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MainEvent
12-31-2006, 07:12 PM
jelis, i like that alot. letter wise it could use some fixing but the fill is fresh.

melo- go more simple

fredom-writer
12-31-2006, 07:15 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!

fredom-writer
12-31-2006, 07:17 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!

Kems 80
12-31-2006, 07:22 PM
this is an earler one from mine

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5231.jpg

any critics?

plus is there a limit to how many pics u can put up?

oh and a shirt just finished

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/de...06/IMG_5239.jpg (http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5239.jpg)

Jrow17
12-31-2006, 07:51 PM
I hope you dont actually wear that shirt...


thats all i got

Kems 80
12-31-2006, 08:01 PM
oh rly? wats wrong with it?

T_R_O_N
12-31-2006, 08:10 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/Picture002-1.jpg

new camera, crits plz.

fredom-writer
12-31-2006, 08:13 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!

T_R_O_N
12-31-2006, 08:22 PM
^^^ i didnt look at the other page...my bad.

Kems, work on the letter form dude the drop shadow on those letters are off.

KoreTwo
12-31-2006, 08:32 PM
Happy New Year.

ras
12-31-2006, 08:47 PM
yeraH Happuty nrew yeAR

Kems 80
12-31-2006, 08:49 PM
hey man they rnt drops shadows there edges.

dont like the 2nd one garone but the first is nice, more colour patterns not just half wud make it alot better

oh and i just did a hoodie
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5240.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5225.jpg

but thanks for the criticism, at least no flaming

enuf.
12-31-2006, 08:52 PM
Kems- well you wanna know what i think? im not trying to be offensive but, its all ugly.

bouncingsoul
12-31-2006, 08:53 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0525.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0526.jpg

Kems 80
12-31-2006, 08:57 PM
nice i like the variation of block to flow but try shorter shadows cuz they look a bit annoying (opiinion)
oh and very nice spy

meek2
12-31-2006, 09:17 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/S5000342.jpg

critz

meek2
12-31-2006, 09:17 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/S5000342.jpg

critz

meek2
12-31-2006, 09:19 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/S5000342.jpg

critz

whahappen?
12-31-2006, 09:36 PM
nice triple post
dont do those characs ......there just bad
just do block letters
SIMPLE BLOCK LETTERS

Kems 80
12-31-2006, 10:09 PM
just flow man, dont try characters less uve got an art bakground or uve been doin graff for a whill, i started march this year man, n hav a look at my shit, how old r u man? cuz im 13 u look like fukin 20 no offence
no beef tho man

aim33_28
01-01-2007, 12:33 AM
[FONT=Arial][SIZE=1][COLOR=blue] hey thanks for the crits earlier.. yeh the "s" did look a lil lonely ey...here is somethin else i did today -
alive you said i shouldnt do 3d - but i am tryin to learn how - i kno that parts of this is a bit whack but some suggestions cant hurt... peace

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6453/hawes3qp0.jpg

btw these are new pens - there prity sweet on new years sale - happy new years all.. :D
i am so bored - does any one wanna do a like personal battle or somethin?? i was told by one person i wsnt allowed to battle unless my pute is fucking crazyshit house shit - its so fucking annoying - really its my internt but whateveru kno

TryingTooHard
01-01-2007, 12:42 AM
Originally posted by Kems 80@Dec 31 2006, 09:49 PM
hey man they rnt drops shadows there edges.

dont like the 2nd one garone but the first is nice, more colour patterns not just half wud make it alot better

oh and i just did a hoodie
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5240.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5225.jpg

but thanks for the criticism, at least no flaming
what happen to the simplicity or block letters?

straight lines?... im not hating or anything just go simple

Fosale!
01-01-2007, 12:57 AM
Originally posted by Fosale!@Dec 29 2006, 11:38 PM
colored it in.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebkcolor.jpg
a lil more feedback for this new year.

ShIfTeD
01-01-2007, 01:03 AM
i say be more original




can you say chillen?

Blix
01-01-2007, 02:17 AM
Damn kems to be honest that looks horrible all that shit on the clothes just throw em out

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:25 AM
wtf is wrong with it?

Blix
01-01-2007, 02:26 AM
ITS HORRIBLE no letters structure at all it looks like some paint blew up on ur clothes or some shit

Jrow17
01-01-2007, 02:54 AM
alright.. kerms, you have no letter structure.. Hell, i dont even think you have letters to be structured. Start with simples and work your way up.. drop the little shine things, they look like crap. Graffiti isnt drawing colorful blobs and calling them letters.. first you need real letters, then they need to be structured. Id start out with block letters same width and height.. maybe add a little 3d and some color.. Then start small add ons and tweaks. Eventually you will develop a style of your own and it wont looks like giant paint terds on a dollar general hoodie...

dookiefresh
01-01-2007, 03:00 AM
hi guys,my first official piece on bombingscience

http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/4285/dscn0430bz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


it says virus, its for the battle on here

LilTripEihtNine
01-01-2007, 03:23 AM
Damn kems u Fucced that Hoodie UP!!!!! LMAO damn doo fo real. lol aite damn for real i cant stop laughin. what did the hoodie do to u man??!!! aite im done. i dont usually hate on people but damn lmao. aite neways like they said doo GO SIMPLER. for u tho...doo just copy the letters off ur keyboard :lol: whoo aite

n dookie...i think thats a lil late... but i like it...except for that R

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 03:58 AM
oi r these better?
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5230.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5232.jpg

Skeam
01-01-2007, 04:28 AM
no. no there not.

LilTripEihtNine
01-01-2007, 04:48 AM
yeah foo like we said, simpler...addin pretty colors doesnt make it better

navo
01-01-2007, 05:38 AM
Tried my first try to do a sketch or what it is called in english. <_<
Didnt turn out as i wanted it to. poop

klick klick (http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/4118/p1010034ae8.jpg)

BFC
01-01-2007, 06:57 AM
Hawes, define your H and A more.

EBK, the K looks good, that&#39;s about it though.

Dookie and Kems, you both have real bad letter structure. You need to do some simple letters and then work from there.

Navo, try thicker, straight letters first.


Just drew this:

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/nyda_01-01-07_1.jpg

any crits?

BohemianBastard
01-01-2007, 07:01 AM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Jan 1 2007, 02:03 AM
i say be more original




can you say chillen?
i swear to god, your fucking stupid
i mean.... goddamn your stupid

ras
01-01-2007, 08:25 AM
NYDA....i hate sloppy shit...and lose the terrible fill thing... :(

Bohemian....were you from.. ?

T_R_O_N
01-01-2007, 09:21 AM
nyda, simple letters bro and the drop shadow is uneven.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/Picture003.jpg

weee drunk sketching&#33;

BohemianBastard
01-01-2007, 10:21 AM
what the hell is that?
uh i know you were drunk but dont do fills
ye ye ye yeah
and yo what that nyda isnt simple?

ras, serbia

L33mur
01-01-2007, 10:40 AM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r99/l33m/Attix5_Painting___Better_photo_by_V.jpg

Yeah. I know some of the letters are wack, but overall, I like it.

alive
01-01-2007, 10:50 AM
im glad you like it. . . . but i doubt sincerely that anyone else does. block letters. now. no color. no fill.

nyda, dont bubble unless ur working on a throw. dont fill. straight lines&#33; blocks and then learn to slowly twist them.

gapa might not be half bad if you would drop your colored markers and focus on the goddamn letters. no fills&#33;



jesus fucking christ. until u know the letters, fills n colors n 3d n backgrounds are just a crutch to hide your inexperience. get rid of them so you can move on.


peace.

