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Linkzone1
11-26-2006, 11:20 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert@Nov 26 2006, 11:03 PM
add 3d to yours etch a sketch and samw wit you linkzone
What are you talking about?
I didn't post up a pic.

etch a sketch
11-26-2006, 11:27 PM
he thought u did some dude's piece

Linkzone1
11-26-2006, 11:28 PM
ah ok

near
11-26-2006, 11:33 PM
lil bomb thing i made up...kinda cute

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010567.jpg

TricksForKids
11-26-2006, 11:39 PM
very very dope throw near

quigbert, that handstyle needs serious work, make it simpler, and stretch your throw out, take some time on your letters, and make them the same size, and stop saying everyones shits dope, because its not, and then theyre going to think its dope, and ruin the streets with their bullshit

linx, that cannot be dope, there are no vissible eltters there, its a bunch of squiggly lines, so taine, thats not dope, go simpler

myl, i like it minus the S, keep it up, the S is too fat

Sluts_r_us
11-26-2006, 11:47 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/112606_2018.jpg
niga tricks...lemm get some crits....

bouncingsoul
11-26-2006, 11:55 PM
I love it down to your handie

myl
11-27-2006, 12:09 AM
thanks for the crits guys...i figured that S would be a problem

oh well ill have to deal with it in the morn cause im beat

night all

Zoink
11-27-2006, 01:15 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/z****gf003.jpg

New name

Crit.

Zoink
11-27-2006, 01:44 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/z****gf004.jpg

crits...

ras
11-27-2006, 03:08 AM
your first is better than the 2nd...good ideas on the second...but wud u really wnah bomb a cola drink on a wall... :lol:

TricksForKids
11-27-2006, 07:34 AM
sluts is one dirty dirty bastard, you're pulling off a style id never be cpabale of sluts, just cuz im a bit of a erfectionist, you're on the path of mastering the down and dirty graffiti, which i admire, if you kept those squiggly dirty lines, but painted it cleanly, that shit would look so ill, so keep up the ruggedness, ecept maybe lose some of the overlapping lines at the botttom of each letter, peace

z****, i think its kinda cool how you make your letters have weird qualities but the only orignal one, or at least original to me is the b with the straw in it, but you also need to work on your letters, if your going towards the european style then look at some europen styles for guidance

Peace

KoreTwo
11-27-2006, 07:35 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/Peeta.jpg

Submission for the 'Peeta' battle.

Crits please?

Z****: I really like the C on the second one. Your O is kinda wierd, especially the overlap. The top part seems to curve in much faster than the bottom. Try using a pencil and lightly sketching the letter one on top of another before overlapping in order to keep proportions right.

etch a sketch
11-27-2006, 08:25 AM
kore2: i really dont like the arrow on top of the a.. i think its just me but before i read the part bout the peeta battle, i thought it was peetd try this type of a


can i squeeze anything else outta this piece? it was my exchange for "uhhh" :) :)
it says kar by the way...

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/4417/file0021jk0.jpg

beefgerky
11-27-2006, 08:35 AM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Nov 26 2006, 11:47 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/112606_2018.jpg
niga tricks...lemm get some crits....
bump. im feelin this mang.


man its been days. been going thru some shit. pondering names. dont worry tho. my pills come on friday. ;)

http://myspace-801.vo.llnwd.net/01484/10/83/1484913801_l.jpg

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 10:15 AM
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerk, you're back yay... Sketch looks good except for the E-hole... Doesn't fit in at all... You missed some drop shadow on the top-right of the K but I like it overall...

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-27-2006, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by Unded@Nov 26 2006, 10:20 PM
Could anyone do some handstyles and draw some marshmallow "GHOST" letters? I just seem to not be able to conquer it and I can&#39;t figure out how to make a marshmallow G, H, or T =[
you DON&#39;T write ghost.

read up, he&#39;s a legend.

pesk your throw is hot but still a little sketchy just clean it up and itll look fresh
gerk personally i think the e hole looks good you have a sort of funky simple style, but you already know that

capo93
11-27-2006, 10:34 AM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Nov 26 2006, 04:07 PM
does that say on?

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/7387/picture171mv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
last name change..i swear :huh:
yo bastardo that hot shit wanna do an exchange?

ASB_ONE
11-27-2006, 11:04 AM
yo baper man watsup got any hot new ish?

aces
11-27-2006, 11:29 AM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7826/1216864273933765340ag4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Wow piece of shit. Here ya go tricks. I&#39;ll do up another one cause this is the worst thing that I have done in a long ass time. You do mine? If so could you send it to me cause I missed.

ras
11-27-2006, 11:45 AM
aces...good 3d...put lines on the other side tho..

cahnged it to Ate

http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/1394/atele3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments please ;) thanks

capo93
11-27-2006, 12:41 PM
Originally posted by capo93+Nov 27 2006, 10:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (capo93 @ Nov 27 2006, 10:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bastardo@Nov 26 2006, 04:07 PM
does that say on?

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/7387/picture171mv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
last name change..i swear :huh:
yo bastardo that hot shit wanna do an exchange? [/b][/quote]
bump..

i wanna exchange bastardo plzzzz

searoner
11-27-2006, 12:45 PM
http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/28/simple2qv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
honest crits please

ras
11-27-2006, 12:54 PM
why ask for crits without giving other people crits <_<

good and simple...like the handstyle...

shamee1991
11-27-2006, 12:58 PM
get a ruler and draw them line straight

ASB_ONE
11-27-2006, 01:02 PM
na dont use a ruler bro

searoner
11-27-2006, 01:06 PM
ruler, what the fuck you on lol the lines are meant to be slightly curverd. no one should ever youse a ruler there bad you need to learn how to draw straight lines free hand i dont even own a ruler.

ras
11-27-2006, 01:13 PM
y wud u put a slight curve on 3d....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-27-2006, 01:15 PM
rulers are for fool-ers b.

asb my man i got some stuff ill post up my battery on my cam is just garbage, did some new pen freebies ill post when i get home. tweaked my style a little maybe youll like it.

searoner
11-27-2006, 01:17 PM
alright well not the 3d but the letters.

shamee1991
11-27-2006, 01:49 PM
yh well if u cant draw a straight line wid a ruler den what the fuck u gonna use??

revolt92
11-27-2006, 02:06 PM
Why not free hand? i do.

ras
11-27-2006, 02:29 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 27 2006, 04:45 PM
aces...good 3d...put lines on the other side tho..

cahnged it to Ate

http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/1394/atele3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments please ;) thanks
not one crit...i crit all of yall peices...

Crits please .. ;)

revolt92
11-27-2006, 02:31 PM
Thats nice but i prefer that person :lol: :lol: .

ShIfTeD
11-27-2006, 02:39 PM
Originally posted by ras+Nov 27 2006, 02:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Nov 27 2006, 02:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Nov 27 2006, 04:45 PM
aces...good 3d...put lines on the other side tho..

cahnged it to Ate

http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/1394/atele3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments please ;) thanks
not one crit...i crit all of yall peices...

Crits please .. ;) [/b][/quote]
the hats kinda off

marker looks like a tampon

hand has 1 big finger

work on the drips



other than that i like it

ras
11-27-2006, 02:42 PM
Tampon...lmfao...yeah the hat is off lol...thanks any way

tampon ;) :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

afek
11-27-2006, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by afek@Nov 26 2006, 11:17 AM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/000_0430.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/000_0434.jpg

just trying some add ons not really sure wat to think?


