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Noddles912300
03-22-2007, 03:40 PM
sume love your letters and color combos
chalk nice lettering. not fan of the colors

sky 5
03-22-2007, 04:04 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8258/1232371ou6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some scribbles . . . green markers died on me

looking nice chalk, maybe try angling the C southeast alil so teh bottom leg that goes right can go over teh bottom part of the H and not the middle of it

memo
03-22-2007, 04:09 PM
here is something i did in class today..yes i know the arrows thing..but i had to at least try them lol ! :unsure: oh and sorry about the big pic.. i uploaded them without resizing by accident and im too lazy to go back and do it again.
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00560-1.jpg

Lunatic
03-22-2007, 04:35 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Mar 22 2007, 04:04 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8258/1232371ou6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some scribbles . . . green markers died on me

looking nice chalk, maybe try angling the C southeast alil so teh bottom leg that goes right can go over teh bottom part of the H and not the middle of it
man that yellow.. or gold or whatever one is Ill.

Ez3kieL
03-22-2007, 04:41 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/EzeKieL_board.gif
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/70819d8b.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/EzeKieL_06_v3.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/ezekiel.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f164/EzeKieL415/Pieces/EzeKieL_06_v2.gif

Ekers.Two.Two
03-22-2007, 04:52 PM
sume, sick
esekiel, sick

pier , sick

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011222.jpg

bouncingsoul
03-22-2007, 05:02 PM
I'm fucking jealous of you Sume. Graaaghhh!

Thankfully, I racked some nice Prismas and got some sick colors as well as a blender (I think I might have taken 2 on accident) so yeah... I might actually color something for once!

Well, there's this one armed girl in my Spanish class and this is what I always think of whenever I see her... Yeah, I think I'm fucked up in the head..

"look ma, no hands, i cutted thems off"
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0687.jpg

"culture"
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0688.jpg

okaz
03-22-2007, 05:11 PM
Feelin that char. Just it looks like its missing something in the eyes you know. Do some cross hatching but make like a dark to light affect yaknawwaImean?

Ill be posting some of my stuff soon. just kinda lazy to upload.

BAI,

kersrone
03-22-2007, 05:33 PM
sumoe: as always, amazing. However, it does seem like you are getting into a rut. Try and break out of it and come up with something different.

ezekiel: at first I was thinking "go a little more simpler" but the more i looked at the flicks, the more i liked them. you should color some of those plain outlines

bouncing soul: the stubs are hot. in "culture" the c looks like a T and the lower part of the L could be brought out a slight bit, but pretty nice for a quick throw


some of my new stuff
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/RedFadeBubbleFill.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/bluebubblefill_boxes.jpg
experimenting with fills
then going to plain white and simple
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/WhiteFill_yellowred.jpg

crits?

emokid
03-22-2007, 05:36 PM
dont like the fills much kersrone, your letters are getting better, i like the bottom one best, just take off the thing on the top leg of the k

nice stuff bounce, obviously

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2739/dscn6334xi4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

did the top of the a like the rest of the letters and lo, it looks way better thank you sume and whoever else told me to do that

okaz
03-22-2007, 05:42 PM
Wow. Kersr Likin' em fills brutha keep doing them streight's just not feeling the R's As much as the other letters.

Pear, thats what i had in mind for the next sketch that A flows much better with the rest of the letters. Just make the R a tiny bit biggger. and Then yer off .

Umm new style not really feelin it. that much.

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/8813/picture278fb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

small picture
Anal!

Crits?

Samp1e
03-22-2007, 05:44 PM
emokid -- might just be me but I don't like the right leg of your R much... also, I think it might look better if the real thin sections in the middle of all your letters were thickened up just a tiny tiny bit. otherwise, lookin good. dig that style

AnteUp
03-22-2007, 05:57 PM
Originally posted by emokid@Mar 22 2007, 01:49 PM
bottom one is looking nice thor, o and r are good but the t and h are a bit close together.

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/9851/dscn6333ul7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

shoite colouring
damn pear... i dont kno why but im likin ur style and colorin... hmmm :D

sank one
03-22-2007, 06:25 PM
emo - those colors remind me of a pear :lol:

props to sume, sky and bouncing

heres some school sketching, dont like it but i wanna see what people think...

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u222/sankster101/IMG_0490.jpg

AnteUp
03-22-2007, 06:41 PM
i like ur work sank but lose the add ons i like ur simplicity

ok heres sum work i did like yesterday...did this befor...tryin it again scanner is gay...and this color is like a regular green...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0002.jpg

okaz
03-22-2007, 06:41 PM
The K and S are kinda weird. loose the little things on the K and S and yer good. and strighten em out a bit.

Sumoe
03-22-2007, 07:10 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Mar 22 2007, 05:02 PM
I'm fucking jealous of you Sume. Graaaghhh!

Thankfully, I racked some nice Prismas and got some sick colors as well as a blender (I think I might have taken 2 on accident) so yeah... I might actually color something for once!

Well, there's this one armed girl in my Spanish class and this is what I always think of whenever I see her... Yeah, I think I'm fucked up in the head..

"look ma, no hands, i cutted thems off"
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0687.jpg

"culture"
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0688.jpg
bump for bouncin' only thing is the "C" kinda looks like a "T".

sky-likin' the yellow and green one.

Sank-the letters get progressively smaller.

pear-likin' the sketch, it dose look better now you did the top part like the rest, I also like the flow in your letters and the overall shape, it gives them a sense perspective.

thats my daily does of criticism...
:D

-Sinn-
03-22-2007, 07:17 PM
peak love the coloring in that 3D dope shit bouncingsoul diggin that culture one simple yet orgasmic

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture109.jpg

lol u were all thinkin it i said it

okaz
03-22-2007, 07:20 PM
looks like my wife.

dim
03-22-2007, 07:36 PM
pear im rele liking your coloring
sank keep up the simples
bouncing soul your characters are so good i rele like them

What Happened to the Letters?
03-22-2007, 07:48 PM
ante up, ugly cant even read it...sorry but its the truth

okaz, needs work dude, and anal? thats a gross name, makes me think some fat hairy homo in leather chaps and a thong throwing up handstyles with colored lube

What Happened to the Letters?
03-22-2007, 07:53 PM
Originally posted by Chalk@Mar 22 2007, 03:03 PM
new from me today
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/chalk_bbo.jpg
L&K need work, they look weird

Ezekiel...killin it, decided to do track for the pack liek you with teh swimming...got destracted and now im throwing the discuss so nto helping at all :rolleyes:

whahappen?
03-22-2007, 07:53 PM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Mar 22 2007, 06:41 PM
i like ur work sank but lose the add ons i like ur simplicity

ok heres sum work i did like yesterday...did this befor...tryin it again scanner is gay...and this color is like a regular green...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0002.jpg
holy shit
this is weird
i thought it suckd but then found te actual letters
hawt

What Happened to the Letters?
03-22-2007, 07:55 PM
looks lie kan attempt at bar piecing as in early Widl style technicians shit and early 80s advanced wildstyles...but they arent really comparable, if you clean up teh lines and make the extensions/bars connect more to the letters than the 3d it might look ok, but i really think you shoudl drop it and workon somethign else personally

ternoner
03-22-2007, 07:59 PM
stoned
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/joe183.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/joe182.jpg

What Happened to the Letters?
03-22-2007, 08:15 PM
deosnt look bad, reminds me of old school simples i.e. "the art of gettign over" shit

Sumoe
03-22-2007, 08:55 PM
so, I colored in the "one" and added some flame-ish type thingys..any suggestions, I wanna write something in block letters at the bottom but don't know what to write.

