Blackbooks

[trashhh]

Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 13 2007, 04:47 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40800.jpg
bump bottom of page

[sky 5]

trash thats pretty smooth, im def a fan of your stuff . . . ive never liked your Ts thoo, the S is real sharp, and ive never liked how all you pieces seem unbalanced with the right side being bigger and heavier . .

i know 2 writers in DMC . . :D

[revolt92]

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5017/dsc00057qs1.jpg

Right guys i've decided to go back to square one. Crits?

*edit* oh shit i didnt realise the pic was so shit.

[Deso7]

Yeah nice shit trash.
I know my stuf sux the maxcore but this one i tried to do something with my letters like going a tiny bit more complex not happy with it though.
some crits would be nice.
http://img351.imageshack.us/img351/5580/0000543tv8.jpg

[Albert Fish]

Originally posted by shamee1991@Jan 13 2007, 04:51 PM

if you can "ace" em lets see it king shame

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/8923/image001te3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
now work off of that, bend em a little, round em out if you want, add a dropshadow, instead of just completely forgetting the basics and trying to wing it.

[revolt92]

The s and the o arnt to bad but get rid of the top part of the e, and i dont no what it is but the d looks kinda dodgy to.

[shamee1991]

u kno what i'm gonna start from the beginning. fresh start.

[Mr. Lefty]

Good idea.

[shamee1991]

OI mr LEFTY have u eva posted any pic's. cuz u do chatt alot.

[ras]

yeah MR LEFTY...post some shit...or " dont you keed to prove youself to some teenage punk "....

[shamee1991]

dat cuz i didnt have any nu shit.

[ras]

shame....dont take offence mate...i read mrlefty post and he really is all talk...anyways...i edited it.. ;) ..Post up son

MR LEFTY...MOLOTOW 15 WANTS TO CHALLENGE YOU TO A BATTLE...EITHER PM HIM...OR GET THE FUCK OF THIS SITE..

[Code]

Originally posted by shamee1991@Jan 13 2007, 04:51 PM

if you can "ace" em lets see it king shame

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/8923/image001te3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
k Ace i tried to point out some of you problems with that simple. So here they are

Also here a pic with what i mean with my critz

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3839/acepy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

First point=The bottom of your letters should all be straight and evenly straight, which you did k in i must admit

2 point= The the top part of the C is not the same size as the bottom, your A is not the same size all the way through if you know what i mean.


Lol so no beef intented, becuase i am at that stage were i am making letters like that. But alot of people have told me to always keep your lines straight and parralel and all.

[capo93]

Originally posted by capo93@Jan 13 2007, 04:15 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3058/dsc02016om3.th.jpg (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02016om3.jpg)

crits?? might have posted it befor but here it is coloured

sane- its not horrible but ya stick to simplesfor a bit

demer- this might sound weird but your d almost looks like the playboy bunny?? :blink: might jsu b bc im so tired haha
wow suprise, skipped over again... crits? <_<

[nickstix]

revolt...lookin good but the top bar of the t is not as fat as the rest of the letters and the upright bar from the k is not the same width.

deso...defenatly go back to simpiler stuff(not that i should even really be talkin)

capo...that thowie is pretty cool but i dont like how the bottom half of the c is so skinny, try messin with the thickness of it.

heres something i did the other day...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar3.png
and heres a new style &#39;s&#39; that i came up with during school...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/s.png
crits?

[ras]

can someone post up some pic of that writer Capo was suppsed to of bit off ..

capo....just make the letters te same size ..

nictix....do that shit without the fill...aaaww....its huriting my eyes lol...good letter stuctrue...jus lose the fill

[noam12]

Originally posted by shamee1991@Jan 13 2007, 03:42 PM
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/7844/17tx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new style i&#39;m doin. says sane. dont wanna kno about ma tag cuz it is shit.,
crits?
dont write sane (r.i.p) and the n makes my eyes bleed, and at least try to make it clean.

[capo93]

Originally posted by capo93+Jan 13 2007, 05:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (capo93 @ Jan 13 2007, 05:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-capo93@Jan 13 2007, 04:15 PM
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/3058/dsc02016om3.th.jpg (http://img407.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02016om3.jpg)

crits?? might have posted it befor but here it is coloured

sane- its not horrible but ya stick to simplesfor a bit

demer- this might sound weird but your d almost looks like the playboy bunny?? :blink: might jsu b bc im so tired haha
[/b][/quote]
wow bump bottom of page

[ras]

i aint critting you because you bumped 2 times with out giving crits yourself.. <_<

[capo93]

wwtf are u smoking man i critted te first time second time fcking ace didnt have anything to crit bc his shit wasa fucking square and than last time i was jsut pissed that my shit keeps getting passed over :angry:

[BFC]

Nickstix, your fill is bad, your 3d is off, your color choice is bad, your forcefield/2nd outline is bad. That S in the second flick is great though. Go with that style. Try to pick better colors and try some drop shadows until you&#39;re good with 3d.

Trash, good shit as usual.

Tick, make your letters the same size, and go even simpler. Every part of the letter should be about the same width too.

Deso, the D kinda has a empty space below it, reshape it a little bit to fill that area in. Besides that I kinda like it, just keep playing around with different add-ons like that.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-1307_1.jpg

Markers were messing up a lot. Can&#39;t wait till I get my touchtwins. Basically I just wanted to make a simple based off of my handstyle. Crits?

[Slushi]

its a bite anyway

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by capo93@Jan 13 2007, 11:53 PM
wwtf are u smoking man i critted te first time second time fcking ace didnt have anything to crit bc his shit wasa fucking square and than last time i was jsut pissed that my shit keeps getting passed over :angry:
fuck off, it&#39;s fundamental

[ras]

Originally posted by capo93@Jan 13 2007, 10:53 PM
wwtf are u smoking man i critted te first time second time fcking ace didnt have anything to crit bc his shit wasa fucking square and than last time i was jsut pissed that my shit keeps getting passed over :angry:
whoa...dont cry becuase some one looked over a peice of bitten ass shit..i was wondering...wat the hell are you smoking ?..

[revolt92]

molotow what happened to pie ina tree?

[Fosale!]

i would crit you capo but you bit are4&#39;s A so i didnt.

[ras]

fosale..i serached ARE 4 everywhere but i cannot find a pic...somebody please post a pic up ?


NYDA .. your gettin there mate...yeah...touchtwins are good..

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by revolt92@Jan 14 2007, 12:01 AM
molotow what happened to pie ina tree?
it was on my bebo and bebo banned me so it got rid of all my
links, so im uploading it onto photobucket

n revolt pictures allways do look shitter
once they&#39;ve been posted up
wiv tha scannin etc..

[Fosale!]

look on the 666 thread.
its a crappy bubbly redo of his A.
only thing thats different is the swiril in it instead of something else.

[ras]

ahhh....Brandead&#39;s Are 4 right ?..

i knew i had herd that name some were..

[..SmOeK 1..]

Not finished, cant decide how i want to color it. Any ideas?