FEEDBACK&#33;
bump beacuase i got ignored i know its not good but im just trying add ons

alera
11-27-2006, 03:34 PM
^^^^^ your addons arent that bad just keep workin with them, and try them on a buch of different letters.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6524/1127061529ov7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
school sketching... obviously <_<
critz?

afek
11-27-2006, 03:37 PM
iight thanx

alera: im not feelin those letter
and make the bubbles more round

SKA11289
11-27-2006, 03:50 PM
I tried my first time to do a cursive style...dont think it came out to good.
Its says "SE", hope everyone knows there lower case cursives so its readable....Crits?
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/438/scan0001mi9.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001mi9.jpg)

ras
11-27-2006, 03:51 PM
Originally posted by alera@Nov 27 2006, 08:34 PM
^^^^^ your addons arent that bad just keep workin with them, and try them on a buch of different letters.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6524/1127061529ov7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
school sketching... obviously <_<
critz?
i like those letters...keep it up

ShIfTeD
11-27-2006, 03:57 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 27 2006, 02:42 PM
Tampon...lmfao...yeah the hat is off lol...thanks any way

tampon ;) :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
wait its actually a tampon&#33;?&#33; :blink:

ras
11-27-2006, 04:00 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I was just laffin at the way u described it ;)

:lol: :lol: :lol:

freakshow
11-27-2006, 04:07 PM
these are my second and third atempts at drawing throws...
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/3193/2moremarthrowiesso6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alera
11-27-2006, 04:14 PM
not to bad
when your doing it try to bo it fast though
i always find that my throws come out better that way

ras
11-27-2006, 04:24 PM
Originally posted by freakshow@Nov 27 2006, 09:07 PM
these are my second and third atempts at drawing throws...
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/3193/2moremarthrowiesso6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
to me they look like the letters are squished up....and lose those comments around the page kinda gay ;)

-testify-
11-27-2006, 04:24 PM
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/451/omgzlr6.png
new name really like this style
and ive seen it somewhere else but i didnt bite it i was just fucking around with the tops of my tag&#39;s letters and came up with it then recognized it from somewhere

freakshow
11-27-2006, 04:36 PM
word i was just really bored and wanted to write stuff for some reason... so your saying i should fatten the letters up a bit?

ras
11-27-2006, 04:37 PM
i really like that....maybe make the first letter have the connections proper bacuz it looks like astrayl ines...cool throw tho

ras
11-27-2006, 04:38 PM
freak show...yeaah.....a little big fatter than the green un...thats okay...just the blue one to skinny :P :P ;)

ras
11-27-2006, 05:35 PM
sum tired shit....fucked up the fingers ...

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/9263/ate2dq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:wacko:

crits and comments please yall :) ;) ;) ;) ;)

etch a sketch
11-27-2006, 05:55 PM
and freakshow, just also work on your forcefield/outline

-testify-
11-27-2006, 05:56 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Nov 27 2006, 04:24 PM
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/451/omgzlr6.png
new name really like this style
and ive seen it somewhere else but i didnt bite it i was just fucking around with the tops of my tag&#39;s letters and came up with it then recognized it from somewhere
new page
and i really like that style ras except that arrow

myl
11-27-2006, 05:56 PM
honestly i suck at crittin throwies...sorry dude


new style ive been messing with on the computer

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/seftyboii.jpg
"SEFT"

sheist
11-27-2006, 06:50 PM
http://i10.tinypic.com/2wejj1k.jpg

something i&#39;ve been doodling lately

myl
11-27-2006, 06:51 PM
simples

kicklip9634
11-27-2006, 06:55 PM
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/761/krpt2qt0.th.jpg (http://img364.imageshack.us/my.php?image=krpt2qt0.jpg)
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/9282/krpt3dr7.th.jpg (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=krpt3dr7.jpg)
critz.....

sheist
11-27-2006, 06:57 PM
Originally posted by myl@Nov 27 2006, 06:51 PM
simples
Are you talking letter structure/style

or just the lack of color?

Bastardo
11-27-2006, 06:58 PM
kurupt nice and simple. just lose the fills for now and concentrate on your letter structure.
http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/9887/picture173fx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I fuckin hate Es in this style..help?

-testify-
11-27-2006, 06:59 PM
try lowercase

TricksForKids
11-27-2006, 07:01 PM
you should write meow and i write bawk so we can start an nimal sounds crew :D

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 07:22 PM
Haha, ****&#39;s a pretty sick name too

Aborted_Fetis
11-27-2006, 07:34 PM
Originally posted by nero122@Nov 25 2006, 04:35 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/sere.jpg

Gesus called, he wants his style back....

myl
11-27-2006, 07:35 PM
Originally posted by sheist+Nov 27 2006, 06:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sheist @ Nov 27 2006, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Nov 27 2006, 06:51 PM
simples
Are you talking letter structure/style

or just the lack of color? [/b][/quote]
letter structure, do simples

dont even worry about coloring yet

-testify-
11-27-2006, 07:35 PM
holy shit...

Stonk
11-27-2006, 07:35 PM
Originally posted by Stonk@Nov 26 2006, 10:11 PM
feliks - haha not ignored. umm go simpler on the fill and structure.

took etch a sketch&#39;s advice and changed the e a bit.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new.jpg
bump

G - Wahl
11-27-2006, 07:37 PM
Stonk, im really feeling that.
Try to make the bottom of the O match the top

kicklip9634
11-27-2006, 07:43 PM
Originally posted by kicklip9634@Nov 27 2006, 06:55 PM
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/761/krpt2qt0.th.jpg (http://img364.imageshack.us/my.php?image=krpt2qt0.jpg)
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/9282/krpt3dr7.th.jpg (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=krpt3dr7.jpg)
critz.....
bump

myl
11-27-2006, 07:43 PM
Originally posted by myl@Nov 27 2006, 05:56 PM
honestly i suck at crittin throwies...sorry dude


new style ive been messing with on the computer

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/seftyboii.jpg
"SEFT"
bump my outlines

stonk looks nice

jerm_mtl
11-27-2006, 07:54 PM
wtf do u want us to say .... color that shit and then post it

myl
11-27-2006, 08:03 PM
another brilliant person in this thread...

G - Wahl
11-27-2006, 08:44 PM
Yes, I know the A is bigger then the C, besides that. What you guys think?
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4760/picture002rk5.th.jpg (http://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002rk5.jpg)

afek
11-27-2006, 08:45 PM
damn straight



my shit always gets ignored

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 08:47 PM
Meh, I don&#39;t like it myl, throwie should be fast and simple so people can see it and read it really fast (like even if they&#39;re going on a train)

Poed, on the other hand, has a great throw, his handie just needs a little work

:edit: Capo, it&#39;s REALLY REALLY generic... Good simple though, but REALLY generic

FOEone
11-27-2006, 10:16 PM
Originally posted by Stonk+Nov 27 2006, 07:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Stonk @ Nov 27 2006, 07:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Stonk@Nov 26 2006, 10:11 PM
feliks - haha not ignored. umm go simpler on the fill and structure.

took etch a sketch&#39;s advice and changed the e a bit.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new.jpg
bump [/b][/quote]
well, i can&#39;t say much for letter originality, but the execution is nice. i&#39;m more curious as to how that would look on a wall. it could really go either way, depending on your can-control. i know that sounds weird for a throw-up, but believe it or not, can-control on throw-ups like that can separate the toys from the kings. post a flick of that on a wall, and i&#39;ll be able to offer praise or criticism.

myl
11-27-2006, 10:16 PM
eh i shouldve specified...its not a throwie

i dunno, its just some weird ass style i came up with after looking at the hair in a brush

Bartic
11-27-2006, 10:36 PM
haven&#39;t been sketching in a while, it&#39;s all a bit rough
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9317/suki120jq9.png
any comments? pointers?

G - Wahl
11-27-2006, 10:38 PM
BouncingSoul - What do you meen by generic? Do you meen common?


Edit; Bartic, im feeling that. Im not sure if the last letter is a V or an L though

Quigbert
11-27-2006, 10:43 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Nov 27 2006, 08:44 PM
Yes, I know the A is bigger then the C, besides that. What you guys think?
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4760/picture002rk5.th.jpg (http://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002rk5.jpg)
Make the C more stylish or make the A more basic and lose the tear drop and put and exclamation point at the end or sumtin.

