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aces
01-25-2007, 07:50 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE+Jan 25 2007, 05:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASB_ONE @ Jan 25 2007, 05:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Jan 24 2007, 07:43 PM
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3889/12222135py.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


sky dont get enough bumps lol, this shit is sik. [/b][/quote]
BUMP for teh hottness...

etch a sketch
01-25-2007, 08:01 PM
What&#39;s sky doing in the toy thread lol.. he&#39;s too good for us.. :(

sky - dopity dope dope

weldo i like it but the snails eyes look like they werent frawn right? i cant find the word for it but good job anyways.

newborn - i like the handies at the top of the page but i dont like your handie at the bottom :blink: anyways just try to keep it neater and keep workin on the 3d :)

mrquote - pretty clean but id suggest to try to change the bottom part of the g like this kind of g except in ur style of the throwie :)


heres a few throwie ideas. can you guys tell me which one i should keep and which one i should forget about?

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7075/file0005mg6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Noddles912300
01-25-2007, 08:15 PM
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9522/scan0003xj9.jpg
I suck :( i know did this during math class today. Any advice?

Hask420
01-25-2007, 08:31 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/6853/haskhandstylelx6.jpg


i need some help wid my handstyle any suggestions?

What Happened to the Letters?
01-25-2007, 08:33 PM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Jan 25 2007, 09:43 PM
Haze amaze i do like your style 2 and that snail pimpin only one thing I can say is do black outlines around ur letters. New born good Fresh peice id say tho for ur drips round em off instead of just like rectangular drips.
that peice IS NOT goood, dont try and critique shit iof you dont know what you&#39;re talkign about, thats why the blackbook thread is so cluttered with toy shit...notice how sky5 still posts in here? that dude can burn half the peopel in the blackbook thread but he realises his shit can still imrpove nad prefers to think of himself as a toy

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 08:34 PM
Ok, so I want to get some good Crit on this.
I dont wanna get this chirped either.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/sake7throwup3.jpg

I did this in like 45 seconds.. ^^

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7Tag1.jpg

This is just a tag I had.. I probably wouldn&#39;t take the time to outline it if I was out doing it somewhere.. but its in my book, so...

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7tag6.jpg

This is another one of my Tags.. Some more crit.

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 08:35 PM
Hask.. Some pretty sick shit dude.
Not Really anything I can Crit about it.

etch a sketch
01-25-2007, 08:35 PM
Why is everyone posting their crap in the wrong threads?
Hask are u that blind that you can&#39;t find a thread called toy tagz..only?

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 08:38 PM
<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:100%'>Noodles, your math teacher must be pretty fucking oblivious to everything man.. Nicely done.

I might Make the O a little bit bigger.. other than that, Nice.</span>

Gist
01-25-2007, 08:40 PM
noddels back to block leters and keep everything in proportion use bars like nickstick said and keep all ur letters facing the appropriate direction

etch a sketch im feeling the throwie to ur left the most with a little bit of work i think it would be pretty decent but im confused the first one says wipe and then the other two say nope

hugs not bad for the h try making the bendy part go straight into the straight part rather then havin it proced downwards and for the g keep the back of it straight rather then bubbly and use etch a sketch crit on definin the curve more

newbornsex back to basicks back to block leters and keep everything in proportion use bars. ur best lookin leter is the h wana noe why cus its simple

exame dope shit i like ur style alot, alot like the european style, who r ur influences?

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/sketch9.jpg

The three d of my c came onto my s back accident my hand slipped :P im having a hard time making the s seem to fit in with the rest of my letters it seems like its just been stuck in to fill up space. O n i worked on my handy. Critz plz

T45K
01-25-2007, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Jan 25 2007, 01:26 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40808.jpg

some different style ive been working on...
YOUR A FUCKING MONSTER&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
Some of the best shit I&#39;ve looked at in a while&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Tahworsetoy
01-25-2007, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by Noddles912300@Jan 25 2007, 09:15 PM
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9522/scan0003xj9.jpg
I suck :( i know did this during math class today. Any advice?
it&#39;s pretty good but I don&#39;t really like how you (appear) to squeeze the "r" in btwn the "t"s...also not sure if you were doing it just for practice or not but usually you don&#39;t do city names for your name lol just my opinion i&#39;m a toy too...keep it up you got skill i can tell just minor things

Tahworsetoy
01-25-2007, 08:45 PM
trashhh that is awesome keep it up

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 08:47 PM
Ok, heres another one i just did.
Doesn&#39;t look that great.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7tag7.jpg

I gotta find myself a fatter marker.. These damn 5mm sharpies aren&#39;t cutting it.

etch a sketch
01-25-2007, 08:51 PM
seventeen17, use the thread called toy tagz only man. thats where ur tag goes :lol:



Originally posted by Gist@Jan 25 2007, 09:40 PM
etch a sketch im feeling the throwie to ur left the most with a little bit of work i think it would be pretty decent but im confused the first one says wipe and then the other two say nope

oh, well i guess i have to work on my t&#39;s the :lol: . the first one that when the n looks like a w is because i like added an extra leg or something because i&#39;ve always liked that before but i end up makin wme look like w&#39;s :blink: oh well.

oh well. as for the gesc piece, your lines seem a bit shaky, just try to practice straight lines then when you got it right keep on with the simples good job on the handie too :lol: :lol:

trash - thats pretty cool man but i like ur 3d a lot better :)

MrQuote
01-25-2007, 08:54 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/HUG2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/HUG3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/HUG.jpg





I&#39;m itchin&#39; to get this out around town in white and blue...

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 08:58 PM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7Throwie3.jpg

Heres another one I just did... took like 45 seconds too.
Crit?

Noddles912300
01-25-2007, 08:58 PM
Hey just posting to say thanks you to all the advice and i did detoit as practice because every ones at my school has been complaining to me about how the only word i write is noddles.

etch a sketch
01-25-2007, 08:59 PM
dude can&#39;t you at least crit the people above you even though theres like 2 people? ahh well....... i&#39;d use the first one and maybe try like a hole instead of an x for the holein the g. well i donno it&#39;s ur tag and it&#39;s ur call..

seventeen its so bubbly :huh:

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 08:59 PM
I thought this was just a blackbook posting thread.
This is just stuff thats in my Book.

Samp1e
01-25-2007, 09:06 PM
seventeen -- we generally mean pieces and such, but you&#39;re bound to get better and more elaborate feedback in the tags thread ;) not too much of a fan of your throw style, but that&#39;s just me

mrquote -- i like your throws. i&#39;m not too well seasoned on them so i dunno what my opinon matters :rolleyes: i think that the "G" on the third one should be a little bit more defined though.

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 09:11 PM
Ok, Thanks...
I&#39;ll stick to Throwies and Bombs and stuff like that.

On this one.. I&#39;m just really bored and totally expirementing..
This is what NOT TO DO.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7Throwie4.jpg

Hahaha.. laugh away people.

Mse
01-25-2007, 09:14 PM
Originally posted by Mse+Jan 25 2007, 04:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mse @ Jan 25 2007, 04:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Mse@Jan 25 2007, 03:47 PM
oh and people
i still havent finished all the sketches. some alias&#39; are giving me a hard time :( mesa in particular and entr (which is kind of absurd considering the difference between my name and his is one letter) i refuse to post em up seperate
in the meantime


http://i18.tinypic.com/44rx7yc.jpg
http://i12.tinypic.com/2lkza0y.jpg
i fucked up the eyes really really badly
oh well im too lazy to erase anything
http://i12.tinypic.com/49jmwhu.jpg
some 3 am supposed to be studying bullshizzot
buhump [/b][/quote]
17 - lose the bumps
hug - dont paint it yet, perfect it. its okay i guess

Hask420
01-25-2007, 09:14 PM
Originally posted by etch*a*sketch@Jan 25 2007, 09:35 PM
Hask are u that blind that you can&#39;t find a thread called toy tagz..only?


dude im only posting stupid black book shit and this is the toy black book thread... whats yer beef???

Sumoe
01-25-2007, 09:25 PM
Gist- your lines are a lil&#39; shaky, pretty good start but you gotta clean it up a lot.

trash- i like it but not as much as some of your other stuff, not diggin&#39; the fill or how the A drops down, but lookin&#39; pretty good.

Mse- dope karaks, like your letters too, you should ink em&#39;.

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 09:28 PM
Ok.. So Sampl1e.. you dont like my throw style?
Tell me what I can do to make it better, it&#39;s whats Criticism is about right?

etch a sketch
01-25-2007, 09:28 PM
Originally posted by Hask420+Jan 25 2007, 10:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hask420 &#064; Jan 25 2007, 10:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-etch*a*sketch@Jan 25 2007, 09:35 PM
Hask are u that blind that you can&#39;t find a thread called toy tagz..only?


dude im only posting stupid black book shit and this is the toy black book thread... whats yer beef???[/b][/quote]
i don&#39;t have any beef with u.. its just that heres a thread called toy tagz..only and thats where most tags go..

seventeen - make em less bubbly, thats my crit <_<

sibil juggalo
01-25-2007, 09:28 PM
Originally posted by Seventeen17@Jan 25 2007, 10:11 PM
Ok, Thanks...
I&#39;ll stick to Throwies and Bombs and stuff like that.

On this one.. I&#39;m just really bored and totally expirementing..
This is what NOT TO DO.

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7Throwie4.jpg

Hahaha.. laugh away people.
man dont write sake theres already about 100 others trying to do the same
work with the letters on you "s" dont have that top portion curve back just have the top of it you know what i mean?

