Blackbooks

[BohemianBastard]

i was just curious, i like to form opinions based on peoples age. For example i know that musashi is a fucking wierdo. Cezr was cool, then he became all touchy and sensitive. Old people are funny. Older than you, yet younger then nemz

[neuk]

Originally posted by neuk@Dec 25 2006, 02:29 AM
nice shit cezr

boo for picture quality.

yay for critz?


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c336/strikerx4/Photo_0013.jpg
sigghh over looked..


critz palease?

[ras]

Okay Bohemian ;)

NEUK...lookn good....dont like the extension on the N but thats a matter of opinion..

just something to test out my new pens.....i need sum lay out paper as this paper sucks in the ink and makes it look splodgy :( ...but there fucking ace markers to blend etc..i recommend them to anyone..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/dsafjioq.jpg

..P.s...i hate the chain on the mexican ese man...and i forgot the lil speeches too..and the bubbles are fucked too .. ah well ;)

Crits and comments please !! ;) thanks

[TricksForKids]

im 17 what does that make me?

neuk way to start out with simples buddy, your U is a cool style but doesnt fit the rest of your style, and you need some work on that E, and the bottom right leg of the K

[BohemianBastard]

that makes you less than 5 months ahead of me

ras - i dont like it
its kinda gay
but i have no idea what you could do to improve it

[uhhh]

im 14, that makes me?

[ras]

yeah i suppose it is gay..but im just gettin the feel for new pens..

uuuuh...that makes you the same age as me

[G - Wahl]

Ras, whats up with the name change?
And are those TouchTwins you're using?

[ras]

im always changing my name..but iv finally come up with a name consiting with the letters i like...Etec and Ete for short ;)

and yeha they are touchtwins...and there amazing !...crnt wait till i get proper proper used to them ! ... i got a 12 set but my parents sed if when ive used them up i can have a bigger set...hopefully the 60A ;) :lol:

[Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G]

some 5 minute ugly ass shit.
crizzle?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumsimp.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumthro.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/SEthroo.jpg

[DESAK]

k on the last throw se lose those x's and make it a striat line not a squigglt one. on the first one get a better u and r. on the second one make the throw on the right the e a little more noticible on the top and the left throw or watever that is its simple good 3d make the letters more constructed i think the word is i cant think of the word but yeaa

--- peace-----

[Apoc]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 25 2006, 01:39 PM
and Cezr...why the hell you posting here :blink: :blink: yours shits the shit !!
he still belongs here... everyone here has a long way to go. The only one who shouldn't be here is sky

[G - Wahl]

Serum - The first colored one is alright, letters are cool, just make them all the same size, then start tweaking them a bit, and make that extension on the top of the S a lil bit shorter

Crits on these?
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9771/picture001lo3.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001lo3.jpg)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4922/picture002sf9.th.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002sf9.jpg)

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0460.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0461.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0462.jpg

"sTWOen" "s2en is sexy" "knewstwo wishes you happy holidays"

[ras]

Originally posted by G - Wahl@Dec 25 2006, 10:07 PM
Serum - The first colored one is alright, letters are cool, just make them all the same size, then start tweaking them a bit, and make that extension on the top of the S a lil bit shorter

Crits on these?
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9771/picture001lo3.th.jpg (http://img141.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001lo3.jpg)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4922/picture002sf9.th.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture002sf9.jpg)
have u painted that throw...and that bottom peice wud make a sick roller !

[sank one]

this isnt the place to talk......

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

Originally posted by NiL+Dec 25 2006, 03:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NiL @ Dec 25 2006, 03:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Baper Moves Kilos. <3@Dec 25 2006, 01:59 AM
cezr your letters are always fire, i wanna see some 3d to compliment it babe. do ittt.
You&#39;re gay aye.. [/b][/quote]
battle me faggotttttttttttttttt till then keep your mouth shut cuz you&#39;re garbage

[C3ZR ONE]

Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)

[NiN]

ignore the stupid line at the bottom
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87/Flexx154/DSC00032.jpg

[Snapple]

how bout this one MUSASHI

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/1456/dscn1328pl0.jpg

[MUSASHI]

oh yeah &#33;&#33;&#33; much better... and you have no problems filling a page,more than I can say for alot of toddlers round here...

[Snapple]

Thanx man&#33;

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by Apoc+Dec 25 2006, 04:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Apoc &#064; Dec 25 2006, 04:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 25 2006, 01:39 PM
and Cezr...why the hell you posting hereÂ* :blink:Â* :blink: yours shits the shit &#33;&#33;
he still belongs here... everyone here has a long way to go. The only one who shouldn&#39;t be here is sky [/b][/quote]
:( kay said i could post in the big boys thread too

lol, no really, we all need to remember were toys, some of us are straight out of the box, others are clawing at the coattails of the greats and just need to sharpen our nails

merry christmas fools

[noam12]

i dunno i just did a 5 min one, nothing special, i need to work on shading lol i cant get a hold on it =&#092;

http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/9199/dosesplatterjz2.jpg

now heres just a differ style

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/5904/dosetagta7.jpg

[Apoc]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Dec 25 2006, 10:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Dec 25 2006, 10:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Apoc@Dec 25 2006, 04:56 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 25 2006, 01:39 PM
and Cezr...why the hell you posting here :blink: :blink: yours shits the shit &#33;&#33;
he still belongs here... everyone here has a long way to go. The only one who shouldn&#39;t be here is sky
:( kay said i could post in the big boys thread too

lol, no really, we all need to remember were toys, some of us are straight out of the box, others are clawing at the coattails of the greats and just need to sharpen our nails

merry christmas fools [/b][/quote]
word to that. Merry christmas, hope you all get lots of pussy/dick or whatever the fuck you people like, and drink a shitload. Oh yeah and hang out with your families too. Just don&#39;t get molested by uncle ronnie again.

[uhhh]

no uncle ronnie, no, not again. :lol:

i almost have a drawing done, ill edit it in in a few.

[Fube]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Throws/Astro.jpg

tryin out a name. probable not new but wish for crits all the same.

[noam12]

looks nice, what markers?

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 24 2006, 02:41 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ms12.jpg
mush no offence but that i on the very nd looks hardcore like a double headed penis ^^ <3 u



Nos

[Fube]

Originally posted by noam12@Dec 25 2006, 11:49 PM
looks nice, what markers?

silver sharpie, black marks-a-lot, blue highlighter.

[amuin-gcs]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****...

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs+Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (amuin-gcs @ Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****... [/b][/quote]
you ever talk to cezr like that again dude ill blast your ass in a war so STFU

[noam12]

lol my metallic makes me orgasm :rolleyes:

[MUSASHI]

Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 25 2006, 11:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 25 2006, 11:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MUSASHI@Dec 24 2006, 02:41 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ms12.jpg
mush no offence but that i on the very nd looks hardcore like a double headed penis ^^ <3 u



Nos [/b][/quote]
this one was for all the pervs in our viewing audience...see how many sexual inuendos you can find I put about 6 just for the ladies...

[Fube]

^^^ i see another penis in the e.

