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Nem
02-28-2007, 09:02 PM
EMOKID.

i love it. as always.

crazy style of drawing.

you should draw something demonic. i think it could go far.

legatogunsmoke
02-28-2007, 09:03 PM
Sabe2, check it. Its a solid simple, but one thing is REALLY bothering me lol. the A. you have the middle line chopped. Here, this should help. Your As middle line is like this "|-|" , make it like this "-" No lines on the side of it. You get what i mean. Itll look a helluvalot better when you do that.

No one crit'd what i put up a couple pages... lame. lol

Kore123
02-28-2007, 09:09 PM
aimo exchange

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2700/0228071959jv4.jpg

crits please

sorry for not coloring it i didnt feel like it but if u want me to i will tommarow ill redraw it in my book and color and maybe my famous piggy karak :D

busted some bounceingsoul shit wit tha highlighter lol....he hasent been on here lately has he? hmmmm i like his shit


sezer...me likey the tech and wats in the middle of the o on tha other one?

sabe....keep workin on them simples clean it up and try to make the a the same size as the others keep playin wit that n and r on the n fix where the hump comes out to make both of em the same and on the r fix the same place as the n where the hump and streight bar meet. use bars they sure as hell helped me

percoset fun
02-28-2007, 09:11 PM
tech mko im fealin your shit somebodys actualy bangin out sick simple on here keep it up bruh ;)


i dont know my *****s any opinions? il be glad to crit anybody elses stuff i freestyled this
sorry for the shitty pic it says percs
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percs1.jpg

NewbyTJ
02-28-2007, 09:13 PM
The A and O seem to fat but its a sexy simple I luvin that M im sure he will 2
I accidentally posted my Aner flik on my bros account by accident again i never think hes logged in Heres 2 moer by me......
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture307.jpg
I didnt attach the bars on the A like u wanted on the top one cause i had already sketched it by the time i read ur crits.....All crits appreciated thanx

stales
02-28-2007, 09:17 PM
percs i like it, u gonna add color cuz that shit would look dope
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/1407/dslb1.jpg
sumthing i did today, dunno wuts up with the back round but i was bored... crits?

percoset fun
02-28-2007, 09:17 PM
^^ round your corners a lil bit itl look cleaner as well as use a pencil and clean it up afterwards take your time and think about what makes it look just right on each thing you do like the joint in the "r" where the branch comes off in the bottom one .


anybpody wanna crit on mines

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-28-2007, 09:19 PM
NEWBY TJ
use a penicl
do bars, no not xanax
but simples those are incredibly shaky and umm just go read the new 2 graffiti thread.

percoset fun
02-28-2007, 09:22 PM
i do simples i just made an atempt at a semi wildstyle you can barly see the 3'd cuz of the shity pic but its fairly clean and looks alot better i just want crits on my letter structure which is visable

NewbyTJ
02-28-2007, 09:24 PM
Percs looks nice from what I can see but Its hard to see u should push harder on all the lines so we can actually see it cause ur cames a little blury and ur pencil sketch is so thin its hard to notice i dunno wats up with that thing over ur P i dunt really like that doesnt look like its attached to anything and I aint commenting on Zale's shit cause i dunt wana start this beef shit over again i explained myself And so did almost everyone else on this site but to stop beef from starting ill crit it for the hell of it.....The shadow effect is decent even on each letter the backround is bullshit i can piss on a page outline it and colour it in to(jokes lol)I just dunt like the backround....... As for letters dunt have them go so high up bring them down a bit ......New simple by me 20 second sketch...
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture308.jpg
All crits appreciated

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-28-2007, 09:25 PM
i cant even see your shit so i aint crit on it.

stales
02-28-2007, 09:26 PM
wut zale are u talking about

meph
02-28-2007, 09:27 PM
Yeah newby, bars man bars, make sure each and every single bar is the same width.

Percoset, i'm sorry man but i actually can't see it well enough to make any crits =/

Stale, pretty funky style there man, i like it. I think you should move the letters closer together though as there is a lot of dead space.

Here's a few of my sketches, three peices and two throws. Sorry for massive crease down the middle.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6350/01032007457yf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Cheers

NewbyTJ
02-28-2007, 09:30 PM
Top seph the nicest and W/e Zale i was bitchin at yesterday

percoset fun
02-28-2007, 09:32 PM
im outlining it in sharpie right now i only have a camera phone so il have it back up it is really hard to make out there. its from my collection mooked where i filled a b-book of freestly sketches while i was under the influence

stales
02-28-2007, 09:33 PM
seph i like em but the top one might look good fatter

NewbyTJ
02-28-2007, 09:34 PM
under the influence lol true its tha way to go man ight fair enough some people just dunt have webcams post it when its done luv ta see it

PSH ONE
02-28-2007, 09:35 PM
heres some shit i did. if any1's up for tradin pm me

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p105/HK2007/casey525.jpg
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p105/HK2007/casey523.jpg

NewbyTJ
02-28-2007, 09:37 PM
Lol the most well known asnwer on this site Try simples man like letters on ur keyboards first then block letters and post em we will give u crits from there The process does not go bye as fast as u think

Quigbert
02-28-2007, 09:43 PM
Meph-make them 3d

Quigbert
02-28-2007, 09:44 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri34.jpg

Criticism please

percoset fun
02-28-2007, 09:45 PM
tj i started off with you about the same level as me like november last year just practice its does go by slow. keep sketching dont paint i ruined my local rep by painting every time i though i was good enough. you will end up changing your name many times no matter how much you like one you find when i look back i regrett using all that paint. just keep at it man i have seen inprovment. but i fucked up so bad im actauly another member on this site that you all know but i cant risk my people being like shit that kidsa going at it again and ragging my shit.

Kore123
02-28-2007, 09:52 PM
Originally posted by Kore123@Feb 28 2007, 09:09 PM
aimo exchange

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2700/0228071959jv4.jpg

crits please

sorry for not coloring it i didnt feel like it but if u want me to i will tommarow ill redraw it in my book and color and maybe my famous piggy karak :D

busted some bounceingsoul shit wit tha highlighter lol....he hasent been on here lately has he? hmmmm i like his shit


sezer...me likey the tech and wats in the middle of the o on tha other one?

sabe....keep workin on them simples clean it up and try to make the a the same size as the others keep playin wit that n and r on the n fix where the hump comes out to make both of em the same and on the r fix the same place as the n where the hump and streight bar meet. use bars they sure as hell helped me
bump.....only 1 crit and aimo didnt see it

quig....i cant even read it

psh......simples, bars, learn, post, CRIT, please

seph....i like the top one

Edward"Sezer"Hands
02-28-2007, 09:53 PM
kore wanna exchange?

BIGel
02-28-2007, 09:55 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert@Feb 28 2007, 09:44 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri34.jpg

Criticism please
i actually dig this, now if you could show me this painted as a throwie id dig it even more

Kore123
02-28-2007, 09:57 PM
aiight sezer u write sezer....iight i never did z before :blink: lol but ok

ShIfTeD
02-28-2007, 09:59 PM
Originally posted by Quigbert@Feb 28 2007, 09:44 PM
http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g48/quigbertthesixth/deri34.jpg

Criticism please
reminds me of wickeds

its cool, clean it up and you got one cool style ;)

Stevie
02-28-2007, 10:15 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1406/eattbf2.jpg

Sumoe
02-28-2007, 10:16 PM
nice throwie ya got there. ;) :)

NICCSACC
02-28-2007, 10:19 PM
i write EAT haha

BIGel
02-28-2007, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by Stevie@Feb 28 2007, 10:15 PM
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1406/eattbf2.jpg
heat, not the t so much, but the a

roller4life68
02-28-2007, 10:28 PM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6784/img0940cn6.jpg

still having trouble with the B.

theprokilla
02-28-2007, 10:41 PM
nab- i like the lower case "b" better then when u had the upper

stevie- hot style but ur B seems to small

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0043.jpg
crits?

BIGel
02-28-2007, 10:44 PM
^its fine except* if you are going to shade the right portion of the M then do it to the other three letters, if not its not even at all.

Tombie15
02-28-2007, 10:45 PM
you put 3d on the far right line in the M, but none of the other letters have internal 3d. Makes it look like the M is floating in front of the other letters, but what do i know?

BIGel
02-28-2007, 10:45 PM
thought id throw this in here, from a few years ago..
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/8826419/117021527.jpg

uhhh
02-28-2007, 10:45 PM
it so cute.
you little kids still putting your 3-d over your letters.

a koochie koochie koo ^_^

Sumoe
02-28-2007, 10:47 PM
Peek-a-boo*in annoying high kiddie voice*. ^_^

but for real good simples except for the little "M" mishap. If it was even a mistake. B)

legatogunsmoke
02-28-2007, 10:50 PM
NAB, the lowercase B works SO MUCH better with that. Work with it. MEZN, you know what everyone has said so far, you need to establish a lightsource and base the 3D/shadow from that. You get what i mean?

That charac is cool, i like how you did the letters BIG.

Silly kids lol. Im one of them, but its cool...

FEN the HEN
02-28-2007, 10:53 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture024.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture025-1.jpg

meh not much of a sketcher....