DESAK
01-01-2007, 10:54 AM
Originally posted by fredom&#045;writer+Dec 31 2006, 09:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fredom-writer @ Dec 31 2006, 09:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-T_R_O_N@Dec 31 2006, 09:10 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/Picture002-1.jpg

new camera, crits plz.
I wish they just combined the 12oz fourms and bombing science fourms, everything thats in 12oz&#39;s toy thread is here also.

im not ganna comment you tho, you should learn to leave critz, not just take critz. [/b][/quote]
yo this shit looks good on the real. but yo one ting lose all those shitty swirrly things and the faces all over and it will look tight.

-- peace

alive
01-01-2007, 11:01 AM
y the fuck would u bump just that to give crits, and ignore every1 else on the page?

i dont understand u ppl.

but yaeh, the top looks ill, except for a few little things, the second leg of the second A is thin. the hole in the O is misshapen. the bottom of the E, the curve doesnt fit with the rest of the piece.

the thow, get rid of the swirls and faces.
and dont extend the bottom of the last e like cope 2. . . . haha.
and dont pull the e in so much, move it out, its cramped


peace./

bouncingsoul
01-01-2007, 11:12 AM
Originally posted by alive@Jan 1 2007, 12:01 PM
y the fuck would u bump just that to give crits, and ignore every1 else on the page?

i dont understand u ppl.

but yaeh, the top looks ill, except for a few little things, the second leg of the second A is thin. the hole in the O is misshapen. the bottom of the E, the curve doesnt fit with the rest of the piece.

the thow, get rid of the swirls and faces.
and dont extend the bottom of the last e like cope 2. . . . haha.
and dont pull the e in so much, move it out, its cramped


peace./
Hey, I did your exchange, where&#39;s mine haha

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0519.jpg

alive
01-01-2007, 11:18 AM
my bad, didnt see it, well im off to work on it then&#33;


coming soon. . . .

ASB_ONE
01-01-2007, 11:25 AM
Originally posted by dookiefresh@Jan 1 2007, 04:00 AM
hi guys,my first official piece on bombingscience

http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/4285/dscn0430bz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


it says virus, its for the battle on here
i like this even if it is gettn bad reviews.
bounce, looking nice as usual.
everyone else on this page follow these instructions:

go to start>
all programs>
microsoft word>


lock up your coloured markers and swallow the key
pick yourself a font and copy it in pencil 24/7 until the key passes thru your system.

bouncingsoul
01-01-2007, 11:31 AM
Here&#39;s a better one because I hated the A in the other

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0528.jpg

BFC
01-01-2007, 11:34 AM
Gapa, I like it but you probably shouldn&#39;t have outlined where the red and white meet.

L33mur, that&#39;s just plain ugly.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/nyda_01-01-07_2.jpg

I know the outline is fucked up but how are those letters?

Fosale!
01-01-2007, 12:03 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Jan 1 2007, 01:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Jan 1 2007, 01:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Dec 29 2006, 11:38 PM
colored it in.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebkcolor.jpg
a lil more feedback for this new year. [/b][/quote]
idk how this looks anything like chillen&#39;s work.

T_R_O_N
01-01-2007, 12:06 PM
^^^ i really like the a and the r but the other letters are too big

http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/807/picture018qp8.th.jpg (http://img394.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture018qp8.jpg)

i couldnt help but color >.<

Fosale!
01-01-2007, 12:09 PM
wtf are you talking about.
the letters are e b and k

T_R_O_N
01-01-2007, 12:13 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jan 1 2007, 01:09 PM
wtf are you talking about.
the letters are e b and k
i meant bouncing souls post, but yea your letters need work though.

noam12
01-01-2007, 12:19 PM
nvm

sketch3
01-01-2007, 12:26 PM
get rid of all the extra shit like extentions and lines and concentrait on structer

ras
01-01-2007, 12:28 PM
Dont write that Sayn...it sounds like Sane...R.I.P...Him and Smith are my fucking idol&#39;s...

noam12
01-01-2007, 12:32 PM
ugh time to think of another name UGH <_<

BFC
01-01-2007, 12:48 PM
Originally posted by BFC@Jan 1 2007, 12:34 PM
Gapa, I like it but you probably shouldn&#39;t have outlined where the red and white meet.

L33mur, that&#39;s just plain ugly.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/nyda_01-01-07_2.jpg

I know the outline is fucked up but how are those letters?
Bump for crits. Also I think I&#39;ll start using my video camera to take pictures of sketches instead of my scanner because it seems to do them more justice.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0055.jpg

shamee1991
01-01-2007, 12:54 PM
nice shit, but dont like the top one, but nice simple keep it up&#33;...

bouncingsoul
01-01-2007, 01:08 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0529.jpg

shamee1991
01-01-2007, 01:19 PM
noce shit. like it alot. ty it in just a black pen.

sketch3
01-01-2007, 01:25 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE+Jan 1 2007, 12:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASB_ONE @ Jan 1 2007, 12:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dookiefresh@Jan 1 2007, 04:00 AM
hi guys,my first official piece on bombingscience

http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/4285/dscn0430bz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


it says virus, its for the battle on here
i like this even if it is gettn bad reviews.
bounce, looking nice as usual.
everyone else on this page follow these instructions:

go to start>
all programs>
microsoft word>


lock up your coloured markers and swallow the key
pick yourself a font and copy it in pencil 24/7 until the key passes thru your system. [/b][/quote]
i like the fill

uhhh
01-01-2007, 01:41 PM
all of you.




die.

ras
01-01-2007, 01:53 PM
:( ...Thats not very nice....hahaha... :P :lol: but i do think that green thing up there...i think the style has a BIT of potential...

Albert Fish
01-01-2007, 01:58 PM
feel knews&#39;s e and s

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellr.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/green.jpg

not really happy with these, need new markers too

ras
01-01-2007, 02:02 PM
The first one...i struggled to work out the last letter...one minit i fort it was a P..then a R...then a E..but...the Y is sick ... i like...

the 2nd..nice...i dont like the R...

i tried my best to give you sum constructive crits as i read a post you put in the pro b-book thred about toys in here just say " wow sick style " etc.

;)

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:06 PM
if u fully filling in your drops td look better

ras
01-01-2007, 02:08 PM
wat the hell did u just say..... :blink: :huh: ?...

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:09 PM
instead of doing zigzags on the drop shadows, fully fill them in

Albert Fish
01-01-2007, 02:12 PM
the first one was poutlined in pen, the second one was a dead sharpie

cut me some slack ****

myl
01-01-2007, 02:13 PM
they look cool with the zigzags

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:15 PM
if they were just quick sketches u shud have sed, but its good tho

ras
01-01-2007, 02:15 PM
Yeeah...thats what i think

Jrow17
01-01-2007, 02:29 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Jan 1 2007, 02:58 PM
feel knews&#39;s e and s

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yellr.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/green.jpg

not really happy with these, need new markers too
first one looks like it says Yellpe and the tag says yellser ...the second one looks like it says yeller... i cant figure out what your name is. They look alright though, need some work but for the most part they arent bad. Get rid of the swirls and money signs for holes though, doesnt look right.


bouncingsoul- thats probably my favorite of yours yet.. the left leg of the w could maybe be exteneded to fill the gap between it and the e ..but it looks good like it is regardless. Lol now fill that ish..

