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alive
02-25-2007, 10:03 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Feb 25 2007, 10:45 AM
fosale - thanks, going to see a specialidt tomorrow, maybe they can fix me up right because right now this bitch is a killaahhh. which old style do you mean, ive had so many :P

btw , switch up your sig, its just damn narsty.

alive - truss me, i went through all that bullshit , and i still am. i've tried classic graffti but im horrendously crap at it, maybe one day though.

aimo - those karaks are straight up fucking sick!!!! so much better...the pages look so trippy and i can see an improvment in your letters. the structure on the second page is hott, the others are a bit meh though :P
i think fosale ment the ones with the dots and such?

krazzie_ammo
02-25-2007, 10:14 AM
guy abve /\ - i like the b , not so much the rest. try bunching them up a bit and straightening up your lines.

ok, as i have nothing to post, thought i might post my progression.

we should have a progression thread.

most start with a wack wildstyle but i have never actually tried a wildstyle.

so here goes,
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5565/graff4mq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
plain and simple brapp!
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4980/1pointperspst5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my notorious "block" phase
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/2209/11es9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
took me alot longer than it looks...
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/7671/27am0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
totally dependant on a a ruler!
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/323/29tn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
still bumming the ruler...
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5936/45xg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
blockbuster muster nuster
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/3275/46na0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
couple of ideas...
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8757/51ic9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
more ideas
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/8534/75cq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
karak
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2825/71hi7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
nemz exchange
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1388/84un4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
simpe, the most important thing...........ever
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4386/92vg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
first thing i coloured properly..
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/7232/99cw9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dunno what happened here..
and onto my latest sketch up the page.
obviously there are millions of sketches in between.
craze to crae, the journey of a lifetime :P

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 10:18 AM
seeing as you did it..i may aswell do it..bahaha..yeah..there shud be a progression thread !

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/dsc003458he.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/burner.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/dop4.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/128423941.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1weqfew23.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/444.jpg

baha..the top one is " dope sick dude "

Bazer
02-25-2007, 10:21 AM
aimo...you used to suck sooooooo baaaaad!! :lol:

alive
02-25-2007, 10:23 AM
haha i sucked worse. wanna see mine? itl take forever, but have a little patience and ill put it up

alive
02-25-2007, 10:43 AM
fuck. "Sorry, but you have posted more images than you are allowed to"
how manny images are you allowed to post.

FUCK. I JUST REALIZED. FUCK FUCK FUCK. TO SHOW U THAT FUCKING ERROR MESSAGE, I FUCKING COPIED AND PASTED IT. WHICH MEANS I LOST THE ENTIRE FUCKING POST, WITH ALL THE FUCKING IMAGE LINKS, CUZ I COPY AND PASTED THAT. FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK.


here. this is how i started.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/12-11-05_1742.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/25-11-05_1310.jpg

first paint

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/09-11-05_0712.jpg


and yes i fucked around with arrows and shit when i shouldnt have. and i regret it.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02443.jpg

see how shit that looks ras? lol.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02445.jpg


i did blocks.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/d3566026.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02556.jpg

then i found bars, and something started to click.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/7a1dcf81.jpg


recent

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03060.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03059.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03081.jpg



theres a thousand more sketches, and later ill post them all, but right now im too fucking pissed that i lost it all.

plz
02-25-2007, 10:46 AM
wow both of you really nice sketches

plz
02-25-2007, 10:47 AM
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q260/schneida333/Scan0007.jpg

alive
02-25-2007, 10:50 AM
ok man, listen to me, and youll improve. dont listen? fuck off.


drop ur markers. lock em in a box until a year from now. pick up one pencil, and one black pen. sketch block letters. yeah, like the ones on ur keyboard. plain. no color. no 3d. nothing. no arrows. no squiggly shit. use bars.

from there youll move on.

plz
02-25-2007, 10:52 AM
Originally posted by alive@Feb 25 2007, 11:50 AM
ok man, listen to me, and youll improve. dont listen? fuck off.


drop ur markers. lock em in a box until a year from now. pick up one pencil, and one black pen. sketch block letters. yeah, like the ones on ur keyboard. plain. no color. no 3d. nothing. no arrows. no squiggly shit. use bars.

from there youll move on.
be a lil more specific of who your talking to...

alive
02-25-2007, 10:53 AM
you

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 10:56 AM
his speaking to you ! plz..
plz plz plz..

just take Alives advice..its helped me..if you dont..youll end up like i did...and not like i am now.. !

but to be brutally honest..and i know ill get stoned for this..your stuffs horrible..its sketchy...scribbly..i have never seen so sketchy lines..hold your pen still for god sake..

harsh critizism will be the only way to help you..and i know !! ..
now i dont wunna sound a dick..but its the truth

plz
02-25-2007, 11:02 AM
ok.... back to first grade for my letters, i'll work on plain keyboard letters

WolfBurrns
02-25-2007, 11:12 AM
Good shit, Alive.

I'll jump on the bandwagon too. Goes from Capo to Sole which is the name I use now since I got arrested.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/capo2.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/capo.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/capo6.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture33.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Solepink3.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/solegreen2.jpg

As you can see I tried doing some crazy shit on the last Capo piece. I went back to basics and im just now trying to develop my own style of simples. This over a year and a half. Its amazing how you can progress even though it was only slightly. I can still see the differances. Stay up people.

legatogunsmoke
02-25-2007, 11:31 AM
Originally posted by legatogunsmoke@Feb 25 2007, 02:04 AM
whats up everyone. I haven't been around here in a while, and now im actually gonna post something lol. so, Crits would be appreciated. And, so you know, I write Mith or Mithic. Mainly Mith though. So, lemme hear whatcha got for me. Thanks all. Oh, and these are kinda old. I havent had a chance to draw any time as of late.

Random word I felt like writing:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030559.jpg
Did this for a friend named Elyssa, obviously:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030557.jpg
And this ones me:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030558.jpg

(sorry for the size. I dont have time, or the patience, to resize them right now)
Bumpin for some Crits. and AIMO, that smaller pic you posted on this page has Mith on it... you know someone, or you yourself, that writes Mith too?! gahh...

@Capo: Dude, calm down with the rigid letters. Stay simple. Kinda looks like your first one's letters got hit with a 2x4 a few times. Ya know? That first Sale one is actually good. Keep workin that style and stay away from trying to go crazy rigid for a while.

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 11:34 AM
^ what the hell are you talking about .. ?

argh fuck fuck fuck fuck..left my fucking black pen at my freinds..and now i canrt fucking sketch..arrrrrrgh :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:

so heres a exchange thing for " PiE "

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/44444.jpg

legatogunsmoke
02-25-2007, 11:37 AM
Aimo, i just noticed that one of your sketches says Mith. And thats what I write too. Thats all I was pointin out.

Copieright
02-25-2007, 11:42 AM
Originally posted by alive@Feb 25 2007, 11:43 AM



recent

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03060.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03059.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03081.jpg


so what came out of that titration? :P

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 11:43 AM
i dont write mith anymore so its okay

role
02-25-2007, 11:43 AM
i have nothing useful tosay

crae that progession shit is cool i can see just from those how far it's taken you

legatogunsmoke
02-25-2007, 11:46 AM
Haha. Alright man. And, my full name is Mithic but i dont have any sketches laying around with it. So, Mith is the shorthand version. Since you used to write it, you willing to Crit my version of it fro mthe last page?

Fosale!
02-25-2007, 11:54 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Feb 25 2007, 12:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Feb 25 2007, 12:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:42 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kohv-1.jpg
white board freebie.
i actually reeally like it.
cept for my off 3d, but hey, i was pooping. >:0()


i like to ride in.....


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/canoes.jpg

CANOES&#33;
bumpskies


bounce, my new gf.


