Blackbooks

[SceneKid]

Originally posted by ztec@Nov 26 2005, 01:15 PM

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5168/fitt7ck.th.jpg (http://img297.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fitt7ck.jpg)

comments
You need to work on ur letter structure and making things stand out.
It looks like a bunch of blobbyness

[KaSe01]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Nov 25 2005, 04:55 PM
ouch^

http://img496.imageshack.us/img496/2460/regsbykay1fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

regs by my boy kay 10

http://img496.imageshack.us/img496/2597/regsredstars8oz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


regs by me


Peace, feedback, etc
i like kay 10's style on that sketch, both are pretty good.

[Speq9]

colors are the coolness
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v102/c0heedx/homecoming012.jpg

[Jank]

Originally posted by SceneKid@Nov 26 2005, 06:18 PM
Scene, sry I didn't know someone else here went by that. It's not my usual name

but here it is again cuz i didn't really get any feedback except for you callin me a bitch.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v102/c0heedx/homecoming012.jpg
dont overlap the 3d, so if theres a bit of a letter overlapping another letter, dont show the 3dover the letter behind...do u get me?
also, i would try doin a smaller sketch, same style... i dno y..maybe ignore that.
i would make the colour divide constant throughout, so for example the green line in the middle lines up all the way through. and the 2nd is too fat in my opinion(like stretched <---&#62;) just my thoughts, safe

[Yaiya.]

Originally posted by Speq9@Nov 26 2005, 02:00 PM
colors are the coolness
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v102/c0heedx/homecoming012.jpg
i think its alright actually.. nice

[Select_One]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/focksified2.jpg

focks, ninja kitsune :ph34r:

[AMAZ tbscrew]

that shit looks insane lol

[meetermaid]

focks- your k doesn&#39;t have like a 1st leg, and looks like you had fun in photoshop?

scene- some of the letters overlap each other, some of them don&#39;t. don&#39;t do that

[__:Amok:_]

i perfer accualy colorin shit. makes it more artistic. computer painting is whack if u ask me :blink:

[JETc17]

something im working on, constructive criticism please :)

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/2576/depa29rl.jpg

[Myme]

Not bad, i&#39;d say to not fold your letters in, like you did on the D and some parts of the E.. lost the things on the bottom and top ends of your E... but besides that just keep sketching it looks alright

[cess!]

Originally posted by Select_One@Nov 26 2005, 11:34 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/focksified2.jpg

focks, ninja kitsune :ph34r:
NICEE

[Select_One]

the k? it has a first leg- look a little harder, and yea i painted the background navy blue in photoshop- kill me.

but thanks for the props guys- dress to impress

[Sluts_r_us]

i see it...it goes under the c

[JETc17]

second sketch. long night <_<

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/5570/depa39iy.jpg

[Select_One]

depa- drop the stupid things comin off the left and right, curve your letters.





sketch extremely slowly, with thin lines and a big eraser. trust me on that. Get a thin outline pen (felt tip) for outlining (after you sketch with a soft pancil). Dont worry about 3d till you get btter letters down. thats my advice.


:lol:

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

photo edited <_<

[Visualaid]

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b317/Visualaidone/dose.jpg

i kno 2 many addon-s go back to simple, i was jsut experimenting.

[Jank]

is it jose? i really like it, but that mite just b the colours.... ye the little skinny addons make it look a lil confusing, but its always gd to experiment...tone it down a little but keep it up man, its gd

[TricksForKids]

http://img496.imageshack.us/img496/2460/regsbykay1fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

regs by my boy kay 10

http://img496.imageshack.us/img496/2597/regsredstars8oz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


regs by me


Peace, feedback, etc

bumpity bump bump

[Jank]

post it a few more times....

[AoAssis]

dam dude i have seen ur shit 5 times the past week stop bumpin ur shit, u already got all the feed u could get and all of it was good so stop bumpin

[Select_One]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/focksified4.jpg
colored.. :ph34r: I like the S more than the other letters- so i guess my next attempt will be to make all the letters more like that S. sssss

[TricksForKids]

lol yo ao, my boy was bumping it too, the other guy that sketched i just realized, sorry man, haha, no hard feelings to tell you the truth focks, the s doesnt fit in for me, the bottom far right curve of the S has nothing going on compared to the other letters, and im not feelin that arrow on the top of the c, other than that its reallly fresh, keep it up


Peace

[Myme]

A thousand add-ons and bits don&#39;t hide the fact that your letter structure is very poor. (To Focks)

[JETc17]

Originally posted by Visualaid@Nov 27 2005, 11:06 AM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b317/Visualaidone/dose.jpg

i kno 2 many addon-s go back to simple, i was jsut experimenting.
looks pretty whack to me :huh:

[Jank]

i dunno i quite like the focks. oo many addons admitedly, and the F is odd and the K needs work. The s doesnt fit with the other letters but its really nice... work on it, its not great yet, buts not bad either

[Select_One]

myme- post one of your sketches.

[nerdx]

FOCKS, i kinda like it. the S is nice. but my fav letter is the F
just because its odd, diffrent than most peoples stuff.




a full name throww im working on
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b315/nerdx/IMG_1612.jpg
can you tell what it says? the I is a bit hard to do with the style, so the X kinda takes the place of the dot. i hope that point is gotten.

[JETc17]

the x for the dot is obvious. looks like "SEME"

[meetermaid]

i didn&#39;t even notice the i thing, i thought it was just sem, try to make the i as big as the other letters cause it&#39;s not going to be too noticable when it&#39;s that small

[ztec]

Hello . . 1 ive bin working on . .im not sure bout a colour yet :unsure:
advice please. .

btw ive bin drawing about 2weeks now . . :)

http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/1681/img0035re.th.jpg (http://img461.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0035re.jpg)

[JETc17]

its better than the past few for sure. thats all i have to say

[ztec]

cheers :) but tht dnt reli help me :unsure:

[JETc17]

yeah i didnt really want to give any advice cause i dont know waht u should do with it then get flamed

[ztec]

:( i dnt kno how im sopesd 2 get better wen i dnt get ne feed back

[meetermaid]

ztec, way better than anything i&#39;d done after 2 weeks, i really like it, just maybe make the letters all the same relative size and do something with the t, it&#39;s wierd