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/7824/dsc0735hb5.jpg

-Sinn-
03-22-2007, 09:03 PM
THAT SHITS INSANE!!!!!!

dim
03-22-2007, 09:13 PM
yo sume how do you use the prisma color blender?

Sumoe
03-22-2007, 09:21 PM
I don't use it, I just blend with two similar colors.

DJLotus
03-22-2007, 09:22 PM
Originally posted by okaz@Mar 22 2007, 05:42 PM
Wow. Kersr Likin' em fills brutha keep doing them streight's just not feeling the R's As much as the other letters.

Pear, thats what i had in mind for the next sketch that A flows much better with the rest of the letters. Just make the R a tiny bit biggger. and Then yer off .

Umm new style not really feelin it. that much.

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/8813/picture278fb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

small picture
Anal!

Crits?
Were you getting anal while drawing this?

golden pen
03-22-2007, 09:23 PM
somthing i made for a girl i really miss
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s204/mateorossini/P1010064.jpg

cirus905
03-22-2007, 09:23 PM
sume.. lookin nice meng.. still wondering what ur using to colour that..
heres some i did today.. no color

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p105/cirus905/sketchesmar22002.jpg

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p105/cirus905/sketchesmar22004.jpg

Lunatic
03-22-2007, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 22 2007, 08:55 PM
so, I colored in the "one" and added some flame-ish type thingys..any suggestions, I wanna write something in block letters at the bottom but don't know what to write.

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/7824/dsc0735hb5.jpg
thats really sick man. well done

dim
03-22-2007, 09:26 PM
cirus i like the first one not so much the second one ?

cirus905
03-22-2007, 09:33 PM
haha i drew the second one a while ago i just drew the drips for no reason they look pretty wack.

ESKE one
03-22-2007, 09:48 PM
Originally posted by golden pen@Mar 22 2007, 09:23 PM
somthing i made for a girl i really miss
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s204/mateorossini/P1010064.jpg
:huh: wow with this ill be surprise if see ever want to see you again
go simple real simple
wat the hells her name anyway? xtdnl

AnteUp
03-22-2007, 09:58 PM
sumes shit is always tight...sume ur add-ons get better and better...i live for your add ons.... :wub: they make me go craaaazzzyyyyy :wacko:

ok sum other shit...lukks like shit too but crits please my sucky ass scanner again..
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0005.jpg

dim
03-22-2007, 10:02 PM
not my favorite from you but i think your realy getting on your way so keep it :)

Zep0
03-22-2007, 10:09 PM
Sume sick stuff...I dont like the arrow coming off the U though, I say connect it into the M. Shadowing looks great, not only behind center vanishing point you got the drop shadow...it really makes it pop off the paper. For the block letters, it reminds me of Venom from spider man cause of the new movie coming out. I think maybe though do a real rotten and vile handstyle in purple at the bottom.

Italics - if that means anything to you. :lol:

burton i ride
03-22-2007, 10:36 PM
http://img483.imageshack.us/img483/5856/ionwildstylefinalmt8.jpg

attempt at some wildstyle shit
cristisism?

Sumoe
03-22-2007, 11:11 PM
stay away from wildstyle shit for now and work on letter structure...by the way your shit looks exactly like mine about 1 year ago, stay with it and you'll get better.

GnawTheBones
03-22-2007, 11:33 PM
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j50/ghr7891/DSCN0172.jpg

a block style I was working on, I dont like the colors though.

yeah dude burton, keep it simple

calculating infinity
03-22-2007, 11:50 PM
your s needs some work. make is look more like a backwards z if youre gonna do that kind of style.
and if thats supposed to be the country you spelled it wrong.

GnawTheBones
03-22-2007, 11:58 PM
The country is Israel, but i was going for isreal, as in "the government IS REAL"

Nem
03-23-2007, 12:47 AM
i bet any dude who saw that would be like "he spelled it wrong. what a dumbass."

nobody goes much deeper than that.

you wouldnt get the desired effect.

.Smoke.
03-23-2007, 01:17 AM
Originally posted by Nem@Mar 23 2007, 12:47 AM
i bet any dude who saw that would be like "he spelled it wrong. what a dumbass."

nobody goes much deeper than that.

you wouldnt get the desired effect.
Nobody goes much deeper than that? Speak for yourself, I always do my best to interpret art. I admit that I didn't think the artists was to go as far as using wordplay but it reminded me of a discussion I had concerning Isreal, religion, and government. So to the artist...keep doing things like that because there are those of us who enjoy looking deeper into the art, and also those of us who enjoy interpreting art whether we're wrong or right.

''SCC''
03-23-2007, 02:30 AM
isreal move the letters closer together
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/360/untitled2sm6.png (http://imageshack.us)
dident relly try on the fill

SeKz
03-23-2007, 04:23 AM
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5622/p010ir7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

something

nase7
03-23-2007, 05:27 AM
That just burnt a hole in the thread. :o

neza
03-23-2007, 06:35 AM
SeKs

your one of the best writers in here and your style is burning

i love those extentions man! the one at the bottom of the second e i would snap in closer to the e itself if ya know what i mean other than that the bigboys thread might be able to help

-neza

dim
03-23-2007, 06:45 AM
sekz that is one of the sickest peices i have seen come out of this forum i like it how all the letter share the same style and size keep up the good work

SeKz
03-23-2007, 06:57 AM
thanks guys :lol:

Apoc
03-23-2007, 07:58 AM
sekz is fire

fuck the rest

pez ss
03-23-2007, 11:40 AM
sek that shit is wiked keep it up for sure i love all the letters in that. keep it up for sure and i would try to paint it if u can cause that would just be dope if u cant paint it then do sumthing like it but simpler it would be the shit painted

khax
03-23-2007, 11:47 AM
sekz why the hell you in the toy forum? haha that shit is hot

Game Ova 07
03-23-2007, 12:02 PM
damn seks get outta tha toy forum...

Fluffy Bunnies
03-23-2007, 12:14 PM
Originally posted by golden pen@Mar 22 2007, 09:23 PM
somthing i made for a girl i really miss
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s204/mateorossini/P1010064.jpg
Damn homie... that shit is like BBQ hawt sauce on a sunday evening.

All it's missing is some arrows!
ADD SOME ARROWS!
and play this game son
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Marc-Eckos-Getting-Up.jpg

Xsjadox
03-23-2007, 12:26 PM
Damn sekz ;o

Golden Pen : Draw straight first and S to the I, MPLE

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/164/431366547_4ef9cd7008.jpg

lol @ post below

kersrone
03-23-2007, 12:29 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies+Mar 23 2007, 12:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fluffy Bunnies &#064; Mar 23 2007, 12:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-golden pen@Mar 22 2007, 09:23 PM
somthing i made for a girl i really miss
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s204/mateorossini/P1010064.jpg
Damn homie... that shit is like BBQ hawt sauce on a sunday evening.

