, 03:41 AM
Originally posted by Truth.@Nov 6 2006, 04:17 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/nov6slap1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/NOV6SLAPS2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/NOV6SLAPS3.jpg

Why do people always rip down my stickers? :(
lol really nice stickers those are just people that hate or little kids that just want to take your sticker home for insperation :)

NiL
11-06-2006, 03:42 AM
Originally posted by NiL+Nov 6 2006, 01:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Nov 6 2006, 01:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NiL@Nov 5 2006, 04:07 AM
Ignore the bad shadowing and gay tag :)

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseThrow.jpg
Same with this one, I just wanted to try a new fill too.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseThrow001.jpg

Sorry about the sideways but it wont change :(

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/RiseRainTags-1.jpg

What tag is good?
Crits please on throws and tags don&#39;t care good or bad.
Crits please [/b][/quote]
Crits please..

Truth.
11-06-2006, 04:18 AM
RISE - maybe make the letters of the thro more thinner and taller and less fat, make the middle of the E overlap the bottom bit of it so its not so long and sticking out.

heres my bad MS paint example: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/RISE.jpg

4 and 9 are defo the best jhandies, with number 4 move the letters closer, maybe get the I as a capital and get it doing an underline or sumthin round the whole tag, idk, anythings cool, or u cud put an extension of the E

with nuber 9 lose arrow and quotation things, keep an undeline i think, but no arrow, move the R in closer and try to give it more style

ASB_ONE
11-06-2006, 06:06 AM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 5 2006, 05:32 PM
simples:

peace.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0076_000.jpg
bumpidy bump.

anilizer
11-06-2006, 07:36 AM
Rise that E (on the orange and yellow one) is pretty ugly, try make the bottom of it stick out alittle more like you have on the top.

anilizer
11-06-2006, 07:37 AM
ASB - your shits looking pretty good, nice simples, however, on the bottom one the M looks like a H.

ras
11-06-2006, 09:13 AM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE+Nov 6 2006, 07:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASB_ONE @ Nov 6 2006, 07:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Nov 5 2006, 05:32 PM
simples:

peace.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0076_000.jpg
bumpidy bump. [/b][/quote]
nice shit aseb

OliverTwist
11-06-2006, 10:05 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Nov 5 2006, 07:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Nov 5 2006, 07:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-OliverTwist@Nov 5 2006, 06:02 PM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture148.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture146.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/Picture147.jpg

some neww sketches :blink:
your stuff looks like Alies&#39;s stuff.
its prob you.
who cares if there are 2 olives
if this kid doesnt live in or close to cali then whats it matter.

shit&#39;s hot. bump. [/b][/quote]
i live in toronto so its all good in da hood
:P

OliverTwist
11-06-2006, 10:07 AM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/olivesketch1.jpg

anotha new sketch
:blink:

near
11-06-2006, 10:24 AM
ya i cant talk in the toronto thread without posting flicks so ill just say it here...i just moved to a new section of toronto (finch and weston) and im looking for heads to go bombing with anyone live around here??

ras
11-06-2006, 10:52 AM
Originally posted by OliverTwist@Nov 6 2006, 11:07 AM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/olivesketch1.jpg

anotha new sketch
:blink:
that look hell of a lot like nug&#39;s stuff back in the pro black book thread &#33; <_<

some guy from NCI...
11-06-2006, 11:23 AM
haha truth... the reason they rip down your stickers is cos you stick em over their tags :P

But seriously they&#39;re looking real good,

ras
11-06-2006, 11:51 AM
oooops sorry for that quote...my bad ^


Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Nov 6 2006, 12:23 PM
haha truth... the reason they rip down your stickers is cos you stick em over their tags :P

But seriously they&#39;re looking real good,
http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/268/dub7kc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

summthing new...please please please comment ;)

OliverTwist
11-06-2006, 12:26 PM
Originally posted by ras+Nov 6 2006, 11:52 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Nov 6 2006, 11:52 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-OliverTwist@Nov 6 2006, 11:07 AM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g30/*****fromthegetto/olivesketch1.jpg

anotha new sketch
:blink:
that look hell of a lot like nug&#39;s stuff back in the pro black book thread &#33; <_< [/b][/quote]
i am hip-hop bomber

ras
11-06-2006, 12:35 PM
ooooo ... sorry man :unsure:

