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''SCC''
03-14-2007, 10:05 PM
it looks sick but it would look beter if thin little curvy addons were smoother......

Fosale!
03-14-2007, 10:23 PM
no it wouldn't.
then the addons wouldn't match the letter style
of the hitched edges.

T_R_O_N
03-14-2007, 10:30 PM
Bigel im really feeling the style man, nice work. Ive been off of bombing science for a while, really havnt been writing as much, but here goes.....

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6042/picture048il8.th.jpg (http://img293.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture048il8.jpg)

AnteUp
03-14-2007, 10:49 PM
ayo bigel u got a fuckin crunk style!! :D lukkin gud mane

sheist
03-14-2007, 10:58 PM
Originally posted by sheist@Mar 14 2007, 04:16 PM
new throw up

picture is kind of dark but its visible

http://i16.tinypic.com/2rdx5sk.jpg
bump

Heab
03-14-2007, 11:24 PM
i have been writing for like a week and a half now and these are my pics i tag kazhttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/1979/dscn1146nn2.jpghttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/2379/dscn1148nq2.jpghttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/7333/kazpx1.jpg ya just looking for some criticism so i can get better dont go to hard on me though ;)

Chalk
03-15-2007, 12:32 AM
Heab, you need to stay wayyy far away from arrows, and work on some simples.

work on straight lines ( for the love of god. ( it's not your style it's just straight up bad.))

then work on simples

then the coloring.

FuseOne
03-15-2007, 01:05 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 14 2007, 08:00 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3409/dsc0724wh8.jpg
mmm I've liked your sketches since the first one I saw, and I don't get why people don't like the S, I love it hah, but I think you should def drop the pencil, and the year along with oner, you can just do a little hit up right next to it with sume oner 2007, w/e, I'm just not feelin the uneven aspect due to the 2007 and oner :)

OutbuRst
03-15-2007, 01:22 AM
Burst:

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7839/burstthrowiesk0.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=burstthrowiesk0.jpg)
KT initials for a friend:

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6193/burstktthrowiebq0.th.jpg (http://img257.imageshack.us/my.php?image=burstktthrowiebq0.jpg)

sorry for the shitty scans

inkbits
03-15-2007, 04:15 AM
Sume it flows pretty nicely. Looks fine as it is but if you could position that S higher and bring it tighter in it would have a sort of perspective a-symetrical feel to it (if that makes any sence) which would rock.
Even though the S is not comparable directly with angles from any other letter (apart from the upper part of the E) it sits on a slightly different plane (more layed back and downward).
You should have a crack at writting EMUS sometime.

http://www.rpi.edu/~tayloj/EEMUS/emu.jpg

OutbuRst the top one aint too bad for a throwie style but to have that thinness on the R you would need to have it also in other places throughout the word. Would be good to work on a horizontal to get more idea of how it's all balancing out man.

Heab if you've only been writting a week I'd go real basic for now. Probally don't attempt arrows or any pointed type angles on your lettering at all for now just work on getting some solid simple stuff. Try not to go so tall and space your letters out longer so they're not all blending together also.

sheist kinda hard to see the pic on my shitty monitor but from what I can tell it looks like a decent throw.

T_R_O_N try working along the edge of your page or on a horizontal man to get height consistant. It kind of changes style a lot. Maybe use either the M or the A and try and match your other letters to it. Consistancy is important to keep the whole word together with simple letterings.

BIGel your linework is crisp man, really like the wildstyle direction you're going with the colour pic. It breaks some of the rules my hand follows when I flow lines and that's what I like about it. It's a look very fitting to your handstyle. I'd run with it and do more of that shit, unconformed and unique.


This was to be a ruff so I could puzzle the word up but I got lazy and just lined it as is...

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10206156.jpg

Apoc
03-15-2007, 07:33 AM
Originally posted by Heab@Mar 14 2007, 11:24 PM
i have been writing for like a week and a half now and these are my pics i tag kazhttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/1979/dscn1146nn2.jpghttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/2379/dscn1148nq2.jpghttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/7333/kazpx1.jpg ya just looking for some criticism so i can get better dont go to hard on me though ;)
AHAHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAAPAHAH

sorry

Albert Fish
03-15-2007, 08:20 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Mar 14 2007, 03:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Mar 14 2007, 03:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Mar 14 2007, 03:32 PM
They should rename this forum to
Padawan Ways of the book
or something with padawan in it
bc. star wars is che best.
http://www.internationalhero.co.uk/a/anakin1.jpg
bump&#33;
for a great idea&#33;
and because anakin is so darn cute&#33;

but is a fag bc. later he gets tempted by Senator Palpitine(sp)(Sith Lord) with lots of power and being able to learn both the ways of the sith and the ways of the Jedi
and becomes fag vader

but at least he doesnt hook up with his sister [/b][/quote]
haha weirdest kid on these forums

NICCSACC
03-15-2007, 10:21 AM
OO

v __give me body.

NICCSACC
03-15-2007, 10:23 AM
Originally posted by Apoc+Mar 15 2007, 07:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Apoc @ Mar 15 2007, 07:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Heab@Mar 14 2007, 11:24 PM
i have been writing for like a week and a half now and these are my pics i tag kazhttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/1979/dscn1146nn2.jpghttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/2379/dscn1148nq2.jpghttp://img485.imageshack.us/img485/7333/kazpx1.jpg ya just looking for some criticism so i can get better dont go to hard on me though ;)
AHAHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAAPAHAH

sorry [/b][/quote]
learn how to use a sharpie.
do simples... the simplest of all simples.
stop drawing?
sorry so mean :(

NICCSACC
03-15-2007, 10:27 AM
Originally posted by FuseOne+Mar 15 2007, 01:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FuseOne @ Mar 15 2007, 01:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Mar 14 2007, 08:00 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3409/dsc0724wh8.jpg
mmm I&#39;ve liked your sketches since the first one I saw, and I don&#39;t get why people don&#39;t like the S, I love it hah, but I think you should def drop the pencil, and the year along with oner, you can just do a little hit up right next to it with sume oner 2007, w/e, I&#39;m just not feelin the uneven aspect due to the 2007 and oner :) [/b][/quote]
i think sume did it on purpose(sic) since its a strate up pencil thing or whatever it reminds me of like school house rock animation style. kind of shitty on the outside but detailed from a distance. am i exoplaining it right? i dont know it must be a genius thing where only certain people see it. mabye im totally wrong. i dont know.

theprokilla
03-15-2007, 10:30 AM
kaz- start simpler. your lines should be the same width (for the most part) and the letters the same size. on ur black peice the outline isnt even and your letters are filled in w/o an outline so you cant see where one ends and another begins

I spaced the E and the Z to far but yea
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0021.jpg

NICCSACC
03-15-2007, 10:32 AM
Originally posted by inkbits@Mar 15 2007, 04:15 AM
Sume it flows pretty nicely. Looks fine as it is but if you could position that S higher and bring it tighter in it would have a sort of perspective a-symetrical feel to it (if that makes any sence) which would rock.
Even though the S is not comparable directly with angles from any other letter (apart from the upper part of the E) it sits on a slightly different plane (more layed back and downward).
You should have a crack at writting EMUS sometime.

http://www.rpi.edu/~tayloj/EEMUS/emu.jpg

OutbuRst the top one aint too bad for a throwie style but to have that thinness on the R you would need to have it also in other places throughout the word. Would be good to work on a horizontal to get more idea of how it&#39;s all balancing out man.

Heab if you&#39;ve only been writting a week I&#39;d go real basic for now. Probally don&#39;t attempt arrows or any pointed type angles on your lettering at all for now just work on getting some solid simple stuff. Try not to go so tall and space your letters out longer so they&#39;re not all blending together also.

sheist kinda hard to see the pic on my shitty monitor but from what I can tell it looks like a decent throw.

T_R_O_N try working along the edge of your page or on a horizontal man to get height consistant. It kind of changes style a lot. Maybe use either the M or the A and try and match your other letters to it. Consistancy is important to keep the whole word together with simple letterings.

BIGel your linework is crisp man, really like the wildstyle direction you&#39;re going with the colour pic. It breaks some of the rules my hand follows when I flow lines and that&#39;s what I like about it. It&#39;s a look very fitting to your handstyle. I&#39;d run with it and do more of that shit, unconformed and unique.


This was to be a ruff so I could puzzle the word up but I got lazy and just lined it as is...

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10206156.jpg
this is fuckin sweet.
please do more and post them.

South-Pole
03-15-2007, 11:49 AM
the prokilla:its nice but work on the E and N


some characters i did..full page not finished yet

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/perso.jpg

crits O.o?

