Blackbooks

[tame345]

wrong link it dont work

[Samp1e]

go here nowwww: http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...showtopic=17479 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=17479)

[ROYALE]

Well then go to the front page of the toy forum and read the New to Graff thread

[tame345]

my bad man i just found all this shit in my black book and i wanted some comments i coulnt make i all on one for sum reason

[nase7]

Tame- Wahapenen was joking when he said your dope, he was being sarcastic. You have some of the worst stuff i have ever seen its a disgrace to this forum START WITH SIMPLES (cruel to be kind) when your better you will be embarased looking back try copying this and fattening it >>>>> ACE

[whahappen?]

ooo you fucked that up..^

[nase7]

HAHA i know i was testing fonts and i couldnt get rid of them all sorted now tho ;).

[NICCSACC]

i think they took "too many arrows" litterally. :rolleyes:

[nase7]

Originally posted by Exploited@Mar 31 2007, 10:25 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a390/scabywag/quoteblue.jpg
Just thought id bump this.

Really feelin this style, jsut define the "Q" abit more.

[BIGel]

tame i hope your younger than 8, or joking around. i have a five year old brother who i shit you not would burn you, when he's not in kindergarten. go to the tutorials.

[Rasp]

i was looking for crits and now everybody is just bashing tames shitty stuff

[ROYALE]

Tell you to go simple is a crit

[Rasp]

i spaced out there
RmI6TxB2wRoQ?referrer=hlnk][IMG]http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/400000006539749/1/39/ggaEE9me2z-zKzNE_gad
well i kept it super simple

[Rasp]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/400000006539749/1/39/gMk8oIYWpj8ZQk4WCzLNKahWNicPazVl.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/XQwAhLft5D-jpFghRG6ZRmI6TxB2wRoQ?referrer=hlnk)

[ROYALE]

Key Board letters like this

R A S P

[nase7]

Rasp do you know what the edit button is there for <_<.

Go simpler your A luks like an M and dont kick the "R"s legs out and your letters legs change from fat to thin, you know what a blockbuster is rasp?

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by BIGel@Mar 31 2007, 07:49 PM
tame i hope your younger than 8, or joking around. i have a five year old brother who i shit you not would burn you, when he&#39;s not in kindergarten. go to the tutorials.
what are you smokin&#39;, that Tame shit is off da hook yo...arrows are da shit yo, it is so gangster tame...don&#39;t listen to da haters man...

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: <_< NO.

they actually quite suck...go to NEW 2 GRAFF THREAD, like everybody else said... :angry:

[nase7]

Originally posted by nase7@Mar 31 2007, 02:33 PM


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/50000000642a73f/1/105/3LNaDbvU2z_Mwfo9RVAsbUBvkPTV6QOL.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/FMYYCQVl1D9vI50xpSF0ENYqYszPGm0V?referrer=hlnk)

any better peeps?
[/quote]
:D Just thought id bump this.

[.rekon.]

I&#39;m gonna upload some pics in a couple minutes here. They are super bad I know but I&#39;m planning to not paint until at least summer so I have something I can at least be semi happy with.

[Sumoe]

if you write Rekon, there&#39;s already a Recon and he&#39;s mad ill, so...just a warning different names but kinda the same, anyways just a heads up.

[.rekon.]

Where&#39;s he write?

[Apple pie]

Tame what does that thing say?

[alera]

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/914/0305071834bnf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4221/0331072222aok9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just messin around critz?

that quote a while back was awsom, love to see it on a wall

[Apple pie]

alera those letters are sick, i like the first page

[dim]

i like the charac on the second picture on the right havd side page looks very nice

[BIGel]

nicely done on that first sketch alera, looks solid.

[alive]

what the fuck. is in your sig.

[BIGel]

its mech warrior, and it rules. courtesy of tame.

[Sumoe]

my drawing... <_< :(

you don&#39;t like it?

[Snot]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 31 2007, 09:20 PM
if you write Rekon, there&#39;s already a Recon and he&#39;s mad ill, so...just a warning different names but kinda the same, anyways just a heads up.
There&#39;s actually 2 Recon&#39;s and they&#39;re getting pissed.
Now there&#39;s a Rekon..
-makes popcorn-

[Apple pie]

AHHAHAA ROFLMAOO&#33;&#33; mechwarrior... can i use it too?

[ESKE one]

anybody up for an exchange I&#39;m extra bored

[dim]

im down for an exchange i wirte dim

[.rekon.]

Originally posted by Snot+Mar 31 2007, 06:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Snot @ Mar 31 2007, 06:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Mar 31 2007, 09:20 PM
if you write Rekon, there&#39;s already a Recon and he&#39;s mad ill, so...just a warning different names but kinda the same, anyways just a heads up.
There&#39;s actually 2 Recon&#39;s and they&#39;re getting pissed.
Now there&#39;s a Rekon..
-makes popcorn- [/b][/quote]
I live in B.C Canada, should it be much of a problem? I know one lives in California, and thats all the way down so that&#39;s no real concern I don&#39;t think, what about the other?

[Sumoe]

uhhh, I would just pick another name...how long you been writing? cause I&#39;m sure they both got years on you...just my 2 cents.

[nickstix]

wow besides asen and alera the last like 4 pages have been super uberly toy...was that a joke or something. well i might as well crit asen and alera.

asen...the a and e are pretty good, the n dosent really flow with the rest of the piece. you might want to try to make the righthand side of the n match the rest of the piece alittle.

alera...you have overall really good letter structure but in the 2nd pic i think the outer legs of your a&#39;s are too thick along with the bottom leg of your e and r. and the l is way to skinny for the rest of the piece.

[Apple pie]

dim ill exchange? what u want like a throw or a piece?

[.rekon.]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Mar 31 2007, 07:12 PM
uhhh, I would just pick another name...how long you been writing? cause I&#39;m sure they both got years on you...just my 2 cents.
Eh ok. I&#39;ll still post my rekon shit just for crit anyways. But where&#39;s the other recon write?

[moltov]

Originally posted by alera@Mar 31 2007, 09:31 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/914/0305071834bnf6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4221/0331072222aok9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just messin around critz?

that quote a while back was awsom, love to see it on a wall
nice&#33; its a pretty nice clean style that you can really expand you wanna do an exchange?

[inkbits]

Top one&#39;s nice alera, the L could not flick up so much and be a bit longer if that makes sence but none the less it&#39;s nice.

[.rekon.]

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h248/Ekco_Star/Mybomb.jpg

It sucks, yeah I know. Any suggestions?

[Aska.]

Originally posted by .rekon.@Mar 31 2007, 10:47 PM
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h248/Ekco_Star/Mybomb.jpg

It sucks, yeah I know. Any suggestions?
Try to keep all of your letters the same size dude, work on the K at the bottom and you&#39;ll improve.

Edit.. you missed some 3d at the top.

