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`Juke.
01-27-2007, 07:21 PM
Waffer. When you want to post something.. scince you already have a photobucket.. when in your album, cliock on the piocture you want to poste. Then from there, you can resize it.. then copy and paste the link given on the right. The bottom one, for forums and bilboards.

Heres one i Just did. Any crit on the shadowing?

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u111/Juke_KTS/Bomb1.jpg

`Juke.
01-27-2007, 07:23 PM
Slushi, looks pretty good.. But I might play around with the R and maybe make the middle of the E a little smaller.

koper
01-27-2007, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Jan 27 2007, 04:19 PM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/7990/1222223wk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

revok . . . just under 1,000 unnecessary addons but it was close, the O demanded a recount but the R and K overruled him, the E obstained from voting for obvious reasons . . . . the curly addon on the top right of teh E is misleading, makes it look like its a part of the basic letter structure of the E which its not, left leg of V goes up to high (inconsistent with the style of the rest of the letters) . . . yeah i "critique" myself . .sorry

crazzie -the bottom tab of the R that goes right makes it look like another C, maybe bring it straight up the middle bar of the R . . or kick the tab left and up back towards the middle open area of the C . . .either way gives you room to put a tab at the bottom left leg of the A (probaly shooting towards the open space under and in the middle of the R . .
i simply do not understand what you're doing in the toy forum still man.

You kill over half the people who post in the big boys thread, including myself.

Absolutely phenomenal outline.

koper
01-27-2007, 07:35 PM
Originally posted by shithead onerzzzz@Jan 27 2007, 07:13 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/CIMG0530.jpg

sky5 that shit looks intense!
Dim: do simples, i wouldnt worry about colour too much yet, work on your letters
lookin pretty good man, i dig the lettering

waffer
01-27-2007, 07:36 PM
thanks for the head up juke
check this out
waffer
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/stillbombing.jpg

Sumoe
01-27-2007, 07:42 PM
Originally posted by waffer@Jan 27 2007, 07:38 PM
so it looks nice....so why you call me a shithead
he wasn't addressing your sketch, he was talkin about shithead onerz, by the way nice sketch Rieser, just use either the capital or lower-case "E", so they are the same thats the only thing I don't really like

sky-that outlike is dooooooope, I gotta learn how to bend my letters n' shit cos every extension and arrow I sketch seems to be outta place, anyways good shit.

`Juke.
01-27-2007, 07:43 PM
lol...
Still bombing?
Looks really familiar.. [Still free.. LOL yeah I played the game too]
Other than that I think its pretty kick ass..

Maybe take the arrow off the S and separate the T and I
In bombing maybe give a little something to the G

waffer
01-27-2007, 07:44 PM
oooooooo...my bad

`Juke.
01-27-2007, 08:53 PM
Its all good, I'm pretty sure a bunch of people into writing tried the game.
I even saw a kid whose sign-in name was Trane_SFC :lol: Which is the writer and his crew if you never played it.. ;)

MAERone
01-27-2007, 08:54 PM
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1165/photo011907007sx7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ehh i dunno if i like it

crits?

`Juke.
01-27-2007, 09:19 PM
I Like it, except for you have that arrow out of nowhere that crosses the A. Maybe change that... Other than that it rocks.
Get out of the Toy section dude.

MAERone
01-27-2007, 09:22 PM
hey thanks for the crits
and the arrow across the A is like the line across a capital A

Skeam
01-27-2007, 09:27 PM
i tried going overboard with add ons just to see how it turned out. dont know if ill keep trying it or not or just go back to whta i was doing. sorry for the awsomely shit picture.

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/1599/hpim2890sb3.jpg

MAERone
01-27-2007, 09:29 PM
skeam i really like it you didnt go over board everthing flows wicked good color that shit in and it will be sick!

alive
01-27-2007, 09:41 PM
Originally posted by `Juke.@Jan 27 2007, 10:19 PM
I Like it, except for you have that arrow out of nowhere that crosses the A. Maybe change that... Other than that it rocks.
Get out of the Toy section dude.
excuse me, but tell me that was a joke.

and walfer, apologize now. fucking biter. goddamn.

good call sleep.

hmmmmm.
what else is there to say.


ill post some pickks up later. i owe u big ACES. its coming, have faith, my apologies, i suck with S's. excuses excuses. im going to sketch.


peace.

ASB_ONE
01-27-2007, 09:46 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 27 2007, 10:27 PM
i tried going overboard with add ons just to see how it turned out. dont know if ill keep trying it or not or just go back to whta i was doing. sorry for the awsomely shit picture.

http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/1599/hpim2890sb3.jpg
nice. fresh as a daisy

`Juke.
01-27-2007, 09:48 PM
Skeam, I think its pretty kickass, Like MAERone said, it all flows really sick man.

And MAER. I know its part of the A.. But inseat of an arrow.. just make it an a and get rid of the bar coming out of the e.

`Juke.
01-27-2007, 09:49 PM
Sorry, my typing sucks..
I mean INSTEAD of an arrow.

I'm stupid. :lol:

AteskOne
01-27-2007, 09:54 PM
^^soo use the fuckin edit button u dumb ass....also dont fucking tell total toys to go to the big boy threads. that kid sucks even for the toy's forum.

maer...trust me you dont want to "get out of the toy section"...if you went up to the big boy threads they'd just tell you to scram and then delete your posts. just stay down here for a long time and dont listen to toys like juke.

alive
01-27-2007, 09:56 PM
hence the edit button at the top right of your post.
you still have yet to explain wether tthat shit on the other page was a joke or if ur just dumb.



im in a bad mood yes?

sky5 (just to catch your attention) if ur reading this n that post in the big boy thread was directed at me, then fuck you. honestly though, i dont feel i deserved to be bitched at by a mod for that. im good abt all that shit, n so once in a blue fucking moon i make a comment? i was the one that came up with that shit, and i deserve recognition for it. and btw, that peice, while ill as fuck, and a thousand times better then me, yada yada yada. . . . im a little confused at to y u chose to make the bottom so flat, makes it lose its dynamics for me. i dunno. i think ur best style is ur curviest, flair-iest one that u posted a while ago with the same kind of fill, bright orange 3d? but thats just the kind of style i like where as that was a bit thin.



anyyyyway. i will post pics soon.
peace.




PS. HAHA. atesk beat me to the count.

ASB_ONE
01-27-2007, 10:01 PM
yo how u feelin this shit i only got like 1 comment sayn it was a nice style (thanks emokid my brutha!!!! u can rep asb any day of the week mate)

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0269_000.jpg

Sumoe
01-27-2007, 10:02 PM
Originally posted by SleepATK?+Jan 27 2007, 10:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SleepATK? @ Jan 27 2007, 10:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-waffer@Jan 27 2007, 08:36 PM
thanks for the head up juke
check this out
waffer
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/stillbombing.jpg
im not one to embarrass someone and point out biting but
this reminds me to much of banksy and his rats.
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r46/__411/babnjbanbanb.jpg [/b][/quote]
Ouch... <_< :angry:

Skeam
01-27-2007, 10:15 PM
ASB i been lovin your shit from day one, lovin the tweakage and shit its deffinetly coming along bra&#39;.

uhhh
01-27-2007, 10:17 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Jan 27 2007, 04:19 PM
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/7990/1222223wk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you always make me want to sketch.
but my god.
its getting to the point where i cant read it.
in a good way.

levans
01-27-2007, 10:43 PM
Originally posted by ASB_ONE@Jan 27 2007, 11:01 PM
yo how u feelin this shit i only got like 1 comment sayn it was a nice style (thanks emokid my brutha&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; u can rep asb any day of the week mate)

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0269_000.jpg
yeh caser its sweet as usual maybe you should much around with extensions and see how they look.. :blink:

koper
01-27-2007, 10:52 PM
Skeam - i like the extensions, they fill the space well. You could work on making them flow a little more to give your piece some more shapy, but i say keep working with them, the style looks pretty solid

ASB ONE - nice simples, i really like those letters, try playing with extensions now and shapping your word more to give it some flow.

and both of you, get some colour in there

uhhh
01-27-2007, 11:44 PM
that sky sketch inspired me to do a new revok sketch.
ill see if my camera likes me tomorow and will let me get pics uppp.
goodnight bombing science.

Skeam
01-27-2007, 11:52 PM
ok ok ok koper ill colour it in haha, my sharpies are pretty fuct though so im not gunna promise its gunna look better. see how we go ay?


Edit: here we go just finnished... i dont think i like it as much anymore. meh.

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6325/hpim2893ev2.jpg

weldo
01-28-2007, 12:36 AM
UHM fuk yea easily your best drawing the only bit i dont like is the lest extension coming off the n the rest is sik as the s is dope as oh and a bit on the end of the k the bit going skywards could of done something diffrent but still good sketch.
heres mine posted before now got colour
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/2700/imgp0001qz1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

inkbits
01-28-2007, 12:46 AM
lookin like a fat page. good shit fellas.



(p.s. skeam I printed those electral calenders behind your sketch, spun me out to see one).

