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Eskimo33
12-06-2006, 04:15 PM
D_G clean those up and erase all the shit on the inside then repost. Also try to move your letters closer together I dont like how the A sits on top of the S.

imported_Bes_one
12-06-2006, 04:17 PM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/2510/pict0005xl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits please.

poopis
12-06-2006, 04:17 PM
Originally posted by Syn@Dec 6 2006, 04:13 PM
Hey there!

I'm new here. My name's Syn. And I write "Syn" (coincidence?). Here's a few of my designs, tell me what you think, please don't be too harsh. I'm only new at this! LOL:

http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/9180/syn1bq8.jpg

I'm not 100% confident with my choice of fill yet. So I've left them blank. If anybody could give me some suggestions, it would be much welcomed.
yes ,loose the 2 top throws...there not gonna make it, your bottom 2 are pretty good there, but on the 2nd one on the bottom looks like a 5...your Y's are the shit just that S thats gettin in the way the first S at the bottom is the best play with that style S for a little.And when I saw SYN first thing that poped in my mind was state your name..


EDIT: Bes the top extinstion at the top of the B doesnt looks so good ,with the arrow goind right and the middle of the E could be a little smoother ,also at the bottom of the E where it goes in looks a little off at the top. Overall I love that S and your B except the top part.

Eskimo33
12-06-2006, 04:23 PM
I believe there is already a SYN on this site cause i did a throwie for him in the exchange.

fuckthatgame
12-06-2006, 04:30 PM
ya sounded familiar to me 2....just revers it and me NYS or sumthin

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
12-06-2006, 04:31 PM
d_g don&#39;t make the tail of the s that long b.

some sketches, playing with the name "yells"

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/yells1.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/yells2.jpg

and for the saber battle that i didnt enter hah:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/saber.jpg

criticize me cap&#39;n

Eskimo33
12-06-2006, 04:37 PM
Baper, I think that yells with the color would be bomb on the side of a train. Thats a very nice simple you got. I wish more people would understand how nice a good clean simple looks. Your saber piece is alot better then 90% of the entries.

enuf.
12-06-2006, 04:50 PM
bes- take the top arrow off the s
and one of the b.
then it will look good.

Stonk
12-06-2006, 04:56 PM
i dont like how in the hollow yells one you have the letters divided. But the top one is probably my favorite that i&#39;ve seen from you

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new011.jpg the fill was done with some shitty markers so try to look past that. also dont mind the pink tags, the orange ones are the ones i would prefer to be criticized

poopis
12-06-2006, 05:21 PM
looks alright to me... I&#39;d love to see your tag philly style or w/e they call it with the "top fade" lots of good curves good tag. The PO and the D look pretty simple but good, your E is good too but it kinda doesnt fit with the style of your other letters. I like the orange coloring in that with the tiles n stuff.

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
12-06-2006, 05:25 PM
try it with a drop shadow poed. i think that would fit that type of letters more nicely

enuf.
12-06-2006, 05:25 PM
um. im assuming your talking about flare. maybe.

this is directed toward poopis.

eMJayBee
12-06-2006, 05:30 PM
Bes-one- Simples thats all, although you seem to know how to do your3-d
Baper-I like the first one the most, different style...nice
Stonk-That looks pretty good, Maybe make the 3-d a different color then the outline

Somthin I did for a chicka friend, just did simples...Critz?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/scan0050.jpg

fuckthatgame
12-06-2006, 05:32 PM
That simple is super sick man&#33;&#33;&#33;
Diggin it to the maxx

kicklip9634
12-06-2006, 06:02 PM
http://i14.tinypic.com/2ihw4nl.jpg
experimrntin with new names.. pen freestyle crits...
emjaybee:Love the colors

Eskimo33
12-06-2006, 06:07 PM
kickflip, clean up your lines

ASB_ONE
12-06-2006, 06:12 PM
fucthatgame: yeh ayt ill exchange wat u write? ur letters are alright they jus need practice and make the hole in the R
D_G: not rele likin them letters the e and the t are cool but s and a need some work
bes: looks well rushed dope style though
syn: bottom left throwie is tight jus work on the s as someone said it looks like 5 lose the rest tho
baper: fresh, killin it as always
poed: fresh simples keep it up man&#33; same to you emjaybee
kickflip: clean it up and it coulf look ayt

lil new sketch fookd the m

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0146_000.jpg

kicklip9634
12-06-2006, 06:17 PM
i dont like how the 3d on the M looks like it ovelaps.

faime
12-06-2006, 06:25 PM
the m is fucked

fuckthatgame
12-06-2006, 06:28 PM
ASB i write KUR....ill try ta have somethin done by like friday

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
12-06-2006, 07:01 PM
Originally posted by Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Dec 6 2006, 05:31 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/yells1.jpg
bumpkins

mjb-thats a hot simple, the quotes sorta throw it off though.
asem-your style is nice and consistant baby, the m&#39;s a little messed butchu know that.

bouncingsoul
12-06-2006, 07:16 PM
A girl asked me for a rose for a tatoo... So I did my attempt at a flower. Comments pleeeease

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0383.jpg

Bape, I love it... Stick on a name and we&#39;ll do an exchange yet again

T_R_O_N
12-06-2006, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 6 2006, 08:16 PM
A girl asked me for a rose for a tatoo... So I did my attempt at a flower. Comments pleeeease

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0383.jpg

Bape, I love it... Stick on a name and we&#39;ll do an exchange yet again
dude soul i like your graff and stuff, but no offense dont let that girl get that as a tatoo dude.

bouncingsoul
12-06-2006, 07:40 PM
Hahaha, yeah I know

Eskimo33
12-06-2006, 07:41 PM
I agree... that doesn&#39;t look like a rose at all man

bouncingsoul
12-06-2006, 07:48 PM
Fuck that one... It&#39;s shit I agree...

Hopefully this will save my ass?
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0384.jpg

nickstix
12-06-2006, 07:48 PM
Originally posted by nickstix@Dec 6 2006, 03:16 PM
http://www.freewebs.com/defense/3.png
messin with my throwies...crits?


bump

bounce:that rose is cool but idk im not so sure about it, defenatly better then the first one though

Ginsu
12-06-2006, 07:53 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/000_0375.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k97/_lacrimosa/000_0376.jpg

here are a couple i did not to long ago. crits would be great. tell me if im on the right track of simples plz that be kool to.

Bartic
12-06-2006, 08:51 PM
simple... no
top one isn&#39;t bad, take your time tho. It&#39;s only gunna look as good as the amount of time you put into it. As for the bottom 1 scrap it, get rid of all the xtras, the n looks ridiculous with the long extended arrow. Same with the top the arrow and stuff to the left is wack, keep on it ur s is getting there take more time

Ginsu
12-06-2006, 08:57 PM
thnx alot, its OSAH tho
back to the drawing bord :)

Slim Pickens
12-06-2006, 09:24 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1227/1202051vp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres that KILL ZONE sketch . . .fuckin retard decision to use multi pastel colors for fill given the word and theme, should have just done red with a lighter red as an inner right highlight . . . even the fill design is wack but im tryin new ish so its expected . . . gonna go back and fix up the 3d on the bottom middle, right now its all black and shouldnt be . . yada yada

Lunatic
12-06-2006, 09:28 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/rdkv23/spireeffaround.jpg

from messing around in class

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/rdkv23/spireorange.jpg

an older one i gave a fill

Cy-anide
12-06-2006, 09:28 PM
Originally posted by Slim Pickens@Dec 6 2006, 10:24 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1227/1202051vp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres that KILL ZONE sketch . . .fuckin retard decision to use multi pastel colors for fill given the word and theme, should have just done red with a lighter red as an inner right highlight . . . even the fill design is wack but im tryin new ish so its expected . . . gonna go back and fix up the 3d on the bottom middle, right now its all black and shouldnt be . . yada yada
that shit is hooooot &#33; hmm but r u sure making the zone part block is good? jus asking :unsure:

peng.2
12-06-2006, 09:51 PM
watta yall think??
http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q81/masoner/masoner.jpg

Fosale!
12-06-2006, 09:56 PM
bored.
pen freebie.
yucky ass handies.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kan.jpg

glass
12-06-2006, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by glass@Dec 5 2006, 08:16 PM
been working on letters for a while so now i&#39;ve done a few sketches, first in a long time.
i&#39;m keeping them simple and probably will be for a while while i develope more. crits would be good :D

http://i13.tinypic.com/4gralwm.jpg

http://i13.tinypic.com/4712sdf.jpg

http://i14.tinypic.com/2rrrwcy.jpg
bump

enigmatic
12-06-2006, 10:16 PM
GO TO WWW.MYSPACE.COM/KIDSWITHCRAYONS206

CLICK ON THE KWC THINGY TO VEIW PICS

tell me what ya think&#33; please.

