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Fosale!
03-03-2007, 09:16 AM
am i the only person that knew that nicc was white.

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 09:21 AM
damn aimo, you're peices are hot but your throw needs mad work ha


hawk - that throw is sooo sick

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 09:25 AM
Gwhal..haha..its my first throw since i wrote Ras.. :blink: ..
heres a hopefully better one..i like the the A..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/77.jpg

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 09:27 AM
haha oh right. i forgot you had diff names ha
its a cool style you got goin, just dont how how to help you :unsure:

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 09:29 AM
me neither seein' as how I can't make up a throwie myself. :unsure: it's making me crazy that I cannot come up with a good one, that doesn't looks really generic. :wacko: -_-

Kore123
03-03-2007, 09:30 AM
Originally posted by Kore123+Mar 2 2007, 09:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Kore123 @ Mar 2 2007, 09:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Kore123@Feb 28 2007, 09:52 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Kore123@Feb 28 2007, 09:09 PM
aimo exchange

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2700/0228071959jv4.jpg

crits please

sorry for not coloring it i didnt feel like it but if u want me to i will tommarow ill redraw it in my book and color and maybe my famous piggy karakÂ* :D

busted some bounceingsoul shit wit tha highlighter lol....he hasent been on here lately has he? hmmmm i like his shit


sezer...me likey the tech and wats in the middle of the o on tha other one?

sabe....keep workin on them simples clean it up and try to make the a the same size as the others keep playin wit that n and r on the n fix where the hump comes out to make both of em the same and on the r fix the same place as the n where the hump and streight bar meet. use bars they sure as hell helped me
bump.....only 1 crit and aimo didnt see it

quig....i cant even read it

psh......simples, bars, learn, post, CRIT, please

seph....i like the top one
bizziddybuuuump......aimo didnt see it :( :D [/b][/quote]
rebumped he still didnt see it im thinkin im gunna have to pm it to him soon

Bazer
03-03-2007, 10:02 AM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 3 2007, 10:25 AM
Gwhal..haha..its my first throw since i wrote Ras.. :blink: ..
heres a hopefully better one..i like the the A..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/77.jpg
dude...i do throwie exchanges with people so that they can make em about a million times better..why dont you try screwin around with the throwies i GAVE you...?

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 10:10 AM
wo...chill big guy..:wub:..

i see it as copyying if i copy your throws you did me...i wunah cum up with something of my own..

uhhh
03-03-2007, 10:39 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Mar 3 2007, 02:42 AM
LOL at uhhh- I&#39;d be happy to "shitify" your sneaks. I got fresh decos. Send me some dookie ass air knockoffs. I&#39;ll hook it up with arrows and all that shit.
HEYHEYHEY&#33;
don&#39;t be raggin on ipaths.
i love those shoes.
i have a pair that basicalyl has no sole and their still ridiculosuyl comfortable.

i AM ready to fight you over this.

hey, i found that sticker i did for you a long as time ago in my room the other day.
i might send it out sometime?
but i think i deleted the pm with you address negroo.
i mean, big black cezr3000.

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 11:03 AM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Mar 2 2007, 10:32 PM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture010-1.jpg

bump

aimo - i would suggets going with the generic style first, just like peicing, you gotta start with simples..

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 11:04 AM
wa...simples even for throws..ugh

Ekers.Two.Two
03-03-2007, 11:06 AM
aimo- sick , your getting better in throw ups,

leos, make the letters the same size

whahappen?
03-03-2007, 11:08 AM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 3 2007, 10:15 AM
ugh..first throw in ages..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/7.jpg
reminds me of caer&#39;s throws alot...
anyways take the bump off the a or make it smaller
or just lose the bumps altogether it really only makes sense on the i bcause the o looks like a d
nvm you posted a newer one...
so i have a pic...
http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/5886/picture010po3.jpg

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 11:12 AM
look..i ts my first throw attempt since i wrote RAS ages ago back this time last year lol...i only did it becuz sum good writer on 12oz told me not to just be good at peices..and have the whole package...so once i feel iv finally got letters down..ima go onto...throws...then handys...then back to blocks..you get me..i have alll this planned ;)

whahappen?
03-03-2007, 11:28 AM
haha i went the opposite way
tags>throws>half assed characs..>bars
gwahl isnt that your dads name?
the s&#39;s bar in the middle is too big

Mace
03-03-2007, 11:29 AM
hey guys first simple
can i get sum crits?

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u308/Blockart/hazersimpleblack3d.jpg

Bazer
03-03-2007, 11:37 AM
i should slap you. dont write hazer.

Mace
03-03-2007, 11:39 AM
y? i asked n everybody else said tht since haze wuz in europe it was cool

Bazer
03-03-2007, 11:53 AM
why would you even steal his name though? whatever. im not gonna be the only one to tell you this..its just up to how stupid you are..

whahappen?
03-03-2007, 11:54 AM
just put in another letter instead of haze
like baze...
haha

eng
03-03-2007, 11:55 AM
yo way to rack some pro&#39;s name man...

Mace
03-03-2007, 11:55 AM
hahah dumbass i thot up the name before i heard bout him obviously

Bazer
03-03-2007, 11:57 AM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Mar 3 2007, 12:54 PM
just put in another letter instead of haze
like baze...
haha
yeah just like that....haha. no man. no....no. there alot of names with aze in them. they dont all mean they were bitten from haze though. know what i mean? ;)

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 12:00 PM
Haze / Hazer is the most geyst overused non flowing name in the world..also...dont over lap your simples...just dothem like this...


HAZERISTHEGAYESTNAMEINTHEWORLD

for cynic..i hate it..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/8.jpg

no crits thanks

ill have a peice up zoon :lol:

Mace
03-03-2007, 12:05 PM
lol okay ill change it up i jus wanted an H in it and i liked the other letters thnx for the tip on my simple

Bazer
03-03-2007, 12:08 PM
haha. you even changed your signature and everything. i like this guy. someone give him a million dollars.....



does anyone every see that guy "Aerosol assasin" around here anymore? that lil bitch stole my name, told me he was better than me but he fuckin sucks...and he wont even battle me.

Mace
03-03-2007, 12:11 PM
wut can i say i adapt :D

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 12:12 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Mar 3 2007, 12:28 PM
gwahl isnt that your dads name?

what are you talking about haha


mace, you&#39;ve been on this site for 2 days and i think you chagned your name atleast 3 times already

NICCSACC
03-03-2007, 12:15 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 3 2007, 02:24 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture010.jpg
bump cuz i like it.

