Blackbooks

[Fluffy Bunnies]

^^
To be BRUTALLY HONEST, I beleive your stuff sucks and I hate that style and your letters ain't straight, and yeah!

No beef. that's just my opinion.
I was just letting you know what's wrong and don't take this the wrong way.



like zomg no spelling mistakes!

[ras]

" No beef " <_< ...if i remeber rightly ... didnt u two have beef a while back...and to be BURTALLY HONEST...Craze pisses all over your work anyday...its fresh and always clean ... yeah...maybe that peice up there isnt his best...but if he lost the extension on the C then it would be better...keep it up Craze &#33;

[BAPKEB]

crits?http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/889/stickers011jk0.jpg

[BAPKEB]

crits?http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/889/stickers011jk0.jpg

[myl]

oh god

do simples man

and take that animation out of your sig, its choppy as fuck and wack as hell

[ras]

Oh My Gosh...dude...didnt u read the crits u got last time...GO SIMPLER .. the 3d is off like crazy...there is a mile in between every letter...and the fill is like puke...and PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE get rid of the damn sig you have got &#33;&#33; evry thread i go in i see it and that suggests your a post whore also

[emokid]

i&#39;m gonna agree with myl and ras and reinforce the overall view that you should get a pencil, a biro and a rubber and do block simple letters until they come out of your ears and eye sockets. and the sig needs to go badstyl...

[ras]

Yeh emo is right..also about the sig..." Throwies is wer its at " ... i can asure u..that " Throwie Isnt Were Its At " ..

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Dec 14 2006, 12:42 PM
^^
To be BRUTALLY HONEST, I beleive your stuff sucks and I hate that style and your letters ain&#39;t straight, and yeah&#33;

No beef. that&#39;s just my opinion.
I was just letting you know what&#39;s wrong and don&#39;t take this the wrong way.



like zomg no spelling mistakes&#33;
thanks ras :)

well to be BRUTALLY honest i didnt ask if you liked it, i asked for crits and how to improve.

and your stuff is crap, you do them on little pieces on scrap paper and then cut them out like a retard. can you cut straight?

you write "AK" which sounds like a retarded bird. its TWO LETTERS, what the fuck can you do with two letters? by looking at your stuff im gunna say not much.

last time you told me not to crit your stuff because you knew what i was saying was true and you cant handle it. so why would i want you to crit my stuff?

weren&#39;t we supposed to have a battle? o thats right, everyone shut you up so you didnt get back. if you wanna battle then try and keep your word.

why dont you try giving some proper crits or improvment instead of putting everyone down because they are better than you and you are jealous. you have madddd social issues.

and you post the same thing everytime&#33; on a little piece of paper than you cut out.

and btw, i can safely say that the majority of people hate you say why dont you go find some other forum to ruin.

like ZOMG, your a twat.

[trashhh]

Originally posted by glass@Dec 13 2006, 09:27 PM
bounce: love those ribbon-like extensions on the letters

more simples, trying something just as block letters. i think it looks ok but could def. be improved. tell me if you think it has potential or not for crit please.

http://i16.tinypic.com/44k2a9i.jpg
man ur shits got so much better from when u first joined this forum

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo+Dec 14 2006, 01:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (krazzie_ammo &#064; Dec 14 2006, 01:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fluffy Bunnies@Dec 14 2006, 12:42 PM
^^
To be BRUTALLY HONEST, I beleive your stuff sucks and I hate that style and your letters ain&#39;t straight, and yeah&#33;

No beef. that&#39;s just my opinion.
I was just letting you know what&#39;s wrong and don&#39;t take this the wrong way.



like zomg no spelling mistakes&#33;
thanks ras :)

well to be BRUTALLY honest i didnt ask if you liked it, i asked for crits and how to improve.

and your stuff is crap, you do them on little pieces on scrap paper and then cut them out like a retard. can you cut straight?

you write "AK" which sounds like a retarded bird. its TWO LETTERS, what the fuck can you do with two letters? by looking at your stuff im gunna say not much.

last time you told me not to crit your stuff because you knew what i was saying was true and you cant handle it. so why would i want you to crit my stuff?

weren&#39;t we supposed to have a battle? o thats right, everyone shut you up so you didnt get back. if you wanna battle then try and keep your word.

why dont you try giving some proper crits or improvment instead of putting everyone down because they are better than you and you are jealous. you have madddd social issues.

and you post the same thing everytime&#33; on a little piece of paper than you cut out.

and btw, i can safely say that the majority of people hate you say why dont you go find some other forum to ruin.

like ZOMG, your a twat. [/b][/quote]
yeah, so what? i don&#39;t care, it&#39;s just the internet.
and ras is just a post whore.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by karmatikal@Dec 14 2006, 11:16 AM

any better?

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1214Image0002a.jpg


improvement? yeah def in my mind . . . got proportion down, style could use some TLC but that will come with time . . . nice fill, not to busy but uses a couple dif colors . .

[G - Wahl]

Lookin good Karma, the middle of the M needs to be changed, it doesnt fit well.



http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/1964/picturekd8.th.jpg (http://img185.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picturekd8.jpg)
Messin around with letters I like
Crits?

[revolt92]

Fluffy bunnies, you say ras i a post whore but most of his post are pics and crits so he may be a post whore but at least he posts alot of pictures unlike alot of people in this forum (not directed at you).

*edit* G-wahl:i like it could be improved tho im just not sure how.







man that was crap advise

[ras]

thanks Revolt....

Kraze...great speech you did there ... u shut him up &#33;... &#33;&#33;

and im a post whore...bitch..i put in WAAAAAAY more effort into sketching than you &#33; .... because im commited...unlike you...every peice ... well i carnt call them peices...every thing u post is the same...excpet it has a different fill...and i like to post up ALL of my sketches...which means im a " POST WHORE " becuase i have LOOOOADS OF SKETCHES to post up and like Revolt said..i like to give out CRITS to help out people..NOT PUT THEM DOWN LIKE YOU DO &#33;&#33; ...so go back to nursery AND LEARN HOW TO CUT THINGS...AND MAKE SURE YOU USE THOSE IKKLE IKKLE PLASTIC SIZZORS....BITCH &#33;&#33; ...

and seeing as im a " POST WHORE " ...but gives out RELEVENT information...ima give out the best CRITS i can...

G-wahl....i would say lose those drips..but if it says SO...for sum reason i like the O... ;)

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/conkcanvas.jpg

another thing for another friend... sketch for a canvas and the background for it

[ras]

If that says Conk...its very well done...i dont think your really that toy anymore

[trashhh]

hehe yea it says conk... cheers man

[krazzie_ammo]

yep, fluffy bunnies wont be posting here for a week or so.

g-wahl - i like it. paint it. post it. love it.

trashhh - loving it as usual but the K is smaller compared to the rest.

[krazzie_ammo]

http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/2376/87yu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
heres the ATEC exchange. im sorry.
i hate colour.
lol, it looks like AMEC. ima do another later.