5yn
03-15-2007, 11:57 AM
been working on a throwie for months and no one is giving crits at all can atleast some one give me crits on this i dont care if its negitive cause i would like another view besides my 14 year old brothers haha
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture4-1.jpg

South-Pole
03-15-2007, 11:59 AM
well to get crits you need to give some before asking them

that throwie looks aight

don&#39;t make the top right edge of the t pointy and try pulling down the middle of the m but the e is pretty decent though

emokid
03-15-2007, 12:31 PM
inkbits that is fucking ace

like the five clustered together best southpole

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/456/dscn6321rr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

love or hate on a slightly pointier style?

NICCSACC
03-15-2007, 12:38 PM
Originally posted by 5yn@Mar 15 2007, 11:57 AM
been working on a throwie for months and no one is giving crits at all can atleast some one give me crits on this i dont care if its negitive cause i would like another view besides my 14 year old brothers haha
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/5yn/Picture4-1.jpg
pretty standard fare for graffiti. im sure people will shit on that drip thing at the end of it.

melly1
03-15-2007, 12:39 PM
Originally posted by emokid@Mar 15 2007, 12:31 PM
inkbits that is fucking ace

like the five clustered together best southpole

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/456/dscn6321rr9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

love or hate on a slightly pointier style?
I REALLY like that emokid, good shit. Im lovin the 3-D too but i suck at it (And throwies, bombs, and everything alltogether) but how did you get it to flow so nicely, what did you use etc.

emokid
03-15-2007, 12:42 PM
ha i have been writing almost exactly the same piece for nearly 3 months now so i am well practiced, this ones the same only with pointy bits.
and i used a blue biro, clicky top, which reads "Associated Board of The Royal Schools of Music", which i found on the floor :)

AimoOne
03-15-2007, 12:42 PM
ugh..woo...err..Sume...Inky..Wowy..

Pear..nice simples as usaily..ugh..id love to see a funky&#39;ER simple from you tho..yummy..yummy :wub:

Melly..id reccommend you starting SIMPLE...yuh..Simple&#39;s...they help..................
just take a look at my old account..Ras...look thru my first posts...and look how shit my peices were..and then look at the most recent sketches..from jan to feb..thats how simples help mate :D

ima have a peice up soonier..lolier

melly1
03-15-2007, 12:46 PM
thanks aimo, haha, yreah im workin on blocks right now, and I HATTTTTTTTTTTTTTE them lol but i want to be good so i gotta :(

And just for the hell of saying it, this is my second time on BS and the ocmmunity is a hell of alot better, so hell of a good job everyone now i dont jsut get "fuck you toy go quit you faggot, you suck hahahahahahahah woot rofl pwneed kthxbai +1&#33;&#33;"

sky 5
03-15-2007, 12:55 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 15 2007, 10:32 AM

http://www.rpi.edu/~tayloj/EEMUS/emu.jpg


http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10206156.jpg
this is fuckin sweet.
please do more and post them. [/quote]
nice inkbits . . . yo ive got time now so lets me you and niccsacc talk about that team battle when you get a chance . .

my boy just came over with an old surfboard i can paint up&#33; any tips??

Thor_tfm
03-15-2007, 12:58 PM
New name first few sketches with it changing my style to something simpler as well.
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5568/img0011du0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/9909/img0012rs0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/959/img0013wk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/9500/img0014gu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits and comments appreciated

Copieright
03-15-2007, 01:00 PM
clean up your lines and it will look al lot better&#33;

melly1
03-15-2007, 01:01 PM
I like the 1st 3-D style and the 1st throwie, i dont like the thrid one for some reason, but good job

AimoOne
03-15-2007, 01:10 PM
Melly ... no probs mate

oohcie..Thor..i love the hands..and the Ts are amazing..but the rest..juts aint doing it for me..

so..heres a simpler form of the style i been working on..i done simples to get letters down..now why not do simples to get a simple basic style down.. :lol:

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1111.jpg

crittie doodles.. :D

Mood..tired / bored / head ache..

hense the sloppy lines.. :(

melly1
03-15-2007, 01:14 PM
IDOT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; HAHAHAHA You play socom?? I usded to if thats what IDOT is refering to. As for the hand, love it, but i dont like the extensions of the a forming other letters, just me though. First "M"http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/9810/dsc05600ht6.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-15-2007, 01:15 PM
umm the A and the M connection thing it aint workin mate. try agen. by puttin the I infont of the connection. it will work.

sky 5
03-15-2007, 01:20 PM
yeah i agrre, the long extension from your A to M aint the best, maybe try having a long extension like that go behind the I so the I will kind of chop it in half so its not such a long plain bar going thru the whole piece . . drop shadow looks a lil off on the bottom . .

good stuff THOR, i like how you are trying different styles of simples, keep cranking em out man

BIGel
03-15-2007, 01:35 PM
Originally posted by inkbits@Mar 15 2007, 04:15 AM
http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10206156.jpg
thanks for the suggestions ink, your style is looking good, love to see a fill on this.

AimoOne
03-15-2007, 01:56 PM
Melly..you dont make sence...ugh..the M is simple..basically..

erm..seriously tired..im only doing this just to get this simple part right..i feel ill..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1111111.jpg

if you like in UK you will know about the Walkear&#39;s on the karak..if not..done ask.. ;)

crits ;)

Seriously tired..im out to sleep.. :)

ps.any tips for the O..it looks lonely..Poopie Bants Baze said..baha :lol: ;)

trashhh
03-15-2007, 02:03 PM
im likin it aimo.. i really think you shouldnt do a drop shadow and do 3d (referring to previous sketch) cos i dont think shadow ever looks very good on pieces.. but im realy feelin the AIM on the outline

AimoOne
03-15-2007, 02:05 PM
shoudl i jus drop the O .. ? .. umm.. i love my O..its like..my very own Cheerio :rolleyes: :(

AnteUp
03-15-2007, 02:11 PM
YES RAS PUT THE DOT ON&#33;&#33;&#33; yay :lol: <_< anyways...im likin ur new idea on the dot...the karaks purrrty tight too...o what do you use to make ur letters 3 d? no what im sayin? like where it lukks like pencil shading...

Sumoe
03-15-2007, 02:13 PM
Originally posted by inkbits@Mar 15 2007, 04:15 AM
Sume it flows pretty nicely. Looks fine as it is but if you could position that S higher and bring it tighter in it would have a sort of perspective a-symetrical feel to it (if that makes any sence) which would rock.
Even though the S is not comparable directly with angles from any other letter (apart from the upper part of the E) it sits on a slightly different plane (more layed back and downward).
You should have a crack at writting EMUS sometime.

http://www.rpi.edu/~tayloj/EEMUS/emu.jpg

thats a dope idea, I seriously am considering writing Emus now...haha it rolls off the tongue...but I kinda get what you sayin&#39; bout my "S" thats why I posted it in pencil so I could change it up after people critted it...anyways you&#39;re shit is fiyah ink...especially the "Z".

Bazer
03-15-2007, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 15 2007, 01:56 PM
Melly..you dont make sence...ugh..the M is simple..basically..

erm..seriously tired..im only doing this just to get this simple part right..i feel ill..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1111111.jpg

if you like in UK you will know about the Walkear&#39;s on the karak..if not..done ask.. ;)

crits ;)

Seriously tired..im out to sleep.. :)

ps.any tips for the O..it looks lonely..Poopie Bants Baze said..baha :lol: ;)
i jsut realized my name on msn said poopie pants dude. :lol: thats why i didn&#39;t know why you said poopie when you first imed me. oh and yeah, do the d thing i told you with the o ;)

roller4life68
03-15-2007, 02:18 PM
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/6295/img0986ab4.jpg

crit?

ThickGravy
03-15-2007, 02:20 PM
Looks pretty nice for a simple.. now try adding something to it..

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 02:50 PM
Finished my rough sketch for teh team battle yo&#33;
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010489.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010488.jpg
and a couple karaks i did in english and history.
i know they suck, im not a big karak man
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010490.jpg

AimoOne
03-15-2007, 02:57 PM
i hate to say it Fosale.. :( .. but the H looks like a direct bite from Cheu ( Alberto Fisho ) :( .. i may be wrong

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 02:59 PM
i know what you mean but if you look at my other sketches from weeks ago i had it
like my sketches from bfre i got my phone txt taken away
you can tell which pics they are bc. theyre not as clear and they have a black border around them

Sumoe
03-15-2007, 03:01 PM
ahh now we gunna lose cause a you fosale...... <_< :angry:







hahahah j.k. love your style, karaks remind me of freakshow (just the style not callin&#39; a bite), but they look good...yea the one I posted was gunna be for the battle but we cant color it. <_< so I might do a EMUS sketch instead.

melly1
03-15-2007, 03:07 PM
yeah aimo its suposed to be cause i jhust started and evenryone said start of with block letters so i did

C-money fresh!
03-15-2007, 03:07 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC+Mar 15 2007, 10:32 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Mar 15 2007, 10:32 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-inkbits@Mar 15 2007, 04:15 AM
Sume it flows pretty nicely. Looks fine as it is but if you could position that S higher and bring it tighter in it would have a sort of perspective a-symetrical feel to it (if that makes any sence) which would rock.
Even though the S is not comparable directly with angles from any other letter (apart from the upper part of the E) it sits on a slightly different plane (more layed back and downward).
You should have a crack at writting EMUS sometime.

http://www.rpi.edu/~tayloj/EEMUS/emu.jpg

OutbuRst the top one aint too bad for a throwie style but to have that thinness on the R you would need to have it also in other places throughout the word. Would be good to work on a horizontal to get more idea of how it&#39;s all balancing out man.