[.rekon.]

Alright, anything else I should work on? (Aside from obviously practicing)

[Fosale!]

I MISS ACES(seaz)&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :0( :0(

[Rasp]

well i dont know what a blockbuster is nase7 and i guess i just need to pratice a lot more

[N.O.T.E]

haha you guys scared him away..
kinda feel sorry for the lil tyke :P

[alera]

Originally posted by moltov@Mar 31 2007, 10:35 PM

nice&#33; its a pretty nice clean style that you can really expand you wanna do an exchange?

[/quote]
shure what do you write? it may take a while though.

[tame345]

yea u can use my mech warrior just dont go drawing saying u did it originally

[BIGel]

Originally posted by tame345@Mar 31 2007, 11:55 PM
yea u can use my mech warrior just dont go drawing saying u did it originally
thank you, you made my day.

[whahappen?]

yep :o :o :o

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by BIGel+Apr 1 2007, 12:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BIGel @ Apr 1 2007, 12:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tame345@Mar 31 2007, 11:55 PM
yea u can use my mech warrior just dont go drawing saying u did it originally
thank you, you made my day. [/b][/quote]
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: ...

i just fell in love with bigel.

[.rekon.]

Someone wanna do a throwie exchange?

[moltov]

ahah who doesnt lov big El&#33;?

a sloppy ass exchange I did with eske.
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00564.jpg

[near]

i like that tag alright...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/upload.jpg

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Mar 31 2007, 11:08 PM
I MISS ACES(seaz)&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :0( :0(
bump.

[AteskOne]

i miss u :wub: ...when are you getting your sexy bum over here so i can get some more of that hot sweet loving.


i&#39;m really messed up right now and would perfer if you didnt ask :rolleyes: . k?

near- shits dope as always...think you needa work on the &#39;n&#39; a little and maybe make your &#39;e&#39; a little easier to read. other then that its fucking dope. i love the &#39;r&#39;.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by near@Apr 1 2007, 01:00 AM
i like that tag alright...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/upload.jpg
please take those circles and make them more blocky, jagged, and pointed, at least once, pour moi?

pweeseyy nearrybobeezy


Ateskkkkkkkkkkkk :wub:

[Robbie P]

Being cool with my lame letters, some critique would definitely be appreciated.
http://a.photos.cx/Rhonaldo-ab1.PNG

[South-Pole]

Originally posted by tame345@Apr 1 2007, 12:38 AM
already have behind some abandoned grocery store down here in d-twon oh yea btw i did dat in sat skoo today lol here some more


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e257b/1/2/sr7iNjpI7T9iIxWAwvEKVjrdBc5OkrJT.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/zJUWzX4l7z_y2W-k6L7QeL9WaM1xeHM8?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e4286/1/2/fNAM8oPe6z8UGPBezxIwJ4g_uhu3L8ql.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/3O_v4paFwT-gW2J4xdlSlywUA6b2-Id-?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e3cda/1/2/lpasp2q46j8EW0JFteEZX-xB27MJ_t29.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/xW1wYIUs7z-0mqSFkkr91U-iPLnmHp5f?referrer=hlnk)
ahahaha lmfao is this a joke

mech warrior? :D :D no no..please don&#39;t post here again.no hahaha

seriously thats the worst letter structure i&#39;v seen yet

[HSAL]

Originally posted by HSAL+Mar 31 2007, 12:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HSAL @ Mar 31 2007, 12:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-HSAL@Mar 31 2007, 11:12 AM
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/3484/dsci0002zv9.th.jpg (http://img73.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsci0002zv9.jpg)

click on the pic for the bigger version - then click on the original size to see it better; it looks shit when it&#39;s scaled down to fit your computer screen.

took about 30 mins. just used a black fine liner and a ruler. crits?
bump for more crits... [/b][/quote]
anyone wanna exchange? and i need crits :(

[molotow_15]

u got a bigger picture ?

[HSAL]

click on it for the larger version.

[Skesh]

I critted it before, so I can post my new sketches :D

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8459/p1010133br4.jpg

&#39;sear&#39; and &#39;ero&#39; freestyles
dont know why i wrote ero, i just felt like writing a word with those letters

and a piece for my girl i did last night
i realise i forgot a forcefield

[-ShAmEE-]

Originally posted by South&#045;Pole+Apr 1 2007, 04:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (South-Pole @ Apr 1 2007, 04:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tame345@Apr 1 2007, 12:38 AM
already have behind some abandoned grocery store down here in d-twon oh yea btw i did dat in sat skoo today lol here some more


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e257b/1/2/sr7iNjpI7T9iIxWAwvEKVjrdBc5OkrJT.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/zJUWzX4l7z_y2W-k6L7QeL9WaM1xeHM8?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e4286/1/2/fNAM8oPe6z8UGPBezxIwJ4g_uhu3L8ql.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/3O_v4paFwT-gW2J4xdlSlywUA6b2-Id-?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e3cda/1/2/lpasp2q46j8EW0JFteEZX-xB27MJ_t29.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/xW1wYIUs7z-0mqSFkkr91U-iPLnmHp5f?referrer=hlnk)
ahahaha lmfao is this a joke

mech warrior? :D :D no no..please don&#39;t post here again.no hahaha

seriously thats the worst letter structure i&#39;v seen yet [/b][/quote]
umm. seems to me that u should go alot SIMPLER&#33;.. PLZ save the humilation of gettin the piss taken out of you.

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by Skesh@Apr 1 2007, 12:55 PM
I critted it before, so I can post my new sketches :D

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8459/p1010133br4.jpg

&#39;sear&#39; and &#39;ero&#39; freestyles
dont know why i wrote ero, i just felt like writing a word with those letters

and a piece for my girl i did last night
i realise i forgot a forcefield
skesh loves amanda :wub:

nice simple though keep it up

[Skesh]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Apr 1 2007, 01:14 PM
skesh loves amanda :wub:

nice simple though keep it up
lol :D

thanks

i want to do some extensions now, but i dont know how to do extensions, i always fuckthe whole thing up

[Apple pie]

ther good, i think the &#39;&#39;AR&#39;&#39; on S E A R ohould follow the same patter as the s and the e and get thin at some point

[Apple pie]

Originally posted by Apple pie@Mar 31 2007, 03:03 PM
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/5455/untitledfq9.png (http://imageshack.us)

bump

[AimoOne]

ey...whats with all the piss take out of Tame..
Fucking leave the man alone..his stuffs bad..so fucking what..we all start somewhere..
get off his fucking nuts..
instead of being little bitches to him..help him out...its out of order..
Tame...go simpler .. yeah..like do blocks...TAME..like that .. okay...leave karaks..and colour alone for the time being..

and Apple Pie..get that shit outta your sig.. <_<

ad the Nemz peice is all unproportioned..(sp)..like..N is tiny..E is fucking huge &#33;..M is fucking huge..and the Z is fucking huge..you should keep all your bars etc. the same size..unless you have letter stucuture FULLY DOWN..then you can do shit like that..