All it&#39;s missing is some arrows&#33;
ADD SOME ARROWS&#33;
and play this game son
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Marc-Eckos-Getting-Up.jpg[/b][/quote]
You miss a girl named....

XΨ]N¿ ????

trashhh
03-23-2007, 12:49 PM
Fap its cool but the T is coverd wayyyy too much

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA41005-1.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
03-23-2007, 12:55 PM
Trash... sorry to say this... but that&#39;s pretty toy. just try to focus on trying to find ur own style and don&#39;t go overboard with the add ons. Add some curves, all I ever see from you is straight lines and squares and rectangles.

Good straight lines, nice coloring... letters suck&#33;

Xsjadox
03-23-2007, 12:56 PM
Hah yeah,I noticed and then tried it more to the right and open and then there was this really ugly space between the P and the T and it made me all sad

Bastardo
03-23-2007, 01:12 PM
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/7342/picture070sv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

acidconceptone
03-23-2007, 01:30 PM
bastardo i love the throwy and the handstyles

''SCC''
03-23-2007, 02:05 PM
XΨ]N¿ i think u should practice with just a super simple tag
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/7899/untitleddl0.png (http://imageshack.us)

''SCC''
03-23-2007, 02:11 PM
newer uncleen stuf
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/3747/untitled3mt8.png (http://imageshack.us)

emokid
03-23-2007, 02:12 PM
scc, dont really like the messy style or the two r&#39;s. the rest is pretty good, clean up the letters and lose the extensions and it will look better, in my opinion

second one is better

bastard, gorgeous as always

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/835/dscn6335ck9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

colourss

Sumoe
03-23-2007, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Mar 23 2007, 12:55 PM
Trash... sorry to say this... but that&#39;s pretty toy. just try to focus on trying to find ur own style and don&#39;t go overboard with the add ons. Add some curves, all I ever see from you is straight lines and squares and rectangles.

Good straight lines, nice coloring... letters suck&#33;
it&#39;s not that bad, it&#39;s not great but it&#39;s okay, letters are okay just too many add-ons

pear-gettin&#39; better and better.

golden-if that girl sees that sketch she&#39;s never coming back(I&#39;m assuming she left you or dumped you or moved away.)

Zep0
03-23-2007, 02:17 PM
Extend the leg of the R and upsize the P...but I love it. Your style is great, and now with the colors its looking twice as good.

''SCC''
03-23-2007, 02:22 PM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;@Mar 23 2007, 02:30 AM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/360/untitled2sm6.png (http://imageshack.us)

should i switch my name to gonad or no

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 02:27 PM
...no

Fluffy Bunnies
03-23-2007, 02:32 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 23 2007, 02:16 PM
(SOme useleses jibberish was here)

golden-if that girl sees that sketch she&#39;s never coming back(I&#39;m assuming she left you or dumped you or moved away.)
No she won&#39;t leave you... she&#39;s gonna be like OMGWTFBBQSAUCE then moonwalk the fuck outa there.


and SCC... nig ga you nasty

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 02:35 PM
hey fluff you finished my sketch?

edit:get on msn lol

Sumoe
03-23-2007, 02:39 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Mar 23 2007, 02:32 PM
Some useless jibberish was here.
:o

whahappen?
03-23-2007, 02:49 PM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;+Mar 23 2007, 02:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (&#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39; @ Mar 23 2007, 02:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;@Mar 23 2007, 02:30 AM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/360/untitled2sm6.png (http://imageshack.us)

should i switch my name to gonad or no [/b][/quote]
i actually like this
yea and you can tag balls all oveer the place

AimoOne
03-23-2007, 02:49 PM
South Bar..( bar,pole..haha )..send me you MSN

ugh..well..

my last few crits..ima out on my ps3.. :D

SCC...i told you before .. you need to go simpler
.. and seriously..dont touch markers untill next year.. :( sorry man..

ugh..er..

Well..

peace..

shouts tooooo...FOSALE..SUMEOINHO..FLUFFYMISTER..SKETCHIE DOODLE 3 .. TRASHHHH .. SHAMEEEE ... SOUTH POLE .. .. WAPPEN UGH ? :lol: .. EMO MAN :D

whahappen?
03-23-2007, 02:52 PM
you forgot me...
do you WANT to get castrated?

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 02:53 PM
awwww,i got a shout out :wub: lol

popshots
03-23-2007, 03:08 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Mar 23 2007, 02:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Mar 23 2007, 02:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;@Mar 23 2007, 02:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-&#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;@Mar 23 2007, 02:30 AM
http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/360/untitled2sm6.png (http://imageshack.us)

should i switch my name to gonad or no
i actually like this
yea and you can tag balls all oveer the place [/b][/quote]
:lol: ...... use bars and go simpler... and dont color in your ish yet

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 03:10 PM
naw his letter structure is ok but she should calm down on the add-ons

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 03:12 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/depro4.jpg

the scanner took some color

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 03:30 PM
don&#39;t worry about coloring

nice simple try making the R and O straighter

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 03:36 PM
well some dude on here told me "add some color and 3d then well crit your shit" <_<

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 03:41 PM
who told you this?
i think colouring isn&#39;t important for now imo well feel free
add colours if you want and 3-d

Slushi
03-23-2007, 03:41 PM
Depro: Dont make your letters go into each other like that and straighten them up a bit.

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/2734/picture163ec9.jpg

crits

dim
03-23-2007, 03:43 PM
scc- you rele need to work on your colouring

[breakout]-azer
03-23-2007, 03:43 PM
when u first startin out leave the couloyr n the 3d n the add ons n just stick to basic lettering then slowly progress.

deproone- i liek it but the r and the o could be a bit straighter n i would leave the colour out but keep the 3d it looks good

ghozt
03-23-2007, 03:43 PM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/927/scan0004ix6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits =] i got another one tht says "skate" but im too lazy to get up and get it so ill post it later tonight :ph34r:

dim
03-23-2007, 03:48 PM
hacks thats a nice simple style keep it up :)

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 03:50 PM
yeah nice simple ghozt

BIGel
03-23-2007, 03:58 PM
ghozt-i like everything but the s

a snowboard..
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/082/4/8/snoarbod1_by_bigel.jpg
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/082/f/6/boarder_by_bigel.jpg
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/082/7/5/wholeboard_by_bigel.jpg

wish i waited and done a sprayed background but alas i had no spray paint. might still try it tho.

dim
03-23-2007, 04:00 PM
bigel thats sick i rele like the back ground detail that it has right now

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 04:03 PM
thats ill BigEl. the background brings everything out.

kersrone
03-23-2007, 04:10 PM
wicked snowboard. I don&#39;t like the color combinations, but other than that...

pear: nice simple color.
hacks: pretty nice, a very decent simple.
slushi: love the color. interesting that its not just a basic red to yellow fade.
SSC: I actually like the Gonad throw (dumb name though), add some highlights or make the zigzag fill more pronounced. try a different color for the addons.
The first green one I like as well. I like the messiness. The second purple one could use some highlights or something.. something so it doesnt look like a blob of purple

And what the hell... is it just me or did you write my name for those two?
If you look at it, it looks like it says KERSR for both. Am I crazy?
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/SSCkersr.jpg

Ive got some new stuff:

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/Chips_WhitefillBlueOutline.jpg

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/Balloony.jpg

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/Drips_Slatter_small.jpg
will probably make stickers out of some of these

crits?