OliverTwist
11-06-2006, 12:37 PM
it all good man

furious
11-06-2006, 12:55 PM
Originally posted by DUF@Nov 6 2006, 12:58 AM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5113.jpg
i dont like your coloring job hah

besides that, feeling the o and g, dont get rid of the flair things, maybe get rid of em in the a, and fix up the n

besides that, i like it alot better than your duf stuff.

ras
11-06-2006, 12:56 PM
Originally posted by ras+Nov 6 2006, 12:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Nov 6 2006, 12:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> oooops sorry for that quote...my bad ^

<!--QuoteBegin-some guy from NCI...@Nov 6 2006, 12:23 PM
haha truth... the reason they rip down your stickers is cos you stick em over their tags :P

But seriously they&#39;re looking real good,
http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/268/dub7kc1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

summthing new...please please please comment ;) [/b][/quote]
COMMENTS PLEASE &#33; ;)

ASB_ONE
11-06-2006, 12:59 PM
ras
work on your letter structure bro. aint feelin any of them letters im afraid.
the giraffe is dope tho&#33;&#33;&#33;

furious
11-06-2006, 01:10 PM
yeah asb knows what hes sayin

giraffe looks sick though

Quadratic
11-06-2006, 01:45 PM
Originally posted by Quadratic@Nov 6 2006, 03:21 AM
some new sketches... forgive the sloppy



http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/8masoe.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/9masoe.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/10masoe.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/11masoe.jpg
bump for crits... why am i always the last post on the page

Code
11-06-2006, 02:42 PM
Quardratic= Those pieces are dope love the style, but on the first piece on the second page the e is a little bit wierd, also not really feelin some of the E so work on that letter and you should be good to go.

Ras= I love the character and the fill in, but work on your letters, do some straight letters and mess around with them, and if you do good on that you will be gold.

In this sketch i am still rocking simple letters, and just tried to make a simple throw Critz please

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/6972/scan0006am2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some guy from NCI...
11-06-2006, 03:11 PM
The shadows fucked. Try to keep the letter width the same throughout all the letters. Lose the face on the O.

dibz
11-06-2006, 03:25 PM
new style
definatly seeing an improvement in my writing so thats all i care about.
but crits would be aaiiight.
not really feeling the t though :(
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_3526.jpg

Code
11-06-2006, 03:52 PM
Originally posted by dibz@Nov 6 2006, 04:25 PM
new style
definatly seeing an improvement in my writing so thats all i care about.
but crits would be aaiiight.
not really feeling the t though :(
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_3526.jpg
Rant that piece is dope, but like you said the T is not really following the flow, and the N looks kind of like an H at first sight. But like i said dope piece

dibz
11-06-2006, 03:56 PM
word thanks
yea i couldnt think of anything for the t for dayz so i jus thre that one. but i think im gunna keep workin on that style.
but gracias for the crits

C-SONE
11-06-2006, 04:12 PM
Originally posted by C&#045;SONE@Nov 5 2006, 10:52 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110075.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110080.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110082.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/P1110084.jpg[/
CRITSSSSS
BUMP FOR CRITSSSSS

ASB_ONE
11-06-2006, 04:27 PM
looks ayt man just dont like the style. the structures ok but difficult to make out. u got potential tho i rekn

furious
11-06-2006, 04:40 PM
sone - s is too big, lines arent as clean as they should be.

stop bumpin thats a huge post, bump ONE sketch if you gotta not the same sketch 3 times

its not like no ones givin you crits

searoner
11-06-2006, 05:08 PM
couple of recent sketches
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7397/img0035zy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8796/img0036by1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/221/img0037qs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alera
11-06-2006, 05:17 PM
dont know y but im lovin the green one keep it up&#33;

just somthin small only 3 letters becouse mu parkers are out of color
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2806/1106061813ld6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz? did it befor holloween so its kind of orange

Soze One.
11-06-2006, 05:23 PM
karaks.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1377.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1381.jpg
a throwie.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1382.jpg
another karak
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1383.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1384.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1386.jpg
some bs
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1385.jpg

alive
11-06-2006, 05:43 PM
fuckin around
changed the letters in my name to the reverse order, from cear, to caer.
throw and pen freestyles. crits plz.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02843.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02844.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02845.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02846.jpg

lets see. on the last one i did the A first, C last, which is why the C is fucked. R is too small cuz i didnt realize until too late. ummmm. dont you fucking dare bitch about my one goddamn arrow. just practicing, tryina getta feel. and i never abuse them like most of the kids.

