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Mse
01-21-2007, 06:22 PM
mr lefty, you do tattoos?


enser, enzeru, ensr, enzah, enzar, mse, socrates, bohemianbastard, clear fruit nectar
allright peoples
ill do
a nemz
a mesa
a caer
and a melo

but i just wasted 4 pages of my blackbook on n's
so ill post the sketches here and ill pm you all the sketches tomorrow, i might collapse

and to all the kids who might try acid, do it when you're happy
i actually lied in ga, im barely sitting down. but i cant lie down because the world starts to spin
and before that i was walking around for 5 hours
sooo be careful

and if anyone wants to know why im not happy

you said you're better off alone then in hands of bad company, it was written in stone but eroded right in front of me, yo for her id move mountains all that moved was grains of sand, from one side of the hourglass to outside our plans
:(

sorry for taking up space/bandwidth

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 06:23 PM
ouch

Chop Logic
01-21-2007, 06:39 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Jan 21 2007, 07:22 PM
mr lefty, you do tattoos?


enser, enzeru, ensr, enzah, enzar, mse, socrates, bohemianbastard, clear fruit nectar
allright peoples
ill do
a nemz
a mesa
a caer
and a melo

but i just wasted 4 pages of my blackbook on n's
so ill post the sketches here and ill pm you all the sketches tomorrow, i might collapse

and to all the kids who might try acid, do it when you're happy
i actually lied in ga, im barely sitting down. but i cant lie down because the world starts to spin
and before that i was walking around for 5 hours
sooo be careful

and if anyone wants to know why im not happy

you said you're better off alone then in hands of bad company, it was written in stone but eroded right in front of me, yo for her id move mountains all that moved was grains of sand, from one side of the hourglass to outside our plans
:(

sorry for taking up space/bandwidth
What song is that?

alive
01-21-2007, 06:48 PM
im guessing he wrote it.

thanks man, ill throw one up for u. wont be as good as u of course, but i try.


ive been wanting to try acid, but then the other day, i smoked a shitload of weed. and kind of freaked out. i mean temporarily, but for a few minutes, i was in the worst place i could imagine. kind of scares me. i mean, acid could make that a million times worse.

nemzone
01-21-2007, 06:52 PM
think thats bad, well u can cotrol acid more than the magic mushrroms. i had a mushie brew, and tripped for about 14 hours. was good for like 3 hours, then i watched romper stomper. freked me out. i thought i was dying, and my mum thought i actually literally went insane. she phoned the hosp and i had to get takedn in. turns out there was weedkiller in the grass we picked em out of, and i was the only fuckin one allergic to it. they pumped me full of valum tho so when i came round it felt like sum1 saved my life. was questioning the meaning of life n shit too. scared me. so hallucinogens are off my nice drugs list.

poinless post but lefty, im quite liking that shit

Mse
01-21-2007, 06:53 PM
its paralogic - better off alone
and just be happy wwhen you do any drug, till be good

C3ZR ONE
01-21-2007, 06:53 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Jan 21 2007, 07:22 PM
mr lefty, you do tattoos?


enser, enzeru, ensr, enzah, enzar, mse, socrates, bohemianbastard, clear fruit nectar
allright peoples
ill do
a nemz
a mesa
a caer
and a melo

but i just wasted 4 pages of my blackbook on n's
so ill post the sketches here and ill pm you all the sketches tomorrow, i might collapse

and to all the kids who might try acid, do it when you're happy
i actually lied in ga, im barely sitting down. but i cant lie down because the world starts to spin
and before that i was walking around for 5 hours
sooo be careful

and if anyone wants to know why im not happy

you said you're better off alone then in hands of bad company, it was written in stone but eroded right in front of me, yo for her id move mountains all that moved was grains of sand, from one side of the hourglass to outside our plans
:(

sorry for taking up space/bandwidth
Keep occupied. Don't just sit idle or you'll go too far into your head and you might not like it. I suggest watching cartoons, and if they start talking to you, just go with it. You're in for a long trip most likely. I find that time as we know it holds absolutely NO bearing on an acid trip. Watch the clock. A minute can seem like a couple days.

I don't do drugs anymore, but I had plenty of bad trips in my day...

I tried your name teice and they both sucked which baffles me cause the letters are great....
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9324/im0005193mg.jpg

Mr. Lefty
01-21-2007, 06:55 PM
I love the fill on the bottom one

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 06:55 PM
alive if you have a history of mental illnesses in your familey like depression or scizophrenia dont do it because it provokes that gene/passed down illness to happen to your faster

thats what happened to sid barret

alive
01-21-2007, 07:00 PM
word. i dont, but i have a serious serious family history of addiction. was just a scary fucking moment. at the bottom of this dark pit and suddenly i realize i cant get out. not actually. symbolically.


cezr, i love them.

Mse
01-21-2007, 07:01 PM
cezr, you didnt need to go to that much trouble :(
now i have to do a full color one aswell, you bastard

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 07:17 PM
Originally posted by alive@Jan 21 2007, 08:00 PM
word. i dont, but i have a serious serious family history of addiction. was just a scary fucking moment. at the bottom of this dark pit and suddenly i realize i cant get out. not actually. symbolically.


cezr, i love them.
yea i have depression schizophrenia and multiple personalities in my family history so i'm not trying it anytime soon
cezr the s in the first sketch looks weird how it juts out

LOER1
01-21-2007, 07:19 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q217/smokey107/IMG00134.jpgi know bubbles are gay but w/e heres a simple i did .... critz??

C3ZR ONE
01-21-2007, 07:20 PM
One time I ate a quarter ounce of cabenzies right before a keger at my girlfriends apt. in college. I only ment to eat a couple to get a buzz on before the party and sell the rest, but I underestimated the strength and tripped balls. For the first hour or so, I lost all sight and halucinated about cheeze and pulsing vines and wierd writhing shit. Kinda loke the end of that flick Akira. Then I though I was dead and in purgatory, so I could do anything I wanted...
I got my ass kicked at the party and rightfully so..
Why am I talking about this.. Wrong thread. My bad. I'll delete it in a few. I took the time to right it tho so you're shit outta luck right now. :lol:

cerex89
01-21-2007, 07:35 PM
tell me what u think


http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0284.jpg

sky 5
01-21-2007, 07:37 PM
lefty - i thought you were going to add some more light/a lighter color to the black 3d areas, especially in the big curl under the S to help highlight/reinforce the curved spiral/curl movement . . to me it looks lke theres alot of dead black just sitting there not necessarily doing anything to attract teh eye or complimet teh flow of your letters . . . with your tattoo shading abilities and your choice of simple letters i really thought the 3d was going to better if not the focal point of your sketch, like nemz 3d a page or 2 back . . its a good sketch

shithead onerzzzz
01-21-2007, 07:46 PM
yo im beggining to start messing with extensions but i dont really no where to start. sky5 i heard you were good with this shit can you help? peace

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture056.jpg

ASB_ONE
01-21-2007, 07:47 PM
yo its melbs scum of 12oz dope come join the dark side.

whahappen?
01-21-2007, 07:50 PM
oh snap melbs scum!
take the extension of the left side of the r

alive
01-21-2007, 07:52 PM
godDAMNIT. i cannot make an accnt on 12oz for my fucking life. mustv tried a hundred times. they never email me with a activation. or once they did. but it still didnt work. fucking hell. maybe an AOL thing? ill try something else.

C-SONE
01-21-2007, 07:53 PM
hmm havnt posted here in wuite a while anyhoo

[SIZE=14]THESE FIRST 2 ARE BITES[/SIZE=14]
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/slomobite.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/tuesbite.jpg
FROM HERE ON IN THEY ARE ORIGINAL
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/christmassketch.jpg
NEW STYLE IM TRYIN
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/newstyle1.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/newstyle2.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/newstyle3.jpg

entri
01-21-2007, 08:00 PM
MSE....yo do me some piece..ur shit is pretty dope..
i write

ENTR

cuzz i see u doin all deez utha ppl shit..lol

bonafied
01-21-2007, 08:04 PM
i got bored in class one day
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/9489/pic01180711nc.jpg

MAiNKo
01-21-2007, 08:22 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Jan 21 2007, 07:05 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6783/picture2642kz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Jerk? Same 'jerk' from maryland?

kicklip9634
01-21-2007, 08:34 PM
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/1005/pesa5gn.jpg
experimenting with a new name crits...
Bastardo:i love that throw and the teeth^_^
bonafied:cant relly understand what it says space the letters out a lil more
C-sone: if the first 2 are bites why did u post em <_<
ries:i like how the e connects to the s but i would keep messin with youre letter structure before you do add ons
cerex:i dont get the plane

C-SONE
01-21-2007, 08:42 PM
i posted em just because they were on my photobucket

kicklip9634
01-21-2007, 08:44 PM
i jus wouldnt post bitten work youll jus get laugh at other wise make youre lines cleaner dont make extensions or arrow yet

C-SONE
01-21-2007, 08:47 PM
idk what is wrong with my extensions and shit?

kicklip9634
01-21-2007, 08:48 PM
no beef or anything but there wack

C-SONE
01-21-2007, 08:51 PM
in waht way?

kicklip9634
01-21-2007, 08:52 PM
r u joking look at it

Linkzone1
01-21-2007, 08:56 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Jan 21 2007, 10:49 AM
already critted that train ish, so...

workin with some arrows...
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/1486/dsc00077wv.jpg
crits?
Get some 3d and you&#39;re good to go.

