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AimoOne
04-04-2007, 05:46 PM
^^..do straight blocks..like...AYTE..like that..cuz all your letter propertions..possitions are waaay off..

and Pegasus..i think that type of syle..being very euroish..only appeals to a certain person...if they like euro..theyll like that style.if not..then they wont..i personally like euro..and i like those

sex without condoms
04-04-2007, 05:47 PM
:0D
:wub: you mr.ras

G.SMooth
04-04-2007, 05:48 PM
for the next one shud i add 3d and stuff or just keep it like that?

AimoOne
04-04-2007, 05:51 PM
keep it like this..

AYTE

and Fosalie...love you too..more than the whole interweb univerzee :lol: :wub:

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 05:53 PM
ok ur rite aimo, im sorry no beef condom

dim
04-04-2007, 06:06 PM
sex without condoms- i like that style a lot odd words tho lol

G.SMooth
04-04-2007, 06:07 PM
ok here is a simple with completly strait letters and everything, i messed up the 3d but i dont care http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture008-1.jpg

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 4 2007, 04:51 PM
keep it like this..

AYTE

and Fosalie...love you too..more than the whole interweb univerzee :lol: :wub:
G.SMooth-you don't need to do straight letters like Aimo said, you're structure isn't that bad...just keep doing simpler ish, like you posted.

AimoOne
04-04-2007, 06:09 PM
i think thats perfect ^ Ayte..thats what i like..just fix up the 3d..add a funkay fill..and slant the lettters or summet

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 06:11 PM
Originally posted by G.SMooth@Apr 4 2007, 05:07 PM
ok here is a simple with completly strait letters and everything, i messed up the 3d but i dont care http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture008-1.jpg
worse than the other one...go back to your other simples, trust me on this one.

http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/5295/dsc0798im0.jpg

fixed the fill, at least I kinda like it now...

NICCSACC
04-04-2007, 06:17 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture30-2.jpg
heres a closer shot to show the somewhat detail....... fuck webcams.
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture33-3.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture34-1.jpg

unfinished project............
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture35-3.jpg

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 06:18 PM
nice...I love your flow...wish my shit would flow like that, my style was really rigid before, trying to change it up a bit...anyways dope shit nicca.

NICCSACC
04-04-2007, 06:19 PM
thnx. nice re-fill by the way on tha cash peice. it looks 100 times better.

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 06:25 PM
feelin the first one more than the others. Is it newer?

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 06:37 PM
feelin the first one more than the others. Is it newer?

G.SMooth
04-04-2007, 06:44 PM
another addition to the suck-fest!
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture009-1.jpg

bouncingsoul
04-04-2007, 06:55 PM
I lose

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0706.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0707.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0708.jpg

Noddles912300
04-04-2007, 06:57 PM
Your letters are messed up AYTE the letters should look like that. they should all be even. oh and your 3-D isnt even either. just keep practicing every day all the time. any paper hw,notes,just paper doodle letters on them.
Sume.....Amazing.......reminds me of watermelons cause the colors.

whahappen?
04-04-2007, 07:11 PM
Originally posted by whahappen?@Apr 4 2007, 03:43 PM
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4713/picture034kc3.jpg
;) ;) ;)
knews all good

Super Duper VILLAIN
04-04-2007, 07:12 PM
i love your stuff bouncing soul.

here is some stuff from me

throwie practice:
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/throwiepractice.jpg

throwies i'm keeping and a one liner(man i suck at one liners):
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/IMG_0017.jpg

and some pieces:
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/IMG_0019.jpg
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k189/shred_villain/burner-1.jpg

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 07:15 PM
im feelin it lost soul and im LOVING the 2nd last piece on the left, ts really clean.

KAL
04-04-2007, 07:42 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3958/newthrowqz3.jpg
throw
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7404/shittythro6lw7.jpg

BIGel
04-04-2007, 07:50 PM
damn nicc and sume nicely done.

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs13/i/2007/094/f/4/totem_pole_by_bigel.jpg

KAL
04-04-2007, 08:10 PM
nice shit el

Murder817Worth
04-04-2007, 08:13 PM
Im lovin dat RAD shit. It's tight!

rayseone
04-04-2007, 08:25 PM
bigel - thats fresh man

Knews - thats shits good,

kal- lose the cut back on the top of thek or whatever,

im liking that radical one liner, nice and simple but looks good,

my shit, crits?shitty camera phone pics
quick outline, quiete a while ago actully
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/9338/ayserab7.jpg
some sharpie coloring hah,trying to take my letters abit farther
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/9431/mrayselb5.jpg
these 2 are the latters in my name still just trying a different way around
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/7769/seyarmn6.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4118/seyar2gb6.jpg
juust a s i did in school
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/573/sinscholsl4.jpg

prank
04-04-2007, 08:39 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe+Apr 4 2007, 05:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sumoe @ Apr 4 2007, 05:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-G.SMooth@Apr 4 2007, 05:07 PM
ok here is a simple with completly strait letters and everything, i messed up the 3d but i dont care http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture008-1.jpg
worse than the other one...go back to your other simples, trust me on this one.

http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/5295/dsc0798im0.jpg

fixed the fill, at least I kinda like it now... [/b][/quote]
illin

G.SMooth
04-04-2007, 08:50 PM
What pen do you u guys use to ink your stuff?

bouncingsoul
04-04-2007, 08:51 PM
Help me on this quick
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0709.jpg

I&#39;ma change the E maybe to a lowercase... Or maybe I&#39;ll change the top one to a capital like the bottom. Less nega-space.

Murder817Worth
04-04-2007, 08:59 PM
Looks good 2 me. Finish it up&#33;

esnet1r
04-04-2007, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by hungr@Apr 4 2007, 10:13 AM
sketchbook i found from this past summer.. mostly me & tenser
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00107.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00106.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00111.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00113.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00116.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00104.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00105.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00101.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00103.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00117.jpg
fucckkk mee that little tenser thangs is ghhettoooooo

prank
04-04-2007, 09:43 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/238/image119hw2.jpg

czon onah&#33;&#33;&#33;

kinging yer hood&#33;&#33;&#33;

moltov
04-04-2007, 09:46 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Apr 4 2007, 07:51 PM
Help me on this quick
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0709.jpg

I&#39;ma change the E maybe to a lowercase... Or maybe I&#39;ll change the top one to a capital like the bottom. Less nega-space.
Yea MAn this is DOPE keep this style up

