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poopis
12-28-2006, 10:23 AM
yo Gwal the Z is pretty nifty I suppose but I guees it would look weird with the top left of the Z Bigger??? but your O would look better if it had a char. in it, or as trash said the circle in the letter.


Finished up 2 simples
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/56/0002ej7.jpg

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1492/0001ap9.jpg
(i know the top of the E is a lil off kinda got off track)

critz are appriciated, also I would like to put some stiff on Rwk. but everytime I go to google or yahoo and I click on any link it comes up with a site that is strickly advertisments so I belive I have adware O.o and it won't do know good to put it in the address bar..wont even come up

G - Wahl
12-28-2006, 10:26 AM
The first one looks like that exte sion is a really bad S. But besides that just keep workin with it.

Second one is alright, I dont suggest using that one blue letter though, just seems out of place and random. And the V kinda looks like a U

trashhh
12-28-2006, 10:30 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40730.jpg

something i just spent ages on cos i kept messing stuff up.. u can tell some letters are still a tad iffy

poopis
12-28-2006, 10:33 AM
kkz thanks and eer its not an S I wanted to do that little thing to mt E but i dunno where to put it at so i just did it like that. And with the blue I wanted to try shading but i guess i suck at it with sharpies but thanks.



EDIT:Trash I'm loving it but I'm not sure about the long arrow n the R or just both of the arrow ext. and your S is a lil to small but the whole letter structure is pretty neat.

G - Wahl
12-28-2006, 10:34 AM
The A kind of looks like a H, and the S doesnt look like a S
And im not good with 3D but I think the right leg of the H is messed up, there is 3D on both sides.

trashhh
12-28-2006, 10:45 AM
yes ive fucked the bottom of the h.. how does the s not look like an s?

G - Wahl
12-28-2006, 10:48 AM
Its just got that weird pointy thing at top, try making the top like the bottom, where it curves into the middle of the S

Stonk
12-28-2006, 10:57 AM
Originally posted by Stonk@Dec 28 2006, 12:31 AM
fosale - for some reason i love that sticker, i think its because i love simple pen sketches on stickers. also i really like the f on funerals throw.

im kinda drunk and decided to sketch some new throws, im problaby gonna hate them tommorow but whatever, do any of them seem decent?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new023.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new024.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new025.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new026.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new027.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new028.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new029.jpg

and my first oneliner attempt

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new030.jpg
i hate to do it but bump

trash again your lettters kinda droop down to the right, also that s doesn't really work with the rest of the letters

uhhh
12-28-2006, 11:05 AM
Originally posted by trashhh@Dec 28 2006, 11:30 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40730.jpg

something i just spent ages on cos i kept messing stuff up.. u can tell some letters are still a tad iffy
i really like this, but the second bend on the h, i think you should change the perspective, it just doesnt look right as is.

krazzie_ammo
12-28-2006, 11:25 AM
TRASH - normally i really like your 3d stuff, but im not too sure about this one...its more than iffy :P
the T looks like a J. maybe lose the bottom left arrow extension.
your R looks good. im just not sure with the left part of the arrow extension because everything is straight bars but this one bends which is kinda confusing. i guess some 3d colouring will put it into perpective.
the A looks like a H. try and seperate the horizzontal and right vertical bar and move the top part of the vertical bars further apart.
and your S looks like an U. you can switch that up by bringing the top verticalesque bar further out.
and get rid of the extra arrow extension on the H, it makes it look like a W.
but i really like your handsteezy and each letter has different 3d which gives it a really nice effect.

Stonk
12-28-2006, 12:04 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new031.jpg messing around with extentions, is there any potential or should change up the structure a bit. and sorry for the shitty pic

trashhh
12-28-2006, 12:12 PM
one on the bottom is ok but the one on the top.. nahhh

shamee1991
12-28-2006, 01:51 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new031.jpg

TAKE A BETTA PICTURE!

imported_Bes_one
12-28-2006, 03:46 PM
Stonk-I agree with trash you should take out the top arrow.

http://img487.imageshack.us/img487/6535/p1010456bv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any crits on this?

trashhh
12-28-2006, 03:56 PM
i like it, i dont really know what to say apart frm that.. feelin the S

imported_Bes_one
12-28-2006, 04:00 PM
Originally posted by Bes_one@Dec 28 2006, 04:46 PM


http://img487.imageshack.us/img487/6535/p1010456bv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any crits on this?
Thanks trash.
Bump

*LoST*
12-28-2006, 04:14 PM
Originally posted by Bes_one@Dec 28 2006, 04:46 PM
http://img487.imageshack.us/img487/6535/p1010456bv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any crits on this?
Looks good. Really like that S. But one thing, on the E, not sure what's going on with the bottom part close to the S, I believe its something with the 3D shading. But other than that..its good.

jude
12-28-2006, 04:16 PM
i just started gettin into graffiti a couple months ago but ive always liked to draw.. lemme know whatcha think of the pieces.. oh ya sorry not all of them are finished either :(

http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000154.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000152.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000150.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000148.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000147.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000144.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000141.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000137.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000134.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000132.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000129.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000123.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000120.jpg

aim33_28
12-28-2006, 04:30 PM
[FONT=Arial][SIZE=1][COLOR=red] yo jude i really like ur style its fresh.. prolly way better than anythin i can do..i like the first pieces beter than the last one
peace out

kustem
12-28-2006, 04:32 PM
well jude, if your new to graff, then i'd definately say that your interest in drawing is showing. Some of those pieces are nice, some are a bit too wild for me tho.

You have a pretty vast array of styles happening there aswell and i also like your colouring.

I'll let someone else crit before i say anything else.

*LoST*
12-28-2006, 04:33 PM
jude: sick pieces! seriously nice...lovin that cheyanne one...can't wait to see what your capable of with a can of spray paint.

revolt92
12-28-2006, 04:33 PM
nice, for someone thats only bin doing graff for a couple of months thats pretty good, im not really feelin that venessa piece its kinda shakey.

aim33_28
12-28-2006, 04:46 PM
[FONT=Arial][COLOR=red]
hey yo, this is a piece i did.. i been drawin for about a month or so..any hints or sumthin would be awesome peace out
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6695/hawes1fz6.jpg

Vagrant
12-28-2006, 04:50 PM
Sorry for not giving any crits before...

Jude: lots of stuff there, most of them aren't completed. I like the 3rd one the best, the green fill is nice and the red splatter background contrasts the color nicely.
Finish some of those sketches, and maybe cut back on the complexity. Keep it simple with your highlights,shades,and 3Ds. You should be able to come up with some hot stuff.

*LoST*
12-28-2006, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by aim33_28@Dec 28 2006, 05:46 PM
hey yo, this is a piece i did.. i been drawin for about a month or so..any hints or sumthin would be awesome peace out
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6695/hawes1fz6.jpg
Looks straight except for your S. Its not matching the same style as the other letters...try to keep the flow consistent trough all the letters.

TryingTooHard
12-28-2006, 04:59 PM
i like your color choice

aim33_28
12-28-2006, 04:59 PM
[FONT=Arial][SIZE=1][COLOR=red]
aiight good point mate. thanks will keep that in mind.. i will do another one later an post it up. peace out

jude
12-28-2006, 05:00 PM
thanks.. i was hoping u guys wouldnt hate too much.. ya the venessa one is kinda sketchy but the pencil is just a semi guidline.. im not tracing it with ink.. it should look cleaner when im done.. but ya i just ordered a buncha paint on monday n express shipped it so i should be getting it tommarow or saturday n imma spray that blue n yellow rotermund piece in my garage (2nd one down) after i spray it ill post it up.. i wanna make a video from start to finish n just make a speed video of it..