[noam12]

lol the s looks like a cam....nvm

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 25 2006, 11:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 25 2006, 11:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs@Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****...
you ever talk to cezr like that again dude ill blast your ass in a war so STFU [/b][/quote]
Haha, they&#39;re in the same crew I&#39;m pretty sure... Musashi I spot a head on the bottom right of the E... Yes that kind of head

Shit from like last week... Started outlining and then got lazy

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0468.jpg

[Baper Moves Kilos. <3]

wow bottom sketch hot fire favorite bouncy sketch put some 3d color color i hate you


whats wrong with drawing penises in ya sketches haaaaaaaaaa

[uhhh]

knews-meh.

gahhh fuck.
wildstyles harddd.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-028S.jpg
crits on this?
says rtk..

[sank one]

i think you should make the upper legs of the k bigger, and maybe drop the lower right leg of the k down a bit. im still real toy but just my 2 cents :P

[noam12]

http://http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/3500/doseslantyxi1.jpg

copyed fubes style so credit to him



got idea from bouncingsoul so credit to him alsohttp://http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/1715/doseweirdom0.jpg

[noam12]

why arent my pics coming up..?

[Blix]

cause you bite?

[noam12]

g thanks, thats loads helpfull <_<

[minesweep]

its not a bite, he didnt claim it as his own so stop bein a dick

and it&#39;s probably your image hosting, or you put the link in wrong or something like that

[yung-wun]

finally got some more shit.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings028.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings027.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings022.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings014.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings012.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings008.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e390/bluielover/drawings007.jpg

[myl]

letters are whack, characs are fresh as fuck

[Sade_RL]

<center>
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b264/zackman108/RLBOYO.jpg


</center>

My First Post, Also - Don&#39;t hate on it..

I just like started to Kinda get a wildstyle or, Abstract style down,
and I only had 2 pencil&#39;s and a Little felt marker.

Tip Me.

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Dec 26 2006, 12:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ Dec 26 2006, 12:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Nosypainter@Dec 25 2006, 11:57 PM

Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs@Dec 25 2006, 11:55 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Dec 25 2006, 09:09 PM
Way too much talking in here guys... This is a pic and crit thread. I just deleted a full page of chit chat and there&#39;s still a bunch more, but I&#39;d rather spend christmas with the fam, so it&#39;ll have to wait.


But hey, Merry Christmas. ;)
shut up. ur a grumpy old man.




Gwa Country Shit&#33;

****...
you ever talk to cezr like that again dude ill blast your ass in a war so STFU
Haha, they&#39;re in the same crew I&#39;m pretty sure... Musashi I spot a head on the bottom right of the E... Yes that kind of head

Shit from like last week... Started outlining and then got lazy

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0468.jpg [/b][/quote]
i would hope so that got my head hott lol .....

[ras]

to me the N lookes like a lowercase m...

[Truth.]

first one is a sticker i plan on putting up tonight, second is a mates deck, what do u think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/daffy.jpg

[shamee1991]

look kool...like dem both...

[nemzone]

i like em 2, but it must fuck up ur paint pens nibs on the griptape??

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7439/imag0005th3.jpg

il get a better flick wen my cam gets more batts

[MUSASHI]

I like that steezo nemzr

[noam12]

i dunno a quick one, i need to work on shading (omg i got it to work :lol: )



http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/1363/dosesplatterng3.jpg

no more bite off...

[G - Wahl]

Nemz - Lovin your style as always..

Noam - Maybe its just my PC but I can hardly see that picture..But from the looks of it, make your D the same size as the rest of the letters..

Messing around with Paint
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture009.jpg

[noam12]

lol yea i have a freqeunt problem with shading and letters being the same size

[ras]

Noam....are you serious...Idea of fube..Bite off fube morelike..its nearly the same...same colours and everything...

ZO...some how i think if you tweak that O it could turn out into a sick E..then u could write Ze..i dunno...great shit tho...bout time u painted it...and are you gunna do that lime green roller ?

[G - Wahl]

ZE is already a writer
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgra...p?artist_id=471 (http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php?artist_id=471)
And I hate E&#39;s
I love my name as of now, ZOTwo ( Sounds like CO2, you know, the gas.. ) And I love the letters.

Thanks for the props
;)

And Ill do that green roller once I stop being lazy. Youll get flix soon I promise ha

[ASB_ONE]

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0175_000.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Lookin nice Cases, love that style.

[Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G]

Originally posted by Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G@Dec 25 2006, 04:46 PM
some 5 minute ugly ass shit.
crizzle?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumsimp.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumthro.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/SEthroo.jpg
bump?

[nemzone]

u can bump the day u start fuckin crittin ppls work b4 u post / bump. cunt.

cases, i like the piece, just not the A. not feelin anythin else there either, but the piece has a nice flare 2 it

[Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G]

i believe ihave critted peoples work. including yours atleast once on the other acc.

[nemzone]

possibly, but im talkin bout u just overlooked cases without sayin a word... i hate to chit chat without flicks, but i critted cases. to crit yours i duno what to say really, ur on the right tracks doin simples... but just need to work on cleanin it up, and stat doin simples and throws til u get good.

[G - Wahl]

Nemz - I love your work man, you ever paint any of that? All we have seen of your painted stuff is that one sprayed drippy tag and those two blue throws you did&#33; Lets see those peices&#33;

[ras]

Cases...i like that one..the A i like best .." show me the money in CASES " :lol:

extremely quick throw..i think i got the feel of them pens now..but i still havent got a layout paper so it still looks a lil splodgy...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/et.jpg

Crits please.. Thanks ;)

[G - Wahl]

I liked your other name better Ras

[ras]

What one...Atec...i chenged bucuz the A&#39;s were giving me problems with the other style i was doin a few weeks back...but i might go back to Atec now as i think with this style i can do alot with the A&#39;s..

[steez_b]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 26 2006, 12:45 PM
Cases...i like that one..the A i like best .." show me the money in CASES " :lol:

extremely quick throw..i think i got the feel of them pens now..but i still havent got a layout paper so it still looks a lil splodgy...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/et.jpg

Crits please.. Thanks ;)
ahh man i love your style every throw I&#39;ve seen from you is too dope. can&#39;t find anythin bad to say about em&#39;


this is the first piece I&#39;ve done using a vanishing point and I like how the 3d turned out, don&#39;t like how I didn&#39;t make the A in proportion though:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_cashmoney_grnline.jpg

then a throw I&#39;m workin on, tryin to keep it simple:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_redscribble_throw.jpg

crits please

[nemzone]

RAS - i dont like it as a throw, make it so u can do it within like 3 mins with paint.

