Blackbooks

[near]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 22 2006, 05:00 PM
ASEM - letters are damn fresh. loving the tag.

btw, so fluffy bunny doesnt like like me because "i act like i own the place" well if anyone else thinks so then join in :rolleyes:
realistically i think its because he didnt like the crits i gave to his sketches. i dont mean to offend, just giving my 2 cents. if you dont want it, leave it :)
i've never battled online so hows it going down?
not that im one to talk after the sketch i posted but his letters did lack structure...i think he just cant take crits ]:

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Stuff I did in class today...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Yup.png

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by near@Nov 22 2006, 04:59 PM
my feeble attempt at something a little wilder...lol the nugs look black

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010565.jpg

asem thats looking nice, noticeable improvement from yer other ish
fresh.

[krazzie_ammo]

yeah near! really feeling that E.

[Necro-]

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture061.jpg

[FIN one]

i like that.finish up the two lil bits on the end tho.

[stroke]

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/550/img0505sd8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some brand new shit i did at school today with a pen and an highliter. kinda like that piece i posted yesterday but i fixed that stupid K.
bouncingsoul mad handstyle yourself

[ras]

stroke...not likin the karak.. the peice is kwl too...u gettin a style..
necro...youv got a great style
fluffy bunnies....i like the bottom peice and i like tha red single A abit too

sumthing i just did....

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/3336/atel3zf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments yalllllll ;) :)

[G - Wahl]

Stroke, im loving that.
Atel, im still loving your style.
Necro, damn man..Thats sick. Fill that and post it ;)

[krazzie_ammo]

STROKE - looks like Dr.Sex's stuff, really feeling it man.
ATEL - good shit mannn.
NECRO - ahem, wow.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies+Nov 22 2006, 04:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fluffy Bunnies @ Nov 22 2006, 04:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 22 2006, 04:12 PM

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Nov 22 2006, 04:06 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Nov 22 2006, 02:44 PM
Fluffy bunny - why not? im just pissed at what you said about my sketch. cant you handle that fact that im tellling you the truth and that you should go back to simples but that piece looks shit :)
I just hate you cuz you act like you own the place... we&#39;re just toys.
we are all toys, thats why we are in the toys section.
I challenge you to a duel... lets see who can come up with the best piece. We write eachothers names k bitch? submit it tomorrrow or start a new thread.

I write AKOne

Tell me what you write? [/b][/quote]
fluffy...bunny... Chill the fuck out. You run your mouth too much in here and Ive heard you mocking "stupid toys" before when you are one yourself, so why get on his ass about "we&#39;re just toys"?
And if you haven&#39;t figured it out by now, I&#39;m not approving a new threrad with one fucking sketch in it, nor will I approve a thread with 2 sketches unless they&#39;re REALLY good. I don&#39;t see where he said anything to you that warrants you calling him a bitch or telling him you hate him and his face. Are you still in elementary school? <_<

[uhhh]

I hate you AND your face cezr.

:lol:

[krazzie_ammo]

/&#092;/&#092;/&#092;/&#092;/&#092;/&#092;
yeah cezr, just ban that homeboy :)

[whoarethereal evil]

Originally posted by stroke@Nov 22 2006, 05:34 PM
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/550/img0505sd8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some brand new shit i did at school today with a pen and an highliter. kinda like that piece i posted yesterday but i fixed that stupid K.
bouncingsoul mad handstyle yourself
chomp al la chomp chomp of dr sex anyone?

[uhhh]

for the SECOND time, a bite, or chomp, is when you DIRECTLY copy someone elses letters or EXTREMLY close. the piece he posted yesterday someone was making a fuss about him biting dr sex. he didnt bite. its just slightly the same shape as some of doctors sex&#39;s eltters. now chill. pleaseee.

ACTUAL crits,
stroke-your letter structure is horrible, the way you "fixed" the k, didnt work. you just need to scrap those letters and go back to simples.

[G - Wahl]

Stroke, personally, I love that..

[G - Wahl]

What do you guys think about this idea for a bomb?
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7668/picture005qs3.th.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture005qs3.jpg)
C+C please :)

[TricksForKids]

caop, keeo your letters the same size, the C is huge, fix the a, its too chunky, spread them out a bit

stroke, i personally cant stand that, theres no letter structure and you&#39;re just ok at colouring and throw random extensions

however, that is not a bite of dr.sex, the extensions might be influenced, by the letters are nowhere near dr sex in skill

anyways

DONT COME NEAR&#33; ots a bawk near exchange watch yo back&#33;

sorry man, this piece doesnt flow at all, i cant stand N&#39;s E&#39;s , and R&#39;s, lol, oh well, tried my best

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/2100/neartr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[G - Wahl]

Is this any better?
And what do you meen by the A is to chunky?
Thanks for crits.
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/5064/pictureqw7.th.jpg (http://img205.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pictureqw7.jpg)

[Slushi]

What is up, Vanilla face?

[stroke]

k so i put a little more effort in the structure for this one, had to "color" it with that stupid highliter again tho, all my markers are dried out..

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/1531/img0517tm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

let me know what you think..

[alera]

I like the carac
letters im not so shure of but good enyway :D

[Zoink]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/z****gf002.jpg

what one do you prefer more top or bottom.

[KoreTwo]

You need thinner markers.

[Dropping Bombs On Society]

http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o234/SKAGE_bucket/DSCN0667.jpg
:huh:

[ARMAwonR]

Stroke - That &#39;R&#39; Is Reaaaaal Dope

[A-chue!]

Originally posted by stroke@Nov 21 2006, 11:58 PM

call me a biter again and i&#39;ll bash your fuckin head in :)
crits?
Mister fuckin tuff nuts on the internet, i wasnt saying your shit was a bite from that peice just that dude dr.Sex yeah your shit isnt origanil anyone can look up one of his peices and see its biten.
you fucking herb dont get at me i burn you anyday on the streets. fuck internet beef you homo thug. get a grip punk ass bitch and learn to fucking paint then come at me until then step down and deflate your ego.

[A-chue!]

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/newhevn.jpg
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/hevncolored.jpg
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVNUEROP.jpg
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HevnBLUEfade.jpg
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/hevncolo.jpg
Fuck stroke

[uhhh]

i always love how the people who mainly bitch about internet beefing, are ingaged in internet beefing.

well anyways, heres my entry for the peeta battle..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-041S.jpg

[ARMAwonR]

work on that handstyle ... add some flair ... looks like wanna-be cursive with some lines and dots <_<

**EDIT** This was not directed towards &#39;Uhhh&#39;

[G - Wahl]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 22 2006, 07:44 PM
Is this any better?
And what do you meen by the A is to chunky?
Thanks for crits.
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/5064/pictureqw7.th.jpg (http://img205.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pictureqw7.jpg)
Bump&#33;
Can I get some C+C please ;)

[etch a sketch]

Originally posted by etchÂ*aÂ*sketch@Nov 21 2006, 09:52 PM
stroke: man thats hella clean but yea some letters look like x&#39;s nice piece tho. better than what im bout to post...
mine sux haha well heres ya go dont mindd the crew names, i was just tryin to write down which name sounded the best.. wal mart crew hehe


http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/2400/file0012fe3.jpg
Crit/comment pls it got overlooked from the business about biting and crap :(

[uhhh]

i like that e. actually a lot. but the other letters needa lotta work.
capo-i dont like it much. but just keep working on it. youll have somethigbn decent in a little while.



http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-041S.jpgcrits please.

