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ras
12-25-2006, 03:01 PM
Okay Bohemian ;)

NEUK...lookn good....dont like the extension on the N but thats a matter of opinion..

just something to test out my new pens.....i need sum lay out paper as this paper sucks in the ink and makes it look splodgy :( ...but there fucking ace markers to blend etc..i recommend them to anyone..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/dsafjioq.jpg

..P.s...i hate the chain on the mexican ese man...and i forgot the lil speeches too..and the bubbles are fucked too .. ah well ;)

Crits and comments please !! ;) thanks

TricksForKids
12-25-2006, 03:03 PM
im 17 what does that make me?

neuk way to start out with simples buddy, your U is a cool style but doesnt fit the rest of your style, and you need some work on that E, and the bottom right leg of the K

BohemianBastard
12-25-2006, 03:06 PM
that makes you less than 5 months ahead of me

ras - i dont like it
its kinda gay
but i have no idea what you could do to improve it

uhhh
12-25-2006, 03:06 PM
im 14, that makes me?

ras
12-25-2006, 03:19 PM
yeah i suppose it is gay..but im just gettin the feel for new pens..

uuuuh...that makes you the same age as me

G - Wahl
12-25-2006, 03:31 PM
Ras, whats up with the name change?
And are those TouchTwins you're using?

ras
12-25-2006, 03:44 PM
im always changing my name..but iv finally come up with a name consiting with the letters i like...Etec and Ete for short ;)

and yeha they are touchtwins...and there amazing !...crnt wait till i get proper proper used to them ! ... i got a 12 set but my parents sed if when ive used them up i can have a bigger set...hopefully the 60A ;) :lol:

Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G
12-25-2006, 03:46 PM
some 5 minute ugly ass shit.
crizzle?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumsimp.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumthro.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/SEthroo.jpg

DESAK
12-25-2006, 03:53 PM
k on the last throw se lose those x's and make it a striat line not a squigglt one. on the first one get a better u and r. on the second one make the throw on the right the e a little more noticible on the top and the left throw or watever that is its simple good 3d make the letters more constructed i think the word is i cant think of the word but yeaa

--- peace-----

Apoc
12-25-2006, 03:56 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 25 2006, 01:39 PM
and Cezr...why the hell you posting here :blink: :blink: yours shits the shit !!
he still belongs here... everyone here has a long way to go. The only one who shouldn't be here is sky

G - Wahl
12-25-2006, 04:07 PM
Serum - The first colored one is alright, letters are cool, just make them all the same size, then start tweaking them a bit, and make that extension on the top of the S a lil bit shorter

Crits on these?
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9771/picture001lo3.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001lo3.jpg)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4922/picture002sf9.th.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002sf9.jpg)

bouncingsoul
12-25-2006, 04:43 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0460.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0461.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0462.jpg

"sTWOen" "s2en is sexy" "knewstwo wishes you happy holidays"

ras
12-25-2006, 06:01 PM
Originally posted by G - Wahl@Dec 25 2006, 10:07 PM
Serum - The first colored one is alright, letters are cool, just make them all the same size, then start tweaking them a bit, and make that extension on the top of the S a lil bit shorter

Crits on these?
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9771/picture001lo3.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001lo3.jpg)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4922/picture002sf9.th.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002sf9.jpg)
have u painted that throw...and that bottom peice wud make a sick roller !

sank one
12-25-2006, 07:10 PM
this isnt the place to talk......

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
12-25-2006, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by NiL+Dec 25 2006, 03:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Dec 25 2006, 03:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Dec 25 2006, 01:59 AM
cezr your letters are always fire, i wanna see some 3d to compliment it babe. do ittt.
You&#39;re gay aye.. [/b][/quote]
battle me faggotttttttttttttttt till then keep your mouth shut cuz you&#39;re garbage

C3ZR ONE
12-25-2006, 08:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)

NiN
12-25-2006, 08:11 PM
ignore the stupid line at the bottom
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87/Flexx154/DSC00032.jpg

Snapple
12-25-2006, 08:14 PM
how bout this one MUSASHI

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/1456/dscn1328pl0.jpg

MUSASHI
12-25-2006, 08:19 PM
oh yeah &#33;&#33;&#33; much better... and you have no problems filling a page,more than I can say for alot of toddlers round here...

Snapple
12-25-2006, 08:29 PM
Thanx man&#33;

TricksForKids
12-25-2006, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by Apoc+Dec 25 2006, 04:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Apoc &#064; Dec 25 2006, 04:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 25 2006, 01:39 PM
and Cezr...why the hell you posting here¬* :blink:¬* :blink: yours shits the shit &#33;&#33;
he still belongs here... everyone here has a long way to go. The only one who shouldn&#39;t be here is sky [/b][/quote]
:( kay said i could post in the big boys thread too

lol, no really, we all need to remember were toys, some of us are straight out of the box, others are clawing at the coattails of the greats and just need to sharpen our nails

merry christmas fools

noam12
12-25-2006, 09:28 PM
i dunno i just did a 5 min one, nothing special, i need to work on shading lol i cant get a hold on it =&#092;

http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/9199/dosesplatterjz2.jpg

now heres just a differ style

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/5904/dosetagta7.jpg

Apoc
12-25-2006, 10:27 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Dec 25 2006, 10:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Dec 25 2006, 10:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Apoc@Dec 25 2006, 04:56 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 25 2006, 01:39 PM
and Cezr...why the hell you posting here :blink: :blink: yours shits the shit &#33;&#33;
he still belongs here... everyone here has a long way to go. The only one who shouldn&#39;t be here is sky
:( kay said i could post in the big boys thread too

lol, no really, we all need to remember were toys, some of us are straight out of the box, others are clawing at the coattails of the greats and just need to sharpen our nails

merry christmas fools [/b][/quote]
word to that. Merry christmas, hope you all get lots of pussy/dick or whatever the fuck you people like, and drink a shitload. Oh yeah and hang out with your families too. Just don&#39;t get molested by uncle ronnie again.

uhhh
12-25-2006, 10:31 PM
no uncle ronnie, no, not again. :lol:

i almost have a drawing done, ill edit it in in a few.

Fube
12-25-2006, 10:45 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Throws/Astro.jpg

tryin out a name. probable not new but wish for crits all the same.

noam12
12-25-2006, 10:49 PM
looks nice, what markers?

Nosypainter
12-25-2006, 10:53 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 24 2006, 02:41 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ms12.jpg
mush no offence but that i on the very nd looks hardcore like a double headed penis ^^ <3 u



Nos

Fube
12-25-2006, 10:53 PM
Originally posted by noam12@Dec 25 2006, 11:49 PM
looks nice, what markers?

silver sharpie, black marks-a-lot, blue highlighter.

amuin-gcs
12-25-2006, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****...

Nosypainter
12-25-2006, 10:57 PM
Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs+Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (amuin-gcs @ Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****... [/b][/quote]
you ever talk to cezr like that again dude ill blast your ass in a war so STFU

noam12
12-25-2006, 10:59 PM
lol my metallic makes me orgasm :rolleyes:

MUSASHI
12-25-2006, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 25 2006, 11:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 25 2006, 11:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MUSASHI@Dec 24 2006, 02:41 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ms12.jpg
mush no offence but that i on the very nd looks hardcore like a double headed penis ^^ <3 u



Nos [/b][/quote]
this one was for all the pervs in our viewing audience...see how many sexual inuendos you can find I put about 6 just for the ladies...

