Blackbooks

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Chalk@Mar 4 2007, 06:22 PM
eh fucked up the fill a bit. and i feel like i should have pulled the K away from the L just a bit.
overall eh.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_po_swirl.jpg
your letters are nice i like how they twist together and shit.
kinda organic lookin but still spaceage.

[TESTER]

chalk -- nice color like it a lot

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by neptune@Mar 4 2007, 05:31 PM
Eyo
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6789/graff1vg8.jpg
ill have whatever youre on.

really tho it reminds me of those old beatles toons.

[sabe2]

Originally posted by neptune@Mar 4 2007, 05:31 PM
Eyo
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6789/graff1vg8.jpg
Yo neptune srry man but u gotta hear this word SIMPLES :D
Simples create structure and help u in many ways..
So wat ur gonna wanna do is copy the letters off ur keyboard make sure
there the same height and the same width(try to use bars if u can..U
can learn how to use them in the im new to graffiti forum(helps alot))
Then u can go to block letters then post ur pictures colouring is not nessecary
then we will all give u crits to help u better ur letters and create a style over time
Stay up

[Billburg]

Originally posted by shifty!@Mar 4 2007, 06:45 PM
this
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/8027/ak016nz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
or
this
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/63/ak014yp6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(yeh i know they are both messy as hell, and one is painted, o well. you get the point)
so which one you guys like better?
top one is definatley better

[React!]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 4 2007, 06:31 PM
eng-I would but the reason I have never done ASB's exchange sketch I owe him is cause I hate "G"s with a fuckin' passion. :)
Last time i checked aint no 'G's in Ink or InkFlow :P :D :lol:

[nickstix]

shirfty...top one is nice

chalk...the orange fill is kinda random(imo)

neptune...defenatly simples




Originally posted by Sumoe+Mar 4 2007, 10:59 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe &#064; Mar 4 2007, 10:59 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-nickstix@Mar 4 2007, 12:11 AM
ive been wonderin sume, what do u use for all ure fine black lines in your pieces? because the prismacolor marker dosent go that skinny.
for the really fine lines I use &#39;Sakura&#39; Microns, really good pens (sizes .1, .3, .5). Alot of people have been asking me that lately.

[/b][/quote]
hey thanx i picked up a .3 and .5 today and im gunna do a sketch soon if i have the time.

[mazermcb]

omg this came out so wack&#33;&#33;&#33; check it out lol


http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g281/snooponer/DCP_2118.jpg

btw, thanks u guys who gave me critz, but this time i need even more, cuz i need to get better by the end of this week (or next week...watever lol) for some battle.... thanks, peace

[Noddles912300]

Maze the sizing seems a bit off M and A are too small.

If anyone can help me i need 2 people who are not rosa parks or MLK that helped form American Equality in 19th to 20th century.

[React!]

Originally posted by React&#33;+Mar 4 2007, 07:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (React&#33; &#064; Mar 4 2007, 07:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Mar 4 2007, 06:31 PM
eng-I would but the reason I have never done ASB&#39;s exchange sketch I owe him is cause I hate "G"s with a fuckin&#39; passion. :)
Last time i checked aint no &#39;G&#39;s in Ink or InkFlow :P :D :lol: [/b][/quote]
Bump :)

Mazer - That shit looks cool to me just lose that weird extension b4 the &#39;M&#39;

[Nem]

noddles, try Thurgood Marshall. or that one other NAACP guy.

im sure google can help you too.

[Bastardo]

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4138/picture027he3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5943/picture023ud5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9641/picture282op9vh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4236/picture268rh6hp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ThickGravy]

I dont think you need to be posting here..

[Sumoe]

damn...you haven&#39;t been on bs for a while, good to see you back with some heat, dope shit.

[Nem]

bastardo...hmmm...reminds me of Primus. yeah dude. sick stuff. you can pull off the faces in there. thats usually cheesy to me.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem2-1.jpg

shitty shit.

along with shitty handstyle crap.

along with a shitty rabbit character.

throw shit at me.

(verbally)

[fredom-writer]

ok ok nice mice

[shifty!]

bastardo killin shit, so dope. stay up.

[roller4life68]

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8883/knab5nb2.jpg

did this when i was bored, not planning on actually putting it up. crits on the throwie and the tag? thanks.

[Apple pie]

ASB nice stuff bud but i think u should start with simples...
JUST JOKING :D
im gunna bite ur &#39;&#39;E&#39;&#39;

[slinks]

roller for life - it lacks style and the color is too blah.

nem - are you nemzone? or however thats spelled with a new acount?? if not you might want a new name.

bastardo - thats some sweet writing you got going on. i love your style.

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti060.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti061.jpg

both similar but which is better?

Critz PLEASE

[Nem]

Originally posted by slinks@Mar 4 2007, 09:16 PM

nem - are you nemzone? or however thats spelled with a new acount?? if not you might want a new name.


are you shittin me? im hoping nemzone isnt a king or somethin....

i don&#39;t plan on changing my name unless it&#39;s a last resort. i&#39;ve been workin on these letters for way to long amigo.

(even though they look like shit. i&#39;ve eliminated a lot of stuff. and familiarized myself with them.)

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by nemzone+Jan 29 2007, 05:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nemzone &#064; Jan 29 2007, 05:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nemzone@Jan 28 2007, 09:53 PM


http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3314/imag0002qi6.jpg

1st in a while :rolleyes:
bump, only got like 1 comment :(

lefty, would be better if the letters were closer together [/b][/quote]
nemz is a really good writer who used to come on BS but is going into or trying to get into the army or sumthing...

this is his work.

[slinks]

you could reply to what i said but not crit my stuff???? i swear noone ever gives me crits for some reason. if there is a reason i want to know.

Bump.
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti060.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti061.jpg

[Billburg]

yeah i remeber his stuff, it was dope

slinks- i feel the same way i only got one crit on my last Bbook post

[Sumoe]

hahahahahaha my bad slinks...

kinda ugly to me, "L" ain&#39;t too bad but the "S" and "Y" are bad...keep practicing. :) ;)

[slinks]

alright finally thanks.. i know the Y is awful. ive just been experimenting alot lately but not alot of good has come from it.

[rayseone]

sly take the extension of the bottom left of the y

kspy oi know you got good simples so i dunno just keeep messing around with stuff

sloppy outline, need to fix things up before i redo it, tell me what
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/305/putlineqf1.jpg

[Lunatic]

rayseone it looks pretty good id thicken the letters up a bit.

[Nem]

so should i change my name?

or is it safe territory seeing as how he&#39;s joining the army.

i don&#39;t want to "steal" it persay.

its just recycling through generations?

[Bazer]

geeze. just write nemn.

[xAWOKE.925]

lol, pretty famous??

[Sumoe]

nah just find out another letter you like and write....something with all of those letter..."n", "e", "m" and any other letter(s) you like.

[shifty!]

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/3579/ak017rv1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you the deal...crits?

[rayseone]

maybe like men, we never know you could like them :unsure:

[Sumoe]

haha, I was thinkin&#39; write "men" then I realized it said "men" so I thought that would be a gay thing to write... :lol: :lol: :lol:

[Bazer]

thats kinda...gay...why not nemr? or nemn. nen. mem.....just screw aroud with the letters you like.