[glass]

Originally posted by trashhh+Dec 14 2006, 01:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh &#064; Dec 14 2006, 01:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-glass@Dec 13 2006, 09:27 PM
bounce: love those ribbon-like extensions on the letters

more simples, trying something just as block letters. i think it looks ok but could def. be improved. tell me if you think it has potential or not for crit please.

http://i16.tinypic.com/44k2a9i.jpg
man ur shits got so much better from when u first joined this forum [/b][/quote]
bump

heh, thaks trash and everyone else who commented. much appreciated.

craze: man i love that style. it has a lot of potential to improve and i think you seem to have a good handle on the flow. the only thing is that some extensions could be a bit shorter and maybe some different colors.

trash: i like the curve of the whole piece, not sure if you meant it to do that though. the letters look pretty good with flowing into one-another but i think would look better if it were a bit fatter, good the way it looks now though. however i don&#39;t like the arrow on the left, doesnt seem to go with the rest of the piece to me.

G - Wahl: i&#39;m liking those colors and drips. nice throwie in general.

[-testify-]

trash that k is fucking nice
and craze i like your newer style but make the t lowercase so it doesnt look like an m

[ThickGravy]

Originally posted by BAPKEB@Dec 14 2006, 01:03 PM
crits?http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/889/stickers011jk0.jpg
bring your letters closer and lose all those extra squares you have in the 3d.


Work on your letter structure. Its hard to read.

[krazzie_ammo]

glass - please stop bumping it.

draw up a new one with taking all the crits into consideration.

[ras]

yo thanks craze... ;) ;) i like that...did u say u was gna do another one...if so..there aint any need mate...i like that one...thanks mate &#33;&#33;

[-testify-]

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/357/bombgrakhys8.jpg
i dont know
and bap simples

[ras]

testify...i would like to see your stuff ore clearer...becuz its always a huge pic and its hard to work out...

** WIP ** .. another Hip Hop themed peice...

becuz " I Luuuurve Hip Hop " :P ;)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/000099.jpg

sorry about the shitty scan...its on A3 paper lol...

crits on how i can improve at the moment please &#33;&#33; Thanks &#33;&#33; :D ;)

[-testify-]

ill try to resize it then
thumbnail?
or can image shack resize it

[TricksForKids]

ras, see those letters that spell hip hop? thats what i want to see from you, if you wnt to get better then no more of these "themed" pieces, theyre driving me nuts

props to g-wahl for a nice throw, and he started with really simple stuff, keep it up man

no more beef between anyone in this thread understood? i dont wanna see that shit taking up this forum

testify theres a resize button o the iamgeshack website just before you upload your pic, you can do that, or if you have microsoft picture or whatever it is, theres a button that allows you to compress pictures, might drop a sketch tonight

Peace

[-testify-]

yay resized....if it worked
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8382/bombgrakhtg9.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Ras - It says " Zo " ;)



Testify - I cant read that :ph34r: Grka?

[-testify-]

grkah

[Fosale!]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/gowrsf.jpg
a nem sketch that im not finishing bc. im not happy with it.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/iokp.jpg
for exchange with nemz. gotta finish coloring in the 3d. but im not too happy with it.


feedback on both?

[sheist]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/waterwingsend/moozsketch.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/waterwingsend/bombsketch.jpg

[Fosale!]

yuckie.

thanks for the feedback btw.

[ras]

Fosale...aint feeling either of them...the 2nd one is the best tho

...

sheist...liking the throw on the 2nd...much much better to your other one..

summet i just finished...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/128423941.jpg

crits on this one please &#33; thanks &#33;&#33; ;)

[Fosale!]

Only decent letters are the first I and the first H

[sheist]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 14 2006, 05:10 PM
Fosale...aint feeling either of them...the 2nd one is the best tho

...

sheist...liking the throw on the 2nd...much much better to your other one..

summet i just finished...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/128423941.jpg

crits on this one please &#33; thanks &#33;&#33; ;)
thanks man, and im always into your sketches

[krazzie_ammo]

arghh, ate&#33; you went simpleeee and it was lurvlyyyyy but dont be so quick to adding backgrounds and stuff. concentrate on the letters and your tagggg....dayyymmm, sort it out.

[ras]

Krazzie...whut like that..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/0020.jpg

..?

[kustem]

i like that piece ras, keep it up

[nemzone]

no ras thats not simples u bellend. im sick of sayin it so im just gonna act like a cock from now on.

fosale i luv tht style, needs painted lol. just dont do the 3d all the way to the vp ;)

[Fosale!]

just for you Nemz, i wont.

[ras]

well if the " i love hip hop " bit isnt simple then i dont know what the fuck is..." your gunna act like a cock from now on " ... youve been a cock to me since i startd posting up new stuff...

[G - Wahl]

Personally, I love Ras&#39; style...


What do you guys think about this?
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/4122/picture001ij6.th.jpg (http://img248.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001ij6.jpg)

[krazzie_ammo]

its just a matter of opinion.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1076/atecyh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thats what i mean by simples. but i like it, it has maddd potential.

G-Wahl - i like it. have you tried painting it?

[near]

ras all theyre saying is stick to the letters drawing a bunch of dudes smoking spliffs in all the pieces and spending all that time on the background is unnecessary because you should be practicing the lettering not beautifying some decent straight letter sketch if that made sense...no beef try adding some snow and icicles but dont make the snow too drippy or it looks like jizz apparently (or so bawk tells me)

[ras]

Thanks Craze...and what is BCFC..lol ?

[nemzone]

haha ive been a cock to u since u started posting aye? bullshit&#33; iv helped u told u to go simple, and advice iv given others would help u.

but U DONT FUCKIN LISTEN&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; yes the i luv hip hop is simples but they are shit, hence y u need to do simple all the time, n lose ur fuckin letters with tumors n random stupid bits sticking out.

[krazzie_ammo]

birmingham city fc you twonk 8-) they own lfc :P

lol tumors, and what nemz is saying is right. you could simplify what i did even more but i dont have that good paint skills :P

[sky 5]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 14 2006, 05:10 PM

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/128423941.jpg

crits on this one please &#33; thanks &#33;&#33; ;)
ATE - i always like seein your themed colored posts homie . . id let you get down on a page in my bbook . . the santa claus lowrider joint was ghetto fabulous


http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/7232/1202061pl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some simples, letters were good to go but colors and effects are weak . . one day it will all come together

[kicklip9634]

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/3723/redpen1gx1.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5020/redpen2hf7.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1858/redpen3tj8.jpg
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/502/redpen4tv2.jpg
red pen sketches i no they could be cleaner but crits.....
sky5: ill as always

[G - Wahl]

Krazzie - No I havent tried painting it..Another month of sketching and ill try to paint it.

Kicklip - 2nd Pic, the " UP " bomb to the right, thats looking nice, just try to make the P the same size as the U

[-testify-]

Originally posted by &#045;testify&#045;@Dec 14 2006, 04:16 PM
yay resized....if it worked
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8382/bombgrakhtg9.jpg
grkah....

[kicklip9634]

yo testify i love dat throw

[G - Wahl]

Testify - All I have to say is try to make all the top points the same size and sharpness, and make all those bottoms the same width. Just keep practicing with it, once they all are the same size it will look nice.
By the way, how do you pronounce that? Is it " Greck-Ah " ?

