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Apoc Dozer
11-25-2006, 03:09 AM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/3538/ikyhjco7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



As you can see I need some help with this

nero122
11-25-2006, 03:35 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sere.jpg

kinda gesus style probs gnna get the shit ripped outa me but w/e wernt bitin just love his style n tryed sumthin like it crits n coments?

shamee1991
11-25-2006, 07:29 AM
umm..i can see but just not there yet

whoarethereal evil
11-25-2006, 07:47 AM
that fucking peeta :wub:

shamee1991
11-25-2006, 07:56 AM
whoarethereal evil Posted on Nov 25 2006, 08:47 AM
that fucking peeta

how is dat peeta this is peeta
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/6568/peetasparkipeetavrwebdg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 08:35 AM
nero - shits kinda fresh man just the colouring rele confuses me.

Sluts_r_us
11-25-2006, 08:40 AM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 25 2006, 12:29 AM


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/DSCF1134.jpg
w.e. drunk as a mofo...
bumpidy....n nero...you shit looks ALOT like jesus' stuff...especially the s.

edit: yeah sorry nero didnt read what you said..im more of a "scrolling" type of guy then a read all the shit in the threads guy.

fuckthatgame
11-25-2006, 09:16 AM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3515/p1010075mv7.jpg
In progress, how do you like it?

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 09:28 AM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Nov 24 2006, 12:34 PM
the a looks rele weird, it dosnt stay the same thickness, i duno try n 'squash' the letters in aswell for a throwie but i mean thats just how i like em.

yo smith i took ur advice was some gd crit

peace

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0110_000.jpg
yo this got buried by that clown im_the_best chattn shit for like two pages,

fuckthatgame, duno bro looks ayt that t jus dont look right tho, depends on wat u do with the other letters i guess.

wat yall think of this bs haha

peace

uhhh
11-25-2006, 09:29 AM
Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Nov 25 2006, 08:47 AM
that fucking peeta :wub:
mine? :huh:

uhhh
11-25-2006, 09:30 AM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Nov 25 2006, 08:56 AM

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/6568/peetasparkipeetavrwebdg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dude...fuck life.

fuckthatgame
11-25-2006, 09:31 AM
Yo its not a T its a J

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 09:33 AM
if thats a j u need to go back to simples lol

uhhh
11-25-2006, 09:35 AM
scratch that.. if thats a letter..

anyways dont over lap your 3d and at this point your letters either, dont break them up, it looks really bad. go back to simples. so if you want to do a j, make is like this: J or j

fuckthatgame
11-25-2006, 09:37 AM
naw, i think its a j and it makes sense to me. Im gonna keep doin it cuz i like it.......People like to hear that their stuff looks good, so i post my stuff in hopes of someone complimenting it, not to tell me to change it entirely

fuckthatgame
11-25-2006, 09:41 AM
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-044S-1.jpg

Is this yours? If so then idk where you got the idea that i should go to simples....cuz from what im seein..

uhhh
11-25-2006, 09:42 AM
im not going to compliement it when its not compliement worthy. im trying to help you so that one day, months off, you can get on here, post something and everyone will like it. so you can keep doing that if you want but at some point your gonna realize it sucks and you need to do simples. its a process. you HAVE to start with simples, it gives you your base of understanding letters and good ways to bend them and such while still making them legible.

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 09:45 AM
Originally posted by inkbits+Nov 24 2006, 09:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (inkbits @ Nov 24 2006, 09:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-quasnob@Nov 25 2006, 12:36 PM
Wanted some opinions on this. Tis entry for battle (peeta). Am considering starting all over again because I not real happy with structure but I&#39;m kind of undecided so feedback would be great. Exoskeliton only at this point ...

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p8092748.jpg
sorry folks it is me inkbits posting. quasnob is my brothers account didn&#39;t realize was logged in as him. Cheers for comments, will probally continue on it. Hopefully colour brings it out a bit more and breaks it up a little. [/b][/quote]
thats no toy mate

uhhh
11-25-2006, 09:45 AM
yes. that is mine. not my favorite but if you realzie, most lines are even, where theyre not they increase at a good rate.

now if youd like to talk about this further Pm me so we can stop wasting space.

fuckthatgame
11-25-2006, 09:47 AM
Wheres the structure in it? Do you know what structure is? Lines increasing at a good rate? wtf does taht mean hahah increase at a good rate? And most lines are even? what?

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 09:47 AM
fuckthatgame, i kno wat ur saying man its hard to take on crits that you dont feel are right if you feel your style is better but imo i think ur style is ahead of itself to be able to add the extensions and cut the letters like you have you need an understanding of the letters and where du get that understanding from.......simple letter structure. the fact that i mistook (is that a word?) your t for j says to me that the structure isnt great.

jus ma two cents take it on board if u like, or dont whadda i care lol??

peace

fuckthatgame
11-25-2006, 09:50 AM
thanks for the positive critz. much appreciated

krazzie_ammo
11-25-2006, 10:06 AM
heres some tags and throws,
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/962/73wh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits appreciated :)

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 10:08 AM
Eyyyy, that peeta was for the battle, he doesn&#39;t really write peeta. The real peeta writes peeta...

4 peetas in 2 sentences

:edit: Craaaaaaaaaaaaaze, The throws are good simple (E doesn&#39;t seem to fit though...) and the handies are good simple too

krazzie_ammo
11-25-2006, 10:27 AM
yeah, ive been practising my throws and tags on pieces of wood and now i think its time to go into the big bad world with a spray can&#33; hopefully...after my exams :P

dajam410
11-25-2006, 11:12 AM
Originally posted by dajam410@Nov 24 2006, 10:33 PM
I&#39;m slowly progressing with my letter structure...

Heres my latest creation. Sketched out on paper, colored in Photoshop:
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/newsketch.jpg

Constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated
Bump. Anyone have comments?

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 11:56 AM
...Your handie is good

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 12:00 PM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1439/eckuepyd7.jpghttp://img137.imageshack.us/img137/9471/eckue2pcb2.jpghttp://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6351/eckue3pgo5.jpghttp://img241.imageshack.us/img241/2954/eckue4pam8.jpg

TricksForKids
11-25-2006, 12:07 PM
that was done on a computer correct? it looks like it says eckue or some shit lol, umm all the letters need some work, theyre getting there, but the way you stertch them out vertically takes away from their structure

krazzie_ammo
11-25-2006, 12:14 PM
just did a page but imageshack won&#39;t let me upload, anyone know any picture uploading websites that i dont have to sign up for?