I dont see a need to make the E lower case it flows well

prank
04-04-2007, 09:51 PM
yo bouncing ur going euro style for sure

[phenom5]
04-04-2007, 10:09 PM
bouncing start inkin those&#33;
looks good ;)

TricksForKids
04-04-2007, 10:10 PM
hes not going euro style, smh...hes simply going fresh, keep rocking bounce, havent seen shit from you in a while, and im loving it, props to erb crew, havent seen much painted ish in the 416 lately but those sketches are on point

little bullshit pencil freestyle i whipped up earlier
fuckin hellll im shit lol


http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/1047/bawkpencil2007nc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 10:12 PM
I love simples...therfore,

dope shit knews and bawk.

bouncingsoul
04-04-2007, 10:13 PM
I fail at inking
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0710.jpg

Bawk... I love that one much better than the others I don&#39;t k now why, it just looks way better. The line going through the middle is blehhhh though

sank one
04-04-2007, 10:14 PM
bawk&#39;s handstyle :wub:

F.R.A.T.
04-04-2007, 10:15 PM
tricks do u write in etobicoke r overall all toronto?

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 10:15 PM
smudgy on the "&#33;" haha that&#39;s okay though...looks a lot better inked.

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 10:16 PM
mmmmm i love it bawk and that capital a bouncingsoul made me hot in my pants&#33;&#33;

TricksForKids
04-04-2007, 10:22 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Apr 4 2007, 09:13 PM
I fail at inking
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0710.jpg

Bawk... I love that one much better than the others I don&#39;t k now why, it just looks way better. The line going through the middle is blehhhh though
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/1047/bawkpencil2007nc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and a BUMPPPP, lol i love the letters and everything homie, but my favourite thing, is the heart on the fucking I, i dunno why


andddddddddddddd im trying to think...oh yeah FRAT, you wont see me many places, im not exactly up, i took a break man, too much shit going down for me right now....youll see me around though, ;)

tame345
04-04-2007, 10:22 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/200000006891e12/1/36/ZkF_6Jax3j-MXY7ycG38E-6GxeEHhO8b.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/pDBLvCBm6T-3th5rmjln9tjYp6WHcQUM?referrer=hlnk)



could this be considered an improvement? i did it after reading all the tutorials

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Apr 4 2007, 09:22 PM
and a BUMPPPP, lol i love the letters and everything homie, but my favourite thing, is the heart on the fucking I, i dunno why
haha, I was thinking the same thing...I think it&#39;s cause of the perspective-ish view...

G - Wahl
04-04-2007, 10:26 PM
boucning i love your style so much

F.R.A.T.
04-04-2007, 10:27 PM
ya ive seen ur tags up alot aroujnd my house

new piece fucking webcams

http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k18/thebucketofphotos/Picture6.jpg

Chulo
04-04-2007, 10:28 PM
Originally posted by tame345@Apr 4 2007, 09:22 PM
http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/4/S/200000006891e12/1/36/ZkF_6Jax3j-MXY7ycG38E-6GxeEHhO8b.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/pDBLvCBm6T-3th5rmjln9tjYp6WHcQUM?referrer=hlnk)



could this be considered an improvement? i did it after reading all the tutorials
yea, it is somewhat of an improvement, what tutorials did u read?

tame345
04-04-2007, 10:28 PM
the ones in the bombing science thread for it

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 10:28 PM
Originally posted by prank+Apr 4 2007, 07:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (prank @ Apr 4 2007, 07:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 4 2007, 05:11 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-G.SMooth@Apr 4 2007, 05:07 PM
ok here is a simple with completly strait letters and everything, i messed up the 3d but i dont care http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture008-1.jpg
worse than the other one...go back to your other simples, trust me on this one.

http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/5295/dsc0798im0.jpg

fixed the fill, at least I kinda like it now...
illin [/b][/quote]
last bump for this baby, then tomorrow or the next day I&#39;ll have a canvas to show you nukkas...for my cousin&#39;s B-Day.

TricksForKids
04-04-2007, 10:31 PM
oh SNAP, sumey baby, if youre interested, ( its kinda a lot of work ) but id be so down to get down on a canvas with you, i.e do a piece, leave me some space and send me that shit, or vice versa, holla

oh and fresh to death piece, but you know that;)

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 10:35 PM
possibly, not sure yet though, cause my dad has been crackin&#39; the whip, cause my grades are dropping, feel me? fuckin&#39; sucks ass he&#39;s like "I want you to focus less on art for a little bit, you need to start thinkin&#39; bout your future..."

tame345
04-04-2007, 10:36 PM
shit art is a future :D

TricksForKids
04-04-2007, 10:37 PM
yeah man, im in grade 12, universitys coming up, i feel you on the "future" talks, looks like im going to BC or Halifax...in case anyone was interested...haha....sorry, mr.mod&#39;s breaking all the rules here, oh well, at least my chit chats kinda interesting

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 10:41 PM
yeah, I&#39;m in the 10th grade...really wanna go to RISD (Rhode Island School of Design, I beleive Shepard Fairey went there) or Cornell, but my grades been slippin&#39; so if I don&#39;t start workin&#39; my ass off again Cornell is gunna be a real stretch...

anyways more flix people&#33;

rayseone
04-04-2007, 10:44 PM
Originally posted by rayseone@Apr 4 2007, 07:25 PM
bigel - thats fresh man

Knews - thats shits good,

kal- lose the cut back on the top of thek or whatever,

im liking that radical one liner, nice and simple but looks good,

my shit, crits?shitty camera phone pics
quick outline, quiete a while ago actully
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/9338/ayserab7.jpg
some sharpie coloring hah,trying to take my letters abit farther
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/9431/mrayselb5.jpg
these 2 are the latters in my name still just trying a different way around
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/7769/seyarmn6.jpg
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4118/seyar2gb6.jpg
juust a s i did in school
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/573/sinscholsl4.jpg
buump, not one crit, nothing to crit at all anyway , sume that is reallly hot, looks abit off too much negative space at the top of the S, its all good though

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 10:53 PM
work in progress. I like the third one ray, and the last s, a little better letter style might move you into semi wildstyle.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5589.jpg

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 10:57 PM
I can&#39;t see the letters...no beef, just statin&#39; a fact.

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 11:06 PM
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/overpaintedkems.jpg

is that better?

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 11:17 PM
still don&#39;t like it though...the extensions are ugly and some of them make the entire piece look uglier...the "E" is hurtin&#39; too, just my opinion.

memonkey
04-04-2007, 11:17 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v68/memonkey/0403070037.jpg

This is my first real attempt... I just recently got into graf so i&#39;m hella toy. <3 critique...

and i know the bottom of the k is ugly and there isn&#39;t much depth and everything is a little scattered.

but still... help. :D

edit: i was also thinking of changing the name to rovok instead of rook... what do you guys think?