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 10:44 PM
I mean like everyone uses it... Yeah, common I guess... It looks great though, don&#39;t take it as a bad thing or anything, just something I noticed

Biology-the shittiest, most boring class EVER

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0363.jpg

"kn"

My N&#39;s shitty because I just added it in the end, the main focus is the K really

Hilo
11-27-2006, 10:48 PM
getting better Ca, crits not the best pic.

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1497/picture161do5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

says hysr.

glass
11-27-2006, 10:49 PM
looks pretty good, i actually kind of like that &#39;N.&#39;

i had bio last year when i was a freshman. yeah it sucked a lot, boring. this year though, i have chemistry which is pretty cool.

AteskOne
11-27-2006, 10:49 PM
I mean like everyone uses it... Yeah, common I guess... It looks great though, don&#39;t take it as a bad thing or anything, just something I noticed

Biology-the shittiest, most boring class EVER

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0363.jpg

"kn"

looking hot bounce...im loving how you turned your ribbon into an arrow. looks really hot. im not so sure bout the little bits i been seeing your do. they&#39;re a little to skinny for my liking and just kind of hang over your letters. try giving them a little thickness and shape to flow better with the letters.

ps...i fuckin hate biology also lol. thank god i dont have to take it this year.

Bartic
11-27-2006, 10:50 PM
Hilo: the right bottom leg of the h is weak and the s is lacking in the top dept. I&#39;m liking the Y tho

glass
11-27-2006, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by Bartic@Nov 27 2006, 10:36 PM
haven&#39;t been sketching in a while, it&#39;s all a bit rough
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9317/suki120jq9.png
any comments? pointers?
that looks pretty sick dude, except i don&#39;t realy like the extensions on the ends that look like comma&#39;s, but whatever just my thought.

Bartic
11-27-2006, 10:51 PM
this can be deleted

etch a sketch
11-27-2006, 10:52 PM
hilo: work on ur r it looks like a fucking k

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 10:53 PM
Hilo man, I love your style. The only thing that bugs me is the H looks like a K (a great K I might add).

Thanks for critz guys... I don&#39;t like fat bits which is why I keep them on the skinny side. Glass, I like Physics/Math better than Biology/Chemisty because I suck at those

Hilo
11-27-2006, 10:53 PM
thnks
gootta work harder then

G - Wahl
11-27-2006, 10:53 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert+Nov 27 2006, 10:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Quigbert @ Nov 27 2006, 10:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-G &#045; Wahl@Nov 27 2006, 08:44 PM
Yes, I know the A is bigger then the C, besides that. What you guys think?
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4760/picture002rk5.th.jpg (http://img218.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002rk5.jpg)
Make the C more stylish or make the A more basic and lose the tear drop and put and exclamation point at the end or sumtin. [/b][/quote]
Well, I use the drop inplace of " po ". Its faster for bombs.
I write Capo, not Ca.

Thanks for all the crits guys. Ill start giving my C some flaver.

YarHarHar
11-27-2006, 10:54 PM
lalala

hilo your alot better than what i first saw of you here..keep it up ...their

Hilo
11-27-2006, 10:56 PM
thanks alot again<3

near
11-27-2006, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Nov 27 2006, 10:49 PM

I mean like everyone uses it... Yeah, common I guess... It looks great though, don&#39;t take it as a bad thing or anything, just something I noticed

Biology-the shittiest, most boring class EVER

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0363.jpg

"kn"

looking hot bounce...im loving how you turned your ribbon into an arrow. looks really hot. im not so sure bout the little bits i been seeing your do. they&#39;re a little to skinny for my liking and just kind of hang over your letters. try giving them a little thickness and shape to flow better with the letters.

ps...i fuckin hate biology also lol. thank god i dont have to take it this year.
IPMAT muthafucka I PRETEND MY ASS TALKS interphase prophase meta[hase anaphase telophase muthafucka read rememeber recite u know how we do

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 10:59 PM
Hahahahahaha, I pretend my ass talks. Thanks bro

near
11-27-2006, 11:00 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Nov 27 2006, 10:48 PM
getting better Ca, crits not the best pic.

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1497/picture161do5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

says hysr.
hilo i know i chilled with u in the queen alleysa during the 416n but that looks a lil like a causr/baesr "borrow" ill call it for now

etch a sketch
11-27-2006, 11:12 PM
ive commented the recent piece already so comment or criticize mine

note

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/6387/file0022zb5.jpg

G - Wahl
11-27-2006, 11:14 PM
Note, thats pretty fresh, it reminds me of the Roman Collosium(Sp?)
Fill that with various shades of grey and black, would look tight.

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-27-2006, 11:35 PM
note, make your letters a little more legible and i think eventually you&#39;ll be one of those good 3d style graff heads

sorry i&#39;ve been shady for a minute, here are 2 new pen freestyles from school. lemme know what you think.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/2.jpg

uhhh
11-27-2006, 11:36 PM
i was just looking through my photobucket.. ive gotten a lot better in teh past month or so...
then:
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-060S.jpg

now:
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-048S.jpg

FOEone
11-27-2006, 11:44 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Nov 27 2006, 10:44 PM
I mean like everyone uses it... Yeah, common I guess... It looks great though, don&#39;t take it as a bad thing or anything, just something I noticed

Biology-the shittiest, most boring class EVER

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0363.jpg

"kn"

My N&#39;s shitty because I just added it in the end, the main focus is the K really
whoa whoa whoa, back up.

please, for the love of god, tell me you don&#39;t plan on turning that in. a throw-up and your handstyle all over a school paper? smart idea.

let me take this time to give you kiddies some tips.

1. Learn to separate your tag from your normal handwriting style. Leave the tags on the street where they belong.
2. Leave your blackbook at home. Don&#39;t bring it to school. Ever. Don&#39;t show it off to friends who don&#39;t graff, and don&#39;t sit in class and sketch. Otherwise, you&#39;ll become known as that "graffiti kid", and I wonder who&#39;s the first one they blame when someone tags the school, whether you did it or not.
3. DON&#39;T TAG YOUR FUCKING HOMEWORK&#33;


Sorry. Anger wasn&#39;t directed at anyone in particular, but this gave me a chance to vent some annoyance I&#39;ve noticed at some newbies in the graff game.

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 11:44 PM
Yeah you have... I still can&#39;t get over how much I love that fucking K

:edit: Ay, that handie is scratched out by now and I&#39;m really sure we&#39;re not turning this in anyway... My "graffiti handstyle" and my "normal handstyle" are completely different... Normal handie (up there)

Graffiti handie
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0277.jpg

...Nobody even thinks it&#39;s graffiti, everyone just thinks it&#39;s doodles ha

FOEone
11-27-2006, 11:45 PM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Nov 27 2006, 11:35 PM
note, make your letters a little more legible and i think eventually you&#39;ll be one of those good 3d style graff heads

sorry i&#39;ve been shady for a minute, here are 2 new pen freestyles from school. lemme know what you think.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/2.jpg
your earlier work showed a lot of promise. assuming these sketches were just on a "bad day", i think it&#39;s safe to say you can stop posting in the toy forums. i really liked your previous sketches.

sorry for the double-post.

bouncingsoul
11-27-2006, 11:52 PM
...Does this mean the babysitter&#39;s club is done? Nooooo

KoreTwo
11-28-2006, 12:03 AM
Originally posted by KoreTwo@Nov 27 2006, 07:35 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/Peeta.jpg

Submission for the &#39;Peeta&#39; battle.

Crits please?


Bumpitty.

