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ThickGravy
11-11-2006, 05:09 PM
The hilo was for my friend ahaha but thanks for the crits.

fuckthatgame
11-11-2006, 05:25 PM
doin a canvas for a kid
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1894/p1010057ed4.jpg

C3ZR ONE
11-11-2006, 05:27 PM
Tight shit Socrates and Tricks.

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8079/im000376qo1.jpg

I know, I know... The letters are too thin. :(

lost_for_evex
11-11-2006, 05:32 PM
the letters r 2 thin ...


-_-

C3ZR ONE
11-11-2006, 05:37 PM
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Nov 11 2006, 06:32 PM
the letters r 2 thin ...


-_-
Asswipe... :lol:

TricksForKids
11-11-2006, 05:41 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Nov 11 2006, 02:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids &#064; Nov 11 2006, 02:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Nov 11 2006, 01:18 PM
too much colour wood, your letters arent there yet, i was drunk last night and tried doing a character....haha i thought you all deserved a good laugh...so heres my attempt at a character

PEace

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4707/bawkcharacteree9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and bump my slob for some more crits

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/9306/slopcolouredfinalfl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump

go simpler ras [/b][/quote]
Bump cuz im rugged like that :P


mmm look cezr sketched letters, i should take a picture :D, but ah he already has for me, you know you got the structure down, dunno if little ol me should be giving the big MOD crits, but youll have to take em

work with that that R it just aint flowin for me, the letters are too thin, specially the C in case you didnt notice, lovin the E, the Z looks like it has one too many legs, and the C is dope just really thin

peace muffin

C3ZR ONE
11-11-2006, 05:54 PM
Good crit tricks. I really like the first flick. The second one isn&#39;t one of my favorites of yours, but it&#39;s solid. One thing I like about your style is it&#39;s so comepletely your own. You can spot who&#39;s sketch that is right off. Your handyrock too. Props on that.

YarHarHar
11-11-2006, 07:26 PM
good shit tricks but i dont get the character one??
but the slobs lookin dope as usual

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2054.jpg
had a little bleeding during drawing..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2060.jpg
decided to change the r for you guys... better?

KoreTwo
11-11-2006, 07:29 PM
Originally posted by KoreTwo@Nov 11 2006, 06:39 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/Voltron.jpg


Bump for more crits.

Jar: Love the fill on the second one&#33;

Cezr: Nice Nice Nice. Letter are kinda thin though....

bouncingsoul
11-11-2006, 07:31 PM
Ay, a little better but now it doesn&#39;t seem to fit the style... But that can be fixed eventually... And did you get a nosebleed or something in the middle of a sketch? That musta sucked haha

myl
11-11-2006, 09:12 PM
i think thats india ink...

kore do straight letters, not that stuff

YarHarHar
11-11-2006, 09:20 PM
myl if your talking bout mine..its not ink i got a nose bleed while i was sketchin it an jus spread it wiht a toothpick..

sky 5
11-11-2006, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by &#045;MaCKiE&#045;@Nov 11 2006, 11:31 AM
craze.. u cud turn that voltron tag into a dope karak soo easy..


http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9821/leanonekf2.jpg


used sky 5 coulorin tut coz i suck at coulorin.. crits?
mack - this fill (for me) has to be done in a series of steps and you dont decide where to put the second fill color or how thick or thin it gets, that part is up to your letters . . . it looks like you tried to do everythin all in one step but atleast for me it dont work that way . . i layer, layer again, then layer again(outline the 2nd layer color w/ some twists) . . first couple steps you dont knwo how it is gonna turn out but in the end if you followed your letters and the steps and not your imagination (how you see the fill in your head complete before you even started) then you should be alright . . . im sure you consciously or unconsciously learned somethin in your first sketch, next one is only going to come easier and look better . . . pm me if you want and we can go over each step . . . stay up man


ps - nice to see big Cezr up in the mix . . .

Truth.
11-11-2006, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 11 2006, 08:26 PM
good shit tricks but i dont get the character one??
but the slobs lookin dope as usual

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2054.jpg
had a little bleeding during drawing..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2060.jpg
decided to change the r for you guys... better?
your J looks way too much like a D, and the R doesnt really flow with the J and A, maybe its too big. try making it the same size as the other letters.

TricksForKids
11-11-2006, 11:23 PM
his J looks like a D if your a fan of shitty letters...but if you&#39;re not...which im not...then his J is killing it

i like your capital R&#39;s more, shit had more style, not gunna lie, keep up the nosebleeds, shits rugged haha

i dont know where the fucking character came from, might try my hand at another one right now

Peace

bouncingsoul
11-11-2006, 11:33 PM
Yeah, that thing was actually pretty good... I&#39;m about 3/4 done inking that sketch... I don&#39;t have the camera right now so flicks tomorrow or later tonight maybe

myl
11-11-2006, 11:34 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 11 2006, 10:20 PM
myl if your talking bout mine..its not ink i got a nose bleed while i was sketchin it an jus spread it wiht a toothpick..
ha yeah im retarded...i honestly didnt even notice the "bloody nose&#33;" or what you had written underneath the flick...damn im dumb

Slushi
11-11-2006, 11:39 PM
Keep your finger outa there.

LOER1
11-11-2006, 11:57 PM
JAR - i happen to like it the way it is, the only thing that bothers me a little is capital R, i think you should drop that leg down

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p127/ldog150/Picture021.jpg

can i get some crits please

Truth.
11-12-2006, 12:08 AM
Cool, nuice and simple, always make sure the letters are same widths and size

myl
11-12-2006, 12:09 AM
uh loer...i think that E needs some work...i dont like how its being squeezed down in the front


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/sf.jpg

just made this throw on my computer...any crits?

Truth.
11-12-2006, 12:09 AM
is it supposed to say SS or SE?

coloured tweedle dee in, gunna make him a sticker. sorry about the extremely blurry photo

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/tweeds.jpg

myl
11-12-2006, 12:11 AM
SF

thats just how i do my Fs

Truth.
11-12-2006, 12:13 AM
hmm, well i think u shud try define it more cause i cant make an F out of that...

fuckthatgame
11-12-2006, 12:15 AM
so no critz on mine huh

myl
11-12-2006, 12:17 AM
actually i dont know how you cant make an F out...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/sf3.jpg

but anyway heres a different version without that line in the F

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/sf2.jpg

i think i like this one better anyway

Truth.
11-12-2006, 12:21 AM
yeah that looks alot more like an F, the line makes it look like another S

in that last one i really like the S, but think the horixontal bars on the F are to wide.

wood
11-12-2006, 12:53 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/10-24-2006030533pm2.jpg


lemme have it crits

lost_for_evex
11-12-2006, 01:53 AM
it looks like puke.

YarHarHar
11-12-2006, 01:56 AM
holy shit wood you need to calm that down man its just a blotch of color you need to get some sort of letter structure down before you start getting crazy with the fills...i cant make out one letter..but by the tag it says ric? rid? i dono

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2061.jpg
anyways havent attempted a wildstyle in a long time so i did a quick one

umop 3pisdn
11-12-2006, 01:58 AM
mine were wrong place sorry

d_g
11-12-2006, 03:18 AM
Jar, I really like that, I would put a bottom right leg on the &#39;R&#39; if you know what I mean, to fill some space and to make it look a little less like a &#39;P&#39; (sorry, I know everyone has been giving you shit about your letters being confusing haha).

I would also define/simplify the &#39;a&#39; a little, not because it&#39;s hard to tell it&#39;s an &#39;a&#39; but just because it&#39;s more &#39;wildstyle&#39; compared to the &#39;J&#39; and &#39;r&#39;.

And the sketch is on a bet of a weird slightly off horizontal angle, but that&#39;s just me being picky :P.

EDIT:

Just finished this, first page in my first blackbook. Hopefully something to look back on later.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch10.jpg

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 05:35 AM
drast - good use of colours but maybe you should have done thoes red fades all the way around the force field. and im not so sure about those white bits in the 3d, they are not consistent.

ras
11-12-2006, 08:13 AM
drast i like the colour selection u got ...
yarharhar .... you fading is awesome ...

sumthing i just did....looked at sky5&#39;s filling turiorial ... kinda helped...just experimenting...