all done during class. . . . so. . . . yeah.
everybody else on the page- its fire.

peace.

krysnum1
11-06-2006, 05:46 PM
truth, wholy shit you got better fast, you were like major toy in the paint thread not too long ago. good job, how much do you draw? PM me r somthin im curious.

furious
11-06-2006, 05:51 PM
sear your pieces are fire but i dont really like your characters, sorta generic i guess

aces
11-06-2006, 05:52 PM
Alive try not to get those lines in the middle of the letters. It kinda defeats the purpose of it being a pen freestyle.

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/7039/1171727723777456360yk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Newest ish. I know the handy sucks balls but crits?

ASB_ONE
11-06-2006, 06:33 PM
soze
u been checkin out the new to graff thread by any chance?
letters on the 6th pic look jus like them ones cezr one posted in that thread.......
i kno u got mad style tho

Soze One.
11-06-2006, 06:44 PM
yeah
i was tryin to use it.
thanks man.

unknown...
11-06-2006, 07:32 PM
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/6104/p1010056hc0.jpg
goin back to old stuff

jerm_mtl
11-06-2006, 07:48 PM
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/1276/meat8.png



new throw....crit?i kinda fucked up the R

ARMAwonR
11-06-2006, 08:20 PM
http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid218/pb48325a0013dbb09ded1e94d2d0a302b/ec290f44.jpg

Crits ... Yes?

krysnum1
11-06-2006, 08:32 PM
tight, what kinda markers? looks like a fucking metalic gell pen, if so musta took hella long to fill in.

ARMAwonR
11-06-2006, 08:37 PM
jeah ... i have this fine tip metallic paint marker ... my medium tip died on me and i was already started so i just finished with the thin ...

and jeah ... it took quite a minute to fill
but im happy with the result

krysnum1
11-06-2006, 08:46 PM
ha ha, did you run out after or during the R?

The UssUaL SusPecT
11-06-2006, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by searoner@Nov 6 2006, 06:08 PM
couple of recent sketches
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7397/img0035zy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8796/img0036by1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/221/img0037qs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
im luvin ur style, bro. Ur color scheme/word structure is sick, great lookin characters, verrry nice 3D work...it goes on.

Refreshing to see no arrows used too. Keep up the good work&#33;

nickstix
11-06-2006, 09:49 PM
i just started graffiti about a week ago and my friend showed me styles to try out, i just want to see if im headed in the right direction and if u guys have any tips for the styles my friend showed me.(i would alsom like it if u could give me tips on how to branch off to my own style)

http://www.freewebs.com/defense/mozar%202.png
http://www.freewebs.com/defense/nick%204.png

Z FUSE
11-06-2006, 09:53 PM
nickstix-lose arrowns make simple block letters with no add ons at all.

any crits on my stuff by the more experienced people in the toy forum..or anyone really..
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/1459/grrdwhtblups2.jpg
http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/9197/csidlf0.jpg
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/3563/sonekubjo6.jpg

DUF
11-06-2006, 10:03 PM
Originally posted by furious+Nov 6 2006, 01:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (furious @ Nov 6 2006, 01:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DUF@Nov 6 2006, 12:58 AM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/IMG_5113.jpg
i dont like your coloring job hah

besides that, feeling the o and g, dont get rid of the flair things, maybe get rid of em in the a, and fix up the n

besides that, i like it alot better than your duf stuff. [/b][/quote]
thanks for the crits i def work on it and post up after i try it out. i know the n looks iffy on that one i think it came out better on the purple one.

Soze One.
11-06-2006, 10:14 PM
Originally posted by Soze One.@Nov 6 2006, 06:23 PM
karaks.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1377.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1381.jpg
a throwie.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1382.jpg
another karak
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1383.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1384.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1386.jpg
some bs
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1385.jpg
:lol:

Soze One.
11-06-2006, 10:44 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1388.jpg

enigmatic
11-06-2006, 10:45 PM
Good work soze. Love that charac, you know where you can improve.

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/7342/1001299yx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

etch a sketch
11-06-2006, 10:47 PM
I made it just now. Umm it sucks i know.. It&#39;s for my girlfriend.. It says Angela is sexy...