[Ekers.Two.Two]

sly - work on it
ask - sick sick

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011170-1.jpg
a throwup with my new name , non2

crits plz

[Sumoe]

what the fuck, "ask".....another name problem, theres another really good head on this site that writes "ask"(infekted)...BS, always having a name stealing problem, tisk, tisk, tisk... :rolleyes:

[Nem]

well, when i first started out i wanted to write "Nemesis" really bad. but i realized it was too long for me to do while starting out.

so NEM is kind of short for nemesis.

so would neme work out?

[shifty!]

yeh where does he live? prob nowhere near here.
and im not even out writing it, im not even good enough. so dont worry.

[uhhh]

take a long as word,
like 7-10 letters.
make it like four.

my name
melo.
i picked it for the letters and its kind of an actual word, but its usually 6 letters, i know thats not cut much.
but it cuts down on using someones namee.
;)

[Sumoe]

or "nemes"...or "nemes" backwards..*thinks about the word "nemes" backwards* nevermind that would be gayer than writing "men."

[ESKE one]

yea theres already a ask sry

and ayse i like your style that is gonna look hot with a fill

simples
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025006.jpg

crits thx

[Bazer]

Originally posted by Nem@Mar 4 2007, 10:08 PM
well, when i first started out i wanted to write "Nemesis" really bad. but i realized it was too long for me to do while starting out.

so NEM is kind of short for nemesis.

so would neme work out?
hey&#33;&#33; write "nemles" hahaha. like nameless&#33;&#33; :lol:

[Ekers.Two.Two]

eske- not bad, practice it

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011170-1.jpg
i ddint receive crits, plz give me crits
my new name NON2

[uhhh]

i think il start writing men.
on the reals,
i actually am pretty down with those letters.

[Nem]

could i just do a ton of different things?

neme, nemes, nemles, nemesis, semen, whatever.

if its all still associated with nem?

[Bazer]

Originally posted by Ekers.Two.Two@Mar 4 2007, 10:13 PM
eske- not bad, practice it

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011170-1.jpg
i ddint receive crits, plz give me crits
my new name NON2
just keep letting it progress....right now it looks like every other throwup you see on the street..

[Sumoe]

if you want...no one really cares what you do, just don&#39;t steal a name.

[Bazer]

Originally posted by Nem@Mar 4 2007, 10:15 PM
could i just do a ton of different things?

neme, nemes, nemles, nemesis, semen, whatever.

if its all still associated with nem?
yeah. i do that. baze bazer bazerk bazers bazes and sometimes i do bazererererererer until i get paranoid.

[Sumoe]

yeah but don&#39;t write "ENEM" or "NM" cause theres a really good writer in Philly who writes that...watch the movie "Infamy" and you&#39;ll see.

[KrookONE]

nemz, bastardo..feelin your stuff

[Nem]

ESKE - i like your first E a lot. the top right thing on the K could be pulled in a bit more. and all the letters pushed together. thats just my opinion though.

i just got my shipment of USPS stickers&#33;

100. woo.

i also racked 5 deco markers from home depot today.

and another score for today, i found a pack of thin plastic file things in my garage.

i will be doing some stencil cutting tonight.

get ready for sore fingers.

[rayseone]

Originally posted by rayseone@Mar 4 2007, 09:42 PM
sly take the extension of the bottom left of the y

kspy oi know you got good simples so i dunno just keeep messing around with stuff

sloppy outline, need to fix things up before i redo it, tell me what
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/305/putlineqf1.jpg
bump cuz i got 1 crit

[Sumoe]

"Home Depot" has decos? Never new that. Thanks for the information. lol. :lol: :lol: :lol:

[whim]

Originally posted by esstyle@Feb 27 2007, 04:11 PM
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/8042/menasburnersor2.jpg
A menas bomb and some weird voodoo char I came up with
werd big up&#39;s on this page one of the better i&#39;ve seen in you books for sure

[ESKE one]

yea I see enem everwhere I go and his handstyles are crazy that&#39;s one of my local heroes lol

[AteskOne]

that menas peice looks like absoulte shit...dont comliment it <_< .

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 4 2007, 10:11 PM
yea theres already a ask sry

and ayse i like your style that is gonna look hot with a fill

simples
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025006.jpg

crits thx
bump thiis should start a new page

enem gets up I see him everwhere I go he&#39;s a local hero of mine

[rayseone]

push your letters together more and lose the extension or lump in the middle bar of the s

[Chalk]

just fuckin around.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_spiky.jpg

[mazermcb]

Originally posted by mazermcb@Mar 4 2007, 04:45 PM
omg this came out so wack&#33;&#33;&#33; check it out lol


http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g281/snooponer/DCP_2118.jpg

btw, thanks u guys who gave me critz, but this time i need even more, cuz i need to get better by the end of this week (or next week...watever lol) for some battle.... thanks, peace
i would like more critz on this one, thanks you guys....




BTW it says macer.... a variable for mazer :D

[Nem]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 4 2007, 10:35 PM
"Home Depot" has decos? Never new that. Thanks for the information. lol. :lol: :lol: :lol:
well, at least the home depot in my area does. they have them at walgreens too if im not mistaken.

[rayseone]

mazer i like the fill, but the top bar of the E is almost none existant, make your m and your a bigger cuz they are smaller then the other letters and lost the extension off the m, the one that kinda looks like a K

[mazermcb]

ummm ur right, that extension does suck.... and yea i needed to make those two letters bigger, i got problems making all my letters the ssame size :S lol thanks.... any more critz?

[inkbits]

Chalk: I like it, the L got a little lost though. Even though it&#39;s form could be hidden there and still be true it could do with being more visable imo.

mazermcb: I get real lost in the letter structure man. I&#39;d say probally go a lot simpler.

[mazermcb]

ok then, imma post one of my simples, so i can get some critz, i got this battle and i really need to win....

[Feliks]

simple
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/2602/img0007zg7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[.Smoke.]

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s132/YouStoleMyBoxers/Graffiti/Picture002.jpg

Lookin for some ideas for this one.

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by Nem@Mar 4 2007, 10:08 PM
well, when i first started out i wanted to write "Nemesis" really bad. but i realized it was too long for me to do while starting out.

so NEM is kind of short for nemesis.

so would neme work out?
wat about "demise"

[Nem]

smoke - i do love your stuff. its awesome. but i wanna see one like that one you got there, but each letter seperated. like, none of the connection things. if thats possible and if you know what i&#39;m talking about at all. and then do a fat 3d thing. i think that would be sick.

I recently discovered a new sketching technique. thought i&#39;d try it out on you guys.http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem3-1.jpg

[Nem]

Originally posted by AnteUp+Mar 5 2007, 12:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AnteUp @ Mar 5 2007, 12:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Nem@Mar 4 2007, 10:08 PM
well, when i first started out i wanted to write "Nemesis" really bad. but i realized it was too long for me to do while starting out.

so NEM is kind of short for nemesis.

so would neme work out?
wat about "demise" [/b][/quote]
shit son. thats brilliant. i might do that.

[.Smoke.]

Thanks Nem. Next time I&#39;ll try to do something like that. But about the 3D thing, I&#39;m hoping to work something different, hopefully something new because I see 3D too much. And about your new sketching style, that&#39;s in the First starting out thread.

Here&#39;s a quote from it.