<33333
:wub: [/b][/quote]
Boomphh&#33;&#33;

and CRAZE i was talking about the style you did
for that Nemz excahnge

fredom-writer
02-25-2007, 12:13 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Nosypainter
02-25-2007, 12:16 PM
Originally posted by stemONE@Feb 22 2007, 05:02 AM
this is what i threw together earlier on today...
crits would be greatly appreciated&#33;&#33;&#33;
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/6476/comeredblueqo8.jpg
just to let you know that font is on the graffiti generater.... o0.... <_<

Quadratic
02-25-2007, 01:09 PM
sum new shit and sum exchanges

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new%20blackbook/Cmasoe4.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new%20blackbook/Cmasoe3.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new%20blackbook/geistbymasoe2.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new%20blackbook/suma-12oz-x.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new%20blackbook/ese-12oz-x.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new%20blackbook/Cmasoe2.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new%20blackbook/Cmasoe1.jpg

whahappen?
02-25-2007, 01:21 PM
oneliner for speed
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9896/picturecm3.jpg
masoe on the first one the middle bar on the a is weird

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 01:28 PM
wappen..seeing as all you do is throws..do a e-buddy a favour..could you do me a AIMO , AI and MO throw up for me pweeese ? ..

krazzie_ammo
02-25-2007, 01:33 PM
ok, i have added a progression thread but it looks like the admins have to check it first.

whappen - looks like one letter to me, add a bar inbetween to differentiate between the two letters.

whahappen?
02-25-2007, 01:35 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Feb 25 2007, 02:28 PM
wappen..seeing as all you do is throws..do a e-buddy a favour..could you do me a AIMO , AI and MO throw up for me pweeese ? ..
yea sure
but i cant get it for awhile bcause my main computers broken and i have limited use of the one im on right now
ill get it to you though

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 01:36 PM
ah thanks &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :D

stales
02-25-2007, 01:52 PM
weird sketch http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6109/catdog003vh9.jpg

rly simple sketch with a big ass Ehttp://img238.imageshack.us/img238/5554/catdog005km8.jpg the simple one is old but i kinda like the style of it

uhhh
02-25-2007, 02:05 PM
stale- ugh. *shakes head*

fosale babe, sorry i made suck a mockery of your name..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-051S-2.jpg
:(

stales
02-25-2007, 02:10 PM
wuts wrng with the first one?

Ekers.Two.Two
02-25-2007, 02:15 PM
new simple crits plz

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011123.jpg

xXSARSXx
02-25-2007, 02:18 PM
elkers it seems as if ur letters get smaller from the begining work on ur basics a bit more before trying to warp the letters like u did and it will look nicer

Fosale!
02-25-2007, 02:22 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Feb 25 2007, 12:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Feb 25 2007, 12:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:53 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:42 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kohv-1.jpg
white board freebie.
i actually reeally like it.
cept for my off 3d, but hey, i was pooping. >:0()


i like to ride in.....


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/canoes.jpg

CANOES&#33;
bumpskies


bounce, my new gf.


<33333
:wub:
Boomphh&#33;&#33;

and CRAZE i was talking about the style you did
for that Nemz excahnge [/b][/quote]
because i got no thang

and Uhhh, how is that a mockery.
so much hotter than what i produce.
and that O is illin

slinks
02-25-2007, 02:37 PM
stale... i dont like it

uhhh... i dont know what it says but it looks good

ekers... i like it all except for the E

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti044.jpg

tweeked and then colored that simple sketch from a while ago

Crits please

Edit: i know the tail of the last S is fucked up. and so is some spots of the 3d

uhhh
02-25-2007, 02:43 PM
thanks fosale.
but im not that happy with my stuff.
like i like it when its a sketch.
but im not happy with what i have for fills and such.
i have like pens. and a highlighter or two.

mind.or.matter
02-25-2007, 02:44 PM
Ekers: The simple part is pretty down, try to tweak the "s" a little, its the weakest part....
Also, try to fatten up the extentions of the "k" and the "r"

Slinks: Dont overlap every little bump into the letter, too much of it makes it look bad,

-ShAmEE-
02-25-2007, 03:27 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Feb 25 2007, 03:37 PM
stale... i dont like it

uhhh... i dont know what it says but it looks good

ekers... i like it all except for the E

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti044.jpg

tweeked and then colored that simple sketch from a while ago

Crits please

Edit: i know the tail of the last S is fucked up. and so is some spots of the 3d
like ur fill design looks so nice. letters are nice and simple.

theprokilla
02-25-2007, 03:34 PM
crits?
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0036.jpg

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 03:44 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Feb 25 2007, 03:27 PM
Sumoe..thats a great start to a canvas

Krazzie Ammo..i dunno..just aint feelin it..maybe if you colourd it in abit..then it wud look gazzilions better

soooo...did sum hardcore sketching...made my connections fatter...and develpoed my karaks more and more..( they dont have a name anymore &#33; )

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/44.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/444.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/4444.jpg

Crits..?

Thanks &#33;&#33; :D
Seeing as Fosalie has bumped a gazzilion times..ill bump..anything fosale does..i do

besides..i only got one crits..

theprokila..keep them simples up &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;11111

-ShAmEE-
02-25-2007, 03:55 PM
that nice and funky. love it

slinks
02-25-2007, 03:58 PM
maybe you should give crits before expecting to get some yourself....

theprokilla
02-25-2007, 04:00 PM
me?

slinks
02-25-2007, 04:16 PM
yes you

-ShAmEE-
02-25-2007, 04:18 PM
where the fuck did u get ur idea of ur characs from ras

theprokilla
02-25-2007, 04:36 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Feb 25 2007, 05:16 PM
yes you
i have more crits then times i have asked go away...

Fosale!
02-25-2007, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Feb 25 2007, 03:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Feb 25 2007, 03:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:54 PM

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:53 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:42 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kohv-1.jpg
white board freebie.
i actually reeally like it.
cept for my off 3d, but hey, i was pooping. >:0()


i like to ride in.....


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/canoes.jpg

CANOES&#33;
bumpskies


bounce, my new gf.


<33333
:wub:
Boomphh&#33;&#33;

and CRAZE i was talking about the style you did
for that Nemz excahnge
because i got no thang

and Uhhh, how is that a mockery.
so much hotter than what i produce.
and that O is illin [/b][/quote]
boombah&#33;

again.
please i wanna develop this style more and idk if i should.

AND AIMO(RAS :wub: )

you pieces look sooo much better with fatter bars.
AIMO PM ME.

i have a request pour toi.

AnteUp
02-25-2007, 05:02 PM
sum simples
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz459.jpg
jus tryin new shit ( i think it lukks like shit)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz458.jpg
sig... it hink it lukks gud
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz457.jpg

Ekers.Two.Two
02-25-2007, 05:04 PM
hayz keep simples

my new simple

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011128.jpg

crits and tips are welcome

theprokilla
02-25-2007, 05:04 PM
haze-liking the first but u need to fix the h on the 2nd

ekers- the middle of the 2nd e is to fat

AimoOne
02-25-2007, 05:05 PM
fo salie check your pm thing

Ekers..that aint simple..its all wavy .. do em straight up..but i freking love you handy...oooochie

sabe2
02-25-2007, 05:59 PM
haze im digggin the frist but i would re think the h on the second stay up boi peace

sabe2
02-25-2007, 06:21 PM
i fucked up on the e and the b but what do you think i mjust startin i usually was just trying too evolve my trow up

sabe2
02-25-2007, 06:23 PM
yo guys really sorry about this but i for got too post the picture im not trying too double post or anything alright no hate?

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture299.jpg

slinks
02-25-2007, 06:42 PM
there is a little button on your posts called

"EDIT"

for a reason.



not hating just letting you know for future use

glass
02-25-2007, 07:13 PM
hey guys what&#39;s up. haven&#39;t had much time to sketch and i just kind of started up again so these are my first attempts in a long time. i could really use some quality crit please. thanks. also i&#39;m having issues with sketching an A to fit the rest of the letters in the bottom of the second image. any ideas would be awsome.

sabe: try not to curve the letters like that, it makes them look kind of odd and a bit like silly putty. try to make the curves less extreme if you&#39;re going to put so many of the letters.

http://i16.tinypic.com/30mweo3.jpg

and

http://i17.tinypic.com/4bf67wp.jpg

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 07:21 PM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4795/dsc0455bj8.jpg

screwed up the other one, so this is my first completed(almost) canvas.

AnteUp
02-25-2007, 07:29 PM
im luvin how u masked the arrow and the line off before u painted, makes it lukk real clean mane

F.R.A.T.
02-25-2007, 07:32 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 25 2007, 08:21 PM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4795/dsc0455bj8.jpg

screwed up the other one, so this is my first completed(almost) canvas.
i......love u :wub: :wub:
looks real good man keep it up

alive
02-25-2007, 07:34 PM
nicest ive ever seen from you sume. glad ur in bsc.

Bazer
02-25-2007, 07:35 PM
sume, why do u sitll post your stuff in the toy thread if its already big boy stuff?

alive
02-25-2007, 07:37 PM
he likes attention.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-25-2007, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 25 2007, 08:21 PM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/4795/dsc0455bj8.jpg

screwed up the other one, so this is my first completed(almost) canvas.
you misssed some white between the m and the e

Kore123
02-25-2007, 07:41 PM
well ive been playin around wit a new-ish style i just want some crits and to see if you guys think its any better than my old shit............