[G - Wahl]

What do you think I should change about it?
And by the looks of yours, I like it.
Its kind of hard to see.

[uhhh]

yeah. i have an old sony that uses floppy discs. you put them in the side.. haha. its at least 7 years old.

i guess your styles just not refined yet. but just keep working on it for awile. i cant really help you at this point. just work by yourself for a little while.

[G - Wahl]

Alright, thanks for help.

[G - Wahl]

This any better?
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/851/picture002ud0.th.jpg (http://img226.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002ud0.jpg)

[Bowser]

early thanksgiving sketch let me get some crits, The middle throw was like my first bowser style ever, I still kinda like it. what you think?
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n169/WoodenFoot/11-23-2006012534AM.jpg

[StEaDy_LiMpS]

i think it looks fresh budd but if i could add 1 thing it would be to try n maybee round out the dead squares in the middle give it the same curviture as your letters, maybee that might help, but i think its nice either way

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Nov 22 2006, 10:41 PM
stroke...not likin the karak.. the peice is kwl too...u gettin a style..
necro...youv got a great style
fluffy bunnies....i like the bottom peice and i like tha red single A abit too

sumthing i just did....

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/3336/atel3zf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments yalllllll ;) :)
bowser...to much goin on on that page...i think the bottom and middle peices are kool...and nice turkey leg :lol:
uuuh....great style...



hardley got any crits for this

[ASB_ONE]

looks ayt ras bro jus usual stuff loose the arrows and define the letters a bit more. still dont like that little E. maybe to a piece in that style of letters keepin it simple like??

i duno
peace

[whoarethereal evil]

g-wah

altho tht p is mad generics it looks hella like copes

and as we all unfortunately know every fucker bums cope

[stroke]

Originally posted by stroke@Nov 22 2006, 09:44 PM
k so i put a little more effort in the structure for this one, had to "color" it with that stupid highliter again tho, all my markers are dried out..

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/1531/img0517tm6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

let me know what you think..
bump

[G - Wahl]

I didnt meen to bit Cope, it just kind of happend ha.
Whatevs, im not gonna be painting for a while anyway, so it will change
Can I get any more crits?
http://img226.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002ud0.jpg

[Bowser]

Originally posted by Bowser@Nov 23 2006, 01:30 AM
early thanksgiving sketch let me get some crits, The middle throw was like my first bowser style ever, I still kinda like it. what you think?
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n169/WoodenFoot/11-23-2006012534AM.jpg
bump for a new page

[G - Wahl]

That top left charactor saying Rawr is pretty cool.
I like that style to, its different.

[G - Wahl]

What do you guys think about this?
I changed it a bit.
Let me get come C+C pleasee ;)
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3595/picture005sq2.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture005sq2.jpg)

[Bowser]

I just think that those letter are very common along with that style, so try and make a differant letter style, but its a good start......letters are proportional so your good there.

[G - Wahl]

Yeah, the letters are pretty basic..
Ive only been sketching this for 3 days now..Its a good start i suppose
Can I get more Crits please?
Thanks bowser

[-MaCKiE-]

http://img472.imageshack.us/my.php?image=acidleanlsdjb1.png

[G - Wahl]

Ms Paint Represent&#33;

[ras]

g-wahl...i fucking lovin that throw..u posted erlier &#33; keep it up bro ;)

sum stuff i did in class..only had a gray and organge wimme ...oh and i just got my brand new touch twin marker &#33;&#33; :D ;)

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5179/atel4bi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^^ unfinished ^^^^

http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/5294/atel5fo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on both pleeeease &#33;&#33; :)

thanks yaaall &#33;&#33; ;)

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Nov 22 2006, 05:09 PM
Stuff I did in class today...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Yup.png
Bump and I chilled the fuck out so everythings ok&#33;

[Dropping Bombs On Society]

Normaly I think that bumping your own shit is stupid but I really want some critz on this new style:http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o234/SKAGE_bucket/DSCN0667.jpg
:huh:

[ras]

im fucking lovein the fill...really clean...now how about crits on mine ;)

[Necro-]

scace?

the second C doesnt look right for some reason. but other than that it looks good.

and the mushrooms are nice

[G - Wahl]

That one with the train is pretty cool.
But it looks like the train is coming from inside the L, you should make it coming around the back of the L

[Necro-]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Nov 22 2006, 05:25 PM
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture061.jpg
bump

[G - Wahl]

I cant even read that but its so good..

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Nov 23 2006, 02:57 PM
g-wahl...i fucking lovin that throw..u posted erlier &#33; keep it up bro ;)

sum stuff i did in class..only had a gray and organge wimme ...oh and i just got my brand new touch twin marker &#33;&#33; :D ;)

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5179/atel4bi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^^ unfinished ^^^^

http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/5294/atel5fo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on both pleeeease &#33;&#33; :)

thanks yaaall &#33;&#33; ;)
bump for crits....i wuz ner the bottom of page ? ;)

[Code]

RAs- i Like it nice and clean :), but on the first one dont like how some letters are big and some are small not really into that

Necro= Man that style is fresh :)

[ras]

yeah...the A was supposed to come out the same size as the E

[G - Wahl]

Ras, I liked it better when jsut the E was small.

[alive]

Originally posted by ras+Nov 23 2006, 11:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Nov 23 2006, 11:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Nov 23 2006, 02:57 PM
g-wahl...i fucking lovin that throw..u posted erlier &#33; keep it up bro ;)

sum stuff i did in class..only had a gray and organge wimme ...oh and i just got my brand new touch twin marker &#33;&#33; :D ;)

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5179/atel4bi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^^ unfinished ^^^^

http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/5294/atel5fo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on both pleeeease &#33;&#33; :)

thanks yaaall &#33;&#33; ;)
bump for crits....i wuz ner the bottom of page ? ;) [/b][/quote]
im begging you to slow down. make your letters the same size and stop fucking around with backgrounds and colors. focus on your letters.


necro- looks dope but i dont see letters?

[ras]

they was the onlu colours i had

[Code]

lol, ras i think he is saying to go simpiler and make all the letters parrallel, thats what i have been doing after Neza told me to do block letters all the same width, and parralel. And lol that has helped me alot i see my letter structure improveing more and more :)

[ras]

Yeah....and i have been doing simples...alot...and i think its helped out my eltter structure aswell considering this..

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9088/burnerfy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

one of my first sketches ^^

to this..

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/1882/atel2oz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


i think i have improved abit on structure...