[ras]

Originally posted by sky 5+Dec 14 2006, 11:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Dec 14 2006, 11:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 14 2006, 05:10 PM

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/128423941.jpg

crits on this one please &#33; thanks &#33;&#33;Â* ;)
ATE - i always like seein your themed colored posts homie . . id let you get down on a page in my bbook . . the santa claus lowrider joint was ghetto fabulous


http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/7232/1202061pl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some simples, letters were good to go but colors and effects are weak . . one day it will all come together [/b][/quote]
Wtf...are you serious... :blink: :huh: " You like seeing my themed coloured peices " ... :blink: ...and whut you mean " id let you get down on a page in my bbook " lol...?

and if you wasnt taking the piss :( ...Thanks...coming from a great writer like you...

and Craze...BFC own Liverpool do they..Hmmmmm...what was the score when we played you in the carling cup...hmmm...you tell me HAHAHA &#33;&#33;&#33; :D :D :lol: :P

[-testify-]

idk...there just letters im good at and its not even my name so im not gona use it just did it and thought it looked good

[kicklip9634]

Originally posted by kicklip9634@Dec 14 2006, 06:34 PM
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/3723/redpen1gx1.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5020/redpen2hf7.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1858/redpen3tj8.jpg
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/502/redpen4tv2.jpg
red pen sketches i no they could be cleaner but crits.....
sky5: ill as always
bump fo crits.....

[dazeless]

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o47/lovemonstertag/untitledngvk.jpg
eh?

[kicklip9634]

first off crit the person obove you befor you post the go back to some strait letters

[-testify-]

please tell me that your camera quality just sucks.....that that isnt ms paint

ok just forget ALL about those letters do normal SIMPLE bubble letters and straight letters and after AWHILE then put bends and little changes into them

[kicklip9634]

it kin of looks like microsoft word

[dazeless]

It was ms paint.
The person above me didn&#39;t need crits.
and yeah, it is sloppy, my drawn ones are better.

[kicklip9634]

then maybe, jus maybe you should get a flick of the one you drew

[Kost 2 g.b.s.]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m93/getwet_813/3_1.jpg
this is daze and cope 2 there new york legends
if i where you dazeless i be working on a new name

[dazeless]

Originally posted by Kost 2 g.b.s.@Dec 14 2006, 07:23 PM
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m93/getwet_813/3_1.jpg
this is daze and cope 2 there new york legends
if i where you dazeless i be working on a new name
I think I&#39;ll switch to cope.

[kicklip9634]

thats not even funny , and you probly will switch to cope 2 and get beat up

[ASB_ONE]

lol na i thought that was q funny.
kikflip keep on keepin on

[kicklip9634]

im gonna sound dumb but whats that mean

[sky 5]

ehh it made me crack a smile . . i like when new people come on here and dont take shit from nobody (even if it is good advice)

VPIK - man im tryin to think up some crits for ya but nothin is poppin up . . youre on the right track, doin a zillion simples with a bit of style, you might wanna try workin some more dominant horizontal flow in . . .

the black forcefield on the cope pops soooooo hard . .

[ASB_ONE]

yeh sorry man bit vague, just like keep on doin wat ur doin ya know?

[kicklip9634]

im gonna sound dum again exactly how do u do that?

[ASB_ONE]

yeh k u r startin to sound dumb now mate, keep doing simples.

[Fosale!]

ok.

almost finished sketch for Nemz with shit 3D
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/nemzz1.jpg
Finished Nemz sketch with 3d all the way back the the VP, sorry Nemz but i had to do it it looked mad shitty when it wasnt like this and i tried doing regular 3d and i made it look shitty idk, i tried.
i also fucked up the Z and E on the handie but oh well.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/nemzperspective.jpg

[Slushi]

dont make your 3d all the way to the vanishing point.

[bouncingsoul]

You&#39;re slipping Fosale... Well so am I actually

[ShIfTeD]

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/9392/dscn0358wn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

any better i erased some of the 3d.
i suck at it so im not surprised its bad
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/better.jpg

[glass]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Dec 14 2006, 08:24 PM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/9392/dscn0358wn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
damn shifted i always like the sketches you make. only problem i have with this one is the proportion throughout the letters seems a bit off. still like it though.

[TricksForKids]

not bad fosale, just not feelin the m so much buddy

ahah funny story, so i was babysittin two lil munchkins tonight, and i figured, hey lets bust out a sketch, so im freestylin with all these pens tyhe kids ahve, and i let them pick all the colours, and designs and everything, so excuse the wackness, but a fliks a flik&#33;

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3755/babysitbawkbe8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[hip-hop bomber]

nice stuff bawk

[nemzone]

yo fosale, if u didnt do the straight line rite across on the 3d, and followed the contours of the tops of the piece it wud be sweet. i love the letters fo. u shud do ur name in that style and paint it.

bawk i like it as per, but i think ima let us down in the bsc battle :( i got writers block to fuck its well shit. ripped out 3 sketches tonite alone :angry: but il try my best ;)

[Stonk]

bawk im loving the fill, but the force field looks kinda weird how its 2 different colors

done for lady friend

i wish i could keep my letters straight, fuck.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new020.jpg

[TricksForKids]

dont we all stonk?

make the bottom of the C go straight up instead of curvy like that, fix the s&#39;s, i dont like the way they curve down again at the top, make me more like a five (5) at the top, anddddd, the bottom leg of the R neds to go a bit farther down, and the A&#39;s, other than that, money man, hope you get some pussy out of that sketch

[Necro-]

i love that tricks. i think the circle in the W makes that part too cluttered compared to the rest.

[Necro-]

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture077.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture078.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture079.jpg

[myl]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Dec 14 2006, 10:03 PM
not bad fosale, just not feelin the m so much buddy

ahah funny story, so i was babysittin two lil munchkins tonight, and i figured, hey lets bust out a sketch, so im freestylin with all these pens tyhe kids ahve, and i let them pick all the colours, and designs and everything, so excuse the wackness, but a fliks a flik&#33;

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3755/babysitbawkbe8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
very nice, lovin the fill

only thing i see wrong is the missing green forcefield on the lower right leg of the K...

edit for crit: maven those look nice i would just watch some of your proportions

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Stonk@Dec 14 2006, 11:07 PM
bawk im loving the fill, but the force field looks kinda weird how its 2 different colors

done for lady friend

i wish i could keep my letters straight, fuck.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new020.jpg
The day you get better S&#39;s all your sketches will be golden.
fix up the D&#39;s a lil also.
and make the joint of the N go all the way to the bottom of the right piece.

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0416.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0417.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0418.jpg

[DNO]

a few new ones
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/Ivoted4Kodos/100_9634.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/Ivoted4Kodos/100_9635.jpg
(hate the n)
an older one
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/Ivoted4Kodos/100_9637.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y180/Ivoted4Kodos/100_9633.jpg

[Billburg]

tonight work....... so crit please
DNO- i like the last one the most.(but thats just me)

1st section.
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep042.jpg

2nd.
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep043.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Billburg - For the bomb, try to make everything the same size..the width, height..Also, everyone of of those letters has a different style to it, it doesnt flow at all. Try making all your letters the same shape at first, then give them all their little tumors or whatever you want on them. Start with block letters.