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8431/0225071931it8.jpg

i fucked up inkin the k but i kinda fixed it wit whiteout sooo yeah tell me what you think

sume...i wuv that canvas......can i have it :rolleyes:

glass....i like the bottom one on the first picture just make the right leg on the k a lil bit longer

sabe....its not too good dont make it soo squiggily and fix the b and the e but its a pretty solid start

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 07:45 PM
Originally posted by alive@Feb 25 2007, 08:37 PM
he likes attention.
haha, that and the big boy thread hardly gets any crits... :) oh yea and I got the white between the "M" and "E"

LAGE
02-25-2007, 07:49 PM
kore - the O and R need work
Sumoe - always loving your stuff :wub:
anyways im workin on my S tell me what 1 you like more
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00131.jpg
and this one is the far right one upside down i think it&#39; the best of them all
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00132.jpg

glass
02-25-2007, 08:01 PM
Originally posted by glass@Feb 25 2007, 08:13 PM
hey guys what&#39;s up. haven&#39;t had much time to sketch and i just kind of started up again so these are my first attempts in a long time. i could really use some quality crit please. thanks. also i&#39;m having issues with sketching an A to fit the rest of the letters in the bottom of the second image. any ideas would be awsome.

sabe: try not to curve the letters like that, it makes them look kind of odd and a bit like silly putty. try to make the curves less extreme if you&#39;re going to put so many of the letters.

http://i16.tinypic.com/30mweo3.jpg

and

http://i17.tinypic.com/4bf67wp.jpg
bump for crit

kore: looks like if you refine it a bit then it&#39;ll look pretty sick, maybe make the letters a little less wide &#39;cause when you stretch skinny letters they tend to look too spaced out from what i&#39;ve seen. and the K from mine is actually a G lol.


lage: i like the middle S the best dude, and after that would be the upside down far right.

Bazer
02-25-2007, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Feb 25 2007, 08:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Feb 25 2007, 08:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Feb 25 2007, 08:37 PM
he likes attention.
haha, that and the big boy thread hardly gets any crits... :) oh yea and I got the white between the "M" and "E" [/b][/quote]
where do u live? cuz i wanna start buyin some canvases from people....are you goin to keep that one? cuz i think you should start sellin them..unless thats not your thing..

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 08:05 PM
I&#39;m prolly gunna start to sell canvases when I get better, right now I&#39;m not gunna sell any yet, but maybe in a couple months I&#39;ll start sellin&#39; em.

ShIfTeD
02-25-2007, 08:06 PM
Originally posted by glass@Feb 25 2007, 09:01 PM


http://i17.tinypic.com/4bf67wp.jpg
bump for crit

[/quote]
did you use a zig 2 way caligraphy marker? B)

i hope im right

Bazer
02-25-2007, 08:15 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 25 2007, 09:05 PM
I&#39;m prolly gunna start to sell canvases when I get better, right now I&#39;m not gunna sell any yet, but maybe in a couple months I&#39;ll start sellin&#39; em.
ahh. its like you just dont see how good you are....can we see it when its complete? cuz right now it looks a bit empty. :(

Zep0
02-25-2007, 08:17 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Feb 25 2007, 08:41 PM
well ive been playin around wit a new-ish style i just want some crits and to see if you guys think its any better than my old shit............

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/8431/0225071931it8.jpg

i fucked up inkin the k but i kinda fixed it wit whiteout sooo yeah tell me what you think

sume...i wuv that canvas......can i have it :rolleyes:

glass....i like the bottom one on the first picture just make the right leg on the k a lil bit longer

sabe....its not too good dont make it soo squiggily and fix the b and the e but its a pretty solid start
Close up the R like you did the K, so they&#39;re the same. Then Work on diff O&#39;s a little bit, and not such a plain E. You&#39;re on the right track, good job.

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 08:18 PM
I know I&#39;m not horrible, but if I&#39;m gunna start sellin&#39; stuff I want it to be my best, best, best, best, best, best(well, you get the picture) work, ya know? Yeah I&#39;ll post it when I&#39;m done, I think I kinda messed it up though, cause I tried to add highlights and bubbles. :(

glass
02-25-2007, 08:26 PM
haha damn shifted that was dead on dude

legatogunsmoke
02-25-2007, 08:28 PM
http://i17.tinypic.com/4bf67wp.jpg
bump for crit


did you use a zig 2 way caligraphy marker? B)

i hope im right [/QUOTE]
Glass, this is prolly the best of the ones you&#39;ve posted. I think so atleast. Just keep workin this style, and throw some 3-d on that beast. That handstyle is nice thogh, i really like that.

and bumplin these, hopefully to get some crits.
Random word I felt like writing:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030559.jpg
Did this for a friend named Elyssa, obviously:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030557.jpg
And this ones me:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030558.jpg

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 08:39 PM
You my friend, need simples in your life. ^_^

Kore123
02-25-2007, 08:40 PM
anybody wanna do an exchange like aimo, sume, knews or anybody i really dont care but somebody lets do an exchange yeah pm me or tell me what u write here aiight
im on post 100 im pretty happy....lol

Ekers.Two.Two
02-25-2007, 08:41 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011129.jpg

crits and advice is welcome

Kore123
02-25-2007, 08:42 PM
ekers....give crits first if you want to recieve crits

Ekers.Two.Two
02-25-2007, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Feb 25 2007, 09:42 PM
ekers....give crits first if you want to recieve crits
ok il give them,

the guy in the top of the page stick to simples

kore , practice simples

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011129.jpg


crits and help plz

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 08:46 PM
work on your simples too. :ph34r:

Zep0
02-25-2007, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by Ekers.Two.Two+Feb 25 2007, 09:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ekers.Two.Two @ Feb 25 2007, 09:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kore123@Feb 25 2007, 09:42 PM
ekers....give crits first if you want to recieve crits
ok il give them,

the guy in the top of the page stick to simples

kore , practice simples

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011129.jpg


crits and help plz [/b][/quote]
All the crits you need in are in your post....your working with bars good job, but they&#39;re not the same size...fix that, and no add ons.

dim
02-25-2007, 09:05 PM
ekers work on the top of the "s" "r" and "k"

LAGE
02-25-2007, 09:17 PM
Originally posted by LAGE@Feb 25 2007, 08:49 PM
kore - the O and R need work
Sumoe - always loving your stuff :wub:
anyways im workin on my S tell me what 1 you like more
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00131.jpg
and this one is the far right one upside down i think it&#39; the best of them all
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00132.jpg
bump got 1 crit thanks glass

Fosale!
02-25-2007, 09:21 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Feb 25 2007, 05:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Feb 25 2007, 05:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 03:22 PM

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:54 PM

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:53 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Feb 25 2007, 12:42 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kohv-1.jpg
white board freebie.
i actually reeally like it.
cept for my off 3d, but hey, i was pooping. >:0()


i like to ride in.....


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/canoes.jpg

CANOES&#33;
bumpskies


bounce, my new gf.


<33333
:wub:
Boomphh&#33;&#33;

and CRAZE i was talking about the style you did
for that Nemz excahnge
because i got no thang

and Uhhh, how is that a mockery.
so much hotter than what i produce.
and that O is illin
boombah&#33;

again.
please i wanna develop this style more and idk if i should.

AND AIMO(RAS :wub: )

you pieces look sooo much better with fatter bars.
AIMO PM ME.

i have a request pour toi. [/b][/quote]
you know the deal.

legatogunsmoke
02-25-2007, 09:22 PM
OK, simples. Now, this is gonna sound like the biggest toy question ever, but for some reason i dont know how simple is simple lol. I realize i had some weird extensions and connections, but should i stick to words that arent connected and just work blockbusters for now or what? I cant seem to get a decent throwie going either... handstyle is near impossible for me too lol. where to start...
oh, and thanks for the help guys. i appreciate it.

glass
02-25-2007, 09:23 PM
anytime dude

legatogunsmoke: if you want to work on handstyles buy a white board and some dry erase markers and go to town. as for simples just work on basic letters like how you see them on your keyboard, you can add your own kind of feel to them but don&#39;t go overboard. simples is just a basic term with no real set of letters in my opinion, but yeah blockbusters are an awsome way to go.

zep0: i like the first E and the bottom of the K, work on everything else mainly the R

F.R.A.T.
02-25-2007, 09:25 PM
when ever i drawn i cant put extentions on the tops of m letter sthey always look weird
also i cant draw cracks on my letters could someone show me how.

uhhh
02-25-2007, 09:28 PM
guhh.
why cant you guys just try stuff on your own?
is your self esteem that low?
are you that codependant?
that you dont belive that if you try youll be able to make cracks in letters?
or that youll be able to have a good handie and throwie and such one day?
i mean, its not like thousands of others have done it beofre you or anything..

glass
02-25-2007, 09:28 PM
post what you&#39;ve got so far and maybe somebody will be able to help, but it&#39;s easier if we see how far you are.