[SKA11289]

i personally like that some letters are bigger than others in your style cause to me it looks real original and seems to flow nice....just my opion

[G - Wahl]

Yeah Atel, I really like the one with the litte E, it flows really nice.
Paint it and show us ;)

[ras]

yeah thats my point...now i think i have evolved my own style by putting in little block letters as my own ...like t-kid...he put karaks in nerly all his peices...

anyway .... testing out my new touch twin..summet rushed..

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/9105/atel6zh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on this please... ? thanks ;)

[G - Wahl]

Ehh, I dont like that one to much, although it is very original.
Im not feeling the 3D, or the T

[ras]

it wuz rushed....just to get a feel for my new tools ;)

[G - Wahl]

Your stuff is very clean
Are those lines done with a ruler or free hand?

[ras]

free hand....you can see the splodges on the lines were i stopped to readjust my arm...i never use rulers...artists dont use rulers...espaecailly A* students ;)

[bouncingsoul]

I was doing Spanish homework and found these old classroom sketches creeping around

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0346.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0347.jpg

[ras]

it kool that you handwriting is kinda of a handstyle...lol ;)

[G - Wahl]

That KNE is fucking sick, please make that a finished peice haha


And yeah, I noticed your handwriting also, pretty fly.

[ras]

yer....the KN are sick but i dont like the E..it dont flow....the Knews on the first pic is proper smart &#33; ;)

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 22 2006, 07:30 PM
caop, keeo your letters the same size, the C is huge, fix the a, its too chunky, spread them out a bit

stroke, i personally cant stand that, theres no letter structure and you&#39;re just ok at colouring and throw random extensions

however, that is not a bite of dr.sex, the extensions might be influenced, by the letters are nowhere near dr sex in skill

anyways

DONT COME NEAR&#33; ots a bawk near exchange watch yo back&#33;

sorry man, this piece doesnt flow at all, i cant stand N&#39;s E&#39;s , and R&#39;s, lol, oh well, tried my best

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/2100/neartr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for some crits

[bouncingsoul]

Your red outline is a bit messy some parts... The left side of the N doesn&#39;t look good to me but I love your A and your R man...

I was just starting English when I found this fucker

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0348.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 23 2006, 08:46 AM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3595/picture005sq2.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture005sq2.jpg)
Bump.
Can I get more C+C? ;)

[bouncingsoul]

That looks pretty good atually. Keep doing shit like that and work on that handie a bit

[ASB_ONE]

cant rele crit on it ma friend im not rele into throwies.
tricks that looks good man i prefer bit more generic style but always good to see some fresh ish.

some new ish, that flower is practice for a painting im doing un graff related.

peace&#33;

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0107_000.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Thanks bouncingsoul
What about this?
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/482/pictureta2.th.jpg (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pictureta2.jpg)

ASB, im loving that flower haha.

[bouncingsoul]

Meh, I&#39;m not a big fan of coloring in general... That one looks a bit shaky compared to the last one. That shit was pretty clean

[ASB_ONE]

yeh that flower is just rough idea for somit ima do for a present for someone for christmas.
were u jokin or u think its ayt?

[nemzone]

tricks not feelin that half as much as ur usual my friend.

asb, i like the piece itself. fuck the flower lol

done this. first in a good while, just cuz im not well lol

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6933/img146si8.jpg

[G - Wahl]

BouncingSoul - Well, i guess the pencil one is cleaner because it is soo much smaller, it only takes up like 7-8 lines of paper.
While the colored one is half the size of a black book page.

ASB - No I wasnt joking, I really do like it.

[G - Wahl]

Craze - Your 3D and shadowing is..Crazy ;)

[nemzone]

Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 23 2006, 07:19 PM
tricks not feelin that half as much as ur usual my friend.

asb, i like the piece itself. fuck the flower lol

done this. first in a good while, just cuz im not well lol

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/6933/img146si8.jpg
oh i should clear this up, im nemz lol. did this for craze, and a battle on another board.... :D

[G - Wahl]

Well then..Nemz your 3D shadowing is crazy haha.

[krazzie_ammo]

thanks man, looks nice :) espicially the cracks, good touch.

[shamee1991]

u should use a black pen it always looks beta...

[ASB_ONE]

nemz kills it as usual.

n ill fuc ur flowr lol

[South-Pole]

damn dope shit nemz

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/Scan2copy.gif

made this at school

cr&#33;tz?

[Necro-]

lust writes die.

but other than that the D and I are too thick compared to the E.

[shamee1991]

very very original. just dont cut up the letters, them half circles and shit, but lovin it...

[South-Pole]

i know that lust writes die

i write den and die

but thanks for the crits guys


but what should i do after to get the shit more wicked

[nemzone]

spot on for crits lads. its in biro cuz it was for a biro battle, and i only had a blue 1 to hand and couldnt be bothered moving lol

die i say u do sum mor simple shiz for a bit. til u get proportions n shit down

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40649.jpg

someone told me to tell em when ive coloured this but i forget who it was so here it is

[South-Pole]

dope shit right there but the nose of that black man needs work
edit:if i was you i wouldnt add that head

[shamee1991]

fuckin dope dudE&#33;&#33;&#33;...

[Hutz_one]

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/2987/newgraf2fkr0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


what does anyone think..? one of my 1st sketches for this name...criticism and comments welcome...aswell as any ideas?

[ras]

Yo....that craze 3d is tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight

trash....the thing being done on computer puts it off for me .... good peice tho...and that karak...lose it ....it looks like a head floting above your workk...good job tho... ;)

tried ATEW cuz i hated the L

did a few simples and then i added this fill and a arrow..

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3163/atew1je3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits crits crits please..? thankssss ;)

aaah....brand new page :lol: hehe

[westsida]

SIMPLES&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
DO BLOCK LETTERS

[krazzie_ammo]

ATEW - nahh man&#33; not really feeling this one, get rid of that arrow.

btw, when im filling in a piece i get darker areas where i have gone over the lines. how do i stop this?

[nemzone]

crazzie, u took graphic comm right? they should teach u colourin in that?? what i do is outline all the block of the colour im using, then colour in single line strokes all the way thru. looks nice and dont waster ur pens

[krazzie_ammo]

haha, we dont learn anything in graphics. we havent even started our coursework. our teacher is such a douché, like an older tony blair, cant control the class.

thanks for the tip :)

[ras]

i posted these b4...but which style u think is better ..

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/6551/atel2jp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that or this ..

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2223/atelne2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thanks...

[shamee1991]

what pens do u use??

[ras]

shitty berols....which style is better ?

[WolfBurrns]

Something I did in school. I was bored and only had one marker.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/asiansss.jpg

[Fluffy Bunnies]

New quick sketch... I lost my BBook and al I got is lined paper for now :(

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/redgreen.png

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Nov 23 2006, 09:15 PM
i posted these b4...but which style u think is better ..

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/6551/atel2jp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that or this ..