Linkzone1
01-01-2007, 02:34 PM
dookiefresh, thats nice

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/9953/0003667nt9.jpg

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:39 PM
fresh but blackbooks please

Linkzone1
01-01-2007, 02:41 PM
It&#39;s not painted so I have no other place to put it.

Jrow17
01-01-2007, 02:42 PM
you posted a fuggin sweater... how can you say "buhhh blackbooks pleaze"

frg

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:43 PM
llol i know but i joined jujst yesterday
forget wat ii sed

ras
01-01-2007, 02:52 PM
Linkzone...yum yum ... chomp chomp...did that bite of Gesus taste yummy....man...looking back at it...thats one of the biggest bites iv EVER seen &#33;..no beef or shit...just saying

sumthing simple with only 2 COLOURS... :lol: :o ...and NO KARAKS... :P
to start of 2007 &#33;&#33;

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1weqfew23-1.jpg

Crits and comments ... thanks &#33;&#33; :) ;)

Bump bottom of the page...sorry for the duoble post...i fuked up

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:54 PM
nice but i dont like the m to i, kinda ugly, good overall, try some 3d tho

ras
01-01-2007, 02:56 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1weqfew23-1.jpg

Bump bottom of the page.. ;)

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 02:58 PM
slow....

Jrow17
01-01-2007, 02:58 PM
if you want to bump your picture you probably should have quoted yourself or reposted the picture.. cause saying bump does nothing


[edit] wtf, it wasnt there just a second ago when i looked.. hrmm

ras
01-01-2007, 03:00 PM
no shit...i fucked up....the picture has come up now tho....

sketch3
01-01-2007, 03:01 PM
finally u stoped all that fancy shit around it, and got down to the nitty gritty,lol all u need is letters. good stuff this is my fav peice from u

ras
01-01-2007, 03:04 PM
is this shit okay as a SIMPLE SIMPLE SIMPLE &#33;&#33; ...if it is...ill stick to this shit...itsa new year and a fresh start...after looking at Labrats shit...its just inspired me to take the advice thats gunna get me to pro level..his level..

ASB_ONE
01-01-2007, 03:06 PM
labrat is off the chain. going to take a fucking long time to get to that level.

ras
01-01-2007, 03:08 PM
noooo shit...hes been doin it since 83...wel i think it was then...but im fucking determined to get to that level..

bouncingsoul
01-01-2007, 03:26 PM
Hey, cut the talk motherfuckers

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0530.jpg

ras
01-01-2007, 03:46 PM
Not feeling the W....likeing the N alot..

anotheer sketch i jus did...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/.jpg

Crits Please... &#33; Thank&#39;s.. ;)

BFC
01-01-2007, 03:48 PM
Mith you should stop connecting your letters. Especially when you only do it two a couple of them. the letters are pretty solid though. I&#39;d thicken up the right side of the M and maybe change the T up a little though.

ras
01-01-2007, 03:49 PM
Yeah...thats a thought...thanks BFC...just ordered a colourless blender and a Skakura white gelly pen...so ill finally be able to get some highlights on my shit.. :D :lol:

trashhh
01-01-2007, 03:52 PM
i like it ras, its good the way youve stopped making letters with drawings of markers etc

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 03:52 PM
and stick with either straight or bubble, cuz i see a bit of both

ras
01-01-2007, 03:56 PM
wtf you talking about Kems...wtf do you know...i appreciate you giving me this advice but from looking at your work you dont know much...

and Trash...thanks man

bouncingsoul
01-01-2007, 04:03 PM
This sketch isn&#39;t worthy of 3d shad-age

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0532.jpg

BFC
01-01-2007, 04:35 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0057.jpg

Chop Logic
01-01-2007, 04:36 PM
Quick sketch from today, had to do something for the theme mechanical:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymohand1.jpg


I&#39;ll get a better pic when its done. Crits comments welcome.

noam12
01-01-2007, 04:57 PM
logic i think ur picture just gave me a orgie in my pants

TricksForKids
01-01-2007, 05:00 PM
well we now know it doesnt take much for you to cum^

knews, you ahve the freshest most orignal S&#39;s, but honestly, the only thing thats going to make your style evolve, is you fucking around with colour and new 3DS it opens up a world of possibilities, i ahvent skeched in a minute and i need some fucking inspiration, so knews wanna do an exchange?

nyda make your eltters like that first n, everything gets skinny and lame after that first N, keep blocking it

chop lose the fat green outline and just do a drop shadow or some simple 3D, the spike on the top of the A isnt working for me, and the random jagged edge in the Y, the M needs some more curves and that O&#39;s cool

oh and the hand&#39;s fucking dope

ras
01-01-2007, 05:00 PM
Logic....that hand is kool....but the only letter i like is the Y...and that Y is dooope..

dookiefresh
01-01-2007, 05:47 PM
Originally posted by BFC@Jan 1 2007, 05:35 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0057.jpg
oh wow, and you said mine looks bad&#33;

man, you have no room to talk, nor should you have the "power" to tell people theirs looks bad

alive
01-01-2007, 05:54 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Jan 1 2007, 12:31 PM
Here&#39;s a better one because I hated the A in the other

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0528.jpg
loved urs. here mine. or vice versa, u know wut i mean.
i rele like my K, i hate my W. the pen "escaping" at the end was supposed to look good, but now i kind of regret it. anyway.

actually i might do a second too. the S and N need work too.

penfreestyle, lined with 2 prismas. cuz thats how i rolllllll.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02993.jpg

critiques&#33;

peace.


my bad 4got to crit. ummm. nyda. work on making all ur letters the same size.
chop- its ill, but the O doesnt rele look like an O. it needs a hole.

dookiefresh
01-01-2007, 05:57 PM
alive, yours is nice,im glad too see your not trying to rock somthing crazy and failing to do so

the only thing i dont like is the 3D, i say just do some simpler 3D, and a little bit thinner

doing that, i think your piece would look waaaaay coller :D

Linkzone1
01-01-2007, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by ras@Jan 1 2007, 03:52 PM
Linkzone...yum yum ... chomp chomp...did that bite of Gesus taste yummy....man...looking back at it...thats one of the biggest bites iv EVER seen &#33;

sumthing simple with only 2 COLOURS... :lol: :o ...and NO KARAKS... :P
to start of 2007 &#33;&#33;

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1weqfew23-1.jpg

Crits and comments ... thanks &#33;&#33; :) ;)

Bump bottom of the page...sorry for the duoble post...i fuked up
...what are you talking about?
Do you even know what you&#39;re sayin....?

noam12
01-01-2007, 06:13 PM
alive- make the 3d a tad bit shorter but other than that its all good, ur w isnt that bad lol, and is it just me or is it getting bigger as it goes along?

noam12
01-01-2007, 06:17 PM
[QUOTE=TricksForKids,Jan 1 2007, 06:00 PM] well we now know it doesnt take much for you to cum^



yea i have that problem lol

bouncingsoul
01-01-2007, 06:18 PM
Alive, good shit... The pen "escaping" would have worked really nice if it was just a horizontal fade-away if you know what I&#39;m talking about...

