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migotti
04-02-2007, 09:45 PM
hahaha i'm embarrassed to say i made that well before reading the 2 many arrows part. once i read it i was like i've got the perfect one

NICCSACC
04-02-2007, 09:49 PM
rofl

BIGel
04-02-2007, 09:50 PM
you sir, are an arrow gangsta.

for my soon to be ex.
ho
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/092/0/6/thru_by_bigel.jpg

TricksForKids
04-02-2007, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by dim@Apr 2 2007, 09:13 PM
tricks i only said change the "e" cause it doesnt fit with ne of the letters
(no beef intended)
haha you dont need to defend yourself man! its your opinion, you know me, i dont beef unless kids make me very angry ( mind you i guess im a kid myself ) so no beef at all man :lol: ,

andddd to whoever asked if i live in toronto thats a yes

TricksForKids
04-02-2007, 09:51 PM
Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 2 2007, 09:50 PM
you sir, are an arrow gangsta.

for my soon to be ex.
ho
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/092/0/6/thru_by_bigel.jpg
damn son whatd she do to deserve that? ( nice fucking handy though )

moltov
04-02-2007, 09:55 PM
Thats beautiful BIg EL lawl she I bt she wont take it serious.

good luck

bouncingsoul
04-02-2007, 09:59 PM
Blegh
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0701.jpg

Bigel beats me anyday

Sumoe
04-02-2007, 10:04 PM
sorry I don't got your exchange yet Nicc, prolly have it by Wednesday or some shit...

nice shit bouncin' does he have a hat or a mohawk or something? a third eyebrow maybe? haha, anyways looks good.

NICCSACC
04-02-2007, 10:12 PM
tis all good. kids still owe me from like a year ago haha. its nuutthinnnn.

mmark187
04-02-2007, 10:22 PM
heres a couple of things in my black book. havent really posted anything before, adnd this is my first time. ive just been writing for about a month and an half and cruising the boards, looking at tight shit. lookin for some crits to see how ive come along. thanks.
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0021.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0013.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0018.jpg
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0005.jpg

sex without condoms
04-02-2007, 10:22 PM
Originally posted by Deso7@Apr 2 2007, 07:15 PM
theres nothing really to crit so im just gunna say i like those tags from bigel and samp the peice is looking good but work on the throwie a bit it looks like your trying to do a one liner which you maybe trying to do one but just work on a simple one.




http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7497/picture495rt3.jpg
crits?
fuck you cuntbag.

dont bite pesk's S

NICCSACC
04-02-2007, 10:25 PM
im not gonna say thats a variation of my e.

AnteUp
04-02-2007, 10:25 PM
TO MMARK
ahahaha gud simples...but on the first sketches "R" if u imagine that the legs of the
R are pants then the little part stickin out lukks lik a boner...hahaha

Deso7
04-02-2007, 10:35 PM
who is pesk?

also if i did bite which i dont know how i could have if i dont know who this guy is, you could just tell me and not have to say shit like that

Sumoe
04-02-2007, 10:35 PM
his name on BS is Sluts R Us.

Deso7
04-02-2007, 10:39 PM
well if i did bite im sorry.
ill just have to change it.
not a big deal.

mmark187
04-02-2007, 10:43 PM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 2 2007, 10:25 PM
TO MMARK
ahahaha gud simples...but on the first sketches "R" if u imagine that the legs of the
R are pants then the little part stickin out lukks lik a boner...hahaha
hahah i see what youre sayin. thanks for the feed. i was wondering where i should try to take if from here. like what should i move onto next to try to develop my skills in. like how would i make my shit more complex and step it up to the next level? and can i get more crits from peeps on that. ill return all crits.
deso7-that shit looks weak man. step your game up before you ask for help. work on control of your lines more.
bouncingsoul-you have a crazy ass style for your hands. its depressing but tight at the same time. reminds me of delirium

sky 5
04-03-2007, 04:39 AM
Originally posted by mmark187@Apr 2 2007, 10:43 PM
like what should i move onto next to try to develop my skills in. like how would i make my shit more complex and step it up to the next level? and can i get more crits from peeps on that. ill return all crits.

deso7-that shit looks weak man. step your game up before you ask for help. work on control of your lines more.

i thnk deso is on the better track than you homie and this is teh palce to get crtis expecially if your just starting out and dont have your style/appraoch figured out yet . . no beef or nothing buut dont be telling kids thewy wont be getting help down here cuz that just aint how we roll . .

deco - the Mis the best letter, ED is way to big and nowhere near within the style of teh other letters, maybe close up that open space in the middle of teh S to kkep to consitent with a kinda straght letter throw . . .

damn i get teh joke now . . . mark 187, crown in your sketches, talking shit like your stuff dont stink . . . . fucking clever bs toy members caught me sleeping when im mad f'ed up! :P :P :P

sky 5
04-03-2007, 04:42 AM
Originally posted by sex without condoms+Apr 2 2007, 10:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sex without condoms @ Apr 2 2007, 10:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Deso7@Apr 2 2007, 07:15 PM
theres nothing really to crit so im just gunna say i like those tags from bigel and samp the peice is looking good but work on the throwie a bit it looks like your trying to do a one liner which you maybe trying to do one but just work on a simple one.




http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7497/picture495rt3.jpg
crits?
fuck you cuntbag.

dont bite pesk&#39;s S [/b][/quote]
thats about the simplest most basic S there is&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

inkbits
04-03-2007, 04:42 AM
deso7-that shit looks weak man. step your game up before you ask for help.

In honesty you&#39;re not really in any position to make a strong comment like that man. Biting aside his is a better product then what you have put up. You need to go simpler before going more complex, everyone say&#39;s "go simpler" to just about everyone on here and it&#39;s standard fare but in essence it&#39;s true because you need to know where to sit the letters and balance their basic structure before you can try and get more adventurous and throw shit out of your letters like you&#39;re draining a flank or something. You&#39;ve allready tried to go way too far for your sketching ability with those. Keep it mega simple for now until you can balance some sort of consitant structure and you&#39;ll end up better for it. Do some simples and post those.

DeproOne
04-03-2007, 08:09 AM
and when you get the structure...

-ShAmEE-
04-03-2007, 08:34 AM
Originally posted by sky 5+Apr 3 2007, 04:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Apr 3 2007, 04:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 2 2007, 10:22 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Deso7@Apr 2 2007, 07:15 PM
theres nothing really to crit so im just gunna say i like those tags from bigel and samp the peice is looking good but work on the throwie a bit it looks like your trying to do a one liner which you maybe trying to do one but just work on a simple one.




http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7497/picture495rt3.jpg
crits?
fuck you cuntbag.

dont bite pesk&#39;s S
thats about the simplest most basic S there is&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
bet this S has been made like million of times before.

mmark187
04-03-2007, 08:48 AM
Originally posted by sky 5+Apr 3 2007, 04:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Apr 3 2007, 04:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-mmark187@Apr 2 2007, 10:43 PM
like what should i move onto next to try to develop my skills in. like how would i make my shit more complex and step it up to the next level? and can i get more crits from peeps on that. ill return all crits.

deso7-that shit looks weak man. step your game up before you ask for help. work on control of your lines more.

i thnk deso is on the better track than you homie and this is teh palce to get crtis expecially if your just starting out and dont have your style/appraoch figured out yet . . no beef or nothing buut dont be telling kids thewy wont be getting help down here cuz that just aint how we roll . .

damn i get teh joke now . . . mark 187, crown in your sketches, talking shit like your stuff dont stink . . . . fucking clever bs toy members caught me sleeping when im mad f&#39;ed up&#33; :P :P :P [/b][/quote]
im not trying to beef man, i just wanted to work on my crowns. i understand that im a nothing on the hierarchy of this website. my shit is no where near where i want to be, which is why i keep trying to improve. i personally think that deso&#39;s is really ugly. i see what youre saying about my shit not being good and that i do need to work on simples, but i dont see what i should do when i work on simples. a little help would be nice, and ill post some simpler shit today, but i just need crits on my simples so i can figure out where i need to go with it and what i need to do to improve.

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 09:02 AM
your simples need alot of work.

mmark187
04-03-2007, 09:22 AM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Apr 3 2007, 09:02 AM
your simples need alot of work.
what areas are they lacking, so i can pay more attention to them?

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 10:09 AM
just the whole structure of the letters basically. go simpler... as in nothing but single lines for each side of whichever letter. forget anything else about it.

dizzle_d
04-03-2007, 10:19 AM
Mark187- It looks like your paying more attention to throwing add-ons in then working on your letter structure. I mean, I&#39;m not good either so don&#39;t get me wrong, but I&#39;m just saying you should try and work your letters for now.

Just a late night sketch. bored out of my mind, my S need help. crits. It says Psilo.
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9592/img1498qq4.jpg

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 10:31 AM
it really fucking seazes to amaze me..how some people cannot do a fucking simple..whats hard about them...its SIMPLE..FUCK ME..HOW CAN YOU NOT DO A FEW LETTERS LIKE THESE..

S I M P L E..

IF YOU CRNT DO A FUCKING SIMPLE..YOU CARNT DO ANYTHING..IM SORRY FOR BEING SOOO HARSH..BUT ITS FUCKING COMMON SENCE..FUCK SAKE &#33; :o :o :angry: :rolleyes: <_< <_<

are you cunts thick..or just..plain FUCKING STUPID..?..ugggh...arghhhhhh.. :angry:

sorry for being soo harsh..but now it seems the Toy Forum has been overtook by thick bastards.. :(

Dizzle..d.................i like the karak..and its clean..but tone it down..do funky simples..kinda like the simple in my sig..

emokid
04-03-2007, 10:34 AM
dizzle d, looks like you have some skill with the biro, like aimo said, go a bit simpler and get a bit of structure and itl look nice

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3337/dscn6373xt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

splashed out and bought 5 biros for 97p from tescos

dizzle_d
04-03-2007, 10:41 AM
true. already workin on those simples.
Pear that shit is freshh

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 10:46 AM
Im Grounded..so looks like ill be on here tonight..ill help out in bunches..