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 12:15 PM
Tricksforkids - That is exactly what it says. Yes, I thought I&#39;d try and color it digitally for once. As you can see, I&#39;m not the best. Thanks for the feed.

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 12:17 PM
quick throws i dont do em much:

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0119_000.jpg

TricksForKids
11-25-2006, 12:21 PM
nah linx i didnt mean the name was shit, its just strange, i appreciate how you took time to put it all together, and you actually cared about how it looked as a whole because you focues on making your E&#39;s symmetrical, your starting a great point and with your attitude and the way you sketch you&#39;re only going to get better

to tell you the truth the best pic is the one in pencil, try not to do an all black 3D as well, it will look good with the occasional directional lines in it, just stretch the pice out a bit more horizontally, and dont be afraid to use the occasional extension now

Asem - the bottom throw is the best, work on that E, its too bubbly and doesnt flow, and try a new M, it looks to childish, the S is the best letter though

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 12:24 PM
yeh i hardly eva do throws i never paint em eiether i like em bubbly tho
guess im just a bubbly kinda guy hahaha

afek
11-25-2006, 12:27 PM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/000_0430.jpg
feedback?

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 12:28 PM
solid simples. make em yours....

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 12:30 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 25 2006, 01:21 PM
to tell you the truth the best pic is the one in pencil, try not to do an all black 3D as well, it will look good with the occasional directional lines in it, just stretch the pice out a bit more horizontally, and dont be afraid to use the occasional extension now




was this intended for me?

TricksForKids
11-25-2006, 12:45 PM
yep^

afek
11-25-2006, 01:01 PM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/000_0433.jpg

thanx

starting fresh

feedback?

krazzie_ammo
11-25-2006, 01:06 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/962/73wh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/9030/74wb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

etch a sketch
11-25-2006, 01:18 PM
please crit/comment the dude above ur post..

asb one: i liek ur throws, i feelin the s

afek: nice simples man keep workin and it and when u think ur ready go for harder peieces wit add ons and stuff

krazzie: i liek ur character and the handies with the purple background on em is what am feelin

uhhh
11-25-2006, 01:39 PM
TRICKS-am i ever getting my sketch?

Apoc
11-25-2006, 01:40 PM
lookin good craze

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/PB240074.jpg

thinkin about changing my name to aune, just because there was another aone. plus this one looks kinda like a U

nero122
11-25-2006, 01:52 PM
Originally posted by nero122@Nov 25 2006, 04:35 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sere.jpg

kinda gesus style probs gnna get the shit ripped outa me but w/e wernt bitin just love his style n tryed sumthin like it crits n coments?
more crits shud i keep the style or edit it ?dont wanna b seen as a gesus copy i just love his style

Fosale!
11-25-2006, 01:53 PM
it looked better before i outlined it in sharpie.
pen freestyle.
no im not changing my name
and i added 3d on the M that wasnt supposed to be there.

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/2572/meeeqq1.jpg

Apoc
11-25-2006, 02:12 PM
nero, avoid blatent ripoffs. And give crits to me please

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 02:20 PM
looks good apoc keep it up bro just at same point as me init so i cant rele help you.

TricksForKids
11-25-2006, 02:21 PM
apoc, nice simples, keep it up, the a&#39;s clean, make your other letters follow

nero, that is a digusting ripoff of gesus, cut it out or no one will help you

fosale, keep that shit up, the letters are looking funy

uhhhhhh --- i dont know when your gettin your sketch

Fosale!
11-25-2006, 02:24 PM
huh, funny letters?
isnt that bad.

TricksForKids
11-25-2006, 02:26 PM
funky*

Fluffy Bunnies
11-25-2006, 02:34 PM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Nov 23 2006, 04:27 PM
Something I did in school. I was bored and only had one marker.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/asiansss.jpg
Are you this guy in here? cuz his name is sole...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mo09KaHAiP0

Make your letters more structured and clean... and wtf at the pic&#33;

shamee1991
11-25-2006, 03:04 PM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8099/image007nv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bin try dis style, secound one i&#39;ve done think i got the hang of it...

Fosale!
11-25-2006, 03:12 PM
no.
wayyy to many unneccessary arrows

Kaze
11-25-2006, 03:15 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a349/rylandieno/Picture007.jpg



Jus a lil thing i did in like 10 mins

shamee1991
11-25-2006, 03:23 PM
Fosale&#33; Posted on Nov 25 2006, 04:12 PM
no. wayyy to many unneccessary


it the style...

krazzie_ammo
11-25-2006, 03:29 PM
SHAME - i dunno, i would like to see it cleaned up and coloured please :P

Fosale!
11-25-2006, 03:30 PM
i know but the arrows are supposed to be placed in a way where the letters can look good and only your 2nd letter looks ok IMO

shamee1991
11-25-2006, 03:33 PM
what that ment to mean?

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 03:43 PM
theres a ridiculous amount f arrows in that piece shame, even a blind guy would tell you youv got too many arrows in that piece

South-Pole
11-25-2006, 03:45 PM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Nov 25 2006, 04:04 PM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8099/image007nv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bin try dis style, secound one i&#39;ve done think i got the hang of it...
i agree there shouldnt be many arrows there should be a few arrows but not that much or else we will never reconise the letters and it would look wack but i like your R in that piece

revolt92
11-25-2006, 03:55 PM
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/8610/dsc00037ij8.jpg


crits

capo93
11-25-2006, 03:56 PM
Originally posted by Kaze@Nov 25 2006, 04:15 PM
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a349/rylandieno/Picture007.jpg



Jus a lil thing i did in like 10 mins
work on keeping all ur lines the same thickness and the same style the z is just like wtf is that doing in there???

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 04:00 PM
K needs work

shamee1991
11-25-2006, 04:00 PM
(shamee1991 @ Nov 25 2006, 04:04 PM)
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8099/image007nv1.jpg

bin try dis style, secound one i&#39;ve done think i got the hang of it...


i agree there shouldnt be many arrows there should be a few arrows but not that much or else we will never reconise the letters and it would look wack but i like your R in that piece


kk i&#39;ll have another go...and it&#39;s shamee hahaa...

shamee1991
11-25-2006, 04:01 PM
(shamee1991 @ Nov 25 2006, 04:04 PM)
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8099/image007nv1.jpg]http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8099/image007nv1.jpg

bin try dis style, secound one i&#39;ve done think i got the hang of it...*


i agree there shouldnt be many arrows there should be a few arrows but not that much or else we will never reconise the letters and it would look wack but i like your R in that piece


kk i&#39;ll have another go...and it&#39;s shamee hahaa...