Bawk, I did a whole page for you because I felt like it... Don&#39;t get jealous alive aha

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0533.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0534.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0535.jpg

dookiefresh
01-01-2007, 06:21 PM
hey bouncing soul, i think your stuff would look waaaaaay better it you rounded off the top of your letters instead of squaring them off.

i dont know why i think that, but since your letters flow round, i just think it would look 30x better if you rounded them off

Linkzone1
01-01-2007, 06:23 PM
bouncing soul - your stuff have improved tremendously.

Kems 80
01-01-2007, 06:34 PM
im feeling those A&#39;s bounce, nice man

ras
01-01-2007, 06:42 PM
Linkzone...i know what im saying...and what i was sayin was you bit Gesus&#39;s stlye...like the teeth on the letters...and the spikes ( w.e there called ) coming out from the forcefeild...or w.e...maybe its just me... <_< :blink:

and Alive...what do u think to those couple of simples i did tonight... Crits wud be nice...? .. ;)

Your shit looks kool...i like the gritty stlye...its like kinda urban to me...very freestyle lol..i dont make sense...

amuin-gcs
01-01-2007, 06:44 PM
yo kerms or kems or whatever the fuck ur name is. you bug man. shut the hell up. i dont think YOU should be tellin people what they need to work on. bcuz ALL your shit is wack/toy to the max.

word to motha.

AMUIN*GCSK*DOAK**

ras
01-01-2007, 06:47 PM
WORD TO THAT SHIT.. :lol: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ :D :D

BFC
01-01-2007, 06:49 PM
Originally posted by dookiefresh+Jan 1 2007, 06:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (dookiefresh @ Jan 1 2007, 06:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-BFC@Jan 1 2007, 05:35 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0057.jpg
oh wow, and you said mine looks bad&#33;

man, you have no room to talk, nor should you have the "power" to tell people theirs looks bad [/b][/quote]
Your piece wasn&#39;t even legible. I don&#39;t have to be real advanced to be able to tell if something looks like shit. I didn&#39;t even knock you, I just said the letters were bad and that you should try getting some good structure down before you try to go wild. I&#39;ll be the first to admit that I&#39;m a beginner and I&#39;m working on getting my structure down. I swear, people are way too easily offended these days.

NiN
01-01-2007, 06:54 PM
just so this post isnt pointless, BFC you letters are simple you might want to work on keeping each letter about the same proportion, for example the N.

and everyone gets so upset so easily, is cuz everyone on this board is 17 or less, just check out that age thread... i was supprised to be a older member here at 22...

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:01 PM
nin=orgasmic(the band lol), but on another note. could we like stop talking and post some stuff ;)

Samp1e
01-01-2007, 07:05 PM
alrighty. this is my first post here... don&#39;t really know what i&#39;m doing, right or wrong, so help me out?

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/3095/photo0008pa0.th.jpg (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0008pa0.jpg)
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/9497/photo0010ec2.th.jpg (http://img50.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0010ec2.jpg)
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/6972/photo0014gl3.th.jpg (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0014gl3.jpg)

yeah.

G - Wahl
01-01-2007, 07:06 PM
Boucning - Beautiful as always, but the 2nd Bawk kinda looks like it says Pask

BFC - Make all your letters the same size, but besides that they are good simples..

Samp - One rule here, crit people above you first before you post. Love that little charactor in the first pic though ha.

This is my first time trying that hole in the wall effect shit
Let me know what you guys think..
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture050.jpg

ras
01-01-2007, 07:09 PM
Yo GWahl....id make the inside of the wwalll REAL dark.. ;)

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:13 PM
g wahl-lol it reminds me of them cromosomes im learning about in science

Samp1e
01-01-2007, 07:14 PM
ooh, didn&#39;t know about the critique thing...

as for your hole in the wall, i like the outer part of it, i just think that it looks funny with the hole itself being straight black. i&#39;d expect there to be something on the other side or detail in it.

G - Wahl
01-01-2007, 07:14 PM
Ras - Alright haha, but what about the structure?

Noam - Yeah thats what I tought after I finished haha, some type of cell, my 3D needs work

Samp - Yeah well this is my first time trying it, so once I get it to look good ill draw somthing in it

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:16 PM
lol u should draw liek the poland springs (not the bottle ) on the other side

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:17 PM
samp-i like ur stlye, but i cant read the second one (ill character on the first one though)

Samp1e
01-01-2007, 07:27 PM
the second one is supposed to say deny... i should simplify?

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:29 PM
yes just make a lil less bubbles and lines going out, and i still cant tell thats a d but its weird, once u told me what it siad i saw the letters, this always happens...

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:30 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/7792/nelsonsstuff048qs5.jpg

york, i hate the way the why turned out to look like a lower case g but the face is okay i guess

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3200/nelsonsstuff049jm5.jpg

i dunno tried sumthing new lol

ras
01-01-2007, 07:32 PM
Samp...i suggest goin a lil simpler...tone it down a bit...and once you got the knowledge of letters...go back to that style...bacuz its unique..i like it alot...you gota mad potential..

GWAHL....the structres aight..make it moooore cracky and jagged on the inside edge tho mayne..and i just remembered...u painted that throw yet...and that lime green roller..hahaahaa :lol: ? ... lmao

Noam ... dunno really...kinda sloppy...your background proper reminds me other something...crnt think tho...its kindaa late...AAAHHH thats it Yeller...and those lines in the letters on the last one look a lil like mine did erlier...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/.jpg

Now i aint sayin you BIT AT ALL...im just saying they look alike...and its something alot of writers do..

BFC....just do that without any 3d..bcuz from what i see from you...its your 3d that always lacks.. ;)

BFC
01-01-2007, 07:34 PM
Simple as I can get. Chose a bad vanishing point for the 3d.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0001.jpg



Noam, that looks like a rip off of Yeller (Albert Fish). Your letters need some work. With that style they should be more rounded.

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:36 PM
yea i took the lil side things from yeller, wondered what it would look like lol, but its not a bite so yea

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:38 PM
nvm

ras
01-01-2007, 07:38 PM
you just said " i took the side things from yeller...but its not a bite... " ... wtf... :blink:...are you serious... " i tend to take lil things " ...man .... one of the whole points in graffiti is to come up with your OWN shit...your OWN style...not " take lil things " of other people&#39;s shit.. :blink:

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:41 PM
bleh i should be quiet lol, what i mean is like i come up with stuff but if i see sumthing i like ill try it once in a while(i just put 2 dashes ehh)

trim
01-01-2007, 07:44 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j142/dggcrew/IMG_0368.jpg
ANY CRITZ??

trim
01-01-2007, 07:44 PM
I TRIED TO HIGHLITE IT CUS I DONT HAV A WHITE MARKER

ras
01-01-2007, 07:47 PM
...Trim...DONT USE CAPS ITS ANNOYING...u shudnt of done those highlights on paint...the highlights are actually off aswell...i like the H...just lose the huge extension on the left side...not likin the E at all..the fill is really sloppy.. the red line things thru the middle are not bad...and going by that sketch...you certainly never did that freight in you sig..

myl
01-01-2007, 07:47 PM
you are a fucking idiot

go simple

noam12
01-01-2007, 07:50 PM
dont connect ur letter that much, and for some reason i dont like the colors, it hurts my eyes

trim
01-01-2007, 07:59 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j142/dggcrew/IMG_0372.jpg

ras
01-01-2007, 08:05 PM
thats a bit better...but pretend itsa bitch...strip it bare...take off her fishnet tights...her thongs...her huge bra...untill its just her and her huge titties...( in other words lose the fill...3d...forcefeild...untill its just those letter with nothing else...and do a normal H and E with no seprate bars or w.e there called ) ...

noam12
01-01-2007, 08:13 PM
lol damn ras, somebody likes detail, o and trim nice dog?

ras
01-01-2007, 08:17 PM
wtf..you dont make sense at all..

