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LowtoriouS
03-25-2007, 08:12 PM
ayo, im new to the site..
it be dope if i could get some crits on my burner.. it would really help alot

thnx!



http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t148/lowtorious/scan0001.jpg


"LOW"

Samp1e
03-25-2007, 08:14 PM
lose the arrows, extensions, addons, do simples.

entri
03-25-2007, 08:15 PM
hah talk about mr wiggles..

ight keep it simple.. dont look for graffiti alphabets on google.. start with like STRAIGHT letters pretty much block.. work your way up..since ur new i was nice..hah..

but ye serious keep it REAL simple and then progress

DeproOne
03-25-2007, 08:15 PM
first off. thats NOT a burner. second, i hope you dont paint that tag at the bottom. third, looks like u tried to copy off the graffiticreator thing (no-no). fourth, go to simples. study form, study structure...now

capo93
03-25-2007, 08:16 PM
ya so im trying out pieces using bars and for some reason i find that it looks better with all the bars still in it not after ive outlined and erased them any tips on what i can do about it?

F.R.A.T.
03-25-2007, 08:17 PM
yea thats a 100% bite of graffiti creator sad thing is, its looks like shit
and yea capo i feel the same, try colouring it before pening it. or extend ur lines into the letter

Samp1e
03-25-2007, 08:18 PM
show us before and after pictures

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by LowtoriouS@Mar 25 2007, 07:12 PM
ayo, im new to the site..
it be dope if i could get some crits on my burner.. it would really help alot

thnx!
first of all it's not a burner...

second, it's a Mr. Wiggles bite...

third, don't bite shit you prick...

fourth, it's ugly as fuck...

and lastly do block letters and stop depending on graffiti alphabets for your letters.

okay? :)

Zep0
03-25-2007, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 25 2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I actually kinda like the throwine except the E.

naner - your throw is pretty fresh too.

Just a simple...crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philos123.jpg
Bump, to the new page...

Capo if it looks better..leave them in?

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:21 PM
not likin' how every letter goes over the last one.

DeproOne
03-25-2007, 08:21 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/crap.jpg

some crap i did at 2 this morning.
not great but im practicin.

:unsure: http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/cough.jpg :unsure:

DeproOne
03-25-2007, 08:22 PM
i think thats dope philos

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:22 PM
last ones pretty good, keep it up, just keep your thicknesses consistent for now.

Bazer
03-25-2007, 08:24 PM
meh..im not even gonna point out that last thing depro posted.

Hazex
03-25-2007, 08:24 PM
Originally posted by Hazex@Mar 25 2007, 12:40 PM
fuckthatgame you 3d is jsut dope! and the bleu outline makes the sketche go out good job

Alot of ppl said to me to do keyboard letter ncie and simple so i did and i tryed for the first time to do shadows crits?

i know i messed up in the r leg and the lines in the a lol :)

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/7747/realsimplehu6.png (http://imageshack.us)
lotorious do simple letters like my sketche

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:25 PM
you got my PM Baze?

LowtoriouS
03-25-2007, 08:26 PM
ye see i got it off a website nd tried to put a lil lauren into it... didnt work out too well ...see why im new? lol come on help me out i can do tags but not burners nd shit it doesnt work well when i try nd convert a tag into a burner... got n e tips?

Bazer
03-25-2007, 08:27 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 25 2007, 07:25 PM
you got my PM Baze?
the one with your uh...entry? yeah i got that one. i dont know when were gonna do the whachamadoodle. i gotta color mine still. got any background ideas i can use?

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:27 PM
from what I can see you can't do a tag, the tag is mad ugly, do block letters for now don't try fancy shit.

Baze- IDK did we need a background? cause mine didn't have one.

ThrowItUP
03-25-2007, 08:31 PM
uhhh, no flix to crit on dis page, so ill get some upp.
newww piece done like 4 minutes ago, fucked up on the 3-D
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/OhDipiitzNick/Epikmetal.jpg
Critsss?

LowtoriouS
03-25-2007, 08:32 PM
no trust me thats a few years old its the only picture i had on this crappy computer... its been a few years ive been practicing... i just dont do the shit u usualy see ... i make it a lil more girly... can anyone tell me how to go from tag to something thats NOT throwup i hate that shit

dim
03-25-2007, 08:36 PM
epik- fix the "K" the bend in it goes to far in and the pink around it is no offense but rele ugly but keep at it

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:37 PM
how old are you? it seems like you're 9 or something. You obviously no nothing about graffiti, learn more and then we'll help you...directed at "Lowtorious" and if you've been writing for a few years and have only gotten as far as you are now, I'm sorry but you kinda suck.

Bazer
03-25-2007, 08:39 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 25 2007, 07:27 PM
Baze- IDK did we need a background? cause mine didn't have one.
no, you could do whatever you wanted..but i dont like seeing pages in my blackbook so empty with just a peice on them..all alone..u dont call the purple in the back a background????

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:40 PM
maybe a little bit.

Bazer
03-25-2007, 08:41 PM
:lol:
haha...so any ideas? :)

alive
03-25-2007, 08:42 PM
Originally posted by LowtoriouS@Mar 25 2007, 07:32 PM
can anyone tell me how to go from tag to something thats NOT throwup i hate that shit
haha. how the fuck u gonna knock the throws? a real, down n dirty, true grime, throw. fuck. a wall covered in that real ish, top to bottom, thatl burn fuck all. black. white. chrome. simples rockin side to side, back n forth. nothin better. the fuckin real.

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:44 PM
uhhh, I do a two or thee inch wide line going down sometimes that is the same color as my forcefield, I do bubbles alot, those flame thingys, ummm stars and shit, karaks if your good at them, I dunno, you prolly thought of everything I just said lol.

atesk-word, how you gunna do that shit, throws are essential, though I do suck at them.

alive
03-25-2007, 08:45 PM
playyyed. not that im original. ha.



fuck, if u can rock the ill old styles well enough, it doesnt matter.

Bazer
03-25-2007, 08:46 PM
umm..nah..i dont like using that kind of stuff anymore....

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:47 PM
haha what else is there, I can't think of anything either, everything is played out, but if you can make it look good, you should be fine. ;)

Bazer
03-25-2007, 08:48 PM
crap i need this one marker..the pastel purple sharpie..i have an ultra fine point one but it takes to long for a whole peice.....

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:49 PM
rack some prismas, dey gotsis sem doap callers...haha

Bazer
03-25-2007, 08:52 PM
nah..i want specificaly the second one to the left..

http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B0004F7F...ZZZZ_SS260_.jpg (http://images.amazon.com/images/P/B0004F7FRW.16._SCLZZZZZZZ_SS260_.jpg)

Sumoe
03-25-2007, 08:54 PM
haha I have that one, not kiddin' my mom got it for me for some reason and was like here is a pastel marker.

Bazer
03-25-2007, 09:10 PM
yeah, they color nice, all i hate is that i racked the ultra fine point not the regular one. :(

OutbuRst
03-25-2007, 09:17 PM
just messing around with some new paint markers.... they kind of suck.

The green-teal and royal blue are DecoColor and the rest of the colors are from medium bold Sharpie Paint markers. The green-teal was kind of kicked from the beginning...sooo it doesnt look that great

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5033/burstpaintzd6.th.jpg (http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=burstpaintzd6.jpg)

bonafied
03-25-2007, 09:17 PM
i know i asked this before, but where can you get just the truck pics? thanks for the trains, but no one had anything for the trucks, so does anyone have any links or anything?

DeproOne
03-25-2007, 09:23 PM
whered u get the trains from

Zep0
03-25-2007, 09:26 PM
dear god....someone posted a link farther back...goooo loook...theres a thread about em somewhere...search for it.

React!
03-25-2007, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by React!@Mar 23 2007, 05:15 PM
Ignore tha stupid shit that says one..
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6941/quikinkthrowieli5.jpg
Advice to make it better? wa wa..

Hazex - Stick with simples like the letters on ur keyboard. Keep doin that till you feel like you can move on then get more complex with the add-ons and watt not..

Lars - You def. gotta get rid of the arrows.Your letters are pretty nice on the second pic buh the arrows kills the whole thing..
yea i kno i posted this a while back buh never got feed so any crits?

