Blackbooks

[TricksForKids]

your not kidding, dont lie :D, but i already did you, real good too ;)

[jerm_mtl]

ill get one tricks, i can do u one for u if u wwant... i write RASE

[Fosale!]

Tricks..!!!!
MEE!!!
please...=]

[TricksForKids]

fosale what do you rwite again baby? fen? or something?.....lol

[Chop Logic]

Yeah I'll do one with you if you want, should be a little challange, uncommon first letter, I write ICHO.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 7 2006, 07:45 PM
fosale what do you rwite again baby? fen? or something?.....lol
Sec one

=*

[ASB_ONE]

yo tricks
hit me up wid an asem if im not too late

wat u write, ill retun the favour

peace

[bouncingsoul]

Haha yeah I know, we just did an exchange like 2 days ago, that's why I said I was kidding

:edit: 500 posts in 5 months, wow I spend waaay too much time on here

[afek]

blahhhhhhhh..

yo triksss

germ

peace

[Chop Logic]

Originally posted by Chop Logic@Nov 7 2006, 06:46 PM
New name, trying out some new stuff with it.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/icho4.jpg



Crits appreciated.
bumpin myself.

[aces]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 7 2006, 08:36 PM
any requests for your name in my handstyle? first 3 to respond get it

Peace
Can I get one of dem even though I'm #4?


Bouncingsoul. I've got 1800 and that is in 7 months. Haha wow I'm on here too much.

[ASB_ONE]

chop llogic

theyr alright man but i mean thers no real style to the letters. there structure is kind of there, try and keep the letters the same size, also if your going to put extensions in like on your e and h you might wana use them in the other letters too. nah mean if you do it for one you got to do it for all of em.
plus lose the arrows (standard toy crit lol)

keep it up tho man nice and clean
peace.

[aces]

Originally posted by aces+Nov 7 2006, 04:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Nov 7 2006, 04:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Nov 6 2006, 07:52 PM
Alive try not to get those lines in the middle of the letters. It kinda defeats the purpose of it being a pen freestyle.

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/7039/1171727723777456360yk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Newest ish. I know the handy sucks balls but crits?
Bump for teh crits??? [/b][/quote]
Bump again...

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by aces+Nov 7 2006, 08:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Nov 7 2006, 08:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Nov 7 2006, 08:36 PM
any requests for your name in my handstyle? first 3 to respond get it

Peace
Can I get one of dem even though I&#39;m #4?


Bouncingsoul. I&#39;ve got 1800 and that is in 7 months. Haha wow I&#39;m on here too much. [/b][/quote]
...You win

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by aces+Nov 7 2006, 08:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Nov 7 2006, 08:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by aces@Nov 7 2006, 04:42 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-aces@Nov 6 2006, 07:52 PM
Alive try not to get those lines in the middle of the letters. It kinda defeats the purpose of it being a pen freestyle.

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/7039/1171727723777456360yk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Newest ish. I know the handy sucks balls but crits?
Bump for teh crits???
Bump again... [/b][/quote]
hey man watsup
iv seen this posted a bit seems to be gettn alot of gd feedback but i think i must be missing somit that ppl are seeing. yeh its a nice piece, but strip down them extensions that have nout to do wid any of the letters and the structure and style of the letters aint that nice IMO.
sorry if that snds harsh man cos i am feelin ur work just if you lose them arrows the letter structure aint all that.

peace.

[krysnum1]

yeah, the letters arnt extended, but theres a bunch of ectensions around them.

[alera]

just messin around
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/7414/1107062103ty5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz?

[ASB_ONE]

since i been pretty harsh tonight thought id better post somit up to show i aint all that eiether.

peace

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0080_000.jpg

[Soze One.]

tricks get me.
soze or kesr

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Nov 7 2006, 07:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Nov 7 2006, 07:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Nov 7 2006, 07:45 PM
fosale what do you rwite again baby? fen? or something?.....lol
Sec one

=* [/b][/quote]
lol sec one makes it sound like secondary 1 haha, grade 7.... i hate grade 7&#39;s...or just the way i thot i was cool in grade 7

[Z FUSE]

Originally posted by alera@Nov 7 2006, 09:05 PM
just messin around
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/7414/1107062103ty5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz?
i like it :] those letters are pretty nice and simple :] maybe get rid of the faces in the letters and i think would make a nice simple

[Fosale!]

im not in 7th grade
yeah. idk. im bored
and i forgot i changed it from 1 to 13 like 3 days ago w.e
idc

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by Z FUSE+Nov 7 2006, 09:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Z FUSE @ Nov 7 2006, 09:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alera@Nov 7 2006, 09:05 PM
just messin around
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/7414/1107062103ty5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz?
i like it :] those letters are pretty nice and simple :] maybe get rid of the faces in the letters and i think would make a nice simple [/b][/quote]
nah man i would def keep the faces...they add some style to it. word bout the simples tho. they look hot. nice work.

[NoneOfThisIsReal]

Me just screwing around with shading and styles and 3D on my Anatomy notes.
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/3402/dscf1759lw9.th.jpg (http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/3402/dscf1759lw9.jpg)

[AteskOne]

^^^needs alotta work no offense. anyways heres a pic of my throwy...no where else to really put this, so y not here...

http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/8951/scan0004pc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[etch a sketch]

NoneOfThisIsReal - well ur motly improving and just try to watch out where u put the 3d on ur Tio thing.


AteskOne - pretty good but i aint feelin the e a little. maybe try a lowercase e? well dont worry bout it.. im just a toy.

[NoneOfThisIsReal]

Originally posted by etch a sketch@Nov 7 2006, 11:27 PM
NoneOfThisIsReal - well ur motly improving and just try to watch out where u put the 3d on ur Tio thing.


AteskOne - pretty good but i aint feelin the e a little. maybe try a lowercase e? well dont worry bout it.. im just a toy.
Thanks. Yeah, the Tio is pretty sloppy.

@ Atesk:
It&#39;s all good dude, I don&#39;t take offense to criticism.

[C3ZR ONE]

I rarely ever touch my blackbook anymore, but I was fuckin around trying to come up with some new wheatepaste ideas.. Any crits?

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5642/im000360ci3.jpg

[sank one]

cezr&#39;s handstyle :wub: :wub:

[ras]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Nov 7 2006, 11:49 PM
I rarely ever touch my blackbook anymore, but I was fuckin around trying to come up with some new wheatepaste ideas.. Any crits?

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5642/im000360ci3.jpg
those bubbles look smart and that tag is fucking awesome ...

[nemzone]

the bubbles tht much diffrent thn b4?? i like the tag and feelin the charac.

postin this again as it got lost in all the fuckin chit chat


first sketch in a while

http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/3059/img136js0.jpg

not gr8, but yeh

[aces]

I personally liked your other style better but this is lookin good.