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8889/dub13io2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits are welcome ... thanks ;)

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 08:53 AM
yo dub - i think that type of fill suits more of a semi-wildstyle. work on your letters a bit more :)

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3417/57ue9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

TricksForKids
11-12-2006, 09:05 AM
craze that bottom left craze is a sweet style for a throwup, you should develop that,w ood, chill out man, like, what the hell does that even say? what goes through your mind when you draw that? draw the letters on your keyboard, exactly how they look...then post it up, and jar oooo baby, thats one of the freshesht things ive seen you do, it flows so well, keep it up

ras
11-12-2006, 09:10 AM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 12 2006, 09:13 AM
drast i like the colour selection u got ...
yarharhar .... you fading is awesome ...

sumthing i just did....looked at sky5&#39;s filling turiorial ... kinda helped...just experimenting...

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8889/dub13io2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits are welcome ... thanks ;)
:angry: Arrrgh bottom of the page 2 times in a row now :angry: :blink:

:P

crits please haha thanks

Slushi
11-12-2006, 09:12 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 12 2006, 09:53 AM
yo dub - i think that type of fill suits more of a semi-wildstyle. work on your letters a bit more :)

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3417/57ue9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
Paint. Now.


http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/1690/picture21wl1.jpg
my voltron entry

fuckthatgame
11-12-2006, 09:20 AM
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1894/p1010057ed4.jpg

toon_dragon
11-12-2006, 09:39 AM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 11 2006, 08:26 PM

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2054.jpg
had a little bleeding during drawing..

blood the new kind of ink huh? ewwh&#33; ha, nice*

uhhh
11-12-2006, 10:21 AM
no pencils...
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-012S.jpg
crits please.

fuckthatgame
11-12-2006, 10:22 AM
wheres the 3d? looks a lil off without 36 or anything else

LAER
11-12-2006, 10:39 AM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/5518/dsc0235bj2.jpg
crits? jus started writing a couple months ago.

bouncingsoul
11-12-2006, 10:52 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0308.jpg

ras
11-12-2006, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 12 2006, 11:52 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0308.jpg
Hell im really likein the outline on that one &#33; ;) sooo fresh ...

ASB_ONE
11-12-2006, 10:57 AM
thats fucn dope.

myl
11-12-2006, 11:00 AM
you dont have to quote it if youre the one posting right under it...

but yeah i like the outline, very interesting E, never seen any like it

poepomhoog1
11-12-2006, 11:01 AM
Laer I would loose the arrows or find a better way to place them
And the size of the e and the r a bit big...wich kinda throws of the balance

Bouncingsoul....sweet


Michel21...homies birthday..critz??
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7685/michel1fs0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bouncingsoul
11-12-2006, 11:10 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0309.jpg

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 11:41 AM
poepomhoog1 - the letters are nice, work on the M.

bouncingsoul - great as ever, try to distinguish the W a bit more.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1465/58vb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

TricksForKids
11-12-2006, 11:45 AM
W and S are my favourite letters bounce, but that K needs some work as does the N, and they both need to be bigger, plus make the S connect to the rest of your shit, at least its not in penicl though:D haha

craze that shits nice, if you did it really clean and fairly big with paint it would look bangin, especially in that color scheme

michel 21 i like the c and h thats it, rest is a little bit too hectic, oh the 21 is simple and nice too"

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 11:46 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 12 2006, 12:41 PM
poepomhoog1 - the letters are nice, work on the M.

bouncingsoul - great as ever, try to distinguish the W a bit more.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1465/58vb1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
bump from bottom of the page :rolleyes:

poepomhoog1
11-12-2006, 11:56 AM
thanx for the critz both.

krazzie ammo real dope...the blue part on the bottom of the R just bugs me a lil don&#39;t know why

Code
11-12-2006, 11:58 AM
Craze= I actully like it, but not really feelin how the letters are set up tho, i dont like the over lapping colors, but either way your improving i think :)

Bouncing Soul= Man that piece is amazing, love it, just not feelin the E it kind of looks like an F with three sticks instead of two lol :) Either way GJ

K here i tried to work more on my shadow of course, and trying to improve on the letters so here you all go :)

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6827/scan0009wd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz please

LAER
11-12-2006, 12:05 PM
i dont really know about coloring and wat is right or wrong.

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 12:14 PM
acon - please work on your tag. take a couple of days out and practise practise practise&#33; it will help improve your throws and pieces aswell :)

Code
11-12-2006, 12:18 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 12 2006, 01:14 PM
acon - please work on your tag. take a couple of days out and practise practise practise&#33; it will help improve your throws and pieces aswell :)
lol, tags unfortainetly are not my thing dont have the first clue on how to even start lol

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 12:41 PM
lol, what i did was get line paper and do 5/6 tags per line and it will improve slowly. i will try and find a picture if it :)

Code
11-12-2006, 12:59 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 12 2006, 01:41 PM
lol, what i did was get line paper and do 5/6 tags per line and it will improve slowly. i will try and find a picture if it :)
k ty :)

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 01:14 PM
http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/9897/59zc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i still haven&#39;t finished this but you get my drift...
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/3762/60ap7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
eurgh...berol broad&#39;s are so shit they make me want to cry.
crits?

nemzone
11-12-2006, 01:20 PM
that would of driven me CRAZE doin all them tags lol. i dno wat im thinkn bout that style, finish it and il see. and y do u never write the full word these days??

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/5333/img140ph5.jpg
for the razmo battle
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3358/img139ms4.jpg
lil fuckabout

bouncingsoul
11-12-2006, 01:46 PM
bump these


http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0308.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0309.jpg

Nemz they look solid. That second one looks good like a fusion of your new style and your older style. The O in Razmo looks a little small though

furious
11-12-2006, 01:49 PM
bouncer your first one looks reallll clean, like the outline alot. second one looks like "kneis" fatten the lower leg on the k a little.

nemz the second one is real hot, give it a nice little fill it&#39;ll look good

ras
11-12-2006, 01:52 PM
Craze...Didnt u get bored doin aaaaaaaaaall them tags lol ;)

Nemzone .... i really like the 2nd one ...

sumthing shit i just did :huh: ....i really need help on new letter&#39;s...how can i improve on them

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2097/dub14ey1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments are welcome thanks ;)

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 01:57 PM
nah not really, i normally watch tv or something whilst doing it...ive only done 2 pages.

nemz you crazy mofo, they are brilliant&#33;

dub - try doing them all in upper or lower case. keep them the same height :)

YarHarHar
11-12-2006, 02:29 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 12 2006, 02:56 AM


http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2061.jpg
anyways havent attempted a wildstyle in a long time so i did a quick one
bumpppppppp

nems i liked the sit you posted when ou first started posting

ras i can only make out the d...the other letters are kinda wack..kinda really wack

Code
11-12-2006, 02:38 PM
Originally posted by Code@Nov 12 2006, 12:58 PM
Craze= I actully like it, but not really feelin how the letters are set up tho, i dont like the over lapping colors, but either way your improving i think :)

Bouncing Soul= Man that piece is amazing, love it, just not feelin the E it kind of looks like an F with three sticks instead of two lol :) Either way GJ

K here i tried to work more on my shadow of course, and trying to improve on the letters so here you all go :)

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6827/scan0009wd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz please
YarHarHar= I really like it, but not feelin the R kind of hard to make out, but the fill is dope

Ras= Work on that letter structure, as soon as you nail that you will be gold :), also the B is a bit wierd, dont really like it


Bump critz please

bouncingsoul
11-12-2006, 02:45 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0310.jpg

furious
11-12-2006, 02:57 PM
Originally posted by furious@Nov 11 2006, 12:51 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/blue.jpg
bumpsta didnt breally get any crits on this. ill post a new sketch later
but tell me what you think of this one

jar, PLEEEEASE make that r look more like an r, it REALLY looks like a p and sorta ruins the piece for me. otherwise i think its reallly sick.

nemzone
11-12-2006, 02:57 PM
jar i love it m8, i can see it easily cuz i no wat im lookin for, but if i never new wat it said id have a lil trouble. tho i always love ur flicks. n thanx for every1s comments, bottom one seems to be the best one out of my 2 lol :D

Code
11-12-2006, 03:02 PM
Furious= danm very nice, but like i said dont hide that P show it :) If you can perfect that style you will be gold :)

Soul= Man that outline is so danm complex so i am going to go with fucking amazing, but in my oppinion maybe specify your letters more :)


Lol sorry to ask but may i get a crit on my stuff :) , In that sketch i tryed to improve the shadow so how did i do :)

ras
11-12-2006, 03:05 PM
Something else i just did....fucking shit :( i aint really hitting it today :(

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/9895/dub15rz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dunno why i put the crown above the pencil...its shud be above the marker hehe...

ThickGravy
11-12-2006, 03:27 PM
^^ I thought that was a shoe with some pens and pencils in it at first but then i found somewhat of a shape of a letters.

