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whahappen?
01-07-2007, 12:23 PM
older
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/2230/ackwf5.jpg
i wish my camera software wasnt sucking right now....

emokid
01-07-2007, 12:36 PM
asb, that is gawjus, lovin the 3D

ras
01-07-2007, 12:56 PM
Whappen...that flows really well.. !!

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1sfsd.jpg

bringing the simplness..

Crits..

bouncingsoul
01-07-2007, 01:02 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0557.jpg

molotow_15
01-07-2007, 01:02 PM
very nice simples ras and boucing soul

but not as gd as myn im dope

http://file010a.bebo.com/large/2006/05/22/02/206106281a880980299b117753553l.jpg

hungr
01-07-2007, 01:31 PM
:huh:

bouncingsoul
01-07-2007, 01:37 PM
Fuck, molotow wins this page

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0558.jpg

ras
01-07-2007, 01:49 PM
Originally posted by ras@Jan 7 2007, 05:56 PM
Whappen...that flows really well.. !!

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1sfsd.jpg

bringing the simplness..

Crits..
Bump for crits..

Molotow...what isit ? lol..

Albert Fish
01-07-2007, 01:53 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jan 7 2007, 09:33 AM
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/5922/bawkpinkypi2.jpg
wow, bawk... really hot. probably one of my favorites from you. if the k was lined up as high as the b it would look more symmetrical and i think that would top it off, but it still looks hot. propsssssss. and congrats becoming a mod ha. BSC 2007!

T_R_O_N
01-07-2007, 02:29 PM
^^^^ nice stuff everyone, bouncing soul with the freshness


this is my feeble attempt at doing the "old school" look, not finished though...

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/11/picture029fg3.th.jpg (http://img122.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture029fg3.jpg)

Kaze
01-07-2007, 02:35 PM
bouncingsoul you stuffs dope
mith i like the simple look sweeeett stuff
Tron- im feeling it

ShIfTeD
01-07-2007, 02:38 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Jan 7 2007, 01:37 PM
Fuck, molotow wins this page

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0558.jpg
im feelin the fill mane!

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3121/dscn0453dh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my 2nd attempt at making 3D
messed it up with the markers <_<

http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/1160/dscn0454jz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

try 3 at it with no color yet

STAR01
01-07-2007, 02:42 PM
:unsure: http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/561/1001644ij9.th.jpg

quick sketch last night

any crits

whahappen?
01-07-2007, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 7 2007, 12:23 PM
older
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/2230/ackwf5.jpg
i wish my camera software wasnt sucking right now....
just cause im a crits whore
shifted im really liking that
dream make your letters all the same size height and width...block letters

Fixion
01-07-2007, 03:03 PM
That&#39;s ill man. Keep it up, put that up on a wall now.

whahappen?
01-07-2007, 03:06 PM
yea i already wouldve but the first time my friend couldnt sleep over and his hosue has an alarm and im horrible at like knowing what to do when a cop or someone shows up
then we were definatly gonna go bombing on a tuesday and i got fucking strept throat for a week
and then my friend&#39;s parents were just being annoying and stupid
fucking sucks...playing on going this weekend though

knews thats is fucking awesome i love every part of all those letters..

Albert Fish
01-07-2007, 03:14 PM
"dream" are you serious? do some research. don&#39;t write dream he&#39;s a legend and he&#39;s dead.

scec feelin the s in that throw, the rest of the letters are alright too just dont really stand out to me.

shifted, find a style and stick to it and work on your own style instead of just doing something completely different everyweek for an online sketch battle. no beef, just work on your own thing and you&#39;ll get better than trying a million different styles and not mastering any of them.

ive ben sketching alot im just too lazy to flick, ill post in a couple hours.

trashhh
01-07-2007, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40780.jpg

ras
01-07-2007, 03:25 PM
WOW.. :o ..Trash..baby.. :wub:

trashhh
01-07-2007, 03:27 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 7 2007, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40780.jpg
bump bottom of page... thanks ras lol

ShIfTeD
01-07-2007, 03:31 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Jan 7 2007, 03:14 PM
"dream" are you serious? do some research. don&#39;t write dream he&#39;s a legend and he&#39;s dead.

scec feelin the s in that throw, the rest of the letters are alright too just dont really stand out to me.

shifted, find a style and stick to it and work on your own style instead of just doing something completely different everyweek for an online sketch battle. no beef, just work on your own thing and you&#39;ll get better than trying a million different styles and not mastering any of them.

ive ben sketching alot im just too lazy to flick, ill post in a couple hours.
thanks for the crits man, same whahappen

ive been trieng a very long time to get this specific style, i just try other stuff on battles....this is a big step for me, cuz its finally looking like somthing other than a pile of doodoo :D

Jrow17
01-07-2007, 03:32 PM
that shits hot trash.. its like the piece version of your handstyle.. really like it

emokid
01-07-2007, 03:41 PM
TRASHHH good fucking GOD that 3D is awesome

shamee1991
01-07-2007, 03:43 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 7 2007, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40780.jpg
bump bottom of page... thanks ras lol

new style cuz it is lookin hot&#33;...

beefgerky
01-07-2007, 03:48 PM
yummy yummy yummmy.

G - Wahl
01-07-2007, 04:21 PM
Holy shit Trash, thats the best style ive ever seen in my life...
I love you..So much..

uhhh
01-07-2007, 04:41 PM
in your life?
although that is pretty nice trash.
very nice, actually.

newbornsek
01-07-2007, 05:20 PM
pretty nice ish trash

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00062.jpg

ras
01-07-2007, 05:37 PM
Wat the hell....you rep a crew..

Albert Fish
01-07-2007, 05:39 PM
trash, idk i guess im the only one but thats my least favorite sketch from you. i don&#39;t like the whole underline thing and the extensions from the r and s just don&#39;t look right to me, clean though.

newborn sek, the f is pretty messy, dont curl down the top leg that much. besides that just clean up your lines and keep up those simples cuz it looks decent. maybe add some unique style to it.

Kore123
01-07-2007, 05:40 PM
http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/6520/picture006jd4.jpg
i was bored so i figured id see if i can make something worth of the sketh battle i still dont know if i should enter it the pic is kinda dark and hard to see ill take a better one tommaro.....but otherwise comments and crits please and do you guys think i should enter it?

newbornsek.....i like your style

trash....that shits raw as fuck

slEEt
01-07-2007, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 7 2007, 03:17 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40780.jpg
TRASH&#33; That shit is FUCKING FIRE.

MAERone
01-07-2007, 05:53 PM
hey Trash what kind of marker is the red one? it looks mad clean

PaintTheWorld
01-07-2007, 06:10 PM
BouncingSoul - That is really shaping up. Way to bring the style.
ras - the i is workin well. I love the caracs but it is nice to see an all letter piece from you. Hot.
Trash - Sickness. Plain and simple, that&#39;s the Sickness.

Tryin to get a feel for where I&#39;m at. A few crits would be nice.
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o45/AJAPhotos/100_0044.jpg
Thanx.

Oh yeah, I hate the background, and I know everyone here does too.

newbornsek
01-07-2007, 06:23 PM
Originally posted by ras@Jan 7 2007, 05:37 PM
Wat the hell....you rep a crew..
yea.. i do..
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/thcroller.jpg

and a sketch from a lil back
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00049.jpg

ASB_ONE
01-07-2007, 06:32 PM
i entered this one in the end.......

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/asb_one_causr.jpg

newbornsek
01-07-2007, 06:44 PM
i like it... other than the black outline..

another from the book


http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00067.jpg

emokid
01-07-2007, 07:00 PM
asb, lovely, and i quite like the black outline
new born sek, charac is okay, but the letters are a bit off, try using bars to construct them, it helps a lot.

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/6623/dscn6197zh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

outlineee

ASB_ONE
01-07-2007, 07:01 PM
newborn - bro seriously im all for taking crits and i value your opinion and shit, but when your work looks like that ^ dont rele think u can give crits

emokid ur letters are fresh man we shud get up on a collab or some shit

BFC
01-07-2007, 07:09 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Jan 7 2007, 02:38 PM
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/1160/dscn0454jz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Wait do you write Clesh? Where are you from?

Hilo
01-07-2007, 07:12 PM
feelin that pear./

freakshow
01-07-2007, 07:17 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6559/doodiepunchinrl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7893/im008720yd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3696/causrbattlecf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dont know if im gunna enter that in the battle or not
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4743/piecemarfu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

coments from a more expirienced writer would be cool...