[ztec]

cheers :) . heres some others i have dun but i goh bad feed back :(

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5168/fitt7ck.th.jpg (http://img297.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fitt7ck.jpg)

http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/1681/img0035re.th.jpg (http://img461.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0035re.jpg)

[ztec]

sorry i posted the rong 1 (last 1)

[ztec]

there these are the rite 1s

http://img197.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ztec7es.jpg

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5168/fitt7ck.th.jpg (http://img297.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fitt7ck.jpg)

[funky monky]

i dont like that style ztec try sticking with the one u did before but that wasnt colored. that style was pretty nice but ur t needed a bit of work
keep it up man and practise practise and practise again

[ztec]

kk funky munkey. . uh u goh ne ideas bout my T

[funky monky]

try making it a bit liek this, i kno my computer graff skills suck but u can get wat i mean
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/8143/ztec0aq.th.jpg (http://img393.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ztec0aq.jpg)

[ztec]

i understand thnks

[Anth]

[img=http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5717/mygraff0090nh.jpg] (http://[img=http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5717/mygraff0090nh.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/8366/mygraff4tp.jpg] (http://[img=http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/8366/mygraff4tp.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/5562/mygraff0017yr.jpg] (http://[img=http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/5562/mygraff0017yr.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/384/mygraff0025tj.jpg] (http://[img=http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/384/mygraff0025tj.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8492/mygraff0036zm.jpg] (http://[img=http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8492/mygraff0036zm.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/5655/mygraff0042wy.jpg] (http://[img=http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/5655/mygraff0042wy.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/4817/mygraff0055ti.jpg] (http://[img=http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/4817/mygraff0055ti.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/4120/mygraff0065dq.jpg] (http://[img=http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/4120/mygraff0065dq.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1641/mygraff0073jh.jpg] (http://[img=http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/1641/mygraff0073jh.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8550/mygraff0083fm.jpg] (http://[img=http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8550/mygraff0083fm.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[img=http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/1018/mygraff0097bz.jpg] (http://[img=http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/1018/mygraff0097bz.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[Anth]

Shit,it took me forever to do that and now none of them work.

[AoAssis]

forget it we dont want to look at all that shit post 2 of ur best ones

[JETc17]

yeah, all your urls are fucked. juse use the code they gave u and put up thumbnails

[minesweep]

thtrowie
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/5773/picture0187ba.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Speq9]

wth is the second letter minesweep?

[minesweep]

it says ea i geuss i should make the letters more obvious

[JETc17]

eo? damn that thing is screwed.. i say scratch it and start over

[nerdx]

iknew it was a A, i like the a, but i think the hole in it should be smaller.

not really sure what do to on the e, but the A i like.

[Iamyourrealfatherbitchnigga]

try and make the e and the a the same size ish, and try and get them to flow together more.

[AoAssis]

hmm i dont reli like how the E has a indent but the E is ok u can keep that but i think the A is wack its hard to recognize


edit-i have turned into a post whore..............dam myself well i am gana start sketchin again after being a post whore for who knows how long and i will try and stop being a dick to everyone

[Speq9]

yeah I thought the a was like a super screwed (whould that be a whore?) i

[minesweep]

thanks for the feedback just wanted to get some opinions on it

[Speq9]

2 letter throws are overplayed, be different

[JETc17]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 27 2005, 07:40 PM
hmm i dont reli like how the E has a indent but the E is ok u can keep that but i think the A is wack its hard to recognize


edit-i have turned into a post whore..............dam myself well i am gana start sketchin again after being a post whore for who knows how long and i will try and stop being a dick to everyone
woot&#33;&#33; :lol: haha jp man. have fun. show us some of your shit when you get back

[minesweep]

2 letter throws are overplayed, be different
so...what? one letter?

[JETc17]

wow if thats not the dumbest thing ive ever heard

[Speq9]

whats the use of writing if you arent different? how are you going to be seen if you arent different? dont conform...its pointless

[Speq9]

what the hell&#33;?&#33;?&#33; Ao, you cant stop bein a dick to everyone, it wont be the same

[AMAZ tbscrew]

i do one letter trowies =]

[Speq9]

pics?

[minesweep]

well one letter throws aren&#39;t too uncommon any more either

[JETc17]

Originally posted by minesweep@Nov 27 2005, 08:00 PM
well one letter throws aren&#39;t too uncommon any more either
really? iver never seen any... maybe its just me ;) sorry i be hating

[Iamyourrealfatherbitchnigga]

the realest *****s use 2 letter throws, ya heard....

[Speq9]

exactly why I wouldnt concider doing 2 letter...overplayed unless styled so different it catches the eye

[minesweep]

QUOTE (minesweep @ Nov 27 2005, 08:00 PM)
well one letter throws aren&#39;t too uncommon any more eitherÂ*


really? iver never seen any... maybe its just meÂ* sorry i be hating
from robots will kill, the s at the top now you can&#39;t say you&#39;ve never seen one :P
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/10152005005205Scan0034034.jpg

[JETc17]

funky. whatever floats your boat

[meetermaid]

the sic guy on these forums that posted the same sketch over and over totally bit that s on that pic

[Iamyourrealfatherbitchnigga]

Originally posted by Speq9@Nov 27 2005, 08:04 PM
exactly why I wouldnt concider doing 2 letter...overplayed unless styled so different it catches the eye
you should really mix it up, it depends where your bombing, if it calls for a 2 letter throw depending on how heat it is, then do a 2 letter, but if the times right, and you have enough time on a heat spot to do a full letter throw, then do it, just like knowing when to leave a bomb or throwup hollowfilled, or when to fill it.