Stevie
02-28-2007, 10:58 PM
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/9784/eatroj8.jpg

FEN the HEN
02-28-2007, 11:00 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Feb 28 2007, 10:53 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture024.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture025-1.jpg

meh not much of a sketcher....
that throwup is dope man keep that up.....can you paint it?

Stevie
02-28-2007, 11:03 PM
self props? hahah too nice

Sumoe
02-28-2007, 11:05 PM
haha, I think he was talkin' bout yours, which by the way is very hot.

Fosale!
02-28-2007, 11:17 PM
Originally posted by Fosale!@Feb 28 2007, 07:28 PM
someone told me to not go as hard.
so im doing simples now.
ebk pen freebie with fucked K
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebksimp.jpg

now, the only reason im posting sticks here is because i have been just randomly freestyling throws and letting my hand move around.
ive been playing around with sharp edges and i think that these throws came out hot but i wanna know what other ppl think.
and yeah, i know I overdid it on the upsidedown crosses.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kovrthrow3.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kovrthrow2.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kovrthrow1.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/ebkthrows.jpg
bump?

=[

Rank!
02-28-2007, 11:35 PM
Originally posted by Rank!@Feb 28 2007, 07:09 PM
AImo likin the peice i think you should add shadow and highlights


Im working on simples and i didnt get many crits so im posting againhttp://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/Ranksimples2.jpghttp://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/ranksimples.jpg
crits please
ok so ive been looked over twice and ive given crits before so i know its not that....can anyone give me some damn advice

Stevie nice throw bro

enigmatic
02-28-2007, 11:40 PM
keep in mind how hard it is to outline with huge deco markers...

http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/5261/1001739pe6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits much appreciated.

AnteUp
02-28-2007, 11:48 PM
lukks purty tight jus dont like the change of colors from dark to light green in each letter gud tho

sky 5
03-01-2007, 12:00 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 28 2007, 07:29 PM
well since today is kinda going slow on BS...

here's a quick pencil sketch, still gotta add more extensions/connections but whatever.

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/9757/dsc0474hk6.jpg B)

edit: fosale! lookin good bruh, lovin' it, so grimey, only thing is not feelin' some of the red stickies.
sume - maybe tyr fixin up the top part of your S and Es, i would still keep them how you have em but try and make them sharper, more defined . . good stuff as always, your def one of the people on here i like to follow . . .

legatogunsmoke
03-01-2007, 12:09 AM
Sumoe, idk if you're going for constancy or whatever you're doing, but to me it looks like this and the canvas piece are the same thing. the only real difference i see is the placement of "one". You might be doing it on purpose, but id love to see you crank something a little different out. ya know? To me, the 2 just seem too similar.

sky 5
03-01-2007, 12:22 AM
most sume sketches are the exact same but that is to his advantage in the long run, to be able to consistently produce the exact same letters (same proportion, style everything) i find very impressive . . . i honestly cant do the same and ive tried

NICCSACC
03-01-2007, 12:28 AM
sumoe is real nice with it.

xJ-onex
03-01-2007, 12:34 AM
alritey, im tryin to find my style still, cant quite get it....
any tips?
[img]http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/j-one002.jpg[img]




SUMEONE
sick with it

legatogunsmoke
03-01-2007, 12:42 AM
Alright Sky, i see whatcha mean. Im no good at consistancy either lol

sky 5
03-01-2007, 12:47 AM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 1 2007, 12:28 AM
sumoe is real nice with it.
so are you homie . . niccsacc you tryin to do a quick sketch battle with me (will takw about 40 mins of your time from righ tnow)? you pick 2 words, i pick 2 words we post it up in 40 mins??

my words are NICSAC and DES

if you are then post your 2 words then the 40 min clock starts . . .

legatogunsmoke
03-01-2007, 12:51 AM
Originally posted by legatogunsmoke@Feb 27 2007, 10:59 PM
Crits appreciated. Thanks!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030581.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/legatogunsmoke/P1030582.jpg

(sorry for pic sizes)
Bumpin for some crits cuz i never got any. Any would be appreciated, thanks all.

shtfit138
03-01-2007, 12:53 AM
Originally posted by Rank!@Feb 28 2007, 11:35 PM

ok so ive been looked over twice and ive given crits before so i know its not that....can anyone give me some damn advice


that megaman char is dope. and i like ur colors and the shading inside the letters aswell as the glare. personally im not a fan of having ur vanishing point inside ur piece but it still looks dope. keep it up.

NICCSACC
03-01-2007, 01:05 AM
Originally posted by sky 5+Mar 1 2007, 12:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Mar 1 2007, 12:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Mar 1 2007, 12:28 AM
sumoe is real nice with it.
so are you homie . . niccsacc you tryin to do a quick sketch battle with me (will takw about 40 mins of your time from righ tnow)? you pick 2 words, i pick 2 words we post it up in 40 mins??

my words are NICSAC and DES

if you are then post your 2 words then the 40 min clock starts . . . [/b][/quote]
this is GONNA happen FUCCCCCK&#33;&#33;&#33; no cam
im gonna go smoke and watch beer league. late

foryouractions
03-01-2007, 01:17 AM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b381/xskeebox/bzerkpeice1.jpg

FuseOne
03-01-2007, 01:43 AM
started doing pieces about a month and a half ago or so... been just doing hitups for a while, but here are some of my first ones...

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f221/snerkadacerca/Buzzsdrunk184.jpg

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f221/snerkadacerca/Buzzsdrunk185.jpg

^^^^^ still need to fill/shade

would love some crits.

oh and bzerk, I like it :)

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-01-2007, 01:44 AM
Originally posted by Kore123@Feb 28 2007, 09:57 PM
aiight sezer u write sezer....iight i never did z before :blink: lol but ok
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1717.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1718.jpg

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-01-2007, 01:59 AM
Originally posted by foryouractions@Mar 1 2007, 01:17 AM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b381/xskeebox/bzerkpeice1.jpg
:D :D
some lame ass writer at my school writes that shit.
go simpler lose the extensions.

Stim
03-01-2007, 02:34 AM
Foryouractions- Your headed in the right direction, but try and make your lines more confident and change the name

Sezer- Dope as always, I don&#39;t know if I&#39;m feeling the R on that Kore tho.

Fuse One- Second sketch is legit as hell, I&#39;m really feeling it. However the first sketch kinda seems like you got lost halfway through it, the colors kinda throw you out of wack too. But I get the concept nonetheless and it&#39;s cool.

Legatogusmoke- You forgot to crit other pieces in your post, but I&#39;ll crit yours anyway. Work on drawing perfect circles and curves then work that into your sketches to make the letters look uniform and tight, also when you are finished outline the shit in ink so it pops and we can see the focus of the letters.

I just submitted this for the next throwie battle
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5962/pic962ol8.jpg

eng
03-01-2007, 02:39 AM
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/9225/grabbedframe1id2.jpg
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2438/genotag13qr0.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/10/grabbedframe34tm2.jpg

bad points? (good points?)

thanks ;)

Stim
03-01-2007, 02:45 AM
Cut the image sizes homeboy, and you have to crit others to get crits. But since your new

eng- Your third piece is by far the best, try working with some more pigmented inks instead of just pen and whatever else. If your just getting going it&#39;s not bad.

flip79
03-01-2007, 02:55 AM
http://s155.photobucket.com/albums/s302/_7...rhowiegreen.jpg (http://s155.photobucket.com/albums/s302/_79/th_sake-trhowiegreen.jpg)

feedback

Stim
03-01-2007, 02:57 AM
Dead up homeboy, did you just come in and not read ANY posts at all? POST CRITS TO RECIEVE CRITS. I JUST said it to two people.

Nem
03-01-2007, 03:11 AM
eng - i really like on the first one how the bubbles at the top look all hazy and what not.

you should do a whole piece like that. hazy and stuff. if you can.

thats not necessarily good advice. im not a pro or anything.

i just wanna see it, lol.

cool shit though bra.

Xsjadox
03-01-2007, 06:11 AM
Stim : Fresh style throwy
Foryouraction : Your fills pretty cool,but work on letters

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/128/406652832_269f1de8b4_m.jpg

beefgerky
03-01-2007, 07:07 AM
all my names/styles and shit,
old and new...

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap197.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap310.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/doodles-1.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/48.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap307-1.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/36.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture676.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture771.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap250.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/20.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap245.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap295.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/thuggg1.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/39.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture758.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap217.jpg
one man species shakin leeches off his pumas.

.:jeka:.
03-01-2007, 07:59 AM
yo gerk im lovin that collage.....and that canvas+record

id post my shit but i dont have a comp...FUCK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

sky 5
03-01-2007, 08:23 AM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Mar 1 2007, 07:07 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/36.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture676.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture771.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap250.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/20.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap245.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap295.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/thuggg1.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/39.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture758.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap217.jpg
one man species shakin leeches off his pumas.
hahaha nicsac im guessin you meant, the movie beerfest, yup my bot dropeed off a bootleg tonight, watched alil before my attention wandered, ghetto cut thoo . . . bumpin thin even thoo i dont like gerk or his bot awoke . . . fuck the both of em straight up bitches, i dont sleep

Stim
03-01-2007, 08:31 AM
ive been up all night and im rate hyper right now.