Fosale!
01-28-2007, 12:48 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Jan 27 2007, 03:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Jan 27 2007, 03:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Jan 27 2007, 01:19 PM
heres the 1st copy of my i love lyfe piece with the extension left in and badly colored. im gonna do the one without the bar in good coloring. sorry the picture is in such high brightness:0(
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/1.jpg
this was my quick pencil sketch for my old exchange with seaz
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/3.jpg
and heres an old old sketch for a roller.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2.jpg
[/b][/quote]
i hate bumping but bump cause i got nothing.


weldo i dont really like your style but its better than most people on here. its too round for me.

Skeam
01-28-2007, 12:53 AM
hahaha fucken small world ay ink?

Fosale!
01-28-2007, 12:59 AM
you sir, make no sense.

MiNZ
01-28-2007, 01:20 AM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2940/mesh4yr9.jpg
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/2050/mesh5af9.jpg
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/71/mesh6fd8.jpg
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/965/mesh7vz9.jpg
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/84/mesh8dr5.jpg
any crits?

imported_big_boss
01-28-2007, 03:34 AM
Don&#39;t ever do anything like the third one ever again. Really. Just stick to basic letters all in line with each other. Once you master drawing simple letter forms, you can do whatever you want to them without having it come out looking like shit. You need to build a foundation before you can get to paint a house and make it look pretty.

inkbits
01-28-2007, 03:35 AM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 28 2007, 04:53 PM
hahaha fucken small world ay ink?
fuggin oath man, dunno the odds of seein that.

minz you should leave 3D and dropshaddows for a bit and just work your letter shape up more, 3d fills negative space and makes things look cleaner but the core of it is more important. the top style would look good if the S and H were closer together like the ME is, and crossing the H higher near to the where the centre of your M ends would be nicer.

not much to post yet today but here&#39;s a beercan.
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9612852.jpg

Skeam
01-28-2007, 04:03 AM
what type of markers are they? they look pretty good ay.

Deso7
01-28-2007, 04:29 AM
yeah fucking nice brah

sky 5
01-28-2007, 04:41 AM
and i thought aussies only drank 22.6 oz or bigger cans of beer :P . . . we americans like our 40 ouncers, i think if another country like japan started chuggin 42 ozouncers we would start sellin the 64 oz . . we could easily just do a 44 ounce but that just aint our style . .

Skeam
01-28-2007, 04:43 AM
i dont have a clue what an ozis ay... its all litres or mL here hahaha.

inkbits
01-28-2007, 05:11 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Jan 28 2007, 08:41 PM
and i thought aussies only drank 22.6 oz or bigger cans of beer :P . . . we americans like our 40 ouncers, i think if another country like japan started chuggin 42 ozouncers we would start sellin the 64 oz . . we could easily just do a 44 ounce but that just aint our style . .

way ahead of ya man, Northern Territory Draught, 68 ounces/ 4.8% (if you can drink the stuff :().

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9614632.jpg

pens are posca&#39;s Skeam.

Bastardo
01-28-2007, 06:15 AM
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/2408/picture270pa4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Revok

vegimite on prescription drugs
01-28-2007, 07:07 AM
Originally posted by inkbits+Jan 28 2007, 06:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (inkbits &#064; Jan 28 2007, 06:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Jan 28 2007, 08:41 PM
and i thought aussies only drank 22.6 oz or bigger cans of beer :P . . . we americans like our 40 ouncers, i think if another country like japan started chuggin 42 ozouncers we would start sellin the 64 oz . . we could easily just do a 44 ounce but that just aint our style . .

way ahead of ya man, Northern Territory Draught, 68 ounces/ 4.8% (if you can drink the stuff :().

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9614632.jpg

pens are posca&#39;s Skeam. [/b][/quote]
you gotta send me some of this...
next time in in NT ill definately get some
it dont get trucked to nsw
great looking bottle

nemzone
01-28-2007, 09:07 AM
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5879/imag0002ig4.jpg

DLove
01-28-2007, 09:15 AM
Tryin something alittle more complicated

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/Ragdoll/Art/-4.jpg

Fosale!
01-28-2007, 09:26 AM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Jan 28 2007, 07:15 AM
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/2408/picture270pa4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Revok
this deserves an effin&#39; bump.

waffer
01-28-2007, 09:46 AM
jeez guys calm down the rat was just a drawing...sorry if i offended anyone

ASB_ONE
01-28-2007, 09:59 AM
yeh but if u bite it off another writer we are going to take offence cos biting is offensive to other writers.

nemz that looks dope man prolly 1 of my favrite sketches from ya
bastardo is illin
and dlove thats not nice it gives me a headach and im scared one of those arrows might poke me in the eye thers so dam many of em.

waffer
01-28-2007, 10:03 AM
and once again i apologize for use bansky&#39;s rat and i learnt my lesson
sorry
waffer

ras
01-28-2007, 10:20 AM
that guy in NY uses rats as a throw up..

alive
01-28-2007, 10:22 AM
that would be RATE. and the rats look entirely different.

they look ill as fuck in the tunnells. an when ur in one, and he paints them with huge fucking glowing eyes in the tunnel. mad freaky.

http://www.untitledname.com/archives/upload/2005/3/rate-lions-nsf.jpg

Noddles912300
01-28-2007, 10:41 AM
alot of people use rats. so i dont know if RATE is biting off banksy but man i want to see one of the RATE rats with glowing eyes.
Nemzone i like the sketch but i cant read it <_< sucks being toy

waffer
01-28-2007, 10:53 AM
can someone help me out with my sig.
does this look ok
thanks
waffer
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/waffer.jpg

alive
01-28-2007, 11:53 AM
first off, put that in the toy tags section, secondly, noddles, of course rate isnt biting bansky are u kidding? the rats look completely different. ill try to get a pic with the ill eyes.

and waffer, its a big, big deal to bite. dont u dare do it again. its ok for practice, but then say "THIS IS A BITE FOR PRACTICE NOT MINE"

waffer
01-28-2007, 12:02 PM
it was for practice and trust me i will never do that again...

Nosypainter
01-28-2007, 12:48 PM
Originally posted by Mekr4@Jan 18 2007, 09:06 PM
CRITS

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g19/cons483/giraffe.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g19/cons483/bluee.jpg

CRITS
the sticks not bad i think its funny but you do know that your going ot have to clear coat it because that will fade in the weather hardcore...

The Fonz
01-28-2007, 01:03 PM
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture357.jpg

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l44/nick41291/Picture356.jpg

comments? crits?

NewbyTJ
01-28-2007, 01:06 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture165.jpg


please comment just on the letters

STAR01
01-28-2007, 01:33 PM
a lot of ppl use rats, so it&#39;s not original anymore nevertheless you shouldn&#39;t steal from those legends, wether or not it&#39;s original i love banksy&#39;s rats

waffer
01-28-2007, 01:39 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/waffer167.jpg
comments any one

ras
01-28-2007, 01:39 PM
isnt is orginal when people do use rats...

oh..btw...i aint been postin cuz im still working at me " simple " lol..

dopeness still on here..

Waffre....i carnt understand how all this rat talk has got so blown outa propeortion...damn...and you shoudl go real simple..like this

W A F E R

.. Y O U G E T M E &#33;

revolt92
01-28-2007, 01:39 PM
Banksy&#39;s rats are done well aswell, in fact all of his stuff is.

Bastardo
01-28-2007, 01:44 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Jan 28 2007, 07:15 AM
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/2408/picture270pa4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Revok
bump please :)

ras
01-28-2007, 01:46 PM
read the yellow in my sig..

but...

seeing as your kool...and my age...ill crit you...you dont need to be in hur..

trashhh
01-28-2007, 02:00 PM
wafer i dont think u should try to do complicated weird stuff like that yet try doing normal letters first

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40815.jpg

Ignore the tag on this please&#33; :P

elcs
01-28-2007, 02:04 PM
take off the arrow on the left side of the T and id say that looks pretty sick trash

whahappen?
01-28-2007, 02:31 PM
Originally posted by alive@Jan 28 2007, 11:22 AM
that would be RATE. and the rats look entirely different.

they look ill as fuck in the tunnells. an when ur in one, and he paints them with huge fucking glowing eyes in the tunnel. mad freaky.

http://www.untitledname.com/archives/upload/2005/3/rate-lions-nsf.jpg
get a pciture of ones with glowing eyes thatd be sooo sweet
trash thats soooo awesome
the fonz i like those simple lettrs they look nice

Kore123
01-28-2007, 02:44 PM
a pic of a quick drawing i just did. i dont think that its that bad i think its one of the best that i ever did (sadly) and i think its way better than my old shit so crits and comments please.