AnteUp
03-03-2007, 12:18 PM
ayo haze try not to write hayz cuz thats wat i write lol...but since im not famous... :D

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 12:46 PM
Your not famous..but you 100 % ghetto..YEYAH

Niccsacc..nice letters..bout it..i dunno..

tryin " somthing different "

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/88.jpg

crits..and clits..please

dim
03-03-2007, 12:49 PM
looks good but the shadow on the "L" doesnt line up with 3d on the "A"

trashhh
03-03-2007, 12:49 PM
really like it aimo, shadow looks well nice... looks kinda like almo tho dot the i&#33;

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 12:51 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 3 2007, 06:46 PM
Your not famous..but you 100 % ghetto..YEYAH

Niccsacc..nice letters..bout it..i dunno..

tryin " somthing different "

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/88.jpg

crits..and clits..please
oh shi..forgot the Dot.. :( lol..bump..bottom..of...page..

krazzie_ammo
03-03-2007, 01:03 PM
aimo - work on that handdsteez, it will really help.

just entered teh BACON battle.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6297/113gg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

AnteUp
03-03-2007, 01:15 PM
ayo aimo... :o im a rapper&#33;&#33; o anywayz i like ur drop shadddooww lukks purty tight mane well except for almo lol but i truh-st they-uht ur goh-nuh put tha dow-t on tha i&#33; lol <_< :D <_< :angry: <_< :) :blink: :)

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 01:17 PM
aimo - thats lookin really nice, i like taht alot better then your other style

krazzie - looks nice, dont really know what else to say about it. the o is kinda looking like a U, donno how to fix that


http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture.jpg
changed my s and 3d a bit, the o is fucked up i know...
what you gusy think?

AnteUp
03-03-2007, 01:26 PM
g-wahl i like the colors u used on tha letters but the background color kinda lukks like the color of shit...but other than that i lukks gud

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 01:28 PM
yeah tahts just the camera making it look like shit color ha, its actully a light brown

Bazer
03-03-2007, 01:33 PM
h - wahl. u write leos? thats such a......normal persons name.... you should leso.

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 01:34 PM
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/5065/piecebs5.png (http://imageshack.us)
crits???
i think i did way too much

it says "Pye" by the way

G - Wahl
03-03-2007, 01:35 PM
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Mar 3 2007, 02:33 PM
h - wahl. u write leos? thats such a......normal persons name.... you should leso.
..what are you talking about haha

AnteUp
03-03-2007, 01:38 PM
graffiti...americas apple pie...lol well i like the colors but if i was trying to find my way to a city id be so fukcin confused wit all those damn arrows...

Fube
03-03-2007, 01:39 PM
stager&#33;&#33;&#33;

eh, i dont like it but ill post.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/LastScan.jpg

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 01:42 PM
thx how about this one
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/7950/untitledai0.png (http://imageshack.us)
graffiti supposed to give people directions?

at least not mine bun dat <_<

AnteUp
03-03-2007, 01:47 PM
yea that was sarcasm... :lol: :lol: :lol: <_< anyways i like the pie...lol this one lukks a little better

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 02:09 PM
lol thx no prob, im just playing too:D

NICCSACC
03-03-2007, 02:33 PM
Originally posted by Fube@Mar 3 2007, 02:39 PM
stager&#33;&#33;&#33;

eh, i dont like it but ill post.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Graff/LastScan.jpg
i can see where you going with this style.
loving it.

South-Pole
03-03-2007, 02:33 PM
apple pie

for the first ones your letters needs some structure

the last one the letter structure is ok but loose the arrows

ok,i need mad help for throwies

i made simple letters then i rounded the letters and changed them a bit

should i overlap?
please help

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/THROWIE.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/tor0001.jpg

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 02:36 PM
are u serios?? that would look lame man
give me and example

Bazer
03-03-2007, 02:38 PM
south pole. what do you write?

South-Pole
03-03-2007, 02:38 PM
actually i think it would look better

for the first ones they&#39;re too much arrows

just loose the arrows.

edit:

baze don&#39;t think i write trane i didn&#39;t try to write that

i write TORN but sometimes i take off the o

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 02:43 PM
whatever no prob , and if ur open to crits man that throw needs some expression

Bazer
03-03-2007, 02:44 PM
coool. i was thinkin u might write that&#33; :lol:

South-Pole
03-03-2007, 02:44 PM
ah,thanks.but what do you mean by expression

like add eyes on letters and this kind of stuff?

edit:lol blaze

actually i&#39;v seen a guy that writes trane,but this guy has been writing for years,he also writes drag

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 02:46 PM
lmaoo nawww like add more curves and maybe put it on an angle it just looks real stiff, im going out now but when i get back ill do somthing for you

South-Pole
03-03-2007, 02:47 PM
ok thanks man pm me it when you&#39;re done

xAWOKE.925
03-03-2007, 02:48 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/6712/goodfillpieceui2.jpg

South-Pole
03-03-2007, 02:48 PM
^Wow just wow


and those handies are........................ :blink:

NewbyTJ
03-03-2007, 02:50 PM
meh its ok torn

-ShAmEE-
03-03-2007, 02:51 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0090.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0091.jpg

crit

Necro-
03-03-2007, 02:52 PM
awoke those handies look exactly like gesus&#39;s handies.

sabe2
03-03-2007, 02:55 PM
south i think youre simples need alittle more work just my opinion i like simples more like these urs aree good too tho

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture321.jpg

NICCSACC
03-03-2007, 02:56 PM
Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Mar 3 2007, 03:48 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/6712/goodfillpieceui2.jpg
nice letters and colors. trippy type shit.

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 02:57 PM
Necro..i fucking agree...so many people take his handy&#39;s..

Appel Pie..first off..i always have issues to do with graff names..and PIE is probably the gayer than Haze..i mean...doin a peice with a freakin pie underneath it is gay..but stupid...but funny..

yer..you shud go simple..like..the simples i do...i think you have funky letters...but tone down those humongus addons..just look thru my posts....to see whut i mean...then again...dont....im just trying to give examples..

ANTEUP...yueh...you dont make say-unce ... you con - fuza - meah ... yeuh

Shamee...has...the....meaning...of....blocks....on .....lock.... :D ..it...makes..me..wanna..get...lowwah...like...a.. ..hurricane...is...how...itah...flowah

Bazer
03-03-2007, 02:57 PM
Originally posted by South&#045;Pole@Mar 3 2007, 03:44 PM
ah,thanks.but what do you mean by expression

like add eyes on letters and this kind of stuff?

edit:lol blaze

actually i&#39;v seen a guy that writes trane,but this guy has been writing for years,he also writes drag
yeah this one guy kept crossin me out the other week and writin train. lil bitch was pissin me off. but i found out who did it..its just some angry toy with no ups. and its BAZE not blaze.

Ekers.Two.Two
03-03-2007, 03:02 PM
sabe - start more simple, block letters
awoke - sick handstyle


new flop says ES

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011149.jpg
crits plz

-ShAmEE-
03-03-2007, 03:03 PM
RAS...funni FUCKER....flow like a hurricane and sketch like ME&#33;

-ShAmEE-
03-03-2007, 03:05 PM
RAS...funni FUCKER....flow like a hurricane and sketch like ME&#33;

South-Pole
03-03-2007, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze+Mar 3 2007, 03:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (1nOnly Baze @ Mar 3 2007, 03:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-South&#045;Pole@Mar 3 2007, 03:44 PM
ah,thanks.but what do you mean by expression

like add eyes on letters and this kind of stuff?

edit:lol blaze

actually i&#39;v seen a guy that writes trane,but this guy has been writing for years,he also writes drag
yeah this one guy kept crossin me out the other week and writin train. lil bitch was pissin me off. but i found out who did it..its just some angry toy with no ups. and its BAZE not blaze. [/b][/quote]
haha....poor toy, and sorry for calling you blaze

esker:im not good with throwies but i think it looks good

xAWOKE.925
03-03-2007, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Mar 3 2007, 03:52 PM
awoke those handies look exactly like gesus&#39;s handies.
lol fool you&#39;re hella dumb.

fuckin toys dont even know how to read a handstlye let alone judge a bite.
you see a sharp "gothy" lookin style and you immediately jump on gesus&#39;s nuts.