''HAZE'' *88*
01-21-2007, 09:02 PM
i would say that looks pretty good, and yea 3d would complete it
...............

uhhh
01-21-2007, 09:02 PM
another practice sketch for cezr, before i put it on a sticker.
cezr-im gonna pretty much do this, without the extremly wack extesion on the r, unless youd like me to try and figure something out with my wilder style..?
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-026S.jpg

Sumoe
01-21-2007, 09:11 PM
love that "Z" :rolleyes:

meetermaid
01-21-2007, 09:18 PM
melo i fucking love your simple handstyle. on the piece, the z looks too much like a 2, and the r is at like a completely different angle than the rest of the letters which is confusing, and the extension off the r is ridiculous. other than that i really like it.

uhhh
01-21-2007, 09:18 PM
haha.
thanks man.
its nice drawing simples,
i can just freestyle somethig and its just..
easy, i dont have to worry baout where i can fit an extensions or bend this, it just comes out, and just works.

thanks meet, i wasnt sure about it, but im glad other people like it too.

T_R_O_N
01-21-2007, 09:19 PM
no beef, but that shit is ugly bro. Sume good stuff man, get that 3d.
new sketch sorry about the pic quality.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c92/skizzipizzulpuff/Picture045.jpg

nemzone
01-21-2007, 09:25 PM
the N is hatin, hell theres nothing great bout that, but ive seen worse. keep at it.

not feelin the R up on the CEZR, rest is hot, cept the black bit of hte E. also what do the handys say??

T_R_O_N
01-21-2007, 09:29 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 21 2007, 10:25 PM
the N is hatin, hell theres nothing great bout that, but ive seen worse. keep at it.

not feelin the R up on the CEZR, rest is hot, cept the black bit of hte E. also what do the handys say??
owch..burn? :lol:

fredom-writer
01-21-2007, 09:33 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

meetermaid
01-21-2007, 09:36 PM
damn dog&#33; with all those those shiny crosshairs, drips, and arrows, you must have some styyyyyyyyyyyle under your belt. ;)

uhhh
01-21-2007, 09:40 PM
oh man&#33;

and look at his sig.
hes ALWAYS right.
that means your the sickest graffitier dude ever.

ACTUALLY,
spy, thats bad, you dont needto be worrying about ANYTHING but your letters, which.. yuck. draw it like this S P Y, and with blocks, using blocks to form each part of your letter, pm me if you dont understand.

tron, you need to learn to draw with blcoks, it helps a whole lot. and that n is liek, beyond wack, worse then the other letters.

T_R_O_N
01-21-2007, 09:40 PM
wow spy, thats very colorful, try working on the simples some more.

tasty
01-21-2007, 09:41 PM
that spy is so slick..cept im not digin those drips lol
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/S4020015-1.jpg
ideas for a new throwy, crits?

uhhh
01-21-2007, 09:43 PM
one liner throws are ONLY for when you have regular throws down, like really realyl down, or else its not gonna work.
you obviously dont have it down, but keep working at it..

Mr. Lefty
01-21-2007, 09:47 PM
^^werd

Fosale!
01-21-2007, 09:52 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Jan 21 2007, 10:40 PM
oh man&#33;

and look at his sig.
hes ALWAYS right.
that means your the sickest graffitier dude ever.

ACTUALLY,
spy, thats bad, you dont needto be worrying about ANYTHING but your letters, which.. yuck. draw it like this S P Y, and with blocks, using blocks to form each part of your letter, pm me if you dont understand.

tron, you need to learn to draw with blcoks, it helps a whole lot. and that n is liek, beyond wack, worse then the other letters.
yo uhhh

meeter&#39;s a girl.

so she&#39;s ALWAYS right.


and she usually is.
its kinda annoying.

uhhh
01-21-2007, 09:53 PM
fuck.
i knew that one too.
know i feel bad.
im sorry meeter,
now i know you have no penis.

oh and.
buuump
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-026S.jpg
i know the r&#39;s wack and all.

meetermaid
01-21-2007, 09:56 PM
yeye no worries hon, everyone&#39;s entitled to one (1) mistake..

and you know i hate to perpetuate stereotypes but... i AM pretty much always right. :P

but yeah, uhh, i was being sarcastic about spy.

sarcasm&#39;s my friend.

uhhh
01-21-2007, 10:05 PM
i can tell.
the only time you know someones serious about work like that being good,
is when they type..
LIKE THUISS SO THEY CAN BE SOOPER RAD A PWN N00BS&#33;
hey now&#33;
we have a mutual friend.
sarcam&#39;s actually more of a fuck buddy then just a friend to me though.
we connect..
on a special level.
you wouldnt get it.

meetermaid
01-21-2007, 10:10 PM
ah..

excuse me? i wouldn&#39;t GET it? you&#39;ve never felt connected in your life you sad little whore. only REAL women like me can feel connected, like I&#39;VE been connected.

remember sweetie, it takes a duo to tango, but i&#39;m woman enough for two.


1 4M T3H |&#092;/|3373R & 4LL Y0UR B453 4R3 B3L0NG T0 U5&#33;

T_R_O_N
01-21-2007, 10:17 PM
^^^^ 1337 is so 1999

meetermaid
01-21-2007, 10:22 PM
not when you&#39;re the meeter.

1337&#39;s ALWAYS in, when you&#39;re the meeter.

think about it.

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/831/picture2199qg.jpg

^an old wrinkly sketch for lack of pictures posted on this page

nemzone
01-21-2007, 10:35 PM
like the lip concept for the M, should give em 2 lil wrinkles or creases on the bottom lip for the legs, if ya get me

C-SONE
01-21-2007, 10:36 PM
Originally posted by C&#045;SONE@Jan 21 2007, 08:53 PM
hmm havnt posted here in wuite a while anyhoo

[SIZE=14]THESE FIRST 2 ARE BITES[/SIZE=14]
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/slomobite.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/tuesbite.jpg
FROM HERE ON IN THEY ARE ORIGINAL
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/christmassketch.jpg
NEW STYLE IM TRYIN
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/newstyle1.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/newstyle2.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/newstyle3.jpg
BUUUUMP

meetermaid
01-21-2007, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 21 2007, 08:35 PM
like the lip concept for the M, should give em 2 lil wrinkles or creases on the bottom lip for the legs, if ya get me
that&#39;s a fucking ace idea, thank you beddy much.

sone, i like the first sketch (except for the o, make it wider, it&#39;s too skinny), and the 3rd is ok, the rest are too complicated and ugly. go back to simple-ish letters, you&#39;ve sort of got a style down but you&#39;re getting too far ahead of yourself.

Sumoe
01-21-2007, 10:43 PM
it&#39;s funny how you say you like the first one considering he said it&#39;s a bite lol.

meetermaid
01-21-2007, 10:44 PM
oh i didn&#39;t even see that, well it looks nice anyway hahah

nemzone
01-21-2007, 10:46 PM
or even some lip rigs, shit just experiment

Bombers Ambition
01-21-2007, 10:46 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sketchs/Sketchs030.jpg

C3ZR ONE
01-21-2007, 11:04 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Jan 21 2007, 10:53 PM
fuck.
i knew that one too.
know i feel bad.
im sorry meeter,
now i know you have no penis.

oh and.
buuump
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-026S.jpg
i know the r&#39;s wack and all.
Lookin fresh kid. ;)

I&#39;ll make you search for yours..... :D
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5703/im0005261yo.jpg


Nemz- I like that 2 letter. I&#39;m a huge sucker for faces on throwies... Gets me everytime.

Sore- It would make a pretty descent roller, but other than that, not much to it. I like the E alot. I&#39;d do a little fill... Like since it looks digital, add some space invader fill to it. You feel me? that would make it an off the hook roller&#33;

TryingTooHard
01-21-2007, 11:06 PM
SONE - Simples my man... simples

NEMZ - Never been a fan of those...

BOMBERS - not critin cause I dont see any crits from you

C3ZR - nice dude... I love the first 2

more simple shit...
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/krum001.jpg

fuck the colts

Stonk
01-21-2007, 11:20 PM
CEZR im loving all of those, very very sick. what markers do you use for your stickers?

Tryingtoohard - i think if you didn&#39;t make your letters as wavy they would look better.. also maybe scoot them closer. also are you from asheville NC if you dont mind me asking

Bombers Ambition
01-21-2007, 11:21 PM
Cezr - feelin your slaps i espically like the top left 2 alot i like that style and dope fills on pretty much all of them

levans
01-21-2007, 11:35 PM
hahaha i love your stuff cezr any1 wanna do an exchange pm me if you do

DocterX
01-21-2007, 11:48 PM
c3zer- your shit is DOPE. Loving all those stickers. Very interested i what markers you used cause those are FRESH.