Bowser
01-07-2007, 07:26 PM
where you from BFC? ohio maybe???

Kore123
01-07-2007, 07:30 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Jan 7 2007, 05:40 PM
http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/6520/picture006jd4.jpg
i was bored so i figured id see if i can make something worth of the sketh battle i still dont know if i should enter it the pic is kinda dark and hard to see ill take a better one tommaro.....but otherwise comments and crits please and do you guys think i should enter it?

newbornsek.....i like your style

trash....that shits raw as fuck
any comments at all? lol

uhhh
01-07-2007, 07:33 PM
freakshow, that first karak is really nice, the causr sketch would look better with out he bumps, and that mar is frigity fresh. hah.

sky told me to go crazy with extensions for awile, to get a better feel for em or something, so here..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-038S.jpg
says "me"

artcrime99
01-07-2007, 07:36 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5238/wick6smallyf8.jpg
*shrugs*

emokid
01-07-2007, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 7 2007, 07:01 PM
newborn - bro seriously im all for taking crits and i value your opinion and shit, but when your work looks like that ^ dont rele think u can give crits

emokid ur letters are fresh man we shud get up on a collab or some shit
cheers man, thatd be cool, i suck at fills/ colours though :rolleyes:

freakshow, characs look... well, freaky. i like the bottom pic best, fresh as, and it looks like its made of sock puppets :D

kore, not really feelin the fill although it might just be the picture, too much black

Albert Fish
01-07-2007, 07:52 PM
kore, i cant even see that last flick. looks too jagged and blocky to me and the fills to complicated. going simple doesn&#39;t just mean letters

freakshow, i like that mar so much more than your comit stuff, way more stylish. do more in that style it&#39;s fat and funky. props.

heres a straight letter and an overdue exchange with jrow.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/blue.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/new/slie.jpg

enuf.
01-07-2007, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by enuf.@Jan 7 2007, 02:05 AM
if i were uhhh. sorry for flash burn.
http://i1.tinypic.com/47spc8n.jpg
bump. alberts i like. uhhh. don&#39;t listen to him.

Hilo
01-07-2007, 07:56 PM
EDIT

meetermaid
01-07-2007, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by freakshow@Jan 7 2007, 04:17 PM

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3696/causrbattlecf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dont know if im gunna enter that in the battle or not
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4743/piecemarfu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

coments from a more expirienced writer would be cool...
i LOVE the bottom mar, being nitpicky, i&#39;d move the right leg of the r over to the right just a touch, otherwise it&#39;s on fire. the causr one is nice too, i&#39;d enter it..

slEEt
01-07-2007, 08:20 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/7744/blah002mediumgs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9231/blahmediumse5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

whahappen?
01-07-2007, 08:26 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 7 2007, 12:23 PM
older
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/2230/ackwf5.jpg
i wish my camera software wasnt sucking right now....
B)
secor dont extend the right leg of the r good stuff though cept the left of the c should go down so it looks overlapped
freakshow-mar stuff is good but the s on causr i hate how the bottom of it goes up
and lower the bottom part o the c
yellis-awesome cant say anything else
uhhh-cant read that for shit i thought it was like four letetrs and you were like says me
make it with alotta extension but readable at the same time

Truth.
01-07-2007, 08:34 PM
scec lookin good, try some drop shadow now or sumthin, i quite like it

just drawin random stuff today:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/puppet.jpg

Hilo
01-07-2007, 08:40 PM
truth did you get inspired by nsync when you did that?

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4692/picture195ty7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

beefgerky
01-07-2007, 08:42 PM
BYE BYE BYE&#33;


hilo that shit is chilllinnn.


(flick in a sec.)

Truth.
01-07-2007, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Jan 7 2007, 08:40 PM
truth did you get inspired by nsync when you did that?

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4692/picture195ty7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
possibly. i thought &#39;hey i wanna draw a charac&#39; and didnt know what i shud draw, and a depressed looking sort of puppet guy popped into my head, i dunno where i saw it before, but i tried to draw what was in my head. so maybe the charac i saw somewhere was nsync&#39;s i dunno.

sky 5
01-07-2007, 08:47 PM
http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/7504/1212140cu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^ simple stickies . .

its just random advice givin out over teh internet for less than a penny so listen to it or not . . . what i told UHHH in more words is that if he wants to get into wildstyle hes ready . . . he knows how to tweak and bend letters/bars, keeping them proportional, and repeats certain curves/lines/angles throughout his letter so there is a consistent style and flow to them . . i suggested that he go crazy with teh addons for awhile, putting them and having them shoot out from everywhere so he can see what works and looks good and what doesnt . . you sacrifice some letter structure but its only for alil while, then when you think youve got addons down you can start to reconcentrate on your base letters, making them better but still incorporating some (maybe half the addons/extensions) you use to do . .

9 months ago when i first came on BS i was at UHHH s stage and decided to just go crazy with the addons for a few months (i think it helped and was fun), my letters were hurtin and people would say "loose the extensions, too many arrows" and they were right but i wasnt worried about what my stuff was lookin right then cuz i know im still a work in progress . . youre never gonna get good at wildstyle if you keep doing simples . . that bein said youd should have simples on lock and know how to bend a bar before you try wildstyle . . i dont know, maybe im wrong

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5218/1212141sy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^ one of my first posts on BS, damn i had addons coming off addons and that was the idea at the time . . .

Soze One.
01-07-2007, 08:48 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1506.jpg
i like the s thats it.

freakshow
01-07-2007, 08:51 PM
thanks yells and meeter...



hilo that throw is illl

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/6492/throwste8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
those are about 3 month old

Albert Fish
01-07-2007, 08:51 PM
nah truth hilo&#39;s just being a weiner, nsync - no strings attached ha. feelin the handstyle and the karak. dont like that *****s arm though.

feelin that throw hilo&#33; that h is hot fire and the rest are cute too, pretty clean looking throw, props.

skyyyyyy your s&#39;s are always on point. that p looks a little lower case e-ish. that&#39;s my only complaint. fresh.

sky 5
01-07-2007, 09:01 PM
yeah i love the letter S lately . . and you caught me on the P, the kept tryin to clean up the lines on the inside of the P but just making it bigger and bigger till i just gave up . .

SEEER - doing 3 Es in a row (or any letter) is hard to do and not have lookin redundant, it is unique thoo . . .those canvasses you posted where lookin pretty nice

beefgerky
01-07-2007, 09:08 PM
i tihnk its sezer....lol


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap311.jpg
ehh, i dont like this one.

Albert Fish
01-07-2007, 09:08 PM
i think thats a messed up z not an e. if so dont do that extension sezer. and your r looks alot like sky&#39;s but im not callin bit im just saying.

edit: gerkkkk i love your new style.. not feelin the word skum cuz it&#39;s played out and there is a scum that destroys things, but im not gonna tell you to change it simply because you pull that word off like crazy. funk.

Hilo
01-07-2007, 09:11 PM
skum. work on your U and M.
make them fit. like nicer.

kicklip9634
01-07-2007, 09:16 PM
i dunno the "k" looks reel funky to me

Hilo
01-07-2007, 09:16 PM
cause it is./

TricksForKids
01-07-2007, 09:17 PM
My god this thread is poppn, tjeres so much shit to give feedback on:

sleet, nice simple letters bos, im always a fan of an O just being a plain circle like that, keep it up

truth, great chracter idea, just need to work on theactual drawing of it, i thhink itd look sick in dark black messy pen

sky5, your works a pleasure to watch as always, i dont know why but i just dont like the S in the first pic *shrugs* just aint doin it for me, but everyone else loves it, so dont listen to me ;)

hilo, i like it , especially the "LO"m consider throwing just the LO up

Sezer, the Z and E need some work man, keep the style consistent

freakshow, loving the MA throwup, try making the As two bumps look lke wings since they already do, then add some wings to the M, i tyhink thatd be cool, but maybe im wrong


gerky i love that shit minues the "the", those letters arent working for me, just make them DEADLY simple enxt time, and the top of the U once again,that add-on doesnt fit with your style


and my handcuffs story is i was drunk, tagging stop sign, two cops saw me, threw me in the back, took me out, threw me onto the car, cuffed me, drove me home to my parents instead of the station which was nice of em i guess at 3am

mind.or.matter
01-07-2007, 09:33 PM
Workin with a new name, says desr
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/Graffiti/DSCF2173.jpg

Albert Fish
01-07-2007, 10:01 PM
throw uppp:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/throw6524.jpg
not too happy with this one:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/browner.jpg

feedback?