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2223/atelne2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thanks...
cumooon whats best

crits ;)

AK...work on yur A ... the K is kooool

[bouncingsoul]

That second one DEFINITELY. That&#39;s a great straight letter

[ras]

yeah but how about incorprating the little E....i love that E :( ;)

[krazzie_ammo]

yeah, i agree with bouncy :)

[ras]

whut bout the LIL E ;)

[TricksForKids]

amen, i got a little progression BAWK commin up for ya, well its not really progression at all, jsut without 3D and the with it, but illt be up soon

ras go with that simple, build on that


hutz too squiggly, get some better definition, the simple letters are there though

wolfburns, thats too shaky, and anything shaded half ass in penicl looks bad, so try using pen

fluffy bunnies keep it up, its looking nice and simple

Peace

[ras]

okay yall...thanks for the crits

[fsmith]

Ras: The fill from the first is dope, but the style of the second is way, way hotter than the first. The little E disrupts the flow more than anything else, and as much as it makes it unique it hurts the thing overall. About the second though, I&#39;d say shorten the E a little so the gap between the E and the L isn&#39;t so huge, it looks just a shade too big. Also, don&#39;t bump your shit like three times in a single page, that&#39;s just fucking unnecessary and all it does is makes people want to crit you less.

Fluffy: I like it mang, real simple, but when a name&#39;s that short you really gotta pay attention to scale, because the negative spaces are off. Look at the hole in the O and the gap under the K, they gotta be closer in size so it looks more unified, good shit though.

Wolf: 3d&#39;s off, especially on the S. Nice and simple though, which is where most of us need to be right now. Forget the bump on the L and work on the E, make sure you really keep all the letters in the same sort of style. If you&#39;re going with bubble, go with bubble, if you&#39;re going with simple, go with simple. At this point, don&#39;t try really incorporating both. Notice how your E is almost all curves and your S is almost all straights? Try to keep it together and keep it simple.

That&#39;s all I can see in my reply window right now, so those are all the crits I&#39;m going to give.

Also, as a note: I know I&#39;m not too good a writer yet, I&#39;m still a total toy, but I&#39;m just calling this stuff as I see it. I&#39;m a terribly analytical guy and I like trying to provide constructive crits so I can see people improve. I hope I&#39;m helping at least some people.

[TricksForKids]

good crits^

And as i promised:

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4175/bawkpenre7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7990/bawkpen3dhz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my fills kinda suck ass, but i might try one later tonight, crits?


Peace

[Necro-]

ill prolly color this later
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture062.jpg

[nemzone]

tricks u down for an exchange??

[kicklip9634]

kind of old i wanted to enter it into the halloween battle but was to lazy
http://i7.tinypic.com/2ir0v9z.jpg
critz.....

[TricksForKids]

thought you said my shit was half assed nemz ? :D hehe, yeah that near sketch was BAD BAD BAD, but whatever, ummmm yeah im down but i couldnt do yours for a while, i got once for aces first, and i like to sketch my own name now and then as you can tell

[TricksForKids]

krupt make your pictures smaller and for GODSAKE take time on your lines, look at how shaky it all is, make your letters the same size, and in a line, dont worry about colour, and make the simple, and straight

Peace

[ras]

thanks for the crits people...

late night shit...after reading LSsmiths comments...ill lose the E...i loved it soo much :P :P ;) ... is there anyway i could make it not distrupt the peice..? thanks

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/8245/atel7ev2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits plaese... ;)

[kicklip9634]

try a diffrent color 3d and do a force feild thing thin but yeah that looks ill

[nemzone]

ras, ur tryin to hard buddy. just do simple letters til u get ur proportions rite, and a good grasp on lettering. then try complesed shiz...

and tricks yeh theres no hurry lol

[TricksForKids]

Alright, little progression, yall know

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5871/bawkpenfc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7990/bawkpen3dhz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/5153/bawkbluerednf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/8525/bawkblueredpinkrr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[HazeAmaze]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/marker-1.jpg

crits?

[Linkzone1]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 23 2006, 06:13 PM
Alright, little progression, yall know

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5871/bawkpenfc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7990/bawkpen3dhz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/5153/bawkbluerednf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/8525/bawkblueredpinkrr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you&#39;re gettin there

[Necro-]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Nov 23 2006, 05:37 PM
ill prolly color this later
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture062.jpg
bump

[krazzie_ammo]

NECRO - i see a MAU.....am i right? loving your style. no real crits i can give.

[TricksForKids]

necro, quit bumping your own shit without giving crits, linkz, something other than "your getting there" to me would be appropraite and helpful

necro i personally hate the style, but you seem to execute it decently, keep going at it i guess, i ahve no way of giving you help because there are no legible letters there

[HazeAmaze]

Originally posted by HazeAmaze@Nov 23 2006, 06:15 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v168/Man_of_punk/marker-1.jpg

crits?
bottom of page bump?

[Necro-]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 23 2006, 06:20 PM
NECRO - i see a MAU.....am i right? loving your style. no real crits i can give.
its mav

[neza]

necro your style as fresh as it is lacks letter structure work on you letter structure and try to make them more defined other than the fact i know u write maven (mav) i wouldnt be able to tell what it said

neza

[G - Wahl]

Ras - I like the style with the charactor. That looks good.

Necro - Your shit is hot but I cant read it at all. Like Neza said, if I didnt know what it said I couldnt be able to read it.

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by kicklip9634@Nov 23 2006, 05:49 PM
kind of old i wanted to enter it into the halloween battle but was to lazy
http://i7.tinypic.com/2ir0v9z.jpg
critz.....
wow thats one gangster charac hahahha :)

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Nov 23 2006, 06:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Nov 23 2006, 06:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Necro&#045;@Nov 23 2006, 05:37 PM
ill prolly color this later
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture062.jpg
bump [/b][/quote]
mate this is rele nice, i duno wat u guys r chattn about structure no offence.
in this case i think structure can be excused due to orginality

[uhhh]

necro- i dont like it too much. i see the letters now. but just. ehh.

bawk- wanna exchange? i write areo, if your down..

[afek]

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/000_0413.jpg
comment?

[TricksForKids]

uhhhh /areo lets see your work

fuck all of you that dont talk about each others pieces and bump one piece on the same fucking page, honestly, i put in time and effort to give help to all of you and i cant get shit now and then on my shit, its a pissoff, regardless

Haze, its well put together but the actual letters need some serious serious work, theyre all differnt widths and sizes, work on each individual eltter in just pencil and then maybe try to put it back together like that

dont ever say "theres no lettters but its orignal so it can be excused", if hes trying to go for eltters then they need some more structure, and another thing, hell never ( necro ) be able to paint that, my shits complex too, but i can tone it down to paint, he cant tone that down at all, hes getting ahead of himself

and when i thought all was lost afek starts simple, it looks like it says che? lose the one with the underline, its not working, work on the E to make it flow more, and that handstyle,


now can i get some feedback on my shit?

PEACE

[afek]

thanks for the comment


i like yours... but im not one to give the most in depth comments


EDit;

tricks you ever see ahsk one pieces around toronto?