Anyways, heres a simple I did.

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o59/musterdoner/SeeSketches014.jpg

Not feeling the T or the M as much.

Didnt have enuff space for the whole thing (Musterd).

LAER
11-12-2006, 03:32 PM
Originally posted by LAER@Nov 12 2006, 11:39 AM
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/5518/dsc0235bj2.jpg
crits? jus started writing a couple months ago.
I like it MUST, the S looks a little funny tho... bump for crits

Code
11-12-2006, 03:34 PM
ThickGravy= I like it, really simple, but you got to work on the S doesent go with the flow, and keep all your letters all the same size.

Ras= I like it better than some of your other pieces, but your B is still a little wierd. But either way nice job.

Guys if your going to post a pic please crit the people above you just makes sense :)

Sumoe
11-12-2006, 03:34 PM
good start but lose the arrows and make your letters all the same size.

d_g
11-12-2006, 03:41 PM
Originally posted by d_g@Nov 12 2006, 09:18 PM
Just finished this, first page in my first blackbook. Hopefully something to look back on later.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch10.jpg
Buuuuuuuump.

LAER
11-12-2006, 03:43 PM
i like it its nice and simple.

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 03:43 PM
dub - the black fill kinda hids the structure of the letters.

Musterd -im loving the simplicity :)

Syren
11-12-2006, 03:58 PM
u no i should stop getting kicked off the blackbook forums and just start posting here anyway :P do u think doin some simples for a while will help my lettering?

krazzie_ammo
11-12-2006, 04:05 PM
ermm...."yes" seems to easy off an answer.

furious
11-12-2006, 04:09 PM
Originally posted by d_g+Nov 12 2006, 04:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Nov 12 2006, 04:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Nov 12 2006, 09:18 PM
Just finished this, first page in my first blackbook. Hopefully something to look back on later.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch10.jpg
Buuuuuuuump. [/b][/quote]
drast, lookin reallll good, cant really think of anything to tell you to improve. feelin it though.

Guerrilla876
11-12-2006, 04:11 PM
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l99/cjohnson816/graff/voltrongraff2.jpg


entered into &#39;dat &#39;dere lil&#39;o sketch battle. i think i&#39;ve improved & i haven&#39;t posted in a while. so . . . you know . . . critz? ;)

Syren
11-12-2006, 04:29 PM
Luckily i have a sense of humor

aces
11-12-2006, 04:33 PM
Well just posting my progress over the last year. Hopefully it will motivate you even if you suck you can get better by working at it. Look at the first pic and you will understand.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118418851_382078162_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118419185_382079314_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118418576_382077233_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118418127_382075674_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118418332_382076372_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118418462_382076823_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118415564_382066920_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118415430_382066455_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118416896_382071464_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118416802_382071147_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118416350_382069612_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118417914_382074937_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118416981_382071749_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118415118_382065391_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118414981_382064932_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118415216_382065736_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118414837_382064464_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118415653_382067220_0.jpg

aces
11-12-2006, 04:33 PM
Continuing last post…

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118415985_382068356_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118417144_382072290_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118417835_382074678_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118417688_382074176_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118414703_382063999_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118418730_382077753_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118422587_382090988_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118422912_382092090_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118423663_382094635_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118423552_382094267_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118420298_382083174_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118423343_382093536_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118420056_382082347_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118420164_382082713_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/118422348_382090180_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/116445366_375249294_0.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/117172772_377745636_0.jpg

YarHarHar
11-12-2006, 04:36 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2062.jpg
another

mabey ill post my deveopment to...

aces
11-12-2006, 04:39 PM
I&#39;m really liking the one on the right. The cracks are good in the other one too but the R is a little weird. Maybe try to add some curve to it to make it fit with the other letters.

uhhh
11-12-2006, 04:39 PM
aces-damn. i was off here for a few weeks and you got good. i really like your new style. it reminds me a litlle of sky 5 but far from a bite. nice work.

jar-i really really like that blue and green piece.

krysnum1
11-12-2006, 04:45 PM
aye, what do you guys use for your outlines. should I use a reg. bic pen or a thin sharpie. ive kinda been debating cause the sharpie lines look to bleedy. and the pen lined are kinda thin...

Guerrilla876
11-12-2006, 04:48 PM
sharpies. :o

unheard of. one does not just stumble onto outlining a piece with
"sharpies". do you have any place in your city/town to get markers like deco or some type of paint markers? even painters would work. if not . . . then you&#39;re shit outta luck.

d_g
11-12-2006, 04:52 PM
I think sharpies are fine for outlining. I use them then just clean up any little mistakes with a fineline black.

nemzone
11-12-2006, 04:54 PM
mate, once u get the feel for sharpies they work a dream&#33; i love sharpies n bic markers. im to cheap to go buy some fuckin prismas, fuck tht shit&#33; I >3 SHARPIES&#33;&#33;&#33; lol. ul get em controlled so u wont have blotches everywhere eventually

also jar - i want to see u progress wiv the style on the right, i love it&#33;

aces
11-12-2006, 04:57 PM
Originally posted by Guerrilla876@Nov 12 2006, 06:48 PM
sharpies. :o

unheard of. one does not just stumble onto outlining a piece with
"sharpies". do you have any place in your city/town to get markers like deco or some type of paint markers? even painters would work. if not . . . then you&#39;re shit outta luck.
I belive that sky uses sharpies to outline and his shit never comes out bad. Yea they do take a little getting used to and I still am but they are good none the less.

YarHarHar
11-12-2006, 04:59 PM
sharpies dont bleed..thats what i use for black or black deco

anways development...man ive gone throguh a fuck load of names

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1198.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1199.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1203.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0075.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0178.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0192.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0295.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0301.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0709.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0740.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0760.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0850.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0871.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1085.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1336.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1700.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1976.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2053.jpg


obviously alot of sketches inbetween those..to many to post

d_g
11-12-2006, 05:00 PM
Oh yeah, just don&#39;t use the fucking ghetto sharpies that like dollar store asian shops sell. They&#39;re fucking useless. That&#39;s all that I have to colour sketches at the moment, gonna get some prismas or something soon I think.

YarHarHar
11-12-2006, 05:01 PM
nems there was no progression wiht that one..i jus did it..pencile dit in liek 10 minutes

aces
11-12-2006, 05:14 PM
I think he means he want&#39;s to see you bring it further like use that as your style instead of the one you got goin now. Also WOW you&#39;ve come a long way.

Guerrilla876
11-12-2006, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by aces+Nov 12 2006, 05:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Nov 12 2006, 05:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Guerrilla876@Nov 12 2006, 06:48 PM
sharpies.Â* :o

unheard of. one does not just stumble onto outlining a piece with
"sharpies". do you have any place in your city/town to get markers like deco or some type of paint markers? even painters would work. if not . . . then you&#39;re shit outta luck.
I belive that sky uses sharpies to outline and his shit never comes out bad. Yea they do take a little getting used to and I still am but they are good none the less. [/b][/quote]
depends on how you use them. i&#39;d never seen any of his work. my fault for generalizing that everyone who uses them makes their &#39;ish come out bad.. so in that, i choose to say sorry. just a smart ass comment where i didn&#39;t think before i posted. ;)

aces
11-12-2006, 05:32 PM
Apology accepted&#33;&#33;&#33;

-testify-
11-12-2006, 05:37 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6018/bleehqw8.png
on paper this time

Apoc Dozer
11-12-2006, 05:39 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/837/bdram3434dx8.png (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3896/bluedhv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5373/bluedrammu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7992/greendramup0.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3800/nbluegram3sx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yeah I don&#39;t know what I&#39;m doing but I need some tips (I would crit on others but I don&#39;t know shit)

Truth.
11-12-2006, 05:47 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Nov 12 2006, 06:37 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6018/bleehqw8.png
on paper this time
try making the legs smaller and fatter, see how that looks.

7case
11-12-2006, 05:55 PM
Messing with some new names, army is one of them, figured i would hook up some remeberance day thing considering im using the name army and all, threw it together kinda qucik, meh w/e

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/kyle-G/remberanceday.jpg

Guerrilla876
11-12-2006, 06:58 PM
Originally posted by 7case@Nov 12 2006, 06:55 PM
Messing with some new names, army is one of them, figured i would hook up some remeberance day thing considering im using the name army and all, threw it together kinda qucik, meh w/e

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/kyle-G/remberanceday.jpg
first of all . . . i like the whole theme ;

butt of course, here&#39;sz the critisizim, your name kind of blends into the background [even if you finished this all quickly] you want your name to stick out but being able to keep your background as eye-candy to add to your name. joo know what i mean? anyways, your characters are great, keep that up. but all of this was my suggestions. keep practicing, add more color, and keep the background simple until you develop more letter structure. hope i helped somewhat.