BAPER: Dont really liek either ofm them. Still prefer your old style

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-28-2006, 12:04 AM
thanks alot foe, but i think ill stay in the toy forum for a while unless i have a sketch that i feel real good about.

if anyone needs to get up out of the toy forum it&#39;s bawk hah.

babysitters club 2006 - hottest toys in kay bee.

Soze One.
11-28-2006, 12:09 AM
what have i missed?
baby sitters club?

bouncingsoul
11-28-2006, 12:19 AM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Nov 28 2006, 12:04 AM
thanks alot foe, but i think ill stay in the toy forum for a while unless i have a sketch that i feel real good about.

if anyone needs to get up out of the toy forum it&#39;s bawk hah.

babysitters club 2006 - hottest toys in kay bee.
Yeeeeeah, next exchange winter break?

myl
11-28-2006, 12:24 AM
this page is hot, hope i dont kill it

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/3333/img0134jz2.jpg

fixed the S

near
11-28-2006, 12:24 AM
omg i thought it might e the last time i saw the orly baby grace the toy bb thread thank god -_- i may rest easy for at least 1 more night

askone
11-28-2006, 01:41 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/bboyz_dogg/Picture-1.jpg


help anyone? any comments? getting started. need advice.

sheist
11-28-2006, 01:47 AM
clean it up and go over it with a better pen and post another pic. looks pretty good with the blocks

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/waterwingsend/11-22-06_0150.jpg

BLOC
11-28-2006, 02:22 AM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/1803/img04071dz1.jpg



any comments or advice

sorry for bad qulality

Billburg
11-28-2006, 03:21 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep003-1.jpg

need help on the n and a......

levans
11-28-2006, 05:56 AM
yo snap try make all your letters the same size and width and go on from there cuz your skipping some chapters with that s

neza
11-28-2006, 07:00 AM
snap work on your handie it sucks

try diifernt types of a<----(like that one) they look good in throws&#33;


neza

KoreTwo
11-28-2006, 07:25 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE1.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE2.jpg

My first attempts at 3d. Please tell me what im doing right or wrong.

Billburg: Your lines are really shaky. Try and work on steadying that hand a bit more. It&#39;s easy to read, but more work could have been done for that S. It looks really cliche.

Bloc: Sorry dude, but i cant really see anything.

Askone: Thats pretty good for a start. Like the 3D and the tiny stars in there.

Sheist: Can&#39;t really make out what it says, but try adding some color in it. It looks alright now.

etch a sketch
11-28-2006, 08:08 AM
Originally posted by askone@Nov 28 2006, 01:41 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/bboyz_dogg/Picture-1.jpg


help anyone? any comments? getting started. need advice.
i think i might be one of the onlt few people who go back a page and see what has been missed...

well yea mostly do what sheist said, clean it up but i like your simple keep at it

beefgerky
11-28-2006, 09:27 AM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Nov 27 2006, 11:35 PM
note, make your letters a little more legible and i think eventually you&#39;ll be one of those good 3d style graff heads

sorry i&#39;ve been shady for a minute, here are 2 new pen freestyles from school. lemme know what you think.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/2.jpg
dank style.

terower
11-28-2006, 09:34 AM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Nov 27 2006, 11:35 PM
note, make your letters a little more legible and i think eventually you&#39;ll be one of those good 3d style graff heads

sorry i&#39;ve been shady for a minute, here are 2 new pen freestyles from school. lemme know what you think.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/baper/2.jpg
Haha, I like that "Bape Moves Kilos".

Looks good, you might wanna beef up the &#39;E&#39; a bit, though.

bouncingsoul
11-28-2006, 09:46 AM
Ask, that&#39;s a great start but don&#39;t write ask... Someone big writes ask on here and 12oz already

myl
11-28-2006, 09:56 AM
Originally posted by myl@Nov 28 2006, 12:24 AM
this page is hot, hope i dont kill it

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/3333/img0134jz2.jpg

fixed the S
bump

bouncingsoul
11-28-2006, 10:02 AM
Still don&#39;t fit... Make the bottom left leg of the S like the bottom right extension of the T so it&#39;s like shooting out. I think that&#39;d do the trick

myl
11-28-2006, 10:21 AM
youre good bouncing...very good, thanks for the help. looks a shit load better now

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3866/img0137uu9.jpg

kicklip9634
11-28-2006, 12:11 PM
make the 3d on each letter the same size

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 01:00 PM
think u should work on that E

ras
11-28-2006, 01:43 PM
myl....im really likeing those lil addons...it makes it flow better ;)

fucking with new style&#39;s

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4668/ate3rt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/392/ate4ot5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on both please thanks ;)

Peaceee... ;)

searoner
11-28-2006, 01:46 PM
real nice character mate, maybe try not joining the letters, just a thought.
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/9440/serif2ow6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 01:55 PM
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/392/ate4ot5.jpg

love that piece have the letter not fully shown looks ill...nice to see somethin different&#33;....

eMJayBee
11-28-2006, 01:58 PM
ras-I&#39;m liking the first one, I like the character on the 2nd one
searoner- work on the "e" a lil

Any critz on this?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/scan0045.jpg

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 02:09 PM
yeh like it...just need to change the colour i think

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-28-2006, 02:46 PM
seft - i just dont like the whole idea of the tall letters with so much space in the middle all the letters seem sorta squished and spaced out too much to me, but if thats what you were going for then do whatchu do.

ate - you have the pen skills that you need to be writing, you just have like this crazy habit of connecting all your letters hah, i think if you made each letter by itself with no connection, it would define the letters more, and actually compliment the drawing skills you have. characters dope as usual though.

sear - i can tell you&#39;re trying to go a little simpler than you used to do, which is great, but there aren&#39;t many kids on here that can worthily give you crits hah. you have a letter style down, and thats what i like to see from people in the toy section, development of a specific letter structure and style. the only thing i could suggest is kicking the right leg of the r out a little more so it doesnt curve in and look too much like a "B"

emjaybee - you have coloring skills and a decent knowledge on how to put 3d on letters but your structure needs alot more concentration. not a good idea to put the point of one letter through the hole of another like you did with the p and e. line all the letters up the same height, and keep them the same size, i wouldn&#39;t do that swirly thing with the tail of my "t" and i wouldn&#39;t make the "e" so pointy.

im a walkin crit machine, b

expect a couple sketches from me shortly.

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 02:54 PM
yeh den we can crit u, hahaaa, na bring on them dope fuckers&#33;...

ras
11-28-2006, 02:55 PM
emjaybee....fucking loveing that fill &#33;

yo thanks for the crits yall...im just a lil confused...sum1 sed they love the fact that the letters aint shown and its ill ... then sum1 sez not to connect the letters :unsure: :blink: anyway&#39;s..

summet i just did...im gna redo the karak on anutha peice ..

http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/7369/ate5aq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on this please... :) ;)

c0ld
11-28-2006, 02:57 PM
some sketches i did at skool today.
actually these are my first sketches in a loong time.
kinda messy..........im rusty.

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/1223/jii3.jpg


crits?

trashhh
11-28-2006, 03:00 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 28 2006, 02:55 PM
emjaybee....fucking loveing that fill &#33;

yo thanks for the crits yall...im just a lil confused...sum1 sed they love the fact that the letters aint shown and its ill ... then sum1 sez not to connect the letters :unsure: :blink: anyway&#39;s..

summet i just did...im gna redo the karak on anutha peice ..

http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/7369/ate5aq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on this please... :) ;)
nice man ur stuffs gettin alot better.. the letters in this one i dont like as much as the other 2 u posted a few posts up tho, but nice..

searoner
11-28-2006, 03:02 PM
http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/9242/serif3de9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
nice ate loving that one. i have worked on my letters for a long time im just trying to get a few pointers on here cos i know i aint good enough to post up in the blackbook thread.

ras
11-28-2006, 03:14 PM
fucking love that...it really shows you have used the block system ( or w.e its called :P ) and progressed yah letters....maybeeee fix the E a bit...love the A and R ...i like the S abit ... But work with the E...good stuff mate ...

cOld...give crits back then m-maybe we can give you crits in return... <_< :( :blink: :)

glass
11-28-2006, 03:36 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 28 2006, 02:55 PM
emjaybee....fucking loveing that fill &#33;

yo thanks for the crits yall...im just a lil confused...sum1 sed they love the fact that the letters aint shown and its ill ... then sum1 sez not to connect the letters :unsure: :blink: anyway&#39;s..

summet i just did...im gna redo the karak on anutha peice ..

http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/7369/ate5aq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on this please... :) ;)
damn, i love that &#39;A&#39; dude, looks sick. the others are pretty good too, i don&#39;t like the arrows though, but i usually never like arrows so do what you think looks good.