First off, Gesus doesn&#39;t give a fuck about.
Secondly, I didn&#39;t bite shit and the letters look nothing like Gesus&#39;s at all.
Third, shut up.

bouncingsoul
03-03-2007, 03:15 PM
I think I think too much..

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0658.jpg

xAWOKE.925
03-03-2007, 03:16 PM
feelin those ears and eyes. is that a mouth or some bandanda shit on his face?

bouncingsoul
03-03-2007, 03:18 PM
Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Mar 3 2007, 04:16 PM
feelin those ears and eyes. is that a mouth or some bandanda shit on his face?
Yeah, a bandanna haha

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 03:53 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC+Mar 3 2007, 03:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Mar 3 2007, 03:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-xAWOKE.925@Mar 3 2007, 03:48 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/6712/goodfillpieceui2.jpg
nice letters and colors. trippy type shit. [/b][/quote]
the W is too hidden
lose the extra bits on the extensions
fix the K, the left side has too much going on with that elongation
and it doesnt really look good.

enigmatic
03-03-2007, 04:27 PM
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9457/1001776cg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

WOOT WOOT

HawkeR
03-03-2007, 04:45 PM
thanks guys :D

now to go out and do it with paint :ph34r:

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 04:53 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3101/dsc0554ai9.jpg :ph34r:

-ShAmEE-
03-03-2007, 05:05 PM
arrhhh....beauitful. flamin hot babay.

LAGE
03-03-2007, 05:05 PM
loving that one sumoe but whats up with the black behind the "one"

HawkeR
03-03-2007, 05:15 PM
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8981/hawkertrowieqd6.jpg
finished hawk throw
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2918/hktrowieef8.jpg
HK quick trowie

HawkeR
03-03-2007, 05:17 PM
that Sumoe look hot man i love it

CaMa
03-03-2007, 05:20 PM
Sumoe thats fresh man. Its got awesome style and flow.

-ShAmEE-
03-03-2007, 05:29 PM
kawker. make the k more curved.

Ekers.Two.Two
03-03-2007, 05:31 PM
sume - SICK
hawk - sick throwups


so i got told i need more simple throwups, is this enaugh siumple?

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011150.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-03-2007, 05:32 PM
kawker. make the k more curved.

HawkeR
03-03-2007, 05:39 PM
Ekers nice throw its got flow

AnteUp
03-03-2007, 05:49 PM
ok i know i fucked up on the z on the second one and my writin sucks...

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz461.jpg[/IMG]

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz460.jpg[/IMG]
CRITS PLEASE

uhhh
03-03-2007, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 3 2007, 05:53 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3101/dsc0554ai9.jpg :ph34r:
sume baby,
that shit is so hot.
everytime i see your posts i say outloud
"oh my god"
or
"god damn"



:wub:

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 05:50 PM
you forgot 3d on the things that go through

tompenny
03-03-2007, 05:51 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC03181.jpg

uhhh
03-03-2007, 05:54 PM
at first glance that shit is tight as fuck.
then i look at it for more then a second and realize.
wow.
that munchs some serious cock.
SIMPLES.
id tell you to write your name like THIS
but i have no idea what you write.
yes,
in a bad way.

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 05:57 PM
@Tom
listen to Uhhh
he knows what hes talking about

and that R in the top left.

could be mad hot.

Ekers.Two.Two
03-03-2007, 05:57 PM
sume - sick
tom - simples

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011152.jpg
crits plz

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 06:01 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 3 2007, 06:50 PM
you forgot 3d on the things that go through
huh? :huh:

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 06:05 PM
that was directed at anteup

Sumoe, you fool&#33;


:0p

HSAL
03-03-2007, 06:22 PM
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/6646/picture006nw5.jpg
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8177/picture001mc4.jpg

React!
03-03-2007, 06:27 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 3 2007, 05:53 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3101/dsc0554ai9.jpg :ph34r:

God Damn&#33;&#33; thats all i can say man u come with heat every time...

slinks
03-03-2007, 06:31 PM
holy shit sume that is SICK&#33;&#33;

HSAL i like the throw but not really the colors and the first i dont like at all

ekers it looks sweet but if i didnt know your name i wouldnt be able to read it.

a new throw stlye i was trying:
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti059.jpg

should i enter this in the battle?

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti057.jpg

crits please

sabe2
03-03-2007, 06:31 PM
hsal i like youre peice yo ok evryone witch is better peaple are telling me my blockbusters are better then my simples???
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture321.jpg
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture323.jpg

Ekers.Two.Two
03-03-2007, 06:33 PM
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011157.jpg

crits plz

slinks
03-03-2007, 06:38 PM
give crits yourself mr selfish

sabe2
03-03-2007, 06:45 PM
eckers lookin good like the style cople things too get rid of tho..

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/sdsdsd.jpg

AnteUp
03-03-2007, 06:55 PM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Mar 3 2007, 06:49 PM
ok i know i fucked up on the z on the second one and my writin sucks...

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz461.jpg[/IMG]

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/trinaz460.jpg[/IMG]
CRITS PLEASE
bump for crits dammit.... <_<

bitches and hoes
03-03-2007, 06:58 PM
sumoe wat type of markers do u use?

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 07:03 PM
PRISMACOLOR MARKERS(CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL)

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 07:10 PM
Sume..jus dont like the connection between the U and S..i think the U is too slanted..and i also dont like the addon on the inside of the U..

some..1 in the morning shit...i hope Shifted doesnt see the kicks on my karak...he will have a fit.." OH MY GODZ..FAKES NIKE SB&#39;S...ON PAPER...I HAVE A PAIR..HOW DARE YOU PUT THEM ON PAPERZ..OMG " ill have to PM him saying there not fake :lol:

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/888.jpg

tired :(

BIGel
03-03-2007, 07:12 PM
fuck liverpool.

slinks
03-03-2007, 07:16 PM
Originally posted by slinks@Mar 3 2007, 07:31 PM
holy shit sume that is SICK&#33;&#33;

HSAL i like the throw but not really the colors and the first i dont like at all

ekers it looks sweet but if i didnt know your name i wouldnt be able to read it.

a new throw stlye i was trying:
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti059.jpg

should i enter this in the battle?

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti057.jpg

crits please
BUMPPP&#33;

aimo- sweeeet . i love your karaks. especially their shoes.