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 09:53 PM
Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 25 2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I actually kinda like the throwine except the E.

naner - your throw is pretty fresh too.

Just a simple...crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philos123.jpg
philos????....were u write????

uhhh
03-25-2007, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by alive+Mar 25 2007, 07:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive &#064; Mar 25 2007, 07:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-LowtoriouS@Mar 25 2007, 07:32 PM
can anyone tell me how to go from tag to something thats NOT throwup i hate that shit
haha. how the fuck u gonna knock the throws? a real, down n dirty, true grime, throw. fuck. a wall covered in that real ish, top to bottom, thatl burn fuck all. black. white. chrome. simples rockin side to side, back n forth. nothin better. the fuckin real. [/b][/quote]
YES.
i went bombing last night,
i love it so god damn much.

AnteUp
03-25-2007, 10:09 PM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/hayz3d.jpg
CRITS PLEASE

e_vol
03-25-2007, 10:11 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m41/bukcn8ked/brap1.jpg
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m41/bukcn8ked/evol.jpg

crits welcome.

AnteUp
03-25-2007, 10:15 PM
BUMP TO NEXT PAGE CRITS PLEASE
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/hayz3d-1.jpg

Hazex
03-25-2007, 10:36 PM
wow anteup i liek that style there liek big blocs lol :)

Anyway i did a simple one and i know i messed up the 3d in tha a

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2281/simplerealzo4.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

Zep0
03-25-2007, 11:10 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko+Mar 25 2007, 08:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sacwacko @ Mar 25 2007, 08:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Mar 25 2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I actually kinda like the throwine except the E.

naner - your throw is pretty fresh too.

Just a simple...crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philos123.jpg
philos????....were u write???? [/b][/quote]
Im down in Tampa Fl...Why?

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 11:13 PM
Originally posted by F.R.A.T.@Mar 25 2007, 06:52 PM
dude he doest mean just plywood just anything people wont see
no, i meant just plywood.

save blank wall space for someone halfway decent.

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 11:39 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Mar 25 2007, 10:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Mar 25 2007, 10:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-F.R.A.T.@Mar 25 2007, 06:52 PM
dude he doest mean just plywood just anything people wont see
no, i meant just plywood.

save blank wall space for someone halfway decent. [/b][/quote]
always talkin shit.... <_<

Fosale!
03-25-2007, 11:40 PM
trying to get you motivated
step it up&#33;

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 11:40 PM
Originally posted by Zep0+Mar 25 2007, 10:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Zep0 @ Mar 25 2007, 10:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 25 2007, 08:53 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Mar 25 2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I actually kinda like the throwine except the E.

naner - your throw is pretty fresh too.

Just a simple...crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philos123.jpg
philos????....were u write????
Im down in Tampa Fl...Why? [/b][/quote]
thats clean n shit but i was wondering
cuz i have been herein about a local that
rites ur name.....but i dont no
how he spells it....jw

sacwacko
03-25-2007, 11:56 PM
im thinkin of changin my name....
wut u guys think...
any suggestions???

memo
03-26-2007, 12:05 AM
Anteup - sick block letters, id define the letters a TINY bit more. and maybe colour in that part between the Z and the Y so it doesnt look like they are over lapping (unless thats what you wanted...??)

i got tired of just straight letters for today..ill be back at them tomorrow dont worry lol crits please &#33;
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00573.jpg
im not sure what to do inside the B yet..any input on that?

*edit* sacwacko - just write out the alphabet and see what letters your best at and make a word out of those, or you could just chose a word you think is cool and spell it differently (ie. Fire = Phire = Phyre = Fy-R etc)

AnteUp
03-26-2007, 12:13 AM
FINALLY SUM CRITS&#33;&#33;&#33; thanks man well when i posted it i figured out that i forgot to do that...thanks again cuz people have bi bullshittin on this page for tha longest time :angry: <_< :D
o and on urs...ur at the stage i was at for a while...were i tried to make everything lukk crude n shit cuz i thought it lukked gud...so wat i think you should do is make em simple and not all blocky n shit...
my 95 cents... :D

Hazex
03-26-2007, 12:44 AM
Originally posted by Hazex@Mar 25 2007, 09:36 PM
wow anteup i liek that style there liek big blocs lol :)

Anyway i did a simple one and i know i messed up the 3d in tha a

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2281/simplerealzo4.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
bumb no crits :(

DeproOne
03-26-2007, 12:49 AM
make the letters straight up and down.leave off the 3d and color for a min till u get the straights down.

i didnt think my Es were ok so i sketched one to put on her to see wat u guys say
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/eeeeee.jpg

Hazex
03-26-2007, 01:27 AM
Originally posted by DeproOne@Mar 25 2007, 11:49 PM
make the letters straight up and down.leave off the 3d and color for a min till u get the straights down.

i didnt think my Es were ok so i sketched one to put on her to see wat u guys say
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/eeeeee.jpg
depro u mean i sould do all my letter liek the e?

sevewon
03-26-2007, 04:10 AM
http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/IMG_1783.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/IMG_1782.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/IMG_1781.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/IMG_1779.jpg

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c353/stumpy_80/IMG_1780.jpg

crit crit crit

HuntingLOLs
03-26-2007, 08:02 AM
Originally posted by Hazex+Mar 26 2007, 12:27 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hazex @ Mar 26 2007, 12:27 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DeproOne@Mar 25 2007, 11:49 PM
make the letters straight up and down.leave off the 3d and color for a min till u get the straights down.

i didnt think my Es were ok so i sketched one to put on her to see wat u guys say
image
depro u mean i sould do all my letter liek the e? [/b][/quote]
no he means you should do letters like the one&#39;s represented on your keyboard, keep them simple and don&#39;t try his style yet

and depro, drop the arrow, looks strange

DeproOne
03-26-2007, 09:35 AM
yea i know. i couldnt do anything about it cuz i did it in pen.

so besides that is it ok?

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 10:59 AM
Originally posted by Zep0+Mar 26 2007, 03:10 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Zep0 &#064; Mar 26 2007, 03:10 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 25 2007, 08:53 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Mar 25 2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I
..god..i cnnot get over how good Aimo is..
Just a simple...crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philos123.jpg
gee i think Aimo is probs the best wirter in here..his stlye is so sick
yeah..i agree..i fucking love his karaks too..so cool..ad different..and all his shit is soooo clean..it makes my wanna hump this teddy next to me.. [/b][/quote]
:blink: this is freaky nice...thats howta doah simpleah :lol: &#39;ah :D &#39;eh

and thanks for ze quotes guys

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

neza
03-26-2007, 12:17 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 25 2007, 06:15 PM
NO&#33;
your not allowed to paint.

only on plywood for now.

simple simple simple.
listen to this guy ive been sketching solid for over a year and im just starting to understand the way stuff works i havent got the hang of it by any means just begining to understand

as for painting i did my first peice the other day and it sucked ass but i learned loads about how to paint but all that would mean nothing if i hadnt put the time in sketching

molotow_15
03-26-2007, 12:28 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne+Mar 26 2007, 03:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AimoOne @ Mar 26 2007, 03:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 26 2007, 03:10 AM

Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 25 2007, 08:53 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Mar 25 2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I
..god..i cnnot get over how good Aimo is..
Just a simple...crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philos123.jpg
gee i think Aimo is probs the best wirter in here..his stlye is so sick
yeah..i agree..i fucking love his karaks too..so cool..ad different..and all his shit is soooo clean..it makes my wanna hump this teddy next to me..
:blink: this is freaky nice...thats howta doah simpleah :lol: &#39;ah :D &#39;eh

and thanks for ze quotes guys

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: [/b][/quote]
ras smokes weed

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 01:30 PM
i inhaled the fumes from weed once..thats it actually..i wanna try some tho :)

sky 5
03-26-2007, 01:44 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15+Mar 26 2007, 11:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ Mar 26 2007, 11:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 26 2007, 03:59 PM