[minor crimes]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Dec 14 2006, 11:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Dec 14 2006, 11:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Stonk@Dec 14 2006, 11:07 PM
bawk im loving the fill, but the force field looks kinda weird how its 2 different colors

done for lady friend

i wish i could keep my letters straight, fuck.http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new020.jpg
The day you get better S&#39;s all your sketches will be golden.
fix up the D&#39;s a lil also.
and make the joint of the N go all the way to the bottom of the right piece. [/b][/quote]
haha. cassandra was my ex gfs name. haha. my new gf loves the sketch i did for her.
they like froth over it wen u do em one

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Sketch in class
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Ahhhh.png

What colors you guys thinkin&#39;?

[ras]

BillBurg : Yo Billburg...if i can remeber rightly....dont you do those like blob like karaks...if so...i would keep on doing them...becuase they was one of a kind...they made me laff....aswell as being dope....but if not...i woould recommend simples...because that pice want very good...but i like tht throwie...just keep the letters the same height/width and I THINK its be ready for you to cause some destruction..haha :P :lol: ;)

Stonk : i love your style of letters...just take the advice of the others and itl bloom into a great great style &#33;

DNO : The top one is fucking killing it ;)

Necro : not feeling any of those....i like the bottom peice best...add ink and colour and i feel itll be better &#33;&#33; ;)

[TricksForKids]

maven the last one looks like its developing some style, keep that up, billburg well man just go simpler for those pieces, youll get there


dno, keep it up with the simple big letters, im liking em, just make sure to keep it consistent, sometimes you go a little crazy on a letter or two

and knews baby, i HATE pencil, but i love the one you did in bold minus that random ass extension on the farthest right side of the S

fluffy not liking the AK as much as others youve done and tha O needs work

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/conkcanvas-1.jpg

the finished result of that canvas did for a mate

[ras]

Daaamn Trash..dooope....the 2nd pic makes the piece look like its popping off the canvas...great work &#33; :o

[glass]

^

very nice, great choice of colors. nice and smooth.

[aces]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 15 2006, 04:28 PM
Daaamn Trash..dooope....the 2nd pic makes the piece look like its popping off the canvas...great work &#33; :o
That is usually what 3-D is supposed to do to a piece...but yea trash that is some dope ish right there.

[ras]

well obviously...but even more so at that angle

[-testify-]

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/4993/getattachmentaspxfg8.jpg
tricks is this what you meant with the lines curving..?

[ras]

man....stick with your other throw

[myl]

Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 15 2006, 03:15 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/conkcanvas-1.jpg

the finished result of that canvas did for a mate
bump for dopeness

very nice trash

[ras]

god damn...this thread has been dead tonight...hardly any sketches... :( :blink:

[myl]

cause its fridayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

gettin zooted off my ass after i get a quick bite to eat

[ras]

yeah man...time i went out......gna get ratarsed...i hope when im back there sum more flicks...

peace ;)

[MUSASHI]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/senseieieio.jpg

sorry &#39;bout the inversion but it was just pencil on a yellow legal pad paper ,and I think it looks cool this way almost like a blue print...peace out

[ras]

Your tag is like a signature...id say work on that first S...great great background tho...nice stars.. :)

[bouncingsoul]

Ay mierda

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0419.jpg

[ras]

That K looks like an R

[BohemianBastard]

musashi you never did listen did you?
you&#39;ve been writing for almost a year now, yet you still fucking suck
this ras fellow followed peoples advice and his shit burns yours (even if his characters suck)

[ras]

^^ Thanks.. :) ...why dont u like my karaks... <_< :( lol ;)

[BohemianBastard]

run through this shit
http://www.hoddinott.com/

and this
http://www.thedailydrawing.com/

then come up with something original
and i might like em, feel me homie?

[ras]

Thanks for the advice..but i like to keep my Karaks original...and with the Old Skool sting in them...you know ... thanks anyway.. :) ;)

u gunna post sum of your shit ... ?

[BohemianBastard]

it wasnt anything concerning originality, it was my subtle way of telling you to learn how to draw characters


you&#39;ve already seen my shit
but im not gonna post anything again until im satisfied
but you&#39;ll see, you&#39;ll see

[ras]

I Havent seen ANY of your shit..? ... :( ;)

[larsson719]

Here&#39;s a quick thing I did, my D ended up looking like an A, shows how much of a toy i am :unsure: , well... I tried..

"des"
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/9636/copyofquickiedi7rk0.jpg

Crits Please

[bouncingsoul]

Exchange with entr (Sec, I&#39;ll get yours up soon... I fucking hate C&#39;s)


http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0420.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0421.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0422.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0423.jpg

[larsson719]

I <3 the flowish hands some people have... I&#39;m trying to get those but they always look arkward

[Fixion]

http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/9706/natrathrowiebi0.png
Crits?

[phinch]

kinda new to the site dont be too harsh
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r134/kooccela/tp.jpg

[MUSASHI]

Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 15 2006, 06:58 PM
musashi you never did listen did you?
you&#39;ve been writing for almost a year now, yet you still fucking suck
this ras fellow followed peoples advice and his shit burns yours (even if his characters suck)


is that so? why dont you get in on the paint battle coming up and then well see bohemian

[sank one]

musashi would burn you bohemia, post flicks or shut up.

[ras]

How do you know that ^^...

Fixion Des And Pinhc...3 posts in a row asking for crits without giving any out any crits themselves.. <_<

[BohemianBastard]

Originally posted by sank one@Dec 16 2006, 04:26 AM
musashi would burn you bohemia, post flicks or shut up.
hahhahahahahahahahahhaahha
musashi sucks my left testicle hoping to get a little style
as i already stated you people have already seen my shit, maybe your not intelligent enough to put 2 and 2 together
and musashi painting? i wipe my ass and make better graffiti than you
(i am totally aware that your a 30 year old man, which makes this situation that much more amusing to me. Though the real reason i cant paint is the fact that i have no fucking money)

goddamn i really need to get rid of the ego :)

[CoKKeYONe]

@bouncingsoul

Like that 2nd piece looks fine but need color...

[sky 5]

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6090/1191964fe3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/4108/1191962yl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/6702/1191977to7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

man its freezing in paradise right now . . . some oldies

baper, alive, fosale ill be doing my sketch for the battle today and ill leave this page up so pm me if you see this please . .

may not be intelligent enough to figure out who you are on the internet but at least im smart enough not to give a fuck&#33;

larson - that aint bad, sloppy in some parts, are those antenanaes or eyebrows? is that arrow on the bottom right really necessary?

fixion - if your just starting out your off to good start . . like how to repeat the curve nob/tab thing throughout . .. you got good proportional same size letters on a straight level . . i recommend looking at styles you like and really break tehm down and study them and just put the pencil to the paper all day everyday for a year and then youll be ready to go out the door homie . .