NICCSACC
03-01-2007, 09:34 AM
nah, beer league is Artie Lange&#39;s new flick.
i wanna chek out beerfest tho but mabye not so much now.

beefgerky
03-01-2007, 09:59 AM
atleast bump the whole thing next time.
only 1 cool point for u today sky.


faggot.

Xsjadox
03-01-2007, 10:23 AM
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/128/406652832_269f1de8b4_m.jpg
Bumpidy bump
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/143/406827489_e4ddae6d7c_m.jpg

DJLotus
03-01-2007, 10:30 AM
good simples...

Albert Fish
03-01-2007, 10:30 AM
beefgerky do your thing

Fluffy Bunnies
03-01-2007, 11:37 AM
Gerky... some are awesome some are blah... why would you do that to a record... somone could really use that cuz the stuff where they get vynil is being extinc... and it&#39;s making the prices of it go up and soon in 10 more years there will be no more vynil... found out on Ragga jungle...

anyways... here&#39;s stuff

Old Name, Old game The last AKOne I will ever do&#33; Who wants me to send it to them?
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-4.png

New name, New game&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Cynic.png

AimoOne
03-01-2007, 11:42 AM
why are people hating on beefgerky..his stuff awesomeeeeee dudeeee radddd gnarly..i just watched jackass 2...SO FUNNY BAHAHAHAHAHAHA LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Loving the A Akone

nero122
03-01-2007, 11:48 AM
dammit i new i recognised that avatar

xJ-onex
03-01-2007, 12:45 PM
kay, im gonna try this again here, image didnt work last time...


any tips would be a big help, still havent quite found what style iim comfortable with...

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/j-one002.jpg

AimoOne
03-01-2007, 01:30 PM
^^ .. that is the gayest quote iv ever seen next to a sketch ... id also go abit simpler..

Wap..kinda gay name..tbh..i thiink u shud write Ap..or atleast use the F i skecthed you..lol..anyway..nice colours..dont like the W&#39;s at all tho..sorry..

so..time for my monthly dose of different letter&#39;s...on sumthing different.. :P

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/lastscan-3.jpg

only quick..and yeah..i hate R&#39;s and S&#39;s..sooooo bad... :angry: :angry: :angry: :lol:

Crits..

Thanks..

Fluffy Bunnies
03-01-2007, 01:33 PM
Awesome Ras... nice idea... but nothing I can really say cuz it&#39;s too plain (not bad) :( your M&#39;s can use some work. Nice simples though... yeah.

but good job&#33;

Xsjadox
03-01-2007, 02:55 PM
Aimo : you&#39;re a hard one to please... Although I don&#39;t do what I do to please anyone... But I want to drop the whole number thing anyway,so I`m thinking of writing "Cache" or something

AimoOne
03-01-2007, 02:59 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/lastscan-3.jpg

fucking maga bump wuv :wub: everyone in the toy forum..shouts to..
XASJACOYXAJADOAW...SHAMEE...CEZR...BEEFGERKY...FOS ALE...SUME..SKY..MSE..WAPPEN ( THANKS FOR THE THROWS..LOVE THEM &#33;&#33;..COULD YOU PM THEM TO ME..I CBA TO LOOK FOR THEM )

Fap...i aint hard to please at all mate..i just dont like Wap..sounds chinese..change it..i reomend..Apen..i like that name..up to you tho..

soo..Fluffy Bunnies..has inspired me to do a double pager..and idea&#39;s for karak&#39;s , peice..all that jaz...all help appreciated...&#33; :D

-ShAmEE-
03-01-2007, 03:07 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/mush.jpg

Sumoe
03-01-2007, 03:09 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Mar 1 2007, 12:22 AM
most sume sketches are the exact same but that is to his advantage in the long run, to be able to consistently produce the exact same letters (same proportion, style everything) i find very impressive . . . i honestly cant do the same and ive tried
is it really a good thing to have the exact same letters? I never thought it was and I am constantly trying to change up my style but it&#39;s kinda hard for me...whenever I change my style up I end up hating the result...but if you say its good, maybe it is. :) Thanks for the crits everyone, hopefully will finish the sketch and ink this mafucca up today.

shamee-I think its kinda ugly and what does it say? :huh:

React!
03-01-2007, 03:23 PM
word sume is a beast i wish i had skills like him and his coloring is so sexy damn why do i have to suck lol hey ima keep practicin tho..

nice simples aimo. my toy ass sucks buh i really like the shit ya post here those trains are cool to how you do that?

Fluffy Bunnies
03-01-2007, 03:50 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Mar 1 2007, 11:37 AM
Gerky... some are awesome some are blah... why would you do that to a record... somone could really use that cuz the stuff where they get vynil is being extinc... and it&#39;s making the prices of it go up and soon in 10 more years there will be no more vynil... found out on Ragga jungle...

anyways... here&#39;s stuff

Old Name, Old game The last AKOne I will ever do&#33; Who wants me to send it to them?
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Untitled-4.png

New name, New game&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Cynic.png
Buzzzzizump&#33;

Nice shamee, I can see some real mad hardcore potential with that style.
Keep it real B

NewbyTJ
03-01-2007, 03:58 PM
Cynic i like the bottom simples its nice Y the only letter that could use some work i think tho and Y&#39;s are a bitch to sketch

whahappen?
03-01-2007, 03:58 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 1 2007, 02:59 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/lastscan-3.jpg

fucking maga bump wuv :wub: everyone in the toy forum..shouts to..
XASJACOYXAJADOAW...SHAMEE...CEZR...BEEFGERKY...FOS ALE...SUME..SKY..MSE..WAPPEN ( THANKS FOR THE THROWS..LOVE THEM &#33;&#33;..COULD YOU PM THEM TO ME..I CBA TO LOOK FOR THEM )

Fap...i aint hard to please at all mate..i just dont like Wap..sounds chinese..change it..i reomend..Apen..i like that name..up to you tho..

soo..Fluffy Bunnies..has inspired me to do a double pager..and idea&#39;s for karak&#39;s , peice..all that jaz...all help appreciated...&#33; :D
you liked them??
thanks
yea ill pm them to you
and on the trains part(bottom word) the r&#39;s left leg is a lil thick
nice simple though ive been finding out how fun bars are latlly...ill post them later
shame the letters are hard to make out and dotn write ewok
cynic nice simple

and just so im not posting with no pic...
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/5927/picture008vk8.jpg

krazzie_ammo
03-01-2007, 04:23 PM
shame - wtf? what does it say?

ak - nice a...like the teeth thing, try making them bigger so they stand out in the letter

seks - do you do anything other than throws? lol, i likes it.

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/772/lastscansz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BACON BATTLE&#33;

even though im vegetarian.

gunna colour..maybe...

crits?

D Snif
03-01-2007, 04:24 PM
AIMO im not really feelin the a, it&#39;s overlapping itself while the other letters dont overlap them selves, and the extension coming out from the a kinda fucks it up too, im lovin all the other letters tho, good job.

whahappen?- youre extending the letters wayyy too much, try shortening up the top of the letters, and the bottom of the letters. youre doing that style way too much and its not really that great :/

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/3743/workingpiecetd0.jpg

Noddles912300
03-01-2007, 04:25 PM
Krazzie Change the N a little and put some 3-D on it.
Snif i dont like it the letters get smaller and smaller. lose the arrow on the F
I need help on color i got this peice work in progress that goes to vanishing point but dont know what to color it. the letters are filled in blue to light blue fade and black out line. any suggestions?

D Snif
03-01-2007, 04:29 PM
maybe black with white shine.
oh and i did put some 3D on it.. just not to a vanishing point 3D

Fluffy- i like that throw, except for the fact that the Y has different points, try to make the same ones, it would look nicer. other than that GREAT job&#33;

Slushi
03-01-2007, 04:31 PM
snif: simples.
Kraze: I love you.

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/7863/picture157hj0.jpg
Bacon battle will have it scanned by monday.
Critz.

Kore123
03-01-2007, 04:43 PM
aimo did you see the piece i did for you if not ill repost it or pm it to ya, i dont kno if you posted mine yet and i didnt see it but if you did repost it or pm it to me foshizzle my wizzle littizle niggizle sorry i wanted to say some shitizzle :D :P

NICCSACC
03-01-2007, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Mar 1 2007, 04:23 PM
shame - wtf? what does it say?

ak - nice a...like the teeth thing, try making them bigger so they stand out in the letter

seks - do you do anything other than throws? lol, i likes it.

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/772/lastscansz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BACON BATTLE&#33;

even though im vegetarian.

gunna colour..maybe...

crits?
shits almost unreadable... in a good way.

i dig this shit big time.

awesome original style. keep that shit up.

Mse
03-01-2007, 05:04 PM
slushi i like your a
but i dont like the amount of arrows you&#39;re using

bam bam bam bam bam
http://i15.tinypic.com/34ydyfn.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/3ys5gna.jpg

Stim
03-01-2007, 05:08 PM
Originally posted by Stim@Mar 1 2007, 02:34 AM
Foryouractions- Your headed in the right direction, but try and make your lines more confident and change the name

Sezer- Dope as always, I don&#39;t know if I&#39;m feeling the R on that Kore tho.