Heab if you&#39;ve only been writting a week I&#39;d go real basic for now. Probally don&#39;t attempt arrows or any pointed type angles on your lettering at all for now just work on getting some solid simple stuff. Try not to go so tall and space your letters out longer so they&#39;re not all blending together also.

sheist kinda hard to see the pic on my shitty monitor but from what I can tell it looks like a decent throw.

T_R_O_N try working along the edge of your page or on a horizontal man to get height consistant. It kind of changes style a lot. Maybe use either the M or the A and try and match your other letters to it. Consistancy is important to keep the whole word together with simple letterings.

BIGel your linework is crisp man, really like the wildstyle direction you&#39;re going with the colour pic. It breaks some of the rules my hand follows when I flow lines and that&#39;s what I like about it. It&#39;s a look very fitting to your handstyle. I&#39;d run with it and do more of that shit, unconformed and unique.


This was to be a ruff so I could puzzle the word up but I got lazy and just lined it as is...

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10206156.jpg
this is fuckin sweet.
please do more and post them. [/b][/quote]
i really do love your style. its perfect

while heab you suck and you semm like an adult

NICCSACC
03-15-2007, 03:16 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture54-2.jpg

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 03:18 PM
ive seen that like 3 times

and i love it more each time i see it

that E is so hot

molotow_15
03-15-2007, 03:36 PM
http://file019a.bebo.com/1/large/2007/03/15/19/2387735903a3851797624b878763658l.jpg

super quick kinda handstyle kinda thing

Sykal
03-15-2007, 04:10 PM
http://i174.photobucket.com/albums/w88/Sykal/HPIM0279.jpg

last shit of me i dont post much here so no need advice

whahappen?
03-15-2007, 04:10 PM
everything on this page looking good esp. that eohver fosale
sloppy throw trying to go fast
http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/3533/picture020yr6.jpg
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/6444/picture021wk3.jpg

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 04:13 PM
rofl whahappen, it says cover

and keep trying to fo ur throw fast
you dont have to go mega fast, just quicker than a sketch speed
dont do the eye in the R just do a dot, spiral, line, dash, etc

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 04:14 PM
and sorry for the double post, dont feel like editing...

zeks, you gotta fix that K brah, its hurtin

whahappen?
03-15-2007, 04:19 PM
its an r
yea i know i was just trying to make it flow and thats the best i could come up with
o yea i forgot about swirls thats what i was gonna do but forgot and didnt feel like remebering

Bastardo
03-15-2007, 04:26 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5941/picture060kx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-ShAmEE-
03-15-2007, 04:27 PM
haha funni faces. wohhhohwhoh. ohh yeh.

color??.

Sumoe
03-15-2007, 04:27 PM
:wub:

whahappen?
03-15-2007, 04:28 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Mar 15 2007, 04:26 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5941/picture060kx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thanks for completely showing me up
feggit....
:wub:
bump sloppy throw trying to go fast
http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/3533/picture020yr6.jpg
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/6444/picture021wk3.jpg

Cursrone
03-15-2007, 04:33 PM
whahappen?: for a fast throw i think it looks pretty good, nice flow. perhaps you could widen it a little bit so the letters aren&#39;t quite so squished.

molotow: looks sick for being just a simple hold-two-markers-at-the-same-time-and-write. maybe you could develop that. use a magnum or something for the main line, and a fine tip for the 3d line. the clearness works.

niccsacc: love the style. im not to fond of the e but the styl, especially the ty, is amazing. color it.

new blackbook, better paper
don&#39;t like the top C so much
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Cursr/BlueWhite_Clear.jpg

bouncingsoul
03-15-2007, 05:00 PM
Haven&#39;t posted on here in a while... My letters have been sucking mad ass lately. So I decided to try some new ones... Voila&#33;

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0674.jpg

namesake
03-15-2007, 05:05 PM
not really feeling that O on VOILA..but im loving that S bro


crits

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9067/profit002fw6.jpg

D Snif
03-15-2007, 05:26 PM
Bastardo- thats fuckin beautiful, good job.

namesake- that really ill, nice shading, nice extensions, but on the bottom of the T, it&#39;s really plain, it would look better with some extensions of those too

heres a shitty thing i did today on my bookbag while bored in class.. shitty flick too
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5892/picture005ew3.jpg

theprokilla
03-15-2007, 05:39 PM
Originally posted by theprokilla@Mar 15 2007, 10:30 AM

I spaced the E and the Z to far but yea
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0021.jpg
bump :unsure:

React!
03-15-2007, 05:51 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Mar 15 2007, 04:26 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5941/picture060kx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i hate u for bein so dope damn u gotta do me up some day&#33;
INK :)

garbage down tha way
03-15-2007, 05:53 PM
Prokilla-I love that style, just closen the letters like you said.

namesake-lot of shit happening there but it looks real good.

bsoul-Keep working with that style, it looks nice. (top one more than the bottom one)

Bastardo- looks good like usual, but color would be awesome.

Cursr-I don&#39;t like the R&#39;s on the bottom at all but the rest of it looks good keep it up.

I was trying this new style, probably shouldn&#39;t. Crits?

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/nearpiece.jpg

AimoOne
03-15-2007, 05:59 PM
^

1. i dont think you shouldnt try a style..

2. cuz you dont have letters down

3. to get letters down try simples..

4. i reccomend a name change..cuz there is a Near on here who burns you..no offence

garbage down tha way
03-15-2007, 06:18 PM
Yeah I know I&#39;ve been doing simples forever and i started to get pissed because nothing was happening so i tried something new.

damn i wish i would have known that, i bombed "near" all over my town. oh well.

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 06:20 PM
its worth a namechange, them bombs probably sucked

uhhh
03-15-2007, 06:21 PM
how long do you consider "forever?"

Thor_tfm
03-15-2007, 06:24 PM
someone said tydy it up so heres some coloured ish... i rushed it, its shit no excuses.
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9391/img0015zy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NewbyTJ
03-15-2007, 06:43 PM
Thor I think u need to do block letters ur H and O are on the right track but the T and R arn&#39;t stay up Simples man Simples........My Newest simples Spectr is back
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture334.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture335.jpg
All crits appreciated dunt mind the shitty 3d on the first one i jsut got really bored while waiting for my comp to bout up and i knw the letters crooked so plz dunt comment on that thanx

garbage down tha way
03-15-2007, 06:46 PM
ive been doing simples for a couple of months and i have one bomb which was good enough for me to put on walls but i cant use it anymore. i guess its back to the books.

Cursrone
03-15-2007, 06:49 PM
Originally posted by Cursrone@Mar 15 2007, 04:33 PM
whahappen?: for a fast throw i think it looks pretty good, nice flow. perhaps you could widen it a little bit so the letters aren&#39;t quite so squished.

molotow: looks sick for being just a simple hold-two-markers-at-the-same-time-and-write. maybe you could develop that. use a magnum or something for the main line, and a fine tip for the 3d line. the clearness works.

niccsacc: love the style. im not to fond of the e but the styl, especially the ty, is amazing. color it.

new blackbook, better paper
don&#39;t like the top C so much
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Cursr/BlueWhite_Clear.jpg
bump for crits

plus I colored and added to the top one:

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Cursr/RedYellowClear_Grey3D.jpg

rayseone
03-15-2007, 07:24 PM
thor dont listen to newby, you dont need to go back completely to simples,i think its simple enoguh to look ok, try to keep your letters the same width though, the right leg of the r is thinner than everyhting else and it just looks awkward,

and cursr dont connect the top of the c to the u then i think i will look a bit better

NICCSACC
03-15-2007, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by Cursrone+Mar 15 2007, 06:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Cursrone @ Mar 15 2007, 06:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Cursrone@Mar 15 2007, 04:33 PM
whahappen?: for a fast throw i think it looks pretty good, nice flow. perhaps you could widen it a little bit so the letters aren&#39;t quite so squished.

molotow: looks sick for being just a simple hold-two-markers-at-the-same-time-and-write. maybe you could develop that. use a magnum or something for the main line, and a fine tip for the 3d line. the clearness works.

niccsacc: love the style. im not to fond of the e but the styl, especially the ty, is amazing. color it.

new blackbook, better paper
don&#39;t like the top C so much
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Cursr/BlueWhite_Clear.jpg
bump for crits

plus I colored and added to the top one:

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o75/VagrantGraf/Cursr/RedYellowClear_Grey3D.jpg [/b][/quote]
thicken the inside lines and shit.
if youre gonna use a crayon or pencil to fill it in make sure its faded nice or something. like the 2nd cursor in blue has a cool blue inside of it but the letters are below average... even for simples.