[ras]

that bottom on is ace

[sky 5]

thank you ATE . . yeah im feelin the E on the top one . . damn this might be the first time im lookin at my stuff and sayin "that kid got some skills"

ATE - you should try drawin just faces for awhile to boost your karaks alil man . .

[ras]

Yeah...im experimenting with faces at the moment...but i think iv improved from this shit...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/dop3.jpg

to this..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/ateee111.jpg

whut u think ... ?

[sky 5]

i like it man but im a fan of cartoony style . . imagine some heads aint feelin it cuz its too busy with random words and objects thrown on the page with no connection (look at the top one, all teh words and objects are on different planes making it look messy) . . people will tell you just do pencil sketches of letters and thats good advice if you want to follow the same path 95% of writers go down (shit i went down that path now my stuff looks just like everyone elses, i mean its cool to have alil somethin on lock but if you want to do something fresh and not copycat graf then you gotta start fresh) so i guess if 95% of the people on here tell you do blocks and simples that just means youre a 5 percenter . .

my advice from a 95 percenters point of view is to work on your letters but keep teh karaks and themes and cartoon going . . find one or 2 fills that look good, easy to do and realtively simple (not busy to balance all the other things you like to add to your page)

yuo know after writing all this ish i just remebered you posted somethin about how you never paint cuz you dont want to ruin your career . . . man your in high school, you should be tag banging everythin in sight . . . turn 18, stop tagging or atleast not as hot and start piecin and finding chill tunnels and what not . .

[ras]

Sky...that advice has really opened my eyes...thats what iv actually been trying to do..but never been able to explain if you get me...i can tell that this advice youve just given me...is your personal advice youv follwed yourself..with the fills and all that...i bomb constantly in the winter time..but in the summer its harder..and yeah..like you said the top one has shit all over it..but iv learned how to do proper themed peices...like the bottom one...thanks for the adivce Rek....its sounds gay but..95%&#39;er FOR LIFE ... ;) :P haha

[nemzone]

sky out of this whole site ur style is my favorite. sure thers better writers, but no1s style makes me wanna go sketch right away more than urs duz. props man

[uhhh]

i tottally agree with nemz.
i dont really like the fills youve been doing lately, but just your sketches before coloring.. :wub:

and i really dont think that ras is going on a weird path, i think you need to get down basic block letters first to do ANY style, after that you can do whatever, but you need that basic understanding ECSPECIALLY for funky styles.

edit-that musa a few pages back.. you havent improved at all, youve been told to do simples FOREVERRR and you havent and know you still suck.
DO SIMPLES.

[ras]

Took sum of Sky&#39;s advice..doing themed peices but stil working on letters...lost the tumors like nemz sed..

w.i.p..iventory theme

not very clear ...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/12.jpg

how could i improve on the letters thus far

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 15 2006, 11:40 PM
Exchange with entr (Sec, I&#39;ll get yours up soon... I fucking hate C&#39;s)


http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0420.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0421.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0422.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0423.jpg
Bump because I&#39;m a bastard... How come I get one comment and the shitbucket gets a bunch hahaha

[sky 5]

Originally posted by nemzone@Dec 16 2006, 03:24 PM
sky out of this whole site ur style is my favorite. sure thers better writers, but no1s style makes me wanna go sketch right away more than urs duz. props man
thats cuz your only a step behind me homes (no diss, u know what i mean) . .so props right back at ya

yeah all my fills have been the same lately but im workin this kinda computer sharp edge multi color fill style out for a few months so it will always be in my back pocket when i need it down the road . .

bounce - i think its better than your other stuff, alil less clumpy lumpy so the letters are lil more defined . . . some straight lines and sharp clean acute angles
might help . .

[nemzone]

http://a806.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/27/m_2271c2970434534f71c8c159e851d19d.jpg

all iv done lately :( got block man its shitt. sky thts a gr8 compliment cheers, u got flciks of ur painted shiz, ever posted em??

just realised the pic is tiny, go to myspace n u can see the bigger 1, i cant be fucked lookin for my imageshack registration email...

[sky 5]

http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/3035/1202066rc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/5732/1202065lt3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/6352/1202062xl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NM for nemzer . . . less than 5 min with 2 empty ass cans, ran out so i couldnt put a forcefield, could clean up the 3d on the bottom but i aint . . messed up the right side of the M but im diggin that N and normally i dont fucks with them . .

found 3 of these lil buggers (black widow spiders) behind the trash cans, the 2 ran away but this one was half dead from the cold front . . i gave that bitch a beat down with a twig

[NiL]

LOL @ That little fucker&#33; Eat it.

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

rek, that green outline you posted a couple pages back was crazy brooo.

my sister has my cam right now, but i&#39;ve been sketching. expect some pen steez and some experimental funk stuff from me tomorrow or monday.

knews you had a nice simple in one of your posts a couple pages back id bump but im lazy

and testify your throw is starting to look nice, try a shadow or 3d on that but dont overdo it

[MUSASHI]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musensei.jpg

somethin just to piss people off with

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

musashi, i like the n alot. the whole fat-skinny thing catches my eye. really wish you wouldnt invert it though.

[krysnum1]

DOP and Bouncing sould have the 2 most orriginal styles in this thread. i love that i could see your guy&#39;s&#39;s picstures and not have to look at your user name. honestly im not lying, i could tell who drew the picture from a mile away.


dop- you karaks, have improved. one time i accualy went to the library n shit, n i read some cartooning books... i also noticed you dont use any high lights on you pieces?

[Truth.]

Playing around with ze different styles critique pleaze

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/6179/truthdrawingge6.th.jpg (http://img184.imageshack.us/my.php?image=truthdrawingge6.jpg)

[ras]

Originally posted by krysnum1@Dec 17 2006, 07:45 AM
DOP and Bouncing sould have the 2 most orriginal styles in this thread. i love that i could see your guy&#39;s&#39;s picstures and not have to look at your user name. honestly im not lying, i could tell who drew the picture from a mile away.


dop- you karaks, have improved. one time i accualy went to the library n shit, n i read some cartooning books... i also noticed you dont use any high lights on you pieces?
Truth...you aint posted here for a lil while...im really like that...just clean it up and itll look smart

Dop...was you refering to me...i havent wrote Dop for a while now...and you saying we / i have one of the most orginal styles on this thread .. is that a bad fing :unsure: ...and yeah..about the highlights...i dont knwo whut to use for higlights...any tips..? ;)

[CoKKeYONe]

Originally posted by Truth.@Dec 17 2006, 05:19 AM
Playing around with ze different styles critique pleaze

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/6179/truthdrawingge6.th.jpg (http://img184.imageshack.us/my.php?image=truthdrawingge6.jpg)
looks fine but paint whole 3d black and put some bubbles or something

[ras]

Bubbles... :blink: ...i rekon bubbles wud pull the whole peice off...becuase the edges of the letters are fairly sharp...an cute curiular bubbles would look wrong...i think its fine as it is...