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/1807/picture015xc0.jpg


that rat is fuckin awsome

trash... that shit is dope

bastardo... thats good i like the colors

waffer... its pretty good it would make an awsome roller

newby....thats wayyy too simple but it make an ok roller

waffer
01-28-2007, 03:07 PM
quick drawing.....crits and comments
[IMhttp://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/hghg.jpg[/IMG] G]
kore try some shadows on your drawing

waffer
01-28-2007, 03:12 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/hghg.jpg

''HAZE'' *88*
01-28-2007, 03:15 PM
Yo Bastardo that shit is ill, trash thats a nice confusing wildstyle ya got there the arrows are all good i think.. and kore maybe start to try and add shadow to it.. the later on add some extenions and shit ;)

crits on this? the color is fucked due to flash on camera, it doesn&#39;t really look all that liney and shit..
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02095.jpg

ras
01-28-2007, 03:16 PM
HAZE..Go simpler mayn..or...id just stick to your tag ish....once you gets yah handy down...i think youll rock that syle better

waffer
01-28-2007, 03:29 PM
haze try taking out the arrow from the f

Mr. Lefty
01-28-2007, 03:30 PM
*kore* - you&#39;re catching on.. try making the top "arm" of your K more animated.. try and do something along the lines of the bottom arm.. have it extend, then reach.. i&#39;m just sayin&#39;http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/1807/picture015xc0.jpg
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8049/helppg2.jpg
nvm the bottom pencil lines.. but ya see what im gettin at?

''HAZE'' *88*
01-28-2007, 03:34 PM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;HAZE&#39;&#39; *88*@Jan 28 2007, 04:15 PM
Yo Bastardo that shit is ill, trash thats a nice confusing wildstyle ya got there the arrows are all good i think.. and kore maybe start to try and add shadow to it.. the later on add some extenions and shit ;)

crits on this? the color is fucked due to flash on camera, it doesn&#39;t really look all that liney and shit..
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02095.jpg
bumpin this shit.. i got shits all for crits..

haze try taking out the arrow from the f..yo&#33; where that arrow came from?? LOL thats not an arrow its just a mad extention..

ras
01-28-2007, 03:37 PM
looking at the top on...i fink..if you clean it up a lil..take of the extension on the F..it could look aight

Kore123
01-28-2007, 03:41 PM
alright thanks for all the comments imma work on the k and add some shadowing, this is the first time i posted something and u guys didnt say it looked like complete shit :D

nemzone
01-28-2007, 03:53 PM
faze, work on the 3d, and work on making your letters all proportional...

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3314/imag0002qi6.jpg

1st in a while :rolleyes:

Mr. Lefty
01-28-2007, 03:54 PM
nemz, I don&#39;t even know why you still post in here...

Deso7
01-28-2007, 03:56 PM
Nemz......I hate you... Your too good i think im really digging it

AteskOne
01-28-2007, 04:04 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Jan 28 2007, 03:44 PM
newby....thats wayyy too simple but it make an ok roller
are you serious...what is with these toys. telling people with no skill what so ever (not talking about you nemz...talking bout someone a few pages back) to move up to the big boy thread and now someone basically telling a kid he&#39;s trying to simple of pieces and he should try more complicated ones...when he doesnt even have a goodletter structure down. rediculous shit. i&#39;m really disapointed with recent critisism. toys getting advice from even lower toys. little peace of advice...if you dont know what your talking about.....just dont talk. <_< .



ok i&#39;m done.

bouncingsoul
01-28-2007, 04:07 PM
Nemz it looks great. We should exchange?

Bored sketch... I hate my W and my S but whatever... Give me crits you whores

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0602.jpg

MainEvent
01-28-2007, 04:10 PM
shits nice as usual nemz, stay up

haze, shits alright. the 3d is pretty inconsistant, like on the extension on the F it pretty much goes straight down where as on the E, it goes vertically out the right. letter wise, check the link below to wiggle&#39;s site. gives a basic, good tutorial- http://www.mrwiggles.biz/how_to_construct_a_letter.htm

nemzone
01-28-2007, 04:14 PM
knews, sure il exchange. wont be nothin glamourous tho, takes me ages to bust out a decent sketch these days :angry: plus im getting ready, starting basic in 2 weeks today, so no more graff for me for a while :angry: :(

i like the K in that piece, the rest of the letters are odd, and multi sized... but its alright. ;)

''HAZE'' *88*
01-28-2007, 04:18 PM
thanks for the info nemz.. last one from you i remember is that merry x mas one.. with the same colors and shit.. good stuff..

for 3-d should i do the top one or bottom.. the difference being the shadow over lapping type thing.. fixed the F also..

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p94/letsgobombin/DVC02096.jpg

EasyMac
01-28-2007, 04:20 PM
Bounce, you never color and finish your shit, maybe you have and I didn&#39;t see, I don&#39;t know...if you haven&#39;t you should...for sure.

nemzone
01-28-2007, 04:21 PM
bottom. WORK ON STRUCTURE BRO.

easymac, he did, but only with a pink highlighter :( :(

''HAZE'' *88*
01-28-2007, 04:28 PM
ok thanks for that.. i don&#39;t really know what else to do with the letter structure tho..or how to make it better..

EasyMac
01-28-2007, 04:29 PM
Haze...I wrote faze a while back but changed, here&#39;s some old old sketches...maybe they&#39;ll help a little...probobly not...

http://ourworld.cs.com/DaveHarrisss/Faze20.jpg

http://ourworld.cs.com/DaveHarrisss/Faze40.jpg

http://ourworld.cs.com/DaveHarrisss/Faze102.jpg

slinks
01-28-2007, 04:38 PM
Faze that stuff looks sick. i especially like that bottom white and pink one

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/GraffitiRevok002entry.gif
should i enter it?

Kore123
01-28-2007, 04:39 PM
sorry for sayin somthin was too simple i just thought that they were too far apart and not connected that was it i didnt mean that it wasnt good...but anyways i took everybodys advice and i fixed the k and did a drop shadow...i messed up the dropshadow i think but idk so yeah here it is

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6703/picture019it0.jpg

easymac....that shit looks good

EasyMac
01-28-2007, 04:39 PM
http://ourworld.cs.com/DaveHarrisss/recentfaze.JPG

Hopefully these&#39;ll help a little at least....who knows...

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 04:55 PM
Kore, I think the O is a little fucked... I dont really know what it is.. maybe make it a little thinner..
And I dont really know what you did with the dropshadow.. Try picturing it like theres some kinda light shining on it form the corner.

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u111/Juke_KTS/Tutorial1.jpg
You&#39;ll have to excuse the crappy photo quality.. I dont have any programs to edit it decently with.. and the lighting in this room sucks.

waffer
01-28-2007, 04:59 PM
ca some one help me with my w
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/Save0002.jpg

ras
01-28-2007, 05:05 PM
Easy mac...funnyily eunuff...you older shit...is btter that you knewer.. :blink:

wafer....look at the yellow in my sig..and also

G
O

S
I
M
P
L
E

&#33;
&#33;

AteskOne
01-28-2007, 05:06 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Jan 28 2007, 05:39 PM
sorry for sayin somthin was too simple i just thought that they were too far apart and not connected that was it i didnt mean that it wasnt good...
no....that&#39;s not the point....it wasnt good&#33;&#33;........ugh never mind.

mass stupidity sweeping this forum.

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 05:07 PM
Try separating the bottom of the W. For the A.. make the hole inside it a bit shorter? And maybe make it go with the rest of the letter.. see how the whole A leans to the left and the hole is more vetical/to the right? Maybe move the F a little closer.. Connect the E and close up the back of the E.

waffer
01-28-2007, 05:10 PM
thanks juke

AteskOne
01-28-2007, 05:13 PM
ok waffer first bit off advice...dont listen to juke&#39;s advice. ok after you&#39;ve dropped all he said from your memory, why dont you start by sketching out some simples. start doing letters that look like this "WAFFER"....that&#39;s all you will need to do until you get a good feel for letter structure and proportions and all that fun stuff.

MAERone
01-28-2007, 05:14 PM
yeah waffer just work on your simples for a while until they get sick and then complicated shit comes easier. just take everything slow and it comes out better

EasyMac
01-28-2007, 05:17 PM
Ras.....I&#39;d have to disagree with you there the last five pics I posted were the first five attempts at that name, it just takes time to settle with a new name.....I AM NOT getting worse at graff...cause that would suck......

..SmOeK 1..
01-28-2007, 05:17 PM
EasyMac- That could look really good if you splashed the right colors in that.


http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5862/frame00115rd1.th.png (http://img404.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00115rd1.png)
Something i tried. I knoww people you say go simple but I dunno this started simple and i guess worked itself from there.

Crits Please :)

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 05:29 PM
NP, you need some positive crit after everyone started freaking on you about the Rat thing...
Whatever.. at least everyones calmed down now.

What do you think of this one? I know, nice and simple.. All the same size.. blah blah blah..
Anything I could do to to make it look nicer without making it look crappy?

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u111/Juke_KTS/Bomb3.jpg
Thanks.

Fosale!
01-28-2007, 05:31 PM
all for the battle.
not sure which handie im gonna enter.
any suggestions?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/3-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/1-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/4-1.jpg
this was my original entry but then i fucked up on the O and K
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/5dud.jpg

and this is for a friend.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2-1.jpg

Samp1e
01-28-2007, 05:31 PM
smoek -- I can&#39;t really see it too well, sorry.

waffer -- your stuff isn&#39;t being consistent, the letters are all different sizes, I don&#39;t even know what the thing on the end is supposed to be. I do like the F and E though.

juke -- diggin it

fosale -- don&#39;t know much in those areas, but i like the second throwie and the first tag.