-testify-
11-28-2006, 03:38 PM
ate its god except the thing the characs holding is bad...i shouldnt be talking though
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/451/omgzlr6.png
do i just suck really bad and thats why im not getting crits? or do i just get skipped over

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 03:48 PM
c0ld Posted on Nov 28 2006, 02:57 PM
some sketches i did at skool today.
actually these are my first sketches in a loong time.
kinda messy..........im rusty.
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/1223/jii3.jpg

mate no one has 6 fingers&#33;....

-testify-
11-28-2006, 03:50 PM
toy machine much?

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 03:54 PM
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/451/omgzlr6.png

nice like it alot flow nicey and u got the letter the sme size and same style lieka lot keep it up&#33;

-testify-
11-28-2006, 03:56 PM
so your can read it for the most part? cause people on 12 oz were bitching about it being unreadable

ASB_ONE
11-28-2006, 03:57 PM
listen to 12oz mate.
thats a horrible tag/throwie/wateva that is

-testify-
11-28-2006, 04:01 PM
why? can your not read it or is the letter structure bad?

ASB_ONE
11-28-2006, 04:13 PM
its jus straight up not that nice on the eye.

ras
11-28-2006, 04:14 PM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Nov 28 2006, 08:48 PM
c0ld Posted on Nov 28 2006, 02:57 PM
some sketches i did at skool today.
actually these are my first sketches in a loong time.
kinda messy..........im rusty.
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/1223/jii3.jpg

mate no one has 6 fingers&#33;....

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

:lol: ;) bump cuz this is funny as fuck...curtosy of shame..

like shame sed...hands dont have 6 fingaz...lose the other...try not to draw things all over the page...it meks it look scrappy and scruffy..and lose the crown on the throw...cuz u aint king...well that if it is a crown..kool little spray cans...and thats bout it.. ;)

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 04:18 PM
well this is ma shit

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3420/image002us4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeh sign fucked it up hard neva gonna do that agen

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2780/image008tu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits? i&#39;m ready for them bitch&#33; haha...

ras
11-28-2006, 04:20 PM
i can se a A...lol ;)

-testify-
11-28-2006, 04:22 PM
he did the hands with six fingers because he felt liek biting toy machine a skateboard company

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 04:24 PM
mate leave it ur post is over&#33;

ras
11-28-2006, 04:25 PM
i never knew that...i wudnt say its a proper bite as toy machine is a manufacture not a writer..i put PhatFarm and Nike And Adidas on nerly all my karaks clothes...dus that mean i bite...? <_< not really...

nemzone
11-28-2006, 04:29 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1708/img148ky3.jpg

sum more pen sketches. im getn better, 6months ago i wouldnt be able to do this without pencil first. :) i want str8 out criticism, it helps more lol

sky 5
11-28-2006, 04:33 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/2919/1202038hw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BOWSER wanted me to try and make his letters more wild . . .i used your B, half your W, S, and R . . your other letters have major structure flaws that need to be owrked out before they can be dressed up . . . the S is kinda messed up b/c the paper is bending up there . . ill pm you the pencil sketch before i marked it up

SEFT - i was lookin at your post a few days ago and doodled the F (above piece) giving it weight/mass or however you wanna call it . . that was an interestin post man

shame - theres some potential but maybe try sketchin all your letters first then going back and look to add some extensions . . . keep at it and youll be able to draw each letter and add extensions as you go along instead of doing all the letters then going back . . but its gonna take some time

ras
11-28-2006, 04:35 PM
sky5 .. . Awesome ^^

Linkzone1
11-28-2006, 04:37 PM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Nov 28 2006, 04:18 PM
well this is ma shit

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3420/image002us4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeh sign fucked it up hard neva gonna do that agen

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2780/image008tu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits? i&#39;m ready for them bitch&#33; haha...
There are no letters......

ASB_ONE
11-28-2006, 04:37 PM
yeh sky 5 thats som ill shit

sky 5
11-28-2006, 04:49 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 28 2006, 04:29 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1708/img148ky3.jpg

sum more pen sketches. im getn better, 6months ago i wouldnt be able to do this without pencil first. :) i want str8 out criticism, it helps more lol
uhhhhh . .shheet drawin blanks on crits for you man . . . one thing i noticed is that all your letters are very square dimension (there all the same height as they are wide individually and as a group) . .whenever your ready to get a lil crazier try stretching your letters more . . in my bowser sketch the B and S are stretched so they are twice as long as they are high . . . you have the right approach and thinking so just keep bangin em out, tryin new stuff

nemzone
11-28-2006, 04:52 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Nov 28 2006, 09:33 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/2919/1202038hw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BOWSER wanted me to try and make his letters more wild . . .i used your B, half your W, S, and R . . your other letters have major structure flaws that need to be owrked out before they can be dressed up . . . the S is kinda messed up b/c the paper is bending up there . . ill pm you the pencil sketch before i marked it up

SEFT - i was lookin at your post a few days ago and doodled the F (above piece) giving it weight/mass or however you wanna call it . . that was an interestin post man

shame - theres some potential but maybe try sketchin all your letters first then going back and look to add some extensions . . . keep at it and youll be able to draw each letter and add extensions as you go along instead of doing all the letters then going back . . but its gonna take some time
buperoo for this, cant believe u bumped the spagetti up top lol.
i love ur style man&#33;&#33; i can crit it cuz its just nuts and i like it all. and thanx for the ideas, il try strech em out n bend em more n shit ;)

Zoink
11-28-2006, 04:52 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep004.jpg

crit

myl
11-28-2006, 04:54 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Nov 28 2006, 04:33 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/2919/1202038hw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BOWSER wanted me to try and make his letters more wild . . .i used your B, half your W, S, and R . . your other letters have major structure flaws that need to be owrked out before they can be dressed up . . . the S is kinda messed up b/c the paper is bending up there . . ill pm you the pencil sketch before i marked it up

SEFT - i was lookin at your post a few days ago and doodled the F (above piece) giving it weight/mass or however you wanna call it . . that was an interestin post man

shame - theres some potential but maybe try sketchin all your letters first then going back and look to add some extensions . . . keep at it and youll be able to draw each letter and add extensions as you go along instead of doing all the letters then going back . . but its gonna take some time
bump for hotness

and thanks man, that f looks real sick in that style. hopefully ill have time tonight to keep playing around with it

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 04:55 PM
shame - theres some potential but maybe try sketchin all your letters first then going back and look to add some extensions . . . keep at it and youll be able to draw each letter and add extensions as you go along instead of doing all the letters then going back . . but its gonna take some time

na the 2nd one i wanted to mesh the letters wid the extensions.... done know why i did the n the wrong way round....
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/25/image008ir1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ras
11-28-2006, 04:56 PM
Originally posted by Z****@Nov 28 2006, 09:52 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep004.jpg

crit
cula in one direction...

TricksForKids
11-28-2006, 05:04 PM
sky wanna exchange you hunk?