Originally posted by Zep0@Mar 26 2007, 03:10 AM

Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 25 2007, 08:53 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Zep0@Mar 25 2007, 07:07 PM
Spie...simples...I
..god..i cnnot get over how gay Aimo is..
Just a simple...crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/philos123.jpg
gee i think Aimo is probs the best cock sucker in here..his stlye is so sick
yeah..i agree..i fucking love his handis too..so cool..ad different..and all his shit is soooo clean..it makes my wanna hump this teddy next to me..
:blink: this is freaky nice...thats howta doah simpleah :lol: &#39;ah :D &#39;eh

and thanks for ze quotes guys

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
ras smokes poles?&#33;??&#33; PM RIGHT AWAY [/b][/quote]
:D :D :D :D

Hazex
03-26-2007, 01:46 PM
sry for breaking the page with my simple shit but lol ppl said to me to do keyboard letter with no color no 3d so i did 1:question when do i know that i can stop doing keyboard letter? :o anyway this is it

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3083/reallysimplefp6.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits....if u can crit this

sketch3
03-26-2007, 01:50 PM
wen they stop being shit,make ur letters out of bars that overlap, so the E will have one vertical rectangle with 3 horizontal ones crossing it

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 01:57 PM
gee..i fort simples was easy..you making a huge fucking dumbass job outta them..sorry for being harsh but its true..iv never seen anyone make such a fucking mess out a SIMPLE..hence..SIMPLE..gee..its easy...HEZEX..thats it..god,mother,mary,SIMPLE..

well..i said id wouldnt sketch for abit cu of ma ps3..but ia do some crazy shit..a simple AIMO..and a crazy page of karaks.. :D :rolleyes:

coming soon.. :D

Hazex
03-26-2007, 01:59 PM
Originally posted by Hazex+Mar 25 2007, 07:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hazex @ Mar 25 2007, 07:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hazex@Mar 25 2007, 12:40 PM
fuckthatgame you 3d is jsut dope&#33; and the bleu outline makes the sketche go out good job

Alot of ppl said to me to do keyboard letter ncie and simple so i did and i tryed for the first time to do shadows crits?

i know i messed up in the r leg and the lines in the a lol :)

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/7747/realsimplehu6.png (http://imageshack.us)
lotorious do simple letters like my sketche [/b][/quote]
sketch 3 liek this one i did before?

Fluffy Bunnies
03-26-2007, 02:10 PM
^^
Make ur lines straight and have the same width...

Some old... I don&#39;t think I posted it yet.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/100_3282.jpg

''SCC''
03-26-2007, 02:18 PM
rheal
yes keep doing that
bring your letters closer to eachother like so they overlap...
and try 3d its ez just do it to the middle..

Hazex
03-26-2007, 02:19 PM
ok i did a other simple wit the bars lines still there fluffy bunny you use the bar method like me but much cooler

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6682/simpleeck6.png (http://imageshack.us)

sketch3
03-26-2007, 02:20 PM
Originally posted by Hazex+Mar 26 2007, 12:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hazex @ Mar 26 2007, 12:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hazex@Mar 25 2007, 07:24 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hazex@Mar 25 2007, 12:40 PM
fuckthatgame you 3d is jsut dope&#33; and the bleu outline makes the sketche go out good job

Alot of ppl said to me to do keyboard letter ncie and simple so i did and i tryed for the first time to do shadows crits?

i know i messed up in the r leg and the lines in the a lol :)

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/7747/realsimplehu6.png (http://imageshack.us)
lotorious do simple letters like my sketche
sketch 3 liek this one i did before? [/b][/quote]
KINDA, U JUST GOT LEARN PROPORTION IN LETTERS BUT THATS BETTER

React!
03-26-2007, 02:57 PM
Ignore that &#39;one&#39; shit.
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6941/quikinkthrowieli5.jpg
Give crits u homo thugs..

Hazex - For one try writing your name like that so you can get the feel with your letters and not &#39;simple&#39; lol and yes see how better it looks when u use bars keep doin it kid..

Cynic - Nice shit fam im feelin that right ther.

aeon
03-26-2007, 03:12 PM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9776/dsc00085bx0.jpg
ANO

react - straighten out the top of the k n sort out the arm, make the 1st stroke of the n squarer n lose the second bump on the 2nd stroke....

nice stuff fluffy bunnies - doesit read cych? like the chunky style definately

that philos sick is of course

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-26-2007, 03:17 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/8273/graff001mo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Obviously Im not finished and the 3-d lines are not going to be there in the end of it, but how do you guys like it so far?

it says KRES

trashhh
03-26-2007, 03:30 PM
Kres its quite a mess and dont post something that unfinished without even bothering to give crits to the guy above........
Ano i quite like it good letters just not feelin the extensions either side

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-26-2007, 03:48 PM
Originally posted by aeon@Mar 26 2007, 02:12 PM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9776/dsc00085bx0.jpg
ANO

react - straighten out the top of the k n sort out the arm, make the 1st stroke of the n squarer n lose the second bump on the 2nd stroke....

nice stuff fluffy bunnies - doesit read cych? like the chunky style definately

that philos sick is of course
It flows but then there are parts that im sure you&#39;ll notice that dont really go with it, like some rounded tips, and I think the overall piece is a little too thick for what you were going for; BUT You got the right idea, just keep doin what your doin

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 03:52 PM
it doesnt flow at all..it started looking at it..it started flowing like a river..but then the middle bar on the A stopped it like a damn..uuugh

pecie up soooooon :D

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-26-2007, 03:58 PM
I was tryin to be as nice as possible

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 04:01 PM
being nice desnt make a person get better ;)

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 04:02 PM
i thought it said "ANK" at first. woulda looked a lot better as a "k" instead of an "o".

...waiting on imageshack which is being gay...pictures shortly.

Cyto Aka Son1c
03-26-2007, 04:03 PM
Originally posted by trashhh@Mar 26 2007, 02:30 PM
Kres its quite a mess and dont post something that unfinished without even bothering to give crits to the guy above........
Ano i quite like it good letters just not feelin the extensions either side
Yeah I know man, the problem was that I needed the I of the K to have an extension so that there wouldnt be a gap and make it look funny, although I could have moved it closer together I regret the decision.

whahappen?
03-26-2007, 04:08 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 26 2007, 03:02 PM
i thought it said "ANK" at first. woulda looked a lot better as a "k" instead of an "o".

...waiting on imageshack which is being gay...pictures shortly.
dude i know wtf is up with it today

Fosale!
03-26-2007, 04:18 PM
the lines arent really shakey.
its just my moms stupid camera >:0()
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010529.jpg

-ShAmEE-
03-26-2007, 04:24 PM
like them loads get growing on me like fags. I WANT IT MORE AND MORE.

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 04:27 PM
some sketches from school.
a more complicated style than usual that i&#39;ve been practicing...
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2907/scan0010ah9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
says "AME" didnt have enough room to finish the &#39;ns&#39; so i cut my losses...too complicated??

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2599/scan0011xo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
unfished shit not sure if i like where its going but oh well.

Fosale!
03-26-2007, 04:32 PM
Dude, ditch that E and that Face
other than that.
its illin.

Zep0
03-26-2007, 04:33 PM
Fosale...Its pretty good, bottom of the E looks a little thin and I&#39;m not feelin the squig off of the T other than that, not bad.

Atesk..Top of the A in both pieces are just too crazy...The last bar on the first M is too crazy but I&#39;m really feelin the second M. The E isnt bad, just I would thicken up the middle bar and then it would look great. I dont know how I feel on the face...but if you want it there keep it. (By the way I remembered today that you write amens (playing with letters) dear god, such a fun name...

Aeno...shorten up the middle A bar, and either make it a K or loose that swoosh off the O, other than that pretty good.

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 04:34 PM
but i like the face :( . nah i was just gettin to removing the nose. might make it look better.

ya the e i got lazy with...was thinking about changing it.

Fosale!
03-26-2007, 04:34 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 26 2007, 03:18 PM
the lines arent really shakey.
its just my moms stupid camera >:0()
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010529.jpg
bumps new page

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 04:37 PM
the &#39;x&#39; reminds me of Dr.Sex&#39;s throwy. looks dope tho.