[alive]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 23 2006, 09:00 PM
uhhhh /areo lets see your work

fuck all of you that dont talk about each others pieces and bump one piece on the same fucking page, honestly, i put in time and effort to give help to all of you and i cant get shit now and then on my shit, its a pissoff, regardless

Haze, its well put together but the actual letters need some serious serious work, theyre all differnt widths and sizes, work on each individual eltter in just pencil and then maybe try to put it back together like that

dont ever say "theres no lettters but its orignal so it can be excused", if hes trying to go for eltters then they need some more structure, and another thing, hell never ( necro ) be able to paint that, my shits complex too, but i can tone it down to paint, he cant tone that down at all, hes getting ahead of himself

and when i thought all was lost afek starts simple, it looks like it says che? lose the one with the underline, its not working, work on the E to make it flow more, and that handstyle,


now can i get some feedback on my shit?

PEACE
my friend tricks.

i feel your pain. understand that part of the reason you dont get many crits, is because one, your style is so unique. and two, ur so much better then most others here. what good advice can they give?

to be honest, thats part of the reason i dont post up here much anymore, so little feedback.

but feel assured.
ur dope.

[ASB_ONE]

yeh u havnt posted in a while alive, got anything new?

tricks i comment on your stuff all the time bro, its always good, style is always the same and the progression is nice.

[TricksForKids]

thanks boss, appreciate it, i didnt mean me, im not some bitch omplaing that no one gives shit on my stuff, but i see other kids get passed up too, makes me angry, this is supposed to be a community, if everyone just bumps all their shit over and over again then this fails

[fsmith]

Tricks: I like the style mang, but I can see some extensions that I think might be unnecessary, namely the right angle additions to the W and the A, the ones on the very bottom right of each letter. They don&#39;t really add anything and make the piece look a little flat. On that note: I think the piece would *really* pop if you put the 3d on an angle instead of straight. right now the piece looks flat despite all the work you put in it. You know your letters, and they all look tight, the B is a little bit out of the style of the rest but it still looks good, and I think it&#39;s more that you need to find more of the style you used on the B in the other letters. Adding some of those sweet curves to the awks would really make it look hot. Also, the shine seems off as well, and I&#39;m no good at shine myself so I can&#39;t really tell why it is, but it looks strange. Maybe try thinking of it from a single light source, like you would with 3ds. Overall, some really good shit.

Haze: The letters need some major work mang, there are too many random spikes and such on those letters. It&#39;s not a bad composition but the only thing I really dig about it is the actual outline of the whole piece. Go back to simples or bubbles for a bit and get your letter structure down, work on your basics until your own style starts to shine through the simple forms and then start to work out from there.

Jerm: You&#39;ve got to really, really work your basics before you start shifting things off the line. Make sure to keep all your letters the same size and the same level for awhile and as with haze, work on bubble and simple until your own style starts to show through. Your 3d honestly ain&#39;t that bad, but your letters need some serious work. I can&#39;t even think of one of the letters that needs more work than the other, they all need some serious touching on.

Necro: You&#39;ve obviously got some really good hand control and some good sense of line, but you really need to tear that shit down and start from the ground up. I can&#39;t even read it mang, I can see the V but that&#39;s it. Don&#39;t try to go from tagging to wildstyle man, it just doesn&#39;t work that way, and I&#39;m not sure if that&#39;s the case, but because we&#39;re in the toy forum I&#39;m going to assume it is. Get the basics down before you innovate. From what I can see, you&#39;ll probably be able to get a really good grasp on some of the more crazy complex styles once you&#39;ve done your research, but for the moment start at the bottom of the totem pole and work your way up. No budding in line mang, it shows when you try to play with the big boys and you&#39;ll get torn to pieces by the people outside this forum if you try to show it to them.

Afek: The cloud is very well done, and the letters aren&#39;t bad either, nice and simple and definitely a good stepping stone. Work on your fills, and try to keep the letters even closer in scale. If you look close you can see that the E is quite a bit bigger than the other two letters.


Now, one more thing I&#39;ve got to say: STOP FUCKING BUMPING YOUR SHIT. This shit has got to stop and it&#39;s fucking ridiculous. Just because your shit was at the bottom of the page doesn&#39;t mean people didn&#39;t see it. Yeah, lots of the people in this forum don&#39;t really want to give detailed crits and just want to improve themselves, but the fact that half the pictures on any page are fucking bumps is driving me crazy. Grow the fuck up and stop being so impatient. Unless your shit is several pages back DON&#39;T BUMP.

Christ, how old is everyone here, thirteen?

[ASB_ONE]

daaaaam thats some in depth crits
me next me next

[fsmith]

I do my crits in bunches, so post some shit around now and I&#39;ll probably get you in the next bundle.

Man, I wish I had a scanner, because my actual physical work is so much better than the shit I can make using my dodgy old tablet (thing is seriously over ten years old, and the writing space is smaller than a postcard). All the shit I churn out using illustrator and that thing just look like a fucking joke so I don&#39;t even bother posting my stuff anymore.

[TricksForKids]

you&#39;re a beast with the crits, and thanks, yeah, i dont know, my favourite letters my A :( and i did the straight down 3D cuz people were getting old of the into the middle 3D, and yeah, my shines off,

thanks for the tips though boss, keep goin at it

[ASB_ONE]

i can bump some shit for ya hahaha

[fsmith]

ASB, feel free to bump I didn&#39;t see any of your stuff in the past three or four pages.

Tricks: The A actually looks pretty dope taking a second look at it. Your piece wasn&#39;t in my reply window when I was writing, so I was doing it mostly from memory (that&#39;s why yours is first :P). It does all look pretty tight, it&#39;s just that I&#39;ve gotta get really nitpicky with stuff like yours because it&#39;s already above the "work on your letters" phase and it&#39;s at the refining your style phase. Also, you don&#39;t have to do down to middle 3d, you can bust a down left or down right, and that shit would look especially good with all the flat lines you&#39;ve got going.

[Necro-]

Originally posted by fsmith@Nov 23 2006, 09:23 PM
Necro: You&#39;ve obviously got some really good hand control and some good sense of line, but you really need to tear that shit down and start from the ground up. I can&#39;t even read it mang, I can see the V but that&#39;s it. Don&#39;t try to go from tagging to wildstyle man, it just doesn&#39;t work that way, and I&#39;m not sure if that&#39;s the case, but because we&#39;re in the toy forum I&#39;m going to assume it is. Get the basics down before you innovate. From what I can see, you&#39;ll probably be able to get a really good grasp on some of the more crazy complex styles once you&#39;ve done your research, but for the moment start at the bottom of the totem pole and work your way up. No budding in line mang, it shows when you try to play with the big boys and you&#39;ll get torn to pieces by the people outside this forum if you try to show it to them.
i developed my letters from simples. i can post some development pics if you want, but thanks for the crits anyway.

and tricks, i like your stuff and have never tried to start any beef, so i dont really understand the hostility (or maybe im just imagining it). i didnt intend to paint this, honestly it was just me brainstorming a new direction for my style. im going to start making mine mechanical (i guess would be the best word). BUT THIS SKETCH SUCKS ASS, I KNOW IT DONT TELL ME. it didnt turn out anything like i imagined. i need to bring it together and loose the negative space, balance it and work with the mechanical idea a lot. i wouldnt have even colored it but ive never tried to shade with markers before, so this is my first attempt. i need to practice shading with markers.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture067.jpg


and for crits:

tricks yours looks good, but i dont like the addon on the bottom right of the A, the b&#39;s beautiful tho.

kicklip: it looks messy, use a pen to outline, not a marker.

afek: i dont like how the top of the C is leaning foreward.

