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South-Pole
03-09-2007, 12:39 PM
trash trash trash..

thats a nice throw but the top right part of the t needs to be round not sharp,don't draw your S on the other letters,but its still nice though

Bazer
03-09-2007, 12:40 PM
its looks fine dude but just make sure to make your t a little bit bigger than the r so that you can tell the difference..cuz you could say that t was an r if you wanted to..

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 12:51 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0128.jpg

`Juke.
03-09-2007, 01:04 PM
Shamee nice Karak but I'm not really feeling the piece.
The 3D comes out good, but the letter structure is wierd. It kinda looks like SNAM]
Try again without connecting the letters?

South-Pole
03-09-2007, 01:14 PM
it looks nice but i don't realy like the connection between the s and the a

trashhh
03-09-2007, 01:17 PM
what does it say shame?

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 01:19 PM
SHAM

trashhh
03-09-2007, 01:22 PM
Oh. Define the H alotttt more, and join the middle bar of the A!
thers something about it i like tho
But the 3d seems to be going in all directions

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 01:25 PM
SHAM

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 01:27 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sham.jpg

Zep0
03-09-2007, 02:06 PM
Dude Shame I know what your trying to say but I agree with Trash define it some more. Your 3d is a little off, not much but take a last looksie. And for the guy that did astro...I dont know if you plan on tagging that but hes pretty big, hes got his own section on the main site.

AimoOne
03-09-2007, 02:17 PM
Aimo..is back in teh e-universe ;)

Shame...that letter structure is seriously shit..no offence at all..but it is..i seen better from you...and going by that peice...it tells ME that you still dont have basic structure down..not like i do...but you can still see...i think its kinda too complex this early to be honest..the colour job dont do it favours neither...as it completely covers up the connections..well..morphs..
aint likeing the karak much niehter...the teeth then tounge look wrong.. :( ..i hate saying i dont like your stuf...but mate..this ones way off...i see way better from you... :( :( .. oh..like the S is really basic..then it goes proper crazy..you know

Bazer
03-09-2007, 02:20 PM
where u been???

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-09-2007, 02:22 PM
the karak is ok the piece i cant tell what the fuck it says though
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1722.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/jffjfj.jpg

Zep0
03-09-2007, 02:25 PM
I dont like how far you extended the middle bars....but thats just me.

[phenom5]
03-09-2007, 02:31 PM
Sezer - Not sure if you did it on purpose but the bottom of the 'S' 3d, has a difference vanishing point of the rest of the piece, it looks real awkward. The letter structure seems like it's trying a bit too hard to be all over the place. But it's got potential to be a dope style if it were cleaned up.

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 02:50 PM
yh ras i kno i fuckin stink at fills that y i dont do them. i've aint be graffin for a long time since now. so abit rusty for the moment.

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 02:52 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0132.jpg

South-Pole
03-09-2007, 02:53 PM
NICE B shamee

but the pic is too big

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/OR.jpg

errm..yes only two letters,trying out letter connection thats why

CRITS :P

edit:don't talk about the cracks,they fucked up i know


and could someone please post a tutorial on how to make cracks in letters

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 02:59 PM
umm..ur style is the style most people go for when they start to get goin on simples. they dont look good. dunno that just my opinon. try different style to make them more funky.

South-Pole
03-09-2007, 03:02 PM
^:(...lol ok.i think i'll try something else even though i liked that syle

emokid
03-09-2007, 03:04 PM
dont try something else if you dont want to, that style is fine, just cut down on the length of the flicky bits on them both

South-Pole
03-09-2007, 03:06 PM
oh,ok then.Í'll keep that style ,was just trying letter connection

Zep0
03-09-2007, 03:29 PM
Letter connection isnt bad...for cracks....just do a sketchy line(thin) then branch off or connect back...Its actually easier than it looks. I did a piece a couple pages back with cracks I like to use traingle towards the edge of the letters. Let me find it.

Shame I like the B...

Zep0
03-09-2007, 03:31 PM
Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 8 2007, 09:19 PM
First time working with these letters....L is too hidden O looks like an A and my S needs improvement....Crits. Please?

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0184.jpg
Cant really see the cracks but its just sketchy lines. How to do cracks down into the 3-d I havnt experimented with.....same with knocking chunks out...but there you go.

AimoOne
03-09-2007, 03:33 PM
am i right .. ?

funnilly enuff...those arnt connections...those are morphs..arnt connections made by using bars..connected to other bars on the other letters..?

and cracks are shit anyway...

Sumoe
03-09-2007, 03:41 PM
I always do cracks...on like all my pieces. ;) :( I guess I&#39;m shit then. <_<

AimoOne
03-09-2007, 03:48 PM
jus cuz you do cracks..doesnt mean your shit...imo....they look stupid...if not done write...you my lord..do them write...but i hate them non the less...i only think they look nice on B L O C K B U S T E R S .. ;)

Zep0
03-09-2007, 04:14 PM
Thats all there really meant for...but if incorporated right, they can look good.

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0133-1.jpg
obean

uhhh
03-09-2007, 04:49 PM
shamee- your on teh verge of a tight style.
just keep working.
that was me like last month,
and id tottaly have a tight style if i wasnt a big wussy and started drawing karaksss.

speaking of the sonsa bitchess,

HOLLA
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-016S-1.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-017S-2.jpg
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-018S-2.jpg
used me an abony pencils.
i really love em for sketchy shit.
not so muh for other stuff.

whahappen?
03-09-2007, 04:51 PM
haha nice^
i actually really like oneliners
mine look like shit but theyre fun...
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/968/picture016jo5.jpg
haha i fAil characs
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9922/picture017sl6.jpg

Ekers.Two.Two
03-09-2007, 05:26 PM
whahappen = I LOVE YOUT ONE LINERS

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 05:29 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0133-1.jpg
obean
bump bottom of the page.

revolt92
03-09-2007, 05:37 PM
Shamee - For me &#39;o&#39;s are hella hard to do so well done on that, the only letter im not keen on is the &#39;n&#39;, it dosen&#39;t seem to go with the other letter&#39;s.