Nooo shit it was deep...

trim
01-01-2007, 08:17 PM
RAS,that was very deep

sank one
01-01-2007, 08:33 PM
anyone thats new here needs to go straight to the "new to graff" thread. search new to graff and read it.

lazypiss04
01-01-2007, 08:44 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m302/lazypiss04/DSCN0695.jpg

ok heres just a simple block i did.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m302/lazypiss04/DSCN0697.jpg
now with fill and border

now to crit on ppl so ppl dont get pissed

trim-i like the red lines but the colors arent my favorite andin your other pic i dont like the silver highlights

crits plz?

noam12
01-01-2007, 08:46 PM
nark- did u like smear ur hands on the bottom one or sumthing? but still i like the first corner fill, not so much the outline and the main filll though, at least ur letters are about the same size

lazypiss04
01-01-2007, 08:53 PM
i was too lazy to get markers so i used pastels for the fill and outlines thats y they&#39;re fuked up

Soze One.
01-01-2007, 08:53 PM
:D
back.
sesh i owe you stickers ill get ya man, ibeen very busy and havent fucked around with graff in a bit.
heres some new shit new name, after half my school knew what i was writin i had to change it.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1478.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1479.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1481.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1480.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1477.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1482.jpg

Albert Fish
01-01-2007, 08:58 PM
sezer, like that straight letter so much better than your old "soze" stuff, keep it up. im feeling your highliter pain too hah.

a quick straight letter:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/straight.jpg
and a throw ive been workin on:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/throw.jpg

Soze One.
01-01-2007, 09:00 PM
i like dem bright colors on my paper and in my cup.

noam12
01-01-2007, 09:08 PM
soze= lol i love that stencil, nice pic with the new years aha.

yells= the second one, the e kinda looks like an s so yea

G - Wahl
01-01-2007, 09:18 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Jan 1 2007, 08:06 PM
This is my first time trying that hole in the wall effect shit
Let me know what you guys think..
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture050.jpg
Anymore crits?

Albert Fish - Man that ish looks soo fimiliar

Soze - That red canvas made me happy

What Happened to the Letters?
01-01-2007, 09:20 PM
albert fish, stop biting yaks, ive seen you do it a few tiems now, make your own stuff dude

and trim, for now keep all your letters connected and on the pointed part of the m, square it off a bit and itll look nice

uhhh
01-01-2007, 09:21 PM
yels-i really like that first one, that throw though, not feeling it at all. but i think that as simple as your stuff is you could just bomb that stuff.

Albert Fish
01-01-2007, 09:21 PM
id crit your hole but i have no idea ha

maybe it looks familiar cuz i used to post under the name baper moves kilos? plus we both post in the long island thread

and the little carrot thing in my e is too much like ar4, i noticed after i flicked it, whatever
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/straight.jpg

lazypiss04
01-01-2007, 09:29 PM
Originally posted by lazypiss04@Jan 1 2007, 09:44 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m302/lazypiss04/DSCN0695.jpg

ok heres just a simple block i did.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m302/lazypiss04/DSCN0697.jpg
now with fill and border

now to crit on ppl so ppl dont get pissed

trim-i like the red lines but the colors arent my favorite andin your other pic i dont like the silver highlights

crits plz?
repost

Fosale!
01-01-2007, 09:32 PM
^where you live.
bc here in nj theres a nark that has mad ups, and is very skilled.

uhhh
01-01-2007, 09:37 PM
can someone show me who yells is biting?

it keeps coming up and yes ive seen styles like that, but thats a very basic simple style..

lazypiss04
01-01-2007, 09:37 PM
dam... im from md/dc area

i was thinken the name might be taken but i dunno if i shuld change it

Soze One.
01-01-2007, 09:39 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Jan 1 2007, 10:21 PM
id crit your hole but i have no idea ha

maybe it looks familiar cuz i used to post under the name baper moves kilos? plus we both post in the long island thread

and the little carrot thing in my e is too much like ar4, i noticed after i flicked it, whatever
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/straight.jpg
oh i remeber you you been doin this style for minute though.
I like.

Kore123
01-01-2007, 09:53 PM
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6332/kohn0.jpg

crits and comments please and thanks in advance and heres my crits for this page..............

lazypiss04.... letter structure is alright but the coloring looks like piss no offence but lookin good

albertfish.....nice letter structure ok coloring and great shadow it looks pretty good

g-whal..... it looks good make the middle part whatever you call it darker but it looks siick

G - Wahl
01-01-2007, 09:57 PM
Kore - If you&#39;re gonna have the drop shadow on the left side, dont put it on the right side of the letters on the bottom.

BohemianBastard
01-01-2007, 09:57 PM
it keeps coming up and yes ive seen styles like that, but thats a very basic simple style..

word, still dope though

Kore123
01-01-2007, 10:00 PM
ohh and bouncingsoul i really like ur style pm me if ur down for an exchange..even tho im not that good

Kore123
01-01-2007, 10:02 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Jan 1 2007, 10:57 PM
Kore - If you&#39;re gonna have the drop shadow on the left side, dont put it on the right side of the letters on the bottom.
aiight thanks for the tip :D

Albert Fish
01-01-2007, 10:08 PM
people have said i "bite ar4" and there really isnt much of a similarity in our stuff. besides the simple childish letter type thing. i dont know, i dont bite though. i started with generic letters then eventually fattened them and made them thinner then made them smoother then did simple add ons and eventually came to this style. if you really need me too ill show your a timeline of sketches from like july to now to show what i mean.

uhhh
01-01-2007, 10:09 PM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Jan 1 2007, 10:57 PM

it keeps coming up and yes ive seen styles like that, but thats a very basic simple style..

word, still dope though
oh, i absolutely love his style, its really simple yet very stylish too.
i was more pointing out that its not a bite of anyone inparticular, more just of that style in general, which is straying far away from being a bite.

EDIT-id enjoy a timeline quite much so.

Albert Fish
01-01-2007, 10:12 PM
my stuff is like simplified eurostyle, it&#39;s not that i bite anything, its more that you tend to sketch more similarly to the style that interests you. like sky5 like&#39;s wildstyles so his sketches are technical, that doesnt mean he bit any wildstyle writer in particular, it&#39;s basically just a graffiti sub genre.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yelser.jpg
new sketch, didnt wanna post again so i edited this one.

Zee!
01-01-2007, 11:16 PM
Wow, lol. My brother used to write "Kore" back when we first got into graff...