Fube
12-25-2006, 11:07 PM
^^^ i see another penis in the e.

noam12
12-25-2006, 11:09 PM
lol the s looks like a cam....nvm

bouncingsoul
12-25-2006, 11:09 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 25 2006, 11:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 25 2006, 11:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs@Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****...
you ever talk to cezr like that again dude ill blast your ass in a war so STFU [/b][/quote]
Haha, they&#39;re in the same crew I&#39;m pretty sure... Musashi I spot a head on the bottom right of the E... Yes that kind of head

Shit from like last week... Started outlining and then got lazy

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0468.jpg

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
12-25-2006, 11:20 PM
wow bottom sketch hot fire favorite bouncy sketch put some 3d color color i hate you


whats wrong with drawing penises in ya sketches haaaaaaaaaa

uhhh
12-25-2006, 11:22 PM
knews-meh.

gahhh fuck.
wildstyles harddd.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-028S.jpg
crits on this?
says rtk..

sank one
12-25-2006, 11:33 PM
i think you should make the upper legs of the k bigger, and maybe drop the lower right leg of the k down a bit. im still real toy but just my 2 cents :P

noam12
12-25-2006, 11:39 PM
http://http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/3500/doseslantyxi1.jpg

copyed fubes style so credit to him



got idea from bouncingsoul so credit to him alsohttp://http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/1715/doseweirdom0.jpg

noam12
12-25-2006, 11:43 PM
why arent my pics coming up..?

Blix
12-25-2006, 11:50 PM
cause you bite?

noam12
12-25-2006, 11:53 PM
g thanks, thats loads helpfull <_<

minesweep
12-26-2006, 12:31 AM
its not a bite, he didnt claim it as his own so stop bein a dick

and it&#39;s probably your image hosting, or you put the link in wrong or something like that

yung-wun
12-26-2006, 01:14 AM
finally got some more shit.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings028.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings027.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings022.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings014.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings012.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings008.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings007.jpg

myl
12-26-2006, 01:24 AM
letters are whack, characs are fresh as fuck

Sade_RL
12-26-2006, 01:53 AM
<center>
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b264/zackman108/RLBOYO.jpg


</center>

My First Post, Also - Don&#39;t hate on it..

I just like started to Kinda get a wildstyle or, Abstract style down,
and I only had 2 pencil&#39;s and a Little felt marker.

Tip Me.

Nosypainter
12-26-2006, 02:57 AM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Dec 26 2006, 12:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Dec 26 2006, 12:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Nosypainter@Dec 25 2006, 11:57 PM

Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs@Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****...
you ever talk to cezr like that again dude ill blast your ass in a war so STFU
Haha, they&#39;re in the same crew I&#39;m pretty sure... Musashi I spot a head on the bottom right of the E... Yes that kind of head

Shit from like last week... Started outlining and then got lazy

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0468.jpg [/b][/quote]
i would hope so that got my head hott lol .....

ras
12-26-2006, 06:13 AM
to me the N lookes like a lowercase m...

Truth.
12-26-2006, 07:40 AM
first one is a sticker i plan on putting up tonight, second is a mates deck, what do u think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/daffy.jpg

shamee1991
12-26-2006, 07:56 AM
look kool...like dem both...

nemzone
12-26-2006, 08:09 AM
i like em 2, but it must fuck up ur paint pens nibs on the griptape??

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7439/imag0005th3.jpg

il get a better flick wen my cam gets more batts

MUSASHI
12-26-2006, 08:38 AM
I like that steezo nemzr

noam12
12-26-2006, 08:58 AM
i dunno a quick one, i need to work on shading (omg i got it to work :lol: )



http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/1363/dosesplatterng3.jpg

no more bite off...

G - Wahl
12-26-2006, 09:10 AM
Nemz - Lovin your style as always..

Noam - Maybe its just my PC but I can hardly see that picture..But from the looks of it, make your D the same size as the rest of the letters..

Messing around with Paint
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture009.jpg

noam12
12-26-2006, 09:12 AM
lol yea i have a freqeunt problem with shading and letters being the same size

ras
12-26-2006, 09:34 AM
Noam....are you serious...Idea of fube..Bite off fube morelike..its nearly the same...same colours and everything...

ZO...some how i think if you tweak that O it could turn out into a sick E..then u could write Ze..i dunno...great shit tho...bout time u painted it...and are you gunna do that lime green roller ?

G - Wahl
12-26-2006, 09:50 AM
ZE is already a writer
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgra...p?artist_id=471 (http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php?artist_id=471)
And I hate E&#39;s
I love my name as of now, ZOTwo ( Sounds like CO2, you know, the gas.. ) And I love the letters.

Thanks for the props
;)

And Ill do that green roller once I stop being lazy. Youll get flix soon I promise ha

ASB_ONE
12-26-2006, 09:51 AM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0175_000.jpg

G - Wahl
12-26-2006, 10:03 AM
Lookin nice Cases, love that style.

Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G
12-26-2006, 10:10 AM
Originally posted by Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G@Dec 25 2006, 04:46 PM
some 5 minute ugly ass shit.
crizzle?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumsimp.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumthro.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/SEthroo.jpg
bump?

nemzone
12-26-2006, 10:21 AM
u can bump the day u start fuckin crittin ppls work b4 u post / bump. cunt.

cases, i like the piece, just not the A. not feelin anythin else there either, but the piece has a nice flare 2 it

Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G
12-26-2006, 11:00 AM
i believe ihave critted peoples work. including yours atleast once on the other acc.

nemzone
12-26-2006, 11:04 AM
possibly, but im talkin bout u just overlooked cases without sayin a word... i hate to chit chat without flicks, but i critted cases. to crit yours i duno what to say really, ur on the right tracks doin simples... but just need to work on cleanin it up, and stat doin simples and throws til u get good.

G - Wahl
12-26-2006, 11:07 AM
Nemz - I love your work man, you ever paint any of that? All we have seen of your painted stuff is that one sprayed drippy tag and those two blue throws you did&#33; Lets see those peices&#33;

ras
12-26-2006, 11:45 AM
Cases...i like that one..the A i like best .." show me the money in CASES " :lol:

extremely quick throw..i think i got the feel of them pens now..but i still havent got a layout paper so it still looks a lil splodgy...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/et.jpg

Crits please.. Thanks ;)

G - Wahl
12-26-2006, 11:54 AM
I liked your other name better Ras

ras
12-26-2006, 11:57 AM
What one...Atec...i chenged bucuz the A&#39;s were giving me problems with the other style i was doin a few weeks back...but i might go back to Atec now as i think with this style i can do alot with the A&#39;s..

steez_b
12-26-2006, 12:58 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 26 2006, 12:45 PM
Cases...i like that one..the A i like best .." show me the money in CASES " :lol:

extremely quick throw..i think i got the feel of them pens now..but i still havent got a layout paper so it still looks a lil splodgy...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/et.jpg

Crits please.. Thanks ;)
ahh man i love your style every throw I&#39;ve seen from you is too dope. can&#39;t find anythin bad to say about em&#39;


this is the first piece I&#39;ve done using a vanishing point and I like how the 3d turned out, don&#39;t like how I didn&#39;t make the A in proportion though:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_cashmoney_grnline.jpg

then a throw I&#39;m workin on, tryin to keep it simple:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_redscribble_throw.jpg

crits please

nemzone
12-26-2006, 12:59 PM
RAS - i dont like it as a throw, make it so u can do it within like 3 mins with paint.