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/2799/file0008xy6.jpg

enigmatic
11-06-2006, 10:54 PM
Originally posted by enigmatic@Nov 6 2006, 11:45 PM
Good work soze. Love that charac, you know where you can improve.

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/7342/1001299yx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
Bump... crit the people above you dude. And yeah its okay. Needs basic letterform work.

Z FUSE
11-06-2006, 10:57 PM
wow guys you kno wat&#39;s great? how people just keep posting and posting their shit w/o decently or sometimes w/o at all critiquing the people above them..it&#39;s just common courtesy ya kno? soo...
SEAR- that shit is DOPE&#33; hella cool style. keep goin w/ it.

SOZE- keep working on your letters and developing them w/ the blcok things. the karaks are pretty cool. the throw the E is weird..try bubles more or try diff style..
ENIGMATIC- the "one" inthe top rite is bad ho ever the fade on the big letters in prety nice the blue to green. teh 1st letters i don&#39;t think has same style as the second ones.
ETCH A SKETCH- the E is kinda cool same w/ X the Y loks weird and the S 3d looks a bit off.

Truth.
11-06-2006, 11:58 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Nov 6 2006, 12:23 PM
haha truth... the reason they rip down your stickers is cos you stick em over their tags :P

But seriously they&#39;re looking real good,
well i only stuck one over a guys tag, and another was a tiny bit on a guys thro up. see the black lines underneath the purple tag, that was my tag and the guy specifically wrote over me when the had the whole metal grate to write on. so i put a slap over his cause i didnt have any paint or anything. and yeah, that thro is really toy so i wudnt care if i went over it, which i barely did.

Truth.
11-06-2006, 11:59 PM
Originally posted by enigmatic+Nov 6 2006, 11:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enigmatic &#064; Nov 6 2006, 11:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-enigmatic@Nov 6 2006, 11:45 PM
Good work soze. Love that charac, you know where you can improve.

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/7342/1001299yx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
Bump... crit the people above you dude. And yeah its okay. Needs basic letterform work. [/b][/quote]
no need to bump it on the same page, let alone after only one post... i agree with the other guy tho, it dusnt fit in to well, as its curvy and what not, maybe make it a basic more block e like the other letters, make it like this: E

novella
11-07-2006, 12:17 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q50/Novella1/letterAsmall.jpg
sketch battle entry

lost_for_evex
11-07-2006, 12:29 AM
PESSSSSSSSSSSKKKKK WHERE YOU AT HOMIEEE LETS SHOW THE CHILDREN WUT IT IS HAHA


JUST FOR CEZR....CUZ I HAVENT BEEN AROUND IN A MIN

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture084-1.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture056.jpg


and ill have fresh shit 2marow hopefully

NOMX
11-07-2006, 12:57 AM
enigmatic, theres a problem with ur piece... theres one thing thats killin it. its that writing on the side that says east side pride. change it 2 west and u will be good 2 go

ARMAwonR
11-07-2006, 01:21 AM
Originally posted by ARMAwonR@Nov 6 2006, 09:20 PM
http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid218/pb48325a0013dbb09ded1e94d2d0a302b/ec290f44.jpg

Crits ... Yes?
Bumpski For More Crits

I Only Got One ... Come On People&#33;

:ph34r: :ph34r:

inkbits
11-07-2006, 02:36 AM
Bumpski For More Crits

I Only Got One ... Come On People&#33;

Looks good arma, maybe focus more on the R and making that a prominant letter would look good (I&#39;d try backlapping it so your first A sits behind and see how that sits for ya). Perspective on extensions is good but might looks nice fatter to suit the letter structure more.


PESSSSSSSSSSSKKKKK WHERE YOU AT HOMIEEE

I been sourcing new ink :ph34r:.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438741.jpg

I be dropping more simple shit for awhile until I get time to finish some full outs. Here&#39;s some canvas work I gota finish and keyline.

fenese.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438766.jpg

rms&#39;er.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438777.jpg

sky 5
11-07-2006, 04:00 AM
damn thats goona look real nice once you drop the black on there, im envious . . . (puts head down, kicks a can and goes back to the drawing board)

SeKz
11-07-2006, 04:18 AM
Originally posted by inkbits@Nov 7 2006, 03:36 AM

Bumpski For More Crits

I Only Got One ... Come On People&#33;

Looks good arma, maybe focus more on the R and making that a prominant letter would look good (I&#39;d try backlapping it so your first A sits behind and see how that sits for ya). Perspective on extensions is good but might looks nice fatter to suit the letter structure more.