Kore123
01-01-2007, 11:21 PM
Originally posted by Zee&#33;@Jan 2 2007, 12:16 AM
Wow, lol. My brother used to write "Kore" back when we first got into graff...
no shit how long ago hahahah while its my name now muahhaha

Soze One.
01-01-2007, 11:22 PM
dude dont be proud of that.

Bowser
01-01-2007, 11:31 PM
go here hes a home town king here in my city but he write Kore also.


go here... http://www.myspace.com/djcoreroc

Albert/Baper I love your style and I wouldn&#39;t change a bit, its simple yet very sexy. I wish I could come to a point in style somewhere....

nemzone
01-01-2007, 11:41 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Jan 2 2007, 04:12 AM
my stuff is like simplified eurostyle, it&#39;s not that i bite anything, its more that you tend to sketch more similarly to the style that interests you. like sky5 like&#39;s wildstyles so his sketches are technical, that doesnt mean he bit any wildstyle writer in particular, it&#39;s basically just a graffiti sub genre.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yelser.jpg
new sketch, didnt wanna post again so i edited this one.
your baper on a new username rite?? but i love that style neway, i got a similar e to that in my letter inventory lol

http://a215.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/3/l_c88322481fbffdbbe3dfb9c80a63696e.jpg

duno if i posted this b4

Kore123
01-01-2007, 11:50 PM
Originally posted by Bowser@Jan 2 2007, 12:31 AM
go here hes a home town king here in my city but he write Kore also.


go here... http://www.myspace.com/djcoreroc

Albert/Baper I love your style and I wouldn&#39;t change a bit, its simple yet very sexy. I wish I could come to a point in style somewhere....
while where r u from and besides he writes core not kore

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 12:24 AM
:rolleyes: :lol: :ph34r:
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1485.jpg

Kore123
01-02-2007, 12:26 AM
Originally posted by Kore123@Jan 1 2007, 10:53 PM
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6332/kohn0.jpg

crits and comments please and thanks in advance and heres my crits for this page..............

lazypiss04.... letter structure is alright but the coloring looks like piss no offence but lookin good

albertfish.....nice letter structure ok coloring and great shadow it looks pretty good

g-whal..... it looks good make the middle part whatever you call it darker but it looks siick
bump....crits please

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 12:42 AM
straight up my nigg.
schill out with dem wiggly lines make letters the same size and basic structure look at your keyboard make the letters like that. dont try to put shadows right now dont use markers get a pencil and eraser thats what i use fam.
start off with a k and make it straight block do the same with the rest of them junts.
once you get that down start addin shadow/ 3d
i aint the best to give advice but people told me this too
so dont take offense because im tryin to help ya out my nigg

sevewon
01-02-2007, 12:43 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 2 2007, 12:41 AM


http://a215.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/3/l_c88322481fbffdbbe3dfb9c80a63696e.jpg

duno if i posted this b4
feelin it, NY styles.. try using a ruler :ph34r: , if need be for those skinny lines under the "M"

bouncingsoul
01-02-2007, 12:45 AM
Kore exchange

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0536.jpg

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 12:52 AM
nems that sorta reminds me of the tony montana logo

Stevie
01-02-2007, 12:59 AM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8868/freebubbletopng2.jpg

http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/6826/freeflattopxu9.jpg

they&#39;re half assed, just ideas.. what do you guys think?

fredom-writer
01-02-2007, 01:10 AM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Jrow17
01-02-2007, 01:27 AM
Originally posted by Stevie@Jan 2 2007, 01:59 AM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8868/freebubbletopng2.jpg

http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/6826/freeflattopxu9.jpg

they&#39;re half assed, just ideas.. what do you guys think?
im likin it.. says free right?? My only crit for you is to buy a sketch book


kore- (not knews&#39; kore, but kore123)- Id keep the 2nd one and work with that.. drop the handstyles for now lol..

soze- not a bad karak, you should post up some more.. id like to see


if i ever get around to drawin some new shit ill post soon..

Zee!
01-02-2007, 01:29 AM
And "Nems" is a hometown king where I currently live, ha ha. Oh and Nems, I&#39;m liking the style..

Albert Fish
01-02-2007, 01:33 AM
free, i dont really feel the r idk what to do about it though ha sorry.

jrow, do you wanna exchange? i write yells, yels, yeller, yelser, yellser, whatever as long as it has the word yell in it.

nemzone
01-02-2007, 01:38 AM
And "Nems" is a hometown king where I currently live, ha ha. Oh and Nems, I&#39;m liking the style..
well im guessing hes not from scotland, and i write nemZ ;)

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 01:40 AM
hey ill take a photo of my style workout and get sum criits cuz my scanners fucked

Jrow17
01-02-2007, 02:03 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Jan 2 2007, 02:33 AM
free, i dont really feel the r idk what to do about it though ha sorry.

jrow, do you wanna exchange? i write yells, yels, yeller, yelser, yellser, whatever as long as it has the word yell in it.
yeah man im up for that.. Ill get back to you tomorrow sometime.. I write slie... I gotta admit somethin though, im really lazy so it might take me a few days to post somethin up unless i have some crazy free time

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 02:18 AM
i am way better with karaks but heres some lame shit

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1487.jpg

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 02:22 AM
nice but yd u outlijne the splash withb black, maybe darker purple

Jrow17
01-02-2007, 02:24 AM
one weird thing that i notice is that your name is sezer ...which is pretty much like c3zr just spelled different... meh.. i dunno

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 02:41 AM
its not like cesar
its like scissor
sky 5 bite i know but im blown.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1488.jpg

d_g
01-02-2007, 02:48 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Jan 2 2007, 04:12 PM
my stuff is like simplified eurostyle, it&#39;s not that i bite anything, its more that you tend to sketch more similarly to the style that interests you. like sky5 like&#39;s wildstyles so his sketches are technical, that doesnt mean he bit any wildstyle writer in particular, it&#39;s basically just a graffiti sub genre.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/yelser.jpg
new sketch, didnt wanna post again so i edited this one.
Hey, do you know of anywhere to find pics of styles similar to yours and the stuff that you&#39;re into?, I really like Euro graff but it&#39;s hard to find good pics of it.

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 02:54 AM
hey these photos r pretty crap n shit, they look better with a beeter, not broken camera and even better n real life. :lol:
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5345.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5349.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5348.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5347.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5346.jpg

nice jrow, try gettin different variations tho

any1 wanna do an exchange?

i no it looks crappy, but im puttin it 2getha now and tll looj heaps good with fills

sank one
01-02-2007, 03:00 AM
does that show how the progression of letters should go :lol: :lol:

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 03:03 AM
:wacko:
i hope not.

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 03:04 AM
yeh i thought itd help other peeps, i use it alot for me, wanna do an exchange

edit: y? whats wrong with it

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 03:11 AM
use pencil to satr off with and stick to simpler letters
ill exchange write sezer or soze
you write kems 80 right?

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 03:12 AM
yeh i used pencil but phto dusnt work cuz its night,
uhhh yeh i wirte kems 80 wanna exchange?

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 03:13 AM
sure. ill have it up either tomorrow or tonight .