[minesweep]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Nov 27 2005, 08:10 PM
the sic guy on these forums that posted the same sketch over and over totally bit that s on that pic


http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/10152005005339Scan0035035.jpg

but i think that "s" is kinda generic

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by Speq9@Nov 27 2005, 07:57 PM
what the hell&#33;?&#33;?&#33; Ao, you cant stop bein a dick to everyone, it wont be the same
u kno there once was a time long long ago......yes wen i only had 50 posts i belive it was a very long time ago.....and i used to not be a dick.......yes i was a nice guy tryin to be nice to everyone and posted sketches...until one day...........i came out of my shell and became a dick, but now its time to crawl bak into my shell where i came from and start sketching again, im sry to disapoint u but maybe i will come out of my shell again

[AMAZ tbscrew]

sorry i dont have pics of my one letter trow..=(

ao...do whatever u want lol

[Speq9]

Ao....well at least it wont surprise me when you just lose it on one of us

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 27 2005, 08:33 PM
sorry i dont have pics of my one letter trow..=(

ao...do whatever u want lol
lol only reason i am not bein a dick ne more is cuz to many ppl are complaing and that is expected wen ur bein a dick but it just gets borin after a while and i want to get better :) i made new letters but they arent together they&#39;r just on scraps of paper so i will put it together in a while hopefully then i will post i saw one letter throws are wak unless u got a kool letters like O,Y,S,M those r letters i like

[nerdx]

Originally posted by minesweep+Nov 27 2005, 08:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (minesweep @ Nov 27 2005, 08:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-meetermaid@Nov 27 2005, 08:10 PM
the sic guy on these forums that posted the same sketch over and over totally bit that s on that pic


http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/10152005005339Scan0035035.jpg

but i think that "s" is kinda generic [/b][/quote]
generic.

if i was ganna do a one letter throw, it deffinitly wouldnt be a generic form of a letter.
it would be the dopets form i could come up with. not something that eveyone has in their bag.


that S isnt generic if you ask me.

[djsupreeme]

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6760/graff03118mf.jpg

[Confuz]

nice coloring ^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v626/Devin875/sens2.jpg
short for sensez

[Myme]

Sorry, but make excuses all you want that S is not as generic as you think, if you can give me 3 other writers who use the same S (2 big ass lumps, little line thing going under the throw) then i&#39;ll excuse him.. but for now...

CHOMP CHOMP

[AoAssis]

^^ i dont like the N looks weird and the E doesnt reli fit the style of the S


http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/9224/picture1411vx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i will color it soon

edit- woops that was to confuz

[minesweep]

Originally posted by Myme@Nov 27 2005, 09:59 PM
Sorry, but make excuses all you want that S is not as generic as you think, if you can give me 3 other writers who use the same S (2 big ass lumps, little line thing going under the throw) then i&#39;ll excuse him.. but for now...

CHOMP CHOMP
i know he bit that pic because all three letters are exactly the same as that sketch in the battle section

[AoAssis]

and here it is colored

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/4138/picture1426ri.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Speq9]

haha...nice, i like the letter style you have

[minesweep]

i like it remik but the exstension on the k is a little bit big and your shadow might be messed up on the k not really sure, but i like it

http://img496.imageshack.us/img496/7569/picture0193qn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Speq9]

a looks a LOT better....i can make it out :D dont know about the Xs though

[minesweep]

ok thanks i wasn&#39;t sure either but i don&#39;t think they&#39;ll stay x&#39;s

[AoAssis]

thx speq

minesweep- ALOT better just put those old circle bak in not X or put sumtin else in there just dont X&#39;s

[djsupreeme]

http://xs57.xs.to/pics/05481/p001.jpg
http://xs57.xs.to/pics/05481/p002.jpg

[AoAssis]

^ work on ur handy and the S on the second one is wack u messed up i can tell,try and do sumtin wit the S i dont like it



comments on mine plz? :ph34r: :ph34r:

[djsupreeme]

yeah my handy isnt exactly like that. it looks more like this http://xs57.xs.to/pics/05481/4ok.jpg. but ya im workin on my s. also yours, i liked it when it wasent coloured. maybe because there glare? i dunno but i really like the 2 dots in the middle. and the extension on the k is perfect length id say. also make the M a bit skinnier.

[Speq9]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 27 2005, 11:39 PM
^ work on ur handy and the S on the second one is wack u messed up i can tell,try and do sumtin wit the S i dont like it



comments on mine plz? :ph34r: :ph34r:
to be honest lose the double holes on the r and e (keep the bigger one on the r and the smaller on the e) and lose half the extention on the k and round the end off

[Bartic]

Attempt 1, been read round about starting simple hence...
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3087/mtro6za.jpg

[Speq9]

trust me that is by no means simple, work on simple letters (bubble/block) and your sizing is off. Looks like the s is scared of me and the o wants to make out :P btw doodle with a pen thats what a friend told me. Keeps you from worrying too much about one mistake and perfecting it faster. Cant exactly erase paint :)

[Sire]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 27 2005, 10:46 PM
and here it is colored

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/4138/picture1426ri.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
pretty clean lookin

[Bartic]

Thx for that man, it was supposed to be an M but what can you expect. More Simple..http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/5590/stc5gx.jpg

[djsupreeme]

you know people who fidget at school/work can lose up to 500 calories a day. theres a fact, go eat it.

[djsupreeme]

liking it except loose the little "bit thingy -seen" on the t.

[Speq9]

Originally posted by Bartic@Nov 28 2005, 12:12 AM
Thx for that man, it was supposed to be an M but what can you expect. More Simple..http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/5590/stc5gx.jpg
woman* and sorry, didnt know it was an m lol. yeah what you posted is a good bit more simple then what you had, just work on that more and more and more and more and....

[Ume]

not what i normally write, just a drawing dealio.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM004221.jpg

what i normally do
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM004046.jpg

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by Speq9+Nov 27 2005, 11:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Speq9 @ Nov 27 2005, 11:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@Nov 27 2005, 11:39 PM
^ work on ur handy and the S on the second one is wack u messed up i can tell,try and do sumtin wit the S i dont like it



comments on mine plz? :ph34r: :ph34r:
to be honest lose the double holes on the r and e (keep the bigger one on the r and the smaller on the e) and lose half the extention on the k and round the end off [/b][/quote]
hmm guess ur styles different them mine, i like the OO in the letters and i like the etension on the k :lol: but just for the hell of it i might do wat u said just to see wat it would look like


and supreme ya the glare messed my pic up

[AoAssis]

wow ume i always thought u were one of those ppl who did crazy ass wild style since u and vegi and havik hang around in the normal bb forum but i guess it isnt, even if it isnt its still very nice, i aint feelin the colorin on the first piece but the second one is hott, u used decos rite? burgandy for the fill and light green for force field? ya those colors look nice together i did a piece with same exact colors

[Speq9]

Originally posted by AoAssis+Nov 28 2005, 12:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Nov 28 2005, 12:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Speq9@Nov 27 2005, 11:52 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@Nov 27 2005, 11:39 PM
^ work on ur handy and the S on the second one is wack u messed up i can tell,try and do sumtin wit the S i dont like it



comments on mine plz? :ph34r:Â* :ph34r:
to be honest lose the double holes on the r and e (keep the bigger one on the r and the smaller on the e) and lose half the extention on the k and round the end off
hmm guess ur styles different them mine, i like the OO in the letters and i like the etension on the k :lol: but just for the hell of it i might do wat u said just to see wat it would look like


and supreme ya the glare messed my pic up [/b][/quote]
yeah i covered the extension up with my thumb...seemed to look better to me, maybe you wouldnt like it though

[Speq9]

double post...