NiN
12-28-2006, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by aim33_28@Dec 28 2006, 05:46 PM
[FONT=Arial][COLOR=red]
hey yo, this is a piece i did.. i been drawin for about a month or so..any hints or sumthin would be awesome peace out
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6695/hawes1fz6.jpg
Looks good, but yea you gotta change the S to make it look like the rest, as for the other parts i dont know if its me or not, but i would make them about the same width, but thats just me, other then that lookin good

Heres something i drew up, first time using prisma pens....
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87/Flexx154/DSC00047.jpg

TryingTooHard
12-28-2006, 05:18 PM
crits on the shadow / blocking effect.... tnx

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Break002.jpg

aim33_28
12-28-2006, 05:21 PM
yo nin thanks for tha advice - yeh i like it - it say frost rite?? the "T" looks a little weird but yeh i like it s'alrite
peace out

aim33_28
12-28-2006, 05:23 PM
yo tth yeh i like the 3d but it looks like it changed a bit halfway thru u get my drift? but otherwise neat. is anyone up for a battle just friendly? u choose all the shit an stuff. or should i go somewhere else fo that?
peace out

addicted
12-28-2006, 05:24 PM
Whoa. That 3D is hot. It needs a bit of work here and there, but its getting there. Definately getting there. Colour it and it will look even better. Keep it up man, its hot.

aim33_28
12-28-2006, 06:02 PM
pm me if u wanna battle - i gotta go have a shower and eat sometihn laters

Hot_Pocket
12-28-2006, 06:10 PM
So many posts by like 4 people....

Trying, it's a pretty good simple, but one the A, the 3D isn't out far enough and your E... I dunno, it just doesn't seem to fit to me, neither does the K. But the rest is solid.

jerm_mtl
12-28-2006, 06:13 PM
Originally posted by TryingTooHard@Dec 28 2006, 06:18 PM
crits on the shadow / blocking effect.... tnx

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Break002.jpg
pretty nice actually

Bastardo
12-28-2006, 06:33 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/8372/picture208jb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MesaOne and None

PS I DIDNT DO THE NONE THROW

meetermaid
12-28-2006, 06:36 PM
bastardo get the fuck out of here. handstyles aren't the best but those throws are abfab.

kustem
12-28-2006, 06:37 PM
your 3D looks good. I'd like to see what this piece looks like coloured.

aces
12-28-2006, 07:23 PM
Bastardo do you think you could do one for me? SEAZ if you can...What you write so I can do something back?

Bastardo
12-28-2006, 07:26 PM
yeah sure thing!
i write MESA but just do me or whatever you prefer!

aces
12-28-2006, 07:47 PM
I'll do the whole thing for ya. I don't got a camera for a couple of days just to tell you but I'll have it up by jan. 2nd at latest.

Nosypainter
12-28-2006, 08:36 PM
Originally posted by ThickGravy@Dec 27 2006, 10:35 PM
Tried my own style, I just dont like the t.


Must.
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o59/musterdoner/Must.jpg
i like the s alot tweak with that letter style for a little bit

nickstix
12-28-2006, 09:21 PM
bastardo, im really likin those throws.


some recent stuff...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sr.png
tried some extension things that im not crazy about on this one...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar.png

crits?

d_g
12-28-2006, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Dec 29 2006, 01:45 AM
lol du just take wat i write and change the last letter to a t?

asem = aset
cases = caset
Haha, dude honest mistake.

I knew you wrote asem when I started writing aset but that wasn't in my mind at all when I thought of it.

I didn't know you had started writing cases. I just put another letter infront of 'aset' cause four letters wasn't working too well for me.

Fosale!
12-28-2006, 10:42 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/RIP-WASTE.jpg

ShIfTeD
12-28-2006, 11:10 PM
nice gesus bite

Fube
12-28-2006, 11:20 PM
R looks horrible but who am i to say anything.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/heep.jpg

letters are not even. same with the thickness.

crits welcome

Fosale!
12-28-2006, 11:37 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Dec 29 2006, 12:10 AM
nice gesus bite
i bit gesus?

he wasnt the first one to use teeth.
if you were to call me out on a bite i would have called me on a bastardo bite for the teeth, not gesus.

enuf.
12-28-2006, 11:38 PM
Originally posted by enuf.@Dec 28 2006, 02:16 AM
Yeah what Albert said.

Been awhile, any Suggestons or comments?
http://i10.tinypic.com/49bkk0o.jpg
Fube- i wouldn't connect the d and e. but thats just me.

bumpity bump bump!
http://i12.tinypic.com/40kxylc.jpg

ShIfTeD
12-28-2006, 11:40 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Dec 29 2006, 12:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Dec 29 2006, 12:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Dec 29 2006, 12:10 AM
nice gesus bite
i bit gesus?

he wasnt the first one to use teeth.
if you were to call me out on a bite i would have called me on a bastardo bite for the teeth, not gesus. [/b][/quote]
hey, atliest you can admit it....thats the 1st step, now the next step is being more original and using your own teqnices to get attention

TryingTooHard
12-28-2006, 11:40 PM
Theres the colored.... Im improving but slowly

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Break-1.jpg

CRITS PLEASE&#33;&#33;&#33;

sky 5
12-29-2006, 12:12 AM
shifted - in my opinion that aint nothing like gesus teeth he uses for his E . . . gesus&#39; teeth on his E are like PHERZ&#39;s homie, check the script

surprisingly people from the burg be showin up here with some skill . . when i was there yunz scene was fugly . . (i had a lifetime ban form 3 rivers till they blew it up :lol: )

AIM - if you rlookin to battle and get almighty you gotta go thru me first homie . . .them just the rules of engagement . . . unless your true toy . . .

Fube
12-29-2006, 12:20 AM
enug: ses "heep" yeah it was to late to fix it when i outlined it. o well,

as for your bumb, your 3d is messed up in places, the f could be confused as an r, not feelin the "heart arrow thing" on your e. no fill? but as a whole i like it. the throw u need to work on your f&#39;s i guess. still sweet.

trying to hard: that just about sums it up in your name man. your force field is to faint, and the thickness of your letters is not consistent. the hightlights seem strange and also out of place in places. but stay simple your on the right track im thinkin.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/heep.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/heepfill.jpg

^^^ mine after trying to get a decent fill.

Fosale!
12-29-2006, 12:29 AM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Dec 29 2006, 12:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Dec 29 2006, 12:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Dec 29 2006, 12:37 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Dec 29 2006, 12:10 AM
nice gesus bite
i bit gesus?

he wasnt the first one to use teeth.
if you were to call me out on a bite i would have called me on a bastardo bite for the teeth, not gesus.
hey, atliest you can admit it....thats the 1st step, now the next step is being more original and using your own teqnices to get attention [/b][/quote]
the teeth make it look worse.

w.e


many ppl use teeth.
i dont care.
w.e

Blix
12-29-2006, 12:34 AM
yeah ur mom uses her teeth so tell her to stop damn

ShIfTeD
12-29-2006, 12:51 AM
horrible attempt to try to diss someone

317773
12-29-2006, 12:51 AM
Originally posted by Fube@Dec 29 2006, 01:20 AM
enug: ses "heep" yeah it was to late to fix it when i outlined it. o well,

as for your bumb, your 3d is messed up in places, the f could be confused as an r, not feelin the "heart arrow thing" on your e. no fill? but as a whole i like it. the throw u need to work on your f&#39;s i guess. still sweet.

trying to hard: that just about sums it up in your name man. your force field is to faint, and the thickness of your letters is not consistent. the hightlights seem strange and also out of place in places. but stay simple your on the right track im thinkin.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/heep.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/heepfill.jpg

^^^ mine after trying to get a decent fill.
That fill looks decent to me. And theres 2 e&#39;s in there? i thought it was H.E.P.

Fube
12-29-2006, 12:54 AM
thats where i screwd up, the later part of the h is an E as well, gay gay gay.

Blix
12-29-2006, 12:55 AM
shifted gay as hell

Albert Fish
12-29-2006, 01:08 AM
shifted that looks nothing like gesus&#39;s style and teeth are a common thing in graff, check out alot of euro writers. fo sale i dont like how long your 3d is.

i hate to say it but everyone in this forum sucks now and its just a bunch of toys telling other toys that their ugly stuff looks nice. im not trying to say that im better than everyone but still, this stuff isnt "nice" most of the time. thats not crits thats just an inexperienced novice opinion, you guys really dont know better.

fube dont connect the h and the e and dont have a break in the p if you know what i mean

i dont think im posting in here anymore.