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 03:15 AM
alrite ill do handstyle aqswell

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 03:17 AM
sry bout duble post but wat do u put up? sezer?

ras
01-02-2007, 06:03 AM
KEMS KEMS KEMS KEMS KEMS ... that ketter progrerssion shit is stright wack...your the one that needs to be following letter progression ( like me ) from the new 2 graff thred...not making your own so other people can follow YOUR&#39;S when you havent even got a basic letter down ...didnt you get what Amunin said to you...your shit is wack...yet you try to help ppl out..obviously people appreciate you helping them out butyou talk a loada shit most of the time...like you said to me .. " try sum 3d tho " ... when your doing simple stuff you dont do 3d...

Trust me....you need to go simple...now i was a prick for not going simple when Nemz was going on and on and telling me to and not appreciting it..but i thought i was good enough not too...when i really wasnt...after starting fresh for 2007...i found that when i went back to simple shit yday...my stuff was kinda better...after doing a lil bit of complex shit...but now if i go back to simples...get even more knowledge of letters...il be able to progress more...not sayin you shud do complex stuff NOW...bcuz iv been doing this longer than you...so what im sayin is Kems you should go simpler.... ;) No beef or all that shit...iv been in your boots like most toys on here...but simples is the way to go... ;)

ill have sum shit up soon .. ;)

and what do you actually write...kems , deri what ?...i suggest just having one name and not using a load at the same time... ;)

Kore123
01-02-2007, 07:24 AM
that looks clean and nice

Kore123
01-02-2007, 07:26 AM
Originally posted by Soze One.@Jan 2 2007, 01:42 AM
straight up my nigg.
schill out with dem wiggly lines make letters the same size and basic structure look at your keyboard make the letters like that. dont try to put shadows right now dont use markers get a pencil and eraser thats what i use fam.
start off with a k and make it straight block do the same with the rest of them junts.
once you get that down start addin shadow/ 3d
i aint the best to give advice but people told me this too
so dont take offense because im tryin to help ya out my nigg
yeah i kno ur helpen me out thanks for the advice

Skeam
01-02-2007, 08:45 AM
did this tonite and, umm, yeh whateva. im having a bit of trouble with my C&#39;s... owell keep practising i guess

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7132/hpim2864qe9.jpg

noam12
01-02-2007, 09:23 AM
skeam-lol i like the lil star in the corner, only thing that anoys me is the c for some resaon, i dunno lolbut its good

Baper Moves Kilos. <3
01-02-2007, 09:26 AM
skeam, your s is pretty stylish, the rest is sorta cookie cutter looking. still fresh though just spice up the other letters a little.

slie i&#39;ll get workin on that exchange once i get home

hah, still logged in in school under baper

alive
01-02-2007, 09:41 AM
skeam, it seems to me that the trouble with your C&#39;s are b/c ur trying to bend it in a way that C&#39;s arent really meant to be bent. i think, although it looks fine overall, u would be helped by just a few more sketches that go a little bit simpler.
i doubt ur gonna listen, but thats what i advise.


critiques?


CAER dejavu?
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02997.jpg

ras
01-02-2007, 09:47 AM
looks aight...but i aint liking the E..nor the A...like the R the way the bottom morphs into a bubble kinda thing ;)

shamee1991
01-02-2007, 10:29 AM
looks gd just dont like the A...

Fluffy Bunnies
01-02-2007, 12:23 PM
Yup just an idea&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_2918.jpg
The stuff that looks like smudges is actually from the back of that page, like you see I was eating osme wendy&#39;s and then some grease dripped on the sketch on the other side.

emokid
01-02-2007, 12:29 PM
fluffy, looks real good, only thing i would change/ get rid of is the thing on the end of the top bar of the E, doesn&#39;t seem to fit well.

my 3D wants some advice or comments please
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8656/dscn6190ag5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the g is fucked generally.

shamee1991
01-02-2007, 12:32 PM
na the G is looking kool.. love dem simples...

ShIfTeD
01-02-2007, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by emokid@Jan 2 2007, 01:29 PM
fluffy, looks real good, only thing i would change/ get rid of is the thing on the end of the top bar of the E, doesn&#39;t seem to fit well.

my 3D wants some advice or comments please
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8656/dscn6190ag5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the g is fucked generally.
one of the best things ive seen im many many many pages

alive
01-02-2007, 01:00 PM
Originally posted by alive@Jan 2 2007, 10:41 AM
CAER dejavu?
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02997.jpg
fuck u shifted. lol

crits then?

Fluffy Bunnies
01-02-2007, 01:03 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jan 2 2007, 01:23 PM
Yup just an idea&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_2918.jpg
The stuff that looks like smudges is actually from the back of that page, like you see I was eating osme wendy&#39;s and then some grease dripped on the sketch on the other side.
BumpaBump&#33;

ras
01-02-2007, 01:03 PM
Pear..dope 3d AS USUAL :lol: :) ;)

Alive...i critted your throw mayne....you said to go simpler...so hows this... ;)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/dgfswrew.jpg

Hope you like..

Crits also please &#33; Thanks &#33;

alive
01-02-2007, 01:09 PM
maybe the best ive ever seen from you.
now, although it looks great for a single piece, for the sake of advancing your letters, straighten out the letters, and mkae them all the same size. and then try, (slowly) twisting the letters different ways.

keep going
pecae.

kicklip9634
01-02-2007, 01:10 PM
i love the shading on that 3d keep it up

ras
01-02-2007, 01:11 PM
okay man...so the same kinda peice....make all the letters the same size...but its only really the H thats biggers...and slowly and only abit twist my letters...but what do you mean by " twist " ???? ...

Thanks.. :)

Kickflip...was that directed at me.. ? ..

Hilo
01-02-2007, 01:22 PM
make the m less complicated and make it more like the h

Linkzone1
01-02-2007, 01:27 PM
emokid - your stuff is dope for this toys section

Sorry this isn&#39;t clear. Bad camera

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/6506/0003670ir7.jpg

ras
01-02-2007, 01:27 PM
No offence mayn...thanks for the crit... :) but how the hell is the M complicated :blink: ...

ALIVE ARE YOU THERE.. &#33;&#33; ...whut u mean by " twist " .. ? ;)

Link...frm wut i can see...well i cnrt see much...i can see a S..but there is far far too many uneccary addons etc. go simpler mayn...NO BEEF...hah .. &#33;&#33; :D ;)

sketch3
01-02-2007, 01:35 PM
yea link wat he said

BohemianBastard
01-02-2007, 01:41 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Jan 2 2007, 01:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Jan 2 2007, 01:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-emokid@Jan 2 2007, 01:29 PM
fluffy, looks real good, only thing i would change/ get rid of is the thing on the end of the top bar of the E, doesn&#39;t seem to fit well.

my 3D wants some advice or comments please
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8656/dscn6190ag5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the g is fucked generally.
one of the best things ive seen im many many many pages [/b][/quote]
its because your a fucking idiot
you couldnt recognise style if it cut off your penis

linkzone, what the fuck is that?
its fuckin wack

and ras, alive was right keep it simple

emo kid, keep it up

and alive, your crits suck

have you people been brainwaashed into replying the same way to every single person?
its rediculous, think about it

Linkzone1
01-02-2007, 01:45 PM
Ok here is more in depth.
You can see the letter and outlines now.