GUY ABOVE - throw is alrite, paintable, no go get sum skill with paint paintin that ;)

paintin this tomoz all dependin on weather, and if my shit comes from illuminarty

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7452/imag0008dm8.jpg

any1 got any reasons y i shudnt paint this? any things i should change first? i rekon the symmetry will be a bitch

BohemianBastard
12-26-2006, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0175_000.jpg
fayahhhhhhhhhh

MUSASHI
12-26-2006, 01:23 PM
that bump is coo...

nemz make a grid if yer havin&#39; trouble wit symetry...I&#39;d paint that foteaux&#33;&#33;&#33;

a feeble attempt at 3d and light depth...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/s.jpg

Linkzone1
12-26-2006, 01:23 PM
ASB_ONE - sick letters props

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8962/0003662zp4.jpg

ras
12-26-2006, 01:53 PM
Okay Nemz and thaks Steez

Link..get a clearer pic mate

BohemianBastard
12-26-2006, 01:59 PM
http://i13.tinypic.com/42lgfvk.jpg

bah humbug

Z FUSE
12-26-2006, 02:03 PM
that looks pretty good, the pencil makes it a bit harder to see, but after that&#39;s gone it should turn out pretty good.

crits on this anyone..
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/472/tgrwck4.jpg

nemzone
12-26-2006, 02:19 PM
love it&#33; paint it now&#33;&#33;&#33; its a lil generic but thats ok. make the sqaure bit on top left of the K the same siz as rest of letters.

paintin this tomoz all dependin on weather, and if my shit comes from illuminarty
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7452/imag0008dm8.jpg
any1 got any reasons y i shudnt paint this? any things i should change first? i rekon the symmetry will be a bitch

steez_b
12-26-2006, 02:20 PM
Originally posted by steez_b@Dec 26 2006, 01:58 PM
this is the first piece I&#39;ve done using a vanishing point and I like how the 3d turned out, don&#39;t like how I didn&#39;t make the A in proportion though:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_cashmoney_grnline.jpg

then a throw I&#39;m workin on, tryin to keep it simple:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_redscribble_throw.jpg

crits please
bump


and Musasshi thats far from a feeble attempt man, looks awesome

EDIT: nemz I think it looks dope, go paint it for sure man

and thanks trashhh, the canvas is lookin mint man the piece and handstyle are very nice

trashhh
12-26-2006, 02:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.

Linkzone1
12-26-2006, 02:44 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 03:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
sick ass mo fo

nemzone
12-26-2006, 02:46 PM
yeh cuz that bump was relevant <_<

BohemianBastard
12-26-2006, 02:52 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/33v29uh.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/4fyqm88.jpg

bla bla bal
i hate doing fills

Quigbert
12-26-2006, 03:16 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri25.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri23.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri22.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri21.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri20.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri24.jpg

Crits would be greatly appreciated

Quigbert
12-26-2006, 03:17 PM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 26 2006, 03:52 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/33v29uh.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/4fyqm88.jpg

bla bla bal
i hate doing fills
the "MR." on top looks bad

ras
12-26-2006, 03:21 PM
^^^ .. waste of space..u shudda just editied your post..

sort out the R&#39;s...they look bad..and the E...make the middle bars of the indent more..other than that there not bad...there kinda sloppy too

Albert Fish
12-26-2006, 03:33 PM
deri space your letters better, squish it together a little

nemzone
12-26-2006, 03:39 PM
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/1739/imag0010lo5.jpg

emokid
12-26-2006, 04:23 PM
nemz, blacknwhite works real well but pics a bit blurry, would look better if it was clearer. TRASH that is so fucking nice i love it

ras
12-26-2006, 04:34 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 08:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
bump cuz its fire..you just have to get those tweaks here and there and you wont be toy anymore

nemzone
12-26-2006, 04:48 PM
<_< bullshit&#33; no offence to trash, its nice. but ras u dont no what the fuck ur talkin bout. a few tweaks and he wont be toy anymore? says a toy from the internet. is he up? is he up lots? can he paint well?

Linkzone1
12-26-2006, 05:05 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Dec 26 2006, 05:48 PM
<_< bullshit&#33; no offence to trash, its nice. but ras u dont no what the fuck ur talkin bout. a few tweaks and he wont be toy anymore? says a toy from the internet. is he up? is he up lots? can he paint well?
PROPS&#33;

ras
12-26-2006, 05:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...

minesweep
12-26-2006, 06:04 PM
even in sketch terms he still has a way to go

Sumoe
12-26-2006, 07:20 PM
lovin the black and white shit nemz, pretty dope canvas trash.

bouncingsoul
12-26-2006, 07:21 PM
This is all I could come up with today... Fuck

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0472.jpg

Sumoe
12-26-2006, 07:22 PM
W is kinda strange lookin, like the S, overall it&#39;s pretty good.

Nosypainter
12-26-2006, 07:27 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 26 2006, 02:23 PM
that bump is coo...

nemz make a grid if yer havin&#39; trouble wit symetry...I&#39;d paint that foteaux&#33;&#33;&#33;

a feeble attempt at 3d and light depth...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/s.jpg
nice i like it alot...



Nos

NiN
12-26-2006, 07:48 PM
wasnt sure how to do a 8, and this is just practice i know its bad lol
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87/Flexx154/ReL8.jpg

bouncingsoul
12-26-2006, 07:53 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 26 2006, 08:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 26 2006, 08:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MUSASHI@Dec 26 2006, 02:23 PM
that bump is coo...

nemz make a grid if yer havin&#39; trouble wit symetry...I&#39;d paint that foteaux&#33;&#33;&#33;

a feeble attempt at 3d and light depth...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/s.jpg
nice i like it alot...



Nos [/b][/quote]
That is definitely my favorite thing I&#39;ve ever seen from you... Do more, do more&#33;

afek
12-26-2006, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
shut-up

PushOner
12-26-2006, 07:58 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/IMG_0768.jpg

lemme know whatchu think?
been on this site for a while, just too lazy to make a name. Im good now. been doing graffiti for about 2 years now....so yeah. idk im gunna start posting more and more shit on here, yall gunna know who i am. =D CHyeah. lol

levans
12-26-2006, 07:59 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/9708/poolphotosfromdecember0lv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



some random shizzle a did in italian a while back sorry if i forgot to rotate them if i did just tilt your head to the side

levans
12-26-2006, 08:04 PM
sorry i didnt mean to press send here is some more from italian and from other classes
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/492/poolphotosfromdecember0li9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
other sketch from the same lesson in italian^^^^^
some stuff i did with my new pens
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5668/poolphotosfromdecember0xt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

afek
12-26-2006, 08:11 PM
edit button dumb ass

ASB_ONE
12-26-2006, 08:21 PM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard+Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BohemianBastard @ Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0175_000.jpg
fayahhhhhhhhhh [/b][/quote]
cheers def worked on letters alot after your last crit rele was the kik up the ass i needed, thats if indeed your socrates unda a new name?

Nosypainter
12-26-2006, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by PushOner@Dec 26 2006, 08:58 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/IMG_0768.jpg

lemme know whatchu think?
been on this site for a while, just too lazy to make a name. Im good now. been doing graffiti for about 2 years now....so yeah. idk im gunna start posting more and more shit on here, yall gunna know who i am. =D CHyeah. lol
not to bad push although i wish the leters were a bit taller and more teqnique but its all good

bouncingsoul
12-26-2006, 10:02 PM
Finally a decent sketch today...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0473.jpg

Stonk
12-26-2006, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by ras+Dec 26 2006, 05:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Dec 26 2006, 05:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 08:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
bump cuz its fire..you just have to get those tweaks here and there and you wont be toy anymore [/b][/quote]
trash again part of your piece drops down to one side, i still say that if you keep everything even it will look way better

MUSASHI
12-26-2006, 11:15 PM
werd bounce&#33;&#33;&#33;


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/outline.jpg

pretty productive day for me too...

levans
12-26-2006, 11:20 PM
nice musashi i cant believe how much you sketch i swear there is 1 of your pieces on each page..

uhhh
12-26-2006, 11:22 PM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.

whahappen?
12-26-2006, 11:24 PM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5038/untitledra4.png

bouncingsoul
12-26-2006, 11:33 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
True, most of his stuff is pretty bad (no offense man)... You need to get letter structure down and you&#39;d be sick as all hell... Your technique is great but your raw letters are horrible...

...And just so I&#39;m not flickless
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0428.jpg

uhhh
12-26-2006, 11:41 PM
oh no&#33;
you drew a notebook that might be for school&#33;
them evil police men are gonna arrest you&#33;
put it in the paper shredder, that way when the cops go on a random raid they wont find your notebook that says your awesome graffiti tagger name on it&#33;&#33;1&#33;111&#33;&#33;1&#33;

ShIfTeD
12-26-2006, 11:47 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk

NiN
12-27-2006, 12:05 AM
^^ i was just bout to say that, bouncingsoul those letters are almost as bad as mine

uhhh
12-27-2006, 12:09 AM
puppys and ice cream.
puppys and ice cream.
puppys and ice cream.