Stonk
12-29-2006, 01:11 AM
haha shit now i dont even feel like posting this after reading that /&#092; /&#092; /&#092;

anyway fucking with lame extensions but my o sucks balls so whatever
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new032.jpg
is it even worth trying to work with?

Albert Fish
12-29-2006, 01:17 AM
wasnt referring to you poed i always thought your straights had alot of potential. i dont like how the holes are sharp, maybe try small holes in the o and d.

Small Time Crook
12-29-2006, 01:28 AM
This is what I have to contribute.
What started off as life studies quickly turned into a disaster.
Simple progression is a bitch.
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/126/picture007hv1.jpg

'aSHiD"
12-29-2006, 01:39 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v651/kevin6nipple/erospiece.jpg

wrote eros

shifted and i were battling on this cause i started some beef.
we didnt get polled cause were both too toy i guess.
let me know what you think.

d_g
12-29-2006, 02:38 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Dec 29 2006, 07:08 PM
i hate to say it but everyone in this forum sucks now and its just a bunch of toys telling other toys that their ugly stuff looks nice. im not trying to say that im better than everyone but still, this stuff isnt "nice" most of the time. thats not crits thats just an inexperienced novice opinion, you guys really dont know better.

i dont think im posting in here anymore.
Dude, not trying to beef or anything but it&#39;s not like your crits are a whole lot better than anyone elses or anything.

Anyways,

aSHID, I&#39;d lose the arrows and addon things, not cause &#39;arrows are toy&#39; or whatever don&#39;t fit or flow, especially since thy&#39;re in a different colors. You need to work on your 3D too. Like check out the extension on the far left that connects to the &#39;R&#39;. The angle of the 3D line on the far left points on less of angle than the 3D line on the right whereas it should be the other way around. Also try and add some more curves into your letters.

Small Time Crook, That &#39;S&#39; is a bit excessive. The rest of the letters are ok but need some fixing up, keep working on simples.

Poed, it&#39;s not too bad but I would start playing with the letters themselves a bit more before adding extensions to them.

Hep, I like the pencil only one. If the &#39;H&#39; didn&#39;t have the little extension to the right of it it would look heaps better IMO. THe loop part of the &#39;P&#39; could be a little thicker. And something about the &#39;E&#39; bugs me a bit but overall the concept is good.

EDIT:

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch25.jpg

At least I did a good job of fucking up the &#39;C&#39;. Anyways...

weldo
12-29-2006, 04:32 AM
that eros is dope as like all of it exept for those blue things style good got nothing wrong ith that piece.
xams up top and aken below crits would be dope
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/921/imgp0001ry0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

meetermaid
12-29-2006, 04:44 AM
weldo that first piece is fucking amazing. the only thing i would suggest is to come up with some better colour schemes for the both of them :&#092;





http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5752/picture40qz4.jpg
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6501/picture38hv8.jpg
^dropshadow&#39;s a little off and it&#39;s messy but whatever, it&#39;s that official shit. ;)

Fixion
12-29-2006, 05:00 AM
Weldo that&#39;s stuffs awesome. Keep it up.

nemzone
12-29-2006, 05:16 AM
bottom weldo looks like an awful familiar style.... <_<

317773
12-29-2006, 05:18 AM
Weldo that shit is dope. Props

Truth.
12-29-2006, 05:44 AM
the peice fosale did looks nothing like a bite from gesus

weldo
12-29-2006, 07:31 AM
thanks for all the props heres my latest
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5240/imgp0002nw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Skeam
12-29-2006, 08:10 AM
the A M and S all go together so fucking well but the X just doesnt really flow with it. other then that... i just creamed my dackeries

nickstix
12-29-2006, 08:48 AM
ashid-i really like that but the arrows and bits that are blue dont really flow with the piece, i wish it woulda been poled

weldo-i would try making the top fatter b/c its not as fat as the other letters

some recent stuff...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sr.png
tried some extension things that im not crazy about on this one...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar.png

crits?

use it
12-29-2006, 09:48 AM
Originally posted by enuf.+Dec 29 2006, 12:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enuf. @ Dec 29 2006, 12:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-enuf.@Dec 28 2006, 02:16 AM
Yeah what Albert said.

Been awhile, any Suggestons or comments?
http://i10.tinypic.com/49bkk0o.jpg
Fube- i wouldn&#39;t connect the d and e. but thats just me.

bumpity bump bump&#33;
http://i12.tinypic.com/40kxylc.jpg [/b][/quote]
i like this style alot
the only thing i dont like is how the n squigles
that e though is tight

shamee1991
12-29-2006, 10:05 AM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar.png

need to tone it down man, do simples first know the stucture.

nickstix
12-29-2006, 10:37 AM
well i didnt really tone it down but i think this one came out alot better then the last one...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar2.png
crits?

G - Wahl
12-29-2006, 10:44 AM
Do simple block letters man, your lines are soo shaky, those extensions are huge and pointless, get rid of all those man, start off with drawing the letters on your keyboard.

uhhh
12-29-2006, 10:52 AM
i had to look through 3 pages to look at about 5 flicks.
this thread blows.

shamee1991
12-29-2006, 10:55 AM
well it is a toy...

Apoc
12-29-2006, 11:06 AM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 29 2006, 11:52 AM
i had to look through 3 pages to look at about 5 flicks.
this thread blows.
its just like any other picture thread on BS, people post some shit and everyone inputs... and this is the toy thread so theres like an average of 3 vomitous posts every page...

and no, vomitous is not a word but I think it should be.

uhhh
12-29-2006, 11:18 AM
i use vomitous all the time :unsure:

just because its the toy thread doesnt mean we should fill up pages and pages with just talk. in big boy thread theres beef and different things being said, in here theres like a full page of people who joined yestrerday saying "thats awesome" "thats really cool" "i like that" like those count as different oppinions or even crits. its ridicilous.

imported_Bes_one
12-29-2006, 11:37 AM
Originally posted by Bes_one@Dec 28 2006, 04:46 PM
http://img487.imageshack.us/img487/6535/p1010456bv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any crits on this?
Could i get more crits on this,I only got 2.

trashhh
12-29-2006, 12:02 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/other/STA40754.jpg

another canvas

Sumoe
12-29-2006, 12:32 PM
lovin the skyline, that 3d shit is pretty dope, and i like the yellow force field, you shoulda done some shading tho.

HeiSk
12-29-2006, 12:35 PM
1st one

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/PinkBubleSketch.jpg


2nd one

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/FlopFlopFlopHeisk-1.jpg


Comments/critique/flame....

Darkeist
12-29-2006, 01:25 PM
Seikt. Its my first Blockbuster.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/blockbust.jpg

imported_Bes_one
12-29-2006, 01:38 PM
Trash-Looks dope,love the 3d shit and the forcefield.
Heisk-I think the first one is okay,but i don&#39;t like that S and the E.
Darkeist-You should make all your letters the same size and don&#39;t make the E backwards

Darkeist
12-29-2006, 01:42 PM
Okay, thanks. When I was talking to Heisk on msn, he told me the same thing. I&#39;ll try one more.

BohemianBastard
12-29-2006, 01:45 PM
bes, its pretty shitty, do simples the s is the only mildy good letter

Darkeist-You should make all your letters the same size



http://i12.tinypic.com/2v15grr.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/4g5enux.jpg
http://i14.tinypic.com/2ezsdvr.jpg

i HATE writers block

Darkeist
12-29-2006, 02:25 PM
I&#39;ve only been writing for like a week now. Geez.