Crits also please :)

http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/7177/frame00096ih7.th.png (http://img363.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00096ih7.png)

[Linkzone1]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 13 2007, 04:50 PM
little do you know, demer is a jerssey legend....change it..
http://www.graffiti.org/demer/dem6_25_2006142.jpg
http://www.graffiti.org/demer/dem6_25_2006171.jpg
http://www.graffiti.org/demer/demer6_25_2006_020.jpg
Relax son
It&#39;s for the BATTLE on THIS forum&#33; Not my name. Geez

[Necro-]

god damn why do you guys beef so much, this thread moves so fast theres barely any pics per page. sound like the preppy bitches at my school

nyda it looks ok, change the A and make the letters level. then get a pen to outline and use 1 long stroke per line instead of a bunch of little ones (thats what it looks like).

for a girl says carrie
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture083.jpg

and what i did for the waster colab.
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/untitled.jpg

[ras]

now..thast demer shit is sum tight ass beyonce shit right there

necro...nice style....i just crnt work it out..lol...it looks like a tree to me.. :unsure: :blink:

[Mr. Lefty]

I dont care too much for the first one.. but the bottom one would be phenominal if you layered the shades a little more.. good work

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by revolt92@Jan 14 2007, 12:13 AM
Molotow may i ask why you were banned?
jus a little trouble with koper i sed he was goin be replaced as mod
dont think he liked it



tha second waster thing is fukin ill
dope shading

[TryingTooHard]

real quick question...

EXCHANGE = Is that when lets say I draw what you always draw or tell me to draw and vice versa? and then post em on here?? and then they get crited?

[ras]

exchange is were you do someones name and then they do yours...then post it on here.. :)

[TryingTooHard]

:blink: so if I would be like....

ME: Ras wanna exchange?

You: Sure my nig what you write?

ME: (I pick a word or what I been writing?)

You: Ok you write "mit" "mith"

End: lol Right?

[molotow_15]

haha yeh

[Super Duper VILLAIN]

here is some stuff i&#39;ve been doing. my markers suck but whatever. i&#39;ve been trying different styles and working on the basics. crits would be great, thanks.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/radplaid.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/radical.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/wild3D.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/ratnbear.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/2stickgraff.jpg

[ASB_ONE]

that waster piece aint my sorta thing but u got to admire the shading and originality.

take it to toy story or pms about what an exchange is, the clue is in the name bro ;)

them &#39;rad&#39; karaks are pretty nice.

i filled some shit in.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0232_000.jpg

[TryingTooHard]

alright I got it down now... thanks

EDIT: I like the karak villina....

love the gren fill cases

[ras]

LMFAO..

SUPER DUPER VILLIAN....lok...you gots the karaks down...but...you letters are wack...go simpl into block letters...also....its FUNDAMENTAL to crit the other person on the page bofre asking for you own.. ;) :)

[Super Duper VILLAIN]

haha my bad. now i know for next time

[ras]

okay mate...you got mad potnetial for karaks tho...try drawing some happy shit..like a b-boy or sumet....not a scary rabbit lol...

[nickstix]

rad...the one with the plaid fill is way too busy, dull down the fill

cases...im really likin the techno sorta fill

heres something i jsut did, i tried to keep the same basic shape for each letter...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar4.png
crits?

[molotow_15]

10 tyms better than the last one

[ras]

yeah...thats clean as a whsitle...good job

[uhhh]

Originally posted by nickstix@Jan 13 2007, 06:53 PM
rad...the one with the plaid fill is way too busy, dull down the fill

cases...im really likin the techno sorta fill

heres something i jsut did, i tried to keep the same basic shape for each letter...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar4.png
crits?
once you have more feel for letters, this culd look really dope.

[TryingTooHard]

SAR - I like the "S" not so much a and r

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/011307_18531.jpg

not much..... Still trying to find ways to tweak the letters

[BohemianBastard]

exchange anybody?
im kinda drunk :)

[nickstix]

well i only started the new style on friday and only just did my first actual piece today so the letters are still gonna prob change alot, i have alot of trouble with my r&#39;s though i can never get them to look the way i want. anybody have advice?

trying...im really liking the way your letters flow, and the fade from bottom to top is great, i think those letter would look nice with a dropshadow

[ras]

Nicktix...i had the same trouble...i used to right Ras but i cudnt do R&#39;s...in my opnion...there one of the hardest letters &#33;

[..SmOeK 1..]

Originally posted by ..SmOeK 1..@Jan 13 2007, 06:14 PM
Not finished, cant decide how i want to color it. Any ideas?

Crits also please :)

http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/7177/frame00096ih7.th.png (http://img363.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00096ih7.png)
*Bump* for crits please.


Phreak - good coloring job, only thing i dont like is how the bottom of the h touches each other.

[ras]

Go simple mate... ^^

Trying...i know u had stick for you shit looking like pear...it does i suppose..but i guess those are basic genreic simple letter....it flows nice...good job...

[MSG]

i like rads sweet 3d i love that style
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a337/trynlive/sketch.jpg
i did this in ten minutes i&#39;ve only been sketching and shit for 4 or 5 months any suggestions? besides practice practice practice practice and more practice

[Gome-tron]

Originally posted by Super Duper VILLAIN@Jan 13 2007, 06:38 PM
here is some stuff i&#39;ve been doing. my markers suck but whatever. i&#39;ve been trying different styles and working on the basics. crits would be great, thanks.

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/radplaid.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/radical.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/wild3D.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/ratnbear.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/2stickgraff.jpg
Not a fan of your style man but thous karaks are dope
Bump for the karaks

[Skeam]

yeh the characs are sick, the name radical sounds a bit.... shit though sorry. just sorta played out. should change it to Dar, thatd be mad lol.

[beke]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jan 13 2007, 06:03 PM
i would crit you capo but you bit are4&#39;s A so i didnt.
ive never even heard of this are4 guy?????

[capo93]

^^^ sry that was me my brother left his account on

[whahappen?]

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9506/picture025mi0.jpg
youve never heard of are4...?
wow

[HeiSk]

new style i tried came out pretty good, but the quality is bad it was taken with my web cam

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/Picture004.jpg

[Skeam]

dodgey webcam pic havent finnished it yet, startin to play with add ons. gunna do a K instead of a C cause it flows betta.

http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/6149/nescsketchzx2.jpg

Heisk i like the faces but does it actually say anything? it doesnt look like it says heisk lol

[nickstix]

heisk...looks good but its too many faces for my taste

skeam...those letters look good cant wait to see it filled.


Originally posted by nickstix@Jan 13 2007, 06:53 PM

heres something i jsut did, i tried to keep the same basic shape for each letter...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar4.png
crits?
bump i&#39;d like to get some more crits on this

[Gome-tron]

Bumping these for some .. help? hints? just a new style im working with


http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y100/DekronJedi/Gome2004052.jpg

dont pay attention to the mfdoom sketch cause aparently i stole it out of chills book
<_<

the top says Wale
The bottem says I wont forget

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y100/DekronJedi/Gome2004051.jpg

Name ive been playing with Awkry

[whahappen?]

that reminds me alot of necro
define the r more on the last one
exchnage with shifted...so bad
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9800/picture029sx8.jpg

[levans]

Originally posted by BFC@Jan 13 2007, 05:53 PM
Nickstix, your fill is bad, your 3d is off, your color choice is bad, your forcefield/2nd outline is bad. That S in the second flick is great though. Go with that style. Try to pick better colors and try some drop shadows until you&#39;re good with 3d.

Trash, good shit as usual.

Tick, make your letters the same size, and go even simpler. Every part of the letter should be about the same width too.

Deso, the D kinda has a empty space below it, reshape it a little bit to fill that area in. Besides that I kinda like it, just keep playing around with different add-ons like that.