Grape1
01-07-2007, 10:21 PM
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/9051/grhdr003dz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Tell me what you think, I know i&#39;m a toy, but i&#39;d like some advice, and if anybody in Toronto is interested in starting a graff group, let me know.

Thanks&#33;

uhhh
01-07-2007, 10:58 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Jan 7 2007, 07:33 PM
freakshow, that first karak is really nice, the causr sketch would look better with out he bumps, and that mar is frigity fresh. hah.

sky told me to go crazy with extensions for awile, to get a better feel for em or something, so here..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-038S.jpg
says "me"
bumpity bump.

grap-the g is fucked, the rest is just kida ehh, plain.

freakshow
01-07-2007, 11:00 PM
desr your d looks like an r, yells they are both pretty good im not sure what to tell you...

i cant decide which one i want to enter into the battle...
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/5601/im008748vy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
or
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/1859/causrbattlewk3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Soze One.
01-07-2007, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Jan 7 2007, 10:01 PM
throw uppp:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/throw6524.jpg
not too happy with this one:
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/browner.jpg

feedback?
:lol: :D :rolleyes: ;) :o :huh: :P B) :)

Truth.
01-07-2007, 11:02 PM
love the charac letter on the first one freakshow, hot.

slEEt
01-07-2007, 11:19 PM
Originally posted by slEEt@Jan 7 2007, 08:20 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/7744/blah002mediumgs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9231/blahmediumse5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
anymore quick crits?

BFC
01-07-2007, 11:26 PM
Desr, that throw could work if you fixed a few things. The D, the extension makes it look like a lower case R. Smooth that out. The line on the E shouldn&#39;t go all the way across. The S would be great if you didn&#39;t swirl out that line. The R is perfect though.

Yels, your usual style. Not much for me to say but I dig it.

Grape, your G needs work and the rest of the letters shouldn&#39;t have those bulging legs.

Uhhh, to be honest not really feeling it. I prefer the Letters to be a little more straight and legible where it matters. You shouldn&#39;t go crazy with em till you get to the outer edges.

Freakshow, looking fresh. Really loving the first one. Don&#39;t like the second character but the eye on the R is very nice.

Secor, I&#39;d say round the tops of your E, C, and R and it would look pretty tight.


http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0026.jpg

Working on some slanted block letters. Need help with the D. I have the basic shape sketched there but I need a way to differentiate it from an O. I don&#39;t wanna really round it or cut it too much on the corner cause I think it would take away some of the flow the straight edge across the letters has. Any ideas?

enuf.
01-07-2007, 11:59 PM
Originally posted by enuf.+Jan 7 2007, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (enuf. @ Jan 7 2007, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-enuf.@Jan 7 2007, 02:05 AM
if i were uhhh. sorry for flash burn.
http://i1.tinypic.com/47spc8n.jpg
bump. alberts i like. uhhh. don&#39;t listen to him. [/b][/quote]
bump again.
i got bottom of page and still no comments.

bfc- im not able to comment because my computer isnt loading.

Samp1e
01-08-2007, 12:02 AM
freakshow -- diggin the top one, like that char on it over the bottom one. colors are clean, but it&#39;d be nice to see dropshadow on that. someone also mentioned the way the S comes up at the back, which looks awkward.

sleet -- the way you have it so that the letters don&#39;t connect on the left, like on the O or C doesn&#39;t sit with me right.... they look incomplete.

BFC -- likin it, and how the bars all are being consistent and even with each other (like the levels of them, how the Y&#39;s and A&#39;s bridges are.

as for the D, the red highlight edit alone might work since (it looks like) you&#39;re trying to make all the letters square, but maybe the yellow edit also would work
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8615/moooojt9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

enuf. -- its really inconsistent and the addons and stuff don&#39;t go with each other. simpler... see how the A is huge and the rest of the letters are much smaller? your 3D is off too, esp. on the A

Volume_one_
01-08-2007, 12:46 AM
Originally posted by mind.or.matter@Jan 7 2007, 09:33 PM
Workin with a new name, says desr
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/Graffiti/DSCF2173.jpg
this reminds me of the cheat from homestarrunner . com

BFC
01-08-2007, 12:47 AM
I think I got the D how I want it. Threw on some 3D too.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0033.jpg

I think I&#39;ll color this if I come up with a good fill and color scheme.

DocterX
01-08-2007, 12:55 AM
can someone give me some inspiration for Sludge? maybe just some simple block letters or just some advice.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-08-2007, 12:57 AM
you just gave yourself some advice simple block letters.

DocterX
01-08-2007, 01:05 AM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Jan 7 2007, 09:57 PM
you just gave yourself some advice simple block letters.
yeah true hah was just looking for another persons take on the name ill up what ive got so far

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-08-2007, 01:08 AM
ill do an exchange with you, if you want?
I&#39;ll write Sludge you write Soze or Sezer.
i&#39;ll up it tomorrow.

DocterX
01-08-2007, 01:12 AM
alright sounds good ill work on it tonight or tommorrow and up it tommorrow.

ras
01-08-2007, 02:40 AM
Originally posted by BFC@Jan 8 2007, 05:47 AM
I think I got the D how I want it. Threw on some 3D too.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/PIC_0033.jpg

I think I&#39;ll color this if I come up with a good fill and color scheme.
shits dope.. :D ... way to go Nyda...u know what...cula the 3d in GREY and add an Orange outline..like this..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/dgfswrew.jpg

and..

i started using blocks for my letters...hopefully ill " Progress alot faster "...

BFC
01-08-2007, 03:39 AM
Thanks Mith, took your suggestion on the orange, but went with a green for the 3d and a dark blue for the regular outline.

Noone to crit, damn.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-08-07_1.jpg

I&#39;m very happy with this one. Looks fucking ill. I might even get a better picture of it tomorrow or scan it. Looking at it makes me really want to go out and paint it.

All Hail:DEAD-EYES
01-08-2007, 04:15 AM
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/WakeUp.jpg

Just joimed today. been looking here for awhile now. one of the first of the new year. somethin quick. not my name, but ill defiantly put up some of my stuff soon. tell me what ya&#39;ll think.

BohemianBastard
01-08-2007, 07:14 AM
oh god oh god oh god
someone else rag on him i cannot

anyone down for an exchange?

nemzone
01-08-2007, 07:49 AM
right here bohemian... duno what u write tho.... and its nemz incase u were wondering ;)

BohemianBastard
01-08-2007, 08:24 AM
enser/ensr/enzeru/ensah/enzah
:)

ras
01-08-2007, 10:08 AM
BFC...thats great man...its a pleasure helping you out.. :lol: ;)

ALLHAILDEADEYES...you shit lookslike musashis colouring lol...anyway...i bet you ... 99.99.09.0.99999 % of ther poeple on here will say " go simpler " .. :)

Albert Fish
01-08-2007, 10:20 AM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Jan 8 2007, 08:24 AM
enser/ensr/enzeru/ensah/enzah
:)
EXCHANGE WITH ME. &#39;ve been meaning to ask you. i write yels or yelser. ill draw yours up when i get home.

nyda that blockbuster is clean, would make a good roller.

DocterX
01-08-2007, 11:12 AM
For Sezer.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/DSC00024.jpg

Nyda- Thats Dope. Im Diggin it. Love the Choice of colors.

BohemianBastard
01-08-2007, 12:11 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish+Jan 8 2007, 10:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Albert Fish @ Jan 8 2007, 10:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-BohemianBastard@Jan 8 2007, 08:24 AM
enser/ensr/enzeru/ensah/enzah
:)
EXCHANGE WITH ME. &#39;ve been meaning to ask you. i write yels or yelser. ill draw yours up when i get home.

nyda that blockbuster is clean, would make a good roller. [/b][/quote]
okay okay
ill have both up tomorrow
gotta sketch for tonights piecing
tomorrow is like 20 hours
its 6 pm :(

nemzone
01-08-2007, 12:44 PM
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/4269/imag0001sc7.jpg

:&#39;( i always fuck my sketches up these days

PaintTheWorld
01-08-2007, 01:01 PM
Originally posted by PaintTheWorld@Jan 7 2007, 06:10 PM
Tryin to get a feel for where I&#39;m at. A few crits would be nice.
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o45/AJAPhotos/100_0044.jpg
Thanx.

