Blackbooks

[C3ZR ONE]

Stitch- Those are wicked letters. Nice overall shape. I've always been partial to those vlack and whites with a red outline too.

Mith- Good old school stuff. The bottom right extension of the M needs to be brought down a bit. I like the crew letters attacthed on the end.

Nems- That "User" piece is really fresh. Love the letters. The S coulda been pushed a bit further tho. It's kinda lacking the freshness of the other letters. You have a kinda "aliens" feel to your work.

Wookie- That's WAYY old school. Even the colors. Good hand on blocks. Not my favorite, but it's fun.

Caser- that simple style is locked dowen well for you. Great handle on letter flow. Your style would look good on freights because it's so easily readable, kinda like Mber's work (he's a freight king who always does simples so people can read it from a mile away at 40 miles an hour)

Tricks- Go easy on the warnings.. Only heavy offenders. We don't wanna suspend everybody, but I feel you. It's tough to hold this many people to the rules. Just try your best.

Anybody who posted while I typed this- sorry if you didn't get crits. :(


A clever bump. I posted this sketch last night, but added a sticker I did for Remiks pack, so it's like a new flick. B) B)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6974/im000510td4.jpg

[nemzone]

can i suggest something mate? no? well tough, listen anyway lol.

on ur top M, you got he wee arrow in the bottom of the letter, going into all 3 legs, well i think it would be mint if u put the arrow facing up, at the top of the M, then the 2 stright sections on the top of the M now could go on the bottom?

just dont think it looks right how they joined.

and btw im loving the style, never seen anything like it..

[sane013]

Originally posted by stroke@Jan 18 2007, 01:18 AM
freakshow- really feelin that style
bouncingsoul - your throws are dope
fube - like you told me(thx for that peice of advice by the way), id go with somethin a little more simple, those extensions make it hard to figure out whats actualy written, looks like a bunch of S to me.
nemz - not realy feelin that color skeme but everything else is tight

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3028/stitch002iq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i got rid of all those stupid extensions and gay arrows and tried writting stitch instead of stroke cause i really suck balls at doin Ks and Rs...i dont think im gonna stick to stitch do...
crits?
I really like your styl.
But i think you have to look at the letter structure. and the addons you put on.
Make sure you put them on the right places so people wont think they see other letters. (for example the H that looks al little bit like the K)
With the letter stucture i mean the way you shape your letters. For example the C
Of you make the bottem al little bit longer and the top a little bit shorter it looks really good. Hope you can do something with this. (also the T is not really right shaped (i dont say its not nice or something) but the upper part is longer than the bottem. with the upper part i mean the line that cros the t frem left to right and with the bottem part i mean the really bottem of the ''t'')

[sane013]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 17 2007, 02:50 PM
Near...that throw is fucking hot...dope..dont like the 2nd so much...but the 3rd on is dope too..

erm...decided to do a peice with a back gorund...that being a ny train..ha..old skool babyyy

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzz.jpg

Crits and Comments

Thanks :D
I've added it a little bit. (only the bottems)
I think you have the make some lines fatter to make ik look more thight
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9578/zzzzuy1.jpg
Also put a little bit more detail in the bubbles Than make 2 or 3 big bubles but make 10 little bubbles on one place.
Hope this helps you.
(what i wanne say in the immage is that you have to look more at your letter structure and make them more ''One'' with the other lines in the letters and the extensions)

[MainEvent]

wookie- the vanishing point 3d is nice but work on the letters. the fill is cool though.

mith- i like it alot as usual but the the modifications that sane made make it look nicer.

caser- shits real nice. stay up

cezr- man that remik piece is fresh. i dont really like the R that much but all the other letters are sick with very cool fill and extensions. post up a colored version, good shit.

[ASB_ONE]

word to sane heed that advice!!!
cezr that stuff is real nice same as nemz aint seen a style like that before u goin to colour that?

finnished the first page of ma new black book:

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0239_000.jpg

[Hilo]

B) Near Yes Yes Yes, well this is a new name , really hard to do 3D with this one time will show with it. Crits?





http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9198/picture201iq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us) <-- might be a bit big.





Rasssssssssssssss&#33;&#33;


wohhooo top of the page

[ras]

Hilo...whut you mean RAAASSSS...

ASB...dope shit man..really nice..that R is realll fire..

SANE...much thanks...ill have it up soon...thanks man :D

Nemz...thank for the info about the 3D man... :)

and..

ENRTI...what the fuck you chatting...man...that flick you posted was done in like january 2006... <_< ...and when have i ever called anyone a TOY...let alone in Canada...even if i did...i prpbably never meant it..becuase im toy..you prick

[Hilo]

thats just entr man. he likes beef. RASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS&#33;&#33;

[ternoner]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0858.jpg

[alera]

^^^^^its tall... thats good :)

I know I know no color <_<

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/6223/0118071244ga5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

critz?

[sane013]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 18 2007, 12:07 PM
word to sane heed that advice&#33;&#33;&#33;
cezr that stuff is real nice same as nemz aint seen a style like that before u goin to colour that?

finnished the first page of ma new black book:

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0239_000.jpg
Like it man really like it.
Did you make those trains yourself? or are they printed samples

[near]

hilo that throw is pretty cute....i dont know why but that "motr" tag reminds me of "matr" like the way its spaced out and the letters...like i dunno it just looks like matr steeze kinda

tern thats a nice simple u got

alera the &#39;A&#39; is mad nice the other letters r pretty good too but the &#39;R&#39; (if it is an R) looks like a &#39;B&#39;

here is something i found in my bbook so i outlined and coloured it...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010675.jpg

[DemiGod]

Originally posted by slinks@Jan 17 2007, 07:53 PM
Ive been sketching alot lately with my new prismas...heres a few...please crit
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti019.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti020.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti022.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti018.jpg
ok heres my crit....prismas are dope markers but they r not gunna help ur ability to draw....and put a lil more personality into ur throwie letters....and sketch everyday

[Bastardo]

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/581/picture244ra7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6_6tpnhnAjI

[Hilo]

Edit.

[Hilo]

WOW, iloveyou.<3

[capo93]

holy shit bastardo thats fucking amazing :o

[Hilo]

WTF SOMEHTING WRONG WIHT BS.

[Hilo]

yeha just give it more letter structure not to squggaly over all i love it.

More of a bubaly style. haha bubaly.
CRITS.

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9149/picture202ty8.jpg (http://imageshack.us) THNKS&#33;&#33;&#33;

[ras]

Bastardo..nice nice.. ;)

Near...great colouring comination.. :D

diceided to lose the extensions on the legs of the M n H..becuase they only look decent on trains..and did the modifications whut Sane told me..Much props Sane &#33;&#33; :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzz.jpg

Crits and comments

Thanks :) ..

oh..excuse the sloppiness and shit 3d...my main concentration is my letters..thnen ill move onto 3d..

ima make a card board train lol..kinda like the ones from All City Style.. ;) :lol:

[emokid]

bastardo, always loved your style, bordering on too squiggly perhaps, like it anyway.

hilo, nice throw, dont know anything about throws though so wont even try and give you advice.

ras, something about the skinny bit of the m seems out of place with the rest, apart from that its good

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9827/dscn6239pz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

last post till i do somethin different, otherwise i&#39;d be posting the same sketch over and over.

[ras]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 18 2007, 08:02 PM
Bastardo..nice nice.. ;)

Near...great colouring comination.. :D

diceided to lose the extensions on the legs of the M n H..becuase they only look decent on trains..and did the modifications whut Sane told me..Much props Sane &#33;&#33; :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzz.jpg

Crits and comments

Thanks :) ..

oh..excuse the sloppiness and shit 3d...my main concentration is my letters..thnen ill move onto 3d..

ima make a card board train lol..kinda like the ones from All City Style.. ;) :lol:
Yeah Emo..thats what i was thinking..
nice shite as uasual....i think you should muck about with add ons and shit

and Bump for bottom of the page... :( ;)

[DLove]

alil something. tryin some new letters.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0805.jpg

[_ghost_]

IMG]http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/graff3.jpg[/IMG]
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/graff2.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/graff1.jpg

[alera]

i know every one hates hearing this but go simpiler

it will help alot... :D

[slinks]

damn ghost not dissin cus i have no room to talk but i cant really make out any of that...?

[_ghost_]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/graff3.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/graff2.jpg

it says Gist srry for the double post

[shamee1991]

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9827/dscn6239pz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
love it love it love it, so simple and so sweet&#33;...love ur work.