Bowser
11-12-2006, 06:59 PM
oh-no MF feet

DnK/eeK
11-12-2006, 07:07 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSC00009.jpg

krysnum1
11-12-2006, 07:29 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7062/img1992ss8.jpg

Im doing soem real simple simples. im working on somehitng to put on my first train.

meaner1
11-12-2006, 08:04 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/4232/meanertagly5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits comments?

myl
11-12-2006, 08:06 PM
waste of stickers

do simple letters and also stick to paper

beone
11-12-2006, 08:30 PM
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/260105.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/260107.jpg

DnK/eeK
11-12-2006, 08:32 PM
Originally posted by DnK/eeK@Nov 12 2006, 08:07 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSC00009.jpg
bump for critz

Guerrilla876
11-12-2006, 08:34 PM
Originally posted by Guerrilla876@Nov 12 2006, 05:11 PM
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l99/cjohnson816/graff/voltrongraff2.jpg


entered into &#39;dat &#39;dere lil&#39;o sketch battle. i think i&#39;ve improved & i haven&#39;t posted in a while. so . . . you know . . . critz? ;)
still wantin&#39; critz for this too.

beone
11-12-2006, 08:37 PM
k so give some fucking crits if u want some

num i like it color it and try to not fuck it up but move the karak closer or add more stuff

geurilla its good and i love that can

acne fk
11-12-2006, 08:54 PM
http://i15.tinypic.com/2mfyxol.jpg
fisrt attempt at wildstyle critz please?

meaner1
11-12-2006, 08:56 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5436/yeeyeesm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us) crits?

Slushi
11-12-2006, 08:58 PM
^^^^ Simpler

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/1690/picture21wl1.jpg
Crytz

Hot_Pocket
11-12-2006, 09:00 PM
Meaner 1, your pic is backwards

Acne, you have too many arrows, and I&#39;m not a big fan of your handy

Guerilla, I like it but your T looks a lot like another R

DNK/EEK, I like that style, but your grim reaper looks obese.

Slushi, get a better picture, I can&#39;t really see it but it looks sexy from what I can tell

Equinox
11-12-2006, 09:15 PM
Some Random&#39;izms...

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/1231/bubbleletterom5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4884/goodenoxthrowppx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8296/karakdarknessxa7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

The rough idea
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9154/karakpoorhs9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
To A Unfinished ink sketch
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/695/karakbetterxf5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9668/enoxie3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


anyways critz would be awsume...



Meaner1: your pic is backwards :blink:

acne fk: not sure of the handys

Guerrilla876: thats fucking awsume, lovin that can....

myl
11-12-2006, 10:50 PM
Originally posted by meaner1@Nov 12 2006, 09:56 PM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5436/yeeyeesm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us) crits?
said it on the last page

simple letters

slEEt
11-12-2006, 10:54 PM
How about some crits...

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/588/img1744mediumdp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

near
11-12-2006, 11:06 PM
do i get the end of the page again?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/piecij.jpg

--SORE--
11-12-2006, 11:13 PM
I&#39;m sketching for only 2-3 months and i still only do black and white stuff. Crits plz, good or bad anything that can help me improve my shit.

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6553/1010062353bl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fube
11-12-2006, 11:48 PM
SORE : keep workin on structure, try some blockbusters, your letters lack consistancy(spelling) your in the same boat as me. your s has to meny extentions, your o could be mistaken for an a, and your R needs some help, it looks like its in a O&E sandwitch. but i do like the e.


ok now that i gave crit, i need some :rolleyes:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/tower.jpg

furious
11-12-2006, 11:58 PM
NUM- really feelin that, give it a dropshadow and an outline, lose the character it makes you look toy, your letters have way more potenial than your characters.

FUBE- if it says mower, i really like your letters. line em up better next time, guess you ran out of room. your handstyle needs work though.

somethin i cooked up this afternoon, criticism would be appreciated:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/brown.jpg

think i got the end of the page so expect a bump hah

Fube
11-13-2006, 12:12 AM
Originally posted by furious@Nov 13 2006, 12:58 AM
FUBE- if it says mower, i really like your letters. line em up better next time, guess you ran out of room. your handstyle needs work though.

close it says tower. guess i did come down a bit far with the t, and yes i ran out of space.

furious
11-13-2006, 12:15 AM
well i like your w and r, dont bend the sides of the t down so much, obviously i think it looks like an m hah.

bumpers; page ended. i want some critssszszsss
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/brown.jpg

Apoc Dozer
11-13-2006, 12:26 AM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/837/bdram3434dx8.png (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3896/bluedhv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5373/bluedrammu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7992/greendramup0.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3800/nbluegram3sx4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yeah I don&#39;t know what I&#39;m doing but I need some tips (I would crit on others but I don&#39;t know shit)

NiL
11-13-2006, 12:33 AM
Originally posted by furious+Nov 12 2006, 03:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (furious @ Nov 12 2006, 03:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-furious@Nov 11 2006, 12:51 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/blue.jpg
bumpsta didnt breally get any crits on this. ill post a new sketch later
but tell me what you think of this one

jar, PLEEEEASE make that r look more like an r, it REALLY looks like a p and sorta ruins the piece for me. otherwise i think its reallly sick. [/b][/quote]
Yeah like an &#39;R&#39; see your piece of shit R?

furious
11-13-2006, 12:35 AM
lets see some of your flicks NiL, im not one to beef but put up or shut up faggot

FEN the HEN
11-13-2006, 01:19 AM
BAPER that looks good i like it, and NIL ya, shut the fuck up

Fube
11-13-2006, 01:45 AM
Baper, 2 nice throwies. i would like to see them in some paint. :)

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/blue.jpg

to me all of these letters match well. but your p is kinda smushed.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/brown.jpg

i like this one a lot more then the blue one. evenly spaced. and all and all i think its a great throw up. the only thing i would change is the thickness of the cross mark on the A, i would make it a touch thinner.

ras
11-13-2006, 02:13 AM
Is the name Kep or Kept taken ? ...becuz i was thinkin off changing to that.... ;)

apoc dozer....i love the colours on it and the simplicity...

oh i just found on artcrimes that Kept is taken....how about Kep ?

entropy
11-13-2006, 03:41 AM
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p73/nasica22/firstpage-Sli.jpg

Page One of my first ever blackbook.
Been lurking for a while, working on simples (still there)
Any crits ?

d_g
11-13-2006, 04:35 AM
For one you could say that&#39;s not technically a black book because bb&#39;s are generally sketch books, but whatever, I&#39;m just picky.

I wouldn&#39;t call that a simple either.

Try writing your name on MSWord in a font called Impact (arial will work too if you don&#39;t have impact for some reason).

Then copy that out, freehand, in pencil, not coloring or 3D or anything at the moment, it&#39;s just a waste of your time and money.

Do that about 100 times then come back for more advice :P

LOER1
11-13-2006, 05:16 AM
baper- shits ill bro, i like it way better then the one in the blue

entropy
11-13-2006, 05:16 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Nov 13 2006, 05:35 AM
For one you could say that&#39;s not technically a black book because bb&#39;s are generally sketch books, but whatever, I&#39;m just picky.

I wouldn&#39;t call that a simple either.

Try writing your name on MSWord in a font called Impact (arial will work too if you don&#39;t have impact for some reason).

Then copy that out, freehand, in pencil, not coloring or 3D or anything at the moment, it&#39;s just a waste of your time and money.

Do that about 100 times then come back for more advice :P
Basically what i have done is started with an S in block letters, then overlapped then added some curves.
I have books full of sketches and letter studies, the thing is ive never been a good artist, so i dont even really know if what im doing is on the right track.

Thankyou for your comments though, they are appreciated and will be followed (this is the first piece i have ever coloured, and i went through a metalic purple doing it).
But could i ask, please for some constructive critism, as i feel like i dont know where im going wrong and if i go back to the simples again, i will end up in the same spot i am now, with no more knowledge of where ive gone wrong.... or even right for that matter.