TricksForKids
02-25-2007, 09:29 PM
aw shucks, everyones getting along so well, little cleaning up here and there and its just oh so purty, hey sumey sumey wanna do an exchange you beast? that canvas made me smile thiiiiiiiiiiiiis big

gunsmoke, im a fan of the skinny long letters only if theiyre clean and executed well, keep it up cham, nice and simple

ekers, do your letters litterally like the ones on your keyboard, and forget about colours and 3D just outline in pen

lage, you aint treaking those eltters right sun, its an S , its mean to be fatter in some places, etc, your just making weird little tweaks in it, keep it up though, thats a good way to progress

F.R.A.T.
02-25-2007, 09:29 PM
scanners broken but ill show u older pics

uhhh
02-25-2007, 09:30 PM
lets battle.
someone.
anyone.
im not very good either so dont worry about that.
the word is "cock"
if you have a problem then suck.
a cock.
ahahahhaa,
NO.

fredom-writer
02-25-2007, 09:31 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 09:32 PM
yea I&#39;ll do an exchange tricks, prolly won&#39;t have time to sketch this week though...

GUEST a.k.a. ASB-I&#39;ll try to have your sketch done by the end of this week, I tried to start it but "G"s piss me off... <_<

C3ZR ONE
02-25-2007, 09:37 PM
Sumoe- That canvas is....fantastic. You&#39;re the man. I just bought 4 canvases to try and rock.

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 09:45 PM
thanks alot man, lemme ask a question though...when you do canvases do you sketch the piece first or after the background? because it&#39;s kind of a pain in the ass to do a pencil sketch on top of the spray paint.

Kore123
02-25-2007, 09:48 PM
hey cezar wanna do an exchange....or anybody eltse wanna do an exchange i wanna work on some other letters and bored as shiiit

C3ZR ONE
02-25-2007, 09:50 PM
I&#39;ve only done one, and it didn&#39;t come out nearly as good as that, but I just sketched it on paper and then copied the sketch as I painted it.

Kore- Thanks for the invite, but I&#39;m locked up on a project right now. ;)

amuin-gcs
02-25-2007, 09:56 PM
whatever man. i suck. :(

C3ZR ONE
02-25-2007, 10:00 PM
Originally posted by amuin&#045;gcs@Feb 25 2007, 10:56 PM
whatever man. i suck. :(
Take your caps off sucka. Where the fuck you been to?

How am I supposed to e-regulate without my right hand man?

I been sweatin 12 oz too.



Sorry for the chat guys. I&#39;ll delete it later. ;)

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 10:00 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Feb 25 2007, 10:50 PM
Kore- Thanks for the invite, but I&#39;m locked up on a project right now. ;)
At first readin&#39; it I though you were gunna say "I&#39;m locked up" haha. :lol:

dim
02-25-2007, 10:07 PM
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/5831/img0071rn6.jpg
crits please
freedom writer i love your fill

wood
02-25-2007, 10:34 PM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a248/nanipie/scan0001-2.jpg


http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a248/nanipie/scan0002-3.jpg


give me some feed back please and ill do the same

LAGE
02-25-2007, 11:11 PM
Originally posted by LAGE+Feb 25 2007, 10:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (LAGE @ Feb 25 2007, 10:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-LAGE@Feb 25 2007, 08:49 PM
kore - the O and R need work
Sumoe - always loving your stuff :wub:
anyways im workin on my S tell me what 1 you like more
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00131.jpg
and this one is the far right one upside down i think it&#39; the best of them all
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00132.jpg
bump got 1 crit thanks glass [/b][/quote]
last bump i wanna know what i can change so i can work on it tomorrow help would be greatly appreciated
wood - i like the 1st one but the second one is just random to me try simpler stuff i guess
Dim - i like it but i unno the right part of the M bothers me but that&#39;s probably just me and c3zr post up a flick of your canvas i wanna see that.

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 11:20 PM
pencil sketch, it took a while, still not done...trying to go with a new style wacha think?

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1128/dsc0471kc2.jpg

LAGE-keep doing the first simple. :)

sky 5
02-25-2007, 11:26 PM
i think sume has turned the corner from being toy to a legit writer, atleast on paper . . . nice to see in only a few months, keep it coming man

Sumoe
02-25-2007, 11:28 PM
thanks man, I been trying yo practice painting a little, when spring comes around I&#39;m a start practicing painting alot more.

sema
02-25-2007, 11:36 PM
yo sumoe that style is bangin hard id like to see more sketchs of urs, n i feel ya on not paintin its way too cold now-a-days
havent sketchs in a bit heres some old stuff
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/fstghtrhrt.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g93/twohip4school/aeryqag.jpg

wiserism
02-25-2007, 11:54 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 12:20 AM
pencil sketch, it took a while, still not done...trying to go with a new style wacha think?

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1128/dsc0471kc2.jpg

LAGE-keep doing the first simple. :)
yu defenitly dont need to be in the toyz forum fresh shit B)

Deso7
02-26-2007, 12:45 AM
Originally posted by wiserism+Feb 26 2007, 12:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (wiserism @ Feb 26 2007, 12:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 12:20 AM
pencil sketch, it took a while, still not done...trying to go with a new style wacha think?

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1128/dsc0471kc2.jpg

LAGE-keep doing the first simple. :)
yu defenitly dont need to be in the toyz forum fresh shit B) [/b][/quote]
sume i see some wildstyle coming out of this keep it up man

d_g
02-26-2007, 12:49 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 05:20 PM
pencil sketch, it took a while, still not done...trying to go with a new style wacha think?

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1128/dsc0471kc2.jpg

LAGE-keep doing the first simple. :)
I like your stuff man but I reckon it would be better if you found a way to fill up the negative space a bit. Just looks kinda &#39;empty&#39; to me.

Good shit though, keep it up.

NICCSACC
02-26-2007, 01:38 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 12:20 AM
pencil sketch, it took a while, still not done...trying to go with a new style wacha think?

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1128/dsc0471kc2.jpg

LAGE-keep doing the first simple. :)
SWEET SHIT

Xsjadox
02-26-2007, 04:08 AM
Sumoe : *Insert what everyone else said here*

Sema : I like the bottom one

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/165/403244453_79f460cd3e_m.jpg
A bit of a playful piece.
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/178/403358773_86a0f416ab_m.jpg
Crappy :/
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/177/400892598_fc86c7dabc_m.jpg
Old Simple (old being a few days)
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/128/403384543_13df478d49_m.jpg

-ShAmEE-
02-26-2007, 07:05 AM
looks okay. letter wise but keep it to the fills.

Albert Fish
02-26-2007, 07:39 AM
sumoe you are beautiful no matta what they say, words cant bring you down, no oh no.
hacer* get that arrow outta that h&#33; otherwise i like em alot
wap4, w&#39;s looking a little silly, work out the bugs, i hate w&#39;s.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/pencil.jpg
gonna color it funky and fix the c later

Oink.
02-26-2007, 07:43 AM
Originally posted by stales@Feb 25 2007, 02:52 PM
weird sketch http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6109/catdog003vh9.jpg

rly simple sketch with a big ass Ehttp://img238.imageshack.us/img238/5554/catdog005km8.jpg the simple one is old but i kinda like the style of it
simple,simple simple. Go simpler, make your letters the same size,3d go the same way work on each letter 1 by 1.

Xsjadox
02-26-2007, 07:48 AM
sumoe you are beautiful no matta what they say, words cant bring you down, no oh no.
haver get that arrow outta that h&#33; otherwise i like em alot

Fucking lol dude&#33;&#33;&#33;

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 08:00 AM
hahaha, thanks for the crits peeps...