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 11:19 PM
it looks like cursive, but different...not my style, but some people can pull it off well, right now just keep practicing.

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 11:25 PM
aany idea how to make it better?

<~ReSiN~>
04-04-2007, 11:27 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/meatwadresn.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q17/304tagger/rezn.jpg

the letters for the first one suck i know but i rushed thru it

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 11:29 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 4 2007, 10:25 PM
aany idea how to make it better?
I&#39;d say work more on structure and less on pointless extensions for now, I see you have a lot of ideas, so once you get your structure down pact you&#39;re shit could be pretty nice...but there is way too many extensions on your letters, they take up as much space as your letters, so work on that.

Murder817Worth
04-04-2007, 11:40 PM
Looks kinda wierd. Well finish it.Here is my first official sketch i put on bombing science. I went extra basic. So help me out, I kno i messed up a little on the letters but im still a toy ok.


http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze.jpg

SpekZ
04-04-2007, 11:44 PM
Well i just starting sketching tell me what u guys think
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9721/scanxs2.jpg

Murder817Worth
04-04-2007, 11:47 PM
Go more simple like i did right above u

SpekZ
04-04-2007, 11:48 PM
Originally posted by Murder817Worth@Apr 4 2007, 10:47 PM
Go more simple like i did right above u
Will Try It out

Pegasus
04-04-2007, 11:48 PM
hahaha sry toy on toy, but u both got good handies. And go simple until you feel you can tweak it and keep tweaking, only in little bits tho, i advise reading the pinned new to graffiti topic. damn new page. Oh wel heres an old skateboard i did.

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5556.jpg

Sumoe
04-04-2007, 11:49 PM
BOTH OF YOU GO TO THE "NEW 2 GRAFF THREAD"

and it&#39;s "simpler", not "more simple"...sorry had to correct it...

Spekz- don&#39;t do what Murder did...
<_<

Murder817Worth
04-04-2007, 11:54 PM
Ok then

SpekZ
04-04-2007, 11:55 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 4 2007, 10:49 PM
BOTH OF YOU GO TO THE "NEW 2 GRAFF THREAD"

and it&#39;s "simpler", not "more simple"...sorry had to correct it...

Spekz- don&#39;t do what Murder did...
<_<
Alright Then ;)

Excalibur
04-05-2007, 12:09 AM
Damn, I&#39;ve been working on it for hours, I need help on handstyles, my name is Base2

hungr
04-05-2007, 12:25 AM
tenser sketch bookism
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00132.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00133.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00134.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00135.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00136.jpg

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 12:31 AM
lovin the last one, oh and sumo, im doin an exchange with base and im going simpler wit that.

.rekon.
04-05-2007, 01:41 AM
Originally posted by memonkey@Apr 4 2007, 07:17 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v68/memonkey/0403070037.jpg

This is my first real attempt... I just recently got into graf so i&#39;m hella toy. <3 critique...

and i know the bottom of the k is ugly and there isn&#39;t much depth and everything is a little scattered.

but still... help. :D

edit: i was also thinking of changing the name to rovok instead of rook... what do you guys think?
Since you&#39;re just starting out don&#39;t try stuff like that. Work on a handstyle and a throwie I think. I&#39;m been paintin since last year but I didn&#39;t do it much, I&#39;m just gettin&#39; really into it now. What I&#39;m doin is just working on a throw up that I will be happy with so when I go out bombin with my friends I got somethin&#39; that I&#39;m happy with. Just work with bubble letters. Keep it super simple.

Also, if you really get into graffiti, you&#39;ll probably end up getting a different name later, so just stick to the name you got right now and keep it until you get really good. Then change your name so you don&#39;t waste a good name with toy bombs.

SpekZ
04-05-2007, 02:03 AM
Well This is another sketch
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3868/scanel0.jpg

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 02:35 AM
heres the outline for the exchange bazer, sorry i could only fit baze. oh and spek, just do simples.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5591.jpg

levans
04-05-2007, 03:54 AM
pegasus work on ur letter structure....(make certain parts of ur letters the same withdth etc)

NICCSACC
04-05-2007, 03:59 AM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 4 2007, 09:53 PM
work in progress. I like the third one ray, and the last s, a little better letter style might move you into semi wildstyle.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5589.jpg
love it. i dont know... mabye add more stuff in between.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 04:01 AM
thx niccsacc, and yeh i know im workin on letters levans.

AimoOne
04-05-2007, 05:33 AM
Gee..this websites loades with opinions..like
Sume..dope writer..hated that pegasus peaice..
Niccsacc..dope writer...loves the peice..
you canrt win..aha..
anyway..
shall i sketch..?...or go out ?...
i really dont know..


oh..and im kinda into skateboarding..i only like P-Rod , Danny Way and Stevie Williams...but Pegasus..why fuck up a Element deck..or draw onit atleast..i got about 50gazzilion of my class mates..who would fucking kill for a Element deck..ajaja...

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 05:53 AM
haha yeh, but in australia element decks are not very popular, cuz thewy wear easily, and its old anyway, so if i drew on it now itd be better

levans
04-05-2007, 06:01 AM
edit:ahh shit new page.................hahah element suck balls(im from aus too) rook the style your going 4 could work....its like adore`s

inkbits
04-05-2007, 06:33 AM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 5 2007, 07:53 PM
in australia element decks are not very popular, cuz thewy wear easily
That&#39;s bullshit man, I&#39;m in Australia, skated for 12 years, have mates that are still skating and have for 18 years or so, underworld element is one of the better deck brands (or as good as any) interms of wear if you mean cracking, snapping or them de-laminating. Probally my favorite skate brand of all time barring New Deal and as popular as anything else over here.

AimoOne: you should sketch and not go out man.

SpekZ: you need to balance your stuff a bit man, draw two lines and keep your letters between them or try drawing on the edge of a page and not putting bottoms on your letters for now so you can keep them consistantly sized when working on your simples, keep at it man.



I&#39;ll follow this post in coming hours with something to make up for being picture-less ..hopefully :(.

nase7
04-05-2007, 06:46 AM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Apr 5 2007, 02:10 AM
hes not going euro style, smh...hes simply going fresh, keep rocking bounce, havent seen shit from you in a while, and im loving it, props to erb crew, havent seen much painted ish in the 416 lately but those sketches are on point

little bullshit pencil freestyle i whipped up earlier
fuckin hellll im shit lol


http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/1047/bawkpencil2007nc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
This simple is so solid :wub:.