[Apple pie]

okay... <_<
im not hatin tho, tame says it cool
w.e its gone

[sketch3]

yo tame 4get everything u think u know about graff and start simple, also make ur lettas outa blocks

[semxz]

heres a new quik pen sketch i write pear now after a lil switch up more on the way crits welcome
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34862da614e46f6828f0d64b2e9b9ca146e14.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)

[Samp1e]

emokid writes pear

[Apple pie]

even still thats pretty sick, how the letters are broken

[pez ss]

pie the z is two big man i liked ur other one way more

[semxz]

thanks, heres some more gotta get my camera to work..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34880e744c3c1700d5c0747b080bd4d8eaa4a.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
quik throw
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34882073a53758e0c5bd9e30f0157143817e3.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
another pen
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34883067d2b23d5127d74c133d1a7e28a34d1.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
if you cant tell i like pen sketeches lol

[Apple pie]

i like the throw alot, simple

[pez ss]

yea pear that throwy is ill nice work

[pez ss]

yea pear that throwy is ill nice work dont know a bout thougs other ones though

[Apple pie]

pez post some of ur shit

[AimoOne]

Apple Pie..how the fuck is that shit " sick "
the throw i would consider sick..but nothing else..
and besides..someone whos way better than him writes PEAR..

i thought youd know better Apl Pie :(

Smexz..your good with colour..but your letters are shit..no offence..you got potenital..put that throw is " sick "

[ESKE one]

exchange i did with wose
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs009.jpg

exchange i did with dim
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs010.jpg
for some reason my lines are really shakey on this one
and i think i messed it up with the fill

CRITS?

[Apple pie]

im just giving the guy some positive replies, and it aint that bad

[semxz]

who writes pear thats way better i wanna see that and my letters i dont really thnk that theyre that bad its just my style i guess n ill work on it from there
thanks for the crits thoo

[semxz]

thanks apple pie man word

[Apple pie]

yeee bud..

[semxz]

yo aimo post pics of the dude thats wayyy better than me i wanna peep this..

[AimoOne]

his account is undername Emokid...just search for hi shit and look thru his posts..

Apl Pie...its okay giving people positive good cits...but whats the point..you aint pointing bad things out..thus..he wont improve...you HAVE to point out the BAD points ... or you WONT get better...thats why i rarely say good things about pieces..unless i personally like it..trust me..i know about harsh critizism..ask anyone who was around in the November , October time...theyll know how harsh the crits i was getting was...and they made me better &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Porps Alive . Nemz and Tricks :)

im gunna have sum shit up soon..someone shud make a EURO guide...like..how to do EURO addons etc.

i really wwanna get EURO..and Basic...all at the same time..

[Apple pie]

lol, kk thanks

[pez ss]

ya pie ill post some shit ive been posting in the painted section havent u seen any

[Apple pie]

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3750/untitledro1.png (http://imageshack.us)
pretty much the same letters but with little touch ups

[Knice]

some new stuff....plain and simple....critz. and comments appreciated

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a92/KniceDesigns/DrawingZ/SSPX0062.jpg
Knice

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a92/KniceDesigns/DrawingZ/SSPX0060.jpg
Waiz

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

ill post some black book shit tomorrow.
apple pie nice shit but try coloring one of dem joints.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture002-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture001.jpg

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by South&#045;Pole+Apr 1 2007, 04:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (South&#045;Pole &#064; Apr 1 2007, 04:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tame345@Apr 1 2007, 12:38 AM
already have behind some abandoned grocery store down here in d-twon oh yea btw i didÂ* dat in sat skoo today lol here some more


http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e257b/1/2/sr7iNjpI7T9iIxWAwvEKVjrdBc5OkrJT.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/zJUWzX4l7z_y2W-k6L7QeL9WaM1xeHM8?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e4286/1/2/fNAM8oPe6z8UGPBezxIwJ4g_uhu3L8ql.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/3O_v4paFwT-gW2J4xdlSlywUA6b2-Id-?referrer=hlnk)

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/2000000064e3cda/1/2/lpasp2q46j8EW0JFteEZX-xB27MJ_t29.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/xW1wYIUs7z-0mqSFkkr91U-iPLnmHp5f?referrer=hlnk)
ahahaha lmfao is this a joke

mech warrior? :D :D no no..please don&#39;t post here again.no hahaha

seriously thats the worst letter structure i&#39;v seen yet [/b][/quote]
i doubt thats the worst youve seen were you around when p&#33;p was?
sezer does it say sezed i like it though just dont make the add on arrow thing that long
knice the c is small on the knice one but there good

[whahappen?]

Originally posted by semxz@Apr 1 2007, 09:40 AM
thanks, heres some more gotta get my camera to work..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34880e744c3c1700d5c0747b080bd4d8eaa4a.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
quik throw
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34882073a53758e0c5bd9e30f0157143817e3.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
another pen
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34883067d2b23d5127d74c133d1a7e28a34d1.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
if you cant tell i like pen sketeches lol
the ea is a sake bite on the throw
go simpler and dont mess with exntensions

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by semxz@Apr 1 2007, 09:40 AM
thanks, heres some more gotta get my camera to work..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/34/34880e744c3c1700d5c0747b080bd4d8eaa4a.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)

so hows it feel to know that you arent creative to come up with your own shit. stop trying to bite tricks you homo.

[Skesh]

The last one looks like one from www.graffiticreator.net

[slinks]

sezer i wish i could do handstyles like you...there so pretty

pear i dont really like how you split the letters in half at all. its ugly


i think ive finally got a name im happy with. and i hope its not something someone big has. these are all just quick ones that i was trying to figure out an M but i cant find one i like. can anyone help? dont pay attention to the sloppyness
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti067.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti068.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti069.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti070.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti071.jpg
i also want crits on all the letters but the M is most important

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Apr 1 2007, 10:59 AM
ill post some black book shit tomorrow.
apple pie nice shit but try coloring one of dem joints.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture002-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture001.jpg
you should try making this a oneliner. your letters are mad set up to be one...also what happened to the &#39;r&#39;? decided it was time for a change?

[HSAL]

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/6568/dsci0006sv4.jpg

crits this time anyone?

*EDIT*

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/9159/dsci0001vr9.jpg

[AimoOne]

Atesk..i dont think it looks nothing like Tricks..

HSAL..do simples..not drugs..

hence..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/22.jpg

TADAAARR...

Now i can say..

do simples like the simple in my sig..bahaaaaa <_<

i was going for a euro look with te X&#39;s in the drop shadow..hence the " EURO-WANNABEE " ...in the speech bubble..for yous who cannot read

[HSAL]

hmm get rid of the crosses in the shadow, i don&#39;t like them. :/

other than that, i like it. fix up the a tho, it&#39;s a bit too wonkey.