I haven&#39;t done anything that I&#39;ve really liked recently, save for the last piece in this set:
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6779/samp1e2ax7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4900/samp3ga5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6629/samp4ec6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

the first one... eh. it&#39;s messy, the &#39;S&#39;, &#39;M&#39; and &#39;E&#39; need work... also keeping &#39;em level and stuff.

the second one, I like the &#39;A&#39; and &#39;P&#39;, not so much the others.

feedback?

waffer
01-28-2007, 05:35 PM
samp1e...like the 3 drawing
juke....need some shadows
and what is the battle

Mse
01-28-2007, 05:38 PM
Originally posted by waffer@Jan 28 2007, 02:39 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/waffer167.jpg
comments any one
its some kind of wierd jewish thing
GAS IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
:)

waffer
01-28-2007, 05:46 PM
or its a star with 3 dots

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 05:53 PM
OK, Same as my piece before.. Except I added some colour and some dropshadow. I know that the green looks really fucked in the photo.. <_<
It doesnt actually look that bad.. I dunno why it came out like that.]
Piece of shit webcamm...

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u111/Juke_KTS/Bomb3colour.jpg

Any Crit on the shadowing?

waffer
01-28-2007, 06:03 PM
looks good.....practice makes perfect

TryingTooHard
01-28-2007, 06:37 PM
FOSALE - not a fan in the throwie stuff things department so I dunno about em?

SAMP1E - I think the black and white one... the "A" is the best letter

WAFFER - uhhh? lol

JUKE - Same as FOSALE

So.... I took NESK&#39;s "K" Bitch me out for biting 1 letter....BLOW ME but I just wanted to try it out and this is what I came up with... I know the "M" to big, and Im not really feeling it

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e144/mudvayne50/Graffiti/krum007.jpg

Crits/Flame/Comment?

waffer
01-28-2007, 06:39 PM
looks pretty good...

Mse
01-28-2007, 06:39 PM
ugly?
get rid of teh arrows
make yo lettahz fattah&#33;

ASB_ONE
01-28-2007, 06:41 PM
krum thats lookin fresh bro comin along nice. ur sketch was ghetto i did it on my desk, ill do a decent one another time:

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0277_002.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0273_000.jpg

TryingTooHard
01-28-2007, 06:44 PM
lol MSE not arrows just some whack extenstions... maybe a lil to much :lol:

caser.. dude that looks nice thats not ghetto I like it bro :D

Mse
01-28-2007, 06:45 PM
hahaha
i thought you would see through that shit asb
guess i was wrong :(
you need to be brutally honest, flowery comments dont help anyone
if you&#39;re gonna lie to someone you shouldnt speak at all :)

so anyway the bottom of your c&#39;s look akward but take it how you want

TryingTooHard
01-28-2007, 06:54 PM
ASB.... You care if I print that out the exchange and draw it, and try dif shaowds on it???

AteskOne
01-28-2007, 07:03 PM
^^^plagerism is illegal and very much frowned upon in the graffiti world...just a hint. and your signature is uber gay. graffiti is your anti drug???? graffiti is the reason i do drugs lol.....not really but they&#39;re still fun none the less.

Samp1e
01-28-2007, 07:09 PM
ASB -- I like the Krum sketch, just that something seems wierd about the K. other stuff looks great

tricks -- where the the bars meet each other and you have the overlaps, i think that&#39;s overdone in your sketch... i dunno if that makes sense, i&#39;ll point it out with a pic if you don&#39;t understand.


k, so I decided to take the A you pointed out and try to use it as a basis for my other letters... i might ink this, but feedback first would be good :)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6319/photo0001sw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 07:14 PM
I donno, I think I might mix up the top of the letters a little bit.. they all look pretty much the same.
Other than that.. ink it.

tremulant
01-28-2007, 07:22 PM
That S looks a bit awkward.

ASB_ONE
01-28-2007, 07:26 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Jan 28 2007, 07:45 PM
hahaha
i thought you would see through that shit asb
guess i was wrong :(
you need to be brutally honest, flowery comments dont help anyone
if you&#39;re gonna lie to someone you shouldnt speak at all :)

so anyway the bottom of your c&#39;s look akward but take it how you want
mse dont be like that bro&#33;&#33;&#33;
yeh i kno bruv but it is better than his other stuff man. yeh i kno my c felt awkward wen drawing it ima work on some otha shit tomo or somit.

yeh krum do wat u want wid it man its officially yours.

peace

~RAVE~
01-28-2007, 07:32 PM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0002-2.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0003-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-4.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0001-1.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0008.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j285/Kawasaki72/DSCF0006.jpg

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some old stuff

whahappen?
01-28-2007, 07:34 PM
simples

TricksForKids
01-28-2007, 07:36 PM
lol i love how people say "some old stuff" as if theyve improved since..especailly when 3 out of the 5 sketches say 2007 right on em haha, um rave is probably one of the most commonly used graffiit names, so i suggest changing that, then i suggest doing simple letters, and not using colour

sample, keep that up, remember to keep your letters the same size for now, dont be afraid to ink the occasional one either

i wanna collab with a couple people, so if anyones good at photoshopping and feels like doin some sorta theme get at me ( in pms&#33; )

Peace

edit - sample point that shit out for me boss, thatd be helpful thanks

uhhh
01-28-2007, 07:38 PM
tricks,
i know im probably not on your list to collab with.
but prettty pretty please&#33; :)

HeiSk
01-28-2007, 07:53 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011022.jpg

its for a battle is says heisk

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-28-2007, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by Samp1e@Jan 28 2007, 08:09 PM
ASB -- I like the Krum sketch, just that something seems wierd about the K. other stuff looks great

tricks -- where the the bars meet each other and you have the overlaps, i think that&#39;s overdone in your sketch... i dunno if that makes sense, i&#39;ll point it out with a pic if you don&#39;t understand.


k, so I decided to take the A you pointed out and try to use it as a basis for my other letters... i might ink this, but feedback first would be good :)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6319/photo0001sw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
aren&#39;t those the letters from mr.wiggles?

What Happened to the Letters?
01-28-2007, 08:00 PM
oh shit, kid got caught

uhhh
01-28-2007, 08:01 PM
hahaha.

mannn,
my simples are ruuusty.
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-019S-1.jpg

nothing good on this page.
that should be crits enough.

What Happened to the Letters?
01-28-2007, 08:02 PM
Originally posted by HeiSk@Jan 28 2007, 09:53 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011022.jpg

its for a battle is says heisk
ugly as fuck, sorry

but that could be an ill style if you work it out right

looks like it says kire if anything

Samp1e
01-28-2007, 08:03 PM
tricks -- i meant like this stuff

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/4851/krum007gb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it works in some places, doesn&#39;t in some. i think it&#39;s overdone in your piece and in some places really distracts me from other stuff.

rave -- like tricks, i noticed too the dates on your pieces. that isn&#39;t old stuff... i have some to show, coming later in this post. as for your stuff, like a lot of other people you are being too complex with your work, and don&#39;t have a lot of the essentials down. you have extensions and stuff coming out of random places, your letters look bad cause they aren&#39;t consistent and randomly go to thick and thin, looking like you were thinking "hmm... i&#39;ll put an arrow here, cause i can&#33;"

here&#39;s an example of the garbage i used to do in my old book (around september of 2006):

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2084/photo0003br1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/3133/photo0004vi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

all sorts of bumps and random extensions... didn&#39;t look good.

on a side note, this is a piece my friend do for me in my book... just wondering what you guys would think of it, and no he isn&#39;t the real temper:
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5449/photo0002rv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Samp1e
01-28-2007, 08:06 PM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands+Jan 28 2007, 08:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Edward"Sezer"Hands @ Jan 28 2007, 08:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Samp1e@Jan 28 2007, 08:09 PM
ASB -- I like the Krum sketch, just that something seems wierd about the K. other stuff looks great

tricks -- where the the bars meet each other and you have the overlaps, i think that&#39;s overdone in your sketch... i dunno if that makes sense, i&#39;ll point it out with a pic if you don&#39;t understand.


k, so I decided to take the A you pointed out and try to use it as a basis for my other letters... i might ink this, but feedback first would be good :)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6319/photo0001sw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
aren&#39;t those the letters from mr.wiggles? [/b][/quote]
mr. wiggles? who&#39;s that? if it is similar to another artist&#39;s it isn&#39;t intentional at all.