AimoOne
04-05-2007, 07:07 AM
jeah..that is kool...^ just dont like the little bottom bar on the right leg of the A..i rekon you shudda put it on the other bottom legs to make it flow more..kinda..w,e ;) :(

yeah..ima sketch then..thanks inkie.. :)

WHO PLAYS NBA STREET HOMECOURT ON PLAYSTATION 3 ONLINE..IF SO..PM..AND ILL WHOOP YOU

right...i need to get my sketch head on now..here we gooooo :angry: :lol:

Copieright
04-05-2007, 08:35 AM
need some colour advice:

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4101/0504071420wv2.jpg

what color is nice for the 3d?

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 08:58 AM
Black or a different blue is what id pick.

Edward"Sezer"Hands
04-05-2007, 10:03 AM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1859.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1857.jpg
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e276/DannyHartu/IMG_1860.jpg

nero122
04-05-2007, 10:16 AM
dayuuuuuum you got beter than last time i saw you that shit is sick

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 10:18 AM
kudos :D

AMansNotACamel
04-05-2007, 10:26 AM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/480/dorkserkkm4.jpg
Yo, I haven&#39;t sketched in a gazillion years so I tried to sketch my boys word (Serk) then mine (Dork) I tried different 3d on my boys tried to make it like it was looking downwards. On the dork I tried different letters, but I see they&#39;re still lacking.
The bottom isn&#39;t the bottom of the page just the end of my scanner :)

NICCSACC
04-05-2007, 10:27 AM
Originally posted by Copieright@Apr 5 2007, 07:35 AM
need some colour advice:

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4101/0504071420wv2.jpg

what color is nice for the 3d?
dark letter faces ( all same color&#33;&#33;)

light 3d areas (all same color&#33;&#33;)

2 colors. use them wisely.

NICCSACC
04-05-2007, 10:30 AM
Originally posted by AMansNotACamel@Apr 5 2007, 09:26 AM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/480/dorkserkkm4.jpg
Yo, I haven&#39;t sketched in a gazillion years so I tried to sketch my boys word (Serk) then mine (Dork) I tried different 3d on my boys tried to make it like it was looking downwards. On the dork I tried different letters, but I see they&#39;re still lacking.
The bottom isn&#39;t the bottom of the page just the end of my scanner :)
try drawing with a good old no.2 cuz that pen sketching aint for everyone. i wouldnt sketch with a pen at toy level unless it was jokingly or... well, no other good reason to.
leave pen sketching to the vets.

NICCSACC
04-05-2007, 10:31 AM
Originally posted by inkbits+Apr 5 2007, 05:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (inkbits @ Apr 5 2007, 05:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Pegasus@Apr 5 2007, 07:53 PM
in australia element decks are not very popular, cuz thewy wear easily
That&#39;s bullshit man, I&#39;m in Australia, skated for 12 years, have mates that are still skating and have for 18 years or so, underworld element is one of the better deck brands (or as good as any) interms of wear if you mean cracking, snapping or them de-laminating. Probally my favorite skate brand of all time barring New Deal and as popular as anything else over here.

AimoOne: you should sketch and not go out man.

SpekZ: you need to balance your stuff a bit man, draw two lines and keep your letters between them or try drawing on the edge of a page and not putting bottoms on your letters for now so you can keep them consistantly sized when working on your simples, keep at it man.



I&#39;ll follow this post in coming hours with something to make up for being picture-less ..hopefully :(. [/b][/quote]
ELEMENT is Ok i like ZERO but when i was skating i rode a natas and rob roskopp(sic&#33;)

shifty!
04-05-2007, 11:00 AM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6462/ak045bi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

dizzle_d
04-05-2007, 11:04 AM
nice^
not feelin the top right corner of the K though.

Hazex
04-05-2007, 11:52 AM
shifty i like your trowie its ncie and clean so i did this thing

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/1033/leafsay7.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

edit sry for startign to apge with a toyish thing :(

ESKE one
04-05-2007, 12:01 PM
keep your letters the same height use a ruler if you have to and your 3d fuck pick one vanishing point and stick wit it

heres an new piece
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00119.jpg
crits

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 12:14 PM
dont make the d a part of the n and dont make the a part of the a. those little extra thing above the H and N, x those. besides that it looks good

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 12:15 PM
Hazex, make them the same height, and take off that lil thing on a

React!
04-05-2007, 12:20 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Apr 5 2007, 10:00 AM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6462/ak045bi8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
im feelin this throw man keep it up

sky 5
04-05-2007, 12:22 PM
Originally posted by Copieright@Apr 5 2007, 07:35 AM
need some colour advice:

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4101/0504071420wv2.jpg

what color is nice for the 3d?
theres an ELF about teh same skill as you starting to get some serious ups in my city . . if you are him, get better before you put up . . .you got a blue fill so i would go with a pink, green or red 3d or yellow/orange

Copieright
04-05-2007, 12:26 PM
Originally posted by sky 5+Apr 5 2007, 11:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Apr 5 2007, 11:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Copieright@Apr 5 2007, 07:35 AM
need some colour advice:

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4101/0504071420wv2.jpg

what color is nice for the 3d?
theres an ELF about teh same skill as you starting to get some serious ups in my city . . if you are him, get better before you put up . . .you got a blue fill so i would go with a pink, green or red 3d or yellow/orange [/b][/quote]
where do you live?

Jugga
04-05-2007, 12:51 PM
this one is pretty old...
I&#39;d say 7-8 months...
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/juggah-1.jpg

this is more recent shit...
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/S5000601hes.jpg

uhhh
04-05-2007, 02:17 PM
you havent improved much over those 7 months..

Jugga
04-05-2007, 02:26 PM
yeah... I know....
I pretty much stopped for a long ass while and picked it up again about a month ago...

uhhh
04-05-2007, 02:27 PM
oh.
gotcha.
well, take the advice you get from GOOD people on here.
trust emm,
youll improve a bunch, and a lot faster too.

Mo*
04-05-2007, 02:31 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v732/jodan-me/duca.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v732/jodan-me/Mostar.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v732/jodan-me/mostarblue.jpg
these are mine

whoarethereal evil
04-05-2007, 02:47 PM
mastar is the worst name ever

:)

.D.H.
04-05-2007, 02:55 PM
awsome. but that says mostar.