[moltov]

Originally posted by HSAL@Apr 1 2007, 11:46 AM
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/6568/dsci0006sv4.jpg

crits this time anyone?

*EDIT*

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/9159/dsci0001vr9.jpg
Dope man Ill have yours up sumtime later today

[dim]

i kind like that hsal i see wat you did now when i look at it with all the letters its kind like you wrote it with a chisle tipped marker witch i like

aimt- im normally not a fan of the euro stuff but that i like
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7237/img0093aa7.jpg
this is for the exchange with hand its just a simple style but i don rele like it not my best thats for sure

[ESKE one]

Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 1 2007, 10:08 AM
exchange i did with wose
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs009.jpg

exchange i did with dim
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/bs010.jpg
for some reason my lines are really shakey on this one
and i think i messed it up with the fill

CRITS?
bump
don&#39;t kno if dim and wose seen it or not
crits.

[HSAL]

i prefer the second one to the top. the top lettering isn&#39;t all that imo.

[Sumoe]

ESKE one- the only decent thing is the "OSE" in "WOSE" everything else isn&#39;t too good.

[Bastardo]

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3846/picture005ee0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AimoOne]

do you need crits..^ .. ha :lol: ;)

ugh..sum new style shit..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/222.jpg

shud i carry on..?..looking to do a big colourfull full pager with karaks..but i want the peice to be decent..

help Sume ? .. anyone :D

[HSAL]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 1 2007, 06:08 PM


http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/222.jpg

that&#39;s pretty dope man. loving the style, fill it&#33;&#33; :D

[trashhh]

Aimt i dont like wher the A joins to the I but apart from that nice

[Zep0]

Aimt-your trying to mix jaged and round, and im not really feelin it...the main points that bug me are the top right of the T the A extension to the heart and the top of the A.. and the top left of the M, try dotting your I, I think it will close off some of the empty space...correction the whole right side of the top bar of your T needs work. I actually like the hearts and the thought of the extensions coming off of them, but I dont think they were executed properly, and again I think its the mixture of jagged letters and curvy hearts...maybe not. I can still see your bars, and on that A you had that top bar right, then you chopped it up top with that line across and curved it at the bottom..it donsnt look right now...

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 1 2007, 11:53 AM
Atesk..i dont think it looks nothing like Tricks..
well than you know nothing. all his extensions in that peice are made exactly like tricksforkid&#39;s extensions. the letter structure is definitely based on trick&#39;s...even the white hightlights in the 3d. someone already called him out on biting his throwy so if you ask me...this is a complete chomp.

[AimoOne]

K Atesk..

Thanks for the crits peeps..and thanks for the look out Zep0 :D

ima scrap that shit and come up with sumthing..more EURO-IE .. :D

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/scan.jpg

any crits on how to improve this?

[ThickGravy]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Apr 1 2007, 12:48 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3846/picture005ee0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Not here bra

[slinks]

Originally posted by slinks@Apr 1 2007, 11:40 AM
sezer i wish i could do handstyles like you...there so pretty

pear i dont really like how you split the letters in half at all. its ugly


i think ive finally got a name im happy with. and i hope its not something someone big has. these are all just quick ones that i was trying to figure out an M but i cant find one i like. can anyone help? dont pay attention to the sloppyness
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti067.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti068.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti069.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti070.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti071.jpg
i also want crits on all the letters but the M is most important
anyone think i should continue with this. or have any advice for an M.

edit: forgot to give crits.

bastardo and trash i like alot and wouldnt change.

aimt it looks like it has potential but i think it should be changed alot

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[GnawTheBones]

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j50/ghr7891/DSCN0181.jpg

slinks, in the last one it looks like your 3-d is off, and you really need to work on the letters expecially the m.

fredom, I am diggin most of those especially the bottom 2

[HuntingLOLs]

aimt, looks well but the t is strange, before colouring it work on the t imo
maybe cut off the connection where a and heart meets - make it just stop same length as the i dunno

[HSAL]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/963/dsci0004gl7.jpg

[G.SMooth]

One of my favourites. Crits?
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5198/picture002om2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[nase7]

I like the steez.. not to keen on the piece though

Quik simpler simple i done today

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/50000000654f56b/1/23/ItoWfROH4z_F5SQGK7skyBb1Rc3N94Ok.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/s55oJ_Wx5j8sEtvo2CU4Aj_785Cpg4eJ?referrer=hlnk)

crits ?? :D

[-Sinn-]

isreal - not really feelin it looks like a super rush job

Asen - i like it the A reminds me of the H guy named House uses

Hsal - likin the color choices like the gold on black

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture168.jpg

any crits?

[flclnaruto1213]

Yeah, change your sig. It isnt funny.

[AimoOne]

ahaha..your sig is awesome ^^^^ :D i actually like that Z..too..

Fredom..whut you onabout..leave characters..?..i aint done no karaks.. <_< .. the throws dont flow..the S is phat...the K and P look like a load of shit..the Y is okay..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/111111111111111111111.jpg

reposting this..as i have nothing else to post..and its a new page..could i have some opinions on the Fills.. :(

[bouncingsoul]

I don&#39;t feel like outlining anymore and I wanted to post a flick so... Ehh

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0698.jpg

I&#39;m going to actually color this one. The letters are going to be green, the bubbles I&#39;ll make gray and the dropshadow will just be shaded with a sharpie or something

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Apple pie]

bouncing soul thats sick. u gottta exchange with me some time man..

[whahappen?]

have you boned her yet?
edit:too....bouncingsoul
easy the s looks awkward and thin
pie the i has too many extensions
kspy the letters really dont have any flow or common shape for the throw

[Zep0]

Bounce man really looking forward to that...Nice color selection and I&#39;m actually feelin those bits, usually I dont like em.

Aimt- I love that piece, the letters are nice, and it flows well, the only thing that isnt real great is the I. but still def. fresh.

Zion- you know what your doin for the most part but I would still practice simples for a little while..(i say that because of the I) Still looking good.

Asen - A&#39;s a little small, but nice simples.

Smooth man goo SIMPLE....crazy is not good...Even wildstyle, has style...start simple.

Freedom man - AHHH I&#39;m loving everyhting on that page...very nice.

Trash - Dude the only thing I could say is the lines crossing on the R and A but your trying to flow with that H, honestly, I think its a really fresh through, color one and add a forcefield, I wanna see it. Maybe even go out soon? your can control is siiiiick.