Fuse One- Second sketch is legit as hell, I&#39;m really feeling it. However the first sketch kinda seems like you got lost halfway through it, the colors kinda throw you out of wack too. But I get the concept nonetheless and it&#39;s cool.

Legatogusmoke- You forgot to crit other pieces in your post, but I&#39;ll crit yours anyway. Work on drawing perfect circles and curves then work that into your sketches to make the letters look uniform and tight, also when you are finished outline the shit in ink so it pops and we can see the focus of the letters.

I just submitted this for the next throwie battle
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5962/pic962ol8.jpg
Hey nobody besides xsjado (thanks) crited this and I just want some suggestions on my letter form.

waffer
03-01-2007, 05:13 PM
lookin good
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/Save-3.jpg

krazzie_ammo
03-01-2007, 05:20 PM
kismet guy - i dont think thats a throwie...but im not one to crit throwies.

profanity - ok ok ok....start simple...bust out that pencil, work on straight lines, keeping the width the same and keeping the height the same throguhout.

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/772/lastscansz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BACON BATTLE&#33;

even though im vegetarian.

gunna colour..maybe...

BUMP.

waffer
03-01-2007, 05:23 PM
bacon should be neon green on the iside

Noddles912300
03-01-2007, 05:26 PM
does any one have any vanishing point suggestions? im thinking black with pink outline. any others?

waffer
03-01-2007, 05:28 PM
i think the vanishing point should be in the middle...or to a side

Noddles912300
03-01-2007, 05:33 PM
yea it goes to the middle but i dont know what colors to use i only got the fill of blue to light blue fade. dont know what to do to the 3-D or outline.

waffer
03-01-2007, 05:36 PM
use some colors the pop....that stick out from the drawing

React!
03-01-2007, 05:48 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Mar 1 2007, 05:04 PM
slushi i like your a
but i dont like the amount of arrows you&#39;re using

bam bam bam bam bam
http://i15.tinypic.com/34ydyfn.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/3ys5gna.jpg
uppin it for ya this shit is hot keep it up

throwie1294
03-01-2007, 05:57 PM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k275/psp1294/Picture167.jpg



criticize away

AimoOne
03-01-2007, 06:01 PM
Love it MSE
Like that Baconpeice too..

soo..heres that double pager i was onabout..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/555-1.jpg

i duno..its okay i suppose..

Crits..

Thanks.. :D

waffer
03-01-2007, 06:03 PM
throwie1294-your 3d or shadowin is off
AimoOne-dude that shit is nice

legatogunsmoke
03-01-2007, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by Stim@Mar 1 2007, 02:34 AM
Foryouractions- Your headed in the right direction, but try and make your lines more confident and change the name

Sezer- Dope as always, I don&#39;t know if I&#39;m feeling the R on that Kore tho.

Fuse One- Second sketch is legit as hell, I&#39;m really feeling it. However the first sketch kinda seems like you got lost halfway through it, the colors kinda throw you out of wack too. But I get the concept nonetheless and it&#39;s cool.

Legatogusmoke- You forgot to crit other pieces in your post, but I&#39;ll crit yours anyway. Work on drawing perfect circles and curves then work that into your sketches to make the letters look uniform and tight, also when you are finished outline the shit in ink so it pops and we can see the focus of the letters.

I just submitted this for the next throwie battle
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5962/pic962ol8.jpg
I actually had been critting things in previous posts, that was just a bump to see if anyone would crit mine back. Buck thanks for the crit. Ill crit yours. Im feelin it, it kinda reminds me of flintstones... idk why. It just feels like the K is taking over a little and the T could of been enlarged a little to give some more balance. Sweet style though

neza
03-01-2007, 06:10 PM
Originally posted by throwie1294@Mar 1 2007, 05:57 PM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k275/psp1294/Picture167.jpg



criticize away
nice attempt but you are moving tooo fast cant tell weather its a 3d or a drop shadow but its way off block letters for you my friend construct letters from solid bars rather than individual lines

waffer
03-01-2007, 06:11 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/Save0002-1.jpg
crit

~MeRcI-oNe~
03-01-2007, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by waffer@Mar 1 2007, 05:13 PM
lookin good
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f50/rimzim/Save-3.jpg
the letters on that are way to spaced out and the shadow is way off...also work on the Y and the R and the N...also that tag is horrible....you can barely read it and the style is wack...

AimoOne
03-01-2007, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 1 2007, 11:01 PM
Love it MSE
Like that Baconpeice too..

soo..heres that double pager i was onabout..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/555-1.jpg

i duno..its okay i suppose..

Crits..

Thanks.. :D
Huge bump over ugh..

Nice karak hmm..waffel

React!
03-01-2007, 06:22 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Feb 28 2007, 07:29 PM
well since today is kinda going slow on BS...

here&#39;s a quick pencil sketch, still gotta add more extensions/connections but whatever.

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/9757/dsc0474hk6.jpg B)

edit: fosale&#33; lookin good bruh, lovin&#39; it, so grimey, only thing is not feelin&#39; some of the red stickies.
this shit is fuckin fire Sume now color it NOW&#33;&#33; lol

And damnn Aimo that is some sick work man&#33;&#33;&#33;

Mse
03-01-2007, 06:29 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/4hms5d2.jpg
ARGH&#33;

waffer
03-01-2007, 06:30 PM
Mse- that is so fuckin cool

sabe2
03-01-2007, 06:32 PM
yo i love that peice aimo one i love the hand really detaild nice

anyways what do you think for simples of my s and my a i know i screwd up the shadowing but other then that?http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture311.jpg

waffer
03-01-2007, 06:41 PM
sabe2-lookin good nice and simple

Fosale!
03-01-2007, 06:58 PM
MSE.
I wont be able to post your piece.
or any more pictures until i graduate highschool.
or if i get a friend to take pictures.
but my few friends dont have cameras.
my fucking dad took away txt messaging so i cant upload pics.

Sumoe
03-01-2007, 07:01 PM
MSE-HEAT&#33;

fosale-that sucks dude, haha unless you got mad good racking skills and can rack a camera.

edit: Aimo-lookin&#39; pretty good, in the piece, the "M" is too big and the "I" is too small, but the shadows in the hands/drawings look pretty good, at first glance I thought it was really good but...work on the anatomy of the hands.

stales
03-01-2007, 07:29 PM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/2568/ds003rk5.jpg
cameras suck....crits... -waffer i like that shit
- aimo killed it, but the m is too big like sumoe said

Lunatic
03-01-2007, 07:51 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne+Mar 1 2007, 06:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AimoOne @ Mar 1 2007, 06:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Mar 1 2007, 11:01 PM
Love it MSE
Like that Baconpeice too..

soo..heres that double pager i was onabout..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/555-1.jpg

i duno..its okay i suppose..

Crits..

Thanks.. :D
Huge bump over ugh..

Nice karak hmm..waffel [/b][/quote]
Nice drawings man

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-01-2007, 08:02 PM
fucked up on the s
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1720.jpg

whahappen?
03-01-2007, 08:20 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 1 2007, 06:58 PM
MSE.
I wont be able to post your piece.
or any more pictures until i graduate highschool.
or if i get a friend to take pictures.
but my few friends dont have cameras.
my fucking dad took away txt messaging so i cant upload pics.
:huh: <_< :(
that really sucks a lot...
sezer i like it the kis is small and the top off the s is shaped strange..whats with all the simples though?
aimo...thats awesome like the brush stroke looks realistic and...yea its really nice
stales dont make your stuff so jagged and use bars

F.R.A.T.
03-01-2007, 08:41 PM
sezer not bad
aimo ur hands r fucked up, the can one specially, but the simple is good
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture1.jpg
have know clue wat to do eith this

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-01-2007, 09:12 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Mar 1 2007, 08:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Mar 1 2007, 08:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Mar 1 2007, 06:58 PM
MSE.
I wont be able to post your piece.
or any more pictures until i graduate highschool.
or if i get a friend to take pictures.
but my few friends dont have cameras.
my fucking dad took away txt messaging so i cant upload pics.
:huh: <_< :(
that really sucks a lot...
sezer i like it the kis is small and the top off the s is shaped strange..whats with all the simples though?
aimo...thats awesome like the brush stroke looks realistic and...yea its really nice
stales dont make your stuff so jagged and use bars [/b][/quote]
im planning on painting soon so im practicing my simples.
frat keep it up.

ESKE one
03-01-2007, 10:01 PM
aimo- your simples are always hot just those hands are kinda fudged up
sume- fresh as usual
stales-wtf man havent we told you a bunch of time stick to simples
sezer- your another one with always fresh simples
mek- good shyt just make the M match more with the E and the K

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30024.jpg

new style new throwie (i need the work on the s alittle more) new handy(fucked that one up alittle bit)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025.jpg
^^^ my scanner scan this bright as shyt so i had to bring the brightness down that y it looks brown and shyt
crits?