GUY ABOVE - throw is alrite, paintable, no go get sum skill with paint paintin that ;)

paintin this tomoz all dependin on weather, and if my shit comes from illuminarty

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7452/imag0008dm8.jpg

any1 got any reasons y i shudnt paint this? any things i should change first? i rekon the symmetry will be a bitch

[BohemianBastard]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0175_000.jpg
fayahhhhhhhhhh

[MUSASHI]

that bump is coo...

nemz make a grid if yer havin&#39; trouble wit symetry...I&#39;d paint that foteaux&#33;&#33;&#33;

a feeble attempt at 3d and light depth...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/s.jpg

[Linkzone1]

ASB_ONE - sick letters props

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8962/0003662zp4.jpg

[ras]

Okay Nemz and thaks Steez

Link..get a clearer pic mate

[BohemianBastard]

http://i13.tinypic.com/42lgfvk.jpg

bah humbug

[Z FUSE]

that looks pretty good, the pencil makes it a bit harder to see, but after that&#39;s gone it should turn out pretty good.

crits on this anyone..
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/472/tgrwck4.jpg

[nemzone]

love it&#33; paint it now&#33;&#33;&#33; its a lil generic but thats ok. make the sqaure bit on top left of the K the same siz as rest of letters.

paintin this tomoz all dependin on weather, and if my shit comes from illuminarty
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7452/imag0008dm8.jpg
any1 got any reasons y i shudnt paint this? any things i should change first? i rekon the symmetry will be a bitch

[steez_b]

Originally posted by steez_b@Dec 26 2006, 01:58 PM
this is the first piece I&#39;ve done using a vanishing point and I like how the 3d turned out, don&#39;t like how I didn&#39;t make the A in proportion though:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_cashmoney_grnline.jpg

then a throw I&#39;m workin on, tryin to keep it simple:

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/steez_b/meka_redscribble_throw.jpg

crits please
bump


and Musasshi thats far from a feeble attempt man, looks awesome

EDIT: nemz I think it looks dope, go paint it for sure man

and thanks trashhh, the canvas is lookin mint man the piece and handstyle are very nice

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.

[Linkzone1]

Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 03:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
sick ass mo fo

[nemzone]

yeh cuz that bump was relevant <_<

[BohemianBastard]

http://i11.tinypic.com/33v29uh.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/4fyqm88.jpg

bla bla bal
i hate doing fills

[Quigbert]

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri25.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri23.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri22.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri21.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri20.jpg
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri24.jpg

Crits would be greatly appreciated

[Quigbert]

Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 26 2006, 03:52 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/33v29uh.jpg
http://i13.tinypic.com/4fyqm88.jpg

bla bla bal
i hate doing fills
the "MR." on top looks bad

[ras]

^^^ .. waste of space..u shudda just editied your post..

sort out the R&#39;s...they look bad..and the E...make the middle bars of the indent more..other than that there not bad...there kinda sloppy too

[Albert Fish]

deri space your letters better, squish it together a little

[nemzone]

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/1739/imag0010lo5.jpg

[emokid]

nemz, blacknwhite works real well but pics a bit blurry, would look better if it was clearer. TRASH that is so fucking nice i love it

[ras]

Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 08:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
bump cuz its fire..you just have to get those tweaks here and there and you wont be toy anymore

[nemzone]

<_< bullshit&#33; no offence to trash, its nice. but ras u dont no what the fuck ur talkin bout. a few tweaks and he wont be toy anymore? says a toy from the internet. is he up? is he up lots? can he paint well?

[Linkzone1]

Originally posted by nemzone@Dec 26 2006, 05:48 PM
<_< bullshit&#33; no offence to trash, its nice. but ras u dont no what the fuck ur talkin bout. a few tweaks and he wont be toy anymore? says a toy from the internet. is he up? is he up lots? can he paint well?
PROPS&#33;

[ras]

I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...

[minesweep]

even in sketch terms he still has a way to go

[Sumoe]

lovin the black and white shit nemz, pretty dope canvas trash.

[bouncingsoul]

This is all I could come up with today... Fuck

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0472.jpg

[Sumoe]

W is kinda strange lookin, like the S, overall it&#39;s pretty good.

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 26 2006, 02:23 PM
that bump is coo...

nemz make a grid if yer havin&#39; trouble wit symetry...I&#39;d paint that foteaux&#33;&#33;&#33;

a feeble attempt at 3d and light depth...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/s.jpg
nice i like it alot...



Nos

[NiN]

wasnt sure how to do a 8, and this is just practice i know its bad lol
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87/Flexx154/ReL8.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by Nosypainter+Dec 26 2006, 08:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Dec 26 2006, 08:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MUSASHI@Dec 26 2006, 02:23 PM
that bump is coo...

nemz make a grid if yer havin&#39; trouble wit symetry...I&#39;d paint that foteaux&#33;&#33;&#33;

a feeble attempt at 3d and light depth...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/s.jpg
nice i like it alot...



Nos [/b][/quote]
That is definitely my favorite thing I&#39;ve ever seen from you... Do more, do more&#33;

[afek]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
shut-up

[PushOner]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/IMG_0768.jpg

lemme know whatchu think?
been on this site for a while, just too lazy to make a name. Im good now. been doing graffiti for about 2 years now....so yeah. idk im gunna start posting more and more shit on here, yall gunna know who i am. =D CHyeah. lol

[levans]

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/9708/poolphotosfromdecember0lv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



some random shizzle a did in italian a while back sorry if i forgot to rotate them if i did just tilt your head to the side

[levans]

sorry i didnt mean to press send here is some more from italian and from other classes
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/492/poolphotosfromdecember0li9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
other sketch from the same lesson in italian^^^^^
some stuff i did with my new pens
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5668/poolphotosfromdecember0xt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[afek]

edit button dumb ass

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by BohemianBastard+Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BohemianBastard @ Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0175_000.jpg
fayahhhhhhhhhh [/b][/quote]
cheers def worked on letters alot after your last crit rele was the kik up the ass i needed, thats if indeed your socrates unda a new name?

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by PushOner@Dec 26 2006, 08:58 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/IMG_0768.jpg

lemme know whatchu think?
been on this site for a while, just too lazy to make a name. Im good now. been doing graffiti for about 2 years now....so yeah. idk im gunna start posting more and more shit on here, yall gunna know who i am. =D CHyeah. lol
not to bad push although i wish the leters were a bit taller and more teqnique but its all good

[bouncingsoul]

Finally a decent sketch today...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0473.jpg

[Stonk]

Originally posted by ras+Dec 26 2006, 05:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Dec 26 2006, 05:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 08:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
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Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
bump cuz its fire..you just have to get those tweaks here and there and you wont be toy anymore [/b][/quote]
trash again part of your piece drops down to one side, i still say that if you keep everything even it will look way better

[MUSASHI]

werd bounce&#33;&#33;&#33;


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/outline.jpg

pretty productive day for me too...

[levans]

nice musashi i cant believe how much you sketch i swear there is 1 of your pieces on each page..

[uhhh]

am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.

[whahappen?]

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5038/untitledra4.png

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
True, most of his stuff is pretty bad (no offense man)... You need to get letter structure down and you&#39;d be sick as all hell... Your technique is great but your raw letters are horrible...

...And just so I&#39;m not flickless
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0428.jpg

[uhhh]

oh no&#33;
you drew a notebook that might be for school&#33;
them evil police men are gonna arrest you&#33;
put it in the paper shredder, that way when the cops go on a random raid they wont find your notebook that says your awesome graffiti tagger name on it&#33;&#33;1&#33;111&#33;&#33;1&#33;

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk

[NiN]

^^ i was just bout to say that, bouncingsoul those letters are almost as bad as mine

[uhhh]

puppys and ice cream.
puppys and ice cream.
puppys and ice cream.