Pear..as you know..extremely nice simples..but..the flick of the bar on the top on the P makes it kinda look lika K..you know...just invert it kinda..itll look 10000s tims better...id like to see more complex shit from you now..as i reckon you got down ze basics.. :)

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 10:49 AM
Well, I did a mass amount of simples over the last few days and slowly gave my letters some sharper structure. If this doesn&#39;t pass for semi-decent I guess I&#39;m going back to the basics.


http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4390/graf41vv9.th.jpg (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graf41vv9.jpg)


Also, is there a host that I can use other than Imageshack to get my photos blown up a little more, cuz I&#39;m sick of posting thumbnails.

Samp1e
04-03-2007, 10:59 AM
back to the basics

DeproOne
04-03-2007, 11:02 AM
here we go.

make that v...not like that. make it a normal V.
Take that tail off the s...its flippin weird
Make them the same width and height
dont worry about coloring for now
and what the hell is that behind the E? looks like a....dino tail??
take off the black dots
dont make your letters wiggle like that unless you can keep them the same width
and draw like Aimo&#39;s sig some more.

South-Pole
04-03-2007, 11:20 AM
sevn son thats not simple,mark 187 don&#39;t add crowns you&#39;re not a king yet,and also you need to go simple

ok,i bet you won&#39;t understand what simple means,so here you go:

now thats simple,if you wanna try to make simples then your lettes should like this
http://www.masgrafx.com/masgrafxracing/modules/Downloads/shots/temp/931.jpg

as you notice those are the same letters on your keyboard.print the pic and try to copy the letters
use bars to make letters,like i did here:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/samy3.jpg

i hope that you understood and read my whole post

edit:im not gonna repost that a second time neither explain,

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 11:26 AM
Originally posted by Samp1e@Apr 3 2007, 10:59 AM
back to the basics
Thanks alot for the constuctive critisism, real helpful. No wonder you have an endless amount of posts, all were most likely five words in length.


Depro-I appreciate all the details and help, I have a serious problem with V&#39;s. I went to the local bookstore to look at some "Graffiti World" books, and I realized why. I really couldn&#39;t find any inspiration except from people like Volt. The thing behind the E was going to be like a ram skull, and I was gonna have the horns pushing out through the E, but I completely got lost. I really messed up when I made his teeth curl at the bottom. However, it&#39;s definatly an improvement from this:

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3028/graf42nh7.th.jpg (http://img504.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graf42nh7.jpg)

I think I have alot of dedication, and the talent to get pretty decent, I just don&#39;t have the rules down pact yet.

Dizzle-Loving that sketch man, fresh as hell. However the "I" is a little to big and obtuse.

Tri1
04-03-2007, 11:32 AM
Ive just got into graff after meeting some other artists so i&#39;m a majour toy. Here&#39;s what ive tried to do so far.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture13.jpg
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture14.jpg
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture15.jpg
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture17.jpg
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture16.jpg

I was just hoping for some crits and comments on how i can improve.

South-Pole
04-03-2007, 11:33 AM
did i waste my time to explain what simple is?

sevson read my post again,cuz thats still not a simple

edit:my post goes for you also tri1

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 11:45 AM
Originally posted by South&#045;Pole@Apr 3 2007, 11:33 AM
did i waste my time to explain what simple is?

sevson read my post again,cuz thats still not a simple

edit:my post goes for you also tri1
What I just posted is an old sketch, I compared it to the one I posted previously, claiming that I&#39;ve improved. I know what simples are for God&#39;s sake, we were doing &#39;em for S&#39;s & G&#39;s years ago in my prelimenary art classes.

ESKE one
04-03-2007, 11:47 AM
Originally posted by Sevn_Son+Apr 3 2007, 11:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sevn_Son &#064; Apr 3 2007, 11:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Samp1e@Apr 3 2007, 10:59 AM
back to the basics
Thanks alot for the constuctive critisism, real helpful. No wonder you have an endless amount of posts, all were most likely five words in length.


Depro-I appreciate all the details and help, I have a serious problem with V&#39;s. I went to the local bookstore to look at some "Graffiti World" books, and I realized why. I really couldn&#39;t find any inspiration except from people like Volt. The thing behind the E was going to be like a ram skull, and I was gonna have the horns pushing out through the E, but I completely got lost. I really messed up when I made his teeth curl at the bottom. However, it&#39;s definatly an improvement from this:

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3028/graf42nh7.th.jpg (http://img504.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graf42nh7.jpg)

I think I have alot of dedication, and the talent to get pretty decent, I just don&#39;t have the rules down pact yet.

Dizzle-Loving that sketch man, fresh as hell. However the "I" is a little to big and obtuse. [/b][/quote]
SEVN READ THIS ALL OF IT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

yo sevn quit man becuse if tou cant understand and listen to other ppls advice then you shouldnt be in the graffiti world the first rule of respect is you must listen
your not gonna be good if your doing shyt like that
and for future refrence thats not style its shyt throw all those sketchs out of all the shit you created so far and start from the beginning
im not tryna start no beef but south pole went through all that trouble of trying to help your ass out and you totally ignored it
DO SIMPLES until someone tell you otherwise

South-Pole
04-03-2007, 11:49 AM
everybody toy that started doing graffiti thinks that he can do simple,
its not that easy as you think to make simples when you just started doing graffitti ;) ..well anyways im off doing my homework,so if you still don&#39;t understand please care to read my post again

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 11:50 AM
I suggest you open your fuckin&#39; mind before you open your mouth. The last picture I posted is about a month old, I&#39;ve been trying to improve by doing simples and then making extensions and altering the letter. My previous pic was recent.I suggest you read all of my posts thoroughly before you go making statements like that.

Let me make it a little "Simpler" for the handicaps of this board:

RECENT-
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/6757/graf41nb1.th.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graf41nb1.jpg)

OLD-
http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/7565/graf42qj1.th.jpg (http://img506.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graf42qj1.jpg)

I&#39;m not attempting to start any beef either, I&#39;m just trying to get through to you.

South-Pole
04-03-2007, 11:51 AM
i know it wasn&#39;t recent so try making simples next time

Fluffy Bunnies
04-03-2007, 11:58 AM
Originally posted by Tri1@Apr 3 2007, 11:32 AM


http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture15.jpg


I am putting this in my sig

gangprobed by aliens

ARMAwonR
04-03-2007, 11:58 AM
Sevn

your recent shit is definately an improvement ... but still looks like some nasty noodles

beef that shit up [thicker lines bro] ... lose the extensions ... and make some boxes
contrary to toy belief ... boxes ARE your friends

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 12:00 PM
sevn_son...shut the fuck up..

arma..how the fuck is that an imrpovement?...uughh..what the fuck..



you obviously aint been doing simples...becuz if you had..that recent sketch definatly wouldnt look like that..unless..your either lieing...or you just carnt graff..stop making beef with people..and except people opinions on you stuff..okay

South Pole know his stuff..simples the lot..me and him aree in the same boat..so listen to the both of use about simples..or dont..i couldnt care..

ima have somehting up in a minit

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 12:08 PM
Yall are right, I&#39;m wasteing both mine and your time trying to please a group of negative individuals. Graf ain&#39;t gonna get nobody nowhere, except for maybe behind bars. I&#39;ll stick to my tat work.

Tri1
04-03-2007, 12:10 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies+Apr 3 2007, 11:58 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fluffy Bunnies @ Apr 3 2007, 11:58 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Tri1@Apr 3 2007, 11:32 AM


http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u22/platapusman/Picture15.jpg


I am putting this in my sig

gangprobed by aliens [/b][/quote]
dose that mean you like it o&#39;r is it that crap your putting it in your sig for evryone to have a laff att? XD lol.

BIGel
04-03-2007, 12:13 PM
Originally posted by Sevn_Son@Apr 3 2007, 12:08 PM
Yall are right, I&#39;m wasteing both mine and your time trying to please a group of negative individuals. Graf ain&#39;t gonna get nobody nowhere, except for maybe behind bars. I&#39;ll stick to my tat work.
dont quit graf because of what you hear on an internet forum, damn you are one easy push over. just listen to some of the more experienced heads and move on. taking advice doesnt make you any less of a man, it makes you a smarter man.

nase7
04-03-2007, 12:16 PM
Tri- Just try and proportion your letters to the same size.

Sven- Fatten your letters up a bit.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/500000006702e35/1/95/GCk52hbp0j-Gsb2dmghIm2dpQ47BxRzA.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/uN7ATDqM0j-q8NtpizyLY5-U9JbEjXLv?referrer=hlnk)

Any crits before inking? :D

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 12:18 PM
Thats EXACTLY what i did ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Listened to the people who KNEW good and proper about the whole graffiit game..
and besides..why the hell should you care wht someone on a internet forum thinks to your work..

anyway

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/2222.jpg

sum shit..different theme to what i normally do..Samuraiii :ph34r:

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 12:27 PM
I know this has nothing to do with graffiti but I thought I&#39;dd share two of my tat designs with you guys before I left.

Carnival of Carnage
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4465/holycrap9bt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Wraith
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/2330/holycrap8vl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Samp1e
04-03-2007, 12:35 PM
Originally posted by Sevn_Son@Apr 3 2007, 12:27 PM
I know this has nothing to do with graffiti but I thought I&#39;dd share two of my tat designs with you guys before I left.