[TricksForKids]

not bad nemz, im with aces on liking your old shit more though, props to one of the feshest faces ive seen in a while ceezy

Peace

[South-Pole]

Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 8 2006, 05:03 AM
the bubbles tht much diffrent thn b4?? i like the tag and feelin the charac.

postin this again as it got lost in all the fuckin chit chat


first sketch in a while

http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/3059/img136js0.jpg

not gr8, but yeh
i like it,but i can&#39;t read all the letters though


edit:n/m i figured it out but nice piece

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 7 2006, 06:33 PM
whoarethe real evil....get some straight lines, that shit is squiggly everywhere, work on a smaller scale, ittle help you

This was an exchange for slob, and man i hate S&#39;s, L&#39;s o"s and My b at the end is the shittiest thing ive ever done

i tried 500 times, and finnaly gave up and did this bullshit, whatever, crits?

http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/461/slobjq0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
quite likin this one myself ;)

[5yn]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture79.jpg
this is why i opnly bomb haha

[trashhh]

Originally posted by trashhh+Nov 7 2006, 03:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Nov 7 2006, 03:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Nov 7 2006, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40624.jpg



Bump

Legacy im likin that a lot, but maybe ur G looks a little too much like a C. I think greens would work well on it [/b][/quote]
cmon critzz

[joke]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/i%20chelcie/aztecfukedup-1.jpg



this probs dont qualify but it got a lil sketch in there



http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m71/i%20chelcie/azteknew1.jpg



n thats ma new word n all

[afek]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Nov 7 2006, 11:49 PM
I rarely ever touch my blackbook anymore, but I was fuckin around trying to come up with some new wheatepaste ideas.. Any crits?

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5642/im000360ci3.jpg
cezr that old man :wub:

[TricksForKids]

trash keep up the good work homie, work on that T though :D Heres some handies

Be nice, each one is clearly a freestyle and i know some of em suck, but i was bored as fuck

Peace


http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1861/asemhandywp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Asem

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8852/demhandynf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Dem

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/3508/germhandyvq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Germ

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5233/ichohandycs1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Icho

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/964/rasehandylv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Rase

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/3983/sechandytl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sec one

[Bastardo]

nice handstyles.
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/1022/picture137ah4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/5403/picture151mb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/6117/508079388l1dkhz0.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[furious]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/brownblock.jpg

dont think i posted that

soek you def know how to rock a throwie

work on the s in the second one though... really feelin the e and k

[tycoonin]

ur styles hella unique..im liken it but it seems like everything you post looks alike...can you do good throwies too?

[ras]

bastardo that first thro is ace and i love the E on the 2nd

[afek]

damn


triks


just damn...

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 8 2006, 04:27 PM
trash keep up the good work homie, work on that T though :D Heres some handies

Be nice, each one is clearly a freestyle and i know some of em suck, but i was bored as fuck

Peace


http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1861/asemhandywp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Asem

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8852/demhandynf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Dem

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/3508/germhandyvq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Germ

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5233/ichohandycs1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Icho

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/964/rasehandylv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Rase

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/3983/sechandytl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sec one
thanks tricks &#33;&#33;&#33; ill hook u up with a bawk handy laterr

[jerm_mtl]

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/4289/piecerh6.png



new piece..... crits??? ... double post haha... lol theres no colours or outline, wtv, oh ya and i forgot to erase the pencil haha :ph34r: :ph34r:

[Oprah]

can someone tell cezr tht hes not a toy. lol

the characters sick and the bubbles are always nice along with the handstyle

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Nov 8 2006, 05:24 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/4289/piecerh6.png



new piece..... crits??? ... double post haha... lol theres no colours or outline, wtv, oh ya and i forgot to erase the pencil haha :ph34r: :ph34r:
BUMP on new page

[Soze One.]

it says rae?
the e is to far away
nice though
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1390.jpg

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Soze One.@Nov 8 2006, 06:45 PM
it says rae?
the e is to far away
nice though
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1390.jpg
RASE &#33;&#33;&#33;

[krysnum1]

Originally posted by Soze One.@Nov 8 2006, 06:45 PM
it says rae?
the e is to far away
nice though
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1390.jpg
tight//// is that color pencil?

[Soze One.]

yeah, its all we had at school.

[jerm_mtl]

i find the H and the O are hiden too much

[amuin-gcs]

Originally posted by afek+Nov 8 2006, 03:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (afek @ Nov 8 2006, 03:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Nov 7 2006, 11:49 PM
I rarely ever touch my blackbook anymore, but I was fuckin around trying to come up with some new wheatepaste ideas.. Any crits?

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5642/im000360ci3.jpg
cezr that old man :wub: [/b][/quote]
u fcukin old hobo. that better be in my book damnit..
check u out tmrow r something piece.
DOA*GCSKINGS
605

[YarHarHar]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2045.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2046.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2052.jpg

[G.SMooth]

I am super toy but I thought I&#39;d post this pic even tho it does suck. I just started tagging things like 2 days ago :)
http://http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o89/jeremygreg/Picture044.jpg

[krysnum1]

what pic?

[krysnum1]

http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/3216/img1991ul4.jpg

heres my table from mon - today. basicly just doodleish shit....

[Monster Island]

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/1808/img2180nh2.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/2679/img2189pu5.jpg
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2718/img2188ls5.jpg
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/435/img2185zp0.jpg
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/2500/img2184es2.jpg
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/3136/img2181zk7.jpg

good enough for normal blackbook thread?

[-testify-]

i like the 1rst and 5th one best but dont really like the fill on the last one or fourth one

[-GEKS-]

i would say 2nd 4th and 5th are worthy

[ghozt]

am i in the right thread? cuz the stuff on the 2nd to last page was hella sick


hate to fuck up the page but here i go

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/5338/scan0003st1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/3451/scan0001vm6.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[krysnum1]

you cant write hecks.... absolutly not... unless you are hecks? or biting him...

[ghozt]

ummm didnt no someone wrote hecks my bad



edit: wait better yet show me a pik of his work =]

[krysnum1]

nuff proof?

and accualy your first one dose it say hacks? that ones straight,

[ghozt]

:lol: umm didnt no someone wrote hecs but i write hacks now not hecks plus i had a k in front of my s :lol: but yea hes a beast

[BoRe-719-]

k, so its been like a month since ive come anywhere neer doing letters, my gf asked me to do her name so here it is

vrits please

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/scan0003-2.jpg

[dibz]

ill^
colors would make it better though, but im sure you already knew that
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_3536.jpg

[LOER1]

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p127/ldog150/Picture013.jpg

can i get some crits yoo

[dibz]

luer- i think theres a to many little extensions on the letters. its good there the same size. an try to keep um in a straight line.

[YarHarHar]

Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 8 2006, 08:50 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2045.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2046.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2052.jpg
shit gets overlooked way to much...

[furious]

thats weird dibz, seeing as there arent any extensions on those letters...

real crits:

loer - the o sorta looks like a u baby. and squish the letters together a little more

dibz - line up your letters instead of doing whatever you want with them, the r and a have some potential to look hot

give my buddy loer some crits guys its his first time posting

[furious]

and jar, the black and blue one looks crazy. the a looks real hot, letters are original and thats what matters but j looks too much like a u all the time to me thats my only complaint

edit: if the second leg of the r reached to the bottom more it would be alot more legible, also

[sky 5]

[QUOTE=trashhh,Nov 7 2006, 03:17 PM] http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40624.jpg




im likin these letters alot trash, the stem part of the T and the last H could use some correcting thoo . . . sephek wut up man, long time no see . . nice fluid letters there

edit: i thought it was THRASH . . . that bottom right loop extension of the T would make a fly H

[gift]

loer- yeah man. that o looks like a u. if you want it to look like one line instead of a complete circle, but the cut on the side, not right on the top.


here&#39;s some of mine. haven&#39;t sketched in a while...