Ok new piece, I&#39;ve been sick so I havn&#39;t even picked up a pen or pencil, but here we go... before I ink it, what can I fix? Anything? accepting all crits...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/easy1.jpg

[AimoOne]

Fredom..i am focusing on letters.. <_< :rolleyes: ..uggghh.. hence months of simplisitc blissness..boo yah..ugh..im tired

lmfao at Wappen..bahahahhaaaaaaaaa

wut does the word fresh mean..that youve done somthing different..and its like..fresh..new..i donno :blink:

[Apple pie]

Originally posted by Apple pie@Apr 1 2007, 10:29 AM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3750/untitledro1.png (http://imageshack.us)
pretty much the same letters but with little touch ups
no critz:P

[Zep0]

Pye, the only thing I dont like is the P, I only wish you would extend it a little more...other than that I love it.

and On mine, I just moved the 2nd extension down on the y too the bottom bar...

[HSAL]

EDIT: ugh since my other post of crits didn&#39;t come up i&#39;ll do them again...:

applepie: yeah, i agree - change the P. it doesn&#39;t look good like that.

zep0: loose the arrows. the arrows don&#39;t really flow with the sketch IMO.

freedom: loving the throwups man, but change the P.
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/3471/forkatiehsalhw5.jpg

for my mate katie. very quick sketch.

[Apple pie]

hsal- the t is kinda off, looks more like a wanna be &#39;&#39;j&#39;&#39;
w.e good colouring tho

[Zep0]

I hope your not expecting crits...seeing how you said Nothing about the 10 pieces on this page.

[HSAL]

one of my posts never showed up; because i did crit. anyways, re-critted.

[dim]

zep0 that peice looks like a tag dont no if you were trying to get it to look like the or not if you were it looks good but if you want it to look more like a peice you should probaly lose the connections between every thing

[-ShAmEE-]

Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 1 2007, 03:33 PM
ahaha..your sig is awesome ^^^^ :D i actually like that Z..too..

Fredom..whut you onabout..leave characters..?..i aint done no karaks.. <_< .. the throws dont flow..the S is phat...the K and P look like a load of shit..the Y is okay..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/111111111111111111111.jpg

reposting this..as i have nothing else to post..and its a new page..could i have some opinions on the Fills.. :(
looks sick DUDE. one of the best from U. love it, TNG.UK&#33;

[ternoner]

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d7/onionmeaster/philly1.jpg

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Apr 1 2007, 03:35 PM
I don&#39;t feel like outlining anymore and I wanted to post a flick so... Ehh

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0698.jpg

I&#39;m going to actually color this one. The letters are going to be green, the bubbles I&#39;ll make gray and the dropshadow will just be shaded with a sharpie or something
i dont like calling bites

espicially on a loved one(bouncing :wub: )
but dude,your B, is totally Bosoe&#39;s B

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9716/bosoedsya4.jpg

[ternoner]

yo that bosoes is fresh one of the best color schemes ive seen so far today

[FOEone]

Originally posted by slinks+Apr 1 2007, 02:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (slinks @ Apr 1 2007, 02:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-slinks@Apr 1 2007, 11:40 AM
sezer i wish i could do handstyles like you...there so pretty

pear i dont really like how you split the letters in half at all. its ugly


i think ive finally got a name im happy with. and i hope its not something someone big has. these are all just quick ones that i was trying to figure out an M but i cant find one i like. can anyone help? dont pay attention to the sloppyness
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti067.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti068.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti069.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti070.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti071.jpg
i also want crits on all the letters but the M is most important
anyone think i should continue with this. or have any advice for an M.

edit: forgot to give crits.

bastardo and trash i like alot and wouldnt change.

aimt it looks like it has potential but i think it should be changed alot [/b][/quote]
get a new name. there are a million writers out there tagging "slim", and it seems to be the first name that new writers choose.

[G.SMooth]

Originally posted by G.SMooth@Apr 1 2007, 03:20 PM
One of my favourites. Crits?
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5198/picture002om2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any advice?

[Bastardo]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Apr 1 2007, 12:48 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3846/picture005ee0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump please. :]

g.smooth smoothen your letters out and get rid of all the ragged shit around your letters...just make them normal looking letters and add add ons over time.

[Apple pie]

bastardo thats so sick.. y gotta do a handy for me ;) pye

whats it read mehk?? either way it look sgood

[Apple pie]

Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 1 2007, 03:41 PM
have you boned her yet?
edit:too....bouncingsoul
easy the s looks awkward and thin
pie the i has too many extensions
kspy the letters really dont have any flow or common shape for the throw
it actually a crooked y

[Bastardo]

Mers..The handy says Mersek

[ternoner]

whats that teal throw say? id its fresh paint it wanna see it on a wall
and g.smooth throw that away cause youve got to go simplier then that its lookin like it was broken off of something

[okaz]

Bastardo my love.

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/5569/picture2jt0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Hylo. ya dig nig

[[phenom5]]

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2673/0002790uo6.jpg
c&c?
ya my marker decided to blow up on the &#39;discount&#39;
fuck karma

[okaz]

Yo phenom. that has no letter structure what so ever. like what does it say? shnk?, then some ugly other shit on the bottom. but it doesnt matter. your not going ot get any better doing that over and over again. so you might as well stop. or start using a ruler or ms paint do some stirhgt letters like i dont know. get some ideas from upstate new york. look at ataks shit. and youll see hwta i mean ok [phenom5] ? dont do all this ugly unnessesary ugly shit that o wont get oyu nowhere. do simple wiht funk bre. keep funk alive.

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/1885/picture3js4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and aimo please dont post here anymore. your getting old man. i dont think your a toy anymore hahah. iight nig?

[NICCSACC]

nice dots all over

[alive]

aimo if u listen to okaz, ill e-punch you.

[okaz]

AHAHAHAH. lol. i was meaning dont be in the toyzzzz forummmmz any moooeeeee. iight?

[alive]

ummm. yeah. i understood. hes right where he belongs.

[Samp1e]

[phenom5] -- Uhh... I can&#39;t read that. Simplify, simplify.

okaz -- Your letters... Meh. Your fills... bleh. Those dots are unattractive.

Old piece and a new one:

http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/5792/20070328samp1efa7.th.jpg (http://img472.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070328samp1efa7.jpg)http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4825/20070401sampzy4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070401sampzy4.jpg)

Feedback is always nice.

[popshots]

samp i didnt froget ya ill get it tommorow...... is it cool if its only pen???

[Samp1e]

Fine with me popshots :P I forgot about the exchange myself. Did you like?

Also been trying to work on getting a throw... no M or P yet.

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9710/photo0032gd2.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032gd2.jpg)

[popshots]

yea im lovin the second 1 u sent me... thats a intrestin style

[Snakey]

Got some new Prisma&#39;s, just a test.

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7028/image001ow2.jpg


Okaz- I don&#39;t really like the whole dot thing.

Samp1e- I really like both those pieces, really clean.

[alive]

haha czer bite. dont u think i cant tell. i see all.