I re-did it.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/completeseiktbuster.jpg

Albert Fish
12-29-2006, 02:51 PM
make all the letters the same size and try to stay all caps or all lower case. lines come out cleaner if you use bars to create each piece of the letter and erase the excess pencil lines then outline it in marker, instead of just trying to draw the outline straight up

paint fumes have rotted my brain
12-29-2006, 02:52 PM
Originally posted by Darkeist@Dec 29 2006, 02:25 PM
Seikt. Its my first Blockbuster.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/blockbust.jpg
i feel sick, keep them the same size, try to do straight lines and what age are you?

shamee1991
12-29-2006, 02:55 PM
he is 13

Albert Fish
12-29-2006, 03:30 PM
socrates that is real hot, always liked your sharp style. just emphasize the second letter more cuz i can&#39;t really tell what it is.

shamee1991
12-29-2006, 04:12 PM
http://i14.tinypic.com/2ezsdvr.jpg

just notice that u didnt put a arrow on ya angel...

alera
12-29-2006, 04:16 PM
just some recint sketches
http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/1346/1229061655rq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
kinda forced some of the extentions
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/8668/1229061656vn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just one letter but i was feallin it
critz?

and BohemianBastard i like the e but not so mutch the others... still pritty good :D

noam12
12-29-2006, 04:19 PM
for alera i dont get the extensions on the a and lasnt letter (not sure if its a or r, i think its and r though if that helps lol)

alera
12-29-2006, 04:23 PM
yes ... it is an R

noam12
12-29-2006, 05:16 PM
well i got it right lol, other than that it looks good

..SmOeK 1..
12-29-2006, 05:36 PM
PuNi

(trying some ideas out with words)

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/872/punize7.th.png (http://img172.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punize7.png)

dont got much good colors left.. all my markers are either dead/dieing.

Critz?

Bastardo
12-29-2006, 06:37 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/5919/picture210mj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
stickerrr

emokid
12-29-2006, 06:39 PM
Bastardo you make my pussy wet, and i dont even HAVE one HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE?? i duno
and Trash
your 3d stuff is good but i am in love with the more conventional letters stuff

Fosale!
12-29-2006, 06:40 PM
you are my favorite writer on this site.
besides hare2.
i love you Bastardo.
your inspiration.
<3s.
no homo

hatehatehate for my gay post.

alera
12-29-2006, 07:19 PM
im liking that bastardo man paint it&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
just a throwie what do you think of the E?
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/368/1229062016va0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bouncingsoul
12-29-2006, 07:36 PM
Hate writer&#39;s block... Couldn&#39;t think of a good W and it shows

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0488.jpg

fredom-writer
12-29-2006, 07:38 PM
knuck if you buck

bouncingsoul
12-29-2006, 07:53 PM
Originally posted by fredom&#045;writer@Dec 29 2006, 08:38 PM
Hey bouncing soul. your always posting pencil sketches, could you mabye outline/color one in for us and post it.

love your stlye, just wanna see a finnished peice.
You don&#39;t know how many times I&#39;ve heard that... And my answer is, I don&#39;t feel that I&#39;ve come up with a sketch good enough for me to color in or anything... Add brokeness and laziness and there you go

Here&#39;s another one

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0489.jpg

myl
12-29-2006, 07:53 PM
dope S knews

alera im not likin that E at all...rest is nice though

edit: i was talkin about your first sketch bouncing...

the second is hot too though

Bastardo
12-29-2006, 07:55 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Dec 29 2006, 07:37 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/5919/picture210mj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
stickerrr
first time i bumped a sketch <_<

enuf.
12-29-2006, 08:26 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 29 2006, 12:18 PM
i use vomitous all the time :unsure:

just because its the toy thread doesnt mean we should fill up pages and pages with just talk. in big boy thread theres beef and different things being said, in here theres like a full page of people who joined yestrerday saying "thats awesome" "thats really cool" "i like that" like those count as different oppinions or even crits. its ridicilous.
So post on the mix and get REAL advice that MATTERS&#33;

whoarethereal evil
12-29-2006, 09:01 PM
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/IMG_0395.jpg


delt

i posted it in the painted bit

because im an idiot

whahappen?
12-29-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul+Dec 29 2006, 08:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul &#064; Dec 29 2006, 08:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fredom&#045;writer@Dec 29 2006, 08:38 PM
Hey bouncing soul. your always posting pencil sketches, could you mabye outline/color one in for us and post it.

love your stlye, just wanna see a finnished peice.
You don&#39;t know how many times I&#39;ve heard that... And my answer is, I don&#39;t feel that I&#39;ve come up with a sketch good enough for me to color in or anything... Add brokeness and laziness and there you go

Here&#39;s another one

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0489.jpg [/b][/quote]
please color that PLEASE
not one letter i dont like
and barstardo its awesome cept for the top left side of the m you inspired me to do throwies
but you can get outta here now
bastardo>toy forum

G - Wahl
12-29-2006, 09:11 PM
Delt - All I have to say is make them all the same size, and the T looks nothing like a T, I dont really feel how you did all your letters, just not my style.

Bastardo - Soo, why you still postin in Toy Thread?


Crits on this?
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture.jpg

BohemianBastard
12-29-2006, 09:15 PM
g-wahl, keep it up


I REALLY HATE WRITERS BLOCK
yeah i know its succks
http://i11.tinypic.com/2zycrpc.jpg


everyone has a throwie, can i have one too?
http://i14.tinypic.com/332z53t.jpg

G - Wahl
12-29-2006, 09:26 PM
ooo, does that meen I have potential&#33;? ha..

Anyway, I think that first picture would be better if it didnt have that huge arrow at the bottom, also, I cant seem to figure out what that odd purple creature is coming up from the peice is haha. It reminds me of a pocket pussy.
If you have writers block, go onto Robotswillkill and just search through everyones shit, not saying bit them, but it helps to get your ideas flowing, seeing different colors and shapes..

fredom-writer
12-29-2006, 09:32 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

uhhh
12-29-2006, 09:39 PM
Originally posted by enuf.+Dec 29 2006, 09:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enuf. @ Dec 29 2006, 09:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Dec 29 2006, 12:18 PM
i use vomitous all the time :unsure:

just because its the toy thread doesnt mean we should fill up pages and pages with just talk. in big boy thread theres beef and different things being said, in here theres like a full page of people who joined yestrerday saying "thats awesome" "thats really cool" "i like that" like those count as different oppinions or even crits. its ridicilous.
So post on the mix and get REAL advice that MATTERS&#33; [/b][/quote]
once a lot of people on here who matter like my stuff, then ill start posting more on omnimix and in the big boy forums here.

Fosale!
12-29-2006, 10:38 PM
colored it in.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebkcolor.jpg

bouncingsoul
12-29-2006, 11:46 PM
Eh?

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0491.jpg

Vagrant
12-30-2006, 12:09 AM
The wavey baseline of the letters is interesting but that K is way too small. work on the K and N, then crank out a colored version. should look pretty nice.

Albert Fish
12-30-2006, 12:21 AM
really like the n,e,s maybe fatten the top leg of your k and dont make the middle line of your w so squished and small. then color it you bum. im sketching right now ill have a flick in a little

bastardo love it love it feelin the thumbs up extension

i like the e in that sticker fosale just clean up your lines&#33;

-SiC->
12-30-2006, 12:23 AM
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m236/FTW_Juggalo_FTW/Picture054.jpg
feedback and yea i kno its a shit pic

RFI. SPit
12-30-2006, 12:34 AM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 30 2006, 12:46 AM
Eh?

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0491.jpg
Looks very... Gesus&#39;y..

But none the less, good letters, I like it, good 3d too, first two letters are my favourite.

Fosale!
12-30-2006, 12:51 AM
looks nothing at all like gesus.

whahappen?
12-30-2006, 01:25 AM
gesus...?
dude no

d_g
12-30-2006, 02:17 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Dec 29 2006, 08:38 PM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch25.jpg

At least I did a good job of fucking up the &#39;C&#39;. Anyways...
I can&#39;t see any Gesus in that at all, not even like he&#39;s inlfuenced him a lot...

I like it Knews, &#39;K&#39; could be a bit bigger and the &#39;e&#39; a little smaller.