Oh yeah, I hate the background, and I know everyone here does too.
Bump, bump, bump for crits.

ras
01-08-2007, 01:19 PM
What was the rule Tricks invented about " CRIT THE OTHER PEOPLE BEFORE ASKING FOR YOUR OWN CRITS... " ... even worse BUMPING you shit without giving CRITS.. &#33;&#33;&#33; :angry: <_<

Nemz...were u bin...not liking the Tag that much..but i really like the M and Z...but the M n E seem to be bigger the the N n Z ... or is that just the style..?..

eMJayBee
01-08-2007, 02:40 PM
Doctor x- Thats nice, although you need to work on your lines and your coloring, both are a little sloppy.
Nemz- The 3-d is nice, I like your "m" and "z".
Paint the world- I dunno, maybe go simpler.

Any Critz on this?
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picturesofwobbitz046.jpg

trashhh
01-08-2007, 02:49 PM
Does it say warning? I think the 3d effect is a bit too crazy thers too much goin on ther, and thers too many extensions coming from nowher etc

eMJayBee
01-08-2007, 02:56 PM
Yes it does say warning. if you follow the arrows they all come from part of a letter, execpt for the arrow comming out of the "a".

NiN
01-08-2007, 03:03 PM
I think theres too much going on, but thats just me, and it was hard for me to make out the A

DocterX
01-08-2007, 03:19 PM
Anyone wanna Exchange? Bored at school need to draw. I write Sludge Or Cona. Take Your Pick.

slEEt
01-08-2007, 03:25 PM
Originally posted by DocterX@Jan 8 2007, 03:19 PM
Anyone wanna Exchange? Bored at school need to draw. I write Sludge Or Cona. Take Your Pick.
I&#39;m down since I need to practice too, I write SECOR.

ras
01-08-2007, 03:48 PM
EMJYBEE...damn...what happend man...you other shit was sooo much better...but its still hella cleeaannnn

Trying to keep the old skool essence in this thread.. ;)

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1111.jpg

Added some add-ons from the other simples i did...

Crits ?...thanks... ;)

STAR01
01-08-2007, 03:49 PM
ras i always like your sketches props for that but you might want to try some new colors?&#33;

Sumoe
01-08-2007, 03:50 PM
eMJayBee-arrows and extensions ruin the piece in my opinion, it would look alot better wit out all that other shit.

ras-M is pretty nice jus get rid of the half-circle thingy don&#39;t like the T to nice charcter too.

shamee1991
01-08-2007, 03:53 PM
RAS - do a sketch that doesn&#39;t have a charac and work hard on the letterin, just letterin

ras
01-08-2007, 04:04 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1111.jpg

Bump...bottom of page.. :) :(

Shame..iv done lodsa sketches with out karaks... <_< ...and iv also been working on JUST my lettering..and nothing else but my lettering becuase iv been doing simples..

and thanks Sumoe..but you dont like the T ?

shamee1991
01-08-2007, 04:08 PM
it is da little thimg on the bottom right of the t

ras
01-08-2007, 04:13 PM
dont you mean bottom left..i added that just to make it flow more..but ill get rid of it.. :)

shamee1991
01-08-2007, 04:19 PM
yh cuz it looks shit wid it...

MainEvent
01-08-2007, 04:33 PM
hey ras, what kind of markers and pens do you use? sketch is nice as usual, your characters are sick.

ras
01-08-2007, 04:34 PM
not liking this post whoring...you cudda asked me through a PM ohwell...TouchTwin markers..

molotow_15
01-08-2007, 04:36 PM
http://file023a.bebo.com/1/large/2007/01/08/21/20360727a3130920868b232272441l.jpg

art fag

beefgerky
01-08-2007, 04:42 PM
s1q p1ece daWg wAtz it saY?

oh nvm...its a fucking HOUSE.

get that shit outtta heerreee.

:lol:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap309.jpg

TricksForKids
01-08-2007, 04:43 PM
ahahahha i should delete that post, but, the mans right, i for one dont want to see houses, especially houses that arent drawn well, and no one here can give you advice on it, so yeah, as for ras, your chracters are dope, and i dont mind you posting them but i cant stand the fact that you hide bad eltters with them, if you&#39;re gunna do letters, DO LETTERS, you;re not ready to combine the two

Peace
edit - gerky wanna exchange
edit - guess i shouldnt delete that post since you threw down a flik, ahah, aint feelin the S so much, everything else is gravy you beast
edit AGAIN- who am i kiddin the S is dope, im just grumpy

molotow_15
01-08-2007, 04:47 PM
uhh ?? me, gesus and nosy lyk are art fags :wub:

beefgerky
01-08-2007, 04:48 PM
yea ill exchange, and molotow knows im just fucking with him, it aint a bad house actually...

Hilo
01-08-2007, 04:56 PM
any one down to exchange?, i think i write Hilo

molotow_15
01-08-2007, 04:56 PM
tricks for kids i wasnt asking for crits i was just showing
and gerk sound man im not here to beef anymore peace

Sumoe
01-08-2007, 05:05 PM
ras-yea not feelin the T too much idk maybe straighten the leg of the T and don&#39;t make it curve, idk it is decent jus not my bag of chips lol.

ras
01-08-2007, 05:06 PM
Bag of Chips...LMFAO LMFAO...lmao.. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

whut does IDK mean..lmfao.. :blink: ?

ASB_ONE
01-08-2007, 05:29 PM
beef gerky gots an ill throw

qik sketch from me.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0226_000.jpg

Truth.
01-08-2007, 05:32 PM
molotow i liked the trees in your art fag

Fube
01-08-2007, 05:57 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/01-08-07_1615.jpg

outline, crits welcome.

Grape1
01-08-2007, 06:00 PM
Here&#39;s a new version of my "Grape" Throw-Up. I changed the "G" around and messed with other letters. Also added the acid bubles at the bottom. Tell me watcha think. Any crit is welcome.

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4309/gaprieoj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Cases: I really like your letters and style&#33; Would look really nice in red&#33; Maybe just bring ur "E" & "S" closer together and you have it. Its really awesome, ready to spray.

If anybody is interested in exchanging just let me know, cause i really wanna exchange.

Thanks,

ASB_ONE
01-08-2007, 06:03 PM
fube i like your style man sorta gesusish but not??&#33;?&#33; lol bit of an old old old school zone feel

Grape1
01-08-2007, 06:03 PM
Fube: It looks awesome&#33; I like how the letters are so similar. Nice style. Personally I might keep them all the same size instead of making them bigger each time. But other then that its a killer outline.

beefgerky
01-08-2007, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by Fube@Jan 8 2007, 05:57 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/01-08-07_1615.jpg

outline, crits welcome.
yo&#33; that shits illlin.

grape, dont over lap the letters so much, and try to make the R a bit simpler, cuz it dosnt really look like an R at this point.

dinedgc
01-08-2007, 06:15 PM
fube-i like it, but try to keep the letters the same height, and this is just my personal preference, but i really hate when there are two of the same letter next to each other in a name, but you pulled it off pretty well

posted it a while ago in the other black book thread, but i never get any advice there what y&#39;all think?
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a377/blured09/IMG_2905.jpg

Fube
01-08-2007, 06:20 PM
i think its fuckin awesome. i wish i could do extentions like that. i also like how u filled it.

DocterX
01-08-2007, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish+Jan 8 2007, 07:20 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Albert Fish @ Jan 8 2007, 07:20 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-BohemianBastard@Jan 8 2007, 08:24 AM
enser/ensr/enzeru/ensah/enzah
:)
EXCHANGE WITH ME. &#39;ve been meaning to ask you. i write yels or yelser. ill draw yours up when i get home.

nyda that blockbuster is clean, would make a good roller. [/b][/quote]
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/DSC00027.jpg
Decided to do your name Albert Fish hope you dont mind...Worked on my coloring alittle bit.

Fube- Thats fucking dope man Im diggin the style.

DineEdgeDc- Im Diggin that shit too. wishing i could do shit like that.