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/5193/0003671wp6.jpg
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8123/0003671222222ep5.jpg

ras
01-02-2007, 01:47 PM
Yo Bo... &#33; .. you said Alive was right by saying keep it simple...yet you say his crits suck..lol.. :blink:

Links...you aint done you self any justice mayn..now it shows that you do have SOME lettter knowledge but not as much for you to start adding on stuff...so...just go simpleee...keep it steadyyyy...and then go onto that shit..after you got simples down &#33; ;)

BohemianBastard
01-02-2007, 01:51 PM
his crits suck because of this

now, although it looks great for a single piece, for the sake of advancing your letters, straighten out the letters, and mkae them all the same size. and then try, (slowly) twisting the letters different ways.
acting all high and mighty, when he still hasnt done a good simple
alive also needs to stop doing the same letters over and over again
its called stagnation, its the bane of a graffiti writer

linkzone its fucking wack, outlining it and coloring it in paint isnt gonna make it any better

oh and if i offended anyone, im not really sorry. but pm me and we can argue as long as you want

Soze One.
01-02-2007, 01:52 PM
sky 5 bite
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1488.jpg
crits???? :rolleyes:

Zee!
01-02-2007, 01:53 PM
Hmm... Links go a bit simpler... if you want to add extensions, I&#39;d first do the basic lettering structure (which you obviously did), but then put a box around your peice and make sure all the sextensions stay within that. Also, go for symmetry and balance.

BFC
01-02-2007, 02:00 PM
Caer - I like the C, A, and the R. The E needs work and I&#39;d take that bubble off the end of the R

Akone - I really like this. It&#39;s a nice stylistic simple. I&#39;d take the little doo-dads off the top of the o and e though.

Mith - Very nice, but like someone said, make your M more like your H and that would be fuckin solid.

Linkzone - Is that supposed to say Scaz? If so your A really needs work. But the rest is pretty good

Sezer - I like that a lot but you shouldn&#39;t have outlined the pink splats in black. You could&#39;ve tried that brown rusty color that&#39;s in the fill.


http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-02-07_1.jpg

Just a Simple and a Throw. Crits?

trashhh
01-02-2007, 02:03 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/Picture005.jpg

Everyone always goes on about simples simples simples. To be honest i never started with simples, I started with pieces and improved them from that... so i decided to do some just to see how they would turn out. I like the one on the left here.. digi cam is at my mates house so shitty webcam pics for now

ras
01-02-2007, 02:13 PM
Soze...man ... i dont like people that admit they bite..so i aint gunna crit you...but i will say...go simpler...and i like the tag

Yeah Trash...im in the same boat as you..i feel from doing complex shit...when i went back to simples...i actually had the knowledge and structure on letters...

shit looks nice anyways..definatly feeling the T on the left one..

and Bo...you attitude make me luagh like fuck.. &#33; hahaha aaa :lol: :lol:

BFC....yo ... i like the way you give evryone crits.. &#33;...so ima give you sum..okay...that last simple block shit you did..was perfect..okay...now that I think isnt...so whut i wud say is...go get that peice ...

heres my very own method of crits :

get that peice...pretend itsa bitch....strip of its bra so its her huge titties showing ( take of the 3d ) ... and panties ( take out the fill ) ... untill you just have the body ( the letters themselves ) ... then fuck that bitch...then post it up...im waiting &#33;&#33; :lol: :lol:

karmatikal
01-02-2007, 02:28 PM
trash- I like that simple on the left

nyda - you got the right idea, now try adding a drop shadow on the throw and some 3d on the block letters

soze- I don&#39;t like the fill or the colors and the letters look a little too jagged, they don&#39;t flow too well


new throw here, any thoughts?

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2007_0102Image0005.jpg


I fucked up the K it should be thicker

BFC
01-02-2007, 02:33 PM
Karma I like that throw a lot. Only thing I can think of to improve it is to make the K and R more like the M in the leg area. Thanks for the crit.

Stinky
01-02-2007, 02:35 PM
I think the only problem is that the gaps in between letters seem to be too big. Do you know what I&#39;m talkin about? I cant articulate it very well. Overall I think it has alot of potential.

-Stinky-

Samp1e
01-02-2007, 02:37 PM
yeah karma, i like that throw a lot too, like BFC said, make the K&#39;s and the R&#39;s legs like on the M. i dig those A&#39;s too.

some chunky lettering and a tag
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/7448/photo0001fk2.th.jpg (http://img239.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0001fk2.jpg)

trashhh
01-02-2007, 02:40 PM
Sample i cant really crit it cos its simple block lettering like even a non writer would draw. Get rid of the charcter betweeb the letters and add 3d

newbornsek
01-02-2007, 02:42 PM
new throw here, any thoughts?

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2007_0102Image0005.jpg


I fucked up the K it should be thicker [/QUOTE]
carma i really love your shit, i see enough of it up, but that would be dope if you could make that into a one liner, ujujst a tought
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00049.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00050.jpg
anyways im not sure if my shit is wanted here but ill try anyways. i fucked up in a few places but any suggestions?

ras
01-02-2007, 02:44 PM
Lose the karak in the middle...put it too the side or sumthing..

newbornsek
01-02-2007, 02:51 PM
aite cool thanks

Kems 80
01-02-2007, 02:53 PM
nice but try not doing the 70&#39;s flairs at the end of each letter, they look wak in my opinion

whahappen?
01-02-2007, 02:55 PM
Originally posted by karmatikal@Jan 2 2007, 03:28 PM
trash- I like that simple on the left

nyda - you got the right idea, now try adding a drop shadow on the throw and some 3d on the block letters

soze- I don&#39;t like the fill or the colors and the letters look a little too jagged, they don&#39;t flow too well


new throw here, any thoughts?

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/karma905/2007_0102Image0005.jpg


I fucked up the K it should be thicker
hot
just dont put that bump on the right side of the k where it is
also you should be able to draw a straight line across the tops of the letters where its sharp to make it even your r is alot lower i got the same problem its a bitch
make the middle line where it goes into the letter on the m go down farther and make the m more....square i guess i dont know how to explain

karmatikal
01-02-2007, 02:58 PM
thanks for all the crits everyone

and newbornsek... there is a carma and a karma... different people

Linkzone1
01-02-2007, 02:59 PM
Originally posted by Zee&#33;@Jan 2 2007, 02:53 PM
Hmm... Links go a bit simpler... if you want to add extensions, I&#39;d first do the basic lettering structure (which you obviously did), but then put a box around your peice and make sure all the sextensions stay within that. Also, go for symmetry and balance.
Thanks for the help man

BohemianBastard - this is a toy forum. Ripping on the stuff in here is almost a sin. We know we&#39;re not as good as you guys. We&#39;re workin on getting better and want some help from other people that know more and might actually be nice about it. Don&#39;t rip on stuff in here. It&#39;s just rude.

whahappen?
01-02-2007, 03:02 PM
alright old shit till i get my computer running again
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5038/untitledra4.png

ras
01-02-2007, 03:03 PM
Originally posted by Kems 80@Jan 2 2007, 08:53 PM
nice but try not doing the 70&#39;s flairs at the end of each letter, they look wak in my opinion
Didnt you get my PM...i sent you <_< if you did...its up to you not to listen.. :blink: <_<

whappen...try sumthin different..

whahappen?
01-02-2007, 03:05 PM
yea thats just old shit till i can get my camera and computer moniter all set up which will be in a few weeks
and holy shit dude you got 50 posts today&#33;&#33;&#33; :o :P