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 05:09 PM
(Z**** @ Nov 28 2006, 09:52 PM)
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep004.jpg

crit


cula in one direction...


hahaa funny fuck&#33;&#33;...another no not as funny&#33;..work on that shadow and dont try and do the bubbles cuz dey aint workin. also make the letters the same size and keep it simple&#33;

sky 5
11-28-2006, 05:12 PM
how bout you join me and inkbits in a friendly sketch battle? dont think he would mind . . . were gonna get a word in a few days hopefully, due date whenever were done, no rush or worries . . . i wanna do "cold krush" full page . .stay up

Feliks
11-28-2006, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by sky 5+Nov 28 2006, 05:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Nov 28 2006, 05:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Nov 28 2006, 04:29 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1708/img148ky3.jpg

sum more pen sketches. im getn better, 6months ago i wouldnt be able to do this without pencil first. :) i want str8 out criticism, it helps more lol
uhhhhh . .shheet drawin blanks on crits for you man . . . one thing i noticed is that all your letters are very square dimension (there all the same height as they are wide individually and as a group) . .whenever your ready to get a lil crazier try stretching your letters more . . in my bowser sketch the B and S are stretched so they are twice as long as they are high . . . you have the right approach and thinking so just keep bangin em out, tryin new stuff [/b][/quote]
Haha Nemz, you&#39;re one smart cookie.
For your A, I&#39;m liking the cross hatching. i like the simplicity, you&#39;re very good with that, but I think you should challenge yourself, maybe put some addons to the letter, warp it a bit.
I don&#39;t know, it&#39;s just that you&#39;ve already hit the platform that everyone here&#39;s been trying to get to. Now you can pretty much experiment&#33;

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-28-2006, 05:16 PM
shame - there are no letters whatsoever, even with you putting it in paint and writing something over it, still have no idea what youre talking about, looks more like a maze than any sort of letter sketch.

sky 5 - i wanna marry you

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/veins.jpg

ras
11-28-2006, 05:18 PM
nemz...good stuff..

baper...loving it....its bliding me...fucking ace colours...but i dont really like the E...

sum late night shit...

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/474/ate6ow2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments plase...

nemzone
11-28-2006, 05:20 PM
thnks felicks, yeh i do sumtimes warp shit up, but usually fuckitup lol. sky5, can i get in on this since its only a friendly?? if not its all good :rolleyes:

shamee1991
11-28-2006, 05:29 PM
work on that T...and sort the clothing for the character...

searoner
11-28-2006, 05:45 PM
damn that sky 5 is sick, nemz i do think thats one of thebest form you mate keep it up.
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2605/serif5ui7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

TricksForKids
11-28-2006, 05:46 PM
too many bumps^ looks all rocky and toy now, i prefer your smoothe flowing style

ras
11-28-2006, 05:54 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 28 2006, 10:18 PM
nemz...good stuff..

baper...loving it....its bliding me...fucking ace colours...but i dont really like the E...

sum late night shit...

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/474/ate6ow2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits and comments plase...
bump...bottom of the page

crits please... ;)

like tricks sed there are far too many bumps....clean as hell tho...and i like your tag &#33; ;)

searoner
11-28-2006, 06:06 PM
yeah thanks i see what you mean. i like that ate character looks like hes melting though lol.
these any better?
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2221/serif6el7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/8028/serif7ll9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ras
11-28-2006, 06:08 PM
they look the same as the others lol...try those letters without any bumps on or just slim down the bumps but not as many .... ;)

and what about my peice...not the karak..? .. :) thnks

searoner
11-28-2006, 06:11 PM
yeah man i hear that just trying to izms and shit, liek the piece looks a bit like a throwie to me maybe try making it a bit more striaght rather than round.

etch a sketch
11-28-2006, 06:21 PM
there is no reason to bump your pic beacuse it was on the bottom of the page...

c0ld
11-28-2006, 06:26 PM
Originally posted by ras@Nov 28 2006, 04:25 PM
i never knew that...i wudnt say its a proper bite as toy machine is a manufacture not a writer..i put PhatFarm and Nike And Adidas on nerly all my karaks clothes...dus that mean i bite...? <_< not really...
thank you. its not an attempt to bite. just doin somethin i saw. im sure toy machine wasnt the first to do it. and i know hands have 5 fingers. otherwise thnx for the crits.

c0ld
11-28-2006, 06:31 PM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Nov 28 2006, 04:18 PM
well this is ma shit


http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2780/image008tu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits? i&#39;m ready for them bitch&#33; haha...
i remember something like this from a book i had as a kid. maze madness i think it was. lol

but seriously you should have the letters more defined. are there letters?

just work on it and dont have so many lines goin everywhere and all connected.

but its not as bad as some others ive seen.....

like mine. =P

c0ld
11-28-2006, 06:54 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Nov 28 2006, 04:33 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/2919/1202038hw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BOWSER wanted me to try and make his letters more wild . . .i used your B, half your W, S, and R . . your other letters have major structure flaws that need to be owrked out before they can be dressed up . . . the S is kinda messed up b/c the paper is bending up there . . ill pm you the pencil sketch before i marked it up

SEFT - i was lookin at your post a few days ago and doodled the F (above piece) giving it weight/mass or however you wanna call it . . that was an interestin post man

shame - theres some potential but maybe try sketchin all your letters first then going back and look to add some extensions . . . keep at it and youll be able to draw each letter and add extensions as you go along instead of doing all the letters then going back . . but its gonna take some time
WOW. i think i need to change my pants.

nemzone
11-28-2006, 07:00 PM
bout to hurt ur eyez

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4232/img149os5.jpg

first ever attempt at tht weird acid trip fill lol. wish i had a lighter green down first. also fucked wiv letters a lil....

nemzone
11-28-2006, 07:01 PM
fuckin double post. my bad AGAIN :rolleyes: :ph34r:

bouncingsoul
11-28-2006, 07:01 PM
...Sky, Your W, S and R in that work need work... Oh wait, you used Bowsers... I like the E though. I&#39;m not one to talk haha

:edit: Also sky, I can&#39;t figure out any way to what you told me (add straight lines into my stuff). I can do the harsh angles good but straight lines won&#39;t fit in anywhere for me... help?

Also nemz, I love your M, how it&#39;s tilted haha. That&#39;s how I like to do my letters

zale
11-28-2006, 07:14 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Nov 28 2006, 07:00 PM
bout to hurt ur eyez

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4232/img149os5.jpg

first ever attempt at tht weird acid trip fill lol. wish i had a lighter green down first. also fucked wiv letters a lil....
once i figured it out i realized its actually pretty nice. i like it.

sank one
11-28-2006, 07:20 PM
http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/8025/img0312xh7.th.jpg (http://img490.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0312xh7.jpg)

what do you guys think?

Sky - ill shit as always

nemz - nice shit, your stuff is really improvin

zale
11-28-2006, 07:37 PM
startin off with block letters :

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010211.jpg

movin into more complicated shit (where im at right now)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010212.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010213.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010215.jpg

any crits or ideas. constructive of course

Kace
11-28-2006, 07:48 PM
zale lose the lines in the 3d and the stars on the piece awt the bottom i think they make it look pretty dumb. just what i think.

HazeAmaze
11-28-2006, 07:48 PM
youre going in a good direction i guess, work on your structure, and especially work on your 3-d, it makes no sense

zale
11-28-2006, 07:50 PM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze@Nov 28 2006, 07:48 PM
youre going in a good direction i guess, work on your structure, and especially work on your 3-d, it makes no sense
i have it facing the middle. R and most of A have 3d facing the right side, and G and E have it facing the left. makes piece look more centered. ya idk why i put hte stars in it that was the first i did with this style. i stopped though

alive
11-28-2006, 08:01 PM
Originally posted by c0ld@Nov 28 2006, 06:54 PM
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/2919/1202038hw3.jpg[/URL]

BOWSER wanted me to try and make his letters more wild . . .i used your B, half your W, S, and R . . your other letters have major structure flaws that need to be owrked out before they can be dressed up . . . the S is kinda messed up b/c the paper is bending up there . . ill pm you the pencil sketch before i marked it up

SEFT - i was lookin at your post a few days ago and doodled the F (above piece) giving it weight/mass or however you wanna call it . . that was an interestin post man

shame - theres some potential but maybe try sketchin all your letters first then going back and look to add some extensions . . . keep at it and youll be able to draw each letter and add extensions as you go along instead of doing all the letters then going back . . but its gonna take some time
goddamn. you wanna make my letters more wild?

but seriously, would you mind me pming you for some extra help? i feel a little stuck, but then, i havent been sketching enough lately. but in anycase, the question stands.