[throb]

Originally posted by alera@Jan 18 2007, 12:52 PM
^^^^^its tall... thats good :)

I know I know no color <_<

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/6223/0118071244ga5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

critz?
id bring the "A" all the way down

[stroke]

Originally posted by sane013+Jan 18 2007, 10:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sane013 @ Jan 18 2007, 10:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-stroke@Jan 18 2007, 01:18 AM
freakshow- really feelin that style
bouncingsoul - your throws areÂ* dope
fube - like you told me(thx for that peice of advice by the way), id go with somethin a little more simple, those extensions make it hard to figure out whats actualy written, looks like a bunch of S to me.
nemz - not realy feelin that color skeme but everything else is tight

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3028/stitch002iq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i got rid of all those stupid extensions and gay arrows and tried writting stitch instead of stroke cause i really suck balls at doin Ks and Rs...i dont think im gonna stick to stitch do...
crits?
I really like your styl.
But i think you have to look at the letter structure. and the addons you put on.
Make sure you put them on the right places so people wont think they see other letters. (for example the H that looks al little bit like the K)
With the letter stucture i mean the way you shape your letters. For example the C
Of you make the bottem al little bit longer and the top a little bit shorter it looks really good. Hope you can do something with this. (also the T is not really right shaped (i dont say its not nice or something) but the upper part is longer than the bottem. with the upper part i mean the line that cros the t frem left to right and with the bottem part i mean the really bottem of the &#39;&#39;t&#39;&#39;) [/b][/quote]
thx for the crit man, really usefull, now i see what yall meen by letter structure :blink:... im on it right now

GHOST - man i know its the last thing you wanna hear but you really need to scrap those letters and go back to blocks, i mean.. the letter structure couldnt be much worst. all these extensions just keep coming out of nowhere and it makes it hard to read the thing.. dude I know you wanna do some wild shit right away(been there) but the thing is people gotta be able to read the peice or else its just a bunch of crooked arrows. So be patient, work on simples, youll get much better results that way than if you rush the whole thing..

[whahappen?]

stroke go back to simples
alera dont make the e so huge on the side
should i submit this...?
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5798/picture042zm3.jpg

[sane013]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 18 2007, 03:02 PM
Bastardo..nice nice.. ;)

Near...great colouring comination.. :D

diceided to lose the extensions on the legs of the M n H..becuase they only look decent on trains..and did the modifications whut Sane told me..Much props Sane &#33;&#33; :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzz.jpg

Crits and comments

Thanks :) ..

oh..excuse the sloppiness and shit 3d...my main concentration is my letters..thnen ill move onto 3d..

ima make a card board train lol..kinda like the ones from All City Style.. ;) :lol:
this looks much better. But you can try to put the extensions back on. But dont make them complicated (not that your extensions before where complicated) but make some little things for example a arrow or something

[ras]

Thanks Sane.. :) :D

Wappen...please...do sumthing other than a throw up..

Throb..dope style..nice nice nice..add colour..and some other things .. and thatll be unique.. :lol: :)

[Hilo]

EDIT

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 18 2007, 04:45 PM
Thanks Sane.. :) :D

Wappen...please...do sumthing other than a throw up..

Throb..dope style..nice nice nice..add colour..and some other things .. and thatll be unique.. :lol: :)
its for the throwie battle...
and im not good enough or paitient enough to do simples and progress AGAIN maybe someday

[sane013]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 18 2007, 04:45 PM
Thanks Sane.. :) :D

Wappen...please...do sumthing other than a throw up..

Throb..dope style..nice nice nice..add colour..and some other things .. and thatll be unique.. :lol: :)
Some arrow samples:
http://www1.istockphoto.com/file_thumbview_approve/406733/2/istockphoto_406733_graffiti_arrows.jpg

[whahappen?]

half those look fucking stupid^
specially top left they look like emblems for some online game

[ras]

Originally posted by ras+Jan 18 2007, 08:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Jan 18 2007, 08:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ras@Jan 18 2007, 08:02 PM
Bastardo..nice nice.. ;)

Near...great colouring comination.. :D

diceided to lose the extensions on the legs of the M n H..becuase they only look decent on trains..and did the modifications whut Sane told me..Much props Sane &#33;&#33; :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzz.jpg

Crits and comments

Thanks :) ..

oh..excuse the sloppiness and shit 3d...my main concentration is my letters..thnen ill move onto 3d..

ima make a card board train lol..kinda like the ones from All City Style.. ;) :lol:
Yeah Emo..thats what i was thinking..
nice shite as uasual....i think you should muck about with add ons and shit

and Bump for bottom of the page... :( ;) [/b][/quote]
bump...for crits... :( <_< ;)

SANE...what you mean by the arrows.. ?? :unsure: .. to add on to the legs..they look kindaaa wierd..too

[uhhh]

Originally posted by stroke+Jan 18 2007, 04:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (stroke @ Jan 18 2007, 04:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sane013@Jan 18 2007, 10:54 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-stroke@Jan 18 2007, 01:18 AM
freakshow- really feelin that style
bouncingsoul - your throws areÂ* dope
fube - like you told me(thx for that peice of advice by the way), id go with somethin a little more simple, those extensions make it hard to figure out whats actualy written, looks like a bunch of S to me.
nemz - not realy feelin that color skeme but everything else is tight

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3028/stitch002iq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i got rid of all those stupid extensions and gay arrows and tried writting stitch instead of stroke cause i really suck balls at doin Ks and Rs...i dont think im gonna stick to stitch do...
crits?
I really like your styl.
But i think you have to look at the letter structure. and the addons you put on.
Make sure you put them on the right places so people wont think they see other letters. (for example the H that looks al little bit like the K)
With the letter stucture i mean the way you shape your letters. For example the C
Of you make the bottem al little bit longer and the top a little bit shorter it looks really good. Hope you can do something with this. (also the T is not really right shaped (i dont say its not nice or something) but the upper part is longer than the bottem. with the upper part i mean the line that cros the t frem left to right and with the bottem part i mean the really bottem of the &#39;&#39;t&#39;&#39;)
thx for the crit man, really usefull, now i see what yall meen by letter structure :blink:... im on it right now

GHOST - man i know its the last thing you wanna hear but you really need to scrap those letters and go back to blocks, i mean.. the letter structure couldnt be much worst. all these extensions just keep coming out of nowhere and it makes it hard to read the thing.. dude I know you wanna do some wild shit right away(been there) but the thing is people gotta be able to read the peice or else its just a bunch of crooked arrows. So be patient, work on simples, youll get much better results that way than if you rush the whole thing.. [/b][/quote]
its really funy how many times you made it sound like you were good.

but, those letters are very bad, they have just enough relativness to the letters that you can make it out, but its still very bad, and you go overboard on a whole lot of things. It will take awile of sketching and doing SIMPLES until youll understnad how much of this extension and that. and please dont say "ill never learn extensions without trying" because, although this is true, you NEED to have good simples so that you can understand what makes your letters and then and ONLY then should you branch off into extensions. this goes for sooo many people in this part of the forum.

[turnturnturn]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1652.jpg

any tips on improving this?

[ras]

Hey..why not give tips out yourself.. :)

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh...that was very true what you just said...word

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Bazer]

i like that second one man. but you should tilt the oval a little bit over to the right. not to much though.

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 16 2007, 04:08 PM
Sane..he means this..

D O Y O U R N E X T P E I C E L I K E T H I S I T M I G H T L O O K B O R I N G B U T I T H E L P S

( do you next peice like ^^ this might look boring but it helps )

:)
^made me laugh out loud.

[ternoner]

Originally posted by ternoner@Jan 18 2007, 12:39 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/100_0858.jpg
any way to make this better? and whats letter structer? do i have it with this

mith- its tight, like that T, they are hard for me i guess

[turnturnturn]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1654.jpg

line is fine, but your p and y needed fixin so i did it

[Beast]

[
spy that looks cool

[Bazer]

letter structures how your lines look. good structure means the lines are well rounded and curve the right way on the right place. bad letter structure is somethin that would look like you were shaking alot when you were moving you pen or marker or whatever. but yeah, i think you gettin somewhere with that tag. just keep progressing.

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 18 2007, 04:40 PM
stroke go back to simples
alera dont make the e so huge on the side
should i submit this...?
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5798/picture042zm3.jpg
for battle
spy really nice but the top of the s is too small
tern really cool
kees reminds me of poed really cool though
mith looks awesome

[DLove]

woops my fault

[DLove]

Originally posted by DLove@Jan 18 2007, 03:41 PM
alil something. tryin some new letters.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/100_0805.jpg
Bump for critz

[nemzone]

KEES - nice simples bud,

SPY - work on ur Y and ul have it lookin good (one with three throws)

TERN - would look good painted bout 6-7ft tall

below - the B needs work

STOP FUCKING BUMPING WHEN U WONT CRIT ANY&#33; ELSE MOTHER FUCKER&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; holy fuckin hell are u lot retarts or somethin

its an alrite simple, keep at it

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4841/imag0003zl8.jpg
all worn out now lol

[entri]

turn keepin it straighth and clean.. nice...seek...im feelin it.. but im not feelin the 3D so much..

ye..sorry ras man.. i guess that was kinda a dik move on my behalf...bt e you have improved alot...and everyone statrs out shit...

here are some of my new sketches.....the one with 3-D.. i dont like my N....and then i also posted a canvas i did....but i still have to put a lil piece up in the corner

CRITS??

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture121.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture124.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture122-1.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Originally posted by turnturnturn@Jan 18 2007, 05:20 PM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1652.jpg

any tips on improving this?
:lol:
i like this mangggg
color it.