Sic, that&#39;s a pretty common name, anyways, your letters are too thin and sharp IMO.

fosale, nice handy. I don&#39;t really like the sticker over all, not cause it&#39;s bad, I dunno what the fuck I&#39;m on about haha.

ShIfTeD
12-30-2006, 02:21 AM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5164/dscn0427ij6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Jrow17
12-30-2006, 02:47 AM
this will be my entry for the bayse battle.. its not often that i get my hands on a camera so this is all that i can post for now.. unless i happen to see my brother tomorrow or somethin..


figured id could get some crits before the battle
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8681/baysemq8.jpg

Albert Fish
12-30-2006, 03:23 AM
impressive. id like it better without breaks in the b

shifted i like how that arrow came out. your lines are shakey and your dropshadow goes 2 different directions. does it say ysy? dont like the handies in the letters.

ShIfTeD
12-30-2006, 03:30 AM
yea man...im still getting used to prismas lol..yea it says ysy

shamee1991
12-30-2006, 07:22 AM
not feelin that b.

Bastardo
12-30-2006, 08:34 AM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2451/picture216ao1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Snapple
12-30-2006, 08:44 AM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/7048/dscn1470ff9.jpg

shamee1991
12-30-2006, 09:02 AM
ur letters just dont flow&#33; ur 3d is shite sorri but it is. and what the fuck is that arrow all about. ur letter on the far right is fucked up in so many ways. SIMPLES> BLOCKED LETTERS


http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2451/picture216ao1.jpg
looks pretty kool...love it alot.

alive
12-30-2006, 09:13 AM
ill bastardo


last night. . . .

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02971.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02970.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02972.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02969.jpg



crits plz. peace.

shamee1991
12-30-2006, 09:18 AM
dey all gd on the stucture but the fill, well it need abit of work...

G - Wahl
12-30-2006, 09:34 AM
Not really feeling the extension on the A, it fits with the C, but not the E + R

PushOner
12-30-2006, 11:57 AM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Dec 29 2006, 10:15 PM
g-wahl, keep it up


I REALLY HATE WRITERS BLOCK
yeah i know its succks
http://i11.tinypic.com/2zycrpc.jpg


everyone has a throwie, can i have one too?
http://i14.tinypic.com/332z53t.jpg
nice shit&#33; where do u tag at?....
have u ever lived in south FL?

BohemianBastard
12-30-2006, 12:05 PM
Belgrade, Serbia, Eastern europe
Represseeennttttt

G - Wahl
12-30-2006, 12:13 PM
My 3D needs work..
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture044.jpg
Crits?

entri
12-30-2006, 12:17 PM
Originally posted by jude@Dec 28 2006, 05:16 PM
i just started gettin into graffiti a couple months ago but ive always liked to draw.. lemme know whatcha think of the pieces.. oh ya sorry not all of them are finished either :(

http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000154.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000152.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000150.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000148.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000147.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000144.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000141.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000137.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000134.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000132.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000129.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000123.jpg
http://pic40.picturetrail.com/VOL300/7648101/14468903/217000120.jpg
are you SERIOUS.... man that is some wak ish... and since ur new i wont be that harsh but start REAL easy with some block letter and dont try to add pointless ish...keep it as simple as possible and progress u cant just start graff with piece.. start with handstlyes.. ta bombs.. then do a block letter.. then a burner.. then possibly after like two blackbooks.. go into pieceing..and mabye it will look ALOT better...just some advice..

bouncingsoul
12-30-2006, 12:58 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0512.jpg

kirbstomp
12-30-2006, 01:18 PM
just whipped this up with my new prismas. i went a little heavy on some of the original guidelines, and had trouble with my outliner, but all in all, i liek how it turned out.

http://216.240.159.145/ytphotos/u_photo/C8858433527337u_photo.jpg

emokid
12-30-2006, 01:49 PM
ha prismas, yeah, that looks like crayon

shamee1991
12-30-2006, 01:52 PM
well it looks okay. sumthin about make me think it&#39;s shit dunno what thou. but that R is buggin me think u should of made the top part abit bigger...

ASB_ONE
12-30-2006, 01:58 PM
bastardo rules he is king of throwies.
alive thats some solid ish

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0179_000.jpg

shamee1991
12-30-2006, 02:02 PM
dats some nice shit man, try different fills. the guys looks koool&#33;...

Jrow17
12-30-2006, 02:08 PM
that shit looks pretty good cases, maybe try keepin the s&#39;s lookin the same..

Jrow17
12-30-2006, 02:27 PM
heres another one same style and colors as the bayse one i drew. What can i say, i was in an orange and blue mood... (the orange looks red in the pics)

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8043/slieresizeiz1.jpg


I like the sli, but not the e... when i first drew it i thought it looked alright, but now i dont

emokid
12-30-2006, 02:45 PM
asb, every letter is hot, like it better than your older stuff
jrow, feelin the s and the e but the L and i dont seem to fit well. colours are nice though
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/6029/dscn6183nu3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
shit pic
the decline of british sea power, not very original but whatever i like the words

Nosypainter
12-30-2006, 02:49 PM
Originally posted by enuf.+Dec 29 2006, 12:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enuf. @ Dec 29 2006, 12:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-enuf.@Dec 28 2006, 02:16 AM
Yeah what Albert said.

Been awhile, any Suggestons or comments?
http://i10.tinypic.com/49bkk0o.jpg
Fube- i wouldn&#39;t connect the d and e. but thats just me.

bumpity bump bump&#33;
http://i12.tinypic.com/40kxylc.jpg [/b][/quote]
this is tight as hell...

trashhh
12-30-2006, 03:20 PM
^^ lol learn to colour between the lines&#33;

trashhh
12-30-2006, 04:14 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40757.jpg

Albert Fish
12-30-2006, 04:41 PM
Originally posted by alive@Dec 30 2006, 10:13 AM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02969.jpg
thats what im talkin bout, color more&#33; maybe dont make your 3d as deep next time

bastardo: you know its hot. didnt you love a different girl like a month ago haha

trash: i dont rock 3d so i cant really give crits, really hot though. h always sorta looks like an n or m to me though, maybe try a capital? keep it up.

emokid: simple yet stylish letter structure, keep doin that whole sentence thing it expands your horizons when it comes to letters. i wanna see somethin like that colored with a nice drop shadow. good work.

cases: maybe fill in the empty space between the letters. your letters are a little generic but i still like basically everything you do, just dont be afraid to tweak it.

peace.

MUSASHI
12-30-2006, 04:54 PM
trash your 3d style is coming along fotious&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bayse1.jpg

just liked the way the colors came out when I inverted it ...


haters hate while artists create...

Guerrilla876
12-30-2006, 05:09 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 30 2006, 05:54 PM
trash your 3d style is coming along fotious&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bayse1.jpg

just liked the way the colors came out when I inverted it ...


haters hate while artists create...
i&#39;m feelin&#39; it. i woulda just blend&#39;d the colors more, joo kno? butt whatever works for you mayne.

noam12
12-30-2006, 05:32 PM
damn musashi ur stuff always looks better lol, this ones so trippy though :blink:

aim33_28
12-30-2006, 05:36 PM
mush i really like the colours inverted looks awesome - agree wit guerilla tho maybe blend a bit more.
here is somethin i did - just wanted some opinions. peace
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/2369/1000296io0.jpg

and this is one just a sketch - that i mite fill if its any good

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7482/1000300dv5.jpg

peace brothers

noam12
12-30-2006, 05:50 PM
a lil to many bubbles, but the a kinda looks like and o, get rid of the bottom of it to give it the shape of an a then its all good

emokid
12-30-2006, 06:52 PM
Trash, that 3D sketch is gorgeous

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6131/dscn6185ac7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

half way ish done, anything can happen in the next half hour

Bowser
12-30-2006, 07:12 PM
beautiul simples EMO keep them comin...