Carnival of Carnage
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4465/holycrap9bt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Wraith
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/2330/holycrap8vl0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
That&#39;s a bitch move to just up out and leave cause you&#39;re getting a little bit of heat. With an attitude like that you&#39;re not going anywhere. When I said back to basics, I meant exactly what I said, don&#39;t bother messing with extensions and addons until you have some solid letters down, cause at the moment it sure doesn&#39;t look like you do.

As for those two drawings though, those are pretty sick. You got something going for you.

Aimo -- Dope char/sword. Not feeling the letters though.

nase -- Lacking some consistency with your bar size, but otherwise looks alright.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-03-2007, 12:43 PM
ras - whoa, awesome&#33;&#33; is that suppose to be a mongolian guy? and yeah ur letters ain&#39;t that good.

sevn... juggalos are gay

nase7
04-03-2007, 12:44 PM
Thanks sample ill see what i can do ;).

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 12:45 PM
What can I say....I am what I eat-Pussy and Chicken. I honestly don&#39;t believe that graf is the thing for me to be doing, I should be focusing on my flash and apprenticeship. It&#39;s not that I&#39;m not willing to commit to people&#39;s advice, it&#39;s just that I&#39;m not looking to get myself into a medium of monatony. Everyone will give me advice to just be a generic form of what they are. I got into graf when I came here and saw the work of Gesus, Acroe, Hepos, and Die. They encouraged me because they all have their own unique style, and I know that there are people here that look down on them, but it&#39;s their dedication to what they believed in that made them so popular here.

DeproOne
04-03-2007, 12:45 PM
Originally posted by Sevn_Son+Apr 3 2007, 11:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sevn_Son @ Apr 3 2007, 11:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Samp1e@Apr 3 2007, 10:59 AM
back to the basics
Thanks alot for the constuctive critisism, real helpful. No wonder you have an endless amount of posts, all were most likely five words in length. [/b][/quote]
Word From The Wise:

If someone can smash you in a battle, dont be a smart ass to them...common sense.

DeproOne
04-03-2007, 12:47 PM
Who looks down on Gesus, Acroe, Hepos, and Die??

i really should&#39;ve put this in the first post. oops :unsure:

Fluffy Bunnies
04-03-2007, 12:47 PM
Originally posted by Sevn_Son@Apr 3 2007, 12:45 PM
What can I say....I am what I eat-Pussy and Chicken. I honestly don&#39;t believe that graf is the thing for me to be doing, I should be focusing on my flash and apprenticeship. It&#39;s not that I&#39;m not willing to commit to people&#39;s advice, it&#39;s just that I&#39;m not looking to get myself into a medium of monatony. Everyone will give me advice to just be a generic form of what they are. I got into graf when I came here and saw the work of Gesus, Acroe, Hepos, and Die. They encouraged me because they all have their own unique style, and I know that there are people here that look down on them, but it&#39;s their dedication to what they believed in that made them so popular here.
take a look at my sig&#33;

ESKE one
04-03-2007, 12:48 PM
watever sevn keep graffing wat i said to you was
i say it "simpler" it your gonna keep graffin like that quit because your ignoring us ever though it was an improvement :huh: it wasnt a very good one becuase yuor not doing simple like we said to do
thats it
and if your goona quit so be it you wont be missed but that just show how hard headed and stubborn you can be

HSAL
04-03-2007, 12:49 PM
nase: that looks dope man. ink it :D
aimo: nice character and sword but as sample said i don&#39;t really feel the letters.

anyways here&#39;s some new stuff... i wasn&#39;t particularly proud of the first one.
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/4518/dsci0005do5.jpg
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/6562/dsci0009ws9.jpg

DeproOne
04-03-2007, 12:51 PM
Last thing im gonne say to sevn.

Nobody was good at graff when they first started..Nobody. Everybody started from blockes and bars and went from there to make their own style. If you&#39;re gonna bitch out then leave already, but if youre gonna grow some balls and keep trying, go sketch with simples for a couplle weeks

Sevn_Son
04-03-2007, 12:55 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 3 2007, 12:43 PM
ras - whoa, awesome&#33;&#33; is that suppose to be a mongolian guy? and yeah ur letters ain&#39;t that good.

sevn... juggalos are gay
So were your rents, but it didn&#39;t stop Mom and Ma from adopting their precious lesbo love child. Just like it never stopped me from adopting what I consider a heritage that&#39;s over ten years old.


Depro-I was a smart ass to him because he gave me no advice on improveing my work, he simply stated "back to the basics" the purpose of posting here is to give constructive critisism. Not just "Ehhh....I don&#39;t like it".

Anyways, I might come back in a few weeks with some simples just to prove a few peeps wrong, until then I&#39;ll be basking in the beef that I recieve.

South-Pole
04-03-2007, 01:00 PM
sevn no one will crit you till you can&#39;t get your basics down

nase7
04-03-2007, 01:06 PM
Alrite south pole, hows the TRN simples goin down. From the last i saw they were lookin good.

G.SMooth
04-03-2007, 01:07 PM
Im trying simple letters but i still want it to look like graffiti. so here it is.
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture009.jpg
Any better?

nase7
04-03-2007, 01:09 PM
Simple is all about having proportion, all your letters need to be the same size and width, no overlapping yet and no extensions etc. Its where graffiti all begins.

alive
04-03-2007, 01:16 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 3 2007, 10:31 AM
it really fucking seazes to amaze me..how some people cannot do a fucking simple..whats hard about them...its SIMPLE..FUCK ME..HOW CAN YOU NOT DO A FEW LETTERS LIKE THESE..

S I M P L E..

IF YOU CRNT DO A FUCKING SIMPLE..YOU CARNT DO ANYTHING..IM SORRY FOR BEING SOOO HARSH..BUT ITS FUCKING COMMON SENCE..FUCK SAKE &#33; :o :o :angry: :rolleyes: <_< <_<

are you cunts thick..or just..plain FUCKING STUPID..?..ugggh...arghhhhhh.. :angry:

sorry for being soo harsh..but now it seems the Toy Forum has been overtook by thick bastards.. :(

Dizzle..d.................i like the karak..and its clean..but tone it down..do funky simples..kinda like the simple in my sig..
i cannot believe you. do you realize what a fucking hippocrit you are? you get ahead of yourself so fast. ur STILL doing shit thats too advanced for u. u never fucking learn. and still, as angry as it makes me, as infuriating as you are to me, and to eevry1 else who has tried to help u, we never called u a stupid fucking cunt. hello? learn your fucking place boy. i will burn you so hard. thick bastards? look in a fucking mirror.

do we need to ask everyone else whos been around here for a long time to remind you all the bullshit u pulled? do we need to? because if all the kids who ur bitching about knew your past, you would lose any clout that these misguided kids hold in you.


take all that shit back, or battle me.

slEEt
04-03-2007, 01:20 PM
Well the last few pages have just been bickering about shit so there isn&#39;t anything to crit but G.Smooth, so for Gsmooth i&#39;d use different colors since those are hard to read. I understand you want your stuff to "look like" graffiti, but before you do that you need to be able to make basic letters so you can understand how to manipulate them into your own style.

Now onto mine, first time playing with 3D so I know it&#39;s off under the M and maybe in a few more spots, any crits or help?

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/5072/img2304mediumwj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 01:22 PM
alive..uugh..gee..true true..but you gotta admit..it aint exactly hard to do a simple..isit not ?..

and iv said in the past that i never listend to you guys..and i actually gave credit too you..ill even try and dig up that post..

HSAL
04-03-2007, 01:23 PM
Originally posted by HSAL@Apr 3 2007, 06:49 PM
nase: that looks dope man. ink it :D
aimo: nice character and sword but as sample said i don&#39;t really feel the letters.

anyways here&#39;s some new stuff... i wasn&#39;t particularly proud of the first one.
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/4518/dsci0005do5.jpg
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/6562/dsci0009ws9.jpg
bump for crits.
more crits:

sleet: fix up the o... doesn&#39;t look like an o.
g.smooth: try a different colour scheme, i can&#39;t really see the letters. :/

alive
04-03-2007, 01:26 PM
you are not yet at the level where u should be using colors, fills, backgrounds, faces, 3d, any of that shit. u want to be serious, and u want to get serious crits by me, throw all that shit out the fucking window, pick up a pencil and onee black pen, and only work with that. use BARS. damnit.

focus on the goddamn letters. thats what this shit is about.

remember, real shit, good shit, can rock hard in black and white with nothing else.




ras, aimo, w/e the fuck u are now, yeah? well u used to find it pretty goddamn hard. but its all good, just remember your place. like i said, we neevr called u names and all that shit, seriously, if their serious, and your seriously annoyed, say what i had said to u, do what i say or dont, but if u dont, dont come to me and bitch that u still suck.

BIGel
04-03-2007, 01:28 PM
gsmooth-your first and last letters are badly misproportioned, get rid of the color and start from the begininning. take everybody else&#39;s advice about simples.

some-looking good, the s maybe a little off but it looks good. the handie is ill.

hsal-nice background but look at basic anatomy more for you characs he&#39;s lacking structure. his arms and neck look like jello.

something for that coshure ish. another nemz sketch after i fucked the first one up.
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/093/8/e/eeyor_by_bigel.jpg
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/093/6/2/nemz_by_bigel.jpg

alive
04-03-2007, 01:29 PM
o fuck that nemz its ill. honestly maybe the best ive ever seen from you. wanna exchange? i write caer, not alive.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-03-2007, 01:30 PM
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;^^
Awesome to the maxX to the exXtreme&#33;

is that a nemz? it&#39;s like hot sauce&#33; on fya&#33;

can you do me a throw up bigel? do a CY for me&#33;&#33;

Kayone707
04-03-2007, 01:32 PM
bigel. nice

mmark187
04-03-2007, 01:33 PM
yo south, ill keep off the crowns until im ill. and as for simples, i know what they are and shit, but do i have to use straight lines or is it still considered a simple while working on the flow and shit of each letter. like im not gonna connect them or shit. ill just keep them same size and style, but just wondering about the flow of the letters.