Fosale!
12-06-2006, 10:23 PM
^two kids above are gay.
enigmatic learn how to post flicks.
jerk.
and glas.
dont bump unless you crit.
now im not gonna crit yours, gaylord.

TricksForKids
12-06-2006, 10:28 PM
nevermind

bouncingsoul
12-06-2006, 10:34 PM
BITCHES
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0386.jpg

Quigbert
12-06-2006, 10:38 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 6 2006, 08:48 PM
Fuck that one... It&#39;s shit I agree...

Hopefully this will save my ass?
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0384.jpg
sweet

Quigbert
12-06-2006, 10:41 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 6 2006, 11:34 PM
BITCHES
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0386.jpg
the 3d sucks

bouncingsoul
12-06-2006, 10:42 PM
It&#39;s not supposed to be 3d... I just do it to fill in the space inside so it doesn&#39;t look gappy and unbalanced

Quigbert
12-06-2006, 10:43 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri17.jpg

Crits on the yellow outlined drawing?

enigmatic
12-06-2006, 10:50 PM
http://enione.deviantart.com/gallery/

this is dope. Check out my stuff.

SEROKID
12-06-2006, 11:18 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4189/postmekr2.jpg

kind of old

ras
12-07-2006, 01:44 AM
Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 7 2006, 04:50 AM
http://enione.deviantart.com/gallery/

this is dope. Check out my stuff.
callin your stuff dope...when it isnt that dope...makes u look a bighead...

deri...work on your R .. and E...and if thats a T on the end...definitly need to work on that

smiley face
12-07-2006, 02:24 AM
some sketches

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/Bleep1984/smyl3.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/Bleep1984/smyl2.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/Bleep1984/smyl1.jpg

5yn
12-07-2006, 04:33 AM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture158.jpg

inkbits
12-07-2006, 05:41 AM
Originally posted by Slim Pickens@Dec 7 2006, 01:24 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1227/1202051vp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres that KILL ZONE sketch . . .fuckin retard decision to use multi pastel colors for fill given the word and theme, should have just done red with a lighter red as an inner right highlight . . . even the fill design is wack but im tryin new ish so its expected . . . gonna go back and fix up the 3d on the bottom middle, right now its all black and shouldnt be . . yada yada
pretty dope man. colour makes it pop with the black, wouldn&#39;t sweat that. ext&#39;s are good, maybe a little light on the end comparing to the K but not to a degree it looks out of place.

Unded
12-07-2006, 05:47 AM
Eh, critz or comments? =/
I&#39;m going to go over in markers to fix mistakes and fill.
Any suggestions on improvement?
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p289/UndedWon/HPIM0556.jpg


some sketches

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/Bleep1984/smyl3.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y10/Bleep1984/smyl2.jpg


Maybe it&#39;s just me, but your letters seem disproportioned. They get big and then gradually get smaller. I think mine do too =/
Other than that, I like =]

uhhh
12-07-2006, 07:30 AM
this thread grows too fast.

deciet, its not bad, good to see someone doeing simples, just keep working on em.
sky-thats really nice, but the fill could use improvments in some places.

enigmatic
12-07-2006, 08:43 AM
http://enione.deviantart.com/

Crits Please. Those throws look okay for beggining but yo need more letter form.

ras
12-07-2006, 08:57 AM
Originally posted by inkbits+Dec 7 2006, 11:41 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (inkbits @ Dec 7 2006, 11:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Slim Pickens@Dec 7 2006, 01:24 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1227/1202051vp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres that KILL ZONE sketch . . .fuckin retard decision to use multi pastel colors for fill given the word and theme, should have just done red with a lighter red as an inner right highlight . . . even the fill design is wack but im tryin new ish so its expected . . . gonna go back and fix up the 3d on the bottom middle, right now its all black and shouldnt be . . yada yada
pretty dope man. colour makes it pop with the black, wouldn&#39;t sweat that. ext&#39;s are good, maybe a little light on the end comparing to the K but not to a degree it looks out of place. [/b][/quote]
colours are incredible...

Unded
12-07-2006, 09:13 AM
Originally posted by enigmatic@Dec 7 2006, 09:43 AM
http://enione.deviantart.com/

Crits Please. Those throws look okay for beggining but yo need more letter form.
Put up your flix and stop posting a fucking link to your Deviant Art portfolio.

ARMAwonR
12-07-2006, 09:38 AM
Am I the only one to notice ... that deviant art website drops names ...

:huh:

Fluffy Bunnies
12-07-2006, 09:47 AM
Here&#39;s some nemz I wrote cuz I felt like it... I hate Z&#39;s&#33;&#33; I suck&#33;

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/c4b8b95a.png
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/a4896181.png
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/f1a6e5d9.png

Apoc
12-07-2006, 10:17 AM
Originally posted by ras+Dec 7 2006, 09:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Dec 7 2006, 09:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by inkbits@Dec 7 2006, 11:41 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Slim Pickens@Dec 7 2006, 01:24 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1227/1202051vp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres that KILL ZONE sketch . . .fuckin retard decision to use multi pastel colors for fill given the word and theme, should have just done red with a lighter red as an inner right highlight . . . even the fill design is wack but im tryin new ish so its expected . . . gonna go back and fix up the 3d on the bottom middle, right now its all black and shouldnt be . . yada yada
pretty dope man. colour makes it pop with the black, wouldn&#39;t sweat that. ext&#39;s are good, maybe a little light on the end comparing to the K but not to a degree it looks out of place.
colours are incredible... [/b][/quote]
bump

TryingTooHard
12-07-2006, 10:48 AM
Apoc... Im liking the colors dude... definatly but I dunno about the block "zone" ...

other than that I like it w/o the zone

Slim Pickens
12-07-2006, 10:57 AM
thanks for the love people . . . yeah most of my sketches are heavy on extensions to the left side and lessen as the letters go on . . workin on it by tryin to throw in extensions at the end to try and balance but i gotta get a better game plan . . i found that a thicker black forcefield really really pops for multi color fills like this one . . gonna catch a quick sesh then finish it up, then start all over cuz this is for a battle i aint tryin to lose but got lil chance of winning . . blacka blacka&#33;

i aint sky, that fool would be postin mad stupid shit at all hours of the night when he was on the juice . . this is slim pickens man, fuck a sky 5 . . (does have a nice star wars ring to it thoo)

fluffy bunnies - those simples are decent, you have 3 bumps on the top of your Ms, maybe try takin the left most top bump so itd look more like the mcdonalds archs with 2 humps instead of 3 . .

Unded
12-07-2006, 11:11 AM
Originally posted by Slim Pickens@Dec 7 2006, 11:57 AM
thanks for the love people . . . yeah most of my sketches are heavy on extensions to the left side and lessen as the letters go on . . workin on it by tryin to throw in extensions at the end to try and balance but i gotta get a better game plan . . i found that a thicker black forcefield really really pops for multi color fills like this one . . gonna catch a quick sesh then finish it up, then start all over cuz this is for a battle i aint tryin to lose but got lil chance of winning . . blacka blacka&#33;

i aint sky, that fool would be postin mad stupid shit at all hours of the night when he was on the juice . . this is slim pickens man, fuck a sky 5 . . (does have a nice star wars ring to it thoo)

fluffy bunnies - those simples are decent, you have 3 bumps on the top of your Ms, maybe try takin the left most top bump so itd look more like the mcdonalds archs with 2 humps instead of 3 . .
Graf is about creativity, don&#39;t hassle him.
I can distinguish his M&#39;s from W&#39;s so it&#39;s all good.

myl
12-07-2006, 11:11 AM
Originally posted by TryingTooHard@Dec 7 2006, 11:48 AM
Apoc... Im liking the colors dude... definatly but I dunno about the block "zone" ...

other than that I like it w/o the zone
apoc didnt do that. he bumped it.

but if i may say so...slim pickens...sky5...whoever you are, that shit is incredible. dope as hell

Slim Pickens
12-07-2006, 11:41 AM
youre right UNDED, suggesting someone try 2 humps with their M next time instead of 3 was an unprovoked "hassle" . . . :unsure: i hope CEZR doesnt see this . . .