CHEU&#33;-COLOR AND REPOST by the way, how do you pronounce your name...*cheo* or *choo* or...nevertheless love your steez.

edit: gunna finish the sketch today cause I gotsa SNOW DAY&#33; :D

Albert Fish
02-26-2007, 08:06 AM
chewwww like "yo chew your food or youre gonna choke negro" or "come on ride the train (chooo choooo) and ride it (chooo chooooo)"

krazzie_ammo
02-26-2007, 08:46 AM
woo, my wrst s outta the cast and into the splint, my writing is fucked but ima try and finish my earlier piece, brap&#33;

stado
02-26-2007, 10:08 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Feb 26 2007, 08:39 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/pencil.jpg
gonna color it funky and fix the c later
don&#39;t make the lines extremely fat and thin at the same time. keep it in the middle.

http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/3199/hpim0833xw4.jpg
any crits for mine?

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 10:24 AM
It looks like an outlined tag done with a calligraphy pen, kinda ugly in my opinion, I don&#39;t like it, try sum simples. :blink:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/355/dsc0473if5.jpg
:ph34r:

Xsjadox
02-26-2007, 10:44 AM
God Sumoe.... I hate you dude :P That`s hot as holy hell,amped to see them on wall :P

Stado : That`s got lank potential with some tweaking and working on that style some more it could look really hot

nero122
02-26-2007, 10:49 AM
sume fuck off dude you dont belong here now go to the bigboys thread n think bout what youve done :@

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 10:53 AM
:( ...I post in both threads.

ASB_ONE
02-26-2007, 10:55 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 11:24 AM
It looks like an outlined tag done with a calligraphy pen, kinda ugly in my opinion, I don&#39;t like it, try sum simples. :blink:

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/355/dsc0473if5.jpg
:ph34r:
sick.

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 11:02 AM
asb- I&#39;ll try to start your sketch today, after I do my essay, maybe I&#39;ll even color it, if I get bored. :)

nero122
02-26-2007, 11:09 AM
:lol: i was fuckin bout with the anger but you should just post there lol i remember you startin that style kinda hated it but now it progressed so much it love it :lol:

nero122
02-26-2007, 11:16 AM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/insaneinthemembraine.jpg

hopfully goin next to a piece or on canvas, gnna be much darker

krazzie_ammo
02-26-2007, 11:18 AM
i cant exactly draw...so heres some photoshopping&#33;

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/5281/zeezeeed9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nero122
02-26-2007, 11:43 AM
Originally posted by nero122@Feb 26 2007, 12:16 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/insaneinthemembraine.jpg

hopfully goin next to a piece or on canvas, gnna be much darker
botom of last page watchya think?

nero122
02-26-2007, 11:45 AM
damit page went gay unno why ignore the lil thing

catch_reck!
02-26-2007, 12:27 PM
Originally posted by nero122+Feb 26 2007, 12:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nero122 @ Feb 26 2007, 12:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nero122@Feb 26 2007, 12:16 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/insaneinthemembraine.jpg

hopfully goin next to a piece or on canvas, gnna be much darker
botom of last page watchya think? [/b][/quote]
haha, this is your fill?

just kidding

glass
02-26-2007, 02:15 PM
Originally posted by glass@Feb 25 2007, 08:13 PM
hey guys what&#39;s up. haven&#39;t had much time to sketch and i just kind of started up again so these are my first attempts in a long time. i could really use some quality crit please. thanks. also i&#39;m having issues with sketching an A to fit the rest of the letters in the bottom of the second image. any ideas would be awsome.

sabe: try not to curve the letters like that, it makes them look kind of odd and a bit like silly putty. try to make the curves less extreme if you&#39;re going to put so many of the letters.

http://i16.tinypic.com/30mweo3.jpg

^the G is messed up and the bottom of the S also

and

http://i17.tinypic.com/4bf67wp.jpg
last bump

albert fish: the bubble like look of your letters looks a bit confused and jumbled, if you clean it up a bit and maybe fix the placement of the letters to look more uniform i think it&#39;ll have some great potential.

Fosale!
02-26-2007, 02:31 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 12:20 AM
pencil sketch, it took a while, still not done...trying to go with a new style wacha think?

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1128/dsc0471kc2.jpg

LAGE-keep doing the first simple. :)
ok.
here goes my rambles.

I like the way your thinking and trying to go, but you gotta balance your stuffs out.
The focal point of the piece seems to be too much centered in the center.
All the add ons and busy stuff is in the middle and its not as "heavy" at the beginning or end of the piece.
The center being the main "focus" of the piece takes away from the whole of the piece catching my eye(s).
Basicly im saying i think you gotta add more stuff to the beginning and end like in the center to balance it out.

I hope this helps, or at least is an opinion or something to review.
man.

I LOVE YOU SUMOEEE&#33;&#33;

and to be like Bouncing.
heres a picture so i dont just ramble for a post.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kohvr.jpg
almost done sketch.
im gonna put an R on and most likely take out the Arrow on the K.
and im prob gonna change my O bc. right now it kinda looks like a D.
yeah... feedbackkss?

AimoOne
02-26-2007, 02:43 PM
hey,,fo sale..could you PM about that collab shit..i got confused..

nice btw..and whut u said to sumoe..was good critizism..take it in Sumoe..non the les..i like it...but didnt like how you colour the addons orange..but thats me..great structure..and i like the word on the end..maybe if you added sumthing to the start..it weould look amazing..like

you could do..

a little made..like thi

made - S colour the U in a bright colour M E - look

you get me.. ?..

i might do it when you can be bothered to exchange with me..i canrt fraking wait &#33;&#33; :D

stado
02-26-2007, 02:49 PM
Originally posted by Xsjadox@Feb 26 2007, 11:44 AM
Stado : That`s got lank potential with some tweaking and working on that style some more it could look really hot
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/3093/hpim0835mc5.jpg

something like this?
i&#39;m still thinking about how to change the O... any ideas/crits/other stuff that might be useful?
(sorry, i have no crits)

AimoOne
02-26-2007, 02:55 PM
naw..do your stuff like this..

S T A D O

an when you have your structure down..go back to that connecting style..itll look amazing

trashhh
02-26-2007, 02:58 PM
i reckon that stado is good much improved from the other but maybe dont connect ur letters quite yet do seperate letters and work on them like that

krazzie_ammo
02-26-2007, 02:58 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Feb 26 2007, 12:18 PM
i cant exactly draw...so heres some photoshopping&#33;

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/5281/zeezeeed9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
what you gguys think of my photoshop ability? lol.

mind.or.matter
02-26-2007, 03:13 PM
krazzie_ammo: I dont really have much to say about photoshop except for that i suck at it :ph34r:

stado: I think that your letters are a bit too overlapped,

any crits on this? playin around with a new name, "cola"
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/Graffiti/DSCF2525.jpg

levans
02-26-2007, 03:13 PM
its better than what i can do on photoshop
andmin or matter loose that fat thing on the c it makes it look like a g or atleast dont make it as long

Xsjadox
02-26-2007, 03:21 PM
I agree with Levans,at first glance I thought it was a G

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/136/403816259_8e4f0b7a3e_m.jpg
&#39;Wap4&#39; Hah you guys will hate this :P But I kinda like it,regardless how toy-looking arrow-having it is..but oh well :P (waits for the GO SIMPLE) [Yes I go simple all the time,I just try fucking around with shit]

Peace

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 03:33 PM
Fosale-thnx for the tip, I think your right so I&#39;ma work on that...I like your style, it&#39;s simple but pretty fresh.

cola-lose the extensions on the "c"

stado-I don;t like how the "D" goes into the "O" if you know what I mean it&#39;s better than the last one though.

Fap-the "A" is decent bu the other letters are not as good as the "A" the over all look isn&#39;t bad but you still need to work on your letters alot, your style&#39;s got potential though.

EDIT: GUEST, AIMO and BAWK, I heard I might have a snowday tomorrow too so I could prolly finish your exchanges then, but I&#39;m not sure yet.

-ShAmEE-
02-26-2007, 03:33 PM
gold star for photoshop shit&#33;....make the G the same sixe as the other letters

AimoOne
02-26-2007, 03:41 PM
i dunno when ill have yours SUMOE..erm..i aint got my supplies..hopefully..thursday.. :P

capo93
02-26-2007, 04:08 PM
Originally posted by mind.or.matter@Feb 26 2007, 04:13 PM
krazzie_ammo: I dont really have much to say about photoshop except for that i suck at it :ph34r:

stado: I think that your letters are a bit too overlapped,

any crits on this? playin around with a new name, "cola"
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/Graffiti/DSCF2525.jpg
dont write cola <_< theres already pretty wll known one down here in the 514

Billburg
02-26-2007, 04:11 PM
isn&#39;t there a cola war too

F.R.A.T.
02-26-2007, 04:15 PM
man i fucked this up bad, i hate how my extentins look and come of the letters
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Photo2001.jpg

Bazer
02-26-2007, 04:16 PM
even ive heard of him and im not from there..