Trying tooHard- Its a good simple. Somethings alittle off on it but i cant really tell what it is exactly.

sky 5
01-22-2007, 12:02 AM
Originally posted by shithead onerzzzz@Jan 21 2007, 08:46 PM
yo im beggining to start messing with extensions but i dont really no where to start. sky5 i heard you were good with this shit can you help? peace

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture056.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/876/12222017ca.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thats pretty good man i like it . . . got some real good ideas going on, real consistent and repitive style which is great (needed to move on), almost an exact copy of my letters before i got into extensions and whatnot . . . u could def use some time fine tuning the way in which you bend your letters but i would recommend from looking at one sketch of yours is to try and add clean crisp tabs at teh end of your letters for now instead of full extensions/addons .

i realy realy like how the middle parts of your R, E and S where each letter comes together is on the same level with each other . . . consistent angle/length/shape of your bars thruout . . lil bulgy/disproportional here and there . . i really realy like the straight horizontal bottom connection of the R to the I then the straight horizontal connection at the top of teh E to the S (good repition of a move = style/flow, invert the move but keep it same shape = super style/flow) . . biggest drawback is the end of your bars/addons are sloppy and clumpy

i did a quick sketch following your letter structure (i fucked up), i would def keep how the middle parts of your R, E and S are identical and on the same level (i didnt really do that in my sketch or pull off the nice connection from the top of the E to S . . didnt feel like erasing) but just get cleaner where your addons start . . my advice is to just shoot tabs where you want to put an addon for now (a tab is on the top left of 2 and bottom left of 4) . . .when you get good flow and sense of these tabs then you can extend the tabs into longer more complex addons like you have now at the bottom of your R and S or like 1 and 3 below . . . if you use a skinny extension like in 3, make the tabs (that dont end up being extended into full addons) skinny too, i probaly should have brought the extension where it goes back to thick in closer to the left side of the R so it slips under or over alil (too much open space as is . .or you could bring and extension from the top left of teh R and bend it down to take up that space) . .

arent long ass posts annoying as fuck . . . :P

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/6470/12121997dw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

repostin this cuz my ries sketch came out so bad and it has different types of skinny to big addons (arrrgrgh . . . my E and S are so much fucking bigger . . letter proportion is a whore

Mr. Lefty
01-22-2007, 12:36 AM
Originally posted by meetermaid@Jan 21 2007, 11:10 PM
ah..

excuse me? i wouldn&#39;t GET it? you&#39;ve never felt connected in your life you sad little whore. only REAL women like me can feel connected, like I&#39;VE been connected.

remember sweetie, it takes a duo to tango, but i&#39;m woman enough for two.


1 4M T3H |&#092;/|3373R & 4LL Y0UR B453 4R3 B3L0NG T0 U5&#33;
actually it takes 3 to tango.. :P

Apoc Dozer
01-22-2007, 12:49 AM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/1433/formthrow0sh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

you think this a usable throw up? for a toy

Don&#39;t mind the sloppy outside the lines shit

Mr. Lefty
01-22-2007, 12:50 AM
....no?

Stim
01-22-2007, 12:51 AM
It&#39;s not bad, try a diffrent color combination though. clean up those lines too.

http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/5746/pic7861hn.jpg

EDIT: Done in pencil, nothing serious... just fucking around with lettering. Orange and black marker accents, crits please.

shithead onerzzzz
01-22-2007, 02:42 AM
first of all word up to all the 12oz sluts. and thanks a whole lot sky5 i get what your talking about and ill be fucking with tabs soon. also if your talking about some bars in the S being dispreportional well that was coz i did it sort of quick coz i just wanted to focus on extensions. so yeh preportions are indeed annoying haha.

ill post something in a couple of hours thanks again peace.

inkbits
01-22-2007, 02:52 AM
Apoc Dozer bring your M in closer man, gap is all good but there&#39;s none prior to that which makes the letter too prominant. Other then that it aint too bad bro in the scheme of things. Maybe forget about drop shaddow/3d for now just concentrate on letter shape and keep playing around with it changing it up some till you get a feel.

Mr. Lefty
01-22-2007, 02:55 AM
lol.. "changing it up some til you get a feel" ^^^

Anyway.. I&#39;m leaving tomorrow morning to go to MPLS until Friday.. some tattoo convention... me and plumererer were supposed to have a battle.. i sent him my piece and he hasn&#39;t said shit yet.. if the poll goes through, yippee&#33;, if not.. it&#39;s postponed until I return.

d_g
01-22-2007, 03:50 AM
Sky5, Nice, I don&#39;t really know what to say about it because it&#39;s soooo far ahead of my level.

Kez, Try and make the letters a little more straight, like look at the left leg of the &#39;K&#39;, it&#39;s all zig-zagy going upwards, some movement is good but it will come with practice. The &#39;E&#39; overall is faaaar too skinny. The &#39;Z&#39; isn&#39;t too bad actually.

Anyways, first sketch in a while...

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch26.jpg

EDIT: Fuck does anyone else have this problem of doing a sketch and you&#39;re thinking to yourself &#39;This is pretty good for me&#39;, then you take a picture, upload it, and then post it and realise it&#39;s terrible...I&#39;m gonna leave mine up for crits anyways.

levans
01-22-2007, 04:20 AM
kaset work on your letter structure and try make each letter consistant in size length width etc

weldo
01-22-2007, 05:03 AM
kaset is all good just chuck some 3d on it and maybe try straigten your letters out but wat your doing looks good aye.
heres mine crits would be dope
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8163/imgp00054wx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

TricksForKids
01-22-2007, 06:48 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 21 2007, 04:03 PM
it was supposed to be. i wish i didnt throw out all the build up sketches i made for this... if u look on the inside of the right leg of my A that is part of the W that i coloured in green :angry: only just noticed
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/3868/imag00037oo.jpg

plus i was under pressure for this sketch. wanted to do somethin real good lol
fuckin hellll thats dope :o

my favourite sketch from you, every single letter is on point and just plain DOPE, ill have a proper nemz up for you in a bit, sorry if i didnt give advice to people above me, ill edit this post when im back from school

KoreTwo
01-22-2007, 07:18 AM
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/SkullStencils.jpg

First attempt at real stencilling. Any crits would be much appreciated. Done with markers... No spray paint around.

Weldo: Like the top one a lot more. Second one you could have prolly changed the color scheme a bit to make it look better. But i like taht style. Like a bunch of lil ETs or shit liek that.

Kaset: Letter structure needs work. A lot of work. And sizing as well, in ceratin places.

inkbits
01-22-2007, 07:32 AM
nice shit Weldo and Nemz.

dodgy throw on a beer bottle.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9488141.jpg

CoKKeYONe
01-22-2007, 08:14 AM
new sketch
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p241/CoKKeYONe/Sketches/ElDadingele.jpg

CoKKeYONe
01-22-2007, 08:15 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p241/CoKKeYONe/Sketches/CokiOne.jpg

1st page of my BB

MithOnerLfcGy
01-22-2007, 09:00 AM
like the top one...dope handy..what you use for those highlights.. ? ;)

CEZR....that bunch of sticks of fucking beautiful...soo colourful

CoKKeYONe
01-22-2007, 09:07 AM
i used white gel pen for that highlights ;) tnx for crit

MithOnerLfcGy
01-22-2007, 09:09 AM
lol...i carnt find one anywere...&#33;&#33; .. annoying :angry:

DocterX
01-22-2007, 10:27 AM
Originally posted by weldo@Jan 22 2007, 03:03 AM
kaset is all good just chuck some 3d on it and maybe try straigten your letters out but wat your doing looks good aye.
heres mine crits would be dope
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8163/imgp00054wx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Weldo- Those are DOPE. Soooooo Fucking Clean. So fucking Fresh. Lovin That Style Man.

KoreTwo- Dont Necessarly like the stencil it has potential and i know its pretty difficult to make a nice a working stencil but keep at it man youll get it. Try making less breaks in the stencil. it will end up looking alot cleaner in my opinion.

Inkbits- Good call on the beer bottle. Its a good throw. The extesions have purpose but they look alittle weird how they flow all together. Like the way the bottom of the Y goes all the way through the E. Dont like that part to much but its deffinatly better then anything ive done.

CoKKeYONe- The Second one is my favorite. That shit is DOPE. Youve got mad Style.

Keset-You deffinatly need to work on your structure. Everythings all over the place but it seems youve taken notice of this already. Im sure youve heard it before and will here it again. Stick with those simple letters just tweak it however you want. Just keep them all one size and nice and clean.

Those are my long ass list of critz hah. Ill have some shit up later.

aces
01-22-2007, 11:55 AM
Weldo - Pretty sick style you got goin on but I am not really feelin the M.

Cokkeyone - Likin the handy and the "black book" but the throwie not so much. It doesn&#39;t really have a style that goes throughout the whole thing and looks like a mix of styles. On the piece don&#39;t have the 3-D overlapping the letters because it just makes it look more toy then it needs to.

Inkbits - Lovin it except those two dots at the beginning which I&#39;m guessing are supposed to be an I??? If so that is the only letter that doesn&#39;t flow with the rest.

Kore - Your coloring makes it look like you are a 2 year old...It&#39;s alright but would definately look better with paint.

Nemz - I&#39;m lovin every bit of it...Especially that A.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/134745653_438979950_0.jpg
CAER pencil outline for an exchange with alive. Will ink it asap. Alive sorry about the lateness...Forgot that I had a midterm on Monday so I had to study.

Crits???

T45K
01-22-2007, 12:10 PM
critizm????
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture003.jpg

aces
01-22-2007, 12:25 PM
critizm????
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture003.jpg

Alright you&#39;re new here so maybe you didn&#39;t see the rule but...BEFORE ASKING FOR YOUR OWN CRITS...AND BUMPING YOU OWN SHIT...GIVE OUT CRITS TO THE OTHER PEOPLE ON THE PAGE FIRST &#33;&#33;&#33;
COPY AND PASTE TO YOUR SIG TO SPREAD THE WORD &#33;&#33;

It&#39;s in my sig...You gotta give crits to everyone on before you on the page before you get your crits...I&#39;m gonna crit you but then make a post and crit the people above you in your next post...After this warning you won&#39;t get crits if you don&#39;t give them though.

Well the T is really small compared to the A so keep your proportions straight...Also the A kinda looks like an R cause the right leg is soo much bigger than the left leg...other than that it&#39;s good...Nice drop shadow and the TA to the right is pretty good...Reminds me of JA a little...Add some shadow to the TA and get rid of the little water drop to the side cause from what I can see it is pretty bad (they are hard to get really nice and consistent)...other than that I think it&#39;s ready to paint...


http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/134745653_438979950_0.jpg
CAER pencil outline for an exchange with alive.

BUMP for crits???