TricksForKids
12-27-2006, 12:15 AM
god, grow up please all of you, being toys at graff doesnt mean we all have to be toys when we talk to each other, were all in the same boat trying to help each other out, so chill

whahappen?
12-27-2006, 12:22 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 12:24 AM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5038/untitledra4.png
new page

Fosale!
12-27-2006, 12:23 AM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk [/b][/quote]
neither do you.

levans
12-27-2006, 12:26 AM
seriously guys what tricks said just chill amd if you wanna start beef take it to pm`s

Blix
12-27-2006, 12:27 AM
all of us are in the toys thread what the heellll

bouncingsoul
12-27-2006, 12:32 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk
neither do you. [/b][/quote]
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0478.jpg

Blix
12-27-2006, 12:36 AM
whoa whoa back up dont prove his point

uhhh
12-27-2006, 12:40 AM
im sorry for the beefy post, ill edit it out in a minute.

but heres a simple...
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-029S.jpg

and a not so simple, with a horrrible k..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-030S.jpg
some people said i should go back to my old style, so i tried but with a little wave of the new style... hence the horrible k.

ShIfTeD
12-27-2006, 12:48 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; &#064; Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk
neither do you. [/b][/quote]
and neither do you...you fucking emo faggot....all your hoodies are fake btw


dont try to act cool and try to get a comeback...and i wasnt criting was i? no so shut the hell up

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1676/faggotsp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kill
12-27-2006, 12:56 AM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 27 2006, 12:15 AM
werd bounce&#33;&#33;&#33;


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/outline.jpg

pretty productive day for me too...
i think dat the second s shouldnt have that huge circular thing buh the rest is tight
al ot better than the last time i said sumthin bout ur pieces
whats up with that dot on the i too???

bouncingsoul
12-27-2006, 01:01 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0479.jpg

kill
12-27-2006, 01:04 AM
chicken scratch

Sluts_r_us
12-27-2006, 01:14 AM
bouncing soul, your handstyles are terrible.

nemzone
12-27-2006, 01:15 AM
please can i get in this argument?? i wana be like the cool kids, and rag on ppl who are equally shit, and make some other weirdo on other side of world think im hard :blink:

get a grip lads, help each other or fuck off

bouncing i cant reli read ur handy lol

uhh, ur shiz is too spread out i think... try make it more chunky n compact.

now i posted a few flicks a few pages back , aand u slags overlooked it, with self gloating bumps. cunts, i want crits&#33; lol

also wats going on with the bsc, battle.. tricks get our entry sorted, n we win by default :lol:

sky 5
12-27-2006, 01:17 AM
Originally posted by PushOner@Dec 26 2006, 08:58 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/IMG_0768.jpg

lemme know whatchu think?
been on this site for a while, just too lazy to make a name. Im good now. been doing graffiti for about 2 years now....so yeah. idk im gunna start posting more and more shit on here, yall gunna know who i am. =D CHyeah. lol
welcome aboard PUSH . . . thats pretty nice man, keepin it simple . . i like how your 2 lil addon tabs are semetricalish (1 on both ends of piece) . . ive never been a big fan of the bubble type fill you got going but you kept it mellow/downplayed . . . do you always sketch your pieces at teh bottom of the page so its cut off and you dont have to do the bottom of the letters and can get away with alil bit more? . . only reason why i ask is cuz when i started sketchin it was easier for me to do better letters if i cut it off at the bottom like you did (helped/easier to paint too) . . . stay up

readin the last couple pages makes me think people didnt get what they asked santa for xmas . . . to cheer you my mom gave me a stapler she got for free from some convention . . .then a rather kick ass bright orange shirt she got from the convention . . she did slip a few 100&#39;s in my pocket when my dad wasnt lookin (after i slyly mentioned i aint paid my power bill in awhile . . all moms are defenseless against teh puppy dog look :D ) . . my bad for postin without a pic . .

Sluts_r_us
12-27-2006, 01:21 AM
lol.

bouncingsoul
12-27-2006, 01:30 AM
Like I said, I have writer&#39;s block, everything I sketch turns to shit today...

Albert Fish
12-27-2006, 01:31 AM
im installing my scanner.... stand by ladies

ShIfTeD
12-27-2006, 01:33 AM
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im all out of drum roles...go on wicho baaad self

MUSASHI
12-27-2006, 02:42 AM
here&#39;s the dealI drew this so uhhh? could have somethin to hate on

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/dullsimple.jpg

and I thought "how gay is it for me to spend the better part of 2 hours
doing simples telling someone simples are dull and boring...
when all I really had to do was nothing ...listen when I was younger than alot of you guys I was painting windows and advertisements for grocery stores and restaurants and who ever needed signs painted...how I did that was my neighbor from the time I was 12 till I was a senior in high school was a sign painter and I would work with him after schooland over the summers ,cuz I showed him I could draw...

so for about five years of my life I was drawing letters ,simple letters
all the damn time...but that was like 17 years ago,longer than alot of yall been alive...so I&#39;m sick to fucking death of simple letters and am doing my best to stay cool ,but the next fucker that tells me to do simples will push me over the edge...

I just post cuz I like to draw,not cuz I&#39;m trying to be a graffiti god or anything like that .but I enjoy drawing and what I draw has meaning to me,regardless of wether or not anyone gets it or not.but don&#39;t tell me what I need to do cuz my life is sorted like a mother fucker and my shit is in order and when any of y&#39;all can surpass me in life then I&#39;ll let you tell me what I need to do to draw better cuz if I aint asking ,aint no need in telling me a goddamn thing ,ya heard me?

nemzone
12-27-2006, 02:52 AM
MUSASHI, HOW MANY FUCKIN TIMES?&#33;? DO SIMPLES&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;



:D jks man, thats fuckin cool :lol: ;)

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/1739/imag0010lo5.jpg
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7452/imag0008dm8.jpg[/img]

unlike u i want crits, cuz the top 1, i will be paintin in no more than 4 hours ....

BohemianBastard
12-27-2006, 03:07 AM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE+Dec 26 2006, 09:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASB_ONE &#064; Dec 26 2006, 09:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
**[/IMG]
fayahhhhhhhhhh
cheers def worked on letters alot after your last crit rele was the kik up the ass i needed, thats if indeed your socrates unda a new name? [/b][/quote]
;)



bouncing soul, your handstyles are terrible.

yep

and musashi, even your simples are horrible :) im really not joking

nemz, i would say what i always say, i really really dislike how you connect teh letters. Because of that most of your pieces look the same to me, so i have a tendency to scroll past your shit :). Dont just sketch your own name, constantly be sketching other words dun. it helps you evolve your style
What i would do (dont listen to me):
disconnect all the letters :)

enigmatic
12-27-2006, 03:09 AM
Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 03:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
Alright something about this peice really stood out to me, in a bad way. Now this is coming from a kid with bipolar disorder and OCD, so bear with me.