FOUND MY CAMERA. FUCK YEAH.
pics coming to a post near you.
soon.



ZALE you silly boy. those arent block letters&#33; go back to block letters, this time real ones. and start over, you can move past them fast, but just get them down first. fit each letter into a sqaure. dont overlap nearly so much. stop coloring. use bars.



peace.

KoreTwo
11-28-2006, 08:14 PM
Originally posted by KoreTwo@Nov 28 2006, 07:25 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE1.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE2.jpg

My first attempts at 3d. Please tell me what im doing right or wrong.

Bump... not a single crit at all.

bouncingsoul
11-28-2006, 08:26 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0364.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0365.jpg

In the first one I didn&#39;t like my K or my E but my N and were decent... The second one was just a fuckaround...

uhhh
11-28-2006, 08:35 PM
i actually like the second one more. just do somethign to the right side of teh w...

Feliks
11-28-2006, 08:45 PM
Word, I like the second one more, it&#39;s less of a pain on the eyes trying to figure out teh first one.

c0ld
11-28-2006, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by KoreTwo+Nov 28 2006, 08:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KoreTwo @ Nov 28 2006, 08:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-KoreTwo@Nov 28 2006, 07:25 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE1.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE2.jpg

My first attempts at 3d. Please tell me what im doing right or wrong.

Bump... not a single crit at all. [/b][/quote]
hmm....

go back a few steps.

dont have your letters made up of several different "bricks."
at least not like that.
second, make it easier to tell what the letters are, but that should happen as long as you do that first thing.
also some of your 3d doesnt make sense. like that middle bar on the E.
and try to keep all your 3d the same size.

hope that helps.

-testify-
11-28-2006, 08:56 PM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6671/ballspp2.png
simple throw

ThickGravy
11-28-2006, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Nov 27 2006, 10:48 PM
getting better Ca, crits not the best pic.

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1497/picture161do5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

says hysr.
Dope shit.

Feliks
11-28-2006, 09:35 PM
http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/3205/img0006ms3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Never done a throw before....

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-28-2006, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Nov 28 2006, 05:16 PM

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/veins.jpg
bump, just to have a flick up.

feliks, i know its short for jade but jd one from queens has a similar jd throw like that. i suck at throws as well so there arent many crits i can give you besides find a specific destination for your 3d cuz its sorta all over the place, i personally usually do a drop shadow toward the bottom left.

kore two, not feelin it bud, the three d is all over the place, take the same advice i just gave to feliks.

knewsy, i like the k in the second one but everything else looks better in the first. maybe space out the angles in your n a little more, always seems a little squished to me but im really feelin the e and w in the first sketch, maybe dont put the hard angle you have on the 3d in the bottom left, make it smooth like the rest of the 3d, and shade the 3d in so its more defined. (all crits on the first sketch)

Feliks
11-28-2006, 09:46 PM
Baper: Lose the red lines, it takes away from teh nice neatiness ness ness from your piece. Your style remidns me of Bruce.

ghozt
11-28-2006, 10:09 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6043/scan0010cq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:ph34r: critz ? thnx =]

Hilo
11-28-2006, 10:09 PM
baper you know i love ur shit. New thigny slop. Crits. thanks.

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/6948/picture162tg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

oh and to near i dont want to bite i guess thats hot strihgt letters made me develope graffiti made me do it this way.

Feliks
11-28-2006, 10:11 PM
Originally posted by ghozt@Nov 28 2006, 11:09 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6043/scan0010cq8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:ph34r: critz ? thnx =]
Yeah man I like it, the simplicity is great keep it up.
The S needs work, bring it closer to the k and curve the top instead of angling it.
my 2 cents

Hilo
11-28-2006, 10:25 PM
for that hacks i like it its neat but the H dont flow the A dont flow the C dont flow the K dnt flow nothign flows but i like it ahhaha

-testify-
11-28-2006, 10:33 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Nov 28 2006, 08:56 PM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6671/ballspp2.png
simple throw
crits

Hilo
11-28-2006, 10:36 PM
put some damn effort mani dotn even get crits so why should you color it and shit man&#33;

FOEone
11-28-2006, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Nov 28 2006, 12:04 AM
thanks alot foe, but i think ill stay in the toy forum for a while unless i have a sketch that i feel real good about.
that&#39;s cool man. it&#39;s good to have a modest attitude, but don&#39;t be shy when you know something you&#39;ve done is dope.

Stonk
11-28-2006, 10:45 PM
hacks- if you made the s a little bit smaller (to match the other letters) then it would be really good. the shark makes it that much better too.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new006.jpg yes i know that i fucked up the p a little bit.

Apoc
11-28-2006, 10:59 PM
stonk - I like it

hacks - keeps your letters the same size mang, looks good tho

random ish while bored at work.
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/PB270077.jpg

c0ld
11-28-2006, 11:21 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/927/j002vf0.jpg

some experimentation with a new name.
im not likin the X in Xombie.

thats my first attempt at anything 3d. its always been bubbles up to this.
i dont think itd be too bad if i could get everything staright n even.


crits////

sky 5
11-28-2006, 11:38 PM
Originally posted by KoreTwo+Nov 28 2006, 08:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KoreTwo @ Nov 28 2006, 08:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-KoreTwo@Nov 28 2006, 07:25 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE1.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/KRE2.jpg

My first attempts at 3d. Please tell me what im doing right or wrong.

Bump... not a single crit at all. [/b][/quote]
props for trying somethin new . . but i dont know if i would call that 3d . . . i think a true 3d doesnt have outlines like you have . . . when i wanna mess with 3d (aint good at it at all) i like workin with 3 shades of the same color which helps you think in terms of depth and shading . . .check out (not sure of his correct username on here) ICEONERBABYROCK from the bad boy crew of chicago? i cant think of his name right now but he posted some stuff about a week ago in the big boy thread that is same style but more advanced and sharper . .

APOC - been starin at your post for 5 mins now . . . i wanna talk about how all your lletters taper towards a middle top point and how it adds alot to your drop down 3d but cant think of the proper words to communicate the thought . . .3d on the right side of R needs work . . maybe try making your letters a lil longer cuz they look alil boxy

ALIVE - yeah man PM me . . to anyone (this is where i sound like a dick) else dont pm with bullshit like jerm mtl and call me a bastard and please dont pm me asking for help if you joined BS yesterday, put in your work on this thread and well see what we can do later on . .

congrads on being a free man again FOEONE . . .

Necro-
11-28-2006, 11:58 PM
Originally posted by searoner@Nov 28 2006, 06:06 PM
yeah thanks i see what you mean. i like that ate character looks like hes melting though lol.
these any better?
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2221/serif6el7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/8028/serif7ll9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
your other style was awesome why r you toning it down so much?

Apoc
11-29-2006, 12:01 AM
yeah I did realize the R was messed up but I had to clock out of work.

I think i know what ur sayin... like the letters in the middle kinda skew inward and make a cool effect with the 3d?