[Ume]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Nov 28 2005, 01:22 AM
wow ume i always thought u were one of those ppl who did crazy ass wild style since u and vegi and havik hang around in the normal bb forum but i guess it isnt, even if it isnt its still very nice, i aint feelin the colorin on the first piece but the second one is hott, u used decos rite? burgandy for the fill and light green for force field? ya those colors look nice together i did a piece with same exact colors
haha why would you think that? i suck, maybe a year into it? and i just like simples more then wild styles(maybe cause i cant do them right? haha) i might hang around in the normal bb part but i don&#39;t post flicks, i just like to talk. the colour on the first sucks, i dont have anything to blend colours into each other like i wanted so yeah, and no i don&#39;t use decos i use sharpies, lauranatine gel markers and just aboiut any other mark i got lying around.

[AoAssis]

http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/6610/picture14223ye.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

is that wat u ment speq ehh i think the E looks better but i think the R is retarded now and the K just has no style kno wat i mean?

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by Ume+Nov 28 2005, 12:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ume @ Nov 28 2005, 12:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@Nov 28 2005, 01:22 AM
wow ume i always thought u were one of those ppl who did crazy ass wild style since u and vegi and havik hang around in the normal bb forum but i guess it isnt, even if it isnt its still very nice, i aint feelin the colorin on the first piece but the second one is hott, u used decos rite? burgandy for the fill and light green for force field? ya those colors look nice together i did a piece with same exact colors
haha why would you think that? i suck, maybe a year into it? and i just like simples more then wild styles(maybe cause i cant do them right? haha) i might hang around in the normal bb part but i don&#39;t post flicks, i just like to talk. the colour on the first sucks, i dont have anything to blend colours into each other like i wanted so yeah, and no i don&#39;t use decos i use sharpies, lauranatine gel markers and just aboiut any other mark i got lying around. [/b][/quote]
i see u got some dirty socks layin around :lol:

[Ume]

yeah i just noticed how many i got laying there to...maybe i should clean up? :D

[AoAssis]

^^ ur pretty cool............thought u might be gay like other ppl on this site most ppl in the bb forum are full of them self but ur not, u live in astrialia rite? u veg and there was one more guy i think

[Ume]

nah i live in canada.

[AoAssis]

i c lots of ppl from canada on here

[djsupreeme]

im from canada. 204 pegcity

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by Sire+Nov 28 2005, 12:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sire @ Nov 28 2005, 12:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@Nov 27 2005, 10:46 PM
and here it is colored

http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/4138/picture1426ri.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
pretty clean lookin [/b][/quote]
bump

[faint rem one]

not feelin it. dunno y. :(

& this site/shop is based in canada, thats y.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture579.jpg

new crew throwie...hopein to put it up in this dooppeee ass spot i found

feeed?

[Jugga]

Don&#39;t really like it...
Not feeling the pointy shits..

I&#39;m not liking how the bottom leg of the K overlaps the spine..
if you get what I mean..




Remik, real nice...
I&#39;m feelin&#39; that shit..

I just think you should move your K up a bit, and make the I a little smaller...
so it can go with the subtle big-small-big that the REM part of it have..

[meetermaid]

love that n rem, but the f and k are wierd, i don&#39;t know how to explain why in words so i did it up in paint, here&#39;s how i&#39;d do that:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/6884/nfk9br.jpg

remik, the holes look good on the e but not so good on the r, maybe move em over to the right more, and the extension bit that goes up on the k is kinda ugly. i want your markers :(

[flclnaruto1213]

aoassis im feelin that a lot, i just think the bottom of the e should be a little bigger, to balance it out more. i really like the style though its mad clean.
heres what i mean

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/2130/myhelp1nd.png (http://imageshack.us)

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

dont ask, let it cooommmmmmeeeee&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[ztec]

sumthing ive just dun .. comments please

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/554/img0044xn.th.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0044xn.jpg)

[faint rem one]

hows this one guys? (and girls ;) )

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture580.jpg

& ignore the 3d.

:ph34r:

[Sluts_r_us]

better

[d3faultu53r]

http://static.flickr.com/25/36676594_988a0f45b7_m.jpg

old sketch

[faint rem one]

:huh:

[Bartic]

I know the 3d is off in some spots.. still trying to get that down.. the "t" through and "g" and "a" is rather homosexual but eh next time

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7616/gta9sr.jpg

[AoAssis]

thx for the feed everyone&#33; :)

jugga- ya i had the paper side ways wen i was drawin thats y it came out slantin like that but i will make it straighter next time

meeter-there seems to be alot of contraversary (sp?) on the extension on the K 50% like it 50% dont but without it, it has no style u can chek last page i edited it out on paint......

naruto- i watched a couple of those episodes, brother borowed it from someone at school.....ne way ya i like the E lol but i guess ur style is different then mine cuz some ppl liked the E others didint but i guess all in all most ppl liked the sketch for one reason or another and they had dislikes but for now its my best sketch i guess? ill do a couple with modifications and post em up


once again thx for the feed everyone


















wow its weird not bein a dick to ne one ne more.......ne one else think it weird?

[Speq9]

overall i like it, if you like it and are satisfied thats all that matters so stick with it :D

[Ume]

yeah i liked it, just leave the E with the 2 dots, and the R with one.

[nerdx]

Ao, the remik is dope. Im just not feeling the 2 dot hting.
also dont change the E how that one guy drew it in, that is wack.



that last NFK is pretty nice, just move the letter closer together.
i hope you guys all live in the same area, cause online crews suck.

[JETc17]

Originally posted by faint rem one@Nov 28 2005, 04:29 PM
hows this one guys? (and girls ;) )

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture580.jpg

& ignore the 3d.