I really cant stand the fact his peice isnt symetrical at all, seriously, it would be way nicer if it were even, i mean the left side drops down, its really getting on my nerves, like i actually want to fix it. It would add soooo much for it. Anyways, furthermore, im really not to fond of those letters, especially the S, and the H, Now the H is good but the extension is sortof wack. The little thing on the top of the S would be good... but it needs to be bigger, and placed further to the left over it. The R and the A are the best letters in there. I like those alot, I like the way the T starts but im not feeling the bottom. I know that arrows are hard to master, ive been trying them for ever, and i still cant seem to get them, but your gonna need to work a lot more on your extensions, because some of them are just odd and misplaced. The colouring is great, your a good drawer, but the letters, you already heard my opinion, and the symetry is killing it, as far as color scheme etc. its awesome. Im sure your a respectable writer so your gonna read this and not have a hissy fit like most of the kids that i give advice to. Thank you very much and good night

Btw, you keep this up and youll be sketching dope peices in no time.

nemzone
12-27-2006, 04:19 AM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard+Dec 27 2006, 09:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BohemianBastard &#064; Dec 27 2006, 09:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 09:21 PM

Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
**[/IMG]
fayahhhhhhhhhh
cheers def worked on letters alot after your last crit rele was the kik up the ass i needed, thats if indeed your socrates unda a new name?
;)



bouncing soul, your handstyles are terrible.

yep

and musashi, even your simples are horrible :) im really not joking

nemz, i would say what i always say, i really really dislike how you connect teh letters. Because of that most of your pieces look the same to me, so i have a tendency to scroll past your shit :). Dont just sketch your own name, constantly be sketching other words dun. it helps you evolve your style
What i would do (dont listen to me):
disconnect all the letters :)[/b][/quote]

well il try some words with unconnected letters, but that was the way my style was made up if u look...

http://myspace-791.vo.llnwd.net/01529/19/72/1529322791_l.jpg

i think i like it bcoz, its not the worst style out there, and i know its my own original shit. without the things u dont like i think i would judt be too generic.. but il see how i can make it better

BohemianBastard
12-27-2006, 04:23 AM
dont worry about being generic. anyway you could always figure out another way to connect the letters without losing structure

Truth.
12-27-2006, 04:53 AM
trash that peice is way hot in my opinion. the only thing i dont like is how the T sort of slopes away from the other letters, maybe try bring it up a little?

edit: oh fidnt see enigmatics crits

trashhh
12-27-2006, 04:58 AM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
Damn right :P

But em im up i spose, im not up a lot all over the plcae but in town i hav quite a lot o tags n stickers, a loada tags n bombs in other places... most big writers know about me

and enigmatic, i really know the piece isnt that good, honestly i like my S and H but i think my A is shit, and yea the arrows and bottom of T are pretty bad. The fact is im an idiot cos i didnt do a sketch for that or even draw it on the canvas first, i did a black to blue fade then freestyled it with a paint pen, which was a bit stupid

thanks tho, especially for the guys bumping my piece like 1000 times :D

2KoS
12-27-2006, 06:29 AM
Originally posted by trashhh+Dec 27 2006, 05:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Dec 27 2006, 05:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
Damn right :P

But em im up i spose, im not up a lot all over the plcae but in town i hav quite a lot o tags n stickers, a loada tags n bombs in other places... most big writers know about me

and enigmatic, i really know the piece isnt that good, honestly i like my S and H but i think my A is shit, and yea the arrows and bottom of T are pretty bad. The fact is im an idiot cos i didnt do a sketch for that or even draw it on the canvas first, i did a black to blue fade then freestyled it with a paint pen, which was a bit stupid

thanks tho, especially for the guys bumping my piece like 1000 times :D [/b][/quote]
Yeah I&#39;m gonna be honest, I&#39;m proper feeling that piece, especially the colour scheme, and dont really agree with most of what enigmatic has said (&#39;slanting&#39; :rolleyes: ), but the only thing I do think you should change as you&#39;ve said, is your A.

You thought or tried using a capital A?

whahappen?
12-27-2006, 07:18 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Dec 27 2006, 01:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Dec 27 2006, 01:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 12:24 AM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5038/untitledra4.png
new page [/b][/quote]
....

trash and nemz those both look really good

ras
12-27-2006, 07:28 AM
Musashi...That peice is funny...hahaha..clean aswell..

i dunno how u bump one sentence without bumbing other but wat Shited said was fucking sooo funny.. " shut up..emo ass faggot...all you hoodies aree fake " LMFAO...

whappen....you know waht...get a clean peice of lined paper and draw that filling the whooooole page... ;)

Sumoe
12-27-2006, 10:22 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2069/dsc0179wq7.jpg
crits? don&#39;t mind my weak ass tag.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3977/dsc0180gt2.jpg
first attempt at a throwie, again don&#39;t mind the shitty tag.

Bazer
12-27-2006, 10:46 AM
alright..i hope im progressing.. what do u jerks think? :(

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/RECO0255.jpg

Copieright
12-27-2006, 10:51 AM
crits please


http://www.image-share.net/image/7600/27-12-06_1743.jpg
http://www.image-share.net/image/7600/08-11-06_1934.jpg
http://www.image-share.net/image/7600/08-11-06_1730.jpg

hungr
12-27-2006, 10:52 AM
i dont even know if u can c this one i was ripped and outlined it in blue pen so when i flicked it it blends with the forcefield o_O o ya its near btw brothers account

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/feefw.jpg

Bazer
12-27-2006, 11:04 AM
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Dec 27 2006, 11:46 AM
alright..i hope im progressing.. what do u jerks think? :(

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/RECO0255.jpg
wtf i didn&#39;t post to get no crits. what do u jerks think?? i really dont care i just wanna know.

ras
12-27-2006, 11:11 AM
your the jerk...you expect people to give you crits without giving the people above you any and calling us all jerks.....and wtp in bumping your own shit on the same page...now im going to give crits..

Hngr...kinda sloppy man..

sumoe...not your best shit...wat you oabout the wack tag....i like the tag

Bazer
12-27-2006, 11:18 AM
what a cry baby. i was just messin dude. i dont give a shit about wat people in this thread think. its just toys giving toys help. seems pointless to me. thats why i never post any of my shit here son. its a bad idea.

ras
12-27-2006, 11:20 AM
then why the fuck ask for crits and bump it...andyeah that sis true...toys giving toys help..

PushOner
12-27-2006, 11:40 AM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0023.jpg

i had a dream about this one. i woke up, and started drawing. =D graf=life.

shamee1991
12-27-2006, 01:17 PM
umm...looks ok...push the letter together and work on that S...

ras
12-27-2006, 01:22 PM
Pushr...lose the extension on the P...it looks like a lil I

sumthing with a karak...the scanner made the light brown skin tone on the karak look green :(

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/erigrwre.jpg

Crits and comments plase...thanks ;)

Blix
12-27-2006, 01:27 PM
ras i hate ur shit you always gotta have a charac in the middle JUST FINISH THE DAMN THING WITH LETTERS

Sumoe
12-27-2006, 01:28 PM
lovin the character, letters not so much and take away the arrows, still don&#39;t really like your letters tho.

ras
12-27-2006, 01:37 PM
Thanks Sumoe.. ;)

Blix....Post up son &#33;&#33; ...i dont give a fuck what you think... :)

shamee1991
12-27-2006, 02:01 PM
u fucked it up ur character it was actually gd. dont up spifs in it...

trashhh
12-27-2006, 02:14 PM
Originally posted by 2KoS+Dec 27 2006, 07:29 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (2KoS @ Dec 27 2006, 07:29 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 27 2006, 05:58 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
Damn right :P

But em im up i spose, im not up a lot all over the plcae but in town i hav quite a lot o tags n stickers, a loada tags n bombs in other places... most big writers know about me

and enigmatic, i really know the piece isnt that good, honestly i like my S and H but i think my A is shit, and yea the arrows and bottom of T are pretty bad. The fact is im an idiot cos i didnt do a sketch for that or even draw it on the canvas first, i did a black to blue fade then freestyled it with a paint pen, which was a bit stupid

thanks tho, especially for the guys bumping my piece like 1000 times :D
Yeah I&#39;m gonna be honest, I&#39;m proper feeling that piece, especially the colour scheme, and dont really agree with most of what enigmatic has said (&#39;slanting&#39; :rolleyes: ), but the only thing I do think you should change as you&#39;ve said, is your A.

You thought or tried using a capital A? [/b][/quote]
yea i cant do them as well as small a&#39;s.. not that that small a is good as ive said before it was just a complete freestyle

meetermaid
12-27-2006, 02:22 PM
got a webcam for xmas
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9780/picture2zm2.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7341/picture18qv9.jpg
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2503/picture17xr7.jpg
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7951/picture19yk8.jpg

Snapple
12-27-2006, 02:32 PM
shitty but w/e...wish i never did the arrows

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3963/dscn1375ue4.jpg

shamee1991
12-27-2006, 02:35 PM
u reali need to know ur stuctures on the S and A cuz it aint workin

meetermaid
12-27-2006, 02:38 PM
snapple, it&#39;s a nice style, just refine it a bit. definitely get rid of the little extension bar thing on the bottom of the s, it looks retarded. keep working at it.