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/anthony-straight-redo.jpg

the y&#39;s fucked up bad. but i kind of like the style.

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/anthony-sketch1-license.jpg


http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/rachel-heart-jpg.jpg


did some names for a friend&#39;s kids. tell me what you think.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs+Nov 8 2006, 07:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (amuin&#045;gcs &#064; Nov 8 2006, 07:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by afek@Nov 8 2006, 03:19 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Nov 7 2006, 11:49 PM
I rarely ever touch my blackbook anymore, but I was fuckin around trying to come up with some new wheatepaste ideas.. Any crits?

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5642/im000360ci3.jpg
cezr that old man :wub:
u fcukin old hobo. that better be in my book damnit..
check u out tmrow r something piece.
DOA*GCSKINGS
605 [/b][/quote]
Fuck your book. I toyed it up.... :P
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/4105/im000365zq2.jpg
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/3057/im000366bm4.jpg
Hey Where&#39;s Mirk with my book?

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@Nov 8 2006, 10:40 PM
k, so its been like a month since ive come anywhere neer doing letters, my gf asked me to do her name so here it is

vrits please

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/scan0003-2.jpg
Holy gingersnaps&#33; That&#39;s on some all new shit. Props. :o

[Fosale!]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010276-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010275-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010274-1.jpg
^fucked up on handie so much.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010272-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010270-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010269-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010268-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010267.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010266-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010264-1.jpg

[Mx5]

Quality lacks hard...

[ASB_ONE]

asem hates little dogs yap yappin at his ankles

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0084_000.jpg

[myl]

Originally posted by Mx5+Nov 7 2006, 07:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mx5 @ Nov 7 2006, 07:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Nov 7 2006, 05:43 PM
mx5 dont write magic
Why not? lol.


EDIT: It&#39;s me guys&#33;&#33; Lol. Fuck cops. [/b][/quote]
oh haha my bad

[Fosale!]

@ASBdont being the top of the E down as much
then itll be dope

[ASB_ONE]

word.

[WolfBurrns]

Havent posted anything in awhile. Still searching for my own style and I wanna progress with this.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture86.jpg

CRITS?

[Klone]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Nov 9 2006, 12:10 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010276-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010275-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010274-1.jpg
^fucked up on handie so much.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010272-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010270-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010269-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010268-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010267.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010266-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010264-1.jpg
ouch..work on ya lettering man..and dont waste stickers on tags..its a waste..

[near]

Originally posted by Klone+Nov 9 2006, 12:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Klone &#064; Nov 9 2006, 12:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Nov 9 2006, 12:10 AM

ouch..work on ya lettering man..and dont waste stickers on tags..its a waste.. [/b][/quote]
ya some of those handstyles shouldnt have been on stickers but those throws are not bad at all...ps klone if u write klone....


http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/ha-klone001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/ont-klone001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/ha-klone002.jpg

[nemzone]

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/4427/img137jh4.jpg
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/2333/img138hj5.jpg

[furious]

^^^ really feelin the bottom one and the purple one nemso, but i hate to see you wasting nice sketches like that on words that arent your name hah

idk for some reason that annoys me, not tellin you what to write or anything but you know hah

[nemzone]

lol they both for sketches, and ambers done me a gd few bangin exchanges, n dust is just amazin so i had 2 put the work in lol. but thnx&#33;

[ras]

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/7530/dub9sb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

something new ... nemzone i love the bottom one on the first pic ...

crits and comments on minee pleasee ...... ;)

[nero122]

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/nero.jpg

aint been graffin long bt been into it for a while mostly lookin at stuff round ma area anyway crits?

[ras]

Originally posted by nero122@Nov 9 2006, 02:16 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/nero.jpg

aint been graffin long bt been into it for a while mostly lookin at stuff round ma area anyway crits?
whut dus it say...work on your letter structure...other than that great highlighting , karak and good tag... ;)

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Nov 9 2006, 01:38 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/7530/dub9sb8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

something new ... nemzone i love the bottom one on the first pic ...

crits and comments on minee pleasee ...... ;)
Comooon Criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiits pleeeeeeeeease &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Vagrant]

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Blackbook1.jpg
A few quickies for throws and stickers