Thanks again
Entropy

PS, it was cut out of an exercise book post-scanning and glued on the first page of my blackbook (sketch pad) as it is the first coloured piece i have ever done, and even if it is bad, it will serve as a good before/after comparision once i reach the final page.

nemzone
11-13-2006, 06:50 AM
yeh baper i love that style m8&#33; keep it up

nemzone
11-13-2006, 06:57 AM
heres my progress..
http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/6418/yy6fl.png
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2567/untitled12ft.png
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/5615/untitled6gg.png
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/1143/hh3vf.png
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7241/10006075uo.jpg
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/1708/10006158vy.jpg
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3300/10006181pr.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6967/10006371wb.jpg
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/892/gfgmm8.png
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/9936/dsc01023xc7.jpg
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/936/dsc01015my6.jpg
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1028/dsc01025zo9.jpg
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/20/dsc01090gf3.jpg
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/3603/dsc01110yc4.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3358/img139ms4.jpg

sky 5
11-13-2006, 07:10 AM
Originally posted by beone@Nov 12 2006, 09:30 PM
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/260105.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/260107.jpg
bumpage for my man . . nemz most of them pics aint showing up . . :angry: in a coupel days my boy goes back east and ill get crakin on them stickers . . blap blap blap&#33;

near
11-13-2006, 07:31 AM
Originally posted by near@Nov 13 2006, 12:06 AM
do i get the end of the page again?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/piecij.jpg
bump4kritz~~

nemz those throws in the second to last pic u posted are fiyah son o__O

nemzone
11-13-2006, 07:40 AM
god dammit&#33;&#33; they work on my comp <_<

u talkin bout stickers for our trade? cuz u never pm&#39;d me back lol

does tht thro say noes?? i dno what to say, not gr8 wiv throws reli, just try make the letters all one piece and maybe make only 1 or 2 have seperations to them. hard to explain, but the S has 2 many bits to it in mu opinion

sky 5
11-13-2006, 08:25 AM
yeah nemz them pics do show up, my dial up is just so damn slow . . (yeah i got dial up, you pay your own way and see how fast you be movin on the internet before you talk ish) . . .
near . . .i like your posts man, Ns are a bitch, i would probaly shot eh bottom part of the E out more to the right so it goes past the end of the top part of the E, and Ive never been a fan of the concave(?) legs of Rs . .. too hurt and probaly givin wrong advice so ill STFU&#33; . . i messed up and feel a double post coming . . .

sky 5
11-13-2006, 08:29 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 13 2006, 07:57 AM
heres my progress..
http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/6418/yy6fl.png
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2567/untitled12ft.png
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/5615/untitled6gg.png
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/1143/hh3vf.png
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7241/10006075uo.jpg
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/1708/10006158vy.jpg
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3300/10006181pr.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6967/10006371wb.jpg
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/892/gfgmm8.png
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/9936/dsc01023xc7.jpg
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/936/dsc01015my6.jpg
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1028/dsc01025zo9.jpg
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/20/dsc01090gf3.jpg
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/3603/dsc01110yc4.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3358/img139ms4.jpg
ahh there it is and how inkbits last post didnt get bumped a billioin times but everyone finds time to bump their own 5 second attempts lookin for crtis is beyond me . . . didint people use to bump hot shit 6 months ago? now it seems everyone bumps their own playin it off like they want crits . . damn i be a bitter herb sometimes ..

slEEt
11-13-2006, 08:34 AM
Originally posted by slEEt@Nov 12 2006, 11:54 PM
How about some crits...

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/588/img1744mediumdp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Anything?

sky 5
11-13-2006, 08:42 AM
dont do throws at all (why when you can just rock a quick straight letter?) but you got the left/back lean going nice for each letter so maybe try having all your letters leaning forward (whcih should help the O) for a diff throw, maybe learn alil sumthin . . probaly shouldnt have some lettters leanin forward and others back on the same throw but if you work it right who knows . . .

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 08:44 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0310.jpg

...bump this. I don&#39;t think I got anything last time

smartSOFT
11-13-2006, 08:52 AM
finish ur sketch and then ask for crits?

RepUrSet
11-13-2006, 08:53 AM
i think itll look pretty damn good if u finished it and gave it a nice background :blink:

sky 5
11-13-2006, 09:17 AM
bouncingsoul - you are close to turnin the corner and advancing a step b/c you have a consistent approach and style to the way you lay down your letters and you do A to Z but in my opinion you should try to dress up your letters alil, maybe add some definitive sharp angles in there or something to contrast the soft rounded feel you got now . . . quick head high sketch tryin to follow your last few letters if you dont mind me following your letters . . . the E on the EW is a bummer, an easy one is what i d did below still in your style but the top and bottom legs pinch towards the middle with the bottom leg of the E shootin out farther than the top right of the E . . .


http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/7100/1202020am0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

edit: the bottom of your E where it shhots directly right looks alot better than my curved . .

ras
11-13-2006, 09:26 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 13 2006, 07:57 AM
heres my progress..
http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/6418/yy6fl.png
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2567/untitled12ft.png
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/5615/untitled6gg.png
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/1143/hh3vf.png
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7241/10006075uo.jpg
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/1708/10006158vy.jpg
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3300/10006181pr.jpg
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6967/10006371wb.jpg
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/892/gfgmm8.png
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/9936/dsc01023xc7.jpg
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/936/dsc01015my6.jpg
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/1028/dsc01025zo9.jpg
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/20/dsc01090gf3.jpg
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/3603/dsc01110yc4.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3358/img139ms4.jpg
man you&#39;ve hella improved &#33;

near
11-13-2006, 10:24 AM
dont bump a post that huge twice on a page -_- jus kills it

ras
11-13-2006, 10:34 AM
Iv decided to change my name to Kep....i dont think its taken...say so if it is

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/7460/kepxx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

startin of " simple " ;)

Crits crits crits thank&#39;s ;) ....

krazzie_ammo
11-13-2006, 10:49 AM
not much i can say there ras, but your P is looking a wee bit small.

Code
11-13-2006, 12:12 PM
Originally posted by Code@Nov 12 2006, 12:58 PM
Craze= I actully like it, but not really feelin how the letters are set up tho, i dont like the over lapping colors, but either way your improving i think :)

Bouncing Soul= Man that piece is amazing, love it, just not feelin the E it kind of looks like an F with three sticks instead of two lol :) Either way GJ

K here i tried to work more on my shadow of course, and trying to improve on the letters so here you all go :)

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6827/scan0009wd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz please
Ras= I like the one that is nice and simple, the shadow is a little off, but either way nice :), and your other more complex sketches are hot to, but you got to work on that throw :)

Sleet= Keep working on it, try to add some style to that throw it you will be gold if you get it right :)

K here may i get some critz on how my shadow is set up and over all sketch, going to pick up some nice Big stickers so trying to improve a bit more :)

ras
11-13-2006, 12:27 PM
Summet New...

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8664/kep2fu8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments

Code
11-13-2006, 12:30 PM
Originally posted by Code+Nov 13 2006, 01:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Code @ Nov 13 2006, 01:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Code@Nov 12 2006, 12:58 PM
Craze= I actully like it, but not really feelin how the letters are set up tho, i dont like the over lapping colors, but either way your improving i think :)

Bouncing Soul= Man that piece is amazing, love it, just not feelin the E it kind of looks like an F with three sticks instead of two lol :) Either way GJ

K here i tried to work more on my shadow of course, and trying to improve on the letters so here you all go :)

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6827/scan0009wd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz please
Ras= I like the one that is nice and simple, the shadow is a little off, but either way nice :), and your other more complex sketches are hot to, but you got to work on that throw :)

Sleet= Keep working on it, try to add some style to that throw it you will be gold if you get it right :)

K here may i get some critz on how my shadow is set up and over all sketch, going to pick up some nice Big stickers so trying to improve a bit more :) [/b][/quote]
Bump, sorry got the last page


Ras- I aint feelin the letter structure man, and some of the 3d is a little wierd

myl
11-13-2006, 12:49 PM
ras that letter structrue sucks

you gotta do simples man

ras
11-13-2006, 01:02 PM
kkkkkkk ill go back to simples ... :) ;)

i was trying to experiment but i diddnt pull it off lol... :blink:

furious
11-13-2006, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by furious@Nov 13 2006, 01:15 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/brown.jpg
critszo

kepsta i like the straight letter but theres too much space between the k and e or somethin, other piece is sorta whack though stay simple baby

opinions?

Code
11-13-2006, 01:17 PM
Furious i love it man accept the R its a bit wierd, the right stick is to short in my oppinion.

So how about a crit for mine please

ras
11-13-2006, 01:30 PM
code...i dunno how many times i told you...make the bottom of the C curve lol :)

Code
11-13-2006, 01:35 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 13 2006, 02:30 PM
code...i dunno how many times i told you...make the bottom of the C curve lol :)
lol, k ty for that one and your right after i look at it closer it makes sense to do that lol, but how is my shadow that is the main thing i tried here :)

ras
11-13-2006, 01:36 PM
apoc .. continue the shadow round the bottom of the peice..