Sumoe
12-27-2006, 03:07 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Dec 27 2006, 11:22 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2069/dsc0179wq7.jpg
crits? don&#39;t mind my weak ass tag.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3977/dsc0180gt2.jpg
first attempt at a throwie, again don&#39;t mind the shitty tag.
BUMP&#33;&#33;&#33;

MEETER-like the throwie like ur style.

Snapple- work on the S and A like shamee said.

HazeAmaze
12-27-2006, 03:17 PM
honestly i think your word forms are great, i dont think there is really anything wrong with it, when you get more comfortable with the letters, you can style them for some better flow and shit

good job overall, i like your throwie too

afek
12-27-2006, 03:25 PM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 27 2006, 02:37 PM
Thanks Sumoe.. ;)

Blix....Post up son &#33;&#33; ...i dont give a fuck what you think... :)
ras stop giving crits

you dont know what your talkin about

start fucking simple how many times does everyone have to tell you

CoKKeYONe
12-27-2006, 03:40 PM
nice sketch Sumoe
but i don&#39;t like that throw up much ;)

Chop Logic
12-27-2006, 03:48 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/desire.jpg

Crits please, thanks. I&#39;m really trying to improve, been doing simples since as long as I can remember. (I know this isnt simple)

Sumoe
12-27-2006, 03:51 PM
the first E after the D is way too small, work on your letter structure a bit and it&#39;s a good start and you should continue to do simples, not that bad tho.

meetermaid
12-27-2006, 03:52 PM
chop, get rid of the arrows and the heart, and make the s more pointed and square to fit the style of all the other letters. get rid of the extensions on the tops of the Es cause they&#39;re gross, and the i looks more like a t..

whahappen?
12-27-2006, 04:11 PM
chop just get rid of the extensions you have a nice style going though i could tell it was you without looking at the username
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6730/gjf9.png

NiN
12-27-2006, 04:49 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87/Flexx154/Canada.jpg
sketch for fun

-DaNnY-
12-27-2006, 04:55 PM
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004dewa-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image005-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image001-3.jpg



just want sum crits plz? tht 1 with the crappy arrows everywhere jus ignore n cldnt be arsed to colour it in cos its reli going nowhere lol so jus a few crits plz

addicted
12-27-2006, 05:03 PM
I like them all but with all of the ones that sa "reak" you might wanna define your "k" coz it kinda looks like a deformed "h" to me ...

sank one
12-27-2006, 05:24 PM
danny i think you should add more arrows

kustem
12-27-2006, 05:30 PM
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Dec 27 2006, 12:18 PM
what a cry baby. i was just messin dude. i dont give a shit about wat people in this thread think. its just toys giving toys help. seems pointless to me. thats why i never post any of my shit here son. its a bad idea.
if its pointless and you don&#39;t care what the people in here think then why post your piece here and then re-post 20 mins later whining about not getting crits?

you posting here seems pretty pointless if you think that.

go and post in the advanced thread.



anyway..

i&#39;m not really feeling all of the arrows in those pieces danny.


snapple - the piece is ok, bu as peeps are saying, the structure is key, and your S doesn&#39;t look right. keep at it tho.

oh and snapple, you didnt play tribes by any chance did you? An old PC Game..

kustem
12-27-2006, 05:47 PM
posted twice, my bad.

-DaNnY-
12-27-2006, 05:53 PM
well cheers for crits guys an yer i know i hate them arrows now lol i havent been into graff vry long bout a month or two bt i gotta admit lookin back on it now those arrows are shit think i jus need to tone them down a bit

MUSASHI
12-27-2006, 05:53 PM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 27 2006, 04:07 AM


and musashi, even your simples are horrible :) im really not joking


psst. simpleton...hey, let me fill you in on a secret..since you seem to be completeley deficient in the realms of the OBVIOUS&#33;&#33;&#33; they were horrible on purpose and it was a joke...now for those not impared as thee, thou bastard of bohemia...I like setting the precedence for my self...IE meaning fashioning things never fashioned prior to... However,if you want simples I can hook you up "G" ;)

kustem
12-27-2006, 06:01 PM
Originally posted by &#045;DaNnY&#045;@Dec 27 2006, 06:53 PM
well cheers for crits guys an yer i know i hate them arrows now lol i havent been into graff vry long bout a month or two bt i gotta admit lookin back on it now those arrows are shit think i jus need to tone them down a bit
well, they aren&#39;t shit, no need to put your work down.. but your right when you say you need to tone them down. Its probably best if you work on simple letter structure before adding arrows and addons etc, and then from there other things will come.

Truth.
12-27-2006, 06:21 PM
hmm i dont think i like this. i will draw again, in the meantime, any crits? its basically my first time doing fancy fills and outlines and whatnot.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/P1262968.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/DEC28SKETCH.jpg

kaweJFK
12-27-2006, 06:34 PM
truth - not bad, that style is fine. Now try to do a style with fater leters if you know what i mean thats what i feel anyway,

-DaNnY- - try and do stuff more WITHOUT ARROWS, like Truth&#33;&#33; but you look like not a bad drawer, If YoU gEt Me&#33;

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061118/13/0/2/5/0251ae243d0ea8de6e3055fc2a8ed076200611180_full.jpg

i drew my dog...

whahappen?
12-27-2006, 06:38 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 05:11 PM
chop just get rid of the extensions you have a nice style going though i could tell it was you without looking at the username
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6730/gjf9.png
new page

enigmatic
12-27-2006, 07:34 PM
I wish i could draw my dog... Thats good.

Truth, looks good, your coming back&#33;

and as for me. i made a dope background, then was gonna do a peice, but couldnmt manage to draw on the canvas, so said screw it and tagged it with a kiwi mop.

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6842/1001464bk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

-DaNnY-
12-27-2006, 07:41 PM
i like tht background and the tag looks pretty kl aswel, nice1, wot u use to do ur background with??

Truth.
12-27-2006, 07:46 PM
the background is so hot, just fix the A man, it looks like a 2.

ternoner
12-27-2006, 07:53 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/HPIM1384.jpg

addicted
12-27-2006, 08:01 PM
^^ ternoner, i like that&#33; its lookin good&#33; maybe make the t a bit bigger, so the bottom gets to the same line as the legs of the R, and maybe make the top part of the T bigger, then clean it up, colour it and it&#39;ll look even hotter.

addicted
12-27-2006, 08:04 PM
Originally posted by Truth.@Dec 27 2006, 07:21 PM
hmm i dont think i like this. i will draw again, in the meantime, any crits? its basically my first time doing fancy fills and outlines and whatnot.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/P1262968.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/DEC28SKETCH.jpg
I absolutely love it man&#33; I love the 3d&#33; HOT. And BTW, incase you didnt know, I am Lachlan001 of skaters cafe. :P . Anyway, keep it up.