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-1307_1.jpg

Markers were messing up a lot. Can&#39;t wait till I get my touchtwins. Basically I just wanted to make a simple based off of my handstyle. Crits?
uhhh nyda why the hell are you gonna get touchtwins to be honest all your stuff is ugly and it would be a waste of money for you to get them. ohh and buddy they aint gonna make you any better

[freakshow]

whahappen, its consistant and easy to read. id say you are on the right track but i dont really know shit...
both of these are from this morning
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/290/newmarxb9.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/3250/marmathrowfi1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 13 2007, 08:56 PM
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9506/picture025mi0.jpg
youve never heard of are4...?
wow
freakshow those are soo nice
nyda nice simples

[Fube]

Originally posted by freakshow@Jan 13 2007, 11:19 PM

http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/3250/marmathrowfi1.png (http://imageshack.us)
i like this one. :ph34r: but its hard to tell the last letter is an r

[freakshow]

the last letter is an a

[MAERone]

http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/2589/photo010907003jf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/6005/photo010707001iy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

[levans]

maer i think you should lose those extensions.


heres something i did tryin some stuff with a diff method of structure

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/3713/jan07yx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by freakshow@Jan 13 2007, 11:19 PM
whahappen, its consistant and easy to read. id say you are on the right track but i dont really know shit...
both of these are from this morning
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/290/newmarxb9.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/3250/marmathrowfi1.png (http://imageshack.us)
please.
next time.
please.
write marmalade.
you will be my hero.
marmalade.
illest sounding word.
MARMAA&#33; lAAAAAAAAAAAde.
marmalade.

ps.
your style is mad steezy.

keep up the hotness.


pss.
your karaks are too illin as well.




marmalade.

[levans]

Originally posted by levans@Jan 13 2007, 11:50 PM
maer i think you should lose those extensions.


heres something i did tryin some stuff with a diff method of structure

http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/3713/jan07yx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumparoo bottom of page..

[freakshow]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Jan 14 2007, 12:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; &#064; Jan 14 2007, 12:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-freakshow@Jan 13 2007, 11:19 PM
whahappen, its consistant and easy to read. id say you are on the right track but i dont really know shit...
both of these are from this morning
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/290/newmarxb9.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/3250/marmathrowfi1.png (http://imageshack.us)
please.
next time.
please.
write marmalade.
you will be my hero.
marmalade.
illest sounding word.
MARMAA&#33; lAAAAAAAAAAAde.
marmalade.

ps.
your style is mad steezy.

keep up the hotness.


pss.
your karaks are too illin as well.




marmalade.[/b][/quote]
thats actually what ive been writing for the past month...

[MAERone]

Originally posted by MAERone@Jan 13 2007, 11:41 PM
http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/2589/photo010907003jf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/6005/photo010707001iy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?
bump for crits

[TARE5]

yo it looks dope i would keeep working on the character in the first sketch and also continue working on lettrering

but the handstyle looks tight

[BFC]

Marma, love your style. But you could probably distinguish the letters a little more while still keeping the flow and style.

levans, it&#39;s real sloppy and your widths aren&#39;t consistant. What you&#39;re trying to do could work, but maybe you should go back to simples first.

Maer, I like the old school fill on the second one. I&#39;d say you should drop the arrows. They make your letters hard to read and they don&#39;t really add much style. You&#39;re throw in the clouds is nice too

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-14-07_1.jpg

couple throws, an N, and a rough drawing of a cartoon bird I saw a picture of. Probably won&#39;t use it for anything cause it&#39;s not quite original(i only changed a couple things).

crits?

[ShIfTeD]

what does BFC stand for? butt fuck crew?

work on your letter structure a little more

i think your over exagarating your curves in your throw...and the shadows a bit off




i cant really say i can crit you very well on 3D cuz quite frankly, im not a fan of it






im a throwie dude now :blink:

[BFC]

Bird Flu Crew.

Thanks for the crits.

[levans]

^^^^^^^^^ nyda sorry the width of my letters inst consistant it was just something i did real quick to see what the style would look like and simples arnt gonna get you anywhere besides consistancy and i can do that i was just testing a new style.. anyway the 3d on your n is off with the colouring and the throws are pretty ugly

[wookiE]

nice bird

[DocterX]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/noname.jpg

Just a sketch. could really use some help on how to add 3-d. But any crits?

MAERone- Im digging the first one. I like the top half alot more then the crazy stuff but i like your clouds and the overall page. Just think the bottom part looks out of place.

BFC- Im diggin your straight letter stuff alot more but can see you are working on styles.

freakshow- I LOVE your colors and style.

[wookiE]

cona- the letters are good enough. but you might try making the lines on the inside of the N straight like all of the other lines inside of the C O and A. but anyway so now you were asking how to add 3-D. well its pretty easy all you have to do is go from every corner that goes at the same angle and then connect them. depending on which way you want your 3-D to be you might not have to draw lines from every corner cause in real life you wouldn&#39;t be able to see that side of a 3-D shape. but just look online if you cant understand what i just said. there are probably tons of "how-tos" on 3-D drawing out there even if they aren&#39;t on graff sites. just look around and experiment

[levans]

Originally posted by DocterX@Jan 14 2007, 03:49 AM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/noname.jpg

Just a sketch. could really use some help on how to add 3-d. But any crits?

MAERone- Im digging the first one. I like the top half alot more then the crazy stuff but i like your clouds and the overall page. Just think the bottom part looks out of place.

BFC- Im diggin your straight letter stuff alot more but can see you are working on styles.

freakshow- I LOVE your colors and style.
hope this helps done real quick so excuse sloppiness....



http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/1410/jan073dzw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:D

[levans]

wow im amazed i could be bothered to do that :D

[DocterX]

DAMN&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; wish i had looked back on here before i attempted to finish my sketch FUCK thank you soooo much im too embaressed to even show what i ended up with. but thanks Levans its much appreciated&#33; ill up something tommorrow hopefully with 3-d

[levans]

ahhaha glad to have helped...

[ras]

Levans.....how can you talk to NYDA about his shit being wack...saying not to buy TouchTwins becuz hell be wasting his money...and that they dont make you any better...well for starter&#39;s...

yes the fucking do make you better....my colouring work on karaks and my peices have improved loads since i bought them..

and for 2nd...you have no room to say to NYDA that his shit is ugly...becuze UNLIKE YOU...hes on the right path...doing SIMPLE SIMPLE SIMPLE stuff....and i can see the improvments...

and 3rdly...the stuff you posted up...is waaacker than djimi traore.....and NYDA pisses all over it...sso...maybe you should do SIMPLES....and after you got LETTER&#39;S down...you can call people&#39;s SHIT UGLY &#33;..

tut..

FreakShow...you gots yourself a nice funky euro style there mayn...good shit..&#33;

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 13 2007, 12:46 PM
Sumoe, Pesk, sky5.- Hot shit. Feelin the Pesk throwie. nice simple too.

Heisk- It&#39;s got charachter. (oh snap&#33; that&#39;s like one of those..I ferget, but you feel me.. :P )

Whahappen- It&#39;s simple. Keep goin with that.


Since no one was up for a b-book swap last night iI did one for Tricks, cuzz he did my name way back in the day, and I never repaid him...
http://img275.imageshack.us/img275/6920/im000493sw4.jpg
Bump-A-Lump

Ceezy imma get at you for this, thats my favourite sketch ive seen from you man, i can tell you a put alot of time into the actual letter structure and evolving your style...imma go all out for yours too, so be prepared it could be wack lol

*cezr exhange coming soon, keep ya eyes peeled *

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 13 2007, 06:39 PM
that waster piece aint my sorta thing but u got to admire the shading and originality.

take it to toy story or pms about what an exchange is, the clue is in the name bro ;)

them &#39;rad&#39; karaks are pretty nice.

i filled some shit in.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0232_000.jpg
yeh cezr straight up kills every time.

ras u need to take a step back your ego is startin to get the better of you, like no offence man but who are you to be telling people to get the fuc off this site, ever since u got all that feedback on 12oz about how your too good and shit u gotten harsh, jus take a step back and look at your work, just cos ur better than someone dont mean u can tell em to fuc off and that ther stufs wack. and how do you know what the right track is unless youv been down that road. you my freind are in the same boat as all of us, the simples boat and we dont know where were going. admitedly that guys stuff was a bit shoddy but im sure in a couple of months he will be bringing the heat.

if anyone reckons they got simples down like i been reading a few pages back, u aint. u can see it in your style, all this i got simples down now im moving on to &#39;experiment&#39; you jus aint, if u wana experiment, fucn go for it i love seeing that shit, jus dont be fronting on havin the simple steez aswell.