All Hail:DEAD-EYES
03-15-2007, 07:38 PM
on the last page-

namesake-really tight stuff there man.

boungingsoul-those letters are nice, keep it up.

thor-diggin the 3D on that sketch, the letters are nice too.

sorry if these are a bit big.
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/scan0011.jpg
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/scan0002.jpg
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/AlanFuller/scan0004.jpg

NewbyTJ
03-15-2007, 07:43 PM
Wdf :S

roller4life68
03-15-2007, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by roller4life68@Mar 15 2007, 02:18 PM
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/6295/img0986ab4.jpg

crit?
ehhh bump.

theprokilla
03-15-2007, 08:11 PM
thor- loven the style

dead- that face or w/e it is should just be burned

cursr- the u kinda looks like an a

i tryed to clean up a few stray marks but u can still see them
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0044.jpg

cess!
03-15-2007, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by Bastardo@Mar 15 2007, 04:26 PM
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5941/picture060kx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Yoo fuck you your makin us all look bad :lol:
prokilla your definatly on the right track, but those colors arnt really workin..

these say sanative, tell me if you like em,kinda rough drafts
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/HPIM1557.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/HPIM1558.jpg

mind.or.matter
03-15-2007, 08:44 PM
cursr: Im feelin those, nice and simple, good colours

dead eyes: I like the first red throw, i think the top part of the E is too fat,

knab: all you need to work on his your handstyle

theprokilla: go simpler, and the 3d at the bottom parts of the N are comin from nowhere... Also maybe use a ruler for straighter 3d

cess: yea, those "rough drafts" are lookin pretty good

Zep0
03-15-2007, 08:44 PM
Cess not my style man, but I guess it looks good...Abstract concept...looks like too much bullshit to me.

Prokilla your stuff looks too jaged and uneven for me...I have to say the word "Simples" you have the basic idea just dont bed and contort your letters so much and also dont do the add-ons at the end.

Knab fairly goos simple now try overlapping or 3-d one or the other, stay simple. The k is a little messed up your using bars and I see what you did...Just shorten that bar so its not like that or tilt that bar a little more.

Dead eyes...Simples...and that last piece man? Either stop trying to be abstract or stop doing drugs.

Some stuff...Im getting a 7 megapixel camera soon, so no more fucked up pictures. This is the best I can offer for now, Crits?http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philo1.jpg

Sumoe
03-15-2007, 08:51 PM
those arrows epitomize gayness...letters aren&#39;t too bad though.

theprokilla
03-15-2007, 08:52 PM
Originally posted by mind.or.matter@Mar 15 2007, 08:44 PM
the 3d at the bottom parts of the N are comin from nowhere...
??

mind.or.matter
03-15-2007, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by theprokilla+Mar 15 2007, 08:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (theprokilla @ Mar 15 2007, 08:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-mind.or.matter@Mar 15 2007, 08:44 PM
the 3d at the bottom parts of the N are comin from nowhere...
?? [/b][/quote]
like this, and also the 3d of the top of the E is cut off by the N,
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n10/mind_or_matter/SANY0044.jpg
just work on simple letter structure before you try to learn 3d

Zep0
03-15-2007, 08:59 PM
I thought some homo-accesories could spice up my peace. :lol: No I understand I was skeptical about em too...Thanks.

Dots are homo too, but what the hell crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0199.jpg

BIGel
03-15-2007, 09:02 PM
last few pages have been so so..

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/238108409.jpg
recon venom. i thought the snake tongue was funny but oh well..
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/238108410.jpg
wosers hard copy, misspelled.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/238108135.jpg
new style of handies.

sank one
03-15-2007, 09:15 PM
dam that shits hot el, would love to see a pic of your throwie painted. and those handies are hot, how long did it take you to get that handstyle down?

im hopin ill have some time to finish a sketch ive been workin on and ink it later. stupid ass lit speech is takin all my time :angry:

NewbyTJ
03-15-2007, 09:21 PM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Mar 15 2007, 06:43 PM
Thor I think u need to do block letters ur H and O are on the right track but the T and R arn&#39;t stay up Simples man Simples........My Newest simples Spectr is back
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture334.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture335.jpg
All crits appreciated dunt mind the shitty 3d on the first one i jsut got really bored while waiting for my comp to bout up and i knw the letters crooked so plz dunt comment on that thanx
No one crited this for past 2 pages so bump for crits

theprokilla
03-15-2007, 09:24 PM
sry i keep posting but im realy confused on what u mean... and y u added that line
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/3derror.jpg

AteskOne
03-15-2007, 10:05 PM
just to fuck with your head...which wouldnt be as easy if you werent a retard.

mog
03-15-2007, 10:05 PM
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/148/422684479_69d9867d4e.jpg

first post, crits please

sick throw ups BIGel i like the yellow on black

i also like that top one for SPEC

BoringBors
03-15-2007, 10:10 PM
mog your shit is sick very clean you have alot of style i like the N
props

MAERone
03-15-2007, 10:13 PM
yeah spec stick with the first one
try add to that it has good structure

but work on the 3d a little bit it needs some work

MAERone
03-15-2007, 10:18 PM
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/5571/photo03ei7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/6181/photogd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sorry for the double post
crits?

first colored pieces i decided to do in a while

Albert Fish
03-15-2007, 10:25 PM
you really dont wanna write mono ^^^ not bad though.

i think it was aimo that called a bite on fosale, i dont care. we have similar styles and the only similarity is the angle in the h. doesnt bother me though its not too original anyway.

sawyerFL
03-15-2007, 10:25 PM
SPECTR where you from?

roller4life68
03-15-2007, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 15 2007, 08:44 PM
Knab fairly goos simple now try overlapping or 3-d one or the other, stay simple. The k is a little messed up your using bars and I see what you did...Just shorten that bar so its not like that or tilt that bar a little more.
not sure i get what you mean by the K. i&#39;ll work on it though, thanks.

BIGel
03-15-2007, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 15 2007, 02:50 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010489.jpg

come on now son&#33; thats lifted straight outta mister cheu&#39;s book.

ILuvHoodRats
03-15-2007, 11:03 PM
I did this tonight , i really couldnt sleep and it was the last page of my blackbookie ... kinda emo but i like it

Sumoe
03-15-2007, 11:06 PM
I don&#39;t. :rolleyes:

Albert Fish
03-15-2007, 11:07 PM
big elllll its forgivable. i did 2 sketches for you then my scanner decided to be a faggot. ill try to have em up tomorrow though negro.

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 11:08 PM
yo MAER you gotta change your crew name
AIDS in Nj will fuck your shit up the ass.
http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l202/kenny_035/IMG_3080.jpg
http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/417/alots2vf3.jpg
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4494/alotsoi8.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c314/dualphoto/Highways/DSC_0903.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c314/dualphoto/Highways/DSC_0940.jpg
don&#39;t feel like finding more.
you get the point, i hope.

Fosale!
03-15-2007, 11:10 PM
Originally posted by Albert Fish@Mar 15 2007, 11:07 PM
big elllll its forgivable. i did 2 sketches for you then my scanner decided to be a faggot. ill try to have em up tomorrow though negro.
many of my sketches have that H on it.
you can look through sketches done weeks and weeks ago and i have the H on it.
and its not like its original anyhow.
and even if it was Cheu is my lifepartener, so we share many a thing.

SKriBL*666
03-15-2007, 11:15 PM
Im still tryin to get a style workin or sumthin.
i got this unfinished one here.

http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k202/AerosolSkam916/Luisdone.jpg

whynot?
03-15-2007, 11:20 PM
maer im feeling those peices..clean




board in history class.. hears the outcome
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/49/rotatedzb1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Sumoe
03-15-2007, 11:22 PM
Originally posted by SKriBL*666@Mar 15 2007, 11:15 PM
Im still tryin to get a style workin or sumthin.
well...it ain&#39;t workin&#39; simples for you buddy.