Hilo
01-08-2007, 06:53 PM
dope man.
work on the E and it wud look good without the pokadots

jungle book<==8
01-08-2007, 06:54 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Jan 7 2007, 08:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Jan 7 2007, 08:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Jan 7 2007, 12:23 PM
older
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/2230/ackwf5.jpg
i wish my camera software wasnt sucking right now....
B)
secor dont extend the right leg of the r good stuff though cept the left of the c should go down so it looks overlapped
freakshow-mar stuff is good but the s on causr i hate how the bottom of it goes up
and lower the bottom part o the c
yellis-awesome cant say anything else
uhhh-cant read that for shit i thought it was like four letetrs and you were like says me
make it with alotta extension but readable at the same time [/b][/quote]
wow great one this one is a master ;) this is real nice and you dont need to work on anything.

Hilo
01-08-2007, 06:56 PM
dinee, love it. just work on the handstyle. the peice is dopetastikk. props mang

near
01-08-2007, 06:58 PM
i finally got some new colours other than highighters lol so hopefully no more eye burners heres 2 new things...the first one isnt really that light just the pic...dope sketch dine

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010660.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010659.jpg

Fube
01-08-2007, 07:01 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Jan 7 2007, 08:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? &#064; Jan 7 2007, 08:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Jan 7 2007, 12:23 PM
older
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/2230/ackwf5.jpg
i wish my camera software wasnt sucking right now....
B)
secor dont extend the right leg of the r good stuff though cept the left of the c should go down so it looks overlapped
freakshow-mar stuff is good but the s on causr i hate how the bottom of it goes up
and lower the bottom part o the c
yellis-awesome cant say anything else
uhhh-cant read that for shit i thought it was like four letetrs and you were like says me
make it with alotta extension but readable at the same time [/b][/quote]

wow great one this one is a master ;) this is real nice and you dont need to work on anything.

whahap....i mean Jungle book, are u just starting new accounts in an attempt to crit yourself? if u are, your not fooling anyone with the whole joined today and very first post deal. come on man. if its true dont be rediculous thats just stupid.

DocterX: dont worry about color right now, i might try to fix the letters first. the onlything halfway decent in my opnion is the bottom portion of it. the rest is horrific.

ASB_ONE
01-08-2007, 07:04 PM
sick near is back, where u been at man? shit looks ayt dont like the bottom one much and i cant make out the top one prolly the photo maybe throw a thicker black outline on it. lovin ur stuf but i seen u do better shit.

whahappen?
01-08-2007, 07:07 PM
Originally posted by Fube@Jan 8 2007, 07:01 PM
DocterX: dont worry about color right now, i might try to fix the letters first. the onlything halfway decent in my opnion is the bottom portion of it. the rest is horrific.

also whahap....i mean Jungle book, are u just starting new accounts in an attempt to crit yourself? if u are, your not fooling anyone with the whole joined today and very first post deal. come on man. if its true dont be rediculous man thats just stupid.
no its not me
i&#39;m pretty sure its one of my friends or something.....

Grape1
01-08-2007, 07:41 PM
Near&#33; Those burners are dope&#33;

sky 5
01-08-2007, 08:10 PM
Originally posted by near@Jan 8 2007, 06:58 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010660.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010659.jpg

you mean these burners :D . . if you like something, bumping it to the next page is the best compliment you can give someone . .

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3372/1212158dz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my causr practice skethes . . . strugglin to get somethin worth finishing started . . .

Fosale!
01-08-2007, 08:11 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/knews.jpg
took a while.
for knews&#33;

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/lyfe.jpg
im probably gonna take out the arrow on the E bfre i color it.

uhhh
01-08-2007, 08:12 PM
oh jesus.
to clear a few things up.
DOCTORX-that is nowwhere near dope. you need to completely scrap those letters and do letters like THIS. what I mean is the letters you want to do, do them like the ones on your keyboard, just bigger and fatter, they need to be the same width hight and size altogether, before your ready to move on from that.
NEAR-You obviously have basic letters down, and it seemed like you were on the verge of busting some pretty nice shit before you left, but that stuff, im just not feeling it. and im not quite sure what it says either..
And
Whahappen-That throws pretty nice, i like seeing peoples throws get better over the course of really a few weeks, i need to start doing that.

sky..man, i hate you. your so damn good at the style i want to be. bastard.

fosale-those are really nice. and very clean. and just. damn good. keep it up.

bouncingsoul
01-08-2007, 09:04 PM
Fosale, shit&#39;s nice&#33; That extension from the middle bar to the top bar of the E on the "lyfe" doesn&#39;t look too good. Take that out too.

Practice sketches for a girl

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0559.jpg

uhhh
01-08-2007, 09:14 PM
knews-your style had gotten god damn sexy in the past.. week.

heres my causr sketch.. theres some little details that you cant swee, im gonna beg my mom to use the scanner if i decide to enter this.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-039S.jpg

ASB_ONE
01-08-2007, 09:33 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 8 2007, 05:29 PM
beef gerky gots an ill throw

qik sketch from me.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0226_000.jpg
yo i dont normally bump ma shit so ima get a qik 1 in right now see wat some of the other guys think didnt get much from them

uhh - u beaten me already lol

TricksForKids
01-08-2007, 09:45 PM
uhh youve got some great ideas for letters, you just need some hard work on putting it all together to make it flow nicely, you&#39;re gettin there tho boss, keep it up

sky, cant wait to see the finished product, glad you&#39;re along side me here bro

knews those l&#39;s in kelly are HOT FIYUH&#33;

fosale the i love life is sick, just not the e in love, lol, but you already know that

props to near for coming back in action, and asb work on that hadny&#33; and that E aint feeling the voerhang at the top

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1891/thisismedl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NiL
01-08-2007, 09:46 PM
B is from Mr. Wigglez cept I did the shitty 3D and the B just looks gay all together I just done it out of no where, I just wanted comments on my fading &#39;cause if I paint I want this sorta fade cept maybe without the purple it&#39;s gayeh.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/B.jpg


ASB_ONE - I love your S&#39;s that shit looks good.

Grape1
01-08-2007, 10:00 PM
I wanna see if I can get some more crid for my new throwy. I improoved it from last time, changed the "G" and added some acid bubbles at the bottom. Any feedback for advice? Be straight up.

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/9531/gaprieyd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Heres some crid:

Knew: Love your block letter style, maybe connect them in some way? Other wize, its a sweet throwy.

Near: Lovin those new burners&#33; Should get together sometime and chill&#33;

Thanks,

DocterX
01-08-2007, 10:00 PM
Some of My own personal Stuff.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/mclkmvlkcxm.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/jlsadkjsalkj.jpg

Fosale- Im Diggin those letters dawg.

Uhhh- That shits dope

Thanks for all the crits and advice just trying to draw as much as i can to get better. Working on my block letters and just playing with shit.

Hilo
01-08-2007, 10:26 PM
FoSale: O lord so clean. just on hte I dont put that little dot there.

DrX: nice rectangular letters. make them a bit spread apart and just add some detail in the background JUST&#33; not to much colors .

Grape: feelin it , just make it more cleaner. CLEAN IT UP. and make hte letters have more contrast. :]

uhhh
01-08-2007, 10:48 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jan 8 2007, 09:45 PM
uhh youve got some great ideas for letters, you just need some hard work on putting it all together to make it flow nicely, you&#39;re gettin there tho boss, keep it up



http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1891/thisismedl7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thanks man.
thats the only thing im having trouble with. like.. i think this looks pretty good, i sorta grouped stuff together, i think ill just take it in two flicks so you can see it?

that handie is fucking sexy btw.

slEEt
01-08-2007, 11:35 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 8 2007, 05:29 PM
beef gerky gots an ill throw

qik sketch from me.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0226_000.jpg
That shit looks DOPE, you want to exchange maybe, pm me.

slEEt
01-08-2007, 11:37 PM
Here&#39;s another sketch before my colors, any crits?

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/9672/blahmediumgk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

DocterX
01-08-2007, 11:40 PM
looks good but the O looks alittle off for some reason but other then that cant wait to see it with color.

Stonk
01-08-2007, 11:53 PM
yeah cases thats nice, i say color it, but im toy as hell haha so someone else might say different.

sleet the o is way to fat for the rest of the letters and to round? if that makes any since

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new035.jpg another new throw yet im still not happy

C3ZR ONE
01-09-2007, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by sky 5+Jan 8 2007, 08:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Jan 8 2007, 08:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-near@Jan 8 2007, 06:58 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010660.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010659.jpg

you mean these burners :D . . if you like something, bumping it to the next page is the best compliment you can give someone . .