Wha happen What can i say, i jus&#39; love your style.

uhhh - I&#39;m not really keen on that but i guess it&#39;s in the eyes of the beholder.


peace

smartSOFT
03-09-2007, 05:43 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 01:27 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/sham.jpg
stick to simples...ur lines are bad man...stick to simples til you can do clean lines.

not only your lines bad...but ur letter structure is whack. STAY SIMPLE

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 06:10 PM
that peice was a first on in a while about 2 weeks. bin out for a long time. i&#39;m bck. better piece abover^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

BIGel
03-09-2007, 07:03 PM
that shit looks good shamee

some unfiinshed stuff floating around
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/236568245.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/236568649.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/236568451.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-09-2007, 07:07 PM
that shit is the floaty like. but i dont kno which one i like. like them all that what it means.

whahappen?
03-09-2007, 08:57 PM
Originally posted by Ekers.Two.Two@Mar 9 2007, 05:26 PM
whahappen = I LOVE YOUT ONE LINERS
:lol: :lol:
wait...for real?
i thought they pretty much sucked

garbage down tha way
03-09-2007, 08:59 PM
shame- i like the fist and last letter, but do work on the middle.


bigel- that&#39;s amazing but putting that to a wall would be difficult.

neptune
03-09-2007, 09:08 PM
Originally posted by Chriis@Mar 9 2007, 06:43 AM
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q146/fat233/Sketch2bumming.jpg
BUMPp&#33;

intergalactic, doesnt mean alot coming from me but work at it and in a couple months youll be straight soaring through this atmosphere&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Sumoe
03-09-2007, 09:10 PM
It&#39;s ugly EVEN, when a ruler was used.

the "S" is aight though, make your other letters more like the style of the "S". :)

uhhh
03-09-2007, 09:28 PM
haha.
i love how stuff is still unporportionate.
like the 3d is still off.
im scared to see what that would look like with no rulerrr.

neptune
03-09-2007, 09:33 PM
may i inform that where are in the toys forum, one must ignore the trivial nuances that subtly tarnish what you must focus on, style style style.

uhhh
03-09-2007, 09:43 PM
one must realize that this is a forum.
your not trying to write a one-day-famous philosophical work.
you cna use normal words.
like "hey, were all toys. thats why were here."

and as for that.
i know were toys.
but the reason for having this whole post and crit system.
is to get better and get out of the toys forum.

now if i tell someone their 3d is off, they might be like "oh, gotcha" and fix.

understand?

freakshow
03-09-2007, 10:09 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/6438/otae613fv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/572/angybeardb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

comments/suggestions?

Sumoe
03-09-2007, 10:10 PM
Originally posted by neptune@Mar 9 2007, 09:33 PM
may i inform that where are in the toys forum, one must ignore the trivial nuances that subtly tarnish what you must focus on, style style style.
typing words like &#39;nuances&#39; and things like &#39;may I inform you&#39;, while making you sound "smart" or at least like you have a good vocabulary, won&#39;t do anything for his "style, style, style" or his sketches, sketches sketches, so don&#39;t tell him his shit is hot when it really is ugly.

Mse
03-09-2007, 10:10 PM
dude was trying to be smart
you know what we do with your kind round here
we stick needles in their eyeballs, destroy taht shit. feel moe homie
dude thi s so cool

BIGel
03-09-2007, 10:11 PM
that throwie is pretty hideous, maybe it was your choice of marker or something
character is fresh tho, would look dope on a sticker

garbage down tha way
03-09-2007, 11:01 PM
Yo freakshow work on that throwup before you go tagging that shit, if they&#39;re bubble letters, make them pop like bubble letters. They&#39;re too compact. Widen that shit homie. Maybe it&#39;s just me. Whatev.

uhhh
03-09-2007, 11:07 PM
his throws usually look tight.
i think its the nuance of the markersssss.
:lol:

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-09-2007, 11:45 PM
Originally posted by neptune@Mar 9 2007, 09:33 PM
may i inform that where are in the toys forum, one must ignore the trivial nuances that subtly tarnish what you must focus on, style style style.
wtf?
style?

Reak
03-09-2007, 11:55 PM
regarding freakshow
im pretty happy about the bear, but the throw is a little choppy, and i dont like that portruding spike coming out of the first letter.

neptune
03-10-2007, 12:04 AM
my bad that was my brother hes a jackass

garbage down tha way
03-10-2007, 12:07 AM
I like that throwup, but I need a solid tag.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/near.jpg

Fosale!
03-10-2007, 12:44 AM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;+Mar 9 2007, 05:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-ShAmEE- @ Mar 9 2007, 05:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0133-1.jpg
obean
bump bottom of the page. [/b][/quote]
is sky5 posting under a new name?

kicklip9634
03-10-2007, 12:53 AM
i dont think so i jus think its a bad case of the biters...

Fosale!
03-10-2007, 01:19 AM
yeah...
my post was kinda sarcasm.

but just a little.

Snot
03-10-2007, 01:26 AM
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3412/ryan1rl5.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4686/ryan2xo1.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5076/ryan3hm9.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4250/ryan4rt8.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3607/ryan5md5.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9413/ryan6wx7.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2563/ryan7yv1.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/5286/ryan8sj2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3966/ryan9bn1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Tell me how toy this is, I&#39;ve been writing for awhile. But serious writing for.. almost a year.
This is a quick thing on the front of my book, all sharpie paint markers.

sank one
03-10-2007, 01:35 AM
so i never get any crits on my work, ppl always say thats "ill" or some shit like that... can one of the better cats in here give a crit... plz&#33;&#33;

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0459.jpg

tompenny
03-10-2007, 01:48 AM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC03210.jpg

etch a sketch
03-10-2007, 02:02 AM
Where was your 3D going?

BIGel
03-10-2007, 02:09 AM
sank-you have a nice simple style, try thowing some extras into it now, additions, addons, a more wildstyle, see where it goes and play with color now.

tompenny-the colors are ruining that piece, do you have any simples?

smartSOFT
03-10-2007, 03:00 AM
Originally posted by neptune@Mar 9 2007, 09:33 PM
may i inform that where are in the toys forum, one must ignore the trivial nuances that subtly tarnish what you must focus on, style style style.
dont talk anymore please.

Billburg
03-10-2007, 04:08 AM
sank- i agree with bigel
tompenny- um what dose it say id say simples or post one without color to see what it actually looks like

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q203/Bleep36/throw.jpg

eng
03-10-2007, 09:58 AM
SANK - lose that thing coming out of the A... otherwise expand like thingy said, addons links etc

TOMPENNY - those colours clash man.. maybe try similar colours, chek the colour weel for complimentaries etc.

mine... quite simple... crits APPRECIATED ;)

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9492/zera1jn4.jpg

cheers guys :rolleyes:

NICCSACC
03-10-2007, 10:28 AM
pretty clean for the most part considering your personal skill level... hmmm erase the pencil lines before you color it at least or dont press so damn hard on the pencil.

Vow
03-10-2007, 10:31 AM
Zera yours is good because its nice and simple but you should try to make the lines all the same width like on the right leg of the R and the Z. Tompenny the colors on your piece are fine blue and orange are complementary other stuff is wrong about it.

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 10:44 AM
Originally posted by neptune@Mar 9 2007, 09:33 PM
may i inform that where are in the toys forum, one must ignore the trivial nuances that subtly tarnish what you must focus on, style style style.
Well in my social experiments of conducting and examining the laws of one being called a " Toy ", there is no true meening to this word. It is just a figment of your simple, non-complex minded cranium. It is impossible for a human being to become a child&#39;s playing instrument. Thus, your statment was proven wrong and neglected completly.