SKriBL*666
03-15-2007, 11:24 PM
Ya i no. I have been goin simple forever, just tryin to try some stuff.

Sumoe
03-15-2007, 11:28 PM
you obviously haven&#39;t been goin&#39; simple because you have no structure...or you&#39;re stupid and have been doing them "forever" and just don&#39;t understand letters.

and why is your name "SKriBL*666" your definitely not in 666... :lol:

SKriBL*666
03-15-2007, 11:33 PM
wasnt met to be "666"

moltov
03-15-2007, 11:41 PM
my boy amok

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00485.jpg

whynot?
03-15-2007, 11:42 PM
ya dog 666 is a sick ass crew on hear... im suprized they havnt hated on u yet for the name

WizDaWoo
03-15-2007, 11:48 PM
bxdfbfgbf

ILuvHoodRats
03-15-2007, 11:50 PM
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6483/dsc03029pi1.th.jpg (http://img255.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03029pi1.jpg)

some kind of a throwup
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6682/dsc03030nw6.th.jpg (http://img255.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03030nw6.jpg)

sank one
03-16-2007, 01:23 AM
wiz - i was actually laughing when i saw those lol. sry but thats some of the toyest shit i&#39;ve ever seen. lay off the arrows and start by drawing the letters on your keyboard.

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0481.jpg

meh.. should i ink it? o and i just felt like adding a circle :P.

also dont mind the crease...

SKriBL*666
03-16-2007, 01:26 AM
Originally posted by whynot?@Mar 15 2007, 11:42 PM
ya dog 666 is a sick ass crew on hear... im suprized they havnt hated on u yet for the name
Oh i didnt know it was a krew :rolleyes:

emel
03-16-2007, 01:33 AM
Originally posted by mog@Mar 15 2007, 10:05 PM
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/148/422684479_69d9867d4e.jpg

first post, crits please

sick throw ups BIGel i like the yellow on black

i also like that top one for SPEC

......
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/763/scan0006gn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
....

<_<

levans
03-16-2007, 01:51 AM
AHHAHA biter

NICCSACC
03-16-2007, 02:14 AM
ooofff

South-Pole
03-16-2007, 06:19 AM
lol someones been caught biting :D

i guess?


some haste piece i&#39;v done in class,been done realy quick

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/haste.jpg

but actually i made this for a battle against this mackie kid lol.the word we need to write is haste

lool..mackie im waiting for you

alive
03-16-2007, 08:34 AM
mog is feeling awfully dumb. right about now.


mad nice simple southpole.

Albert Fish
03-16-2007, 08:44 AM
yeah southpole thats the best ive seen from you keep it up

and sape, that s looks like a b ha. the p is decent the a is nice you gotta fix the s and the e a little bit make them a little simpler

chase one
03-16-2007, 09:03 AM
says phreak. I dont write this but i tried it. crits please

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3798/chaseone006wd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bazer
03-16-2007, 09:09 AM
umm.......................theyre just to squiggely and.....you letters structure needs some work...i know some jackass might tell you to do simples but dont listen. if you wanna do more complex shit just get good...

Slushi
03-16-2007, 09:45 AM
Chase_one: Go simple.

chase one
03-16-2007, 09:52 AM
ya i know but neway that was a year ago i just spotted it on my pc said i&#39;d c what people thought

Bazer
03-16-2007, 10:14 AM
so then you must be better than me now cuz i havent been writing for more than a year. post some of your recent work.

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 10:19 AM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/6530/dsc0727qi5.jpg

chase one
03-16-2007, 10:32 AM
real nice i would think ur in the wrong forum

chase one
03-16-2007, 10:34 AM
so then you must be better than me now cuz i havent been writing for more than a year. post some of your recent work.

ya well i stopped for a couple of months but im writing again. ill do something new n post it up so

HuntingLOLs
03-16-2007, 10:37 AM
Originally posted by BIGel@Mar 15 2007, 09:02 PM
last few pages have been so so..
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/238108135.jpg
new style of handies.
who is writing that handstyle as well?

moltov
03-16-2007, 11:00 AM
a messy quicky I did
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00484.jpg

AteskOne
03-16-2007, 11:05 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 10:19 AM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/6530/dsc0727qi5.jpg
loving it sume...that drop shadow underneath the 3d really makes it pop out at you. and that fill is really amazing. only i think it might look a little better if you had added more darker orange on the edges. it&#39;s just too hidden in my opinion. also your highlights could be a tad bit more noticiable.

Cursrone
03-16-2007, 11:16 AM
South-Pole: Even if mackie is a toy with a huge ego, I would go through and make a final sketch of that, just to make it clean and everything. If mackie picked the word he could post some work of some actual writer named Haste in his town that he knows and claim it as his own. Paranoid? maybe, but hey, toys do anything to make themselves seem a least bit skillfull.

Sumoe: I think you&#39;re my idol. I love your style and your use color is sick. Do you get up much or are you sticking to blackbook right now? If you have any painted flicks I would love to see them.

Molotov: Don&#39;t bother with trainpaper until you are actually planning on painting a train, that way the train is a good reference. The image just distracts from the piece.
I think some of the letters are really sloppy (W) , the O looks like an S, The E looks like flyguts, and theres that big black spot between the S and E. Work on the fill a little bit - try and keep it level. maybe add some highlights

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 11:16 AM
thank ya, it&#39;s not quite done yet, so I might add some more darker orange, actually it&#39;s just the same orange but I go on top of black sharpie and then do the "darker" orange, but yea...and I dunno what to do with the background.

edit: nevermind, just realized it was a darker orasnge... :lol:

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 11:18 AM
Originally posted by moltov@Mar 16 2007, 11:00 AM
a messy quicky I did
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00484.jpg
bump , where did you get these papers?

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 11:20 AM
Originally posted by ILuvHoodRats@Mar 15 2007, 11:50 PM
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6483/dsc03029pi1.th.jpg (http://img255.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03029pi1.jpg)

some kind of a throwup
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6682/dsc03030nw6.th.jpg (http://img255.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03030nw6.jpg)
bump number2 , crits??

AteskOne
03-16-2007, 11:45 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 11:16 AM
thank ya, it&#39;s not quite done yet, so I might add some more darker orange, actually it&#39;s just the same orange but I go on top of black sharpie and then do the "darker" orange, but yea...and I dunno what to do with the background.

edit: nevermind, just realized it was a darker orasnge... :lol:
lol i was sitting there reading that thinking wow that&#39;s a really good idea...then i was thinking how does that work cause the orange shouldnt cover the black even if it is a deco(which i thought it to be prismas up until this point) because the orange is pretty opaque. well mystery solved i guess :rolleyes: .

NICCSACC
03-16-2007, 11:50 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 10:19 AM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/6530/dsc0727qi5.jpg
this type shit makes me realize graffiti aint no game.
fuck

molotow_15
03-16-2007, 11:52 AM
Originally posted by theprokilla+Mar 15 2007, 11:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (theprokilla @ Mar 15 2007, 11:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-theprokilla@Mar 15 2007, 10:30 AM

I spaced the E and the Z to far but yea
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h240/theprokilla/SANY0021.jpg
bump :unsure: [/b][/quote]
pilots are the shizzle :wub:

South-Pole
03-16-2007, 11:52 AM
Originally posted by Cursrone@Mar 16 2007, 05:16 PM
South-Pole: Even if mackie is a toy with a huge ego, I would go through and make a final sketch of that, just to make it clean and everything. If mackie picked the word he could post some work of some actual writer named Haste in his town that he knows and claim it as his own. Paranoid? maybe, but hey, toys do anything to make themselves seem a least bit skillfull.

Sumoe: I think you&#39;re my idol. I love your style and your use color is sick. Do you get up much or are you sticking to blackbook right now? If you have any painted flicks I would love to see them.