React!
03-01-2007, 10:02 PM
Frat thats nice keep it up

NewbyTJ
03-01-2007, 10:05 PM
New shit by me
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture314.jpg
All crits appreciated

roller4life68
03-01-2007, 10:34 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1293/knab3fr3.jpg

Another throwup, reworked a little. B is still fucked up, any suggestions? Also tried a drop shadow, which didn&#39;t work.


http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6979/knab4lu4.jpg

wack ass tag.

fredom-writer
03-01-2007, 10:40 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

ESKE one
03-01-2007, 10:48 PM
freedom-writer- nice shyt i not feelin the s though and the y kinda looks like a lower case g but it good and the tag got nice flow try not to connect the k at the bottom though

nab - nice throwie, and crit if you want to be crited

aner- dont do that wit your r is looks wack, same with you crit if you wanna be crited

plz plz can i get some crits now

F.R.A.T.
03-01-2007, 10:49 PM
freedom - nice man i actually love ur simples
roller - good but not the drop shadow but work on it, look at things in the light to, even things like cubes, just to see the shadows and where they fall

roller4life68
03-01-2007, 10:52 PM
yeah, i really fucked up on the drop shadow. i would&#39;ve fixed it but i started with a marker instead of penciling it first, ha.

F.R.A.T.
03-01-2007, 10:53 PM
ohh roller i just noticed, when u pen ur stuff do u got back and forth or only once

roller4life68
03-01-2007, 10:56 PM
usually only once, not sure what i was doing on the shadow and outline.

.Smoke.
03-01-2007, 11:13 PM
Here&#39;s some pages I did in my book. Some aren&#39;t finished some are. Some are friend&#39;s names and some are "smoke".

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture001.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture013.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture014.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture015.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture016.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture017.jpg

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture.jpg

Fosale!
03-01-2007, 11:33 PM
simples pweesy ma friend.


SMOKE.
S-M-O-K-E
x99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

then start going complex

Nem
03-01-2007, 11:35 PM
im really tryin to work on some new simple styles.
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem7.jpg


smoke - i really like your color combinations and all of your little accent-y things. really nice stuff.



do you guys know of anyone who writes Fetus?

.Smoke.
03-01-2007, 11:41 PM
Thanks Nem. I can digg your style as well. And try using search for "fetus".

enigmatic
03-02-2007, 12:26 AM
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3165/1001741hz4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

what yall think?

Nem
03-02-2007, 12:46 AM
enigmatic - i think you should try something else with the E. i dunno, you just have all these nice letters, and then bam. E. it just doesnt feel like it fits.

and seriously. Queen lyrics?

thats a bit lame. if you ask me.

enigmatic
03-02-2007, 12:49 AM
ha ha ha i was talkin bout how i destroyed this kid that sketch was for a battle.

eng
03-02-2007, 02:40 AM
Enigmatic your blue sketch is pretty sick but i think maybe the little black and red tags draw the attention out from the main thing. Just a small thing, overall really nice work and i love the lettering.

Nem thats a really nice simple, try to expand with your fills, maybe hitting up some bubbles in those letters would bring em out and really make em look sweet&#33;

Smoke your black and white (sort of) metallic one is by far the best, really eye catching with nice lettering and 3d drops. I think the first one doesnt really flow for me, the lettering is sweet but the different types of fill sort of clash with eachother? just my opinion. The second one down i think maybe could be restricted to a certain colour theme, for instance red orange and yellow or different shades of blue, as all the colours maybe clash a little and give a confusing effect to that awesome lettering style you have.

ESKE try connecting your letters up and making them a bit more bulky, nice effort though i can see where your going...&#33;

Freedom writer, loving the bubbles, maybe the bottom of the S looks a bit weird but ur handstyle is awesome which makes your tag look sick.

FINALLY - NAB i like the way you write neat. it suits your letters and makes them all fit together... how about adding a simple fill? maybe a few bubbles? and your drop shadows can be easily improved, theres a really nice tutorial in the totorials section posted as a sticky in this toys forum area, it would help u get a cleaner effect to the shadow as it doesnt back up your nice lettering style.

hopefully now ill get some crits for my future work&#33;
hope that helps everyone, GENO / ENG

eng
03-02-2007, 02:46 AM
F.R.A.T., for your MEK sketch the lettering fuckin cuts it, maybe try adding a fat 3d drop with detailed shine, then a single colour (maybe red, another orange) outline, then some bubbles or a fat 20mm line going 90 degrees through it to bring it out from the page???

eng
03-02-2007, 02:49 AM
waffer, that sketch is ill man, u got the fabric on his sleeve perfect, the only thing i can crit really is that his cap looks a little outta perspective but on the whole this shits amazing keep it up

maybe add a bit of colour?

.Smoke.
03-02-2007, 02:50 AM
Originally posted by eng@Mar 2 2007, 02:40 AM
Smoke your black and white (sort of) metallic one is by far the best, really eye catching with nice lettering and 3d drops. I think the first one doesnt really flow for me, the lettering is sweet but the different types of fill sort of clash with eachother? just my opinion. The second one down i think maybe could be restricted to a certain colour theme, for instance red orange and yellow or different shades of blue, as all the colours maybe clash a little and give a confusing effect to that awesome lettering style you have.
Definitely appreciate the constructive critisizm. ANd about the first piece, yeah it sucks I was hoping the colors would turn out fine but Nah, lol. Good lookin out.

NiL
03-02-2007, 02:55 AM
enigmatic loose the arrows on the E and C they are like coming out of no where and don&#39;t like go good other than that it&#39;s nice.

NewbyTJ
03-02-2007, 09:34 AM
i would loose the arrows on youre peice enig but looks good

sabe2
03-02-2007, 09:37 AM
smoke im liking most of you&#39;re peices i ike you&#39;re trow up
anyways here are my simples what you think i need work on the e if anyone has one tht would flow post it plz

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture315.jpg

NICCSACC
03-02-2007, 10:32 AM
make your strokes more fluid.

have an idea of what each letters gonna look like and how youre gonna lay it down in one good stroke or what have you.

if it looks jagged and decrepid, it prolly is. those edges and shit are all jagged and stuff.

squash the letters together a bit more. alot more.


get new style of letters.

FailOne
03-02-2007, 11:00 AM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/4640/foneoneilsye3.jpg

capitol
03-02-2007, 11:30 AM
Fail one: It looks pretty sweet, i think theirs alittle to much extra little fragments everywere though.

eng
03-02-2007, 11:37 AM
Fail i really like that piece, well balanced, even lettering and a nice colour scheme

maybe on your next piece you could add a little more 3D depth to the drops outside the letters, it could bring the piece out and give it a &#092;"fat&#092;" look instead of a sort of 2dish style. it would also enhance all those little fragment you do which would be cool. just a minor point otherwise, nice 1 man

eng
03-02-2007, 11:39 AM
sabe i see what ur tryign to do here, make the thickness of the letters constant and bunch them up a bit, then add a fatter drop. it will look sick

Fluffy Bunnies
03-02-2007, 11:55 AM
POST PICS... DON&#39;T TALK UNLESS YOU POST A PIC OR ARE GIVING CRITZ STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART&#33;

Smoke&#33; I like only 2 of ur sketches... everything else was not so good.

Anyways, I did an exchange with Ras and the CY is mines...
I write Cynic

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/AimoExchange.jpg

and I am messing around with this.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Cynical.png

nase7
03-02-2007, 12:01 PM
hmm its clean but not to keen on the style and the letters arent to defined

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/441/cimg0287ka6.th.jpg (http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cimg0287ka6.jpg)

crits plz.

Fluffy Bunnies
03-02-2007, 12:05 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Mar 2 2007, 11:55 AM
POST PICS... DON&#39;T TALK UNLESS YOU POST A PIC OR ARE GIVING CRITZ STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART&#33;

Smoke&#33; I like only 2 of ur sketches... everything else was not so good.

Anyways, I did an exchange with Ras and the CY is mines...
I write Cynic

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/AimoExchange.jpg

and I am messing around with this.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Cynical.png
Bumped harcore to the maxX&#33;

Sorry you had to hear this from me Nase... GO SIMPLER&#33;&#33;&#33; read the new to graff thread to know why&#33;

REAL..
03-02-2007, 12:20 PM
yo kids im new any one comments plz :D

http://i10.tinypic.com/2zqtq88.jpg

http://i11.tinypic.com/2yx0itg.jpg

http://i16.tinypic.com/2vc7pyd.jpg

http://i7.tinypic.com/2qn5pp2.jpg

look better in person dont like camera...

REAL..
03-02-2007, 01:24 PM
better quality of my fav pic looks well better in person hate my camera lol enjoy........... comments plz

http://i11.tinypic.com/2v9aonq.jpg

Albert Fish
03-02-2007, 01:27 PM
judging by your handstyle youre getting a little ahead of yourself with those. the extensions look nice but the letters need more uniform and have to be alot cleaner, i hate telling people to work on simples but i think you should for a little while because your pieces have alot of potential and once you understand the concept of basic letters and incorporate them into your extensions tou have going, you&#39;ll be on your way to having a nice style.