"Thanks to "What Happened to the Letters?" For digging these up from sky5. If anyone else has some stuff saved from before this thread was wiped please send it to me.

sky5:
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/rogan181/page2.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/rogan181/page1.jpg"

[sacwacko]

any tips on wildstyle??

[Nem]

yeah dude. thats pretty much what i did.

but why dont my letters look as kickass as those&#33;&#33;?? lol.


is mine at least pretty cool?

[NiL]

Originally posted by Nem+Mar 5 2007, 12:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nem @ Mar 5 2007, 12:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AnteUp@Mar 5 2007, 12:26 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Nem@Mar 4 2007, 10:08 PM
well, when i first started out i wanted to write "Nemesis" really bad. but i realized it was too long for me to do while starting out.

so NEM is kind of short for nemesis.

so would neme work out?
wat about "demise"
shit son. thats brilliant. i might do that. [/b][/quote]
Theres a &#39;Dmise&#39; in my area also writes &#39;Dmiser&#39;.

[.Smoke.]

Originally posted by Nem@Mar 5 2007, 12:36 AM
yeah dude. thats pretty much what i did.

but why dont my letters look as kickass as those&#33;&#33;?? lol.


is mine at least pretty cool?
It&#39;s a good start, I say try working on making straighter lines.

[Billburg]

Nem- the s looks unfinished at the bottom and the middle of the N is to wide but its a start with that style

smoke- a green fill with pink bubbles around the pice would look sick in my opion

here some stuff i was meesing with my P on tha first one got cut off a bit

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/ggdhk.jpg

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by Nem@Mar 5 2007, 12:26 AM
I recently discovered a new sketching technique. thought i&#39;d try it out on you guys.http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem3-1.jpg
haha, that&#39;s how you&#39;re supposed to sketch they&#39;re called bars, many people use them, they aren&#39;t a "new sketching technique." :lol: :lol: :lol:

[AnteUp]

ayo NEM if you want to make that shorter put "demiz"thats wat i did with hayz but that was to change the name so i wouldnt copy people

[Nem]

ah. bars. i see.

yeah, ante. i think im gonna stick with nemes. im feelin it.

thank you mucho though.

and thanks for the crits.

straighter lines, thinner N, elaborate on the S. got it. bedtime.

[AnteUp]

anytime mane :D

[Cut Throat Savage]

THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IS TO KNOW HOW TO DO BASIC LETTERS BEFORE ANYTHING ELSE, WALK BEFORE YOU RUN. TRUST ME.

Learn fonts.

[CyphOne]

^yeah learn what he&#39;s saying. you could even copy the letters on your keyboard. try to do them PERFECTLY because letters have to be very exact.
oh yeah, make them bars more consistent.

[Xsjadox]

Just messing around with a name my friend writes
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/169/411380718_5bc140329d_m.jpg
Will crit some stuff just now..but everything seems to be covered on the last page

[roller4life68]

Originally posted by roller4life68@Mar 4 2007, 08:54 PM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8883/knab5nb2.jpg

did this when i was bored, not planning on actually putting it up. crits on the throwie and the tag? thanks.
bump

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Chalk@Mar 4 2007, 10:47 PM
just fuckin around.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_spiky.jpg
finally. something dope.

[theprokilla]

trying something new

i know i need to move them closer any other crits?

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0071.jpg
edit: pen

[Chalk]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Mar 5 2007, 10:52 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC &#064; Mar 5 2007, 10:52 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-Chalk@Mar 4 2007, 10:47 PM
just fuckin around.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_spiky.jpg
finally. something dope.[/b][/quote]
dope for me, or in general?

[Loz emlintio]

Originally posted by theprokilla@Mar 5 2007, 11:28 AM
trying something new

i know i need to move them closer any other crits?

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0069.jpg
Try and draw ur lines straight if u want lines straight, don&#39;t sketch and not draw over. That&#39;s all i&#39;m saying... ;)

[Loz emlintio]

Originally posted by Chalk+Mar 5 2007, 11:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Chalk @ Mar 5 2007, 11:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 5 2007, 10:52 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Chalk@Mar 4 2007, 10:47 PM
just fuckin around.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_spiky.jpg
finally. something dope.
dope for me, or in general? [/b][/quote]
That&#39;s pretty sweet, fairplay.

[Zep0]

Chalk I really like that, The L is hidden but it looks fine, I&#39;m lovin the green shading on the 3d, adds a good effect.

I&#39;m working on doing an alphabet....First letter&#33; What do you guys think?
The reason I havn&#39;t inked it is because the add-on on the right side of the A coming through the middle is off, because I don&#39;t know how to put it behind the 3d and still come over that middle bar. Crits? Suggestions?



http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0165.jpg

[Ekers.Two.Two]

Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 12:09 PM
Chalk I really like that, The L is hidden but it looks fine, I&#39;m lovin the green shading on the 3d, adds a good effect.

I&#39;m working on doing an alphabet....First letter&#33; What do you guys think?
The reason I havn&#39;t inked it is because the add-on on the right side of the A coming through the middle is off, because I don&#39;t know how to put it behind the 3d and still come over that middle bar. Crits? Suggestions?



http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0165.jpg
stick to simples
end of the story

[theprokilla]

Originally posted by Ekers.Two.Two+Mar 5 2007, 12:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ekers.Two.Two @ Mar 5 2007, 12:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 12:09 PM
Chalk I really like that, The L is hidden but it looks fine, I&#39;m lovin the green shading on the 3d, adds a good effect.

I&#39;m working on doing an alphabet....First letter&#33; What do you guys think?
The reason I havn&#39;t inked it is because the add-on on the right side of the A coming through the middle is off, because I don&#39;t know how to put it behind the 3d and still come over that middle bar. Crits? Suggestions?



http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0165.jpg
stick to simples
end of the story [/b][/quote]
i think it looks good =/ it has good letter structure y do u say simples?

[Purplepants]

Zep0 Posted on Mar 5 2007, 12:09 PM
Â* Chalk I really like that, The L is hidden but it looks fine, I&#39;m lovin the green shading on the 3d, adds a good effect.

I&#39;m working on doing an alphabet....First letter&#33; What do you guys think?
The reason I havn&#39;t inked it is because the add-on on the right side of the A coming through the middle is off, because I don&#39;t know how to put it behind the 3d and still come over that middle bar. Crits? Suggestions?


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0165.jpg


Lose the arrows. I think it would look a lot better without them.

[Ekers.Two.Two]

i already gavem y comments in the other post i did

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011173.jpg

an exchange i did with mek2

crits plz

[South-Pole]

nooooo,his letters structure needs mad work.don&#39;t add arrows yet
stick to simples till you get sick of them,use bars to make letters

[Zep0]

Ekers drop shadow on the K looks off, and on the tag it almost looks like noek to me.

No all I usually do is simples, I&#39;m just trying out new things, I start everything with bars, then bend the bars and extend some bars, then round em off...This is one of my first attempts at add-ons. Just curious where in my lettering structure is it bad?

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Chalk+Mar 5 2007, 11:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Chalk @ Mar 5 2007, 11:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 5 2007, 10:52 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Chalk@Mar 4 2007, 10:47 PM
just fuckin around.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_spiky.jpg
finally. something dope.
dope for me, or in general? [/b][/quote]
sorry i said that wrong.

finally (after 4 pages of bullshit...) something dope.
post more of that stuff.