NICCSACC
04-05-2007, 03:05 PM
Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Apr 5 2007, 01:47 PM
mastar is the worst name ever

:)
i think i have that game.

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 03:34 PM
for the pie vs. pez ss battle :P
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8435/piesb2.png (http://imageshack.us)
different style for me

semxz
04-05-2007, 03:51 PM
im feelin that i like it man nice

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 04:02 PM
thx:D

Edward"Sezer"Hands
04-05-2007, 04:10 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Apr 5 2007, 01:27 PM
oh.
gotcha.
well, take the advice you get from GOOD people on here.
trust emm,
youll improve a bunch, and a lot faster too.
preachhhhhhh

-ShAmEE-
04-05-2007, 04:11 PM
umm.. looks kool. give it time and dey will kool sick.

rayseone
04-05-2007, 04:29 PM
nice pie

considering a name change think it flowws better this way
donno wat to doo with the right bottom leg of the R crits before i ink?
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/9530/penciloe0.jpg

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 04:37 PM
rays thats sick i think that last little curve on the s should be thicker

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 04:38 PM
heres my exchange with baze. I cant tell wether you should leave it like a normal r or make it look like the s but its a good style neway
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5593.jpg

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 04:39 PM
thats dope seyar. i think its ready for inking. kudos.

long time since ive been by a scanner, so i found one and dead a quick sketch. im trying to develop and style and this is just what came out.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/tweak.jpg

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 04:40 PM
the a is skewed too much to the right and the top of the z should go out further. at first glance the B looked like and S to me. good color scheme tho.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 04:52 PM
yeh well b r k and s all look the same with me, and yeh i know wat you mean but its still a new style
i dont like the t or the k but it flows well

semxz
04-05-2007, 04:54 PM
joint from skool today i just finished colouring..
http://www.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/40/4084152a5330f5c26219975e0d7ebb864780b.jpg (http://www.uploadhouse.com)

BIGel
04-05-2007, 04:56 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 5 2007, 03:38 PM
heres my exchange with baze. I cant tell wether you should leave it like a normal r or make it look like the s but its a good style neway
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5593.jpg
i dont like the way the A flows on this and i think you need to add something to the 3-d cuz its too much blank space. also maybe extending the top of the Z would seem to give it more symetry. the e is a big improvement though, much better than your last one.

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 05:08 PM
pegasus was that crit for me

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 05:09 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8435/piesb2.png (http://imageshack.us)
bump?

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 05:11 PM
pegasus that thing not bad , the black shadow must have took forever..

pez ss
04-05-2007, 05:14 PM
pie u better not do anything gay to my battle entry

semxz
04-05-2007, 05:19 PM
any crits on mine

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 05:19 PM
shutup ill smoke u the fair way maaaan

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 05:21 PM
pear that aint bad man.. looks like all ur other stuff tho and im not big on the different letter sizes

slinks
04-05-2007, 05:22 PM
apple pie i dont really like it but ilike the color scheme

heres a throw ive been trying with my new name
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti.jpg
give me crits

semxz
04-05-2007, 05:22 PM
lol iight i just did one tryin an improvement i hope. ill post yall can decide

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 05:24 PM
what dont u like?? just askin for like help

ThrowItUP
04-05-2007, 05:25 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h59/OhDipiitzNick/epikbomb.jpg
i like my E but everything else is kinda ehh
crits for improvement?

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 05:26 PM
Originally posted by DeproOne@Apr 5 2007, 03:39 PM
thats dope seyar. i think its ready for inking. kudos.

long time since ive been by a scanner, so i found one and dead a quick sketch. im trying to develop and style and this is just what came out.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/tweak.jpg
bump for crits :(

and heres a sketch i found where i penciled it then colored it in highlighter then went outlined it with a sharpie. (i know the t is skinny and hidden the leg of the r is fatter then everything else <_< )

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/waster12.jpg

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 05:27 PM
let your C have that little half cirle thing in it. then its priddy decent to me.

AimoOne
04-05-2007, 05:30 PM
Depro..why post you shit..then .. post again adding a crit..uugh <_< :rolleyes:

same wit Apple Pie..

i sound like a mod..aha..but im just stating.. :(

anyways..

Depro..im actually likin the flow on the Waster peice..alto th letters are pretty bad..but yur gettin there.

skan2
04-05-2007, 05:36 PM
:blink: wow its been awile since i&#39;ve been on this site

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 05:39 PM
i dont understand what ur tryin to say aimo

DeproOne
04-05-2007, 05:41 PM
your slow...

sex without condoms
04-05-2007, 05:52 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Apr 5 2007, 04:50 PM
yeah when i first started it wsa skandal but i shorted it to skan
you know skan 2 is like a mad famous mad dope writer right?

because if you don&#39;t, well that&#39;s just pathetic.

skan2
04-05-2007, 05:53 PM
;)

ESKE one
04-05-2007, 06:04 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 5 2007, 11:01 AM
keep your letters the same height use a ruler if you have to and your 3d fuck pick one vanishing point and stick wit it

heres an new piece
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00119.jpg
crits
bump no crits

bouncingsoul
04-05-2007, 06:06 PM
Originally posted by hungr@Apr 4 2007, 11:25 PM
tenser sketch bookism
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00132.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00133.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00134.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00135.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/DSC00136.jpg
My new favorite member

BUMP

Aaaaand one from today

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0711.jpg

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 06:08 PM
thats siiiiiick and that black book it great i might add ur good with pen bouncingsoul

sex without condoms
04-05-2007, 06:11 PM
Originally posted by skan2@Apr 5 2007, 04:53 PM
;)
guess your pathetic.

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 06:11 PM
nice some 3D with shading, never seen that from you before, good job, really make your letters pop.

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 06:11 PM
hahh&#33;

emokid
04-05-2007, 06:11 PM
yeeeeaahhh bouncing loving every letter, and its in BIRO :lol: i dearly love biro

BIGel
04-05-2007, 06:15 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Apr 5 2007, 05:06 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0711.jpg
probably my favorite non-karikter thing ive seen from you. apart from the t there isnt a letter i dont like, that e is straight killing it. nice work.

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 06:17 PM
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/8435/piesb2.png (http://imageshack.us)
:P
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3168/dimtg4.png (http://imageshack.us)
exchange with dim

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 06:18 PM
Originally posted by Sumoe@Apr 5 2007, 05:11 PM
nice some 3D with shading, never seen that from you before, good job, really make your letters pop.
who u talking to:P

AimoOne
04-05-2007, 06:23 PM
see what i mean..^^ .. fuck sake..

am i okay to say this..