PESSSSSSSSSSSKKKKK WHERE YOU AT HOMIEEE

I been sourcing new ink :ph34r:.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438741.jpg

I be dropping more simple shit for awhile until I get time to finish some full outs. Here&#39;s some canvas work I gota finish and keyline.

fenese.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438766.jpg

rms&#39;er.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438777.jpg
Haha, thats my weapon of choice too, good old posca, they have some good bombing markers too :)

heres my latest

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1082/p024nl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any comments?

sky 5
11-07-2006, 04:38 AM
looks real nice, i like your style . . maybe try shootin the extensions at the ends of your piece out farther and fatting the middle part of the K . . and running a white gel pen as an inner highlight . .

alive
11-07-2006, 05:38 AM
Originally posted by alive@Nov 6 2006, 06:43 PM
fuckin around
changed the letters in my name to the reverse order, from cear, to caer.
throw and pen freestyles. crits plz.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02843.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02844.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02845.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02846.jpg

lets see. on the last one i did the A first, C last, which is why the C is fucked. R is too small cuz i didnt realize until too late. ummmm. dont you fucking dare bitch about my one goddamn arrow. just practicing, tryina getta feel. and i never abuse them like most of the kids.

all done during class. . . . so. . . . yeah.
everybody else on the page- its fire.

peace.
past few pages have been nice
bump for crits
thanks, peace.

whoarethereal evil
11-07-2006, 08:30 AM
alive i dnt like tht throw 2 much bt the pen free styles are hot

1 of my fist attempts at ne kind of piece <_<

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/IMG_0309.jpg

near
11-07-2006, 10:50 AM
characters with gas masks are playyeeeeeeeeed out

posted this already but it got bumped out by the next post...i realise the n has a point where the others dont other than that crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010546.jpg

ras
11-07-2006, 11:53 AM
Damn everything on the page is killin &#33; keep it up &#33;

krazzie_ammo
11-07-2006, 12:01 PM
stuff from todayyy...
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2096/52yn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
real quick....for the bottom one i did it all in red that used a correction pen for the white :rolleyes:
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/6286/51pf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i dunno what was going on here :blink:
crits?

trashhh
11-07-2006, 02:17 PM
edit: i made a fuck up .... <_<

FIN one
11-07-2006, 02:17 PM
code-make your letters all the same thickness,lose tha little eyes in the O, try to make them in line with eachother,and your shadows need some work.but its good, keep sticken to thesimples

trashhh
11-07-2006, 02:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40624.jpg

craze some of the tags are alryt but not feelin those cra things

The Legacy
11-07-2006, 02:20 PM
help me out on this one crits .... color scheme and backround are still needed ... what do you think i should do?
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2065/thelegacysicklc6.jpg

trashhh
11-07-2006, 02:21 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Nov 7 2006, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40624.jpg



Bump

Legacy im likin that a lot, but maybe ur G looks a little too much like a C. I think greens would work well on it

ras
11-07-2006, 02:22 PM
Legacy and trash...shits hot &#33;

sumthing new

http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/2393/dub8fw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


CRITS AND COMMENTS PLEASE &#33; ;)

-GEKS-
11-07-2006, 02:25 PM
i lovin it. except that half those artists suck and dont do real hiphop :)

The Legacy
11-07-2006, 02:34 PM
thats sickkk man ... phat farm bird .... hahh ... anyone else for color schemes http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2065/thelegacysicklc6.jpg

The Legacy
11-07-2006, 02:35 PM
i cant get over how sick that peice is ras... lovin it

Mx5
11-07-2006, 02:40 PM
Maybe everyones seeing something im not...cause that isnt all that great lol...its cool though

aces
11-07-2006, 02:42 PM
Originally posted by aces@Nov 6 2006, 07:52 PM
Alive try not to get those lines in the middle of the letters. It kinda defeats the purpose of it being a pen freestyle.

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/7039/1171727723777456360yk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Newest ish. I know the handy sucks balls but crits?
Bump for teh crits???