[TricksForKids]

god, grow up please all of you, being toys at graff doesnt mean we all have to be toys when we talk to each other, were all in the same boat trying to help each other out, so chill

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 12:24 AM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5038/untitledra4.png
new page

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk [/b][/quote]
neither do you.

[levans]

seriously guys what tricks said just chill amd if you wanna start beef take it to pm`s

[Blix]

all of us are in the toys thread what the heellll

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk
neither do you. [/b][/quote]
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0478.jpg

[Blix]

whoa whoa back up dont prove his point

[uhhh]

im sorry for the beefy post, ill edit it out in a minute.

but heres a simple...
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-029S.jpg

and a not so simple, with a horrrible k..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-030S.jpg
some people said i should go back to my old style, so i tried but with a little wave of the new style... hence the horrible k.

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; &#064; Dec 27 2006, 01:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Dec 27 2006, 12:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 AM
am i the only one who really doesnt like musa&#39;s stuff?

i really think you need to do simples, like really bad, you did 6 months ago and now your doing the sameeee style and i still think it looks really bad and uneven and all that.
and i really think you have no room to talk
neither do you. [/b][/quote]
and neither do you...you fucking emo faggot....all your hoodies are fake btw


dont try to act cool and try to get a comeback...and i wasnt criting was i? no so shut the hell up

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1676/faggotsp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[kill]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 27 2006, 12:15 AM
werd bounce&#33;&#33;&#33;


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/outline.jpg

pretty productive day for me too...
i think dat the second s shouldnt have that huge circular thing buh the rest is tight
al ot better than the last time i said sumthin bout ur pieces
whats up with that dot on the i too???

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0479.jpg

[kill]

chicken scratch

[Sluts_r_us]

bouncing soul, your handstyles are terrible.

[nemzone]

please can i get in this argument?? i wana be like the cool kids, and rag on ppl who are equally shit, and make some other weirdo on other side of world think im hard :blink:

get a grip lads, help each other or fuck off

bouncing i cant reli read ur handy lol

uhh, ur shiz is too spread out i think... try make it more chunky n compact.

now i posted a few flicks a few pages back , aand u slags overlooked it, with self gloating bumps. cunts, i want crits&#33; lol

also wats going on with the bsc, battle.. tricks get our entry sorted, n we win by default :lol:

[sky 5]

Originally posted by PushOner@Dec 26 2006, 08:58 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/IMG_0768.jpg

lemme know whatchu think?
been on this site for a while, just too lazy to make a name. Im good now. been doing graffiti for about 2 years now....so yeah. idk im gunna start posting more and more shit on here, yall gunna know who i am. =D CHyeah. lol
welcome aboard PUSH . . . thats pretty nice man, keepin it simple . . i like how your 2 lil addon tabs are semetricalish (1 on both ends of piece) . . ive never been a big fan of the bubble type fill you got going but you kept it mellow/downplayed . . . do you always sketch your pieces at teh bottom of the page so its cut off and you dont have to do the bottom of the letters and can get away with alil bit more? . . only reason why i ask is cuz when i started sketchin it was easier for me to do better letters if i cut it off at the bottom like you did (helped/easier to paint too) . . . stay up

readin the last couple pages makes me think people didnt get what they asked santa for xmas . . . to cheer you my mom gave me a stapler she got for free from some convention . . .then a rather kick ass bright orange shirt she got from the convention . . she did slip a few 100&#39;s in my pocket when my dad wasnt lookin (after i slyly mentioned i aint paid my power bill in awhile . . all moms are defenseless against teh puppy dog look :D ) . . my bad for postin without a pic . .

[Sluts_r_us]

lol.

[bouncingsoul]

Like I said, I have writer&#39;s block, everything I sketch turns to shit today...

[Albert Fish]

im installing my scanner.... stand by ladies

[ShIfTeD]

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im all out of drum roles...go on wicho baaad self

[MUSASHI]

here&#39;s the dealI drew this so uhhh? could have somethin to hate on

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/dullsimple.jpg

and I thought "how gay is it for me to spend the better part of 2 hours
doing simples telling someone simples are dull and boring...
when all I really had to do was nothing ...listen when I was younger than alot of you guys I was painting windows and advertisements for grocery stores and restaurants and who ever needed signs painted...how I did that was my neighbor from the time I was 12 till I was a senior in high school was a sign painter and I would work with him after schooland over the summers ,cuz I showed him I could draw...

so for about five years of my life I was drawing letters ,simple letters
all the damn time...but that was like 17 years ago,longer than alot of yall been alive...so I&#39;m sick to fucking death of simple letters and am doing my best to stay cool ,but the next fucker that tells me to do simples will push me over the edge...

I just post cuz I like to draw,not cuz I&#39;m trying to be a graffiti god or anything like that .but I enjoy drawing and what I draw has meaning to me,regardless of wether or not anyone gets it or not.but don&#39;t tell me what I need to do cuz my life is sorted like a mother fucker and my shit is in order and when any of y&#39;all can surpass me in life then I&#39;ll let you tell me what I need to do to draw better cuz if I aint asking ,aint no need in telling me a goddamn thing ,ya heard me?

[nemzone]

MUSASHI, HOW MANY FUCKIN TIMES?&#33;? DO SIMPLES&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;



:D jks man, thats fuckin cool :lol: ;)

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/1739/imag0010lo5.jpg
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7452/imag0008dm8.jpg[/img]

unlike u i want crits, cuz the top 1, i will be paintin in no more than 4 hours ....

[BohemianBastard]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE+Dec 26 2006, 09:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASB_ONE &#064; Dec 26 2006, 09:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
**[/IMG]
fayahhhhhhhhhh
cheers def worked on letters alot after your last crit rele was the kik up the ass i needed, thats if indeed your socrates unda a new name? [/b][/quote]
;)



bouncing soul, your handstyles are terrible.

yep

and musashi, even your simples are horrible :) im really not joking

nemz, i would say what i always say, i really really dislike how you connect teh letters. Because of that most of your pieces look the same to me, so i have a tendency to scroll past your shit :). Dont just sketch your own name, constantly be sketching other words dun. it helps you evolve your style
What i would do (dont listen to me):
disconnect all the letters :)

[enigmatic]

Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 26 2006, 03:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40728.jpg
canvas

Meka the first piece looks nice i just think the middle bit of the M should be the thinnest not the thickest, but its in proportion and loooks good.
Alright something about this peice really stood out to me, in a bad way. Now this is coming from a kid with bipolar disorder and OCD, so bear with me.

I really cant stand the fact his peice isnt symetrical at all, seriously, it would be way nicer if it were even, i mean the left side drops down, its really getting on my nerves, like i actually want to fix it. It would add soooo much for it. Anyways, furthermore, im really not to fond of those letters, especially the S, and the H, Now the H is good but the extension is sortof wack. The little thing on the top of the S would be good... but it needs to be bigger, and placed further to the left over it. The R and the A are the best letters in there. I like those alot, I like the way the T starts but im not feeling the bottom. I know that arrows are hard to master, ive been trying them for ever, and i still cant seem to get them, but your gonna need to work a lot more on your extensions, because some of them are just odd and misplaced. The colouring is great, your a good drawer, but the letters, you already heard my opinion, and the symetry is killing it, as far as color scheme etc. its awesome. Im sure your a respectable writer so your gonna read this and not have a hissy fit like most of the kids that i give advice to. Thank you very much and good night

Btw, you keep this up and youll be sketching dope peices in no time.