[Snot]

Originally posted by &#045;Sinn&#045;@Apr 1 2007, 03:22 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture168.jpg

any crits?
Crits are dont write Zion.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Snakey@Apr 1 2007, 08:25 PM
Got some new Prisma&#39;s, just a test.

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7028/image001ow2.jpg


Okaz- I don&#39;t really like the whole dot thing.

Samp1e- I really like both those pieces, really clean.
subtle much?

[alive]

u mean "subtle munch."


haha

[NICCSACC]

now its a "layered" snide comment.

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Apr 1 2007, 06:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; &#064; Apr 1 2007, 06:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@Apr 1 2007, 03:35 PM
I don&#39;t feel like outlining anymore and I wanted to post a flick so... Ehh

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0698.jpg

I&#39;m going to actually color this one. The letters are going to be green, the bubbles I&#39;ll make gray and the dropshadow will just be shaded with a sharpie or something
i dont like calling bites

espicially on a loved one(bouncing :wub: )
but dude,your B, is totally Bosoe&#39;s B

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9716/bosoedsya4.jpg [/b][/quote]
I don&#39;t venture out of the toy forums so I wouldn&#39;t know what else goes on in the big boy forums... It&#39;s the reason I still don&#39;t know who Chillen is hah. That B was generic, or so I thought...

Oh yeah, I forgot... For a deck design..

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0699.jpg

[dim]

Originally posted by Snot+Apr 1 2007, 08:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Snot @ Apr 1 2007, 08:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;Sinn&#045;@Apr 1 2007, 03:22 PM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture168.jpg

any crits?
Crits are dont write Zion. [/b][/quote]
finally some one said it

[Snakey]

Originally posted by Snakey@Apr 1 2007, 08:25 PM
Got some new Prisma&#39;s, just a test.

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7028/image001ow2.jpg


Okaz- I don&#39;t really like the whole dot thing.

Samp1e- I really like both those pieces, really clean.
Bump, new page.

I don&#39;t see how it&#39;s a bite from Cezr. If it&#39;s the piece that I think you&#39;re talking about, then the only similarity is the block method.

[Zep0]

Originally posted by Zep0@Apr 1 2007, 03:43 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/easy1.jpg
Snakey, its all right, your on the right track, just keep working on your letters.

I&#39;ve critted everything else...cause its being bumped for a bite..

Who did I bite?...Anyone? Crit it.

[semxz]

heres from today...
double page unfinished with me and my friend ceptor..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/35/3576395bcea4207ca43fcf90dc01cdf033e5f.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
a coloured sketch..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/35/3576718d1c0369b991d6dd54377c137e1d0e0.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
picture quality is horrid i no this..

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Snakey+Apr 1 2007, 09:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Snakey @ Apr 1 2007, 09:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Snakey@Apr 1 2007, 08:25 PM
Got some new Prisma&#39;s, just a test.

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7028/image001ow2.jpg


Okaz- I don&#39;t really like the whole dot thing.

Samp1e- I really like both those pieces, really clean.
Bump, new page.

I don&#39;t see how it&#39;s a bite from Cezr. If it&#39;s the piece that I think you&#39;re talking about, then the only similarity is the block method. [/b][/quote]
...and the drips going up and the rounded ends of the bars. rofl

[Apple pie]

Originally posted by Bastardo@Apr 1 2007, 07:03 PM
Mers..The handy says Mersek
same with the throw?

[sky 5]

Originally posted by semxz@Apr 1 2007, 09:41 PM
heres from today...
double page unfinished with me and my friend ceptor..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/35/3576395bcea4207ca43fcf90dc01cdf033e5f.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
a coloured sketch..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/35/3576718d1c0369b991d6dd54377c137e1d0e0.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
picture quality is horrid i no this..
aint bad . . maybe try keepin your bars proportional, make them a lil thicker and squish or scrunch your letters in more so they arent so open and dangly

[semxz]

hey, iight thanks man

[cirus905]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p105/cirus905/cirussketch.jpg

just bored at school last week.. threw down a quick thro and a one liner that has some potential..

[Apple pie]

cirus thats top one is nice.. im in 905 too bud

[moltov]

exchange with HSAL
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00572.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00573.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

"plague"
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0700.jpg

[Sumoe]

nice simples.

[Samp1e]

http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/5792/20070328samp1efa7.th.jpg (http://img472.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070328samp1efa7.jpg)http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4825/20070401sampzy4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070401sampzy4.jpg)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9710/photo0032gd2.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032gd2.jpg)
Trying to get a throw going, dunno if I&#39;m going in the right direction.


Bumpity bump.

bouncing -- :)

moltov -- The "H" looks too thin, should be fatter and your dropshadow on the "H" is stronger/bolder than all the other letters... or maybe it&#39;s just me.

cirus -- Good looking. Might wanna give more definition to the "R" on the top piece.

semxz -- The breaks in your letters occur a lot, it gives it a disjointed and kind of sloppy feeling. Might look better with less breaks.

zep0 -- Keep working at it.

[moltov]

BOUNCINGSOUL That Plague is so nice&#33; you wanna do a sketch exchange?
just PM me or post here

[[phenom5]]

went and did some simple shit, better?
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2752/0002791bd6.jpg
the proportions arent that great, the H is too small and im not sure about the 3d fill. but yea

[nero122]

no its still not simple i hate simples but im only telling you this because evryone else will use bars n keep doin em until you dont need to use a ruler n dont put sum shit electric crap in youre pics

[kozmoe]

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/3729/untitledcx8.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits please

[levans]

ahhh kozmoe loose every extension and use keyboard letters in block form for now untill you start bending them and make ur own style

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5158/djfsjdbf011lj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[HSAL]

liking that piece phenom5, but make the letters a bit wider so they stand out more. nice colour scheme btw.

[-Sinn-]

first of all i dont write Zion my friend asked me to do somethin that said that. I write Sinn 2 or Mawl 7 dependin on my mood and what the fuck is wrong with writin Zion?

[HSAL]

Originally posted by HSAL@Apr 1 2007, 08:57 PM
EDIT: ugh since my other post of crits didn&#39;t come up i&#39;ll do them again...:

applepie: yeah, i agree - change the P. it doesn&#39;t look good like that.

zep0: loose the arrows. the arrows don&#39;t really flow with the sketch IMO.

freedom: loving the throwups man, but change the P.
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/3471/forkatiehsalhw5.jpg

for my mate katie. very quick sketch.
bump for crits.

[levans]

your lines look like you have parkinsons or something well u get the point they should be smooth and i dont really like the letters / style

[Aven]

it could be neater. i like the use of not too many colors, keeps it simple

[trashhh]

Originally posted by trashhh@Apr 1 2007, 02:20 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/scan.jpg

any crits on how to improve this?
bumppp

Hsal just keep trying to improve the letters before u add loads of colour n stuff
Ases i like it

[nase7]

Its nice trashhh , i would just make the "h" on the same line as the other letters and make it abit smaller on the left.