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3372/1212158dz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my causr practice skethes . . . strugglin to get somethin worth finishing started . . . [/b][/quote]
You can learn so much just from looking at sky5&#39;s raw ass sketches. It&#39;s a shame when mods jock other mods, but damn....Just damn...

Just looked over tha last 5 or so pages, patrollin for beef. Thread&#39;s lookin real good. The sketches posting up are great quality for the most part. Keep it up guys. It&#39;s a great time to be in toy forum. Alot of rising talent in here.


....And I&#39;m down with Molotows sketch of the cottage in the woods. Clever to post it in the blackbook thread instead of the "other art" thread. It got twice as much attention&#33; :lol: In a sense, that&#39;s what graff is about. Throwin some crazy shit up where it aint supposed to be and watchin people gawk at it...Genious...
...I&#39;m gonna go sketch a cottage now. :P

DocterX
01-09-2007, 12:29 AM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/DSC00029.jpg

Sketch without color. Any color advice?

Stonk- Its nice im diggin the style cant quite make it out but then again im toy as fuck but i like it.

N.O.T.E
01-09-2007, 01:01 AM
completed
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/5862/0109070028dy1.jpg

work in progress
http://img308.imageshack.us/img308/5412/0109070029kk2.jpg

completed
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/4503/0109070031dx4.jpg

work in progress
http://img308.imageshack.us/img308/355/0109070033ub4.jpg
sorry for shitty pic quality, posted in chronological order, im reallu stagnating with my debeliopment, any help to develop/ make better? props bros...

emel
01-09-2007, 01:04 AM
ok............. this muh first blackbook and uh i dono how to use prismas good so yeah heres the first 2 pages i did earlier....crits please

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/7544/fasfas2ps4.th.jpg (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fasfas2ps4.jpg)
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1776/bbook22er2.th.jpg (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bbook22er2.jpg)

Albert Fish
01-09-2007, 01:30 AM
Originally posted by NiL@Jan 8 2007, 09:46 PM
B is from Mr. Wigglez cept I did the shitty 3D and the B just looks gay all together I just done it out of no where, I just wanted comments on my fading &#39;cause if I paint I want this sorta fade cept maybe without the purple it&#39;s gayeh.


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b71/QuiK13/B.jpg


ASB_ONE - I love your S&#39;s that shit looks good.
i can&#39;t believe you dissed me a while back...

the return of near is lookin pretty ill to me, props&#33; second sketch is funky

DocterX
01-09-2007, 02:37 AM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/DSC00030.jpg

Finished


Ase-I especially like the one with the UFOS that ones fresh. The rest are pretty damn dope too. im diggin your A alot.

Emel- Those are dope. Yeah i still havent gotten the hang out of the prismas yet either but you sure seem like youve got a better handle on them then i do hah.

Kayone707
01-09-2007, 02:47 AM
Originally posted by Stonk@Jan 8 2007, 08:53 PM
yeah cases thats nice, i say color it, but im toy as hell haha so someone else might say different.

sleet the o is way to fat for the rest of the letters and to round? if that makes any since

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new035.jpg another new throw yet im still not happy
id try and match the other letters to the style of the E.

sky 5
01-09-2007, 03:02 AM
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/1425/1212161wp1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tryin out my new 99 cent 10 pack of markers . . . they pretty much kick ass, but these letters suck . .the R is huge

note - my thought is to drop the backgrounds and page themes and concentrate on your letters just doing straight pencil sketches 24/7 for the next 6 months . . do quick 2-5 min sketches just going with the flow of it and not worry about minor details or errors . . if you do half a letter or a certain move you like, circle it and put that piece of paper in folder or something to look at latter . .

emel - your on the right track, fills arent too complicated but got some color to em, letters are decent . . .looks like you understand the basics, its just a matter of time for you homie

DocterX
01-09-2007, 03:07 AM
could use some tips or advice on my shit if anyone has any.

sky 5
01-09-2007, 03:16 AM
not bad, id def make your 3d bigger . . . letters are real basic block . . maybe try and make them look alil more interesting by extending some of the bars/letter blocks slightly farther out than they would normally go . . or try getting some open space inbetween the letters . . .

ras
01-09-2007, 03:16 AM
Sky5...shit niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice..

Doctor X...Damn...lodsa people have given you advice...you have to find you own way...it wont help you whining and whining for crits..even more without giving any back...if you talking about that throw...imo..its fucking horrible..there isnt no letter structure at all...the R is all mushed up too

DocterX
01-09-2007, 03:20 AM
naw i was talking about the shit i just posted. im not tryin to whine. just trying to get alittle bit of help. not enough writers around in my town to give me some proper advice thats all.

sky 5
01-09-2007, 03:26 AM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7821/1202093ie0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ras what you doin up this late . . aint you on east coast time man? my boy did a skethc for me years ago that looks alot like your stuff, ill post it up tomorrow

DocterX
01-09-2007, 04:03 AM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/not%20my%20graff/DSC00032.jpg

Just thinking outside of the block.

Skeam
01-09-2007, 08:33 AM
thats fucking horrible... dont ever leave that block of yours again. sorry mate.

since when does a circle go ontop of an A, i mean look at your fucking keybord for fuck sake, that sketch looks like it took no more then 3 seconds. its caled a sketch... so do exactly that, slowly sketch out your lines so there not wobbly as a mutha fucker.

im not gunna say anymore i fucken hate that thing...

sorry for soudnin like a stuck up fuck.

HawKer^One
01-09-2007, 09:07 AM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k259/DyingDesigns/char.jpg
just one i did after i tryed to draw my char

ASB_ONE
01-09-2007, 09:47 AM
no offence bro but that is really bad. loose all the extensions and just concentrate on doing raw letters.

sky that shit is dope but u already kno that........lol

ras
01-09-2007, 10:07 AM
Sky...i live in England..Ha..lol...kool..id like to see it...tbh...i base my shit on old skool stuff...

ill have a new peice up soon...with a NEW skool karak...you know...Bape...Ice Cream sneaks..haaaaa... &#33; ;)

HAWK...Go Simple...mayyynnn

DocterX
01-09-2007, 10:37 AM
it took about 4 seconds. Just something i did before i went to bed. Any possible way i could get some help from someone on constructing 3-d? or should i just stick to my letters still.

Hawker- To many Arrows. just my opinion starts looking to rediculous when you just throw abunch of arrows in there...

ASB_ONE
01-09-2007, 10:40 AM
dr x u can start by taking longer than 4 seconds on ur sketches, theyll come out shit.

slEEt
01-09-2007, 11:24 AM
Here&#39;s another one, i&#39;m trying to just keep it simple and get my letters down. Any crits?

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/2901/blah002mediumwk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ras
01-09-2007, 11:39 AM
if you wan stay simple and get letters down you wanna be doing B L O C K L E T T E R S ... :) also....leave out the 3d..its waaaaay off..other than that..its clean...but do B L O C K L E T T E R S ..

nemzone
01-09-2007, 11:50 AM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/7758/imag0002lj9.jpg

well bohemianbastard, im not sure if the U was supposed to be on the end or was it a typo, but here u go.... lol

i havent been able to draw anything good since b4 xmas :angry: :(

PushOner
01-09-2007, 11:54 AM
heres my finished piece from b4...Crits?
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0109.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m44/wannacookiehuh/PICT0073-1.jpg ??? crits also...? [/QUOTE]
bumped
crits? [/QUOTE]
bump4critz


nems....nice, its like ur tag, but blocked...clean. i likey

ras
01-09-2007, 11:57 AM
Oooh Myyy Goodd..* rolls eyes * ... do you know what and exchange is.. :( :blink: :lol: :D

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 12:05 PM
pusherone - secound one is ssick first one don&#39;t like at much u need to keep the fill simple.

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 12:09 PM
pusher what decks are they?...what u mix?...

DocterX
01-09-2007, 12:09 PM
pusherone- Honestly i dont like the second one at all. The first ones good but alittle to crazy for my likings. to many pointless extensions in my eyes.