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 23 2006, 01:51 PM
cant rele crit on it ma friend im not rele into throwies.
tricks that looks good man i prefer bit more generic style but always good to see some fresh ish.

some new ish, that flower is practice for a painting im doing un graff related.

peace&#33;

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0107_000.jpg
er ya go bro did this last night.

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Nov 23 2006, 09:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Nov 23 2006, 09:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fsmith@Nov 23 2006, 09:23 PM
Necro: You&#39;ve obviously got some really good hand control and some good sense of line, but you really need to tear that shit down and start from the ground up. I can&#39;t even read it mang, I can see the V but that&#39;s it. Don&#39;t try to go from tagging to wildstyle man, it just doesn&#39;t work that way, and I&#39;m not sure if that&#39;s the case, but because we&#39;re in the toy forum I&#39;m going to assume it is. Get the basics down before you innovate. From what I can see, you&#39;ll probably be able to get a really good grasp on some of the more crazy complex styles once you&#39;ve done your research, but for the moment start at the bottom of the totem pole and work your way up. No budding in line mang, it shows when you try to play with the big boys and you&#39;ll get torn to pieces by the people outside this forum if you try to show it to them.
i developed my letters from simples. i can post some development pics if you want, but thanks for the crits anyway.

and tricks, i like your stuff and have never tried to start any beef, so i dont really understand the hostility (or maybe im just imagining it). i didnt intend to paint this, honestly it was just me brainstorming a new direction for my style. im going to start making mine mechanical (i guess would be the best word). BUT THIS SKETCH SUCKS ASS, I KNOW IT DONT TELL ME. it didnt turn out anything like i imagined. i need to bring it together and loose the negative space, balance it and work with the mechanical idea a lot. i wouldnt have even colored it but ive never tried to shade with markers before, so this is my first attempt. i need to practice shading with markers.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture067.jpg


and for crits:

tricks yours looks good, but i dont like the addon on the bottom right of the A, the b&#39;s beautiful tho.

kicklip: it looks messy, use a pen to outline, not a marker.

afek: i dont like how the top of the C is leaning foreward. [/b][/quote]
Haha, no beef, no beef, listen, i just cant relate to your style because its so different from mine, the only thing i can suggest is colour with markers, pencil crayon takes away from your style, tryin including more in the piece, it looks strung out and bare, and im just saying youd ahve a ahrd time painting it, its just like a couple kids were like:

"yay necro&#33; i cant reead it so its ill&#33;"

lol, and to me graffiti, is all about the letters, at least at this stage unless your doing character, but keep doing your thing man, its all about new styles

[fsmith]

Necro: Don&#39;t get me wrong man, the idea and the control of the style is ill, it just needs some serious refining and some clarification. I think you hit the nail on the head saying you need to get rid of the negative space. The idea of a mechanical style is pretty fresh, just don&#39;t go overboard or you&#39;ll lose the heart of the piece. Your letters. Like I said, you&#39;ll probably have a fucking wicked grasp of the more complex styles, but I think you should try to get a handle on those styles before you try creating an entirely new genre, know what I mean?

ASB: The S and the E are looking mad fresh, but your A and M *really* need some work, they&#39;re out of scale, out of line and out of style mang. Find those wicked curves in the A and M, same as you&#39;ve got in the S and E and it&#39;ll really fly.

[ASB_ONE]

safe smith. yeh im havin probs wid ma a and m i been sketchin hard tho trying to figure them out.

[uhhh]

tricks- i gotcha bro. heres yours..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-043S-1.jpg
the dark part in eh w, says bawk, but my camera sucks so it just looks like part of its grey. <_<

[TricksForKids]

damn son thats pretty fresh, that styles gunna pop very very soon, its already looking good though, ill have yours in a while, been flooded with exchanges, props tho

[uhhh]

thanks man.
can&#39;t wait to see mine. i really like your style.

[imported__TeCH_]

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1639/newstyleyp8.jpg

that says ais, and the next one says smp........

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/8852/simpleabstractwk5.jpg

[etch a sketch]

tricks: ur bawk piece was pretty nice man i like ur style its fresh

uhhh: thats sweet man dont u have a scanner u can use instead?

heres something i did for a b&w exchange wit ocelot..

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6406/file0015hm6.jpg

[TricksForKids]

keep goin with the bottom style, im actually kinda feelin that^, lost the first one, way too many useless addons

Peace

not bad etch, its getting there, the e is far too skinny and gets squished by the letters, if you&#39;re going to make your eltters that curvy, you might want to try adapting a more handwritten style, like old english cursive or something, ahvent seen anyone try that in the toys, i think itd be fresh, if not go back to some more well defined straight letter, becauase the inbetween isnt really working

[etch a sketch]

Ok, ill try to do the old english cursive thing man. thanks for the crits man

[uhhh]

my mom has a scanner but its hooked up to her laptop that im not allowed to use so pretty much no.

[uhhh]

new sketch. *crits please*
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-044S-1.jpg

[G - Wahl]

I just did this.
Two pics, one with flash one without
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2514/picture002ye0.th.jpg (http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002ye0.jpg)
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/63/picture003lv8.th.jpg (http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture003lv8.jpg)
Crits?

[SAGE2]

yoooo, just started writin not so long ago, and this is one of my first throw ups...tell me what u think...THANKS..my fault about the shitty pic

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g244/DuTchTwiSter973/sagethrowie-1.jpg

[wood]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/death.jpg

<img src"http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/twirl.jpg">


please give me crits

[wood]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/twirl.jpg

[wood]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/death.jpg


can i have crits and the last post please

[Torrent]

http://myspace-926.vo.llnwd.net/01470/62/92/1470072926_l.jpg

Any critique?

[ras]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 24 2006, 05:16 AM
I just did this.
Two pics, one with flash one without
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2514/picture002ye0.th.jpg (http://img220.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002ye0.jpg)
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/63/picture003lv8.th.jpg (http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture003lv8.jpg)
Crits?
yo...that fiill looks like the fill is use quite often...i aint sayin its a bite... ;) just look a lil bit alike...ur throw is getting better....just work on yur P...i struggled on P&#39;s..

wood...i like the first one...just clean it up

[extirpate]

torrent i like it but the R is a little thin


new style crits?
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p258/dillingerdilger/newstyl.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

very fresh, the middle letter could use a bit of work, and the last letter is fire but maybe a little smaller or spaced out

[terst]

Originally posted by terst@Nov 22 2006, 11:43 AM
[http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/4674/slugyt7.th.jpg (http://img45.imageshack.us/my.php?image=slugyt7.jpg)



Can I get some constructive critz?