''HAZE'' *88*
01-28-2007, 08:07 PM
yo i see you followed a bit of what i was talking about before.. your letters look much beeter than before, the J is way better maybe mess around with your E those its pretty plain.. and the tag under the E.. the farthest right.. thats pretty good..i like it anyway

Noddles912300
01-28-2007, 08:07 PM
sample this is my opinion for the temper peice. like every thing especially the coloring except the "T" but thats just me

HeiSk
01-28-2007, 08:14 PM
the last product of my piece for a battle http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/piecesexy.jpg

''HAZE'' *88*
01-28-2007, 08:14 PM
Originally posted by EasyMac@Jan 28 2007, 05:29 PM
Haze...I wrote faze a while back but changed, here&#39;s some old old sketches...maybe they&#39;ll help a little...probobly not...

http://ourworld.cs.com/DaveHarrisss/Faze20.jpg

http://ourworld.cs.com/DaveHarrisss/Faze40.jpg

http://ourworld.cs.com/DaveHarrisss/Faze102.jpg
man thanks for that post, those are fucking good.. and give me a really good look at letter structure.. and why don&#39;t you write faze now? what made you stop? :unsure:

TricksForKids
01-28-2007, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by Samp1e@Jan 28 2007, 09:03 PM
tricks -- i meant like this stuff

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/4851/krum007gb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it works in some places, doesn&#39;t in some. i think it&#39;s overdone in your piece and in some places really distracts me from other stuff.

rave -- like tricks, i noticed too the dates on your pieces. that isn&#39;t old stuff... i have some to show, coming later in this post. as for your stuff, like a lot of other people you are being too complex with your work, and don&#39;t have a lot of the essentials down. you have extensions and stuff coming out of random places, your letters look bad cause they aren&#39;t consistent and randomly go to thick and thin, looking like you were thinking "hmm... i&#39;ll put an arrow here, cause i can&#33;"

here&#39;s an example of the garbage i used to do in my old book (around september of 2006):

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2084/photo0003br1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/3133/photo0004vi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

all sorts of bumps and random extensions... didn&#39;t look good.

on a side note, this is a piece my friend do for me in my book... just wondering what you guys would think of it, and no he isn&#39;t the real temper:
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/5449/photo0002rv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
itd be nice if that was my piece :P

slinks
01-28-2007, 08:27 PM
dude heisk that looks pretty sweeeet


heres some throwies ive been working on... they say SLY. i hope thats not taken. if it is i didnt try. i was just messing with some leters. Crits please but disregard the bubbles and other random stuff. just letters.
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti038.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti037.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti036.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti035.jpg
crits crits crits crits crits

HeiSk
01-28-2007, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by HeiSk@Jan 28 2007, 09:14 PM
the last product of my piece for a battle http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/piecesexy.jpg
bump i need more critz

Chop Logic
01-28-2007, 08:33 PM
^Cant really read it, looks kind of in between a piece and a throw. Take some of the wierd little distractions off and make the lines bolder, it might eb more legible then.

FAZE - That looks really good. Shows the value of knowing your simples.

I know its on stickers but its still letters and I still want crits.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/aymo-1.jpg

Fosale!
01-28-2007, 08:55 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jan 28 2007, 06:31 PM
all for the battle.
not sure which handie im gonna enter.
any suggestions?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/3-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/1-1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/4-1.jpg
this was my original entry but then i fucked up on the O and K
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/5dud.jpg

and this is for a friend.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2-1.jpg
bump because i need to know by tommorow.

sorry for teh bump.
i <3 tricks&#33;&#33;&#33;

i would <3 to collab but im not too good at photoshop. :0(

Samp1e
01-28-2007, 08:58 PM
i got photoshop, but i don&#39;t know how to use it though, haha

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 09:00 PM
Chop Logic -- Where did you get those stickers man? Everybody has em, and I cant find em.
But I like the letters... They look Really clean and will draw a lot of attention to your stickers.

slinks
01-28-2007, 09:04 PM
why doesnt anyone ever crit me??

Samp1e
01-28-2007, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by `Juke.@Jan 28 2007, 10:00 PM
Chop Logic -- Where did you get those stickers man? Everybody has em, and I cant find em.
But I like the letters... They look Really clean and will draw a lot of attention to your stickers.
you can usually get them from usps or dhl by ordering directly from them. i think on their website, you could get huge rolls of them

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 09:13 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Jan 28 2007, 10:04 PM
why doesnt anyone ever crit me??
Why don&#39;t you ever crit anyone else?

YOU ARE IN A TOY FORUM: DON&#39;T KEEP ASKING FOR CRIT AND BUMPING YOUR SHIT WITHOUT GIVING SOME OUT FIRST.

HeiSk
01-28-2007, 09:15 PM
Originally posted by HeiSk+Jan 28 2007, 09:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HeiSk @ Jan 28 2007, 09:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-HeiSk@Jan 28 2007, 09:14 PM
the last product of my piece for a battle http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/piecesexy.jpg
[/b][/quote]
bumpppp

slinks
01-28-2007, 09:15 PM
i do to everyone above me on the page.

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 09:18 PM
OK.. But can you order them without a credit card???
And how do I keep my parents from noticing some random parcels showing up at my house for me.. <_<

Fosale!
01-28-2007, 09:20 PM
EDIT

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 09:22 PM
Edit what?

uhhh
01-28-2007, 09:22 PM
Originally posted by `Juke.@Jan 28 2007, 10:18 PM
OK.. But can you order them without a credit card???
And how do I keep my parents from noticing some random parcels showing up at my house for me.. <_<
uhm.
yes.
you do need a credit card.
but they dont charge it or anything.
just steal your paretns for all of five minutes.
and hope you catch it when you get home from school.

[N01R]
01-28-2007, 09:23 PM
lol good idea

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 09:25 PM
Ok.. Thats doable I guess..
Anything probably better than these shitty ones im using now..
They are only like.. 6 x 9cm things with this dumbass navy blue outline.

TryingTooHard
01-28-2007, 09:27 PM
I guess I can be pretty good @ photoshop.... PM and ill see what can be done and if Im anygood @ it... I can always try but no guarentees

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 09:29 PM
Ok..
So scince the J at the beginning of the Tag leaves so much dead space in a handy.. I think im going to change my tag..
What do you guys think?
Juke
or
Neuk?

MAERone
01-28-2007, 09:33 PM
i like neuk :blink:

[N01R]
01-28-2007, 09:35 PM
Ok just to tell you juke it doesnt seem like there are any stickers on the postal offices site so you might have to go to one of their buildings to buy them :o

`Juke.
01-28-2007, 09:37 PM
ok... so with a total of ONE vote..
Neuk it is.. :D
Im out guys.

Peace.

dajam410
01-28-2007, 09:39 PM
Don&#39;t really care whether or not this fits into this thread, but one of my latest digital creations:

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/xwalkamongme138x/entry2.jpg

What do you think?

Samp1e
01-28-2007, 09:56 PM
dajam -- that&#39;s pretty good loookin. the J looks funky though, it&#39;s really angular when the other letters are mostly curved n shit

Gist
01-28-2007, 09:59 PM
Originally posted by Mse+Jan 28 2007, 06:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mse @ Jan 28 2007, 06:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-waffer@Jan 28 2007, 02:39 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/waffer167.jpg
comments any one
its some kind of wierd jewish thing
GAS IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
:) [/b][/quote]
wen u gas it were u makin a reference to the slaughter of jews during world war? kus if so thats not cool at all

AteskOne
01-28-2007, 10:12 PM
what are you jewish...if not shut the fuck up....if so shut the fuck up.

i just think you needa calm down. he was obviously making a joke. if you dont enjoy racially slurred jokes then you dont belong anywhere on this planet. there is no where you can go nowerdays without hearing people make fun of others&#39; ethnic background or anything for that matter. do you get mad if someone makes a joke about you being short (supposing your on the short side), or near sighted, or whatever the fuck the case may be. well i&#39;m kind of beating around the bush but my point is its all in good fun and if you havent learned to put up with teasing...then you really arent gunna make it far in life. i mean i understand if the dude was parading around a swatstika saying "god hates jews" or some shit...but he was simply making a joke. so roll up a joint and forget about it. speaking of joints...i&#39;ma go get acquainted with one lol.

Rank!
01-28-2007, 10:39 PM
-etch a sketch ..def. fellin the top one man..its got alot goin on
you should put some color and that 3d is lookin good.
so i just made a few stickers real fast
got the dhl ones in tell me what you thinkhttp://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/blackstickerrank.jpghttp://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/stickerRANK.jpg

Bombers Ambition
01-28-2007, 10:44 PM
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1322/sketchs034ms6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

rank - not really feelin those work on the throws and handies more cant really make out the handies on the bottom but keep workin on that ish

..SmOeK 1..
01-28-2007, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by ..SmOeK 1..@Jan 28 2007, 06:17 PM
EasyMac- That could look really good if you splashed the right colors in that.


http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5862/frame00115rd1.th.png (http://img404.imageshack.us/my.php?image=frame00115rd1.png)
Something i tried. I knoww people you say go simple but I dunno this started simple and i guess worked itself from there.

Crits Please :)
BUMPPITY BUMP



No Crits Last Time, Crits Please.




Rank- The gold one is the best, really like that color. But define your letters more, make more depth in your bends and such. It will look abit better because some letters can be mistake for others.

uhhh
01-28-2007, 10:57 PM
Originally posted by Gist+Jan 28 2007, 10:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Gist @ Jan 28 2007, 10:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Mse@Jan 28 2007, 06:38 PM

its some kind of wierd jewish thing
GAS IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
:)
wen u gas it were u makin a reference to the slaughter of jews during world war? kus if so thats not cool at all [/b][/quote]
what else was he making reference to?