[ras]

Taken Skys Advice and kept with the theme peices BUT working on letters and keeping a simple fill...

still w.i.p...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/10389423.jpg

how do u think its coming along

[hip-hop bomber]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Dec 16 2006, 04:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul &#064; Dec 16 2006, 04:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@Dec 15 2006, 11:40 PM
Exchange with entr (Sec, I&#39;ll get yours up soon... I fucking hate C&#39;s)


http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0420.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0421.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0422.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0423.jpg
Bump because I&#39;m a bastard... How come I get one comment and the shitbucket gets a bunch hahaha [/b][/quote]
your "E" from the straight letter is a bite of eyes&#39;s "E" but its pritty good nice and simple

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 17 2006, 09:30 AM
Taken Skys Advice and kept with the theme peices BUT working on letters and keeping a simple fill...

still w.i.p...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/10389423.jpg

how do u think its coming along
thats so wierd i just did a peice where i drew a cap :P

but dude, those caps do need some work. like the one from the second left, the curvature of the bottom should be the same at the top.

T looks good. C not so much, the width is not consistent, like on the vertical part of the letter. i dont really like the way the E is made out of markers, but thats porbably just a matter of opinion.

[nemzone]

ok this aint aimed at any1 specific but ive noticed that most &#39;toys&#39; only seem to care about drawing purdy lil pages with colours n designs. but thats not what its about. we supposed to be sketching to establish a solid style, that we can go out and paint. once u can paint it then u worry bout fill and backgrounds. its not about makin nice colourful patterns n shit, so dont worry about anything like that yet. the main objective is to get a style down.... THEN you can fart about with colour n shit... just my 2cents, because i think ppl are drifting away from what the purpose of sketching really is..

peace

[ras]

Kraze...yeah...i looked at the caps after you sed that and yeah there off...but it was too late as i had already inkd it...i tried to change them up abit..and i tried to change the C too...man....i wish i hadnt of inkd it sooo soon :(

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/12111.jpg

yeah...and i need a new Gray.. <_< :(

Criiits...Please..Thanks

[nemzone]

i critted it above ur post.

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/2830/imag0001jp6.jpg
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/987/imag0001fv5.jpg
effects of writers block :(

[ASB_ONE]

nemz i like the bottom one shits nice n simple, not so much the top tho dont seem to flow, but u bringing the heat as normal.

ras why dont u just do letters instead of all that crazy shit like making letters out of markers, i mean if thats ur thing and u think its guna work then go for it but i like to see letters all in the same style.

[ras]

Wtf is writers block...?....Nemz..what does that bottom one say..?..i dont like the top one..the way the E is conected to the N..the N is kinda hard to work out...the M isnt good neither..but i like the Z..and that throw is kool too...

[G - Wahl]

Im loving that C Ras, charactor is nice to. Im not really feeling the E, maybe pretty creative with Name sticker though ha. Overall I like it.

Nems, im loving that black + silver throw up.

What do you guys think about my shitty stuff?
Fucked up the O
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/9717/picture002fz8.th.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002fz8.jpg)

[hungr]

that E doesnt really look like eyes&#39; e only the way the middle bar connects to the rest of the letter...eyes e&#39;s arent that slanted and the top bar doesnt hang over the back part of the e that much..

[kaweJFK]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061128/13/7/d/4/7d496dd0df83586cf900b4c742acfe92200611280_full.jpg

could i get some comments on this please&#33;&#33;&#33;

ras- nice i like it&#33;&#33;
nemz- thet neko throw is propa nice&#33;&#33;

[MUSASHI]

I haven&#39;t been around in a while cuz I&#39;m an old fart with an actual life...I see alot of new faces about and some old ones as well some good some bad ,just got one thing to say ,(no beef) paint is cheap as fux but talk is even cheaper...

ras ,nemzer you guys are looking good...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/thesensei.jpg

no colors for those who suggest the sketch is for sketching..."it burns my precious"

[krazzie_ammo]

kawe - love that orange background. how did you do it?

mushashi - not really feeling that.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3158/88jn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
trying something new, crits?

[ras]

That flows fucking awesome &#33;&#33; ^^...

[Bowser]

love the style craze...

heres the sketch I did for you kinda wack I did it a the hospitol with a kroger plus card for a ruler...

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n169/WoodenFoot/12-17-2006120040PM.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Lookin nice Bowser, you should have doen the E backwards, would have flowed even better.

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

craze get rid of the ugly cap looking thing before the letter c, then add a drop shadow or some good 3d, color it, and that will look real nice.

kawejfk, i critted that like months ago, but it is real hot.

[Bastardo]

ras seriously please stop doing markers fr letters and shit like that.
do normal letters&#33; and your stuff will get better

[bouncingsoul]

Did a buncha stuff yesterday. Hope you like

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0424.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0425.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0426.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0427.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0428.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0429.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0430.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0431.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0432.jpg

That character says "woah, puke." by the way. Sorry about the bad lighting. The idea was to have a giant mouth on the side puking like crazy

[G - Wahl]

Bounce I cant see any of those besides the first ha

[ras]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Dec 17 2006, 05:24 PM
ras seriously please stop doing markers fr letters and shit like that.
do normal letters&#33; and your stuff will get better
Yeah man...i wuz getting really fucked off with the E..so i fort i wud go the easy way out and just substitute it for markrs...thanks anyway ;)

[koper]

Originally posted by kaweJFK@Dec 17 2006, 11:45 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061128/13/7/d/4/7d496dd0df83586cf900b4c742acfe92200611280_full.jpg

could i get some comments on this please&#33;&#33;&#33;

ras- nice i like it&#33;&#33;
nemz- thet neko throw is propa nice&#33;&#33;
fuckin ill man

you&#39;re comin along great

[4noapparentreason]

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/7651/img00111fu5.th.jpg (http://img184.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00111fu5.jpg)

feedbak welcome

[ras]

Nice and cleeeean ...just need a lil work on letters

[krysnum1]

Originally posted by ras+Dec 17 2006, 07:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Dec 17 2006, 07:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krysnum1@Dec 17 2006, 07:45 AM
DOP and Bouncing sould have the 2 most orriginal styles in this thread. i love that i could see your guy&#39;s&#39;s picstures and not have to look at your user name. honestly im not lying, i could tell who drew the picture from a mile away.


dop- you karaks, have improved. one time i accualy went to the library n shit, n i read some cartooning books... i also noticed you dont use any high lights on you pieces?
Truth...you aint posted here for a lil while...im really like that...just clean it up and itll look smart

Dop...was you refering to me...i havent wrote Dop for a while now...and you saying we / i have one of the most orginal styles on this thread .. is that a bad fing :unsure: ...and yeah..about the highlights...i dont knwo whut to use for higlights...any tips..? ;) [/b][/quote]
for high lights i use a white out pen. i hered of white jell pens working too tho.

cop some of those and post up some new pics.

[ras]

i dunno when ill be able to get hold of sum...i might be able to rob one from skool...im in the UK...if you are...do u know any were decent to get them..

[Fixion]

Craze and bouncing, you guys&#39; stuff are ill.

[[biohazard]]

my first ones in about a half a year pretty much happy how they came out, could be a lil smoother but ya c +c is welcome. Oh and it supposed to say "seis" but i forgot the friggin &#39;i&#39; http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture055.jpg

[ras]

hhmmm...dunno really...al ican say is go simpler with block letters...becuase your letter structure is wack...especially on the 2nd..stick wit the first one...i rekon it cud turn out a lil nice...also...i aint feeling the mushroom neither lol..