[RemoZ]

My new thorwy
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2364/1000585dy7.jpg

[whoarethereal evil]

looks pretty nice

get it off your crotch tho

please?


mineeeeeeee

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/DSC00002.jpg

[South-Pole]

Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 01:54 PM
Ekers drop shadow on the K looks off, and on the tag it almost looks like noek to me.

No all I usually do is simples, I&#39;m just trying out new things, I start everything with bars, then bend the bars and extend some bars, then round em off...This is one of my first attempts at add-ons.Â* Just curious where in my lettering structure is it bad?
by the looks of your A i&#39;v just seen your letter structure still needs work,what you&#39;ve done on the a weren&#39;t realy add-ons,but don&#39;t try add ons yet.you can add add ons and extensions once you get good

[Code]

Evil= I really like it, but i am not the best at throwys so i have not critz :)

Chalk= Pretty dope, just not feelin the H

Remo= like i said not good at throwys but either way looks nice


So here is something i did in class, trying to mess around with the E and C a bit more, tell me what ya think.


http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3536/scan0001ek5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[eng]

evil that well good, maybe make the fill more even, but i guess ur going for that painty look so wateva man

chalk i fuckin love that orange sketch, cant criticise it at all

ekers loving the throwie not sure about the hole in the middle...

zep0... i really like it... cant really spot nething wrong :s

ok my VERY simple one... i tried to follow crits given to me earlier...


http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2248/genosimpleye6.jpg

[percoset fun]

*****s aint know ,*****s aint kno&#33;....about percs




http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percs3.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percs2.jpg


fucked up the p on this painting shit
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percslyrcs.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percsc.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/percs1.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

stick to the simple and slowly develope. dont jump steps.

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40949.jpg

For Craze

[South-Pole]

percs your stuff i aight but don&#39;t try making your s look like a 5

trash:your stuff is dope as usual,keep it up with that style
working on letters,trying new things:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/R.gif

tell me whats wrong so i can fix it and then i can outline it

[eng]

Originally posted by eng@Mar 5 2007, 03:11 PM
evil that well good, maybe make the fill more even, but i guess ur going for that painty look so wateva man

chalk i fuckin love that orange sketch, cant criticise it at all

ekers loving the throwie not sure about the hole in the middle...

zep0... i really like it... cant really spot nething wrong :s

ok my VERY simple one... i tried to follow crits given to me earlier...


http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2248/genosimpleye6.jpg any crits?
percs your top sketch is sick

trash thats fuckin awesome, especially the drops... :o

[Code]

Originally posted by Code@Mar 5 2007, 03:05 PM
Evil= I really like it, but i am not the best at throwys so i have not critz :)

Chalk= Pretty dope, just not feelin the H

Remo= like i said not good at throwys but either way looks nice


So here is something i did in class, trying to mess around with the E and C a bit more, tell me what ya think.


http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3536/scan0001ek5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump Bump

South Pole- Just not feelin it, dont like the bit coming off the top of the R, dont like how ther eis a little chip on the left side either, but keep at it, one day you will get it down :)

Trash- As usual very dope just the C almost looks like a G, but either way dope

Fun- Well the pieces aint that good sorry, just the whole letter structure is off, got to define them and structure them more, i would say go simpiler

Geno- Very nice simples, just a bit of advice, i probaly wouldnt ink simples, just my 2 cents. And their is a part of The g that is a bit thin

[Zep0]

Acen it looks good man...Geno keep practicing your on the right path...South your bumps just dont look right, I do like the basic style though...Trash that craze piece is excellent the throwie though, I dont like how it gets bigger and bigger...but the style of it is nice....Pers I agreee with south on no 5 as an S, the simple bookie is your best one, keep practicing it.


Hey heres a progression of how I do every letter.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0168.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0169.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0170.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0171.jpg
usually I take more time but thats the basic things I do when developing my letters...Where am I messing up?

Edit:Sorry about size, just realized that.

[Captain]

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9851/img1355fh3.jpg
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/2280/img1356dn1.jpg

i hate colored pencils. and i know the blue one is whack. Crits anyway.

code- the 3d on the bottom of the letters kinda looks fucked up.

trash-dope as hell.

[garbage down tha way]

fuck. i just found out kerb is already taken. *deleted pictures*

[React!]

RemoZ - New throie lookin fresh juss next time dont take the pic with ur meat as the surface its pretty homo
Trashhh - Sick as fuck as always now make me a throwie now lol :) pweez

- Mr. Ink or InkFlow
;)

[-ShAmEE-]

right ^^^^^^^^^ nice throwie


CAPITAIN: very dope man&#33;... NOT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; learn the stucture of your letters

[BIGel]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Mar 4 2007, 08:19 PM
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4138/picture027he3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5943/picture023ud5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9641/picture282op9vh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4236/picture268rh6hp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just flippin thru the pages and saw this, that bomb on the first page is killin it. not seein so many bombs and throwies on these pages so im definately bumping this.

[Billburg]

Originally posted by Billburg@Mar 5 2007, 12:46 AM
Nem- the s looks unfinished at the bottom and the middle of the N is to wide but its a start with that style

smoke- a green fill with pink bubbles around the pice would look sick in my opion

here some stuff i was meesing with my P on tha first one got cut off a bit

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/ggdhk.jpg
bump cause i got nothing

[garbage down tha way]

eh..
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/kres.jpg

[Zep0]

Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 03:44 PM
Acen it looks good man...Geno keep practicing your on the right path...South your bumps just dont look right, I do like the basic style though...Trash that craze piece is excellent the throwie though, I dont like how it gets bigger and bigger...but the style of it is nice....Pers I agreee with south on no 5 as an S, the simple bookie is your best one, keep practicing it.


Hey heres a progression of how I do every letter.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0168.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0169.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0170.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0171.jpg
usually I take more time but thats the basic things I do when developing my letters...Where am I messing up?

Edit:Sorry about size, just realized that.
Bump fopr crits.

Garbage- Loose the E and the bump on the S work on your letters.

Snap- 1st one- loose the bump on the p and dont be so sketchy with your letters. Go simple, use bars with your letters so they look right.-2nd one- loose the S and again not so sketchy.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Code@Mar 5 2007, 03:05 PM
Evil= I really like it, but i am not the best at throwys so i have not critz :)

Chalk= Pretty dope, just not feelin the H

Remo= like i said not good at throwys but either way looks nice


So here is something i did in class, trying to mess around with the E and C a bit more, tell me what ya think.


http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3536/scan0001ek5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you gotta make the letters better.
make the legs parallel on each side and ride with it.
dont know if you can decipher that shit... i dont know how to explain it for you.

[BIGel]

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/8826419/120789751.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/8826419/120789214.jpg
weeeeeeeeeeeeed.

[What Happened to the Letters?]

yo bastardo, can you paint clean as you sketch? shits lookign fresh

[-ShAmEE-]

ur hard. fuckin scribbling WEED&#33;..hahhaa..it the only time when u love a plant. do anythin to get it. steal, cheat and hustle&#33;....