[Bastardo]

feeling the dub&#33;
but by the throw underneath looks like you need work on ur throws&#33; (Y)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/317/picture239rn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
=|

[ras]

oo..yeah..shit fuck man...i never realised.. :blink: :( ... yeah..but the thing is .. i have been down the simples track...and im still onit..and i know that NYDA is on the right track...but was just pissed that Levans called all his shit ugly...whe it isnt...its nice and simple...and then he posts something distgusting himself..thats wat pissed me off...and yeah...i am gettting TOO FAR ahead of myself..i need to calm down.. :(

as for 12oz...i dont know why they give me such good crits etc. ... :blink:

and fucking Everton have just scored.. :angry: :angry:

ima have a proper peice up with karaks and shit soon..aint done one or a bit..

[Hilo]

ok

[ASB_ONE]

easy bastardo, nice throws as usual mang. can u get on bb at the mo? it wont load up for me.

[Bastardo]

:huh: its fine for me man..

[nemzone]

thts a class single letter throw&#33;

and im confused as to who goes on bb, if ur on bb what is ur username??

http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/1834/imag0003ec3.jpg

gone to war with writers block&#33;&#33; its still shit but i think im comin out of the phase :-&#092;

[..SmOeK 1..]

The letters arent my favourite but the effect of the shading and the background is a very good idea. looks like it took you alot of time. Maybe just try some different letter structures. Still great job tho ^^

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?+Jan 13 2007, 11:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Jan 13 2007, 11:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Jan 13 2007, 08:56 PM
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9506/picture025mi0.jpg
youve never heard of are4...?
wow
freakshow those are soo nice
nyda nice simples [/b][/quote]
bottom of page..sorta

[Chop Logic]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/causr3d.jpg

Did this for the causr battle. Not really happy with it but whatever. Just wanted tot ry something new and experiment with 3D. I know the C and R suck.

Crits or anything, thanks.

Crayola colored pencils for life.

[taine]

looks nice, but try and clean it up a bit and work on letter structure but ya nice

[ras]

Give Crits to the people above you ... its fundamental..lol.. :lol: ...anyways..

i like your style..

Scec...you bump too much as you know...and as you know...i always like you throws..

still fucking with add-ons etc.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/12-2.jpg

Crits...Thanks ... ;)

[whahappen?]

dude you get better everyday i like that
you should work on your tag though
haha yea im a crit whore ill stop
but i dont think ive gottne anything except from freakshow and you
ill stop

[jungle book<==8]

mit i like your letters and youve gotten alot better your add-ons look good
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/5478/picture030xu1.jpg
crits?

[A-chue!]

try and space your letters more but no to shaby also try and round out the edges.
crits and comments please ill post color in a few
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVN-1.jpg

[A-chue!]

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/Hevnprodo.jpg
some more
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG0001-1.jpg
and ill throw it in
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG0067.jpg
crits on any or all apreiciated

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 14 2007, 05:36 PM
Give Crits to the people above you ... its fundamental..lol.. :lol: ...anyways..

i like your style..

Scec...you bump too much as you know...and as you know...i always like you throws..

still fucking with add-ons etc.

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/12-2.jpg

Crits...Thanks ... ;)
bump bttom of ze page

hevn

looks aight...like the top one..al in al...nice style

[trashhh]

Hevn middle ones clearly the best, nice fill an style

[jungle book<==8]

ya hevn middle is good i like the top one alot too though.

[jungle book<==8]

can anybody put a drop shadow on what i made? the one that says cesa. because i dont know how and i keep trying but i cant do it.

[Necro-]

mit i dont like it. addons should have some point to them. and i dont like that M. i dunno.

the letters lean opposite directions on this one, but i dont feel like fixing it. ill just not do it from now on.
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture084.jpg

[Fixion]

That&#39;s awesome Maven.

[jungle book<==8]

necro-besides the curving different ways its really good, i really like the m.
mit-i really like it its really good and i like the colors alot too.

[BohemianBastard]

nice shape, but the letters are wack

[emokid]

like the M necro, but the rest of the letters need re-structuring
shape of it is nice.

[trashhh]

I actually realllyyyy like the M.. stylish. Rest is alryt but N should be following the shape of the piece rather than shoved on top of the e

[Albert Fish]

Originally posted by A&#045;chue&#33;@Jan 14 2007, 12:59 PM
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/Hevnprodo.jpg
this one was the best, the fill is on point the only thing i object to is the connection of the letters.

bastardooooo that single letter throw burns whole pieces that i sketch, love it.

[STAR01]

i like that one Maven

[eMJayBee]

Necro- Thats lookin nice, I like that "e" the most, nice work.

Did this at school, any critz? :unsure:

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f364/mechwarx/Picturesofwobbitz051.jpg

[Beast]

http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/5493/picture031jx0.jpg
guy above me i like that alot

[DocterX]

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/noname2doodoo3d.jpg

My doo doo Attempt at 3-D. WHAT THE FUCK AM I DOING WRONG&#33;&#33; gah for some reason i cant figure out why everytime i try 3-D it ends up looking like shit or like some weird new shape that looks like shit. any crits advice ANYTHING will help.

Beast- i like but the E seems alittle lower then the rest of the letters. but other then that its pretty good.

EmJaybee- Im digging it. Its good to see you didnt go overboard with the arrows and Extensions. I REALLY like that sticker the most though.

[whahappen?]

http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/3467/picture032da7.jpg
exchnage
maven the a and n are too small
cesa make the c not so angeled, cool a
bastardo i wanna be you when i grow up
and off topic but waht the hells wrong with 12 oz

[Boodabang923]

throwie

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/73/scan0002fx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[whahappen?]

NEW RULE
CRITS BEFORE YOU POST
tas the e sucks
the a is too plain
the t looks awkward

[emokid]

drX, you used a ruler for the letters so whats stopping you from using one for the 3d? its a lot easier with one.

[revolt92]

Scec are you angry?

[DocterX]

i try using one for the 3-d but it still turns out like shit all uneven still and what not just doesnt look right but ill do somemore and take my time on it.

[ras]

No shit Scec...12 oz wont work for me neither..

And that Rule has been made up for ages...BUT NOBODY FOLLOWS IT...cumon Trick&#39;s...sort it out.. &#33;&#33; :(

from now on...im only critting people thta give crits out themselves...

Scec...good as usual...getting bored of seein throws tho..

Doctor X...keep that up..

EMJABE...tight shizzle mah nizzle fizzle wizzle prizzle gafizzle .. :blink: lol

some new shit..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-8.jpg

crits and comments ... thanks &#33;

[revolt92]

Ok so i could have this in my other post but ahwell...

Doctorx- on all but the a the 3d wun towards top left why didnt you do that with the a and follow the pattern, also come down the letter with the 3d so you can see the side otherwise its not 3d.

Tase- take your time it looks a bit rough, just keep practising.

Cesk- i think there might already be one of them here(i&#39;m not sure though), nice but make the bit in the e smaller.

*edit* ras- dont connect the i and the t it makes it hard to read, also not really feeling the h dunno what it is about it but the right side of it looks different to the left.

peace

[Albert Fish]

emjaybee - i like the "feliks" piece better so im gonna crit that ha. im really feelin it up until the s underlines the rest of the word. besides that i feel that all the extensions are on point and the letter structure is definitely there. prawpppsssss do more pieces like that

[trashhh]

Originally posted by DocterX@Jan 14 2007, 02:48 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h75/docterx1232/noname2doodoo3d.jpg

My doo doo Attempt at 3-D. WHAT THE FUCK AM I DOING WRONG&#33;&#33; gah for some reason i cant figure out why everytime i try 3-D it ends up looking like shit or like some weird new shape that looks like shit. any crits advice ANYTHING will help.