C3ZR ONE
01-28-2007, 11:24 PM
**slaps head and groans at Mse&#39;s post..***

I swear, I didn&#39;t even read that shit. Please don&#39;t put me in that position again.. :(

Atesk- Your views on the subject are all fine and dandy, but regardless of what your oppinion is on the subject, racial or prejudicial jokes are not permitted on this forum. Period. I am not to allow them. They slip thru time to time without notice, but that doesn&#39;t make it okay. As far as the comparrisons you made, I get your point, but I think there&#39;s a difference in levity between cracking on someone with glasses, and reffering to an event in history jokingly in which over a miliion people were slaughtered. Whole families. Mothers watched there children wither away. I believe the subject deserves more respect, but that&#39;s MY oppinion. There is so much shit in life that&#39;s already funny. Why pull up one of mankinds worse atrocities, and dismiss it as laughable in any shape or form? Did Mse mean anything serious by it? I&#39;m sure he didn&#39;t, but does it have the potential to hurt someone deeply, and more importantly, is it something that&#39;s against the forum rules? Yes to both.

Yeah, sure, Nobody on this forum was involved in the holocaust, but if I was told the story of how my grandfather or great grandfather spent his last minutes in a chamber, I think I&#39;d hold some feelings about it. Again, just my oppinion, and I&#39;m not gonna ego trip and say my oppinion is the only acceptable one, but if you&#39;re putting me in a compromizing position about forum rules, that&#39;s not cool. ;)

uhhh
01-28-2007, 11:32 PM
cezr-sent my sticker yet?
ill be sending your out tomorow.

elcs
01-28-2007, 11:37 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Jan 28 2007, 11:12 PM
what are you jewish...if not shut the fuck up....if so shut the fuck up.

i just think you needa calm down. he was obviously making a joke. if you dont enjoy racially slurred jokes then you dont belong anywhere on this planet. there is no where you can go nowerdays without hearing people make fun of others&#39; ethnic background or anything for that matter. do you get mad if someone makes a joke about you being short (supposing your on the short side), or near sighted, or whatever the fuck the case may be. well i&#39;m kind of beating around the bush but my point is its all in good fun and if you havent learned to put up with teasing...then you really arent gunna make it far in life. i mean i understand if the dude was parading around a swatstika saying "god hates jews" or some shit...but he was simply making a joke. so roll up a joint and forget about it. speaking of joints...i&#39;ma go get acquainted with one lol.
Members of my family and my ex-girlfriend&#39;s were jews in poland and were killed in the camps. But i guess that shit is hilarious, huh? comeparing teasing a person about their height to the holocaust...youre a fucking idiot.


Cezr, please for the love of god ban these pieces of shit. this is in no way funny. Dont just suspend them. ban their IP&#39;s forever. fuck that shit seriously.

Mr. Lefty
01-28-2007, 11:53 PM
Okay "dude"; for one, even "if" he/she/it/they were banned.. they can just get back on with a proxy. For two, you definately need to chill the fuck out, seriously, and three, I don&#39;t believe you can ban someone for making a racial slur or joke. It&#39;s called humor kid, don&#39;t like it, don&#39;t read it.

C3ZR ONE
01-28-2007, 11:56 PM
Lefty- you&#39;re wrong. I am supposed to ban people who make racial slurs or jokes. Lets drop this subject.
...And how the fuck are you supposed to know what you&#39;re reading till you&#39;ve read it?

......

elcs
01-28-2007, 11:56 PM
Originally posted by Mr. Lefty@Jan 29 2007, 12:53 AM
Okay "dude"; for one, even "if" he/she/it/they were banned.. they can just get back on with a proxy. For two, you definately need to chill the fuck out, seriously, and three, I don&#39;t believe you can ban someone for making a racial slur or joke. It&#39;s called humor kid, don&#39;t like it, don&#39;t read it.
fuck you too

Albert Fish
01-28-2007, 11:59 PM
the fact of the matter is some people take their religion seriously and dont like seeing it get dissed. no harm was intended im sure

bastardo and fosale im feelin those revok throws

ive been slacking on my graff game, someone mail me a new sketchbook, some prismas and decos and go pick up my cam from my buddy&#39;s or hook up my scanner

NOW

im sick of seeing people telling others to go simple, why dont these kids just look around and see what graffiti looks like. its LETTERS not discombobulated shapes

LAGE
01-29-2007, 12:08 AM
Rank i like all 3 of them but the R looks like a P and i like the handy in the second one. ALKA next time you bite don&#39;t take credit for it the letters you have there you bit and the guy who posted the it said don&#39;t bite(i can&#39;t remember who it was but they posted like 3 or 4 alphabets of letters in the old new to graff begin here thread)

Mr. Lefty
01-29-2007, 12:16 AM
some late-night shit.. http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/4130/seig3dis8.jpg

inkbits
01-29-2007, 02:09 AM
change it up some til you get a feel.

nemzone
01-29-2007, 04:07 AM
Originally posted by nemzone@Jan 28 2007, 09:53 PM


http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3314/imag0002qi6.jpg

1st in a while :rolleyes:
bump, only got like 1 comment :(

lefty, would be better if the letters were closer together

NiL
01-29-2007, 04:27 AM
NEMZ YOUR HAND SHAKES TOO MUCH CALM THE FUCK DOWN WITH THE DRUGS

na lol :P Looks neat as man simple clean and neat it&#39;s good.

Skeam
01-29-2007, 05:04 AM
Nemz looks good man its a bit hard to ready though maybe define the letters a bit more? i dunno lol.

this time i think i did over do it with the add ons, i think ill just go back to what i was doin... it takes so fucken long to do something like this aswell haha.


http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/4696/hpim2895asg0.jpg

mr pane
01-29-2007, 05:16 AM
not too bad but as u already said chill with the arrows n shit.

Mse
01-29-2007, 07:13 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jan 29 2007, 12:24 AM
Yeah, sure, Nobody on this forum was involved in the holocaust, but if I was told the story of how my grandfather or great grandfather spent his last minutes in a chamber, I think I&#39;d hold some feelings about it. Again, just my oppinion, and I&#39;m not gonna ego trip and say my oppinion is the only acceptable one, but if you&#39;re putting me in a compromizing position about forum rules, that&#39;s not cool. ;)
Serbians were amongst the most slaughered during ww2, im serbian. I think we lost 1 or 2 million people, but im not sure you can correct moi, anyway my great grandparents were killed by nazis. If i can joke about it everyone can, i hate when people get offended. If my jokes offend them ill apologize but still. You feel me?
i understand if people get offended by "****" etc etc. Ah im too tired for this

overall, im sorry
Though you should chill the fuck out, i tend to forget that religious comments are against teh rules. Dont take me seriously

im rambling again? i passed geography, i pwn teh worldzorz
word? word

nesk- im gonna be brutally honest, get rid of the fucking add-ons
all of them
you cant do a nice looking piece without them, how do you think it looks with them?
it looks like shit, so take it how you want to but seriously it looks like shit

anyway, a month of simples isnt "doing simples forever"
if you did em for 3 years id understand the complaning
[/rant]

peace i is sleepin

..SmOeK 1..
01-29-2007, 07:55 AM
Originally posted by LAGE+Jan 29 2007, 01:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (LAGE &#064; Jan 29 2007, 01:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Rank i like all 3 of them but the R looks like a P and i like the handy in the second one. ALKA next time you bite don&#39;t take credit for it the letters you have there you bit and the guy who posted the it said don&#39;t bite(i can&#39;t remember who it was but they posted like 3 or 4 alphabets of letters in the old new to graff begin here thread) [/b]

wtf are you talking about dont bite? I never bit anyone.


<!--QuoteBegin-Edward"Sezer"Hands@Jan 28 2007, 08:54 PM
ASB -- I like the Krum sketch, just that something seems wierd about the K. other stuff looks great

tricks -- where the the bars meet each other and you have the overlaps, i think that&#39;s overdone in your sketch... i dunno if that makes sense, i&#39;ll point it out with a pic if you don&#39;t understand.


k, so I decided to take the A you pointed out and try to use it as a basis for my other letters... i might ink this, but feedback first would be good :)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6319/photo0001sw7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
aren&#39;t those the letters from mr.wiggles?

mr. wiggles? who&#39;s that? if it is similar to another artist&#39;s it isn&#39;t intentional at all.][/quote]


Maybe talkin about this? I still dont understand how u can mistaken that for me.

slinks
01-29-2007, 09:10 AM
Originally posted by slinks@Jan 28 2007, 09:27 PM
dude heisk that looks pretty sweeeet


heres some throwies ive been working on... they say SLY. i hope thats not taken. if it is i didnt try. i was just messing with some leters. Crits please but disregard the bubbles and other random stuff. just letters.
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti038.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti037.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti036.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti035.jpg
crits crits crits crits crits
BUMP...crits please

skeam i think theres way too many arrows and extensions and the left side is a little bit crammed.

nemz thats pretty sweet. i like the colors.

mr lefty i like the style except for the weird angles and seperation of letters. but the letter style is cool.