Code
11-13-2006, 01:40 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 13 2006, 02:36 PM
apoc .. continue the shadow round the bottom of the peice..
lol, sorry if your talking to me, so your saying to the side of the piece and the bottom of it?

ras
11-13-2006, 01:43 PM
Originally posted by Code+Nov 13 2006, 02:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Code @ Nov 13 2006, 02:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Nov 13 2006, 02:36 PM
apoc .. continue the shadow round the bottom of the peice..
lol, sorry if your talking to me, so your saying to the side of the piece and the bottom of it? [/b][/quote]
Yep :)...

ras
11-13-2006, 02:14 PM
AAARGH Carnt adapt to those letter&#39;s...going back tah Dub &#33; .. lol

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3046/kep3tn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

post it anyway

crits...

Code
11-13-2006, 02:27 PM
RAs= i like it, the P on the simple one though is a bit wierd, though the throws are k, in my oppinion :)

K, here is kind of my first serious attempt at a Throwy, I am sure its probaly somebody elses style, but just trying to get a hang of the flow of a style and some ideas . I was also working on my tag so ignore the squigly lines

http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/1496/scan0010bb5ro4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

7case
11-13-2006, 02:33 PM
Originally posted by Guerrilla876+Nov 12 2006, 07:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Guerrilla876 &#064; Nov 12 2006, 07:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-7case@Nov 12 2006, 06:55 PM
Messing with some new names, army is one of them, figured i would hook up some remeberance day thing considering im using the name army and all, threw it together kinda qucik, meh w/e

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/kyle-G/remberanceday.jpg
first of all . . . i like the whole theme ;

butt of course, here&#39;sz the critisizim, your name kind of blends into the background [even if you finished this all quickly] you want your name to stick out but being able to keep your background as eye-candy to add to your name. joo know what i mean? anyways, your characters are great, keep that up. but all of this was my suggestions. keep practicing, add more color, and keep the background simple until you develop more letter structure. hope i helped somewhat.[/b][/quote]
thanks for the crittz, i realized after how much the colour scheme in the letters sucka nd dont stand out at all, thanks for the crittz..anyone got anymore?

ras
11-13-2006, 02:44 PM
^^

youve had crits :blink:

acon i like the first one but ur 2nd one suck&#39;s and you could do with work on yur handies ;)

trashhh
11-13-2006, 02:45 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40625.jpg

Sketch but coloured in on the computer

krazzie_ammo
11-13-2006, 02:52 PM
daymmm trash thats amazing&#33; dont be so lazy and colour it in&#33;

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/8755/61jz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dunno if im feeling this...atleast now i have a style that i can improve on :rolleyes:

Crits?

ras
11-13-2006, 02:52 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Nov 13 2006, 03:45 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40625.jpg

Sketch but coloured in on the computer
man fix ur T rest of it is ace...can you post up the skecth ....before u culad it in on the comp...

trashhh
11-13-2006, 02:55 PM
em i saved the changes so its replaced with the coloured one.. its exacctly the same only a black outline no fill etc. ill post another pic of it non coloured if i can be assed

FIN one
11-13-2006, 03:14 PM
trash,its nice but like someone said a while back, it looks like thrash with the extension on the t but good job

nemz-i love that blue pen one

entropy(or whatever)-i find it very hard to believ you have "books full of letter studies" just do what that one person said.then work on changing those simple little by little. try not to let a single letter overlap itself.

ras
11-13-2006, 03:39 PM
Sumthang Nu&#39;

Decided to go with ANOTHER new name .. DET ...i dont think its taken anyway here&#39;s sumthin i jus did ...

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6245/detyk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits crits crits please thankyooou ;)

krazzie_ammo
11-13-2006, 03:44 PM
firstly, crit the people above, like me and trash.

secondly, work on your tag before you start trying to peice a new name.

thirdly, LFC SUCK :)

imported_Bes_one
11-13-2006, 03:48 PM
Craze-Dope style man&#33;I really like your work

Ras-Go more simple.

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1682/pict0658rg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

FIN one
11-13-2006, 04:01 PM
i like that b just like 2 parts look wierd (the top and the bottom left) not bad tho

heres something i did in US history, got reaaal bored during a video
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2026/usdoodlecu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

krazzie_ammo
11-13-2006, 04:11 PM
BES - looks like you had a good idea but im not feeling the arrow work, i think you should add a couple more arrows to even the top and the bottom of the letter.

DCAP - the background looks good, work on the consistency of the letters.

FIN one
11-13-2006, 04:15 PM
yeah im tryin to figure out what i can do to make it "more consistant"

krazzie_ammo
11-13-2006, 04:20 PM
lol, sorry about the vaguenessism. keep the width of the letters the same :)

aces
11-13-2006, 04:25 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 13 2006, 04:52 PM
daymmm trash thats amazing&#33; dont be so lazy and colour it in&#33;

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/8755/61jz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dunno if im feeling this...atleast now i have a style that i can improve on :rolleyes:

Crits?
Yo I&#39;m feelin that middle on the left but the right leg on the A is a little weird. Bottom on the right don&#39;t have the leg sticking out that far.
Top on the right is pretty good just work out some of the little kinks in it like the top of the C goes too far on the left. Other than that keep it up.

I&#39;ll post a sketch soon then color it. Maybe expect it tonight?

krazzie_ammo
11-13-2006, 04:36 PM
thanks man, that really helped **starts sketching like a mad man, MAD MAN I TELL YOU&#33;**

Red3
11-13-2006, 04:37 PM
Originally posted by krysnum1@Oct 28 2006, 08:13 PM
bezerk,

Go on google vid. and look up graff videos there a shit load of them, look at there stlye and how there letters look.

vychodni straran -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-2...quality+control (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-2429662165916940784&q=quality+control)
not guilty -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=9020523890812244837
russian roullete -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5...ussian+Roulette (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-543093117778022664&q=Russian+Roulette)
show must go on -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=6344751796938690354
Men in black 3 -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-3071981461989926960
kings and toys -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=3748277510837985565
style wars -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5...le+wars&pl=true (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5065949310221269915&q=style+wars&pl=true)
HM 2 -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8...7753798&pl=true (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-8465868383947753798&pl=true)
steel injection -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=95...3191434&pl=true (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=958243022433191434&pl=true)
supafly -- http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=45...6898661&pl=true (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=4501528400476898661&pl=true)

image movers
http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...85777672086169

Kings And Toys

http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...77510837985565

style warsz
http://www.video.google.com/googlepl...9310221269915&#092;



THE LINES TOUGHEST VOL I, VOL II, VOL III and VOL IV

vol 1 :
http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...29156936763697
vol 2 :
http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...37029733342846
vol 3 :
http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...26500828870020
vol 4 :
http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...08133338301273
Bumb this for anyone lazy to search for "geelblauw" on google video.

EDIT: I like the colours for the middle one, looks nice.

YarHarHar
11-13-2006, 04:45 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2063.jpg

-testify-
11-13-2006, 05:13 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6929/akhf9.png
for the handstyle battle might enter
and jar thats awesome

prank
11-13-2006, 05:37 PM
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/379/image103up1.jpg
[img]http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/1560/image105vp2.jpg

throw ups yank&#33;

prank
11-13-2006, 05:38 PM
jar that piece is dope paint it

magashna
11-13-2006, 06:02 PM
new shit i&#39;ve been working on, reads BRITISH

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/dan-cor/DSC01832.jpg

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/dan-cor/header.jpg

entropy
11-13-2006, 06:33 PM
Originally posted by entropy@Nov 13 2006, 04:41 AM
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p73/nasica22/firstpage-Sli.jpg

Page One of my first ever blackbook.
Been lurking for a while, working on simples (still there)
Any crits ?
Any comments, crits, on my first coloured piece ?
Thanks Guys
Entropy

-testify-
11-13-2006, 06:38 PM
simples

ThickGravy
11-13-2006, 06:42 PM
Dont add those little random things.

furious
11-13-2006, 06:58 PM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Nov 13 2006, 05:45 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2063.jpg
hottest yettttttttt finally made the leg longer on the r

nemzone
11-13-2006, 06:58 PM
it was pointless 2 colout it. the time it took u to colour it, u could of done 5 more simple outlines, with no colour

end of ;)

nemzone
11-13-2006, 07:00 PM
oh n jar, likin it again, like the way the loopy lines are different, better this time. tho im not too keen on the 3d which just stops at a scruffy sorta edge like that, i like it more when the 3d has the 1 definitive thickness throughout...