[nemzone]

Originally posted by BohemianBastard+Dec 27 2006, 09:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BohemianBastard &#064; Dec 27 2006, 09:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 09:21 PM

Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 26 2006, 02:12 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ASB_ONE@Dec 26 2006, 10:51 AM
**[/IMG]
fayahhhhhhhhhh
cheers def worked on letters alot after your last crit rele was the kik up the ass i needed, thats if indeed your socrates unda a new name?
;)



bouncing soul, your handstyles are terrible.

yep

and musashi, even your simples are horrible :) im really not joking

nemz, i would say what i always say, i really really dislike how you connect teh letters. Because of that most of your pieces look the same to me, so i have a tendency to scroll past your shit :). Dont just sketch your own name, constantly be sketching other words dun. it helps you evolve your style
What i would do (dont listen to me):
disconnect all the letters :)[/b][/quote]

well il try some words with unconnected letters, but that was the way my style was made up if u look...

http://myspace-791.vo.llnwd.net/01529/19/72/1529322791_l.jpg

i think i like it bcoz, its not the worst style out there, and i know its my own original shit. without the things u dont like i think i would judt be too generic.. but il see how i can make it better

[BohemianBastard]

dont worry about being generic. anyway you could always figure out another way to connect the letters without losing structure

[Truth.]

trash that peice is way hot in my opinion. the only thing i dont like is how the T sort of slopes away from the other letters, maybe try bring it up a little?

edit: oh fidnt see enigmatics crits

[trashhh]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
Damn right :P

But em im up i spose, im not up a lot all over the plcae but in town i hav quite a lot o tags n stickers, a loada tags n bombs in other places... most big writers know about me

and enigmatic, i really know the piece isnt that good, honestly i like my S and H but i think my A is shit, and yea the arrows and bottom of T are pretty bad. The fact is im an idiot cos i didnt do a sketch for that or even draw it on the canvas first, i did a black to blue fade then freestyled it with a paint pen, which was a bit stupid

thanks tho, especially for the guys bumping my piece like 1000 times :D

[2KoS]

Originally posted by trashhh+Dec 27 2006, 05:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Dec 27 2006, 05:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
Damn right :P

But em im up i spose, im not up a lot all over the plcae but in town i hav quite a lot o tags n stickers, a loada tags n bombs in other places... most big writers know about me

and enigmatic, i really know the piece isnt that good, honestly i like my S and H but i think my A is shit, and yea the arrows and bottom of T are pretty bad. The fact is im an idiot cos i didnt do a sketch for that or even draw it on the canvas first, i did a black to blue fade then freestyled it with a paint pen, which was a bit stupid

thanks tho, especially for the guys bumping my piece like 1000 times :D [/b][/quote]
Yeah I&#39;m gonna be honest, I&#39;m proper feeling that piece, especially the colour scheme, and dont really agree with most of what enigmatic has said (&#39;slanting&#39; :rolleyes: ), but the only thing I do think you should change as you&#39;ve said, is your A.

You thought or tried using a capital A?

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?+Dec 27 2006, 01:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Dec 27 2006, 01:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 12:24 AM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5038/untitledra4.png
new page [/b][/quote]
....

trash and nemz those both look really good

[ras]

Musashi...That peice is funny...hahaha..clean aswell..

i dunno how u bump one sentence without bumbing other but wat Shited said was fucking sooo funny.. " shut up..emo ass faggot...all you hoodies aree fake " LMFAO...

whappen....you know waht...get a clean peice of lined paper and draw that filling the whooooole page... ;)

[Sumoe]

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2069/dsc0179wq7.jpg
crits? don&#39;t mind my weak ass tag.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3977/dsc0180gt2.jpg
first attempt at a throwie, again don&#39;t mind the shitty tag.

[Bazer]

alright..i hope im progressing.. what do u jerks think? :(

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/RECO0255.jpg

[Copieright]

crits please


http://www.image-share.net/image/7600/27-12-06_1743.jpg
http://www.image-share.net/image/7600/08-11-06_1934.jpg
http://www.image-share.net/image/7600/08-11-06_1730.jpg

[hungr]

i dont even know if u can c this one i was ripped and outlined it in blue pen so when i flicked it it blends with the forcefield o_O o ya its near btw brothers account

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/feefw.jpg

[Bazer]

Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Dec 27 2006, 11:46 AM
alright..i hope im progressing.. what do u jerks think? :(

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/RECO0255.jpg
wtf i didn&#39;t post to get no crits. what do u jerks think?? i really dont care i just wanna know.

[ras]

your the jerk...you expect people to give you crits without giving the people above you any and calling us all jerks.....and wtp in bumping your own shit on the same page...now im going to give crits..

Hngr...kinda sloppy man..

sumoe...not your best shit...wat you oabout the wack tag....i like the tag

[Bazer]

what a cry baby. i was just messin dude. i dont give a shit about wat people in this thread think. its just toys giving toys help. seems pointless to me. thats why i never post any of my shit here son. its a bad idea.

[ras]

then why the fuck ask for crits and bump it...andyeah that sis true...toys giving toys help..

[PushOner]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0023.jpg

i had a dream about this one. i woke up, and started drawing. =D graf=life.

[shamee1991]

umm...looks ok...push the letter together and work on that S...

[ras]

Pushr...lose the extension on the P...it looks like a lil I

sumthing with a karak...the scanner made the light brown skin tone on the karak look green :(

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/erigrwre.jpg

Crits and comments plase...thanks ;)

[Blix]

ras i hate ur shit you always gotta have a charac in the middle JUST FINISH THE DAMN THING WITH LETTERS

[Sumoe]

lovin the character, letters not so much and take away the arrows, still don&#39;t really like your letters tho.

[ras]

Thanks Sumoe.. ;)

Blix....Post up son &#33;&#33; ...i dont give a fuck what you think... :)

[shamee1991]

u fucked it up ur character it was actually gd. dont up spifs in it...

[trashhh]

Originally posted by 2KoS+Dec 27 2006, 07:29 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (2KoS @ Dec 27 2006, 07:29 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 27 2006, 05:58 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 26 2006, 06:43 PM
I never ment it in paint terms...i ment it asin sketches ... and yeah ... he can paint well...
Damn right :P

But em im up i spose, im not up a lot all over the plcae but in town i hav quite a lot o tags n stickers, a loada tags n bombs in other places... most big writers know about me

and enigmatic, i really know the piece isnt that good, honestly i like my S and H but i think my A is shit, and yea the arrows and bottom of T are pretty bad. The fact is im an idiot cos i didnt do a sketch for that or even draw it on the canvas first, i did a black to blue fade then freestyled it with a paint pen, which was a bit stupid

thanks tho, especially for the guys bumping my piece like 1000 times :D
Yeah I&#39;m gonna be honest, I&#39;m proper feeling that piece, especially the colour scheme, and dont really agree with most of what enigmatic has said (&#39;slanting&#39; :rolleyes: ), but the only thing I do think you should change as you&#39;ve said, is your A.