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 04:11 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/depro40001-1.jpg

is this straight enough.

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 04:13 PM
hacks i like everything except the S looks a little weird

[breakout]-azer
03-23-2007, 04:28 PM
Originally posted by DeproOne@Mar 23 2007, 04:11 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/depro40001-1.jpg

is this straight enough.
yeah thats straight enuf id say add some 3d n just work from there

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 04:31 PM
i know how to do 3d but i dont know what else to do to the letters

[breakout]-azer
03-23-2007, 04:35 PM
try extendin the r leg dwn n mayby over laping some of the letters

dim
03-23-2007, 04:38 PM
depro thats great now you got to start moving the letters closer together and then add three demension

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 04:43 PM
Bigel:that stuff is siiiick

kersr:nice simples,i like the last one best

depro:you&#39;&#39;re getting there keep working,now you can add color and 3-d

well,was bored so i coloured a recent pencil sketch:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/trncoloured.jpg

im realy no happy with this

heres the pencil sketch:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/trnup.jpg

i already posted here it before

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 04:46 PM
i like em southpole. i like the color u picked 2

dim
03-23-2007, 04:47 PM
yo im rele liking the pencil sketch not the first because of all the rd line coming up from the peice

South-Pole
03-23-2007, 04:50 PM
yeah thats what im not happy with,i thought it would look good but after i regret what i did

larsson719
03-23-2007, 04:55 PM
This is my poor attempt at trying to piece tell me whats wrong with it plzzz
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/4457/image081ea0.jpg

My friend asked me to do this on a wall for him so I&#39;m practicing alot, what do you think of my choices: Rusto and Krylon -- NY FAT and NY THIN caps? I&#39;m changing colors to GREEN FILL and LIME GREEN outline..
http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/6298/image079cv1.jpg

Hazex
03-23-2007, 04:58 PM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1388/squadbx5.png (http://imageshack.us)

fast sketch i did this morning before going to school( i dont like the stuff all around but neway...) Crits plz?

edit: its my first time i tryed to shadowing so thats it :)

AnteUp
03-23-2007, 05:05 PM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Mar 22 2007, 09:58 PM
sumes shit is always tight...sume ur add-ons get better and better...i live for your add ons.... :wub: they make me go craaaazzzyyyyy :wacko:

ok sum other shit...lukks like shit too but crits please my sucky ass scanner again..
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/scan0005.jpg
bumpity bump bumpersss for critizzles pweeeessssss

ghozt
03-23-2007, 05:06 PM
http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/5364/scan0005fn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

theres the skate one blah im not happy with any of those two but whatevskis and hasex go simpler and crit the person above you&#33; :ph34r:

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 05:09 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/depro45.jpg

like this?

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 05:12 PM
lars - lose arrows mos def
hazex - pleaser please please go to simples

larsson719
03-23-2007, 05:15 PM
lose arrows on both?

React!
03-23-2007, 05:15 PM
Ignore tha stupid shit that says one..
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6941/quikinkthrowieli5.jpg
Advice to make it better? wa wa..

EDIT: Wow.. How can I forget that

Hazex - Stick with simples like the letters on ur keyboard. Keep doin that till you feel like you can move on then get more complex with the add-ons and watt not..

Lars - You def. gotta get rid of the arrows.Your letters are pretty nice on the second pic buh the arrows kills the whole thing..

DeproOne
03-23-2007, 05:19 PM
yea lars lose the arrows on both of them. make your letters look like the ones on the keyboard and then widen them and bend them and you should have something decent if you do it right...

react:


crit the one above you and you shall be crticized.
law of the forum

dim
03-23-2007, 05:32 PM
depro that much better keep it up and just build off of the :)

beastie_1989
03-23-2007, 05:39 PM
recent stuff i did not to great

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/9071/dsc00346ra3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/8152/dsc00350ta7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

critz please

dim
03-23-2007, 05:42 PM
i dont rele like th top one to much because of all the bits and things at the top of the letters but the second one looks pretty good id like to see it coloured

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-23-2007, 05:46 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Mar 22 2007, 04:04 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8258/1232371ou6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some scribbles . . . green markers died on me

looking nice chalk, maybe try angling the C southeast alil so teh bottom leg that goes right can go over teh bottom part of the H and not the middle of it
killin em.

Hazex
03-23-2007, 05:58 PM
beastie if you call that not to good i whant to see your `good`:)

depro your getting way better than the first post of u i saw keep working&#33;
just done this like now

http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/2590/simplexv2.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

larsson719
03-23-2007, 06:04 PM
the "s" looks wierd

Noddles912300
03-23-2007, 06:52 PM
Hazex need to work on letter sizing make your letters more porportional and the S covers up the I too much.

Hazex
03-23-2007, 06:55 PM
like keep all the letter the size of the p and e?

Noddles912300
03-23-2007, 06:58 PM
width and sizing over all. its like a balance beam they have to balance each other out. oh one more thing put two lines parrallel to each other and write inbetween them and use the bar method.

Hazex
03-23-2007, 07:02 PM
ok ty but can u explain the bar method plz i really whant to besome better :)

`Juke.
03-23-2007, 07:09 PM
ditch the colour fills for a while, ummm.. the 3d is ok i guess, but its easier to learn without it and add it later, dont slant them in like that, unless you really like the way it looks. but work on letter sizing.
I have no idea what the block method is, but for letter sizing? try getting some lined or grid paper and do it on that, its easier to see which ones you make bigger or smaller.

larsson719
03-23-2007, 07:15 PM
I think he means this? Scroll down until you see "How to Construct A Basic Letter"
Click Here (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=17479&st=15)

-ShAmEE-
03-23-2007, 07:26 PM
ermm. try simple blocked. letters so no overlaping. no fill, 3D, shadow or addons just letters, tha look like the ones on ur keyboard.

C-money fresh!
03-23-2007, 07:50 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b275/doodoopie/kove.jpg
for fosale

alive
03-23-2007, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands+Mar 23 2007, 05:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Edward"Sezer"Hands @ Mar 23 2007, 05:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Mar 22 2007, 04:04 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8258/1232371ou6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some scribbles . . . green markers died on me

looking nice chalk, maybe try angling the C southeast alil so teh bottom leg that goes right can go over teh bottom part of the H and not the middle of it
killin em. [/b][/quote]
makin it look easy, burrrns.

class pen freestylessss. kay. kay. kay-yuhhh. yea-yuhhh. haha. i feel like ive been stuck here for a while, any advice? especially u sky, i think ima pm u if u dont mind.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03104.jpg



peace.

dim
03-23-2007, 08:11 PM
alive- looks pretty good the only thing i dont like about it is the bottom bend in the "c" other than that it looks pretty sick
c-money fresh- the fill looks like it needs alot of work espeacialy the red in the back ground
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4245/img0086aj1.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-23-2007, 08:12 PM
umm. i think that u should still be goin with the simples. cuz dat aint workin.

alive
03-23-2007, 08:17 PM
Originally posted by alive+Mar 23 2007, 08:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Mar 23 2007, 08:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> </div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Edward"Sezer"Hands &#064; Mar 23 2007, 05:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Mar 22 2007, 04:04 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8258/1232371ou6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some scribbles . . . green markers died on me

looking nice chalk, maybe try angling the C southeast alil so teh bottom leg that goes right can go over teh bottom part of the H and not the middle of it
killin em. [/b][/quote]
makin it look easy, burrrns.