T45K
01-22-2007, 12:38 PM
cool, thanks Aces...
I guess I&#39;ll start w/
Inkbits... madprops from me, I like that alot.. Everything about it nice.
CoKKeYONe, I like your color scheme alot and the bubbles are super fresh&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
On the throwup one that says Cokieone... I like but the bubbles on that one look repititious* I think you should lose some of them like towards the center... But its still nice looking.
Weldo... Its all dope I think....
Dg. I think it&#39;s overrall good, The seems outta shape or place... Maybe it&#39;s too unporportional... But overall good. I like the colors and all.
And Aces... What can say......It&#39;s dope.. and it&#39;s only pencil, Ink it and I&#39;m sure it will be fresh...
Everything looks good to me, everything I see...These are amazing artists... Sorry for no critisim...

Task......

cerex89
01-22-2007, 12:44 PM
tell me what u think


http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0284.jpg

MithOnerLfcGy
01-22-2007, 12:46 PM
^^ .. read the yellow in my sig..and thats not exactly graffiti..post it in a automotive forum..

aces..niiiccee

T45K
01-22-2007, 12:48 PM
Originally posted by cerex89@Jan 22 2007, 01:44 PM
tell me what u think


http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h48/vexinglight/DSCN0284.jpg
Yoo&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; That would be an ill stencil &#33;
I&#39;d like too see that....
It looks good though....

cerex89
01-22-2007, 12:50 PM
ok i didnt know that there were rules 2 post pics

STAR01
01-22-2007, 01:03 PM
Originally posted by T45K@Jan 22 2007, 08:10 PM
critizm????
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture003.jpg
like the idea and the concept but try to make the T kinda the same size as the A
but i like it&#33;

Stonk
01-22-2007, 01:10 PM
yeah that looks way more like an r than an a, but its a pretty good r. haha

i like the pink simple though.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new044.jpg first shot at a semi wildstyle

aces
01-22-2007, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by cerex89@Jan 22 2007, 02:50 PM
ok i didnt know that there were rules 2 post pics
It&#39;s just getting annoying having kids ask for crits and then never give crits...You want something from this forum you gotta put something into the forum type deal...Also it was getting annoying having one person bump then the next person bumps because their pic was left behind and then more and more people bump...Those were the people that never gave crits...As I said before, if you want crits just give some to the people above you and everyone will be happy to give you crits...

Stonk - That J isn&#39;t that bad...Lose the bits coming off it though and that arrow on the far left is really awkward looking and could be made better by not havin that little bump in the line...I&#39;d say go just a LITTLE bit simpler next time by losing the bits and try to make that arrow flow better if you know what I mean...

cerex89
01-22-2007, 01:15 PM
ok ill start doing that

trashhh
01-22-2007, 01:16 PM
Originally posted by STAR01+Jan 22 2007, 02:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (STAR01 @ Jan 22 2007, 02:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-T45K@Jan 22 2007, 08:10 PM
critizm????
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture003.jpg
like the idea and the concept but try to make the T kinda the same size as the A
but i like it&#33; [/b][/quote]
dont listen to star i love throwies that get bigger :D
nice.

whoarethereal evil
01-22-2007, 01:26 PM
[QUOTE=T45K,Jan 22 2007, 08:10 PM] critizm????
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture003.jpg




it looks like an f

aces
01-22-2007, 01:49 PM
It looks a little like an F but not enough so that you would be saying is that FA or TA...I think that the A looks too much like an R cause the right leg is way oversized...So it is more likely for someone to think is that TR or TA...

PeZuR
01-22-2007, 01:55 PM
YAH I AGREE WITH ^^^^^^

emokid
01-22-2007, 01:56 PM
task, dont like the throw, the pink letters are much nicer

stonk, nice J but i don&#39;t like either of the little arrows, especially the bottom one

and that inkbits throw on the beer bottle from way back is so nice

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/356/dscn62401vm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i managed not to post anything for like four days, thats self control...
sloppy colouring and overboard with the highlighter also <_<

TryingTooHard
01-22-2007, 02:13 PM
Whoever has the throw - Im not a fan of throws sorry

STONK - lose the extenstion? look much much better

EMO - I like the little flairs on top of the letters

Something on lunch break
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/krum002.jpg

Stonk
01-22-2007, 02:22 PM
hmm i like the k, but i think all the letters could use a little fattening.. also on the r on the top diagonal bar the top line bends one way and the bottom bends the other.. if you see what im saying

CoKKeYONe
01-22-2007, 02:29 PM
Originally posted by aces@Jan 22 2007, 12:55 PM
Cokkeyone - Likin the handy and the "black book" but the throwie not so much. It doesn&#39;t really have a style that goes throughout the whole thing and looks like a mix of styles. On the piece don&#39;t have the 3-D overlapping the letters because it just makes it look more toy then it needs to.
i&#39;m glad u like that DocterX

@ aces
i&#39;ll have that on my mind next time man. tnx

tasty
01-22-2007, 02:40 PM
krum its pretty cool id say conect the r nd the u more though,
heres what i drew up last night. crits?
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f216/djtp101/Photo18.jpg

aces
01-22-2007, 02:46 PM
Tasty - Simpler man...Straight blocks like this "ASER"

Krum - Bring the U closer so there isn&#39;t that huge gap in the middle and flatten the U more against the ground so it doesn&#39;t slant up...

Pear - Lovin it as always man...So simple with so much style...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c16/freeskierpj/CAER.jpg
CAER, Colored...The colors are a lot brighter in real life so it&#39;s like lime green and fluorescent pink. I&#39;m really liking this one...

Sumoe
01-22-2007, 03:37 PM
lol why did you need to bump it?

anyways-tasty-simples

krum-looks pretty good jus make the letters the same thickness and clean it up a little.

pear-dope simples

hmmm no one else to crit.



:lol: jus kiddin Caer-looks pretty good, not really my style but looks good, unique style, don&#39;t like the E tho.

Chop Logic
01-22-2007, 03:53 PM
ASER and ACES - Go way simpler. Honestly, jsut do what I do. When you sketch just have a pencil, a thin sharpe and a thick one and sketch with those. Dont bother with color. In the time it takes you to color something, you could have done another outline, which is really what you need to be working on.

Shitty letters wont be covered up by a great fill, and great letters will still look great in black and white.

For the OBEY battle:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/obey1.jpg

Crits/

uhhh
01-22-2007, 03:53 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jan 22 2007, 12:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jan 22 2007, 12:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Jan 21 2007, 10:53 PM
fuck.


oh and.
buuump
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-026S.jpg
i know the r&#39;s wack and all.
Lookin fresh kid. ;)

I&#39;ll make you search for yours..... :D
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5703/im0005261yo.jpg


Nemz- I like that 2 letter. I&#39;m a huge sucker for faces on throwies... Gets me everytime.

Sore- It would make a pretty descent roller, but other than that, not much to it. I like the E alot. I&#39;d do a little fill... Like since it looks digital, add some space invader fill to it. You feel me? that would make it an off the hook roller&#33; [/b][/quote]
thanks.
that o is really really tight.
i really want to do somethong more then simples for you, but idunno, its just not happening.
but ill hit you back when its sorted.

pear-very nice, i like the colors.

krum-not feeling it, keep at it.

aser-what aces said.

aces-nice, im not a big fan of your style but you have gotten a whoole bunch better.

ill edit in some stuff from today in a little.

TricksForKids
01-22-2007, 04:00 PM
i disagree with chop on aces piece, i think its pretty fresh, i hate the colours though, lol, but i have a scanner too, i know what its like, but hey, at least we have scanners, the only things i dont like, is the way the top of the A has two bars going in different directrions, and the random bar popping out of the top of the R

trying too hard, make all your letters nice and simple like that M, maybe thicken em up a bit as well, kinda skinny

tasty, look at aces work, see how each letter is nice and clean and straight? do it up like that, get some nice simples down with just pencil

chop the O needs work, the b would like better without the weird top right indent, the e needs serious work, esepcillay the bottom bar, and the Y&#39;s nice, the must is clean and simple too

oh, and if you&#39;re not going to give help advice dont give any at all..you know who you are..i deleted your post

uhhh
01-22-2007, 04:00 PM
obey sketch?
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-028S-1.jpg
melo sketch?
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-029S-1.jpg
crits are in above post.

i know, i know double post. scary isnt it kids?&#33;

Chop Logic
01-22-2007, 04:05 PM
Oh shit, thanks Tricks. My mind was somewhere else. ACES, I didnt mean to include you in that it was supposed to just go to Tasty, sorry. And thanks for the crits Tricks. B and E are two of my worst letters, and I was trying out a new kind of style I guess, because it was for a battle. No excuses though. Thanks for the crits.

..SmOeK 1..
01-22-2007, 04:09 PM
uhhh- i think the letters need some work, they all kinda just look a little off.

Chop- that looks pretty tight, the must above it looks real good.



I&#39;ll post this again cuz last time no one felt like critting it.

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/5860/frame000998ba.th.png (http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame000998ba.png)

KoreTwo
01-22-2007, 04:30 PM
Originally posted by aces@Jan 22 2007, 12:55 PM

Kore - Your coloring makes it look like you are a 2 year old...It&#39;s alright but would definately look better with paint.


Im turning 5 tomorrow&#33;

aces
01-22-2007, 04:44 PM
Uhhh...Lovin the B and the Y in the first one and the MELO is real nice too.

Kore - Hahaha...

Smoek - As it has been said before make your letters like this "ALKA"

Tricks - Thanks for the crits but what bar are you talking about? The left or the right? I need help with color schemes...Mine never look good. I guess it will come with time...

Chop - At first I was like "simples"??? I&#39;ve progressed from there and that is a new style so I&#39;m still working out the kinks in it...but then I read your other post so it&#39;s all good. On your OBEY piece the O looks a lot like a D, the B is just a little awkward on the top, the E isn&#39;t all that bad aside from the bottom, the Y is good aside from the extension off on the right.