Code
11-07-2006, 02:52 PM
Aces= lovin it man, but the E is not lookin as good as the other letters in my oppinion, work on it and you will be gold :)

Legacy= Man, i dont even know if i am worthy of given a oppinion on the color scheme, but what i would do is do a 2 color fill in fading into each other i think that would look dope :)

K, this is not really new, I have decided to change my name back because my friends found out about me writing Acon at first, but they get so high they forgot all about so fuck it lol

So here you go, I know i cut the C in half my bad :( and the face on the 0 aint that good as i wanted it so next piece i will drop it i promise :)

http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/8532/scan0003lf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz please

furious
11-07-2006, 03:00 PM
ras work on your b and u a little and listen to some better hip hop hah besides that you def have coloring and characters waayyyy down. props.

legacy not really feelin your y. besides that its lookin good and your add ons look tight.

aces i think the 3d would look alot better with a vanishing point that goes back instead of down, if you know what i mean, and maybe a better fill, other than that you have a style of your own down and thats respectable.

acon don&#39;t lean your letters, line em up nice. your drop shadow is off in alot of places too and your handstyle needs alot of work. besides that good job starting simple.

ill post somethin in a little

ras
11-07-2006, 03:02 PM
code = the fill is good ... but id say you need to smarten up the 3d and curve the bottom on the c abit more...

legacy = a fill in id think would look kool is a fill in with bubbles inside it because the xtensions you got look kinda like splashes and blobs so that would add to the effect &#33; ;)

thrash = id change the T up abit becuse to me it looks alot like a h but every thing else is kooool

krazzie_ammo
11-07-2006, 03:06 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 7 2006, 01:01 PM
stuff from todayyy...
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2096/52yn1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
real quick....for the bottom one i did it all in red that used a correction pen for the white :rolleyes:
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/6286/51pf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i dunno what was going on here :blink:
crits?
critazzzah?

aces
11-07-2006, 03:07 PM
Originally posted by furious@Nov 7 2006, 05:00 PM
ras work on your b and u a little

and listen to some better hip hop hah

besides that you def have coloring and characters waayyyy down. props.

legacy not really feelin your y. besides that its lookin good and your add ons look tight.

aces i think the 3d would look alot better with a vanishing point that goes back instead of down, if you know what i mean, and maybe a better fill, other than that you have a style of your own down and thats respectable.

acon don&#39;t lean your letters, line em up nice. your drop shadow is off in alot of places too and your handstyle needs alot of work. besides that good job starting simple.
Yea I&#39;ve gone with the vanishing point before and ti does look pretty good but it is a lot more work that I really don&#39;t feel like doing. I do understand about the coloring and that is something that I am really trying to work on but not in my pieces yet cause I&#39;m not good at it. Code I&#39;m just wondering but what don&#39;t you like about my E.

I&#39;m liking the tags craze but not so much the first pic.

Code
11-07-2006, 03:09 PM
Craze= I actully like alot of those handstyles, but as you can see above your piece my handstyle sucks, but you inspire me :) As for the Piece not really feelin it, I really dont like your C but the A aint that bad.

Also a bit of advice if you want critz, always crit the guy above you when bumping or posting an image. Not being mean it just works for me :)

Code
11-07-2006, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by aces+Nov 7 2006, 04:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Nov 7 2006, 04:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-furious@Nov 7 2006, 05:00 PM
ras work on your b and u a little

and listen to some better hip hop hah

besides that you def have coloring and characters waayyyy down. props.

legacy not really feelin your y. besides that its lookin good and your add ons look tight.

aces i think the 3d would look alot better with a vanishing point that goes back instead of down, if you know what i mean, and maybe a better fill, other than that you have a style of your own down and thats respectable.

acon don&#39;t lean your letters, line em up nice. your drop shadow is off in alot of places too and your handstyle needs alot of work. besides that good job starting simple.
Yea I&#39;ve gone with the vanishing point before and ti does look pretty good but it is a lot more work that I really don&#39;t feel like doing. I do understand about the coloring and that is something that I am really trying to work on but not in my pieces yet cause I&#39;m not good at it. Code I&#39;m just wondering but what don&#39;t you like about my E.