Fluffy Bunnies
03-26-2007, 04:37 PM
Letters suck but nice proportion and lines



Now it&#39;s time for osme ms paint magic kiddies
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/paintaholics.jpg

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 04:38 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 26 2007, 03:27 PM
some sketches from school.
a more complicated style than usual that i&#39;ve been practicing...
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2907/scan0010ah9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
says "AME" didnt have enough room to finish the &#39;ns&#39; so i cut my losses...too complicated??

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2599/scan0011xo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
unfished shit not sure if i like where its going but oh well.
bump bottom of the page...i like your style fluffy. stay up.

whahappen?
03-26-2007, 04:51 PM
cynic the top of the n is thick
amens make the e go to right(the top bar)like you did with the am and fix up the bottom half
fosale its..hawt
two letter throw
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5637/picture028sp1.jpg
my e&#39;s big i know

Fosale!
03-26-2007, 04:52 PM
fluffy i think your name would look hotter, be easier, and flow better if you wrote
cynik

e_vol
03-26-2007, 04:58 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m41/bukcn8ked/7.jpg

feeeeeedback.

Fluffy Bunnies
03-26-2007, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 26 2007, 03:52 PM
fluffy i think your name would look hotter, be easier, and flow better if you wrote
cynik
Hey thanks... cuz it was geting anoyying having 2 c&#39;

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 05:06 PM
highlighting and the character looks dope and shit...but that throwy just aint cuttin it e_vol.

hadda post my throwy seeing as everyone else was...
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/7193/scan0012gf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ignore the whack ass drop shadow...still gettin the feel for this one.

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 05:17 PM
atesk..i donno were iv seen that A..but iv sure as hell seen it..unless you thougt of it yourself..which if you did..i likey very muchily..and i aint really likin the peices up there nither..i think theyre far too compicated and dont really flow neither..like the face ruins it..still..if you lost the big extension on top on the left leg of the M..the M would be nice..

Fosale..your dizzle unbidizzle.. :blink: ..i freeakizle lovizlle itizzle

well..some shit simple im putting on my big whole pager &#33;.. :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/11111111111.jpg

any adjusment befor i ink ?

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 05:22 PM
the "a" is all me baby. i dont bite shit. i liked that "a" cause i thought it was unique...no :(

neza
03-26-2007, 05:23 PM
hot looking throws there guys i suck at throws

ras i cant see it dunno bout anyone else just a big load of white for me

taking this to a legal wall on sunday crits?

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8333/03262007101428pmok5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sorry bout the pic scanner is crap

-neza

(edit spelling)

-ShAmEE-
03-26-2007, 05:24 PM
looks sick. karak.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
03-26-2007, 05:29 PM
aint done shit in a week so here ya go.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1821.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1822.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1823.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/STA_1824.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1827.jpg

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 05:32 PM
shit looks ten time better with a fill sezer. even if it&#39;s simple like that. i draws you towards the peice more. play around with some more fills dood.

Dream Creation
03-26-2007, 05:34 PM
NEZZA VERRY NICE. and edward dunno weather i like the bottom karak thing vey odd

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 05:36 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;@Mar 26 2007, 09:24 PM
looks sick. karak.
yer..whole page of them

ooh..atesk..good..freaky ace A..niiicceee ( in borat voice )

Mse
03-26-2007, 05:40 PM
weeeeeeeeeeee, its been a while
gimme 25, new flix new flix new flix
oh yeah&#33;

AimoOne
03-26-2007, 05:43 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 26 2007, 09:17 PM
atesk..i donno were iv seen that A..but iv sure as hell seen it..unless you thougt of it yourself..which if you did..i likey very muchily..and i aint really likin the peices up there nither..i think theyre far too compicated and dont really flow neither..like the face ruins it..still..if you lost the big extension on top on the left leg of the M..the M would be nice..

Fosale..your dizzle unbidizzle.. :blink: ..i freeakizle lovizlle itizzle

well..some shit simple im putting on my big whole pager &#33;.. :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/11111111111.jpg

any adjusment befor i ink ?
blump..

Neza..i likey..

Sezer..i like the E

Mse
03-26-2007, 05:58 PM
ras, its all good

neza, i think its shit


some fun, its an exchange and im aware that its wack
http://i10.tinypic.com/2ikwopg.jpg

and some other shit
http://i11.tinypic.com/30ua51t.jpg
http://i14.tinypic.com/4dxsgna.jpg

neza
03-26-2007, 06:01 PM
feeling that bottom one mse

thanx for your honesty

Dream Creation
03-26-2007, 06:04 PM
mse = funk :P

Mse
03-26-2007, 06:07 PM
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8333/03262007101428pmok5.jpg
dude, make your letters the same thickness. i mean try doing these exact same letters but without the ethiopian bar on the n, e, z and a (:))
:(

neza
03-26-2007, 06:09 PM
yeah man ill do that but i like the etheopian bars lol ill make em more like the a what do ya reckon

molotow_15
03-26-2007, 06:10 PM
lots of posting in here tonight,
been kinda busy lately not much time for sketching filling
in some application form and shit, got some stuff to post tomorrow
though, does anyone kno any cheap car insurance companys for under 18&#39;s in england ? pm me :D

Dream Creation
03-26-2007, 06:10 PM
ethiopians neva heard that one :P

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Mar 26 2007, 04:58 PM
http://i14.tinypic.com/4dxsgna.jpg
fucking amazing mse. love your style.

popshots
03-26-2007, 06:14 PM
yo mse are u enser???

Mse
03-26-2007, 06:17 PM
popshots, yessssssssss

neza, i think you should just make em all the same wwidth and move em closer together, and itd be an okay simple. then move from there with some extensions etc etc

atesk, you know i love you baby :)

Lunatic
03-26-2007, 06:21 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne+Mar 26 2007, 04:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AimoOne &#064; Mar 26 2007, 04:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Mar 26 2007, 09:17 PM
atesk..i donno were iv seen that A..but iv sure as hell seen it..unless you thougt of it yourself..which if you did..i likey very muchily..and i aint really likin the peices up there nither..i think theyre far too compicated and dont really flow neither..like the face ruins it..still..if you lost the big extension on top on the left leg of the M..the M would be nice..

Fosale..your dizzle unbidizzle.. :blink: ..i freeakizle lovizlle itizzle

well..some shit simple im putting on my big whole pager &#33;.. :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/11111111111.jpg

any adjusment befor i ink ?
blump..

Neza..i likey..

Sezer..i like the E[/b][/quote]
http://www.picpop.com/gallery/albums/userpics/10001/cant_see2.jpg

Zep0
03-26-2007, 06:26 PM
Yeah, Aimo cant see it man...

MSE...damn good..

Neza..The only thing I dont like is the nothing under the Z between the E and A

Bored at school, just sketched some...says Saeo...Crits?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/Saeo.jpg

Dream Creation
03-26-2007, 06:42 PM
hmm dunno wat to say .. o not evenyly spaced?

Hazex
03-26-2007, 06:46 PM
mse amzing style&#33;

this is me still doing the block thingy

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/563/rhealllni9.png (http://imageshack.us)

sacwacko
03-26-2007, 06:48 PM
hella bored...tryin somthin i cant do.... :D
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other029.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other028.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other027.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other026.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other025.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other024.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other023.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other031.jpg
crits???

Mse
03-26-2007, 06:52 PM
sacwacko, simples simples simples simples
follow hazexs example, he&#39;s on teh right track
zep0, simples for you too

some more crap
im pretty sure i owed fosale a sketch, if not. fuck it
http://i13.tinypic.com/47b3o5v.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/42xqdyd.jpg

AnteUp
03-26-2007, 06:53 PM
O AND FOR CRITS...UM HAZEX I LIKE THAT UR DOIN SIMPLES AND IT LUKKS LIEK UR IMPROVIN... SPIE...SIMPLES MANE...MSE DAMN I LUV UR SHIT :D


Originally posted by AnteUp@Mar 25 2007, 09:15 PM
BUMP TO NEXT PAGE CRITS PLEASE
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/hayz3d-1.jpg
please...sum crits...havent got andy except for one... :(

neza
03-26-2007, 06:54 PM
i dunno man your sketches aint all over the place crazy like some but i think bars of the same size would not go amiss your letter structure is off leave extensions addons arrows backgrounds 3d&#39;s and drop shadows for now focus on your letters then come back to all that stuff later

spend a whole lot of time looking at other peoples simples and asking why they look good to yourself watch and learn the saying goes


sorry @ sacwacko

hayz nothing to special nice use of perspective but the letters are bland and uninteresting they just dont do it for me stick to bar simples for now atempt 3d stuff later

Zep0
03-26-2007, 06:56 PM
It is only right....I must...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/DCFC0221.jpg

Hayze- messed up on the Y Z but it looks good...