-The Institute Of Science And Research.
DR.Goldstein


PS. You&#39;re a "nuance"...

whahappen?
03-10-2007, 10:56 AM
zera the e is too angle on the top and bottom but other than that good simples
snap never do the bump on the left of the p AGAIN people have told you alot of times, make it so the n doesnt looks like a persons legs, and make the s just....better
some oneliners...:P
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/968/picture016jo5.jpg

Fosale!
03-10-2007, 11:31 AM
ok whahappen this is the prob i have with all your throwies.
all the letters are way too consistant, which is a good thing but i just dont like it idk why.
your letters all seem too slowly done or like sketched out then gone over or something, idk
just move your hand faster and make it seem a little more i dont know like quickly throw&#39;d up or somehing, idk all the letters alwyas just seem to exact to me.
idk
just my preference idk...

HuntingLOLs
03-10-2007, 11:40 AM
Originally posted by uhhh@Mar 9 2007, 09:43 PM
one must realize that this is a forum.
your not trying to write a one-day-famous philosophical work.
you cna use normal words.
like "hey, were all toys. thats why were here."

and as for that.
i know were toys.
but the reason for having this whole post and crit system.
is to get better and get out of the toys forum.

now if i tell someone their 3d is off, they might be like "oh, gotcha" and fix.

understand?
ahahaah somebody didnt understand the words :D

South-Pole
03-10-2007, 11:43 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Mar 9 2007, 10:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe &#064; Mar 9 2007, 10:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-neptune@Mar 9 2007, 09:33 PM
may i inform that where are in the toys forum, one must ignore the trivial nuances that subtly tarnish what you must focus on, style style style.
[/b][/quote]
lmfao..should i laugh at this kid?

i hope this is the last time you say that here

and don&#39;t tell us that it was your bro just to cover up what you&#39;ve just said.

uhhh
03-10-2007, 11:46 AM
at huntingLOLs-may i inform that where are in the toys forum, one must ignore the trivial nuances that subtly tarnish what you must focus on, style style style.
a.k.a.
were all in the toys forum, you shouldnt pay attention to coloring, you should pay attention to the persons style.

which is complete crap.
until your letters are good (which the guys letters weren&#39;t) you shouldnt be fucking with color. and then once you do fuck with it,
its not a trivial nuance, its what makes the piece pop and makes people pay attention to it.

Souht-Pole.
theres nothing wrong with talking like that,
in person, i talk like that a lot.
but when what our saying is wrong and not helpful,
AND
most of the people dont get it when its said in layman&#39;s(spc?) terms.
then you shouldnt be using more intresting language.

South-Pole
03-10-2007, 11:57 AM
^i know what you mean
he could talk with alot of vocabulary,but what he said was just useless.
he says that style is more important than anything when its not.and the thing that made me laugh even more is when he said it was his bro posting under his account

whahappen?
03-10-2007, 12:05 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 10 2007, 11:31 AM
ok whahappen this is the prob i have with all your throwies.
all the letters are way too consistant, which is a good thing but i just dont like it idk why.
your letters all seem too slowly done or like sketched out then gone over or something, idk
just move your hand faster and make it seem a little more i dont know like quickly throw&#39;d up or somehing, idk all the letters alwyas just seem to exact to me.
idk
just my preference idk...
do you think thats an alright oneliner though?
yea i just learned how to do them so im still going slow
and everyone just dont worry about it the kid was trying to sound smart and just made himself look stupider

NICCSACC
03-10-2007, 12:22 PM
more stupid

whahappen?
03-10-2007, 12:24 PM
wuddaev

sketch3
03-10-2007, 12:32 PM
i take my hat of to u wahappen i findit hard do to oneliners well.so congrats

sone5
03-10-2007, 12:33 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j142/dggcrew/000000000001.jpg
LUNE any critz?

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 12:35 PM
Lune - letters are really hard to read and i think you should go a bit simplieir, you&#39;re on the right track though with using those bars for the L and the U, just needs to go simpilir..the E needs alot of work, dont rush it..It will come

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture.jpg
Crits?

whahappen?
03-10-2007, 01:05 PM
bottom of the s is small and the top is huge and the l is small
and to the guy who said its hard to do oneliners its easy once you understand how to do connections
i really dont think mines that good the rs is totally shitty and im working on it

sketch3
03-10-2007, 01:06 PM
yea i know wat u mean i ment it was reli dificult to figure out how to conect them but now i can bust one out,i was just impressed cuss it was soo long

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 01:10 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Mar 10 2007, 01:05 PM
bottom of the s is small and the top is huge and the l is small
yeah im trying to get the E and the S to lok exactly the same except for the holes in the E and the bottom line in the S, and the L needs work i know, just cant think of how i want to make that look..thanks for the crits.

whahappen?
03-10-2007, 01:16 PM
yea longer throwups always look better
like mine would be alot worse than it is if i just did zers then i did zersone then just thought why not and did zersoneliner
alright just so theres flicks on the page....
are all these good enough to paint?
and if not tell me whats wrong so i can fix them quickly cause i might be going out tonight...
thanks
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/968/picture016jo5.jpg
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/5615/picture012ul7.jpg
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5920/picture013vx7.jpg
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1521/picture014hq8.jpg
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8241/picturexq5.jpg
haha ignore the ? on that one^
to leos:bottom of the s is small and the top is huge and the l is small

eng
03-10-2007, 01:19 PM
whahappen? - ur bottom and second from bottom are best cos theyre nice and rounded, plus theyre all equal - maybe add some colour?

G - Wahl - its kl but the S is sized all wrong, bring the curl up a bit

crits on this appreciated - i know the R sucks and isnt same style 4 some reson :S i dunno


http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/4180/zeraaaui8.jpg

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 01:24 PM
whahappen - im not liking the 1 liner to much, its to plain you know? all the letters are just simple bubble letters..if you were to make the 3rd sketch down into a 1 liner taht would be nice..That ZE is nice though,

eng - dont make the R into a complete rectangle, make the bottm right leg of the R come out a bit, you&#39;re on the right track though

roller4life68
03-10-2007, 01:38 PM
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5057/img0966ym4.jpg

ran out of room, so the A kinda sucks. crit?

-ShAmEE-
03-10-2007, 01:40 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Mar 10 2007, 12:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Mar 10 2007, 12:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 05:29 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-&#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0133-1.jpg
obean
bump bottom of the page.
is sky5 posting under a new name? [/b][/quote]
hey i aint bitin

I QUOTE BY CERZ
sky5 doesn&#39;t have a particular "signature style" to bite, He&#39;s just a master of the classic to new semi wild. So if someone&#39;s shit looks like sky5&#39;s, I wouldn&#39;t call them on a bite, unless you could match them up letter to letter.

I QUOTE BY SKY
i was gonna post something like "both your guys letters look so familiar . . " but to be honest my "style" is just east coast semi wildstyle which is probaly the most duplicated and used style out there so alot of people are going to have teh same look as me, one of the reasons i post on here is SOO PEOPLE COMING UP CAN SEE HOW EASY THIS STYLE IS and steal a few moves from me if they need to . . . its just a repetiton of a couple different moves/addons on tweaked but still simple letters


ERMMM....