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 09:36 PM
man dont even bother criting that one..
I was just messing around, and I&#39;m kinda going post-crazy cause I just figured out how to put up my pics.

This on I was working with the shadow, did I get it right?

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/SkBomb1.jpg

Gist
01-25-2007, 09:40 PM
how do u guys get them perfectly straight krispy lines lol im jelouse. do u guys move ur pens fast or slow. is the paper ur draw on smooth cus mines sorta rough. etc

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 09:43 PM
I&#39;m just using normal printer paper.. I don&#39;t know what kind of effect rougher paper would have. Just use long strokes, don&#39;t write in short lines around your curves.. and draw them at a speed thats cofortable for you, that you can work with...
Personally, I do mine pretty slow.

TryingTooHard
01-25-2007, 09:46 PM
SKETCH lol.... dont do it hard just real lightly back and forth that how I do mine... then it doesnt show up after your put marker over it

May look like shit but after the marker goes on thats why people invented erasers

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 09:52 PM
Okay, so I took your advice guys.. Took it back a bunch of steps.. tried some shadowing..

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7Bomb1.jpg

Improvement?

Seventeen17
01-25-2007, 09:54 PM
Alright, I&#39;m done spamming my shit for tonight..
I&#39;ll post less pictures tommorow, i swear.
Fuck.. I have an Exam tomorrow.

etch a sketch
01-25-2007, 09:57 PM
seventten ur gettin there keep it up

doing one for a friend.. which one should i give her? and which style should i keep? please answer me if u can.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/116/file0008yn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9229/file0007mf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sibil juggalo
01-25-2007, 09:58 PM
Originally posted by Seventeen17@Jan 25 2007, 10:52 PM
Okay, so I took your advice guys.. Took it back a bunch of steps.. tried some shadowing..

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t52/Sakeseven/Sake7Bomb1.jpg

Improvement?
hell yeah man looks alot better and you got your shadow down just keep playing with those letters but keep it simple and readable

uhhh
01-25-2007, 09:58 PM
Originally posted by Gist@Jan 25 2007, 10:40 PM
how do u guys get them perfectly straight krispy lines lol im jelouse. do u guys move ur pens fast or slow. is the paper ur draw on smooth cus mines sorta rough. etc
when i outline, i go pretty slow AND fast.
i go slow at first, then fast, then slow when i get close to another bend in the letter.
really, it just comes with time, i can draw my lines just fine on printer paper or watercolor, it really makes no difference, but printer paper does look beter, minly for color reasons.

sake-no, you did not get the shadow right. heres a tip about shadow, think about it like you have two of the exact same letter, but you move the bottom one, so its slighty of set to the top, and go from there. but you really shouldnt be worrying about that yet. just work on letters. BLOCK LETTERS.

sibil juggalo
01-25-2007, 09:59 PM
Originally posted by etch*a*sketch@Jan 25 2007, 10:57 PM
seventten ur gettin there keep it up

doing one for a friend.. which one should i give her? and which style should i keep? please answer me if u can.

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/116/file0008yn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9229/file0007mf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
im liking the top one alot put some good colors in that and itll look dope

Apoc
01-25-2007, 10:24 PM
yo sketch, that top shit is fire

for all the rest, keep working

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/P1010046.jpg

near
01-25-2007, 10:45 PM
omg sweet delicious internet...

apoc thats pretty noice throw some 3d on it next time o_O


here is what i been up 2 lol tryin other words well one was the star of my brothers blah blah blah...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010689.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/S3010688.jpg

Sumoe
01-25-2007, 10:47 PM
etch- at first the top one looked pretty good, but as I looked down at the bottom one I realized you still don&#39;t really understand your letters too well, the top one looks like it has some potential but first you gotta learn the structures of your letters, do some simpler work but keep developing the top style also, the letters are pretty bad in the bottom one tho, keep at it tho. You Filipino right?

Apoc- not really feeling the "N" or the "E", the "A" doesn&#39;t need that extra little extension of the left leg and your "N" looks a lot like a "V", at least I think it&#39;s a "N", also the "E" needs some work, it&#39;s not too bad just keep working on it.

Rank!
01-25-2007, 10:57 PM
Yo one guy said he liked the top 3 but i need more crit ..what to work on, what looks like complete shit and if you think i should paint any of them...thanks
some throwies i did quick at work.http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/throwie.jpg



also this is the first piece i have ever sketched....the fill is pretty bad but what about the letter stucture?


http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/surgerank.jpg

Sumoe
01-25-2007, 10:58 PM
letters aren&#39;t that great either, liking the second throwie the most though.

weldo
01-26-2007, 04:09 AM
rank must i say this to every kid on this site man just settle your pieces down and make them simple.
can anyone tell me were i [post my shit for the battle?
i shall put a piece on later

nemzone
01-26-2007, 04:45 AM
rank, u got a few nice throws. no comment on the pieces. 2nd throw down with no exclamation mark would be nice.

near, i like the top 1 more than the 2nd one. fill is too busy for my liking.

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/2317/imag0011rp2.jpg

few pieces of shit, dont have the drive to draw i usually do <_<

Skesh
01-26-2007, 05:18 AM
The midle one is pretty cool (how do you call something like that, a throwup? a burner?)

I think the last throw is the best

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 05:42 AM
that two letter throw would make a sick one liner nems. just join the top of the N with the bottom

weldo
01-26-2007, 05:47 AM
FUK i dont know were to post this shit so im doing it here.
revok can someone now please tell em were to put this?
NEMZ man your pieces are good i cant really jusge them as i dont know your style well enough but watevere your doing so far looks good
i call this one PASSION BERRY PUNCH AHA
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6239/imgp0001vj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 06:21 AM
shit colours.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture061.jpg

TricksForKids
01-26-2007, 06:42 AM
near the letters are hot, but i think if you used a fatter outlined youd be able to see em a bit better

Rank keep tweaking those trowups, but they&#39;re lookin pretty cool, just go simpler with the pieces

nemz we both know it aint your best, im in a big slump right now too, but that bottom right throw is sexy

Weldo, keep that style up, it has lots of potential but the letters are still kinda hard to see for me, and the 3D effect you&#39;re goin for isnt really working, plus work on that handstyle

rieserrrr thats hot and sexy and easy to paint...so go paint it, my only suggestion is if you&#39;re going to use quotation marks put them on the other siede as well, and since its a siple but stylish piece, you might wanna keep the E&#39;s the same, i like them both but the i like the capital E more

weldo
01-26-2007, 07:02 AM
3d is fuked aha the whole piece is but meh its for fun.
riser your piece is uite sexual aha but yea we could all go some good coulours all mine ran out n it suks ass

Apoc
01-26-2007, 07:04 AM
very nice rieser

etch a sketch
01-26-2007, 07:26 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Jan 25 2007, 11:47 PM
etch- at first the top one looked pretty good, but as I looked down at the bottom one I realized you still don&#39;t really understand your letters too well, the top one looks like it has some potential but first you gotta learn the structures of your letters, do some simpler work but keep developing the top style also, the letters are pretty bad in the bottom one tho, keep at it tho. You Filipino right?

Apoc- not really feeling the "N" or the "E", the "A" doesn&#39;t need that extra little extension of the left leg and your "N" looks a lot like a "V", at least I think it&#39;s a "N", also the "E" needs some work, it&#39;s not too bad just keep working on it.
ya im filipino :)


nemz - i like ur throws and ur z from the middle piece looks a bit too small :)

weldo - i like the outline and the colours but i don&#39;tlike the streaks they made on the piece. streaks like when the colours dont come out even and then when you color over one spot the colours overlap and all that junk :)

shithead - i like it but couldn&#39;t you have chosen a better colour for the light part where the light&#39;s supposed to shine or watever? :blink: :)

nemzone
01-26-2007, 08:03 AM
yeh thnx guys, the middle one was just a freestyle lol, so its pretty poor. the only thing i remotely like is the bottom throw. but each sketch improves my skills, so just keepin on keepin on

ries, i love the sketches of urs. all 2 that i can remember lol, but they good. only thing i can say is when doin a word with 2 of the same letter in, make them as identical as u possibly can. iv not seen a piece where it looks good when they completely different.. any1 feel free to prove me wrong lol.

tricks, u still owe me a piece fella :P unless u posted it and i missed it?

nickstix
01-26-2007, 09:24 AM
weldo...i cant really crit you so i really like your style its differnet

ries...work on the 3d b/c u only put 3d along the outsida and filled in the middle, the 3d goes on the inside of the letters too

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sak.png
bump, i know funny name im changin it back so sar but i&#39;d like to get a couple more crits, tell me where i can improve

Skesh
01-26-2007, 10:24 AM
Yo its looks pretty nice, I like the piece and the charac


This is my first attempt at arrows
please dont say &#39;you&#39;re not ready for arrows yet&#39; cause nobody will make perfect arrows the first time

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/Scan0001.jpg

i dont know what wrong with my scanner, cuz the S and the E were like Lemon-yellow. The forcefield is orange.. strange
peace

edit: can somebody tell me what &#39;Sear&#39; means? lol. I cant find it in a dictionary, I read this word one time and thought it was pretty cool to write :lol:

nemzone
01-26-2007, 10:33 AM
would help if the arrows were connected to the letters. and NEVER do an arrow off the end of a letter likeu did on the S.

ASB_ONE
01-26-2007, 10:39 AM
thers no point to your arrows, they dont add to the flow and just &#39;appear&#39; from the letters.