AimoOne
03-03-2007, 07:19 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 4 2007, 01:10 AM
Sume..jus dont like the connection between the U and S..i think the U is too slanted..and i also dont like the addon on the inside of the U..

some..1 in the morning shit...i hope Shifted doesnt see the kicks on my karak...he will have a fit.." OH MY GODZ..FAKES NIKE SB&#39;S...ON PAPER...I HAVE A PAIR..HOW DARE YOU PUT THEM ON PAPERZ..OMG " ill have to PM him saying there not fake :lol:

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/888.jpg

tired :(
HAHHAHAHA..BIG EL..I THOGHT NOBODY WOULD KNOW..HAHAHA..

no..LIVERPOOL FOR EVER MATE :D :D

tompenny
03-03-2007, 07:20 PM
Originally posted by tompenny@Mar 3 2007, 06:51 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC03181.jpg
it reads DRE

whahappen?
03-03-2007, 07:28 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl+Mar 3 2007, 01:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (G &#045; Wahl &#064; Mar 3 2007, 01:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Mar 3 2007, 12:28 PM
gwahl isnt that your dads name?

what are you talking about haha


mace, you&#39;ve been on this site for 2 days and i think you chagned your name atleast 3 times already [/b][/quote]
you posted stuff that you said was his awhile back and one said leos
dre do simples(DRE)
loooks good ras
hayz looks pretty nice specially the a and the other one that isnt a simple is fucking good like awesome...
awoke that w looks like bawks the k is too thin/takes up too much space with the elongations
nice hands

rayseone
03-03-2007, 08:56 PM
hayz- try to keep all your letter the same width when doing simples your h is way too fat compared to other letters on first one, not sure about second one dont know wheather i like it or not.

aimo- good, loving that karak

crits?
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2783/latestux0.jpg
and a quick simple
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/630/lowercaseoo1.jpg

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 09:08 PM
ok AIMO im gonna give it to you plain and simple.
your I&#39;s ruin your entire piece.
the Dot fucks everyone of them up.

please, do everyone a favor and put a small dot or a bar.
a bar would look better than the dot.
pweeeese&#33;&#33;

for meee :wub: ?

uhhh
03-03-2007, 09:08 PM
Originally posted by tompenny+Mar 3 2007, 08:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tompenny @ Mar 3 2007, 08:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tompenny@Mar 3 2007, 06:51 PM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC03181.jpg
it reads COMPLETE SHIT [/b][/quote]
well at least you admit it.
on the real though.
do simples you big mo.

Ekers.Two.Two
03-03-2007, 09:24 PM
tompenny - simples

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011158.jpg
crits plz

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 09:26 PM
ekers.
your throws suck.
listen to your own advice and do simpler throws.
start out with basic bubble throws.
and please, no faces.

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 10:00 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 3 2007, 03:57 PM
i mean...doin a peice with a freakin pie underneath it is gay..but stupid...but funny..


:o whats wrong with pie&#39;s??

w.e yo ill put up another one witthout a pie... how are the letters tho?

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 10:07 PM
i fucking want pie.
just a delicious treat in a 3 letter word.
yummm.

pie.
ohhhhhhhhhhh

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 10:40 PM
I prefer apple, which kind of pie do you enjoy? :lol:

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 10:42 PM
appleee
all the fucking wayyy

AteskOne
03-03-2007, 10:58 PM
Originally posted by Apple pie+Mar 3 2007, 11:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Apple pie &#064; Mar 3 2007, 11:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Mar 3 2007, 03:57 PM
i mean...doin a peice with a freakin pie underneath it is gay..but stupid...but funny..


:o whats wrong with pie&#39;s??

w.e yo ill put up another one witthout a pie... how are the letters tho? [/b][/quote]
i kinda liked the whole idea. it was kinda funny and it wasnt half badly drawn. letters have good structure too. i actually enjoyed it quite a bit.

mmm apple pie...nice and hot with a scoop of vanilla ice cream.

nickstix
03-03-2007, 10:59 PM
ekers...that throw is WAY to busy, tone it down

tompany...simples

raseone...nice simples and 3-d

k so i got my prismacolor markers today and i did this quick piece, i did my name so i can practice other letters...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/nick.png
and i kno i screwed up the i

crits?

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 11:02 PM
I drew a sumo character before (not really a character just a drawing of a sumo wrestler I inked with a silver sharpie and outlined in a black one). Pie you have inspired me to draw another sumo wrestler, but a little more cartoony this time and with a face cause my other one didn&#39;t have a face, even though I don&#39;t think I saw your flick with a pie in it. Wow this post is longer than it need to be and I&#39;m adding this unneeded comment right now, don&#39;t a feel stupid. <_< :lol:

Sumoe
03-03-2007, 11:04 PM
Nick-not too bad, pretty good simples, but prismas bleed like a bitch huh? eh, You&#39;ll kinda get used to em&#39;, I have. :)

edit: shit, I meant to put this in my other post, but clicked reply instead of edit. <_<

edit again: O yea, dot the "i" and it would make a good lower case "i". :blink:

rayseone
03-03-2007, 11:09 PM
Originally posted by rayseone@Mar 3 2007, 09:56 PM
hayz- try to keep all your letter the same width when doing simples your h is way too fat compared to other letters on first one, not sure about second one dont know wheather i like it or not.

aimo- good, loving that karak

crits?
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/2783/latestux0.jpg
and a quick simple
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/630/lowercaseoo1.jpg
bump for crits got none

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 11:10 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/310/piecemz0.png (http://imageshack.us)
better worse?? no pie underneath it by the way

nickstix
03-03-2007, 11:11 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 4 2007, 12:04 AM
Nick-not too bad, pretty good simples, but prismas bleed like a bitch huh? eh, You&#39;ll kinda get used to em&#39;, I have. :)

edit: shit, I meant to put this in my other post, but clicked reply instead of edit. <_<

edit again: O yea, dot the "i" and it would make a good lower case "i". :blink:
ive been wonderin sume, what do u use for all ure fine black lines in your pieces? because the prismacolor marker dosent go that skinny.

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 11:12 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 4 2007, 12:02 AM
Pie you have inspired me to draw another sumo wrestler, but a little more cartoony this time and with a face cause my other one didn&#39;t have a face



:lol: ye I inspired someone&#33;&#33; Thank bud :)

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 11:37 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 3 2007, 05:53 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3101/dsc0554ai9.jpg
sumo this is insane by the way

BIGel
03-03-2007, 11:39 PM
^^thats the best one ive seen out of you. the ones a little fucked up but the colors are heat.

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 11:41 PM
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/4899/pieceyv2.png (http://imageshack.us)
heres just some random shit

Fosale!
03-03-2007, 11:50 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne+Mar 3 2007, 11:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne @ Mar 3 2007, 11:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Apple pie@Mar 3 2007, 11:00 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Mar 3 2007, 03:57 PM
i mean...doin a peice with a freakin pie underneath it is gay..but stupid...but funny..


:o whats wrong with pie&#39;s??

w.e yo ill put up another one witthout a pie... how are the letters tho?
i kinda liked the whole idea. it was kinda funny and it wasnt half badly drawn. letters have good structure too. i actually enjoyed it quite a bit.

mmm apple pie...nice and hot with a scoop of vanilla ice cream. [/b][/quote]
hit it right on the fucking ball ma man.

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 11:54 PM
AWWW FUCKCK BRO FOSALE&#33;&#33; ur sig makes me barf&#33;&#33; and piss myself laughing to

Apple pie
03-03-2007, 11:55 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/310/piecemz0.png (http://imageshack.us)
critisism?