[garbage down tha way]

Worked on it a little. Won&#39;t keep the upside down crosses, just playing with em&#39;.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/kres2.jpg

[-ShAmEE-]

well it all gd. just need to make the croos at the bottom or top of the S..looks like a good start.

word in BATTLE IN TOY BATTLE> CHECK IT OUT>

[garbage down tha way]

Thanks alot bro, but sadly as all my other names, this one is taken already. Found that out just now.

[Feliks]

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/2602/img0007zg7.jpg
Crits appreciated

[Bazer]

the last two letters dont flow with the first two letters..they bassicaly get worse as it goes..

[Sumoe]

BASTARDO KILLIN&#39; SHIT&#33; B)

[Stim]

Originally posted by BIGel+Mar 5 2007, 04:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BIGel @ Mar 5 2007, 04:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bastardo@Mar 4 2007, 08:19 PM
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4138/picture027he3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5943/picture023ud5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9641/picture282op9vh0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4236/picture268rh6hp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just flippin thru the pages and saw this, that bomb on the first page is killin it. not seein so many bombs and throwies on these pages so im definately bumping this. [/b][/quote]
Yo those are sick thats an inspiration

[Xsjadox]

Yeah,agree with Baze.
BASTARDO = Evil good throwies


http://farm1.static.flickr.com/161/411870914_3185fd8f61_m.jpg
F should probably be a lil bit bigger

[Captain]

Originally posted by Captain@Mar 5 2007, 03:44 PM

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/2280/img1356dn1.jpg

i hate colored pencils. and i know the blue one is whack. Crits anyway.


CAPITAIN: very dope man&#33;... NOT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; learn the stucture of your letters

Thanks man, that seriously helped me improve. I&#39;m not a dumbass, I do simples daily.
Once in awhile I give something like that a shot if I&#39;ve got some time during school.

anyway, bump if anyone&#39;s got some actual crits.

[edit] I know there&#39;s a lot of little things that are off, but anything that really strikes you is what i&#39;m looking for.

[Sumoe]

it&#39;s ugly, learn letter structure and don&#39;t put extensions or anything yet, keep practicing man, you&#39;ll get better.

edit: p.s. that "S" is horrid.

[kroma]

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/206/jaylockyy0.jpg
this is another word, besides kroma that ill write

[whahappen?]

bastardo is my hero.....
jesus that stuff makes me wanna sketch...esp that neza omg that z is soooo nice
kroma i cant even read that go simple(KROMA)
fap your stuff is soooo clean

[bouncingsoul]

Hah, I love you Bastardo

I wish I could smile..

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0661.jpg

[-GEKS-]

awwww poor little...eh, yeah
really sick, love it

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Mar 5 2007, 06:00 PM
Hah, I love you Bastardo

I wish I could smile..

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0661.jpg
reminds me hella of chillen
probabaly cause of the lips
do you make stickers with your characs?
or paint with them

[sInk.dIs.]

http://pics-04.hi5.com/userpics/004/329/329154004.img.jpg

doodle while ripped at a buddys place.

[mazermcb]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g281/snooponer/DCP_2121.jpg

my simple :)

[garbage down tha way]

Sink-That S is dope as hell.

Mazer-That&#39;d look good if you did it really big.

[alera]

BASTARDO thoese throws are orgasmik wish my throws were half as good <_<
any way heres a new style im messin with
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/686/0305071834jm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4176/0305071834axl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/6663/0305071835ga2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Great oadens raven&#33; haha just watched ancorman again, funny ass movie :D

[whahappen?]

alera the l is small compared to the a looks nice though
no cam so MS PAINT:p :P
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/1135/fdffffffffffeg3.png
lawlz....

[BIGel]

^nobody ever use microsoft paint ever again. go to the library and borrow a scanner.

[whahappen?]

haha i was just playing around

[Zep0]

I&#39;ve been doing simples all night, (cause I&#39;m toy) And this idea struck me and I couldn&#39;t resist putting it down. It&#39;s an A and I write Adix so Ima do the DI then an X with that same bottom extension come out and in like that....Eh? Crits Please..
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0176.jpg

[React!]

on some real shit g shit i thought it was a &#39;C&#39; for a sec..

[AnteUp]

ayo jus shorten up tha tail on tha a cuz it duz lukk like a c but im luvin that lukks REAL tight

[Bazer]

Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 07:44 PM
I&#39;ve been doing simples all night, (cause I&#39;m toy) And this idea struck me and I couldn&#39;t resist putting it down. It&#39;s an A and I write Adix so Ima do the DI then an X with that same bottom extension come out and in like that....Eh? Crits Please..
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0176.jpg
if this was a c it would look fuckin cool..maybe you should try developin this and simples at the same time..

[Zep0]

Nah the reason I said I was doing simples is cause everytime I post something experimental I get "stick to simples" when I&#39;m doing simples but I cant get better unless I "experiment" So I have creative fits put my basics aside and go crazy. (it started as a C and then I saw its potential as a concept, then like I said I went crazy.

[uhhh]

wow.
that "a" is fucking horrid.
looks like a horrid c.
and its not even that.
o simples.
that idea is not tight and please no one else incourage crap that bad.

on a good note.
dead heafer on a bun is so damn good.
and for those retarded 12 year olds,
im eating a hmaburger,
with cheese.
no,
not a cheseburger.

[Noddles912300]

I thought it looks pretty good. but it doesnt look like an A looks like a C. This sucks my scanner is down.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by uhhh@Mar 5 2007, 09:11 PM
wow.
that "a" is fucking horrid.

that idea is not tight and please no one else incourage crap that bad.

i was thinking the same damn thing.

[inkbits]

I kinda agree on that.

[Zep0]

Well...Shit.

[--SORE--]

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/2673/herstzl0.th.jpg (http://img49.imageshack.us/my.php?image=herstzl0.jpg)


http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/7440/2602070942vl6.th.jpg (http://img266.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2602070942vl6.jpg)


I know my T is messed up on the first one ill fix the right extension on the next sketch. Any other comments are appreciated. I&#39;m not sketching for a long time so help me improve my stuff plz.

[liltaz78]

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a221/liltaz78/008.jpg
Tell me what ya think&#33;Simple nothing big...

[--SORE--]

You should work on your T. I suggest you separate your letters for the moment. Comment mine plz.

[liltaz78]

The top one is nice i just didn&#39;t like the s i think the of it is a little big but besides that its good. The bottom one is good and simple just the t like u said was messed up on the left

[uhhh]

super duper shitty bacon sketch..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-060S-1.jpg
im disappointed in myself. :(

really really.
sometimes soon,
i need to stop sucking so hard.

[NICCSACC]

thats incredible.

[uhhh]

?
hmmp.
i guesss thats cool.

"i am stache man&#33;"
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-068S-1.jpg

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 07:44 PM
I&#39;ve been doing simples all night, (cause I&#39;m toy) And this idea struck me and I couldn&#39;t resist putting it down.Â* It&#39;s an A and I write Adix so Ima do the DI then an X with that same bottom extension come out and in like that....Eh? Crits Please..
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0176.jpg
stick to the simples. one night is not long enough to start trying comlicated shit. this looks like a shitty "C" and an even shittier "A". prime example of why you should stick to simples.

edit*
i like that shit uhhh...i think the only problem with you letters are they are to undefined. tryin making them in a straight line and using color instead of pen fills.

[liltaz78]

Atesk i made a simple throwie check it out its on the page before this. I took your advise.