---CRoR---
11-29-2006, 12:41 AM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Nov 28 2006, 11:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Nov 28 2006, 11:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-searoner@Nov 28 2006, 06:06 PM
yeah thanks i see what you mean. i like that ate character looks like hes melting though lol.
these any better?
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2221/serif6el7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/8028/serif7ll9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
your other style was awesome why r you toning it down so much? [/b][/quote]
graffiti creator style....



hilo u got baser kps style goin on there

nice tho

sank one
11-29-2006, 12:52 AM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6274/img0313rb5.th.jpg (http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0313rb5.jpg)

i know the vanishin point is messed up, but help me out :D

---CRoR---
11-29-2006, 01:22 AM
i think its iight.. diggin that SA for sure...keep it up homie&#33;

taxus
11-29-2006, 04:37 AM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Nov 29 2006, 05:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Nov 29 2006, 05:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-searoner@Nov 28 2006, 06:06 PM
yeah thanks i see what you mean. i like that ate character looks like hes melting though lol.
these any better?
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2221/serif6el7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/8028/serif7ll9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
your other style was awesome why r you toning it down so much? [/b][/quote]
Are you a retard? :blink:
Stupid cock, That other stuff sear was posting was just revolting. Window licker, dont encorage him to do that.
Oh well, he&#39;s getting better.

flclnaruto1213
11-29-2006, 05:31 AM
what the fuck? chill bro where are you coming from with this...

TricksForKids
11-29-2006, 06:49 AM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3+Nov 28 2006, 09:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Baper Moves Kilos. <3 @ Nov 28 2006, 09:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Nov 28 2006, 05:16 PM

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/veins.jpg
bump, just to have a flick up.

feliks, i know its short for jade but jd one from queens has a similar jd throw like that. i suck at throws as well so there arent many crits i can give you besides find a specific destination for your 3d cuz its sorta all over the place, i personally usually do a drop shadow toward the bottom left.

kore two, not feelin it bud, the three d is all over the place, take the same advice i just gave to feliks.

knewsy, i like the k in the second one but everything else looks better in the first. maybe space out the angles in your n a little more, always seems a little squished to me but im really feelin the e and w in the first sketch, maybe dont put the hard angle you have on the 3d in the bottom left, make it smooth like the rest of the 3d, and shade the 3d in so its more defined. (all crits on the first sketch) [/b][/quote]
Bump i love this, especially theE, keep that shit up, are you using highlighters to colour? lol

Peace, and Sear your shit wasnt "revolting" at all, according to taxus, it was simpe, flowed and you had your own style deveolping, go back to that cuz this bumpy rock look aint workin for me anyways

Peace

searoner
11-29-2006, 07:09 AM
graffiti creator&#33;?&#33;?&#33; fuck you. im going back to simples to improve my letters, they werent all that at all. just trying to get simples on lock before attempting anything more complicated.

ASB_ONE
11-29-2006, 08:20 AM
meana be working but messed around on computer instead, 3dsm + vray

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/asem3d.jpg

near
11-29-2006, 09:45 AM
ya thats a sweet baper its got like veins and stuff lol the dude above me with the 3d is kinda cute but itd be better if u drew it D:

k heres my latest disasterpiece

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010568.jpg

Apoc
11-29-2006, 10:05 AM
Originally posted by searoner@Nov 29 2006, 07:09 AM
graffiti creator&#33;?&#33;?&#33; fuck you. im going back to simples to improve my letters, they werent all that at all. just trying to get simples on lock before attempting anything more complicated.

It doesn&#39;t even remotely look like the graffiti creator letters

ASB_ONE
11-29-2006, 11:44 AM
near i like that but the orange is too bright and your R isnt too nice.

new ish pushin maself
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0130_000.jpg

c0ld
11-29-2006, 12:06 PM
much better than the one i made last night.......
http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/939/j003jh4.jpg

crits...

terower
11-29-2006, 12:18 PM
^That 3D is really good. It looks like 3D should.^
BUT, the fill is sloppy, the color scheme isn&#39;t super hot, and the cloud looks gay, the drips look REAL gay, and the letters could stand to be improved, unless you are going for simples.

c0ld
11-29-2006, 12:27 PM
thnx.....


and the fill n coloration r cuz i didnt have much choice. the fill in the letters is ball point pen. i need new markersss.....
and yeah i wanna keep it simple for now. im not ready to move up.

ras
11-29-2006, 02:31 PM
cold...better than your other thing u posted...take terowers advice ;)

aseb...nice...but i aint liking the B on the middle one ... rest if very good. ..

sum very sloppy shit...tired an grounded and fucking boooooooored

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7929/ate7xs2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on this please.... ? ;)

i know the&#39;ll be bad

ASB_ONE
11-29-2006, 02:43 PM
this place has been dry tonight.

atel it looks ayt man but i dont like how ur letters are always joined, free em up let em breathe.
cheers for the crit aswell bro

nemzone
11-29-2006, 03:36 PM
il put an end to it, but i bet some motherfucker will post right after me..

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2746/img150yy6.jpg

ras u should do simples. THEY DO HELP.

ASB_ONE
11-29-2006, 03:39 PM
awwww yeh nemz bringin heet, i well like the top one, the bottom one trips me out lol

shamee1991
11-29-2006, 03:49 PM
that some tight shit, ur&#39;s flowin that style....

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-29-2006, 03:53 PM
asem fill in that empty space with some 3d or somethin brahhh

c0ld
11-29-2006, 03:55 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/5500/imag0007en3.jpg

attempt 3.

a little crooked.

ASB_ONE
11-29-2006, 04:01 PM
cold thats lookin ayt man.
baper i will bro im workin on it, u wan exchange or somit im bored out ma brains

shamee1991
11-29-2006, 04:05 PM
ras Posted on Nov 29 2006, 02:31 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/7929/ate7xs2.jpg

mate i like it but u need to either develope your letter stucture or change the style cuz i wanna see what else u can do

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
11-29-2006, 04:08 PM
ill hit you with an exchange

searoner
11-29-2006, 04:09 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1239/serif9km0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shamee1991
11-29-2006, 04:18 PM
umm...all works but the R look like a B abit...

CoKKeYONe
11-29-2006, 04:18 PM
^looks good but it begs for some color

Nosypainter
11-29-2006, 04:21 PM
Originally posted by askone@Nov 28 2006, 01:41 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a174/bboyz_dogg/Picture-1.jpg


help anyone? any comments? getting started. need advice.
i like your k alot

Nos

Yusef245
11-29-2006, 04:21 PM
nemz- lovin the blue 3d and the green fill on the other piece but the red is distracting for me. maybe a more subtle or calmer color for the background would suit it better.

cold- keep working. work on the 3d on the M but overall pretty good.

sear- like it alot. very clean and the vanishing 3d is nice. the A is the best letter in my opinion, good shit

ASB_ONE
11-29-2006, 05:54 PM
here ya go baper
peace

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0131_000.jpg

-testify-
11-29-2006, 06:01 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Nov 28 2006, 10:36 PM
put some damn effort mani dotn even get crits so why should you color it and shit man&#33;
cant you just crit my structure i dont care about coloring right now id rather concentrate on letters

sInE946
11-29-2006, 06:05 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8939/graff0001mt6.jpg


did it reallly quick in a study with shitty markers just would liike some feedback

-testify-
11-29-2006, 06:26 PM
^block letters
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4649/shityyhd3.png
another throw

searoner
11-29-2006, 06:42 PM
sine think you need to step back, find a nice simple font like ariel or even the letters on your kayboard and copy those, get then nailed and then you can start changing shit creating a style etc.
tstify looks alright could do with work, sketch everyday whenever you get the chance and use all your ideas wether they work or not try everything.
amber by sear:
http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/4647/amberjs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ASB_ONE
11-29-2006, 06:58 PM
testify u need alot of practice

sear nice generic style i like it not too sure bout the end caps on ur letters tho.

ShIfTeD
11-29-2006, 06:59 PM
you should have made all the lines thick, not just the tops