Captain
03-10-2007, 01:41 PM
eng- looks fine, but something about the 3d seems off.

g-whal -that throw would look sweet if it wasn&#39;t all sketchy like that.

from last week-
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/2280/img1356dn1.jpg

from this week-
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2954/img1359nx1.jpg

i know i sent the r to hell, but other than that, any improvements in structure?

eng
03-10-2007, 01:43 PM
roller4life68 - i like how neat that shit is man, how bout tryin to add a colour to the drop? also try and keep your marker moving evenly through the letters when filling, like a can ;)

eng
03-10-2007, 01:45 PM
wispr, i like the way u done fat outlining on the outside and thin inner shit, the dont and top of the i could be fattened, to go with the shape of the W and S, and the r shoul dmaybe tuck in to the left a bit, nice work tho man

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 01:59 PM
Wispr - i know everyone hates hearing it but you gotta go just a bit simpilier, loose some of those extensions, they dont flow at all and you&#39;re loosing your letter structure..although it is alot better then the green sketch you posted ha..just loose those extenstions but keep the shape of the letters, hope that makes sence..

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture031.jpg
crits?

Sumoe
03-10-2007, 02:06 PM
G-Wahl-better than my throwies, so to me it looks pretty good. ;)

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 02:10 PM
that meens alot coming from you ha, your stuff is sick :rolleyes:

mild style > wild style in my opinion

Apple pie
03-10-2007, 02:10 PM
Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 9 2007, 04:14 PM
Thats all there really meant for...but if incorporated right, they can look good.
trash does some good cracks though..on his pieces

ThrowItUP
03-10-2007, 02:12 PM
Originally posted by eng@Mar 10 2007, 01:19 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/4180/zeraaaui8.jpg
i&#39;m really diggin&#39; this.
keep up the good work.

ehhh, i messed up on the 3D of course, but let me know.
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/OhDipiitzNick/epiK.jpg
Critsss?

Sumoe
03-10-2007, 02:14 PM
Originally posted by Snot@Mar 10 2007, 01:26 AM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3966/ryan9bn1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Tell me how toy this is, I&#39;ve been writing for awhile. But serious writing for.. almost a year.
This is a quick thing on the front of my book, all sharpie paint markers.
this looks nice, letters are decent coloring is good, but try to your work on the letters a bit more, they aren&#39;t bad, just try to improve and think bout your letters, and try to make your letters so good you wouldn&#39;t need the coloring to make them look better, although shit always does look better in color. ;)

scoot
03-10-2007, 02:21 PM
some new lettering ive been playing around with.. havent got around to colouring it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/8.jpg

crits please?

ThrowItUP
03-10-2007, 02:23 PM
Originally posted by scoot@Mar 10 2007, 02:21 PM
some new lettering ive been playing around with.. havent got around to colouring it

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/8.jpg

crits please?
deff too much going on with those lines.
try simples.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/OhDipiitzNick/epiK.jpg
critss?

scoot
03-10-2007, 02:26 PM
honestly it looks like it says ERK.. even tho i know it says epik.. it just doesnt look like that, i would do more empahsis on the "I" and less on the K and P due to the fact they are the ones that stand out the most to me.. and as for the blue splash u got going.. does go to well with that colour scheme

South-Pole
03-10-2007, 02:30 PM
lol i thought it was erk,the only letter that i like is the e,your k needs work

eng
03-10-2007, 02:38 PM
make letters same height to stop confusion :P

alive
03-10-2007, 02:45 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;+Mar 10 2007, 01:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-ShAmEE- @ Mar 10 2007, 01:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 10 2007, 12:44 AM

Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 05:29 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-&#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0133-1.jpg
obean
bump bottom of the page.
is sky5 posting under a new name?
hey i aint bitin

I QUOTE BY CERZ
sky5 doesn&#39;t have a particular "signature style" to bite, He&#39;s just a master of the classic to new semi wild. So if someone&#39;s shit looks like sky5&#39;s, I wouldn&#39;t call them on a bite, unless you could match them up letter to letter.

I QUOTE BY SKY
i was gonna post something like "both your guys letters look so familiar . . " but to be honest my "style" is just east coast semi wildstyle which is probaly the most duplicated and used style out there so alot of people are going to have teh same look as me, one of the reasons i post on here is SOO PEOPLE COMING UP CAN SEE HOW EASY THIS STYLE IS and steal a few moves from me if they need to . . . its just a repetiton of a couple different moves/addons on tweaked but still simple letters


ERMMM.... [/b][/quote]
great. so now u have an excuse to be un-original.

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 02:46 PM
haha^

roller4life68
03-10-2007, 02:53 PM
Originally posted by roller4life68@Mar 10 2007, 01:38 PM
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5057/img0966ym4.jpg

ran out of room, so the A kinda sucks. crit?
bump

.:jeka:.
03-10-2007, 02:55 PM
learn to color

dim
03-10-2007, 02:57 PM
try coloring in the 3d
i like your hand styles

-ShAmEE-
03-10-2007, 02:59 PM
Originally posted by alive+Mar 10 2007, 02:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Mar 10 2007, 02:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 10 2007, 01:40 PM

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 10 2007, 12:44 AM

Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 05:29 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-&#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0133-1.jpg
obean
bump bottom of the page.
is sky5 posting under a new name?
hey i aint bitin

I QUOTE BY CERZ
sky5 doesn&#39;t have a particular "signature style" to bite, He&#39;s just a master of the classic to new semi wild. So if someone&#39;s shit looks like sky5&#39;s, I wouldn&#39;t call them on a bite, unless you could match them up letter to letter.

I QUOTE BY SKY
i was gonna post something like "both your guys letters look so familiar . . " but to be honest my "style" is just east coast semi wildstyle which is probaly the most duplicated and used style out there so alot of people are going to have teh same look as me, one of the reasons i post on here is SOO PEOPLE COMING UP CAN SEE HOW EASY THIS STYLE IS and steal a few moves from me if they need to . . . its just a repetiton of a couple different moves/addons on tweaked but still simple letters


ERMMM....
great. so now u have an excuse to be un-original. [/b][/quote]
so u sayin that sky wqas original. and started off the semi wild style.

u dont like do u

roller4life68
03-10-2007, 03:00 PM
Originally posted by .:jeka:.@Mar 10 2007, 02:55 PM
learn to color
yeah i know, the fill is horrible.

scoot
03-10-2007, 03:01 PM
im confused now...

Super Duper VILLAIN
03-10-2007, 03:03 PM
stuff i&#39;ve done

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/2piece.jpg

dim
03-10-2007, 03:12 PM
i like the bottom peice way better then the top i unno i thinks its because there int any of the black shit around it

AnteUp
03-10-2007, 03:22 PM
yea i think that the bottom looks better than the top...im not really likin tha pink 3d...but whatever floats ur boat

Fluffy Bunnies
03-10-2007, 03:32 PM
DAmn Super Duper, the second one&#39;s hoppin&#33; just make the lines more clean and fill it with someting.