I&#39;m liking the tags craze but not so much the first pic. [/b][/quote]
Well to answer your question in my oppinion :) I do not like the extension off the top of the E and its leaning bit to foward for my liking :)

Lol but remember i am a big toy so dont get mad if i say something you dont agree with :) Your much better than me remember that lol

aces
11-07-2006, 03:18 PM
Haha naw man it&#39;s fine. I like how it looks but you are certainly entitled to your oppinion and even if you are toy, keep in mind I am still toy too, sometimes toys know what they are talking about even if they can&#39;t do it themselves.

lost_for_evex
11-07-2006, 03:22 PM
Originally posted by inkbits@Nov 7 2006, 03:36 AM

Bumpski For More Crits

I Only Got One ... Come On People&#33;

Looks good arma, maybe focus more on the R and making that a prominant letter would look good (I&#39;d try backlapping it so your first A sits behind and see how that sits for ya). Perspective on extensions is good but might looks nice fatter to suit the letter structure more.


PESSSSSSSSSSSKKKKK WHERE YOU AT HOMIEEE

I been sourcing new ink :ph34r:.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438741.jpg

I be dropping more simple shit for awhile until I get time to finish some full outs. Here&#39;s some canvas work I gota finish and keyline.

fenese.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438766.jpg

rms&#39;er.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438777.jpg
not u....my pesk...pesk EBK lol


and half the "toys" in here arnt even toys wtf lol

ras
11-07-2006, 03:22 PM
Originally posted by aces@Nov 7 2006, 04:18 PM
Haha naw man it&#39;s fine. I like how it looks but you are certainly entitled to your oppinion and even if you are toy, keep in mind I am still toy too, sometimes toys know what they are talking about even if they can&#39;t do it themselves.
Exactly ... ;)

ras
11-07-2006, 03:23 PM
Originally posted by lost_for_evex+Nov 7 2006, 04:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (lost_for_evex @ Nov 7 2006, 04:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-inkbits@Nov 7 2006, 03:36 AM

Bumpski For More Crits

I Only Got One ... Come On People&#33;

Looks good arma, maybe focus more on the R and making that a prominant letter would look good (I&#39;d try backlapping it so your first A sits behind and see how that sits for ya). Perspective on extensions is good but might looks nice fatter to suit the letter structure more.


PESSSSSSSSSSSKKKKK WHERE YOU AT HOMIEEE

I been sourcing new ink :ph34r:.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438741.jpg

I be dropping more simple shit for awhile until I get time to finish some full outs. Here&#39;s some canvas work I gota finish and keyline.

fenese.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438766.jpg

rms&#39;er.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p7438777.jpg
not u....my pesk...pesk EBK lol


and half the "toys" in here arnt even toys wtf lol [/b][/quote]
Id say ima toy .... and that stuff there is fucking AMAZING ... thatll look ace with the outline&#39;s &#33; :lol: ;)

aces
11-07-2006, 03:28 PM
Yea outline that shit dude and do it now&#33;

alera
11-07-2006, 03:30 PM
Originally posted by alera@Nov 6 2006, 06:17 PM
dont know y but im lovin the green one keep it up&#33;

just somthin small only 3 letters becouse mu parkers are out of color
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2806/1106061813ld6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz? did it befor holloween so its kind of orange
wondering if I can get some critz?

that canvas is awsome wish my fills were half as good <_<

nemzone
11-07-2006, 03:46 PM
hmm not feelin ur A, and the top right extension on ur E aint to hot, but other thn that its good

first sketch in a while

http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/3059/img136js0.jpg

not gr8, but yeh

Mx5
11-07-2006, 03:48 PM
Some of my shit from over the years....just a small ammount compared to all the random loose papers.




http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random047.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random046.jpg

Mx5
11-07-2006, 03:49 PM
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random052.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random041.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random042.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random035.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random044.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random045.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random051.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random049.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/3zkwhgo.jpg

http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p171/magicforfun/Random050.jpg
;)

Code
11-07-2006, 03:52 PM
Alera= Really dont like the letter structure, in my oppinion you should probaly go a little bit simpliler, i really cant even tell what the first letter is and the extensions dont look that good, so just take it a little simpler before you start adding them extension :)

Nemz= That shit is dope, just maybe work on the structure a bit really cant make out the letters, but thats just me.