Bastardo
12-30-2006, 07:32 PM
ha albert&#33; i dont love her..its just thats what she wanted me to write <_<
shes hot though (Y)

Kore123
12-30-2006, 07:36 PM
just a few k&#39;s that i drew up crits please and do u guys think i should go back to simples click (http://img157.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sor0.jpg)

nemzone
12-30-2006, 08:25 PM
http://a215.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/3/l_c88322481fbffdbbe3dfb9c80a63696e.jpg

love them simples

Sumoe
12-30-2006, 08:34 PM
Looks real good nemz, in all honesty the only thing I don&#39;t really like is the lines going down in the bottom sketch, shit is dope tho.

G - Wahl
12-30-2006, 09:11 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Dec 30 2006, 01:13 PM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture044.jpg

Sigh..Overlooked.

Nems - Sick man, and yeah I agree with Sumoe, the lines are a bit funky. Maybe instead of the lines you can draw what " your life " is..Since the banner says welcome to my life..For example, if your life is graff or w/e draw a train in there..

Emokid - Pretty tight simples, 3D is cool how it comes from diff angels, very cartoonish..

Bastardo
12-30-2006, 09:28 PM
ZO dont connect you letters like that&#33;
and leave the tear drop out&#33;
but i quite like =]
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/2687/picture219ch0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
another sketch to add to the I LOVE *name* pile

MainEvent
12-30-2006, 09:50 PM
nemz- i like your style of connecting letters through sharing the extensions. shadow on the top one is clean as fuck, well done. stay up

g wahl- yeah, i&#39;d get rid of the connections. i like the 3d and good start with the letters. keep drawing and keep posting man.

bastardo- personally, i don&#39;t like the faces and whatnot in throwies, shit isn&#39;t my style. but you&#39;re pretty adept with it, i like the handstyles and the W and the N alot. looking good in general.

G - Wahl
12-30-2006, 09:54 PM
Any suggestions on what to do inplace of my connections? I personally love it..Too bad im toy ha..
Thanks for crits <3

Bastardo
12-30-2006, 09:55 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1096/picture208ht6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
main event..just so yano..^thats a throwie.
what i posted before however is not.

MainEvent
12-30-2006, 10:03 PM
my bad, looked more bubbly and throwie-like to me. haha feelin the throwies though.

and g wahl, its really up to you. keep the connections if you want. just keep drawing.

zale
12-30-2006, 10:11 PM
Originally posted by Snapple@Dec 30 2006, 09:44 AM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/7048/dscn1470ff9.jpg
nice photography, you a student?

heres my friends first attempted bomb, he clearly needs some advice. lol

http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffitiView.ph...age=archiveView (http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffitiView.php?id=1199268&returnpage=archiveView)

zale
12-30-2006, 10:15 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Dec 30 2006, 05:54 PM
trash your 3d style is coming along fotious&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bayse1.jpg

just liked the way the colors came out when I inverted it ...


haters hate while artists create...
you paintball?

sevewon
12-30-2006, 10:15 PM
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/the1.jpg
needs color

nemzone
12-30-2006, 10:33 PM
main event, thanx for crits an all, but y do u say stay up when u crit a sketch lol

zale, &#39;your friend&#39; should cut his dick off

sevewon, it needs somethin, tho i wouldnt be so sure its colour.

Apoc
12-30-2006, 10:34 PM
nemz + bastardo, firey fire

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/P1010038.jpg

Kore123
12-30-2006, 10:40 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Dec 30 2006, 08:36 PM
just a few k&#39;s that i drew up crits please and do u guys think i should go back to simples click (http://img157.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sor0.jpg)
crits please&#33;&#33;&#33;

sevewon
12-30-2006, 10:43 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Dec 30 2006, 11:33 PM
main event, thanx for crits an all, but y do u say stay up when u crit a sketch lol

zale, &#39;your friend&#39; should cut his dick off

sevewon, it needs somethin, tho i wouldnt be so sure its colour.
yea i admit not much sto it but im still trying out this new style ,its my first peice

Apoc
12-30-2006, 10:45 PM
Originally posted by Apoc@Dec 30 2006, 11:34 PM
nemz + bastardo, firey fire

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/P1010038.jpg
bump

G - Wahl
12-30-2006, 10:48 PM
Kore - The 2nd K is pretty nice, just make the vertical leg skinnier, its to fat.

Sumoe
12-30-2006, 10:49 PM
Apoc- AONER? or AOIVER? Neither lol?don&#39;t take out the inside lines, it would look better if you kept em in i can&#39;t tell if the third letter is an "N" or an "I""V", not feelin the E too much but other than that it&#39;s pretty good.

TricksForKids
12-30-2006, 11:56 PM
i just aprayed fuckign deadly laundry checmicals inmy eys and im shitaced


aomer dont make the and m connect what the FUCK is the poitn fo life true story

317773
12-31-2006, 01:14 AM
Apoc - I like your handie and make the v touch the bottom with everything else

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/101_0174.jpg

SEN~
12-31-2006, 02:06 AM
flik

317773
12-31-2006, 02:12 AM
try blocks...



seriously

freakshow
12-31-2006, 02:23 AM
all recent shit...
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1323/comitbx0.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/961/comit2ke9.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/2006/comit3yh5.png (http://imageshack.us)

Albert Fish
12-31-2006, 02:25 AM
comit realllly love that first one hah

make stickers, seems like you&#39;d be a hot character head.

AlterOne
12-31-2006, 02:33 AM
http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/7652/picture002lo3.jpg
Tell me what you think&#33;

aim33_28
12-31-2006, 02:34 AM
somethin i did at work today... was just muckin around... just thought i would post and get some crits. peace.
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1895/1000309fi3.jpg

freakshow
12-31-2006, 02:41 AM
thanks albert. i would post some of my stickers but my scaner isnt working <_<

SEN~
12-31-2006, 02:44 AM
Originally posted by 317773@Dec 31 2006, 03:12 AM
try blocks...



seriously
blocks? block lettering?

Albert Fish
12-31-2006, 02:46 AM
yes, go to the new 2 graff thread, make your letters out of bars, SIMPLEs.

basically dont do whatever it is that you think makes your sketch look hot. it&#39;s disappointing, but we all had to go through it.

oh and comit, your m is a little wizard looking to me hah, idk if you know what im talking about.

SEN~
12-31-2006, 02:52 AM
haha I see i see, its a N to but w/e just shows i know less lol, id kill for some markers right now to but w/e work with what we got right?

Mugyver
12-31-2006, 03:04 AM
hey everyone.
workin on a new name.
comments/critisism/whatever?

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/shun1.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/shun2.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/shun4.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/shun3.jpg

Thanks.
P.s. i have a confession to make.
I went on the puregraffiti forums. They blow. im back here now. it feels good.

Kore123
12-31-2006, 09:34 AM
Originally posted by Kore123@Dec 30 2006, 08:36 PM
just a few k&#39;s that i drew up crits please and do u guys think i should go back to simples click (http://img157.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sor0.jpg)
common somebody?

alive
12-31-2006, 09:41 AM
kore, post them up, i dont click.

shun if ur working in pencil, u mind as well make the lines clean. . . . otherwise the first is the best, keep working on it.

working on color schemes, them putting them to work

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02990.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02975.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02978.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02989.jpg



crits pleaseeeee. thanks, peace.

ras
12-31-2006, 09:41 AM
Kore...Thay look alright ^^...if you whiiiine for crits and bump and bumo it makes people not want to crit you...

Alive...likeing the effect on the first...but the rest...the 3d looks kinda crooked...

New year...new name..

MithOne..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/sdigrohsdds.jpg

Ps. Ignore the crooked hand...i got carried away listening to Eazy-E.. :lol:

Crits...

Thank&#39;s

alive
12-31-2006, 09:45 AM
ras. . . u didnt give me any crits. . . :(
but as for yourself, im gonna tell u the same thing i always have. uve got mad potential, but ur letters are wack. stop it with all the shit around the letters, and focus on them for just a little while, working a bit simpler. itl pay off double.

dashhh
12-31-2006, 09:58 AM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/1968/img00125hx4.jpg

feedback please

ras
12-31-2006, 10:01 AM
Wasnt there a old skool NYC legend called Dash...and btw...give the peeps above you feedback before asking for your own... ;)

alive
12-31-2006, 10:01 AM
not until u post it straight on the page, and u give feedback to everyone else on the page.