[writersblock]

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/3947/graff1nn0.jpg

I could use some feedback...

[ras]

ENRTI...its aight man...erm...just fine tune the N ... then thatll be a down and gritty style..yeuhh

NEMZ...that style is spreading its wings...your really tryin other stuff withit and thats good to see..lol..." iv given ras his fair amount of beastings " ... lmao.. ;)

WIRTERS BLOCK..first rule...your new..so...give other people feedback before asking for you own.. ;)

you know im sick off saying this lol..ima put it in ma sig...

i think yall should too...spread the word &#33;&#33; lol

oh yes..now i can just say...READ THE RED..IN THE SIIIGGG :lol:

oh kool...1111 posts.. :o :lol:

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by turnturnturn@Jan 18 2007, 05:20 PM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_1652.jpg

any tips on improving this?
do you post as melbs scum on 12oz? if not its a very heavily influenced sketch, not quite a bite i dont think, but very very similar.

[sky 5]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9616/1212184yl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i know im better than this . .

good stuff nemz

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[bouncingsoul]

Goddammit... I don&#39;t want to crit because I&#39;m a lazy bastard.

Nemz, it looks good but some of the addons kill the letters, like the one in the M on the bottom sketch.

Entri, work on your handie, it sucks hella bad. Your sketches aren&#39;t too great either. Do normal letters instead of trying abstract ones.

Kees, try and incorporate some straight lines into it. As it is, it looks shaky and unstable. Looks sick though.

I don&#39;t know if I missed anyone but I don&#39;t really care... Kill me

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8998/img0581mv2.jpg
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8244/img0582dl6.jpg

"Spectr" sketch (I suck at T&#39;s, and I&#39;m still working on a throw for you man) and some more fucking around

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/121/img1522ma5.th.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1522ma5.jpg)
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/4165/img1521ec5.th.jpg (http://img264.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img1521ec5.jpg)

[_ghost_]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/graff4.jpg

Is this simple enough i dont wana go al the way back to like block block letters =(

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 18 2007, 10:38 AM
Stitch- Those are wicked letters. Nice overall shape. I&#39;ve always been partial to those vlack and whites with a red outline too.

Mith- Good old school stuff. The bottom right extension of the M needs to be brought down a bit. I like the crew letters attacthed on the end.

Nems- That "User" piece is really fresh. Love the letters. The S coulda been pushed a bit further tho. It&#39;s kinda lacking the freshness of the other letters. You have a kinda "aliens" feel to your work.

Wookie- That&#39;s WAYY old school. Even the colors. Good hand on blocks. Not my favorite, but it&#39;s fun.

Caser- that simple style is locked dowen well for you. Great handle on letter flow. Your style would look good on freights because it&#39;s so easily readable, kinda like Mber&#39;s work (he&#39;s a freight king who always does simples so people can read it from a mile away at 40 miles an hour)

Tricks- Go easy on the warnings.. Only heavy offenders. We don&#39;t wanna suspend everybody, but I feel you. It&#39;s tough to hold this many people to the rules. Just try your best.

Anybody who posted while I typed this- sorry if you didn&#39;t get crits. :(


A clever bump. I posted this sketch last night, but added a sticker I did for Remiks pack, so it&#39;s like a new flick. B) B)
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6974/im000510td4.jpg
No no ceezy, i didnt mean suspensions, just saying id ahve to edit their posts/ delete thim if they were multiple offenders, im no crazy man&#33;

ill be back to give some feedback, gotta run though

[whoarethereal evil]

ghost no offence but u do need 2 go back 2 block letters

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00497.jpg

throwie wht dya think?

[VanityOne]

Originally posted by _ghost_@Jan 18 2007, 07:25 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/graff4.jpg

Is this simple enough i dont wana go al the way back to like block block letters =(
_ghost_ - if i was you i would go back to the simples. you have to start somewhere. even though blocks are not that fun. it does help. just keep it up ;)

[Nosypainter]

nice guys the style is really starting to take form...

[Deso7]

if i were you id get even simpler but if you dont want to go back to block busters dont just get more simple
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/707/1001845cw8.jpg

[Linkzone1]

by God resize that&#33;

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by whahappen?+Jan 18 2007, 05:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? &#064; Jan 18 2007, 05:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Jan 18 2007, 04:40 PM
stroke go back to simples
alera dont make the e so huge on the side
should i submit this...?
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5798/picture042zm3.jpg
for battle
spy really nice but the top of the s is too small
tern really cool
kees reminds me of poed really cool though
mith looks awesome [/b][/quote]
bottom of the page
ghost simples
delt that throwie is nice except the lines seem shaky
knews take out the addons near the s and itll be good
soze i like your charcters alot
edit
resize your picture but in the more options reply its normal size...i dont know why but take off the things on the top right of the n

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by Deso7@Jan 18 2007, 08:00 PM
if i were you id get even simpler but if you dont want to go back to block busters dont just get more simple
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/707/1001845cw8.jpg
3d it playa

[turnturnturn]

ASBONE i dont go on twelve ounce at all but i don&#39;t doubt youve seen such a basic style before

meh.....

[ZiareONE]

i don&#39;t know what colors i wanna use on dis yet but check it
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9830/img0008yi5.jpg

[entri]

MOPN- take away those lil bits.. and make it a bit simpler.. and closer together...
my 2 cents

just a oneliner ive been working on.. its a bit sketchy cuzz its only the first one...but ye tell me what ya think ?
CRITS&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;..............CRITS&#33;&#33; :P :P
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture125.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p236/ENTR_BOMER/Picture1255.jpg

[ASB_ONE]

ouch..........wat that say bro? simplify maaaaaan - zaireone

[Deso7]

haha oh yeah i forgot to change that its an a not a p lol

[ZiareONE]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 18 2007, 08:30 PM
ouch..........wat that say bro? simplify maaaaaan - zaireone
it says my name ZIARE

[whoarethereal evil]

ZIARE

is how u shud draw it aswell

[capo93]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Jan 18 2007, 06:29 PM
Goddammit... I don&#39;t want to crit because I&#39;m a lazy bastard.

Nemz, it looks good but some of the addons kill the letters, like the one in the M on the bottom sketch.

Entri, work on your handie, it sucks hella bad. Your sketches aren&#39;t too great either. Do normal letters instead of trying abstract ones.

Kees, try and incorporate some straight lines into it. As it is, it looks shaky and unstable. Looks sick though.

I don&#39;t know if I missed anyone but I don&#39;t really care... Kill me

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8998/img0581mv2.jpg
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8244/img0582dl6.jpg

"Spectr" sketch (I suck at T&#39;s, and I&#39;m still working on a throw for you man) and some more fucking around
buncing do you wanna do an exchange i write capo..

and uhhhhh i dont think i ever got my piece from our exchange?? im not sure if you posted it and i just missed it

entry- i love that e and but work on the rest

ziare one- :blink:

moran- i love that style develop it man&#33;

[Chop Logic]

Almost all of youguys from the last few pages need to try out some simples. As for throws, just try and let it flow keep your hand looser, itll help more trust me. Try some rounded letters.

Did these for a single letter battle, which one do you guys think is better? Im going to get another pic of the blue on, the blue is darker in real life.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M2.jpg

Thanks.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Jan 18 2007, 07:37 PM
ghost no offence but u do need 2 go back 2 block letters

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00497.jpg

throwie wht dya think?
likin this . .

ziare - colors? you wanna talk about colors?? (in the coach mora "playoffs" voice . .probaly funnier if you were trippin)

[ASB_ONE]

yo chop shits fresh man i like the second one way better just cos of the bridge of the m although u shud chop the legs like in the top one. would look good wid some rele light and dark blues aswell

[Deso7]

wait did i miss something who is moran me?

[Chop Logic]

Originally posted by Chop Logic@Jan 18 2007, 08:48 PM
Almost all of youguys from the last few pages need to try out some simples. As for throws, just try and let it flow keep your hand looser, itll help more trust me. Try some rounded letters.

Did these for a single letter battle, which one do you guys think is better? Im going to get another pic of the blue on, the blue is darker in real life.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M2.jpg

Thanks.
Bump. Thanks ASB yeah most people said they like the purple one better.

This has been said a billion times, but seriously guys, you just need to do simple letters.

COPY THE LETTERS OFF YOUR KEYBOARD. do it as many times as you can, until you think you cant do it anymore, then do it four more times. Anyone you&#39;ve seen whose good at graff or can do a wildstyle knows how important simple letters are and has definatly practiced them. Also, dont underestimate the importanct of learning how to tag. Thats where this all came from, and you should definatly practice that too.

[Mekr4]

CRITS

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g19/cons483/giraffe.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g19/cons483/bluee.jpg

CRITS

[asmatic91]

yo chop tht shyts dope

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 18 2007, 12:07 PM
word to sane heed that advice&#33;&#33;&#33;
cezr that stuff is real nice same as nemz aint seen a style like that before u goin to colour that?

finnished the first page of ma new black book:

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0239_000.jpg
can i get i qik bump on this before i hit the hay.

[Mekr4]

^^heeella sick. love it. how did you draw the trains so straight? if you didnt use a ruler that is lol...

crits on mine??