Cezr - Lovin that style...the only one I don&#39;t like is the far top right...Nice colors though man...I&#39;d love to sticker trade with you when I get some time to mass produce some pieces...

nemzone
01-22-2007, 05:07 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Jan 22 2007, 12:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Jan 22 2007, 12:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Jan 21 2007, 04:03 PM
it was supposed to be. i wish i didnt throw out all the build up sketches i made for this... if u look on the inside of the right leg of my A that is part of the W that i coloured in green :angry: only just noticed
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/3868/imag00037oo.jpg

plus i was under pressure for this sketch. wanted to do somethin real good lol
fuckin hellll thats dope :o

my favourite sketch from you, every single letter is on point and just plain DOPE, ill have a proper nemz up for you in a bit, sorry if i didnt give advice to people above me, ill edit this post when im back from school [/b][/quote]
glad ya like it fella. whenever u post up my nemz, u shud prob pm me, cuz my comps is slow for sum reason, and makin it a stressful situation, to browse this place <_<

uhh i like the obey sketch, except the 2 things on the Y.3D IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

aces, u doin real good lately props

aces
01-22-2007, 05:13 PM
Ya that thing is freakin dope man props on that piece up there...

TricksForKids
01-22-2007, 05:18 PM
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6328/youneedhelp0qy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thats what i meant, i dont like how the top of the A looks like a teepee, maybe just make it flat, or have one bar be long and the other nice and short, and the random bar on the R is highlighted too

T45K
01-22-2007, 05:22 PM
EmoKid I like the letter structure and the color.. Nice overrall.
Chop I like the colors. And the Must but I don&#39;t really like OBEY. I dunno why to blocky...
UHHH. I like the Obey one bad colors in my opinion, but overrall fresh, I dislike the Melo one theres not much letter structure there.... But the colors are hot...
Nemz what can I say it&#39;s hot..
And whoever did them USPS stickers..... I wish I had your hands.. Nice shit all around.....
I think I got em, I&#39;m using my last 10 posts for these crits so if I missed you im there I&#39;m sorry...
Here I changed the A a little... And the "F" lol... I kinda liked the fact that it gets bigger. most of the throws I work on seem to start small and get bigger... I dunno I like the 1st one better but lemme know what ya&#39;ll think...
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture092.jpg

Chop Logic
01-22-2007, 05:32 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 22 2007, 06:07 PM
uhh i like the obey sketch, except the 2 things on the Y.3D IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
What do you mean? Also, I really like your sketches but I feel like there could be a bit more structure, but still that a dop style you&#39;ll have down soon.

Fube
01-22-2007, 05:50 PM
task i like that. not really any crits i can give. and nemz, i dont agree with chop. i think the structure of your letters is right on point. but, maybe a fill? i dont know i think its hot eather way.


i might be trying to paint this sometime.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/seone.jpg

crits welcome.

nemzone
01-22-2007, 05:59 PM
im really not feelin it much fella. dno what to say to improve it either, but i like ur throws, go bombing&#33;

Sluts_r_us
01-22-2007, 06:35 PM
wack extentions and shit but w.e im still learning about forming them and blah blah..but i like the colors i used and the actual letters...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskpiece.jpg

T45K
01-22-2007, 06:59 PM
I like that all around.... The quirky wack extensions but whatever shit did&#39;nt need to be there. But the actual piece is super dope...

Bazer
01-22-2007, 07:23 PM
you should add some white shiney thingy on the first letter just like all the other ones..

Sumoe
01-22-2007, 07:27 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Jan 22 2007, 05:00 PM
obey sketch?
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-028S-1.jpg
melo sketch?
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-029S-1.jpg
crits are in above post.

i know, i know double post. scary isnt it kids?&#33;
these r fire, especially the "melo" love your "M"s.

pesk-looks good aside from a few extensions you didn&#39;t need,

fube-looks pretty hot.

MainEvent
01-22-2007, 07:34 PM
pesk, shits hot.

Sluts_r_us
01-22-2007, 07:42 PM
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Jan 22 2007, 08:23 PM
you should add some white shiney thingy on the first letter just like all the other ones..
i did, it just didnt show up in the pic...the others look so bright cuz o fthe flash...also, its silver :)

noam12
01-22-2007, 07:51 PM
Originally posted by Chop Logic@Jan 22 2007, 04:53 PM
ASER and ACES - Go way simpler. Honestly, jsut do what I do. When you sketch just have a pencil, a thin sharpe and a thick one and sketch with those. Dont bother with color. In the time it takes you to color something, you could have done another outline, which is really what you need to be working on.

Shitty letters wont be covered up by a great fill, and great letters will still look great in black and white.

For the OBEY battle:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/obey1.jpg

Crits/
rofl i love this, if u had a lil character to go along with it, you know either a dictaor (no not hitler or ppl of that sort...) or like a brain dead type thing. other than that great letters

Bombers Ambition
01-22-2007, 07:53 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sketchs/Sketchs031.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-22-2007, 08:24 PM
cezr exchange?

nemzone
01-22-2007, 08:25 PM
the lines in the 3d fuck with my eyes
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/5408/imag00028ua.jpg

1st ever 3d piece so dont hate 2 much

Stonk
01-22-2007, 08:27 PM
not really feelin it sore. the 3d is off too.
pesk i really like that. butyeah how come there aren&#39;t any highlights on the "P"?
nemz - i dont think that 3d pieces like that are supposed to have those black lines, its supposed to be shown with the different shades.

not expecting to get much positive critism about this, actually its more of a post to help with the m, i tried longer on making a good m than on the rest of the piece (if you could call it that haha) altogether, and still failed <_<

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/new045.jpg

Chop Logic
01-22-2007, 08:31 PM
Since I belive in giving crits out in order to recive....

TASK - Looks okay, try and let it flow more, like hold your marker looser, dont be so firm with your hand, just do it a million times and you&#39;ll see what I mean
FUBE-Looks good, not really sure what to say, its a wierd style, kind of like a throw piece. I feel like since its so wierd its hard to crit, my only problems with it are probobly just due to astetic difference
PESK - The first letter is missing highlights, the OD looks a little shaky, that extension on the P makes it look a little like an R (P&#39;s as a first letter are a bitch) Otherwise looks really good, I like the S the most I think.
Bombers Ambition- You just have to do simples now, both with the tag and the piece, trust me. Also like I said before, dont waste time coloring sketches in, just do a ton of outlines and simple letters and you&#39;ll start to see an improvment, I have whole sketchbooks filled with just black and white shit, and I&#39;m still trash :o
Nemz- For 3D, usually there are no black lines, I&#39;ll post some of my 3D stuff at the end of this post so you can see, also I never really got crits on it, i posted it a while ago.

And now, my shit. Just wanted to do some simples and try out a new A I guess.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymo1.jpg

Always liked this word, if I was better at E&#39;s and S&#39;s I&#39;d use it (I suck at E&#39;s, S&#39;s, and B&#39;s)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/verse1.jpg

Nemz this is what I mean:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/ocho.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/plusone777.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M2.jpg

See? no black lines. I also wouldnt mind crits on these either. Crits on everything&#33; haha.

So yeah, thanks. I like this new trend here with people actually critting.

Sumoe
01-22-2007, 08:35 PM
nemz-i like that, i been meaning to try 3D.

chop logic- the "e" in the verse is bad you don&#39;t need that extension, messes wit the structure of the letter

jerm- don&#39;t really like em except for the "J"

T45K
01-22-2007, 08:39 PM
Sore nice shit keep working at it.
Nemz that 3-d is hot.
Jerm looks nice but stay porportional....
Chap all I can say is wow on your 3-D&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
Thanks for the advice, Im&#39;a start practicing that I&#39;m using crayola markers and the first time I color it leaves bad strokes I&#39;m bad about holding tight I dunno why... But I&#39;m gonna try just loosen my grip on the marker and not press so hard??? Thanks for the tip, can I get some critz on this on-liner???
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/J-mzo/Picture093.jpg

meetermaid
01-22-2007, 08:50 PM
task, that k&#39;s great, the s doesn&#39;t really look like an s (the left side needs to be more open if that makes sense, try to match the right side with the left side), the a is ok, kinda cool, and the top of the t is too long but otherwise fine. i like that style, it&#39;s simple but unique, keep working on it.

Bombers Ambition
01-22-2007, 08:55 PM
Task - i like that style just work at the A and it will look dope

Logic - i like the top 2 sketchs just take that extension off the first E

Nemz - for ur frist 3D i think its dope keep workin on it

T45K
01-22-2007, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by meetermaid@Jan 22 2007, 09:50 PM
task, that k&#39;s great, the s doesn&#39;t really look like an s (the left side needs to be more open if that makes sense, try to match the right side with the left side), the a is ok, kinda cool, and the top of the t is too long but otherwise fine. i like that style, it&#39;s simple but unique, keep working on it.
The "S" is what&#39;s fucking with me... I understand completly about more open, but it&#39;s like if I do that it looks unporportional, or something I don&#39;t know. I&#39;ll keep working on it, thanks.

LOER1
01-22-2007, 09:10 PM
i tryed a new style.. Critz bros?

Nemz- thats pretty ill for a first 3d piece

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q217/smokey107/Picture062.jpghttp://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q217/smokey107/Picture061.jpg

Bombers Ambition
01-22-2007, 09:54 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g266/Bombers_Ambition/sketchs/Sketchs032.jpg

Diap - kinda like it keep working at it

Fosale!
01-22-2007, 10:11 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 22 2007, 07:35 PM
wack extentions and shit but w.e im still learning about forming them and blah blah..but i like the colors i used and the actual letters...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskpiece.jpg
fucking bump.
Pesk&#33;



ebk&#33;.