FIN one
11-13-2006, 07:02 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/1802/sta71007nz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

is that a lil more consistent?

nemzone
11-13-2006, 07:19 PM
its got too many pointless bits, like the bottom of the D, top of the C and all over the P
dont do ur 3d all the way to the VP, stop it after like 1-3cm.

-testify-
11-13-2006, 07:24 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Nov 13 2006, 06:13 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6929/akhf9.png
for the handstyle battle might enter
and jar thats awesome
can someone crits this dont know if its good enough to enter the battle
and im not gonna use this exact one im gonna change the r and m but crits anyway

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 07:42 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Nov 13 2006, 10:17 AM
bouncingsoul - you are close to turnin the corner and advancing a step b/c you have a consistent approach and style to the way you lay down your letters and you do A to Z but in my opinion you should try to dress up your letters alil, maybe add some definitive sharp angles in there or something to contrast the soft rounded feel you got now . . . quick head high sketch tryin to follow your last few letters if you dont mind me following your letters . . . the E on the EW is a bummer, an easy one is what i d did below still in your style but the top and bottom legs pinch towards the middle with the bottom leg of the E shootin out farther than the top right of the E . . .


http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/7100/1202020am0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

edit: the bottom of your E where it shhots directly right looks alot better than my curved . .
Shit thanks man. I really appreciate it. I&#39;ll try to add some sharp corners and stuff. Here&#39;s something I did just 2 mins ago... I&#39;ll work on it... What do you mean by dressing up the letters though? I didn&#39;t really get that. Kinda vague

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0318.jpg

FIN one
11-13-2006, 07:59 PM
i think he meant like more emphasis on things or i dont know lol.

k this is my last time postin this,sorry,its prolly annoying to you guys but i think this one is hopless and ill move on after this but i tried to get rid of some of the bits and i shortened the 3D

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2575/sta71009jy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i got the thing in the top middle from bansky,just givin him credit

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 08:02 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Nov 13 2006, 08:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Nov 13 2006, 08:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Nov 13 2006, 10:17 AM
bouncingsoul - you are close to turnin the corner and advancing a step b/c you have a consistent approach and style to the way you lay down your letters and you do A to Z but in my opinion you should try to dress up your letters alil, maybe add some definitive sharp angles in there or something to contrast the soft rounded feel you got now . . . quick head high sketch tryin to follow your last few letters if you dont mind me following your letters . . . the E on the EW is a bummer, an easy one is what i d did below still in your style but the top and bottom legs pinch towards the middle with the bottom leg of the E shootin out farther than the top right of the E . . .


http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/7100/1202020am0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

edit: the bottom of your E where it shhots directly right looks alot better than my curved . .
Shit thanks man. I really appreciate it. I&#39;ll try to add some sharp corners and stuff. Here&#39;s something I did just 2 mins ago... I&#39;ll work on it... What do you mean by dressing up the letters though? I didn&#39;t really get that. Kinda vague

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0318.jpg [/b][/quote]
bumpitty

krysnum1
11-13-2006, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by entropy+Nov 13 2006, 07:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (entropy @ Nov 13 2006, 07:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-entropy@Nov 13 2006, 04:41 AM
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p73/nasica22/firstpage-Sli.jpg

Page One of my first ever blackbook.
Been lurking for a while, working on simples (still there)
Any crits ?
Any comments, crits, on my first coloured piece ?
Thanks Guys
Entropy [/b][/quote]
This dosent look like graffiti. look at pictures and see what graffiti looks like, with the out line 3d&#39;s 2d&#39;s n all.

Look to tha left theres links like
Links:
Visual Orgasm
Lounge37
33-MTL
Hip-Hop Franco
Can Discipline
Antiks
Ace Of Art
Art Crimes
Wooster Collective
Ekosystem

Im not saying you should make your graff generic and the same as everyone elses, but you can fux with that once you get the look down.

************************************************** ***********
ALRIGHT GUYS>.....

Ive bin workin on a new bomb, and i cant fuking get this Y right... i think i need to get some seep then try it again with a fresh mind. What you think of the SP tho. any tips for the Y?

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6145/img1994sv0.jpg

uhhh
11-13-2006, 08:23 PM
the bottom s looks pretty good. the p needs to be skinner(the bottom) and the y, well its not good but you know that so its cool.

new sketch...
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-014S.jpg
crits pleaseee.

edit-it says arek. and krysnum, dont tell him to do different stuff YET. he still has to work on simples for a long time before he can even start about really developing a style.

Fosale!
11-13-2006, 08:27 PM
define some of ur letters a bit more.
the leg of the R looks like a W and the k looks like a E and the stope bfre the leg of the K looks like a U

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 08:37 PM
Here&#39;s a tip for over-overlapping letters... I&#39;ve been seeing this a lot lately and I don&#39;t want to see it any more. So here we go. Basically a letter usually looks over-hidden because the overlapping letter sort of divides it into two parts. For example, the "arek" sketch by uhhh right above me. See the E and how the part of the R overlaps it so that it intrudes the hole and makes the bottom of the E kinda seperated from the rest? That&#39;s what you SHOULDN&#39;T do. This has to do with flow and letter interaction so don&#39;t expect to get it within one night. Basically you want to leave the hole free so that you can see all the sides that surround it and try not to make the letter get divided into multiple parts... Personally I like to fit the letters to they conform with the surrounding letters but I guess that&#39;s just me? I dunno

uhhh
11-13-2006, 08:41 PM
i get ya. i try not to do that. i just put a good amount of time into that so i didnt wanna scrap it.

-testify-
11-13-2006, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;+Nov 13 2006, 08:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-testify- @ Nov 13 2006, 08:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;testify&#045;@Nov 13 2006, 06:13 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6929/akhf9.png
for the handstyle battle might enter
and jar thats awesome
can someone crits this dont know if its good enough to enter the battle
and im not gonna use this exact one im gonna change the r and m but crits anyway [/b][/quote]
havent gotten and crit and i dont know if thats because its total shit or because people just skip over it

uhhh
11-13-2006, 09:00 PM
it looks pretty sloppy. the letters arent that great either. you should try and do some simpler handies. ;)

fuckthatgame
11-13-2006, 09:04 PM
http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/4373/p1010067tc6.jpgJOThttp://img179.imageshack.us/img179/8403/p1010062aj3.jpg

meaner1
11-13-2006, 09:04 PM
crits>? is this simple enuough? disregard white sploch on a

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2692/simplezc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 09:05 PM
Solid simple except for that randomass tumor on the topleft of the A Keep doing those and mess with drop shaodw and 3d and stuff. Keep it up

fuckthatgame
11-13-2006, 09:08 PM
haha ive posted like 4 things here and havnt gotten 1 response yet

after_dinner_payback
11-13-2006, 09:22 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5486/scan0001rz0.jpg
critz???plz

meaner1
11-13-2006, 09:24 PM
crits addin shadoww

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/4186/someanah6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 09:25 PM
Zena the warrior princess&#33; Are you peyg on a new account because that resembles his stuff a LOT

meaner1
11-13-2006, 09:30 PM
wtf u talkin bout?

fuckthatgame
11-13-2006, 09:32 PM
haha i still havnt gotten anything yo....

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Nov 13 2006, 09:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Nov 13 2006, 09:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 13 2006, 08:42 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Nov 13 2006, 10:17 AM
bouncingsoul - you are close to turnin the corner and advancing a step b/c you have a consistent approach and style to the way you lay down your letters and you do A to Z but in my opinion you should try to dress up your letters alil, maybe add some definitive sharp angles in there or something to contrast the soft rounded feel you got now . . . quick head high sketch tryin to follow your last few letters if you dont mind me following your letters . . . the E on the EW is a bummer, an easy one is what i d did below still in your style but the top and bottom legs pinch towards the middle with the bottom leg of the E shootin out farther than the top right of the E . . .


http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/7100/1202020am0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

edit: the bottom of your E where it shhots directly right looks alot better than my curved . .
Shit thanks man. I really appreciate it. I&#39;ll try to add some sharp corners and stuff. Here&#39;s something I did just 2 mins ago... I&#39;ll work on it... What do you mean by dressing up the letters though? I didn&#39;t really get that. Kinda vague

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0318.jpg
bumpitty [/b][/quote]
bumpitty

meaner1
11-13-2006, 09:51 PM
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/8927/vroompi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

throw up crits?

furious
11-13-2006, 09:57 PM
zena better be peyg. or else someones chompin like crazy

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 10:00 PM
Nah he said he was peyg&#39;s friend

YarHarHar
11-13-2006, 10:18 PM
Originally posted by FIN one@Nov 13 2006, 08:59 PM
i think he meant like more emphasis on things or i dont know lol.

k this is my last time postin this,sorry,its prolly annoying to you guys but i think this one is hopless and ill move on after this but i tried to get rid of some of the bits and i shortened the 3D

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2575/sta71009jy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i got the thing in the top middle from bansky,just givin him credit
looks liek someone bending over wiht a scar on there ass...while sitting out you letters

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 10:20 PM
Hahahaha, I thought that resembled an ass wen I saw it too

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
11-13-2006, 10:32 PM
i thought thats what it was sposed to be....