k1o3n0
01-29-2007, 10:23 AM
Originally posted by Mse+Jan 29 2007, 08:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mse &#064; Jan 29 2007, 08:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@Jan 29 2007, 12:24 AM
Yeah, sure, Nobody on this forum was involved in the holocaust, but if I was told the story of how my grandfather or great grandfather spent his last minutes in a chamber, I think I&#39;d hold some feelings about it. Again, just my oppinion, and I&#39;m not gonna ego trip and say my oppinion is the only acceptable one, but if you&#39;re putting me in a compromizing position about forum rules, that&#39;s not cool. ;)
Serbians were amongst the most slaughered during ww2, im serbian. I think we lost 1 or 2 million people, but im not sure you can correct moi, anyway my great grandparents were killed by nazis. If i can joke about it everyone can, i hate when people get offended. If my jokes offend them ill apologize but still. You feel me?
i understand if people get offended by "****" etc etc. Ah im too tired for this

overall, im sorry
Though you should chill the fuck out, i tend to forget that religious comments are against teh rules. Dont take me seriously

im rambling again? i passed geography, i pwn teh worldzorz
word? word

nesk- im gonna be brutally honest, get rid of the fucking add-ons
all of them
you cant do a nice looking piece without them, how do you think it looks with them?
it looks like shit, so take it how you want to but seriously it looks like shit

anyway, a month of simples isnt "doing simples forever"
if you did em for 3 years id understand the complaning
[/rant]

peace i is sleepin [/b][/quote]
your people [serbians] killed my people[ethnic albanians] <_< :angry: ;)

slinks- you should work on the s, make it more of an s, i think its supposed to be an s, it says sly right?






id also work on the l




and the y....

krazzie_ammo
01-29-2007, 11:07 AM
NESK - im not really feeling that, too many unnecessary arrows flying around. im not expert...but extensions are used to fill the negative space between the letters, just try and incorporate that into your work :)

SLY - just do block letters at the moment, allow all the other ish.
these are all just pen freestyles...cant be bothered to do all the pencil work&#33;
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/7351/103fa1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i saw that i love lyfe thing someone did a couple pages back and it inspired to me to my own little one :P its a bit shoddy but its something...
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4527/102st3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/2019/101qe3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critazz?

krazzie_ammo
01-29-2007, 11:16 AM
NESK - i just worked it out, you have to many sharp angles...it gives it a wierd look....try and smooth them out a bit...

STAR01
01-29-2007, 11:20 AM
krazzie_ammo
i like the second one in in black you should defenitly do
something with those
sorry i ain&#39;t got no real comment, just clean up a bit

revolt92
01-29-2007, 12:43 PM
Krazzie i much prefered your old stuff from like 3-4 months ago, this stuffs nice but i really liked your old shit.

Slinks- i&#39;m not quite sure about it, not really feelin those letters.

Skeam- thats some nice shit but yeah you did kinda over do it with the add ons.

Peace

nemzone
01-29-2007, 01:02 PM
word, krazzie the stuff u were bustin out wen i first spoke to u on msn, was well good. and i was wanting to see it painted, but uv forgottem bout that shit :(

Gist
01-29-2007, 01:18 PM
sly im not feelin ur throwie man the is looks like two balls on top of each other and your why has some sort of retarded twist on the left side

kraz nice shit took me a bit to figure out whut it says cus its a little mesy but i got it:D

barse the only thing i would fix is that kink on the s in the middle

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/bomb.jpg

a throwie idea

Bastardo
01-29-2007, 01:24 PM
it looks like gest? what is it meant to say?
and then ill crit you properly.



http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9017/picture272au6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Blush/Nicole

pez ss
01-29-2007, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Jan 29 2007, 02:24 PM
it looks like gest? what is it meant to say?
and then ill crit you properly.



http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9017/picture272au6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Blush/Nicole
bastero that shits sick

krazzie_ammo
01-29-2007, 01:30 PM
yeah bastardooo, fresh colouringgg, but your L&#39;s kinda look like U&#39;s, but its all good. i like the style you got going on.

i cant remember what style you guys are on about :S was it the one where i had the double-line thing going on??

revolt92
01-29-2007, 01:33 PM
yeah i think so, i can just remember it but it definatly looked nice.

sema
01-29-2007, 01:35 PM
nesk i like that sketch dont loose all the addons just leave enough to keep the flow of your shit goin

krazzie im feelin the style id like to see maby alittle more color

nems clean style i dig it

sly work on ur style your s looks like a c

bastardo the shit is dope

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/zdtghzth.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/ereryere5.jpg
in the second one i know the e is outa porportion but i just wanted to see how the e looked in the style

nemzone
01-29-2007, 01:36 PM
here bastard, if we ever paint together, when im down england for training, then your hitting up a page in my book like that mate&#33; lol
~

sema i like the top flick&#33; letters just a weeee bbit disproportioned, but favourit from ya

Gist
01-29-2007, 01:40 PM
Originally posted by Gist@Jan 29 2007, 02:18 PM
sly im not feelin ur throwie man the is looks like two balls on top of each other and your why has some sort of retarded twist on the left side

kraz nice shit took me a bit to figure out whut it says cus its a little mesy but i got it:D

barse the only thing i would fix is that kink on the s in the middle

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/bomb.jpg

a throwie idea
it says gesc

dim
01-29-2007, 01:58 PM
gist it looks like you have a pretty good idea of what u are going for
i think it would look a lot better if you cleaned it up like on the two eyes on the "g" and the "e" and just a bit around the top of the "s"

MAERone
01-29-2007, 02:08 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 29 2007, 06:04 AM
Nemz looks good man its a bit hard to ready though maybe define the letters a bit more? i dunno lol.

this time i think i did over do it with the add ons, i think ill just go back to what i was doin... it takes so fucken long to do something like this aswell haha.


http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/4696/hpim2895asg0.jpg
dude you shit is fucking tight and dont listen to whoever that kid was dont chill with the arrows it works so good with your style

dim
01-29-2007, 02:19 PM
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6299/img0033ys1.jpg
this i simple thingy that i did
try to ignor the attempted erased lines
crits

MAERone
01-29-2007, 02:23 PM
thats pretty good for first simples just keep working on it
and just work on cleaning up your lines
practice&#33; practice&#33; practice&#33;

shamee1991
01-29-2007, 02:29 PM
yeh dont press so hard, wid the pencil. top simples tho, keep it up.

neuk
01-29-2007, 02:38 PM
haven&#39;t been on awhile, and I&#39;m a floater (don&#39;t post much) now theres another neuk?? so much for creativity.. damn..

shamee1991
01-29-2007, 02:40 PM
hahaa, killa.

Skesh
01-29-2007, 03:03 PM
Originally posted by neuk@Jan 29 2007, 09:38 PM
haven&#39;t been on awhile, and I&#39;m a floater (don&#39;t post much) now theres another neuk?? so much for creativity.. damn..
Neuk??&#33; are you dutch?

scoot
01-29-2007, 03:12 PM
new throw

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/29.jpg

critz on it please

Skesh
01-29-2007, 03:17 PM
wtf does it say?

scoot
01-29-2007, 03:18 PM
its not that hard to read... it sayd GEN

Skesh
01-29-2007, 03:21 PM
Definitely work on your N

Even now I know its a N, I still can&#39;t see it

get rid of the black dots in the N

ras
01-29-2007, 03:29 PM
MAERONE....you say to nesk..not to listen to Krazzie...when Krazzie BURNS you...so why the hell should he listen to you...Krazzie knows waaaay more than you..and everythang he said about Nesks peice if true...altough there is alot of addons etc. i understand he saaid he over did it..it still flows well...but imo..if he took off all the addons...well....lessend them...then it would look sicker...so MAER...you could stop telling people " dont listen " too people who actually know whut there talking about...i dunnoif its for me to say whut iv jus said...but i sure know enough...

i won be having flicks up for a while..i need to get on with my car design portofolio... B) :P

whahappen?
01-29-2007, 03:33 PM
Originally posted by HeiSk+Jan 28 2007, 10:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HeiSk &#064; Jan 28 2007, 10:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by HeiSk@Jan 28 2007, 09:30 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-HeiSk@Jan 28 2007, 09:14 PM
the last product of my piece for a battle http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/piecesexy.jpg

bumpppp [/b][/quote]
stop fucking bumping this its ugly as hell
the letters make no sense theres no e or i and the k is just retarded
and maer stop critting people you have no clue what your talking about
scoot does it say gem? define the letters more and fix the last letter

ras
01-29-2007, 03:35 PM
whappen....did u relize you bumped it yourself..haha..lol :P ..the only thang i like onit is the flare tops...iv always liked that..some Skuffer one shit lol

emokid
01-29-2007, 03:46 PM
shit all to crit. heisk throw is kind of ugly
gen throw is hard to read and that e with the teeth in is used so much.

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1595/dscn6248ab2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my contribution
tried to get some nice shading on the letters, which failed really

HazeAmaze
01-29-2007, 03:50 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jan 29 2007, 06:04 AM
Nemz looks good man its a bit hard to ready though maybe define the letters a bit more? i dunno lol.

this time i think i did over do it with the add ons, i think ill just go back to what i was doin... it takes so fucken long to do something like this aswell haha.


http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/4696/hpim2895asg0.jpg
psh

arrows are not played out if you can use them :P

I like it a lot, i think you used your arrows and ectenstions well in conjuntion with your peice, looks ill

Bazer
01-29-2007, 03:50 PM
emo kid, what do your write? is it pear or peak?

addicted
01-29-2007, 03:51 PM
Emokid - Its alright man. Work on the shading a bit. I absolutely love those letters nice work keep it up.

emokid
01-29-2007, 04:01 PM
cheers addicted
baze i write pear but it does like peak come to think of it

ras
01-29-2007, 04:01 PM
that would seriously make a dope K..