Molotov: Don&#39;t bother with trainpaper until you are actually planning on painting a train, that way the train is a good reference. The image just distracts from the piece.
I think some of the letters are really sloppy (W) , the O looks like an S, The E looks like flyguts, and theres that big black spot between the S and E. Work on the fill a little bit - try and keep it level. maybe add some highlights
well,if he posts some work of a more skilled writer than him it would be easy to notice,cuz i&#39;v seen his work and it wasn&#39;t good so it won&#39;t be hard to see if he&#39;s biting

ThickGravy
03-16-2007, 12:10 PM
Originally posted by ILuvHoodRats+Mar 16 2007, 11:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ILuvHoodRats @ Mar 16 2007, 11:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-moltov@Mar 16 2007, 11:00 AM
a messy quicky I did
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00484.jpg
bump , where did you get these papers? [/b][/quote]
Look for the outline thread, search it, and you shall find it.. hopefully..

trashhh
03-16-2007, 12:10 PM
killin it sumoe&#33; lovin the letters and colours in the 3d

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 12:10 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne+Mar 16 2007, 11:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne &#064; Mar 16 2007, 11:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 11:16 AM
thank ya, it&#39;s not quite done yet, so I might add some more darker orange, actually it&#39;s just the same orange but I go on top of black sharpie and then do the "darker" orange, but yea...and I dunno what to do with the background.

edit: nevermind, just realized it was a darker orasnge... :lol:
lol i was sitting there reading that thinking wow that&#39;s a really good idea...then i was thinking how does that work cause the orange shouldnt cover the black even if it is a deco(which i thought it to be prismas up until this point) because the orange is pretty opaque. well mystery solved i guess :rolleyes: . [/b][/quote]
It was the sharpie thing just with a different orange...hehe. I don&#39;t mean I go over the black, I kinda smudge the two together, I rub the orange on top of the sharpie so there is some black pigment, then do the other shit.

Thor_tfm
03-16-2007, 12:18 PM
Sume that shits beautiful nice letters how long you been writing?
Rushed coloured piece from last night:
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/4212/img0015ac6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and some doodles and shit from school:
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9376/img0016ce4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/2670/img0017th3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/8641/img0018xp9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4642/img0022cu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4642/img0022cu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4972/img0021ck9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/8576/img0020dl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 12:20 PM
I like your Euro-ish shit Thor...the others ain&#39;t bad either...just keep workin&#39; on your "T" I don;t like the huge extension on the right.

I been writin&#39; for prolly a year and a half.

sky 5
03-16-2007, 12:28 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 10:19 AM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/6530/dsc0727qi5.jpg
abso-fucking-lutely love this joint . . .damn sume you make me wanna grab the prismas and get crackin&#33; . . . your progression and dedication go hand in hand homie, keep hittin it up

flclnaruto1213
03-16-2007, 12:29 PM
^laff. Thanks Mlk

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 12:31 PM
thanks sky...my handy needs loads of work <_<...I&#39;m just happy I gotta snow day so I could ink...but yea if anyone doesn&#39;t mind, help on my handy would be greatly appreciated. :rolleyes:

NICCSACC
03-16-2007, 12:35 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture017.jpg

AteskOne
03-16-2007, 12:38 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Mar 16 2007, 12:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Mar 16 2007, 12:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 16 2007, 11:45 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 11:16 AM
thank ya, it&#39;s not quite done yet, so I might add some more darker orange, actually it&#39;s just the same orange but I go on top of black sharpie and then do the "darker" orange, but yea...and I dunno what to do with the background.

edit: nevermind, just realized it was a darker orasnge... :lol:
lol i was sitting there reading that thinking wow that&#39;s a really good idea...then i was thinking how does that work cause the orange shouldnt cover the black even if it is a deco(which i thought it to be prismas up until this point) because the orange is pretty opaque. well mystery solved i guess :rolleyes: .
It was the sharpie thing just with a different orange...hehe. I don&#39;t mean I go over the black, I kinda smudge the two together, I rub the orange on top of the sharpie so there is some black pigment, then do the other shit. [/b][/quote]
sounds like too much work when all you gotta do is go to your closest michaels and pocket some dark orange prismas lol.

thor really feeling that shit. loving the simples and the euro style. keep at it.

NICCSACC
03-16-2007, 12:41 PM
hey i totally understand that sharpie orange over black thing i try to use that to my advantage as much as possible cuz it makes for good shit sometimes if you do it right. red over black will work yello

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-16-2007, 12:42 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 16 2007, 12:35 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture017.jpg
bump
btu you needa get a better camera

trashhh
03-16-2007, 12:50 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40978.jpg

yeh yehh i cba colourin my sketches like sumoe etc... dont have the right pens anyways.

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 12:53 PM
diggin&#39; it, the "T" and "R" look too big or maybe the "S" and "H" are to small, but anyways lookin&#39; good, I hope I paint as good as you though, and improve as fast as you in painting, I&#39;ve never pieced yet but I prolly will try soon, any tips? PM me if you got any... :)

Thor_tfm
03-16-2007, 12:55 PM
thanks for the comments only started with the euro today and started this name a few days ago, i used to write sear and have posted on this website a few times if anyone remembers me. i hate the flow of the letters with sear though which is the reason for the change. sumoe ive been a fan of your ish since i first saw it nice letters and great colouring skills. Trash love that outline mate keep at it would love to see that coloured.

South-Pole
03-16-2007, 12:56 PM
nice one trashh

i don&#39;t like the arrow on the T it looks random but thats the only thing i don&#39;t like..niice

namesake
03-16-2007, 01:13 PM
Originally posted by namesake@Mar 15 2007, 05:05 PM


crits

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9067/profit002fw6.jpg


^^bump^^

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 01:16 PM
[QUOTE=ILuvHoodRats,Mar 15
some kind of a throwup

bump number2 , crits??
and namesake , i love your sketch the effects are nice
maybe more color next time? gj dude
but i dont like the I

Thor_tfm
03-16-2007, 01:18 PM
id lose all the extensions namesake, work on the letters by themselves.

Fluffy Bunnies
03-16-2007, 01:23 PM
^^
Ew to both of you

Anyways... here&#39;s some new ish.

Exchange for mek2
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3313.jpg

mines
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3314.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3315.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3316.jpg

critz?

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 01:26 PM
and u tell us "Ew" ??

C-money fresh!
03-16-2007, 01:27 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/amanda.jpg
did this sketch in school for this black chick with a fatty
tried a new style she didnt want it simple or complicated

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 01:28 PM
Fluffy: EWW&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :blink: :P

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 01:28 PM
fresh man , i likeit , id lose the orange outline and ill put it red... only critz

AimoOne
03-16-2007, 01:39 PM
Sume...get outta here...

wait..please dont..i love looking at your work.. :D .. it brings a smile to my face

Cmoney fresh..feeling the M alot..also..i like the style..jus do abit of finetuning..it could come out sweet

Flufmisterflex ... like the M an E..but not the K..hmm.. :)

soo..bensketching for like an hour..trying to incroprate the O into me style..ain workin...soo..i now right..Aiom .. hah :D

C-money fresh!
03-16-2007, 01:41 PM
i used a camera phone the orange makes the shit POP im disgusted with the picture quality i used a neon pink highlighter to do the fill and it looks faded on here. <_<

but thanks anyway dude a apreciate it

inkbits
03-16-2007, 01:57 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 17 2007, 01:19 AM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/6530/dsc0727qi5.jpg
fuckin keep that shit up, all set to burn.

14nick
03-16-2007, 02:04 PM
Nice shit sume fuckin niiiiice clean 2

roller4life68
03-16-2007, 02:09 PM
wack sketches from school, gonna do a cleaner one later.

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/3529/img0988qj5.jpg
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/4672/img0989nb5.jpg

NewbyTJ
03-16-2007, 02:13 PM
Originally posted by NewbyTJ@Mar 15 2007, 06:43 PM
Thor I think u need to do block letters ur H and O are on the right track but the T and R arn&#39;t stay up Simples man Simples........My Newest simples Spectr is back
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture334.jpg
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t11/Zein2/Picture335.jpg
All crits appreciated dunt mind the shitty 3d on the first one i jsut got really bored while waiting for my comp to bout up and i knw the letters crooked so plz dunt comment on that thanx
Im from just outside toronto...Last bump for crits thanx guys

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 02:33 PM
Knab - Work on your lettering .. im telling you , try the bubbles
spec- work on your lettering too , the C is a little bit wierd
but i like the first one , good work
thats it :)

AimoOne
03-16-2007, 02:35 PM
Nooo...Knab..keep doing those..those are a good example of simples..keep it up..

Spectr..try basic lettering..i dont think its working for yuh

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 02:40 PM
CRitz plz , i know the letters arent the same size , i didnt do any highlights and the 3d sucks.

NICCSACC
03-16-2007, 02:57 PM
id resize the pic.

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 03:02 PM
its small , isnt it?

RepUrSet
03-16-2007, 03:04 PM
i think thats his point?
but yeah you pointed out all the flaws urself

plus, breakoffs, are overdone(but thats just me)
and in your lettering, i can see the lines arent parallel to eachother, sketch it in pencil, make sure its all right and proper then ink it

ILuvHoodRats
03-16-2007, 03:07 PM
finally a crit &#33;&#33; thank you man , i know 4 the letters , im always super stressed and do all wrong .. but thank you i appreciate it

whahappen?
03-16-2007, 03:38 PM
hoodrats i have no clue what the first letter is it could be a weird k or an n with alot of extensions or a z mae the letter easier the last letter is a w right??

less messy
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9310/picture023px8.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
03-16-2007, 03:40 PM
^^
Looks DEcent

bumped
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3316.jpg
CYNIC

Cursrone
03-16-2007, 03:41 PM
whahappen? why no bottom loop inside that S?

fluffy bunnies: try a fill of some sort. learn about highlights. the background behind it is horrible

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 04:33 PM
a snow day doodle...