TricksForKids
04-03-2007, 01:39 PM
i hate how mathematical youre all making graffiti, its like theres some disgusting formula of straight bars you have to use in order to be "good", theres something called creativity and artisitc talent as well, im a big supporter of starting with simples, but even those can be "your own", so do simple however you want to mark, they can have straight lines or not

and bigel, exchange with me or die homie

:D

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 02:02 PM
dope shit BIGel.

Samp1e
04-03-2007, 02:14 PM
Originally posted by Samp1e@Apr 2 2007, 06:04 PM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4825/20070401sampzy4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070401sampzy4.jpg)http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9710/photo0032gd2.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032gd2.jpg)


^ since no one gave feedback on those (am i heading in the right direction for a throw?)

and some new stuff:

bleh, pen freestyle and a "should i finish this or not"

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/2460/20070403samp1od0.th.jpg (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samp1od0.jpg)http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/446/20070403samppenstylech0.th.jpg (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samppenstylech0.jpg)http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5391/20070403samp2db3.th.jpg (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samp2db3.jpg)

bigel -- Eeyore? lol Dig both.

hsal -- Might want to just focus on your letters like someone else said, save your markers. To each his own though. 2nd page looks sloppy. You trying to go for that ribbon effect in the first one...? Kinda needs more consistency and uhh... like depth or something. I dunno how to explain it.

sleet -- 3d on the bottom doesn&#39;t seem off, it&#39;ll gradually look better over time. Just don&#39;t forget the 3D on the top of your letters too.

Soze One.
04-03-2007, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by emokid@Apr 3 2007, 10:34 AM
dizzle d, looks like you have some skill with the biro, like aimo said, go a bit simpler and get a bit of structure and itl look nice

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3337/dscn6373xt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

splashed out and bought 5 biros for 97p from tescos
bump.
this shit got ignored my worthless chit chat.

just so im not flickless.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture011-1.jpg

<~ReSiN~>
04-03-2007, 02:18 PM
juggalo woop woop


http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071943a.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071946a.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071949a-1.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071948a.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071950a.jpg

...tweeker with a blackbook but anyways comments please. is it great does it make you want to puke...anyhting

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 02:21 PM
that CD makes me puke...i like the flow on the RE peice

Samp1e
04-03-2007, 02:24 PM
emokid -- looks hot. love that shading, you just use a bic pen? I would consider making the "slits" on the tops of the letters a little less deep. (more so the "E" and "A" than the "P" and "R".)

Soze -- love the "S", like the "E", not feeling the "Z" and "D" (is that a "D"?) so much. should be a little bit more defined, maybe bring the "Z"s top out to the left a bit more.

HuntingLOLs
04-03-2007, 02:28 PM
Originally posted by mmark187@Apr 3 2007, 01:33 PM
yo south, ill keep off the crowns until im ill. and as for simples, i know what they are and shit, but do i have to use straight lines or is it still considered a simple while working on the flow and shit of each letter. like im not gonna connect them or shit. ill just keep them same size and style, but just wondering about the flow of the letters.
there&#39;s 2 types of simples - block letters like on your keyboard, and the styled simples. block letters are quite easy to figure. they&#39;re made of blocks :P
the simples with style are the ones you develop while working on block letters (suddenly you by mistake draw a line abit wrong and realize it looks cool or you get a nice idea and try it out). they go hand in hand so work with blocks untill you&#39;re certain you can do them in your sleep.

but remember its not forbidden to experiment (just dont post it here yet). keep having fun with it etc.

Ratikoner
04-03-2007, 02:31 PM
Originally posted by <~ReSiN~>@Apr 3 2007, 02:18 PM
juggalo woop woop


http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071943a.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071946a.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071949a-1.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071948a.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/0402071950a.jpg

...tweeker with a blackbook but anyways comments please. is it great does it make you want to puke...anyhting
i like the letter structure n fills n what not...but im gettin sick of the name resin its... so common/unoriginal...along with many others but yeah i like most of your letters



p.s.

ICP got mad gay after the first wraith CD...madd sold out...then they go n sign a redneck artist too? as far back as i can remember they hated rednecks...

n that slipknot cd is good...i liked it...there newist shit wack...corey shouldnt have let that stonesour shit influence his lyrics on slipknot...its a shame <_<

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 02:37 PM
dope shit but ICP sucks since ringmaster came out. slipknot is terrible musically.

im in a death metal band by the way.

anie 1
04-03-2007, 03:11 PM
nice work but i wasnt crazzy bout first piece but it was still pretty good job

Samp1e
04-03-2007, 03:15 PM
Originally posted by Samp1e+Apr 3 2007, 02:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Samp1e @ Apr 3 2007, 02:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Samp1e@Apr 2 2007, 06:04 PM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4825/20070401sampzy4.th.jpg (http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070401sampzy4.jpg)http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9710/photo0032gd2.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo0032gd2.jpg)


^ since no one gave feedback on those (am i heading in the right direction for a throw?)

and some new stuff:

bleh, pen freestyle and a "should i finish this or not"

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/2460/20070403samp1od0.th.jpg (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samp1od0.jpg)http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/446/20070403samppenstylech0.th.jpg (http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samppenstylech0.jpg)http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5391/20070403samp2db3.th.jpg (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samp2db3.jpg)

bigel -- Eeyore? lol Dig both.

hsal -- Might want to just focus on your letters like someone else said, save your markers. To each his own though. 2nd page looks sloppy. You trying to go for that ribbon effect in the first one...? Kinda needs more consistency and uhh... like depth or something. I dunno how to explain it.

sleet -- 3d on the bottom doesn&#39;t seem off, it&#39;ll gradually look better over time. Just don&#39;t forget the 3D on the top of your letters too. [/b][/quote]
re-re-bump

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 03:16 PM
why bump them on the same page you terd

Samp1e
04-03-2007, 03:23 PM
my fault, my post/page display isn&#39;t default. thought it was on a different page. I&#39;m just begging for some feedback.

sheist
04-03-2007, 04:18 PM
http://i11.tinypic.com/2qxqdz8.jpg

quick sketch

gonna do some coloring when i have time this week and hopefully have it up this weekend

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 04:33 PM
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/1979/dsc0766tk3.jpg

This is gonna be my second battle I ever entered on BS nukkas...not done yet like always, still gotta touch up some shits here and there but you get the gist of it. :ph34r:

nickstix
04-03-2007, 04:49 PM
sumoe...that ish is so tight, the only thing i dont like is how the &#39;s&#39; seems to be shorter than everything else. but your not done so i kno your probably already doing something about that. o and i guess your having trouble with the letters in my name for our exchange?

sheist...i think your overdoing it with the faces, but thats just my opinon, other than that i think its pretty good.

samp1e...your sketches are all pretty good, nice simples. as for the throw i like it but im not so crazy about how its a thin like for the middle of the &#39;s&#39;

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 04:50 PM
haha sorry bout that man, I&#39;ll get it to you soon enough...

BIGel
04-03-2007, 04:51 PM
thats fire sume. the only crit i have is id make the the A (where its crossed) a straight bar to match the straight horizontal bar on the H. seems like it would make it more symetrical to the eye. nice tho.

sex without condoms
04-03-2007, 04:52 PM
something ive been working on.
not finished.
the pencil sketch looked so much better.
vaginal squirt.
close up
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010535.jpg
further away
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010536.jpg

14nick
04-03-2007, 04:53 PM
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/2108/blac...ingay010uv7.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/2108/blackbookjustingay010uv7.jpg)

I was drawin in my black book and this came out :blink:

crits?

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 04:53 PM
weird words but good sketch...just not feelin&#39; the "q"...

nickstix
04-03-2007, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 04:50 PM
haha sorry bout that man, I&#39;ll get it to you soon enough...
i understand, i know what its like. ive been so busy i havent had time to sketch in awhile myself, i want to hopefully sketch tonight but i never know if ill have enough time.

revolt92
04-03-2007, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 3 2007, 04:52 PM
something ive been working on.
not finished.
the pencil sketch looked so much better.
vaginal squirt.
close up
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010535.jpg
further away
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010536.jpg
I take it you are fosale using a different account

if not then your style is just like his

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 04:57 PM
of course it&#39;s forsale&#33;...

revolt92
04-03-2007, 04:59 PM
well you never know&#33; it Could be someone that just bit the hell off him&#33;&#33;

It could happen :P

ClasZWun
04-03-2007, 05:04 PM
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/840/dsfsdfjm4.jpg

Not a Piece. Not a Throw. Hate on it.

slEEt
04-03-2007, 05:05 PM
Sume that sketch for your battle looks pretty sick but i&#39;d fill in that little area above the S or make the top a little bigger.

Sex I like that style but i&#39;d ditch a few of the squiggles here and there, some of the letters like the Q and G.