Apple Pie is a post whore..

like i was..

but its now summer..and i have a life again..so i aint stuck in..lol

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 06:25 PM
who cares dude...

it&#39;s summer? I still got a month and a little of school, actually maybe two months

and PIE, I was talkin&#39; to bouncin&#39;... your shits aight too though.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 06:30 PM
lovin it apple. Is the 3d better now? i was actually planning to do this but i forgot.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5597.jpg

and i love that style bouncingsoul

AimoOne
04-05-2007, 06:41 PM
ugh..whut you use for those crisp white lines

NICCSACC
04-05-2007, 06:45 PM
nice shit pye. holla

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 06:48 PM
dont u like em? lol sum asian paint pen thats got a rollerball thingy

AimoOne
04-05-2007, 06:53 PM
i like them white lines..i been usinga correction pen..and the flow is unpredictable

.D.H.
04-05-2007, 06:58 PM
http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/2733/steez007aq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

its not graffiti, but its still art, but no one ever goes to the &#39;other art&#39; thread. sorry for the blurryness. it looks a lot better when its more clear.

i was think of addin a peice or handy in the sky, which is sort of messed up.

i was really influenced by the burton 151 cruzer, so credit to burton.

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 06:59 PM
it&#39;s aight...not anything great but, not too bad either.

Apple pie
04-05-2007, 07:03 PM
i think its pretty cool, you should of used pencil though, easier to control the values u put into it and what not.

rayseone
04-05-2007, 07:07 PM
Originally posted by rayseone@Apr 5 2007, 03:29 PM


donno wat to doo with the right bottom leg of the R crits before i ink?
http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/9530/penciloe0.jpg
buuuump for crits
thats mountain scene thing looks aight , pegasus i like it just the a seems too tlted

JackJill
04-05-2007, 07:08 PM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8024/img0016cu9.jpg

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 07:14 PM
good simple, like the inline, ut work on ur handstyle abit :)

JackJill
04-05-2007, 07:40 PM
Handstyles have always been my weakness.
And throws. But I&#39;ve come a long way from my old handies.
sketchsketchsketch

G.SMooth
04-05-2007, 07:44 PM
Is this any better than my other stuff?
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture011-1.jpg

G.SMooth
04-05-2007, 07:45 PM
And a throw http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture010.jpg

Gune
04-05-2007, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 5 2007, 05:30 PM
lovin it apple. Is the 3d better now? i was actually planning to do this but i forgot.
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5597.jpg

and i love that style bouncingsoul
The 3Ds ok in most parts, except the middle. You seem to have a totally different vanishing points for it. Try putting a dot on your paper, where you want the 3D to go, and draw the lines from the letters to the dot, then make the 3D however short or long you want it to be.

-ShAmEE-
04-05-2007, 07:53 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 5 2007, 03:38 PM
heres my exchange with baze. I cant tell wether you should leave it like a normal r or make it look like the s but its a good style neway
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5593.jpg
ve seen this floating arond alot. reli i dont this it good. bin lookin and some people think it is.
welll i think it aint good. that B what the fuck isgoin on dere? all the ba things? SIMPLE. would of made it look betta dont cha think. the E need to be kept all the same with. and there is the addons. dey bin put anywhere. some peplemight dis agree. but have to say yeh dat fill it GGOOOODD. but that is was make it look beta. so WORK ON UR STUCTURE&#33;

might not read it. i dont giva a fuck here help, take it or leave it.

FUCKIN helll.insane.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 07:55 PM
the vanishing point is in between the left and middle addons ok? theres nothing wrong with my 3d, it might be off by a couple of degrress but nothin more.

-ShAmEE-
04-05-2007, 07:57 PM
Originally posted by AimoOne@Apr 5 2007, 05:23 PM
see what i mean..^^ .. fuck sake..

am i okay to say this..

Apple Pie is a post whore..

like i was..

but its now summer..and i have a life again..so i aint stuck in..lol
ummm...nuthhin wrong with post whore in. :blink: :unsure: :rolleyes:

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 07:59 PM
and im workin on letter structure now.

fredom-writer
04-05-2007, 07:59 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Bazer
04-05-2007, 08:01 PM
yo i got you pegasus, i just work kinda slow when its on paper...

capo93
04-05-2007, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by &#045;ShAmEE&#045;+Apr 5 2007, 06:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-ShAmEE- @ Apr 5 2007, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AimoOne@Apr 5 2007, 05:23 PM
see what i mean..^^ .. fuck sake..

am i okay to say this..

Apple Pie is a post whore..

like i was..

but its now summer..and i have a life again..so i aint stuck in..lol
ummm...nuthhin wrong with post whore in. :blink: :unsure: :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
its funny to see that coming from aimo bc hes a huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggge post whore and hes smacking ppl for not posting flicks well he hasnt either. so stfu aimo

-ShAmEE-
04-05-2007, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by fredom&#045;writer@Apr 5 2007, 06:59 PM
ayee, that 2d is way off
shame, i dont know what to say?&#33;
bounce, you should post more painted shit. your last one was raw, yet i havent seen anymore from you.

havent sketched in a while.
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5510/img2273cr5.jpg
new throw also,
whats good?
well. bottom one.

grid ride of the extra lines... looks CHEEESSSEEYYY

take them away den it would look betta.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 08:11 PM
its kool baze, no hurry

G.SMooth
04-05-2007, 08:14 PM
Originally posted by G.SMooth@Apr 5 2007, 06:44 PM
Is this any better than my other stuff?
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture011-1.jpg
Bump for crits

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 08:16 PM
simple......

-ShAmEE-
04-05-2007, 08:18 PM
make shore dem letters have smooth edges.

Murder817Worth
04-05-2007, 08:29 PM
Freedon-That throw is pretty nice
Here a lil somethin of mine please crit&#33;
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze1.jpg

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 08:33 PM
go less curves i say, i dont like the u or e but good drop shadow

Hazex
04-05-2007, 08:36 PM
murder jsut make ur w less big and make the u a lil higher

i find my first sketch ugly but still posting

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2743/uglyrehealfl0.png (http://imageshack.us)

And this one i dunno lol like blocks lol :)
and sry for the pic its inclined
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4909/corkedvc7.png (http://imageshack.us)

bouncingsoul
04-05-2007, 08:37 PM
Not really a "blackbook" but oh well, hah

"live, love, listen"
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0712.jpg

Murder817Worth
04-05-2007, 08:40 PM
Bouncingsoul - Heh thats shits tight

alive
04-05-2007, 08:46 PM
dope. . . . except for the S. that shits wack sorry. shoulda used ur s from the bella is a beast sketch. n the crossbar on the T is a bit 2 thick.