Slim Pickens
12-07-2006, 11:43 AM
double post so ill edit . . . eskimo said to emJAY to do small extensions first and not ones that take up the whole piece . . . startin off with just addin tabs at the end or your letters/bars is a good way to start dressin up your letters but not gettin too crazy with it . .

ras
12-07-2006, 12:02 PM
ima crit that kill zone peice agen...fuckeing amazing

bunnies...liking the middleon best...

sumthing i did witha old skool theme...change my name to Are...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/oldskooool.jpg

crits on this un please... thanks &#33;&#33; ;)

emokid
12-07-2006, 12:24 PM
Mr 5 that killzone is so pretty
ras, i like the charax and the a is nice
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/7127/dscn6092oe8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/2184/dscn6091mu4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hate or love or anywhere in between please do tell

myl
12-07-2006, 12:26 PM
dope style

ras
12-07-2006, 12:26 PM
man that bttom one i fucking love...just maybe get rid of that bottom extension on the A

sketch3
12-07-2006, 12:34 PM
i like how the e has different vannishing point to other letters

emokid
12-07-2006, 12:38 PM
heey thanks :)
i dont like the a bit either but itl gradually get phased out
n sketch the e has the same vanishin point, just a few degrees off maybe?

Slim Pickens
12-07-2006, 01:53 PM
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3802/1202052ud7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

finished . . .everythin by itself works but togewther clashes . .fuck it on to the next one, turn and burn . . .

trashhh
12-07-2006, 02:08 PM
wildstyles really nice, real nice colours fill and 3d

ras
12-07-2006, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 7 2006, 06:02 PM
ima crit that kill zone peice agen...fuckeing amazing

bunnies...liking the middleon best...

sumthing i did witha old skool theme...change my name to Are...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/oldskooool.jpg

crits on this un please... thanks &#33;&#33; ;)
bump for crits :)
..
slim...great theme...not liking the Zone part tho...its a bit sloppy on the bottom line between the Z n O..or mybe its supposed to be like that..and i think a camoflage / camo fill would of looked fukin dope on the zone..and i know u cud acheive that becuase i think ur strength is fill&#39;s ... ;)

glass
12-07-2006, 02:13 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Dec 6 2006, 11:23 PM
^two kids above are gay.
enigmatic learn how to post flicks.
jerk.
and glas.
dont bump unless you crit.
now im not gonna crit yours, gaylord.
i crit people a lot, no need to get all hissy

ras, nice characters in your pieces. their really pretty good except there is so much going on in that one it seems way to busy for my liking.

ras
12-07-2006, 02:16 PM
yeah man...there is quite abit goin on...but when im liking a peice myself..i tend to go OTT...its a kinda bad habit..but ill snap outa it..what about the letters..? .. thanks...thats what im concentrating on the most... :) ;)

trashhh
12-07-2006, 02:18 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/trash11.jpg

sketch colored in on comp

ras
12-07-2006, 02:19 PM
u always colour your stuff in on comp...mind you..if thats you thing ur sure doin it...great stuff...but what append to the S...

glass
12-07-2006, 02:22 PM
ras - maybe move the L&#39;s in old skool to the right a little, they look a little too far into the other letters to me

trash - damn, always like the comp colored stuff, so crisp. nice 3D too.

trashhh
12-07-2006, 02:22 PM
em yea i couldnt think of an S lol.. the orange ans white lines make the tail end of it if that makes sense. also the A is wack

ras
12-07-2006, 02:24 PM
Originally posted by glass@Dec 7 2006, 08:22 PM
ras - maybe move the L&#39;s in old skool to the right a little, they look a little too far into the other letters to me

trash - damn, always like the comp colored stuff, so crisp. nice 3D too.
no man..the actual A and E...the oldskool peice was just summin i added on to show that it was old skool themed...?

Eskimo33
12-07-2006, 02:28 PM
Slim... Very nice piece the only thing i dont like is the last L is kinda hard to find. If the extensions were a little wider then i think it&#39;d be easier to find. Just my .02 cents doesn&#39;t mean much haha

imported_Bes_one
12-07-2006, 02:29 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/6706/pict0008vj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Something i did for school.It says biology.
Crits??

Eskimo33
12-07-2006, 02:36 PM
work on your letters more. And your extensions. You shouldn&#39;t run your extensions thru letters. Its hard to explain but the top arrow on the B and the bottom extension on the bottom of the B where it meets with the I erase them lines so it looks like they actually connect. The I needs alot of work to. Your letters should be alittle thicker too.

ras
12-07-2006, 02:39 PM
the O kinda looks like a I...and its kinda sloppy...other than that...take eskimos advice... :)

imported_Bes_one
12-07-2006, 02:44 PM
Thanks for the crits&#33;And i had to make my letters thinner just so it could fit the page.

Fosale!
12-07-2006, 03:59 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Dec 6 2006, 10:56 PM
bored.
pen freebie.
yucky ass handies.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kan.jpg
feedback bc. no one can give little 11 year old kids advice.

Fluffy Bunnies
12-07-2006, 04:06 PM
Having some fun in class&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Karak.png
I don&#39;t think I am gonna color this one. cuz it&#39;s ment to be a pencil sketch.
btw, the thingymajig is scratching his head with a can... A can with every ingredient in the world. yah&#33;

Fosale!
12-07-2006, 04:09 PM
^ i really like it.i would just put an extention on the A bc. it looks like a lowercase D

ASB_ONE
12-07-2006, 04:13 PM
that ak above me looks ayt, just ink it or pop it out a bit.

kur heres ur ish sorry didnt come out v well

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0148_000.jpg

Slim Pickens
12-07-2006, 04:14 PM
damn fosale your only 11 and youve been doing this for more than a year already? . . props lil guy big props . . . your shadow 3d almost looks like a double up of some of your bars on the inner parts of your letters, which is pretty tight idea/style . . . got proportion down, letters all have same style . . . looks good man, you be burnin most freshman fo sure . .

Fosale!
12-07-2006, 04:31 PM
rofl
thanks sky but im really 16.
thought i might get crits easier that way.
i wish i was 11 again though.
i miss them days.
street sharks and darkwing duck
*sighs*

Stevie
12-07-2006, 04:31 PM
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/3684/throwieideasl7.jpg

i dunno, throwie idea.. critiques and suggestions are appreciated..

edit: my bad about the size.. right click view image if you&#39;re on firefox if you&#39;re not down with the size

edit edit: or this.. http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/3684/throwieideasl7.th.jpg (http://img459.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwieideasl7.jpg)

ras
12-07-2006, 04:36 PM
stevie...looks good but if it says Free...work with the F..

asb..ace as always...i love yah 3d...

sum late night shit..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/76696.jpg

crits on this one thanks &#33;&#33; ;)

Stevie
12-07-2006, 04:37 PM
ye it says free, i&#39;m working on another one.. thanks though

ASB_ONE
12-07-2006, 04:47 PM
philly style throwie? i like it.

ras- ur letters look well busy man they look nice how come there no t no more jus karak? ill pm u some better crits if i got time, u kno how i do.

ras
12-07-2006, 04:50 PM
yo ASB...i change my name to Are now...lol...and the R has been tagged on the security guards head whilst he was sleeping...lmfao...yo thanks man for the advice you been givin me.. ;)

G - Wahl
12-07-2006, 05:09 PM
Ras, always loving your stuff ha

ASB, I like that U + R, that K&#39;s extension is to long. Nice though.



Does anyone know how to draw ice? Yeah I know it sounds weird..But I cant figure out which colors to use and how to blend and shape it <_<
Didnt know where else to put this.

ras
12-07-2006, 05:14 PM
light blues and greys..

glass
12-07-2006, 05:25 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Dec 7 2006, 06:09 PM
Ras, always loving your stuff ha

ASB, I like that U + R, that K&#39;s extension is to long. Nice though.



Does anyone know how to draw ice? Yeah I know it sounds weird..But I cant figure out which colors to use and how to blend and shape it <_<
Didnt know where else to put this.
yeah dude i kind of have the same problem. i have been trying to see how i would draw glass shards &#39;cause i think it would look pretty cool as a background that looks to be expolding out.

MeRk!
12-07-2006, 05:27 PM
Originally posted by MeRk&#33;@Dec 6 2006, 01:00 AM
hey "TryingTooHard" i see your doing your words, simple. me like. but can be better, like the A and Y, thats my opinion, but looks good = )
heres mine, but im still new. honest critz and tips please &#33;

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/674/grime1hn2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/989/perfectub7.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7177/equal1iy2.png (http://imageshack.us)
*not done this one =/*
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5127/tranceya3.png (http://imageshack.us)

CRITS AND TIPS please, thanx.
any crits please =/
im new to this forum..