You thought or tried using a capital A? [/b][/quote]
yea i cant do them as well as small a&#39;s.. not that that small a is good as ive said before it was just a complete freestyle

[meetermaid]

got a webcam for xmas
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9780/picture2zm2.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7341/picture18qv9.jpg
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2503/picture17xr7.jpg
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7951/picture19yk8.jpg

[Snapple]

shitty but w/e...wish i never did the arrows

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3963/dscn1375ue4.jpg

[shamee1991]

u reali need to know ur stuctures on the S and A cuz it aint workin

[meetermaid]

snapple, it&#39;s a nice style, just refine it a bit. definitely get rid of the little extension bar thing on the bottom of the s, it looks retarded. keep working at it.

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Dec 27 2006, 11:22 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2069/dsc0179wq7.jpg
crits? don&#39;t mind my weak ass tag.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3977/dsc0180gt2.jpg
first attempt at a throwie, again don&#39;t mind the shitty tag.
BUMP&#33;&#33;&#33;

MEETER-like the throwie like ur style.

Snapple- work on the S and A like shamee said.

[HazeAmaze]

honestly i think your word forms are great, i dont think there is really anything wrong with it, when you get more comfortable with the letters, you can style them for some better flow and shit

good job overall, i like your throwie too

[afek]

Originally posted by ras@Dec 27 2006, 02:37 PM
Thanks Sumoe.. ;)

Blix....Post up son &#33;&#33; ...i dont give a fuck what you think... :)
ras stop giving crits

you dont know what your talkin about

start fucking simple how many times does everyone have to tell you

[CoKKeYONe]

nice sketch Sumoe
but i don&#39;t like that throw up much ;)

[Chop Logic]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/desire.jpg

Crits please, thanks. I&#39;m really trying to improve, been doing simples since as long as I can remember. (I know this isnt simple)

[Sumoe]

the first E after the D is way too small, work on your letter structure a bit and it&#39;s a good start and you should continue to do simples, not that bad tho.

[meetermaid]

chop, get rid of the arrows and the heart, and make the s more pointed and square to fit the style of all the other letters. get rid of the extensions on the tops of the Es cause they&#39;re gross, and the i looks more like a t..

[whahappen?]

chop just get rid of the extensions you have a nice style going though i could tell it was you without looking at the username
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6730/gjf9.png

[NiN]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87/Flexx154/Canada.jpg
sketch for fun

[-DaNnY-]

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004dewa-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image005-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image001-3.jpg



just want sum crits plz? tht 1 with the crappy arrows everywhere jus ignore n cldnt be arsed to colour it in cos its reli going nowhere lol so jus a few crits plz

[addicted]

I like them all but with all of the ones that sa "reak" you might wanna define your "k" coz it kinda looks like a deformed "h" to me ...

[sank one]

danny i think you should add more arrows

[kustem]

Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Dec 27 2006, 12:18 PM
what a cry baby. i was just messin dude. i dont give a shit about wat people in this thread think. its just toys giving toys help. seems pointless to me. thats why i never post any of my shit here son. its a bad idea.
if its pointless and you don&#39;t care what the people in here think then why post your piece here and then re-post 20 mins later whining about not getting crits?

you posting here seems pretty pointless if you think that.

go and post in the advanced thread.



anyway..

i&#39;m not really feeling all of the arrows in those pieces danny.


snapple - the piece is ok, bu as peeps are saying, the structure is key, and your S doesn&#39;t look right. keep at it tho.

oh and snapple, you didnt play tribes by any chance did you? An old PC Game..

[kustem]

posted twice, my bad.

[-DaNnY-]

well cheers for crits guys an yer i know i hate them arrows now lol i havent been into graff vry long bout a month or two bt i gotta admit lookin back on it now those arrows are shit think i jus need to tone them down a bit

[MUSASHI]

Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 27 2006, 04:07 AM


and musashi, even your simples are horrible :) im really not joking


psst. simpleton...hey, let me fill you in on a secret..since you seem to be completeley deficient in the realms of the OBVIOUS&#33;&#33;&#33; they were horrible on purpose and it was a joke...now for those not impared as thee, thou bastard of bohemia...I like setting the precedence for my self...IE meaning fashioning things never fashioned prior to... However,if you want simples I can hook you up "G" ;)

[kustem]

Originally posted by &#045;DaNnY&#045;@Dec 27 2006, 06:53 PM
well cheers for crits guys an yer i know i hate them arrows now lol i havent been into graff vry long bout a month or two bt i gotta admit lookin back on it now those arrows are shit think i jus need to tone them down a bit
well, they aren&#39;t shit, no need to put your work down.. but your right when you say you need to tone them down. Its probably best if you work on simple letter structure before adding arrows and addons etc, and then from there other things will come.

[Truth.]

hmm i dont think i like this. i will draw again, in the meantime, any crits? its basically my first time doing fancy fills and outlines and whatnot.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/P1262968.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/DEC28SKETCH.jpg

[kaweJFK]

truth - not bad, that style is fine. Now try to do a style with fater leters if you know what i mean thats what i feel anyway,

-DaNnY- - try and do stuff more WITHOUT ARROWS, like Truth&#33;&#33; but you look like not a bad drawer, If YoU gEt Me&#33;

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20061118/13/0/2/5/0251ae243d0ea8de6e3055fc2a8ed076200611180_full.jpg

i drew my dog...

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 05:11 PM
chop just get rid of the extensions you have a nice style going though i could tell it was you without looking at the username
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6730/gjf9.png
new page

[enigmatic]

I wish i could draw my dog... Thats good.

Truth, looks good, your coming back&#33;

and as for me. i made a dope background, then was gonna do a peice, but couldnmt manage to draw on the canvas, so said screw it and tagged it with a kiwi mop.

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6842/1001464bk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[-DaNnY-]

i like tht background and the tag looks pretty kl aswel, nice1, wot u use to do ur background with??

[Truth.]

the background is so hot, just fix the A man, it looks like a 2.

[ternoner]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/HPIM1384.jpg

[addicted]

^^ ternoner, i like that&#33; its lookin good&#33; maybe make the t a bit bigger, so the bottom gets to the same line as the legs of the R, and maybe make the top part of the T bigger, then clean it up, colour it and it&#39;ll look even hotter.

[addicted]

Originally posted by Truth.@Dec 27 2006, 07:21 PM
hmm i dont think i like this. i will draw again, in the meantime, any crits? its basically my first time doing fancy fills and outlines and whatnot.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/P1262968.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/DEC28SKETCH.jpg
I absolutely love it man&#33; I love the 3d&#33; HOT. And BTW, incase you didnt know, I am Lachlan001 of skaters cafe. :P . Anyway, keep it up.

SORRY FOR DOUBLE POST GUYS.

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Dec 27 2006, 12:22 PM
got a webcam for xmas
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9780/picture2zm2.jpg
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7341/picture18qv9.jpg
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2503/picture17xr7.jpg
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7951/picture19yk8.jpg
no one wants to critique my shit? :(

[addicted]

^^ Someone been watching to many pornos :P. JK, Those last handstyles are pretty good, and so is the throwup. All the rest I dont like. With the sex in the city one, clean it up, and make all your letters the same size and width and fix the E and M, they are seriously fucked up in my opinion ...