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Blackbook3.jpg
Trying to get away from the "flat bottom with drop shadow"
The splatters were supposed to be orange.

~~~
Ras that U looks like a fucked up backwards N.. take the extention off the D and put it on the bottom of the letter like the B if you want an extention on it.

[nero122]

if you can read the handstyle it says nero n im aware some one writes that but not where i live also im only 13 n a bit i know age aint n excuse ive been doin sketches for 2 weeks so w/e thanks for the crits tho more please

[meph]

To wolfburns, you&#39;re on the right tracks man, keep rocking them simples and eventually your own style will emerge. I would say to lose the top bit extension on the S and the little jagged bit on the curve of the S. 3D would make it look better too.

To nemzone, your style is a lot more progressed than mine but I would say that the top one looks a little over complicated - I can&#39;t even read it =/ even though I know your sketching dust. I like the second one, the D is real sweet.

Ras, I&#39;m not really feeling that peice man, the basic letters themselves are real sweet but the extensions are a bit wack. Maybe reduce their length or just getting rid of them all together will improve the peice a lot. I think the green toxic splash clashes with the colours of the peice too.

To nero, them characs are looking alright man - shows you got some creativity going on. In terms of the letters, for now you have to start off writing block, keyboard style letters and then your style will progress from there. For loads of info check out the new2graff thread in this forum, it&#39;ll help a lot.

To vagrant, you got simples down man, grats.

Peace

[trashhh]

Originally posted by trashhh+Nov 8 2006, 03:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Nov 8 2006, 03:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by trashhh@Nov 7 2006, 03:21 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Nov 7 2006, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40624.jpg



Bump

Legacy im likin that a lot, but maybe ur G looks a little too much like a C. I think greens would work well on it
cmon critzz [/b][/quote]
second bump still not a single crit..

[ras]

we have givven you crits man ...

[Vagrant]

Originally posted by trashhh+Nov 9 2006, 01:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Nov 9 2006, 01:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by trashhh@Nov 8 2006, 03:12 PM

Originally posted by trashhh@Nov 7 2006, 03:21 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Nov 7 2006, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40624.jpg



Bump

Legacy im likin that a lot, but maybe ur G looks a little too much like a C. I think greens would work well on it
cmon critzz
second bump still not a single crit.. [/b][/quote]
stop whining for crits so much.

Looks like you forgot to erase some of your lines from construction.
Connect the vertical and the crossbar on the T, loose the extension to its lower right, make the letter bigger to take up the space.
Connect the top of the vertical and the top round part on the R, as well as the bottom of the vertical.
Connect the lower overlap on the A
The S and H look alright

Right now it looks like some weird combination of a T and an H in the beginning. So mainly just redo that entire letter, and make some connections. It will look alot better.

[LOER1]

ras- dub looks pretty ill but im not really feelin the little hang off thing, on the D and B

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p127/ldog150/Picture014.jpg

crits please

[ras]

Originally posted by LOER1@Nov 9 2006, 03:49 PM
ras- dub looks pretty ill but im not really feelin the little hang off thing, on the D and B

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p127/ldog150/Picture014.jpg

crits please
make the O connect

[WolfBurrns]

Bump. People aint doing crits for the person before them when they post. Dicks.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture86.jpg

Loer- Work on your structure. And the &#39;O&#39; does need some work. Work on your fills too. Should be cleaner.

[ASB_ONE]

chill out mate were not all dicks. anyway toy on toy crit is usually not very good, never the less i guess you got to crit otherwise the thread would die out.

wolf burns: you should take some of your own advice bro. structures ayt but rele theyr jus letters mang no style in there

loer1: looks ayt can see you used felt tips which is why ur fill aint clean jus grab some new ink n ull be set, the structures there jus work on making it flow a bit nicer at the mo it feels rele sharp (????lol)

trash: looks cool feels like a bit too much going on tho and some of the letters arnt rele defined but i rele like it actualy and i dont kno why

vagrant: looking good mate dont like the one where the r and the a cross over but like the rest

ras: define your letters bro let that style loose.


Heres my new ish sorry bout poor pic quality

peace.
asem. asb

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0088_000.jpg

[alive]

go a bit simpler. lose the shit on the S. make ur strokes widths a bit more consistant. dont extend n overlap quite so much. keep going

fucking around in class, pen freestyles

new
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02850.jpg

REPOST
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02846.jpg

new
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02849.jpg

criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiits pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.
peace.

[TricksForKids]

trash i gave you help like 2 pages back...so did sky 5 or someone so dont bump and say no crits...read a little bit

alive lose the "sketchiness" just do a clean one without colour for me

loer not bad, starting nice and simple i like it, same with you rant keep it up

dub, lose those weird ass fat extensions,

and heres a preview of the new slob im working on, not much ebtter than the last one but whatever, 3D, advanced fill, and background to come later tonight

PEace

http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/3135/slobed1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[wildpspitfire90]

Originally posted by wildpspitfire90@Nov 5 2006, 11:07 AM
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2398.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2397.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2396.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2395.jpg
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e39/Wildspitfire90/102_2394.jpg
some stuff ive done in the past couple days.. CRITZ....
bump

[alive]

try critting the shit above you b4 posting ur own shit. . . .

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by alive@Nov 9 2006, 06:29 PM
go a bit simpler. lose the shit on the S. make ur strokes widths a bit more consistant. dont extend n overlap quite so much. keep going

fucking around in class, pen freestyles

new
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02850.jpg

REPOST
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02846.jpg

new
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02849.jpg

criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiits pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.
peace.
sorry mate but i dissagree. if all you did was go simpler then your style would never develop. thats almost a cliche toy crit now, go simpler or look at your letters structure. my simples are down and im now developing my style, perhaps you need to take some of your own advice or just quit biting cezr ones letters from the new to graff thread.

wildspitfire: since im on a rant ima say wat i couldnt be assd to over the previous bloody ten pages u bumped that on. how many people do u need to tell u that shit is wack as hell, sorry man but it is.

[Soze One.]

alive iliek your shit
some sketching shit on xanex
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1393.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1391.jpg

[krysnum1]

Originally posted by krysnum1@Nov 8 2006, 09:39 PM
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/3216/img1991ul4.jpg

heres my table from mon - today. basicly just doodleish shit....
eh?

[furious]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 9 2006, 06:35 PM
http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/3135/slobed1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thats what im talkin about, put some 3d on that ish

trash i like it except the extension on the t makes it look like "thrash" a little.

[acne fk]

http://i14.tinypic.com/2aexsee.jpg

http://i14.tinypic.com/4ida14y.jpg

http://i13.tinypic.com/2cehidf.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

ASB one- Alive didn&#39;t bite my letters. Those are sky 5&#39;s, and it&#39;s really not anything I&#39;d consider a bite. ;)

[ASB_ONE]

hmm agree to diss agree init his simples look q alot like the first stages of the letters in your thread. jus fed up of same old &#39;go simpler&#39; crit u post something simple, get props for it, try to develop it and get told to go simpler agen nah mean. plus i jus find it hard to take crits from cats that dont practice wat they preach.

[acne fk]

umm anything i need to work on??

[Mx5]

Alive, you almost ready to paint.. I&#39;d give it till Jan and you should start rocking cans on chill walls.

[YarHarHar]

Originally posted by YarHarHar+Nov 8 2006, 11:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (YarHarHar @ Nov 8 2006, 11:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-YarHarHar@Nov 8 2006, 08:50 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2045.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2046.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2052.jpg
shit gets overlooked way to much... [/b][/quote]
fuck you guys&#33;

[sank one]

i like your old stuff better

[YarHarHar]

...good crit...anyways what older stuff...i got alot of old stuff mang

[ShIfTeD]

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/8094/aqu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

was gon&#39; be my entry for the single letter battle but never got around to croping it and hosting it

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4838/voltronyf5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for the up and coming voltron battle