Fosale!
11-25-2006, 04:47 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Nov 25 2006, 02:53 PM

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/2572/meeeqq1.jpg
dont like doing this but bump.
i just want feed back on the direction of this style.
should i thicken out the middle bar on the M a little?

revolt92
11-25-2006, 05:02 PM
Mabey give us a pic of it going sideways, just a thought but yeah make the middle bit thicker, its kinda cool yeah.

kaweJFK
11-25-2006, 05:17 PM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061118/13/f/9/5/f955ae01ef5ac9430127dc551e70fa8f200611180_full.jpg
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061124/16/3/2/c/32c3cd33da6ee533b9a32ff7bd9fd949200611240_full.jpg

comments + tips please, as i diddnt get any last time

-yeah i like the M "fosale", but the E need a little work, mayby change a line in the E so its thin like the one in the M

whoarethereal evil
11-25-2006, 06:06 PM
ur throwie is hootttttt

but extend the left hand leg of the k so its equal

and maybe do summit with ur e i dno wht tho just nt feelimng it as a single letter but it works

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 06:26 PM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6355/dscn0281wa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new peeta entry copared to the old

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5116/dscn0153pu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 06:30 PM
I like the green and the style isn&#39;t too bad. Handstyles are dope though.

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7166/save0002sa5.jpg

MY MARKERS SUCK. BUT SO DO I.

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 06:33 PM
learn to crit shit before you post yours

:angry:

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 06:34 PM
Sorry sir. Didn&#39;t know.

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 06:37 PM
i say goodday B)

ASB_ONE
11-25-2006, 06:43 PM
swifted the new peeta sketch is sooooo much better thn the other one

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 06:46 PM
i kno right?

it took me like 10 sketches to get it perfect

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 06:49 PM
...Sorry to burst your bubble but I think both of them suck... STRAIGHT LETTERS WITH EVEN WIDTHS... I know you can do them, and they look 10000000000x better than what you do.

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 06:52 PM
what bubble? :(

taine
11-25-2006, 07:18 PM
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9063/1002956ah8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it aint the best coloring job in the world, but other wise what do you guys think??

Linkzone1
11-25-2006, 08:45 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 25 2006, 07:49 PM
...Sorry to burst your bubble but I think both of them suck... STRAIGHT LETTERS WITH EVEN WIDTHS... I know you can do them, and they look 10000000000x better than what you do.
are you sending that at me?

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 09:07 PM
Nah, that was to shifted... But that counts for 90% of the people in this thread...

...
..
.

:edit: My sketches are shit now (haven&#39;t sketched all Thanksgiving break... FUCK)

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0349.jpg

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 09:31 PM
**shakes head**


your not one to talk bouncing soul...you go around telling people that all of their stuff sucks, coming from a person that only does sketches...w/e you only do pencil, but your shits not the perfect example of good letter structure or any aspect of graffiti, so until your perfect, dont go around telling people their work sucks

SKA11289
11-25-2006, 09:37 PM
edit

Fosale!
11-25-2006, 09:54 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Nov 25 2006, 07:26 PM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6355/dscn0281wa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new peeta entry copared to the old

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5116/dscn0153pu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits
the leg on the T should be going the other way.
J&#39;s curve to the left T&#39;s to the right.
so it reads Peeja.

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 09:58 PM
Ay, just sayin I think straight letters look better than the stuff you do... I guess it&#39;s personal opinion then? (damn I use "personal opinion" too much)

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Nov 25 2006, 10:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Nov 25 2006, 10:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Nov 25 2006, 07:26 PM
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/6355/dscn0281wa0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new peeta entry copared to the old

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5116/dscn0153pu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits
the leg on the T should be going the other way.
J&#39;s curve to the left T&#39;s to the right.
so it reads Peeja. [/b][/quote]
not even.....1st of all please get off my nuts

2nd of all a j would have a crease going down, thats just an extension

Fosale!
11-25-2006, 10:31 PM
yeah the extension on js go to the left and the extensions on ts go to the right

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 10:31 PM
... We&#39;re just trying to help you?

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 10:37 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 25 2006, 10:58 PM
Ay, just sayin I think straight letters look better than the stuff you do... I guess it&#39;s personal opinion then? (damn I use "personal opinion" too much)
how in the fuck are you helping me dude?

whooo i think this shit looks better than you, both of them suck

thats not help bro ;)

Kace
11-25-2006, 10:41 PM
yo guys im thinking about bombing this what do you guys think.
its just a quik sketch though
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6492/scan0004yd7.jpg

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 10:49 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Nov 25 2006, 11:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Nov 25 2006, 11:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@Nov 25 2006, 10:58 PM
Ay, just sayin I think straight letters look better than the stuff you do... I guess it&#39;s personal opinion then? (damn I use "personal opinion" too much)
how in the fuck are you helping me dude?

whooo i think this shit looks better than you, both of them suck

thats not help bro ;) [/b][/quote]
Not saying any other shit looks better than the stuff you do... I know you can do it yourself (or I&#39;m really really really sure) and I think doing straight letters will be better than doing the stuff you&#39;re doing now because

a-looks better at the moment
b-will help in the long run

...Sorry, this shit gets repeated 10x over each page of this thread, but it&#39;s true...

Kace
11-25-2006, 10:53 PM
sorry for the double post but i need to know your crits tonight cuz im going painting tonight&#33;
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6492/scan0004yd7.jpg
I NEED to know sorry for the double post

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 10:57 PM
Is that supposed to be just a C?

...What&#39;s the point of that?