REAL..
03-02-2007, 01:42 PM
i got some other simpler stuff any good???

http://i10.tinypic.com/4gg3prp.jpg

http://i14.tinypic.com/2isei4g.jpg

http://i16.tinypic.com/29qk4cw.jpg

i dont like as much but hey if ppl want simpler........

sabe2
03-02-2007, 01:58 PM
real i really like it what kind of markers are you using?

REAL..
03-02-2007, 02:00 PM
letraset pro twin tips.... look better in person honest and use good paper btw they bleed a bit like prismas (very similar) most are running out gettin more tomoz so i can do some blending btw thanks for comments....

YarHarHar
03-02-2007, 02:09 PM
posted it in normal blackbook but didnt get a response..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_2374.jpg

NICCSACC
03-02-2007, 02:22 PM
it says JAR? its cold as fuck.

eng
03-02-2007, 02:39 PM
Cynic - i really like that name it stands out 4 me, well original. I like your throwup style, lets see your full name???

eng
03-02-2007, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by nase7@Mar 2 2007, 12:01 PM
hmm its clean but not to keen on the style and the letters arent to defined

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/441/cimg0287ka6.th.jpg (http://img340.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cimg0287ka6.jpg)

crits plz.
nase i really like your sketch but i think make the letters less wiggly? cleaner straigher lines, with the letters all bunched closer together for a cleaner, fatter look
just my opinion ;)

REAL - all ur stuff looks insane to me.. i cant really crit seeing as i dont know how i would improve those&#33; try the normal blackbook section of the forum maybe ??

eng
03-02-2007, 02:44 PM
JAR5 i really like your lettering and drops but the colours dont really work for me, just my opinion :)

AimoOne
03-02-2007, 02:53 PM
Real..id say go simpler..

Jar..thats..ugh..amazing..uhg..amazing..amazing .. cula..amazing..

soooo...sum shizzle..i couldnt fit on the O..if i did..it wouldnt flow..soooo..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6.jpg

Crits..only on this please..not these exchanges..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/556.jpg

sorry..im shit at R&#39;s and E&#39;s

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/66.jpg

Bigy..here you goo.. ;)

React!
03-02-2007, 03:02 PM
Damn Aimo ur first one is so sick ur characs are always freshh wa type of markers u usin?

stales
03-02-2007, 03:15 PM
i think everyone on this page fuckin killed it, http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7703/ds004vb7.jpg yeah simple i did just fuckin around, crits mabey?and yeah i know those arrows fills suck, i fergor wut i was gonna do

ESKE one
03-02-2007, 03:17 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 1 2007, 10:01 PM
aimo- your simples are always hot just those hands are kinda fudged up
sume- fresh as usual
stales-wtf man havent we told you a bunch of time stick to simples
sezer- your another one with always fresh simples
mek- good shyt just make the M match more with the E and the K

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30024.jpg

new style new throwie (i need the work on the s alittle more) new handy(fucked that one up alittle bit)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025.jpg
^^^ my scanner scan this bright as shyt so i had to bring the brightness down that y it looks brown and shyt
crits?
aimo- your stuff I&#39;d always nice
I think it says tar5 but wutever it hot
real-go simpler
stale- I&#39;m really diggin that fill and that throwie shyts tuff keep that a throwie though and work on simple for you piece and shyt

AimoOne
03-02-2007, 03:17 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 2 2007, 07:53 PM
Real..id say go simpler..

Jar..thats..ugh..amazing..uhg..amazing..amazing .. cula..amazing..

soooo...sum shizzle..i couldnt fit on the O..if i did..it wouldnt flow..soooo..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6.jpg

Crits..

Thanks


Bump..

stales...do proper straight simples..like S T O L E ..like that..shuv em toghether..lean um..dont add any funny background or anything..just do one colour..

ESKE one
03-02-2007, 03:29 PM
no beef but aimo wut are you talkin about its just a throwie and he was experiment now if your gonna do a piece go simple but your good like that with a throwie

eng
03-02-2007, 03:39 PM
AIMO man that lettering is beast, lovin it - maybe try a black outline on the bubbles to bring em out a bit more??? just a thought man nice one

STALE i really like the bubbles at the top - sick

I only just started... this is maybe a bit too complicated for me but wateva...
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8688/genoggit2.jpg

this next one is my simple throwy style.. :)
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/761/tagsz7mt3.jpg

crits will b appreciated, cheers

ESKE one
03-02-2007, 03:48 PM
y doesn&#39;t any1 like me i cant get any crits :( :angry: <_<

eng go back to simple piece&#39;n and dont bring the back of your e in that deep on your throwie

NICCSACC
03-02-2007, 04:03 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 2 2007, 03:48 PM
y doesn&#39;t any1 like me i cant get any crits :( :angry: <_<

eng go back to simple piece&#39;n and dont bring the back of your e in that deep on your throwie
work on your lines.
they look flimsy.
im saying use even pressure with the marker or whatever when your draw.
put some confidence in it.

Noddles912300
03-02-2007, 04:11 PM
Eske the 3-D is off on the first one. especially the S

stales
03-02-2007, 04:13 PM
eske ur shits got sum potential but TAKE YOUR TIME dont rush shit and ur 3d&#39;s kina fucked cuz the lines aint even.... and i know u dont wanna here it but do simples man, its good practice

eng
03-02-2007, 04:18 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 2 2007, 04:03 PM

work on your lines.
they look flimsy.
im saying use even pressure with the marker or whatever when your draw.
put some confidence in it.
cheers for this - are you talking about the first one? or both?

stales
03-02-2007, 04:20 PM
both

Chalk
03-02-2007, 04:25 PM
practice practice practice

quite pleased with this one ( those are white highlights, the pic just doesn&#39;t show it that well. )
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_07_5.jpg

not so sure how i feel about this one. and i fucked up on the 3d
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_pg.jpg

ok...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_ob.jpg

and i know this one is quite similar to the last and i have been painting simliar things, how ever i&#39;m really just trying to get it dialed in.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_green.jpg

rip them a new one. ;)

Chulo
03-02-2007, 04:47 PM
fresh

React!
03-02-2007, 04:52 PM
thats some real nice shit Chalk and its good to keep the same style juss look at sume he keeps the same style of letters and juss adjusts them in diff. ways that make his peices look diff. wa kinda marker u used for the white hi lights on the 1st one?

whahappen?
03-02-2007, 05:10 PM
tried bars for the first time
fucked up my widths so bad..and the s
the sketchy ness was one purpose...its easier for me hat way..idk y
http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/5886/picture010po3.jpg
chalk it all looks good esp. that new one u said u werent sure about

eng
03-02-2007, 05:28 PM
chalk - i fuckin love the 2nd 2, i like the way you did the drop in the last

whahappen?
03-02-2007, 05:44 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Mar 2 2007, 05:10 PM
tried bars for the first time
fucked up my widths so bad..and the s
the sketchy ness was one purpose...its easier for me hat way..idk y
http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/5886/picture010po3.jpg
chalk it all looks good esp. that new one u said u werent sure about
bottom of page
im gonna get flamed for this but w.e :P

sank one
03-02-2007, 05:48 PM
no you were gettin flamed for your shit thrwoies, im sorry, but i really didnt like them.
happy to seee that you are using bars now. keep on messing around with them.

whahappen?
03-02-2007, 06:02 PM
whyd you think they were shitty

Chalk
03-02-2007, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by React&#33;@Mar 2 2007, 04:52 PM
thats some real nice shit Chalk and its good to keep the same style juss look at sume he keeps the same style of letters and juss adjusts them in diff. ways that make his peices look diff. wa kinda marker u used for the white hi lights on the 1st one?
thanks man, i didn&#39;t use a marker, i just left the paper showing through. I have yet to find a decent white paint marker.

YarHarHar
03-02-2007, 06:20 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 2 2007, 02:22 PM
it says JAR? its cold as fuck.
o...k..is that good or bad?

NICCSACC
03-02-2007, 06:50 PM
sorry, i meant to say its totally gnarley dude.

i like it.

Sumoe
03-02-2007, 07:31 PM
Lesson#1: When Niccsacc says its "cold as fuck", he really means it&#39;s "totally gnarley dude." :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

AimoOne
03-02-2007, 07:41 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne+Mar 2 2007, 08:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AimoOne @ Mar 2 2007, 08:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Mar 2 2007, 07:53 PM
Real..id say go simpler..

Jar..thats..ugh..amazing..uhg..amazing..amazing .. cula..amazing..

soooo...sum shizzle..i couldnt fit on the O..if i did..it wouldnt flow..soooo..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/6.jpg

Crits..