[meetermaid]

haha yeah, the sex in the city one was quick and durrty.. i was too lazy to sit down and make it all nice and perfect so it&#39;s messy, but yeah, i don&#39;t really like it, but i do wanna know what people think of the letters.. they don&#39;t fit together too well but as letters how are they?

[minesweep]

meet feelin the throw style

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/45/dscn0357vy1.jpg

[addicted]

meeter - as letters the last 3 letters (e,t,o) are pretty good, but i dont like the M,E. They look shit coz they arent the same size (width-wise) - Make all the letters the same size, width, and tidy it up, fill it and it&#39;ll be dope.

minesweep - OPIU? I like it, its looking good. Give it some fill and 3d/shadow and it will be looking dope.

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?+Dec 27 2006, 07:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Dec 27 2006, 07:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Dec 27 2006, 05:11 PM
chop just get rid of the extensions you have a nice style going though i could tell it was you without looking at the username
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/6730/gjf9.png
new page [/b][/quote]
yea....

[meetermaid]

k, thanks addicted. whahappen, the s is a lil wierd, the bottom of it makes me think of a smurf, i dunno why :S but otherwise it&#39;s pretty good. i think stretch out the bottom of the s more, like make it go to the left more and it&#39;ll look better.

[minesweep]

Originally posted by addicted@Dec 27 2006, 09:34 PM
meeter - as letters the last 3 letters (e,t,o) are pretty good, but i dont like the M,E. They look shit coz they arent the same size (width-wise) - Make all the letters the same size, width, and tidy it up, fill it and it&#39;ll be dope.

minesweep - OPIU? I like it, its looking good. Give it some fill and 3d/shadow and it will be looking dope.
says delv, but i got an idea on what to work on now, thanks

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G+Dec 26 2006, 11:10 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G &#064; Dec 26 2006, 11:10 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Serum Can Bag It. Hes a G@Dec 25 2006, 04:46 PM
some 5 minute ugly ass shit.
crizzle?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumsimp.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/serumthro.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/SEthroo.jpg
bump? [/b][/quote]
i you know its ugly then why do you post it ? And what the fuck is crizzle. In modern times we use the term crits or critisizm.

[addicted]

minesweep - if it says Delv, you might wanna make the D more like a D coz it looks kinda like a O, make the bottom of the E longer, looks like a P, make the L a capital L, and the V is good. Just give it some fill and 3d/shadow and it will look hot.

Whahappen - I LOVE that throwy, give it a fill and shadow, it&#39;ll look absolutely SICKEST. B)

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by &#045;DaNnY&#045;@Dec 27 2006, 05:55 PM
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004dewa-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image004.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image005-1.jpg

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/DaNnY-H/Image001-3.jpg



just want sum crits plz? tht 1 with the crappy arrows everywhere jus ignore n cldnt be arsed to colour it in cos its reli going nowhere lol so jus a few crits plz
you abuse of life.

lose the arrows

[PushOner]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/no.jpg
blackbook inside cover.
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0073.jpg
some abstract shit i love doing once in a while =D
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0071.jpg
New tag/Old Tag
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0078.jpg
HandStylez...


CRITs...<=

[ternoner]

like the hands push and meetermaid

[ThickGravy]

Tried my own style, I just dont like the t.


Must.
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o59/musterdoner/Must.jpg

[Z FUSE]

the S i think needs some work^

my friend wanted crits on this simple, i think it sucks but he wanted crits form better people..
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1922/pix0011mj4.jpg

[kill]

well i think he should try a lil harder and then get crits...




ruske pride&#33;&#33;

[addicted]

Push - absolutely LOVING your handstyles, keep it up, they are awesome.

Thickgravy - your style is pretty hot, but it needs work. The M and the U are alright, but the S and the T need quite alot of work. Dont get discouraged, making your own style takes months/years.

Z fuse - That throwy is ALRIGHT but it needs alot of work. Tell your mate if thats some of his best work, he needs to ditch the shadow/3d and start with simple&reg; bubble letters. Tell him all he needs to do is take the letters from his keyboard, inflate them, curve them, fill them. And then work up from there.

Hope I might have helped you out ...

~addicted

[Z FUSE]

thanks addicted, and kill, i&#39;ll let him know

Ruskie PRIDE&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by addicted+Dec 27 2006, 09:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (addicted @ Dec 27 2006, 09:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Truth.@Dec 27 2006, 07:21 PM
hmm i dont think i like this. i will draw again, in the meantime, any crits? its basically my first time doing fancy fills and outlines and whatnot.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/P1262968.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/DEC28SKETCH.jpg
I absolutely love it man&#33; I love the 3d&#33; HOT. And BTW, incase you didnt know, I am Lachlan001 of skaters cafe. :P . Anyway, keep it up.

SORRY FOR DOUBLE POST GUYS. [/b][/quote]
truth, i love how much you have improved.
i wish i was as dedicated as you.



ill have some flicks up tonight.
:0)

[sky 5]

MUST - i like the way you draw your lines . . letters need some TLC in my opinion, not sure if you meant to have your letters progreesively get bigger . . . the basic letter structure of your T is not dominant/clear enough to have the huge addon you got (eye doesnt see letter at first glance b/c addon disguises/confuses the T) . . . i wont suggest going to simples but maybe try and define your letters alil better . . . this is just an opinion from some random anonymous cat on the internet who only looked at your sketch for 10 secs

anyone wanna do a quick exchange now? pleeeease

[MAERone]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8775/photo122206003rz5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1722/photo122006006sh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/8136/photo122006008ff5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3408/photo122006010qh1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9541/photo122006011yf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

[addicted]

^^ I agree ... the T is kinda .... weird .... :P

[Fosale!]

flicks&#33;
me and funeral went to a halo2 tournment and had pizza?
yeps.
pizza box freebies.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/funeral.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/fune.jpg
^by funeral

by me.

sticker after competition
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebk-2.jpg
christmas oneliner, the T and A ruin it.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/chistmas.jpg
just an S, fucking around with teeth.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/anS.jpg
my entry i started for the bsc battle but didnt finish. i kno the 3d is fuked
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/christ.jpg

[TricksForKids]

im liking that sticker^

sky ill exchange with you but i got work everyday this week pretty much so i dunno how long till take me
holla back if interested

one love

[Stonk]

fosale - for some reason i love that sticker, i think its because i love simple pen sketches on stickers. also i really like the f on funerals throw.

im kinda drunk and decided to sketch some new throws, im problaby gonna hate them tommorow but whatever, do any of them seem decent?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new023.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new024.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new025.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new026.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new027.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new028.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new029.jpg

and my first oneliner attempt

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new030.jpg

[Albert Fish]

i like the last flick fosale, not feelin anything else really though bud

truth i liked it before the bubbles and fill. a simple forcefield woulda done the trick, fatten your letters a little maybe. otherwise pretty nice

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellsz.jpg

i never post anymore.

[addicted]

pretty nice throws man, fill em&#33;

[uhhh]

i like that yells, but i&#39;m a much bigger fan of your sig.
why does everyone have to get new screen names, its really confusing.