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 05:48 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0387.jpg

G - Wahl
12-07-2006, 05:55 PM
Knew, why are you still in the toys forums? B)

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 06:01 PM
I&#39;m afraid of rejection lol... Plus I like the BSC

ShIfTeD
12-07-2006, 06:03 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 7 2006, 06:48 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0387.jpg
fuck your blue pens bouncing soul&#33; lmao

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/646/erosbv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits on this?

Bazer
12-07-2006, 06:09 PM
Originally posted by MeRk&#33;@Dec 7 2006, 06:27 PM
any crits please =/
im new to this forum..
sup with your cammera buddy?

eMJayBee
12-07-2006, 06:35 PM
Bouncingsoul-Looks good, Although I am not really feeling the shaded in area&#39;s inside your piece.
Shifted-Good 3-d, maybe make the "d" connect

Any critz on this, Its the saber drawing colored...

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/scan0051.jpg

Quigbert
12-07-2006, 06:36 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri18.jpg

crits?

Quigbert
12-07-2006, 06:38 PM
Originally posted by eMJayBee@Dec 7 2006, 07:35 PM
Bouncingsoul-Looks good, Although I am not really feeling the shaded in area&#39;s inside your piece.
Shifted-Good 3-d, maybe make the "d" connect

Any critz on this, Its the saber drawing colored...

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/scan0051.jpg
make it shorter and more scrunched up, its too tall.

Quigbert
12-07-2006, 06:41 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/jkjhjgjgjgj.jpg

kinda like that...

Quigbert
12-07-2006, 06:47 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/jkjhjgjgjgj.jpg

kinda like that...

alive
12-07-2006, 07:09 PM
yeahuhhhhh

trying to work bigger. the r is wackkkkk.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02910.jpg

trying to work without the "guidelines" still pen freestyle, thats how i roll
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02911.jpg

bored on the train
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02912.jpg

i know tags arent for this thread, but. . . . deal with it
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02913.jpg

my throw
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02914.jpg


crits plz.


EMJ - i agree with quig
QUIG - its cool for an effect, but to progress i advice going straighter. but looks nice.
SHIFTED - simpler, sry man
BOUNCE - i like

peace

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 07:37 PM
Shifted, I don&#39;t really like it... It&#39;s not the "keeping it simple" that you&#39;re off on. I think it&#39;s the proportions that you need to work on. Do bars and it&#39;ll look good... The handie at the top is pure shit (had to break it to ya)... The bottom one is great though. With that outline thing, the outline should be done with a thin pen, not another marker lol.

Alive, I love your stuff because it&#39;s just great simples... The handie I don&#39;t really like... It looks like you tried way too hard on that one... The throwie looks good but it looks like it says cear... Unless you wanted it to say that in which case it&#39;s fucking great

ShIfTeD
12-07-2006, 07:43 PM
thats funny cuz you pointed out what i did to the T lol

i kno my proportions are off...i dont know how to get all my letters the same size&#33;
thats the most difficult thing for me

tell me more about thes bars you speak of....i dont get what you mean





btw lookin clean on your drawing, i just hat it how you never color it, and its always in a blue pen <_<

kicklip9634
12-07-2006, 07:59 PM
shifted:i like the fill i jus dont really like the letters.
cear:you should start addin extensions
quigbert: put youre letters closer together
emjaybee: what quigbert said
http://i10.tinypic.com/2mnhm6e.jpg
crits..

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 08:08 PM
Shifted, this will hopefully help you and 90% of this forum

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0388.jpg

uhhh
12-07-2006, 08:26 PM
hot damn. im gonna do one of those.

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 08:28 PM
...More like 100 hahahaha

kicklip9634
12-07-2006, 08:28 PM
Originally posted by kicklip9634@Dec 7 2006, 08:59 PM
shifted:i like the fill i jus dont really like the letters.
cear:you should start addin extensions
quigbert: put youre letters closer together
emjaybee: what quigbert said
http://i10.tinypic.com/2mnhm6e.jpg
crits..
bump
Bouncinsoul: you should put that in the new to graff thread

alive
12-07-2006, 08:31 PM
was just looking for that shit, cant find it, can some1 give me a link?
the new 2 graff thread

ty

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 08:36 PM
I had to search through cezr&#39;s posts and I finally found it and bumped it... You&#39;re welcome young jedi

alive
12-07-2006, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by alive@Dec 7 2006, 08:09 PM
yeahuhhhhh

trying to work bigger. the r is wackkkkk.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02910.jpg

trying to work without the "guidelines" still pen freestyle, thats how i roll
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02911.jpg

bored on the train
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02912.jpg

i know tags arent for this thread, but. . . . deal with it
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02913.jpg

my throw
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02914.jpg

peace
who knows what goes bump in the night. . . . .
ty bounce
peace.

glass
12-07-2006, 08:55 PM
nice, the bored on the train one was my favorite. not too simple and not too crazy.

anyway. here&#39;s something i tried. messed with making thicker letters and a little of a shadow but i know it&#39;s off a bit. crits?

http://i17.tinypic.com/3zapmzd.jpg

uhhh
12-07-2006, 08:57 PM
glas-not bad, i kinda like the g, the a needs work though. keep it up.
alive-pretty pretty please do a sketch in pencil and then erase the lines, i just want to see clean one, just onceeeeee. :(


Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 7 2006, 09:28 PM
...More like 100 hahahaha
? :huh:

well anyways.. here, you can&#39;t see half of it because my camera sucks and all i had was highlighter but oh welll.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-056S.jpg

Hilo
12-07-2006, 09:03 PM
glas work on your 3d good start on simples keep it that way. thats how most of us toys start........

AteskOne
12-07-2006, 09:03 PM
Originally posted by alive+Dec 7 2006, 09:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive &#064; Dec 7 2006, 09:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Dec 7 2006, 08:09 PM
yeahuhhhhh

trying to work bigger. the r is wackkkkk.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02910.jpg

trying to work without the "guidelines" still pen freestyle, thats how i roll
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02911.jpg

bored on the train
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02912.jpg

i know tags arent for this thread, but. . . . deal with it
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02913.jpg

my throw
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02914.jpg

peace
who knows what goes bump in the night. . . . .
ty bounce
peace. [/b][/quote]
i&#39;m really feeling the throwie. i needa work on my throwies lol. although that handstyle needs alotta work. i dont really know what to tell you cause your headed in the right direction and keeping it simple. only advice on it is loose the like anarchy a look. if your gunna circle something circle the whole tag not just a letter. also i&#39;m loving the fact that you have a great letter structure and are keeping it simple because your letters are coming out ill. others on here can learn from you. def keep up the good work.

AteskOne
12-07-2006, 09:09 PM
sorry for the double post but i need some serious help...i dont know if you guys have seen any of my previous characters but if you have you&#39;ve probably also noticed i dont draw clothing. that&#39;s because i cant...
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/2077/scan0007et1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i&#39;m so lost when it comes to how the clothing is shaped, where it bends and folds, and how it is shaded. dont worry bout how bad this sketch is i&#39;m erasing the bends in the clothing now and making new ones, changing the limbs making them all skinnier just to exaggerate them a little, and also i&#39;m going to make a really short guy in the corner to go along with him. i want them both to be wearing basketball jerseys and shorts but like i said i have no clue how. the look i would like to go for is a sharp sort of crisp bend and fold in the clothing... if you get what i&#39;m saying. i sort of started it in the shorts on the right leg but it&#39;s fucked up...so anyone have any tips that could help would be very appreciated.

ShIfTeD
12-07-2006, 09:37 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 7 2006, 09:08 PM
Shifted, this will hopefully help you and 90% of this forum

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0388.jpg
ill give it a try tomaro..thanx man

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 10:08 PM
By the way, the way to keep the widths consistent is to have the widths of the bars the same throughout and it should just come automatically...

uhhh
12-07-2006, 10:14 PM
experimenting.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-057S-1.jpg
crits?
says ak by the wayyy.