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 07:02 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 26 2007, 03:27 PM
some sketches from school.
a more complicated style than usual that i&#39;ve been practicing...
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2907/scan0010ah9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
says "AME" didnt have enough room to finish the &#39;ns&#39; so i cut my losses...too complicated??

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/2599/scan0011xo7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
unfished shit not sure if i like where its going but oh well.
ligidy-last bigidy-bump.

AnteUp
03-26-2007, 07:11 PM
hehe yea i kno i messed up on the y z part...i didnt follow the line on the y and jus stopped and it lukks like i overlapped the z over the y...o but if you would see it in real life...it lukks like its gonna jump out and piss on me...

sacwacko
03-26-2007, 07:20 PM
i no i need 2 keep 2 simples....i said i cant do that shit....
i know

Fosale!
03-26-2007, 07:26 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Mar 26 2007, 05:52 PM
sacwacko, simples simples simples simples
follow hazexs example, he&#39;s on teh right track
zep0, simples for you too

some more crap
im pretty sure i owed fosale a sketch, if not. fuck it
http://i13.tinypic.com/47b3o5v.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/42xqdyd.jpg
awwweeeeee :wub:
MSEEEEEEEEEE you rememberedddd :0D

i would post the sketch i did for you but its very bad.

eng
03-26-2007, 07:27 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 26 2007, 06:20 PM
i no i need 2 keep 2 simples....i said i cant do that shit....
i know
then why did u post them?

eng
03-26-2007, 07:30 PM
HAYZ square letters are so boring :P
mse i dont like A on bottom right of bottom pic
AME i dont like the angry face - also i think the extensions on the top of a are a bit weird :S

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/4673/fatzeraoo9.jpg
awful letter structure i was fucking around - any good points?

Bazer
03-26-2007, 07:54 PM
eng, i can see you gettin a good style soon. just work on you letters. theyre to squiggly. like you wanna make em bend you just dont know where to do it.

whahappen?
03-26-2007, 07:59 PM
repost
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5637/picture028sp1.jpg

Oink.
03-26-2007, 08:01 PM
Originally posted by sacwacko@Mar 26 2007, 05:48 PM
hella bored...tryin somthin i cant do.... :D
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other029.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other028.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other027.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other026.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other025.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other024.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other023.jpg
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t106/other2/other031.jpg
crits???
what the hell is this?, man go simpler

Torrent
03-26-2007, 08:13 PM
Spie, go a lot simpler and rock block letters.

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/5461/p2240023ad0.jpg

Any critique? Rocking simples and I still fucked up on the N and E.

nickstix
03-26-2007, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 26 2007, 06:02 PM some sketches from school.
a more complicated style than usual that i&#39;ve been practicing...
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2907/scan0010ah9.jpg (http://imageshack.us
[b)
says "AME" didnt have enough room to finish the &#39;ns&#39; so i cut my losses...too complicated??

[/b]

Atesk you should try doing your A and S like this(i did it in ms paint so its kinda sloppy but u get the picture)
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/scan0010ah9.jpg

sacwacko
03-26-2007, 08:27 PM
Originally posted by eng+Mar 26 2007, 06:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (eng @ Mar 26 2007, 06:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sacwacko@Mar 26 2007, 06:20 PM
i no i need 2 keep 2 simples....i said i cant do that shit....
i know
then why did u post them? [/b][/quote]
cuz i felt like it..

AteskOne
03-26-2007, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by nickstix@Mar 26 2007, 07:16 PM
&#60;&#33;--QuoteBegin-AteskOne+Mar 26 2007, 06:02 PM some sketches from school.
a more complicated style than usual that i&#39;ve been practicing...
QUOTE (AteskOne @ Mar 26 2007, 06:02 PM some sketches from school.
a more complicated style than usual that i&#39;ve been practicing...
[URL=http://imageshack.us)</td></tr><tr><td id=&#39;QUOTE&#39;>&#60;&#33;--QuoteEBegin--&#62;http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2907/scan0010ah9.jpg (http://imageshack.us--&#62;</div><table border=&#39;0&#39; align=&#39;center&#39; width=&#39;95%&#39; cellpadding=&#39;3&#39; cellspacing=&#39;1&#39;><tr><td>[b)
says "AME" didnt have enough room to finish the &#39;ns&#39; so i cut my losses...too complicated??
Â*


Atesk you should try doing your A and S like this(i did it in ms paint so its kinda sloppy but u get the picture)
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/scan0010ah9.jpg [/b][/quote]
word...i like that. ya i was gunna remove the face and like i said i got sloppy on the "e"...should have some better shit tomorrow if i get around to it.

Sumoe
03-26-2007, 08:39 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Mar 26 2007, 05:52 PM
sacwacko, simples simples simples simples
follow hazexs example, he&#39;s on teh right track
zep0, simples for you too

some more crap
im pretty sure i owed fosale a sketch, if not. fuck it
http://i13.tinypic.com/47b3o5v.jpg
http://i10.tinypic.com/42xqdyd.jpg
a breath of fresh air

props.

that "R" is fuckin&#39; fire...kinda weird lookin&#39; at first but dope.

Fosale!
03-26-2007, 09:22 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Mar 26 2007, 03:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Mar 26 2007, 03:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Mar 26 2007, 03:18 PM
the lines arent really shakey.
its just my moms stupid camera >:0()
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010529.jpg
bumps new page [/b][/quote]
bump this shit kneegarsss

Sumoe
03-26-2007, 09:23 PM
:wub:

Jason Voorhies
03-26-2007, 09:43 PM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3083/hpim0586co5.jpg

shifty!
03-26-2007, 09:57 PM
dont know which one i like better...so just let me know what you guys think.

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/3097/ak031pl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/4716/ak027mb2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(minus the ugly arrow)

NICCSACC
03-26-2007, 10:07 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Mar 26 2007, 08:57 PM
dont know which one i like better...so just let me know what you guys think.

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/3097/ak031pl1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/4716/ak027mb2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(minus the ugly arrow)
the second one is fire.
really, those "R"s are such a played out bite. stop it please.
youre not a fatass spaniard from NY.

Hazex
03-26-2007, 10:08 PM
shifty i liek the top one maybe jsut make the e line less long

anyway simpples as usual

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1670/rheallio4.png (http://imageshack.us)

what the step after doing these block letters and am i in that step?

NICCSACC
03-26-2007, 10:11 PM
Originally posted by Hazex@Mar 26 2007, 09:08 PM
shifty i liek the top one maybe jsut make the e line less long

anyway simpples as usual

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1670/rheallio4.png (http://imageshack.us)

what the step after doing these block letters and am i in that step?
you try to draw cuz its cool right now for some reason.... from looking at that simple specifically, id say learn how to do something else. this dosent seem like its working for you homey,. the whole graffiti thing.
you make simples look impossible to do and it should be the exact opposite. hope that helps you guy cuz i dont want to hurt your feelings.

shifty!
03-26-2007, 10:14 PM
edit

Sumoe
03-26-2007, 10:33 PM
I never actually knew the guy, nor did I ever talk to him on the internet or whatever, I actually didn&#39;t really see his work until his passing. I&#39;ve been looking at his work since yesterday and I really wanted to do an R.I.P. sketch for him, so here it is

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/206/dsc0742ew6.jpg

it&#39;s obviously not done, but I wanted to post it up.

R.I.P. WASTER12

dim
03-26-2007, 10:37 PM
looks sick sume
when are you going to have your alphabet done ?

Sumoe
03-26-2007, 10:38 PM
dunno hopefully by April sometime lol.