[uhhh]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 5 2007, 10:35 PM
i like that shit uhhh...i think the only problem with you letters are they are to undefined. tryin making them in a straight line and using color instead of pen fills.
all i got is pen fillss.
but ill try doing em in a straight lineee.

[liltaz78]

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a221/liltaz78/009.jpg
How is it?

[emel]

Originally posted by uhhh@Mar 5 2007, 10:16 PM
super duper shitty bacon sketch..
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-060S-1.jpg
im disappointed in myself. :(

really really.
sometimes soon,
i need to stop sucking so hard.
dude i can barely see the letters.. please do some more simples

[uhhh]

righto mr boss man.
;)
























:lol:

[TricksForKids]

uhhh baby, you just took a leap backwards in my books, wheres that hot "AK" fire shit you were doin a while back? more time on YOUR style son, MORE TIME&#33;

and liltaz keep all your eltters in the same style and go a bit simpler that S has potential for an orignal throw

[Sumoe]

uhhhh...not my favorite from you my dude, you got some illin&#39; ways to bend your letters but this one kinda confuses me with the arrow/extensions, it would be alot better if they were a darker or lighter color.

quick pencil sketch...
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/917/dsc0715zs7.jpg
not too happy with it... :angry:

[TricksForKids]

not too happy with it? that makes one of us..cuz im happy with it..fuck it you get it do the math

on the real though, if the top of your S was the same height as your E but still in that style, itd be gorgeoussss, just like me, half naked, sippin drinks on the white beaches in dominican...for my grad trip...in 4 days....yeah k im off topic

yall get the deal

PEACE

[liltaz78]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Mar 5 2007, 11:16 PM

and liltaz keep all your eltters in the same style and go a bit simpler that S has potential for an orignal throw
How would i make them simpler lol there like really simple

[TricksForKids]

well for starters i thought it said stic, cuz that last letter AINT an L, secondoly, lose the character on the I...that aint simple.. thirdly, the T&#39;s a huge block, try making the top the same size as the bottom, and making one side of it larger than the other, if you get what i mean, fourthly lose the little squirts, they arent a "requirement" in throwups. fifthy, lose the pencil outline around the whole thing and sixtthly, i dont know but i like the S, keep your letters the same size and style as it for now

answer your question allejandro?

[liltaz78]

lol yeah

[AnteUp]

yea i was jus tryin sum new letters and i figured out that if i did tha sketch of my original letter and rotated it a couple of times...then i got sum new ideas for other letters...weirdddd :blink:

[liltaz78]

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a221/liltaz78/012.jpg
better at all?

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 5 2007, 11:20 PM
uhhhh...not my favorite from you my dude, you got some illin&#39; ways to bend your letters but this one kinda confuses me with the arrow/extensions, it would be alot better if they were a darker or lighter color.

quick pencil sketch...
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/917/dsc0715zs7.jpg
not too happy with it... :angry:
yea im tryin ta hate at any degree cuz well i hate ur ass... ;) to fuckin gud...but id like to see a new style... :D

[emel]

Biology...
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/4677/scan0001sy2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
TAKS test....(i know there are way too many extensions and shit but im toy anyway so whatever)
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/7943/scan0002pi3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bored in fucking church....sorry couldnt get the whole pic in with teh scanner for some reason..
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/9828/scan0003uf5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sumoe- that shit is fuckin dope and i agree with tricksforkids i think it would look way better with teh top of the S a same height as the E, but yeah man i dono why your in the toy section, all your shit is fuckin dope and your fills are orgasmic man

Liltaz78-man work on your letters to be in proportioned and like on the keyboard and shit,try to make it so people can tell what letter it is man..structure, keep at it

[ESKE one]

LILTAZ- where you at in PA?

[liltaz78]

Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 6 2007, 12:48 AM
LILTAZ- where you at in PA?
You know where hazleton is?

[smartSOFT]

Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 08:35 PM
Nah the reason I said I was doing simples is cause everytime I post something experimental I get "stick to simples" when I&#39;m doing simples but I cant get better unless I "experiment" So I have creative fits put my basics aside and go crazy. (it started as a C and then I saw its potential as a concept, then like I said I went crazy.
dude that shit is whack....i dont care what anyone tells you. its whack. stick to simples. you know why every1 tells you that? b/c you do shit like the stuff you posted. simples man simples. if you can do simples...paint them clean....and put a clean tag next to it. no1 will know your toy.

but if you post/try to paint shit like that.....they will know you are a toy. simples man....do simples until you cant move your hand. style will develop on its on. dont try to be "creative" you will be able to tell when you can do something nice. get you letter structure down...

[smartSOFT]

Originally posted by eng+Mar 5 2007, 03:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (eng @ Mar 5 2007, 03:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-eng@Mar 5 2007, 03:11 PM
evil that well good, maybe make the fill more even, but i guess ur going for that painty look so wateva man

chalk i fuckin love that orange sketch, cant criticise it at all

ekers loving the throwie not sure about the hole in the middle...

zep0... i really like it... cant really spot nething wrong :s

ok my VERY simple one... i tried to follow crits given to me earlier...


http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2248/genosimpleye6.jpg any crits?Â*
percs your top sketch is sick

trash thats fuckin awesome, especially the drops... :o [/b][/quote]
letters dont always have to over lap...........



get a new tag..that shit is ugly

[Synist3r]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v236/blue_fusion/death_tag.jpg

What do you guys think, I did this for that one esse, honest crits plz.

[nero122]

dont try 3d n dont do those letters ever again trust youre words gonna change bout a million times n ure style is crap soz for beinn harsh bt i was stuck on bein complisated for ages cos i didnt get harsh true crits n shit like evryones gnna tell you do block letters look at youre keybord n dig deep to find a word with meaning make one up respell it n shit n then try to incorparate character with the style

[Purplepants]

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/headiehunter/foto-0231.jpg
Too many arrows, i know.. <_<
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y296/headiehunter/foto-0230.jpg

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by liltaz78+Mar 6 2007, 01:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (liltaz78 @ Mar 6 2007, 01:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Mar 6 2007, 12:48 AM
LILTAZ- where you at in PA?
You know where hazleton is? [/b][/quote]
I&#39;ve heard of it but idk where it is lol I&#39;m all the way in philly

[liltaz78]

oh yeah i am like 2 hrs away from that my fam is there.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Sume - Stop posting here&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :lol: it&#39;s killing us less talented toys. I say you have graduated to the big boy thread. but I gotta say this, try doing characters or other stuff that ain&#39;t letters. and I never seen a throw from you... post one&#33;

Uhhh - I like that style, and I don&#39;t care what anyone else says... but yeah like you said, ur sucking lately. but it&#39;s not all that bad, you just need to make the letters pop out more.

emel - it sucks... that&#39;s all I can think of.

and get a load of purpleplants... why would you write Sane??&#33;??&#33;&#33;&#33;?&#33;? why?


ANYWAYS... I haven&#39;t posted sketches cuz I had no colors, now I got more, I am gonna post a sketch.

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3280.jpg
I rushed on the I and C ... never realized it at the time but it was too big.

Critz?

[Purplepants]

and get a load of purpleplants... why would you write Sane??&#33;??&#33;&#33;&#33;?&#33;? why?