:ph34r:
see if you can make that bottom right piece of the N not so big

[Sluts_r_us]

uhh make the n the same size as the other letters...idk it looks a lil smaller to me 0_o

[Anth]

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/3227/mygraff0024ph.th.jpg[/URL][/IMG]

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/3259/mygraff3lw.th.jpg[/URL][/IMG]

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/4206/mygraff0065pw.th.jpg[/URL][/IMG]

heres some of mine.

[AoAssis]

make em bigger or so we can seem em beetter

ne way the middle one is wack start simple

top one i cant even read

botom one is ok the 2 middle letters have no structure at all i cant read em so try and fix those things

[Speq9]

anth, your 2 y/o brothers on a roll&#33; what is it?

[ion-i]

these are just sketches i draw up during classes
from the first one, i just drew whatever idea popped into my head, and for some reason a popsicle was one of em. just good ideas that I think of that I would want to paint, some which are dumb, some which I would progress on.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v158/PlayBoarder/sketches1.jpg

and then i drew this up a whiles ago, the &#39;I&#39; is bad I know (looks like a small &#39;z&#39;), but no use changing since it&#39;s just a sketch. ;)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v158/PlayBoarder/ionisketch.jpg

[AoAssis]

the popsicle is prety cool

[AoAssis]

5 min crappy edit in paint got boredhttp://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4431/picture14221rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Anth]

anth, your 2 y/o brothers on a roll&#33; what is it?

Wtf do you mean.....

thanx for the feed back AoAssis.

[Detroit]

AO take off the K extension it has enuf style witout it.

Ion yo sketches r lookin good keep it up the I looks fine it dont look like a z to me

[Speq9]

means i cant make out what in the gods name it is. looks like a toddler drew it up.

[Bartic]

man i feel like i&#39;m pestering all u guys/girls for feedback but heres another... (e&#39;s a bit wonkey)
http://img278.imageshack.us/img278/9440/rise8ps.jpg

[Ume]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/rise8ps.jpg

[AoAssis]

all over the place

[Sire]

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b146/Skatedim/PC050549.jpg
heres da trI Dee

i hate the E any suggestions on it

sry, my cam sucks and so does my skaner

[Sire]

i would love some feed back please :(

[ion-i]

put a lower case &#39;e&#39; above the arrow on the R, it looks kinda crushed at the end with the &#39;R&#39; going over the capitol &#39;E&#39;.

:P it was feedback.

[Sire]

:D wooohooo, i was thinking of doing that or a better version of that e more like a 3

[YNOT iN SF]

wow Sire..
i thought u were good too....

but keep on doin....

[near]

Originally posted by Sire@Nov 29 2005, 12:43 AM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b146/Skatedim/PC050549.jpg
heres da trI Dee

i hate the E any suggestions on it

sry, my cam sucks and so does my skaner
the e is whack which you already know - yer on the right track with the idea of a &#39;3&#39; just work it so it looks like your other letters and on that note the &#39;R&#39; is different sstyle than the other letters but it is the nicest letter u got there so try to make an &#39;E&#39; that goes well with that R then work out the other 2 letters....o yea and lose the sig pic of the goofy crackers with rags on their face

[near]

just as a side thought those kids in the NFK pic (which i assume is your crew) look like theyre gonna go bombing (your in someones bedroom &#39;geared up&#39;) anyway i sincerely hope you guys dont go out with rags on your faces and backpacks or even worse a respirator mask that is just so unbelievably bait i dont even know...you gotta look as normal as possible so as not to attract unwanted attention and all attention is unwanted if you catch my drift if its just a whatever pic then my fault just chiming in with my 2 cents

[faint rem one]

no, fuck that we walk out of my house all gear up, rags and resperators on our faces, paint out, tagging the mailboxes and fucking all the cars up and down my street. then we get in the car like that and blast music hella loud all the way to the spot, windows down...and we keep the car blasting music while we paint. duh. <_<


....o yea and lose the sig pic of the goofy crackers with rags on their face

why does race matter so much? im seriously sick and tired of ppl sayin cracker this and whiteboy that. just stfu aboiut race, what we look like in a picture and just fucking give him feed on his fucking piece, thats all he cares about hearing.

now stfu about us. THANKS.

[JETc17]

^ +1 :lol:

[ztec]

Originally posted by ztec@Nov 28 2005, 02:18 PM
sumthing ive just dun .. comments please

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/554/img0044xn.th.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0044xn.jpg)
comments please :)

[unknown_1]

you on the right track kinda but dont make your 3D fatter than your letters and loose the pointy thing on the bottom of your T
just keep practacin you&#39;ll get there someday

[JETc17]

your definitely getting somwhere. i wouldnt start folding in your letters so soon if you know what i mean

[faint rem one]

i like ur z and c. c especially.

[Sluts_r_us]

karakter i made....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/DSCF0370.jpg

uhh sketch...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/Picture.jpg

[KiNoSeK]

http://www.geocities.com/kinosek1/Picture.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/kinosek1/Picture012.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/kinosek1/Picture023.jpg

Heres a Few.

[KiNoSeK]

Sorry, Images Resized

http://www.geocities.com/kinosek1/Picture.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/kinosek1/Picture012.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/kinosek1/Picture023.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

sorry images dont work..

[Hitch]

yeah didnt work

[BesO]

kinosek...im guessing you didnt see the thousands of posts that say "start with basic letters"...

[Sluts_r_us]

ok someone comment on mine plz

[BesO]

i dont like that karak...looks too simple...and that sketch you did looks alright, make the "J" rounded more at the bottom, and your "C" looks too much like the "E"...

[Speq9]

Jeco is that your name? Anyway fot the karak the eyes should be changed, squares dont agree with circular objects, also try to line your ear lines up with the cheeks...hard to explain so i used MS paint
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/738/dscf03708ch.jpg

[BesO]

^ that looks better...but ya, speg9&#39;s right, the eyes have to change

[Sluts_r_us]

k thnx

[QuestionMark?]

Here&#39;s a piece im doin for a chick im interested in.
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b270/mekas/scan0003.jpg
What do you guys think?

[BRAINE]

doing pieces for girls is dumb.
but it doesnt look really really bad

[QuestionMark?]

Originally posted by BRAINE@Nov 29 2005, 07:39 PM
doing pieces for girls is dumb.
but it doesnt look really really bad
well....well... your a stupid dumbface. :(

PS. On a more serious note, what do you mean its not really really bad? plus your picture thing makes you look emo.