''SCC''
03-26-2007, 10:41 PM
your s looks dope one you put in sume bit thats cus the e on the other side fits perfictley.....
i think you should make the top of the s moor defined....
or not your better then me so do wut u want

Sumoe
03-26-2007, 10:43 PM
I get you, but I still gotta fix it up more, I wanted to do a different "E" also cause the other one wouldn&#39;t fit too well, anyways...

moltov
03-26-2007, 10:43 PM
a quicky I did in class today lol ahhh bordem
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00543.jpg

fuckthatgame
03-26-2007, 10:47 PM
MSE-DONT CHANGE THAT STYLE&#33;&#33;&#33; ITS SICK AND ORIGINAL&#33;&#33;&#33; RUN IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

''SCC''
03-26-2007, 10:57 PM
dont relly know if it helps or not but....
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/1391/untitledyw4.png (http://imageshack.us)
i took the top of ur a and made it the top of ur s to make it match the style...
man i am board

Sumoe
03-26-2007, 11:02 PM
Oh I see, I gotta change it up a bit, I prolly won&#39;t make as much a drastic change as you, but something similar, thanks though. :)

garbage down tha way
03-26-2007, 11:06 PM
messing around. simple. like the a and e no others.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/lunchdrunk/earnsketchhhh.jpg

''SCC''
03-26-2007, 11:11 PM
^^^^^^^^
your e and r is lacking try to.......
nvm its ez&#39;er to show u ill do wut i did to sume&#39;s

''SCC''
03-26-2007, 11:23 PM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8382/untitledko8.png (http://imageshack.us)
i hated ur e so i redid it that way, use it 1000s of wrighters do
i took the top of ur n and put it on ur r to make it match your some wut of a style u got there
and do 3d to the middle looks better and it&#39;s ez&#39;er

dibz
03-26-2007, 11:25 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_1030.jpg

that fix up on the e and r look much better on the earn

garbage down tha way
03-26-2007, 11:29 PM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;@Mar 26 2007, 10:23 PM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8382/untitledko8.png (http://imageshack.us)
i hated ur e so i redid it that way, use it 1000s of wrighters do
i took the top of ur n and put it on ur r to make it match your some wut of a style u got there
and do 3d to the middle looks better and it&#39;s ez&#39;er
haha thanks dude. ill work with it, i like what you did.


oh yeah, i dont usually write in this "style" so don&#39;t mind the lacking "style".

taine
03-26-2007, 11:30 PM
.......

''SCC''
03-26-2007, 11:31 PM
its the r that e i did sucks

capitol
03-26-2007, 11:34 PM
I should give up shouldnt I?
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7379/graf102lk8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sumoe
03-26-2007, 11:34 PM
Originally posted by dibz@Mar 26 2007, 10:25 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_1030.jpg

that fix up on the e and r look much better on the earn
looks kinda font-ish and less graffiti but looks pretty good, not diggin&#39; the round things though (on the ends of the letters).

memo
03-26-2007, 11:39 PM
nothing to crit that hasent been critted on already...except capitols stuff but im not good enough to give you any tips sry man&#33; im sure everybody will probaby say "go simpler, dont connect your letters and dont colour anything in yet"
just some new &#39;B&#39;s i was working on today (please disregard any other letters)...crits please.
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00575.jpg

''SCC''
03-26-2007, 11:42 PM
^^^^^^
i would help u but i dont know how to say buhg so i wont

garbage down tha way
03-26-2007, 11:46 PM
you should make your letters in the style of the "H" in the 3rd one down. for now.

-Sinn-
03-26-2007, 11:55 PM
dibz-likin that style unique real clean keep it up

ARMAwonR
03-27-2007, 02:23 AM
http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid225/pbe5aaa8e895de1caa07127660e233ca6/ea2b7695.jpg

''SCC''
03-27-2007, 02:41 AM
Originally posted by memo@Mar 26 2007, 10:39 PM
nothing to crit that hasent been critted on already...except capitols stuff but im not good enough to give you any tips sry man&#33; im sure everybody will probaby say "go simpler, dont connect your letters and dont colour anything in yet"

dont colour any thing yet &#33;&#33;&#33;../?.1&#33;&#33;?...
always color ur stuf.
i think coloring is just as important as letters
so why not get good at both??..&#33;/&#33;&#33;1..&#33;???...

Tode
03-27-2007, 05:16 AM
messing with 3d again.....still learning ..complete freehand no rulers.. no points..

crits

"JE" ;)

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/7991/scan0006smallvm1.jpg

AMansNotACamel
03-27-2007, 06:01 AM
Arma that is hot, I like how the proportion is consistant throughout.

I was never an "art fag" but I&#39;ve been sketching a lot lately and I think working with simples has allowed me to draw things other than my letters so I&#39;ve been trying characters. I did this in my maths exam for some girl sitting next to me, I&#39;m thinking about practicing my characters more and getting some posters up.

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6589/12345ic6.jpg

Oh and I can&#39;t draw hands and feet so I tried to hide them :blink:

neza
03-27-2007, 07:07 AM
Originally posted by eng@Mar 26 2007, 06:30 PM
HAYZ square letters are so boring :P
mse i dont like A on bottom right of bottom pic
AME i dont like the angry face - also i think the extensions on the top of a are a bit weird :S

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/4673/fatzeraoo9.jpg
awful letter structure i was fucking around - any good points?
the bubbles are nice thats bout it though mate

until you can draw letters properly doing stuff with extensions is pointless

moltov
03-27-2007, 08:12 AM
CHEU for a throwie/burner exchange
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00547.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00546.jpg

Torrent
03-27-2007, 08:15 AM
Originally posted by Torrent@Mar 26 2007, 07:13 PM
Spie, go a lot simpler and rock block letters.

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/5461/p2240023ad0.jpg

Any critique? Rocking simples and I still fucked up on the N and E.
Critique? I did not recieve any.

Hazex
03-27-2007, 08:30 AM
Originally posted by Hazex@Mar 26 2007, 09:08 PM
shifty i liek the top one maybe jsut make the e line less long

anyway simpples as usual

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1670/rheallio4.png (http://imageshack.us)

what the step after doing these block letters and am i in that step?
got only 1 crit...

Xsjadox
03-27-2007, 08:39 AM
Hazex,now try just bending your letters a bit and stuff.

Torrent,Work on the flow of the letters,keeping things equal and stuff in proportion

AimoOne
03-27-2007, 10:00 AM
Xajaconkox..i thought youd know better..i dont think he should bend his letters etc.

i havent seen one decent simple from him yet..why are they so haggered..? <_<

im gunna have a triple pager up soon :lol:

eng
03-27-2007, 10:49 AM
cant w8 aimo :P

South-Pole
03-27-2007, 10:58 AM
ahem..
hazex im liking it you improved well lately try to make your stuff a bit cleaner and thats it


oh well ,heres a clean sketch and two freestyles that i outlined with a sharpie

freestyle piece PA:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/pa.gif


freestyle throwie:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/trnfreestyle.gif

clean throwie:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/trnpink.gif






crits :P

Fluffy Bunnies
03-27-2007, 10:59 AM
Learn to overlap... and just post the pencil sketch I did for you&#33;&#33;&#33; cuz I lost the real sketch I did and I am too lazy to find it again and scan it

AimoOne
03-27-2007, 10:59 AM
well Mr.France :P i liked your peice with the arrows more :o ;)

garbage down tha way
03-27-2007, 11:05 AM
Originally posted by Torrent+Mar 27 2007, 07:15 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Torrent @ Mar 27 2007, 07:15 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Torrent@Mar 26 2007, 07:13 PM
Spie, go a lot simpler and rock block letters.

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/5461/p2240023ad0.jpg

Any critique? Rocking simples and I still fucked up on the N and E.
Critique? I did not recieve any. [/b][/quote]
yo I like this a lot homey. The S is fucking great. I&#39;d just take that thing off the top of the R and make the extention less tall on the E. Also make them all the same size. but its good.