Lol, now i just see i forgot the N behind the 1, it had te be 1nsane.
Ill make a new one.
And why i would wirte that? Cuz I want to write it.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Mar 6 2007, 10:33 AM
Sume - Stop posting here&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :lol: it&#39;s killing us less talented toys. I say you have graduated to the big boy thread. but I gotta say this, try doing characters or other stuff that ain&#39;t letters. and I never seen a throw from you... post one&#33;

Uhhh - I like that style, and I don&#39;t care what anyone else says... but yeah like you said, ur sucking lately. but it&#39;s not all that bad, you just need to make the letters pop out more.

emel - it sucks... that&#39;s all I can think of.

and get a load of purpleplants... why would you write Sane??&#33;??&#33;&#33;&#33;?&#33;? why?


ANYWAYS... I haven&#39;t posted sketches cuz I had no colors, now I got more, I am gonna post a sketch.

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3280.jpg
I rushed on the I and C ... never realized it at the time but it was too big.

Critz?
Bizumpedizzled

[nero122]

hey prple plants amongst other things go back to block letters n i wite sain so write sumin else like nase or summin preciated

[Purplepants]

1nsane is just one of the many i got.
I will do another one next time, thanks for the crits anyways.

[garbage down tha way]

Originally posted by Purplepants@Mar 6 2007, 10:41 AM

and get a load of purpleplants... why would you write Sane??&#33;??&#33;&#33;&#33;?&#33;? why?


Lol, now i just see i forgot the N behind the 1, it had te be 1nsane.
Ill make a new one.
And why i would wirte that? Cuz I want to write it.
Yo sane is already a writer big in ny.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Some mid class madness...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3277.jpg

Skeleton mode
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3282.jpg

Cynimatical mode&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3290.jpg

Stay on topic guys&#33;&#33;&#33; I want critz cuz it&#39;s me new name.

[NICCSACC]

props on your new name.

[South-Pole]

fluffy that looks good.Nice name

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/Picture20005.jpg


I SUCK AT THROWIES&#33;

[TricksForKids]

i actually like that trasgh^, well, the s is killer, and the T is nice, i say try and keep em all in that smooth simple style,

i thought id give you all a laugh cuz i havent posted in a month, found this crumpled up in the bottom of my knapsack today after my mom made me clean it up, some dirty freestyle, must be a couple months old

lol

Peace


http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4435/sabdfsahfer0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[nero122]

anyone up for an exchange?

[5yn]

Befor
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Img_2073.jpg



Now
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture6.jpg

[5yn]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture4.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture5.jpg

[5yn]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/6666.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/66661.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/66662.jpg

just sum quickies

[alera]

Originally posted by alera@Mar 5 2007, 06:51 PM
BASTARDO thoese throws are orgasmik wish my throws were half as good <_<
any way heres a new style im messin with
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/686/0305071834jm1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4176/0305071834axl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/6663/0305071835ga2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Great oadens raven&#33; haha just watched ancorman again, funny ass movie :D
ended up on the bottom of the page...

5yn i think you did thoes quickies to quik.. :D

[whahappen?]

alredady critted you^
make the ls smaller
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/521/picture011xz2.jpg
sketchy bars

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Mar 6 2007, 12:55 PM
Some mid class madness...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3277.jpg

Skeleton mode
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3282.jpg

Cynimatical mode&#33;
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3290.jpg

Stay on topic guys&#33;&#33;&#33; I want critz cuz it&#39;s me new name.
bumped sorry but it&#39;s my new name and I wanna see what people think.

tricks for kids - killin it as always... the W is kinda weird though

Alera - awesome&#33;&#33; just make the letters more evenly wide and same size like ur L is too small on most of the sketches you have there.

[Zire]

hey, first sketch ive done in ages, yeh its probably crap but tell me what u think..

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/6703/zareod6.th.jpg (http://img61.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zareod6.jpg)

[Xsjadox]

Fluffy Bunnies : that&#39;s rad
Zire : I think you should go back to simple styles :/

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/171/412886824_23603fdb3d_m.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/161/411870914_3185fd8f61_m.jpg
Some fuck ups in them,but yeah

[React!]

Fap thats some sick shit i like how u keep ur style and make it better along the way

[dim]

fap two love your stuff



yeyeyeye south africa

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Mar 6 2007, 03:29 PM
i actually like that trasgh^, well, the s is killer, and the T is nice, i say try and keep em all in that smooth simple style,

i thought id give you all a laugh cuz i havent posted in a month, found this crumpled up in the bottom of my knapsack today after my mom made me clean it up, some dirty freestyle, must be a couple months old

lol

Peace


http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4435/sabdfsahfer0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
omfg tricks.

is this pencil :o

oh geez&#33;
what is the world coming to

[nosnhoj zitro]

i really wanna learn how to do a better wild style, how do you all get your ideas?

[whahappen?]

look at your shit for an hour then make shapes outta it

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Mar 6 2007, 04:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Mar 6 2007, 04:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Mar 6 2007, 03:29 PM
i actually like that trasgh^, well, the s is killer, and the T is nice, i say try and keep em all in that smooth simple style,

i thought id give you all a laugh cuz i havent posted in a month, found this crumpled up in the bottom of my knapsack today after my mom made me clean it up, some dirty freestyle, must be a couple months old

lol

Peace


http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4435/sabdfsahfer0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
omfg tricks.

is this pencil :o

oh geez&#33;
what is the world coming to [/b][/quote]
im SORRY, i ahvent sketched in a month ok, i found that in the bottom of my bag, leave me alone asshole&#33; lol

[BIGel]

Originally posted by nosnhoj zitro@Mar 6 2007, 04:48 PM
i really wanna learn how to do a better wild style, how do you all get your ideas?
one of the single biggest things that helped me was doing it in pencil first. i used to just do it off the top of my head. now ill throw something quick and messy down with pencil and then go over it with with ink, linking up all the missing pieces in a way that looks a million times better than the original.

[Fosale!]

Tricks, pweese use pencil more.
seriously, it looks so much cleaner.

<33 you bby
:wub:

[d_g]

FapTwo, I&#39;m not really feeling your stuff for some reason. The structure isn&#39;t too bad, the flow is ok. I think it would look a lot better if you kept all your letters a similar size.

Fluffy, nice simple style, not much to say other than keep practicing it.

Alera, same comment as above.

Little sketchy in places but yeah, you get the idea...
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch32.jpg

[Sumoe]

that "E" murdas bitches...hahaha on the real it&#39;s dope.

[mazermcb]

i agree, that E is dope, but i dont think its like the same style like the other letters.... like the other letters look more normal and that E looks like for a crazy styled throwup or something lol

[d_g]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 7 2007, 10:26 AM
that "E" murdas bitches...hahaha on the real it&#39;s dope.
Haha, cheers.

Yeah the &#39;E&#39;s style is a bit out of place, but yeah, I felt like using it haha.

Bumping my sketch to the new page.
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch32.jpg

[5yn]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture6.jpg
any crits? i want paint it soon

[garbage down tha way]

i like the ghost shadow, thats ill.



heres something i just drew up.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/knar.jpg

[Bastardo]

What does it say?
Copy the letters off your keyboard.
then add different little bumps and lumps&#33; but dont try all the arros and sharp edges yet.