[Fixion]

Nice stuff caser.

[whahappen?]

im pretty sure mekr4s making fun of me and various others for bumping with no crits......cause hes really good

[cerex89]

this is my little carac i made in 5-8 min. tell me whats wrong
with it i know i messed up on the letters specialy the X
im also going to make some stikeeeesss with him on
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0282.jpg :ph34r:

[Mekr4]

Originally posted by cerex89@Jan 18 2007, 10:42 PM
this is my little carac i made in 5-8 min. tell me whats wrong
with it i know i messed up on the letters specialy the X
im also going to make some stikeeeesss with him on
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0282.jpg :ph34r:
tongues way too big... and isnt that the alien hominid guy from that game on newgrounds? dont copy other people shit. thats wack as fuck and it will get you no respect

[throb]

the mouth is real akward

[Mekr4]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 18 2007, 10:41 PM
im pretty sure mekr4s making fun of me and various others for bumping with no crits......cause hes really good
lol really? u think im good???&#33;&#33; im so warm inside right now haha..

honestly though im not makin fun of you.. sorry if i bumped way too much im just really impatient and cranked up on adderal right now.

i havent really seen any of your stuff, ill look back and crit some of it

[cerex89]

i just drew it because it looks sick and i might make stickees with him im not shure
yet

[Mekr4]

Originally posted by cerex89@Jan 18 2007, 10:49 PM
i just drew it because it looks sick and i might make stickees with him im not shure
yet
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/59593

similar, no?

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[cerex89]

thanks man and the spikes r his mouth

[Fube]

Originally posted by Mekr4+Jan 18 2007, 10:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mekr4 &#064; Jan 18 2007, 10:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-cerex89@Jan 18 2007, 10:49 PM
i just drew it because it looks sick and i might make stickees with him im not shure
yet
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/59593

similar, no?[/b][/quote]
very similar. i was thinkin the same shit. but who am i to call a bite. look for yourself. play the game on that link, shame shame on u cerex. u didnt even try to change it up at all.

[Mekr4]

Originally posted by fredom&#045;writer+Jan 18 2007, 10:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fredom-writer @ Jan 18 2007, 10:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Mekr4@Jan 18 2007, 10:46 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-cerex89@Jan 18 2007, 10:42 PM
this is my little carac i made in 5-8 min. tell me whats wrong
with it i know i messed up on the letters specialy the X
im also going to make some stikeeeesss with him on
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0282.jpg :ph34r:

tha toungs not even in the mouth.
the eye that is further away shoud be smalller not bigger
his antlers look like hes tring to rock a comb over.
is that a goatee on the bottom of his mouth?
just some imediate things you can change.. besides that work on detail homie.

I finished 3 more thorow, ended up using the oval pee hole.. i dont no if it ready yet.. i think i improved it tho just this week...

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7379/img2140pd3.jpg [/b][/quote]
i really like the S and P. in my opinion, you need to work on the Y more. Y&#39;s are really hard though, at least for me.

[flclnaruto1213]

I think his Y is his best letter. It looks type nice in the top right throw.

[cerex89]

i know im A TOY but ever1 convinsed me to do my own shit so ill try harder to make up 4 what i just did

[Mekr4]

Originally posted by cerex89@Jan 18 2007, 11:13 PM
i know im A TOY but ever1 convinsed me to do my own shit so ill try harder to make up 4 what i just did
bueno.

[TricksForKids]

that charcter needs some serious work, and ive nevrer been a fan of bitten work, even if it is on purpose for stickers

that throwup flows well as a whole, but each individual letter inst that fantastic, i cant decide whether or not i like it

Hey bawk you SUCK&#33;

fuck pen explosions and a popped out rib.

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/8519/yousuckae5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Albert Fish]

i love that. so grimey, b is fire thats possibly one of my favorite sketches from you

[Sumoe]

spy-likin the throwie

bawk-love the "B" only letter that I&#39;m not really feelin is the "K"

[nemzone]

so bawk you down for our exchange yet?? :P

spy iv seen a lot worse, go try paint it discreetly.

bawk, grime = mint. i love this piece 2.

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Mekr4]

now that i critted a few people, will you guys gimme some crits? my pics are on the page before this one. dont just tell me it sucks or its good, tell me how i can improve

[throb]

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/7085/skribej1.jpg
crits please
yo mekr personally i think you should go back to the drawing board with the character
my opion take it or leave it

[T45K]

Something simple... Any critism helps...
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture087.jpg

[ShIfTeD]

i cant tell if your trying to do 3D or a shadow but either way you have to look at it realisticaly...its not right

dont do the little twirls until you got regular circles down

your r has too amny bumps on its front part

work on cleanness


here goes my throw entry for the eyes battle
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/833/dscn0507tf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it took me sketches apon sketches apon sketches to get a perfect y that i liked


give me some critz please&#33; id apreciate real crits...not oh your letter structure sucks...go simple shit

[Untracked21]

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8063/boyswemustod0.jpg









can someone help me out with making this a little better?

[ShIfTeD]

can anyone learn to give crits before they post asking for crits? :rolleyes:

[Mekr4]

Originally posted by throb@Jan 19 2007, 12:05 AM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/7085/skribej1.jpg
crits please
yo mekr personally i think you should go back to the drawing board with the character
my opion take it or leave it
thanks, but what do you think about my letters?

[Mekr4]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Jan 19 2007, 12:11 AM
i cant tell if your trying to do 3D or a shadow but either way you have to look at it realisticaly...its not right

dont do the little twirls until you got regular circles down

your r has too amny bumps on its front part

work on cleanness


here goes my throw entry for the eyes battle
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/833/dscn0507tf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it took me sketches apon sketches apon sketches to get a perfect y that i liked


give me some critz please&#33; id apreciate real crits...not oh your letter structure sucks...go simple shit
i really like that its hella dope.. the e&#39;s look a little wierd though, maybe try making them all one piece?

[ShIfTeD]

what do you mean all one piece?

[throb]

shifted id seperate the "S" so you can see the space between the curves if you get what im sayin

[Untracked21]

hey shifted im new to this so idk i was just asking for help i can give crits too :lol:

[Mekr4]

i dunno it looks like the "head" of the E is cut off from the "leg" like theyre 2 seperate pieces

[throb]

and mekr all i gotta say is the same old shit keep the width of the components of your letters more consistent

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by Mekr4@Jan 19 2007, 12:31 AM
i dunno it looks like the "head" of the E is cut off from the "leg" like theyre 2 seperate pieces
ooh i got ya...its not...it comes super close..i was gettin precise with the ball point, my camera didnt pick it up tho

thanks for the crits everyone

[Fube]

shifted, dont really like the little "bumps" on the y. personal preph. but u know how it gos.

Untracked21, handy is coming along pretty well, nice simple and sweet. try to adapt the same kinda "style" in your letters for pieceing.

T45K, feeling it besides the k. angles look off or something i guess.

some stuff from my book that i like. crits would help but if u bastards dont want to then o well.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Seoner.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/tower.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/s.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Throws/Eyes.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Throws/alera.jpg

[Untracked21]

nice blackbook fube i really like the hollow and second one

[ShIfTeD]

that eyes throw is straight as hell....before yo pm that to koper, clean it up a little bit

thats hella nice tho

[Truth.]

shifted the S is all think and bulky, but the other letters are skinny and curvy. the S is hot, but doesnt fit in.

[Untracked21]

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8063/boyswemustod0.jpg









first scketch crits?

[Fube]

also wanted to bump this. its sick.



http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/8519/yousuckae5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
:ph34r:

[nemzone]

Originally posted by Fube@Jan 19 2007, 05:42 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/Throws/Eyes.jpg

:o :wub:


PAINT NOW&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; and i seem to remember u outlinin with a tiny thin cap, get a pink dot for outlines, and make this bitch big&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Fube]

lol, thanks for the crits everyone.

Nemz thats for the up coming throw battle. really fucked the handy but no one really counts that shit anyway. i would love to paint it if it was my name.

[Albert Fish]

fube your throws are always on point.

[eso239]

heres something i did real quik shitty cam o well thought ill post it any crits???
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture007.jpg
eso|one

[Truth.]

u can paint for throwie battles i think, xtra props

[ras]

ESO...>> READ THE RED IN MY SIG...YOU SHOULD ALSO DO YOUR NEXT PEICE LIKE THIS << ..


EYES....that tthorw is gooood

Bawk....gritty itty shizle..

Untracker...>> READ THE RED IN MY SIG...YOU SHOULD ALSO DO YOUR NEXT PEICE LIKE THIS << ..