SORRY FOR DOUBLE POST GUYS.

meetermaid
12-27-2006, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by meetermaid@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 PM
got a webcam for xmas
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9780/picture2zm2.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7341/picture18qv9.jpg
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2503/picture17xr7.jpg
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7951/picture19yk8.jpg
no one wants to critique my shit? :(

addicted
12-27-2006, 08:24 PM
^^ Someone been watching to many pornos :P. JK, Those last handstyles are pretty good, and so is the throwup. All the rest I dont like. With the sex in the city one, clean it up, and make all your letters the same size and width and fix the E and M, they are seriously fucked up in my opinion ...

meetermaid
12-27-2006, 08:27 PM
haha yeah, the sex in the city one was quick and durrty.. i was too lazy to sit down and make it all nice and perfect so it&#39;s messy, but yeah, i don&#39;t really like it, but i do wanna know what people think of the letters.. they don&#39;t fit together too well but as letters how are they?

minesweep
12-27-2006, 08:32 PM
meet feelin the throw style

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/45/dscn0357vy1.jpg

addicted
12-27-2006, 08:34 PM
meeter - as letters the last 3 letters (e,t,o) are pretty good, but i dont like the M,E. They look shit coz they arent the same size (width-wise) - Make all the letters the same size, width, and tidy it up, fill it and it&#39;ll be dope.

minesweep - OPIU? I like it, its looking good. Give it some fill and 3d/shadow and it will be looking dope.

whahappen?
12-27-2006, 08:36 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Dec 27 2006, 07:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Dec 27 2006, 07:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 05:11 PM
chop just get rid of the extensions you have a nice style going though i could tell it was you without looking at the username
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6730/gjf9.png
new page [/b][/quote]
yea....

meetermaid
12-27-2006, 08:39 PM
k, thanks addicted. whahappen, the s is a lil wierd, the bottom of it makes me think of a smurf, i dunno why :S but otherwise it&#39;s pretty good. i think stretch out the bottom of the s more, like make it go to the left more and it&#39;ll look better.

minesweep
12-27-2006, 08:39 PM
Originally posted by addicted@Dec 27 2006, 09:34 PM
meeter - as letters the last 3 letters (e,t,o) are pretty good, but i dont like the M,E. They look shit coz they arent the same size (width-wise) - Make all the letters the same size, width, and tidy it up, fill it and it&#39;ll be dope.

minesweep - OPIU? I like it, its looking good. Give it some fill and 3d/shadow and it will be looking dope.
says delv, but i got an idea on what to work on now, thanks

jerm_mtl
12-27-2006, 08:41 PM
Originally posted by Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G+Dec 26 2006, 11:10 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G &#064; Dec 26 2006, 11:10 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G@Dec 25 2006, 04:46 PM
some 5 minute ugly ass shit.
crizzle?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumsimp.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumthro.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/SEthroo.jpg
bump? [/b][/quote]
i you know its ugly then why do you post it ? And what the fuck is crizzle. In modern times we use the term crits or critisizm.

addicted
12-27-2006, 08:42 PM
minesweep - if it says Delv, you might wanna make the D more like a D coz it looks kinda like a O, make the bottom of the E longer, looks like a P, make the L a capital L, and the V is good. Just give it some fill and 3d/shadow and it will look hot.

Whahappen - I LOVE that throwy, give it a fill and shadow, it&#39;ll look absolutely SICKEST. B)

jerm_mtl
12-27-2006, 08:43 PM
Originally posted by &#045;DaNnY&#045;@Dec 27 2006, 05:55 PM
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004dewa-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image005-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image001-3.jpg



just want sum crits plz? tht 1 with the crappy arrows everywhere jus ignore n cldnt be arsed to colour it in cos its reli going nowhere lol so jus a few crits plz
you abuse of life.

lose the arrows

PushOner
12-27-2006, 09:10 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/no.jpg
blackbook inside cover.
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0073.jpg
some abstract shit i love doing once in a while =D
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0071.jpg
New tag/Old Tag
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0078.jpg
HandStylez...


CRITs...<=

ternoner
12-27-2006, 09:17 PM
like the hands push and meetermaid

ThickGravy
12-27-2006, 09:35 PM
Tried my own style, I just dont like the t.


Must.
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o59/musterdoner/Must.jpg

Z FUSE
12-27-2006, 09:58 PM
the S i think needs some work^

my friend wanted crits on this simple, i think it sucks but he wanted crits form better people..
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1922/pix0011mj4.jpg

kill
12-27-2006, 10:02 PM
well i think he should try a lil harder and then get crits...




ruske pride&#33;&#33;

addicted
12-27-2006, 10:08 PM
Push - absolutely LOVING your handstyles, keep it up, they are awesome.

Thickgravy - your style is pretty hot, but it needs work. The M and the U are alright, but the S and the T need quite alot of work. Dont get discouraged, making your own style takes months/years.

Z fuse - That throwy is ALRIGHT but it needs alot of work. Tell your mate if thats some of his best work, he needs to ditch the shadow/3d and start with simple&reg; bubble letters. Tell him all he needs to do is take the letters from his keyboard, inflate them, curve them, fill them. And then work up from there.

Hope I might have helped you out ...

~addicted

Z FUSE
12-27-2006, 10:25 PM
thanks addicted, and kill, i&#39;ll let him know

Ruskie PRIDE&#33;&#33;&#33;

Fosale!
12-27-2006, 10:27 PM
Originally posted by addicted+Dec 27 2006, 09:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (addicted @ Dec 27 2006, 09:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Truth.@Dec 27 2006, 07:21 PM
hmm i dont think i like this. i will draw again, in the meantime, any crits? its basically my first time doing fancy fills and outlines and whatnot.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/P1262968.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/DEC28SKETCH.jpg
I absolutely love it man&#33; I love the 3d&#33; HOT. And BTW, incase you didnt know, I am Lachlan001 of skaters cafe. :P . Anyway, keep it up.

SORRY FOR DOUBLE POST GUYS. [/b][/quote]
truth, i love how much you have improved.
i wish i was as dedicated as you.



ill have some flicks up tonight.
:0)

sky 5
12-27-2006, 10:44 PM
MUST - i like the way you draw your lines . . letters need some TLC in my opinion, not sure if you meant to have your letters progreesively get bigger . . . the basic letter structure of your T is not dominant/clear enough to have the huge addon you got (eye doesnt see letter at first glance b/c addon disguises/confuses the T) . . . i wont suggest going to simples but maybe try and define your letters alil better . . . this is just an opinion from some random anonymous cat on the internet who only looked at your sketch for 10 secs

anyone wanna do a quick exchange now? pleeeease

MAERone
12-27-2006, 10:59 PM
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8775/photo122206003rz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1722/photo122006006sh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/8136/photo122006008ff5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3408/photo122006010qh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9541/photo122006011yf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

addicted
12-27-2006, 10:59 PM
^^ I agree ... the T is kinda .... weird .... :P

Fosale!
12-27-2006, 11:05 PM
flicks&#33;
me and funeral went to a halo2 tournment and had pizza?
yeps.
pizza box freebies.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/funeral.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/fune.jpg
^by funeral

by me.

sticker after competition
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebk-2.jpg
christmas oneliner, the T and A ruin it.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/chistmas.jpg
just an S, fucking around with teeth.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/anS.jpg
my entry i started for the bsc battle but didnt finish. i kno the 3d is fuked
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/christ.jpg

TricksForKids
12-27-2006, 11:31 PM
im liking that sticker^

sky ill exchange with you but i got work everyday this week pretty much so i dunno how long till take me
holla back if interested

one love

Stonk
12-27-2006, 11:31 PM
fosale - for some reason i love that sticker, i think its because i love simple pen sketches on stickers. also i really like the f on funerals throw.

im kinda drunk and decided to sketch some new throws, im problaby gonna hate them tommorow but whatever, do any of them seem decent?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new023.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new024.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new025.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new026.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new027.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new028.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new029.jpg

and my first oneliner attempt

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new030.jpg

Albert Fish
12-27-2006, 11:36 PM
i like the last flick fosale, not feelin anything else really though bud

truth i liked it before the bubbles and fill. a simple forcefield woulda done the trick, fatten your letters a little maybe. otherwise pretty nice

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellsz.jpg

i never post anymore.

addicted
12-27-2006, 11:37 PM
pretty nice throws man, fill em&#33;

uhhh
12-27-2006, 11:51 PM
i like that yells, but i&#39;m a much bigger fan of your sig.
why does everyone have to get new screen names, its really confusing.

Albert Fish
12-27-2006, 11:53 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Dec 28 2006, 12:36 AM
i like the last flick fosale, not feelin anything else really though bud

truth i liked it before the bubbles and fill. a simple forcefield woulda done the trick, fatten your letters a little maybe. otherwise pretty nice

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellsz.jpg

i never post anymore.
bump cuz im fat and greedy

uhhhhh: thanks bruh, i get bored of stuff mad easily and i dont write baper or move kilos ha. so i changed it

crakbaby
12-28-2006, 12:03 AM
what do you think?
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/6655/scan0003qf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-SiC->
12-28-2006, 12:06 AM
i like it i just sketched somtin a lil like that

Albert Fish
12-28-2006, 12:17 AM
dont overlap that much, make the letters more solid than wavy, get rid of that hideous p. the letters need structure theyre a little sloppy

work on the dropshadow

crakbaby
12-28-2006, 12:21 AM
thanks albert , im thinking of dropping that whole indent thing at the top,
ill def take use what you said

enuf.
12-28-2006, 01:16 AM
Yeah what Albert said.