ESKE one
03-04-2007, 12:01 AM
^^^ the extension underneath the p kinda makes it look like a r

.Smoke.
03-04-2007, 12:41 AM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Picture010.jpg

Nem
03-04-2007, 01:24 AM
Smoke - i said it before, i like your stuff a lot. you should experiment with more colors and fills and stuff. i think you could take it far.

aimo - i feel stupid going against everyone else. but i think your characters look relatively generic and lifeless. i dunno. i would definitely say you have the skill to do something way better.

but what do i know. being the massive toy i am and all. so take all my crit with a grain of salt. its basically pointless.

anyway.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem-2.jpg
added colors to the one i had before. on the bottom, left is my new handstyle thingy, and on the right is my old one.

which is better? do they both suck?

i posted a pic up in the charac section too. if anyone cares.

bouncingsoul
03-04-2007, 01:32 AM
I hate my job..

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0660.jpg

d_g
03-04-2007, 01:35 AM
Originally posted by d_g+Mar 3 2007, 09:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Mar 3 2007, 09:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Mar 3 2007, 04:25 PM
Was messing around the other day and drew this

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw10.jpg

I really like the &#39;S&#39; so I&#39;m trying to use that style for a throw. Came up with these as well.

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw11.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/throw12.jpg
Buuuuuump. [/b][/quote]
Bump one last time.

Nem, you only gave us to options to answer you there so it &#39;sucks&#39; :P The left one is better. Try and add some curves in there. I think you&#39;ve fallen into the trap that a lot of new (or newish) writers fall into of too much time drawing and not enough time looking. Browse some pics to get some inspiration and to see what makes a good tag. Borrow (and when I say borrow, I mean it haha) someone elses style to get an idea for flow. For the sketch, it isn&#39;t too bad. It&#39;s good how your letters all follow a similar shape. Your structure, style and flow is lacking a bit, &#39;N&#39; and &#39;M&#39; are quite similar letters in structure yet in your sketch they look a lot different. Bring your letters closer together a bit, graffiti seems to look a lot better when there&#39;s less negative space.

Nem
03-04-2007, 01:35 AM
bouncingsoul - amazing. i love it. elaborate on that thing.

dg, thanks man. appreciate it. and yeah. i do a ton of "looking" lol. maybe too much. I&#39;ve watched style wars about 3 times in the past couple days. love that movie.

and yeah. i live near seattle-ish so theres always a lot to look at.

Fosale!
03-04-2007, 01:43 AM
bouncing that karak reminds me of chillen&#39;s stuff.
but in a good way

Nem
03-04-2007, 01:47 AM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/characters1-1.jpg
shitty shit shit shit. (secks. not socks)

might as well just stick it herr too.

crits if you will.

stemONE
03-04-2007, 02:44 AM
Originally posted by stemONE@Mar 3 2007, 03:13 AM
NICCSACC- Im liken them alot aye,both of them sketches look mad as,i cant give you crits cause well,ur better than me lol,but all i can say is DAMN&#33;&#33;&#33; gimmie ur weed homie hahaha.

NewbyTJ-looks nice but too bad if anyone notices like a cop and they see ur shit everywhere and there after you and your wearing them shoes around... that ends in disaster but yeh other than that i like the first one not really the second one.

Zep0-QUIT&#33;&#33;&#33; ur winging man,that throwie looks nice cept for x yeh ill giv ya that much but all ya gotta do really is SQUASH IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; squash it good lol,get what i mean...

Slushi-Shit looks nice,but i cant really see it properly poor picture quality but yer its nice.

this my new word,did the blue one last night and the green/brown one today,
get i get some good crits plz,actually any critshttp://img116.imageshack.us/img116/7109/scan10002uv3.jpg
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/5600/scan10003wg3.jpg
bumbinf for crits, i got like 2 lol

now CRITS PLEASE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Billburg
03-04-2007, 02:47 AM
stemONE- the top of the Z on the second one looks to big
and the S in the first one should be more like the s on the second one
but i like that E on the first one

Loz emlintio
03-04-2007, 05:45 AM
Stemone, just try and use some outragious colourin to bumb it up. And, try and make ur letters bigger and more slicing in detail.

AimoOne
03-04-2007, 05:49 AM
No...Loz Emiltino...your giving him the completley wrong idea... <_< ...none of the letters are any good...the addons look like lil bumps...and i hate the structure..dont waste your colours..and do

s i m p l e s

you have some potential

trashhh
03-04-2007, 06:05 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/canvas%20and%20digital/STA40929.jpg
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/canvas%20and%20digital/STA40930.jpg

Yea the paint cracked so i decided to make it the theme lol.. this was done before i painted it as a proper piece.


Oh by the way anyone willing to sketch me a throwie that i can use? :D

krazzie_ammo
03-04-2007, 08:07 AM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Mar 3 2007, 02:03 PM
just entered teh BACON battle.

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6297/113gg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
trash - looks kinda dry...trying adding somethign to the top.

AimoOne
03-04-2007, 08:15 AM
Notl liking the connection to the O anc C..
Trash....love the kracks..and the letters...just do summet at the top as kraZZZIE SAYS

so..sum political shit..bored

" Give me the fucking crown..iv stood outside this place for 15 fucking years..freezing my tits off..sweating my fucking balls off..whilst your sat in this dump...on your acient wrinly fucking arse..twiddling your thumbs..whilst that big eared basterd kisses your fucking arse..and what do i get..SHIT &#33; "

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/777.jpg

Crits..

ODESONE
03-04-2007, 08:32 AM
Says BAIN tell me wat u think cheerz :)

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6792/picture1ol1.jpg

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 09:59 AM
Originally posted by nickstix+Mar 4 2007, 12:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nickstix &#064; Mar 4 2007, 12:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Mar 4 2007, 12:04 AM
Nick-not too bad, pretty good simples, but prismas bleed like a bitch huh? eh, You&#39;ll kinda get used to em&#39;, I have. :)

edit: shit, I meant to put this in my other post, but clicked reply instead of edit. <_<

edit again: O yea, dot the "i" and it would make a good lower case "i". :blink:
ive been wonderin sume, what do u use for all ure fine black lines in your pieces? because the prismacolor marker dosent go that skinny. [/b][/quote]
for the really fine lines I use &#39;Sakura&#39; Microns, really good pens (sizes .1, .3, .5). Alot of people have been asking me that lately.

edit: Trash-looks good but too empty.
Aimo- I kinda like the face on the Queen, it is the Queen right?
ODESONE-looks like it says "Saih", make a simpler one and I&#39;m not really feeling the curves on it. ;)

there&#39;s my crits bitches.

sabe2
03-04-2007, 10:01 AM
TRASH lookin good real good one crit tho attach the s too the h becasue all the others are just chillin together and leavin him out he get lonly man lmaojokes but attach em

ok and peaple say my bubble letter simples should be block simples so tell me what you all think witch is better please and crit thank you very appriciated

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture321.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s315/lilfrezell66/Picture325.jpg

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 10:05 AM
I&#39;m a tell you like this, if your hand wasn&#39;t so shaky the letters prolly wouldn&#39;t look half bad, why the hell are your hands so shaky is what I&#39;m wonderin&#39;...work on that(less shaky hands).

edit: also the "b" looks too small compared to the "e", work on your handy alot...alot. ;) :)

fredom-writer
03-04-2007, 10:06 AM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

South-Pole
03-04-2007, 10:14 AM
the letters are ok but don&#39;t add arrows yet

simple character i made fast:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/MONSTER.gif

A...:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/A.jpg

Zep0
03-04-2007, 10:36 AM
Southpole that A has bumps that dont make sense. And only bring it about half way then cut it off parallel to the letter on the vanish point 3-D. You understand what I mean?