[eso239]

untracked21 its tight for ur first sketch just work on keepin the n&#39;s the same size i myself aint really feeling the e either maybe mor like the n&#39;s clean lines u kno

also the eyes throw is ill as fuck Fube

[sane013]

Originally posted by ras+Jan 18 2007, 05:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ras @ Jan 18 2007, 05:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ras@Jan 18 2007, 08:34 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ras@Jan 18 2007, 08:02 PM
Bastardo..nice nice.. ;)

Near...great colouring comination.. :D

diceided to lose the extensions on the legs of the M n H..becuase they only look decent on trains..and did the modifications whut Sane told me..Much props Sane &#33;&#33;Â* :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzz.jpg

Crits and comments

ThanksÂ* :) ..

oh..excuse the sloppiness and shit 3d...my main concentration is my letters..thnen ill move onto 3d..

ima make a card board train lol..kinda like the ones from All City Style.. ;)Â* :lol:
Yeah Emo..thats what i was thinking..
nice shite as uasual....i think you should muck about with add ons and shit

and Bump for bottom of the page... :( ;)
bump...for crits... :( <_< ;)

SANE...what you mean by the arrows.. ?? :unsure: .. to add on to the legs..they look kindaaa wierd..too [/b][/quote]
I dont say you should use that arrows. Maybe you can put some little of the arrow style in your style.
But actually i just had to go so i wanna give you something little so you can think a bit on what you should change. Next time i&#39;ll help you more.
I also tried to put some extensions on your letters but it won&#39;t work. I have to think a little bit more.

[DemiGod]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Jan 18 2007, 07:37 PM
ghost no offence but u do need 2 go back 2 block letters

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00497.jpg

throwie wht dya think?
not to be a dick but ur no better than ghost and i cant even read that trowie.....thank you come again&#33;

[Stim]

Originally posted by eso239@Jan 19 2007, 02:14 AM
heres something i did real quik shitty cam o well thought ill post it any crits???
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture007.jpg
eso|one
Make the thicknesses of your lines consistent, if they get wider they have to get consistently wider until they end, the exception to this rule is adding flare around heavy corners. Just be tasteful and you will go far.

[SeKz]

Originally posted by sane013+Jan 19 2007, 06:16 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sane013 @ Jan 19 2007, 06:16 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ras@Jan 18 2007, 05:14 PM

Originally posted by ras@Jan 18 2007, 08:34 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ras@Jan 18 2007, 08:02 PM
Bastardo..nice nice.. ;)

Near...great colouring comination.. :D

diceided to lose the extensions on the legs of the M n H..becuase they only look decent on trains..and did the modifications whut Sane told me..Much props Sane &#33;&#33;Â* :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzz.jpg

Crits and comments

ThanksÂ* :) ..

oh..excuse the sloppiness and shit 3d...my main concentration is my letters..thnen ill move onto 3d..

ima make a card board train lol..kinda like the ones from All City Style.. ;)Â* :lol:
Yeah Emo..thats what i was thinking..
nice shite as uasual....i think you should muck about with add ons and shit

and Bump for bottom of the page... :( ;)
bump...for crits... :( <_< ;)

SANE...what you mean by the arrows.. ?? :unsure: .. to add on to the legs..they look kindaaa wierd..too
I dont say you should use that arrows. Maybe you can put some little of the arrow style in your style.
But actually i just had to go so i wanna give you something little so you can think a bit on what you should change. Next time i&#39;ll help you more.
I also tried to put some extensions on your letters but it won&#39;t work. I have to think a little bit more. [/b][/quote]
Dude its nice dont listen to these guys, dont do add ons yet man. Bring the T out its overlapped by the letters on either side. You&#39;ve got the structure down pretty much, just keep it simple and experiment, I wouldnt mind seeing a bit of angle in those letters too, try to perfect it before moving into anything fancy bro, probly what a lot of kids make the mistake of doing, but your on the right track. Keep sketching&#33; peace

[SeKz]

Originally posted by Stim+Jan 19 2007, 08:24 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Stim @ Jan 19 2007, 08:24 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-eso239@Jan 19 2007, 02:14 AM
heres something i did real quik shitty cam o well thought ill post it any crits???
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f105/shaggydopeg/Picture007.jpg
eso|one
Make the thicknesses of your lines consistent, if they get wider they have to get consistently wider until they end, the exception to this rule is adding flare around heavy corners. Just be tasteful and you will go far. [/b][/quote]
Back to simples. Lose the arrows forget the colour till and stuff till you get ur letters down. Your 3D is really all over the place remember when doing 3d to make sure its where it should be and on the right angle, but i dont think ur quite up to that yet. Good luck bro

[KoreTwo]

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/kreo.jpg

Been inactive for some while. Beginning to forge my own style methinks.

Took 30 - 40 secs to draw. Timing myself to do fast throws.

Wondering if this would be a possible style to expand on in pieces?

Crits and Comments?

ESO: It&#39;s not the shitty cam, it never is. Back to basics. Looks like a bunch of squiggly lines.

BAWK: BONNNERRRR&#33;

[DemiGod]

id post my pics but im at work...lol...sneaking on this site every 5 minutes :blink: :ph34r:

[ASB_ONE]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Jan 18 2007, 07:37 PM
ghost no offence but u do need 2 go back 2 block letters

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00497.jpg

throwie wht dya think?
yo ur kru asb too??

[KoreTwo]

Originally posted by DemiGod@Jan 19 2007, 08:52 AM
id post my pics but im at work...lol...sneaking on this site every 5 minutes :blink: :ph34r:
I&#39;m deciding between laughing at you, or loling at you.

HAHHAAHHAHAH&#33;LOLOLOLOLOL&#33;

Guess what?

I did both.

[ras]

Thanks for the help SEKZ..and Sane..much props.. :D ... &#33;

[ras]

WHOAREHTEEVIL...that throw is hooottttt

kore...go simple...you need to define the letters waaaay more..

so..i was bored and shit..so i decided to look through my old peices...back then i didnt have letter stucture or fuck all down...compared to my recent stuff..it sucked..and i could see that i had improved in most departments..so i ecided to test my letter structure with some crazy peices..i did about 3 and this was my fav...i think its a good style too..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzzz.jpg

Crits

Thanks &#33; :)#

Oh and dont worry...if it isnt good enough..ill go back to my other stuff.. :P ;)

[SeKz]

I havent really posted much of my stuff lately, but heres the best of my latest book.

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/3606/p000tt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5539/p001dr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3991/p006bk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/9726/p009oj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1677/p002nh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/5170/p015kp1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/16/p016es3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/8618/p018mz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/9231/p029ij4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/8779/p028wv7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/682/p030ar3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Good Crits would be MUCHLY appreciated&#33;

[nemzone]

naw man its pretty poor.

u are going to commit suicide when ur orange and green run oout

KORE TWO - fuck man clean it up A LOT

[SeKz]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 19 2007, 11:39 AM
WHOAREHTEEVIL...that throw is hooottttt

kore...go simple...you need to define the letters waaaay more..

so..i was bored and shit..so i decided to look through my old peices...back then i didnt have letter stucture or fuck all down...compared to my recent stuff..it sucked..and i could see that i had improved in most departments..so i ecided to test my letter structure with some crazy peices..i did about 3 and this was my fav...i think its a good style too..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzzz.jpg

Crits

Thanks &#33; :)#

Oh and dont worry...if it isnt good enough..ill go back to my other stuff.. :P ;)
Yo i like this. But the T is still hidden, im not feelin it as much as the simpler one though, keep on at it though, and maybe change the shape of those arrows, they are too thick. Lookin good ;)

[alive]

SEKZ- y the fuck should anyone say a goddamn word about you, when u cant be bothered to help out someone else? give crits b4 asking for them.

MITH- im just constantly confused about how u manage to keep yelling at ppl like kore to go simple, and then absolutely refuse to take your own advice. . . . (hint hint)


fuck fuck fuck writers block.


shit school skribbles.



i oughta kill myself cuz this T. christ it even looks worse bigger up here.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03027.jpg


gonna color this in, i think itl look aiight
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03029.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03030.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03031.jpg


kind of for bouncingsoul/knews. lol. shit but u know. . . . ran outta space to. and the E is just miserable. i think its kind of cool for such a skribbly kind of thing.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03032.jpg


finally, my fucking beautiful handwriting in latin class. haha.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03028.jpg


i suppose id like some crits too. haha do we even really need to say that? everyone wants crits. everyone wants attention. haha. tots.



peace.

[Hilo]

i like alot but , stop overlapping like keep it more cleannnnnna (alive).


RASIAIAIA man i love that it just seems the t is hiding it needs to come out so it isnt shy.

[ras]

Alive..i have been taking " my own advice " and yours too for the past month.. <_< ..like i say...it was just a test to see about my letter strcuture...your sutff is grimey asusaul..nice.. ;) alive...and SEKS hellped my out alot on the last page

And NEMZ...was that directed at meh..? :( :) ;) :blink:

[alive]

sry. . . but to me, that doesnt count. besides. why not? its nice to give crits. when did i say nething abt wut u said? in my book, its courtisy (fuck sp) to give crits to others on the same page ur asking for them.

honestly though, its real nice. i think ur smoother shit is the best, the raggedy edges lose the flow. now go and give meeee crits. lol.


PEACE.



PS. EDIT. ok ras fair enough, i havent been around, i dont feel right hanging around without anything of my own to contribute. i looked back and u have, and its been real nice, the shit on the last page looks great. ur getting it down.