And since my other sketch was ignored through the bickering of like 5 people heres another one I did just now. I only added the arrow because i&#39;ve never done one and figured why the hell not :lol:

http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/3360/img2308mediumvu3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6687/img2304mediumcq7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dim
04-03-2007, 05:12 PM
both your sketches look good but your "s" looks like "z" other than that i like them

whahappen?
04-03-2007, 05:14 PM
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4713/picture034kc3.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg
fosale i hate the q but all the rest is nice
cl the letters are too wobbly and wide
some your m&#39;s are kinda big and the e&#39;s bottom leg is long

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 05:16 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 04:33 PM
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/1979/dsc0766tk3.jpg

This is gonna be my second battle I ever entered on BS nukkas...not done yet like always, still gotta touch up some shits here and there but you get the gist of it. :ph34r:
awesome and unlike the previous poster i actually ENJOY looking at that S in that position. if you color that.... im going to consider retiring from this shit.

slEEt
04-03-2007, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by dim@Apr 3 2007, 05:12 PM
both your sketches look good but your "s" looks like "z" other than that i like them
How the hell does a S look like a Z? Those two letters are a complete mirror image..

dim
04-03-2007, 05:18 PM
i mean like the style of it is ridged compared to a normal s

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 05:21 PM
Originally posted by revolt92+Apr 3 2007, 04:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (revolt92 @ Apr 3 2007, 04:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sex without condoms@Apr 3 2007, 04:52 PM
something ive been working on.
not finished.
the pencil sketch looked so much better.
vaginal squirt.
close up
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010535.jpg
further away
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010536.jpg
I take it you are fosale using a different account

if not then your style is just like his [/b][/quote]
non-symmetry throws me off. srry. i dont understand this particular style, although it looks clean and all that, its just not my idea of graffiti. Just my personal opinion and i COULDVE told that thought to anybody near me right now as i type this but they would have no idea what im talking about.

good note: shits pretty clean and the fill is done great. no beef

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 05:30 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Apr 3 2007, 05:16 PM
awesome and unlike the previous poster i actually ENJOY looking at that S in that position. if you color that.... im going to consider retiring from this shit.
haha...thnx man, I know you not serious bout retirin&#39; but how long you been in the game man?

bouncingsoul
04-03-2007, 05:35 PM
Shoop de woop

The "knowledge kills" got covered up by the "contact"

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0703.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0704.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0705.jpg

whahappen?
04-03-2007, 05:39 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 3 2007, 05:14 PM
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4713/picture034kc3.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg
fosale i hate the q but all the rest is nice
cl the letters are too wobbly and wide
some your m&#39;s are kinda big and the e&#39;s bottom leg is long
new page
bouncingsoul good as hell

nase7
04-03-2007, 05:39 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 3 2007, 10:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Apr 3 2007, 10:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Apr 3 2007, 05:16 PM
awesome and unlike the previous poster i actually ENJOY looking at that S in that position. if you color that.... im going to consider retiring from this shit.
haha...thnx man, I know you not serious bout retirin&#39; but how long you been in the game man? [/b][/quote]
I think he meant retirirng from the battle ..

Bouncing- nice as always

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 05:45 PM
haha yeah, but seriously how long you been writin&#39; for homie?

14nick
04-03-2007, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by 14nick@Apr 3 2007, 04:53 PM
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/2108/blac...ingay010uv7.jpg (http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/2108/blackbookjustingay010uv7.jpg)

I was drawin in my black book and this came out :blink:

crits?
BUMMPPP :)

whahappen?
04-03-2007, 05:51 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 05:45 PM
haha yeah, but seriously how long you been writin&#39; for homie?
i think he mighta said like the 80&#39;s or late 70&#39;s
nick dont do that charac the left leg of the r is too thick

sank one
04-03-2007, 05:51 PM
^ i actually laughed when i saw that

and fosale its lookin good... your still fosale to me :D

EasyMac
04-03-2007, 05:55 PM
I don&#39;t post often in this thread but this is like the second day of using this word (whil), and i think it came out alright, don&#39;t mind the fill pattern cause I haven&#39;t practiced that shit yet

http://ourworld.cs.com/davewhoris/ourworldwhil.JPG

AimoOne
04-03-2007, 05:56 PM
lookin gud guys iv finally learnt ow 2 go online via my ps3 so now am browsin bs via ps3

sky 5
04-03-2007, 06:01 PM
http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/4506/1242417sr8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

old stickie i put on my boys bbook cover . . pretty good there bounce, letters seem alil to rigid to me thoo . .

ras fuck you and your ps3, fucking thrid time i gotta hear about how you have one and i 100% agree with alive, dont be telling kids to go simple and thowing in your lil "thick fuck" or whatever comments you add, nobody did that or does that to your wack shit so why say it to others? . .eat a dick bitch

alive
04-03-2007, 06:10 PM
thanks for the support.

old stikie, new stikie, fire, fire.
i gotta say though, as dope as u are (i cant step near it) ur handstyles have never done it for me. they seem to never have progressed. they seem like that same wack (sorry) style that every1 gets when they first jump in the game. they just take out all the curves, and make it all hard angles, trying to make it "look lyk graff." not that im saying u do that. just saying i dont feel it.


peace.

AnteUp
04-03-2007, 06:13 PM
thas purrrty tight sky decos (duh)...sorry stupid questionn...did u freestyle that shit? or do a pencil sketch then go over it...?

easy mac thas iight not feelin tha caraktr its gud but me no likey...

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 06:14 PM
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/121/dsc0772aq7.jpg

colored the 3D...dope shit sky.

uhhh
04-03-2007, 06:16 PM
i hate you.
too good.

but that makes me wanna sketch.
so im gonnna.

sky 5
04-03-2007, 06:17 PM
idk when i want to do a nice jazzy handy like people do on here i can with ease, i just like simple readable stuff . . . plus i havent practiced handstyles in awhile . . but the hand style on teh bbook was flat even for me

whats up with your style, did you try extending parts of your letter more like we talked?

whahappen?
04-03-2007, 06:18 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?+Apr 3 2007, 05:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (whahappen? @ Apr 3 2007, 05:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whahappen?@Apr 3 2007, 05:14 PM
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4713/picture034kc3.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg
fosale i hate the q but all the rest is nice
cl the letters are too wobbly and wide
some your m&#39;s are kinda big and the e&#39;s bottom leg is long
new page
bouncingsoul good as hell [/b][/quote]
itd be great if i got crits one these...
sumoe for some reason the smallness of the left bar of the h bugs me idk...

alive
04-03-2007, 06:21 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 06:14 PM
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/121/dsc0772aq7.jpg

colored the 3D...dope shit sky.
sky, haha thanks for the thoughts, ill ge a pic or 2 up in a little.


sumoe, i didnt get to u in time&#33; i wanted to suggest, u shoulda done a big top extension on the S like on the top of the C, woulda filled the dead space n looked nice. dope neway. love that color red.

whahappen, my throwies suck balls. so i cant help. sry.



peace all.

MAERone
04-03-2007, 06:25 PM
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/2929/photo040307001op2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crappy
crits?

alera
04-03-2007, 06:26 PM
sume the only rilly good letter in there is the S the others are ok but the S is amazing
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/3074/0403071921yy7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just a pen sketch... critz?


maer i like some parts maby go a litle simpiler with the extentions.
:D

sky 5
04-03-2007, 06:26 PM
that aint crappy man, keepin sketching, the M is teh best letter but seems to long/takes up too much sq. footage compared to the other letters
whahappen - i dont do throws :( when you can rock a straighletter in teh same time

Chulo
04-03-2007, 06:56 PM
Originally posted by MAERone@Apr 3 2007, 06:25 PM
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/2929/photo040307001op2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crappy
crits?
im likin tha doo-doo brown color... but fo real, try to easte up on tha arrows

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 06:57 PM
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/894/dsc0774tb2.jpg

half-assed fill... :(

might give it more detail later...

alive
04-03-2007, 07:06 PM
dope fill you mean. i wish the arrow on the right side was straight tho, instead of tilted to the side. and theres what i said earlier this page. but dope dope. i cant get near it.

ShIfTeD
04-03-2007, 07:07 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/3896/dscn0789mk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits or some shit?

MAERone
04-03-2007, 07:09 PM
Originally posted by Chulo+Apr 3 2007, 06:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Chulo @ Apr 3 2007, 06:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MAERone@Apr 3 2007, 06:25 PM
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/2929/photo040307001op2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crappy
crits?
im likin tha doo-doo brown color... but fo real, try to easte up on tha arrows [/b][/quote]
its actually bright yellow with a lime green outline but i took a flick with my phone so the color is shitty

Zep0
04-03-2007, 07:11 PM
I think if you did some dark green highlights, it will look good...

Maer its lookin good, I dont like some of the extension..right side of M and the a middle bar particulary but its lookin really good.

Alera, I dont like, sorry...just not my style.

Just some wack sketches from school today...crits please?
I hate the e, but like the S its the only reason im posting it...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/aeos1.jpg
Ehhhh its small the forcefield like that looks good farther away...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/aeos.jpg
I was bored, so I did this...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/lostboys.jpg

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 07:15 PM
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/7418/dsc0779fz0.jpg

better flick, changed fill a little bit.

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 07:17 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 05:45 PM
haha yeah, but seriously how long you been writin&#39; for homie?
1984 when i was 8.... i started drawing characters first then moved on to letters n stuff because this broad from tha chi came to my school and we&#39;d battle in class. ugly ass girl but she was cooll we was on the same type shit. MIDDLESCHOOL...i singlehandedly brought back pumas to my entire area. right before summer break i got a white leather pair of puma clydes with a red stripe and solid red fatlaces. id wear golf style kangols turtlenecks cardigan vests and bubble coats when kids was into starter parkas and reebok pumps. im a cancer so i guess that explains alot.
i started writing raps and battling in elementary school. i still do both daily. i have kids and my own bills for living in this apartment and that shit never stopped what i do cats that "have no time" are fuckin rediculous. make time slackers....... HIPHOP...............................m0therfuckaz bite this.

prototype for CASH battle below:

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/cashbattle1.jpg

alive
04-03-2007, 07:17 PM
to be totally honest, they look the same.

zep0, just keep fuckin with it. dont bother with the colors, focus on rocking the letters hard in black n white.