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 11:29 PM
Last sketch for tonight... If I could, I would soo put a W and an S on this, but fucking page ran out... I&#39;ll get another sheet and tape it on tomorrow...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0319.jpg

Also, crits/comments on my handie. Didn&#39;t seem to get much in the Tags thread... Forget the colors, all I had was 2 highlighters and I was messing around... And I screwed up on the hook of my K a little... It&#39;s usually more sharp. Anyway, here it goes

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0311.jpg

knews2

Thanks&#33;

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-13-2006, 11:30 PM
bounca i really like that e. work on the k

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/kilo.jpg
hah big sticka, lots of letters. crits?

myl
11-13-2006, 11:34 PM
cool style, i really like it

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 11:35 PM
New name and new (awesome) sig I see...

I fucking love your style. Keep it up. That K in the kilogram is a perfect example of what I like about your style... I just like it. Can&#39;t explain why but it&#39;s good. Switch up your B since it&#39;s not doing as well as the other letters... Wwell switch up the others too, I see pretty much the same outline from you everytime it seems

Cramer
11-13-2006, 11:37 PM
Originally posted by epod@Jun 15 2005, 06:12 AM
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/1208/picture0112hg.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0112hg.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/8112/picture0108nd.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0108nd.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/9782/picture0148uo.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0148uo.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/8287/picture0131wp.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0131wp.jpg)

http://img210.echo.cx/img210/4373/ep28dt.th.png (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=ep28dt.png)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/582/picture0184ax.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0184ax.jpg)
http://img210.echo.cx/img210/4105/picture0165pz.th.jpg (http://img210.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0165pz.jpg)
You don&#39;t belong in the toy thread man&#33;

myl
11-13-2006, 11:41 PM
why the fuck are you bumping year and a half old posts

bouncingsoul
11-13-2006, 11:43 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 14 2006, 12:29 AM
Last sketch for tonight... If I could, I would soo put a W and an S on this, but fucking page ran out... I&#39;ll get another sheet and tape it on tomorrow...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0319.jpg

Also, crits/comments on my handie. Didn&#39;t seem to get much in the Tags thread... Forget the colors, all I had was 2 highlighters and I was messing around... And I screwed up on the hook of my K a little... It&#39;s usually more sharp. Anyway, here it goes

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0311.jpg

knews2

Thanks&#33;
bump on new page

And myl, it happens from time to time. I&#39;ve seen that sero sketch been bumped a couple times too haha

myl
11-13-2006, 11:45 PM
yeah i know...i dunno it just bugs me for some reason cause its like "yeah...that person is really gonna pay attention to a crit on some old ass shit" i dunno

but wow, that for what you have so far...that kne is looking really hot

and that hand style is making me go blind, shit hurts to read with them colors

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-14-2006, 12:15 AM
yeah gotta start experimenting w other stuffffffff

negro that epod ish is over a year old, he doesnt even post anymore

and he DID belong in the toy forum but thats besides the point.

FIN one
11-14-2006, 05:49 AM
Originally posted by YarHarHar+Nov 13 2006, 11:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (YarHarHar @ Nov 13 2006, 11:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-FIN one@Nov 13 2006, 08:59 PM
i think he meant like more emphasis on things or i dont know lol.

k this is my last time postin this,sorry,its prolly annoying to you guys but i think this one is hopless and ill move on after this but i tried to get rid of some of the bits and i shortened the 3D

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2575/sta71009jy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i got the thing in the top middle from bansky,just givin him credit
looks liek someone bending over wiht a scar on there ass...while sitting out you letters [/b][/quote]
haha i got that like 4 times at school but disregarding that part is it just something i should just leave alone?and move on?

nemzone
11-14-2006, 07:03 AM
m8 i told u wat to change, now do a piece taking in mind wat iv said. nevermind the shiz round it cuz lets be honest, ur neva gona paint that, an wat ppl seem 2 forget is a ablackbook is something in which u practice ur styles to better them for painting. not doin lil faces, n scars on the page.

shorten ur 3d by about half again. and u still got random bits all over.

cloudyheaven
11-14-2006, 11:08 AM
this is some of my work its usally crap and made in like 5 secs but just to improve skillzz i want to get some good hard advice pleas
(not nessesarely HARD ;) )


(alpha) this is a piece ...
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/4025/alphabu1.th.jpg (http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=alphabu1.jpg)


(ALpha) also a small piece (like half piece half bomb)

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9537/aplha2hh5.th.jpg (http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=aplha2hh5.jpg)


(alpha) this is a kinda wildstyle but very simple . to bad the colour kwaliti on camera is bad ....
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5051/aplha3zp6.th.jpg (http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=aplha3zp6.jpg)


(a) this is a letter , I just want to know if you guys think i lack in originality and stuff just tell me what you think about it
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/851/hxz8.th.jpg (http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hxz8.jpg)

(kayne) again a wildstyle but its hard to read ill work on it
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5808/kayne2hg8.th.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kayne2hg8.jpg)

(Kayne) this is a bomb design
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/7641/kayne4ze3.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kayne4ze3.jpg)

just tell me all you think i need too know :P

okay thx
PeaCe

myl
11-14-2006, 11:17 AM
Originally posted by cloudyheaven@Nov 14 2006, 12:08 PM

(a) this is a letter , I just want to know if you guys think i lack in originality and stuff just tell me what you think about it
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/851/hxz8.th.jpg (http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hxz8.jpg)


yes you do lack originality because that is a line for line bite off the A in the "new 2 graff" thread

you need to do simple block letters and stop biting

ras
11-14-2006, 12:23 PM
Originally posted by myl+Nov 14 2006, 12:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (myl @ Nov 14 2006, 12:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-cloudyheaven@Nov 14 2006, 12:08 PM

(a) this is a letter , I just want to know if you guys think i lack in originality and stuff just tell me what you think about it
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/851/hxz8.th.jpg (http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hxz8.jpg)


yes you do lack originality because that is a line for line bite off the A in the "new 2 graff" thread

you need to do simple block letters and stop biting [/b][/quote]
and seeing as you bit from the new 2 graff thread....u wud of seen the part about " dont try to rock wildstyle " ...

hers summet i just did

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3503/det2zo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments please ... ;)

krazzie_ammo
11-14-2006, 12:37 PM
DET - im not feeling the arrows....try it without. the E is curvy but the D is blocks, try and keep it consistent and bottom of the T is too thin

NICCSACC
11-14-2006, 12:42 PM
same pics the last ten pages haha. nice.

trashhh
11-14-2006, 12:43 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40648.jpg

Just for ras...

thers a legend writer det from here in belfast.. but i doubt itll matter depends wher ur from.

ras
11-14-2006, 12:48 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Nov 14 2006, 01:43 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40648.jpg

Just for ras...

thers a legend writer det from here in belfast.. but i doubt itll matter depends wher ur from.
;) man thats the fucking shit mate

oh...ill change my name AGAIN then...if he legendary then i guess ill have too...and i live in England <_< ;)

trashhh
11-14-2006, 12:52 PM
well i mean hes not legendary but hes pretty damn up and really good and hit dublin etc... but cheers

DUF
11-14-2006, 12:55 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/nogacropone.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y27/da9_chinga/nogaback028.jpg
crits?
and det im not feeling the arrows either.

Skesh
11-14-2006, 01:03 PM
Originally posted by myl@Nov 14 2006, 12:34 AM
cool style, i really like it
hmm strange I really don&#39;t like that style...

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-14-2006, 01:09 PM
no biggie, at least youre not tellin me to change my style just cuz you dont like it.

poepomhoog1
11-14-2006, 01:54 PM
nice stuff duf
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/9715/snellk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
SOA..critz??

krazzie_ammo
11-14-2006, 02:11 PM
soa mannn, thats so ill :) cant really give any crits other than THATS ILL&#33;

poepomhoog1
11-14-2006, 02:18 PM
why thank you very much :)