Beast- i like but the E seems alittle lower then the rest of the letters. but other then that its pretty good.

EmJaybee- Im digging it. Its good to see you didnt go overboard with the arrows and Extensions. I REALLY like that sticker the most though.
If you mean actually trying 3d style then its because you dont have good letters. Thers no dimension at all youve just dont flat letters and added 3d. if u mean why does it mess up when u add 3d to normal 2d sketches then its because youve done it sloppy, it should all be going in the same direction and at the top right on the &#39;furthest away&#39; bit of the 3d there should be a line coming down to show the right side of the letter


Ras - really likin that man the green 3d and 3d effect is lookin sweet.. nice letters too

[shamee1991]

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-8.jpg

bump cuz it is FLAMIN HOTTT

[Necro-]

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture087.jpg

Need to work on N&#39;s. and the top of the V is too large.

and cona just add lines the same length going in the same direction from ALL corners of the letters. then connect them.

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 14 2007, 08:08 PM
No shit Scec...12 oz wont work for me neither..

And that Rule has been made up for ages...BUT NOBODY FOLLOWS IT...cumon Trick&#39;s...sort it out.. &#33;&#33; :(

from now on...im only critting people thta give crits out themselves...

Scec...good as usual...getting bored of seein throws tho..

Doctor X...keep that up..

EMJABE...tight shizzle mah nizzle fizzle wizzle prizzle gafizzle .. :blink: lol

some new shit..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-8.jpg

crits and comments ... thanks &#33;
Bump for crits..

Necro...feeling the V...but i aint a fan of sloppines..that to me looks a lil bit sloppy..maybe its just the 3d..i fink you should write AVE...becuz the AVE fit together perfectly &#33;

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by BohemianBastard@Jan 13 2007, 06:58 PM
exchange anybody?
im kinda drunk :)
Probably not worth your time, but I threw a quick simple together and colored it. :rolleyes:
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1452/im000497cj4.jpg


I finally colored in my Waster sketch.. Used the same color skeme as the Bawk sketch.
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/9922/im000496nm8.jpg

I know, I know.... Needs 3D... :( Next one, I swear&#33; :D

Mith- good simple start. Good grasp of 3d.

Tase- It&#39;s not the worst, but I&#39;m not really feelin it either. I dunno. Throwies are tricky.. People think they&#39;re easier then full on sketches, but I don&#39;t think so. A really nice and unique throwie is difficult for me. The only person I know in toy forum that can pull killer throwies out his ass left and right is Bastardo, and Uhhh to I think (if they aren&#39;t the same person.) Bastardo does lots of fantastic throwies... Other people have maybe 1 good throwie, but the majority a pretty crap. Yours isn&#39;t really crap, it&#39;s just kinda uninspired and not a great deal of flow, but who am I to judge. I can&#39;t do throwies to save my life. I made lunch while working on this post, so there&#39;s probably 10 people that posted between then that I didn&#39;t crit. I&#39;m sorry. ;)

[TryingTooHard]

MITH... Im liking the colors... but dont connect the letters IMO

C3ZR Very nice... In the first pic. The graff on the page NOT the sticker.. what color blue is that?? Lovin it... so clean

[C3ZR ONE]

I dunno. That one I just used sharpies. The 24 pack er whatever.

[jungle book<==8]

c3zr sweet fill and awesome letters. ras i like the letters and cool 3-d.
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/8670/picture033vs9.jpg
crits?..

[TryingTooHard]

o ok.. it looks really smooth and rich in color didnt know what you used... have to pick the pack up =)

and the rounded looks better than what you did before... but looks like it goes c (small) e (medium) S(large) A (medium) get it? small to big to small.....

[jungle book<==8]

i just used a normal red crayola marker, thin. its just the camera that makes it look like that.

[entri]

dis is one of my new sketches..how u like...crits?..and yeh i know i messed up lil bit on the outline of the N..and i fogot to erase the pencil lines...

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture114.jpg

[Bastardo]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Jan 14 2007, 10:25 AM
feeling the dub&#33;
but by the throw underneath looks like you need work on ur throws&#33; (Y)
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/317/picture239rn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
=|
bump for the lovers.
bump for the haters.

entri dont worry bout colours and shit for now.
just work on ur letters..
do normal letters you see on posters and shit and jus curve em abit more and a few doodads and what not..
the R is pretty good.

[Slushi]

3d is unnecessary.

[Bastardo]

Explain.

[Necro-]

edit

[sketch3]

entri im lovein the lightning forcefeild

[Oprah]

How do I post a pic

[Deso7]

go to the picture gallery and inone of the top threads itll say how

[jungle book<==8]

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/5380/picture034ij4.jpg
lolz my letters are killing something.

[TryingTooHard]

:unsure: try 3d.... EDIT: not 3d.... just like a shdow or something


:blink: http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/phresik.jpg

eh?

[ras]

Not crittin anyone on this page becuz they didnt give out crits themselves <_< :angry:

Fuck all to crit..

busted out 3 sketches todday B) lol..

still messing with extension addons etc. aswell as keeping it simple..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-9.jpg

instead of crits...it would be nice to know if im progressing atall ?.. thanks

[whahappen?]

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :P
haha i suck at chracs
crits on the tag
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7064/picture035zp5.jpg
mith good but i dont like the addons
your definatly progressing

[Oprah]

Trying to do blocks like evreyone says.

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/84/camera2062sl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bubble type letters

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/2309/camera2063sp0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I think my name is going to be RAZE

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/6228/camera2064zh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Can someone please give me advice and tell me what else to draw, more block alphabets or work on the name? And is RAZE a good name?

[entri]

here is one with n coulor...its a bit cleaner but i didnt bother to erase the pencil lines...

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture116.jpg

[ternoner]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0843.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0842.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0844.jpg

[ternoner]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0849.jpg

[TryingTooHard]

DOUBLE YOU TEE EF

No crits... all pics

whatever

[Fosale!]

love the simples.
super clean.
super sleek.
super sexy.
perfect.
2 thumbs up&#33;
and a big hoo-rah&#33;

[Sluts_r_us]

new sketch....long live ireland
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/irelandcolors.jpg

[CiviL.Feln]

Oprah - Nice simples, your square &#39;s&#39; looks upside down tho.

Ras - I like the clean coloring and the structure.

This is my contribution to the blackbook thread, not like my other stuuf, and its probably a little too complex. Im feelin it though, everything except the &#39;r&#39; gets a little lost in the mix. Tell me what ya thinkin.
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/2244/nyorkox9.jpg

[ras]

True True..

hopefully...

Tricks Will Sort this out..

something like..

GIVE CRITS TO THE OOTHER PEOPLE BEFORE ASIKING FOR YOUR OWN...OR ELSE YOU WILL GET BANNED...YOU IGNORANT FUCK&#39;S &#33; <_< :angry:

[TryingTooHard]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jan 14 2007, 05:42 PM
love the simples.
super clean.
super sleek.
super sexy.
perfect.
2 thumbs up&#33;
and a big hoo-rah&#33;
lmao....

Loving the skyline

[entri]

yeah lie the tern...simple nice...andthe new york this.. is ight.. i aint qwite feelin it a big to cluddered...and jagged...but the colours are nice..

heres and exchange from a WHILE back that i forgot about...sorry knews...ummm i dont really like the e or the W.. W&#39;s are kinda hard.. but tis the best i could do in like 5 mins..=P...but ye..here.. crit it if u want..