Freedom writer good letters, no arrows, youll learn to add them strategically which is not on the end of your letter.

Sabe sketch blocky bars for all your letters. No curves yet then as you get those bend your bars then do add-ons, right now basic block bars.

Bain the B is too curvy compared to everything else it looks like a S but I see where your going, work with it.

Aimo that one is my favorite of the elasticos style but I still hate the shit coming out of their faces...nice story line though.

Trash man sick stuff, but add something up top and put some colors that will make that shit pop.

AimoOne
03-04-2007, 11:06 AM
Thanks Zep..
Torn..have you alreaddy posted that A...hm...do all your other letters like that..on there own..and see how tthey turn out..
Sabe...id say..do simples..like..SABE..but..what ever..
Freedomwriter..whats with the the dot on the S...lose those arrows..and the little bumps on the ends of the letters...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/8888.jpg

making my karaks more life like..

EDIT..

CRITS ON JUST LETTERS..PLEASE

THANKS.. :(

fredom-writer
03-04-2007, 11:11 AM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Xsjadox
03-04-2007, 11:12 AM
sabe2 : Try keep the width of your letters equal,and maybe try lose the lil extentions in the beginning

Aimo : Nice character :P

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/147/410109532_0935556fed_m.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/186/409893080_1e9b6f107c_m.jpg

pez ss
03-04-2007, 11:27 AM
sume thats fuckin nuts love it and pye that peatty good to man but i dont like the e so much

stado
03-04-2007, 11:29 AM
fap2, looks clean man

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/9378/hpim0883qp4.jpg
crits for mine?
(not finished)

pez ss
03-04-2007, 11:32 AM
the ts to big

Apple pie
03-04-2007, 11:47 AM
yo southpole that character looks alot like Air&#39;s man..whattup?

South-Pole
03-04-2007, 11:59 AM
^^lol it does?weird

krazzie_ammo
03-04-2007, 12:00 PM
stado - allow the wierd fill and keep them the same height.

anyone up for any exchange?? pm me.

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 12:14 PM
Sabe-you know theres a writer who&#39;s really good, pretty famous too, named saber right? Don&#39;t write "Sabe"

Apple pie
03-04-2007, 12:14 PM
yawp:)

AimoOne
03-04-2007, 12:17 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 4 2007, 05:06 PM
Thanks Zep..
Torn..have you alreaddy posted that A...hm...do all your other letters like that..on there own..and see how tthey turn out..
Sabe...id say..do simples..like..SABE..but..what ever..
Freedomwriter..whats with the the dot on the S...lose those arrows..and the little bumps on the ends of the letters...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/8888.jpg

making my karaks more life like..

EDIT..

CRITS ON JUST LETTERS..PLEASE

THANKS.. :(
bump..people forgot about me.. :( :rolleyes:

Faptwo..back to Fap hu..ugh..write APTWO..pweese

Xsjadox
03-04-2007, 12:24 PM
Haha,but Fap has such meaning... (for those who don&#39;t know , fap = wank)... anyway.. I`m just going to try do simple F&#39;s :P like the top one

Ekers.Two.Two
03-04-2007, 12:30 PM
aimo - SICK

ok so i changed to cept.twenty.two , i got 2 questions

1. does cept looks like apset, does cept when you pronounce it, sounds like apset?
2. thats a simple i did, is it enagh simple, tell me what to change and how to

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011159.jpg

pez ss
03-04-2007, 12:31 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1843/bombgraygx6.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombgraygx6.jpg) IMG]http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1408/bombpurplehazeya1.th.jpg[/IMG][/URL] i really like this bomb. the second is better i think. critz what shoulld i add / remove just what u think?

Nosypainter
03-04-2007, 12:31 PM
Originally posted by uhhh+Mar 3 2007, 06:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh @ Mar 3 2007, 06:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Mar 3 2007, 05:53 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3101/dsc0554ai9.jpg :ph34r:
sume baby,
that shit is so hot.
everytime i see your posts i say outloud
"oh my god"
or
"god damn"



:wub: [/b][/quote]
:lol: god i want to have your babys sume ^^ :P

pez ss
03-04-2007, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by pez ss@Mar 4 2007, 01:31 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1843/bombgraygx6.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombgraygx6.jpg) IMG]http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1408/bombpurplehazeya1.th.jpg[/IMG][/URL] i really like this bomb. the second is better i think. critz what shoulld i add / remove just what u think?
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6681/bombpurplehazekb0.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombpurplehazekb0.jpg) this is the the second one i fucked up with image shack CRITZZ plzz

Ekers.Two.Two
03-04-2007, 12:37 PM
Originally posted by pez ss+Mar 4 2007, 01:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (pez ss @ Mar 4 2007, 01:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-pez ss@Mar 4 2007, 01:31 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1843/bombgraygx6.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombgraygx6.jpg) IMG]http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1408/bombpurplehazeya1.th.jpg[/IMG][/URL] i really like this bomb. the second is better i think. critz what shoulld i add / remove just what u think?
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6681/bombpurplehazekb0.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombpurplehazekb0.jpg) this is the the second one i fucked up with image shack CRITZZ plzz [/b][/quote]
crit other people if you want crits

Nosypainter
03-04-2007, 12:38 PM
Originally posted by pez ss+Mar 4 2007, 01:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (pez ss @ Mar 4 2007, 01:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-pez ss@Mar 4 2007, 01:31 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1843/bombgraygx6.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombgraygx6.jpg) IMG]http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1408/bombpurplehazeya1.th.jpg[/IMG][/URL] i really like this bomb. the second is better i think. critz what shoulld i add / remove just what u think?
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6681/bombpurplehazekb0.th.jpg (http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bombpurplehazekb0.jpg) this is the the second one i fucked up with image shack CRITZZ plzz [/b][/quote]
not bad at all for a quickie but ive seen the style before...

Billburg
03-04-2007, 12:42 PM
Pez ss- give some crits but ill give you one cause im nice, i dont like the last letter the bottom of it is to big (but thats just me)

Sumoe- great as usaual

aimo- i dont like the exclatmation point instead of the i

now heres a couple throwie ideas, dont mind the fill on the small one got bored

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/stufffff003.jpg
crits would be nice..

neptune
03-04-2007, 12:44 PM
eyo

Apple pie
03-04-2007, 12:47 PM
pez you r "A&#39;&#39; looks likw and &#39;&#39;R&#39;&#39; other than that looks good

pez ss
03-04-2007, 12:50 PM
bill berg i would sugest working on ur s. also make the p closer together cause it doesnt work with the reat ov the letters for now. with the a make the left part of the a go over the right instead of the righht over the left. and i like filled a a lot better but thats just me. what helps me is do do the same throie over and over again till every thing is just right and not just over and over but chang little thing about it every time

Xsjadox
03-04-2007, 12:57 PM
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/147/410109532_0935556fed_m.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/186/409893080_1e9b6f107c_m.jpg
bumpiddy bump

pez ss
03-04-2007, 01:07 PM
fap two i really like the second onethe black 3d is nice and the green out line makes it really stand out. i dont like the first one as much but thats just me talking.