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Nov 25 2006, 11:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Nov 25 2006, 11:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Nov 25 2006, 11:37 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@Nov 25 2006, 10:58 PM
Ay, just sayin I think straight letters look better than the stuff you do... I guess it&#39;s personal opinion then? (damn I use "personal opinion" too much)
how in the fuck are you helping me dude?

whooo i think this shit looks better than you, both of them suck

thats not help bro ;)
Not saying any other shit looks better than the stuff you do... I know you can do it yourself (or I&#39;m really really really sure) and I think doing straight letters will be better than doing the stuff you&#39;re doing now because

a-looks better at the moment
b-will help in the long run

...Sorry, this shit gets repeated 10x over each page of this thread, but it&#39;s true... [/b][/quote]
now that sounds like help ;)

SKA11289
11-25-2006, 11:04 PM
like bouncing said whats the point of just a "c"(directed to Kase)






I tried my first time to do a cursive style...dont think it came out to good.
Its says "SE", hope everyone knows there lower case cursives so its readable....Crits?
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/438/scan0001mi9.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001mi9.jpg)

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 11:06 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Nov 26 2006, 12:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Nov 26 2006, 12:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 25 2006, 11:49 PM

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Nov 25 2006, 11:37 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@Nov 25 2006, 10:58 PM
Ay, just sayin I think straight letters look better than the stuff you do... I guess it&#39;s personal opinion then? (damn I use "personal opinion" too much)
how in the fuck are you helping me dude?

whooo i think this shit looks better than you, both of them suck

thats not help bro ;)
Not saying any other shit looks better than the stuff you do... I know you can do it yourself (or I&#39;m really really really sure) and I think doing straight letters will be better than doing the stuff you&#39;re doing now because

a-looks better at the moment
b-will help in the long run

...Sorry, this shit gets repeated 10x over each page of this thread, but it&#39;s true...
now that sounds like help ;) [/b][/quote]
Ha cool, we be buddies now right?

... Now excuse me while I bump my post for critz


Nah, that was to shifted... But that counts for 90% of the people in this thread...

...
..
.

:edit: My sketches are shit now (haven&#39;t sketched all Thanksgiving break... FUCK)

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0349.jpg

BUMP

Kace
11-25-2006, 11:07 PM
i just see a whole bunch of people doing just one letter i think they do it to make it just really quik so i just thought id try

ShIfTeD
11-25-2006, 11:08 PM
Originally posted by Kace@Nov 25 2006, 11:53 PM
sorry for the double post but i need to know your crits tonight cuz im going painting tonight&#33;
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6492/scan0004yd7.jpg
I NEED to know sorry for the double post
NO DONT GO PAINTING TONIGHT&#33;&#33;&#33;

wait till your good on paper

uhhh
11-25-2006, 11:50 PM
newww.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-047S.jpg
crits, comments...

bouncingsoul
11-25-2006, 11:53 PM
AR? It looks good though. That R (if it is an R) looks really nice and the A (if it is an A looks like it&#39;s too short and stuff... Bring the right leg down some more and bring it closer to the left leg... Maybe move that block thing down a bit... I dunno.

...Want to do an exchange?

knews2

Kace
11-25-2006, 11:54 PM
i like it quite abit

nero122
11-26-2006, 03:30 AM
couple pages bk soz for my pic i dont mean to be seen as a copy but i spent 2days working on the letters n then another 2 colourin so i dont see how i copied his style exactly , i even said i know im gnna get the shit ripped out me in my first post of it n said how much i love hhis style the only letter i looked at of his was &#39;s&#39; the rest i came up with myself
so w/e

krazzie_ammo
11-26-2006, 05:24 AM
SKA - I like the cursive idea, i sometimes do my tags in cursive :P but make the E the same size as the S and dont have such a large 3d, make it a bit smaller and you&#39;ll be golden&#33;

KNEWS - I always love the way your letters end to take out all the negative space but for the top one the K and N and formed together and the E looks a bit outta place. And for the second one, i like it, but the K and N are thin and the E comes out fat. Do your whole name, i think it would look really good.

UHH - Its a really good, fresh style. but bring the A down so its parallel with the R. Do you just write AR?

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/962/73wh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/9030/74wb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

revolt92
11-26-2006, 05:48 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7863/dsc00039jx2.jpg
crits please

Kace
11-26-2006, 05:50 AM
the throw at the top im not diggin so much and the tag in handwriting looks like it says eraze
jus a lil work and they be good bro

Kace
11-26-2006, 05:53 AM
dip that name is from the game marco eko but whatever write it if you want and all the addins in the tags just make it look huge toy im not saying you are a huge toy but just work on doing the letters as a simple one dont try and make it look all fancy with the start and that other stuff

revolt92
11-26-2006, 05:54 AM
krazzie-looks cool, but the one next to the star is that meant to say erase.

And thanks kace i didnt realise the guy on that game was called dip, my bad.

South-Pole
11-26-2006, 06:30 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/Save.jpg

:(.........






crits?

Syren
11-26-2006, 07:49 AM
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9804/syrenstick2kt3.png

pff looks like shit... i had to put the tag on using a drop shadow brush on photoshop though... i was feeling too lazy to zoom. the other on is better but im remaking it. the R looks like shit on the one i didnt post

Syren
11-26-2006, 07:52 AM
oh and that thing is carl... beenzys best friend :P

Mr.Sars
11-26-2006, 08:04 AM
Originally posted by revolt92@Nov 26 2006, 06:48 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7863/dsc00039jx2.jpg
crits please
Revolt eh?
where the fuck you from?

Linkzone1
11-26-2006, 08:05 AM
Keep workin with those handstyles man. One day they&#39;ll get ya.

revolt92
11-26-2006, 09:22 AM
Mr sars- im from the uk why?

ROYALE
11-26-2006, 09:45 AM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p127/MALEK_TMA/DSC00097.jpg

crits?

uhhh
11-26-2006, 10:02 AM
put your letters closer together. and do some simpler stuff. just like MAL, if thats what that says.

bouncing soul-sure, i&#39;ll exchange. get me back with an AR

ras
11-26-2006, 10:03 AM
royale...looks good apart from the I ...looks like a L

sum weekend stuf...changed my name to from ATEK to ATEC...i fucking hate L&#39;s

heres a peice with the new..name..

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/5515/atec1ki6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres sum other stuff before i didecied to change it from the weekend

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/3173/atel8ri1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and...

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/254/atel9jk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

finally..experimenting with fills...

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/4776/atel10yw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on all please...thanks ;) :)

uhhh
11-26-2006, 10:05 AM
all of those. no. except teh straight letter thing. the grey and orange one. make all your letters like those orange ones and do stuff like that. ;)

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 10:08 AM
@Atel
have you ever thought about just writing Ate? because in my opinion your L is always the letter that is most lacking in your sketches and i always think that the Ate looks fresh in most of the sketches, espically that first simple in the last picture

ROYALE
11-26-2006, 10:11 AM
[QUOTE]royale...looks good apart from the I ...looks like a L

it is an L

ras
11-26-2006, 10:15 AM
well in that case it looks like an I..

and Fosale....Ate looks and sounds abit gay ;) ... i might stick with Atec...sound koooler :P thanks anyway

afek
11-26-2006, 10:17 AM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/000_0430.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/000_0434.jpg

just trying some add ons not really sure wat to think?