You can click on the picture to resize it.
Ok, ive looked harder at the letter structure. I think the g and the l are messed up. Any more tips for me?

[uhhh]

Originally posted by uhhh@Nov 23 2006, 11:45 PM
new sketch. *crits please*
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-044S-1.jpg
bizzump.

terst-it looks like your getting a wee bit a head of your self, the letters arent even very legible. it looked like it said "srug" just try and do simple letters. like SRUG, exactly like that, just bigger.

[ASB_ONE]

uhhh, that was only on the last page bro surely it dont need a bump?

looks ayt tho, not rele my kinda thing but tis ayt, dont like the fill and ur handy aint the nicest letters look k tho.

[Yusef245]

Originally posted by Torrent@Nov 24 2006, 02:52 AM
http://myspace-926.vo.llnwd.net/01470/62/92/1470072926_l.jpg
i like it, just work on the S and the R.

[uhhh]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 24 2006, 09:54 AM
uhhh, that was only on the last page bro surely it dont need a bump?

looks ayt tho, not rele my kinda thing but tis ayt, dont like the fill and ur handy aint the nicest letters look k tho.
thanks for the crits. the fill was kind of an expierment. and the handy i usually do a lot better.

[G - Wahl]

Originally posted by extirpate@Nov 24 2006, 03:17 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p258/dillingerdilger/newstyl.jpg
Very nice, just make the O a bit smaller.

[capo93]

Originally posted by Yusef245+Nov 24 2006, 10:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Yusef245 @ Nov 24 2006, 10:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Torrent@Nov 24 2006, 02:52 AM
http://myspace-926.vo.llnwd.net/01470/62/92/1470072926_l.jpg
i like it, just work on the S and the R. [/b][/quote]
i sorta like the s but the r defintley needs some work

[Torrent]

Originally posted by capo93+Nov 24 2006, 11:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (capo93 @ Nov 24 2006, 11:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Yusef245@Nov 24 2006, 10:08 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Torrent@Nov 24 2006, 02:52 AM
http://myspace-926.vo.llnwd.net/01470/62/92/1470072926_l.jpg
i like it, just work on the S and the R.
i sorta like the s but the r defintley needs some work [/b][/quote]
Thanks for the critique. I really fucked up on the R. I was doing the black outline on it and I saw how bad it was.

[trashhh]

Originally posted by trashhh@Nov 23 2006, 03:02 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40649.jpg

someone told me to tell em when ive coloured this but i forget who it was so here it is
bump.. i agree now the face doesnt really fit in

[G - Wahl]

Trash, that is soo dope.
The fill is ridiculous, it looks like it was done on a computer.

[glass]

Originally posted by trashhh+Nov 24 2006, 11:49 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Nov 24 2006, 11:49 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Nov 23 2006, 03:02 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40649.jpg

someone told me to tell em when ive coloured this but i forget who it was so here it is
bump.. i agree now the face doesnt really fit in [/b][/quote]
holy damn dude, that fill is insane, i love it. great colors and i like the no outline, makes it stand out like crazy. the face doesn&#39;t really fit it but it still looks good on it&#39;s own.

[glass]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl+Nov 24 2006, 10:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (G - Wahl @ Nov 24 2006, 10:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-extirpate@Nov 24 2006, 03:17 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p258/dillingerdilger/newstyl.jpg
Very nice, just make the O a bit smaller. [/b][/quote]
i agree, if the &#39;o&#39; was a bit more narrow and less fat it would pull it together. look&#39;s great though dude, very nice.

[nickstix]

Messin around with my throwie
http://www.freewebs.com/defense/sacro.jpg

what you think?

[ASB_ONE]

the a looks rele weird, it dosnt stay the same thickness, i duno try n &#39;squash&#39; the letters in aswell for a throwie but i mean thats just how i like em.

yo smith i took ur advice was some gd crit

peace

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0110_000.jpg

[uhhh]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 24 2006, 11:54 AM
Trash, that is soo dope.
The fill is ridiculous, it looks like it was done on a computer.
that was obviously done on a computer.

[wood]

that trash piece has to be photoshopped

[G - Wahl]

Just did this
Can I get some C+C please

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/3680/picture004gm4.th.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture004gm4.jpg)

[glass]

good idea, try working on the lettering more. make them seem like they are part of the same style.

[Proper]

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/8623/picture001wy2.jpg

Some toy told me to post in the toy book, so why not?

[Loz emlintio]

That&#39;s some pretty tight art goin on with the 3D colouring. I like the lettering.
THe colour contrast is pretty tight aswell. shame about the black bit underneath.

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 24 2006, 11:54 AM
Trash, that is soo dope.
The fill is ridiculous, it looks like it was done on a computer.
hahahaha :lol: looks like it was done on a computer? it CLEARLY was, just to let all of you know, ut noenthless you have a good grasp of 3D, and excellent one actually, just keep going at those letters, shits fresh and lose the face

Peace

[krazzie_ammo]

TRASH - i recently got photoshop :) how do you fill with photoshop?

[ThickGravy]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 24 2006, 12:34 PM
the a looks rele weird, it dosnt stay the same thickness, i duno try n &#39;squash&#39; the letters in aswell for a throwie but i mean thats just how i like em.

yo smith i took ur advice was some gd crit

peace

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0110_000.jpg
Loving your handstyle for your tag.

[afek]

thanx for all the crits most ive ever gotten

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by ras+Nov 20 2006, 03:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras &#064; Nov 20 2006, 03:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Nov 20 2006, 07:58 PM
theres hardley anything to crit...

bowser...if u work with that stlye it could come out different and hot...

scanned like a &#036;5 hoe...

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/7259/dop11tt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits crits crits please... ;)

Thanks
yo....man...if i dont put arrows i always think that the peice will end up looking bare...is there anyway around this...its damn annoying..

oh and bump on this page cuz i was bottom of the last page..

crits and comments please ;)

thanks [/b][/quote]
i dont mind arrows i just think there badly placed on that piece ... tho i reallly like the letters .. nice and clean and those little bumps on each letter are cool .. :ph34r: EDIT: the character is fresh

[P!P]

HEY EVERYONE....

finally got a good throw up.....and i fucking got arrested. it was about three weeks ago, so this is only my second post since i got out....

the cops said they "followed my footprints" ...what you think?

[ASB_ONE]

didnt someone say feds come on here anyway?

[Guerrilla876]

Originally posted by P&#33;P@Nov 24 2006, 05:28 PM
HEY EVERYONE....

finally got a good throw up.....and i fucking got arrested. it was about three weeks ago, so this is only my second post since i got out....

the cops said they "followed my footprints" ...what you think?
probably meanin&#39; you left evidence around and they just put clues together, etc.