Edward"Sezer"Hands
01-29-2007, 04:36 PM
Originally posted by HazeAmaze+Jan 29 2007, 04:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HazeAmaze @ Jan 29 2007, 04:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Jan 29 2007, 06:04 AM
Nemz looks good man its a bit hard to ready though maybe define the letters a bit more? i dunno lol.

this time i think i did over do it with the add ons, i think ill just go back to what i was doin... it takes so fucken long to do something like this aswell haha.


http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/4696/hpim2895asg0.jpg
psh

arrows are not played out if you can use them :P

I like it a lot, i think you used your arrows and ectenstions well in conjuntion with your peice, looks ill [/b][/quote]
color time.

BFC
01-29-2007, 05:22 PM
Nesk, I like the extensions but maybe you shouldn&#39;t put as many inbetween the letters. Like have them come out at the sides more and not clutter the word up like that. Basically I just think your letters should be closer.The N and E are like just right but the rest are kinda spaced out.

Pear - Nice Letters.




Haven&#39;t been sketching much lately. Here&#39;s a quick throw and handstyle, crits?

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-28-07_3.jpg

kicklip9634
01-29-2007, 05:24 PM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3079/pesa2vx1.jpg
crits...
hiesk: that throw is ugly should go simpler
skeam: that looks relly good... add color
pear: i like the shading make the P and the R the same size as the other letters

kicklip9634
01-29-2007, 05:26 PM
nyda:clean that up and make the A not look like the D

bouncingsoul
01-29-2007, 05:29 PM
Emokid, I fucking love your stuff. I&#39;m starting to get into ballpoint shading myself and you&#39;ve had it down for a while now. Good shit

Nyda, the letters look wobbly and the marker makes it real blotchy/blurry... I like your handie though minus a few quirks and the played out stuff you put on there...

I&#39;m too lazy to crit anyone else so fuck you

Experimenting with random shit... I&#39;m not really feeling wildstyle and I hate doing addons so I&#39;m just not going to do them...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0603.jpg

shithead onerzzzz
01-29-2007, 05:31 PM
those colours are fresh&#33; where r u from, it looks euroish

shithead onerzzzz
01-29-2007, 05:33 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Jan 29 2007, 02:24 PM
it looks like gest? what is it meant to say?
and then ill crit you properly.



http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9017/picture272au6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Blush/Nicole
i was talking about this. where r u from? good work

kicklip9634
01-29-2007, 05:35 PM
Originally posted by kicklip9634@Jan 29 2007, 06:24 PM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3079/pesa2vx1.jpg
crits...
hiesk: that throw is ugly should go simpler
skeam: that looks relly good... add color
pear: i like the shading make the P and the R the same size as the other letters
bump end of page

Mse
01-29-2007, 06:06 PM
get rid of the red/orange penis&#39; and we&#39;ll talk

bouncing i like teh "e"

tiny tiny sketching (by my standards)

http://i15.tinypic.com/2ue74g6.jpg

"are you talking to me? ill kill you with my goddamn drill uh ah uh arrrrr"

Mse
01-29-2007, 06:14 PM
:( 2 post

Fosale!
01-29-2007, 06:35 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/rip.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/revokthrow.jpg
^first try that i didnt use
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/revok.jpg
piece battle

Fosale!
01-29-2007, 06:37 PM
sorry for the double post.
i fucked the R in my sketch.
@mse i love your letters. your style is so unique and i havent seen anything like the work you produce.
beautiful.

Hask420
01-29-2007, 07:15 PM
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/4139/asdfgxg7.jpg

hows this for a new style, i wanna fix up the K but its a start
critz?

Linkzone1
01-29-2007, 07:51 PM
hask - don&#39;t make so edges sharp and some rounded. Looks bad. Yes fix the K too.

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/7739/0003688dn0.jpg

Fube
01-29-2007, 08:10 PM
not really any crit i can give on this page, your all better then me so my crit is kinda pointless.

but bounce, i allways liked your sketches.

fosale: feelin the throw.

mse: sick style man. do u paint any of that?

kicklip: looks like your just takeing one simple sketch and trying to put extentions that dont really belong. maybe try and give the extentions some kind of form?

Link: music sheets?&#33; sweet. no color on 3d? and i also dont like how the s overlaps the e so much.

heres my simple sketch, no fill. it was for some battle. and the other is just me fuckin around.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/lucetextscan.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/seone2.jpg

RustyBurrito
01-29-2007, 08:13 PM
link, the E looks a little weird to me as well as the lack of the yellow quote thing on the left side. I like the colors though.

scoot
01-29-2007, 08:19 PM
does it say "scink"?

TricksForKids
01-29-2007, 08:22 PM
knews i gave you feedback on msn, cutie

just wanna give a shout out to bastardo for that hot fiyuh&#33;&#33;&#33;

kickflip, lose those weird differnt coloured vine things, trips me out, other than that nice block soid letters, keep it up

mse that face is so sick..make stickers and send them to me..along with locks of your hair so i can completel my shrine...

fosale, perfect example of how to develop, gorgeous handstyle, nice throws, and clean simple fresh letters, mwah&#33;

hask, same advice as linkz

linkz, lose colours for now, keep your eltters the same thickness as well, for now

fube, no idea what that says, but its kinda funky fresh, keep it upo


and finally, my exchange for nemz, the colour combo i chose was HORRIBLE, so i apologize

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8594/nemzyt1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dim
01-29-2007, 08:33 PM
nemz the color scheme is soooooooooooooooo sick

TricksForKids
01-29-2007, 08:49 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jan 29 2007, 09:22 PM
knews i gave you feedback on msn, cutie

just wanna give a shout out to bastardo for that hot fiyuh&#33;&#33;&#33;

kickflip, lose those weird differnt coloured vine things, trips me out, other than that nice block soid letters, keep it up

mse that face is so sick..make stickers and send them to me..along with locks of your hair so i can completel my shrine...

fosale, perfect example of how to develop, gorgeous handstyle, nice throws, and clean simple fresh letters, mwah&#33;

hask, same advice as linkz

linkz, lose colours for now, keep your eltters the same thickness as well, for now

fube, no idea what that says, but its kinda funky fresh, keep it upo


and finally, my exchange for nemz, the colour combo i chose was HORRIBLE, so i apologize

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8594/nemzyt1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump ;)

etch a sketch
01-29-2007, 09:08 PM
tricks i like your colors and the fill in and the structure is dope and i like it :) sorry i cant crit anything cuz theres nothing to crit from me :) its good enough :)

Billburg
01-29-2007, 09:12 PM
Tricksforkids- that nemz one is good, i like the pink/purple but i dont like the blue and black

dont know if i posted this a while ago or not ( i dont think so but......)


http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep042.jpghttp://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/tag1bleep043.jpg

thief 127
01-29-2007, 10:50 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/apple.jpg

NiL
01-29-2007, 11:08 PM
Fuckn nice tree haha, nice work man.

sank one
01-29-2007, 11:10 PM
bawk - ill as always, specially the fill its funky

thief - go simple, way less addons

bill - same as theif

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0403.jpg

heres wackness from history... ignore the lil bunny thing

thief 127
01-29-2007, 11:18 PM
yo but thats the kind of style it is
u mean the too much ribbonish stuff?
its a new style im workin wit

imported_big_boss
01-29-2007, 11:22 PM
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c102/elbruse/MVC-007F.jpg

old sketch. Boredom in class.

C3ZR ONE
01-29-2007, 11:44 PM
Big Boss- I like the tree. The letters, not so much. Overall it&#39;s a nice sketch tho.

Sank- The A kinda looks like an R. Good simple tho.

Thief- The coloring is REAL fresh. The karaks kinda damage the picture tho.

Billburg- Not feelin any of it. It could be worse, but go simpler. You haven&#39;t got a grasp on letters natural flow.

Tricks- gives handjobs.................. :lol: ;)


I&#39;ve been doing graffiti since October of &#39;05 (not including the year that I tagged when I was a kid in &#39;93ish) and I still go simple (probably still not simple enough)
...You hear people say "Go simple" over and over like a broken record and it&#39;s boring as shit, but it&#39;s true. Good graff takes time, so take the time to get good. Some will catch on faster than others, but 9.5 times out of 10 if someone says go simple, it&#39;s probably good advice. ;)



My first canvas. I did it for my brothers birthday. The letters suck. :(
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4683/im000559ew5.jpg


Since I didn&#39;t like that one, I did this on paper and stuck it in a &#036;3.00 plastic box frame. :lol: I like it better.
http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/7650/im000560ut9.jpg

imported_big_boss
01-29-2007, 11:50 PM
I really wasn&#39;t too focused on letter structure on that particular sketch. I was trying to keep it simple, but I kinda fucked up because it was so small, so they aren&#39;t proportional at all.

That paper piece is fresh as hell CEZR. I love the colors.

sky 5
01-30-2007, 12:10 AM
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/5060/1222230bh8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

JESE . . . my first try at "abstract 3d alien city" style . . . lol damn im a fuckin herb . . . dried up sharpeis are great for shading/3ds . . looks alot like felons black n white tower karaks . .