FEEDBACK&#33;

Linkzone1
11-26-2006, 10:17 AM
^^^ Pretty Nice Clouds

A Character I did a while back.

http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/1802/save0003qj3.jpg

Not finished yet. Workin on the fill.

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/6607/save0004za1.jpg

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 10:18 AM
links i well like that karak looks fucn gd
afek the coulouring aint v nice on the second

ras
11-26-2006, 10:20 AM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 26 2006, 04:03 PM
royale...looks good apart from the I ...looks like a L

sum weekend stuf...changed my name to from ATEK to ATEC...i fucking hate L&#39;s

heres a peice with the new..name..

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/5515/atec1ki6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres sum other stuff before i didecied to change it from the weekend

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/3173/atel8ri1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and...

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/254/atel9jk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

finally..experimenting with fills...

http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/4776/atel10yw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on all please...thanks ;) :)
bottom of the paage ..

linkzone...the cula on the 3d is kool

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 10:22 AM
ras i dun mean to be rude yeh but stop bumping ur ish jus cos its at bottom of page thats fookin annoying. that other person who citted on it was right man work on the second one i dont rele like the letters on any of the others.

ROYALE
11-26-2006, 10:41 AM
fixed the L and moved the letter alittle closer

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p127/MALEK_TMA/DSC00098.jpg

South-Pole
11-26-2006, 11:28 AM
Originally posted by South&#045;Pole@Nov 26 2006, 07:30 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/Save.jpg

:(.........






crits?
criits please

taine
11-26-2006, 11:28 AM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/7963/1002956ve0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it aint the best coloring job in the world, but any crits????

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 11:59 AM
if you crit other ppl your more likely to get crits yourself.

south pole looks like u need to work on your letters
taine looks ayt but u need someone better than me to crit that 1, looks pretty cool tho shame about the colouring.

edit: im the only motha fucr on this page to post any crits and ya keep puttn up your pics giv some other people some crits before you post your shit

sok
11-26-2006, 12:07 PM
Originally posted by taine@Nov 26 2006, 12:28 PM
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/7963/1002956ve0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it aint the best coloring job in the world, but any crits????
you should take the planets out of the backround but other than that its fine

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-26-2006, 12:10 PM
Originally posted by kaweJFK@Nov 25 2006, 06:17 PM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061118/13/f/9/5/f955ae01ef5ac9430127dc551e70fa8f200611180_full.jpg
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061124/16/3/2/c/32c3cd33da6ee533b9a32ff7bd9fd949200611240_full.jpg

comments + tips please, as i diddnt get any last time

-yeah i like the M "fosale", but the E need a little work, mayby change a line in the E so its thin like the one in the M
one of the only posts worth looking at since last time i was on here

uhhh
11-26-2006, 12:18 PM
bouncingsoul- heres your exchange piece. i&#39;m ashamed of the s but most the other letters are pretty decent.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-048S.jpg

Yusef245
11-26-2006, 12:19 PM
Originally posted by Linkzone1@Nov 26 2006, 11:17 AM
^^^ Pretty Nice Clouds

A Character I did a while back.

http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/1802/save0003qj3.jpg

Not finished yet. Workin on the fill.

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/6607/save0004za1.jpg
very nice. feelin the 3-d alot. characters dope

krazzie_ammo
11-26-2006, 12:24 PM
UHH- im really feeling that knews piece&#33;

krazzie_ammo
11-26-2006, 12:25 PM
SOUTHPOLE - practise practise practise is all i can say.

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 12:34 PM
Goddamn you work fast. Great job man. Your S is pretty good, it just doesn&#39;t look as active as your other letters I guess so it doesn&#39;t fit in...

I&#39;ll get yours soon hopefully.

uhhh
11-26-2006, 12:35 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 26 2006, 01:24 PM
UHH- im really feeling that knews piece&#33;
thanks man.
you wanna exchange? i really like your pieces.
your write craze, or is it kraze?
im write ar..

trashhh
11-26-2006, 12:48 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40649-1.jpg

new and improved version

trashhh
11-26-2006, 12:50 PM
sorry double post

uhhh
11-26-2006, 12:51 PM
man thats tight. its a lot better without the head. but wouldbe nice with some else there...

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 12:58 PM
Yo, I&#39;m really happy with this one (except for the R, but I suck at R&#39;s anyway). I took the risk of experimenting with addons on your exchange sketch and I think it worked out wonderfully... Expect more sketches like this

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0354.jpg

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 01:02 PM
t think if you put a piece on the R on the left side like a bit sticking out and then have the circle come off of that it would look better

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 01:03 PM
trash i like it man i duno thers somit i dont like bout photoshop fills, if you could do a fill like that with pens it would be dope as fook.

uhhh and bounce i like your style nice exchange&#33;

new ish:

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0123_000.jpg

ThickGravy
11-26-2006, 01:09 PM
Work on your letter structure and make sure it flows.

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 01:14 PM
Originally posted by ThickGravy@Nov 19 2006, 11:14 AM
Coloured one of my sketches from a few days ago, personally, I like the colour combo.
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o59/musterdoner/Musterd001.jpg

Sketch I just finished.
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o59/musterdoner/Musterd002.jpg

Although the last one is kind of small, im happy about the outcome of the sketch.
wat like that haha, na cheers for the crit.

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 01:17 PM
mess up on shadow.
quickie
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sec-1.jpg

krazzie_ammo
11-26-2006, 01:19 PM
Originally posted by uhhh+Nov 26 2006, 01:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh &#064; Nov 26 2006, 01:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Nov 26 2006, 01:24 PM
UHH- im really feeling that knews piece&#33;
thanks man.
you wanna exchange? i really like your pieces.
your write craze, or is it kraze?
im write ar.. [/b][/quote]
yeah sounds good, i&#39;ll have yours by tomorrow :)
it&#39;s craze btw.