[ras]

Wo...Alive..thanks..its great to get crits like that off the more advanced writers..well..for some dumb reason..i think you know loadsa shit becuz you live in NY.. :lol: <_< ..

and i just got ROCKY BALBOA...oh yes..get in &#33;&#33;.. &#33;&#33; :D :D :D

[SeKz]

Originally posted by alive@Jan 19 2007, 12:07 PM
sry. . . but to me, that doesnt count. besides. why not? its nice to give crits. when did i say nething abt wut u said? in my book, its courtisy (fuck sp) to give crits to others on the same page ur asking for them.

honestly though, its real nice. i think ur smoother shit is the best, the raggedy edges lose the flow. now go and give meeee crits. lol.


PEACE.



PS. EDIT. ok ras fair enough, i havent been around, i dont feel right hanging around without anything of my own to contribute. i looked back and u have, and its been real nice, the shit on the last page looks great. ur getting it down.
dude i cant even bleive what ur talkin i did give ras crits on THIS PAGE and its the start of the fucking page anyway. fuck crits anyway man when u think about it graffiti isnt for anyone else or for props its for ya fuckin self, theres no such thing as graff by the book, and if there was so cunt would have written the book and all the shit in the world would be the same, graffiti to most people is like freedom, but now u cunts are givin it rules, and that shit is straight up wack. [/rant]


anyway ill help u out if i can ok

buy a pencil and a rubber, it helps u get clean stuff without sketchy pen lines, u cant really see whats goin on when its like a sketchy draft lookin thing and that I is used way to much, break free from the common shit and try to invent your own shit, thats what ive tried to do, but u cant really expect anyone to dig ur style cuz its not like theirs. Personally i think ur shit is generic and bland, theres no real attempt at originality.

peace

[SeKz]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 19 2007, 12:06 PM
And NEMZ...was that directed at meh..? :( :) ;) :blink:
pretty sure it was for me. dunno why though, i always give him good feedback. and the fact that i used green and red cuz they were the only pscas i had in the last 2 days.

[SeKz]

its 3:30am here so i might have to finish mine in the morning

[nemzone]

aiight pm me it wen uv finished.

[Hilo]

this page sucks. new name new style. The Leg of the R is a big to high but ill get it down there the next one Crits. Ras i like ur shit dont go simpler just bring the T out and yer good.

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3541/picture204ff1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Moter. with out teh E

[Copieright]

Hilo change the leg of the R so it is attached to the rest of the letter&#33; that would clean it up a lot

[Hilo]

thanks. i was thinking that but for a first, i guess i did ok

[ras]

How said i needed to so simple lol...the shit iv been doing is simple.. :blink: ;) ..any way..i think that you sould practtice those letters in a simple block form...so you can get your letter stuctures down..then go back to that style...becuase its a SICK form of european style...listen to me or dont lol...but thats what i think you sould do..you have potetial in that style..just get the lettters down :)

and after that fuck off crit..i may aswell bump my shit..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzzz.jpg

Crits ? ;)

oh and this is just a peice to test my letter structure.. ;)

[Sumoe]

no offense but i really don&#39;t like it, seems like u got too many pointless lines that ruin it, arrows aren&#39;t workin for me either jus my two cents.

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by Mekr4+Jan 18 2007, 10:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mekr4 @ Jan 18 2007, 10:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-cerex89@Jan 18 2007, 10:49 PM
i just drew it because it looks sick and i might make stickees with him im not shure
yet
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/59593

similar, no? [/b][/quote]
wait all the stuff you posted is seriously you.....
i remember you being alot better

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40807.jpg

should be doin this tomoro

and yea i just realised i forgto a bit o 3d on the right of the h

Nice mith just a few bits jutting out here and ther kinda spoils it on the T and between the M and the I

[whahappen?]

hey people...shut the fuck up
trash i dont like how the s is skinny at the top and really thick extension coming off it
mith i hate arrows but thats just me so id say take out the arrows like on the m and the little things at the top of the m and other leters wher eits like an extension coming out and a smaler one ontop just looks weird to me and dont make the i so bunched up i thick you just take out a majority of the extensions not all but some of them dont add the the piece IMO and i cant stop looking at your sig its soo sweeet....
hilo its really cool but im not seeing the t...and i could see how th r is an r but its stretch define it more

[aces]

Trash - Don&#39;t like how the T is connected to the R, quick fix tho if you want to, but other than that it&#39;s fire...

Ras - I don&#39;t like it. I think you should more ease yourself into add ons rather than throwing em everywhere...

Hilo - Sick shit as usual...

Just some advice - When I have writers block I just do single letters and work on new styles. If that doesn&#39;t work for anyone else then oh well, I tried.

Had finals, took adderol, finished early, sketched. Here&#39;s the result:

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/A.jpg
A
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/134067235_436622657_0.jpg
C
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/E.jpg
E
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/S.jpg
S

On the E and the S I was just fucking around with the cracks.
So what do ya think?

[Hilo]

thats nice man. really nice and clean. i like.

[revolt92]

Hahahaha i clicked on the link in your sig hahaha thats awsome :lol: but yeah im definatley liking those letters.

[aces]

It is clean all thanks to adderol...Anybody else take this stuff that don&#39;t have ADD or ADHD to help them sketch???

[Hilo]

i ave an idea aces ahahah put all those letters together to form something. ahha a peice.

[aces]

Ya but when I get writers block I just sketch single letters and then put them together when the writers block goes away. And that wasn&#39;t supposed to spell out ACES when I started. I did the S, then the C, then the A, then the E...haha I didn&#39;t notice till I put the letters underneath the sketches when I posted them here and then I just switched em around so they spelt ACES

[entri]

Originally posted by Mekr4+Jan 19 2007, 12:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mekr4 @ Jan 19 2007, 12:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Jan 19 2007, 12:11 AM
i cant tell if your trying to do 3D or a shadow but either way you have to look at it realisticaly...its not right

dont do the little twirls until you got regular circles down

your r has too amny bumps on its front part

work on cleanness


here goes my throw entry for the eyes battle
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/833/dscn0507tf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it took me sketches apon sketches apon sketches to get a perfect y that i liked


give me some critz please&#33; id apreciate real crits...not oh your letter structure sucks...go simple shit
i really like that its hella dope.. the e&#39;s look a little wierd though, maybe try making them all one piece? [/b][/quote]
and yo.. jst so u know u prolly wont be able to post that in the battle becausee first of all.. theres no EYES handie...and second its a throw battle.. and only allowed TWO colours..just my 2 cents :D

[TricksForKids]

ive scoured through the last pages and cant seem to keep my eyes off the stupid beef, nemz and sekz..you guys both give advice all the time..i dont understand the beef? remember to get koper to poll your battle, and keep the beef out of this thread from now on, have a good night everybody, go get shitfaced

Peace

[whahappen?]

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/4396/picture044vv7.jpg
yes...a one liner
well two really..
shifted your s is too big and the e are too small and the y is weird..idk why

[KoreTwo]

Originally posted by KoreTwo@Jan 19 2007, 08:47 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/kreo.jpg

Been inactive for some while. Beginning to forge my own style methinks.

Took 30 - 40 secs to draw. Timing myself to do fast throws.

Wondering if this would be a possible style to expand on in pieces?

Crits and Comments?

ESO: It&#39;s not the shitty cam, it never is. Back to basics. Looks like a bunch of squiggly lines.

BAWK: BONNNERRRR&#33;
Bumpitty.

Trash - That looks awesome, only problem i have with that is the top part of the S. Looks kinda awkward. But color that in man.

Aces - I&#39;m really liking the second one, first one&#39;s alright, but i cant tell what the last two are.

Nemz - What d&#39;you mean by &#39;clean it up&#39;?

[whahappen?]

i like yours alot idk why..^
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8084/picture043aj4.jpg
should this be in toy tagz..

[KoreTwo]

Whahappen: Firstly, think abt getting a new marker. Looks like its dying fast. Not really diggin ur throws, specially the one line one :( . One thing i do like a lot is the tag that says &#39;testify&#39;. Think you did a good job on that.

[aces]

Originally posted by aces@Jan 19 2007, 04:49 PM
Trash - Don&#39;t like how the T is connected to the R, quick fix tho if you want to, but other than that it&#39;s fire...

Ras - I don&#39;t like it. I think you should more ease yourself into add ons rather than throwing em everywhere...

Hilo - Sick shit as usual...

Just some advice - When I have writers block I just do single letters and work on new styles. If that doesn&#39;t work for anyone else then oh well, I tried.

Had finals, took adderol, finished early, sketched. Here&#39;s the result:

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/A.jpg
A
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/134067235_436622657_0.jpg
C
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/E.jpg
E
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/S.jpg
S

On the E and the S I was just fucking around with the cracks.
So what do ya think?
Sorry to bump but it got moved to the page before cause posts were deleted

Scec - the one liner=awful...and the handy isn&#39;t great but put it in toy tags...

Kore - take your time and do a clean one up for us...

[Hilo]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jun 15 2005, 08:27 AM
http://img215.echo.cx/img215/4159/kioskredyellow2uh.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
Bump&#33;

[aces]

HAHAHA...Hey, I remember that...YAY TRICKS&#33;&#33;&#33; That&#39;s sooooo old.