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 10:16 PM
Extensions made it look like AUK to me... I like it though... Good shit lately

uhhh
12-07-2006, 10:17 PM
thanks, i think im gonna keep screwing around with this style. ;)

bouncingsoul
12-07-2006, 10:23 PM
We gotta do another exchange once you get to that new notch in your style belt... In fact, like I&#39;ve been saying for like this whole week, all the BSC people should do a holiday theme exchange... Please? I&#39;m gonna do exchanges for

Bape
Bawk
uhhh (what do you write, I forget... ha sorry)
Fosale (sec right?)

...That&#39;s all I know...

AteskOne
12-07-2006, 10:32 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Dec 7 2006, 10:09 PM
sorry for the double post but i need some serious help...i dont know if you guys have seen any of my previous characters but if you have you&#39;ve probably also noticed i dont draw clothing. that&#39;s because i cant...
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/2077/scan0007et1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i&#39;m so lost when it comes to how the clothing is shaped, where it bends and folds, and how it is shaded. dont worry bout how bad this sketch is i&#39;m erasing the bends in the clothing now and making new ones, changing the limbs making them all skinnier just to exaggerate them a little, and also i&#39;m going to make a really short guy in the corner to go along with him. i want them both to be wearing basketball jerseys and shorts but like i said i have no clue how. the look i would like to go for is a sharp sort of crisp bend and fold in the clothing... if you get what i&#39;m saying. i sort of started it in the shorts on the right leg but it&#39;s fucked up...so anyone have any tips that could help would be very appreciated.
bump....help a muther fucker out.

uhhh
12-07-2006, 10:34 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 7 2006, 11:23 PM
We gotta do another exchange once you get to that new notch in your style belt... In fact, like I&#39;ve been saying for like this whole week, all the BSC people should do a holiday theme exchange... Please? I&#39;m gonna do exchanges for

Bape
Bawk
uhhh (what do you write, I forget... ha sorry)
Fosale (sec right?)

...That&#39;s all I know...
i believe thats the whole club, unless skys in it..?
at the moment i write aktr.. but i only have a solid ak for most stuff, itll probably changed by the time i get this style fixed up.. i&#39;ll letcha know. ;)

so then i&#39;d be doing them for..
Bape
Bawk
Knews
Sec?
right?

TryingTooHard
12-07-2006, 10:54 PM
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Kris.jpg

What you guys think about this? I know the "S" but what can I do about the bottom hook of it?

Crits? please

CaliforniaTHC
12-07-2006, 10:56 PM
hey can u tell me what you guys think and what i shuld do to improve?
i knew these go here because i saw
Tot Black Books, post up your pieces with 2 many arrows hahaha

http://i11.tinypic.com/2hnysmh.jpg

http://i12.tinypic.com/4dwycra.jpg

oh, and btw, i have seen some really nice ones that im suprized would be in the toy forum&#33; Some of you people are reeeaalllllyyy GOOOODD&#33;
but yah please tell me what ya thin kand ya comment and all...blah, thanks&#33;

TryingTooHard
12-07-2006, 10:59 PM
California..... Crits on mine dude...

But honest to god, to many arrows and hookups, calm down but I like the design of the letters

Do mine&#33;&#33; :blink:

hardkore toy
12-07-2006, 11:09 PM
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/3450/imga0017ct8.jpg
says da

monoxide
12-07-2006, 11:20 PM
This is pretty much the first thing I have drawn, so don&#39;t be too harsh :o
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y5/monoxide707/mono002.jpg

Tips would be awesome, I tried to keep it basic for my first drawing...

BAPKEB
12-08-2006, 12:39 AM
My Webpage (http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2050/stickers002ab3.jpg)[img=http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4947/stickers001jx0.th.jpg] (http://My Webpage

neza
12-08-2006, 05:01 AM
Originally posted by CaliforniaTHC@Dec 7 2006, 11:56 PM
hey can u tell me what you guys think and what i shuld do to improve?
i knew these go here because i saw
Tot Black Books, post up your pieces with 2 many arrows hahaha

http://i11.tinypic.com/2hnysmh.jpg

http://i12.tinypic.com/4dwycra.jpg

oh, and btw, i have seen some really nice ones that im suprized would be in the toy forum&#33; Some of you people are reeeaalllllyyy GOOOODD&#33;
but yah please tell me what ya thin kand ya comment and all...blah, thanks&#33;
you my friend need to practice your simples work on the letter structure your add ons look awkward and outta place come back in a month or 2 when you have practiced lots and lots of simples

alive
12-08-2006, 05:45 AM
Originally posted by uhhh+Dec 7 2006, 11:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh &#064; Dec 7 2006, 11:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@Dec 7 2006, 11:23 PM
We gotta do another exchange once you get to that new notch in your style belt... In fact, like I&#39;ve been saying for like this whole week, all the BSC people should do a holiday theme exchange... Please? I&#39;m gonna do exchanges for

Bape
Bawk
uhhh (what do you write, I forget... ha sorry)
Fosale (sec right?)

...That&#39;s all I know...
i believe thats the whole club, unless skys in it..?
at the moment i write aktr.. but i only have a solid ak for most stuff, itll probably changed by the time i get this style fixed up.. i&#39;ll letcha know. ;)

so then i&#39;d be doing them for..
Bape
Bawk
Knews
Sec?
right? [/b][/quote]
bounce said i could get in&#33;

so id be doing

aktr bape bawk knews sec

yes?

so if you would be so kind as to add me to your list?

haha


peace.


CALIFORNIATHC- do block letters. dont color. dont arrow. dont even fuckin 3d
MONO-nice start, but maybe u should do block letters instead of bubble letters, unless ur doing it on purpose to develope a throw?
HARDKORETOY-looks like dy. do some block letters.
TRYINGTOOHARD- not too bad, but dont make the S end so sharp, and keep the letter widths equal throughout


peace.

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 08:33 AM
Ooh yeah, cear, I didn&#39;t know about you, that&#39;s what I was unsure about

Bape
Bawk
Knews
Cear
Sec
Aktr (uhhh)
Nemz (sorry&#33;)

nemzone
12-08-2006, 08:51 AM
ur forgettin the nemzonater ;)

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 08:55 AM
Oh noooo, sorry lol... Well I gotta go to school so I can&#39;t bump any flicks... Sorry for all the chitchat in here

Fluffy Bunnies
12-08-2006, 09:13 AM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 7 2006, 11:23 PM
We gotta do another exchange once you get to that new notch in your style belt... In fact, like I&#39;ve been saying for like this whole week, all the BSC people should do a holiday theme exchange... Please? I&#39;m gonna do exchanges for

Bape
Bawk
uhhh (what do you write, I forget... ha sorry)
Fosale (sec right?)

...That&#39;s all I know...
Word, how bout me&#33;?&#33;?
and i&#39;ll exchange with whoever. just tell me or pm me.

trashhh
12-08-2006, 10:57 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40688.jpg

bump..

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
12-08-2006, 11:40 AM
agh ive created a babysitting monster

trash i like that, give yourself more room than a ruler next time and maybe make it a little taller? cuz its sorta wide, ya know? other than that im feelin it.

now i write yells, yella, yeller, yello, yelr, etc. we&#39;ll see how long that ish lasts.

ras
12-08-2006, 12:06 PM
yella sounds dope...m-mabye all your peices cud have sum yellow init...or summet

whynot?
12-08-2006, 12:10 PM
he wasnt being serious was he?

ras
12-08-2006, 12:12 PM
naaah i wasnt ;)

nemzone
12-08-2006, 12:37 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/3571/imag0001lx1.jpg


was for an xmas battle but ffucked it up

trash the R looks like a C

ras
12-08-2006, 12:54 PM
cud i eneter my crimbo peice for the battle....

nemz...not feelng the addons nor the drips but u still rocking that style..

nemzone
12-08-2006, 12:58 PM
the &#39;drips&#39; are icicles... and its for a battle on another forum

Fluffy Bunnies
12-08-2006, 01:14 PM
I decided to scan my old name "Ghosx"
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/GhosxtwopointO.png
This was done like 5 months ago.

aces
12-08-2006, 01:21 PM
GHOSX - Not likin the fill and lose those extra little lines that go in like on the H and G especially.
NEMZ - I&#39;m really likin that snowy feel to the 3-D. The dotted lines look a little weird IMO.

Well...
2 letter throwie:
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5765/1112yw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
What do you think of the handy?

Woulda been for the SABER battle if I got it done earlier:
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/6293/1111gf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

TryingTooHard
12-08-2006, 01:26 PM
So this is before:
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Kris.jpg



ANd this is after:
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/KrisDone.jpg

Its on DHL sticker shipping label :P

What you guys think???