Skesh
01-26-2007, 10:44 AM
Ok and what about the letters?
I like m

the 3d looks cool too, I was just messing around with the black, came out pretty good

shamee1991
01-26-2007, 11:00 AM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/528/1003bb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

lastest one i&#39;ve done.
crits?>

nickstix
01-26-2007, 11:02 AM
shame...im not really any good at that 3-d but from i can see it looks good

sear...definatly work on your letters, the structure is good in all but in some areas they just dont flow right. for the middle bar on the a dont let the lines overlap into the other bars b/c it dosent look right, dont think you have to do arrows anyway personally i think theyre outplayed alittle.heres something u might want to try, take your handy and basically phatten the letters so that its a piece.

Fluffy Bunnies
01-26-2007, 11:15 AM
daaaaaaamn shamee, I never really seen an up to date sketch from you, and that looks like it has potential. If you make it the right colors, but the only thing wrong with it is that I don&#39;t really see letters.

8/10 for not being colorded.

shamee1991
01-26-2007, 11:19 AM
hahaaa. it says ast

nemzone
01-26-2007, 11:24 AM
feelin the A, not feelin the ST tho. work on the S and redo the T altogether. the big arrows be distracting tho.

Skesh
01-26-2007, 11:44 AM
Originally posted by nickstix@Jan 26 2007, 12:02 PM
shame...im not really any good at that 3-d but from i can see it looks good

sear...definatly work on your letters, the structure is good in all but in some areas they just dont flow right. for the middle bar on the a dont let the lines overlap into the other bars b/c it dosent look right, dont think you have to do arrows anyway personally i think theyre outplayed alittle.heres something u might want to try, take your handy and basically phatten the letters so that its a piece.
Thanks, I&#39;m not a big fan of arrows either.
Next time I won&#39;t do arrows

Shamee, its nice man. I dont really feel the S, but the 3d is good

shamee1991
01-26-2007, 12:03 PM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/3695/1003ct1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

in colour

TryingTooHard
01-26-2007, 12:25 PM
anyone wanna do an exchange?

hollar at your boy :lol:

Albert Fish
01-26-2007, 12:28 PM
shame feelin that, the letter structure isnt great but its still clean. itd look better with a thick final outline

Code
01-26-2007, 12:34 PM
Shamee- I actully like that piece, just in my oppinion you should define letters more

Skesh- I actully like the piece, just think you should get rid of the arrows, they seem out of place.



K so here, i am just doin simples like always :rolleyes: you know, trying to get better at using 3d. And probaly going to start experimenting a little :)

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7408/scan0003ir9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3948/scan0002px6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nemzone
01-26-2007, 01:02 PM
top one, u forgot inside the O, and left leg of the N is squint (3d)

2nd down, u forgot inside the C and O, and the top of the N is goin straight down, when it should follow the diagonal

3rd dowm, the top is uneven. it should be parallel with the top of the letters. also forgot inside the O and C

last one sucks completely. letters are wank. you only got the 3d goin to a vp on the N. the A goes to a diff vp, and the rest is inconsistent.

trashhh
01-26-2007, 01:02 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40810.jpg

sketch for a friend.... rockin the new style again

nemzone
01-26-2007, 01:05 PM
i know i shouldnt like this, as theres so many bits id usually hate. but i fucking love this style u got going. looks so sharp and crisp. but id like to see it hand drawn with no rulers. would have a different look to it. do it. ;)

EDIT - the D is too thick, compared to the rest. try sort it out b4 u ink it :P i would anyways

trashhh
01-26-2007, 01:12 PM
I DIDNT USE A RULER&#33;&#33;&#33; I have a steady hand&#33; :D

nemzone
01-26-2007, 01:14 PM
naw u must of lol, the lines go from thicker dark lines, to thin fading lines. if not then props but i think u did :rolleyes: :P

STAR01
01-26-2007, 01:15 PM
i like that sketch above nice work.

trashhh
01-26-2007, 01:17 PM
well ur givin me props cos i swear serioulsy i reallyyyy didnt&#33;&#33; going from thick lines to thin fading out ones i can do with a biro its easy enuf..
look on the line above the N its kinda sloppy i didnt use a ruler at all

NewbyTJ
01-26-2007, 01:18 PM
I got alot of new sketches let me know what you guys think thnx
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture7.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture5.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture4.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture3.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture2.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture1.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture6.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture29.jpg

Sorry my comp dosnt let me put in the Url cause its fuked up aight
any critisme tnx

TryingTooHard
01-26-2007, 01:30 PM
Very nice trash... But I say ruler ;) :lol:

Anyways... crits on the 3-D shadow thing... and the arrows? First sketch with em
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/krum006-1.jpg

Thanks guys

EDIT: The drawing is a trace outta my sketchbook cause I didnt wanna darken it then I wouldnt be able to erase it... I know Im missing some points

ras
01-26-2007, 01:53 PM
Krum...nice basic letters....just fix the R and lose the arrows..i also dont rreally like how the M is megga phat in the middle..

Trash...crisp...clean....sleek....sexy....great... ..sharp.....sweet......icey.......dope......nicey. ...shittys cleany :o

Code...do evrything Nemzinho said....but no offence at all...but conidering the amount of simples youve said youve done...looking at that you dont seem youve progressed...no beef....i maybe wrong... :unsure:

PS...Trash....i belive you didnt use a ruler...because i also have a very steady hand...and i also find it fairly easy to flair off lines like that..

Noddles912300
01-26-2007, 02:03 PM
2 new pictures i made
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/8181/scan0005gu8.jpg
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6323/scan0004yu3.jpg
2nd one is in pencil and the "o" is a bit small.

Trashh im loving the sketch i wish i could draw like that. and Krum only thing i can say is change the R a bit, but thats my opinion

ASB_ONE
01-26-2007, 02:20 PM
trash im not a fan of sharp stuff but that looks ayt.
krum ima do ur piece this weekend or somit. peace

pencil sketch prolly ink it up later:
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0263_000.jpg

meks
01-26-2007, 02:28 PM
Originally posted by shamee1991@Jan 26 2007, 12:00 PM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/528/1003bb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

lastest one i&#39;ve done.
crits?>
i likey

i cant do that shit for shit

TricksForKids
01-26-2007, 02:31 PM
lol...i find it funny how everyone thinks its some sin to use a ruler.

Who cares what you use on paper, i use a ruler for some of my longer 3D lines that stretch to the middle...you guys gunna hate on me now too?, trash dont say you didnt use a ruler, you did, but NO ONE SHOULD CARE, its not like your gunna bust that sketch on a wall, the stuff we do in our blackbooks is graffiti styled, but not graffiti, this originated as PRACTICE for the STREETS, and then turned into just art in a book...so get off the "you use a ruler you&#39;re toy" thats stupid as all hell.

MrQuote
01-26-2007, 02:37 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/0126070948.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/HUG5.jpg



Both done today at work...I&#39;m getting an itchy trigger finger...need to get back out on the streets.

trashhh
01-26-2007, 02:41 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jan 26 2007, 03:31 PM
lol...i find it funny how everyone thinks its some sin to use a ruler.

Who cares what you use on paper, i use a ruler for some of my longer 3D lines that stretch to the middle...you guys gunna hate on me now too?, trash dont say you didnt use a ruler, you did, but NO ONE SHOULD CARE, its not like your gunna bust that sketch on a wall, the stuff we do in our blackbooks is graffiti styled, but not graffiti, this originated as PRACTICE for the STREETS, and then turned into just art in a book...so get off the "you use a ruler you&#39;re toy" thats stupid as all hell.
No. I paint a lot of my sketches unlike a lot of people on this toys forum. I can do long straight lines with paint kinda well i spose.. and i find it easy to do straight lines like that on paper.. if i used a ruler i would have admitted it by now, because of all you guys saying that i did. Youre saying that i definitely did something i didnt, and im really telling the truth in that i didnt use a ruler....
i have sketches like this long straight lines and im going to paint one soon so im going to hav to do very straight lines so i wouldnt use a ruler in a sketch if i cant use a ruler for the real piece...

sema
01-26-2007, 02:43 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/NewImagerd6uru.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/rsthrsthrthrt.jpg

sema
01-26-2007, 02:47 PM
rulers or not its sick trash

TricksForKids
01-26-2007, 03:04 PM
agreed^ you&#39;re not gettin it, how you sketch doesnt help how you paint, end of story.

you can develop letters etc, and ive seen your painted stuff you ahve good can control too, this isnt beef, im just lettin everyone know how i feel about rulers - it isnt "cheating" so put a sock in it

seam thats a cool style, be sick if it was painted huge, just lose some of the random extensions, and try to simplify it a bit

heres some piece of shit that came out after a freestyle in school for the revok battle that i decided to colour, hahaahh its so bad, oh well, a pics a pic eh?
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/1787/revokzc0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sema
01-26-2007, 03:06 PM
im feelin the hand in it though tricks, ill have it paintd real big soon i got a spot for it

trashhh
01-26-2007, 03:12 PM
looks sweet cheers tricks...

dim
01-26-2007, 03:18 PM
siiicck

South-Pole
01-26-2007, 03:30 PM
well now im mad into simples,im getting sick of it lol

dont ask for the 3d its wack and ugly i just made it fast but i can 3d much better,but the important for me in the piece is letter structure

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/Save123.jpg

edit:fuck.my piece is ugly

edit:tricks dope dope dope

edit:sema finally something im feeling nice letters

sorry for bumping crits too late

revolt92
01-26-2007, 03:30 PM
Sema-i&#39;m deffinatley feelin those letters, i prefer the colour in the first one keep it up.
Tricks-Liking the lettering especially the r.