Thanks


Bump..

stales...do proper straight simples..like S T O L E ..like that..shuv em toghether..lean um..dont add any funny background or anything..just do one colour.. [/b][/quote]
Bump becuz Sume&#39;s now here..hint hint.. :D

Zeks..check whut sumone did to the sketch on 12oz..ittll help ypu alot mate ;)

Ekers.Two.Two
03-02-2007, 07:49 PM
aimo - sick shit

zeks - simples

it says MR TROW UP
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011144.jpg

Sumoe
03-02-2007, 07:51 PM
Aimo-get rid of the connection between the "i" and the "M" and it should be pretty good also make the dot on the "i" a lot smaller, you&#39;re getting there. Your sketches are flowin&#39; better too, not feelin&#39; the character though. <_< :rolleyes:

edit: Ekers.Two.Two-"T" kinda looks like a "Y", "W" kinda looks like an "H" and the "U" kinda looks like a "T". I like the style you&#39;re going for though. <_< :D

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9194/dsc0521pv1.jpg
B)

AimoOne
03-02-2007, 07:55 PM
oh my gosh..i just pissed myself..oh my gosh..ugh..serious..post that in the super duper blackbook thread for people who THINK there still toy&#39;s .. thread..

serious..i love that Sume..wow..

Why dont you like my karaks may i ask..i guess its a mater op opinion.. :lol:

AteskOne
03-02-2007, 08:01 PM
definitely the best color scheem i&#39;ve seen you use sumeo...i dont know i&#39;m not personally a fan of your style (too blocky and sharpfor me) but i must agree this one is absoultely amazing. the "E" is fucking killer. the only thing i&#39;m having a poblem with is the "U" being so blocky and sharp while the "E" is nice and smooth and round.

i also <3 hip-hop :)

Bazer
03-02-2007, 08:02 PM
aimo to be honest im not really a big fan of your characters either. but its only cuz im more into animal characters that dont look flat...but yours r not to bad... :)

see like this:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/_-R/RECO065.jpg

Sumoe
03-02-2007, 08:07 PM
I like that alot.

Bazer
03-02-2007, 08:08 PM
thanks&#33; ;)

Kore123
03-02-2007, 08:09 PM
aimo thanks for the exchange did you see the one i did for you?

sume.....thats the fuckin shit rite there i love it

ekers....looks good work on dat u though

aimo....you know i like your shit

AimoOne
03-02-2007, 08:16 PM
its okay Kore..no..i dint see your part of the ex

NICCSACC
03-02-2007, 08:28 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 2 2007, 07:51 PM
Aimo-get rid of the connection between the "i" and the "M" and it should be pretty good also make the dot on the "i" a lot smaller, you&#39;re getting there. Your sketches are flowin&#39; better too, not feelin&#39; the character though. <_< :rolleyes:

edit: Ekers.Two.Two-"T" kinda looks like a "Y", "W" kinda looks like an "H" and the "U" kinda looks like a "T". I like the style you&#39;re going for though. <_< :D

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9194/dsc0521pv1.jpg
B)
sorry if youve been asked this already but what kinda markers are those? that shit looks wet.
you in the "style" battle sky set up? see ya.

Sumoe
03-02-2007, 08:37 PM
Is wet a good thing? :( ...and I use prismas, the purple one is new so the ink comes out too much, don&#39;t really like new ones...anyways, there&#39;s a "style" battle? I guess I&#39;ll be in it if I can.

sabe2
03-02-2007, 08:45 PM
Sume just like always luving ya shit i gotta buy prismas and wet ok looks good still:D stay up man hopefully reach ya level one day

NewbyTJ
03-02-2007, 08:49 PM
Sume looks fuckin amazing pretty sure i just came in my pants lol jokes:P....The only thing i dunt like is the line that runs from the top of ur s to the bottom the little bar doesnt really look in place if u knw wat i mean....Stay up hope to be as good as u eventually:P...Newst shit by me today
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture318.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture319.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture320.jpg
All crits appreciated thanx

MUSASHI
03-02-2007, 09:14 PM
I used to do that to my shoes in like 1984...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bacon.jpg

Kore123
03-02-2007, 09:26 PM
Originally posted by Kore123+Feb 28 2007, 09:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Kore123 @ Feb 28 2007, 09:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kore123@Feb 28 2007, 09:09 PM
aimo exchange

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2700/0228071959jv4.jpg

crits please

sorry for not coloring it i didnt feel like it but if u want me to i will tommarow ill redraw it in my book and color and maybe my famous piggy karak :D

busted some bounceingsoul shit wit tha highlighter lol....he hasent been on here lately has he? hmmmm i like his shit


sezer...me likey the tech and wats in the middle of the o on tha other one?

sabe....keep workin on them simples clean it up and try to make the a the same size as the others keep playin wit that n and r on the n fix where the hump comes out to make both of em the same and on the r fix the same place as the n where the hump and streight bar meet. use bars they sure as hell helped me
bump.....only 1 crit and aimo didnt see it

quig....i cant even read it

psh......simples, bars, learn, post, CRIT, please

seph....i like the top one [/b][/quote]
bizziddybuuuump......aimo didnt see it :( :D

NICCSACC
03-02-2007, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Mar 2 2007, 08:49 PM
Sume looks fuckin amazing pretty sure i just came in my pants lol jokes:P....The only thing i dunt like is the line that runs from the top of ur s to the bottom the little bar doesnt really look in place if u knw wat i mean....Stay up hope to be as good as u eventually:P...Newst shit by me today
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture318.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture319.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture320.jpg
All crits appreciated thanx
its a good thing those are kmart specials.

NICCSACC
03-02-2007, 10:15 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture005.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture004.jpg

NewbyTJ
03-02-2007, 10:20 PM
Dunt be a fuckin jackass nice throw up dunt like the last S on the first one tho it just looks like a C with a long extension stay up

wiserism
03-02-2007, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 2 2007, 07:51 PM
Aimo-get rid of the connection between the "i" and the "M" and it should be pretty good also make the dot on the "i" a lot smaller, you&#39;re getting there. Your sketches are flowin&#39; better too, not feelin&#39; the character though. <_< :rolleyes:

edit: Ekers.Two.Two-"T" kinda looks like a "Y", "W" kinda looks like an "H" and the "U" kinda looks like a "T". I like the style you&#39;re going for though. <_< :D

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9194/dsc0521pv1.jpg
B)
freshh shit yu should add a background dude

G - Wahl
03-02-2007, 10:32 PM
sume - that 3d and shading literally made my jaw drop..

niccsacc - not to sure what to say, i definitly like what you&#39;re doing though, except that in the 1st one the S kinda looks like a C with a really bad extension.

kore- i like what you did with the I and the M, just make the lines in the M and the A bigger.

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture010-1.jpg
crits on this please

C3ZR ONE
03-02-2007, 10:33 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 2 2007, 10:15 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture005.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture004.jpg
ooooowwwwwwww...second one...monkeyface is illin.. Glad you&#39;re back man.

ESKE one
03-02-2007, 11:06 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one+Mar 2 2007, 03:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one @ Mar 2 2007, 03:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Mar 1 2007, 10:01 PM
aimo- your simples are always hot just those hands are kinda fudged up
sume- fresh as usual
stales-wtf man havent we told you a bunch of time stick to simples
sezer- your another one with always fresh simples
mek- good shyt just make the M match more with the E and the K

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30024.jpg

new style new throwie (i need the work on the s alittle more) new handy(fucked that one up alittle bit)
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025.jpg
^^^ my scanner scan this bright as shyt so i had to bring the brightness down that y it looks brown and shyt
crits?
aimo- your stuff I&#39;d always nice
I think it says tar5 but wutever it hot
real-go simpler
stale- I&#39;m really diggin that fill and that throwie shyts tuff keep that a throwie though and work on simple for you piece and shyt [/b][/quote]
sume- shyts tight like always dont kno y you still post in here
cezr- your shyt tight also
spectr -those shoes are done son but your simples are getting up
musa - that drop shadow is crazy nice

AnteUp
03-02-2007, 11:09 PM
ayo eske not really diggin tha first one...but the second one i think i like :D

Sumoe
03-02-2007, 11:12 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Mar 2 2007, 10:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Mar 2 2007, 10:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Mar 2 2007, 10:15 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture005.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture004.jpg
ooooowwwwwwww...second one...monkeyface is illin.. Glad you&#39;re back man. [/b][/quote]
word...lovin&#39; the monkey face, bump because it&#39;s "cold as fuck" haha. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

React!
03-02-2007, 11:17 PM
wow sick shit niccsacc the monkey face is dope buh the only thing thats kinda weird is that extension off the S on the second one at the end stay up tho fam.

d_g
03-02-2007, 11:25 PM
Leos, I know it&#39;s fun to color shit in but the time it took you to colour that you could have probably have done another sketch. If I was you I&#39;d save coloring for later. The 3D is a little wierd in some places. Like the bottom far left and bottom far right. Those should point either straight down or to a vanishing point. Your letters arn&#39;t terrible but they still have a ways to go. Try and keep the same style and angle in your letters through out the sketch for the moment.

Eske, I&#39;d loose those connections in the top sketch, they look out of place. If you took that top sketch, fattened it up and add some curves into it in the right places it wouldn&#39;t look too bad. The &#39;E&#39; on that throwie is not too bad but the &#39;S&#39; is kinda generic and a little boring.

Thanks guys for giving out crits.


Was messing around the other day and drew this

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw10.jpg

I really like the &#39;S&#39; so I&#39;m trying to use that style for a throw. Came up with these as well.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw11.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw12.jpg

Zep0
03-02-2007, 11:32 PM
Eske - you might want to start bringing your letters together maybe...
Niccsacc - im really diggin those they look good.