TryingTooHard
12-08-2006, 01:27 PM
sorry for the double post

BAPKEB
12-08-2006, 01:31 PM
I need help just posting my stuff

TryingTooHard
12-08-2006, 01:36 PM
Your images? or sketches..... theres a whole forum on how to i think like in the toy forums? or somethin....

But you have to host your images, then get the ** [img] tags with the link of the pic in the middle....

G - Wahl
12-08-2006, 01:41 PM
New shit im messing around with
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/8317/picture002hl8.th.jpg (http://img217.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002hl8.jpg)
Crits?

Mr Tasty
12-08-2006, 02:15 PM
line holes suck

aces
12-08-2006, 02:19 PM
Originally posted by aces@Dec 8 2006, 03:21 PM
GHOSX - Not likin the fill and lose those extra little lines that go in like on the H and G especially.
NEMZ - I&#39;m really likin that snowy feel to the 3-D. The dotted lines look a little weird IMO.

Well...
2 letter throwie:
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5765/1112yw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
What do you think of the handy?

Woulda been for the SABER battle if I got it done earlier:
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/6293/1111gf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump cause it&#39;s most definately going to get skipped over like always...

BAPKEB:
I made a post on the "HOW TO POST IMAGES" thread. Its a sticky on the picture gallery forum.

glass
12-08-2006, 02:25 PM
Originally posted by glass@Dec 7 2006, 09:55 PM
here&#39;s something i tried. messed with making thicker letters and a little of a shadow but i know it&#39;s off a bit. crits?

http://i17.tinypic.com/3zapmzd.jpg
bump

G - Wahl: i like the look of it except for the line holes &#39;cause i don&#39;t think they fit the rest of the piece. maybe some holes that mimic the outside lines but i don&#39;t know.
over all i like it.

aces
12-08-2006, 02:30 PM
Wow um first off, resize that shit. Second, work the letters so that they look more natural and less like you forced them out onto the paper if that makes any sense at all. Lastly, work on your drop shadow cause it is way off. Search on how to do them on google.

TryingTooHard
12-08-2006, 02:45 PM
I dunno... but when I draw the outline in blocks and tweak the lettering how I want it, it always come out nice.... well to

like that...yea.. boi&#33; :unsure:
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Punk.jpg

ras
12-08-2006, 03:06 PM
Trying...alright simple...but i couldnt work out the K very much...

aces...feeling that saber fill

sumthing new...incorpreated my new trainers whut im gettin for crimbo...lol...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/311.jpg

came up with a new E..and i took ASB&#39;S advice about rounding off the edges..

crits on this un please ... &#33;&#33; Thanks &#33; ;)

glass
12-08-2006, 03:14 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 8 2006, 04:06 PM
Trying...alright simple...but i couldnt work out the K very much...

aces...feeling that saber fill

sumthing new...incorpreated my new trainers whut im gettin for crimbo...lol...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/311.jpg

came up with a new E..and i took ASB&#39;S advice about rounding off the edges..

crits on this un please ... &#33;&#33; Thanks &#33; ;)
the letter flow berr but work on making the &#39;e&#39; nice and smooth like that &#39;a&#39;

krazzie_ammo
12-08-2006, 03:29 PM
ARE - those letters are tight&#33; i really like it.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6678/83sj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? says AMR.

emokid
12-08-2006, 03:35 PM
ras, if you want my opinion, i think the e looks better than the a and you should leave it pretty much as it is, its good. but how come theres not a proper r? its hard to notice it on the shoe
amr, like the a and the r but not the m so much
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/2315/dscn6093oa2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
am i going in the right direction, does it look any good, any advice or personal comments or just abuse.

ras
12-08-2006, 03:37 PM
i wont to be have that sting in my peices...like sumthing different..and i do that by placing letters on my karaks..i ainbe being big headed but my karaks are one of my strong points..and i think it if put the karaks in the middle of my peices there even more visible...and then i can put on a basic letter...if uget me lol...thanks for the advice yall....and ill also work on making my letter more vissible on the karak

krazzie...likeing the R and A...but not the M..

pear....ervry thing there is DOPE apart from the A..

aces
12-08-2006, 04:10 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Dec 8 2006, 05:29 PM
ARE - those letters are tight&#33; i really like it.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6678/83sj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? says AMR.
Yea the M just isn&#39;t workin out. I&#39;d love to see my name in that style tho so you want to exchange? SEAZ if you do. What are you writing CRAZE or is it AMBER or is AMBER just a battle?

ras
12-08-2006, 04:15 PM
i think it was an exchnage with so damn fresh...

Fluffy Bunnies
12-08-2006, 04:47 PM
Ms paint homies&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/AKPAINT-1.jpg
I just went over the sketch I did yesterday.

krazzie_ammo
12-08-2006, 04:52 PM
Originally posted by aces+Dec 8 2006, 05:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Dec 8 2006, 05:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Dec 8 2006, 05:29 PM
ARE - those letters are tight&#33; i really like it.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6678/83sj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? says AMR.
Yea the M just isn&#39;t workin out. I&#39;d love to see my name in that style tho so you want to exchange? SEAZ if you do. What are you writing CRAZE or is it AMBER or is AMBER just a battle? [/b][/quote]
yh sounds good. what you write?

i write CRAZE btw, AMBER was just a exchange with AMBER SDF :)

ras
12-08-2006, 04:54 PM
:blink: yo...how u get that soo clean on paint...

uhhh
12-08-2006, 04:54 PM
not too bad. your on your way with simples. but make the a, an a.

i hate going through changing with my style.

ras
12-08-2006, 04:57 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 8 2006, 09:06 PM
Trying...alright simple...but i couldnt work out the K very much...

aces...feeling that saber fill

sumthing new...incorpreated my new trainers whut im gettin for crimbo...lol...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/311.jpg

came up with a new E..and i took ASB&#39;S advice about rounding off the edges..

crits on this un please ... &#33;&#33; Thanks &#33; ;)
bump for crits...please..thanks..

krazzie_ammo
12-08-2006, 04:59 PM
RAS - you wanna exchange? i would like that done in my name :)

Fluffy Bunnies
12-08-2006, 04:59 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 8 2006, 05:54 PM
:blink: yo...how u get that soo clean on paint...
patience my friend... patience... took me like 1 hour to do that cuz I had to go through almost every pixel on the edges so it doesn&#39;t look werid.

It looked a lot cleaner when I was doing and soon as I saved it, I seen the pixelation of it :(

ras
12-08-2006, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Dec 8 2006, 10:59 PM
RAS - you wanna exchange? i would like that done in my name :)
mate..dont mean to sound mean or anything but i only just started that style of letters and i dont think i wud be able to do CRA...but i would give it a try mate...ill get it done for u tomorrow... ;)

and fluffy...mad props for that

Hot_Pocket
12-08-2006, 05:07 PM
Eh, trying to do bars, &#39;cuz I suck at life :)


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture.jpg


BTW, it&#39;s just a random word, just bored in Chemistry. (Rag)

ras
12-08-2006, 06:26 PM
Yo CRAZE &#33;&#33; ...Here it Is...i decided to write Craze and not Cra....and yeah..im an extremely fast worker.. ;)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/Craze.jpg

Hople you like...and i wudnlt mind crits on this neither...thanks ;)

Hilo
12-08-2006, 07:01 PM
thats fucking ill mate cornkly:[

poopis
12-08-2006, 07:20 PM
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2900/0002ge1.th.jpg (http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0002ge1.jpg)

Simples Ftw... just finished also...any suggestions for good markers from like micheal or wal mart or any art store cause deco fabric and bic mark it...sucks my nib came off from coloring the upper mid part of the E so yea... Crits on the structure please.


Hot pocket it Ok just make your letters the Same size its like the gradually get bigger, Not feeling the G that much.

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 07:22 PM
Ras... No offense but I don&#39;t like any of your stuff

:edit: poopis, that looks like a REAL good start

poopis
12-08-2006, 07:26 PM
thanks but its kinda like a restart some of my old stuff is just a tad bit more complex but I just did that simple cause I hadnt sketched for like 3 weeks need to warm upz... But thanks man.

Sumoe
12-08-2006, 07:32 PM
poopis- good "restart"

ras- i don&#39;t really know why but i don&#39;t like your letters. I like your karaks tho.