[Kayone707]

lookin on this topic makes me feel good about my self....
JUS messin&#33;. fuck im sick. :( damn cold and ear infection combo


But like ive said before.
Dont use Extentions&#33;. that goes for the people who posted pix on this page. uah. do simple letters, simple letters can have style. and Graffiti is about clean cut letters With style.. not about extentions an arrows

[nerdx]

it looks pretty good. idk the girl is a bit off.
the chest looks a bit lopsided
and maby the hair. unless this girls got like massive ammounts of hair.



also, whats wrong. who cares if hes emo?

[st3ve-ES]

i liek it question mark. the girl is hawt. id do her

[AMAZ tbscrew]

r u guna put legs on her? or r u scared of fuckin it up if u do add the legs? lol

[st3ve-ES]

yeah make the legs sexy so uhhh juss do it

[amaze.indiana.]

Originally posted by amaze.indiana.@Nov 23 2005, 04:18 PM
new stuff..
sorry for bad pics ..

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b167/JayEmSee/aze.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b167/JayEmSee/aze1.jpg
bumpin, i never got feed..

[AMAZ tbscrew]

u need a scanner or suttin...the pics aint working...or get better pics or suttin

[Sluts_r_us]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/jecosticker.jpg

...a sticker i made really quick

[amaze.indiana.]

new stuff....

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b167/JayEmSee/PB230048.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b167/JayEmSee/PB230046.jpg
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b167/JayEmSee/PB230051.jpg

fuck you if u dont like it :D

[AMAZ tbscrew]

r u guna change ur name? cuz u do no amaze was like a really well known writer...hint hint y my name was amaz...not amaze

[Sluts_r_us]

^^hint hint u got caught...*cough*

[amaze.indiana.]

nah.. lol, i just sketch amaze .. stop trippen..

[djsupreeme]

http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/5796/graff366ep.jpg

[near]

Originally posted by faint rem one@Nov 29 2005, 11:28 AM
no, fuck that we walk out of my house all gear up, rags and resperators on our faces, paint out, tagging the mailboxes and fucking all the cars up and down my street. then we get in the car like that and blast music hella loud all the way to the spot, windows down...and we keep the car blasting music while we paint. duh. <_<


....o yea and lose the sig pic of the goofy crackers with rags on their face

why does race matter so much? im seriously sick and tired of ppl sayin cracker this and whiteboy that. just stfu aboiut race, what we look like in a picture and just fucking give him feed on his fucking piece, thats all he cares about hearing.

now stfu about us. THANKS.
you honestly never know dude some kid in my area of Toronto does it cuz he thinks cops wont see his face as if thats matter when they roll up on him fucking wearing gang colours at 3 am in the middle of the city looking sketchy as fuck...fucking tool...anyway ya i was just putting in my 2 cents on the sig pic...it just looks like your trying to be "hard" while sitting in someones bedroom who&#39;s parents most likely pay all the bills and some guy who posts on the toy forum that needs a respirator for whatever reason :/ im not trying to beef with you im just giving you feedback which is what you asked for...probably gonna get flamed for this...o well predicatble

[Kingz514]

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4518/10063779mg.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10063779mg.jpg)


my marker died :(
looks better on paper

[Speq9]

listen when they say simple letter structure. btw funny ass sig lol

[Kingz514]

fuck... i need some good markers lol
i shouldve just left that as a sketch

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by Kingz514@Nov 29 2005, 10:00 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4518/10063779mg.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10063779mg.jpg)


my marker died :(
looks better on paper
nice job puttin ur name at the bottem of the paper... <_<

[faint rem one]

Originally posted by near+Nov 29 2005, 09:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (near @ Nov 29 2005, 09:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-faint rem one@Nov 29 2005, 11:28 AM
no, fuck that we walk out of my house all gear up, rags and resperators on our faces, paint out, tagging the mailboxes and fucking all the cars up and down my street. then we get in the car like that and blast music hella loud all the way to the spot, windows down...and we keep the car blasting music while we paint. duh. <_<


....o yea and lose the sig pic of the goofy crackers with rags on their face

why does race matter so much? im seriously sick and tired of ppl sayin cracker this and whiteboy that. just stfu aboiut race, what we look like in a picture and just fucking give him feed on his fucking piece, thats all he cares about hearing.

now stfu about us. THANKS.
you honestly never know dude some kid in my area of Toronto does it cuz he thinks cops wont see his face as if thats matter when they roll up on him fucking wearing gang colours at 3 am in the middle of the city looking sketchy as fuck...fucking tool...anyway ya i was just putting in my 2 cents on the sig pic...it just looks like your trying to be "hard" while sitting in someones bedroom who&#39;s parents most likely pay all the bills and some guy who posts on the toy forum that needs a respirator for whatever reason :/ im not trying to beef with you im just giving you feedback which is what you asked for...probably gonna get flamed for this...o well predicatble [/b][/quote]
yes u will get flamed

because u giving ur feedback about our picture matters to nooone.

so u shud have kept it a thought in your head.

and besides...feedback is on the thing u post (sketch, piece, w/e)

and it doesnt even matter about us. worry about yourself.

oh and....ur parents dont pay all the bills? damn ur gunna be cold this winter.

[Kingz514]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Nov 29 2005, 10:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Nov 29 2005, 10:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kingz514@Nov 29 2005, 10:00 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4518/10063779mg.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10063779mg.jpg)


my marker died :(
looks better on paper
nice job puttin ur name at the bottem of the paper... <_< [/b][/quote]
sh.. thats my undercover name :ph34r:

nah im jokin thats not my real name its just a signature i put on sketchs/ my a.k.a. type thing, you know?

[Speq9]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Nov 29 2005, 10:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Nov 29 2005, 10:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kingz514@Nov 29 2005, 10:00 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4518/10063779mg.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10063779mg.jpg)


my marker died :(
looks better on paper
nice job puttin ur name at the bottem of the paper... <_< [/b][/quote]
ahahahahaha :lol: :P

[Kingz514]

..ha..ha..

[djsupreeme]

Originally posted by djsupreeme@Nov 29 2005, 09:55 PM
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/5796/graff366ep.jpg
b.u.m.p.