Add some arrows

emokid
03-10-2007, 03:34 PM
villain, you need to go simpler and find some letter structure

shammee, i dont think its a bite off sky, but i think most of the letters need more defination

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/9097/dscn6317lh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i am so pissed off right now
stuck doing the same thing
someone who is better than me please advise me on where to go from here

Fluffy Bunnies
03-10-2007, 03:39 PM
haha, emokid, I hear you... once I did my new name Cynic... I can only write it one way... and then I was stuck and I am just playing with extensions... that&#39;s what I would do in your case. add some arrows :lol:

G - Wahl
03-10-2007, 03:41 PM
emokid - i really like that, the P is a lil small though. the only thing that is annoying me is how the bottom of the E doesnt over lap the A, it kind of looks like it just stops there.

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture032.jpg
Crits? yeah its sloppy i know, not really paying attention to that right now

trashhh
03-10-2007, 03:41 PM
Pear maybe try a different style... that one u posted in the progression thread that u said u kind of liked wasnt bad at all.. maybe try it only better

NICCSACC
03-10-2007, 03:45 PM
Originally posted by alive+Mar 10 2007, 02:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Mar 10 2007, 02:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 10 2007, 01:40 PM

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 10 2007, 12:44 AM

Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 05:29 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-&#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 9 2007, 04:22 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0133-1.jpg
obean
bump bottom of the page.
is sky5 posting under a new name?
hey i aint bitin

I QUOTE BY CERZ
sky5 doesn&#39;t have a particular "signature style" to bite, He&#39;s just a master of the classic to new semi wild. So if someone&#39;s shit looks like sky5&#39;s, I wouldn&#39;t call them on a bite, unless you could match them up letter to letter.

I QUOTE BY SKY
i was gonna post something like "both your guys letters look so familiar . . " but to be honest my "style" is just east coast semi wildstyle which is probaly the most duplicated and used style out there so alot of people are going to have teh same look as me, one of the reasons i post on here is SOO PEOPLE COMING UP CAN SEE HOW EASY THIS STYLE IS and steal a few moves from me if they need to . . . its just a repetiton of a couple different moves/addons on tweaked but still simple letters


ERMMM....
great. so now u have an excuse to be un-original. [/b][/quote]
post some original shit

alive
03-10-2007, 03:53 PM
me?

and shammee, sky5 injects his own stlyle wether hes in modest or not. if ur so admatant, give me an example of another writer NOT ON THE FORUM, who uses a style so goddamn similar. and besides, were not talking abt sky5, even if hes un-original, y do u want to be?

NICCSACC
03-10-2007, 04:27 PM
skys shit reminds me of that old TC5 style.
where is that dude anyway

-ShAmEE-
03-10-2007, 05:32 PM
dunno....proberly doin some crazy piece

sevewon
03-10-2007, 05:44 PM
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/bomb2.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/bomb1.jpg

shitty camera phone :o

Sumoe
03-10-2007, 05:47 PM
it&#39;s not just the camera phone thats shitty... :o

learn structure.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-10-2007, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 10 2007, 05:47 PM
it&#39;s not just the camera phone thats shitty... :o

learn structure.
hahah
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/untitled-8.jpg

sevewon
03-10-2007, 06:02 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 10 2007, 05:47 PM
it&#39;s not just the camera phone thats shitty... :o

learn structure.
hahah
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/untitled-8.jpg



haha ya man totally.....?

http://www.reedconsulting.com/chesham/photos/large/1999_sara-poolside.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-10-2007, 06:11 PM
hahaaa.blamin the camera&#33;

TENPERCENTJUICE
03-10-2007, 06:12 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/TacoChico/Picture031.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/TacoChico/Picture030-1.jpg

1st post. critiques please?

ThrowItUP
03-10-2007, 06:32 PM
Originally posted by TENPERCENTJUICE@Mar 10 2007, 06:12 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/TacoChico/Picture030-1.jpg

1st post. critiques please?
i like this one, but get your letters the same size, and less add onss.

Sumoe
03-10-2007, 06:37 PM
there&#39;s no add ons on that, if you&#39;re talkin&#39; bout the forcefield then yeah get rid of that.

Bastardo
03-10-2007, 06:40 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6741/picture056ds4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ThrowItUP
03-10-2007, 06:56 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Mar 10 2007, 06:40 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6741/picture056ds4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
wow, there is a lot of shit going on here. :blink:

Bastardo
03-10-2007, 06:59 PM
Thats eurostyle for you.

-ShAmEE-
03-10-2007, 07:02 PM
very euro ishh.

newbi u dont have to quote it if u reply to the post above i think everyone know what piece ur chattin about.

whahappen?
03-10-2007, 07:17 PM
bastardo that is soooo sick
arko really good start i really like that first one
haha i used to think i was like revoulutionary zomgz dope
old
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3789/picture018cy6.jpg
ozi span
i call it...."retarded spahgetti"

-ShAmEE-
03-10-2007, 07:25 PM
must of takin fuckin ages

ESKE one
03-10-2007, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Mar 10 2007, 06:40 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/6741/picture056ds4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i normally dont like euro graff but this i love :wub: :blink: :lol:

eng
03-10-2007, 08:15 PM
pear ur lettering is insane.... nice colouring on the drops 2.. ur at that stage where youve done all your simples... you can have some fun&#33;&#33;&#33;

inkbits
03-10-2007, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by alive@Mar 11 2007, 06:53 AM
and shammee, sky5 injects his own stlyle wether hes in modest or not. if ur so admatant, give me an example of another writer NOT ON THE FORUM, who uses a style so goddamn similar.
<--- Granted I&#39;m on the forum but my stlyles very similar in many ways and I didn&#39;t learn that here in the past 4 months, it&#39;s a look that was very popular in the mid 90&#39;s. Sky writes in &#39;mildstyle&#39;.



Bastardo looks choice man.

bouncingsoul
03-10-2007, 09:22 PM
Fuck, for a second there Ii got all excited because I saw inkbits had posted...

I&#39;ma draw a Neo nazi-ist on the other side hahaha
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0669.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0670.jpg

BIGel
03-10-2007, 09:32 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/236832949.jpg
angry faces

bouncingsoul
03-10-2007, 09:41 PM
Ahaha, I&#39;m an asshole
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0671.jpg

TENPERCENTJUICE
03-10-2007, 10:12 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/TacoChico/DSCF4224.jpg

definitely not satisfied w/ it as is. any suggestions or should i just trash it?

BIGel
03-10-2007, 10:15 PM
the width of the arrows would probably look better if they were the same as the lettering.

eng
03-10-2007, 10:24 PM
and please... improve that tag :P

bouncingsoul
03-10-2007, 10:25 PM
Jew star, ha&#33;
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0672.jpg

Ekers.Two.Two
03-10-2007, 10:27 PM
and plz start simple

cess!
03-10-2007, 10:27 PM
yo bastard your really aint a toy
are you from euro? or just jockin the style?

alive
03-10-2007, 10:33 PM
Originally posted by inkbits+Mar 10 2007, 08:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (inkbits @ Mar 10 2007, 08:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Mar 11 2007, 06:53 AM
and shammee, sky5 injects his own stlyle wether hes in modest or not. if ur so admatant, give me an example of another writer NOT ON THE FORUM, who uses a style so goddamn similar.
<--- Granted I&#39;m on the forum but my stlyles very similar in many ways and I didn&#39;t learn that here in the past 4 months, it&#39;s a look that was very popular in the mid 90&#39;s. Sky writes in &#39;mildstyle&#39;.