South pole-yeah your right the 3d is kinda strange but nevermind, anyways as for your actual letter structure, i think the middle of the r and o is to big make them smaller, other than that looks good.

Peace

Fluffy Bunnies
01-26-2007, 03:35 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3017.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3020.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3032.jpg

ahahaahahahaha new sketches.

T_R_O_N
01-26-2007, 03:36 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jan 26 2007, 03:31 PM
lol...i find it funny how everyone thinks its some sin to use a ruler.

Who cares what you use on paper, i use a ruler for some of my longer 3D lines that stretch to the middle...you guys gunna hate on me now too?, trash dont say you didnt use a ruler, you did, but NO ONE SHOULD CARE, its not like your gunna bust that sketch on a wall, the stuff we do in our blackbooks is graffiti styled, but not graffiti, this originated as PRACTICE for the STREETS, and then turned into just art in a book...so get off the "you use a ruler you&#39;re toy" thats stupid as all hell.
i agree with this a great deal. I know of people that just have been blessed with really steady hands and can control lines very well to the point where it looks like rulers. A steady hand and time, you can make any sketch look awesome, much props trash.

South-Pole
01-26-2007, 03:36 PM
kk ^thanks

edit:this was for revolt

nemzone
01-26-2007, 03:39 PM
lol this trash using a ruler thing got blown way outa proportion. i dont care if he did or didnt, i think its great with a ruler, gives it a nice effect (or i thought this b4 he sed he never used a ruler) i wasnt tellin him not to use a ruler, i was wanting to see it freehand (again b4 he said it was freehand) bcoz it would of changed the effect of the sketch. but EITHER WAY I LIKE THIS NEW STLYO lol

bawk, its alryt, at least your gettin sketches out lol i cant draw again :(

ras
01-26-2007, 03:41 PM
Fluf...i can work out the top....but are the next 2 chinese or summet....cuz if theys not...i carnt see no structure..

Fluffy Bunnies
01-26-2007, 03:43 PM
dammit, it&#39;s japanese&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; JA PA KNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES&#33;&#33;&#33;

revolt92
01-26-2007, 03:46 PM
I was talking to a japenese guy on xbox live today...well he was saying stuff to me but eeeerrrr i couldn&#39;t understand him.

Fluffy Bunnies
01-26-2007, 03:50 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jan 26 2007, 04:35 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3017.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3020.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3032.jpg

ahahaahahahaha new sketches.
Bump bitches&#33;

dim
01-26-2007, 04:09 PM
[img=http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6017/img0008sp8.th.jpg] (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0008sp8.jpg)

Skesh
01-26-2007, 04:10 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 26 2007, 03:20 PM
trash im not a fan of sharp stuff but that looks ayt.
krum ima do ur piece this weekend or somit. peace

pencil sketch prolly ink it up later:
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0263_000.jpg
Damn I fucking love your style

props

Fluffy Bunnies, I don&#39;t know about the lines between the A and the K, but it looks nice.

Edit: wtf, it doesnt say A=K? is it japanese?

dim
01-26-2007, 04:11 PM
crits ^

South-Pole
01-26-2007, 04:12 PM
crit other people before asking for crits

Skesh
01-26-2007, 04:15 PM
I did, I wrote it in the quote field accidentally lol

South-Pole
01-26-2007, 04:18 PM
nm i thought dim was talking about his work

Doza
01-26-2007, 04:39 PM
Does anybody have special nibs they use for them sketches?

nase7
01-26-2007, 04:41 PM
nice sketch ASB jus get abit of ink on that.
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/1388/dsc00097ut7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

quik straight pen sketch 4 ma girl ;) crits?

ras
01-26-2007, 04:53 PM
EVERONE ON THIS PAGE...READ THE YELLOW IN MY SIG...FFS....SPEACIALLY FLUFF..

Sumoe
01-26-2007, 04:55 PM
it&#39;s bad to be honest, not really feelin the letters, what does it say? "CMI"? it&#39;s pretty bad just do simples for now.

nase7
01-26-2007, 04:58 PM
It says AMI cuz its her name.

Sumoe
01-26-2007, 05:00 PM
looks kinda like a "C" work on you letter structure, and as I said before do simples, jus trying to help don&#39;t gotta take my advice.

alera
01-26-2007, 05:15 PM
Originally posted by meks+Jan 26 2007, 03:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (meks @ Jan 26 2007, 03:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shamee1991@Jan 26 2007, 12:00 PM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/528/1003bb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

lastest one i&#39;ve done.
crits?>
i likey

i cant do that shit for shit [/b][/quote]
love this style... wish i could do 3d ish :angry:

NASE sorry man but do block letters for a little bit not hatin just know from experence



little bit diferent style
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/3896/0126071807lu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Critz ? ;)

NewbyTJ
01-26-2007, 05:53 PM
Skesh your shit lookin good im luvin ur Caser
keep up your letter style has deffinitly gotten better

Skesh
01-26-2007, 05:55 PM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Jan 26 2007, 06:53 PM
Skesh your shit lookin good im luvin ur Caser
keep up your letter style has deffinitly gotten better
Lol
I didn&#39;t made that, I quoted it

but thanks ;) :D

ASB_ONE
01-26-2007, 06:01 PM
yeh that was my sketch lol, here it is inkd:

alera keep that shit up man looking good.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0267_000.jpg

dim
01-26-2007, 06:47 PM
bump

TryingTooHard
01-26-2007, 06:49 PM
Ok caser.. its cool... no rush

1 question for all. How the hell do you guys colorsIm gettin tired of the black outline and shit. you guys just experiment? or color the letter then the outline then the sheild? Already checked the "colors" forum, and they just have color suggestions...

And yes I know how to color :lol:

Skeam
01-26-2007, 06:54 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 25 2007, 08:15 AM
i went down to sydney for a week and did 3 sketches haha a poor attempt i know but owell. the throwys were pretty poo but owell.

EDIT: Just seen that revok one, its alot better but still seems to lack letter structure i nsome parts thats why u should do a few simples. dont stop what your doin but just do some simpels too.

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/1258/hpim28952lj.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7223/hpim28948wd.jpg
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5922/hpim28962kf.jpg
Bumpin from a while back.

Cheers

Cases im lovin your shit man its deffinetly progressing no doubt just keep doin what your doin ay.

fredom-writer
01-26-2007, 07:11 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

dim
01-26-2007, 07:14 PM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9577/img0008ys4.jpg
crits^

Skeam
01-26-2007, 07:23 PM
fuck its mad being ignored ay.

TryingTooHard
01-26-2007, 07:23 PM
NESK - hot shit.. i think I crited you awhile back who knows good shit bro

FREDOM - I like the green upper right hand one... and the cracked out karak, not a fan of trhwoies

DIM - Does that say "wow this sucks and I need to go simple?" or does it say "I think I better start with block letters?" I sure as hell can read it..... do simples dont worry about coloring

I took RAS Advice and fixed the "R" and took em off
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/krum006-2.jpg

CRITS and COLORS Welcomed :D

TESTER
01-26-2007, 07:23 PM
©http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/MyPicture-1-3.jpg
©http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/MyPicture-1-1.jpg
©http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/MyPicture-2.jpg

some shits from work while i was board

whynot?
01-26-2007, 07:29 PM
kspy i like the throwies

dim...ew nah go simple

Stinky
01-26-2007, 07:30 PM
Good golly Miss Molly. Dim it seems that you forced the production of it to hard. Please do not take me for an ass, but it really lacks basic letter structure, that if executed properly would make for an overall better piece. There also seems to be to much going on for the fill. Try using only a couple colours that compliment each other. Again please do not get angered I just think you are jumping the gun. Keep practicing. I can tell that you have potential. and those crazy fills will look really interesting later on. Hope this helps.

C3ZR ONE
01-26-2007, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 26 2007, 05:45 AM
rank, u got a few nice throws. no comment on the pieces. 2nd throw down with no exclamation mark would be nice.

near, i like the top 1 more than the 2nd one. fill is too busy for my liking.

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/2317/imag0011rp2.jpg

few pieces of shit, dont have the drive to draw i usually do <_<
Sorry for not criting the rest of you, but I really wanted to bump this. Nemz- that throwie on the bottom is really good&#33; The N and the M could be just a tiny bit more defined, but it looks great&#33;

Fixion
01-26-2007, 07:49 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9800/natrapiece3sr6.png
I know the drop shadow is way off at some points but I just did this quickly
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7784/yvonnesketchcensdu0.png
Sketch for my girl.

ASB_ONE-I love your letters, pretty old school lookin.
Skeam-Nice stuff. Color them in&#33; I bet they&#39;ll look ill. And awesome throwie.
fredom-writer-All of your throws are awesome but work on the one in the middle. Connect the P and lose some of those extensions on that S.
dim-Simples&#33;
TryingTooHard-I&#39;m feelin it but lose the extension on the U.
TESTER-Simples&#33; And keep workin on the bird. I bet it would make a sick charac
NEMZ-Those throwies are so awesome. The N got me. Put some of them up and take a pic.

Crits?

Gist
01-26-2007, 07:52 PM
Krum- ur shit is improving good work

dim-that shit is wack the leter structure is horrible and the colour job u did makes it imposible to read that shit, "kicks ur ass back to the section where the kids play with "block leters"

freedome-definitly feelin ur bottom throwie nice shit

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan-2.jpg

Tryna get straight lines its gona take some work lol n my sharpie black i used for the shadow bled like hell critz

Fixion
01-26-2007, 07:56 PM
Originally posted by Fixion@Jan 26 2007, 08:49 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9800/natrapiece3sr6.png
I know the drop shadow is way off at some points but I just did this quickly
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7784/yvonnesketchcensdu0.png
Sketch for my girl.