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2861/sickflairhx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

latest **for fun** sketch

[FIN one]

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/4200/sta70980qn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)- my "black" book cover

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9719/sta70979wk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)just doodling

all the rest is kind of letter studies

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6785/sta70981vk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/982/sta70983zs9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/3143/sta70985jq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6801/sta70986ix6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/3291/sta70988bi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/3959/sta70987lq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please, i know i aint that good but thats y im here :) anyone know how far i possibly am from the regular black book thread?

[FAB]

yeah jus thought id try something else beside ma name so i did FAB il probaly put it as ma SIG.
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/4512/fab001ga5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:lol: that made me smile seeing that GOOSEBUMP book I yoused to love to read and collect them when i was younger.

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Nov 9 2006, 09:14 PM
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/8094/aqu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

was gon&#39; be my entry for the single letter battle but never got around to croping it and hosting it

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4838/voltronyf5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for the up and coming voltron battle

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2861/sickflairhx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

latest **for fun** sketch
bumping this because it was lost 1 page ago by people who dont like to crit things before they post theirs asking for crits

[TricksForKids]

hot shit fab, your b&#39;s too big but thats bout it, and shifted i like where this new style of yours is going, the green ones my favourite, aint feelin the character too much

Heres slob coloured, Crits? Peace

http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/3135/slobed1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/5626/slobcolouredql6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[blaike]

crits? its from a camera phone, my frien&#39;ds stuff

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/blaike/2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/blaike/3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v288/blaike/4.jpg


they&#39;re not actually names, just sketches of words he sees randomly

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 9 2006, 10:04 PM
hot shit fab, your b&#39;s too big but thats bout it, and shifted i like where this new style of yours is going, the green ones my favourite, aint feelin the character too much

Heres slob coloured, Crits? Peace

http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/3135/slobed1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/5626/slobcolouredql6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like the showed progression

yeah i like my new style too...i think i finaly got it lol

thanks for the crits


the characters supposed to be the fonze lol

[sky 5]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 9 2006, 07:54 PM
hmm agree to diss agree init his simples look q alot like the first stages of the letters in your thread. jus fed up of same old &#39;go simpler&#39; crit u post something simple, get props for it, try to develop it and get told to go simpler agen nah mean. plus i jus find it hard to take crits from cats that dont practice wat they preach.
man i gave you a semi-detailed crit a few days ago and you posted sounding like you didnt want someone breaking down your sketch saying something like "tear it up why dont you" . . . ah this world is a very very unfair place, dont worry man you got the basics its just up to you to practice and push it . .

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/3707/1202016bv8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

pics a lil blurry, made the black solid and not distracting, orange marker ran out during the 3d . . posted this in teh reg thread, better than postin w/out a pic

http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/6475/1202013bh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^ thats dedication right there, in it 4 life . . no holding back no turning back from the dark side . . .

edit: its a miracle my sig works . . thanks to whoever hooked that up&#33; now to photoshop my name up there instead of the skinner karak . .

[TricksForKids]

THrow in some white and were golden

PEace

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8521/slopcolouredfinalmi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[TricksForKids]

lovin the tat sky, is that yours? sick detail whats it say? words? works? anyways hot shit lovin the sketches too, especially the top fill

Peace

[FIN one]

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8995/blackbookcoverjk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my newest Black" book

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/9238/dcap1lx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
eh

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/350/dcap2pa1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ehh
the rest are like letter studies not all there yet tho
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/3773/letterstudyafvv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/6724/letterstudyglsd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/9990/letterstudymrai1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/3485/letterstudysxno6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/3930/roundbl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
doodles and quick karak

let me know what you guys think.i need help, just dont know where

[Quigbert]

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri5.jpg

Criticism?http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/style_images/IS_DarkB-690/icon3.gif
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/st...B-690/icon3.gif (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/style_images/IS_DarkB-690/icon3.gif)

[Quigbert]

Originally posted by FIN one@Nov 9 2006, 10:35 PM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8995/blackbookcoverjk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my newest Black" book

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/9238/dcap1lx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
eh

http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/350/dcap2pa1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ehh
the rest are like letter studies not all there yet tho
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/3773/letterstudyafvv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/6724/letterstudyglsd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/9990/letterstudymrai1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/3485/letterstudysxno6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/3930/roundbl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
doodles and quick karak

let me know what you guys think.i need help, just dont know where
Sick black book , uhh try to make a canishing point in the middle
of all the letters so it looks like mine so it looks like its being sucked away.

[Quigbert]

Also loose the arrows on the first one.

[FIN one]

yeah niether of them is done, i was just thinkin what kind of 3d i want to do on the second one, ill try a vanishing point. everyone else aggre that i lose the arrows on the first one?

[sky 5]

yeah i aint a big fan of havin the erxtension and arrow being smaller than the width of the letters . . i actually like the arrow extension (if placed properly) that are wider than the letter . . FIN you might wanna work on gettin your letters closer together, maybe try drawin an outline of all your letters closer together then go back and spice it up with all the lil dodas you like to do . .

[sky 5]

damn double post . . . found this, its old and i dont htink ive posted it . . to think of it i havent seen that piece of wood in a while . .

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7581/1171709yz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[FIN one]

are you talking about one in particular?or as a whole? any comments on the karak or the letter study thing?

[sky 5]

good call man . . lookin back you dont need to get your letters closer together at all . . but in general you might wanna try drawing the general structure and flow of all the letters you are doing then going back and spicing it them up . . sometimes when i work too much on each letter as i move along the letters end up looking different or akward next to each other . .

[FIN one]

i got ya, thanks ill work on that and post up tomarrow prolly

[Quigbert]

Originally posted by Quigbert@Nov 9 2006, 10:36 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri5.jpg

Criticism?http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/style_images/IS_DarkB-690/icon3.gif
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/st...B-690/icon3.gif (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/style_images/IS_DarkB-690/icon3.gif)
how is my drawing?

[sky 5]

its alright . . in my opinion the center vanishing point is a lil low (i guess b/c the lip of the E takes up the empty space in the middle) and the D and R match in style but the I and E dont . . i like solid black letters

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0303.jpg

Trying out a sorta new style... I think it&#39;d look sweet with a thick outline

[furious]

no offense dcap but youre pretty far from the black book thread. get some consistency in your letters cuz it sorta looks like youre makin em off the top of your head, go simpler the lines are sorta jumbled.

shifted glad youre gettin better, the voltron piece looks hot. dont connect the letters thats my only complaint