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-26-2007, 04:33 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Feb 26 2007, 05:15 PM
man i fucked this up bad, i hate how my extentins look and come of the letters
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Photo2001.jpg
not bad man
except for the skinny part of the e

stado
02-26-2007, 04:38 PM
thanks for the crits dude, maybe i&#39;ll post te new one tomorrow =)

slinks
02-26-2007, 04:41 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Feb 25 2007, 03:37 PM
stale... i dont like it

uhhh... i dont know what it says but it looks good

ekers... i like it all except for the E

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti044.jpg

tweeked and then colored that simple sketch from a while ago

Crits please

Edit: i know the tail of the last S is fucked up. and so is some spots of the 3d
bumpity bumpity. more crits please.

and edward sezer hands that looks pretty good. what battle is it for?

Lunatic
02-26-2007, 04:44 PM
i wudnt bother with all that coloring yet id work on structure first

krazzie_ammo
02-26-2007, 04:49 PM
NOW Y&#39;ALL KNOW MY REAL IDENTITY, FUCK THE 5-0, THEY CAN HUNT ME DOWN BEYATCHHH, I WONT GO DOWN WITHOUT A FIGHT AND IMA TAG YOUR MOM GGG-ZUPPP.

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7894/dsc00612copycopyhz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

YALL KNOW HOW WE DO EAST MIDLANDS WEST MIDLANDS SYTLEEE.

AND FUCK YOUR CRITS, IM FUCK YOUR BITCH INSTERRD.

slinks - work on tha structure bruddah

sezer - nice work, add some colour and a bit of 3d shading and t will look fiyah.

lol, gunna get fucked outtta my head tongiht before school on wednesday..

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 04:52 PM
krazzie went crazy. ^_^

F.R.A.T.
02-26-2007, 04:59 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 11:24 AM
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/355/dsc0473if5.jpg
:ph34r:
sumoe did i tell u that im taking this piece to vegas and gettin hitched, its fucking beutiful

bopONE
02-26-2007, 05:02 PM
hey i am new to this site i just need some crits on this throw i did

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/7991/bopuz8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fosale!
02-26-2007, 05:10 PM
i dont know why.
but im really feeling that.
just take out the continuation line in the B
and put an upside down cross in the O and P
that would look fresh.

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 05:10 PM
what throw....hahaha.

bopONE
02-26-2007, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Feb 26 2007, 06:10 PM
i dont know why.
but im really feeling that.
just take out the continuation line in the B
and put an upside down cross in the O and P
that would look fresh.
thanks man will do and sumoe what do you mean what throw? you saying that because the chick or what?

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 05:21 PM
yea just messin&#39; around.:lol:...but I actually like the throw, pretty good, nice and simple but put something in the middle of your "b" and "P".

ESKE one
02-26-2007, 05:21 PM
sumoe- wow that dope as shyt i love the spraycans in the corner to omg that shyt is hot

bopone- umm try making the bar on the p a little thicker to make it match the b look good so far though

couple simples i did

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs3021.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs3020.jpg

uhhh
02-26-2007, 05:23 PM
whats going on with the BSC battle?
final word yet or what?

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 05:30 PM
I dunno. Hopefully I gotta snow day tomorrow so I can sketch all day... :D

BIGel
02-26-2007, 05:32 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/233765009.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/233765021.jpg

lovin that green peice sumoe

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-26-2007, 05:35 PM
ill bigel.
teddy bear junt.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1707.jpg

2KoS
02-26-2007, 05:39 PM
i FUCKING HATE IT when pens run out....

i could only write &#39;fuck&#39; properly until i gave up coz i hate the screechyness and slowness of hardly any ink left scraping across paper... sucks

my message:

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b119/2kos/fukdripenz0r.jpg

Mazeone
02-26-2007, 05:42 PM
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/3541/photo511us1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just a little slag

don&#39;t know if this belongs here but what the hey.



p.s. sume, fuckin killing shit man. great stuff.

ner_one
02-26-2007, 06:08 PM
edit

mind.or.matter
02-26-2007, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by capo93@Feb 26 2007, 05:08 PM
dont write cola <_< theres already pretty wll known one down here in the 514
i have to say ive never been there and and anyways, theres no "new" names today, everything has been done by someone, somewhere whos gotten pretty well known....

mazermcb
02-26-2007, 06:28 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g281/snooponer/Picture098.jpg
bored at skool....

bopONE
02-26-2007, 06:34 PM
i really hate this and don&#39;t know why i&#39;m postin this oh well crits? i guess

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4048/boppyoy5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

glass
02-26-2007, 06:41 PM
mazermcb: lower left i like, pretty neat. the middle though isn&#39;t very good.

bop: i actually like it, except that the P is a bit big in my opinion. looks kind of cool otherwise.

bopONE
02-26-2007, 06:45 PM
thanks glass anyways heres a throw with the "upside down crosses" somone recommended

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1524/boppont1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slinks
02-26-2007, 06:45 PM
bop im liking your throwy stylez. they just need some minor tweaking.

MCB i like it as well but the C is just tooo small

slag im not really feelin that one.


and now for me:

Am i on the right track?

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti054.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti053.jpg

if im not please re direct me

ESKE one
02-26-2007, 06:47 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Feb 26 2007, 06:21 PM
sumoe- wow that dope as shyt i love the spraycans in the corner to omg that shyt is hot

bopone- umm try making the bar on the p a little thicker to make it match the b look good so far though

couple simples i did

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs3021.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs3020.jpg
bump to the next page

bigel- good stuff love that burner

sezer- nice bear i finish mine but i dont wanna post

bopONE
02-26-2007, 06:50 PM
eske your simples are coming along just keep working on your structure

bopONE
02-26-2007, 06:57 PM
transparent throw fo realz?

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/8898/transpsh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dezik
02-26-2007, 06:58 PM
out

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 06:58 PM
bop-the "B" is funny lookin&#39;. ;)

dezik-simples, simples, simples, simples, simples, simples, simples, simples. etc.

bopONE
02-26-2007, 07:04 PM
Originally posted by bopONE@Feb 26 2007, 07:45 PM
thanks glass anyways heres a throw with the "upside down crosses" somone recommended

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1524/boppont1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump fosale i used your advice for the upside down crosses

mind.or.matter
02-26-2007, 07:11 PM
dezik - Sumoe summed it up, go simple

Bop - lookin good, maybe try to make the p a lil smaller though

sabe2
02-26-2007, 07:11 PM
Dezik Dunt mean to sound harsh man but i really dunt like it at all...Try doin block letters and keyboard letters at first then slwly progress the art of taggin and peicing is completly different......Tagging your more in it for the fun and well piecing you gotta really commit and be willing to spend the time...Maby look at graffiti legend Seen&#39;s old school trains and shit he makes them block letters look sexy...Basically u develop your style through simples and slowly add shit like hookups and stuff just like graffiti history did........Aight I been doing simples alot latly but i just been doing some random shit here and they&#39;re im only gonna show u some of the things i consider decent...On the first one the S and P are crooked but that can easily be fixed
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture300.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture301.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture302.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture303.jpg
All crits appreciated

slinks
02-26-2007, 07:20 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Feb 26 2007, 07:45 PM
bop im liking your throwy stylez. they just need some minor tweaking.

MCB i like it as well but the C is just tooo small

slag im not really feelin that one.


and now for me:

Am i on the right track?