ASB_ONE-I love your letters, pretty old school lookin.
Skeam-Nice stuff. Color them in&#33; I bet they&#39;ll look ill. And awesome throwie.
fredom-writer-All of your throws are awesome but work on the one in the middle. Connect the P and lose some of those extensions on that S.
dim-Simples&#33;
TryingTooHard-I&#39;m feelin it but lose the extension on the U.
TESTER-Simples&#33; And keep workin on the bird. I bet it would make a sick charac
NEMZ-Those throwies are so awesome. The N got me. Put some of them up and take a pic.

Crits?
Bump to new page.

Gist-Nice letters. You got the drop shadow right. Keep it up

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 07:57 PM
for colours look at this. what I do is for multicoloured fills i choose three shades of one colour or something similar that goes together (has to be similar) and make a pattern out of em. then for background forcefield choose a shade of colour directly opposite side of the colour wheel from the fill. just fuck around. look at other peoples shit to get ideas

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/colour_wheel1.jpg

this is the best fill ive ever been bothered to do i think. letters arent the best coz its old

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/untitled.jpg

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 07:58 PM
actually fuk that. just look at those colours and fuck around. i reckon the human brain already knows what goes together so use your head&#33;

MrQuote
01-26-2007, 08:00 PM
Originally posted by MrQuote@Jan 26 2007, 03:37 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/0126070948.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v696/RockRiot/HUG5.jpg



Both done today at work...I&#39;m getting an itchy trigger finger...need to get back out on the streets.
Any more ideas/crits?


And Tester, I&#39;m feeling that purple and white one a lot. Maybe make the letters a little more easy to read. You are definately onto something.

Fixion
01-26-2007, 08:01 PM
shithead onerzzzz, No crits for us, no crits for you. Unless you were helpin us with the color wheel thing. Ehhh.

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 08:06 PM
i WAS helping you with the colour wheel. and i didnt ask for critz i was ust showing you something

noam12
01-26-2007, 08:07 PM
shithead-lmfao i think my eyes are bleeding, so bright

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 08:09 PM
LOL&#33; what can i say i enjoy hot pink haha. never on clothes tho, no pink shirts&#33;

Fixion
01-26-2007, 08:10 PM
sorry for this misunderstandin :D

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 08:12 PM
lol dw

Kore123
01-26-2007, 08:38 PM
wow i havent posted any pics in like a month...i havent even sketched anything in like a month so heres my first in a while for some reason i feel its better than my old stuff comments and crits please

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3554/picture011hl6.jpg

mrquote....i like the bottom one thats black and red i dont like the fill on the other one

shithead.....thats some good shit

fixion.....i like your style

TryingTooHard
01-26-2007, 08:39 PM
hey shithead&#33; :lol: I like that pink yellow and gray... what you use bro? Sharpies :blink:

EDIT: KORE - Not feeling th "O" and the size of the "R" where it connects... P.S: Smoking is bad :angry:

noam12
01-26-2007, 08:43 PM
kore-nice letters, cigs bleh. what 5-6 butts in there lol?

etch a sketch
01-26-2007, 08:43 PM
Kore your o doesnt fit in with the rest of the letters

shithead onerzzzz
01-26-2007, 08:50 PM
tryingtoohard i use these markers called twintouch. pretty much like copics but i can get them 3 for &#036;10 aus. i cant rack them coz i only know one store that has them and theyre next to the counter lol

Kore123
01-26-2007, 08:50 PM
hhaha thanks for the crits guys and thats not mine i dont smoke its my brothers but yeah i cant think of any ideas for the o but i still think its better than my other work before

Kore123
01-26-2007, 08:51 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Jan 26 2007, 09:38 PM
wow i havent posted any pics in like a month...i havent even sketched anything in like a month so heres my first in a while for some reason i feel its better than my old stuff comments and crits please

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3554/picture011hl6.jpg

mrquote....i like the bottom one thats black and red i dont like the fill on the other one

shithead.....thats some good shit

fixion.....i like your style
sorry but it was at the bottom of the page...... i had to

Fixion
01-26-2007, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by Fixion@Jan 26 2007, 08:49 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9800/natrapiece3sr6.png
I know the drop shadow is way off at some points but I just did this quickly
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7784/yvonnesketchcensdu0.png
Sketch for my girl.

ASB_ONE-I love your letters, pretty old school lookin.
Skeam-Nice stuff. Color them in&#33; I bet they&#39;ll look ill. And awesome throwie.
fredom-writer-All of your throws are awesome but work on the one in the middle. Connect the P and lose some of those extensions on that S.
dim-Simples&#33;
TryingTooHard-I&#39;m feelin it but lose the extension on the U.
TESTER-Simples&#33; And keep workin on the bird. I bet it would make a sick charac
NEMZ-Those throwies are so awesome. The N got me. Put some of them up and take a pic.

Crits?
Can I get some more crits eh?

Kore-Start a little more simpler. Your K bothers me. Just keep it simple and you got it.

TryingTooHard
01-26-2007, 09:06 PM
ok.. I got a shitload of prismas and sharpies... when it comes to coloring i just dont have imagination :( haha

Nice penguin karak ;)

inkbits
01-26-2007, 09:16 PM
Your letters are on the right track Fixion just need a bit of reforming. Maybe try to squash them a little mre horizontally so the centre gaps aren&#39;t as large, if that makes sense. Penguin is a good concept for a charicter.

Here&#39;s some work in progress for revok battle. Lined it in while having a few beers lastnight and looking at it this morning I&#39;m not overly happy with the structure, mainly the bottom right which isn&#39;t meshing as well as I woulda liked <_<.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9583040.jpg

dim
01-26-2007, 09:41 PM
thats sick i rele like the characater

ASB_ONE
01-26-2007, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by Skeam+Jan 26 2007, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skeam &#064; Jan 26 2007, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Jan 25 2007, 08:15 AM
i went down to sydney for a week and did 3 sketches haha a poor attempt i know but owell. the throwys were pretty poo but owell.

EDIT: Just seen that revok one, its alot better but still seems to lack letter structure i nsome parts thats why u should do a few simples. dont stop what your doin but just do some simpels too.

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/1258/hpim28952lj.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7223/hpim28948wd.jpg
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5922/hpim28962kf.jpg
[/b][/quote]
bump this im liking it.
inkbits, u kno that shits dope man&#33;

whahappen?
01-26-2007, 09:53 PM
inkbits thats sweet
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3914/picture051ef2.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5663/picture050bt6.jpg
za throw

RustyBurrito
01-26-2007, 09:59 PM
I dig the first one, the second one though...meh

etch a sketch
01-26-2007, 10:09 PM
to me that looks soooooooooo slopy .. lose the extension on the k and next time just put the forcefield/outline around the letters and actauuly touching em..not to be an asshole or whtever but to me thats a waste of prismas.. :blink:

whahappen - i like ur z it&#39;s unique ive never seen it before..:)

inkbits - thats dope and you know it:)

fixion - i like ur letter structures and clean up and put like an outline on the first piece :)

nesk - i love those your style looks sick to me i adore it :lol:

whahappen?
01-26-2007, 10:11 PM
haha thanks thats what i was going for and the bottom i fucked up but i like my a alot...yea
rusty start from simples

uhhh
01-26-2007, 10:14 PM
Originally posted by RustyBurrito@Jan 26 2007, 10:59 PM
I dig the first one, the second one though...meh


http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/7223/slink1ph1.jpg
I Should have used lighter colors or something I know but I was experimenting with my new prismacolors. It says SLINK
buying really nice markers does NOT make you better.
I want prismas, I have black sharpies, a dying gray crayola and 3 red, 1 black, and 1 white paint markers.
NO FAIRRRR.
but really, that sucks. really bad.
do simples, block letters. like this: S L I N K, just bigger.
im inking a "cez" sketch for cezr.
cezr, if i dont think this sucks horribly, you might be luicky and ill send you two stickers.. you still need to pm me back thoughhh.

dim
01-26-2007, 10:20 PM
i thinkn the peice would have looked alot better if it didnt have all of the arrows flying out every where

uhhh
01-26-2007, 10:22 PM
itd look better if he understood the basics of letters.
once you do that you can have as many arrows as you want.
kinda.
well, if your labrat at least..

dim
01-26-2007, 10:24 PM
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/7071/img0019pd3.jpg
this is just a little peice that i have been working on i still need to finish off my 3d and figure out some color&#39;s for the peice
crits please :D

etch a sketch
01-26-2007, 10:34 PM
umm well not really likin it. my advice is keep it simple.. try block letters..

RustyBurrito
01-26-2007, 10:43 PM
dim, I agree with etch a sketch. Keep it more simple.

dim
01-26-2007, 10:46 PM
yeah it looks alot better like that B)

fredom-writer
01-26-2007, 10:48 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

RustyBurrito
01-26-2007, 10:49 PM
I&#39;m so confused&#33;

whynot?
01-26-2007, 10:49 PM
^^both of u go simpilr

rusty try making ur lines thicker but still go simple

dim
01-26-2007, 10:51 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9720/img0182ah4.jpg
is this a little bit more simple

RustyBurrito
01-26-2007, 10:54 PM
Nice. The 3d kinda looks weird in a few spots but other then that it&#39;s not bad. Some of the lines kinda look weird to me too towards the bottom. Personally I would just lose some of those extensions towards the bottom.

mag.oner
01-26-2007, 10:55 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/4c8x3qw.jpg

throwie ...