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 07:20 PM
very subtle differences...i.e. a little extra dark green and cracks, CRACKS MAFUCCA&#33;&#33;&#33;

nice proto nicc.

MAERone
04-03-2007, 07:25 PM
dope

semxz
04-03-2007, 07:25 PM
somthing i just finished.
camera kinda blurs it o well more later.
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/38/38128c77486035b201a0faa9c80b741a8252d.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 07:25 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Apr 3 2007, 07:07 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/3896/dscn0789mk4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits or some shit?
love the tag on top. looks pretty much like one of my tags.

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 07:26 PM
ha...does look like it says Venom.

NICCSACC
04-03-2007, 07:26 PM
Originally posted by semxz@Apr 3 2007, 07:25 PM
somthing i just finished.
camera kinda blurs it o well more later.
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/38/38128c77486035b201a0faa9c80b741a8252d.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)
nice pride rainbow.
if you like it i love it.

Zep0
04-03-2007, 07:27 PM
Originally posted by Zep0@Apr 3 2007, 07:11 PM
Just some wack sketches from school today...crits please?
I hate the e, but like the S its the only reason im posting it...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/aeos1.jpg
Ehhhh its small the forcefield like that looks good farther away...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/aeos.jpg
I was bored, so I did this...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e323/JollyGreenKid/lostboys.jpg
Pear, I&#39;m not feelin how they break up like thator the middle bar of e, other that its not bad...

Nicc - the H is kinda hidden and I dont like how the C is backwards, but its look alright...

semxz
04-03-2007, 07:28 PM
nahh i was kinda goin for an easter type pastel theme but o well

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 07:29 PM
Originally posted by emokid@Apr 3 2007, 10:34 AM
dizzle d, looks like you have some skill with the biro, like aimo said, go a bit simpler and get a bit of structure and itl look nice

http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/3337/dscn6373xt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

splashed out and bought 5 biros for 97p from tescos
I like this Pear better.

semxz
04-03-2007, 07:31 PM
yea we deff. have diffrent styles its cool idc which one u like more im gonna keep developing my style thats all

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 07:32 PM
just sayin&#39;...

AnteUp
04-03-2007, 07:52 PM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/bobobobob.jpg
crits please...did durin skool so not much

mmark187
04-03-2007, 08:27 PM
workin on my simples. i went back to the drawing board, and i did a little charac. nothing special cuz i never do them, but i was just fuckin around. it feels weird to regress in order to progress, but i can tell it does help actually.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0028-2.jpg

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 08:28 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 07:15 PM
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/7418/dsc0779fz0.jpg

better flick, changed fill a little bit.
BUMP&#33;

AnteUp
04-03-2007, 08:33 PM
for crits...um sum one i dont really like ur handies...but other than that... i like the red but i think that u shud do a sketch wit instead of black lines do red lines wit red shadow... jus a suggestion...

Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 3 2007, 07:52 PM
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/bobobobob.jpg
crits please...did durin skool so not much
bump fo crits....

mmark187
04-03-2007, 08:33 PM
sume - no need to bump that. we all know its ill as fuck. ;)
ante - slip a piece of paper under that shit when you draw. the desk and the ballpoint dont match.

fuckthatgame
04-03-2007, 08:42 PM
sume-i dont wana b all over ur dick or whatever...but that is the illest shit that i have seen in the toy forum period....burns more than half the shit in the big guy forum......i can only hope to pull shit like that someday&#33;

Sumoe
04-03-2007, 09:00 PM
thnx for the compliment...but it definitely doesn&#39;t burn anything in the Big Boy Thread...aside from people who aren&#39;t "supposed" to post there...and there&#39;s been a lot iller shit than mine in the toy forum...thanks anyways though.

edit: and yeah Anteup, my handies suck ass.

AnteUp
04-03-2007, 09:22 PM
o that was my scanner that lukks like tha desk...o and do yall mind givin me sum CRITS&#33;&#33;&#33;

.D.H.
04-03-2007, 09:22 PM
edit:

doublee possstt

.D.H.
04-03-2007, 09:26 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/6638/steez005qe7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

weird pen charac

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/7637/steez004za0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i dont like this one that much. the &#39;c&#39; and &#39;o&#39; are messed.

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/4424/steez001js3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

more pen....

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/4699/steez002ph3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

earth science boredem

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/3537/steez003jd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

earth science boredem x2

critisizm, please

Samp1e
04-03-2007, 09:37 PM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5391/20070403samp2db3.th.jpg (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samp2db3.jpg)http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/378/20070403samp3eg6.th.jpg (http://img155.imageshack.us/my.php?image=20070403samp3eg6.jpg)

the fill didn&#39;t really turn out like it should have... was gonna do more but I kinda don&#39;t like it any more.

moltov
04-03-2007, 10:12 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 09:00 PM
edit: and yeah Anteup, my handies suck ass.
D.H.THats so HOT likin it and sume thats Fresh

Myhandies arent that good, but I wanted to see what I can do and mabe help a brotha out
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00578.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00579.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p227/moltov_bomber/DSC00580.jpg

SUMEONE... :wub:

capitol
04-03-2007, 10:15 PM
Samp:If i were doing this fill id use a lighter color forthose curvy lines, then outside of those lines use a darker color. To make it seem more "Trippy"

BIGel
04-03-2007, 10:20 PM
props to everyone (sume and sky looking good) the last four pages are the best ive seen in a long time. sume that cash is dope cant wait to see the finished product.

i filled the nemz and did a background, but it wouldnt fit on the scanner so its all chopped to hell.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/093/8/6/NEMZ_FILLED_by_bigel.jpg
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/093/b/5/the_talking_heads_by_bigel.jpg

nickstix
04-03-2007, 10:38 PM
bigel...man you are crazy

samp1e...your structure is pretty good, as for the fill just keep messing around and eventually youll come up with something you like.

.D.H...nice double post, i like your letters theyre funky. i like your last pic the best.

something i did for the cash battle but im not too happy with it i might do another,
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/cash.png
crits?

Mr Tasty
04-03-2007, 10:52 PM
STE.....is it just me that sketchs backwards?....then never finnishs the first to letters?....
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/ste1.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/stes.jpg
crits

mmark187
04-03-2007, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by AnteUp@Apr 3 2007, 09:22 PM
o that was my scanner that lukks like tha desk...o and do yall mind givin me sum CRITS&#33;&#33;&#33;
nah man. i mean your lines are weird cuz the desk. i have the same problem sometimes. if you use only one sheet of paper on a desk and a ballpoint it rolls real weird. but its alright otherwise. can i get a crit on the simple i did. i took your advice and went back to the drawing board.

ESKE one
04-04-2007, 12:49 AM
Originally posted by .D.H.@Apr 3 2007, 09:22 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/6638/steez005qe7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

weird pen charac

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/7637/steez004za0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i dont like this one that much. the &#39;c&#39; and &#39;o&#39; are messed.

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/4424/steez001js3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

more pen....

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/4699/steez002ph3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

earth science boredem

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/3537/steez003jd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

earth science boredem x2

critisizm, please
cant really crit your letters yet not at that level
but im calling an R bite may be wrong though well just have to see wat FOSALE thinks about that

NICCSACC
04-04-2007, 12:49 AM
Originally posted by Mr Tasty@Apr 3 2007, 10:52 PM
STE.....is it just me that sketchs backwards?....then never finnishs the first to letters?....
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/ste1.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/stes.jpg
crits
that top one is murder

levans
04-04-2007, 01:15 AM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 3 2007, 08:28 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe &#064; Apr 3 2007, 08:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 3 2007, 07:15 PM
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/7418/dsc0779fz0.jpg

better flick, changed fill a little bit.
BUMP&#33; [/b][/quote]
sume its fucking sexy but the s doesnt siut the other letters...i love ur s but its too low..
its like have a sentence like this CAsH but the s is thicker than the other leters
edit:looking at it again makes me think that its missing a letter it would be perfect with 5 letters cuz it would centre the piece

Zealot
04-04-2007, 02:41 AM
Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 3 2007, 11:20 PM
props to everyone (sume and sky looking good) the last four pages are the best ive seen in a long time. sume that cash is dope cant wait to see the finished product.

i filled the nemz and did a background, but it wouldnt fit on the scanner so its all chopped to hell.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/093/8/6/NEMZ_FILLED_by_bigel.jpg
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/093/b/5/the_talking_heads_by_bigel.jpg
Lose the overlap on the top of your Z&#33;

DJLotus
04-04-2007, 06:26 AM
Originally posted by ESKE one+Apr 4 2007, 12:49 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one &#064; Apr 4 2007, 12:49 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-.D.H.@Apr 3 2007, 09:22 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/6638/steez005qe7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

weird pen charac

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/7637/steez004za0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i dont like this one that much. the &#39;c&#39; and &#39;o&#39; are messed.

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/4424/steez001js3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

more pen....

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/4699/steez002ph3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

earth science boredem

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/3537/steez003jd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

earth science boredem x2

critisizm, please
cant really crit your letters yet not at that level
but im calling an R bite may be wrong though well just have to see wat FOSALE thinks about that [/b][/quote]
i like the charac you should put that shit on some stickas.... and send em to me&#33; lol

EDIT :: im not saying your s is a bite in any way but it DEF reminds me of gesus&#39;s

S/E ONE
04-04-2007, 06:27 AM
JUST WANTED TO SHOW ME AND THE HOMMIES COLLECTION

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j145/militantone/graffpics031.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j145/militantone/graffpics033.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j145/militantone/graffpics014.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j145/militantone/graffpics016.jpg


FEEL FREE TO COMMENT

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nase7
04-04-2007, 06:29 AM
Theres a thread called flicks of my inventory mate.. not sure where tho type search at the top.

beefgerky
04-04-2007, 06:47 AM
tearin shit up with those highliters?
oh an you homboy needs some new sweats..

levans
04-04-2007, 07:11 AM
ahaha told^^^^^^^^

-ShAmEE-
04-04-2007, 07:14 AM
loadz of sharpies thou

beefgerky
04-04-2007, 07:31 AM
oh, while im here
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/50.jpg
doodles.