MUSASHI
12-31-2006, 10:11 AM
ALIVE,I totally dig how the second one came out that bleed through is a killer effect...

RAS,you filled the page buddy and it looks cool ,quite a contrst from what I&#39;m used to seeing you post,bravo&#33;&#33;&#33;

dahis my dogs name...wrk onyour fill try to not make t not so choppy

whencoloring your fill try not to scribble it in make all your lines match,try and keep your overlaping to a minimum and when you have tooverlap dontdoit after the first line is dry ,do it while it&#39;s wet...make sense?

HoodRichSucka
12-31-2006, 10:33 AM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Dec 30 2006, 02:58 PM
bastardo rules he is king of throwies.
alive thats some solid ish

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0179_000.jpg
i like this a lot, good shit man

-d

CoKKeYONe
12-31-2006, 10:49 AM
Originally posted by ras@Dec 31 2006, 10:41 AM
Kore...Thay look alright ^^...if you whiiiine for crits and bump and bumo it makes people not want to crit you...

Alive...likeing the effect on the first...but the rest...the 3d looks kinda crooked...

New year...new name..

MithOne..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/sdigrohsdds.jpg

Ps. Ignore the crooked hand...i got carried away listening to Eazy-E.. :lol:

Crits...

Thank&#39;s
great sketch
why are u posting in toys forum ????

nemzone
12-31-2006, 11:41 AM
:lol: :lol: :lol: GET A FUCKIN LIFE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; tou dont know the meaning of the word toy so stop questioning ppl.

or are u being sarcastic??

alive
12-31-2006, 11:44 AM
cokkeyone sucks the cokk.
what a fool.

newbies are so quickly fooled by shiny colors. . . .



nemz, perhaps some crits for yours truly?


peace.

MainEvent
12-31-2006, 12:00 PM
Mugyver- pretty good man. i like the first and last ones, just clean up the other two a bit. good start.

alive- good shit man. feelin the extensions and whatnot. work on the E but its looking good.

ras- very sick. good ass characters and just well drawn shit. stay up.

asb_one- nice and clean. good letters, good character. post some more.

RepUrSet
12-31-2006, 12:09 PM
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/2135/picture170an4.th.jpg (http://img376.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture170an4.jpg)
a new toss of mine any crits?

Hilo
12-31-2006, 12:12 PM
i dont like it. that much. i dont like your sig either your on these forums and you have that its retarted

bouncingsoul
12-31-2006, 12:32 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0513.jpg

ras
12-31-2006, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by CoKKeYONe+Dec 31 2006, 04:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (CoKKeYONe @ Dec 31 2006, 04:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Dec 31 2006, 10:41 AM
Kore...Thay look alright ^^...if you whiiiine for crits and bump and bumo it makes people not want to crit you...

Alive...likeing the effect on the first...but the rest...the 3d looks kinda crooked...

New year...new name..

MithOne..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/sdigrohsdds.jpg

Ps. Ignore the crooked hand...i got carried away listening to Eazy-E.. :lol:

Crits...

Thank&#39;s
great sketch
why are u posting in toys forum ???? [/b][/quote]
Bump becuz its nearly 2007 WHOOT WHOOT :lol: :lol: joke..

Anymore Crits... :) ;)

Rep...whut dose it say...and the tag looks a 4 year olds hand writing..

RepUrSet
12-31-2006, 12:34 PM
yeah, but you see i dont read my signature on a regular basis :ph34r:

Sumoe
12-31-2006, 12:41 PM
Cokkeyone-funny shit, he postin in here cause hes still toy.

ras- hate the H and the M and not likin the i, the T is decent, likin the characs and props for fillin the whole page, but you gotta still have your letters the main focus, you can color shit nice and do characs but if you don&#39;t work on your letters you&#39;ll never improve. just sum advice from a fellow toy ;) .

alive
12-31-2006, 12:49 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Dec 31 2006, 01:32 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0513.jpg
awww man howd everybody pass up this. fantastic, great style. wanna exchange?

Kore123
12-31-2006, 12:55 PM
sorry guys for keep askin for crits and shit and for u guys that said u dont wanna click on anythin im gunna try to put the pic up...here it goes........................http://img305.imageshack.us/img305/8890/shr3.jpg

Kore123
12-31-2006, 12:56 PM
yessss&#33; it worked now back to simples or is it OK?

alive
12-31-2006, 12:58 PM
maybe combine the bottom let of the mid right minus the wierd extension with the rest of the bot left plus the top left bar of the mid bot. haha. this is fun.

those kind of are simples. . .


BUT GIVE EVERYONE ELSE ON THE PAGE CRITS B4 ASKING FOR SOME.

sevewon
12-31-2006, 01:00 PM
Originally posted by sevewon@Dec 30 2006, 11:15 PM
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/the1.jpg
needs color
bump CRTIS please

alive
12-31-2006, 01:02 PM
GODDAMNIT. GIVE EVERYONE ELSE ON THE PAGE CRITS B4 ASKING FOR ANY.
OR FUCK OFF

ras
12-31-2006, 01:04 PM
Haaa...Lmfao....way to go Alive...i fucking hate the All Taker&#39;s...All take...No Give &#33;&#33; ... :lol: <_< :angry:

sevewon
12-31-2006, 01:09 PM
Originally posted by alive@Dec 31 2006, 02:02 PM
GODDAMNIT. GIVE EVERYONE ELSE ON THE PAGE CRITS B4 ASKING FOR ANY.
OR FUCK OFF
eeeeeasy , theres no one to critisize right now . we all know the last post with the k&#39;s blows so whats th epoint in saying anything lol.

G - Wahl
12-31-2006, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl+Dec 30 2006, 10:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (G - Wahl @ Dec 30 2006, 10:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-G &#045; Wahl@Dec 30 2006, 01:13 PM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture044.jpg

[/b][/quote]
Bump..

Alright from now on to help get rid of some of the no critters, im not gonna respond to anyones stuff unless they have some crits about other peoples work on that page..
And on that note..


Ras - Some of those music notes are not real notes :). There is alot of stuff going on as useual with your work, it looks to me like you were trying to go for a 2006 year kind of thing, with the ps2 and the ipod, the letters are alright, but I suggest you drop all the random art for now and concentrate on your letters more, you have mad potential though..

Bounceing - I dont like how the E is so big, the K + N could use some work, the K doesnt really look like a K..But anyway, its amazing as always...And color your damn stuff&#33;&#33; Weve never seen anything colord from you&#33;

MainEvent
12-31-2006, 01:13 PM
lol

Rep- looks pretty good, post it bigger though so i can see it better.

BouncingSoul- shits nice. not feelin that E but i like the W and the S alot. good work, post some more.

kore- good start. the basic K in the bottom left and the K one to the right of the upper left one are the best ones. keep drawing amigo.

sevewon- pretty good. i don&#39;t like the first E but the one at the end is pretty sick. i&#39;d say go a little more simple, but color would help. post up more of your work, peace

bouncingsoul
12-31-2006, 01:24 PM
Because I do shitty exchanges...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0519.jpg

bouncingsoul
12-31-2006, 01:38 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0521.jpg

Jrow17
12-31-2006, 01:42 PM
Originally posted by Jrow17@Dec 30 2006, 03:27 PM
heres another one same style and colors as the bayse one i drew. What can i say, i was in an orange and blue mood... (the orange looks red in the pics)

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8043/slieresizeiz1.jpg


I like the sli, but not the e... when i first drew it i thought it looked alright, but now i dont
gonna bump this once hopin for a few more crits..





knews- i like your style but im not feelin the w&#39;s, they seem like they are always leaning when the rest of the letters are straight... Also the n is hiding a little bit, but stilll a nice lookin letter. I really like that s

zo (or whatever)=id disconnect the letters and drop the drop... its doesnt go with the blocky style letters. Good starting point though

sevewon
12-31-2006, 01:47 PM
Originally posted by Jrow17+Dec 31 2006, 02:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Jrow17 @ Dec 31 2006, 02:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Jrow17@Dec 30 2006, 03:27 PM
heres another one same style and colors as the bayse one i drew. What can i say, i was in an orange and blue mood... (the orange looks red in the pics)

http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/8043/slieresizeiz1.jpg


I like the sli, but not the e... when i first drew it i thought it looked alright, but now i dont
gonna bump this once hopin for a few more crits..