Been awhile, any Suggestons or comments?
http://i10.tinypic.com/49bkk0o.jpg

Skeam
12-28-2006, 01:25 AM
mi not really a fan of that N but the rest looks pretty good mate

Truth.
12-28-2006, 01:25 AM
,mmmmmmmm i like it albert, nice work on that thro

enuf, it looks nice, real clean, the letters cud do with sum work

scope go simpler, start from some simple letters, get them down, then develop them from there.

whahappen?
12-28-2006, 01:29 AM
yellis iv always loved your style....hay guyz&#33; :lol:

Albert Fish
12-28-2006, 01:30 AM
enuf, really like the e, maybe try a lower case n, get rid of the arrow in the u, and dont disconnect the second arm of the f. add some funky colors and a nice forcefield and you got a fresh piece on your hands.

btw thanks truth

Fosale!
12-28-2006, 01:31 AM
Originally posted by Stonk@Dec 28 2006, 12:31 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new030.jpg
only hot one outta the batch u posteed.
this 1liner is hotter than any of the other tosses youve done.
work with this.

Fube
12-28-2006, 01:33 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellsz.jpg

^^^ damn i like this.

did this for the heat throw battle that never happend.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Throws/Heat.jpg

meetermaid
12-28-2006, 01:37 AM
fube, the t is fucking hot. the h is nice but pretty generic, the e&#39;s nice as well, but the a doesn&#39;t look like an a at all, kinda wrecks it. on your handstyle, the extension things look really nice but the letters themselves need a lot of work. save the addons till you have better letters and it&#39;ll be fire.

Fube
12-28-2006, 02:54 AM
:edit:

Vagrant
12-28-2006, 02:57 AM
latest stuff:

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Rant_RedDrips.jpg

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/BlueGreenStars_BlueGreyBars.jpg
The bottom one didnt turn out the way I wanted. those grey bars suck.

Fube
12-28-2006, 03:17 AM
Vagrent: its just common courtsey to crit the one above u before posting something new.

in regaurds to your stuff, your 3d is messed up a bit on the first "rant", and the others with exception of the last are a bit sloppy for my taste. but i can tell your structure gets better as u go along. to me your headed on the right path. just keep going.


meetermaid: i can see what your talkin about but maybe the fact that the a is the only lower case letter kinda throws it off? and the handy, my chestel tip marker ran out so i used a sharpie, and i hate it but yeah, im still workin on it.

ive been tryin like mad to get some structure to my letters but every time i sit down and actually hit the book, something gos wrong or it does not end up like i want it to. its so fuckin frustrating,

for instance, i started this, but then transposed the last letters, its supposed to say "desire". so i just stopped. :angry:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/desire.jpg

also the underline on the tag just made it more gay. so i just quit on it.

d_g
12-28-2006, 04:17 AM
Poed, that throw is nice but the &#39;D&#39; looks waaaaaaaaaay too much like an &#39;O&#39;

Yells, hot shit, I like your style.

Rant, the last one is the best, some potential in it.

Fube, the &#39;lust and &#39;love parts are fucking ace, nice and simple but not too simple. The Desire part is nice too, just that the &#39;d&#39; looks like a &#39;j&#39; and the &#39;i&#39; is kinda camoflauged (sp?)/hidden.

Surprised how this sketch came out cause I was so tired, I know it need work but CC would be cool.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch24.jpg

SKiL
12-28-2006, 04:53 AM
Caset-your throwie came out so clean it almost looks computer generated (if it is then shame shame) but the 3d on the top of the E was off a little

heres mine has a little skil zerk oz1 And TBS on it
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r195/schawnell/toybb.jpg

G - Wahl
12-28-2006, 07:18 AM
Skil, to much random pointless stuff going on, try just one theme for a backround

Caset, your C&#39;s 3d is way off, connect the bottom of the A to the C before you do your 3D.

Fube, all your letters keep getting taller and taller. And im not really feeling how the S goes over the E

Rant, lookin good, try to keep the T behind the N, in my opinion it doesnt look good when you over lap like that..I like the one with the stars, just need to make them all the same size, the A is a bit to skinny and the T is a bit to short

shamee1991
12-28-2006, 07:29 AM
yo dats some nice shit boss...

Albert Fish
12-28-2006, 07:37 AM
... no its not
dont bother with backgrounds until you actually have letters down nicely instead of something resembling 6th grade girl bubble letters and a krylon label.
dont make a crew yet. you dont even have sketching down
and when you do start actualluy painting and you DONT suck, dont call your crew "the bomb squad" cuz thats the corniest crew name ever.
make STRAIGHT simple letters out of bars with dropshadows.

sorry im in a bad mood ha.


fube i like it, drop the bubbles. peace.

ASB_ONE
12-28-2006, 07:45 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Dec 28 2006, 05:17 AM
Poed, that throw is nice but the &#39;D&#39; looks waaaaaaaaaay too much like an &#39;O&#39;

Yells, hot shit, I like your style.

Rant, the last one is the best, some potential in it.

Fube, the &#39;lust and &#39;love parts are fucking ace, nice and simple but not too simple. The Desire part is nice too, just that the &#39;d&#39; looks like a &#39;j&#39; and the &#39;i&#39; is kinda camoflauged (sp?)/hidden.

Surprised how this sketch came out cause I was so tired, I know it need work but CC would be cool.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch24.jpg
lol du just take wat i write and change the last letter to a t?

asem = aset
cases = caset

crazy coincidences.
as for the letters, theyr alright but go from thik to thin real quick and dont flow properly.

skil - props on filling a whole page even if it aint that nice. stay up

shamee1991
12-28-2006, 07:52 AM
na i rate dey it flows and its sick

ASB_ONE
12-28-2006, 08:03 AM
shit boy i aint gettn into an arguement wid you, but anyone wid king in their signiture prolly aint worth listening to anyway, and no i aint battling you.

Sumoe
12-28-2006, 09:05 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Dec 27 2006, 11:22 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2069/dsc0179wq7.jpg
crits? don&#39;t mind my weak ass tag.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3977/dsc0180gt2.jpg
first attempt at a throwie, again don&#39;t mind the shitty tag.
one last bump, prolly have sum new shit up later, crits?

Skil too much shit is going on and wtf is with the krylon can lol, but yeah way too busy.

Caset-don&#39;t really like the A or the E, but it&#39;s pretty good.

G - Wahl
12-28-2006, 09:13 AM
In the first pic your U looks like a W, the S is alot wider then the other letters. I really like the letters thoughm the S + E are bangin. Dont really like the throw, its nice but its just not my taste

G - Wahl
12-28-2006, 09:58 AM
Okay so im always criting people, now somone crit me&#33; Kinda sloppy but whatevs
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture042.jpg

trashhh
12-28-2006, 10:05 AM
does it say zo? the Z is ok but i think the hole should be inside the actual letter, and im not feeling the line-dot-line final, i think itd look better just a solid line

G - Wahl
12-28-2006, 10:12 AM
Yeah it says ZO, whole name is ZO2, I put the 2 as a numeral in the bubble
And yeah, I was just fucking with the forcefeild..
I used Prismas on this one.
Im not really a big fan of Prismas, I actully love my Sharpies.
The only thing I like about the prismas is the dark to light fading with one color ( Look at my fill, blue to whiteish ) But the prismas seem so muich sloppier, Sharpies are eaiser to controll..

Sorry for rambling <_<

trashhh
12-28-2006, 10:14 AM
i agree tho sharpies are amazin
i just outline my sketches in black biro tho.. couldnt be fucked colouring