Chulo
04-05-2007, 08:49 PM
bouncing, im feelin ya style
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/chase222.jpg

slinks
04-05-2007, 08:57 PM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a238/ExpeditiousPK/Graffiti.jpg
BUMP for crits cus i didnt even get one... fuckin selfish people

chase you need to keep it proportional... the size of letters is all over the place

bouncing soul your style is awesome

rheal stay simple.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 09:03 PM
i dont like the l or s but overall good, working on letters:
and yes it is a bit like mewts style, even i noticed that
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5599.jpg

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 09:09 PM
yea it looks like mewt&#39;s stuff but a lot worse, a lot worse...but if you didn&#39;t say that I probably wouldn&#39;t have noticed, were you lookin&#39; at his shit while drawing? It&#39;s okay if you did, I look at other people&#39;s shit when I&#39;m sketchin&#39; too, still don&#39;t like your letters, but I don&#39;t think I ever will, just personal preference.

BIGel
04-05-2007, 09:19 PM
peg it looks better with the detail on the 3-d, your style would be so sick if the letters were more pronounced.

throwies *****zzz..
hayz.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487336.jpg
waster12
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487348.jpg
buffer
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487380.jpg
easoe. rakos.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487358.jpg

BIGel
04-05-2007, 09:33 PM
peg it looks better with the detail on the 3-d, your style would be so sick if the letters were more pronounced.

throwies *****zzz..
hayz.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487336.jpg
waster12
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487348.jpg
buffer
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487380.jpg
easoe. rakos.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487358.jpg

alive
04-05-2007, 09:34 PM
no fair double dipping in the toy forum n the big boy forum.

but dope. exchange? i write caer.

slinks
04-05-2007, 09:39 PM
god damn bigel you have some sweet style

fredom-writer
04-05-2007, 09:45 PM
GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

JackJill
04-05-2007, 09:48 PM
Bigel, I think I creamed myself looking at your handstyle.

14nick
04-05-2007, 09:57 PM
I know my "r"&#39;s too small and the shadow&#39;s fucked
and ethier the to por bottom of the I is fucked.. but other than that howz it?

crits?

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9696/blackbook002fb0.jpg

Aven
04-05-2007, 09:58 PM
^^^I agree you have got some fucking skills man

BIGel
04-05-2007, 09:59 PM
Originally posted by alive@Apr 5 2007, 08:34 PM
no fair double dipping in the toy forum n the big boy forum.

but all the cool kids do it

i split my time between reno nevada and the bay area
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243495201.jpg

G.SMooth
04-05-2007, 10:03 PM
I guess this insnt a simple but i enjoyed doing it.
http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture013.jpg Teh cr1ts?

mmark187
04-05-2007, 10:11 PM
freedom writer - im really diggin the throwie and the handies are pretty good too.

bouncing - i agree with the other dude. i dont like the s much and the t is a little fat, but its still dope. really cool style

big el - dope shit as always. i like the redrum ****. haha thats fly. tight throws too.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 10:13 PM
haha sumo my most original stuff is ewn im in bed, cuz im usually lookin through lots of black ooks and paint forms so i have little bits of styles in them. dope shit bigel and its alright ayte. dont like the e tho. Oh and sumo, no beef

moltov
04-05-2007, 10:15 PM
DOPE Big el
ahah I like the kife

Hazex
04-05-2007, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by Hazex@Apr 5 2007, 07:36 PM
murder jsut make ur w less big and make the u a lil higher

i find my first sketch ugly but still posting

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2743/uglyrehealfl0.png (http://imageshack.us)

And this one i dunno lol like blocks lol :)
and sry for the pic its inclined
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4909/corkedvc7.png (http://imageshack.us)
any mroe crits?

and ayte make all your letter the same heigh

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 10:33 PM
id say only use pencils, dont waste the pens.

14nick
04-05-2007, 10:35 PM
Originally posted by 14nick@Apr 5 2007, 08:57 PM
I know my "r"&#39;s too small and the shadow&#39;s fucked
and ethier the to por bottom of the I is fucked.. but other than that howz it?

crits?

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9696/blackbook002fb0.jpg
BUMmmp

dint get any crits on this. <_<

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 10:45 PM
lines are shaky, it&#39;s pretty bad though, the "R" is bad, learn how to use bars, the "A" ain&#39;t to hot either, the "I" and the "D" aren&#39;t as bad as the first two letters, but work on making your lines sharper and straighter. ;)

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 10:46 PM
Go simple&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; no extension on the A, just the letters off your keyborad, THEn tweak them, so yeah.....

14nick
04-05-2007, 10:53 PM
alright thanks.

and for the past 3 weeks all ive been doing is goin simple <_<

and using bars <_<

and tryin 2 get my letter structure better and all my letters the same size.

i was jus writtin random shit in class and i like the A . :) guess its shit but whatever ill go bak 2 keyboard letters and bars :(

EasyMac
04-05-2007, 10:56 PM
Alright where should I improve, except neatness and colour, and I don&#39;t really need to hear "I don&#39;t like it" , just some constructive fuckin critisism.

http://ourworld.cs.com/davewhoris/Whil4.jpg

http://ourworld.cs.com/davewhoris/Whil3cropped.JPG

http://ourworld.cs.com/davewhoris/Whil2cropped.JPG

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 10:58 PM
at least you do wats best for you

14nick
04-05-2007, 11:00 PM
^^ yea yea but how long does it take????? :angry:

itz al ive been doin and itz gettin boring. ( hence wat i just posted :D )

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:00 PM
i like it.. . all i can say is keep the w like the 1st and 2nd ones and give your l more of a bottom lip if you know what i mean. but its good

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:02 PM
i dont know, uhhh post up some simples and ask how u can tweak it

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 11:09 PM
the toy forum keeps gettin&#39; worse and worse...people keep saying they been using bars and learnin&#39; structure, and yet they use bars wrong or badly and have poor structure...I&#39;m not critting in here unless I have something to say besides "Go simpler" or "use bars"... <_<

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:09 PM
haha, i still cant get mewt out of my head, so i tried kemo
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5600.jpg

sank one
04-05-2007, 11:12 PM
^go simple and theres already a mewt on bs. he has some of the best shit ive ever seen.