ill post up a couple sketches in a few minutes, drew up a couple throws for tycoonin cuz he asked about em

had to edit this cuz im retarded.

bouncy baby i like your stuff better after you add 3d. whats it say? the s looks a little big.

[bouncingsoul]

"knews"

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0304.jpg

[YarHarHar]

bounce- lookin good but the s in the first one doesnt really have your style in it
as for the knews it could use some more flow..kinda liek your first one
and how come always pencil? dont think i ever seen a fill form you

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2053.jpg

hopefully i actually get crits instead of being looked over and over and over...little blurry but does the trick

[bouncingsoul]

Haha yeah, I dunno, I&#39;m just not into filling for some reason... I just pencil something and just leave it at that... I think I&#39;m just too lazy... And the first S was kinda just put there to just finish the sketch and get over with it... I&#39;m a bastard.

As for yours, it&#39;s looking siiiick. I love your simples, except your R&#39;s are kinda screwy it seems like in all of them... It looks like a P in that flick. I love your handie though. The blue/pink double thing looks nice.

...And I&#39;ve got a character in the works at the moment... Expect a new flick soon

[-testify-]

^sweet your characs kick ass

and jar i like the fill but not the r

[furious]

Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 10 2006, 12:36 AM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2053.jpg
oh baby hottest one yet mf. really feelin the color scheme, the j still looks like a u a little, the r still looks like a p a little, but whatever i guess its still hot.

and i critted your last one but apparently YOU overlooked ME?

[bouncingsoul]

*unfinished*

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0305.jpg

[nero122]

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/tupacncar2n.jpg

those are some characters i done last night



http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/neroe.jpg
and this is another neroe (added an &#39;e&#39;) n im nna do a simpler one in a bit

[near]

nero that charac style is kinda dope but the lettering isnt ]: keep on keepin on
lovin the &#39;ews&#39; on that knews sketch too the &#39;kn&#39; need a lil work tho :)
and that fab from the last page is DOOOOOOOOPE o_O

does someone wanna do an exchange im fiending writing a new something new...maybe bawk? love that style u got

[FIN one]

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1796/sta70993mz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/2038/sta70991jo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just taking your advice,havent done anything new yet. crits?

[HA!KU]

oh baby hottest one yet mf.

ohhh babyy ;)
an what did i tell you about that &#39;r&#39; mister.

[bouncingsoul]

"knews"

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0306.jpg

[furious]

the e looks like an n, besides that i like this one better than your others

[FIN one]

any crits on mine?

[furious]

dcap i like the c in the second one, the rest of the letters are sorta too fat or something idk, close up the d too.

throw up:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/throw2.jpg

constructive criticism pleaseee

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 9 2006, 10:34 PM
THrow in some white and were golden

PEace

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8521/slopcolouredfinalmi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump for some feedback you fuckers :angry:

baper the B needs some serious work its not flowin

bouncing, colour your shit before i smack you, i can see your letters ready to make me happy...but i cant..because theyre in fucking pencil lol

and the stuff at the top its looking ok, possibly a nice new style looks like its coming about

[furious]

yeah i think imma fatten the b a little next time.

bawk i love seeing people have an original style perfected. those white highlights are lookin good.

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Nov 10 2006, 01:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Nov 10 2006, 01:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Nov 9 2006, 10:34 PM
THrow in some white and were golden

PEace

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8521/slopcolouredfinalmi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump for some feedback you fuckers :angry:

baper the B needs some serious work its not flowin

bouncing, colour your shit before i smack you, i can see your letters ready to make me happy...but i cant..because theyre in fucking pencil lol

and the stuff at the top its looking ok, possibly a nice new style looks like its coming about [/b][/quote]
ay you kno what would look pretty cool....if you gave the O some shadow..make it really bright in the midle and fade it out...like a real ball

[Flash_One]

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4027/152407gd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i need some crits

[wildpspitfire90]

Originally posted by Flash_One@Nov 10 2006, 02:34 PM
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4027/152407gd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i need some crits
exteamly bad pic quality kinda hard to read the l also try to match the stayl of the other letters with ur a

[kore]

Flash: get some better quality pic maaan, that shit all fuzzy
tricks: dope shit maan, i love your style
furious: dope, but i aint feelin the B, work on that and it&#39;ll be hot

bored in school
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2663/graff024ap1.jpg
crits

[-testify-]

keso i like it its nice and simple just make the k a lil higher tricks its awesome specially the l
flash there tooo much extensions and stuff tone it down and it should look good
bouncingsoul i like your style ALOT

new pask throw
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/3930/bleeheu7.png

[krazzie_ammo]

hey pask, looks good, just tidy up the lines.

http://img288.imageshack.us/img288/3865/53fz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i have an idea to finish off this page...i have ideas, but not enough time :P

crits?

[-testify-]

yea its on a whiteboard haha and is it good enough to paint
and craze i like all cause of the simpleness

[TricksForKids]

craze, fill the page in red orange and yellow small throws and tags till you can barely see any white, and then do a pice in black over it or something, could look sick Pask i like the K, tidy it up and get some more definition in your letters

Peace

[krazzie_ammo]

hmmm....sounds like a good idea. i will try it, just need to find some time.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 10 2006, 12:40 PM
"knews"

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0306.jpg
That&#39;s hot Bounce.

Furious- I really liked that Baper style too.

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/5889/im000373pn8.jpg

For Amuin, DOA crew. (I know, it looks like it says Amuim... :( )

[-testify-]

cezr...why do you post in the toy section haha :P :rolleyes:

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Nov 10 2006, 05:39 PM
cezr...why do you post in the toy section haha :P :rolleyes:
Cuzz I&#39;m a mod in this section, so I devote most all my attention to this specific forum. I post my posters in the regular sticker/ poster thread too, but my blackbooking isn&#39;t very good, so I never post that shit outside here. ;) Thanks tho.

[obseen]

i just dont like how your letters are so thin
but i guess thats the style which also makes it look good
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6092/pict0004kg6.jpg

[Bastardo]

your letters look like a handstyle.
which is pretty sick.
To cezr.

[furious]

Originally posted by furious@Nov 10 2006, 01:12 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/throw2.jpg
bumpsta i want some decent opinions

thanks cezr, yours would look hotter if the letters werent connected, feelin the m,u,i.

obseen you can color but your letters are lackin madd structure, keep workin on it bruhh

[okaz]

obseen is munching too hard slow down a bit buddy.

[TricksForKids]

yeah obseen i like you man but watch the biting...i dont wanna start beef but you didnt just pull that style out of your ass

[whoarethereal evil]

baper

i like the bape

ur r is lacking

but yeah i like all ur throws uv posted

[FAB]

Just thought id try my alias for handstyles and throws, and also ignore the JUST at the top of the pic.
GLAM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1135/glam009ol0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat ya think.

[TricksForKids]

so hot man, keep it up, the left side of the A needs some work, and left sidem of the M, loving the G, L could be a bit bigger, 3D is BANGIN and my favourite part about the whole thing?

the simple "just" at the top

and that handstyle is on point

[furious]

fab that l is on fire.

[etch a sketch]

fab i like your design on the m wheres it shows like it was bolted together or somethin. ur 3d sick too

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3840/file0009mq2.jpg

my throw up i dont usually add the shadows or watever. but i messed up on it soo ya

[alive]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE+Nov 9 2006, 06:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASB_ONE @ Nov 9 2006, 06:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Nov 9 2006, 06:29 PM
go a bit simpler. lose the shit on the S. make ur strokes widths a bit more consistant. dont extend n overlap quite so much. keep going

fucking around in class, pen freestyles

new
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02850.jpg

REPOST
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02846.jpg

new
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02849.jpg

criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiits pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.
peace.
sorry mate but i dissagree. if all you did was go simpler then your style would never develop. thats almost a cliche toy crit now, go simpler or look at your letters structure. my simples are down and im now developing my style, perhaps you need to take some of your own advice or just quit biting cezr ones letters from the new to graff thread.