[[biohazard]]

lol ya i fucked the second one up bad when i wit wit the fatter marker and the mushroom well ya worst mushroom ive ever done sorry

[Fosale!]

blah blah blah

when the bsc battle entries due?

[ras]

Why have you got 2 4 ( or w.e age they are ) year old chinese girls kissing in your sig.. <_< :huh:

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Dec 17 2006, 03:13 PM
blah blah blah

when the bsc battle entries due?
7 days negro, christmas eve. i like your recent stuff fosale and you&#39;re on my team so get a decent picture of your sketch cuz alot of times you have a bad quality pic but yeah

high jack a scanner or something b ha

rek, fosale, and alive, pm your entries to me when you&#39;re ready.

[Truth.]

Originally posted by Truth.@Dec 17 2006, 05:19 AM
Playing around with ze different styles critique pleaze

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/6179/truthdrawingge6.th.jpg (http://img184.imageshack.us/my.php?image=truthdrawingge6.jpg)
bump for anymore crits

[DESAK]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/bryan1.jpg
wuttup
new throw

[.SaKe2. NYC]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/skars1.jpg

SKAR


desak i like it jus work on da K

[kaweJFK]

DESAK- thats not bad&#33;&#33;

thanks for the crits Koper and Baper Moves Kilos. <3, and to the guy who asked me how did i do the background, well........ its kinda hard to explain / i cant be botherd right now to explain it, iv&#39;e been doing some more sketching today:

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061217/13/4/3/b/43b32f82319e47629f27c9332a63cab9200612170_full.jpg

the top right is the new one

more comments please&#33;&#33;

the "L" kinda looks like a "J" but..........

[nuf1]

here a canavas comments
http://i14.tinypic.com/30j5fs1.jpg

[.SaKe2. NYC]

freshhhhhhhh &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;1

[ras]

she called Lucy right...well if shes you girl then u cud tell her it says Jucy Lucy..hah..then get a bitch slap right across the face.. :P :lol: :lol:

as for crits...the middle peice is kool...but the L isnt that good..it looks to me like a random bar tbh..and i know how hard L&#39;s are ... there a basterd...as for everything else..its pretty damn fine..

[ras]

Originally posted by nuf1@Dec 17 2006, 09:51 PM
here a canavas comments
http://i14.tinypic.com/30j5fs1.jpg
whut du they say..try making the letters more noticable..i dunno if thats called " defining " .. lol...pretty doe tho..not so much the pink one...but great fill on the first...

ima watch Bomb The System now on Google Vidz....

Peace &#33;&#33; ;)

[kaweJFK]

cheers RAS, thanks man,

well im hoping to give it to her in a christmas card tomoro..... cus ive never plucked up the curage to give it to her yet&#33;&#33;&#33; :unsure:

and im never plesed with my sketches. argh

nuf1- that it HAWT, nice&#33;&#33;

[.SaKe2. NYC]

nice shit kawe. i like it alot especially the backround if i had anything to say it wud prob be to work on ur L, not that its bad L&#39;s are kinda hard.
anythinn on mine?

[ras]

^^ thats exactly what i said..

[.SaKe2. NYC]

lol o. i guess its true then

[DESAK]

yea kawe nice job on that i like it alot keep wokring on some shit and keep em coming &#33;&#33; sake-you stuff was nice also i like ur s ur a and ur k. work on ur r. ur r needs work keep wokring on ur structure. thats what ima do also like u said to work on my k work on ur r . workin on m structure.

PEACEEEE &#33;

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Dec 17 2006, 11:59 AM
kawe - love that orange background. how did you do it?

mushashi - not really feeling that.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3158/88jn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
trying something new, crits?
crits for a bitch on crack...

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 17 2006, 03:14 PM
Why have you got 2 4 ( or w.e age they are ) year old chinese girls kissing in your sig.. <_< :huh:
because its cute.

why dont you listen to people and do simples?


and crazy, not to be a jerk because i like your workalot
but all your sketches look exactly the same, just with added extentions imo
but i still like it
finish coloring and put a drop shadow or sumthing.

[nickstix]

krazzie: i like the new letter extensions but it seems off balance b/c the last 2 letters dont have anything goin out the top.

heres something i did, it was supposed to say SACRO but i ran out of room and didnt feel like starting over so i left it as SACR...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/four.jpg
crits...

[ras]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Dec 17 2006, 11:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Dec 17 2006, 11:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 17 2006, 03:14 PM
Why have you got 2 4 ( or w.e age they are ) year old chinese girls kissing in your sig.. <_< :huh:
because its cute.

why dont you listen to people and do simples?


and crazy, not to be a jerk because i like your workalot
but all your sketches look exactly the same, just with added extentions imo
but i still like it
finish coloring and put a drop shadow or sumthing. [/b][/quote]
" Because its cute.. " Wtf..its gay..

[krazzie_ammo]

obviously its gay, its two girls :S

its not like they are butt naked.

to be honest i dont really pay much attention to signatures.

how does it annoy you, its his signature. and your not gunna spend all day watching it?

[Fosale!]

w.e its a sig, i dont care.
and btw ras, most ppl know what bridge that is and its easy to read that its smith sane
i like the box around it too because its mad hard it is to see those.

[ras]

i never sed it annoyed me at all...any way...this isnt a fuckin sig thread..weers the pics at..

[sky 5]

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/3306/1202068zy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some fuck around sketches . . the M on teh bottom right is certified gangsta . . . (ehh blurry, cant see lighter lines)

nichstick - like nemz said drop the markers and practice with a pencil and eraser and just produce a ton of sketches

crazie - i like the sharp accurateness of it . .

it wouldnt be gay if it is was his neices or sisters or somethin . . .

[nuf1]

Originally posted by nuf1@Dec 17 2006, 04:51 PM
here a canavas comments
http://i14.tinypic.com/30j5fs1.jpg
anymore critz

[TricksForKids]

nuv, you have some good letters and some off ones, work on consistency, but he background and colourss are pretty fresh

sky well, yu know how i feel bout your shit, keep it up homie, loving how well you execute the wildness

ras atop posting every two seconds, its just getting you in trouble, and fosale, be above him, you dont need to respond to what he thinks about your sig

bs wasnt working for me for a couple of days, dunno if anyone encountered the problem, but yeah, its back baby,

hope ally ou cats are woprking on your xmas shit

Peace

[MUSASHI]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ms1.jpg

[Bowser]

im feelin it musashi I really love your hand style also. any ways I think its straight up...

[MUSASHI]

^^^ thanky,thanky...

[DESAK]

musashi im feelin it alot nice clean only thing is i mean idk maybe just it looks a little wierd to me but i dun likey your handstyle. eyy idk it just looks wierd. but still it loos phat. keep it up and keep um comin.

PEACE &#33;&#33;

[aeon]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo+Dec 17 2006, 06:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (krazzie_ammo &#064; Dec 17 2006, 06:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Dec 17 2006, 11:59 AM
kawe - love that orange background. how did you do it?

mushashi - not really feeling that.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3158/88jn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
trying something new, crits?
crits for a bitch on crack... [/b][/quote]
feelin that. the cap looks shit though...