NICCSACC
03-04-2007, 01:08 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne+Mar 4 2007, 01:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AimoOne @ Mar 4 2007, 01:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Mar 4 2007, 05:06 PM
Thanks Zep..
Torn..have you alreaddy posted that A...hm...do all your other letters like that..on there own..and see how tthey turn out..
Sabe...id say..do simples..like..SABE..but..what ever..
Freedomwriter..whats with the the dot on the S...lose those arrows..and the little bumps on the ends of the letters...

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/8888.jpg

making my karaks more life like..

EDIT..

CRITS ON JUST LETTERS..PLEASE

THANKS.. :(
bump..people forgot about me.. :( :rolleyes:

Faptwo..back to Fap hu..ugh..write APTWO..pweese [/b][/quote]
pic quality great

letter quality wack

trashhh
03-04-2007, 01:09 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40945-1.jpg

A rare kind of style from me.

Anyone willing to make me a throwie?? ill do a sketch for u if its good enuf :P

capo93
03-04-2007, 01:12 PM
ill try one out for you haha make a mek2 sketch for moi

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 01:21 PM
I&#39;m really sad, it&#39;s hard for me to write different letters now I been writing "Sume" to many times, need to practice other letters now. :(

G - Wahl
03-04-2007, 01:26 PM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture-1.jpg
quick pen sketch, the 3d is sloppy i was goin fast...any crits?

Trash - kinda looks like Trlsh, i would connect the A to itself , i will try to do a throw for you but i cant promise its gonna be any good ha..

capo93
03-04-2007, 01:26 PM
sorry for sloppiness of the outline and the trash handstyles and s but here you go :lol: mek me a piece if you think its good enough if not no biggie

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/Picture10.jpg

Synist3r
03-04-2007, 01:39 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/blue_fusion/tag_one.jpg

I know they suck, I&#39;m still learning...any advice is greatly appreciated guys...thanks...

South-Pole
03-04-2007, 01:42 PM
go simpler lol

make your letters like the ones on your keyboard

Synist3r
03-04-2007, 01:48 PM
I did that for awhile...but what do you think of my style now? good, bad...or just plain stupid?....

AimoOne
03-04-2007, 01:50 PM
i wouldnt really say thats a style buddy..its a tag .. in a style .. that tag style could turn into sumthing nice..if you work on it...but before...get basics down..like..

SYNIST3R

Like that ;)

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 01:51 PM
Originally posted by Synist3r@Mar 4 2007, 02:48 PM
I did that for awhile...but what do you think of my style now? good, bad...or just plain stupid?....
bad and just plain stupid. :) keep writing letters like on your keyboard.

meek2
03-04-2007, 01:53 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/S5000165.jpg
crits

LAGE
03-04-2007, 01:54 PM
meek lose the point on the M

eng
03-04-2007, 01:56 PM
trash in my opinion that sketch is fucking sick

leos keep the o the same size as other letters?

uhhh
03-04-2007, 01:59 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 4 2007, 02:21 PM
I&#39;m really sad, it&#39;s hard for me to write different letters now I been writing "Sume" to many times, need to practice other letters now. :(
i have your oppostie problem.
ive been trying to do different letters for awile.
and now melos quite hard.

i had a bacon sketch i sorta liked.
then decided to go and fuck it up with a wack as pencil fill.
so ill redo it todayyy.

oh shit.
sunday,
homework mang.
homeworkkk.
:( :( :(

eng
03-04-2007, 02:00 PM
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/2131/genogg1gj9.jpg

yer man wateva

meek the E&#39;s look a bit weird to me, nice colour scheme tho

uhhh
03-04-2007, 02:03 PM
when i grow up,
i want to be a super awesome uber sweet graffiti drawer man like eng.

eng
03-04-2007, 02:04 PM
do i detect a bit of sarcasm -.-

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 02:04 PM
Eng-yes it is sarcasm good call. :lol: :lol: :lol: B)


Originally posted by uhhh@Mar 4 2007, 02:59 PM
sunday,
homework mang.
homeworkkk.
:( :( :(
word, sux balls.

South-Pole
03-04-2007, 02:07 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Mar 4 2007, 03:03 PM
when i grow up,
i want to be a super awesome uber sweet graffiti drawer man like eng.
lmfaooo :D



eng stick with simples till you get sick of them

G - Wahl
03-04-2007, 02:09 PM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture-1.jpg
quick pen sketch, the 3d is sloppy i was goin fast...any crits?
bump...1 crit and like 5 pictures posted after

Eng - man you needa go back to block letters, and after about a week or so of making nice simples then start putting tiny extensions on..

meek - i cant tell if you&#39;re trying to make a throw or trying to peice...if its a throw make everything the same style and make them more round, and not so sharp..but if you&#39;re tying to peice definitly go alot simplir like i told eng..

Ekers.Two.Two
03-04-2007, 02:10 PM
leos - its ok, but , umm the 3d is a bit off

eng - go simple plz

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011161.jpg
crits plz

G - Wahl
03-04-2007, 02:12 PM
ekers - not relaly likeing the E at all but the S is really nice, not to sure that those balls on the K and R are, are they suppposed to be pokeballs? ha...and can you tell me whats wrong with the 3d? like where i fucked up

uhhh
03-04-2007, 02:12 PM
ekers is my hero.

el-dumbass-o,
take your own advice.
go simpler.
i KNOW youve been told that before.
crits only work if you use them..

G - Wahl
03-04-2007, 02:14 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Mar 4 2007, 03:12 PM
ekers is my hero.

el-dumbass-o,
take your own advice.
go simpler.
i KNOW youve been told that before.
crits only work if you use them..
...me?

Nosypainter
03-04-2007, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by Xsjadox@Mar 4 2007, 01:57 PM

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/147/410109532_0935556fed_m.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/186/409893080_1e9b6f107c_m.jpg
bumpiddy bump
dont do them on lined paper , they look dope to good to be on lined papper

eng
03-04-2007, 02:23 PM
FAP 2 im loving you rphat style of letters and clean lines

im gna upload some simples in a sec - in the words of uhh to learn from my crits

Linkzone1
03-04-2007, 02:27 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 3 2007, 12:14 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture40-1.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture37-1.jpg
You suck ass

uhhh
03-04-2007, 02:29 PM
:o
damn bro.
niccasaccs big shouldbeblack ass is gonna curb stomp yo ass.
:)

eng
03-04-2007, 02:33 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/4852/lolxz5.jpg
i need to work on getting the bars of my letters equal widths i think, any extra tips much appreciated

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9303/lol1qy9.jpg
dont like this one and i expect the same crits as above.. lol

ne would be appreciated

TESTER
03-04-2007, 02:33 PM
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/3-1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/2-1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/1-1.jpg

tried to keep it simple

G - Wahl
03-04-2007, 02:35 PM
Originally posted by eng@Mar 4 2007, 03:33 PM
i need to work on getting the bars of my letters equal widths i think, any extra tips much appreciated