[HSAL]

thanks for the crits.

trashhh: i like that ALOT, but maybe the t could be improved a little to maybe look more like a T than a Y.

heres a quick one:

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/9383/dsci0005av1.jpg

[alive]

Originally posted by levans@Apr 2 2007, 03:48 AM
ahhh kozmoe loose every extension and use keyboard letters in block form for now untill you start bending them and make ur own style

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5158/djfsjdbf011lj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this is the best on te page so far. HOWEVER. none of your letters match in style. your a sucks, so work on that, but your s and e are ill, but they dont flow together. work on repeating certain vertical strokes in the same letters, not just the similarity of the thin centers (which is good).

trash i love ur throw. i actually like your throw more then any of your pieces :P .

hsal, im not giving u crits untill u lose all the color + background, ur not ready for that shit yet. focus on ur letters.

kozmoe, damn. just lose the colors, and do block letters. go to the new 2 graff thread under this one in the toys forum.

[AimoOne]

HSAL..Simples like the simple in my sig
Kozmoe..Simples like the simple in my sig

and the other kid who thought he was doing simples..
Simples like the simple in my sig ;)

[HSAL]

Originally posted by alive+Apr 2 2007, 03:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Apr 2 2007, 03:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-levans@Apr 2 2007, 03:48 AM
ahhh kozmoe loose every extension and use keyboard letters in block form for now untill you start bending them and make ur own style

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5158/djfsjdbf011lj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this is the best on te page so far. HOWEVER. none of your letters match in style. your a sucks, so work on that, but your s and e are ill, but they dont flow together. work on repeating certain vertical strokes in the same letters, not just the similarity of the thin centers (which is good).


hsal, im not giving u crits untill u lose all the color + background, ur not ready for that shit yet. focus on ur letters. [/b][/quote]
you don&#39;t like the A? i think the A is pretty creative but i know what you mean by them not matching in style. i think what put you off the A was the colours used on it - but that&#39;s probably just me.

oh, thanks for the advice btw alive.

[DeproOne]

levans the good thing about it is they&#39;re mostly the same height. i like the color scheme and that u tried to make the Ss the same. but the a and e kinda....are kinda weird. try to draw like aimos sig.

[HSAL]

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/598/dsci0005ld1.jpg
simple? :)

[Aven]

Originally posted by HSAL@Apr 2 2007, 07:26 AM

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/9383/dsci0005av1.jpg
really cool...i don&#39;t see anything on it i don&#39;t like

[DeproOne]

um...confuzzleness.

does one turn into two turn into three etc. or are they different things?

[Skesh]

HSAL, the first is pretty lame, the 3rd has big potential
i like the other styles as well (4 and 5)

levans, thats hot

[ARMAwonR]

4 and 5 are whats up

feelin that medieval gothic style its bringin

use a chisel tip at a 45 and try to replicate that as a handy

.02

[HSAL]

Originally posted by DeproOne@Apr 2 2007, 04:39 PM
um...confuzzleness.

does one turn into two turn into three etc. or are they different things?
yeah, sorry i should&#39;ve made it clearer. 1 morphs into 2. 3 morphs in 4 and 5.

umm, here&#39;s a sketch with that "medival" kinda style/look - like it&#39;s been done with a chisel point. - it was never critted sooo...

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3167/dsci0002pf3.jpg

[South-Pole]

i like it,its your best style so far.keep it up :)

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture16.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture7.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture15-1.jpg

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

NICCSACC- Heat...
but damn you need a better camera.
Print.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture012-1.jpg
The Almighty
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture005-1.jpg
One Liners
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture004-1.jpg
s
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture003-1.jpg
e
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture007-1.jpg
SEZD
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture008-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture009-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture010-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture011-1.jpg
my nigggggggga
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture006-1.jpg

[AnteUp]

ok i kinda wanna start writing a new name...should i stick wit HAYZ or try WUNDR

sezer-i like tha e and s thas hot
hsal-that shit is tight
and aven that is tight

TIGHTNESSSS

[AimoOne]

Stick with Hayz..you did good simples with it.. :) ^

Sezer...do you write Sezd now..cuz i cannot work out the R in the tags..very nice tags tho

NICCSACC..i like your style..

i may have another EURO up soon..on a Swedish Stockholm train background

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/old3.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/old4.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/old2.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/old1.jpg

just some stuff i ran across in a notebook.

[HSAL]

Ed: try not to make it too spaghetti like... you can do better than that defo.
NICCSACC: loving that style man, really feeling it, especially the top sketch. (from ur first post)
the 3d piece is pretty sweet too.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Apr 2 2007, 12:19 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture16.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture7.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture15-1.jpg
did some things on the top one you normally dont do . . i like it alot

[prank]

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4715/image117kt3.jpg

czon oner mother fucker

[Hazex]

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/1469/soloomi6.png (http://imageshack.us)



Long tiem no post fast sketch i did this morning

[AnteUp]

dude... hazex...ur 3d is way tha fuck off

[Chulo]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/chasi.jpg
a couple of quick throws

[Hazex]

Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 2 2007, 04:42 PM
dude... hazex...ur 3d is way tha fuck off
why is it way off i dotn understand?

[BIGel]

good start chulo, play with different styles like that and see what flys and whats burns.

niccsacc those are heat, that last one is my fav, those characters are simple but effective. nice job.

just some busted shit, ive been tired and lazy all week.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/092/5/0/pear__noen__aska__by_bigel.jpg
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/092/7/9/bigel_bomb_by_bigel.jpg
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/092/8/5/more_evil_handies_by_bigel.jpg

[prank]

Originally posted by Chulo@Apr 2 2007, 04:54 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/chasi.jpg
a couple of quick throws
dude this is real shit

its not cuz its a throw up that u have to put as many bubbles as u can

try to make it in a way that will be quick to paint

dont make the bubbles for the point of it

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by Hazex+Apr 2 2007, 05:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hazex @ Apr 2 2007, 05:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AnteUp@Apr 2 2007, 04:42 PM
dude... hazex...ur 3d is way tha fuck off
why is it way off i dotn understand? [/b][/quote]
ok well to the jus regular person it might not be off but when you lukk at where you bring the 3d out on the top of ur "h" its not at the same angle as the rest...comprende?

[sex without condoms]

just some old shit.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010500.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kemsy.jpg

new account *****s,yurpp.

[mmark187]

Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Apr 2 2007, 12:23 PM
NICCSACC- Heat...
but damn you need a better camera.
Print.
The Almighty
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture005-1.jpg
One Liners
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture004-1.jpg
s
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture003-1.jpg
e
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture007-1.jpg
SEZD
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture008-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture009-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture010-1.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture011-1.jpg
my nigggggggga
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture006-1.jpg


dope ass handies. i really like em.