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by KoreTwo@Jan 19 2007, 04:44 PM
Whahappen: Firstly, think abt getting a new marker. Looks like its dying fast. Not really diggin ur throws, specially the one line one :( . One thing i do like a lot is the tag that says &#39;testify&#39;. Think you did a good job on that.
yea the one liner was a joke i hate them...
nice tricks bump

[ASB_ONE]

trash thats lookn good mate
aces them single look ayt personally i think all this writers block thing is a bit bullshit jus seems a bit like &#39;hey my paint dripped cos it was cold&#39; or &#39;i didnt have the right caps&#39; but wateva stay up.

i tried some more wilder shit after seeing &#39;the future of graffiti&#39; - dope dvd, shame i ran out of ideas by the time i got to the R.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0244_000.jpg

[near]

aces those r dope make em a piece and trash that looks sick too your t is fixed up nice...
and whoa caser that dvd helped all those lil addons look sick

blegh...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010677.jpg

[ras]

I watched Furture Of Graff...i didnt think it was that good..

Cases..the top of you C looks like the top of the G off there lol...the only letters im liking is the C n A...the R could do with a tad bit of work...other than that...its fire...asusual

Near...crazy man...shits clean...speacily them clouds..


erm...another old skool peice from Ras..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzzzz.jpg

i was quite happy with this..

Crits

Thanks &#33;&#33; :D

and WAPPEN...yeah ... my sig is Beautiful..:wub: :lol: what the hell .. the eyes on that wub smilie look like there looking down at the sig.. :blink: :huh: :o :D

[ASB_ONE]

yeh man i based the whole piece on that little bit from the g i aint going to use that i just wanted to try out the techniques he was chattn bout in the dvd.

colours look ayt on ur new shit jus still aint feelin the letters much, wats this about a cardboard train??

[sane013]

Originally posted by ras@Jan 19 2007, 04:58 PM
I watched Furture Of Graff...i didnt think it was that good..

Cases..the top of you C looks like the top of the G off there lol...the only letters im liking is the C n A...the R could do with a tad bit of work...other than that...its fire...asusual

Near...crazy man...shits clean...speacily them clouds..


erm...another old skool peice from Ras..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/zzzzzzz.jpg

i was quite happy with this..

Crits

Thanks &#33;&#33; :D

and WAPPEN...yeah ... my sig is Beautiful..:wub: :lol: what the hell .. the eyes on that wub smilie look like there looking down at the sig.. :blink: :huh: :o :D
Looks nice.
But something isnt right in it.
You remember the edding i draw for you? i was making the M and the T a little bit longer. Your bottem of the T on the left site is goingt to the right whit a curve (you know what i mean? ) you shouldn&#39;t do that. also for the right bottem of the M Dont curve it to the left

[Feliks]

Cezr and I doing an exchange. Simple piece.
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2915/img0924sy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ras]

Yeah..iv made the CardBoard train...it was easy seeing as im a A - B student in Graphic Products....i dunno how to use my digi...ill try and learn or summet..and get a pic up

Sane...thats how i like it tho...becuase it looks more old skool...but ill still carry on with what you say.. :)

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 19 2007, 04:51 PM
trash thats lookn good mate
aces them single look ayt personally i think all this writers block thing is a bit bullshit jus seems a bit like &#39;hey my paint dripped cos it was cold&#39; or &#39;i didnt have the right caps&#39; but wateva stay up.

i tried some more wilder shit after seeing &#39;the future of graffiti&#39; - dope dvd, shame i ran out of ideas by the time i got to the R.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0244_000.jpg
:lol:
it&#39;s cute.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1523.jpg

[aces]

The E and the S aren&#39;t that bad but the Z seems really weird

[slinks]

cezr that looks sick i love it

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti009-1.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti010-1.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti012-1.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti013-1.jpg

anything?

[ras]

slinks...plase...do stuff like this .. S L I N K S ... simples..simples......simpleess..and I dont like the lil emo blood eye thing .. yuk <_<

[bouncingsoul]

Here we go&#33; With the criticism

Feliks, that R looks half-assed... I got to give props for actually coloring though haha

Caser, I love you man. I remember I hated your style before but now that you&#39;ve solidified it and started experimenting with addons, I like it a lot more... I think we&#39;re at the same stage. Want to exchange?

Slinks, try and add some bends in your letters man, they look so shitty.

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0583.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0584.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0585.jpg

[Linkzone1]

That new wilder style Cases is SICK&#33;

[nemzone]

bouncing i like it, but i cant really give things to work on cuz its a style which is pretty unique and ur own thing... i can say however that my fave is.. the top flick

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/4295/imag0001km8.jpg

wish i never went over the lines in a marker :cry: too wobbly tonight.

[sky 5]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8839/1212185lc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

obe . . .the E isnt as fluid as the other letters, O is less true to letter structure than B and E . .

those look like simples to me . . . just poorly done . . . keep sketchin all the time and when you see something you really like done by someelse, spend time to look at it and figure why you like it, what makes it work . . should probaly hold off on trying monster letters with capes for alil while thoo. .

caser&#39;s skills have been rising . . . nice to see

nemz the M is fly but to my eye the shell of your letters are boxy, it looks (i know you dont do it) like you put 4 squares next to each other then fill in each box with a letter, bending the letter within the confines of that box . . .

[ASB_ONE]

sweet bounce have i finally earnt ur respect?? u kno i dig ur style man and im totally down for an exchange, i got alot of work on atm but im definatly down.

i shud prolly point out tho that the wilder style sketch is heavily influenced by that future of graffiti dvd and not wat ill be workin on in future, i was trying out the techniques he used in the dvd jus happened to be on same page.

sky that is the shit man thats exactly wat i like the thin lines wid the thick black outline i love that shit.

[Sumoe]

Caser-like the bottom one alot.

Boucin-likin the throwie, not feelin&#39; the E or the S in the second sketch, really likin&#39; the third one too.

nemz- don&#39;t really like it some of the lines look a little shaky, jus not as cleans as u usually are, not sure i like the style either, i like ur older stuff a little better.

sky-love ur stuff, dope, can&#39;t see any problems wit it.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2595/dsc0160nm2.jpg

"Smokin&#39; Trees" any crits?

[levans]

hahah i love it sky i dont know why you posted it here though this thread is fo toys but i dont care its always good to see something sweet...:D

and sumoe it looks pretty sweet lovin the tree charac the m just seems a little weird with the flow of it compared to the other letters

[sky 5]

sume - you have real nice clean colorful stuff and your letters are good but i think you have enough control and style to start bending and shaping your letters more becuase right now they seem kinda plain with just end caps . .

[Sumoe]

thnx, sometimes i try to bend the letters but i always find a way to mess um up, oo well jus gotta keep sketchin.

[nemzone]

sky would that nessecarily be a bad thing?? tho i wasnt trying for that effect.
love urs sky, as usual, ur 1 of my fav writers on bs.
sume, i love that too, i demand u finish that whole page with colours n shit. DO IT

[beastie_1989]

its been a logn time since my last post
this is some new stuff i did tell me what u think

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/1057/dsc00228yh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/470/dsc00230er7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8471/dsc00233ot2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i reely like the throw-up and the first

[Sumoe]

like the throwie proportions are a lil off on the first one and don&#39;t really like the last. the first has potential jus make the letters the same size and fix up the A.

[Fosale!]

^only feeling the throwie.

just mad quick shit.
except for the Yeah&#33; Get Crunk piece for my friend amanda. did that after my calculus midterm today. grr
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/g.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/f.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/e.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/d.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/b.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/c.jpg
fucked up on shadow, as usual.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/a.jpg

[etch a sketch]

fosale&#33; - i&#39;m havin trouble tryin to find out if that&#39;s a k or not in your get crunk piece..

beastie - the m seems too big and out of place on your last amen piece and as for the first the n looks like a r so i thought oh he writes amer.. and then i saw ur other pieces

[Fosale!]

it is.
its mad squished.

[Fosale!]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/crunks.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

did a throw real quick...i hate doing it with marker and paper...always gets fucked up
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/throwsketched.jpg

[etch a sketch]

hehe it looks like that you were experementing or sumthin. well i like it. :) but why are your e&#39;s different? the on is pesk and one look differet to me

ahh well heres a little something to contribute to the forum i guess?
haven&#39;t done this in a while cuz o school and stuff so go easy pls :)

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/459/file0003op7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 19 2007, 08:56 PM
did a throw real quick...i hate doing it with marker and paper...always gets fucked up
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/throwsketched.jpg
ill famlaayyyyy.
nice handstyle.
throwie would look better but it was rough liek ya said.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 19 2007, 08:56 PM
did a throw real quick...i hate doing it with marker and paper...always gets fucked up
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/throwsketched.jpg
bump again.
thats mad hot.
you got that dirty dirty.
dope.
and that sec throwie, hot.

ebk&#33;

[nemzone]

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/6475/imag0001hi2.jpg

bottom one is goin up in bout ah hour

pesk, i like it&#33;

[Sumoe]

don&#39;t wait PAINT NOW&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; lol looks good.