South-Pole
03-27-2007, 11:10 AM
fluffy ok ill post them both

ras..i know the arrow piece is way better but what i&#39;v done is a freestyle if it was clean i would add arrows and lol at mr.france


ok fluffy here they are:

mines:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/cynicexchange.jpg

fluffys:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Picture-1.jpg

some exchange i&#39;v done with fluffy bunnies

memo
03-27-2007, 11:38 AM
&#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39; - its just pronounced BUG with an extra emphasis on the UH part.. ill send you an audio clip if your still having trouble :blink: and i just said that cuz thats what i see most people say. just to start out with outlines.. not my advice just relaying information ;) thanks for the crits &#33;

caseoner
03-27-2007, 01:16 PM
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/7329/img0042hx6.jpg
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5373/img0039go6.jpg
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9056/img0040cg0.jpg
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/5021/img0041sf7.jpg

sky 5
03-27-2007, 01:24 PM
that aint bad case, letters need alil more devloping but i like how you fade your colors . . .

AimoOne
03-27-2007, 01:49 PM
Case..Fuck me...that top one..soooo freky nicey..ugh..fucking awesome...id go back to that typa shit when you gtet you letters firmly down...fucking aamazing..keep at it.. :D

no no no..i know..bust a perfect funcckay simple on that wall back drop..and ill e-hug you

NICCSACC
03-27-2007, 02:31 PM
case remind me of that official train shit from the oooold days.
i start to hate drips lately tho they kind a gay braaa.

Fluffy Bunnies
03-27-2007, 02:50 PM
ANYONE WANT ME TO MSPAINTMATIZE THEIR SKETCH?&#33;?&#33;

HuntingLOLs
03-27-2007, 02:53 PM
Originally posted by dibz@Mar 26 2007, 10:25 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_1030.jpg

that fix up on the e and r look much better on the earn
i like those simples <3

@ SCC&#39;s sume edit - t and e had to get bigger to match that s as well

caseoner
03-27-2007, 02:55 PM
thnx everybody for the support and nice comments,
But you guys told me to work on my letters. Do you&#39;ve got any advice?
I already tried to do simples but damned that is borred. Its just borred because i do some more &#39;&#39;difficult&#39;&#39; letters (i mean it&#39;s not nice to go back to old shit).


&#39;&#39;no no no..i know..bust a perfect funcckay simple on that wall back drop..and ill e-hug you &#39;&#39;
what you mean with that? i&#39;m from the netherlands so my english is good but not that strong

another thanks to everybody :D

AimoOne
03-27-2007, 03:11 PM
ooh..ugh..well..

Do a nice simple with a funky look to it...you know..on that wall you did..redo the wall..with the simple on..simples may be boring..but they help yuh.. ;)

Rant...that simple reminds of summin outta an 1990&#39;s bugs bunny flick..dunno lol..jus does..clean tho

well..heres my work in progress... :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/2.jpg

this shit reminds me of my old crazy stuff from october 2006..when i never knew about letter or shit..now i kinda do ... i can go back to it..i aint done anything like this for awhile...

crits..love you ;) .. all homo <_<

memo
03-27-2007, 03:17 PM
AimoOne - love that, everything about it.

caseoner
03-27-2007, 03:20 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 27 2007, 02:11 PM
ooh..ugh..well..

Do a nice simple with a funky look to it...you know..on that wall you did..redo the wall..with the simple on..simples may be boring..but they help yuh.. ;)

Rant...that simple reminds of summin outta an 1990&#39;s bugs bunny flick..dunno lol..jus does..clean tho

well..heres my work in progress... :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/2.jpg

this shit reminds me of my old crazy stuff from october 2006..when i never knew about letter or shit..now i kinda do ... i can go back to it..i aint done anything like this for awhile...

crits..love you ;) .. all homo <_<
Like your character and the cans around the charac. You&#39;re letters are good but i don&#39;t like the parts you put on it. (for example the right bottem of the M)
but i like the &#39;&#39;heart&#39;&#39; thing you did at the bottem of the I and the T

just an idea but why dont you at that waves at the bottem of your drawing into your letters. may look nice

Exploited
03-27-2007, 03:47 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/scabywag/quoteUnf.jpg

...still not finishd...

LowtoriouS
03-27-2007, 03:51 PM
ayo,
heres a lil sumsum i worked on for a bit.. im still a lil fresh at this... what do u guys think i can improve on?

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t148/lo...ous/insane2.jpg (http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t148/lowtorious/insane2.jpg)

LowtoriouS
03-27-2007, 03:52 PM
fuck wrong thing


http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t148/lowtorious/insane2.jpg

''SCC''
03-27-2007, 04:00 PM
work on your s

NICCSACC
03-27-2007, 04:06 PM
Originally posted by HuntingLOLs+Mar 27 2007, 01:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HuntingLOLs @ Mar 27 2007, 01:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dibz@Mar 26 2007, 10:25 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_1030.jpg

that fix up on the e and r look much better on the earn
i like those simples <3

@ SCC&#39;s sume edit - t and e had to get bigger to match that s as well [/b][/quote]
only half decent thing on this page.
the rest is hot and steaming. like shit.

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 04:56 PM
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/2301/dsc0746sr8.jpg

finished it, just gotta touch up some things here and there.

moltov
03-27-2007, 05:00 PM
Dope man, do you wanna do an exchange?

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 05:03 PM
haha I would but I still owe mad people, maybe in a week or so.

BIGel
03-27-2007, 05:13 PM
so ill sumoe, those wings are a nice touch too.

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/086/2/f/more_handiess_by_bigel.jpg

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 05:16 PM
love the karak for some reason, the "BIGel" at the top looks off a little, but the "EL" at the bottom is nice.

dim
03-27-2007, 05:33 PM
sume- wow i have never seen ne one who uses prismas as well as you do like that 3d is insane

Fosale!
03-27-2007, 05:45 PM
the illest prisma marker using cat that ive seen is salty bastard

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a206/saltedwalls/vernsviceseen.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a206/saltedwalls/showatheleastafoot.jpg

Hazex
03-27-2007, 05:48 PM
bigel i liek that african face

fast sketch i did at shcool 2day

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7001/realbendqe7.png (http://imageshack.us)
wtf stpid scanner put white dots everywhere&#33;
i dont really like it but neway...

crits?

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 05:49 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 27 2007, 04:45 PM
the illest prisma marker using cat that ive seen is salty bastard
word, that dude is insane.

AimoOne
03-27-2007, 06:01 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Mar 27 2007, 07:11 PM


well..heres my work in progress... :D

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/2.jpg


bump..no crittie..

ugh..well..salty basterd..not a fan of his style..but his art is amazing...great shit

like it sume..

like it bigel

Hyphy
03-27-2007, 06:26 PM
http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/226/cent2ed6.png

30 minute school doodle... :P Comments or criticism?

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 06:26 PM
ugly, do simples.

DeproOne
03-27-2007, 06:59 PM
Hyphy: 30 mins? ew. simples.
Hazex: seriously. dont try graffiti anymore. its just not your cup of tea. try coffee.
Sume: I was in detention and drew u a pen sketch. ill get it on here as soon as i can

Nem
03-27-2007, 07:22 PM
wtf. don&#39;t tell him to quit writing. thats stupid.

just sketch every second of your life.

and look at pictures of graf every second that you&#39;re not sketching.

which technically, should be none. because you&#39;re sketching every second.

anyway.

just sketch and look at pics as much as possible. not necessarily bite people, just surround your life with writing and think of nothing else. eventually you&#39;ll find your style. and find out how things work. for some it takes longer then others.

don&#39;t get down on yourself dude. everyone is/was a toy at one point.

nickstix
03-27-2007, 07:38 PM
Hyphy...keep your letters the same size.

Aimt...i like the character but as for the piece im not so crazy about the hearts, but that might just be me. nice clean simples keep it up.

hazex...untill you get proportions right i sugest using a ruler.

piece i started doing while messing around with extensions but i was having trouble with the A and K , and didnt start the T yet.
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sketch.png
Any advice? crits?