class pen freestylessss. kay. kay. kay-yuhhh. yea-yuhhh. haha. i feel like ive been stuck here for a while, any advice? especially u sky, i think ima pm u if u dont mind.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC03104.jpg



peace. [/b][/quote]
bumpppppp

`Juke.
03-23-2007, 08:18 PM
i dont really know where you can go from there Alive, maybe you could mess around with some interesting fills or something to put on the inside? Colour the 3D, play with angles, etc. i dont really know, it looks pretty good.

kersrone
03-23-2007, 08:35 PM
Originally posted by kersrone@Mar 23 2007, 04:10 PM
wicked snowboard. I don&#39;t like the color combinations, but other than that...

pear: nice simple color.
hacks: pretty nice, a very decent simple.
slushi: love the color. interesting that its not just a basic red to yellow fade.
SSC: I actually like the Gonad throw (dumb name though), add some highlights or make the zigzag fill more pronounced. try a different color for the addons.
The first green one I like as well. I like the messiness. The second purple one could use some highlights or something.. something so it doesnt look like a blob of purple

And what the hell... is it just me or did you write my name for those two?
If you look at it, it looks like it says KERSR for both. Am I crazy?
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/SSCkersr.jpg

Ive got some new stuff:

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/Chips_WhitefillBlueOutline.jpg

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/Balloony.jpg

http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u97/kersrone/Drips_Slatter_small.jpg
will probably make stickers out of some of these

crits?
bump

anie 1
03-23-2007, 08:42 PM
dim- i rele like your style keep it up
kersr- i like your simples
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6274/img0091oa6.jpg
it says sice crtis please :D

ZiareONE
03-23-2007, 09:39 PM
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000959small.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000957small.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000909.jpg
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000955small.jpg

sacwacko
03-23-2007, 09:43 PM
anyone wanna do an exchange???....i write "spie"
and can anyone find those freight outlines to print and practice on?

Sumoe
03-23-2007, 09:45 PM
ziare- work on structure. They kinda ugly.

dim
03-23-2007, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by dim@Mar 23 2007, 08:11 PM
alive- looks pretty good the only thing i dont like about it is the bottom bend in the "c" other than that it looks pretty sick
c-money fresh- the fill looks like it needs alot of work espeacialy the red in the back ground
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4245/img0086aj1.jpg
bumping for critz

Hazex
03-24-2007, 09:45 AM
ZIare i like your abstack is creativity and your speaker and really nice&#33;

ok so i did this to practice the `bloc method` and some shawdowing

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/8682/shortlo5.png (http://imageshack.us)

if sum1 had a good method to do help me to learn how to shadow i woudl liek to know ty :)

crits?

inkbits
03-24-2007, 09:51 AM
alive: I like the flow you held with the backstroke of the R, add a kick to the front to suit and that&#39;ll be a fat letter. Your A suits it allright but your C and E are taking a differnt direction of their own. My crit would be to maybe keep that same angle from the R and try and move it into all four letters.

kersrone: nice simples, I like &#39;em. Only crit from me is that maybe the dot/hole in your R&#39;s isn&#39;t sitting right being a strait circle, maybe mix that up a bit. Dribble effect on the last is something I&#39;ve used myself a lot in the past, love the look of that shit, looks nice man.

anie 1: You need some letters in there man before trying to take things wild looking. It&#39;s real hard to make out where they are.

ZiareONE: Maybe leave the colours alone for a bit and as Sume said work on structures. Keep at it.

dim: full perspective 3D is real hard to pull off with success, I&#39;d try and end it somewhere. Go fatter with your bars and work on making them consistant in a simple form.

Hazex: I&#39;d go much fatter with your bars. The thinner you work the harder it is to maintain consistancy.

Sky5: props as allways, mildstyle coallition, blackbook hookin&#39;.


...Random letterings from Brisvegas with beer....

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340435.jpg http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340438.jpg

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340442.jpg

(Reyzr)

Hazex
03-24-2007, 10:36 AM
inkbits sumthing like this? with lines more wide?
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/4386/rheal3te2.png (http://imageshack.us)

anie 1
03-24-2007, 10:52 AM
bumbing for crits http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/271/img0091oa6qt1.jpg :ph34r:

nickstix
03-24-2007, 12:04 PM
anie 1...simples, draw block letters like on your keyboard. i cant even see the letters in what youve posted.

Hazex...your on the right track by using the bars to sketch but the bars are way to uneven. if you have to sketch with a ruler to keep your lines striaght then do it untill you get the feel for things.

inkbits...your style is amazing, why u still postin in the toy forum?

dim...i would say take away the extensions, like the one comming from the center of the m dosent really fit in. just keep working on simples before going to far with addons.

ziare...dont go to far too fast, work on your simples and letter structures before doing extensions and crazy fills. plus those fills make it really hard to read. i like your last pen sketch of the radion though.

Havnet posted in awhile and ive been real busy so i havent been sketchin much, ill probably have a flick posted sometime today or tomorrow, peace

bonafied
03-24-2007, 12:12 PM
a little throwy i did on a folder, and a sketch http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1836/pic0315073jv2.jpg

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/262/pic0315072lm6.jpg

Hazex
03-24-2007, 01:06 PM
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/489/praticrz3.png (http://imageshack.us)

ive been practicing the bloc method i think i messed up this 1 wit the colors :(

ESKE one
03-24-2007, 01:12 PM
hazex- do keybord letters like the R H E A L and the erase your bar lines and then post the after we crit go back and do 3d

sumething i did
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025043.jpg
crits?

sky 5
03-24-2007, 01:20 PM
not bad, you got repititive moves so thats good but i dont see the W, looks like an H . . . . how big did you draw that? whole page? maybe trying doing skethces smaller and more controlled . . . diggin that WEST in your sig, thats the style i be shooting for

yup that middle bar for the A needs to be straightened

dim
03-24-2007, 01:20 PM
if i were you id fix the bar going across the "a"

DeproOne
03-24-2007, 01:26 PM
yup. make the middle bar on the a straight and on the w dont make the bottom longer then the far right bar and make them connect

nickstix
03-24-2007, 01:29 PM
guys im pretty sure that it says HAND not WAND, so its supposed to be an h, but if im wrong than that dosent look to much like a w at all.

dim
03-24-2007, 01:40 PM
hazex- lose the lines going thre the peice
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/549/img0092ch0.jpg di for short
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/2742/img0093nj8.jpg

DeproOne
03-24-2007, 01:57 PM
they look good to me dim. where do you get those trains from?
reakt, the tag says wand.