Mx5= Man some of those pieces aint that bad, and that one throw is fire :), just work on your pieces a bit :)


K here i followed your guys advice and made the letters nice and straight, but unfortainetly since i have never taken art :( i dont know how to do a shadow, but hopefully my sister (the artist in the family) will teach me so before i do a shadow anything i should change :)

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/963/scan0007dy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ras
11-07-2006, 03:54 PM
damn that orange throw is off the chain

and acon..like i sed make the C curve at the bottom

Code
11-07-2006, 03:57 PM
Danm i tried to make it curve a bit more, but I will get it next time :)

ras
11-07-2006, 03:58 PM
just try not to line it up with the bottom of the A and itll be fine ;)

Code
11-07-2006, 04:09 PM
K, ty :)

The Legacy
11-07-2006, 04:18 PM
thankx and much peece to ras code and furious.... im working on my Y&#39;s .... i think they are prolly one of the hardest letters to do ... no joke ... but once again thanx

Code
11-07-2006, 04:26 PM
lol np, i got to go to bed to 11:30 school night in paris :(, and lol your right Y&#39;s are very hard :)

Peace and ty to everybody who gave me critz :)

myl
11-07-2006, 04:43 PM
mx5 dont write magic

FIN one
11-07-2006, 04:57 PM
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...showtopic=14335 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335) code go here, it really helps.

whoarethereal evil
11-07-2006, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Nov 7 2006, 09:30 AM
alive i dnt like tht throw 2 much bt the pen free styles are hot

1 of my fist attempts at ne kind of piece <_<

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/IMG_0309.jpg
hate 2 do it but bump


crits are needed

i know my 3d is wank tho well the whole thing is wank bt u no wht i mean hahaha

ras
11-07-2006, 05:12 PM
Whoaretherealevil = man dont be so hard on yourself....straigtnen up the L abit lose that arrow thingy in the D were the whole should be and just keep on sketching ... i gotta say .. i really like that throw aswell the D and E are hot &#33;

TricksForKids
11-07-2006, 05:33 PM
whoarethe real evil....get some straight lines, that shit is squiggly everywhere, work on a smaller scale, ittle help you

This was an exchange for slob, and man i hate S&#39;s, L&#39;s o"s and My b at the end is the shittiest thing ive ever done

i tried 500 times, and finnaly gave up and did this bullshit, whatever, crits?

http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/461/slobjq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Chop Logic
11-07-2006, 05:46 PM
New name, trying out some new stuff with it.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho4.jpg



Crits appreciated.

furious
11-07-2006, 06:11 PM
chopsicle you know what youre doing with shadows and 3d, but you gotta get rid of the add ons for now, if the second one lost the add ons and had a nice simple h it would be lookin paintable. last ones lookin good besides the bland o.

bawk bawk normally your stuff is so much cleaner, i guess you were frustrated or something but it would still look pretty hot if the b didnt look so much like an r. to tell you the truth i like the s and l but theyre not really lined up. still burns most of the toy forum ha

TricksForKids
11-07-2006, 06:26 PM
yeah man im fucking angry :( lol oh well

enigmatic
11-07-2006, 06:29 PM
Originally posted by NOMX@Nov 7 2006, 01:57 AM
enigmatic, theres a problem with ur piece... theres one thing thats killin it. its that writing on the side that says east side pride. change it 2 west and u will be good 2 go
Ha ha ha ha i think not.

I live in seattle, its sort of a joke with the graff scene. Eastside refering to bellevue and everything that way. because its on the eastside of the bridge. There arnet many writers over there but i have some freinds.

PS. (BIGGIE IS BETTER THAN TUPAC)

Fosale!
11-07-2006, 06:31 PM
Originally posted by myl@Nov 7 2006, 05:43 PM
mx5 dont write magic
Magicnyc can write magic.

idk why he just didnt say hey guys its me magicnyc.
w.e


welcome back magic.

TricksForKids
11-07-2006, 06:36 PM
any requests for your name in my handstyle? first 3 to respond get it

Peace

Mx5
11-07-2006, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by myl@Nov 7 2006, 05:43 PM
mx5 dont write magic
Why not? lol.


EDIT: It&#39;s me guys&#33;&#33; Lol. Fuck cops.

bouncingsoul
11-07-2006, 06:38 PM
Ooh Tricks pick me, pick me... Haha just kidding

TricksForKids
11-07-2006, 06:41 PM
your not kidding, dont lie :D, but i already did you, real good too ;)

jerm_mtl
11-07-2006, 06:44 PM
ill get one tricks, i can do u one for u if u wwant... i write RASE