wildspitfire: since im on a rant ima say wat i couldnt be assd to over the previous bloody ten pages u bumped that on. how many people do u need to tell u that shit is wack as hell, sorry man but it is. [/b][/quote]
why dont you spend a little more time in the new 2 graff thread and read not to call bites without picture support motherfucker.
ive been here longer then cezr, longer then sky5. both of them have watched me develop from the very, very begining.

ur just pissed cuz u cant take the truth. ur shit is wack. back the fuck down or battle me. where the fuck do u live? u ever been real on the street? come here and ull never have a clean piece running again that shitl be crossed so fast.

calling a bite is serious shit. dont fuck around with it or me.

cezr even agrees with me.

its a cliche crit b/c ppl say it a lot. cuz most of the time, its good advice.


instead of bitching, thank fucking god u got crits from a superior writer.


bump crits?

etcha- put 3d on the throw as a whole, not on each letter overlapping.

peace.

[ASB_ONE]

dont cry.
street wats a street? nah iv never been on a street i just sit at my computer all day long.

[alive]

as i thought. battle? u can pick the rules

[alive]

as i thought. battle? u can pick the rules

[alive]

as i thought. battle? u can pick the rules

[ASB_ONE]

chill out wid the triple post, bit eager init
lol ok i nvr battled before but i aint guna say no. thing is if you have been here &#39;since before cezr one and sky5&#39; u prolly got alot of ppl on your side so wats the point?

[PeYGoNeR]

havent been on here for a while heres a quick sketch
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8589/damean089hs0.jpg
crits plz

[ASB_ONE]

nice throws.

[alive]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 10 2006, 09:33 PM
chill out wid the triple post, bit eager init
lol ok i nvr battled before but i aint guna say no. thing is if you have been here &#39;since before cezr one and sky5&#39; u prolly got alot of ppl on your side so wats the point?
my bad internet fucked up. i have been here for that long, but i trust people to be honest. it certainly hasnt stopped anyone from being harsh in the past. no worries.

u want to pick the rules then?



peyg all dope, but i swear ive seen it all before?





peace

[C3ZR ONE]

Alive and ASB- Take it to PM&#39;s. Quit beefin up the picture thread or I&#39;ll suspend you like I&#39;d do with anyone else beefin up the picture threads. <_<


Tsk, tsk... Naughty boys.

[ShIfTeD]

spank em with wrds ceez&#33;

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by alive@Nov 10 2006, 06:45 PM


peyg all dope, but i swear ive seen it all before?


i agree, it&#39;s all pretty common styles, reminds me of eyes in toronto (not sure if i&#39;m calling a bite, i&#39;ll leave it at a &#39;reminder&#39;..) but hot shit nonetheless.










nvstyles :ph34r:

[ASB_ONE]

apologies.

still wack??

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0090_000.jpg

[kore]

Originally posted by kore@Nov 10 2006, 03:06 PM
Flash: get some better quality pic maaan, that shit all fuzzy
tricks: dope shit maan, i love your style
furious: dope, but i aint feelin the B, work on that and it&#39;ll be hot

bored in school
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2663/graff024ap1.jpg
crits
ba-bump bump bump

[-GEKS-]

not bad, but ur lines are kinda shakey. work on drawin them straighter

[C3ZR ONE]

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/9311/im000375rj6.jpg
bahhh&#33; I can&#39;t color. I even sucked at coloring back in schoolio with crayolas. That was a billion years ago when dinosaurs roamed the earth and me and the other cavemen would bust out the cardboard and have pop&#39;n lock competitions untill the saber toothed tigers came and ate one of us, and then I was like "Oh snap, that dude got his shit bit off... Lets bounce. I got a roast pig back at the crib."

etc...

[Twitch1]

thats tight dude. why no 3d?

[bouncingsoul]

I don&#39;t like that first A... The rest of the letters are bangin, even though I personally prefer thicker... Sick letter structure (except for that A and the accidental M, which was a sick M btw) made up for it though... Yes, it saved even the coloring... But I shouldn&#39;t be talking about coloring <_<

[furious]

lil ceez that baby needed some 3d but its all good, i actually like that coloring, very old school oriented... but your little paragraph on paleolithic b-boyin might explain that.

some ugly ish:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/blue.jpg

some criticism will warm my heart.

[C3ZR ONE]

I like how you seperated the two holes in the B this time. Deff. feel that style. It&#39;s solid. Reminds me a lil bit of Dier.

[Truth.]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TWEEDLEDEE.jpg

alice in wonderland theme attempt, i dont havethe ruightcolours, so i cant colour it...

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by PeYGoNeR@Nov 10 2006, 09:42 PM
havent been on here for a while heres a quick sketch
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/8589/damean089hs0.jpg
crits plz
looks like remiks shit.

[NiL]

Originally posted by furious@Nov 11 2006, 12:51 AM
lil ceez that baby needed some 3d but its all good, i actually like that coloring, very old school oriented... but your little paragraph on paleolithic b-boyin might explain that.

some ugly ish:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/blue.jpg

some criticism will warm my heart.
I&#39;ve seen you post shit letters like this a lot now I&#39;ll say something it is ugly and shitty as do simple block/bubble letters.

[Socrates]

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202136099.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202136097.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202136095.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202876386.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202876388.jpg

[KoreTwo]

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/Voltron.jpg

For the voltron battle. Crits?

Baper: Nice stuff, really like the R&#39;s... Looks like cow udders.. o.O
Truth: Good job.

[KoreTwo]

Socrates: That is some sick shit... Really like that goblin charac in orange.

[Code]

KoreTwo= I am not really feelin it the R and the N are really wierd, and the 3d seems off, but i like the effect you put on the 3d :)

Socrates= Love it, really dope

Furious= Man i dont know why i love that stlyle but i do lol, but dont hide the P so much.

Truth= Nice character :)

K, here i tried my best to add a nice shadow, had to have my sister help so what do you all think :)

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/9324/scan0008zt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Bowser]

the first realistic thing I&#39;ve ever drawn.....crits please
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n169/WoodenFoot/11-11-2006082032AM.jpg

[Code]

its nice, not really feelin the letters to the left of it, but its nice :) Also if you are going to post a pic always try to crit the people above you :)

[obseen]

does anyone know what happened to niccsacc?
i really miss that guy

[Bowser]

well Code your shadow doesnt look bad at all I thin the N nedds a little work tho, it looks a little different

[alive]

Originally posted by meetermaid+Nov 10 2006, 10:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (meetermaid @ Nov 10 2006, 10:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Nov 10 2006, 06:45 PM


peyg all dope, but i swear ive seen it all before?


i agree, it&#39;s all pretty common styles, reminds me of eyes in toronto (not sure if i&#39;m calling a bite, i&#39;ll leave it at a &#39;reminder&#39;..) but hot shit nonetheless.










nvstyles :ph34r: [/b][/quote]
my bad cezr, sry.

actually i meant that id seen that before from peyg, i dont think its a very common style at all, at least not around here.

ASB, much better. should be a good battle.


peace

[Code]

Originally posted by Bowser@Nov 11 2006, 08:38 AM
well Code your shadow doesnt look bad at all I thin the N nedds a little work tho, it looks a little different
ty very much for your critz, but may you tell me why its a little awkward is it straighter than the other letters, wider, or is it just a feeling :)

[Toyminater]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Nov 11 2006, 12:24 AM
bahhh&#33; I can&#39;t color. I even sucked at coloring back in schoolio with crayolas. That was a billion years ago when dinosaurs roamed the earth and me and the other cavemen would bust out the cardboard and have pop&#39;n lock competitions untill the saber toothed tigers came and ate one of us, and then I was like "Oh snap, that dude got his shit bit off... Lets bounce. I got a roast pig back at the crib."

etc...
Hahahahaha man I need a good laugh :lol:

[FIN one]

Originally posted by FIN one@Nov 10 2006, 11:58 AM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1796/sta70993mz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/2038/sta70991jo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just taking your advice,havent done anything new yet. crits?
last bump tll i move on to something new

[furious]

NIL. telling me to do something completely different than what ive been doing isnt criticism. thanks for even looking at it though. they started off simple block letters, still are simple, just tweaked them a little and fattened parts and whatnot, went for the childish look on purpose. i know theyre not like hot technical letters or like clean simples with style, i also know theyre not random ugly unorganized letters, but i KNOW they came out as the general idea i had in my head, so im happy with them and im not gonna take your advice and just start over with random blocks and simples just because one kid in particular thinks its ugly. i still need work but dont expect me to change the whole style ive been working on just cuz you dont like it.

KORETWO, thanks. fatten your letters and make them the same size. the vol has potential but your r and n need some work, make the lines straighter or cleaner. dont focus so much ol coloring cuz alot of times that spoils the potential the letters could have had.