..a ruler

eng
03-04-2007, 02:42 PM
i meant by freehand... ne1 can use a ruler its just i need to get my hand used to it

Tester - i really like that red throwy, nice and clean - the top sketch isnt my type, not too sure about the E , just a small thing

G - Wahl
03-04-2007, 02:45 PM
it will come with practice

krazzie_ammo
03-04-2007, 02:46 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6297/113gg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

one more bump.

anyone up for an exchange?

trashhh
03-04-2007, 02:49 PM
Really likin the bacon&#33;

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40948.jpg
sketch for baze

capo93
03-04-2007, 02:52 PM
Originally posted by capo93@Mar 4 2007, 02:26 PM
sorry for sloppiness of the outline and the trash handstyles and s but here you go :lol: mek me a piece if you think its good enough if not no biggie

http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/Picture10.jpg
:lol: bump ths throw for trash dunno if he saw it and id like to see my name in his style

eng
03-04-2007, 02:59 PM
Originally posted by eng@Mar 4 2007, 03:33 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/4852/lolxz5.jpg
i need to work on getting the bars of my letters equal widths i think, any extra tips much appreciated

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9303/lol1qy9.jpg
dont like this one and i expect the same crits as above.. lol

ne would be appreciated
TRASH loving that baze sketch nice shading on the drops, cant see the Z too well, but hey im shit

any more tips on these?

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 02:59 PM
Trashhh-the "B" and "Z" are gangstah. B)

React!
03-04-2007, 03:14 PM
word im lovin that shit Trashhh shit would look sick in color..

Synist3r
03-04-2007, 03:20 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/blue_fusion/Tag_Two.jpg

How is this one? A little simpler with a bit of color.

sabe2
03-04-2007, 03:34 PM
i never knew there was a guy named saber but i dont really kare cause i picked sabe with out knowing there was frirst iwas sobe but then i changed it too sabe so i think im gonna keep it

ASB_ONE
03-04-2007, 03:40 PM
lol fair play man do ur thing but wen u learn a bit more about graff and find who saber is i think ul change it, that dude is ridiculous that l.a river piece :o

AimoOne
03-04-2007, 03:42 PM
i was going to say something about it sounding the same..but i doesnt look the same..yeah..i never like Saber..but after seein infamy...i really respect him ..the thing he did doing that LA river piece..and it get destyroed..but then goin back to fix it..thats ture love there..

sabe2
03-04-2007, 03:43 PM
Any tips on my new simples i been working on
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture320.jpg
All crits appreciated thanx

eng
03-04-2007, 03:51 PM
infamy was sick - saber broke his knees or some shit cos he was doing that piece on a slanted thing

Synist3r
03-04-2007, 03:56 PM
This one is finished...Tell me what you think...Any crits are good crits for me...I&#39;m just trying to improve...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/blue_fusion/syn_tag.jpg

Snakey
03-04-2007, 03:59 PM
Baze- Holy shit. Sweet piece. I loveeeeee the shading

Sabe- For your 3-d, don&#39;t make the lines go all the way to the vanishing point. It&#39;s hard to explain, but cut them sooner.

D Snif
03-04-2007, 04:08 PM
GENO- weird thing is, the first thing i wanted to write was geno in memory of my brother, that was his name. if you want to then write it but it&#39;s reallyyy difficult.

Sabe- dont make all parts of the 3d the same color, make some darker, and some lighter.

eng
03-04-2007, 04:11 PM
is it d snif? sorry 4 ur brother man, im gna keep the name if thats kl wit u, i like it, altho i do use ENG sometimes

LAGE
03-04-2007, 04:25 PM
synister give crits first then we&#39;ll give you crits

ASB_ONE
03-04-2007, 04:28 PM
synister- blocks are always a gd place to start but u gota add some of your own style to your letters bro.
sabe- work using bars then the &#39;holes&#39; in your letters wont look so dissproportional.

ma style was gettn a bit regurgetated so i tried some shit a bit wilder, go easy its ma first &#39;mild style&#39; piece. i should point out i can do simples jus to save you typing that crit out.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r104/asb_one/SP_A0318.jpg

Synist3r
03-04-2007, 04:30 PM
ASB-Dude I have to say I am envious...it looks good to me but hey, im still new so anything that is better than mine looks good to me.

eng
03-04-2007, 04:30 PM
asb thats some sick shit, im lovin the extensions and fragments on the G, also the S is insane, add some colour and fill in the drop, its looking sick

neptune
03-04-2007, 04:31 PM
Eyo
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6789/graff1vg8.jpg

krazzie_ammo
03-04-2007, 04:33 PM
AB - fucking love it, except the S, thicken up that bottom bar please and thank you :)

eng
03-04-2007, 04:37 PM
neptune i cant even read that lol.

synister wer u from? UK?

Synist3r
03-04-2007, 04:43 PM
No Im from the US...why would you say I was from the UK?

whahappen?
03-04-2007, 04:46 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 4 2007, 02:09 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40945-1.jpg

A rare kind of style from me.

Anyone willing to make me a throwie?? ill do a sketch for u if its good enuf :P
zeks
pwease

eng
03-04-2007, 05:07 PM
just wandering.. :)

Chalk
03-04-2007, 05:22 PM
eh fucked up the fill a bit. and i feel like i should have pulled the K away from the L just a bit.
overall eh.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_po_swirl.jpg

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 05:23 PM
Originally posted by sabe2@Mar 4 2007, 04:34 PM
i never knew there was a guy named saber but i dont really kare cause i picked sabe with out knowing there was frirst iwas sobe but then i changed it too sabe so i think im gonna keep it
no man, you should really change it, Saber could prolly be considered a king, what if I wrote "Cope2" or "Futura2000"...haha, just don&#39;t steal a well known writers name.

ASB-I&#39;m really sorry man, I ain&#39;t gunna lie I&#39;ve had mad time to sketch but I just never got around to doing yours, and every time I try to do yours a get pissed at the "G"...but anyways pretty good sketch, I see you&#39;re trying to add a bit more flavor eh, looks good. :)

eng
03-04-2007, 05:24 PM
chalk. i really like it, the fill - were you going for slightly tribal? i dno bout the dots, js my opinion... nice lettering :)

eng
03-04-2007, 05:25 PM
sume is there any chance you could knock me up just a quick sketch of GENO? simple one to sorta guide me to the right lettering style? thanks alot man ;) im off 2 bed

ASB_ONE
03-04-2007, 05:28 PM
no prob sume bro i been lazy on the sketch side of things too.

im likin the chalk sketch

Sumoe
03-04-2007, 05:31 PM
eng-I would but the reason I have never done ASB&#39;s exchange sketch I owe him is cause I hate "G"s with a fuckin&#39; passion. :)

shifty!
03-04-2007, 05:45 PM
this
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8027/ak016nz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
or
this
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/63/ak014yp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(yeh i know they are both messy as hell, and one is painted, o well. you get the point)
so which one you guys like better?

MAERone
03-04-2007, 05:45 PM
hey chalk i see your shit in the NH forum you are sick
are you the one with the super dope stenicls?