[DESAK]

i like it alot. shitty cap though. nice letters. do another one on a clean sheet of paper and than fill it in and put some 3d and itll be firee &#33;&#33; well keep it comin.

PEACE &#33;&#33;

[Fixion]

Craze, your simples are awesome. Keep it up.

[nemzone]

craze u are improvin nicely. just work on the &#39;ze&#39; of it, they too bare.

done this, to show respect for waster 12. :( RIP

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/857/tmp6227wz8.jpg

nothin gr8 just ya know.

[whahappen?]

awesome^
dont have a camera so....
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8382/bombgrakhtg9.jpg

[Nosypainter]

what do you guys think?



Nos


http://x6d.xanga.com/0d4d0720d703395804631/z67058136.jpg
http://x7f.xanga.com/a76d01546443395803032/z67056939.jpg

[BoRe-719-]

Originally posted by Nosypainter@Dec 17 2006, 09:59 PM
what do you guys think?



Nos


http://x6d.xanga.com/0d4d0720d703395804631/z67058136.jpg
http://x7f.xanga.com/a76d01546443395803032/z67056939.jpg
your sig is hanging on my wall
the letters are getting better, keep practicin

[MUSASHI]

damn nosy I likes it ...wasup bore?...good to see some oldies up in here

[BoRe-719-]

hell yeeuh mushi hows life

its winter time, that meens back to bs

[LilTripEihtNine]

u should color that second one it looks badass as fucc.

[SeKz]

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7829/p008gt7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/6605/p011ue3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Some of my latest work, sorry for the bad flicks. Should i post in the main sketch forum?

[MUSASHI]

sekz it&#39;s not bad but I wouldn&#39;t put it up in the big thread just yet cuz it&#39;s still kinda toy...trust me on this one I seen some stuff better than yours get blasted up in there,but for in here your doing ok...work on getting a scanner,ask for one for christmas...you can get one for about the same price as a new xbox 360 game ,not the console but the title...

[Bastardo]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2301/picture192po1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ras]

:o :blink: ...Wow.. ^...you dont need to post here anymore... ;)

[kicklip9634]

yeah i agree with ras you should start postin in the picture gallary

[BohemianBastard]

i agree
and ras i love can 2, actually who doesnt?

[krazzie_ammo]

bastardo - i love it. you wanna exchange?

heres something i did for bowser in like 5 minutes.
http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/4721/89te2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[ras]

Bohemian...yeah can 2 is dope..especially his karaks and cleaness...

craze...does that say Bowze...if so...u need sum structure in the Z...the B & W is fucking dope &#33; ;)

[karmatikal]

craze and bastard that shit is dope

I&#39;m working on this throw what do you guys think?

Ready for paint or still needs more work?

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1218Image0006.jpg

I fucked the M on this one but you get the idea

[G - Wahl]

Krazzie, that B + W are sick

Ras, that is a S, not a Z ;)

Karma, I liked your old throw better. Actully alot better.

[Code]

Craze- Love the style and all, but clean up the 3d a bit

Karma- Your old throwy was way better

Bastardo- Hot as hell man


Still doin simples, trying to get better at 3d so using vanishing point for now.

http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/23/scan0007xe5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Critz please

[capo93]

[img=http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/8284/picture4jd0.th.jpg] (http://img269.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4jd0.jpg)

[img=http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/9793/picture5md3.th.jpg] (http://img269.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture5md3.jpg)

some new stuff crits??

-bastardo hot as always

-craze soething about your style jsut attracts me to it

-karma... no beef but all your letters need work they look kinda all squished down

[MUSASHI]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ms3.jpg

capo, I couldn&#39;t get your images for some reason...
karma, dont get too antsie it&#39;ll happen soon enough...
bastardo, that is smoking hot,for reals...
craze,just try and clean it up a bit...

[Inkognito]

Originally posted by karmatikal@Dec 18 2006, 02:11 PM
craze and bastard that shit is dope

I&#39;m working on this throw what do you guys think?

Ready for paint or still needs more work?

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2006_1218Image0006.jpg

I fucked the M on this one but you get the idea
haha more work....

[trashhh]

Senser the e&#39;s are bangin but the bits on the top and bottom of the s&#39;s are kinda ridculous i think

[aces]

Capo I&#39;m really liking that first one. It&#39;s got style and it&#39;s really nice and simple.

Karma go with simples man. I don&#39;t know how many times it has been said but it is necessary.

Mushai the S&#39;s are wack, the E&#39;s and the N are nice, and the I is just a little strange and it takes a little while to make it out.

Bastardo the bottom L looks a little akward but other than that it is hot shit man.

Code well all I can say is at least it is simple.

Krazzie it looks really nice but it also looks really rushed and I can understand if it is but if not then you really need to work on that pen control. The S is the only thing that I don&#39;t like

[G - Wahl]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/9778/picture004np7.th.jpg (http://img61.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture004np7.jpg)
Am I paint worthy yet?

[TricksForKids]

i think so man, lose the overlap lines in the Z though

bastardo, wanna excahnge?

Peace

[Bastardo]

yeah sure thing bawk

[Bowser]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Dec 18 2006, 12:44 PM
bastardo - i love it. you wanna exchange?

heres something i did for bowser in like 5 minutes.
http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/4721/89te2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
krazie its f-n dope bro mine sukd but its aight, I love your style.

Bastardo your style is sick, kid

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Dec 18 2006, 05:49 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2301/picture192po1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
very very nice
even sexual
:D

[-testify-]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Dec 17 2006, 09:31 PM
awesome^
dont have a camera so....
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8382/bombgrakhtg9.jpg
i got skipped over what a surprise :o

[Fosale!]

Oh molotow.
youre back.

yeah im really sad bc. in school i started a R.I.P Waster sketch and i lost it.
i really liked it and i thought it was mad hot.
im really pissed.
ugggggggggggggg

[molotow_15]

i was never gone..

peace bruv im not ere to cause beef

[G - Wahl]

Bawk - Ahw you dont like my overlaps&#33;? Thats my style&#33;

Anyone else got any opinions?

[molotow_15]

they look ok in my opinion but thats me..
if thats your style go for it
and post fliks wen ya dun

[RepUrSet]

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7098/picture165pd8.th.jpg (http://img166.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture165pd8.jpg)


should i change anything before i ink it?

[G - Wahl]

Just try to make the G + E the same height.
The top of the G is higher then the E
And The angle at the bottoms are different sizes.

That charactor made me laugh. haha

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by RepUrSet@Dec 18 2006, 10:46 PM
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7098/picture165pd8.th.jpg (http://img166.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture165pd8.jpg)


should i change anything before i ink it?
even though its so simple and basic its a mad improve
from when i last saw your stuff
props

[DelozONER]

RepUrSet.... where is ur perspective? i dont u need to put some grafic on there.
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/DelozONER/th_P1010026.jpg (http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/DelozONER/P1010026.jpg)

tell me what ya think.