RustyBurrito
01-26-2007, 11:00 PM
Letters need more definitionand less blobness. Stick so some simpler bubbles and just take it from there.

etch a sketch
01-26-2007, 11:10 PM
mag no crits for u since u don&#39;t crit anyone&#33;&#33; <_<

uhhh
01-26-2007, 11:20 PM
stop no.
no no no.
thats not good,
and its not simple,
it has bad structure, if you can even say that, and is too complex.
write your word like T H I S. the letters on your keyboard, BOTH of you.

mag-you too. your trying to strech your letters and such but you cant yet, it looks bad.

mag.oner
01-26-2007, 11:23 PM
why yes, i shall crit more often ;), aighty lets see

Dim - Yuor structuring is madd jagged and not the same in all 3 letters, try to keep your structure fluent throughout DIM. Your letters are ehhh, to cramped and your color is too complex, keep it simple, too much neons give people headaches @-@

RustyBurrito - The style is there, but i feel like theres something missing when i look at it, maybe the fact that its too skinny ?... try to fatten up the letters, it will touch up the look a bit, and throw some color in it :)

mag.oner
01-26-2007, 11:25 PM
another throwie.

i know it sloppy, its late... :lol:


http://i14.tinypic.com/2vl1bah.jpg

RustyBurrito
01-26-2007, 11:39 PM
I see zero letter structure in there. Tone it down

whahappen?
01-26-2007, 11:52 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 26 2007, 10:53 PM
inkbits thats sweet
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3914/picture051ef2.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5663/picture050bt6.jpg
za throw
dude above me i have no clue what that says

Rank!
01-27-2007, 12:00 AM
yo &#33; I tried to improve my throwie...give me crits on which one you like
ThankS&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/throwie.jpg
Yo i also need you guys to tell me besides the crapy highlighter fill whats wrong with the letter structure in this...
my first sketched peice...
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/surgerank.jpg

RustyBurrito
01-27-2007, 12:16 AM
The 3d is really off in the last one...might just be me though.

Slushi
01-27-2007, 12:17 AM
The throws are decent. The piece has nice colors but go simple. Don&#39;t overlap your 3d.

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/7697/picture123fo7.jpg
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4169/picture122ez5.jpg
crits.

sheist
01-27-2007, 12:18 AM
Originally posted by Rank&#33;@Jan 27 2007, 01:00 AM
yo &#33; I tried to improve my throwie...give me crits on which one you like
ThankS&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/throwie.jpg
Yo i also need you guys to tell me besides the crapy highlighter fill whats wrong with the letter structure in this...
my first sketched peice...
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/surgerank.jpg
i def think the bottom one is a huge improvement

keep up the work

http://i14.tinypic.com/449u9lj.jpg

not much of anything, just a new throwie for a new name and im just seeing how the general idea blows over with you guys

Rank!
01-27-2007, 12:36 AM
i think that shit will look good if you can canstantly keep the same widths in the letters and the same character faces


_slushi the top one looks like it would be real tight but i cant see it too well..blurry pic

C3ZR ONE
01-27-2007, 12:40 AM
Rank- Like I said before, the throwies are alright, as far as the pieces structure, if you go back to blocks and simples, you&#39;ll understand the structure of the letters you&#39;re trying to use so much better and then you&#39;ll understand why the structure an flow of that kinda....sucks. The blue piece is alright. The colored piece is just a mess. Give crits before asking for them. ;)

Shiest- not much to say about it. It&#39;s not terrible, but it just seems kinda generic, like most of the throwies you see in here. Throwies are difficult, and it&#39;s hard to get one with a real signature flavor that&#39;s all your own, but that&#39;s what you want to try to acheive.

Whahappen- read the above post... I personally think you&#39;re a nice guy and a pretty good member, but I&#39;d really like to see you go all out and put some real effort into a sketch. So much of what I see from you looks the same. Keep at it tho. You&#39;ll get there. ;)

Slushie- I like your style. I wish like hell you didn&#39;t have the worlds worst digital camera so I could actually see these flicks.. :lol:



Overall the last couple pages have been lookin kinda rugged.. Lets step it up guys. Push yourselves hard and see what you can come up with....

Inkbits- that doesn&#39;t apply to you. Your shit is hot.



So Ceezah, whacha been up to?
Oh, just a bunch of mediocre crap myself.. I&#39;m kind of at a stuck point, and trying really hard to get out of the slump... :( Here&#39;s what I got....

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/192/im000550ej5.jpg
One for the Inkster... :wub:


http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5128/im000556bx8.jpg

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/609/im000555cw1.jpg
I&#39;m not even coloring this crap in... <_<

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/2301/im000554ul5.jpg

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5981/im000552vz4.jpg
unadulterated wackness...

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6774/im000551ej6.jpg

s&#39;all I got... :(

Gist
01-27-2007, 12:51 AM
Originally posted by Gist@Jan 26 2007, 08:52 PM
Krum- ur shit is improving good work

dim-that shit is wack the leter structure is horrible and the colour job u did makes it imposible to read that shit, "kicks ur ass back to the section where the kids play with "block leters"

freedome-definitly feelin ur bottom throwie nice shit

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan-2.jpg

Tryna get straight lines its gona take some work lol n my sharpie black i used for the shadow bled like hell critz
i gave critz never got n e. Critz plzz

etch a sketch
01-27-2007, 01:12 AM
Yea you did gist u got crits when you posted that up by someone on the next page or the page you posted that on.. and like i said before.. ur lines seem shaky..

damn.. i can&#39;t see c3zr&#39;s pics..

edit: nvm i can see em :lol:

1st pic - is it "inko&#33;"? i can&#39;t really see right now since im tired..

2nd pic - the fill ins are cool :) but for th amuin piece i think the i&#39;s too big? ah well its good :)

3rd pic - i like the throwie but for the piece at the bottom, the c&#39;s add&#39;on looks like it raises the c so the c looks a ltitle small.. its good too though :)

4th pic - i&#39;m feelin it but why no color?

5th pic - i like ur letter structure and the one letter with a pink for the fill in is pretty cool and i like ur outline/forceifeld thingy.. :D

6th pic - likin it but it feels like the i&#39;s gettin squished? i dono maybe its just me :lol:

Albert Fish
01-27-2007, 01:27 AM
Originally posted by inkbits@Jan 26 2007, 10:16 PM
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9583040.jpg
bump inkbits your style is ill

shithead onerzzzz
01-27-2007, 04:03 AM
INKBITS/CEZR: your stuff is real dope loving the colours on yours cezr especially.

RANK: i like the ideas you have for your throws. on the second sketch try to define the letters more on the bottom of the R, N, K. just make the legs of these letters like the A and that shit will flow good.

this is my throw, it looks quick and yucky but you get the idea. i designed it like 6months ago and i havent really got crits. tell me what you think

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/CIMG0526.jpg

shithead onerzzzz
01-27-2007, 04:03 AM
double post

nemzone
01-27-2007, 04:34 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish+Jan 27 2007, 07:27 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Albert Fish @ Jan 27 2007, 07:27 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-inkbits@Jan 26 2007, 10:16 PM
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9583040.jpg
bump inkbits your style is ill [/b][/quote]
i second that. theres new favourits poppin up all over the toy forum lately :wub:

minor crimes
01-27-2007, 04:43 AM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE+Jan 26 2007, 10:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASB_ONE @ Jan 26 2007, 10:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 26 2007, 07:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Jan 25 2007, 08:15 AM
i went down to sydney for a week and did 3 sketches haha a poor attempt i know but owell. the throwys were pretty poo but owell.

EDIT: Just seen that revok one, its alot better but still seems to lack letter structure i nsome parts thats why u should do a few simples. dont stop what your doin but just do some simpels too.

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/1258/hpim28952lj.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7223/hpim28948wd.jpg
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5922/hpim28962kf.jpg

bump this im liking it.
inkbits, u kno that shits dope man&#33; [/b][/quote]
yeah nesk. how did ya find sydney aye? nice meetin up wit u ladske. neways how was down south in ur comps ???? thanks for da hit ups n yeah mad sketches. like the second one all good too

Skeam
01-27-2007, 05:02 AM
cheers mate spewin we couldnt paint haha... i woulda been so fuct if i hadnt of gotten a lift home lol. went mad in the comps you already know that so yeh sick maaaate, getsome of ya sketches up bitch.

weldo
01-27-2007, 06:24 AM
nesk you australian? man you got frsh and lovely pieces there.
heres mine to tierd to colour.
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3986/imgp0002og2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Skeam
01-27-2007, 07:07 AM
yeh mate pure aussie hahaha. im doin somethi ndifferent at the moment, just goin overboard with addons and seein how it turns out. ill post when im done.

shithead onerzzzz
01-27-2007, 07:40 AM
AUSSIE REPN&#33;

krazzie_ammo
01-27-2007, 09:25 AM
o my golly gosh, that inkbits sketch is fireee :)

NESK - looks good, maybe bring the the K a bit closer in with the rest of the letters and add a bit of colour. maybe just block colours with a nice thick black outline.

WELDO - i really like that REVOK sketch, its a nice unique style. clean up the karak and it would look reall nice.

heres a semi-pen freestyle.

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/6374/98vx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

uhhh
01-27-2007, 09:29 AM
craze very nice.
but that bar under the r could mistake it for a c.