[Samp1e]

Originally posted by Samp1e@Apr 1 2007, 10:45 PM

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4825/20070401sampzy4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070401sampzy4.jpg)http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9710/photo0032gd2.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032gd2.jpg)
Trying to get a throw going, dunno if I&#39;m going in the right direction.


Still lookin for crits on the start of my throw...

I&#39;d crit your guys&#39; throws but I dunno what&#39;s good, what isn&#39;t.

NICCSAC -- same thing sky 5 said, really like that first one.

[G.SMooth]

I took you guys advice for simples
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture008.jpg
any better?

[6severe6]

G.SMooth, those are okay, but i would go simpler, just use straight lines to make your letters.
some shit from me
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j270/ksinanaj/101_0312.jpg
critique por favor?

[AnteUp]

no beef G SMOOTH but...GSMOOTH sounds like a name given to the person whose idol is DEBO off of friday after next...or the local prison rapist...o and those arent simples THESE ARE SIMPLES blocks buddy

[sex without condoms]

Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 2 2007, 05:58 PM
just some old shit.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010500.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/kemsy.jpg

new account *****s,yurpp.
stankin&#39; azz bitches, yall need to wash up

[ROYALE]

Severe your off to a good start but try and make your letters size more equal cause the U is tiny and the S is way bigger than the other letters

[anarchy]

The hell you talkin about?

(sex without condoms)

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by Edward"Sezer"Hands@Apr 2 2007, 12:23 PM

One Liners
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture004-1.jpg

glad to see you took my advice...absolutely love these.

[sex without condoms]

Originally posted by anarchy@Apr 2 2007, 06:19 PM
The hell you talkin about?

(sex without condoms)
bc im not a bitch.

and i am hella clean.

[ROYALE]

don&#39;t start beef guys

[-ShAmEE-]

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/092/8/5/more_evil_handies_by_bigel.jpg

i like these alot. :D :P :D :P

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by sex without condoms+Apr 2 2007, 06:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sex without condoms @ Apr 2 2007, 06:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-anarchy@Apr 2 2007, 06:19 PM
The hell you talkin about?

(sex without condoms)
bc im not a bitch.

and i am hella clean. [/b][/quote]
what the hell are you talking about?

you realize you are making no fucking sense right <_< ...or are you trying to sound like an idiot to get attention.

[Samp1e]

Originally posted by Samp1e+Apr 2 2007, 06:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Samp1e &#064; Apr 2 2007, 06:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Samp1e@Apr 1 2007, 10:45 PM

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4825/20070401sampzy4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070401sampzy4.jpg)http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9710/photo0032gd2.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032gd2.jpg)
Trying to get a throw going, dunno if I&#39;m going in the right direction.


Still lookin for crits on the start of my throw...

I&#39;d crit your guys&#39; throws but I dunno what&#39;s good, what isn&#39;t.

NICCSAC -- same thing sky 5 said, really like that first one. [/b][/quote]
kajsgkjagsfwef

:(

severe -- the U is too small, make your bars width more consistent.

G.Smooth -- Simplify even more.

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by AteskOne+Apr 2 2007, 06:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne @ Apr 2 2007, 06:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 2 2007, 06:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-anarchy@Apr 2 2007, 06:19 PM
The hell you talkin about?

(sex without condoms)
bc im not a bitch.

and i am hella clean.
what the hell are you talking about?

you realize you are making no fucking sense right <_< ...or are you trying to sound like an idiot to get attention. [/b][/quote]
haha never mind...just found out it was you fosale :wub: . sneaky little bastard :rolleyes: .

[sex without condoms]

Originally posted by AteskOne+Apr 2 2007, 06:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne &#064; Apr 2 2007, 06:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 2 2007, 06:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-anarchy@Apr 2 2007, 06:19 PM
The hell you talkin about?

(sex without condoms)
bc im not a bitch.

and i am hella clean.
what the hell are you talking about?

you realize you are making no fucking sense right <_< ...or are you trying to sound like an idiot to get attention. [/b][/quote]
atesk, whatever happened to our mad homo love.

you know that this is fosale.

silly boy.

i would edit this but i like it.

:wub:

[G.SMooth]

Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 2 2007, 06:12 PM
no beef G SMOOTH but...GSMOOTH sounds like a name given to the person whose idol is DEBO off of friday after next...or the local prison rapist...o and those arent simples THESE ARE SIMPLES blocks buddy
Yeh i know my name is gay, but i dont really care, id rather not make a new account, so thats why i kept it.

[AnteUp]

haha mah names pretty gay too...its all gud

[-ShAmEE-]

ante up get that dough. hahha love dat tune. i&#39;ll have some new flick up sooon. so keep watching hahaha

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by sex without condoms+Apr 2 2007, 06:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sex without condoms @ Apr 2 2007, 06:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AteskOne@Apr 2 2007, 06:28 PM

Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 2 2007, 06:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-anarchy@Apr 2 2007, 06:19 PM
The hell you talkin about?

(sex without condoms)
bc im not a bitch.

and i am hella clean.
what the hell are you talking about?

you realize you are making no fucking sense right <_< ...or are you trying to sound like an idiot to get attention.
atesk, whatever happened to our mad homo love.

you know that this is fosale.

silly boy.

i would edit this but i like it.

:wub: [/b][/quote]
my bad cutie pie...you were in disuigise so i thought you were hating on fosales (well your own?) work. you know i got mad homosexual love for you :wub: ...in a completely straight and normal way.

[Deso7]

theres nothing really to crit so im just gunna say i like those tags from bigel and samp the peice is looking good but work on the throwie a bit it looks like your trying to do a one liner which you maybe trying to do one but just work on a simple one.




http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7497/picture495rt3.jpg
crits?

[dim]

change the "e"

[BIGel]

more flix less talk
deso i like the e but it doesnt match the rest of the throw. theres no connection to it.

more classwork..i got bad grades
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/092/7/c/in_class_by_bigel.jpg

[TricksForKids]

not feelin the B and the insane ammount of extensions, still its clean as all fuck and i wanna marry that E, deso, i wouldnt listen to dim, i think that E&#39;s your best letter

meh, my two cents

Peace

[F.R.A.T.]

yo tricks u llive in toronto?

[Sumoe]

dope, likin&#39; your extensions...but yeah, my grades are slippin&#39; too, not sure if it&#39;s cause of graff or not...but I gotta get my act together. Last year almost got straight "A"s and I just got 2 C+s, kinda pissed. <_<

[migotti]

it says to post flick with 2 many arrows so here goes:
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f67/migotti/STONE.jpg



































so obviously i changed that shit.
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f67/migotti/bestpiece.jpg
what y&#39;all think of the second one?

[dim]

tricks i only said change the "e" cause it doesnt fit with ne of the letters
(no beef intended)