Bastardo looks choice man. [/b][/quote]
woah woah. this is dont understand. i dont have a piece of yours now, so i cant look side by side, but you have a style completely of your own. the dashed lines, no 3d, letters fitting together. sky5 has an entirely different style. so i dont exactly see what ur saying, unless u mean only in the most basic letter forms, ignoring the overall piece and style.

shamee on the other hand, has the same letter base, the same obvious block letter formation, the same black outlining (which i suppose u share). im really dont understand how he isnt constantly being told to fuck off for biting. and yall are backing him up.

uhhh
03-10-2007, 11:01 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Mar 10 2007, 10:25 PM
Jew star, ha&#33;
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0672.jpg
"knews, your a racist fuck&#33;"
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n276/joshumms/MVC-019S-2.jpg
note the swastica on knews&#39; arm :lol:

kroma
03-10-2007, 11:30 PM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4803/kromatrainln9.jpg


borrred

kroma
03-10-2007, 11:33 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/7259/kromatrainni6.jpg
This was the link up top........cuz im an idoit
kro

uhhh
03-10-2007, 11:34 PM
kroma.

yuck.
:(

Sumoe
03-10-2007, 11:40 PM
ewwwww.

BIGel
03-10-2007, 11:48 PM
it needs some work homie.

sor
03-11-2007, 01:09 AM
that scares me

Captain
03-11-2007, 03:19 AM
kroma block the letters out real simple in pencil,no color, and post that up.

i don&#39;t think anyone can save whatver the hell that is.

-ShAmEE-
03-11-2007, 09:01 AM
mate that peice up there need god to make that good. so start prayin.

Bastardo
03-11-2007, 09:25 AM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Mar 10 2007, 10:27 PM
yo bastard your really aint a toy
are you from euro? or just jockin the style?
Yeah im from euro.
england

-ShAmEE-
03-11-2007, 09:27 AM
UK. where u at?

eng
03-11-2007, 10:47 AM
im UK - london

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 10:53 AM
kroma - everyone else said it already

uhhh - i would crit it but its too dark for my computer to see

Knews - i liked your older stuff better, where everything was angled off and connected together..the new stuff is nice too, but i just liked the older style better ;)

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture-2.jpg
Crits? yes its sloppy, but thats the style i like with this type of sketch

trashhh
03-11-2007, 11:07 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40959.jpg

didnt think 3d would look right on this

G wahl i dont like the faces

-ShAmEE-
03-11-2007, 11:12 AM
looks sick. like the conextions. fill.?..ur bombin that piece?

Zep0
03-11-2007, 11:13 AM
Trash the extension on the H is kind of annoying because it so off center from the the rest of the piece...there no balance anywhere else in it. The T extensions to the R seem really heavy compared to everything else, and kind of closed off. Your R and A look too seperated and the A extension into the top of the A bugs me.
Teh style is good just keep workin on it.

trashhh
03-11-2007, 11:18 AM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 11 2007, 10:07 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40959.jpg

didnt think 3d would look right on this

G wahl i dont like the faces
bump bottom of page

Shame u posted up a sketch without a fill a few days ago it doesnt mean im not gonna do a fill in the actual piece u spanner

cheers for the crits zep0 i know thers stuff wrong with it i couldnt htikn of good letters. ive got that thing some people call &#39;writers block&#39;

Sumoe
03-11-2007, 11:20 AM
not feelin&#39; the connection between the "T" and the "R" and the "S" seems a little too fat, looks good though.

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 11:38 AM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 11 2007, 10:12 AM
looks sick. like the conextions. fill.?..ur bombin that piece?
how do you bomb a peice? ;)


trash - the T and R connection isnt workin, the A is poping out to much, and the top of the S is kinda small...but as always your letter structure is really nice..i think it would look good if you did the 3D where the vanishing point is behind the peice and it looks like its flying out if you know what i meen..

eng
03-11-2007, 11:48 AM
trash thats insannnnne

why r u on the toys forummmm????

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 12:10 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Mar 11 2007, 09:53 AM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture-2.jpg
Crits? yes its sloppy, but thats the style i like with this type of sketch
bump

eng
03-11-2007, 12:30 PM
g-wahl cleaner and faster lines? like THROW it up not sketch it up :P

pull the S&#39;s curl bit up as well????

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 12:53 PM
yeah what i was trying to do with the S was make it the sajme thing as the E, just the E and holes and the S has the curl, you know?

South-Pole
03-11-2007, 12:53 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 11 2007, 10:07 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40959.jpg

didnt think 3d would look right on this

G wahl i dont like the faces
trash

i don&#39;t realy like the connection between the T and the R,and i don&#39;t like what you&#39;ve done with the A on top of the S,but the good letter structutre and the style makes the piece look good

-ShAmEE-
03-11-2007, 12:54 PM
Originally posted by trashhh+Mar 11 2007, 10:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (trashhh @ Mar 11 2007, 10:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-trashhh@Mar 11 2007, 10:07 AM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40959.jpg

didnt think 3d would look right on this

G wahl i dont like the faces
bump bottom of page

Shame u posted up a sketch without a fill a few days ago it doesnt mean im not gonna do a fill in the actual piece u spanner

cheers for the crits zep0 i know thers stuff wrong with it i couldnt htikn of good letters. ive got that thing some people call &#39;writers block&#39; [/b][/quote]
tru tru. but u do good fills i can do fills.

Zep0
03-11-2007, 01:30 PM
Yes Shame Trash has great can control...Or graffiti robots? :blink:

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 01:55 PM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o319/AnAtreyu/Picture033.jpg

Fosale!
03-11-2007, 02:24 PM
do simple throws.
seeing more than one of these each page is blech

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 02:46 PM
no one else besides trash is posting the past 2 threads
and i dont see why i should go simplier, the L needs works and i just needa straightin everything out

Fosale!
03-11-2007, 02:49 PM
oh no.
you need alot more than that.

your letters are bad and your shadow is off

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 02:51 PM
what exactly is wrong with them? except for the l cause iknow that sucks
and im not trying to sound like a dick or start beef i really wanna know what you think

Fosale!
03-11-2007, 02:54 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/leos.jpg

no mouse.
in mspaint

used a touchpad.

aside from the S that i eff&#39;d up on

AimoOne
03-11-2007, 03:01 PM
whys everyone hating trashs peice...its okay...the pen strokes / lenghts are incredbily good..although...the T is very funky and so are the other letters...but the A..seems.....kinda blocky..sharp...you know

dim
03-11-2007, 03:01 PM
trash your "h" kinda Looks like a "k"

G - Wahl
03-11-2007, 03:06 PM
fosale - ill stick to my style ;)

trashhh
03-11-2007, 03:21 PM
Originally posted by dim@Mar 11 2007, 02:01 PM
trash your "h" kinda Looks like a "k"
honestly what? are you just making stuff up so you can try to crit me? :huh:

Fixion
03-11-2007, 03:22 PM
http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/1120/emontwooq1.png
Crits?