GOD DAMNIT.
I don&#39;t thnik ill be ableto post picture about ever.
my camera wont work.
it uses a floppy disc instead of a card or upload cord, and it keeps saying disc error, or once i try and upload it says it needds formatted.
A FLOPPY DISC DOES NOT NEED FORMATTED MORE THEN ONCE&#33; :(

krazzie_ammo
01-27-2007, 09:32 AM
lol, that always happened with my memory card, just buy a new one....floppy discs are like 25p mate :P

uhhh
01-27-2007, 09:40 AM
i have like 50 billion laying around.
i used one yesterday, it had like 5 pictures adn they usually holdaround 50.
today,
no worky.
buut, heres recent stuff:
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-054S-2.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-028S-1.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-035S-1.jpg
if anyone wants to trade stickers.
that be really really awesome.
id be happy to do that 3-dish block style, or the wilder one, which is a little more sorted now.

ASB_ONE
01-27-2007, 09:41 AM
kraze that shits lookin much better man far more refreshing than ur other stuf keep workin on that style bro

T45K
01-27-2007, 09:43 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 27 2007, 01:40 AM
Rank- Like I said before, the throwies are alright, as far as the pieces structure, if you go back to blocks and simples, you&#39;ll understand the structure of the letters you&#39;re trying to use so much better and then you&#39;ll understand why the structure an flow of that kinda....sucks. The blue piece is alright. The colored piece is just a mess. Give crits before asking for them. ;)

Shiest- not much to say about it. It&#39;s not terrible, but it just seems kinda generic, like most of the throwies you see in here. Throwies are difficult, and it&#39;s hard to get one with a real signature flavor that&#39;s all your own, but that&#39;s what you want to try to acheive.

Whahappen- read the above post... I personally think you&#39;re a nice guy and a pretty good member, but I&#39;d really like to see you go all out and put some real effort into a sketch. So much of what I see from you looks the same. Keep at it tho. You&#39;ll get there. ;)

Slushie- I like your style. I wish like hell you didn&#39;t have the worlds worst digital camera so I could actually see these flicks.. :lol:



Overall the last couple pages have been lookin kinda rugged.. Lets step it up guys. Push yourselves hard and see what you can come up with....

Inkbits- that doesn&#39;t apply to you. Your shit is hot.



So Ceezah, whacha been up to?
Oh, just a bunch of mediocre crap myself.. I&#39;m kind of at a stuck point, and trying really hard to get out of the slump... :( Here&#39;s what I got....

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/192/im000550ej5.jpg
One for the Inkster... :wub:


http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5128/im000556bx8.jpg

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/609/im000555cw1.jpg
I&#39;m not even coloring this crap in... <_<

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/2301/im000554ul5.jpg

http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5981/im000552vz4.jpg
unadulterated wackness...

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6774/im000551ej6.jpg

s&#39;all I got... :(
.what are you coloring these with.... Deco&#39;s?????
I don&#39;t think you need any crits either, you know this shits hot...

krazzie_ammo
01-27-2007, 09:48 AM
yo UHHH - i dont wanna exchange slaps but i would be happy for just a normal exchange?

CEZR - theres one pet hate about your work...the colouring is fresh but, i guess its just me but you have a block style but they you have wavy bits coming of the letters to the side of the page which i aint really feeling. but i really am feeling the inko piece. fresh coloursss baby (Y)

uhhh
01-27-2007, 09:57 AM
i say sticker trade because i have no way of posting picks right now.
with stickers, you can send them to each other.
then they could post the pick for me. :P

TricksForKids
01-27-2007, 10:14 AM
weldo keep developing that style, its gunna get there homie

craze i like that shit man, keep it up, and i like the "messyness" of it too

uhhh- i like your crazy own style more than the 3D stuff, just ADD 3D damnnit&#33;

cexr mmm with the freshness, loving the thick black outlines, i cant pull that shit off, letters are too skinny, but its looking sick boss

revok---remix...

yeah the highlights on my O are fucked...oh well

http://img308.imageshack.us/img308/2083/revokkqy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hask420
01-27-2007, 11:13 AM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/3663/haskwildba6.jpg


help&#33; this is only my 3rd or 4th wildstyle..and its not too wild
critz please

..SmOeK 1..
01-27-2007, 11:41 AM
Hask - Go simplier with ur letters, they all look off.

Tricks- That looks pretty sick, i really like the O idea.

Cezr - No need crits, u know ur shits slammin. Also curious on what markers you use.

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/7387/frame00112xz0.th.png (http://img258.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00112xz0.png)

Need alot of help on 3D any crits/commets/tips?

Fixion
01-27-2007, 11:52 AM
Originally posted by Fixion@Jan 26 2007, 08:49 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9800/natrapiece3sr6.png
I know the drop shadow is way off at some points but I just did this quickly
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7784/yvonnesketchcensdu0.png
Sketch for my girl.

ASB_ONE-I love your letters, pretty old school lookin.
Skeam-Nice stuff. Color them in&#33; I bet they&#39;ll look ill. And awesome throwie.
fredom-writer-All of your throws are awesome but work on the one in the middle. Connect the P and lose some of those extensions on that S.
dim-Simples&#33;
TryingTooHard-I&#39;m feelin it but lose the extension on the U.
TESTER-Simples&#33; And keep workin on the bird. I bet it would make a sick charac
NEMZ-Those throwies are so awesome. The N got me. Put some of them up and take a pic.

Crits?
Bump Bump

uhhh - Love your style. I dont see anything wrong with it. Turn the second one into a piece&#33;

C3ZR ONE - I freakin love your fills&#33; It&#39;s so mesmerizing. Wanna exchange? I write NATRA.

TricksForKids - That&#39;s awesome, but I think it would be better to have the V overlap the O instead of the O looking all squashed in there.

Hask420 and ..SmOeK 1.. - Simples as everybody says.

Linkzone1
01-27-2007, 11:53 AM
Originally posted by Skeam+Jan 26 2007, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skeam @ Jan 26 2007, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Jan 25 2007, 08:15 AM
i went down to sydney for a week and did 3 sketches haha a poor attempt i know but owell. the throwys were pretty poo but owell.

EDIT: Just seen that revok one, its alot better but still seems to lack letter structure i nsome parts thats why u should do a few simples. dont stop what your doin but just do some simpels too.

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/1258/hpim28952lj.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7223/hpim28948wd.jpg
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5922/hpim28962kf.jpg
Bumpin from a while back.

Cheers

Cases im lovin your shit man its deffinetly progressing no doubt just keep doin what your doin ay. [/b][/quote]
This is the best stuff I think I might have ever seen in the toy forum.

Linkzone1
01-27-2007, 11:58 AM
Originally posted by dim@Jan 26 2007, 11:51 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9720/img0182ah4.jpg
is this a little bit more simple
Start ALLL over. You&#39;re moving in the wrong direction. You can&#39;t do stuff like this without letter stucture. You&#39;ll realize that in about 4-6 months when you catch on and you&#39;ll be like. Damn they were right. At least thats the way I was.

..SmOeK 1..
01-27-2007, 12:10 PM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3053/frame00114cg4.th.png (http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00114cg4.png)

Went abit simplier i guess, tried copying the Keyboard like everyone says :P

Still need help with shading , any suggestions on that?

ASB_ONE
01-27-2007, 12:14 PM
yeh links is right on the button there.

tricks- looks ayt man but aint as good as ur other shit by a long way

smoek keep doin simples man ull get ur shit together soon.

fucd the R but its in pencil so ill fix it up soon.
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0269_000.jpg

STAR01
01-27-2007, 12:19 PM
Originally posted by Linkzone1+Jan 27 2007, 07:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Linkzone1 @ Jan 27 2007, 07:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 26 2007, 07:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Jan 25 2007, 08:15 AM
i went down to sydney for a week and did 3 sketches haha a poor attempt i know but owell. the throwys were pretty poo but owell.

EDIT: Just seen that revok one, its alot better but still seems to lack letter structure i nsome parts thats why u should do a few simples. dont stop what your doin but just do some simpels too.

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/1258/hpim28952lj.jpg
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7223/hpim28948wd.jpg
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5922/hpim28962kf.jpg
Bumpin from a while back.

Cheers

Cases im lovin your shit man its deffinetly progressing no doubt just keep doin what your doin ay.
This is the best stuff I think I might have ever seen in the toy forum. [/b][/quote]
nice work, props for that handstyle :P

Fosale!
01-27-2007, 12:19 PM
heres the 1st copy of my i love lyfe piece with the extension left in and badly colored. im gonna do the one without the bar in good coloring. sorry the picture is in such high brightness:0(
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/1.jpg
this was my quick pencil sketch for my old exchange with seaz
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/3.jpg
and heres an old old sketch for a roller.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2.jpg

Darthjader
01-27-2007, 12:23 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8530/jan270002nl4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
hey guys im new to the forums but ive been viewing this site for awhile crits please. i would crit other people but i dont have alot of input considering im pretty toy.

ASB_ONE
01-27-2007, 12:26 PM
hey man, welcome.
well pretty much everyone will say do simples and wat they mean by that is simple letters as u would copy from your keyboard.

as u copy these letters look at how the &#39;bars&#39; form the letters, once u understand that well n hav some style start making the bars a little more abstract but u dont need to worry about that for a while.

take a look at the new to graff thread that will help u out, jus dont bite&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

alera
01-27-2007, 12:50 PM
Originally posted by alera@Jan 26 2007, 06:15 PM


little bit diferent style
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/3896/0126071807lu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Critz ? ;)
bump , it got lost

nesk thoes are lookin good.

Hask420
01-27-2007, 12:59 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7531/deleteze5.jpg

the shadow on the H is totaly fucked up but w/e...besides that is it an improvement?