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/8752/picture031nn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[garbage down tha way]

It says knar. Every name i wrote turned out to be taken so i had to make something nobody would have. Know Nothing Above Ru&#036;. But I&#39;ll try to chill with it and do the keyboard letters, i was just tweakin some stuff. I like your stuff alot, it&#39;s always good.

[ESKE one]

knar- stay simple jus like the letters on the top left corner of your page
bastardo- im stuck is that a throwie or a piece wut ever it its is tuff as shyt

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025007.jpg
crits?

[HuntingLOLs]

eske, your 3d is off on the k, not finished on the rest but thats on purpose i guess :)
make your letters abit more compact and dont do overlapping 3d yet, has to be a killer before it can look good
hot stuff on that tag in your signature though, i really like the arrow, work on that to be a killer handstyle

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t293/hunting_07/DSC00412.jpg

this something i did tonight. i have trouble with extensions. im thinking that first you draw a letter, then you draw the WHOLE extention, where it begins and where it ends, then you edit it so it pops off the letter?

oh yeah, sketch not done yet ;)

[NICCSACC]

some people can do extensions or whatever you wanna call em.
some people just cant.
but they try and try reguardless. props

[Sumoe]

^^^word.

[HuntingLOLs]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 6 2007, 06:49 PM
some people can do extensions or whatever you wanna call em.
some people just cant.
but they try and try reguardless. props
assuming you mean i cant :) will work on my style instead of being bothered by extensions
well looking at it now i can see the &#39;e&#39; is too small compared to the &#39;a&#39; - &#39;m&#39; around same size as A&#33; back to sketching&#33;

[nickstix]

knar...the simples in the corner are good but the other piece isnt, keep up the simples b4 you try more

bastardo...i love your throws,the third letter(witch i think is an r)if it is an r then i would suggest making that top bubble a little bigger

eske...try to do letters like on your keyboard then add some stuff. theres no 3D on your s, and not all your 3D is pointing in the same direction.

hunting...looks like you got a pretty good concept of letters but some the extensions dont really flow with the letter, they seem to be forced in.

havent been sketchin much been feelin like crap,heres something from 2 nights ago
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/reakt5.png
crits?

[Sumoe]

arrows make it look ugly. :)

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by HuntingLOLs+Mar 6 2007, 06:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HuntingLOLs @ Mar 6 2007, 06:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Mar 6 2007, 06:49 PM
some people can do extensions or whatever you wanna call em.
some people just cant.
but they try and try reguardless. props
assuming you mean i cant :) will work on my style instead of being bothered by extensions
well looking at it now i can see the &#39;e&#39; is too small compared to the &#39;a&#39; - &#39;m&#39; around same size as A&#33; back to sketching&#33; [/b][/quote]
naw that aint what i meant. i mean you can do extensions (they are great IMO) they just arent in the right places or something. just work on it cuz your lines/strokes are all nice and strong and shit as far as i can tell.
stay up

[nickstix]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 6 2007, 06:57 PM
arrows make it look ugly. :)
yea i was gunna erase the arrows but i forgot and by the time i remembered i already outlined it so i finished it anyway :P

[xAWOKE.925]

Reakt that&#39;s a good start on a simple. lose the arrows

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/737/goodfillpiece2ep6.jpg
i know the 3d is fucked.

[sabe2]

d G im not likin the thing at the bottom of the s

anyways evryone i chhanged my name too serk is there a king like tht??

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Mar 6 2007, 07:12 PM
Reakt that&#39;s a good start on a simple. lose the arrows

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/737/goodfillpiece2ep6.jpg
i know the 3d is fucked.
i wish i could do this style.

[HuntingLOLs]

Originally posted by Zep0+Mar 5 2007, 04:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Zep0 @ Mar 5 2007, 04:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Mar 5 2007, 03:44 PM
Acen it looks good man...Geno keep practicing your on the right path...South your bumps just dont look right, I do like the basic style though...Trash that craze piece is excellent the throwie though, I dont like how it gets bigger and bigger...but the style of it is nice....Pers I agreee with south on no 5 as an S, the simple bookie is your best one, keep practicing it.


Hey heres a progression of how I do every letter.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0168.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0169.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0170.jpghttp://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0171.jpg
usually I take more time but thats the basic things I do when developing my letters...Where am I messing up?

Edit:Sorry about size, just realized that.
Bump fopr crits.

Garbage- Loose the E and the bump on the S work on your letters.

Snap- 1st one- loose the bump on the p and dont be so sketchy with your letters. Go simple, use bars with your letters so they look right.-2nd one- loose the S and again not so sketchy. [/b][/quote]
bumping for ya
imo, you should lower the line through the A down abit - that would help alot. keep them same width still and work on style from there

[14nick]

Deleted cuz i fucked up.

[shithead onerzzzz]

very fresh awoke&#33; some recent stuff.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture125.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/xfbcb.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m309/something_something_2006/Picture134.jpg

[shithead onerzzzz]

please disregard the one on the painted piece.

[Sumoe]

never been a fan of tall letters...but I like yours, diggin&#39; the painted joint too, keepin&#39; it simples with a lot of steez, love it&#33; :)

[14nick]

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/483/graffblackbookrg5.jpg

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/6634/graffblackbook007ar5.jpg

Toy i know.. help?

[Sumoe]

ugly, keep practicing and learn structure. :)

[NewbyTJ]

Nice simple Ryes only thing wrong i noticed was on the last one look at the E and S they look connected because u forgot the black outline on the top part of E and S where they meet......I havnt posted in a while so im gonna post alot of shit right now and be a postwhore srry for all the shadows im in a rush so i did it quikly.....
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture333.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture332.jpg
Was trying to think of aimo&#39;s sexy simples and I accidentaly Did Ai So i just wrote Aimo.
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture330.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture329-1.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture328.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture327.jpg
Thats all thanx guys srry bout all the pics tell me what u think ight thanx all crits appreciated

[BoringBors]

Im def feelin this thread

[whahappen?]

newby stick with the bottom one or the 2nd to bottom
nice one awoke
for speed....
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/5615/picture012ul7.jpg

[Bazer]

it looks like every other throwup on the steet...

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by 1nOnly Baze@Mar 6 2007, 08:45 PM
it looks like every other throwup on the steet...
no offense but your throwies are pretty generic too, doesn&#39;t mean they&#39;re bad though. ;)

[NewbyTJ]

I like it Ze thanx for the crits

[NewbyTJ]

Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Mar 6 2007, 08:40 PM
Nice simple Ryes only thing wrong i noticed was on the last one look at the E and S they look connected because u forgot the black outline on the top part of E and S where they meet......I havnt posted in a while so im gonna post alot of shit right now and be a postwhore srry for all the shadows im in a rush so i did it quikly.....
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture333.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture332.jpg
Was trying to think of aimo&#39;s sexy simples and I accidentaly Did Ai So i just wrote Aimo.
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture330.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture329-1.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture328.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture327.jpg
Thats all thanx guys srry bout all the pics tell me what u think ight thanx all crits appreciated
Bumb to new page cause i need mad crits wat one u guys thinks the best and wat crits u can give helps thanx

[MAERone]

first sketches in a while just staying simple
i got lazy and didnt color them in
crits?



http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/1915/photo030607001tn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/2633/photo030607002kp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)