-Sinn-
03-24-2007, 02:11 PM
Reyzr like ur style that shits dope keep it up

KrookONE
03-24-2007, 02:12 PM
Originally posted by ZiareONE@Mar 23 2007, 09:39 PM

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000955small.jpg
nice freestyle..work on your handy and letter structure though...i also recommend a color wheel to see what colors go together

capitol
03-24-2007, 02:22 PM
DIM:The train looks tight
Hand:Fix the a, and your tag confuzzles me.
Bon: Sweet elephant, the background is pretty sweet in the second one, but its hard to make the word out with out the dots in the b and o.
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/2338/grafql1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7421/graf099ga9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
This alst one is kinda lame.
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1016/graf098gb6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

DeproOne
03-24-2007, 02:24 PM
envoy, you should go back to simples. leave the wild styles out for a while. practice getting basic structure

ESKE one
03-24-2007, 02:37 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 24 2007, 01:12 PM
hazex- do keybord letters like the R H E A L and the erase your bar lines and then post the after we crit go back and do 3d

sumething i did
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs30025043.jpg
crits?
it says hand the H in the tag is close to the A so it looks like a w

dim-nice simple train were you get those printouts?

envoy- simples all day y don&#39;t you listen to use and stop coloring like that its bad all together sorry man

DeproOne
03-24-2007, 02:44 PM
since it says hand...dont put that extra line inbetween the h and a on the tag. thats what makes it look like a w

South-Pole
03-24-2007, 02:52 PM
eske make the middle bar of the a straigther
capitol:don&#39;t try to rock wild styles yet make keyboard letters instead cuz how you wanna rock a wild style when you can&#39;t make simple letters
dim:those are nice keep it up

oh well some exchange i&#39;v done with fluffy bunnies

mines:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/cynicexchange.jpg

his:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Flu...s/Picture-1.jpg (http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Picture-1.jpg)

whahappen?
03-24-2007, 03:05 PM
HAHAHAHHAHA OMFG...
http://encyclopediadramatica.com/index.php/Hitler
http://encyclopediadramatica.com/index.php/Mecha-Hitler
SERIOUSLY READ ALL THE SHIT ON BOTH THOSE
alright crits so my post isnt deleted...
southpole the y is a lil small compared the cn and the i is too
hand make the d not so skinny i really like it though
dim make the di throw proportiooned a lil better

South-Pole
03-24-2007, 03:15 PM
lmfaoooo at the links

made my day lol

Dream.
03-24-2007, 03:20 PM
Alright, this isn&#39;t in a blackbook, but I did this while I was chillin&#39; at a friend&#39;s house.

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d171/Anunaki/SSPX0711.jpg

South-Pole
03-24-2007, 03:25 PM
make keyboard letters for a while

bonafied
03-24-2007, 04:30 PM
where do you get those blank train and truck pics from?

Hazex
03-24-2007, 05:52 PM
Sry dream but i dont understand your letters i dont know why

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/6672/burstzv2.png (http://imageshack.us)

this is a sketch i did in a exchange with outburst crits?

Dream.
03-24-2007, 05:56 PM
It&#39;s a mirror image..

AimoOne
03-24-2007, 06:23 PM
Oh my gosh..uuuuuuugh

Everyone on this page needs to do block&#39;s..

NOW..

Please..

Thanks

Scatterbrain_
03-24-2007, 06:45 PM
can i get some advice
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b25/sickinwyoming02/Wake1.jpg

F.R.A.T.
03-24-2007, 06:48 PM
looks kinda like krazzies style, before now

inkbits
03-24-2007, 06:52 PM
Originally posted by nickstix@Mar 25 2007, 03:04 AM
inkbits...your style is amazing, why u still postin in the toy forum?
I can give crits down here and it&#39;s where I started posting when I joined so ...umm yeah *shrugs*.

Dream: Keep it simple man and avoid sharp lines/edges. Are they actually letters? There&#39;s some weird shapes there.

Hazex: try and keep your letters the same height for a throw-up style like that and work hard on that handstyle man.


bump myself to avoid dry post.


http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340435.jpg http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340438.jpg

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340442.jpg

emokid
03-24-2007, 07:12 PM
inkbits, your style is so fucking nice. have you ever tried 3d on any of your sketches, i&#39;m not saying it would look better, i&#39;m just curious as to what it would look like :)

Ekers.Two.Two
03-24-2007, 07:13 PM
ink bits = WOW its fucking amazing, for howmuch time you been writing?

scatter brain = its not bad, cuold make a good roller

hazex = start simple throws , and do them for a while

dream. = BLOCK LETTERS LIKE THESE IM POSTING NOW :&#39;)

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011226.jpg
something i started crits plz , what could i chnage and all ?

KrookONE
03-24-2007, 07:18 PM
Originally posted by ZiareONE@Mar 23 2007, 09:39 PM

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000955small.jpg
jsut noticed..almost exact picture ehhh...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v640/x_yoHomie4Lyfe_x/Picture081.jpg

sacwacko
03-24-2007, 07:22 PM
Originally posted by bonafied@Mar 24 2007, 04:30 PM
where do you get those blank train and truck pics from?
seriously though....were can u get them....i saw them in this thread like hella long ago but i dont fee like goin 50 pages back.....

SeKz
03-24-2007, 07:26 PM
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9594/p004ca5.jpg

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6278/peeksvb3.jpg


and bump this one for no reason

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1994/p010hy3.jpg

Sumoe
03-24-2007, 07:36 PM
Originally posted by inkbits+Mar 24 2007, 06:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (inkbits @ Mar 24 2007, 06:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nickstix@Mar 25 2007, 03:04 AM
inkbits...your style is amazing, why u still postin in the toy forum?
I can give crits down here and it&#39;s where I started posting when I joined so ...umm yeah *shrugs*.

Dream: Keep it simple man and avoid sharp lines/edges. Are they actually letters? There&#39;s some weird shapes there.

Hazex: try and keep your letters the same height for a throw-up style like that and work hard on that handstyle man.


bump myself to avoid dry post.


http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340435.jpg http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340438.jpg

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10340442.jpg [/b][/quote]
:wub:

Snot
03-24-2007, 07:43 PM
^ I second that.
Nice stuff, great letters.

-ShAmEE-
03-24-2007, 07:48 PM
THIS PAGE LOOKS GOOD.

Nem
03-24-2007, 07:49 PM
to that guy who wrote ISREAL.
that was a really stupid comment that i made.
im the dumbass because i didn&#39;t get it, haha.
but yeah. im really sorry about that.
i did like the block style you had goin on them though.

Ekers.Two.Two
03-24-2007, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by Ekers.Two.Two@Mar 24 2007, 07:13 PM
ink bits = WOW its fucking amazing, for howmuch time you been writing?

scatter brain = its not bad, cuold make a good roller

hazex = start simple throws , and do them for a while

dream. = BLOCK LETTERS LIKE THESE IM POSTING NOW :&#39;)

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o82/elemerica/P1011226.jpg
something i started crits plz , what could i chnage and all ?
bump

capo93
03-24-2007, 07:54 PM
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s7/mek2_2007/Picture29.jpg
kinda crooked i knowandfucked up the k and tried to fix it but didnt work to well anyways crits or comments on it i know its a bit crooked....