[Albert Fish]

Originally posted by Albert Fish@Dec 28 2006, 12:36 AM
i like the last flick fosale, not feelin anything else really though bud

truth i liked it before the bubbles and fill. a simple forcefield woulda done the trick, fatten your letters a little maybe. otherwise pretty nice

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellsz.jpg

i never post anymore.
bump cuz im fat and greedy

uhhhhh: thanks bruh, i get bored of stuff mad easily and i dont write baper or move kilos ha. so i changed it

[crakbaby]

what do you think?
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/6655/scan0003qf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[-SiC->]

i like it i just sketched somtin a lil like that

[Albert Fish]

dont overlap that much, make the letters more solid than wavy, get rid of that hideous p. the letters need structure theyre a little sloppy

work on the dropshadow

[crakbaby]

thanks albert , im thinking of dropping that whole indent thing at the top,
ill def take use what you said

[enuf.]

Yeah what Albert said.

Been awhile, any Suggestons or comments?
http://i10.tinypic.com/49bkk0o.jpg

[Skeam]

mi not really a fan of that N but the rest looks pretty good mate

[Truth.]

,mmmmmmmm i like it albert, nice work on that thro

enuf, it looks nice, real clean, the letters cud do with sum work

scope go simpler, start from some simple letters, get them down, then develop them from there.

[whahappen?]

yellis iv always loved your style....hay guyz&#33; :lol:

[Albert Fish]

enuf, really like the e, maybe try a lower case n, get rid of the arrow in the u, and dont disconnect the second arm of the f. add some funky colors and a nice forcefield and you got a fresh piece on your hands.

btw thanks truth

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Stonk@Dec 28 2006, 12:31 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new030.jpg
only hot one outta the batch u posteed.
this 1liner is hotter than any of the other tosses youve done.
work with this.

[Fube]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellsz.jpg

^^^ damn i like this.

did this for the heat throw battle that never happend.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Throws/Heat.jpg

[meetermaid]

fube, the t is fucking hot. the h is nice but pretty generic, the e&#39;s nice as well, but the a doesn&#39;t look like an a at all, kinda wrecks it. on your handstyle, the extension things look really nice but the letters themselves need a lot of work. save the addons till you have better letters and it&#39;ll be fire.

[Fube]

:edit:

[Vagrant]

latest stuff:

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Rant_RedDrips.jpg

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/BlueGreenStars_BlueGreyBars.jpg
The bottom one didnt turn out the way I wanted. those grey bars suck.

[Fube]

Vagrent: its just common courtsey to crit the one above u before posting something new.

in regaurds to your stuff, your 3d is messed up a bit on the first "rant", and the others with exception of the last are a bit sloppy for my taste. but i can tell your structure gets better as u go along. to me your headed on the right path. just keep going.


meetermaid: i can see what your talkin about but maybe the fact that the a is the only lower case letter kinda throws it off? and the handy, my chestel tip marker ran out so i used a sharpie, and i hate it but yeah, im still workin on it.

ive been tryin like mad to get some structure to my letters but every time i sit down and actually hit the book, something gos wrong or it does not end up like i want it to. its so fuckin frustrating,

for instance, i started this, but then transposed the last letters, its supposed to say "desire". so i just stopped. :angry:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/desire.jpg

also the underline on the tag just made it more gay. so i just quit on it.

[d_g]

Poed, that throw is nice but the &#39;D&#39; looks waaaaaaaaaay too much like an &#39;O&#39;

Yells, hot shit, I like your style.

Rant, the last one is the best, some potential in it.

Fube, the &#39;lust and &#39;love parts are fucking ace, nice and simple but not too simple. The Desire part is nice too, just that the &#39;d&#39; looks like a &#39;j&#39; and the &#39;i&#39; is kinda camoflauged (sp?)/hidden.

Surprised how this sketch came out cause I was so tired, I know it need work but CC would be cool.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch24.jpg

[SKiL]

Caset-your throwie came out so clean it almost looks computer generated (if it is then shame shame) but the 3d on the top of the E was off a little

heres mine has a little skil zerk oz1 And TBS on it
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r195/schawnell/toybb.jpg

[G - Wahl]

Skil, to much random pointless stuff going on, try just one theme for a backround

Caset, your C&#39;s 3d is way off, connect the bottom of the A to the C before you do your 3D.

Fube, all your letters keep getting taller and taller. And im not really feeling how the S goes over the E

Rant, lookin good, try to keep the T behind the N, in my opinion it doesnt look good when you over lap like that..I like the one with the stars, just need to make them all the same size, the A is a bit to skinny and the T is a bit to short

[shamee1991]

yo dats some nice shit boss...

[Albert Fish]

... no its not
dont bother with backgrounds until you actually have letters down nicely instead of something resembling 6th grade girl bubble letters and a krylon label.
dont make a crew yet. you dont even have sketching down
and when you do start actualluy painting and you DONT suck, dont call your crew "the bomb squad" cuz thats the corniest crew name ever.
make STRAIGHT simple letters out of bars with dropshadows.

sorry im in a bad mood ha.


fube i like it, drop the bubbles. peace.

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by d_g@Dec 28 2006, 05:17 AM
Poed, that throw is nice but the &#39;D&#39; looks waaaaaaaaaay too much like an &#39;O&#39;

Yells, hot shit, I like your style.

Rant, the last one is the best, some potential in it.

Fube, the &#39;lust and &#39;love parts are fucking ace, nice and simple but not too simple. The Desire part is nice too, just that the &#39;d&#39; looks like a &#39;j&#39; and the &#39;i&#39; is kinda camoflauged (sp?)/hidden.

Surprised how this sketch came out cause I was so tired, I know it need work but CC would be cool.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch24.jpg
lol du just take wat i write and change the last letter to a t?

asem = aset
cases = caset

crazy coincidences.
as for the letters, theyr alright but go from thik to thin real quick and dont flow properly.

skil - props on filling a whole page even if it aint that nice. stay up

[shamee1991]

na i rate dey it flows and its sick

[ASB_ONE]

shit boy i aint gettn into an arguement wid you, but anyone wid king in their signiture prolly aint worth listening to anyway, and no i aint battling you.

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Dec 27 2006, 11:22 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2069/dsc0179wq7.jpg
crits? don&#39;t mind my weak ass tag.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/3977/dsc0180gt2.jpg
first attempt at a throwie, again don&#39;t mind the shitty tag.
one last bump, prolly have sum new shit up later, crits?

Skil too much shit is going on and wtf is with the krylon can lol, but yeah way too busy.

Caset-don&#39;t really like the A or the E, but it&#39;s pretty good.

[G - Wahl]

In the first pic your U looks like a W, the S is alot wider then the other letters. I really like the letters thoughm the S + E are bangin. Dont really like the throw, its nice but its just not my taste

[G - Wahl]

Okay so im always criting people, now somone crit me&#33; Kinda sloppy but whatevs
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture042.jpg

[trashhh]

does it say zo? the Z is ok but i think the hole should be inside the actual letter, and im not feeling the line-dot-line final, i think itd look better just a solid line