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 01:21 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Nov 26 2006, 02:17 PM
mess up on shadow.
quickie
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sec-1.jpg
I like your E and your C... The S, not so much... I dunno why, maybe because it has that pointy thing in the middle with doesn&#39;t seem to fit

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 01:24 PM
word.
i know what your sayin but when i take it out it looks worse

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 01:26 PM
Yeah, throwie S&#39;s are kinda hard... I just use a swirl and that works great

trashhh
11-26-2006, 01:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40651.jpg

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 01:27 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 26 2006, 02:26 PM
Yeah, throwie S&#39;s are kinda hard... I just use a swirl and that works great
word
when i do that it doesnt go alonog with my other letters i feel as much and i just dont like it

ROYALE
11-26-2006, 01:30 PM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p127/MALEK_TMA/DSC00099.jpg




Crits?

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 01:34 PM
this ones for bouncingsoul.
different S
messed up the C but i kinda like it.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/secc.jpg

trashhh
11-26-2006, 01:36 PM
C&#39;s the best letter on that ^^ work on ur handstyle tho

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 01:37 PM
word.
trashh, i would have given you crits up above but i cant crit 3d shit.
it looks right on from what i know.

lost_for_evex
11-26-2006, 01:39 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Nov 26 2006, 01:18 PM
bouncingsoul- heres your exchange piece. i&#39;m ashamed of the s but most the other letters are pretty decent.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-048S.jpg
put 3d on it..thats wuts wrong with it

westsida
11-26-2006, 01:42 PM
trashhh, thts a good effort man
the T is fire&#33;&#33;
and the R is ill apart from the top right bit should be going back like the horizontal bar of the T
with the A,it dont really look like an A, so connect the two bars just as theyre about to turn away from each other,and maybe put a smallll bar in the middle (not touchin any of the pther bars tho)
i dont really like the S and dunno what u could do with that (sorry)
and the H is nice,but cos its so curvy it looks like a whole different style, so make it blocky instead of curvy.
play around with thse ideas and ur thing will be ill lookin (hopefully)

krazzie_ammo
11-26-2006, 02:19 PM
i still cant get over that KNEWS piece, its amazing&#33;

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/239/76mv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 02:38 PM
krazzie try makin other suttff like diff styles.. cuz i looks like u just keep postin the same stuff man btw the middle piece looks hella clean

Stevie
11-26-2006, 03:05 PM
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/1248/okwu0.jpg

Bastardo
11-26-2006, 03:07 PM
does that say on?

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/7387/picture171mv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
last name change..i swear :huh:

Stevie
11-26-2006, 03:31 PM
nah it says ok, p.s. really feeling that throwie.. so sick

Bastardo
11-26-2006, 03:34 PM
ok so stevie.. the O is on point.
the K eerrr..the left top point bring it up higher.

shamee1991
11-26-2006, 03:38 PM
feelin that piece looks SICK&#33;

some guy from NCI...
11-26-2006, 04:03 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Nov 26 2006, 03:19 PM
i still cant get over that KNEWS piece, its amazing&#33;

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/239/76mv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5454/theeesketch5do.png

...I&#39;ll leave you guys to decide this one.

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 04:06 PM
shit kraze say it aint so man that a is nearly exactly the same

TricksForKids
11-26-2006, 04:07 PM
normally, id say thats maybe a bite, or at elast heavily influenced, by krazzie has been doing that same double bar CRA sketch for like 5 months now with no attempt at improving it or changing it, so, yeah.

afek
11-26-2006, 04:09 PM
:)

krazzie_ammo
11-26-2006, 04:26 PM
i said it was influenced by Caik One when i did it the first time.

its not as if i was going to paint it&#33;

and a bite would have been to copy that exact Caik.

i did a NEMZ in that style aswell and he knew it was a Caik One influence aswell.

But if you think it&#39;s a bite then I will stop sketching that style, what do you think?

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 04:28 PM
i duno man its just as i said before that a is exactly the same near enough do wat u want rele

TricksForKids
11-26-2006, 04:29 PM
who wants their name done in the bawksters handstyle? first three to repsond with what you rwite and ill do it uop

im bored out of my skull but dont feel like doina full piece

krazzie_ammo
11-26-2006, 04:34 PM
pick me&#33; pick me&#33; do up a CRAZE please :)

ras
11-26-2006, 04:37 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...+Nov 26 2006, 10:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (some guy from NCI... @ Nov 26 2006, 10:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Nov 26 2006, 03:19 PM
i still cant get over that KNEWS piece, its amazing&#33;

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/239/76mv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/5454/theeesketch5do.png

...I&#39;ll leave you guys to decide this one. [/b][/quote]
fuck..HEAVILLY influenced......

kore
11-26-2006, 04:44 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 26 2006, 05:29 PM
who wants their name done in the bawksters handstyle? first three to repsond with what you rwite and ill do it uop

im bored out of my skull but dont feel like doina full piece
do a KESO for me man

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 04:47 PM
yup ras

tricksforkids, werent u the dude who told me to do a old english cursive piece? well i think u did ahh whatever

well heres a handwritten piece.

http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/6876/file0017sw3.jpg

TricksForKids
11-26-2006, 05:02 PM
YES&#33;&#33;&#33; man that makes me so happy ahahah YES&#33; man i love that shit, the bottom left of the N is a bit too craze, but man that makes me so happy&#33; ahah props on a fresh simple handwritten piece, that shits ill

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 05:12 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 26 2006, 05:07 PM
normally, id say thats maybe a bite, or at elast heavily influenced, by krazzie has been doing that same double bar CRA sketch for like 5 months now with no attempt at improving it or changing it, so, yeah.
yeah but id say Craze&#39;s stuff was a rip off nemz

uhhh
11-26-2006, 05:16 PM
well, craze, if your gonna stop doing that. stop 5 minutes after you finish my piece for the excahnge.

bawk- i&#39;ll take a handy.. and muh piece :P

Unded
11-26-2006, 05:22 PM
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p289/UndedWon/Sketch1.jpg

I know, toy toy toy.
Any suggestions on how I could improve, and what should be my next step would be really appreciated.
Sorry for the bad lighting, flash fucked it up so I had to use regular lighting.

nemzone
11-26-2006, 05:26 PM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8821/img147pu4.jpg

ghost make the G more squared

Unded
11-26-2006, 05:29 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 26 2006, 06:26 PM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8821/img147pu4.jpg

ghost make the G more squared
What do you mean?

That fucking looks badass dude. How did you do that fade on the 3D?