[entri]

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture117.jpg

sorry kinda forgot o dd the pic...lmao..thats it ^^ up there

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 14 2007, 10:31 PM
Not crittin anyone on this page becuz they didnt give out crits themselves <_< :angry:

Fuck all to crit..

busted out 3 sketches todday B) lol..

still messing with extension addons etc. aswell as keeping it simple..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-9.jpg

instead of crits...it would be nice to know if im progressing atall ?.. thanks
Bump for crits.. over ignoraant people.. :( <_< ..

[ternoner]

cool

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 14 2007, 05:32 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :P
haha i suck at chracs
crits on the tag
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7064/picture035zp5.jpg
mith good but i dont like the addons
your definatly progressing
...

[entri]

i agree ..double you tee eph.....?

[ASB_ONE]

entri got a neat style.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0233_000.jpg

[Hilo]

umm scec,, do some fuckign peices and stop fucking worryign about bombs./

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 14 2007, 05:43 PM
new sketch....long live ireland
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/irelandcolors.jpg
bump

[VanityOne]

http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n106/catnip10/DSCF0314.jpg

first throw. any critz? ignore the super toy handstyle. ;)
-VanityOne

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 14 2007, 06:20 PM
entri got a neat style.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0233_000.jpg
make the A come out a little more , i love it.
:lol: the handies are one liners, i like them hopw you enjoy and crits would be appreciated.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1511.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1515-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1518-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1513.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1512.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1517.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1519-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1520.jpg

[nickstix]

ras...lookin good your defenatly improvin, although you might have to play with the extensions a little not all of them quite fit that well

cases...those letters are nice , keep it up try addin drop shadow or 3-d maybe.

pesk...i would loose the exta arrows and i would change up the top arm of the k it looks kinda funny the way it is, try connecting it to the upright piece(if that even makes since)

vanity...theres kinda a mix of styles goin on, the n and i are different styles then the rest

sezer...those charas are dope but in the one liner handie the z looks like an r, other then that its all good

i did another one in my new style and changed up the r this time...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar5.png
crits?advice?

[Kim Jong Il]

mith no offence but they are always the same style i know you change the letters a little bt they are the same style change it up and then we will see if your progressing cause its impossible to tell now i can tell you that your getting good at that style though

[TryingTooHard]

Originally posted by TryingTooHard@Jan 14 2007, 05:31 PM
:unsure: try 3d.... EDIT: not 3d.... just like a shdow or something


:blink: http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/phresik.jpg

eh?
nick.... not likin the "A"...

cases - your are always like BAM&#33; nice karaks too...

crits on the "klasic" thanks

[FIN one]

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7954/str8poopck1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new style maybe

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4323/loljx5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
math "notes" i know it sucks

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/8198/hotdogfy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
US history "notes possible karak? the hotdog was just random and dont mind the MOE. on the knuckles

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by Hilo@Jan 14 2007, 06:20 PM
umm scec,, do some fuckign peices and stop fucking worryign about bombs./
should i take this as a compliment that im good enough at throws that i should start doing pieces....
cases thats awesome but the e is farther down

[Fube]

maybe u post to meny of the same thing.

[nickstix]

trying...thats real nice, i dont like how the top of the a and the c just kinda like curve though try and play with a little.

dcap...try to crit people b4 postin ur own stuff to get crits, but i will crit anyway, your first sketch is really messed up, the letters are good but you have a dropshadow on the bottome then you have 3-d along the top



i did another one in my new style and changed up the r this time...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sar5.png
crits?advice?

bump for crits/advice

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Jan 14 2007, 08:03 PM
I love you girlssssss.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1511.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1515-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1518-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1513.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1512.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1517.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1519-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1520.jpg
;) ;) ;) :rolleyes: :lol: :D :P :o :huh: B) :rolleyes: <_< :( :angry: :) :unsure: :blink: :ph34r:

[A-chue!]

Originally posted by whahappen?+Jan 14 2007, 08:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Jan 14 2007, 08:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hilo@Jan 14 2007, 06:20 PM
umm scec,, do some fuckign peices and stop fucking worryign about bombs./
should i take this as a compliment that im good enough at throws that i should start doing pieces....
cases thats awesome but the e is farther down [/b][/quote]
no you should concintrate on straight letters and simples.
ps they are close but not the same.

simples are like cases not to nuts but not to simple

[alera]

like thoes carict&#39;s ^^^
heres my throwe http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3794/0114071900ez6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and a pencil sketch
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1890/0114072114sk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz?????

[ternoner]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0848.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0847.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0845.jpg

[HeiSk]

raze dont tag raze, there is a legend called rase

[wookiE]

cool stuff sezer

[ShIfTeD]

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/1497/dscn0493ap8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

three random throws for the toy throwie exchange

[Hilo]

Nice, :P LOL fooling around last night aahahaha. and sorry to Sky5er. :)

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8496/picture200eb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[TryingTooHard]

too many arrows in wrong places outta nowhere... IMO :blink:

[jungle book<==8]

alera cool pencil sketch except take out the spider webs.
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1430/picture036rk8.jpg
not my best...
crits?

[Hilo]

tryign to hard. i didint want crits. im just saying i was fooling around tryign a new style.

[jungle book<==8]

Edward"Sezer"Hands-cool sketches and cool character
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/9695/picture038sk8.jpg
crits?

[A-chue!]

^^^^^You should try and do more keyboard letters like CESA but do them fatter and round edges.

heres the color version crits and watknot
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG0007.jpg

[Fosale!]

hevn, i liked your old style more.
it had more umph&#33; to it.


nohomo.
i know the drop shadow is on the wrong side on the last 2 bubbles.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/nohomo.jpg
freestyled sticks.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/sticks.jpg
dont feel like turningit around for you lazy none head turners.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebkk.jpg
fucked up bday card in the car tonight
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/chloee.jpg
front of card.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/chloe.jpg

[Truth.]

practicing my simples, i dunno, i like the E, crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/THEYsimp.jpg

[Fosale!]

i hope you still write truth bc. most of that work was on point.

[Hot_Pocket]

Make the E smaller, much smaller.

[Truth.]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jan 15 2007, 02:13 AM
i hope you still write truth bc. most of that work was on point.
thanks, yeah i still write truth, i just was trying other letters.

[iPew!]

heres a quick lil&#39; piece for you guys....meh its late im tired :blink:

http://i16.tinypic.com/2edpk5j.jpg

says mono

[Fosale!]

thats not a theow
and wow.
what does it say
kono?

[iPew!]

a throwie to me is something im just gunna throw up for the hell of it. and no, it says Mono.

[ras]

someone need to go simple

[d_g]

iPew&#33;, not criting you cause you didn&#39;t crit.

Truth, the &#39;h&#39; is a little wide, the concept for the &#39;e&#39; is good, could do with a little cleaning up though.

Bastardo, I like the &#39;chloe&#39; stuff but I think they other stuff you posted is a bit average compared to what you usually do. Don&#39;t know how to help you out really.

Hevn, too many colors dude, it distracts from the piece. The fill is kinda wierd. 3d&#39;s not too bad. Personally don&#39;t like the character. The &#39;v&#39; is kinda hidden and the rest of the letters are confusing.


Couldn&#39;t be bothered doing anything pretty.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw08.jpg

EDIT: Shit, sorry for the biggish pic.