[P!P]

yep....well, I had a bunch of empty cans about 200 yards away from the peice.
did it at 10 PM. and got woken up and put inn cuffs at 10 AM..
.it was total bullshit. because i am the only on that writes around here. they wanna make an example out of me

[ASB_ONE]

dude u left your empty cans by your piece?????

[TricksForKids]

this isnt a discussion forum, stop talking and post fliks, this conversation is now done, go tell people how you got caught somwhere else, or do it in pms

Thanks

[ASB_ONE]

sorry tricks i was just shocked by the stupidity of that act.

anyone wana exchange?

[wood]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/twirl.jpg


crits please

3d advice

[-MaCKiE-]

tag looks niice.. the K is dope, rest ain same standerd bah i kno fuk all bout 3D... so..


http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/637/leanpencillhoboha5.jpg

[im_the_best]

ahhhhhhhhhhhh
hahahahahhahahaha
thats terrible, omg lol
go back to the toys thread

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by im_the_best@Nov 24 2006, 07:07 PM
ahhhhhhhhhhhh
hahahahahhahahaha
thats terrible, omg lol
go back to the toys thread
...And what do you think this is?

Keep sketching, just do straight letters and work on your handies (both wood and Mackie... well this counts for 90% of this forum I guess)

[im_the_best]

shut the hell up
u wanna battle
ill kik ur ass

[bouncingsoul]

Hmm, OK? What word? I&#39;ll get it up tomorrow or the day after

[im_the_best]

the word is bgwiuer
mwa hahahaha
i am invincible
u will bow to meeeeeeeeee

[whoarethereal evil]

great some more dickheads on line

miiiiiint

[kaweJFK]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061124/16/3/2/c/32c3cd33da6ee533b9a32ff7bd9fd949200611240_full.jpg

i will put it here as well, comments + tips please? thanks

-MaCKiE- = dont try wild style just yet, and i dont know much about characters,
but i would make it more simple (If YoU gEt Me)

- long smoth lines insted of scraggle ones

"sAfE SaFe sAfE SaFe sAfE SaFe"

EDIT - it says lucy by the way,

&#092;/ "JOKER not so - sAfE SaFe sAfE SaFe sAfE SaFe"&#092;/
&#092;/ oh dear, leave now, YEAH ILL HAVE A BATLLE &#092;/

[im_the_best]

hey shut up
ill battle u to

[ASB_ONE]

cezr where u at mang this clown gota go surely?

[whoarethereal evil]

hahaha no no u wont battle me

u will how ever

go bye bye when cezr gets around 2 his job&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[uhhh]

tricks- where my piece?

[im_the_best]

awwwwwww
ur scared to battle me
u fuckin pussy
im the bestttttttttt&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[kaweJFK]

^ i will battle you "im the best"

[im_the_best]

shut the hell up
ive seen ur shit
u dont stand a chance

[ASB_ONE]

eiether post somit or fook orf

[kaweJFK]

come on lets battle pussy, lets write "SaFe" or "u GeT mE"

im gonna stop posting now, and start PMing, this is wasting space,

[-MaCKiE-]

im the best ill battle u..

[alive]

ill battle any of you.
now shut the fuck up.
C3ZR, would you be so kind?

[ASB_ONE]

post somit alive u aint posted anythin new in ages

[alive]

gotta get new batteries for the cam :(

coming soon to a post near you. . . . . .

[bouncingsoul]

...I just went out... And you&#39;ve got to be kidding with that word. I just realized this page is devoid of flicks... So here it goes, posting old shit

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0348.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0347.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0346.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by alive@Nov 24 2006, 08:30 PM
ill battle any of you.
now shut the fuck up.
C3ZR, would you be so kind?
Maybe, but I&#39;d need at least 2 very high quality entries. No "freestyle" pen sketches. If it gets its own thread, it&#39;s gotta be fire. ;)


i mean hot fire godamnit, not "damn, that&#39;s kinda hot".......uh.......fire...

[quasnob]

Wanted some opinions on this. Tis entry for battle (peeta). Am considering starting all over again because I not real happy with structure but I&#39;m kind of undecided so feedback would be great. Exoskeliton only at this point ...

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p8092748.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Nov 24 2006, 07:25 PM
hahaha no no u wont battle me

u will how ever

go bye bye when cezr gets around 2 his job&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
sorry guys... I just got home from work. The kid is gone.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by quasnob@Nov 24 2006, 09:36 PM
Wanted some opinions on this. Tis entry for battle (peeta). Am considering starting all over again because I not real happy with structure but I&#39;m kind of undecided so feedback would be great. Exoskeliton only at this point ...

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p8092748.jpg
I can&#39;t really criticize it, other then telling you it&#39;s awesome. I&#39;d love to poll a battle between you and sky5....


drools...

[bouncingsoul]

That looks like inkbits&#39; style, which is amazingly sexy btw... That A is siiiick

[inkbits]

Originally posted by quasnob@Nov 25 2006, 12:36 PM
Wanted some opinions on this. Tis entry for battle (peeta). Am considering starting all over again because I not real happy with structure but I&#39;m kind of undecided so feedback would be great. Exoskeliton only at this point ...

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p8092748.jpg
sorry folks it is me inkbits posting. quasnob is my brothers account didn&#39;t realize was logged in as him. Cheers for comments, will probally continue on it. Hopefully colour brings it out a bit more and breaks it up a little.

[G - Wahl]

Lovely as always inkbits..
That A is sick.

[freakshow]

that is very sexy ink bits.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/1539/mamamarfw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


this is my first throw for this name....

[jerm_mtl]

work on the second letter

[Stonk]

is the second letter supposed to be an a?

[dajam410]

I&#39;m slowly progressing with my letter structure...

Heres my latest creation. Sketched out on paper, colored in Photoshop:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/newsketch.jpg

Constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated

[keeblaa]

this is some of my stuff

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4062/nov2408wo9.jpg

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7043/nov2409mn5.jpg

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4073/nov2410mz6.jpg

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4636/nov2411wi2.jpg

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6336/nov2415hy4.jpg

[alive]

PEETA- dope dope dope. im not good enough to give crits. u dont belong in this thread&#33;

i gotta get some new sketches up.

C3ZR. what i meant b4, is would you please come and get rid of all the pointless bullshit on the page

"pussy&#33;
no ura pussy&#33;
ura bigger pussy&#33;
ur the ultra pussy&#33;
pussy x 1000&#33;
meany&#33; battle me&#33;
no u battle me&#33;
pussy&#33;"



peace.

[Chop Logic]

What I&#39;ve been up to latley, most of these are from class:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/pomb1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/rmp1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/tonedeaf1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/phow1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/maria1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/lime1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/cupid1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/claim1.jpg

crits/comments please.

[G - Wahl]

RMP + Claim are lookin nice
Nice style you got

[uhhh]

hey alive, you wanna do an exchange? i dont cafre if it takes awile with camera trouble or whatever. heres examples of my stuff...
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-043S-1.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-041S.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

the 1st pic reminds me of waster...anyway...heres a new throw im workin on..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/DSCF1134.jpg
w.e. drunk as a mofo...