NICCSACC
04-04-2007, 08:41 AM
a baby blue sharpie might as well be a royal blue sharpie.
wish they made affordable paint m arkers.

mmark187
04-04-2007, 09:09 AM
i added some 3d to that simple i did. im really lookin for some crits on this. im trying to regress in order to progress, and im trying to develop my style. thanks
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0029.jpg

beef - i like that throw. that shit looks fresh.

NICCSACC
04-04-2007, 10:00 AM
looks pretty cool except your S id wack. see how it curves up-inward at the bottom? it shoulda just went with the flow.

nase7
04-04-2007, 10:11 AM
Yh i agree with niccsacc.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/5000000067d00cb/1/3/yU-j-Yx15D-M5r1CkIUJlemy1ohP_Qbc.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/qB-H3FfFzj-jE6QJNboKEOGXofJ50Ysw?referrer=hlnk)
Battle piece and random word.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/5000000067d03ee/1/53/N3iiBHwL4j80CkeW83TWuunzQUqyd8XQ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/PSnsjckF7T_PeC6SKjufOdVgNU7yE5PT?referrer=hlnk)
Someting i did for aimt out of boredom :lol:

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/5000000067d0619/1/49/2ojf3LBv4T89iihpy_hQo1F13OVg5fv2.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/WSDL-Avk6T9p4kQp3AmonEk1eI-0N2WZ?referrer=hlnk)
new Asen simple.

Crits :D.

:D :D

South-Pole
04-04-2007, 10:11 AM
i like it but work on the s and take off the head off the i

hungr
04-04-2007, 10:13 AM
sketchbook i found from this past summer.. mostly me & tenser
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00107.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00106.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00111.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00113.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00116.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00104.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00105.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00101.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00103.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00117.jpg

nase7
04-04-2007, 10:14 AM
Originally posted by nase7@Apr 4 2007, 03:11 PM
Yh i agree with niccsacc.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/5000000067d00cb/1/3/yU-j-Yx15D-M5r1CkIUJlemy1ohP_Qbc.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/qB-H3FfFzj-jE6QJNboKEOGXofJ50Ysw?referrer=hlnk)
Battle piece and random word.

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/5000000067d03ee/1/53/N3iiBHwL4j80CkeW83TWuunzQUqyd8XQ.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/PSnsjckF7T_PeC6SKjufOdVgNU7yE5PT?referrer=hlnk)
Someting i did for aimt out of boredom :lol:

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/5000000067d0619/1/49/2ojf3LBv4T89iihpy_hQo1F13OVg5fv2.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/WSDL-Avk6T9p4kQp3AmonEk1eI-0N2WZ?referrer=hlnk)
new Asen simple.

Crits :D.

:D :D
Bumpin to next page :P .

Edward"Sezer"Hands
04-04-2007, 10:30 AM
nice shit hungr.
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/Picture013-1.jpg

mmark187
04-04-2007, 10:33 AM
thanks for the crits everyone. ill be workin on my simples a lot, and ill post some more today. i never do characs so i just wanted to give one a shot. probably wont see any from me for a while, cuz ill be focusing more on my letters and shit.

nase7
04-04-2007, 10:35 AM
Could someone give me crits please.

Sezd- im feelin the S and E but not the rest.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-04-2007, 10:41 AM
TO everyone on this page... RAWR&#33;


Outlined this with a fineliner deco... still gettin used to them.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Yourlifeisalie.png

Just something I did for bouncing... it looked like fire when it was in pencil, then I turned up the light more and it looked wrong... but I am ok with it. oh yeah and I am working out a throw... what ya think?
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/theyarecoming.png

mmark187
04-04-2007, 10:45 AM
nase im feeling the asen one the most. the curve of the R in after is a little thin and doesnt flow that well, and i think the I in the aimt shout be closer to the A

fluffy - the knews is good except the top leg of the k and the overlapping on the top part of the s. i like the throw too but the k needs a little work. its a cool style though. i like the soft c like that.

Urah
04-04-2007, 10:53 AM
Sketch book work since I&#39;ve started with my new name. Any suggestions? aparently I keep losing my letter structure when I try and get loose.

My Quick burner.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d101/zipweenis/sketch3.jpg

Same burner basically, just with a fill.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d101/zipweenis/sketch2.jpg

Most recent sketch
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d101/zipweenis/sketch4.jpg

Aaaand a little page peice or whatever.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d101/zipweenis/sketch1.jpg

I realise the A and the H don&#39;t really match the U and the R in the simple one, but other wise, I&#39;m pretty happy with it?

beefgerky
04-04-2007, 11:06 AM
Tens and Hungr straight killlin shit.

mmark187
04-04-2007, 11:17 AM
urah, thats some fly shit. i like your handies a lot. and the vandals in action and the robot are dope. i think on the first pic the leg of the R is too long. i like the green one the most. the fill is real dope on that one. the other two are tight but i think theres too much going on. shit looks good though.

rockin simples. can i get some crits on this one?
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0030.jpg

Fluffy Bunnies
04-04-2007, 11:26 AM
^^
Paint that ish

all it&#39;s missing is some hardcore arrows... add some then ur set&#33;

chase one
04-04-2007, 11:34 AM
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/5935/sketches003fc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits.....yes im bored

mmark187
04-04-2007, 11:43 AM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Apr 4 2007, 11:26 AM
^^
Paint that ish

all it&#39;s missing is some hardcore arrows... add some then ur set&#33;
i jsut tried adding some arrows but where ever i put them doesnt seem to look right. idk my arrows suck too.

South-Pole
04-04-2007, 11:45 AM
he was being sarcastic^^

don&#39;t add arrows

Fluffy Bunnies
04-04-2007, 11:51 AM
haha... yeah NEW PAGE 2900&#33;&#33;

Wootness...

anyways... bumpalicious

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/theyarecoming.png

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Yourlifeisalie.png

mmark187
04-04-2007, 11:52 AM
hahah now i feel retarded. can i get a serious crit on it? idk if you think it sucks or what, fluffy.

chase one
04-04-2007, 11:53 AM
Originally posted by chase one@Apr 4 2007, 11:34 AM
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/5935/sketches003fc5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits.....yes im bored
bump 4 crits

nase7
04-04-2007, 11:57 AM
Fuckin nice simple just dont make the B go into the O and make the D not have the backwards tail. But keep that ish coming.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-04-2007, 12:02 PM
Originally posted by mmark187@Apr 4 2007, 11:52 AM
hahah now i feel retarded. can i get a serious crit on it? idk if you think it sucks or what, fluffy.
yes I am serious... arrows are the in thing these days, so listen to me and add the arrows like a mad man... don&#39;t listen to what anyone else has to say, cuz honestly, you gonna beleive them or me?&#33;&#33;

South-Pole
04-04-2007, 12:09 PM
lmfao yeah,arrows are the shit now days,add arrows

nase7
04-04-2007, 12:09 PM
Originally posted by mmark187@Apr 4 2007, 04:17 PM
urah, thats some fly shit. i like your handies a lot. and the vandals in action and the robot are dope. i think on the first pic the leg of the R is too long. i like the green one the most. the fill is real dope on that one. the other two are tight but i think theres too much going on. shit looks good though.

rockin simples. can i get some crits on this one?
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c95/mmark187/DIGI0030.jpg
The U and L are ok. but to be honest the S and O are pathetic. Just make your O as simple as it gets for now just rounded with a circle in the middle and make the S just like this>>> <span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>S</span>

Fluffy Bunnies
04-04-2007, 12:13 PM
what you saying nase... that&#39;s fire like bbq hawt sauce... ur moms pathetic.. you have no idea what you are talking about.

Soul... good job&#33;

nase7
04-04-2007, 12:25 PM
Did i say pathetic, I meant its pathetic having ill shit like that in the toy section :wub:

GETS UP
04-04-2007, 12:35 PM
trying to develop out of my toy stage....
trying to involve a new style, some sort of wildstyle, and an old skool theme





http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n27/jpb104/031207_11121.jpg



http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n27/jpb104/wildstyle.jpg



http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n27/jpb104/yoyoyo.jpg

KASE2
04-04-2007, 12:41 PM
ey gets up, thatz sick keep it up

hungr
04-04-2007, 12:44 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00118.jpg
i was recently dubbed "the sign maker" where i work..so i dropped this tonight ...i have a feeling this T has been dropped before..and the G is fucked
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00119.jpg

mind.or.matter
04-04-2007, 01:14 PM
gets up: the 3d is off in the first one but its got a good feel, make a vanishing point where all of the 3d goes towards, but for the rest, still go simpler,

hungr: not feeling the H or the face in your throw, for the h, try getting rid of the swoosh thing on the left of it, and fatten up the right side a bit more....
feeling the second one though

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 02:19 PM
fluffy, hungr...looks good.

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/7955/dsc0788ht8.jpg

okay, so I fucked up the fill and added some "Get Cash" simples...was gonna put "Get Money" but it wouldn&#39;t fit...long story short It looks bad now... <_<

nickstix
04-04-2007, 02:25 PM
wow, sume what you think is bad still is better than my stuff that i think is good :P
but other than that that piece is so nice, nothing really to crit

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 02:28 PM
thnx...I don&#39;t think it&#39;s "bad" but I just hate the dark green in the right hand corner of the small bars on the "A" and "H"... <_<

AimoOne
04-04-2007, 02:33 PM
Ugg..Sumey Baby..whut did you do..the Green splodges.. :( :( ..on the letters...the Get Cash simples is good..bt the H puts it off..you shudda left it..