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/65/dsc0729bq7.jpg

d_g
03-16-2007, 04:48 PM
Sume your shit is real nice but I&#39;d spend some time on my handy if I was you.

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 04:48 PM
yea I know its horrible.

uhhh
03-16-2007, 04:55 PM
your handys kinda,
well crappy.
sky 5&#39;s handy is like strangley horrible.
buuut that karak is noiceee.
:)

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 04:56 PM
yea sky&#39;s isn&#39;t too good either, weird huh? :blink: :o :huh:

AteskOne
03-16-2007, 04:59 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 04:33 PM
a snow day doodle...

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/65/dsc0729bq7.jpg
fucking sick. why havent i seen many character out of you cause the ones i have seen are dope. people dont realize how hard it is to color things correctly. i&#39;ve been working on my coloring lately. i look like a retard with a box of crayons. anyways i actually enjoy your handstyles sume. they are sort of similar to my style which is probably why i like them. simple yet legible.

dame you are lucky you gotta snow day up there sume. i cut skool but all my freinds hadda go and my frend just got in an accident cause of it. another kid ran into a ditch. skool systems are fucked.

Cursrone
03-16-2007, 05:06 PM
Jesus Fucking Christ Sume, would you knock it off and stop being so fucking amazing?
Your coloring is ALWAYs sick as fuck. The way you make shit pop is something to behold. soooooooooo smoooooooth. the dots. the color. the shadows.

can we get a closeup of the carak and "you suck at life" maybe?

AimoOne
03-16-2007, 05:06 PM
i love that type of handstyle..serious..Sume..its looks fine..

and colouring is one of my strong points :D

-ShAmEE-
03-16-2007, 05:13 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3315.jpg

this shit has potentual. i like it but u need to the letter stucture not too thin. notice from other pics. and the moment keep the fill simple. and use a black out line think it would look better.

uhhh
03-16-2007, 05:18 PM
actually shamee,
thats not an outline.
thats a sheild,
notice how it doesnt go around all the lines of the letters,
shields only go along the outside of the letters.
;)

-ShAmEE-
03-16-2007, 05:20 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3316.jpg

yh ma bad i was ment to put this pic.

AteskOne
03-16-2007, 05:21 PM
i agree...shits got definite potential. try keeping your letters the same width and shit. in some spots its too skinny. ex: middle bar on the "N" and the whole "Y" is too out of proportion with the rest of the letters.

Cursrone
03-16-2007, 05:29 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 16 2007, 05:21 PM
i agree...shits got definite potential. try keeping your letters the same width and shit. in some spots its too skinny. ex: middle bar on the "N" and the whole "Y" is too out of proportion with the rest of the letters.
i couldnt agree less with you.

having a thick/thin aspect to the letters can give them more interest than if they were all the same thickness.
however if there is only one small part of the piece that has a thinner thickness, then it would look out of place because its not carried throughout all the letters.

in my opinion i think this has potential as well. I like the uncolored version better, with being able to see the structure of the bars.
the only beef i have with it is the baseline of the letters seems to wavy. try and keep them all in a line.
the Y is hot. the N needs some work. as do the Cs

BIGel
03-16-2007, 05:35 PM
^ agreed i hate uniform letters.

uhhh
03-16-2007, 05:38 PM
saying that that y is "hot"
completely discredits your opinion anyways.

that y is ON ITS WAY to aight.
i think it has potential aswell.
but what your saying about thick to thin ratio,
means you dont know how to use it yet,
thick thin ratio, used well, usually is for extensions or tweaking bars of a letter a bunch,
not doing two sides of an n fat and the middle skinny.

look at say mse&#39;s letter, on the ends, they flair out a little bit,
because hes tweaking the bars and it gives a slightly 3-dish look without using ture 3d.

this post doesnt really explian what i mean,
buut.
basically, you probably cant use thick-thin very well yet,
and when you cant do something, your in no place to be telling others how to do it.

-ShAmEE-
03-16-2007, 05:44 PM
man FLUFFY u get the best crits eva. lucky.

Cursrone
03-16-2007, 05:57 PM
Saying that thick/thin should only be used a certain way is bullshit.
Since when are there rules to art? It doesn&#39;t matter how something is made, as long as it looks good, and has strong artistic merit.

I went to the Painted Pieces thread of the picture gallery section but it will due for examples.


Originally posted by temzah@Mar 8 2007, 09:55 AM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1400/1111rg5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3597/1414989687lmp4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8331/31012007nz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9453/16122006001bz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6056/backtemznr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/2818/battle1bl3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bak...

Now I&#39;m not saying that the above images are examples of the worlds greatest graffiti, I am simply providing them as examples of work that usually wouldn&#39;t be considered toy.

Notice the various differences in thickness between different parts of the letters.
First pic: horizontal of the T, middle of the E, middle of the M
Second pic: right of the K, middle of the W
Third pic: the Ns, the middle of the E
Fourth pic: middle of the M
Etc...

But alas, I suppose since I have an opinion that goes against your narrow minded view of what graffiti should look like, my opinion doesnt count and I don&#39;t know how to draw.

whahappen?
03-16-2007, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Mar 16 2007, 03:38 PM
hoodrats i have no clue what the first letter is it could be a weird k or an n with alot of extensions or a z mae the letter easier the last letter is a w right??

less messy
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9310/picture023px8.jpg
yep
cynic the c&#39;s are too big compared to the other letters and the left side of the n is way to small
people shutup your arguing about stuff thats almost entirely opinions making it pointless to do so
since theres hardly a right answer

Cursrone
03-16-2007, 06:04 PM
^ agreed, is part of my point

-ShAmEE-
03-16-2007, 06:05 PM
yh but the lines art very thin compared to the thickness are they.


whahappen - look average, nothin amazin. random swirl.

AimoOne
03-16-2007, 06:11 PM
No Beef atall..but Course..you have alot of stuff to say..yet you aint thats good yourself.. :blink:

wats all the chat about..i couldnt be bothered to read..

ugh..Wappen..nice tthrow..* yawns * :lol: ;) .. jus kidding mate :D .. its is nice

ugh..really struggled to get anything going tonight..i finally do sumthing decent...and its nerly 12:00 in the morining..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/11111111.jpg

still gettin to grips with this style and different connection forms of it..

ugh..crits..

Sorry for the shitness...

-ShAmEE-
03-16-2007, 06:13 PM
that A. bar on the right should end under the I. and dont have the pointy bit at on top of the O.

AimoOne
03-16-2007, 06:16 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 16 2007, 11:11 PM
No Beef atall..but Course..you have alot of stuff to say..yet you aint thats good yourself.. :blink:

wats all the chat about..i couldnt be bothered to read..

ugh..Wappen..nice tthrow..* yawns * :lol: ;) .. jus kidding mate :D .. its is nice

ugh..really struggled to get anything going tonight..i finally do sumthing decent...and its nerly 12:00 in the morining..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/11111111.jpg

still gettin to grips with this style and different connection forms of it..

ugh..crits..

Sorry for the shitness...
bump..

Thanks Shameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

-ShAmEE-
03-16-2007, 06:25 PM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/Kwaizy2.jpg

that kwaizy battle. i did was fuckin ugly. so i&#39;m workin on it.

uhhh
03-16-2007, 06:39 PM
cursr-you obviously didnt read my post.
and if you did you certaintly didnt comprehend it.

i was saying that where he is now, he should be trying that because he cant make it look good yet.

i said that it can look good but you certaintly dont understand it yet and neither does fluffy.


shamee- :(
nooot so much.

Cursrone
03-16-2007, 06:42 PM
whatever. let it be I guess.
im not trying to start beef or anything, and don&#39;t want any beef goin on so i&#39;ll let it go

Chulo
03-16-2007, 06:58 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/109_0734.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/109_0733.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/109_0731.jpg
heres some of my new stuff

roller4life68
03-16-2007, 07:24 PM
chase try to keep your letters the same height and keep them aligned. also build your letters with bars.