[BohemianBastard]

Fo sale the chl (small oe) is very chillenish

truth, keep the simples up

Ipew, simples

d_g, i like it, though the handy is really fucking wack

here&#39;s some shit, i like to scribble aaa looot
Most of its pen freestyles, hence the wackness
http://i13.tinypic.com/301lszs.jpg
http://i11.tinypic.com/4c12bub.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/4fvje45.jpg
http://i16.tinypic.com/40pz5lt.jpg
http://i14.tinypic.com/335dx1k.jpg
http://i3.tinypic.com/496qzph.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/4grjk39.jpg

:)

[TricksForKids]

Da Fuck? lol, dope as always , i wanna see you take like an hour and do one up and coloure it with dope 3D and everything..but then im not sure id liked it as much cuz i love the grimey pen freestyles *meh*

Dg, that throws sexy other then the last little "kick" in the S&#39;s, its a) wayyy too played out and B), doesnt even look that nice, trust me, ive tried, try doing a differt ending with that line in your S to be original and ultrac00ol

ipew, see how simple and round the O&#39;s are in your "mono throw"?, do that for the other letters as well

truth that simples on point, just dont like how the T and H overlap, takes away from the simplicity of the rest of it

Fosale the styles coming along, that chloe handystyles on poiiiiiiint che che

Heven, that style aint so bad but you royally fudged it up with the colours, and the squiggly lines in the 3D give the whole piece a weird squiggly feelin to it

have a good day suckasssss

[Mse]

i might do it once just for you :), i did the cursive shizzot because you were the only one who liked it

5th flick down, the characters arent mine, a homie hit up mah blackbook

[beefgerky]

yeee i see some chiller in that shit too trickz.

[Mono013]

Can I also post work that&#39;s not made on paper here too?
It was a sort of practice:

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1598/mono1or4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

i wouldnt write mono.
mono and mister breakfast have some mad huge ups.
all over.
just check the sticker thread in the regular thread

[Fluffy Bunnies]

What kinda pens you guys use?&#33;

I use these
http://www.draftingsuppliesdew.com/images/markers/XSDK01-49.jpg

I don&#39;t think they are the best and what can I use to have clean lines and not rough?

[Bazer]

i use prismas and deco color. but i dont think this is the right thread for that..

[alera]

Originally posted by alera@Jan 14 2007, 09:18 PM
like thoes carict&#39;s ^^^
heres my throwe http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3794/0114071900ez6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and a pencil sketch
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1890/0114072114sk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Critz?????
kinda got lost back there...

critz???

bohemianbasterd im lovin thoes keep it up man :D

[uhhh]

alera-what hapened? you had such dope stuff a few months back.
well, that throw kinda sucks, a lot. try it cleaner it might look decent then.
that piece, doesnt really do it for me, and whats up with where the e and r meet, it looks like you tried to do a 3d style there then decided not to for the rest.. :huh:

[Stinky]

Fosale how do you know that it really isn&#39;t Mono. OOooOhhhhhhHH....The suspense is being built. And I&#39;m seriously wondering if it is the real Mono.


[SIZE=1]teehee

[ras]

Stinky...you forgot it again.. :( :lol:

- stinky - lmfao

Alera...feeling that shite right there.. ;)

Tried COMPLETLY new letter&#39;s..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/w.jpg

Euro type shit..PS..i spaced the letters out on purpose..so each letter pops of the Green

Crits..Thanks.. :)

[nemzone]

put the letters together, slight overlap, and a green forcefield. bubbles are overplayed. take the bits off it, and if u did al that, and took the cracks off it would be the first sketch of urs i liked.

well i liked this outline til i raped it with 3d :&#39;(

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/1676/imag0004bf1.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jan 15 2007, 10:36 AM
What kinda pens you guys use?&#33;

I use these
http://www.draftingsuppliesdew.com/images/markers/XSDK01-49.jpg

I don&#39;t think they are the best and what can I use to have clean lines and not rough?
Deco color extra fine point paint pens. They&#39;re thin and if you&#39;re filling in with an ink like prismas, they trap the colors in so they don&#39;t bleed outside the outline.

[Sumoe]

nems-not really feelin the sketch, to curvy for my taste I guess, I really like the Z tho.

Ras- if you fix all the stuff nems said, It would also be one of my favorite sketches from you.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Stinky@Jan 15 2007, 11:38 AM
Fosale how do you know that it really isn&#39;t Mono. OOooOhhhhhhHH....The suspense is being built. And I&#39;m seriously wondering if it is the real Mono.


[SIZE=1]teehee
how could this kid in the toy forum be the real mono.
your an idiot.
the real mono is amazing.
your a /&#092;/008/|_0r(noobzor)

[ras]

Fo...just out of curiosty..how old are you ?

Nemz..i dont like how the N connect to the E..but its my opinion...its you style..and keep on doing it..

did what you said..

i aint a fan of this style and i wont be sticking to it...i just tried new letters to see if i had improved..also added a quick karak lol..aint done one in weeeeeks...to sow how cold it is here..lol

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1-2.jpg

Crits..Thanks :D

[MUSASHI]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jan 15 2007, 10:36 AM
What kinda pens you guys use?&#33;

I use these
http://www.draftingsuppliesdew.com/images/markers/XSDK01-49.jpg

I don&#39;t think they are the best and what can I use to have clean lines and not rough?
if you use good quality paper you can avoid the shittiness of some markersand pens....actually I use those pens sometimes...

[Albert Fish]

ras if you added the h in that style lined up at the same height as the m, that would look nice. and you really have to work on your handstyle.

[Oprah]

Question Everyone: how do I make "cool" letters. I can make block and bubbles but idk how to bend/stretch/ etc. to make them cool. shoulc i just copy other "cool&#39; letters in other pieces and than use them in mine. like if a see a cool &#39;e&#39; and my name is raze, should i put that cool &#39;e&#39; into mine or make my own &#39;e&#39;?

[bouncingsoul]

Haven&#39;t sketched in a loooong while

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0575.jpg

[also known as MYL]

Originally posted by Oprah@Jan 15 2007, 01:49 PM
Question Everyone: how do I make "cool" letters. I can make block and bubbles but idk how to bend/stretch/ etc. to make them cool. shoulc i just copy other "cool&#39; letters in other pieces and than use them in mine. like if a see a cool &#39;e&#39; and my name is raze, should i put that cool &#39;e&#39; into mine or make my own &#39;e&#39;?
no. thats called biting.

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 15 2007, 06:10 PM
Fo...just out of curiosty..how old are you ?

Nemz..i dont like how the N connect to the E..but its my opinion...its you style..and keep on doing it..

did what you said..

i aint a fan of this style and i wont be sticking to it...i just tried new letters to see if i had improved..also added a quick karak lol..aint done one in weeeeeks...to sow how cold it is here..lol

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1-2.jpg

Crits..Thanks :D
Lol..im dont know what to do..you guys seem to like this style..i dont..i like more old skool style.. :unsure: ..lol...i dunno wever to stick to this..or go back to my other stuff..becuz i dont see a way of improving this.. :blink: ..into a funky style..

Bumpz too...

OPRAH...you need to do research &#33; ...or just quit graff all together.. :( <_< ...

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by also known as MYL+Jan 15 2007, 01:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (also known as MYL @ Jan 15 2007, 01:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Oprah@Jan 15 2007, 01:49 PM
Question Everyone: how do I make "cool" letters. I can make block and bubbles but idk how to bend/stretch/ etc. to make them cool. shoulc i just copy other "cool&#39; letters in other pieces and than use them in mine. like if a see a cool &#39;e&#39; and my name is raze, should i put that cool &#39;e&#39; into mine or make my own &#39;e&#39;?
no. thats called biting. [/b][/quote]
ahahahahahahaha...kids.

are you fuckin serious tho. kids really think like the day they start doing graffiti that they are going to be amazing at it. then when they find out they&#39;re not the wanna quit. what has this ridiculous excuse for a planet come to....fuck earth...mars bitch...that&#39;s where it&#39;s at.