ACON, theres like a sharp edge on the side of your "o", get rid of that, round it out. your drop shadows off right now but i can tell in a couple months youll probably have some clean simples if you keep working at it. the a looks good.

[krazzie_ammo]

Remeber KISS - Keep It Simple Stupid :)

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4749/54sh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[furious]

letters are comin along nice craze. do a full voltron simple and put a nice outline around it and im sure itll get mad votes

[-MaCKiE-]

craze.. u cud turn that voltron tag into a dope karak soo easy..


http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9821/leanonekf2.jpg


used sky 5 coulorin tut coz i suck at coulorin.. crits?

[krazzie_ammo]

voltron tag into a character? how? :S

mackie...im not so sure about the letters. its a bit uneven, the width of the letters are not consistent. and check out the "New 2 Graff" thread, sky_5 has a tutorial on that type of fill.

[ras]

fin one ... i reallly like the last one

mackie i aint feeling that one .. wut dus it say

new throwies..

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9141/dub10dw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits are welcome ...

[krazzie_ammo]

lfc? tut tut, bcfc won today :)

dubb....those bubbles, you should do them all the way around the outline. for the blue, i cant tell the first letter is a D.

[wood]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/blackbook-1.jpg


give all the crit

[TricksForKids]

too much colour wood, your letters arent there yet, i was drunk last night and tried doing a character....haha i thought you all deserved a good laugh...so heres my attempt at a character

PEace

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4707/bawkcharacteree9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and bump my slob for some more crits

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/9306/slopcolouredfinalfl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[wood]

tell me all


http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/10-24-2006030533pm2.jpg

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/10-03-2006092353pm2.jpg

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/10-01-2006042653pm.jpg

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/colorg.jpg

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/10-03-2006040054pm2.jpg

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/10-03-2006035758pm2.jpg

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/graff.jpg

http://s59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/th_07-06-2006054955PM.jpg


give me all advice and opinions

[ras]

furious...hah...lfc beat birmingham dint they ... i think they did...i hate nafti for injuring sissoko hahaha :P

back to topic...

Wood .. its really hard to work out what your stuff says...i recommend using simpler colours and simpler letter&#39;s

sumthing i just did ...

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/1471/dub11ck9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits are welcome fanks

[krazzie_ammo]

lol, and bellamy missed a penalty. i was there&#33;

dayymmm dub, you ideas are so fresh. but you could you improve you handstyleizm.

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 11 2006, 01:18 PM
too much colour wood, your letters arent there yet, i was drunk last night and tried doing a character....haha i thought you all deserved a good laugh...so heres my attempt at a character

PEace

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4707/bawkcharacteree9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and bump my slob for some more crits

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/9306/slopcolouredfinalfl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump

go simpler ras

[krazzie_ammo]

bawk - that karak is naiceee :)

i was going through some of my old stuff and found this...
http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/5939/55ih1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this was before i got into graff....took me 3 months of english lessons :rolleyes:

[xkespx]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h231/xkespx/Image0000.jpg

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h231/xkespx/Image005.jpg

crits would be greatll appreciated

[TricksForKids]

go stub your toe, hows that for "Crits"

[trashhh]

^^haha... dont do a tag and add flames, drips etc its toy as fuck and looks wack

[krazzie_ammo]

thats the best crits ive heard in a long time :P

kesp - simple simple simple blockbuster simple simple simple blockbuster simple simple simple blockbuster simple simple simple blockbuster.

[alive]

chill my man tricks.
he doesnt mean it kesp, it just gets fuckin annoying to have to say the same thing over and over a billion fucking times.

throw out every color marker you own. pick up a pencil and a black pen.
draw us block letters. no style. basic basic basic. no curves. just fit each letter into a square. listen to us, do what we say, and well help u get good. otherwise fuck off.

and think about this, if ur not willing to get arrested for this, leave now. if ur not willing to at some point devote your LIFE to this, leave now.

dont paint till we tell u ur ready.

now hurry home, practice and read up on your history son.



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thats mad trippy krazzie. is it ur fingerprint?
and tricks, i love it.


peace.

[krazzie_ammo]

lol&#33; nahhh, i just started with some cirlces and three months later thats what i came up with :S im not sure if i like it but it took a long time so i kept it.

[littlerocky]

New Shit New Name - SMUG
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/4985/bestsketchyd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sketch
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/4707/bestns3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
final
reads SMUG crits and comment please

[krazzie_ammo]

smug - i like your letters, but your G looks like a C or an E.

can&#39;t post without a picture <_<
http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/5649/56rz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[TricksForKids]

I&#39;d prefer if you didnt write smug, one of the best up and comign writers in toronto writes smug....but whatever, its your choice, your potential is there...but theres only one smug for me

craze looking alright man, keep it up, try experiemnting with making your eltters flow better together, good for simples though

[ras]

craze i like your stuff

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4783/dub12ao8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sumthin new...crits and comments please ;)

[littlerocky]

werd tricks yeah smugs the only thing i can really write right now without completly changing..it was kidna a forced change not optional. and i live in buff which i guess is somewhat close to toronto but i dont think there will be a problem thanks.

[krazzie_ammo]

i&#39;m trying to experiment, but i dunno what to do :S

dub - those trains are hot&#33;&#33;&#33; but work on your letters a bit more

[gift]

Originally posted by gift@Nov 8 2006, 11:55 PM
loer- yeah man. that o looks like a u. if you want it to look like one line instead of a complete circle, but the cut on the side, not right on the top.


here&#39;s some of mine. haven&#39;t sketched in a while...

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/anthony-straight-redo.jpg

the y&#39;s fucked up bad. but i kind of like the style.

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/anthony-sketch1-license.jpg


http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/rachel-heart-jpg.jpg


did some names for a friend&#39;s kids. tell me what you think.
buuuuuuump for crits.

[afek]

Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Nov 10 2006, 05:39 PM
cezr...why do you post in the toy section haha :P :rolleyes:
he can give advice and hes a mod for this forum


its nice to have some one with experiece on here i hate how ppl give advice when they dont know wat there talking about&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;


just pisses me off

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Nov 11 2006, 04:46 PM
craze i like your stuff

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4783/dub12ao8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sumthin new...crits and comments please ;)
at the bottom of the page :angry: lol

crits are welcome thanks... ;)

[littlerocky]

Originally posted by littlerocky@Nov 11 2006, 04:37 PM
New Shit New Name - SMUG
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/4985/bestsketchyd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sketch
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/4707/bestns3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
final
reads SMUG crits and comment please
bump cuz of bottom of page last time
and dub work on the letters trains are nice hto

[Socrates]

the letters are horrid as far as i can see
but the trains are pretty nice, just get rid of the joint its makes you look like a child

and seriosuly dont write smug, he&#39;s ill as fuck
but get rid of the add-ons i dont like your letters at all, i think you should work on em more

oh and bump just because

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202136099.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202136097.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202136095.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202876386.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/12928473/202876388.jpg

[trashhh]

Originally posted by ras+Nov 11 2006, 04:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Nov 11 2006, 04:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Nov 11 2006, 04:46 PM
craze i like your stuff

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/4783/dub12ao8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sumthin new...crits and comments please ;)
at the bottom of the page :angry: lol

crits are welcome thanks... ;) [/b][/quote]
nice idea with the trains n uve done it well, but they cover the letters too much

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 11 2006, 04:41 PM

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/5649/56rz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
bump