ASB_ONE
01-09-2007, 12:14 PM
sleet - stick wid wat ur doing them letters will come. try working with a vanishing point to help with ur 3d
nemz - that looks good man but not as good as your other stuff
push - dont like eiether sorry bro, first one is far too busy and second one jus aint &#39;my bag of chips&#39;

as for you ras u cheeky lil boy, go do some block letters yourself haha jus playn.

messing around wid ma e trying to fix it up:

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0228_000.jpg

emokid
01-09-2007, 12:19 PM
ooofff asb, loving all of them, even though they&#39;re kind of similar so i&#39;m bound to like all of them if i like one of them...
colours look real good

nemzone
01-09-2007, 12:21 PM
Originally posted by ras@Jan 9 2007, 04:57 PM
Oooh Myyy Goodd..* rolls eyes * ... do you know what and exchange is.. :( :blink: :lol: :D
who was this aimed at

ras
01-09-2007, 12:22 PM
Nemz...it was aimed at Pushoner..

ASB..nice mayn...but you always playing.. :angry: :lol: ;) ... jus playin..haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..yo...you got MSN...if so...PM me buddy

BohemianBastard
01-09-2007, 12:26 PM
ill post mine when my sister comes home with teh camera

nemzone
01-09-2007, 12:34 PM
no worries, il do another wen i can get anythin other than simples drawn

near
01-09-2007, 12:42 PM
blegh ya i know what u guys mean im not feelin my recent sketches as much....cases u got a nice clean simple goin on up there, i like the 3rd the most...dont even know why sky5 is still in the toy forum lol that shits hot...sketching when i get home flicks hopefully...class is so long~~

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 12:48 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0228_000.jpg

dat shit is hot&#33;&#33;&#33;...mate its flamin hot, like the secound one the most.

BohemianBastard
01-09-2007, 01:19 PM
Limb by limb
http://i18.tinypic.com/2lm5c1t.jpg
http://i1.tinypic.com/4i4ukpg.jpg
http://i1.tinypic.com/4h88k75.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/44vqa94.jpg
yellsr&#39;s ill finish later, ive only got the pencil outline done so far

near
01-09-2007, 01:21 PM
bohemian u got one of the nicest styles on here that midnight marauder looks fire...i think i just squirted a lil...

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 02:07 PM
damn that hot shit, nice style u got goin ther...

Fluffy Bunnies
01-09-2007, 02:16 PM
Hey&#33;&#33;&#33;
who wants to exchange?&#33;
the theme is going to be pokemon... haha :lol: , jus cuz&#33; :lol:

I am serious though.

as serious as this guy
http://www.funkaoshi.com/krishna/05/01/RaymondatKbbq.jpg

TryingTooHard
01-09-2007, 02:19 PM
DOCTERX... WTF Dont you understand about BLOCK LETTERS? Straight lines dude.. thats what I did when I started

SKY5... Very nice stickers man.. I love em

HAWKERONE.. IMO, to many arrows... chill out and just go with the pen flow

SLEET... I like how it looks like all the letters are the same width... Keep it up

BOHEMIAN... Your shit is always amazing.. I love that style too

Sorry guys... Ive been working on base alot and have like no time to draw.. so heres what I did in the past like 2 / 3 days Dunno if you can see the outline of what is it... but Ima see if I can jazz it up

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/klasic.jpg

Thanks guys

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 02:23 PM
yeh ok what u right?

krazzie_ammo
01-09-2007, 02:26 PM
Bohemian Bastard - real nice, i love your style.

Trying Too Hard - try keeping the width of the letters the same.

dammit all my new stuff have been so fucking SHIT&#33; BLERGH.

URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6/94qe4.jpg[/URL]

Crits?

TryingTooHard
01-09-2007, 02:29 PM
the top skceth is the same width... i got a protractor and measured half in lines... for everyone B)

Fluffy Bunnies
01-09-2007, 02:55 PM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Jan 9 2007, 02:23 PM
yeh ok what u right?
I write AKone
or you can write this...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/A-ne.pngthe top word is the same as the bottom word... just different charcters.
It says Akone cept in japanese

adn what you write?

i&#39;ll have it done tomorrow

nemzone
01-09-2007, 03:18 PM
:o how did u find somewhere to translate it to jap/chinese letters?&#33; i would ask for u to find a nemz for me but id prefer the link, god knows what you have me believe said nemz :P

and ensr thats sick ;)

Albert Fish
01-09-2007, 03:19 PM
Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Jan 9 2007, 01:19 PM
Limb by limb
http://i18.tinypic.com/2lm5c1t.jpg
http://i1.tinypic.com/4i4ukpg.jpg
http://i1.tinypic.com/4h88k75.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/44vqa94.jpg
yellsr&#39;s ill finish later, ive only got the pencil outline done so far
bump. ill, fn tribe called quest

Fluffy Bunnies
01-09-2007, 03:30 PM
^^
Can&#39;t read most of it, some of the 3d is barely off, and I think do more simple cuz looks like ther&#39;s too much going on



Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 9 2007, 03:18 PM
:o how did u find somewhere to translate it to jap/chinese letters?&#33; i would ask for u to find a nemz for me but id prefer the link, god knows what you have me believe said nemz :P

and ensr thats sick ;)
I probably can&#39;t find yours cuz in japanese, the words are like syllables like my name is like this when you say it in japanese Ah-CO-nay

Yours probably can&#39;t be translated cuz the "mz" in your name ain&#39;t a character in japanese

You can try this if you wanna try do something else
http://babelfish.altavista.com/

ras
01-09-2007, 03:46 PM
Sick..Bohemian...great styleee..

Craze...wer u been .... not feeling that middle letter...what isit..

WORK IN PROGRESS...gunna add a few karaks...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/111.jpg

what do you think of the letters ?

Crits..

Thanks.. :)

Jrow17
01-09-2007, 03:51 PM
lookin good bohemian bastard.. i like the karak..



some quick stickers i made...
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/979/08996b3efbada90cae97bc5do7.jpg

they arent stuck to the computer, they are just sitting on it..

slEEt
01-09-2007, 04:04 PM
Originally posted by ras@Jan 9 2007, 03:46 PM
Sick..Bohemian...great styleee..

Craze...wer u been .... not feeling that middle letter...what isit..

WORK IN PROGRESS...gunna add a few karaks...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/111.jpg

what do you think of the letters ?

Crits..

Thanks.. :)
I like the other one you did better, everything after the M looks squished to me.

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 04:13 PM
RAS - dont over lap ur letter too much spead them out abit.

poopis
01-09-2007, 04:18 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies+Jan 9 2007, 03:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fluffy Bunnies &#064; Jan 9 2007, 03:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> ^^
Can&#39;t read most of it, some of the 3d is barely off, and I think do more simple cuz looks like ther&#39;s too much going on


<!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Jan 9 2007, 03:18 PM
:o how did u find somewhere to translate it to jap/chinese letters?&#33; i would ask for u to find a nemz for me but id prefer the link, god knows what you have me believe said nemz :P

and ensr thats sick ;)
I probably can&#39;t find yours cuz in japanese, the words are like syllables like my name is like this when you say it in japanese Ah-CO-nay

Yours probably can&#39;t be translated cuz the "mz" in your name ain&#39;t a character in japanese

You can try this if you wanna try do something else
http://babelfish.altavista.com/ [/b][/quote]
time to get off topic buuut, watashi no nihongo wa wakarimasuka ja nihongo o hanasemasuka. Also the words are in Vowels really, like the A-Wa(Hiragana) I suck at kanji and im ok with katakana, but it would be A-ko-ne but thanks for that translation thingy


Jrow they look nice specially the top one but try not to make the top of the I&#39;s circle so sharp also try rounding the first one up abit. and the third one is kinda out there the top right part of the S aint nifty and that E is hurting but the first too are pretty sweet.

Ras i&#39;m feeling it but no beef but come up with some diffrent letter structures, now I&#39;ve seen very similar stuff...but you just put diffrent addons

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 04:20 PM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3203/image000lk8.jpg

one that i did to dey...

poopis
01-09-2007, 04:28 PM
Shamee i suppose ur on your way and it says SIZE right? Anyway the
S: the bottom part which looks like a stan could go away. And the Arrow looks outta place
I: looks rather simple compared to the rest of your peice, and those 2 little things that go down could be gone or either or either loose the bottom right part
Z:also looks very simplier compared to the rest the arrow pointing down doesnt look so great but i like how you connect it to the E
E:looks nice i suppose just fix the 3d on that and the rest of the peice also the end of the E(bottom) looks kinda cut off due to that little part there try curving the bottom so the End doesnt look like its cut off also loose that little sharp part on that addon

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 04:35 PM
yh that 3D was so fuckin hard on that E, well i&#39;ll do it agen and post it up.

poopis
01-09-2007, 04:39 PM
lol yea i know what you mean especially if its your last letter but it depends which type of 3d your doin ,I suppose you did a type of drop shadow with the light coming from it from the left. Try doing it without the drop and like a complete hard 3d with the light hitting it from the left. I found E&#39;s more easier doing that but just a suggestion I&#39;m not really a teacher just trying to helpz

ras
01-09-2007, 04:41 PM
You say POST UP DIFFERENT LETTERS...