Sluts_r_us
01-22-2007, 10:14 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jan 22 2007, 07:35 PM
wack extentions and shit but w.e im still learning about forming them and blah blah..but i like the colors i used and the actual letters...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskpiece.jpg
I DID[B][U] the highlights on the p...it just didnt show up because of the flash...notice at the top of the E none showed up either but i did both...

nemzone
01-22-2007, 10:21 PM
diap, u missed 3d on the D,A and P, il let u find it lol

sore, dont use such thick black line, and NEVER do 3d all way to vanishing point.

sluts, id like it if there was no arrows or extensions

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/520/imag00017ow.jpg

1st ever 3d pieces so dont hate 2 much
and the bottom 1, is red,orange,yellow and pink. shows up better in person

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-22-2007, 10:25 PM
Originally posted by Chop Logic@Jan 22 2007, 09:31 PM
Since I belive in giving crits out in order to recive....

TASK - Looks okay, try and let it flow more, like hold your marker looser, dont be so firm with your hand, just do it a million times and you&#39;ll see what I mean
FUBE-Looks good, not really sure what to say, its a wierd style, kind of like a throw piece. I feel like since its so wierd its hard to crit, my only problems with it are probobly just due to astetic difference
PESK - The first letter is missing highlights, the OD looks a little shaky, that extension on the P makes it look a little like an R (P&#39;s as a first letter are a bitch) Otherwise looks really good, I like the S the most I think.
Bombers Ambition- You just have to do simples now, both with the tag and the piece, trust me. Also like I said before, dont waste time coloring sketches in, just do a ton of outlines and simple letters and you&#39;ll start to see an improvment, I have whole sketchbooks filled with just black and white shit, and I&#39;m still trash :o
Nemz- For 3D, usually there are no black lines, I&#39;ll post some of my 3D stuff at the end of this post so you can see, also I never really got crits on it, i posted it a while ago.

And now, my shit. Just wanted to do some simples and try out a new A I guess.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymo1.jpg

Always liked this word, if I was better at E&#39;s and S&#39;s I&#39;d use it (I suck at E&#39;s, S&#39;s, and B&#39;s)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/verse1.jpg

Nemz this is what I mean:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/ocho.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/plusone777.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M2.jpg

See? no black lines. I also wouldnt mind crits on these either. Crits on everything&#33; haha.

So yeah, thanks. I like this new trend here with people actually critting.
that handy kills it for me

ROOK
01-22-2007, 10:27 PM
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/87/magic4zz.jpg
MAGIC

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/5870/cardboard2fu.jpg
ROOK

new to the forums, any advice is cool

Sumoe
01-22-2007, 10:38 PM
<_< magic- DO SIMPLES. JUST LIKE THIS. don&#39;t try to get all fancy and shit cause you not ready yet.

YarHarHar
01-22-2007, 10:39 PM
make letters...thats my advice

spmethin i probably wont finish... meh

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2293.jpg

oh shit
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2294.jpg

obey battle
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2295.jpg

Chop Logic
01-22-2007, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands+Jan 22 2007, 11:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Edward"Sezer"Hands @ Jan 22 2007, 11:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Chop Logic@Jan 22 2007, 09:31 PM
Since I belive in giving crits out in order to recive....

TASK - Looks okay, try and let it flow more, like hold your marker looser, dont be so firm with your hand, just do it a million times and you&#39;ll see what I mean
FUBE-Looks good, not really sure what to say, its a wierd style, kind of like a throw piece. I feel like since its so wierd its hard to crit, my only problems with it are probobly just due to astetic difference
PESK - The first letter is missing highlights, the OD looks a little shaky, that extension on the P makes it look a little like an R (P&#39;s as a first letter are a bitch) Otherwise looks really good, I like the S the most I think.
Bombers Ambition- You just have to do simples now, both with the tag and the piece, trust me. Also like I said before, dont waste time coloring sketches in, just do a ton of outlines and simple letters and you&#39;ll start to see an improvment, I have whole sketchbooks filled with just black and white shit, and I&#39;m still trash :o
Nemz- For 3D, usually there are no black lines, I&#39;ll post some of my 3D stuff at the end of this post so you can see, also I never really got crits on it, i posted it a while ago.

And now, my shit. Just wanted to do some simples and try out a new A I guess.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymo1.jpg

Always liked this word, if I was better at E&#39;s and S&#39;s I&#39;d use it (I suck at E&#39;s, S&#39;s, and B&#39;s)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/verse1.jpg

Nemz this is what I mean:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/ocho.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/plusone777.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/M2.jpg

See? no black lines. I also wouldnt mind crits on these either. Crits on everything&#33; haha.

So yeah, thanks. I like this new trend here with people actually critting.
that handy kills it for me [/b][/quote]
What do you mean? Good thing or a bad thing?

nemzone
01-22-2007, 10:45 PM
bad thing.

jar. not feelin the 1st one, but loving the obey piece&#33;&#33;

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/520/imag00017ow.jpg


id crit the other lad but he overlooked mine, and im an asshole like that.

Fube
01-22-2007, 10:54 PM
nemz:
i think u should paint the bottom one, but make it 2 colors only, like straight up orange and straight up yellow. maybe its just the sketch but the other value of the orange fades way to much. sweet though, both of them.

chop:
im feelin the 4th one down the most. btw whats the tag say? i really dont like that.

heres what i did for the obey battle just now.
crits welcome.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/obey.jpg

T45K
01-22-2007, 10:56 PM
Nemz the second one the orange, I think is off the hook nice job...
Fube that shits pretty fresh there too, nice all around ya&#39;ll....

Knice
01-22-2007, 11:07 PM
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a92/KniceDesigns/DrawingZ/WAIZblu.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a92/KniceDesigns/DrawingZ/SSPX0046.jpg

new stuff, any tips?

Knice
01-22-2007, 11:09 PM
FUBE that obey is dope

Sumoe
01-22-2007, 11:22 PM
fube-not really liking the letters, don&#39;t like how the Y is huge compared to the other letters, and the "e" and "b" are hurtin pretty bad.

Fube
01-22-2007, 11:30 PM
win some lose some. i didnt like my e as well, but the be just bled together and made it look more worse then it was. damn sharpie markers.

thanks for the crits.

Sumoe
01-22-2007, 11:33 PM
Originally posted by Fube@Jan 22 2007, 06:50 PM
task i like that. not really any crits i can give. and nemz, i dont agree with chop. i think the structure of your letters is right on point. but, maybe a fill? i dont know i think its hot eather way.


i might be trying to paint this sometime.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/seone.jpg

crits welcome.
yea i like this shit alot^^, its weird the "obey" peice doesn&#39;t even look like it was you who did it.

Quigbert
01-22-2007, 11:35 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri21.jpg

criticism please&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Naryan
01-22-2007, 11:50 PM
Quigbert, I like the D, but the top of the E and your I and the third letter need a bit of work. I&#39;m not quite sure what the third letter is. Try going fo a bit more interplay between letters, it looks to me like they are avoiding each other. Also, I&#39;m really not feelin the I. The symmetry of the top and bottom of the E is good, as is the unity of the D and the third letter. I like it at least.

EAz 1
01-23-2007, 12:08 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a31/pinoy4lyfe408/SSPX0142.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a31/pinoy4lyfe408/SSPX0141.jpg

tell me whut chu guys think about these. the top ones is mine nd the bottom one is my friends. mine sucks but oh well i tried.

Sumoe
01-23-2007, 12:34 AM
simples, do em ;)

sema
01-23-2007, 01:01 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/hacer346.jpg

sema
01-23-2007, 01:11 AM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/hacer12.jpg

nemzone
01-23-2007, 01:21 AM
simple letters mate. that looks horrible.

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4057/imag00020qm.jpg
thought bouncing may like this :lol: its the ink bleed from other page ;)
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/387/imag00033hp.jpg
some throws for ppl

YarHarHar
01-23-2007, 01:46 AM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Jan 22 2007, 11:39 PM
make letters...thats my advice

spmethin i probably wont finish... meh

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2293.jpg

oh shit
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2294.jpg

obey battle
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2295.jpg
..?

C3ZR ONE
01-23-2007, 01:53 AM
There&#39;s alot of talent in toy forums, but three kids take the cake in here in my book. sky5, Jar, and Enser. Bawk is a close 4th. Oh, and Bastardo..he&#39;s ill.

Your shit blows me away man... Everything about it. You&#39;ve really progressed.



SEZER- I did your sticker, but I&#39;m too lazy to post it right now. I&#39;ll get at you. ;)

sema
01-23-2007, 02:15 AM
i just seen ur battle pic thems be easy letters sun dun(nemz)

mr pane
01-23-2007, 03:20 AM
yo sema your sketches have a bit too many add ons n shit. i think try some more simple sketches to improve your letter structure.

aces
01-23-2007, 05:33 AM
Originally posted by YarHarHar@Jan 23 2007, 12:39 AM
make letters...thats my advice

spmethin i probably wont finish... meh

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2293.jpg

oh shit
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2294.jpg

obey battle
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2295.jpg
Bumpidy bump...

Fuckin hottness man...

wookiE
01-23-2007, 05:57 AM
your obey sketch beats mine. great job

TricksForKids
01-23-2007, 06:35 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 23 2007, 02:53 AM
There&#39;s alot of talent in toy forums, but three kids take the cake in here in my book. sky5, Jar, and Enser. Bawk is a close 4th. Oh, and Bastardo..he&#39;s ill.

Your shit blows me away man... Everything about it. You&#39;ve really progressed.