[Ume]

ahha
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/perl2.jpg

[AoAssis]

^ nice just aint reli feelin the R

perl-wow lots of ppl like u :lol:


edit-lol u edited out the scribbles

[Speq9]

Ume...how did you get my work on your pc? :P really like the handstyle&#33;

[Select_One]

not like the curve on the bottom of the L,
or the way the r curves at the top.
not crazy style-hand bout.
Draw letters Straight.
------
PERL
------
But me like other.
3d good.
ye.
( :ph34r: )

()applause()

[Kingz514]

hah select_one.. classy sig..

not bad perl
nice and simple :rolleyes:

[Bartic]

Not bad i think.. but lets see what u think (i don&#39;t like how the "e" is covered up so much)
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/6442/spek8vc.jpg

[Speq9]

I think you ripped my old name :P
btw kingz, I&#39;m perl...Ume did that for me which is quite sweet :D

[Ume]

AoAssis - ahaha yes i did edit out the scribbles cause i saw my name in there somewhere.

Speq - i came down to faklen and stole it&#33;

Select - ok? morestraight for a name that isen&#39;t mine? i&#39;ll keep that in mind.

kingz - i&#39;m not perl, speq is perl...i just stole that from her house(or i just drew it in class)

[Bartic]

Originally posted by Speq9@Nov 29 2005, 10:48 PM
I think you ripped my old name :P
btw kingz, I&#39;m perl...Ume did that for me which is quite sweet :D
my bad i wasn&#39;t paying attention, just slapped some letters together. I haven&#39;t got my mind set on what i wanna write yet, but its comming

[Ume]

Originally posted by Speq9@Nov 29 2005, 11:48 PM
btw kingz, I&#39;m perl...Ume did that for me which is quite sweet :D
B)

[Speq9]

actually i was joking, i think speks free to use

[QuestionMark?]

Originally posted by nerdx@Nov 29 2005, 08:55 PM
it looks pretty good. idk the girl is a bit off.
the chest looks a bit lopsided
and maby the hair. unless this girls got like massive ammounts of hair.



also, whats wrong. who cares if hes emo?
I didnt make the character, well i drew it but i ripped it from the net. Plus emo&#39;s suck :lol:

[QuestionMark?]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Nov 29 2005, 09:29 PM
r u guna put legs on her? or r u scared of fuckin it up if u do add the legs? lol
Yeah i already put legs on her, like i said the sketch wasnt finished when i scanned it. i&#39;ll post it up later when it&#39;s finished.

[TricksForKids]

http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/7014/regspenfree0fe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

quick pen freestyle, yeah yeah its sloppy sue me

Peace

[AoAssis]

this is to make UME jealous

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/8369/eeeeeeee600x3234zo.gif (http://imageshack.us)

ya i kno ur jealous speq is gana like my sketch better then urs B)

[Ume]

daaaaammnnnn -_-

[AoAssis]

i kno i kno hold ur aploase (sp?) please, i want speq to see it she is gana be amazed :)

[Speq9]

wow pickle you did a good job lmao....hmm yeah thats a good nickname, pickle, its pickle from now on

[AoAssis]

so u did love it :lol: wow i moved on to a vegitable......ppl used to call me sausage......cuz im polish and ppl called me polish dog then it evolved to sausage guess im a pickle now -_-

[st3ve-ES]

yay for internet flirting

[AoAssis]

steve ur a faggot no one cares about ur stupid gay comments they make no sesne and when they do no one cares, someone already told u this so y dont u just go kill urself.......and i was simply makin a joke......and ur comment makes no sense considering im 13 and speq is 19.....and how come a whole week can go by with EVERYONE flirting with speq and as soon as i make one comment directed twards her its flirting? like meeter i nvr flirted with her and other ppl said the same stuff to her as i did but wen i made a comment it was considered flirting.....i just find it gay how im suposidly the only one "flirting" on BS the comment was funny the first time but wen ppl kept sayin it was just anoying.......so once again y dont u go screw ur self and not come bak to BS steve

sry to everyone who had to read me blab to that faggot but he pisses me off, does he piss ne one else off?

[meetermaid]

no.

:ph34r: :ph34r:

haha. i&#39;m thinking of changing my name, leef, leefus or something like that, just kinda brainstorming a handstyle

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9003/scan0022425x5637ur.jpg




regs, make the 1st leg thicker on the r, it&#39;s really wierd the way it is, and the g in your throw looks like a c

[AoAssis]

he doesnt bother u ? dam..................well he bothers me so w.e

the E is kinda weird i aint feelin it and i aint feelin the F either rest is ok

[djsupreeme]

i like your meeter or which ever one better

[meetermaid]

no one bothers me unless i&#39;m pissed off. then everyone bothers me. and yeah the e&#39;s are ugly, i can&#39;t think of any other way to do them that would fit the style though. how come you don&#39;t like the f? that&#39;s my favourite letter :ph34r:

supe- why?

[Sire]

Originally posted by YNOT iN SF@Nov 29 2005, 03:28 AM
wow Sire..
i thought u were good too....

but keep on doin....
oh really you have me all figured out because of one tag that i put up for suggestion( and didnt get any)

<_<

[Speq9]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Nov 29 2005, 11:54 PM
no one bothers me unless i&#39;m pissed off. then everyone bothers me. and yeah the e&#39;s are ugly, i can&#39;t think of any other way to do them that would fit the style though. how come you don&#39;t like the f? that&#39;s my favourite letter :ph34r:

supe- why?
I liked meet too :unsure: btw the f is superb, looks like half a heart :lol:

[TricksForKids]

thanks for the feedback meet, and im liking the tag, but i dunno, work on it a bit, and aoassis, man shut the FUCK up, steves right, stop trying to fucking impress perl, yeah shes a cool girl but i doubt she wants your 13 year old ass and that fucking PICKLE popping up every fucking time with useless comments, jesus, this forum is for graffiti, and giving each other feedback, hoesnt to god, take this shit to general discussion or send her your virtual kisses in an emal *furious*, keep up the pics...fuck.


Peace

[toxus]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051130/09/2/2/2/2221551c4d5551884f540b41cf8a61dc200511300_full.jpg

[Jank]

regs, i dno if its this thread or trhe other one, but that lst pen sketch i saw from u was LOVELY:) real nice...

toxus... not feeling it personally sorry i would lose the swirls nect time...keep tryin stuff tho man it&#39;ll come
need feedbak on this: ignore the 3d...just need feed on the letters please? is it tryin to b better than i am or wat?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/blackwhiteantiestries2bgd.jpg

[QuestionMark?]