INKBITS&SEKZ- fuuuuuuuuuuuucing siiiiiiiiiiick makes me not wanna post :(

**noen nice simple**

AnteUp
03-24-2007, 08:09 PM
ekers-i luv tha letters...dont change nuthin
seks-ur shit is hot
heres sum throwies ive bin doin
THESE ARE THROWIES...JUS SO YA KNO
for hazex
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/rheal.jpg
for des
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/des.jpg
and for stoke 1
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/stoke.jpg

Noddles912300
03-24-2007, 08:11 PM
capo the M and C seem unbalanced.
i hope ill post something soon but im caught up in school and all this junk. ill post a simple once i get better.

capo93
03-24-2007, 08:14 PM
its an e lol

ESKE one
03-24-2007, 08:29 PM
Originally posted by KrookONE+Mar 24 2007, 07:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KrookONE @ Mar 24 2007, 07:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ZiareONE@Mar 23 2007, 09:39 PM

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n34/siklogik/Art%20Work/IM000955small.jpg
jsut noticed..almost exact picture ehhh...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v640/x_yoHomie4Lyfe_x/Picture081.jpg [/b][/quote]
wow wat a bite

but any way inkibits and seks can you post your progessin in the progressin thread i want to see wat it takes to become really good like you guys if it iisnt a problem

0000
03-24-2007, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko+Mar 24 2007, 07:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sacwacko @ Mar 24 2007, 07:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bonafied@Mar 24 2007, 04:30 PM
where do you get those blank train and truck pics from?
seriously though....were can u get them....i saw them in this thread like hella long ago but i dont fee like goin 50 pages back..... [/b][/quote]
go to toronto kills and u can print them out

ESKE one
03-24-2007, 08:50 PM
Originally posted by 0000+Mar 24 2007, 08:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (0000 @ Mar 24 2007, 08:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 24 2007, 07:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-bonafied@Mar 24 2007, 04:30 PM
where do you get those blank train and truck pics from?
seriously though....were can u get them....i saw them in this thread like hella long ago but i dont fee like goin 50 pages back.....
go to toronto kills and u can print them out [/b][/quote]
im lost is this the right website

http://www.torontokills.com/usergallery/search.php

BIGel
03-24-2007, 09:00 PM
edit

REIS
03-24-2007, 09:26 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one+Mar 24 2007, 09:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one &#064; Mar 24 2007, 09:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by 0000@Mar 24 2007, 08:31 PM

Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 24 2007, 07:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-bonafied@Mar 24 2007, 04:30 PM
where do you get those blank train and truck pics from?
seriously though....were can u get them....i saw them in this thread like hella long ago but i dont fee like goin 50 pages back.....
go to toronto kills and u can print them out
im lost is this the right website

http://www.torontokills.com/usergallery/search.php [/b][/quote]
Heres a link:
http://www.graffiti.no/archives/
If you scroll down to the bottom u can find sum.

zale
03-24-2007, 10:28 PM
i sucked it up and tried a couple simples today. i know sloppy lines, usin a micron and sharpie.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010214-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010215-2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P1010216.jpg

sacwacko
03-24-2007, 10:58 PM
Originally posted by REIS+Mar 24 2007, 09:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (REIS @ Mar 24 2007, 09:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 24 2007, 09:50 PM

Originally posted by 0000@Mar 24 2007, 08:31 PM

Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 24 2007, 07:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-bonafied@Mar 24 2007, 04:30 PM
where do you get those blank train and truck pics from?
seriously though....were can u get them....i saw them in this thread like hella long ago but i dont fee like goin 50 pages back.....
go to toronto kills and u can print them out
im lost is this the right website

http://www.torontokills.com/usergallery/search.php
Heres a link:
http://www.graffiti.no/archives/
If you scroll down to the bottom u can find sum. [/b][/quote]
wut about the trucks???

burton i ride
03-24-2007, 11:25 PM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8562/img0539eo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
comments?

Fosale!
03-24-2007, 11:30 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010525.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010524.jpg
idk.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010523.jpg
simpls&#33;
for a crewmate mad fucked.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010522.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010519.jpg

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 12:09 AM
anyone wanna be a big help and 1-line my name 4 me?

i write "spie"

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 12:38 AM
do it yourself try dont bite

little scrubbb

Nem
03-25-2007, 12:45 AM
fosale - i like your simples a lot, their original. your handstyle looks a little shaky though. i dont know if i like it.

burton - your S and N are awesome, but the B (i think its a B ) doesn&#39;t really flow with the other letters. in my opinion. I&#39;d lose the little ball thing goin on. unless you really like that. i would just try to incorporate it better with the other letters.

zale - the first one is the best. the last one is kinda weird. lose the thing on the top of the R and the face on the E.

i think i&#39;ve found my new style. i&#39;ve been experimenting so much lately. my mind might explode kinda soon. i&#39;m most happy with the very bottom one.

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem12.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/character2.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/nem13.jpg

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 12:47 AM
on the karak make the front fingers skinner.

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 12:55 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 25 2007, 12:38 AM
do it yourself try dont bite

little scrubbb
im not biting....just in need 4 ideas <_<

capitol
03-25-2007, 01:04 AM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Mar 24 2007, 02:37 PM
[QUOTE=ESKE one,Mar 24 2007, 01:12 PM]
envoy- simples all day y don&#39;t you listen to use and stop coloring like that its bad all together sorry man
Whats so damn wrong with the colors, theyre the only things i liked out of those skeches.

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 01:06 AM
[QUOTE=ESKE one,Mar 24 2007, 01:12 PM]
envoy- simples all day y don&#39;t you listen to use and stop coloring like that its bad all together sorry man
Whats so damn wrong with the colors, theyre the only things i liked out of those skeches.

he might not be talkin bout the colors but how u colored it....idk wut ur talkin bout tho???

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 01:08 AM
shit....its commin out wrong...every edit&#33;^^^^^

garbage down tha way
03-25-2007, 01:33 AM
Burton-I don&#39;t like the smog or whatever but the letters are cool.

fosale- they&#39;re all good but i dont like your handstyle.

Nem-I like those a lot.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/earnthrowz.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/earnflare.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/earngreenorange.jpg

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 01:44 AM
reposting 4 critz....
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other055.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other051.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other058.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other059.jpg

Nem
03-25-2007, 01:48 AM
garbage - that last one is awesome. im guessing your scanner is black and white. but i think it&#39;s be cool to see that all inked up. take a picture or something.

garbage down tha way
03-25-2007, 01:49 AM
2nd photo down&#39;s black throwies are dope, id stick with those. I hate the complicated letters. maybe it&#39;s just me.

idiot
03-25-2007, 01:50 AM
http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o306/swimnasty/spie.jpg
spie not line but 2.............just as quick.

fosale some people need inspiration.......try not to shit on people for asking :D

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 01:54 AM
thnx....do u write nes?

idiot
03-25-2007, 02:41 AM
yuuuuupp

minor crimes
03-25-2007, 02:50 AM
i might post up a couple of sketches

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 03:06 AM
quick-n-easy......im bored.....
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/1007.jpg

EasyMac
03-25-2007, 04:28 AM
practice the spray cans more.......

alright this is REALLY crude as far as neatness and coloring goes but I don&#39;t post in the bbook thread often so here it goes , Ive still got a long way to go....

http://ourworld.cs.com/davewhoris/hemscolor.JPG

gysty
03-25-2007, 05:12 AM
first post...
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/wierddd.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/simples.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/newshizzle.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/DSC00120.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/DSC00119.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/simplestyle1.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/meh.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/brokenH.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/brokededup.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/bigR.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/magik.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-25-2007, 07:43 AM
seem to me that u need to go simpler. and stop with the addons. keep everything the same thickness. and dont waste ink buy doind filles yet.