ASB_ONE
01-27-2007, 01:01 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 27 2007, 01:26 PM
hey man, welcome.
well pretty much everyone will say do simples and wat they mean by that is simple letters as u would copy from your keyboard.

as u copy these letters look at how the &#39;bars&#39; form the letters, once u understand that well n hav some style start making the bars a little more abstract but u dont need to worry about that for a while.

take a look at the new to graff thread that will help u out, jus dont bite&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
hask - no. its not.

whahappen?
01-27-2007, 01:01 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Jan 27 2007, 12:52 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Jan 27 2007, 12:52 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Jan 26 2007, 10:53 PM
inkbits thats sweet
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3914/picture051ef2.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5663/picture050bt6.jpg
za throw
dude above me i have no clue what that says [/b][/quote]
bumpzorz
exchange
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/520/picture052ob1.jpg
older style that i felt like coloring...
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/3094/picture053wk7.jpg

alera that looks cool but the r is a lil too big
darthjader and dim go back to simples
sec that all looks really nice
alka cool simple

TryingTooHard
01-27-2007, 01:27 PM
Originally posted by Hask420@Jan 27 2007, 01:59 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7531/deleteze5.jpg

the shadow on the H is totaly fucked up but w/e...besides that is it an improvement?
no offesne or anything but do block letters... and the fill with black outline is absolutly shit :unsure:

my 2 cents

Hask420
01-27-2007, 01:32 PM
word im gonna stick with throwies till i get better..thks anyways guys

emokid
01-27-2007, 02:04 PM
hask, you dont have to just do throwies, block letters are good for you as well.
dont do fills though, at least not complicated ones yet.

nesc and asb, both super nice styles.

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/1548/dscn6247ys8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shit colouring
shit tags
etc

Fixion
01-27-2007, 02:08 PM
Originally posted by Hask420@Jan 27 2007, 02:32 PM
word im gonna stick with throwies till i get better..thks anyways guys
don&#39;t do throwies. do simples. nothing but simples.

Fosale!
01-27-2007, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jan 27 2007, 01:19 PM
heres the 1st copy of my i love lyfe piece with the extension left in and badly colored. im gonna do the one without the bar in good coloring. sorry the picture is in such high brightness:0(
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/1.jpg
this was my quick pencil sketch for my old exchange with seaz
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/3.jpg
and heres an old old sketch for a roller.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2.jpg
i hate bumping but bump cause i got nothing.


emokid i love your simples.
i cant really crit it bc. its bootyful.

whahappen?
01-27-2007, 02:10 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Jan 27 2007, 02:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Jan 27 2007, 02:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by whahappen?@Jan 27 2007, 12:52 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Jan 26 2007, 10:53 PM
inkbits thats sweet
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3914/picture051ef2.jpg
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5663/picture050bt6.jpg
za throw
dude above me i have no clue what that says
bumpzorz
exchange
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/520/picture052ob1.jpg
older style that i felt like coloring...
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/3094/picture053wk7.jpg

alera that looks cool but the r is a lil too big
darthjader and dim go back to simples
sec that all looks really nice
alka cool simple [/b][/quote]
pear that looks soo nice

emokid
01-27-2007, 02:12 PM
cheers fosale
sorry i overlooked your stuff
the top letters are my favourites, i love the y
dont like the little connecty bar on the last e though, looks odd
some sideways 3d on that would look really good.

Fosale!
01-27-2007, 02:13 PM
scec, i never know why you bump bc. every throw ive seen from you looks exactly the same

not looking for trouble just my 2 cents.

krazzie_ammo
01-27-2007, 02:44 PM
PEAR - love the simples. but yeah, tags need work (Y) not much else i can say...

FOSALE - i like the I LOVE LYFE one.

TOYS - for all the toys on the last two pages...when i mean toys i mean if you have more than 1,000 unnecessary extensions and have used ugly colour schemes...go simple...please...i cant take much more, lol.

think i went a bit overboard with this sketch,
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8144/99io3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
lol, crits?

sky 5
01-27-2007, 03:19 PM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/7990/1222223wk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

revok . . . just under 1,000 unnecessary addons but it was close, the O demanded a recount but the R and K overruled him, the E obstained from voting for obvious reasons . . . . the curly addon on the top right of teh E is misleading, makes it look like its a part of the basic letter structure of the E which its not, left leg of V goes up to high (inconsistent with the style of the rest of the letters) . . . yeah i "critique" myself . .sorry

crazzie -the bottom tab of the R that goes right makes it look like another C, maybe bring it straight up the middle bar of the R . . or kick the tab left and up back towards the middle open area of the C . . .either way gives you room to put a tab at the bottom left leg of the A (probaly shooting towards the open space under and in the middle of the R . .

krazzie_ammo
01-27-2007, 03:25 PM
haha
yeah, you might aswell critque yourself because no one else can.
that critique was for toys...not stupidly amazing, anal leakage causing writers that make my pee-pee go woo-woo. :S

anyway, did you do that sketch....without rubbing out once?

krazzie_ammo
01-27-2007, 03:26 PM
ooo, i just onticed something from that sketch....the extension goign into the O makes it look like an A. mwahaha...



doesn&#39;t it?

no.

ok.

sky 5
01-27-2007, 03:50 PM
hahah yeah when i did that lil extension i was thinking whether to keeep it open (not include it) and if i did do it i couldnt have it go all the way across so it wouldnt look like an A . . so you got me

if rubbing means eraser, i changed the left top extension part of the E and im going to go back and change the loop addon on the right of the E, maybe the V . . if this is going to be my battle piece . . . i did this one real quick (15 mins or less) but (this will sound cheesy) i planned it out in my head last night right before i went to bed . . . just managed not to get stuck this time

krazzie_ammo
01-27-2007, 04:05 PM
wow...

yes, i meant erasering. but rubbing sounds better :)

ooo...the V could be mistaken for an E by the way the extension comes out from the middle or mistaken for a K in the way the E extension lines up with the V. but i guess im being a bit picky now.

shamee1991
01-27-2007, 04:08 PM
sky 5, make it bigger. is that on A4?

nemzone
01-27-2007, 04:18 PM
SKY WHETHER U ENTER THIS OR NOT I DEMAND U FINISH IT&#33;&#33;&#33; ITS IMMENSE.

so balanced out. and the left leg of the V fits in well, if u consider the right leg of the R and the k sticks up a lil too. i would of maybe thought about making the middle of the O going vertical, but then realised its made like that to point out left right? for the whole symmetry thing? anyway i love this piece&#33; the R is the only thing i personally dont like. just bcoz the top bit seems 2 small, and pointy where the 2 bars meet. but still, great work.

blah im baked and talking shite&#33;

craze, not feeling this at all. sorry bud

shamee1991
01-27-2007, 04:21 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/220/1005zl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

S i did

crits

slEEt
01-27-2007, 04:32 PM
Sky that shit looks raw dude, finish that up.

dim
01-27-2007, 05:00 PM
shame i realy like it maybe if u finish the black background it would look alot better

shamee1991
01-27-2007, 05:05 PM
yeh it was just a one letter thing.

dim
01-27-2007, 05:08 PM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/3518/img0022yc4.jpg
i thinkn i could rele use some crits on this

nickstix
01-27-2007, 05:28 PM
dim, not to sound like a prick but thats horrible. the i is way to big, dont connect letters, dont use arrows/addons/extension, and the leter structure is pretty bad. heres what you do to start...WHEN YOU SKETCH DO BLOCK LETTERS LIKE ON YOUR KEYBOARD EXACTLY LIKE THIS, or you will never progress. o and dont worry about coloring its a waste of ink, just get some paper and a pencil and just sketch sketch and sketch :)

sema
01-27-2007, 05:30 PM
dim-ok...when u fill use colors thattle flow togeather likr the oranges do but the darkest is too dark and also u gotta fade the color in not just a strait line where the colors chnge. dont just do add&#39;ons that connect letters(like the top of the d to the i) because u wanna connect emm. do more strait box letters first without addons then tweek ur style after awhile into more complex letters(not gonna happen over night) the vanshing point is ok just needs to be cleand up a bit also u gotta keep the side ur doin the high lights on if ur goin on the right of the piece then stay there ur all over wit highlights. n when u stamp ur sketch mover quick so u dont get them ink blotchs thatll throw ur whole piece off(see my piece in toys painted for a smooth fade look) im out now so hope i helped

dim
01-27-2007, 05:31 PM
:o lol naw i no it sucks ill take your advice

shithead onerzzzz
01-27-2007, 06:13 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/CIMG0530.jpg

sky5 that shit looks intense&#33;
Dim: do simples, i wouldnt worry about colour too much yet, work on your letters

Linkzone1
01-27-2007, 06:14 PM
shithead - nice structure keep that up.

Fosale!
01-27-2007, 06:21 PM
@ Ries
i think the pieces would look better with highlights
if your planning on keeping your pieces with a simple solid coloring then id put highlights in it.
i think it&#39;d look better, but hey, that&#39;s just me.

waffer
01-27-2007, 06:23 PM
hey...i am new here....how does this look
wafer

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/waffer-1.jpg

''HAZE'' *88*
01-27-2007, 06:24 PM
shithead, that shit looks clean,simple, and nice... nice..

Fosale!
01-27-2007, 06:32 PM
Haze, change your sig.

people dont wanna see that shitty garbage everytime you post.

waffer
01-27-2007, 06:38 PM
so it looks nice....so why you call me a shithead

waffer
01-27-2007, 06:45 PM
howz this one
waffer
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/waffer1.jpg

Slushi
01-27-2007, 07:14 PM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/4290/picture126ib5.jpg

revok throw battle entry. crits