Jank i love that style you use, it&#39;s like really basic but it looks nice and clean. Keep it up, the only thing i dont like of that sketch is the arrow coming off of the "A" and the little bubble things you used for the forcefield or w.e. other than that it&#39;s pretty nice.

[azo]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v160/zakoff1/peice.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v160/zakoff1/blueyellow.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v160/zakoff1/bluepurple.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v160/zakoff1/blacknred.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v160/zakoff1/sketch.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

azo - stop with the extensions...PLEASE

jank - i like it but i dont like how all of the letters are connected...but its still hot....and i might have to bite ur E :P

[TricksForKids]

http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/7014/regspenfree0fe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

quick pen freestyle, yeah yeah its sloppy sue me

Peace


THat one jank^^^^ ?, if so thanks, dont really like my R and its sloppy but oh well, azo, i like the last one alot actually, just maybe clean it up a bit and add some 3D, other than that, i ahte to say it but tart a bit simpler, and jank keep up the simples those are nice, just like question said, lose the arrow :D


Peaceeeeeeeee

[2KoS]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Nov 29 2005, 11:44 PM
no.

:ph34r: :ph34r:

haha. i&#39;m thinking of changing my name, leef, leefus or something like that, just kinda brainstorming a handstyle

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9003/scan0022425x5637ur.jpg




regs, make the 1st leg thicker on the r, it&#39;s really wierd the way it is, and the g in your throw looks like a c
:angry:

You were doing so well with Meet&#33;

Why the name changing? :o :(

[Jank]

ye regs thats the one im talkin about..ye its not perfect and clean and crisp like the other stuff uv done that iv seen, and on closer inspection there are indeed bits off , but i think the sketch as a hole has proper style to it, nice1

[azo]

so wat should i do to improve?

[TricksForKids]

azo, add some 3d to that last sketch, and keep it simple, work on some basic letters, before throwing in addons, janks a good example of basic letters that still carry style, but i dunno bout everyone else but im liking that last sketch, but the first one has way too much going on, but yeah, keep it up


Peace

[Fate]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Nov 29 2005, 11:44 PM
no.

:ph34r: :ph34r:

haha. i&#39;m thinking of changing my name, leef, leefus or something like that, just kinda brainstorming a handstyle

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9003/scan0022425x5637ur.jpg




regs, make the 1st leg thicker on the r, it&#39;s really wierd the way it is, and the g in your throw looks like a c
id like to see you do anything that takes more than 3 seconds.not to be an ass er anything.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^^^do u mean a bomb or suttin? lol

[Fate]

anything. its all been 2 second sketches.

[meetermaid]

fate- i haven&#39;t really started pieceing, so all i submit are throws and tags, after i&#39;ve got the throw or tag down, why would i spend more than 2 seconds on it? tags are supposed to take no more than like 8 seconds, so why should i spend more time drawing my tag on a piece of paper than on a wall? same with a throw, why would i spend 10 minutes drawing something that should take me 5 minutes max with paint? i don&#39;t put up everything i do on the computer, that would be absolutely retarded, i&#39;ve gone through something like 800 pieces of computer paper in the last 4 days (i need to get a fucking blackbook), i just put up stuff that i want critique on here.

ANYways. sry for the rant, thx for the feedback, 2kos i&#39;m not sure if i&#39;m going to change my name or not, i&#39;m just thinking about it, cause i&#39;ve decided i hate m&#39;s and t&#39;s.



azo- go simple buddy, simple.

[Select_One]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/focksified6.jpg

and thats how we go overboard on the little curvy line effects hahaha. ive been known to tho. Fucking bloody notebook bleeds markers terribly, its like one of those cheaper small sketchbooks made from recycled paper- ill be staying away from such in the future :ph34r:

leef- i like that handstyle

tricksforkids- i like the shading :)

azo- simple, dont bother coloring till you get better letters down. Not saying its horrible- just work at it ;)

[meetermaid]

focks, it would be sooooo much better without the arrows. and the hole in the o is really wierd

[AoAssis]

focks aint feelin the O and the extension arrow on the F is weird the other ones are OK i guess nuttin special

azo i like the red and black one looks pretty kool just make the O diferent looks kinda like a D


and that batman avatar guy did u not read my fukin post? i said sry for u havin to read the blaber so y the fuk did u read it? and i said it was a joke and im pretty sure speq and Ume understood.......i was makin fun of other ppl makin pieces for her so screw off no beef but stay out of other ppls beef and if u even read the post rite i CLEARLY STATED im 13 and shes 19 thats y steves and ur post made no fukin sense,on another note ur last freestyle looked prety good but i can nvr read ur stuff wat does it say?

END OF BEEF

[TricksForKids]

it says regs (regs 2).....just keep the critisizing comments on other peoples work to a minimum...people may not care your being a dick when you give "constructive critisicm" but i do, so chill out a bit is all....and focks its decent, but that forecefiled is way too thick, takes away from the piece, and calm it down a bit, other than that, yeah kep it up

Peace

[AoAssis]

im glad the beef ended

[Bartic]

I need to get my hand on some markers and practice fills, cuz all i have now is 1 oranage marker.
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/4044/spek2ud.jpg

...?

[minesweep]

what does it say?

[-save]

hmhm...im still rather n00bish but gimme sum propshttp://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c39/eriatarka09/c02f35e6.jpg

[-save]

^^ that says "minus" if you cant reed duh...i changed my name to save but i might still go w/ minus

[Bartic]

Originally posted by minesweep@Nov 30 2005, 10:49 PM
what does it say?
says Speks... the "k" is covered up pretty well :(

-save: man you need to slow it down get rid of those spikes all over the place and work on your letter structure. Work on your 3d aswell, reading though this thread will help you alot theres lots of good links to info pages

[Sire]

save your sig is probobly the most fucked up thing ive seen today





but its fucking funny :lol:

[faint rem one]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture584-1.jpg

new throwie design.

feed?

[meetermaid]

faint your e doesnt look like an e at all, and the line thing in the middle of your r goes over too far to the right, it looks like its pacman blowing a bubble or something.

[Select_One]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Dec 1 2005, 04:12 AM
your r goes over too far to the right, it looks like its pacman blowing a bubble or something.




:lol:

im not crazy about that style, but its not that bad. keep workin at it.