SEZER- I did your sticker, but I&#39;m too lazy to post it right now. I&#39;ll get at you. ;)
Looks look i gotta step my game up :P

shithead onerzzzz
01-23-2007, 07:24 AM
working on putting on decent tabs that dont look all stumpy. I is to thin and the extensions are a little uneven but o wells. sky5?

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture061.jpg

textathief
01-23-2007, 07:30 AM
Originally posted by shithead onerzzzz@Jan 23 2007, 11:24 PM
working on putting on decent tabs that dont look all stumpy. I is to thin and the extensions are a little uneven but o wells. sky5?

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture061.jpg
dont worry about letter structure so much, ur letters look to stiff, cut loose, and start angling and makin em fit in :D. keep it up man/.

beefgerky
01-23-2007, 08:35 AM
your tripin that shit is ill.

Chop Logic
01-23-2007, 09:33 AM
SEMA go simple, simples are the foundation for everything. Look at RIES piece, you can see that he knows his simples.

RIES that is pretty ill.

My tag on the last page says AYMO. I thought it way okay, but apparently not. Can I get some advice on it? Can you even read it?

I dont want to bump my shit again I already bumped it once accidently. Someone else can if they want though, or just give me advice on my tag it they could. Thanks.

CoKKeYONe
01-23-2007, 09:37 AM
Originally posted by shithead onerzzzz@Jan 23 2007, 08:24 AM
working on putting on decent tabs that dont look all stumpy. I is to thin and the extensions are a little uneven but o wells. sky5?

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture061.jpg
it looks fine but you should do 2nd outline and some bubbles
i think that it would look better

CoKKeYONe
01-23-2007, 09:41 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p241/CoKKeYONe/Sketches/Coki.jpg

these are cyrillic letters anyway i want to share it with you

PS. I&#39;m waiting for aces he always gives me best advices

this is about two months old

aces
01-23-2007, 11:21 AM
Haha thanks man...Is it YAH??? If so the Y is pretty nice but the A is wicked jumbled up in there...Can&#39;t even tell what&#39;s going on...H is pretty good too and teh coloring is really nice...Overall its not bad aside from the A/whatever it is.

TryingTooHard
01-23-2007, 11:22 AM
Cokkey - Lovin the colors man...

Someone told me that bring the "U" closer and have em over lap a lil more... Overlap more or?

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/krum003.jpg

EDIT:
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/krum005.jpg

Crits fellas?

HeiSk
01-23-2007, 12:06 PM
new throw up, new letters try


http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1010981.jpg

STAR01
01-23-2007, 12:08 PM
Originally posted by CoKKeYONe@Jan 23 2007, 05:41 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p241/CoKKeYONe/Sketches/Coki.jpg

these are cyrillic letters anyway i want to share it with you

PS. I&#39;m waiting for aces he always gives me best advices

this is about two months old
nice props for that&#33;

sky 5
01-23-2007, 12:10 PM
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/270/12222022wy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

did this in the dark last night . . . did dark colors b/c i had big plans for my pink pen but it wouldnt go over the black, u cant really see the outline in the pic but your not missing much ..som crappy pencil sketches to fill up the pic . .

dont know how inkbits, cezr, jar and a few others posts werent bumped to new pages . . . real nice work

ries - it def looks better with cleaner more defined tabs, keep playin with em and soon enough youlll have em down . . .letters do look abit stiff thoo but you can focus on that later (probaly will be abitch cuz you will have to re-examine and tweak your whole letter structure, adding tabs is easy) . . where yuor at now might be a good time to practice painting this style and getting it down before you add anything else to the outline

Fube
01-23-2007, 12:16 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Jan 23 2007, 12:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Jan 23 2007, 12:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fube@Jan 22 2007, 06:50 PM
task i like that. not really any crits i can give. and nemz, i dont agree with chop. i think the structure of your letters is right on point. but, maybe a fill? i dont know i think its hot eather way.


i might be trying to paint this sometime.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/seone.jpg

crits welcome.
yea i like this shit alot^^, its weird the "obey" peice doesn&#39;t even look like it was you who did it. [/b][/quote]
well, i did it in a completly different way. just tryin new stuff. believe it or not i like it when people just trash the hell out of what i do. because thats how u get better. :D

krazzie_ammo
01-23-2007, 12:24 PM
KRUM : nice, not really feeling the bubbles though.

HEISK : H kinda looks like a K, but its real nice.

SKY 5: unlucky about thee pink pen, love it though.

ok, so i&#39;ve had a bigg writer&#39;s block since the beginning of the xmas holidays. i managed to finally push this out, tell me what you think...

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5822/960fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it says CRA, crits?

sky 5
01-23-2007, 12:24 PM
fube - i really wanna trash the hell out of it for ya but for the most part it looks like you did it exactly how you wanted it to which is hard to do . . . the top right of the E looks alil woobly, maybe make the bottom squiggly part of the E bigger or longer so it sticks out farther right b.c right now the middle part of the E and teh bottom squigly part of teh E end at about the same length . . .

Fosale!
01-23-2007, 01:20 PM
ima try to post flicks tonight, i have a bunch.
seaz i have the exchange for you done but its just a quick pencil sketch.

peace&#33;

Mse
01-23-2007, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by STAR01+Jan 23 2007, 01:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (STAR01 @ Jan 23 2007, 01:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-CoKKeYONe@Jan 23 2007, 05:41 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p241/CoKKeYONe/Sketches/Coki.jpg

these are cyrillic letters anyway i want to share it with you

PS. I&#39;m waiting for aces he always gives me best advices

this is about two months old
nice props for that&#33; [/b][/quote]
really now? it doesnt say shit
sta se foliras batooooo?

to all the people i owe a sketch, i have
caer, melo, nemz, and cezr&#39;s done
ill post em all up at once. when i finish

CoKKeYONe
01-23-2007, 01:39 PM
@aces
tnx man

@sky 5
i like that style, sketch is clean but maybe too dark

@Mse
i shto se ja foliram?

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 02:32 PM
Originally posted by Fube+Jan 23 2007, 01:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fube @ Jan 23 2007, 01:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Sumoe@Jan 23 2007, 12:33 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Fube@Jan 22 2007, 06:50 PM
task i like that.* not really any crits i can give.* and nemz, i dont agree with chop.* i think the structure of your letters is right on point.* but, maybe a fill?* i dont know i think its hot eather way.


i might be trying to paint this sometime.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/seone.jpg

crits welcome.
yea i like this shit alot^^, its weird the "obey" peice doesn&#39;t even look like it was you who did it.
well, i did it in a completly different way. just tryin new stuff. believe it or not i like it when people just trash the hell out of what i do. because thats how u get better. :D [/b][/quote]
haha yea i actually prefer someone putting about you suck ass but actually tell me soemthing constructive isntead of like um its ok...

heisk make the h look like an h its a k right now but i actually like this and your characters are really cool

sketch3
01-23-2007, 04:12 PM
Originally posted by HeiSk@Jan 23 2007, 01:06 PM
new throw up, new letters try


http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1010981.jpg
super generic.

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 04:34 PM
Can someone tell me how to post i looked everywhere in this forum and i cant find shit

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 04:40 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture160.jpg

Fube
01-23-2007, 05:11 PM
Newbytj, when u post u need the url (what u posted), when u reply theres a icon that ses "IMG" on it. click it, it will ask for the url of the picture, paste it in there and thats it, it should look like this.

http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture160.jpg

as for crits, dont worry about the fill of your letters yet, worry about the structure of them, go super simple like whats on your keyboard, then elaborate from there. thats be said over, and over and over here. but it works.

i did another obey outline here it is.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/obey2.jpg

here is the old one to compair to.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/obey.jpg

kinda the same but different. is one better then the other? or are they both shit? got overbleed on the outline, just ignore that if u can.

crits welcome.

noam12
01-23-2007, 05:39 PM
fube- nice, its pretty simitrical(i cant spell) so im happy ^_^ lol

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 05:45 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture27.jpg

Id say the second one looks better but try some other letters also

bouncingsoul
01-23-2007, 06:05 PM
Fuuube, I love your style.

School sketching... I had a similar experimental sketch like this first one yesterday but I fucking lost the paper I had it on... The second one is just fucking around... I have no idea where it came from...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0596.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0597.jpg

Gist
01-23-2007, 06:07 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch5.jpg

Dope shit every one krum try keeping all ur letters on a straight line it seems out od balance

My shits a little messy but theres no excuses citz plz

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 06:08 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Jan 23 2007, 07:05 PM
Fuuube, I love your style.

School sketching... I had a similar experimental sketch like this first one yesterday but I fucking lost the paper I had it on... The second one is just fucking around... I have no idea where it came from...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0596.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0597.jpg
cross hacthing :o
like it alot...

swingforblood
01-23-2007, 06:08 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y60/optura10kid/Graffiti/Mine/img052.jpg

TryingTooHard
01-23-2007, 06:20 PM
KNEWS.... Hot shit dude... love the cross hatching

GIST.... No beef or anything but your telling me to keep me letters straight? Yours goes G E S T and its diagnol.... ummm ? :blink:

This page should all do simples.... Im not sayin Im God cause im def not I blow ass... but simples dudes.. cept KNEWS I love your shit

hot dogs&#33;

aces
01-23-2007, 06:23 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jan 23 2007, 03:20 PM
ima try to post flicks tonight, i have a bunch.
seaz i have the exchange for you done but its just a quick pencil sketch.

peace&#33;
Ha I didn&#39;t know we were exchanging...What do you write?