G - Wahl, that one liner is awesome.
Fosale&#33;, that say leos too? Looks good anyways.

AimoOne
03-11-2007, 03:28 PM
i sense some jelousy towards Trash.. <_<

Playstation 3...13 days...Carnt wait..Pre-orderd :D

There&#39;s some jelousy for all you UK&#39;er&#39;s towards me.. :)

trashhh
03-11-2007, 03:32 PM
aimo im from the UK but i aint a we playstation geek :P:P

AimoOne
03-11-2007, 03:43 PM
:o ... mate..playstations..make...my life..apart from football... :D girls :D ...and drink..fucking...ps3 mate... :lol: :lol: :D

ESKE one
03-11-2007, 03:52 PM
fixion- looks good Nlooks wierd though middle bar should have came down more

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025017.jpg

crits

Fixion
03-11-2007, 04:02 PM
Eske, looks awesome., love that style. But your K has more squiggly stuff then the others. Either add more squigglies on the other letters or reduce the squiggly on the K. :) haha squiggly.

alive
03-11-2007, 04:03 PM
g-walh. if ur so goddamn sure of yourself, then why ask for help at all?

listen to fosale.



in any case, trassh, i dont rele feel it, ill give u a good crit a little later.

eske, fixion, go simpler.

trashhh
03-11-2007, 04:04 PM
Eske dont listen to this young lad, it aint awesome
work on the letters a lot more.. and dont do those squiggles or the bits wher the parts of the letter go back on themselves

eng
03-11-2007, 04:15 PM
i agree with trash ESKE, ditch the squiggles and keep the k flowing not like cut off, maybe try fattening the letters or squishing them 2gether

Fixion, not sure about the characters, the lettering is good in that seems to be made of bars of the same width etc but im not really feeling that sharp pointy style thing

this is like, trying to stay simple... crits please <3 :)
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/6753/zerastyle1se6.jpg

D Snif
03-11-2007, 04:19 PM
Im gonna have to agree with Alive and Trash, Eske go simpler, not fully simple, just simpler because those squigglies are way too overdone, and they don&#39;t look good at all.

sky 5
03-11-2007, 04:19 PM
zera - that aint bad . . i think it would look better if your 3d inside of the letters was shaded (had lighter areas like the bottom 3d) . . . maybe try to round teh top loop part of the R, A seems to blocky plain

Fosale!
03-11-2007, 04:21 PM
Originally posted by G &#045; Wahl@Mar 11 2007, 02:06 PM
fosale - ill stick to my style ;)
yeah, your suckstyle.

sky 5
03-11-2007, 04:24 PM
[QUOTE=trashhh,Mar 11 2007, 10:07 AM] http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40959.jpg


i like this . .is that a different R than you normally do? if so, i like were its going . . . never liked how some of your sketches dont stay on level, like how the H in this one dips down lower than anyother letters but either way you my frined are gettin better all the time

right most bar of your S seems alil too fat compared to the other letters/bars

revolt92
03-11-2007, 04:27 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 11 2007, 02:28 PM
i sense some jelousy towards Trash.. <_<

Playstation 3...13 days...Carnt wait..Pre-orderd :D

There&#39;s some jelousy for all you UK&#39;er&#39;s towards me.. :)
Jealous of you?i&#39;m not the sad fuck who supports liverpool..haha but seriously i am slightly jealous of trash, i think his style is sick.

eske - No squiggles, especially like that, its looks fucked up, sorry but the truth hurts.

zera - errr what sky said.


peace

trashhh
03-11-2007, 04:31 PM
Yea thanks sky i changed the R, and i like it too :D
i added 3d to the sketch and thinned the S and its a lot better... cba takin a flick and posting it.

eng
03-11-2007, 04:32 PM
cheers for the crit sky, while i was sketching with a pencil, i tried out the rounded R but it didnt really flow with the atraight corners of the peice, maybe if i slightly rounded off all the corners on other letters it would flow better - whatever

any more crits appreciated ;)

-ShAmEE-
03-11-2007, 04:42 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0151-1.jpg

uhhh
03-11-2007, 04:44 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Mar 11 2007, 03:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Mar 11 2007, 03:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-G &#045; Wahl@Mar 11 2007, 02:06 PM
fosale - ill stick to my style ;)
yeah, your suckstyle. [/b][/quote]
:lol:
now fosale.
i think when its,
you know...
that time of the month,
you should take a break from the forums.
its not very nice to go off on wittle kids.
no matter how crappy their throws look.
:)

ESKE one
03-11-2007, 05:05 PM
thanks guys for the crits
howcome i only get these many crits wen my shyt sucks :lol: :) :( :angry:

but yea i agree to think i went overboard putting those squigly thing in there my bad

eng
03-11-2007, 05:15 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 11 2007, 04:05 PM
howcome i only get these many crits wen my shyt sucks :lol: :) :( :angry:
because theres more to criticise???

sabe2
03-11-2007, 06:44 PM
Do u know if the guy who used to write Cess on this site still rights it or if theres anyone name Sesc?

amuin-gcs
03-11-2007, 06:50 PM
sky 5 is sick. word.

sank one
03-11-2007, 07:15 PM
trash - you have a sick style, but some some of your letters look out of place. like some random bars are way thicker then others, like the bottom part of the s. also the way some of letters transition looks kinda forced. just my 2 cents..

anywho, heres something i did in class and just colord... ignore the highlites, i did em with a white colord pencil. crits on my letter structure would be much appreciated.

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0464.jpg

whahappen?
03-11-2007, 07:22 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 11 2007, 02:52 PM
fixion- looks good Nlooks wierd though middle bar should have came down more

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025017.jpg

crits
bit fosale on the k&#39;s leg
fag

Bazer
03-11-2007, 07:27 PM
alot of things in graff have been done over and over...if you start from scratch youre never going to get anywhere..ever..you can only try and change things..

Fosale!
03-11-2007, 07:30 PM
Originally posted by sank one@Mar 11 2007, 06:15 PM
trash - you have a sick style, but some some of your letters look out of place. like some random bars are way thicker then others, like the bottom part of the s. also the way some of letters transition looks kinda forced. just my 2 cents..

anywho, heres something i did in class and just colord... ignore the highlites, i did em with a white colord pencil. crits on my letter structure would be much appreciated.