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 05:30 PM
make it more funky but not too funky, right now its too basic

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 05:31 PM
ghost

uhhh
11-26-2006, 05:32 PM
n. keep it how it is. just make the g more sqaure like the other letters. and sketch your name in block letters ( like what your doing now) and in a few months.. BAM you&#39;ll have gotten your letter structe most teh way down and yeah. but keep on the simples for awile. ;)

Unded
11-26-2006, 05:32 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert@Nov 26 2006, 06:30 PM
make it more funky but not too funky, right now its too basic
So it needs peace signs and fuzz? What do you mean? =/

Also, I really need to figure out how to do handstyles, I&#39;m just not satisfied with mine. =[
What can I do to improve it? Just practicing?

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 05:32 PM
The circley squiglle mcdoodlebobbers are wicked, i&#39;d loose the banner though.

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 05:33 PM
naw i was talkin too ghost unded but the reply a

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 05:34 PM
Naw i was talking to ghost but the reply above this one was directed towards your picture unded.

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 05:35 PM
Hightler fill innsss
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/seccc.jpg

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 05:37 PM
Fosale do the outline with the fill color next time, in your case orange.

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 05:38 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri15.jpg

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri12.jpg

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri14.jpg

Criticism?

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 05:40 PM
Siiiiiiiick, that one looks great except the lines in the C and the E extended a bit too much on the downside in that one... Make them like the one you posted before with that S and it&#39;ll look dope

kore
11-26-2006, 06:20 PM
dope stuff DERI, except on your throw the D look like a P

Sluts_r_us
11-26-2006, 06:58 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Nov 25 2006, 09:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Nov 25 2006, 09:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Nov 25 2006, 12:29 AM


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/DSCF1134.jpg
w.e. drunk as a mofo...
[/b][/quote]
..

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 06:59 PM
Looks great, but a bit sketchy... I&#39;m not one to talk about sketchiness though haha

taine
11-26-2006, 07:00 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4324/1002939tp1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

here is another one i did, any crits??

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 07:01 PM
i don&#39;t even know what it says but it looks great

taine
11-26-2006, 07:10 PM
it says ace, i didnt really feel like writin taine

taine
11-26-2006, 07:10 PM
it says ace, i didnt really feel like writin taine

taine
11-26-2006, 07:10 PM
well it says ace cuz i didnt feel like writin taine

taine
11-26-2006, 07:14 PM
sorry bout the triple post ma comp was bein gay

wood
11-26-2006, 07:16 PM
taine that shit is illlllllllllllllllll

wood
11-26-2006, 07:23 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/death.jpg

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g308/shanecagney/twirl.jpg


crits please and advice

uhhh
11-26-2006, 07:25 PM
i dont really know what to say wood. i like it.

craze- heres your exchange piece, i don&#39;t like the c and z much, just cause they dont fit this style that well, but ohhh well.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-049S-1.jpg
oh, and sorry about no color :(

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 07:28 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0355.jpg

KNEW&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

uhhh
11-26-2006, 07:32 PM
bawk knews and craze... ya&#39;ll owe meee.

taine
11-26-2006, 07:33 PM
craze, make your lines a bit more clean i guess, like so its not so sketchey lookin, but other wise i like it good letter structure and every thing :) and the arrows on the first letter come from no where

taine
11-26-2006, 07:34 PM
oh wate that was to bouncing soul

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 07:34 PM
...I did yours a while back... Refresher

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0354.jpg

"uhhh" you&#39;re pretty good man. Your style is about to get crazy I know. Just keep sketching and pushing it and it&#39;ll go off the edge and be great. Now&#39;s the time to experiment... I guess I&#39;m at that stage too

taine
11-26-2006, 07:38 PM
uhhhh- make your letters a little closser and maybe connect them some how , but other words.....dope

uhhh
11-26-2006, 07:39 PM
oh yeah sorry. i couldnt remember ifyou did mine yet.

thanks man. tricks told me that the other day. i&#39;ll keep pushin and hopefully soon...

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 07:40 PM
bouncy: man im feelin that e so much for some reason
uhh : i only think the z doesntfit in overall its pretty nice
wood : i like bottom piece but i aint feelin the karak wit the big head lol
taine : das pretty nice man keep it up btw how long did it take u to make it?

still in progress if anyone wants me to add 3d or block letterize it


http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/6528/file0019al2.jpg

uhhh
11-26-2006, 07:41 PM
Originally posted by taine@Nov 26 2006, 08:38 PM
uhhhh- make your letters a little closser and maybe connect them some how , but other words.....dope
that was an exchange for craze, thats not my word. thats probably why its not.. idk, figured out..?

i&#39;m trying to change my name.. im thinking kar, ark or rak?
i like those letters a good bunch hah.

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 07:44 PM
yo anyone like this ish?

def feel im gettn better

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0123_000.jpg

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 07:44 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 26 2006, 08:28 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0355.jpg

KNEW&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
buuuuuuump

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 07:45 PM
just go with the letters ur absolutely good at. then ud be makin crazy pieces

bouncingsoul, why did u bump it anyone couldv just gone back and looked at it...

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 07:53 PM
...Nobody actually does. Or barely anyone does...

KNOWthisX
11-26-2006, 07:57 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3720/blehfz1.jpg

sorry if i&#39;m not siq enufff brahss.

20 second page.

sky 5
11-26-2006, 07:58 PM
etch - for the most part i like the style alot . . just cant read one letter but im tired and probaly not lookin hard enough . . . looks like the letters get progressively smaller which really stands out in the "fill in the rectangle/box" style . . . sometimes i like drawing a rectangle then filling it almost completely in with letters and extensions with very lil negative space (helps if your new to extensions/wildstyle b/c it gives you some structure to work in) . . .

Stonk
11-26-2006, 08:26 PM
knowthisx- the s is good but the middle letter i cnat tell what it is.

im trying to fix fix up my old throw. old one is in the top left
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new003.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new001.jpg
/&#092;/&#092; the one that i personally like the best

these are just somethings i did when i was bored at home sick one day. probably not worth posting but whatever
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new004.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new002.jpg

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 08:33 PM
stonk work on ur throw-up e thought it was popo...

Feliks
11-26-2006, 08:50 PM
Originally posted by KNOWthisX@Nov 26 2006, 09:57 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3720/blehfz1.jpg

sorry if i&#39;m not siq enufff brahss.

20 second page.
Your hand looks kinda shakey there man. Don&#39;t hold your pen so hard ?
And if that says suf...work on your S and F. BUt good job keeping it simple.