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti054.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti053.jpg

if im not please re direct me
bump cus it was at bottom of page with no critz.

sabe i like that melon throw. but the others i dont really like. the s is kinda of funky.

bopone im ashamed to see a copy of transworld snow my fave magazine being used for drawing on. dont you have paper??. o well. it looks good any how.

dezik...do what im doing. simple

bopONE
02-26-2007, 07:22 PM
Originally posted by sabe2@Feb 26 2007, 08:11 PM
Dezik Dunt mean to sound harsh man but i really dunt like it at all...Try doin block letters and keyboard letters at first then slwly progress the art of taggin and peicing is completly different......Tagging your more in it for the fun and well piecing you gotta really commit and be willing to spend the time...Maby look at graffiti legend Seen&#39;s old school trains and shit he makes them block letters look sexy...Basically u develop your style through simples and slowly add shit like hookups and stuff just like graffiti history did........Aight I been doing simples alot latly but i just been doing some random shit here and they&#39;re im only gonna show u some of the things i consider decent...On the first one the S and P are crooked but that can easily be fixed
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture300.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture301.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture302.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture303.jpg
All crits appreciated
spec simples simples simples master them till your sick of them and then some more&#33;

anyways heres a bop throwy
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/4360/bopkpp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

mind.or.matter
02-26-2007, 07:24 PM
not feelin the arrows on that one bop, or the dollar signs in the letters.... i like the structure though

Noddles912300
02-26-2007, 07:27 PM
this is for my future reference but once you get structure down (im not done with simples yet) what should you start with arrows? or bending your letters? or like connecting them etc?

slinks
02-26-2007, 07:28 PM
howcome noone critz me?

ESKE one
02-26-2007, 07:28 PM
bop (no offense) but that is simples that spec is doing also nice throwie spec and good S you did up there the lines are even a hell

ESKE one
02-26-2007, 07:30 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Feb 26 2007, 08:28 PM
bop (no offense) but that is simples that spec is doing also nice throwie spec and good S you did up there the lines are even a hell
edit; to bop stop writing on magazine i kno you got paper sumwhere in your house


edit: damn im dumb i deff. quoted my self lol sry bout that double post to guys

bopONE
02-26-2007, 07:31 PM
sockem boppers simple ass steez yea i got paper but it sucks when i scan it and distorts the colors+makes it look like shit

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/1779/boprszl8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NewbyTJ
02-26-2007, 07:31 PM
Gotta say that simple is pretty steezy man stay up

Vow
02-26-2007, 07:37 PM
In the middle of a class I the sudden urge to draw a flying microwave.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v292/MonkeyMastaa/graffiti/microwave.jpg

dezik
02-26-2007, 07:38 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 07:58 PM
dezik-simples, simples, simples, simples, simples, simples, simples, simples. etc.
fair enough. pretty much what i was expecting. just thought i&#39;d throw it out there ;)

Noddles912300
02-26-2007, 07:39 PM
haha nice i draw alot in class too. you should clean it up a bit and post a pic.

NewbyTJ
02-26-2007, 07:40 PM
I accidendentaly posted my Spec shit on my bros acount again i never look to see if hes logged in Lol yo .......(bop (no offense) but that is simples that spec is doing also nice throwie spec and good S you did up there the lines are even a hell)
Eske u think i should stick with that throwie and just work on the simples a little more /?And yo are u talkin bout the Spec throwie or the melon one?

bopONE
02-26-2007, 07:49 PM
this is an attempt at cursive inspired by seens 1981 fame peice i no it sucks lol
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7821/bopopv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ESKE one
02-26-2007, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one+Feb 26 2007, 07:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one &#064; Feb 26 2007, 07:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Feb 26 2007, 06:21 PM
sumoe- wow that dope as shyt i love the spraycans in the corner to omg that shyt is hot

bopone- umm try making the bar on the p a little thicker to make it match the b look good so far though

couple simples i did

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs3021.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs3020.jpg
bump to the next page

bigel- good stuff love that burner

sezer- nice bear i finish mine but i dont wanna post [/b][/quote]
bump one more time
got skipped over

im talkin about the spec one yea stick wit that throwie it look good and keep workin on you simple start to make idea about your own style also
the melon one look good too.

the only thing i recommend you take out is the the top E and replace it with the blue E

http://i17.tinypic.com/2j4c592.jpg

slinks
02-26-2007, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Feb 26 2007, 07:45 PM
bop im liking your throwy stylez. they just need some minor tweaking.

MCB i like it as well but the C is just tooo small

slag im not really feelin that one.


and now for me:

Am i on the right track?

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti054.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti053.jpg

if im not please re direct me
wow for the third time could someone please let me know if this are good simples?

eske. the top one looks good but work on the letter widths and proportions. the second one i dont even know.

vow thats pretty funny.

fredom-writer
02-26-2007, 07:56 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

ESKE one
02-26-2007, 07:56 PM
all the one on the top are pretty good and the one you circle is perfect i dont kno wat else to say other than keep doing simples lol

edit: k-spy nice simple the only thing that buggin me is wat in the red circle make it flat see how it looks
http://i9.tinypic.com/30kaype.jpg

NewbyTJ
02-26-2007, 07:57 PM
Ight thanx for the crits man ill try it i thought the E was a little fucked up

bopONE
02-26-2007, 08:06 PM
swirls crits
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/9813/booplf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Vow
02-26-2007, 08:09 PM
I wanted to try to make him a character. I want to personify him by giving him facial features through buttons and stuff, does anyone have any suggestions on how?

dj ultraviolet radiation ina can
02-26-2007, 08:11 PM
Originally posted by slinks+Feb 26 2007, 08:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (slinks @ Feb 26 2007, 08:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-slinks@Feb 26 2007, 07:45 PM
bop im liking your throwy stylez. they just need some minor tweaking.

MCB i like it as well but the C is just tooo small

slag im not really feelin that one.


and now for me:

Am i on the right track?

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti054.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti053.jpg

if im not please re direct me
wow for the third time could someone please let me know if this are good simples?

eske. the top one looks good but work on the letter widths and proportions. the second one i dont even know.

vow thats pretty funny. [/b][/quote]
you&#39;re doing it right just keep doing it....

whahappen?
02-26-2007, 08:11 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/9896/picturecm3.jpg
bop dont make the o so chunky

ESKE one
02-26-2007, 08:20 PM
whahappen isnt that like the 735439 time u posted that lol (no beef)
its a pretty good one liner

whahappen?
02-26-2007, 08:21 PM
yea
i just wanna know if its good/paint worhty

glass
02-26-2007, 08:32 PM
whahappened: i kind of liked it, not sure if i&#39;m one to say if it&#39;s paint worthy though. looks like it would make a good throw though.

anyway, i think this one&#39;s ok for a simple. i fixed the A and took a while to fix the S. i&#39;d like some good crit.

http://i19.tinypic.com/2d1qo9c.jpg

Fosale!
02-26-2007, 08:33 PM
Originally posted by bopONE@Feb 26 2007, 07:45 PM
thanks glass anyways heres a throw with the "upside down crosses" somone recommended

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/1524/boppont1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this is ill.
i love it.
but it would look better if you had a crackfill with a white paint marker and a choppy dirty outline.
like sloppy looking but hot.
and keep the upsidedown crosses

Stim
02-26-2007, 08:50 PM
try upside down stars too, I see too many upside down crosses on freights now

Sumoe
02-26-2007, 08:56 PM
bu bu bu bu bizzzump&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/355/dsc0473if5.jpg

prolly gunna fill this page up with some characters and what not.

Stim
02-26-2007, 09:31 PM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/1645/pic946lp5.jpg

Kore123
02-26-2007, 10:00 PM
tryin to get a different/better style

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/4447/0226072150apv0.jpg

shitty pic and i fucked up when i was inkin the k but you get the idea crits please.

stim...looks good get rid of tha circle thing at the bottom of the n

sumoe....i wuv that :wub: but not as much as the canvas :rolleyes: pm me for my address so u can send it to me :D

glass...me like espesially the s

C3ZR ONE
02-26-2007, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by BIGel@Feb 26 2007, 06:32 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/233765009.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/233765021.jpg

lovin that green peice sumoe
incredible.



Sumoe- Looks great. Keep it up.

Zep0
02-26-2007, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Feb 26 2007, 11:00 PM
tryin to get a different/better style

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/4447/0226072150apv0.jpg

shitty pic and i fucked up when i was inkin the k but you get the idea crits please.

stim...looks good get rid of tha circle thing at the bottom of the n

sumoe....i wuv that :wub: but not as much as the canvas :rolleyes: pm me for my address so u can send it to me :D

glass...me like espesially the s
Compared to the last piece you did its ALOt better you closed up the R and made it flow a little better. I would say work on the top of the K, less extension on the R, and the O, It good but there&#39;s something better(maybe simpler) I think...Keep it up, lots of improvemnt already.