What Happened to the Letters?
03-27-2007, 07:43 PM
loose the little flaps on all the edges, they look weird...and in that sketch teh r has too much going on considering nothing else has anything....ut the letters look ok and they flow decently enough, jsut keep practicing and working new styles

neza
03-27-2007, 07:46 PM
i know i am running before i can walk and all but couldnt resist i know the letter structure is good coz my rents can read it and the dont write so...

the thing i dont like is the z

http://aycu23.webshots.com/image/13462/2004799125076977999_th.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2004799125076977999)

-nez

(sorry guys you gotta click it.... image shack wont work damn cheap ass host lol)

What Happened to the Letters?
03-27-2007, 07:47 PM
Originally posted by BIGel@Mar 27 2007, 05:13 PM
so ill sumoe, those wings are a nice touch too.

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/086/2/f/more_handiess_by_bigel.jpg
the B in the hadnstyle is killin, goign towards an east CA bay area type thing it looks, im feeling it

What Happened to the Letters?
03-27-2007, 07:48 PM
nez man the letter structure could be alot better but it flows adn the extensions dont look abd, if you painted it clean peopel woudl dig it, looks alot liek kes&#39;s shit...i dont really liek his letters but he makes them work damn nicely

neza
03-27-2007, 07:50 PM
yer man i admit that i got inspired by kes put my own style in there aswell though

BIGel
03-27-2007, 08:43 PM
reak that r is out of place, put the extensions away on it and it&#39;ll match better
nez that shits pretty wild, arrow gangsta, good to see someones having fun with the wilds.

speakin of wilds im trying to get one going. thoughts?
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/086/b/0/outline_by_bigel.jpg

ternoner
03-27-2007, 08:49 PM
i dont like that flow but good starat though make it more readible aka flow better

Mse
03-27-2007, 09:24 PM
okay, the internet has stopped being gay
bigel, i cant read it at all. not like you care though


http://i11.tinypic.com/2cnxi4o.jpg
says "lover"...whatever


and more wackness, i love it
its supposed to be a rose :)
http://i10.tinypic.com/2ezu5pl.jpg

capo93
03-27-2007, 09:24 PM
i could read it pretty easily... i guess its cause im hardcore like that LOL
but ya defintley digging that b and e other letters are pretty tight also it would look better cloured prob

bouncingsoul
03-27-2007, 09:45 PM
Blehhhh
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0693.jpg

React!
03-27-2007, 10:02 PM
iight heres some help readin BIGel&#39;s peice i love this dudes style i think i got it right buh if i dont el correct me..
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3705/bigelzt3.png

Soul - im feelin them characters man they pretty koo

See!BCK
03-27-2007, 10:07 PM
i think theres to meny extentions on the b and the l. other then that i love it.

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 10:29 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 27 2007, 03:56 PM
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/2301/dsc0746sr8.jpg

finished it, just gotta touch up some things here and there.
bumpalumps.
Props to BIGel, Knews and Ensr.

shifty!
03-27-2007, 10:51 PM
sumoe, thats sick, the wings are wicked dope. keep it up...
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/2906/ak033uv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yehhh you guys know what to do...

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 11:09 PM
not bad but that "K" is playyyyed..."E" is awkward too.

Aesop5|E
03-27-2007, 11:18 PM
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j145/militantone/blackbookie.jpg


this is my homie shyt me and him are still in da toyz stages but we get better everyday some feedback will be appreciated HIS NAME IS SE-1 aka smoke

Sumoe
03-27-2007, 11:20 PM
whoa, whoa, whoa, back up there buddy, get rid of the crown, you ain&#39;t a king yet, like you previously stated, also get rid of the arrow in the throwie.

BIGel
03-27-2007, 11:39 PM
"and make sure i NEVER see those godamn crowns anywhere near your handies again&#33;&#33;"

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/086/e/8/headphones_by_bigel.jpg

Samp1e
03-27-2007, 11:46 PM
skipping crits on the throwies... I would if I was good at giving feedback but I really don&#39;t know.

bigel -- tiiight. your stuff&#39;s always clean n&#39; crisp. what markers do you use?

Sumoe -- sick. great colors, really like how you kicked the chest of the "S" out to match the other letters.

bouncing -- dope chars, keep rocking that blue bic pen. the necktie on the second char really stands out to me for some reason.

mse -- you too. raw ish.

aaaaand some whack stuffs from myself:

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9647/20070327kemistryiw5.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070327kemistryiw5.jpg)http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6523/20070327samp2yg0.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070327samp2yg0.jpg)http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/3627/20070327samp1kt3.th.jpg (http://img149.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070327samp1kt3.jpg)

i think the pink + purple highlighter piece has potential, just need to rework it. gotta stop rushing my work. i get real impatient and then spew out crap

always appreciate feedback ;)

memo
03-27-2007, 11:57 PM
sumone and BIGel - you guys already know ;)
shifty&#33; - only thing i dont like is the E.. everything else is alright.
Samp1e - that middle one is pretty sexy, as you said just re work it and it should be good to goooooo.
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00584.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00581.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00580.jpg

any better than yesterday? crits please

sky 5
03-28-2007, 12:58 AM
Originally posted by Exploited@Mar 27 2007, 02:47 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/scabywag/quoteUnf.jpg

...still not finishd...
i dig this style, kinda twisty thinner simples . . . the C at the end could be a lil bigger/taller next to the T maybe

yeah big el had me staring at it for a few secs, a huge G, thinkin outside the box alil, ggod stuff as always . . . ive been obsessing on keeping shit proportional and balanced awhile now and have forgotten how to take bars big to small and vice versa . . .

BUHG - try drawing the bottom loop of your B before you do the top one . . .

Skesh
03-28-2007, 01:52 AM
Started sketching again, after a break.
First one&#39;s a freestyle, its damn ugly. Just look at the letters, not the outline and 3d

the 2nd and the last are freestyles too, the 3rd is one i did one time (on the computer) (http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffitiView.php?id=1355238&returnpage=artistView) before

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g67/KrimpenDrummer/Searsketches.jpg

By the way, I dont have good markers, and the money for it, so i did it with pencils, its a little light, sorry
I did em in my bed, to they are a little curved

popshots
03-28-2007, 07:33 AM
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/828/nerm3ck1.jpg
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4149/nerm4hk2.jpg
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1715/nerm5yn6.jpg
Crits…
sear: like those simples
exploited: i love that fuky fresh style

inkbits
03-28-2007, 09:06 AM
memo: work in bars man, construct all letters in a square form even those that seem like they should be rounded like G, C, O etc. Strait bars would help you a lot until you can hold consistantcy in letter thickness and placement.

Skesh: The one with the black background looks pretty decent, maybe fix up the trailing leg of your R abit though seems kind of extending too far out. Top stroke of the E comes down a bit too far also maybe.

popshots: The way you are going working with the bending bars in the blue sketch is good imo man. Keep at it and your letters should improve a lot with practice. Just work on consistancy and try not to go too thin in any places (M is a tricky letter to avoid that).


"RRRR" ...like a stuttering pirate.

http://209.85.48.9/8780/128/upload/p10395187.jpg

NICCSACC
03-28-2007, 10:40 AM
Originally posted by memo@Mar 27 2007, 10:57 PM
sumone and BIGel - you guys already know ;)
shifty&#33; - only thing i dont like is the E.. everything else is alright.
Samp1e - that middle one is pretty sexy, as you said just re work it and it should be good to goooooo.
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00584.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00581.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/JDocs/DSC00580.jpg

any better than yesterday? crits please
id stop trying altogether.
seriously tho its horrible. go simpler...? can you go any more simple? stick letters or sumthing.(sic)

i now realize i inadvertantly(sic?) "bumped" this pic.

idiot
03-28-2007, 12:15 PM
inkbits shits hot&#33;&#33; almost melted my screen......

Skesh
03-28-2007, 12:24 PM
Inkbits, that.shit.is.HOT&#33;

i&#39;d like some more comments/crits on my sketches

memo
03-28-2007, 12:35 PM
NICCSACC - ow my heart... luckily this is the internet and you cant make fun of me in person *phewf*. but seriously do you have any advice that doesnt involve me stopping?

gysty
03-28-2007, 12:36 PM
like them skesh, simple but effective
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/DSC00124.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/crump.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j165/pagiff/sketch.jpg

Lunatic
03-28-2007, 01:12 PM
yeah inkbits thats fucking ill.