Ok I know to do simples, I&#39;ve been practicing simples like mad, but how do these extensions look (im trying to move into extensions) Top right arrow on D is gey and the right side of the A is gey as well. It is just practice though.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/adone.jpg

G - Wahl
03-02-2007, 11:32 PM
D_g - thanks for the crits..i only color it cause i dont want my coloring and fill skils to keep up with my cketching ability, and dont get me wrong, i pen sketch allll the time..i hardly ever do fills and shit, but yeah i wanst sure at all on how to do the 3D so i just kinda tryed it ha. your throw is looking nice, the first C looks better then the second one, but i really like the style of the second A S..hope im making sence

d_g
03-02-2007, 11:37 PM
Cheers.

Each to their own I guess. Personally I&#39;d rather take things a step at a time, I don&#39;t think it will take me too long to pick up color schemes later.

AnteUp
03-02-2007, 11:42 PM
yea AD the only extension i like is the one on the bottom of the D dont like the squiggily lines <_<

Slushi
03-02-2007, 11:59 PM
Keep the letters lose the crap

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7941/picture152fo8.jpg
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/9162/picture155yu6.jpg

Meh. Crits.

Zep0
03-03-2007, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by Slushi@Mar 2 2007, 11:59 PM
Keep the letters lose the crap

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7941/picture152fo8.jpg
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/9162/picture155yu6.jpg

Meh. Crits.
Hahahah I thought the same thing After I finished... :D

Im not feelin the U on the first one and I think you overpowered the S. Thicken up the top of the E and maybe trim down the 2nd S&#39;s extention.

I dont like the S or the E on the 2nd one.

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 12:09 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 1 2007, 06:58 PM
MSE.
I wont be able to post your piece.
or any more pictures until i graduate highschool.
or if i get a friend to take pictures.
but my few friends dont have cameras.
my fucking dad took away txt messaging so i cant upload pics.
bump for saddness

NICCSACC
03-03-2007, 12:14 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture40-1.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture37-1.jpg

Zep0
03-03-2007, 12:21 AM
THC FTW HAHA&#33;&#33;

Ok I hate my throw...the A is the only thing I like, I need help. Please?

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0162.jpg

Bah, shit.

whahappen?
03-03-2007, 12:46 AM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 3 2007, 12:14 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture40-1.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture37-1.jpg
your arent black??????
what
the
fuck

uhhh
03-03-2007, 01:02 AM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Mar 2 2007, 08:49 PM
Sume looks fuckin amazing pretty sure i just came in my pants lol jokes:P....The only thing i dunt like is the line that runs from the top of ur s to the bottom the little bar doesnt really look in place if u knw wat i mean....Stay up hope to be as good as u eventually:P...Newst shit by me today
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture318.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture319.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture320.jpg
All crits appreciated thanx
oh damn.
im getting some new kicks pretty soon here.
can i ship em out to you so you can shitify them?

the sume a few pages back..
god damn bro.
shits ill as fuck.
im hoping i can be like that soon after i get me some prismasss.

AND
btw
if anyone on here rides bmx
i have a very nice, extremely close to mint condition CASSETTE rear wheel, no dents, only wobbles a millimetter or two. and ill include a tire and tube.
&#036;125 SHIPPED to any where in teh continental United States.
i really need me some prismas, and ipaths, and some paint for my bicycle.
my baby lookeds a litttle busted at the moment.
yes, i did say baby.

so what if my bike sleeps in my bed with me.
oh.
and i drew a little tiny bit at schoo.
i stole a buncha pencils from some kid so im gonna start drawing cleaner stuff again (yay).
ill post to morow though. im gonna dieee in a minute heree.xjdghj gjdjg :)

etch a sketch
03-03-2007, 02:21 AM
haha good job on stealing pencils from a kid :lol:

NICCSACC
03-03-2007, 02:24 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture010.jpg

C3ZR ONE
03-03-2007, 02:42 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Mar 3 2007, 12:46 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Mar 3 2007, 12:46 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Mar 3 2007, 12:14 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture40-1.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture37-1.jpg
your arent black??????
what
the
fuck [/b][/quote]
His entire grill is gold mufucker&#33; What more do you neeeed?&#33;

Damn kids are picky...

He&#39;s got a sack of dank heavier then the smagma under your nut pouch and he&#39;s the mufuckin Niccaman. The NICCSAC&#33; He&#39;s practically Dolemites illegitamate son for christ sake.

you kids can&#39;t fade that. B)



LOL at uhhh- I&#39;d be happy to "shitify" your sneaks. I got fresh decos. Send me some dookie ass air knockoffs. I&#39;ll hook it up with arrows and all that shit.

stemONE
03-03-2007, 03:13 AM
NICCSACC- Im liken them alot aye,both of them sketches look mad as,i cant give you crits cause well,ur better than me lol,but all i can say is DAMN&#33;&#33;&#33; gimmie ur weed homie hahaha.

NewbyTJ-looks nice but too bad if anyone notices like a cop and they see ur shit everywhere and there after you and your wearing them shoes around... that ends in disaster but yeh other than that i like the first one not really the second one.

Zep0-QUIT&#33;&#33;&#33; ur winging man,that throwie looks nice cept for x yeh ill giv ya that much but all ya gotta do really is SQUASH IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; squash it good lol,get what i mean...

Slushi-Shit looks nice,but i cant really see it properly poor picture quality but yer its nice.

this my new word,did the blue one last night and the green/brown one today,
get i get some good crits plz,actually any critshttp://img116.imageshack.us/img116/7109/scan10002uv3.jpg
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/5600/scan10003wg3.jpg

Zep0
03-03-2007, 03:31 AM
Stem start off all your sketches with bars...nice even bars, then work from there. You know your style just use bars so you get a good foundation to build your letters off of.

d_g
03-03-2007, 04:26 AM
Originally posted by d_g@Mar 3 2007, 04:25 PM
Was messing around the other day and drew this

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw10.jpg

I really like the &#39;S&#39; so I&#39;m trying to use that style for a throw. Came up with these as well.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw11.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw12.jpg
Buuuuuump.

stemOne, Everyone is gonna hate me for saying this, but try going a little simpler dude. It will help you learn letter proportion (the &#39;E&#39; is squashed in some places and fat in others) and structure (your &#39;U&#39; looks a lot like an &#39;O&#39;), seriously you stuff needs a lot of work aye.

HawkeR
03-03-2007, 08:00 AM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/5523/hawktrowiewo2.gif
well thats my throwie ive been working on so any help will be helpful :D

BTW it says hawk -.-

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 08:43 AM
i fuckign love that ^^ .. its flows like a hurricane...lthe W..is amazing

-ShAmEE-
03-03-2007, 08:46 AM
hahaha flows like a hurricane muhahaha...looks kool.

NewbyTJ
03-03-2007, 09:25 AM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Mar 2 2007, 08:49 PM
Sume looks fuckin amazing pretty sure i just came in my pants lol jokes:P....The only thing i dunt like is the line that runs from the top of ur s to the bottom the little bar doesnt really look in place if u knw wat i mean....Stay up hope to be as good as u eventually:P...Newst shit by me today
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture318.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture319.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture320.jpg
All crits appreciated thanx
Yo gotta luv the hate on these shoes but truthfully these have holes in the bottom and barely fit ne more i just bought some sexy etnies for a buck 20 and i was plannin on throwin these out but i decide to try drawing on my shoes first and fuck the shoes wat u guys thing of the drawing i did on the bottom.?

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 10:12 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Mar 3 2007, 02:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE &#064; Mar 3 2007, 02:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by whahappen?@Mar 3 2007, 12:46 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Mar 3 2007, 12:14 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture40-1.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture37-1.jpg
your arent black??????
what
the
fuck
His entire grill is gold mufucker&#33; What more do you neeeed?&#33;

Damn kids are picky...

He&#39;s got a sack of dank heavier then the smagma under your nut pouch and he&#39;s the mufuckin Niccaman. The NICCSAC&#33; He&#39;s practically Dolemites illegitamate son for christ sake.

you kids can&#39;t fade that. B)



LOL at uhhh- I&#39;d be happy to "shitify" your sneaks. I got fresh decos. Send me some dookie ass air knockoffs. I&#39;ll hook it up with arrows and all that shit. [/b][/quote]
Lovin&#39; that sketch man, except for the "T", I need to make my letters more "fluent" people always say they too blocky and shit, yours are all flowy. :(

by the way it&#39;s weird how I also thought you were black I dunno why though, I knew you were 30 something but I still pictured you younger, kinda weird, people prolly think I look different too. :ph34r: so let&#39;s clear this up right now, I&#39;m asian (Filipino). hahaha. :lol: :lol: :lol:

edit: upon further inspection I realized I liked the "T" how it kinda goes into the "Y" and whatnot. :)

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 10:15 AM
ugh..first throw in ages..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/7.jpg

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 10:16 AM
am i the only person that knew that nicc was white.

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 10:21 AM
damn aimo, you&#39;re peices are hot but your throw needs mad work ha


hawk - that throw is sooo sick