But...AM I READY FOR DIFFERENT LETTERS...TRICKS...SKY...BOHEMIAN...Someone tell me ?????????????????????????? :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :blink: :blink: :D

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 04:43 PM
RAS - u chattin to me?

ASB_ONE
01-09-2007, 04:43 PM
id say carry on the simple track ras. oh yeh gutted wat is it atm like 6-3?? haha

emokid
01-09-2007, 04:44 PM
shamee, pretty nice, like the letters but the e and z are a bit far apart in my opinion.

entry for causr battle, never entered one before, just thought i&#39;d see what happens

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/8531/dscn6220am8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 04:45 PM
it nice, readable and MAINLY simple. like it alot i remember u first shit u have improve loadz&#33;....

Socrates
01-09-2007, 04:45 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jan 9 2007, 03:30 PM
^^
Can&#39;t read most of it, some of the 3d is barely off, and I think do more simple cuz looks like ther&#39;s too much going on
if the 3d is off anywhere, its because i tend to hurry my outlines. actually let me say it in a nicer way, i fucking hate doing outlines. i agree with the "too much going on" but im trying to evolve, you aint gonna get nowhere if you dont experiment
Ras - what you need to do is sketch every letter and your not ready

ras
01-09-2007, 04:45 PM
shuttup ASB...ha....okay..ill stick with the simplness

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 04:49 PM
SOCRATES i agree that u should experiment. but some people do and psot up there shit ones...e.g i try doing somthin more wildstyle, when it just looks like a heap of shit...

ras
01-09-2007, 04:52 PM
Yeah but..have i got simple letters down..because if i have...i may aswell experiment like you say Bohemian...like Sky said that he experimented with add-ons or sumthing like that...and doing simples forever wont get you anywere..atleast that wat I thought he said...

ASB_ONE
01-09-2007, 04:54 PM
do wat u want mate, i jus dont like ur letters that much

shamee1991
01-09-2007, 04:58 PM
na experiment but post shit, ONLY IF IT LOOOKS GOOD&#33;...

shame you talk way too much, ive delted like ten of your posts in the last two pages, just collect your thoughts, take a moment, and then say them, also, post more fliks if you&#39;re gunn talk that much - from tricks

Sumoe
01-09-2007, 05:16 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5127/dsc0389ck1.jpg

Sum karak i been workin on any crits? sry cause its sideways o well.

TricksForKids
01-09-2007, 05:23 PM
how am i supposed to give advice on something thats sideways? asshole, haha umm make the inside of the ears a bit cleaner and choose a differnt colour for the eyes like LIME GREEN, other than that shits hot , VURRY hot, and then the rabbit should be saying "tricks are for kids i love bawk&#33;" its up to you about that last part though

afek
01-09-2007, 05:25 PM
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j193/afekt_1/100_0281.jpg

acryliks
01-09-2007, 05:28 PM
keep practsasin afek

near
01-09-2007, 05:37 PM
so ya apparently my english class lasts 3 hours now instead of 1...plenty of sketching time :) fuxin around with a new bomb...the near under it was me explaining the letters to someone not a tag lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/hollowij.jpg

whahappen?
01-09-2007, 05:41 PM
woah nice near
two new styles crit the tag too please...even though its the worst one in that style ive done whatever
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6058/newthrowxu6.jpg

TryingTooHard
01-09-2007, 05:58 PM
Finished @ Wendy&#39;s :P

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/Klasic3D.jpg

Not likin it that much...=&#092;

Fluffy Bunnies
01-09-2007, 06:00 PM
Awee my gawd... pixacao is what they call graffiti in brazil ... I went there in the summer and it&#39;s everywhere and man them guys get up in mad spots... here&#39;s a pics....

http://secure.giantrobot.com/images/products/2006-06-13/14.jpg


here&#39;s a video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V-NdSJutdMw...related&search= (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V-NdSJutdMw&mode=related&search=)

near
01-09-2007, 06:02 PM
K and S are your best letters...K is actually pretty nice but for the most part your arrow extensions dont work...shit i thought it said &#39;kasc&#39; but now i see the L and I tucked away there...your letters should overlap with some sense of order so as to not hide letters like that...for example K overlaps the L wich overlaps the A etc hopefully that makes sense but ya it will look more consistent and ensure that every letter gets the same amount of ice time...if ya know what i mean

Hilo
01-09-2007, 06:05 PM
nice job near, make the N bigger,


Scec? i did the exchange,, wheres my hilo :[

whahappen?
01-09-2007, 06:06 PM
sorry ill have it up in a second
they deleted my topic though for no reason....

TryingTooHard
01-09-2007, 06:08 PM
yea i got you near... i know what you mean... ;)

Fosale!
01-09-2007, 06:11 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/popopo.jpg
cleaned up bfre coloring.
ima redo this again one with the bar on the E and one without it.
Peace&#33;

alive
01-09-2007, 06:19 PM
Originally posted by near@Jan 9 2007, 05:37 PM
so ya apparently my english class lasts 3 hours now instead of 1...plenty of sketching time :) fuxin around with a new bomb...the near under it was me explaining the letters to someone not a tag lol

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/hollowij.jpg
ill throw style. exchange?

subway tunnels 2mrw&#33; first time&#33;


fosale its real real nice and clean. dunno what else much to say. really nice. the FE of LYFE drop down lower then the other letters.



peacee.

Fosale!
01-09-2007, 06:24 PM
yeah but when they were at the same level it looked worse so changed it back.


idk i might fool with it a bit more.
ps.

that&#39;s what she said.

whahappen?
01-09-2007, 06:27 PM
fosale thats awesome
hilo sorry this is total shit....esp the o
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/622/hiloxchangesn2.jpg

Sluts_r_us
01-09-2007, 06:27 PM
the bar on the e is a bite off of ceaze&#39;s style....

Sumoe
01-09-2007, 06:30 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Jan 9 2007, 05:16 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5127/dsc0389ck1.jpg

Sum karak i been workin on any crits? sry cause its sideways o well.
BUMPAGE&#33;&#33;&#33;

near-likin the throwie alot

forsale- i like it, the "e" in love looks kinda like a "c" tho.

whahappen?
01-09-2007, 06:31 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 9 2007, 05:41 PM
woah nice near
two new styles crit the tag too please...even though its the worst one in that style ive done whatever
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6058/newthrowxu6.jpg
ignore the tag its shit
near the top extension on the e is weird and the top right of the r where the hole is is tiny but its good anyway
pesk are you talking about me

Fosale!
01-09-2007, 06:34 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 9 2007, 06:27 PM
the bar on the e is a bite off of ceaze&#39;s style....
not the only person to use it.
its not uncommon.
ive seen
lady sevo
still tippin
and metal use it.
idc w.e

bouncingsoul
01-09-2007, 06:35 PM
You know what suck? Girls...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0560.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0561.jpg

All Hail:DEAD-EYES
01-09-2007, 06:40 PM
Write DE, DeadEyes, or the face.

what yall think.

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/CloudEyes.jpg
this one has been painted a couple of times with different variations.

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/DEdeadeyes.jpg
one of my newer ones.

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/GlyphEyes.jpg
one I did for my friend over at marztek.com. check out the site. its pretty much everything from the 510 area graff wise. and just a bunch of art.

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/DEwild.jpg
From a while ago. May i think. my first atempt at arrows/wildstyle

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/MOAD.jpg
I got this one from the discovory channle. It says moad. just hit my ear so thought why not.

And if anyone wants to do a trade let me know.

kicklip9634
01-09-2007, 06:43 PM
i would rock some strait letters for now then when u get a good structure start to add shit

Sumoe
01-09-2007, 06:48 PM
why no one critting ppl above them, anyways bouncin- hot shit, like the "B" and "A" in the first one

deadeyes-rock sum straight letters and simples until u got structure down like kickflip said.