-ShAmEE-
03-25-2007, 07:56 AM
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0194.jpg
http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u86/ShAm33/IMGP0192.jpg

crits

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:31 AM
only props I can give on these last two pages is to Fosale&#33;

everything else is aight but, just mediocre...some people need to do simples also.

dim
03-25-2007, 09:02 AM
train print outs enjoy
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...?showtopic=5894

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 09:04 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 25 2007, 08:31 AM
only props I can give on these last two pages is to Fosale&#33;

everything else is aight but, just mediocre...some people need to do simples also.
Yeah NEEGAS&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

AimoOne
03-25-2007, 09:41 AM
Originally posted by sacwacko+Mar 25 2007, 12:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sacwacko &#064; Mar 25 2007, 12:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bonafied@Mar 24 2007, 04:30 PM
where do you get those blank train and truck pics from?
seriously though....were can u get them....i saw them in this thread like hella long ago but i dont fee like goin 50 pages back..i really wanna sketch on them..... [/b][/quote]
you aint ready for Train&#39;s and Truck&#39;s yet..

Ahahaha..

Get it ? :huh: :lol:

garbage down tha way
03-25-2007, 09:49 AM
Originally posted by Nem@Mar 25 2007, 01:48 AM
garbage - that last one is awesome. im guessing your scanner is black and white. but i think it&#39;s be cool to see that all inked up. take a picture or something.
Wow thanks alot, I figured everyone would just say "stick to simples".

Naw it&#39;s color but i usually paint in B&W so i draw in B&W too.

AimoOne
03-25-2007, 09:51 AM
Garbage down tha way..you SHOULD go simpler..

Peace :D

Noddles912300
03-25-2007, 11:08 AM
nothing good the A in this is too small i know. just quick thing i did last nite messed up the 3-D. crits or advice?
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/7579/scan0003pz5.jpg

dim
03-25-2007, 11:13 AM
nice simple but if i were you i would put another bend in the second curve of the "s" but other tahn that things look good

fuckthatgame
03-25-2007, 11:27 AM
slab-looks good, just take some more time and make it look a little cleaner...
shame-THE M IS SICK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; i really like the A and the C but the r and e could use a little work man

my most recent work HAC

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/5159/p1010048bd2.jpg
the colors look alot better in person

dim
03-25-2007, 12:32 PM
looks good i rele like th 3d

F.R.A.T.
03-25-2007, 12:33 PM
hac looks alot like a thread

00-made-00
03-25-2007, 12:34 PM
i like it, the 3-d looks the bussiness.

fuckthatgame
03-25-2007, 12:38 PM
wat do u mean looks like a thread?

dim
03-25-2007, 12:40 PM
Originally posted by dim@Mar 24 2007, 01:40 PM
hazex- lose the lines going thre the peice
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/549/img0092ch0.jpg di for short
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/2742/img0093nj8.jpg
bump

Hazex
03-25-2007, 12:40 PM
fuckthatgame you 3d is jsut dope&#33; and the bleu outline makes the sketche go out good job

Alot of ppl said to me to do keyboard letter ncie and simple so i did and i tryed for the first time to do shadows crits?

i know i messed up in the r leg and the lines in the a lol :)

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/7747/realsimplehu6.png (http://imageshack.us)

dim
03-25-2007, 12:45 PM
why are some of your lines so jagged

Hazex
03-25-2007, 12:52 PM
u talking in tha r?i dont know it was eary in tha morning ....ZZZZZZZZzzzzzzz

F.R.A.T.
03-25-2007, 12:59 PM
Originally posted by fuckthatgame@Mar 25 2007, 12:38 PM
wat do u mean looks like a thread?
srry i meant tag but when i went to change it the page had already loaded

Noddles912300
03-25-2007, 02:50 PM
Rheal dont bother with coloring yet keep working on simples.

e_vol
03-25-2007, 03:03 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m41/bukcn8ked/evol.jpg

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 03:03 PM
^wtf are you talking abt.
that simple is hot
i really like it.
he can color as he pleases.

hes earned his first gym badge
kicked broks ass
at the pewter town gym
he crushed through that onix and those pesky lvl 4 gravlers
go Rheal&#33;
&#092;/&#092;/007 &#092;/&#092;/007&#33;

e_vol
03-25-2007, 03:03 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m41/bukcn8ked/naner.jpg

Hazex
03-25-2007, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 25 2007, 03:03 PM
^wtf are you talking abt.
that simple is hot
i really like it.
he can color as he pleases.

hes earned his first gym badge
kicked broks ass
at the pewter town gym
he crushed through that onix and those pesky lvl 4 gravlers
go Rheal&#33;
&#092;/&#092;/007 &#092;/&#092;/007&#33;
ty that really gets me happy but i know i sould not color so i only put some little things .

PS:is my shadowing good no1 talked about it :o

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 03:16 PM
is fine, just a little further back then i would have done it but hell what do i know.

ive only beaten every pokemon game and collected every single pokemon like 923466398734698576345 gazillion times

thats like 1/69 of the times that ive beaten the elite four.

seriously like GAWD.

Hazex
03-25-2007, 04:08 PM
evol i like your style maybe just put sumthing in the a and the e in the top sketch

so i just did a other simple i didint color much no shadow beacause i dont know if the way i do them are ok. no comment on other sketch :angry:

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/1518/heavyma3.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits i know the y is little i didint have enof space sry ...

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 04:21 PM
Originally posted by dim+Mar 25 2007, 12:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (dim @ Mar 25 2007, 12:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dim@Mar 24 2007, 01:40 PM
hazex- lose the lines going thre the peice
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/549/img0092ch0.jpg di for short
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/2742/img0093nj8.jpg
bump [/b][/quote]
were did u get the trucks from???

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 04:23 PM
Originally posted by garbage down tha way+Mar 25 2007, 09:49 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (garbage down tha way @ Mar 25 2007, 09:49 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Nem@Mar 25 2007, 01:48 AM
garbage - that last one is awesome. im guessing your scanner is black and white. but i think it&#39;s be cool to see that all inked up. take a picture or something.
Wow thanks alot, I figured everyone would just say "stick to simples".

Naw it&#39;s color but i usually paint in B&W so i draw in B&W too. [/b][/quote]
u gotta know who to listen to though...

for example if people who are worse than me say I suck, It doesn&#39;t matter to me, same thing goes for if they say my shit is tight, I only really care about the comments made by people who are on my level or better, ya dig.

Nem
03-25-2007, 05:27 PM
yeah. i usually add at the end of my crits "what the hell do i know. im incredibly toy. dont take my advice, etc."

i just tell people if i like it or not. thats all i can do at this stage.

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 05:56 PM
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/1009.jpg
crits anyone??

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 05:57 PM
how about these....??
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/1010.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/1011.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/1012.jpg
bout 2 hit a rooftop wit the bottom 1

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 06:15 PM
NO&#33;
your not allowed to paint.

only on plywood for now.

simple simple simple.

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 06:18 PM
wtf.....why plywood????

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 06:38 PM
cause no one wants to see your ugly shit on a rooftop/wall/train etc.

for now PLYWOOD is your homie.

F.R.A.T.
03-25-2007, 06:52 PM
dude he doest mean just plywood just anything people wont see

Zep0
03-25-2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I actually kinda like the throwine except the E.

naner - your throw is pretty fresh too.

Just a simple...crits?
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