Jroc1993
02-26-2007, 10:11 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 09:56 PM
bu bu bu bu bizzzump&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/355/dsc0473if5.jpg

prolly gunna fill this page up with some characters and what not.
or u could just leave it like that and frame it up on yur wall...i donno thats some hot shit to me

Zep0
02-26-2007, 10:14 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 09:56 PM
bu bu bu bu bizzzump&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/355/dsc0473if5.jpg

prolly gunna fill this page up with some characters and what not.
Now that you&#39;ve mastered it. I&#39;d say back to sketchin and just keep trying more stuff diff. styles. I love it, and I know you got more. :D

xJ-onex
02-26-2007, 10:35 PM
alrighty, first post

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/j-one.jpg



now tear me apart

Kore123
02-26-2007, 10:37 PM
give crits if you wanna recieve crits FOOL :angry:........... :D

xJ-onex
02-26-2007, 10:40 PM
im not exactly sure what you mean........

NICCSACC
02-26-2007, 10:45 PM
Originally posted by xJ&#045;onex@Feb 26 2007, 11:35 PM
alrighty, first post

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/j-one.jpg



now tear me apart
pretty tight but it looks to "produced"... do you see what im saying? the ink looks like its bleeding thru the paper at places or mabye just all around bleeding.
mabye im seeing too much at once... or mabye my eye is too trained to pick up flaws in other peoples work. all in all, its a good page for referance i suppose. hmmm.

edit: now that i looked at it again im digging the "THA" or whatever that is above the main centered "peice". halleluja holla bacc&#33;

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-26-2007, 11:05 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 26 2007, 09:56 PM
bu bu bu bu bizzzump&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/355/dsc0473if5.jpg

prolly gunna fill this page up with some characters and what not.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/677faa96d0916cc67858c547536ecbd6.gif <_< :blink: :angry:
no homo.

xJ-onex
02-26-2007, 11:14 PM
thanks man, yea its definently thin ass paper. i havent got my hand on a proper book yet, so im kinda workin out of binder.....


tha is my "crew" so to speak hahaha



heres another if you wanna check it out

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/j-one001.jpg


i dont roll with tak no more tho....so kro and seven arent there. i plan on paintin this as soon as its warm enough

NICCSACC
02-26-2007, 11:25 PM
copy paper is so great to write on.

ARMAwonR
02-27-2007, 12:22 AM
hey guys ... been a while ...

crits a necessity at this point
dont go easy on me

its been 2 months since I&#39;ve drawn anything decent

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid225/p85220fe5317bd3c429977d8dbd380e0b/ea8108e1.jpg

Nem
02-27-2007, 12:27 AM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem4.jpg

i know there are a lot of things wrong here.

just tell me what i need to change.

and if theres anything good i&#39;d like to know too. =]

(i would give out some criticism but i don&#39;t feel i know whats what just yet.)

(("Ain Elohim" indirectly translates to "There is no God". In case you were wondering...))

edit: yeah. that "M" is fucking ridiculous and stupid. don&#39;t look at it.

ARMAwonR
02-27-2007, 12:46 AM
jeah man that Sume is fire
real clean

what kinda markers are you using?
[if you dont mine me asking]

************************

as for Nem

chill with the bends and the little extentions ...

go straight, uniform boxes for now ... get nice clean letter structure down first
then start experimenting with other junk like extentions

Nem
02-27-2007, 01:01 AM
Originally posted by ARMAwonR@Feb 27 2007, 01:46 AM

as for Nem

chill with the bends and the little extentions ...

go straight, uniform boxes for now ... get nice clean letter structure down first
then start experimenting with other junk like extentions
yeah. i think i get too into it.

and think what i&#39;m drawing is really good and artistic.

but after i&#39;m done i look at it and realize it&#39;s shit.

at least i enjoy it aye?

maybe i should stop sketching while baked.....

ARMAwonR
02-27-2007, 01:04 AM
hey man ... if you&#39;re enjoying it ... more power to ya
we&#39;re just here to help make your enjoyment look better :lol:

iono man ... i&#39;ve heard some baked people talk about some deep stuff
maybe its the same for art

keep sketchin man

inkbits
02-27-2007, 03:09 AM
sume: looking fully nice man, flow on.

xJ-onex: You should try and work without the 3D so you can see letter positioning and get the structure together more. You need to choose between trying to go for rounded letters or practicing strait styles, that sort of has both which looses flow.

ARMAwonR: Maybe work on the right side of the M for slightly less angle to more closely match the angle on the A and R (not entirely take it back to their angle though). Regardless the rawness of it looks sweet as is imo.

Nem: I fear for my testicals a little, I&#39;d say ease up on the jagged and sharp edges and work on getting your letters more together with simpler stuff.



Not complete but I&#39;m super late with doin this so posting where it&#39;s at for progress. Hopefully have full ink and colour tommorow night. Exchange for Eskoner..

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9882971.jpg

d_g
02-27-2007, 06:06 AM
inkbits, I tired hard to find something wrong with it but I failed in that. Do you paint much? I&#39;d be keen to see some of your painted stuff.

Fuck I spent ages on this, and as usual I fucked up bits and pieces when outlining it with ink, hence a few problems with proportion and bars not being parallel. People always seem to pick that out first when criting my stuff, I am working on it. The highlights are extremely fucked up, I&#39;m still kinda learning those.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch31.jpg

ESKE one
02-27-2007, 08:53 AM
inkibits- I love that style it makes me wanna dry hump a gorilla lol

no homo

Xsjadox
02-27-2007, 09:27 AM
Inkbits : Hot
d_g : Not bad hey,I like it.Just work on the highlights and it will make quite a nice lil piece.

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/185/404652952_5eafd0a6bb_m.jpg

stado
02-27-2007, 09:49 AM
no comments, i think it pretty good (Xsjadox)
d_g, keep practicing, it will get better then (i hope)

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/5567/hpim0837xe1.jpg
another one of mine, i hate the O, can someone help me? :(

AimoOne
02-27-2007, 09:53 AM
i love O&#39;s..take a peak at mine..but dont steal &#33;&#33;&#33; <_<

-ShAmEE-
02-27-2007, 10:27 AM
Originally posted by inkbits@Feb 27 2007, 04:09 AM
sume: looking fully nice man, flow on.

xJ-onex: You should try and work without the 3D so you can see letter positioning and get the structure together more. You need to choose between trying to go for rounded letters or practicing strait styles, that sort of has both which looses flow.

ARMAwonR: Maybe work on the right side of the M for slightly less angle to more closely match the angle on the A and R (not entirely take it back to their angle though). Regardless the rawness of it looks sweet as is imo.

Nem: I fear for my testicals a little, I&#39;d say ease up on the jagged and sharp edges and work on getting your letters more together with simpler stuff.



Not complete but I&#39;m super late with doin this so posting where it&#39;s at for progress. Hopefully have full ink and colour tommorow night. Exchange for Eskoner..

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p9882971.jpg
bump for the freshnessssssss. love that S.

try different fills. photo copy it in blck and white to save u the hasle of sketching it out every time.

nero122
02-27-2007, 10:27 AM
Originally posted by nero122+Feb 26 2007, 12:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nero122 @ Feb 26 2007, 12:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nero122@Feb 26 2007, 12:16 PM
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q72/nero112/insaneinthemembraine.jpg

hopfully goin next to a piece or on canvas, gnna be much darker
botom of last page watchya think? [/b][/quote]
no crits last time posted so crits please worth puttin next to piece???

-ShAmEE-
02-27-2007, 10:32 AM
ever tried the toy charc thread?

nero122
02-27-2007, 10:41 AM
fuck off they never get looked at n it got a tag next to it so if u got crits give toy

anyone else hate all the like 2post kids given crits wen theyr graff is just arows n no letters

-ShAmEE-
02-27-2007, 11:05 AM
so it a sketch and this is the black book tread so they ment to post itin her to get crits. if u want the tagg crited the go to taggs. and they do crit in there. i&#39;ve been crited on.

Mse
02-27-2007, 11:05 AM
the character? it looks bitten, remind me of something
cant quite place it though, so i might be wrong.
the tag? its crap, "just arows n no letters" (im lying, but it is really bad. simple fucking letters you twat)

Mse
02-27-2007, 11:36 AM
double post? hellz yeah&#33;
http://i9.tinypic.com/4cixea8.jpg
http://i16.tinypic.com/48d3x3r.jpg
http://i18.tinypic.com/2cwk8k5.jpg
http://i12.tinypic.com/4dpfatg.jpg
every day i wake, i remain rough

trashhh
02-27-2007, 11:42 AM
Im lovin ur penis mse

Mse
02-27-2007, 11:50 AM
hahhahahhahahhah
thats just wrong dude :wub:

sketch3
02-27-2007, 11:52 AM
i like the top one best