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 11:14 PM
He&#39;s tryin&#39; to imitate Mewt&#39;s style...but yeah, you do need to go simpler, and learn structure (see, I say the same thing every time I crit).

alive
04-05-2007, 11:18 PM
awww sumoe. dont lose faith. haha. i remember when i hated ur style. but now&#33; dope dope. i wish i could say the same for myself. ive been stuck for a month or 2 now on the same old shit. making me angryyyyyyyy.

JackJill
04-05-2007, 11:18 PM
How about critting mine then, Sumoe?
It&#39;s simple.

anie 1
04-05-2007, 11:21 PM
pegasus go simple no ofence but yes go simple

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 11:22 PM
Originally posted by JackJill@Apr 5 2007, 06:08 PM
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/8024/img0016cu9.jpg
it&#39;s decent...a little curvy, when they should be straighter but, not too bad...

Alive- yeah, I remember when you didn&#39;t like my shit before(:unsure: :(), I used to think my shit was awesome and my letters were so good, but in retrospect, you were right, they were very bad, but I learned, I found I been getting better constantly, it&#39;s weird, every sketch I do I like better than the last.

but I still got a long ways to go... :)

Murder817Worth
04-05-2007, 11:28 PM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/wuze2.jpg
3rd one&#33; Help me out and crit

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 11:29 PM
your gettin&#39; there, just clean up your lines...a lot.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:33 PM
i went simpler...... i f&#39;d up the e but wat the hell, man i love fridays.... haha that happens to me all the time sumoe. I like a sketch then wen i post it im lik, hmm not so good......

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5601.jpg

sank one
04-05-2007, 11:35 PM
thats not simple man, draw the letters on your keyboard.

hopefully ill have a camera this weekend so i can post some sketches...

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 11:37 PM
see, now we can diagnose the problem, you don&#39;t have good structure, you need to go simpler, maybe not like your keyboard, but still simpler... :)

Murder817Worth
04-05-2007, 11:39 PM
Originally posted by BIGel@Apr 5 2007, 08:33 PM
peg it looks better with the detail on the 3-d, your style would be so sick if the letters were more pronounced.

throwies *****zzz..
hayz.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487336.jpg
waster12
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487348.jpg
buffer
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487380.jpg
easoe. rakos.
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243487358.jpg
Damn I love ur letters? How did u write them when u first started???

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:39 PM
wat letters worst?

Sumoe
04-05-2007, 11:40 PM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 5 2007, 10:39 PM
wat letters worst?
they&#39;re all pretty bad, one isn&#39;t really worse than the other.

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:41 PM
but i like the m....

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:44 PM
there.... ignore the tooth, accident....
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5605.jpg

ESKE one
04-05-2007, 11:44 PM
Originally posted by ESKE one+Apr 5 2007, 05:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one &#064; Apr 5 2007, 05:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Apr 5 2007, 11:01 AM
keep your letters the same height use a ruler if you have to and your 3d fuck pick one vanishing point and stick wit it

heres an new piece
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00119.jpg
crits
bump no crits [/b][/quote]
bump again
kemo- wow wat happen man? thats real sloppy i dont know wat to say try pencil or go slwer or something
bigel- fresh as usual

Pegasus
04-05-2007, 11:49 PM
hahah sume told me to go simple :(

-Sinn-
04-05-2007, 11:54 PM
kemo - WTF?&#33;?&#33;?&#33; ur last on was okay excpt it looked like it said KOMO the E u fucked up on looked like a pretty good O but other then that keep it up and dont rush to much ur gettin good

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture170.jpg
^^^^^^^^Petey The Wonder Weenie
crits?

levans
04-05-2007, 11:55 PM
edit: wtf my image shack isnt workin....
[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/2517/djfsjdbf

dim
04-05-2007, 11:58 PM
bigel- love you throws
hand- that is much better than your older stuff
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4986/img0096vn4.jpg
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1023/img0094xz4.jpg
exchange with pye just a simple style i still need to color it.

Aven
04-05-2007, 11:59 PM
brilliant&#33;




...and im not just saying that...


last post on the page before this...i love the hot dog

inkbits
04-06-2007, 12:00 AM
Originally posted by Pegasus@Apr 6 2007, 01:49 PM
hahah sume told me to go simple :(
No offense man but he&#39;s right. You have some good fundimentals looking at your stuff as a whole but your letters could definately benefit from some more structure.

bobo9827
04-06-2007, 12:03 AM
some shit i did a while ago
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d143/bobo9827/03-13-07_0754-1.jpg

ESKE one
04-06-2007, 12:05 AM
Originally posted by ESKE one+Apr 5 2007, 10:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESKE one &#064; Apr 5 2007, 10:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ESKE one@Apr 5 2007, 05:04 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ESKE one@Apr 5 2007, 11:01 AM
keep your letters the same height use a ruler if you have to and your 3d fuck pick one vanishing point and stick wit it

heres an new piece
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j138/AIRGEE2302/IMG00119.jpg
crits
bump no crits
bump again
kemo- wow wat happen man? thats real sloppy i dont know wat to say try pencil or go slwer or something
bigel- fresh as usual [/b][/quote]
plz crit wont bump anymore
dim- the pye sketch is kinda sloppy try developing a stedyier hand maybe draw like 10 straight lines and the draw like 10 even curved line i dont that sumthing i just came up with
bobo-looks tight but im not exactly intriged(sp) by your 3d

Pegasus
04-06-2007, 12:25 AM
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n300/dekay_2006/IMG_5607.jpg

better?

and eske forget the addons and cracks and get a dfferent d and n connection, if you really want one

Sumoe
04-06-2007, 12:39 AM
it&#39;s not better, go to the NEW 2 GRAFF THREAD and read it...then work on your bars and shit.

C3ZR ONE
04-06-2007, 12:44 AM
Originally posted by BIGel+Apr 5 2007, 08:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BIGel &#064; Apr 5 2007, 08:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Apr 5 2007, 08:34 PM
no fair double dipping in the toy forum n the big boy forum.

but all the cool kids do it

i split my time between reno nevada and the bay area
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1202/4129875/15355407/243495201.jpg [/b][/quote]
....what can&#39;t you do??? :o


...Reno&#39;s a cesspool tho holmes.

I wanna see street flicks. Paper almost seems like a waste in your case.

BIGel
04-06-2007, 01:04 AM
i dont paint as much as i used to because ive been on probation since november. but ill post some flix, the few i have.

as for reno, loosest slots in america baby&#33; dive capital USA&#33; dont be jealous cuz u cant play those nickel slots and five dollar blackjack hands cezr&#33;
http://www.wildnatureimages.com/images%202/031012-052..jpg