[revolt92]

Ras, i personally you should ever tell anyone to quit i just dont think it&#39;s right and i prefer your old style to that one, but just stick to what your good at and what you like.

[ras]

yeah..that wss to far..but..cumon...atleast do sum research bfore picking up a spry can..i sure did..&#33;...most of it i lernt ( YEAH ITS GAY ETC ETC. ) Marc Eko getting up...i learnt a bit off that..

aswell as on here..if it wasnt for you guz on here..i wudnt be wer im at now.. :( .. i sound gay...and this is probably the gayest post iv ever done.. &#33; lol :lol:

[Oprah]

Originally posted by AteskOne+Jan 15 2007, 01:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne @ Jan 15 2007, 01:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by also known as MYL@Jan 15 2007, 01:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Oprah@Jan 15 2007, 01:49 PM
Question Everyone: how do I make "cool" letters. I can make block and bubbles but idk how to bend/stretch/ etc. to make them cool. shoulc i just copy other "cool&#39; letters in other pieces and than use them in mine. like if a see a cool &#39;e&#39; and my name is raze, should i put that cool &#39;e&#39; into mine or make my own &#39;e&#39;?
no. thats called biting.
ahahahahahahaha...kids.

are you fuckin serious tho. kids really think like the day they start doing graffiti that they are going to be amazing at it. then when they find out they&#39;re not the wanna quit. what has this ridiculous excuse for a planet come to....fuck earth...mars bitch...that&#39;s where it&#39;s at. [/b][/quote]
thanks for the help

[shamee1991]

yo oprah, biting ur aloud to do it cuz ur a TOY.

[revolt92]

That still dosent make it ok unless your jokin then its funny haha .

[also known as MYL]

Originally posted by shamee1991@Jan 15 2007, 02:24 PM
yo oprah, biting ur aloud to do it cuz ur a TOY.
so i can bite sky5 or gesus or someone else and its okay then?


i dont think so...you learn graffiti from doing SIMPLES not biting other writers who have developed their own style which takes years to do

[Mse]

yeah because its "aloud"
fucking idiot

[slinks]

Some sketches of my tags...

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti014.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti013.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti012.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti011.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti009.jpg

Critics are welcome and wanted.

[also known as MYL]

dont overlap your letters that much, just looks like a bunch of garble

[Samp1e]

Oprah was just wondering what to do, where to start. He doesn&#39;t know where to begin so instead of just trying to attempt something he doesn&#39;t know he asked us where he should start and was asking whether or not he is right... Instead we just rag on the guy like he&#39;s done something wrong when he just wanted to know what he should do, ras, don&#39;t just discourage the guy and tell him to quit cause you know he won&#39;t learn or get anywhere with "advice" like that. shame, telling him it&#39;s OK to bite other writers isn&#39;t right either. Even if someone is a toy and they bite it isn&#39;t right, it&#39;s just that because they are a toy and still developing their stuff they aren&#39;t called out as hard, cause they don&#39;t know their shit and are still learning and stuff.

Mse, just because someone gets lazy when typing (I do, a lot.) or maybe they just don&#39;t know how to spell doesn&#39;t mean you should call them out, especially when you don&#39;t even use proper grammar and spelling yourself.

This forum sees too much beef and we shouldn&#39;t be all about that, we&#39;re here to get better and help/teach each other what we know, so they can get better and pass what they know on.

As for you Oprah, like MYL said, you learn by starting out simple and developing your letters, making steady progression. Practice a lot.

Slinks -- I&#39;m not great with tags myself but I think MYL is right, and just so you know, there&#39;s a tag thread up so you&#39;re bound to get more responses and better feedback over there ;)

[ras]

Wow..that shit wuz deeeeep.. :huh: ..and

GIVE CRITS ON OTHER PEOPLE BEFORE ASKING FOR YOU OWN..

:angry: .. Fuuuuck

[ras]

Originally posted by ras+Jan 15 2007, 06:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Jan 15 2007, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Jan 15 2007, 06:10 PM
Fo...just out of curiosty..how old are you ?

Nemz..i dont like how the N connect to the E..but its my opinion...its you style..and keep on doing it..

did what you said..

i aint a fan of this style and i wont be sticking to it...i just tried new letters to see if i had improved..also added a quick karak lol..aint done one in weeeeeks...to sow how cold it is here..lol

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1-2.jpg

Crits..ThanksÂ* :D
Lol..im dont know what to do..you guys seem to like this style..i dont..i like more old skool style.. :unsure: ..lol...i dunno wever to stick to this..or go back to my other stuff..becuz i dont see a way of improving this.. :blink: ..into a funky style..

Bumpz too...

OPRAH...you need to do research &#33; ...or just quit graff all together.. :( <_< ... [/b][/quote]
BUMP FOR THE 2ND TIME.. :angry: ..

[Mse]

Mse, just because someone gets lazy when typing (I do, a lot.) or maybe they just don&#39;t know how to spell doesn&#39;t mean you should call them out, especially when you don&#39;t even use proper grammar and spelling yourself.
yo, i really dont care when people spell shit like dis n dey lik typ lik dis
that doesnt bother me, but when you&#39;re spelling allowed, aloud
you can just fuck off

[fuckthatgame]

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/1852/p1010035hn9.jpg

[revolt92]

ras- i already gave you crits but i&#39;ll say it again, i think you should go back to your old style and i also think your &#39;m&#39; and &#39;i&#39; look kinda fucked up.

slinks- try not to overlap everything that make&#39;s it look odd.

mse- I agree with you...i mean why do people have to shorten everything it&#39;s only a couple more letters and has nothing to do with being lazy or cant your fingers go up and down like that for 30 seconds.

Peace

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Jan 15 2007, 01:52 PM
Haven&#39;t sketched in a loooong while

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0575.jpg
dope. colour that shit

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Here&#39;s a sketch just for today with no reason... When I scanned it, it took out the blue lines and made it look more rough than it&#39;s suppose to be... but hey, it&#39;s in pencil so I can fix that anytime
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/scan0002.jpg
I messed up the K... K&#39;s are fun and can be a bitch at the same time.

[ras]

your shit looks like and always reminds me of Oker..

i dont crit people who dont give out crits themselves but ill say this...you also need to work on that tag .. and youve done the same type of stuff for aaages...try moving on or summet..experiement..you aint gunna get no where with the same 2 letters everytime.. :)

[Sike_Bomber]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Jan 15 2007, 01:52 PM
Haven&#39;t sketched in a loooong while

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0575.jpg
dude, you post these on 12oz all the time, dont say you havent sketched in a while.

[entri]

Originally posted by Mse@Jan 15 2007, 02:46 PM
yeah because its "aloud"
fucking idiot
ok.. biin is not "aloud".....so i dont know wut kinds of drugs ur smokig.. bu nleu want this toy ta get capped...lined. crossed.. for the rest of his life.. givehim some atual advice and dont be lazy and a stupid fuck and say that biting is "aloud"...cuzz then one dayy hes gunna bie the wrong person and get his ass beat....and to oprah.. dont bite... and some more advice.. dun start with a piece.. trust... its not gunna work.. start wit a tag.. that is the essensce and all base off graff.. once u got a good tag... then you begin with the bubble letters and progress them..untill you have a fresh "throw-up"... THEN.. and ONLY then come back onaskin advice for pieces...

[ras]

i know its not for me to say AT ALL..but this thread is FOR PICTURES &#33;&#33; ... i carnt belive all these LONG ass paragraphs and essays all becuz of somebody who cannot spell .. and somebody who doesnt know what to do...he got an answer..and thats that...i dont think there is really any need to carry it on onto the next page..

damn..

My rant over.. <_<