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0464.jpg
try overlapping your letters.
you got your simples down pat after that
try making your pieces bigger and moving the letters closer together
ex.) your S is too far away from the A
but mainly overlap your letters some and i mean
you have a whole piece of paper, use it&#33;

cheers

sank one
03-11-2007, 07:31 PM
^^^woops just saw your post

uhhh
03-11-2007, 08:08 PM
fosale babe.
i drew you up a "kova"
but the a is ridiculously wack,
like,
i think i might just have to Pm you this insterad of posting.
but thatll be later.
i dunno where my camera is.
and im working on my bike,
izzle.
my nizzle.
fo.
rizzle.

alive
03-11-2007, 08:10 PM
im coming backkkkk.

so i havent been sketching al that much, well, i dont have pictures of any of it anyway. so heres one i just took from a few days ago. i guess it shows where im going. ill sketch more and get em up. soo. . . . . yeah. crits and all that are appriciated. rep BSC.

says OH NINE. cuz im in da class of oh nine. quikc pen freestyle colored in.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03086.jpg


i know that I is kind of played. but fuck. im uncreative. its actually just all around not vey good. maybe i can get something better later. the H is terrible and the E drifts upwards. o well.


peace.

whahappen?
03-11-2007, 08:30 PM
that h would make an incredible A

Fosale!
03-11-2007, 08:31 PM
eh
the hole in the H is too big to make it a ill A

god of war
03-11-2007, 09:03 PM
Heres on of my drawings. Im still pretty new to drawing, tell me what u think. And i used Trashes "a" so whatever.
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/1290/dsc00111nh9.jpg
the flash on the camrea messed it up just a bit.

Ekers.Two.Two
03-11-2007, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by god of war@Mar 11 2007, 08:03 PM
Heres on of my drawings. Im still pretty new to drawing, tell me what u think.
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/1290/dsc00111nh9.jpg
the flash on the camrea messed it up just a bit.
SIMPLES , BLOCK LETTERS

Equinox
03-11-2007, 09:14 PM
^^^
Grave its clean, and thats good...
but thats about it, do blockletters, or some other simples...
;)

xJ-onex
03-11-2007, 10:04 PM
alritey, heres sometihin i did in biology, all i had was a pencil and a sharpie, so its got no colour

any thoughts?

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/j-one-1.jpg

Sumoe
03-11-2007, 10:06 PM
not diggin&#39; the character, and is the last letter a "P"? :huh:

xJ-onex
03-11-2007, 10:38 PM
naw, its an "E" but i fucked up the tracing of it with the sharpie :(

BIGel
03-11-2007, 11:03 PM
i like it alive, especially the colr.

AiR
03-11-2007, 11:07 PM
Trying something new:
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/182/418326223_286194e067.jpg

Sumoe
03-11-2007, 11:08 PM
I usually feel your shit, not this one though, eh, you said it&#39;s something new anyways, it ain&#39;t gunna be perfect.

Billburg
03-11-2007, 11:08 PM
the first leg on the R looks shorter than the second

AiR
03-11-2007, 11:23 PM
It&#39;s supposed to be sketchy...

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-11-2007, 11:50 PM
Originally posted by AiR@Mar 11 2007, 10:23 PM
It&#39;s supposed to be sketchy...
is it suppose to look bad? <_<

AteskOne
03-11-2007, 11:53 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol:

AiR
03-12-2007, 12:05 AM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands+Mar 11 2007, 10:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Edward"Sezer"Hands @ Mar 11 2007, 10:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AiR@Mar 11 2007, 10:23 PM
It&#39;s supposed to be sketchy...
is it suppose to look bad? <_< [/b][/quote]
Sure.

Sumoe
03-12-2007, 12:07 AM
what the fuck kinda question is that...hahahahaha. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :o

AteskOne
03-12-2007, 12:22 AM
you know the tbs(or whatever channel it is) commercial that&#39;s like "you find this a little more funny than it is"???? ya sumeo...

d_g
03-12-2007, 12:37 AM
Originally posted by alive@Mar 12 2007, 12:10 PM
im coming backkkkk.

so i havent been sketching al that much, well, i dont have pictures of any of it anyway. so heres one i just took from a few days ago. i guess it shows where im going. ill sketch more and get em up. soo. . . . . yeah. crits and all that are appriciated. rep BSC.

says OH NINE. cuz im in da class of oh nine. quikc pen freestyle colored in.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03086.jpg


i know that I is kind of played. but fuck. im uncreative. its actually just all around not vey good. maybe i can get something better later. the H is terrible and the E drifts upwards. o well.


peace.
Fuck I like the way the orange fill goes with the light blue 3D, I&#39;m so fucking stealing that :P

I like that sketch quite a bit, apart from the blue pen used to sketch. But all up nice shit.

-kraze-
03-12-2007, 12:55 AM
^^^yo that colorway is sick and fresshhh

tompenny
03-12-2007, 01:01 AM
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC03211.jpg

scoot
03-12-2007, 01:15 AM
new throw im working on.. i dont know if i like it yet

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/workinprogress.jpg

could i get some crits on what i should change/keep

or if i should just trash the whole idea

(no pun intended)

Albert Fish
03-12-2007, 01:47 AM
props to aliver
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/chugga.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/isle.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/cheu1.jpg

d_g
03-12-2007, 02:26 AM
Cheu, I love your work. Second and third are the best.

I&#39;ve been drinking. Beck&#39;s for the win.

levans
03-12-2007, 02:30 AM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Mar 12 2007, 12:47 AM
props to aliver
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/chugga.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/isle.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/blackbook/cheu1.jpg
im really feeling the e on the second 1....all nice i love that style....

Skeam
03-12-2007, 05:43 AM
fuck yeh, their lookin good mate, realy good&#33;

Xsjadox
03-12-2007, 08:26 AM
Nice stuff Cheu and Alive

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/184/418769629_5a9cf8ecbf_m.jpg
A bit of a rough sketch I did for someone

F.R.A.T.
03-12-2007, 11:29 AM
yo alberty how did u make your red fill get lighter

sabe2
03-12-2007, 11:34 AM
Good link Fab ya shits fresh ........Just wonering does anyone write Cess I saw a guy with his username as Cess but does he Still write it?

scoot
03-12-2007, 11:58 AM
does anyone see the chillen bite in his work?

AimoOne
03-12-2007, 01:26 PM
i cannot belive how dumb and thick some people here really are...

stop calling bites..

stop asking dumb as fuck questions...

( you know who you are.. )

* cough * frat , sabe and scoot * cough *

id love to be a mod so i could ban all 3 of you... :D

Xjaksaodishaox ... i really liking thos extensions...but...the size , wdiths of the letters are way of...the G n A are good ... then you get a B bigger than the river nile * metaphor * ... then you get a I smaller than frat&#39;s , sabe&#39;s and scoot&#39;s dicks put together * another metaphor * ...but im really liking the I...very niccceee...


very nice euro stuff Alberto VO5..

oh..and Scoot...you know you screamed bite...im screaming bite back at you...that E...is bitten ( even tho its the most bitten / overused / common E in the entire world of throw&#39;s) ...

NewbyTJ
03-12-2007, 01:55 PM
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Cess.jpg
So i dunt have a camera right now so im using vandal squad right now lol srry bout it wat u guys think?

Albert Fish
03-12-2007, 01:59 PM
Originally posted by scoot@Mar 12 2007, 10:58 AM
does anyone see the chillen bite in his work?
yeah chillen has a ch too dang guess i bit him

example?

-ShAmEE-
03-12-2007, 02:22 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 11 2007, 03:42 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0151-1.jpg
bump crits?