[Stonk]

yeah nemz im feelin all those throws, the NE not as much but its still really nice,

and pesk the only thing i dont really like is the k but it still looks really good

im not writing poed anymore due to getting caught the other night <_< but a new name was needed anyway, there was too much shitty stuff up anyway. but ive learned my lesson about waiting until stuff is actually decent to get up.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new042.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new040.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new041.jpg

[Tahworsetoy]

I like the first one shading is really good..pm me some tips for shading if you could thanks...anyways I liked the 2nd one too but the colors were kinda weird but they are eye catching lol... 3rd looks good... SPARK NOTES: I like your clean simple yet still very good style...

[etch a sketch]

Try to shorten the bar on the j so it doesnt cover up some of the e and it&#39;ll look like it will match with the rest of the letters&#33; nice simples :)

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

nemz nice throw.
fucking around with random letters.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1524.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1525.jpg

[ghozt]

^^ not feeling the s or the t but the e is fly homey.

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/1816/scan0009rd8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

first skecth in a while :ph34r:

[Stonk]

im loving that. just not so much the s maybe make it more rounded and not as much like a 2. also the handy isn&#39;t that great

[freakshow]

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1953/im008758op7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
^for knews. i might do a better one later
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/138/im008759do0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/6503/im008760lb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ghozt, i like everything about it except how the h overlaps the a and the k overlaps the s i think it would look alot better if they werent smushed together like that

[etch a sketch]

what lil emo chick and why would you want to know? emos are gay.

freakshow - nice karaks. and as for the knews throwie i aint really feelin the k. nice job on the karaks tho

edwardsezerhands - nice i like the e but aint really feelin the s or t. so my comment is the same as ghozt

ghozt - i like it but the s looks too much like a 2 fix it up and it&#39;ll be fine

[etch a sketch]

don&#39;t worry im chilled :)

can i bump this since it was overlooked or no one didnt care :( i commented and criticized peoples posts already&#33;&#33; :)

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1039/file00036bm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ghozt]

i dont know what the fuck tht says sorry homey

[etch a sketch]

Oh well i thought itd be obvious lol. It says note i have too many things going in and out of my letters.

[Hilo]

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/163/picture2063wj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i painted this just now. i like did a HOILAO AND STUFF I ran out of paint in the very begiging and yeah doods i dint do 3D or anything eyahhh doods not go jerk of to lingy lohan yeahh pIECEE BUIGGAS

[etch a sketch]

i like ur m but thats bout it.. ur t kinda looks like a penis at least i think thats a t.. i think it says matr? motr? mote? mate?

[Fosale!]

motr.

freakshowwww
:wub: x a ton.

nohomo

[Fosale!]

i fucked up the date on these.
im such an idiot.
i def bombed my calc midterm now.
fuck.
ugg.
w.e
sketches.
sorry for the fucked up shadow.
i suck at life.
hatehatehate.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/dd.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ee.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/cc.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/aa.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/bb.jpg

[Samp1e]

what the balls... right now i&#39;m real frustrated cause for maybe the past week, every time that i try to start a piece or something, i just can&#39;t get done with a certain letter or i can&#39;t get it to flow, something just isn&#39;t there.

what should i do? just try to keep making something or take a break?

[Gist]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch1-1.jpg

Etch a Sketch- lose all the things goin in and out its just hiding the letters and try to prevent using rulers wenever possible because wen it comes time to paint ur gona be screwed unless u bring a giant ruler :D

Critz plzz

[ShIfTeD]

work on an even forcefield

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/8752/dscn05194ha.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

me fuckin around


crits?

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by Gist@Jan 20 2007, 02:09 AM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch1-1.jpg

Etch a Sketch- lose all the things goin in and out its just hiding the letters and try to prevent using rulers wenever possible because wen it comes time to paint ur gona be screwed unless u bring a giant ruler :D

Critz plzz
your sig made me die a little

[C3ZR ONE]

Sezer- That colored SET is nice. Not really feelin the E. Really nice handy rock tho. simple with flow.

Ghozt- Strong stylish structure on that simple. Good work for sure. Work that handy out tho.

Freakshow- That middle karak is fantastic...

Etch- very impressive 3-d. Got any othe sketches? I gotta admit, I&#39;m a little suspicious of it. No beef. Take it as a compliment&#33; I just don&#39;t remember any of your other flicks right now, and that&#39;s REALLY good. :o

Fosale- The top flick has alot of charachter.

Gist- Very good start. Work that G out tho. It looks too banged up.

Shifted- I can&#39;t read it but I like the shape. You have a very origional style. Something I personally think would help your sketches is if the outline was just a bit thicker.

[ShIfTeD]

thanks man...i got the flow...i just need to work on my spacing and tweak everything

this is the first sketch ive done in months.....im doing throws for a while

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Feliks@Jan 19 2007, 05:03 PM
Cezr and I doing an exchange. Simple piece.
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/2915/img0924sy6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3209/im0005137zb.jpg

Thanks&#33; I like it. Here&#39;s one back at ya&#33; ;) ...Sory the E is wack. I fucked with that E for like half an hour and gave up...


New Sevo sticker for her pack. (the other two I already posted...)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7598/im0005148bi.jpg

[freakshow]

cezr, i dont really know what to tell you about those other then they are dope
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3484/im0087620us.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for shifted. ill do a better one tomorow when i have more time to fuck with the h and x
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1220/im0087640wp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
rough sketch for eyes battle

[whahappen?]

that is sooooo good submit that
you owned me haha

[ShIfTeD]

i had a hard time with my y&#39;s
idk

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4343/dscn05218ek.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for freakshow

[Gist]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch2.jpg
Nice stuff . A good throw has a repition or n flow rember that lol if it helps at all

[C3ZR ONE]

Gist- The G on that one is SO much better. Good work. I like what you&#39;re saying with the cartoon thing, but it&#39;s poorly executed. Kinda takes away from the lettering. You need some real help with your handyrock tho homeboy... That shit is awful. Not tryin to be mean. The G&#39;s all busted up with some wierd squiggle thing, the T is in a gangsta pitchfork (ughh....) and the spade is huge and unneseccary. Go simple for now like you did with the I and the S.. work your alphabet over..
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/8571/im000261xq0.jpg
I know this isn&#39;t toy tags thread, but this tag REALLY needed help... sorry guys.

The "piece" was real nice tho. ;)

[freakshow]

nice work shifted.
and gist a good way to improve is make all the letters the same size. but you are on the right track.. ithink

[Gist]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch3.jpg

alright ill try doin uppercase i&#39;z and ill sketch out some new tags thanks for the critz heres some quick throwies im thinkin of the bottem one&#39;s g is to small but u get the idea of how itll look

[Gist]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch4.jpg

new tag critz plzz the charecter was a 5 second thing so i know its shitty but o well its 4 fun

[ras]

Gist...just follow cezrs advice bcuz he knows more thn me...i will just say...try not to bend your S as much...and dint have things scatterd all over the page...and also....i aint likeing the tag.. :(

[Stonk]

Originally posted by Stonk@Jan 19 2007, 09:56 PM
yeah nemz im feelin all those throws, the NE not as much but its still really nice,

and pesk the only thing i dont really like is the k but it still looks really good

im not writing poed anymore due to getting caught the other night <_< but a new name was needed anyway, there was too much shitty stuff up anyway. but ive learned my lesson about waiting until stuff is actually decent to get up.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new042.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new040.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new041.jpg
sorry.. bump

and gist im not liking those throws that much hmm maybe dont make them so point or something

[Mse]

Originally posted by Gist@Jan 20 2007, 04:20 AM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch4.jpg

new tag critz plzz the charecter was a 5 second thing so i know its shitty but o well its 4 fun
oh god hahahahahhahahhaaa
you my friend are funny
ahahhahhahahahahhaahahaha
"picter"? "canvis"? "vandelism"?
yo apart from that, you got a loooooooooooooong way to go before you can even start thinking about tryin to make graffiti "art"
mad props, ahahahah

[uhhh]

how old are you?
because mispelling things like that isnt funny or anything,
it doesnt make fun of how people talk,
it just shows that you don&#39;t know how to spell,
and your handwriting is horrid.
besides alll that, just keep sketching nobody here can help you right now, you just have to sketch on your own and in a few months you&#39;ll be at a place where we&#39;ll be able to give you actual crits.

annnnd.
new piece.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-054S-2.jpg

[Albert Fish]

gist, the s is the only thing i&#39;d salvage, and make your letters the same size.

felix, the drop shadows off but your letters are nice and simple keep it up

stonk, i like your stuff, if you needed a new name i wouldnt use jerms cus jerm and germ is a really common played out name, i&#39;d try to find something that would stand out a little.

cezr, i like your old style better than the new but the new is still clean, just not my cup of tea haha.

freakshow, so hot. cleann

fosale, the s looks like a c in that two letter throw, unless it is a c. then its nice hah.

my cam is at my friends house so now flickies till like tomorrowish.