.D.H.
12-08-2006, 07:42 PM
^ same. ras, you have a nice clean style that looks good. keep it up, but work on you steezy a bit

ghozt
12-08-2006, 07:52 PM
ras-i dont like the top of ur a =/ but everything else is dope


ummm got bored in skool :

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5871/scan0001xf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8581/scan0002ew2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


:ph34r:

edit: yall see the little i love u shit at the corner of my sketches in purple? thts my gf doin tht lol so dnt wrry about tht

prank
12-08-2006, 07:58 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 8 2006, 11:57 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40688.jpg

bump..
i like ur s but the other letters isssshhhhh

id say be mere consistent

jerm_mtl
12-08-2006, 08:20 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Dec 8 2006, 05:47 PM
Ms paint homies&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/AKPAINT-1.jpg
I just went over the sketch I did yesterday.
Paint is the shit &#33;&#33;&#33; neways u got some mad mouse-control hahaha

KoreTwo
12-08-2006, 08:53 PM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/DAIM.jpg

Crits please.

HACKS - Ur simples are nice and clean. Try adding some color next time.

OUE - Looking good. Only thing is you could try making the U more curved.

Eskimo33
12-08-2006, 08:56 PM
Dont write DAIM, Drop the flames, Work on your letters. Especially your M

BAPKEB
12-08-2006, 08:59 PM
Hey eskimo i like that piece and i like the trucker duck or is that a civil war duck?

Eskimo33
12-08-2006, 09:04 PM
Yeah its one of my fav pieces. Its done by a guy named The bad WOW 123. Im not sure what the character is...

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 09:04 PM
That&#39;s Wow123, not eskimo and that Daim is most likely for the battle... I&#39;m getting tired of people telling people not to write some name because it&#39;s some famous writer when it&#39;s actually for the battle

:edit: Eskimo beat me to it but... Damn man you don&#39;t even know what character that is? Look up Vaughn Bode

Eskimo33
12-08-2006, 09:09 PM
my bad bouncingsoul.... and yeah i&#39;ll look him up thanks.

KoreTwo
12-08-2006, 09:12 PM
Originally posted by KoreTwo@Dec 8 2006, 09:53 PM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/DAIM.jpg

Crits please.


Bump

This is for the DAIM battle. I write KRE.

And i see what you mean eskimo. The left side of the M is screwed.

BAPKEB
12-08-2006, 09:13 PM
ive seen alot of european writers do it

Hot_Pocket
12-08-2006, 09:19 PM
Originally posted by Hot_Pocket@Dec 8 2006, 06:07 PM
Eh, trying to do bars, &#39;cuz I suck at life :)


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture.jpg


BTW, it&#39;s just a random word, just bored in Chemistry. (Rag)
<_< Bump....

Kore Two, I&#39;m not feelin&#39; the fill.

uhhh
12-08-2006, 09:39 PM
looks like bouncingsoul not too long ago.

speaking of bouncing soul, i did your exchange... kinda, its only kne because the ws... baddd.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-002S.jpg
i&#39;m pretty happy with the "kn" but i really dont like the top of the e...

also, the n looks kinda like a w, but thats just part of the k..

koper
12-08-2006, 09:44 PM
Originally posted by Eskimo33@Dec 8 2006, 10:04 PM
Yeah its one of my fav pieces. Its done by a guy named The bad WOW 123. Im not sure what the character is...
the character is famous in graff culture

it is a lizard by vaughn Bode, he also created the cheech wizard...


http://www.graffiti-shop.nl/catalog/images/cheech3.jpg

Eskimo33
12-08-2006, 09:46 PM
thanks koper.

BAPKEB
12-08-2006, 09:48 PM
thanks kooper i know one of my favorite writer(dome) does both

FEN the HEN
12-08-2006, 09:57 PM
HOt Pocket thats looking ill man keep it up

uhhh
12-08-2006, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 8 2006, 10:39 PM
looks like bouncingsoul not too long ago.

speaking of bouncing soul, i did your exchange... kinda, its only kne because the ws... baddd.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-002S.jpg
i&#39;m pretty happy with the "kn" but i really dont like the top of the e...

also, the n looks kinda like a w, but thats just part of the k..
premature bumpage.

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 8 2006, 10:39 PM
looks like bouncingsoul not too long ago.

speaking of bouncing soul, i did your exchange... kinda, its only kne because the ws... baddd.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-002S.jpg
i&#39;m pretty happy with the "kn" but i really dont like the top of the e...

also, the n looks kinda like a w, but thats just part of the k..
Bump this shit because it&#39;s gewd

...And yeah, that hotpocket sketch actually does look a lot like my summer stuff

uhhh
12-08-2006, 10:09 PM
bouncingsoul, i think im gonna redo that. the ne is reallllly bugging me.
so i guess youlll get an even gewder one.

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 10:12 PM
Why thank you... I&#39;d do a sketch right now (because I&#39;m really bored) but all my sketches are turning into shit today...

alive
12-08-2006, 10:13 PM
trying to work bigger, learn to take up the whole page with my ill styles. ha. so here. crits will make me love you.

also was trying for a whole lighting thing? with light on the top of the letters. but ive diagnosed that it looks kind of retarded, so im gonna darken it i think. tell me ur thoughts. mighta looked good but i swcrewd a bunch of it up. missed a spot on the R and such.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02923.jpg

UHHHH- crazy style. i do think it would look a lil better tho if the letters were all the same height.


peace

-testify-
12-08-2006, 10:19 PM
maybe make the top bar on the e go over to the right more and the 3 d at the bottoms of the letters is weird...i dont know why probably because all the letters arent the same but idk i like the c and a alot though....excpet the top part of the a where the bars cross because on the left bar it goes straight up and curves but you made it seem like it crossed to the right and curved up or the left bar went to the right suddenly and it looks weird.....but im horrible at everything that has to do with graffiti so yea...

ghozt
12-08-2006, 10:24 PM
Originally posted by ghozt@Dec 8 2006, 08:52 PM
ras-i dont like the top of ur a =/ but everything else is dope


ummm got bored in skool :

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5871/scan0001xf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8581/scan0002ew2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


:ph34r:

edit: yall see the little i love u shit at the corner of my sketches in purple? thts my gf doin tht lol so dnt wrry about tht
:ph34r: :ph34r: :ph34r: :ph34r:

alive
12-08-2006, 10:25 PM
lol. shitty sketch actually. thanks for ur thoughts, im not vry good at making it big, working on that. took me all of. . . actually, who the fuck cares, no excuses. looks better in person. haha. dunno why i put that up here actually. just felt the need to share. ill pull something nicer together tonight and put it up. haha. peace.


HACKS. i like it. 1st is better but lose the background. make the width of the middle of the S the same. keep going.

kicklip9634
12-08-2006, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by kicklip9634@Dec 7 2006, 08:59 PM
shifted:i like the fill i jus dont really like the letters.
cear:you should start addin extensions
quigbert: put youre letters closer together
emjaybee: what quigbert said
http://i10.tinypic.com/2mnhm6e.jpg
crits..
bump for critss havnt got one yet....
Cear: i love the pen sketches
hacks:i dont really like the k on the first one

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 10:27 PM
Yeah, your 3d is fucked up. At the bottom of the letters in some places it goes sorta to the southwest and on the top in some places it goes northwest... But that&#39;s probably because of the "making it bigger" thing

:edit: That was to alive by the way

-testify-
12-08-2006, 10:27 PM
anytime i was just trying to help you alot because you make mini novels out of crits(which is helpful as hell by the way)

alive
12-08-2006, 10:33 PM
ty test. im always glad to help.

UR RIGHT BOUNCE. thats what was bothering me. AHA. its cuz i was just freehanding it mad fast during science. wasnt paying much attention. (not an excuse.) but for some reason i couldnt tell even when i looked at it close. gotta work on that. thanks peace.

KICK - smaller pic for christs sake. lose the arrows, work on the bottom left one. sketch it ten more times trying to perfect the spacing. the last letter is too hidden compared to the rest of the letters. and the width of the downward stroke of it is too big compared to the rest. peace.


left side n bottom of my A is fuckedddd
got 2 skinny n shit

uhhh
12-08-2006, 10:42 PM
bouncingsoul-heres the revised edition, the e&#39;s funky but thats kinda what i was going for...?
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-003S.jpg

annnd
i know this isnt the right thread, but it gets the most hits..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-004S.jpg
my onle liner.. aktr.

alive, i belive your on my to do list..?
your in the baby sitter club right?

kicklip9634
12-08-2006, 10:46 PM
uhh:im jus not fellin those letters

alive
12-08-2006, 10:59 PM
word uhhhh. ill work on urs.
as for ur piece. its cool. almost a little to funky for me to be honest, i go for the tradition shit, but its cool. I think you could keep a bit more - uh fuck whats the word, cant remember it, ummmm. equality throughout the piece. FUCK whats that word. starts with a C. christ. haha. not that. umm. i think u get what i mean though right? in terms of letter height and letter width. and u wouldnt have to lose to much of that style to do it. i think itd make a huge improvement. w/e just advice.

ha. been smoking too much herb.
peace.

uhhh
12-08-2006, 11:01 PM
alive-yeah, i know what you meabn. but ive only been working with this style for about a day and a hlaf, so its REALLY not sorted out yet. give me like.. a week or so and ill probably have it down.