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 06:24 PM
eh new style idk...
nbs put a hole in the b and make the n look like an n
gest the letters go from small to big bad thing...
edit:damn....phto bucket sucks too

Gist
01-23-2007, 06:25 PM
whoops i didnt notice that i have a hard time keeping everything in proportion lol
N krum notic how the one with the bottom of the leters on the straight lines looks beter thats all i was sayin.

Fube
01-23-2007, 06:32 PM
Gist, i think cleaner lines would help u. take a pen and go over it with clean lines then erase all the pencil.

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 06:32 PM
already critted everyone
new style ive been messing with dont know about it...
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3568/picture0462lv.jpg
yea

Fube
01-23-2007, 06:35 PM
looks just like your other stuff.

TryingTooHard
01-23-2007, 06:40 PM
I know... its cool tho no beef with you :P

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 23 2007, 07:32 PM
already critted everyone
new style ive been messing with dont know about it...
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3568/picture0462lv.jpg
yea
NU PAGE&#33;&#33;
yea..

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 06:42 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture28.jpg

I was told to do Block letters ne tips so i can move on?

TryingTooHard
01-23-2007, 06:45 PM
instead of copying the URL copy the IMG thing....

Space them out a lil bit... I really dunno howta give advice...make all your lines like the same width

All I know :unsure:

EDIT: Does anyone one wanna do an exchange? It will be my first one so gimme a break.....?

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 06:47 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture29.jpg

Trying a bunch of different ideas

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 06:48 PM
Ill do an exchange

ASB_ONE
01-23-2007, 06:49 PM
yo u can do me 1 if u want - caser

Fube
01-23-2007, 06:51 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture28.jpg
this is a shitload better then
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture27.jpg

in order to progress u have to keep at it, theres not really a "moveing on" like school grades.

Gist
01-23-2007, 06:57 PM
Does n e wun no somone named Gesc cus i wana change my t to a c so it sorta flows more with the g n the e lol ... that shit rymes :P

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 06:57 PM
wtf..?^

What Happened to the Letters?
01-23-2007, 06:58 PM
those arnt block letters, thats a square with leters stuuck into it, block letters are letters made out of blocks, therefore they wouldnt be angled liek that n, the i s the only real block letter you have there

______...______..__.... ___......__
|____ |..| ___|.| |...| &#092;....| |
...... / /...| |_......| |...| |&#092; &#092;...| | <===those are block letters
...../ /.....| _|.....| |...| |.&#092; &#092;..| |
.../ /.......| |........| |...| |..&#092; &#092;.| |
./ /___ | |___...| |..| |...&#092; &#092;| |
/_____|..|_____|..|__|..|_|....&#092;___|

edit...wow i jsut took all that time made ill ass blocks and it all got fucked up, ok i think i fixed it jsut odnt mind the periods

What Happened to the Letters?
01-23-2007, 07:00 PM
Originally posted by Gist@Jan 23 2007, 08:57 PM
Does n e wun no somone named Gesc cus i wana change my t to a c so it sorta flows more with the g n the e lol ... that shit rymes :P
google the word "gesc" and the words "gesc graff" and "gesc graffiti" and if you dont find anythign you got a good chance no one has that name, but it really doesnt matter becasue as a toy your jsut tryign to learn your shit, you dont need a serious name till later

Gist
01-23-2007, 07:01 PM
tru

swingforblood
01-23-2007, 07:02 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 23 2007, 07:24 PM
eh new style idk...
nbs put a hole in the b and make the n look like an n
gest the letters go from small to big bad thing...
edit:damn....phto bucket sucks too
What does my N look like in the picture?

shithead onerzzzz
01-23-2007, 07:04 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture062.jpg

did bubbles and shit but i couldnt be bothered making it look fancy. should of chosen i better colour to. crits

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 07:05 PM
Originally posted by swingforblood+Jan 23 2007, 08:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (swingforblood &#064; Jan 23 2007, 08:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Jan 23 2007, 07:24 PM
eh new style idk...
nbs put a hole in the b and make the n look like an n
gest the letters go from small to big bad thing...
edit:damn....phto bucket sucks too
What does my N look like in the picture? [/b][/quote]
an H
ries thats awesome excpet that extesnion on the left of the r
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3568/picture0462lv.jpg
yep im a crits whore

kicklip9634
01-23-2007, 07:05 PM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/2935/pesa10uy.jpg
shitty coloring job i only had the skinny tip sharpies <_< crits..
zein: i like that throw you got jus define the "n" more
scec:i like it but it looks like all youre other stuff

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 07:06 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture30.jpg

I been tryin to load it the right way but my comp wont let me

What Happened to the Letters?
01-23-2007, 07:10 PM
ries is looking real nice, on your way to great letters, you can add some shit on to that make it look real nice now, or jsut keep the simples and rock them

What Happened to the Letters?
01-23-2007, 07:13 PM
Originally posted by Fube@Jan 23 2007, 07:11 PM
Newbytj, when u post u need the url (what u posted), when u reply theres a icon that ses "IMG" on it. click it, it will ask for the url of the picture, paste it in there and thats it, it should look like this.

http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture160.jpg

as for crits, dont worry about the fill of your letters yet, worry about the structure of them, go super simple like whats on your keyboard, then elaborate from there. thats be said over, and over and over here. but it works.

i did another obey outline here it is.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/obey2.jpg

here is the old one to compair to.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/obey.jpg

kinda the same but different. is one better then the other? or are they both shit? got overbleed on the outline, just ignore that if u can.

crits welcome.
dont write obey, youll get soo much shit for that, obey is a worldwide recognized street artist adn im sure you already knew that

Fube
01-23-2007, 07:14 PM
Originally posted by kicklip9634@Jan 23 2007, 08:05 PM
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/2935/pesa10uy.jpg
shitty coloring job i only had the skinny tip sharpies <_< crits..
zein: i like that throw you got jus define the "n" more
scec:i like it but it looks like all youre other stuff
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskpiece.jpg

;)

eh?



also, i do not write OBEY, it was for the battle. thats for the advice if i did though. :)

KoreTwo
01-23-2007, 07:14 PM
Does anyone else do stencisl here? I&#39;ve decided to switch over to the stencil side :P

And Shithead: That&#39;s really nice. Looks good at least.

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 07:15 PM
hahah fube i was JUST uploading both those

What Happened to the Letters?
01-23-2007, 07:17 PM
Originally posted by CoKKeYONe@Jan 23 2007, 11:41 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p241/CoKKeYONe/Sketches/Coki.jpg

these are cyrillic letters anyway i want to share it with you

PS. I&#39;m waiting for aces he always gives me best advices

this is about two months old
your u is great, your y is fine, but in the middle who knows what those two letters are, make an outline of all your letters, dont blend them liek that or its just not readable, also drop all the extensiojns until you get your letters all perfect, and the extensions you did on that are trying to be too wild without knowing why your doingthem like htat, each extensions needs a reason for being there, it has to fit

kicklip9634
01-23-2007, 07:22 PM
awww damn man if you think its a bite or sume shit its not i was lookin at sum of my old shit wat back when and I added all tose lil chop things

Gist
01-23-2007, 07:24 PM
i do stencils before i switchd to graff i got some pics

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 07:24 PM
wrong topic...?^

NewbyTJ
01-23-2007, 07:25 PM
I like it it looks sick man dunt really have much to say maby now wrk on some more complicated letter styles

turnturnturn
01-23-2007, 07:29 PM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_16552.jpg

can someone in here teach me some simple styles
straight letters and what not

kicklip9634
01-23-2007, 07:33 PM
BEFORE ASKING FOR YOUR OWN CRITS...AND BUMPING YOU OWN SHIT...GIVE OUT CRITS TO THE OTHER PEOPLE ON THE PAGE FIRST &#33;&#33;&#33;
COPY AND PASTE TO YOUR SIG TO SPREAD THE WORD &#33;&#33;

turnturnturn
01-23-2007, 07:36 PM
wha what???????????????

turnturnturn
01-23-2007, 07:37 PM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_16552.jpg

can someone teach me simple styles, straight letters and what not?

slinks
01-23-2007, 07:38 PM
turn : that looks kind of sloppy to me. i think defining the lines would help with less background lines which i think are just from the other side or next page.

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti028.jpg
sketch in pencil before adding markers cus i wasnt sure what colors to use yet. critz??

AteskOne
01-23-2007, 07:44 PM
Originally posted by turnturnturn@Jan 23 2007, 08:37 PM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c185/pichuchita/IMG_16552.jpg

can someone teach me simple styles, straight letters and what not?
"SEEN" are you serious...your style looks to advanced to be writing something as toy as seen. i hope that&#39;s for a battle or something??

Fube
01-23-2007, 07:51 PM
sence when is a name like "seen" a toy name? because it has to of the same letters?

whahappen?
01-23-2007, 07:52 PM
it says seek bud
fube ...seen is a king from new york..

Sumoe
01-23-2007, 07:53 PM
alright first off, crits...

turn-like the throwie, but like Atesk said, if you don&#39;t know who seen is <_< thats pretty disturbing, so hope it&#39;s for a battle or something else. EDIT: my bad then if it says "SEEK"

slinks-go simple, no extensions arrows etc. jusy plain block letters, until you learn your letter structures.

Fube-are you serious :o ??

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/974/dsc00737vv.jpg

crits&#33;?&#33;?&#33;?&#33;?&#33;

Linkzone1
01-23-2007, 07:56 PM
sumoe - thats sick&#33; You&#39;re getting goood&#33;

fredom-writer
01-23-2007, 07:56 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Sumoe
01-23-2007, 07:57 PM
no why?

slinks
01-23-2007, 08:01 PM
is there something wrong with my letter structure? like whats the critz on that making me need to go simpler? just want to know what to improve on. i did all the letters themselves first then added the arrows and such.