This i did as an exchange. Kept it basically simple. he asked me to use his style, it was difficult. And it doesn&#39;t look anything like it.
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/7375/skanredonegiftvi7.jpg
edit: please for hte love of god, don&#39;t touch my handy. I know it&#39;s heineous.

jerm_mtl
11-26-2006, 08:51 PM
boucing that shits pretty sexuhal

Feliks
11-26-2006, 08:57 PM
I hope this shit doesn&#39;t get ignored. I hate posting at the bottom....

sky 5
11-26-2006, 09:08 PM
ASB - my bad but i did a quick sketch followin your letters, my A and M look like doodoo but what i wanted to show you is if you shoot a tab on the bottom of your S and E inwards it will eat up alot of that open/negative space in the middle of the letters . . your A is too thick compared to teh rest of the letters and the M needs some TLC . . .


http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3935/1202033vh7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Stonk
11-26-2006, 09:11 PM
feliks - haha not ignored. umm go simpler on the fill and structure.

took etch a sketch&#39;s advice and changed the e a bit.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new.jpg

ASB_ONE
11-26-2006, 09:11 PM
safe man i apretiate the time of doing me name thats rele gd of ya. yeh im trying man just cant get it down, i sketch at least twice every day tho so hopefully progression will come jus practice init&#33;&#33;

jerm_mtl
11-26-2006, 09:12 PM
sky5 is NOT a bastard ;)

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 09:13 PM
redid my bbook backcover bc. i was bored.
C didnt come out good so i didnt fill/outline it.
hatehatehate.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/bbook.jpg

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 09:14 PM
stonk thats better since u defined ur e. keep it up&#33;

jerm, why u got beef wit sky man?

Unded
11-26-2006, 09:16 PM
Originally posted by Feliks+Nov 26 2006, 09:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Feliks @ Nov 26 2006, 09:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-KNOWthisX@Nov 26 2006, 09:57 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3720/blehfz1.jpg

sorry if i&#39;m not siq enufff brahss.

20 second page.
Your hand looks kinda shakey there man. Don&#39;t hold your pen so hard ?
And if that says suf...work on your S and F. BUt good job keeping it simple.

This i did as an exchange. Kept it basically simple. he asked me to use his style, it was difficult. And it doesn&#39;t look anything like it.
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/7375/skanredonegiftvi7.jpg
edit: please for hte love of god, don&#39;t touch my handy. I know it&#39;s heineous. [/b][/quote]
That.... is fucking sick.
I <3 it.

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 09:18 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Nov 26 2006, 10:13 PM
redid my bbook backcover bc. i was bored.
C didnt come out good so i didnt fill/outline it.
hatehatehate.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/bbook.jpg
bump cause im a fag.

Unded
11-26-2006, 09:20 PM
Could anyone do some handstyles and draw some marshmallow "GHOST" letters? I just seem to not be able to conquer it and I can&#39;t figure out how to make a marshmallow G, H, or T =[

jerm_mtl
11-26-2006, 09:21 PM
Originally posted by etch a sketch@Nov 26 2006, 10:14 PM
stonk thats better since u defined ur e. keep it up&#33;

jerm, why u got beef wit sky man?
cause i sent him a pm with an offer ... i dint mind if he said no but he dint even have the
decency to answer me so im just waiting then im thinking &#39;&#39;fuck sky&#39;&#39;

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 09:22 PM
Sec, I love that. The C looks OK though, I dunno why you didn&#39;t fill it in... Looks wierd just a hollow C

AteskOne
11-26-2006, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Nov 26 2006, 10:08 PM
ASB - my bad but i did a quick sketch followin your letters, my A and M look like doodoo but what i wanted to show you is if you shoot a tab on the bottom of your S and E inwards it will eat up alot of that open/negative space in the middle of the letters . . your A is too thick compared to teh rest of the letters and the M needs some TLC . . .


http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3935/1202033vh7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
did i ever tell you how hot your letters make me&#33;&#33;&#33; im loving the "e" man.

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 09:28 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 26 2006, 10:22 PM
Sec, I love that. The C looks OK though, I dunno why you didn&#39;t fill it in... Looks wierd just a hollow C
i fucked up the C
the bottom cirle was to big compared to the throwback line and i just didnt like it.

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 09:30 PM
Whatever you say, it&#39;s your throw haha... Is that all you do though? Anything other than throws?

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 09:36 PM
nope.
i only do freestyle pieces for my friend kevin in math class.
there kinda good, its weird when i "try" they look bad
and i only do good sketches in school idk
but tommorow if he has em ill flick em.

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 09:40 PM
Cool, I want to see your stuff... Have you been writing since August 05 (join date)? Becuase if you have, you&#39;ve been writing the same time as me (monthwise) haha

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 09:42 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri16.jpg

crits?

Oink.
11-26-2006, 09:46 PM
Originally posted by nero122@Nov 25 2006, 04:35 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sere.jpg

kinda gesus style probs gnna get the shit ripped outa me but w/e wernt bitin just love his style n tryed sumthin like it crits n coments?
you bit the HELL out of gesus, And took a chomp out of his style. NO OFFENCE just what i had to say.

Fosale!
11-26-2006, 09:48 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 26 2006, 10:40 PM
Cool, I want to see your stuff... Have you been writing since August 05 (join date)? Becuase if you have, you&#39;ve been writing the same time as me (monthwise) haha
oh no.
ive been writing since 7th grade im a junior now i move mad slow

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 09:51 PM
Originally posted by ****.+Nov 26 2006, 10:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (****. @ Nov 26 2006, 10:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nero122@Nov 25 2006, 04:35 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sere.jpg

kinda gesus style probs gnna get the shit ripped outa me but w/e wernt bitin just love his style n tryed sumthin like it crits n coments?
you bit the HELL out of gesus, And took a chomp out of his style. NO OFFENCE just what i had to say. [/b][/quote]
shits wicked but loose those hearts their queer as fuck

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 09:55 PM
uhhh, heres my exchange piece for yous

id also appreciate crits and comments and for some people to not look over my sutff pls :)

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9460/file0021sn3.jpg

Linkzone1
11-26-2006, 09:58 PM
Originally posted by taine@Nov 26 2006, 08:00 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4324/1002939tp1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

here is another one i did, any crits??
This could be dope

Quigbert
11-26-2006, 10:03 PM
add 3d to yours etch a sketch and samw wit you linkzone

myl
11-26-2006, 10:10 PM
just fuckin with a different style

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0131-3.jpg

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 10:17 PM
Haven&#39;t seem you post in a while. I like it except the S doesnt fit for 2 reasons:

1-It&#39;s smaller than the rest of the letters
2-It doesnt have curves...