[/b][/quote]

looks really good jazz up the "L" a bit more ,other than that

http://www.proairbrush.com/Tony%20the%20Tiger.jpg

TryingTooHard
12-31-2006, 01:49 PM
bouncing.... start coloring dude =( haha I think your pieces would look nice with some color...

sevewon
12-31-2006, 01:55 PM
I think this should be in this forum so all I need is CRITS CRITS CRITS thanks...

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/DSC02789.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/sevewone-1.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/DSCF0431.jpg

Jrow17
12-31-2006, 01:55 PM
i agree with tryintohard,you need some nice colors in those sketches bouncingsoul

sevewon- i kinda like your style man..definitley different from stuff people are used to seeing and thats good.. im diggin the shading on the 3d on the second one.. im not really feelin the 3rd one though

Chop Logic
12-31-2006, 02:52 PM
Last night I had to wait in starbucks for 2 hours for my girlfreind while she was at a party, did these while I was there, the last two were just doodles im kind of messing around with a new name, did them while I was tlaking to freinds and shit:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/three.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymo.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymo2.jpg

crits welcome, thanks.

Apoc
12-31-2006, 02:57 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Dec 30 2006, 11:49 PM
Apoc- AONER? or AOIVER? Neither lol?don&#39;t take out the inside lines, it would look better if you kept em in i can&#39;t tell if the third letter is an "N" or an "I""V", not feelin the E too much but other than that it&#39;s pretty good.
lol, it says AONER, i know its hard to read cuz everything is connected, but I like it that way.

chop that shit is decent keep it coming

Sumoe
12-31-2006, 03:04 PM
Originally posted by sevewon+Dec 31 2006, 02:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sevewon &#064; Dec 31 2006, 02:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Dec 31 2006, 02:02 PM
GODDAMNIT. GIVE EVERYONE ELSE ON THE PAGE CRITS B4 ASKING FOR ANY.
OR FUCK OFF
eeeeeasy , theres no one to critisize right now . we all know the last post with the k&#39;s blows so whats th epoint in saying anything lol. [/b][/quote]
the one with the K&#39;s doesn&#39;t "blow" the aren&#39;t the best K&#39;s but at least he&#39;s starting simple, somethin everyone has to do.

chop- i like i, only thing I don&#39;t like is the "C" in the first sketch but other than that its pretty good.

freakshow
12-31-2006, 03:06 PM
chop those are lookin really good. how long have you been writing?

Chop Logic
12-31-2006, 03:09 PM
Somewhere around a year, probobly less.

Thanks guys I&#39;ll sketch/post more.

uhhh
12-31-2006, 03:19 PM
jrow-i really dont like that too much, if you just evened out your lines itd look really good, and think of a better way for the l and s to meet it looks weird right now.

sevewon-i cant find your letters,m its not that their hard to find its that their not there. do simples, or at least take some of that stuff away.

chop-the first two i dont like that much but the two aymo&#39;s are pretty nice, just need cleaned up here and there.

new sketch, actually took time on it, kinda. the little dots were expirementing, i like them a little bit.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-032S.jpg
crits please?

Albert Fish
12-31-2006, 03:22 PM
zo - dont connect your letters dont have the teardrop over lap the o
chop - maybe thin your letters out a little
bounce - color it doof
sevewon - aiming too high, if you can&#39;t read it dont post it
slie - love it make the s a little smaller it&#39;s over powering the other letters. dont cover the l too much
uhhh - feelin the e alot, make the m a LITTLE more readable, make the o a little bigger and make the l a little taller. like that alot better than usual stuff though. sorry i left you out

TricksForKids
12-31-2006, 03:27 PM
damn this place is ALIVE

ive been wroking everday this week, so i ahvent been sketching and im stressin out, haha oh well, heres some handstyles

uhhh that E is fire, make the M nicer though, not liking the jaggedness of it in the middle, the L&#39;s nice, i dont like the arrows in the O

chop keep up the simples boss and saevwon try and do what chops doin

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5899/handymanxe2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

TryingTooHard
12-31-2006, 03:32 PM
Dont mind the outline yet... I dunno what Im doing with anything yet. Im thinking of a shadow for it
CRITS / FLAMING / HATING WELCOME

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Phly.jpg

Sumoe
12-31-2006, 03:35 PM
tricks-nice handies, I hate it when I can&#39;t sketch which has been this whole week also lol, got a 40 page paper due sux ass.

Phly-nice and simple, fix up the "Y" a little bit and add a drop shadow it&#39;ll look good.

jelis
12-31-2006, 04:51 PM
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/1885/img1941cn6.jpg

ok...start the crits. I&#39;m ready for it this time :unsure:

aim33_28
12-31-2006, 05:00 PM
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jelis - its alrite - bit hard to make out what it says tho if it says jelis maybe u shuld take out the second bump on the side of the j - kinda makes it look like a weird d - i really like the fill tho - but that mite just be me. overall i would try an redefine ur letters cos really half of em dont look like wot there sposed to be...
oh and trying to hard.. man i really like it
peace

aim33_28
12-31-2006, 05:02 PM
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any crits on this?? http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8062/1000309tn0.jpg
peace

jelis
12-31-2006, 05:05 PM
the &#39;s&#39; looks lonely... :( ^^^^^^^^^^^^

alive
12-31-2006, 05:33 PM
Originally posted by jelis@Dec 31 2006, 05:51 PM
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/1885/img1941cn6.jpg

ok...start the crits. I&#39;m ready for it this time :unsure:
yo. remember me?
haha


umm. youve taken a turn to a more abstract style. if thats what u really want, fine, but i think that u have to learn the rules to break them, first learn traditional graffiti.

drop all your colored markers, pick up a pencil and one black marker. focus on the structure of your letters. go simple. dont bubble unless ur working on a throw. straight lines. dont fill.


aim, i agree with jelis, she means the S is too far from the rest of the letters. now go get rid of those dots. start making the letters all the same height. unless your working on a throw, dont bubble your letters unless ur working on a throw. straight lines. dont bother with 3d yet.



peace.

Kore123
12-31-2006, 05:37 PM
alright sorry guys here goes some crits for everybody..........

bouncingsoul.....i like ur style those are good try some color

aim33_28......its alright the s looks a kinda lonely fix the s keep practicing

jelis.......its pretty good kinda hard to read on the e get rid of that line that goes down on top and on the l take off that seconed bubble on the right and awsome fill

tryingtoohard.......nice looks good i would say just add some 3-d or shadow and color

uhhh.........i agree wit albert Fish fix up the m a little make the l and o a little bigger nice fill

and thanks everybody for my cits

TryingTooHard
12-31-2006, 06:36 PM
OMG... horrid. I tried something with tape and paint.. then colored I think it looks like shit.... Flame away =)

Phly = Fly

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Phly001-2.jpg

enuf.
12-31-2006, 06:55 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Dec 31 2006, 04:19 PM
jrow-i really dont like that too much, if you just evened out your lines itd look really good, and think of a better way for the l and s to meet it looks weird right now.

sevewon-i cant find your letters,m its not that their hard to find its that their not there. do simples, or at least take some of that stuff away.

chop-the first two i dont like that much but the two aymo&#39;s are pretty nice, just need cleaned up here and there.

new sketch, actually took time on it, kinda. the little dots were expirementing, i like them a little bit.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-032S.jpg
crits please?
Your hand looks like it says Meko. but it&#39;s alright.
But god damn would you stick with one word&#33;?&#33;