Fluff Mister One..Your Y&#39;s Suck..the C is a nice fresh ... like..a egg..


Hungr..no likeing the H..but the others are koo...i dont like ze face tho..for a throw..i think it should be less detailed..YA MEEAN <_< ;) :D
.. in not liking the bottom peice tho mate..sorry :(


Gets Up...firstly..you have the gayest sig ever..even gayer that when Fosalie baby had two japanses babys kissin..uuughh..the peices..are not that great..the top is HOLY MOLY clean thi ... really good cleaness..but the others a pretty wack..no offence..i like that top style..id do a simple version of that..for a good week or so..and see how you letter structure comes along..i think it could be hot wid extensions , etc etc.....keep up that cleaness .. i like to see..CLEANESS..

no sketching tonight..had a good few hours of fiddling with girls and playing football ( soccer ) .. im now tired :blink: :) B)

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 02:37 PM
I HATE SOCCER&#33;

just thought I&#39;d throw that out there...

South-Pole
04-04-2007, 02:40 PM
sume:why complain lol,that shit is mad fiiire

fluff:im not liking the Y but i still like the piece

getsup:wow just woow..try doing simples im not liking your work

uhhh some quick stuff ....i&#39;ll try to make some more this week-end if i have enough time :P

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/torn.jpg

i didn&#39;t had enough space to add a N at the end of my piece neither i didn&#39;t enough space to finish my T,and also i fucked up the colouring it doesn&#39;t show on the scan


well,not my best but still

CRITS?

revolt92
04-04-2007, 02:51 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 4 2007, 02:33 PM
no sketching tonight..had a good few hours of fiddling with little girls and playing football ( soccer ) .. im now tired :blink: :) B)
hahahahaha...sorry to break it to ya but thats pedeophillia :lol:

sex without condoms
04-04-2007, 02:53 PM
finished squirt further away
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010545.jpg
close up
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010544.jpg
i was gonna suck up to the mods and do a Cezr Sky and Tricks are the best mods ever&#33; but after the Ce in Cezr&#39;s sketch i kinda got bored and let the rest fall of the ship and suck major nuts.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010543.jpg
CocK@&#33;
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010542.jpg
ChodE&#33;
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010537.jpg
a Chode throwie and Oneliner, firsttime.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010538.jpg
^sucks

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 02:55 PM
you like sexual organs dont&#39;cha?

sex without condoms
04-04-2007, 02:59 PM
sure.
all the sketches were from like 2 weeks ago cept the vagina sketch and the cezr sketch when i got really bored
just used words with letters i liked

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 03:06 PM
haha you like the letters in..."cock", "vagina", and "chode" funny stuff, dope sketches anyways.

MainEvent
04-04-2007, 03:06 PM
choder, like those throwies alot.

nickstix
04-04-2007, 03:09 PM
sex...that shit is clean

south-pole...nice simples man keep it up, now that you have your letters down you might want to try bending them and adding some style or you can do other letters to better you versatility.

a quick pen sketch i did, &#39;sr&#39; im trying to go for a wilderstyle just not really wild...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sr.png
crits?

sex without condoms
04-04-2007, 03:11 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 4 2007, 03:06 PM
haha you like the letters in..."cock", "vagina", and "chode" funny stuff, dope sketches anyways.
if you haven&#39;t noticed baby my best letters are like H&#39;s, V&#39;s, C&#39;s. E&#39;s K&#39;s. R&#39;s,S&#39;s, O&#39;s, and A&#39;s and somewhat G&#39;s idk i just love the letters

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 03:12 PM
I guess...but it&#39;s still funny. :lol:

Edward"Sezer"Hands
04-04-2007, 03:16 PM
Originally posted by sex without condoms+Apr 4 2007, 03:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sex without condoms @ Apr 4 2007, 03:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sumoe@Apr 4 2007, 03:06 PM
haha you like the letters in..."cock", "vagina", and "chode" funny stuff, dope sketches anyways.
if you haven&#39;t noticed baby my best letters are like H&#39;s, V&#39;s, C&#39;s. E&#39;s K&#39;s. R&#39;s,S&#39;s, O&#39;s, and A&#39;s and somewhat G&#39;s idk i just love the letters [/b][/quote]
you might as well type the rest of the fuckin&#39; alphabet.

BIGel
04-04-2007, 03:18 PM
great karik a few pages back urah, nice work.

the finished product for that nemz battle, also the first page in my new book.
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/094/0/c/nemz2_by_bigel.jpg

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/094/b/2/more_bombs_and_bombs_by_bigel.jpg
bigel. aerie. easta. bone.

Fluffy Bunnies
04-04-2007, 03:27 PM
hey big el can you do my a cynik... I wanna see how you would do it

whoa new page... mind as well post a pic

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/theyarecoming.png

BIGel
04-04-2007, 03:31 PM
Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 4 2007, 03:18 PM
great karik a few pages back urah, nice work.

the finished product for that nemz battle, also the first page in my new book.
http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/094/0/c/nemz2_by_bigel.jpg

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/094/b/2/more_bombs_and_bombs_by_bigel.jpg
bigel. aerie. easta. bone.
i never bump my ish but i hate being the last on a page.


http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/094/b/2/more_bombs_and_bombs_by_bigel.jpg

nickstix
04-04-2007, 03:36 PM
bigel...that nemz piece is fire, i would have taken the overlap on the z out though. i like your throwies

fluffy...i like the knews on the bottom, but i think the top leg of the k could be a little bit thicker and i think the left bar on the e should be thicker in order to match the rest of your letters.


i could use some crits on this...

Originally posted by nickstix@Apr 4 2007, 03:09 PM
a quick pen sketch i did, &#39;sr&#39; im trying to go for a wilderstyle just not really wild...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/sr.png
crits?

crits?

South-Pole
04-04-2007, 03:37 PM
Originally posted by South&#045;Pole@Apr 4 2007, 08:40 PM
sume:why complain lol,that shit is mad fiiire

fluff:im not liking the Y but i still like the piece

getsup:wow just woow..try doing simples im not liking your work

uhhh some quick stuff ....i&#39;ll try to make some more this week-end if i have enough time :P

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/torn.jpg

i didn&#39;t had enough space to add a N at the end of my piece neither i didn&#39;t enough space to finish my T,and also i fucked up the colouring it doesn&#39;t show on the scan


well,not my best but still

CRITS?
BUMP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;only got one crit

nickstix i made letter bending in the pic but you can&#39;t see it,i&#39;v already tried letter bending and i have my own style.thanks for the crit

big-el,man i wish my stuff was ill like yours

do you wanna exchange i write TORN pm me if you want


edit:hahahah i just realised that everybody bumped there stuff on this page :lol: :lol:

whahappen?
04-04-2007, 03:43 PM
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4713/picture034kc3.jpg

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 03:50 PM
Dope sketchin&#39; el...I hope my stuff is as good as or better than yours one day...I can only hope, and practice. :rolleyes:

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 03:58 PM
i like the bottom throwie better and i think just tweak the letter strucure of the r a bit nick
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5588.jpg

crits?

G.SMooth
04-04-2007, 03:59 PM
OoOoOoOoO t3h sh1n3s
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/tehshinescopy.jpg
simple enough?

Aven
04-04-2007, 04:04 PM
is that on the cover of your blackbook...why&#39;s it so shiny.

the letters are simple and all, but some straight edges might be cool... like it isn&#39;t crisp

G.SMooth
04-04-2007, 04:04 PM
hahah i photoshopped it.

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 04:05 PM
i aagree dont flare the edges or ends of your letters as well

AimoOne
04-04-2007, 04:06 PM
gsmooth . ugh..gee..

simple..like..

G.SMOOTH..like that..easy as 1 , 2 , 3..ait rocket science...straight..the letter stucture is pretty bad

Biegl..get outta here..

oh..no dont go..we need some beatiful visual orgasmic shit in here once in a while

Aven
04-04-2007, 04:14 PM
yea man...beigle&#39;s stuff is really nice

-ShAmEE-
04-04-2007, 04:29 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 4 2007, 03:58 PM
i like the bottom throwie better and i think just tweak the letter strucure of the r a bit nick
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5588.jpg

crits?
DO U HAVE A LIGHT IN YOUR HOUSE???... secound letter extensions are crazy.

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 04:29 PM
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5587.jpg heres one with flash, it looks worse

Bazer
04-04-2007, 04:30 PM
pegasus...it looks cool...but the picture sucks...wanna do an exchange?

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 04:33 PM
ok wat do you write?

sex without condoms
04-04-2007, 04:33 PM
Originally posted by sex without condoms@Apr 4 2007, 02:53 PM
finished squirt further away
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010545.jpg
close up
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010544.jpg
i was gonna suck up to the mods and do a Cezr Sky and Tricks are the best mods ever&#33; but after the Ce in Cezr&#39;s sketch i kinda got bored and let the rest fall of the ship and suck major nuts.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010543.jpg
CocK@&#33;
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010542.jpg
ChodE&#33;
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010537.jpg
a Chode throwie and Oneliner, firsttime.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010538.jpg
^sucks
feedthebacks.

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 04:38 PM
good, but try and develop that alot more, cuz u never see stuff like that painted, its mainly like arty bubble writing, no offense, it looks good, just not a fan of the style. But ur handies n throwies are dope

G.SMooth
04-04-2007, 04:41 PM
Ok, here it is. I did a simple.
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/ASIMPLE.jpg

dim
04-04-2007, 04:45 PM
your "a" and your "y" look good but you lost the flow on the "t" it would look great if you had the "t" closer to the "y" but i like it the "A" is sick i like it alot