-testify-
12-08-2006, 11:22 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6088/tag4mi7.png
no one ever looks at tags thread...old tags till i get a camera again

uhhh
12-08-2006, 11:24 PM
:blink: :blink: :blink:

please do simples. it will help you imensley.
AND
if you dont have any already, go buy some chisel tip markers, they make your tags look better.. that way you look better hten you are. :lol:

bouncingsoul
12-08-2006, 11:28 PM
Hahaha alive, I think you mean consistent

I just watched 45 minutes of Piece By Piece and it is fucking dope... I&#39;m gonna go sleep now, gnight. Hopefully tomorrow will be a better sketch day for me

-testify-
12-08-2006, 11:41 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 9 2006, 12:24 AM
:blink: :blink: :blink:

please do simples. it will help you imensley.
AND
if you dont have any already, go buy some chisel tip markers, they make your tags look better.. that way you look better hten you are. :lol:
haha yea
and i admire your one liner by the way :blink:

uhhh
12-08-2006, 11:45 PM
Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Dec 9 2006, 12:41 AM
i admire your one liner by the way :blink:
sarcasm..? :huh:

-testify-
12-08-2006, 11:49 PM
yes

Nosypainter
12-09-2006, 12:21 AM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 9 2006, 12:24 AM
:blink: :blink: :blink:

please do simples. it will help you imensley.
AND
if you dont have any already, go buy some chisel tip markers, they make your tags look better.. that way you look better hten you are. :lol:
chisel tips are orgasmic

Necro-
12-09-2006, 12:23 AM
Originally posted by KoreTwo@Dec 8 2006, 09:53 PM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/DAIM.jpg

Crits please.

HACKS - Ur simples are nice and clean. Try adding some color next time.

OUE - Looking good. Only thing is you could try making the U more curved.
i hope your kidding.... wow i cnat type it took me like forever to type that im drink. im kinda mad tho because i was straight endge for so loingh/


EDIT: o nvm i see taht it waqs for a battle... thats cool that theres a daim battle tho cuz i love him a lot

Hot_Pocket
12-09-2006, 12:24 AM
An older sketch, but my computer cut off half the G and 3D is fucked a bit...


http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/Picture001.jpg

crits?

Billburg
12-09-2006, 12:29 AM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep016.jpg

critzzz....

Necro-
12-09-2006, 12:30 AM
dude u guys we go thorough lik 15 pages a day but its not at all pictures its just talk just pots pictures not talk so much.

Hot_Pocket
12-09-2006, 12:35 AM
That&#39;s why I&#39;ve actually posted pictures today. So anywho, I guess I&#39;m not just going to waste this post.

Sarp- Round out your letters more, they&#39;re square, then round and it&#39;s not going to look nice at the level you&#39;re at right now. Lose all the extensions and go back to basic letters. Don&#39;t overlap them yet, don&#39;t fill them in, just work on your structure, so when you see your work, you know what it says, because your R looks like another A. Also, lose the little spit mark or whatever it is(the quote substitute)
Aim for things like your avatar, nice, round and simple.

Billburg
12-09-2006, 12:39 AM
ok, it&#39;s supposed t osay Snap....

so somtin more like this?

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep005.jpg

uhhh
12-09-2006, 12:47 AM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 9 2006, 01:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter &#064; Dec 9 2006, 01:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 9 2006, 12:24 AM
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please do simples. it will help you imensley.
AND
if you dont have any already, go buy some chisel tip markers, they make your tags look better.. that way you look better hten you are. :lol:
chisel tips are orgasmic [/b][/quote]
chisel tips are like the best orgasm you have ever had/every will have, all put into a marker.

hotpocket, im really sorry to say it. but that looks EXACTLY like what bouncing soul was doing this summer. and you just happened to start posting up that style once bouncingsoul posted a sketch with his old style (that one) in the new 2 graff thread...

Necro-
12-09-2006, 01:05 AM
OUCH&#33;&#33;111ONE&#33;&#33;111ELEVEN&#33;

EDIT: o shit im doint that same stuff that i was telling people not to do. i wont spam any more sry.

enigmatic
12-09-2006, 01:32 AM
Bouncings style is sick, thats DEFFINETLY a bite. BUT&#33; The little curl overs on the letters, like the ribon, has been done before. Its generic so you cant call him for biting on that. Ive seen other writers doing it.

nero122
12-09-2006, 05:18 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/ase.jpg

quik pen sketch crits (coudnt be bothered to do b n u )

ras
12-09-2006, 05:19 AM
i dont understand whut yall talking about lol...my bad...

billburg....lose those lines for holes...ur purple throw was quite hot...

sumet nu...changed my name back to ATEC...seeing as iv found sum letters i quite like..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/000.jpg

im trying to make this my style of letters...

crits and comment thanks you...and for once...i didnt do a karak... ;) :P :huh:

searoner
12-09-2006, 06:37 AM
some stuff recently only just got round to scanning it all
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/5352/olderishkc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/649/sear4jo5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8849/sear2cr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/589/searrazeur9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
not finished yet
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3656/straightqx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
fucked the r on the straight letter
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2788/orangepq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7206/acidtr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits :)

Socrates
12-09-2006, 06:51 AM
sear, do different letters
the&#39;re all the same in every single sketch


ras youve improved A LOT, seriously
the E and T are hot as fuck, really
just fix the a and c and your good to go


Nero i like that e
but it looks kinda like wiggles or some other shit


http://i12.tinypic.com/4dgvy49.jpg

http://tinypic.com/33uudg1.jpg

http://tinypic.com/3y2wcq8.jpg

krazzie_ammo
12-09-2006, 07:27 AM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 8 2006, 07:26 PM
Yo CRAZE &#33;&#33; ...Here it Is...i decided to write Craze and not Cra....and yeah..im an extremely fast worker.. ;)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/Craze.jpg

Hople you like...and i wudnlt mind crits on this neither...thanks ;)
you genious :P

this is hotttt. thanks man, i will get down to a ATEC soon.

nemzone
12-09-2006, 08:03 AM
i feel like a dick cuz i seem to be the only 1 who aint feelin ras&#39;s letters :(

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/3718/imag00021xp8.jpg


started whilst stoned, finished once i was 2 stoned to continue lol

searoner
12-09-2006, 08:06 AM
nah nemz i aint really feelin em either there too like bubbly for my liking

ras
12-09-2006, 08:26 AM
socrates...thanks man...i really hope i had improved and you , such a good writer saying i have is great...and your style is dope as always

nemz...i didnt really expect you to like my stuff...as you never do.. :( <_< .. i dunno why lol... ;) anyway its your opinion and i understand that...im liking the chrome one...great effect...but un the second one...i dont like how the E drapes down to the M

krazzie...its okay man...i did it with in the first 3 hours of u asking lol..and im looking forwad to seeing you stlye in my name... :)

just got sum new steadtler triplus fibre tips...hopin to do sum good stuff with um...

taxus
12-09-2006, 09:01 AM
Giving shit critism wont make any one better.
All this "yeah, its dope, add a back ground", is bullshit advice

poopis
12-09-2006, 09:08 AM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1740/00022pn2.jpg

cleaning it up as you look, but critz on my structure...no more markers :(

Nemz im feeling the First one pretty good but the right part of the N could be pushed in a little and the Top right part of the M looks a lil to big. And the last one I&#39;m not feeling how the middle part of the E is going into the M just looks odd. But yea that chrome effect thing is tight.

koper
12-09-2006, 09:32 AM
SEAR: that shit is aweosme man
SEMZ: good work aswell

good page

Fosale!
12-09-2006, 09:36 AM
fucked up on K
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kop.jpg
hate on the shitty not my usual style suck handies
just a random A
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/124418354_402882761_0.jpg