Chulo
03-16-2007, 07:43 PM
aight thnx

NICCSACC
03-16-2007, 08:24 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture017.jpg

BIGel
03-16-2007, 08:49 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 16 2007, 06:16 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/11111111.jpg

close, getting pretty close to being a solid solid simple. you need to tweak it because it doesnt flow as well as it could, the m and the o connection isnt strong and to me the a is out of place, the connection on the i and m is heat tho, both those letters look fly, keep playin with it to make those connections flow better. on the right track..

cirus905
03-16-2007, 08:53 PM
heres a sketch i thre down today off the dome

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p105/cirus905/Sketches001.jpg

LAGE
03-16-2007, 09:18 PM
aimo-i liked your old stuff better but thats still good
shamee-i like it but could be cleaned up abit
chase- same thing as roller said work on sizes
niccsacc- thats awesome :D
cirus- i actually like it it interests me :P
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00157.jpg
thought of this in bed so did a rough sketch fixed it up and messed around with it.
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00162.jpg
and this one is just fooling around i guess.

magashna
03-16-2007, 09:19 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/dan-cor/DSC02294.jpg

chase one
03-16-2007, 09:23 PM
Originally posted by chase one@Mar 16 2007, 09:03 AM
says phreak. I dont write this but i tried it. crits please

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3798/chaseone006wd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump 4 some crits

F.R.A.T.
03-16-2007, 09:23 PM
magashna ur throw looks like sank and ur piece looks like hank, but they look good
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/March1620072.jpg

cirus905
03-16-2007, 09:25 PM
im feelin that one nice style and smooth lines ^^^^

magashna
03-16-2007, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by magashna@Mar 16 2007, 09:19 PM
http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/dan-cor/DSC02294.jpg
yea, throw says sank and the piece says hank

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Mar 16 2007, 09:23 PM
magashna ur throw looks like sank and ur piece looks like hank, but they look good
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/March1620072.jpg
You&#39;re improvin&#39;...

I see you like my "E" though, hope it wasn&#39;t a bite but it kinda looks like it...
also the left side of your "M" looks like what I usually do on my "S"s your extensions/add-ons looks hauntingly similar to the kind I use also... <_<

chase one
03-16-2007, 09:39 PM
not too bad the k looks like a h though in the hank and both the n and the k are smaller than the other two. try simple straighter letters then slowly add more style and whatever more ya want. i like the throw its nice

F.R.A.T.
03-16-2007, 09:40 PM
haha nah man i wasnt trying to bite hope u dont think so but ya i do like ur e&#39;s
i usually do them like this
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Untitled-1.jpg

magashna
03-16-2007, 09:41 PM
yea the letters got smaller i realized, heres a different but similar piece

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/dan-cor/DSC02270.jpg

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 09:42 PM
Yea but the one you posted before does look ALOT like the "E"s I rock, I&#39;m not saying I was the first one to use that "E" but still...

Ekers.Two.Two
03-16-2007, 09:42 PM
frat - sick

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011208.jpg

crits plz ? i need like ideas or like someone to tell me am i going the good way ?

F.R.A.T.
03-16-2007, 09:43 PM
ye i get ya well next piece i do will look nothin like urs
yo ekers do u live in ireland

BIGel
03-16-2007, 09:44 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Mar 16 2007, 09:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Mar 16 2007, 09:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-F.R.A.T.@Mar 16 2007, 09:23 PM
magashna ur throw looks like sank and ur piece looks like hank, but they look good
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/March1620072.jpg
You&#39;re improvin&#39;...

I see you like my "E" though, hope it wasn&#39;t a bite but it kinda looks like it...
also the left side of your "M" looks like what I usually do on my "S"s your extensions/add-ons looks hauntingly similar to the kind I use also... <_< [/b][/quote]
this is sumoes letter structure no question. the others are good but the top left is borrowing too much.

Ekers.Two.Two
03-16-2007, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Mar 16 2007, 09:43 PM
ye i get ya well next piece i do will look nothin like urs
yo ekers do u live in ireland
no why?

chase one
03-16-2007, 09:49 PM
Originally posted by chase one+Mar 16 2007, 09:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (chase one @ Mar 16 2007, 09:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-chase one@Mar 16 2007, 09:03 AM
says phreak. I dont write this but i tried it. crits please

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3798/chaseone006wd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump 4 some crits [/b][/quote]
one more bump 4 crits

F.R.A.T.
03-16-2007, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by Ekers.Two.Two@Mar 16 2007, 09:45 PM
no why?
cause there a guy that writes NOER and hes up like hell

Ekers.Two.Two
03-16-2007, 09:51 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.+Mar 16 2007, 09:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (F.R.A.T. @ Mar 16 2007, 09:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ekers.Two.Two@Mar 16 2007, 09:45 PM
no why?
cause there a guy that writes NOER and hes up like hell [/b][/quote]
and? i write noen ? whats the difference 1 letter, no one writes noen, so i tihnk its ok

F.R.A.T.
03-16-2007, 09:52 PM
shit man srry im kinda high right now so srry

sky 5
03-16-2007, 10:01 PM
yup frat and sume have similar styles . . . but sume you cant possibly think that lil addon on the left of his M is yours cuz ive been doing that and alot of other moves you do for years now . . . no bites or copyrights, were all just under the same school of letters, sometimes its cool sometimes it aint so cool

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 10:02 PM
it wasn&#39;t so much the other stuff it was just the "E" but it&#39;s all good...haha yeah I was kinda over exaggerating about the extensions and the "M" and whatnot, but the "E" is pretty similar, but like I said someone has probably done that "E" years before me.

F.R.A.T.
03-16-2007, 10:10 PM
well ima hit da sack, gotta 12 hr bus ride tmmrw cuae of that bullshit storm in newyork, so lots of sketchin gonna be done, and sume ill do a piece with my own E, and none of ur extentions

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 10:13 PM
nah...it&#39;s cool man, I kinda overreacted, they aren&#39;t "my" extensions or "my" "E"...do whatever you want. :)

sky 5
03-16-2007, 10:14 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 16 2007, 08:24 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture017.jpg
bump for skill . . . yeah sume i feel you but what ive come to grugenly accept is that I have a very used and tried style and alot of people are gonna have teh smae letters, addons, angles etc . . . shit im alil bummed now just thinking about it . . :(

with that being said when i saw the MESk (or whatever the word was) i was like oh snap sume did other letters besides his SUME, i was 100% bet my life on it positive it was you but it wasnt . . alright my postwhoring no pic having ass is outta here, have a nice mellow night

fredom-writer
03-16-2007, 10:17 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

F.R.A.T.
03-16-2007, 10:20 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 16 2007, 10:13 PM
nah...it&#39;s cool man, I kinda overreacted, they aren&#39;t "my" extensions or "my" "E"...do whatever you want. :)
cool well i do wanna try another style so we&#39;ll see wat happens

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 10:22 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Mar 16 2007, 10:14 PM
shit im alil bummed now just thinking about it . . :(
hahahaha...sometimes I feel the same way and wish I could do stuff like chillen and be more original, my styles not very unique at all...which kinda sucks...eh whatever.

anyways like the bottom one KSPY, your name is kinda odd though, lol. Why make it "KSPY" and not "SPYK" or "KSYP" or sumthin&#39; haha...anyways looks good. Some extensions on the top one are a little iffy though.

Fosale!
03-16-2007, 10:23 PM
K-Spy, if people on here do what you did, they&#39;d be on a good start.
i remember when you came here you first tried kind of over complicated stuffs and then did only simples.
and now look at that sketch you just posted.
you have improved so much and i love that top drawing.
stay dope.

-Fo&#036;ale

fredom-writer
03-16-2007, 10:31 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

LAGE
03-16-2007, 10:35 PM
Originally posted by LAGE@Mar 16 2007, 09:18 PM
aimo-i liked your old stuff better but thats still good
shamee-i like it but could be cleaned up abit
chase- same thing as roller said work on sizes
niccsacc- thats awesome :D
cirus- i actually like it it interests me :P
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00157.jpg
thought of this in bed so did a rough sketch fixed it up and messed around with it.
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j212/purehate53/DSC00162.jpg
and this one is just fooling around i guess.
crits?

xJ-onex
03-16-2007, 10:40 PM
sume, you amaze me, why are you even in this forum??


here&#39;s my latest....i only got four colours, orange, greenish, black, and pink.
crits??

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h45/stove_top/j-one-2.jpg

Sumoe
03-16-2007, 10:57 PM
work on your letter structure and really think about your letters...I can&#39;t read it (maybe it&#39;s just me though). What does it say?

and I post in the toy thread cause I get crits in here, the "Big Boy" thread doesn&#39;t get much "action" at least crit wise.

BIGel
03-16-2007, 11:04 PM
xj-work on your basics, take those baby steps first.

bored at work, listening to that dre beat the watcher..hahh cant get it out of my head now.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355296/238375791.jpg

Chalk
03-17-2007, 12:15 AM
way out of the norm for me.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_drag.jpg